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Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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UPDATE 52

iidhar wo aadmi jo mere peeche lga huwa tha ki mai kya kr rha hu kaha hu sb ki jankari jo aadmi ghar pahuncha rha tha

jO Ki ab mere na milne se bahut paresan ho gya tha aur use bahut pasina aa rha tha jaise ussse koi bahut mehnat ka kaam karwaya ja rha ho

uuse kuch bhi samjh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kiya jaye ab thak haar ke usne ghar pe call mila diya

iidhar
jangal me mai aage badh gya jaise jaise mai aage badh rha tha jungle mano badta hi chla ja rha ho kuki lg rha tha mai ab bhi whi hu

aandar ab bs peepal bargad ke bade bade ped the jinse moti moti jataye laki huwi thi aur wo bahut bhayanak bhaynak ped the
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UN pedo ke beech bas jane ki hi jagah thi mai aage badh hi rha tha ki tabhi achanak se un sabhi jatao ne mujhe jakad liya

aachanak huwe is wakye se mai thoda hadbada gya aur itne me un shabhi jatao ki pakad kasne lgi mujh pe

aaur wo mujhe upar utha liye tha jisse mai ab hawa me jhool rha tha

ttabhi un pedo ke upar se 4 ya 5 kale kapde pahne huwa aadmi kude aur shabhi hasne lge

aaadmi 1- hahhaha hahhah tu kya samjha tha tu is jangal me ghus ke sair kar lega hahahaha
ye jungal maut ka rasta hai insane ke liye

jjo ek baar ghusa is jangal me wo insan wapas nhi ja pata
waise bhi insano ka khoon hame bahut pasand unke taze thande khoon ko pee ke jaise alag urja mahsoos hot hai

hhahahahah uski un thahako ki aawaj waha pure watawarn ke shanto ko bhang kr rhi thi

mmai us kaid se chutne ke liye ab prayas karne lga mai apne hath failane ke liye jor lgane lga aur idhar wo jataye bhi kasna start kr di

mmai ab jor laga rha tha jisse wo jataye cht cht kht kht ki aawaj se tootne lgi jaise koi shookhi lakdi toot thi ho asi aawj aane lgi

ttabhi un 5 me se ek kala kapda pahne aadmi ghutne pe aa gya aur cheekne lga
ahhhhhhh aaaghghhh

aaur idhar sabhi jataye toot chuki thi aur mai dhapp se jamin pe aa ke gira aur turant khada ho ke unhe dekhne laga

mEre girne ke baad hui aawaj ko sun ke unka dhyan ab apne shathi se hath ke mere upar aaya

maI ab tayar tha inhe marne ke liye kyuki mujhe pta tha koi hamla ab jarur karega aur ab mai puri strength ke sath marne ke mood me tha

ttbhi unme se ek ne mujhe marne ke liye whi se chalag lagai aur jaise hi mere paas pahucha dhaaad
hakkk use cheekhne ka bhi mauka nhi diya bhakkkk

kkuki jaise hi wo mere kafi paas aaya mai thoda sa side huwa aur puri takat se se mera ek jordar ghusa uske left sidechest pe mara mera ghuda itna jordar tha uska left side ka hissa kandhe ki haddi bhi sath me uske peeche se baahar nikal gya

aur wo kisi kate huwe ped ki trah whi gir gya ye dekh ke baki bache huwe 3no thodi peeche hath gye

aab pta nhi ku mere andar ek ajib sa feel ho rha tha aur mujhe ab ghussa bhi aa rha tha wo kuch samjh pate mai un 3 no ke samne pahuch gya

aur mujhe itne karib dekh ke 3 no dar ke mare gir gye aur mai unhe samnblne ka mauka nhi dena chahta tha isliye

tthadddd khattt bhhhh
teen aawaj hui 2 turant whi dher ho gye kyuki ek ko mara uske sar pe jisse uska sar hu whi kharbuje ki trah phat gya

aaur ek ke seene pe aisi laat mara uski sairi pasaliya toot ke chipak gyi bacha teesra girte padte waha se bhagg liya

mmai ab utha aur jaldi jaaldi andar ke taraf jane laga
whi wo bacha huwa aadmi bhagte huwe uski ke paas pahuch jo sher ke andar samaya huwa tha

uuske samne pahucha to uski halat dar ke karan bigdi huwi thi aur pahuchte hi wo bola

aaadmi ,- malik malik wo aadmi insan nhi wo to haywane se bhi bura mar raha hai sabhi malin wo insan nhi hai

mmalik wo sabko maar dega malik bahut khatanka hai wo

wwo aage kuch kahta thabhi us aadmi ki gardan khachhhhh
aur whi ludhak gyi aur uska sarir whi dhu dhu kar jalne laga


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Update 17

tkakur Gajendra ki haweli me sabhi baithe huwe the

Ranvijay - pitaji raghav ke sari me sudhar aa gaya h lekin uski body me koi harkat nahi hoti h

Gajendra - abhi tak us launde ka pta nahi chala jisne mere pote ka ye hal kiya h ek baar ye mela nipat jaye to mai bAtata hu sabko ki thakur se dusmani lena ka kya anjam hota h

Apne danto ko peeste huwe aur muthi ko beech ke apne jangho pe marte huwe

Bheema- dadaji ab mai raghav ka ilag karane le ja raha hu mujhe do tin din lag sakte h

Ranvijay- lekin beta tu kaha se ilaj karwayega ise itne doctors ne dekhe likin koi sahi nahi kar paaya

Bheema- pitaji aako apna beta sahi milna chahiye ya pta ho ki mai ilaj kisse karaunga

Birju - nahi bhaiya hame to sirf hamar bhai sahi slamat chahiye ek baar hamara bhai sahi ho jaye

Uske baad wo khud ham sab ko batayega use marne ki himmat kisne ki jise apni prano se payar nahi h

Thakur Gajendra - theek h beta lo jayo tum lekin yaad rahe agle hafte mela suru ho raha h bhoolna nahi samay pe aa jana

Bheema - dada ji aap chi ta na kare mai jald hi laut aaunga

Aur hamar bhai bhi hasta khelta huwa aayega

Aur iske baad wo raghav ko apni jeep me dal ke nikal gaya

Dushri taraf

Bahut dur kisi bahut hi bahayank jangal me ek bahut hi badi kutiya bani thi

Waha kutiya me ek maidan tha waha us maidan me ek havan kund jal raha tha jiske paas char sadhu baithe huwe the jo kisi mantra ka ucharan kar rahe the

Aur un charo ke samne ek bahut hi tezswi sadhu aasan laga ke apne ankho ko band kar ke baithe the jinhe dekh ke koi bhi kah sakta h ki ye dyan laga ke baithe h

Tabhi unhone apni ankhe kholi aur bole nahi aisa nahi ho sakta


Samne baithe sadhu bole kya huwa gurudev kya nahi ho sakta aap kiski baat kar rahe h

Ji h ye sab us tezswi sadhu ke sisya h

Guru - ek bahut hi badi anhoni hone wali h ek narsanhar hone wala h agar ham us ladke ko uski saktiyo ko use jald se jald nahi denge to anarth ho jayega

Ye manav jivan khatre me aa jayega hame jald se jald use uski saktiya wapas karna padega

Charo sisya lekin gurudev ye kaun h kiski saktiyon ki baat aap kar rahe h

Ggurudev ne apni ankhe band kiye aur apne hath ko uthye aur charo sadhuo ki taraf kiye ek rosni nikli aur unke matho me sama gayi

Guru - mai uski tasvir tumahare ander bhej di h aur ab tumhe 7 dino ke andar use dundh ke uski saktiya use deni hogi

Sisya - lekin gurude ham use dhudhenge kaise aur wo hame kaha mile ga

Aur uski saktiya kaha h aur use uski saktiya kaise wapas karenge

Guru - apne jhole me hath dalte h aur ek anguthi nikalte h jo ek dragon ki tarah thi use apne sisyo ko dete h

Aur kahte h is anguthi ko use tumhe kisi bhi tarah pahnana h

Iske baad wo us anguthi ko apne jhole me rakh liye aur bole

Gurudev ham sab abhi niklte h kyuki hame nahi pta wo hame kaha milega

Guru - hame tum sab se yahi aasa thi jao aur apne karyo ko pura karo yaad rahe tu.he apne raste me kai badhye milengi unse tum sab ko khidh hi niptana hoga

Aur wo balak tumhe dakshin disa me milega

Iske baad wo charo apne guru se ashirwa le ke nikal diye apne lakshya ki taraf

Ab aage dekhte h wo ladka kaun h aur uski kaisi aur kaun si saktiya h jo use lautane gaye h

Mai subhA utha aur apni exercise kiya iske baad ham sab nashta kiye aur maa ko bta ke chal diya haweli ki taraf


Haweli pahuch ke mai mai haweli ke ander gaya jaha sab abhi nasta kar baithe the kyu ki abhi dining table pe naukur bartan ko utha rahe the

Mai gaya sab ko namste kiya aur iske baad mai un sab ke sath baith gaya


Dadi - beta thoda jaldi aaye hote sath me hi nasta kiye hote laao bahu ajay ke liye bhi nasta laga do

Mai - are dadi abhi mai ghar se bhi nasta kar ke aa raha hu rahne dijiye chachi

Dadi - tu karta hai ki nahi

Mai marta kya na karta mai chup chap nasta kar liye jo ki ab mera pet pura bhar chuka tha


Dadaji - beta kab nikal rahe ho lane ke liye

Mai - dada ji abhi nikalte h kyuki aaj ham sab koi gadbd nahi chahte h isliye jald hi jana chahte h


Dadaji chalo theek h

Iske baad nikhil bhi hamare sath chalne ke liye tayar ho gaya kyuki ab hamare beech achi jamne lagi thi


Aur ham sab nikal diye hamne teen gadiyo ke sath chal diye ek me ham aur Nikhil ho liye aur ek me sirf driver aur ek me hamare kuch khas aadmi the

Ham dono hasi majak karte huwe chal diye shar ki taraf

Dushri taraf

Boss ek table ke samne ek kursi per baitha huwa tha table jo ki kafi lambi thi

Table ke charo taraf kai log baithe huwe the jo dekhne me hi lag raha tha ki smaglro ki meeting chal rahi thi

Tabhi ek gaurd aaya aur boss ke kaan me kuch bola iske baad wo sabko iskuj bol ke meeting hal se bahar nikal gaya


Bahar aane ke baad Boss ek room me aaya aur dekha ki victor ek aadmi ke sath baitha huwa tha


Boss - aur victor kaise aana huwa aur sandy maise ho kafi din baad mile ho


Sandy - hlw sir mai badhiya hi hu Singapore. Me maje kar raha tha aap ne bulya aur mai turant waha se aa gaya hu


Boss - chalo achha kiye kuki jis kaam ke liye tumhe bulaya gaya h wo mere liye bahut hi jaruri h


Aur us kaam ko victor tumhe samjha dega

Iske bd wo waha se chal diya apne meeting hal me jaha kisi chig ki dealing chal rahi thi


Aur kuch der ki bahas ke baad meeting me un sab ki deal fix ho gayi aur sab meetin hal se bahar nikal ke ek bahut hi bade hal me chal diye


Jaha sab ke liye vip wayawastha hThi khana peena aur sabhi chij aur sath me ladkiya bhi thi jo us mafil ko ramaye huwe thi sabhi dealar sarab aur sabab ka maja lene lage


Jo ki pta chal raha tha ki in sab ke beech kafi badi dealing huwi thi sab apne apne kamo ko bhul ke sarab aur sabab me dub gaye the

ham sab usi jangal ke raste se ja rahe the

Jo ki hamesa hi sunsan sa pada rahta tha

Nikhil - aur bhai ajay batao kaisa chal raha h

Mai - kuch khas nahi bhai abhi exam diya ho to thoda rest pe ab hu

Nikhil - aur aage ki padhai ki kya soache ho

Mai - kuch nahi bas iit ke form fill kiya hu agar nikal gaya to aage engineering ki soach raha hu

Nikhil - chlo badhiya h apne sahar ka clg to top engineering clg h aur dada ji iske trusty bhi h

Agar admi ssiin lena hoga to bolna koi problem nahi hogi

Kyuki bua ki dono ladki bhi yahi se abki baar padhne wali h

Mai - theek h ab to exam ke baad hi dekhta hu

Aur isi trah ham baate karte huwe station pahuch gaye

Mai aap sab ko batana bhul gaya ki Nikhil ki dono bua ek hi ghar me gayi h jinke pati india ke top bussiness man h

Jiske karan inki betiyon me thodha paiso ka ghamand aa gaya h

Aur ham station pe pahuch gaya aur ja ke announcement counter pepta kiya jaha train abhi 30 min me aane wali thi

ham dono aadmiyo ko gadiyo ke paas chod ke station pe ghumne lage

Ghumte ghumte maine notice kiya ek banda ham sab jab se station aaye the tab se hamare peeche laga huwa tha

Mai us bande ki taraf chal diya aur jaise jaise mai us bande ke karib jaa eaha tha wo peeche ki taraf jaane laga


Mera sak yakin me badal gaya ki wo ham sab ka hi peecha kar raha tha


Mai use turant dauda liya aur wo bhagne laga

Mai bhi useke peeche daud laga diya aur wo patri pe utar ke bhagne laga to


Jab tak mai uske paas pahucta useki ek train se jabardas takkar ho gayi

Jo ki maal gadi thi jo bina ruke is station se cross ho rahi thi

Aisi thokar lagi ki uski ek cheekh se ek baar to us train ki bhi awaj dab gayi

Wo wahi pe dam tod diya mai dekha kafi admiis taraf aane lage to mai waha se nikal liya

Jab mai nikil ke paas pahucha

nikhil- tum yu achanak uske peeche kyu bhaghe the

Mai - kuch nahi jab se ham yaha aaye the tab se wo hamare peeche tha aur wo phone se kisi se baat bhi kar raha tha

Iske baad mai use pri baat btaya ki kya huwa

Nikhil - agar ham use pakad lete to pta chal jata ki kaun tha wo

Mai - chalo jane do jo bhi hota h achhe ke liye hota

Isi beech aadhe ghante bhi nikal gaye aur train aane ki announcement hone lagi

Ham platform pe chal diye jaha train rukne wali thi aur kuch hi minto me train horn dete huwe platform pe aake ruk gayi


Tabhi mai dekha ki ek ek karke char pariya train se niche utri jo ki kafi khubsurat thi sabhi ke shabhi

Aur wo hamari taraf hi hath hila rahi thi

Jaise hi Nikhil dekha un sab ki taraf chal diya Aur unke paas pahuch ke

Nikhil - hi priya aur kaisi ho

Aur un sab ne Nikhil se hi kiya jisse mujhe pta chal ki un sab ka naam Priya Nitu Madhu Aur kiran tha

Nikhil - ajay inse milo ye hamari bahne hamari bua ki betiya

Nitu Nikhil se bhaiya ye kaun h

Nikhil - ye mera dost h aur hamare ghar Ka bodyguard h

Nitu - kisi bodyguard se bhi itro karaya jata h kya

Hamare yaha to pta nahi kitne bodyguard honge hame to kiai se intro ki jarurat to nahi padi

Priya - kya bol rahi h nitu yahi shikhaya gaya h hame

Madhu - didi nitu sahi kah rahi h is jahil ganwar se kya intro chalo yaha se

Mujhe to Ye sun ke bahut bura laga ki koi meri itni bezzati kiya h

Tabhi nikhil mere kan me bhai bura na manna paiso ke ghamand me ye kisi se kaiae baat ki jati h ye bhul gayi h

Mere liye bhai bhul ja sab inhe fuffa ji ke lad pyar ne bigad diya h

Chalte hwe

Priya - ajay bura na manna inhe nahi pta kaiase kisi se baat ki jati h

Mai - ji koi baat nhi

Aur ham jaise hi aage badhe the ek dandanata huwa danda hamare samne se gujra

Ham sab to cahuk gaye ladkiya to dar gayi ye dekh ke danda dur ja ke gira

Tabhi koi hame pukara wahi sab ke sab ruk jao nahi to koi hilne Ke layak nahi bachega

Ham sab udhar dekhe to kuch gunde chaku talwar liye khadhe the

Sath me koi aadmi tha jo gadi ke tek le ke cigrate ki kash mar raha tha aur wo apne khandho pe latest ak47 rakha tha

Gunda1 - o tum sab sab jaldi idhar aa jao

Ladkiya to itne aadmi dekh ke to dar gayi
Priya - bhaiya ab ham kya karenge

Nikhil - kuch nahi hoga chalo

Ham sab un sab gundo ke paas gaye

Wo aadmi

Aisa koi nahi jo sandy ke hatho se bach jaye

Jisse mai ik baar chah liya use ptal se bhi khoj ke utha leta hu

Phil Hal to tum sab to chalte pirte sammne ho

Mai - abe kaun h jo itne lambi lambi fenk raha h

Sandy - abe sale tu mujhse aisi baate karta h mera naam sun ke achhe achho ki gili ho jati h

Aur tu mujhse unchi awaj me baat kar raha h

Mai - sale ase hijdo ki fauj le ke tu hame dhamki de raha h

Tabhi ek gunda uske kaan me kuch kaha aur sandy

To tu h in sab ka bodyguard jo itna phudak raha h

Abhi tak tune sandy ko jana hi kaha h

Mai - banduk le ke ek paida huwa bachha bhi dara sakta h Agar agar apne aap pe itna hi ghamand h to aaja maidan me do do hath ho jaye

Sandy - bache kyu apni jan jokhim me dal raha h abhi bachha h ja chala ja kyu in sab ke peeche apni jaan gawne laga h

Mai - agar itna hi gurur ho to aa dekhte h kaun kya h

Sandy - bahut dino baad kisi ne aise challenge kiya h ab to tre ko thikane lagana hi padega

SandY apne aadmiyo se koi bhi beech me nahi aayega

Ham dono aamne samne aa gaye aur apni apni position le liye

SandY to sala full marsalart tha sale ne apna daoN satrt kar diya

Usne mere upar kick aur punches ki bauchar kar diya

aur ik kick usne meri tngo pe mara aur ek kich mere mere gardan pe peeche

Dhaad

Aur mai wahi gir gaya

Iske baad b

SAndy - bas bachhe teri maa ne tujhe itna hi dudh pillya tha

Mai to uske itne fast war ke liye tayar hi nahi tha

Kt kat chat chur

Ki awaj sun ke wo haran ho gaya kyu ki mai apne muthi ko band kar ke jami pe rakh ke utha jisse meri haddiyo ke chatchatne ki awaj aayi

Mai - apna muh saf karte huwe kyuki uske marne se ek Hath uska mere hoto pe lag gaya tha jisse khon nikal gaya

Mai - bas tera ho gaya ab mai suru karta hu aaja

Aur wo meri taraf badha jaise hi usne is baar kich marne ke liye

Apne lair uthya mai uske pair ko pakad ke use hawa me utha ke

Dhadam

Use jamin pe patak diya is baar wo punches marne ki position le liya

Jiske liye mai is baar tayar tha

Aur wo full speed me punChes marne laga

Aur har punch ko is baar mai rok liya aur jab wo thaodha thak gaya

Mai ne soacha game khatam karu

Aur mai uske pet me ek kick mara aur wo sarakta huwa gadi ke paas gaya

Isse pahlE wo khadha ho pata

Fat fat thak chat pat ki awaj aai

UsE mai daudh ke uske sarkte hi uske upar apne lato ki barsat kar diya

Jisse uske muh se khoon aa gaya aur sayad uski kamar ki haddi tut gayi thi

Mere lagatar kiye gaye praharo ke karan uski aisi halat dekh ke uske baaki aadmi peeche hat gaye

Aur jb wo behos ho gaya tab mai use chod diya

Aur iske baad mai sab ko sath le ke chal diya ghar ki taraf

Jaha sab abhi bhi soach me the ki un ke sath kya huwa

ham sab gadi me baith ke ghar ki taraf chal diye

Ek hi gadi me sab baith gaye the kyuki ladkiya itna dar gayi thi kuch boli hi nahi chup chap gadi me sab baith gayi

Aur ham sab ja rahe the mai gadi drive kar raha tha

Puri gadi me santi faili huwi thi jabki gadi me 6 log the siraf saay saay ki aawaj aa rahi thi jo ki gadi ke chalne ke karan

To mai hi un sab ki chupi ko todte huwe bola

Mai - are sab itna sant sant kyu baithe h

Nikhil - tab bola
bahi dekh ke to bolte dekhe nahi ki wo sab hathiyar liye the

Aur to aur uska kya naam tha ha sandy tum nahi jante sala international wanted kriminol h use kai desh ki police talas rahi h

Aur tumne to use aisE maar diya jaise kisi bache ke sath ki ladta h

Priya - waise tumhe dar nahi laga itne logo ko dekh ke

Mai - are mam kaisa dar waise bhi mai aap sab ki suraksha ke liye hi hu agar aap sab ko kuch ho jata to mai aap ke pariwar ka viswas tod deta

Aur meri maa ne shikhya h kahi pe kisi pe atyachar na hone du chahe jo bhi ho

Filhal aap sab ko kaise koi chu deta jis kaam ke liye mai aaya tha

Mere baat ko sun ke sab sant ho gaye koi kuch nahi bola

Nikhil to janta hi tha mere bare me ki mai darta nahi hu kisi se to wo bhi kuch bola sant hi baitha raha

Aur isi tarah wo sab apna gup sap karne lage apas me is beech nitu sant baithi thi

Aur ham ghar aa gaye

Aur hamare gadi ki horn sun ke sab gharwale bahar aaye

Aur jab mai gadi se utra to mere hoth ke paas khun laga dekh ke sab cahuck gaye

Sayad maine achhe se nahi pocha aur baad me dhyan hi nahi raha

Tabhi dada ji bole

Dada ji - are veta ye kaisa khoon laga h tumharE hoth ke paas

Mere bolne ke pahle hi Priya kahani start kar di ladkiyon ko aap sab jante hi h

Choti baat ko kitna bada bana deti h usi tarah usne bhi khub masal bhar ke sab ko sunaya aur phi dadi boli

Dadi - beta tumhari maa kya soachegi ki sirf tumhe hi ham sab hamse khatre daal dete h

Mai - are dadi aap kya kah rahi ho agar ye sab soachti to mujhe yaha tak aane hi na deti

Dono bua - beta tumne to hamare upar dubara se upkar kiya h

Mai - kya aap sab bhi na rasan paani leke aap sab mere hi upar chadh gayi h

Are aap ki betiya itni dur se aayi h aap sab ne abhi tak unka hal chal bhi nahi pucha h

Meri baat sun ke sabhi hasne lage aur sab 4ro ke le ke andar chal di

Aur mai kuch der waha rahne ke baad apne ghar aane ki baat bola to koi jane hi nahi de raha tha phir bhi mai sab Ko kisi prakar se mana ke waha se apne ghar laut aaya

Udhar hamare aane ke baad sandy ke aadmi sandy ko utha ke waha se bhage

Aur use hospital me admit karwaya aur victor ko phone kar ke sab bata diya

Victor ne suna ki sandy ki halat ghambhir h to wo to trant call cut kar kr ke hospital ki taraf bhaga

Aur jald hi hospital me pahuch gaya jaha uske aadmi khade the

Apne aadmiyon ke paas pahucha to uske aadmi victor ko OT ke paas le gaya jaha

Se kuch der baad doctor apna mask utarte huwe OT ke bahar nikla

Ye hospital victor ke boss ka tha to waha sandy ko admit karane me koi problem nahi hwi

Victor -ky huwa doctor sandy ki halat ab kaisi h

Doctor - ham kuch kah nahi sakte halat critical h

Inke aisi jghao pe waar kiya gaya h jisse inki body ke sabhi ang bahut hi slow krya kar rahe H

Aap ek prakar kah sakte h inki recovery system inka na ke barabr work kar raha h to ye koma me chale gaye h

Iske baad doctor chala gaya

Victor apne admiyon se

Victor - tum kya kar rahe the ki sandy ki aisi halat hui boss ko pta chala to khair nahi

Uske aadmi use bataye ki kaise maine use challenge kiya aur kaise sirf ham dono ki ladayi huwi

Victor - salo tum sab waha show dekhne gaye the sandy ne mana kiya to tum sab maan gaye

Aur sale kya koi bhism prtgya kar liya tha kya sandy agar tum sab marte to wo kuch kar deta

Uske aadmi - sir ham sab dar gaye the wo aise maar raha tha jaise koi machine chl rahi ho

Victor - sale tum sab ki maaaa kki*****
Victor chikh ke rah gaya aur
Waha se nikal gaya

Idhar

Mai bhi ghar pahuch gaya jaha sab baithe hi mile

Mai andar pahucha to dekha puja
Aur Shruti dono baith ke
Baate kar rahi thi

Maa bhi wahi baithi thi
Maa mujhe dekh ke boli

Maa - are beta aa gaye aur kaisi thi
Wo sab

Mai - maa pucho himat
Do to bahut hi ghamandi h
Paiso ki bahut garmi h un.e

Maa - nahi beta aisa nahi bolte
Maa baap ke laad pyar ne bigad
Diya hoga aage sudhar hi
Jayengi

Mai - ji

Isi trah hamne baate ki aur mai
Kamre me aa ke so
Gaya kyuki mai kafi
Thak gaya tha itna kaam karne
Ke karan

Aate hi mai apne bistar par pasar gay
Mujhe kab need aai pta
Hi nahi chal mai kab so gaya

Mai kafi ghahri neend me soya
Tha mujhe laga mujhe koi
Hila raha h

Mai aankh khol ke dekha to Shruti
Mujhe jagane ki kosis kar
Rahi thi

Shruti- kya bhaiyu mai aap
Ko kab se jagane ki kosis kar
Rahi hu aur aap uthne ka naam
Hi nahi le rahe

Mai - are meri sona naraj kyu hoti
Ho

Mai aaj kafi thak gaya tha to pta hi
Nahi chal

Shruti - chaliye uthiye saam ho gayi
H aur aap so rahe h

Mai iske baad uth gaya aur
Fresh huwa aur bahar aa ke
Dekha to saam ho gayi thi

Mai turant hi maidan me aa gaya
Aur apni exercise kiya

Aise hi iske baad ham kha pee ke
So gaye

Agli subha mai utha aur
Routine work kar ke haweli
Chal diya

Jaha aaj sab mere ghar ghumne
Ki jidd karne lage

Aur Nikhil bhi jidd karne laga aur
Bola yarr tune bola tha ki apna ghar
Jarur ghumaye ga

Mai bhi un sab ke itna jor dene
Ke karan tayar ho gaya

Aur Nikhil apne ghar walo ki
Permission le liya

Jaha hamare sath Nikhil Komal
Priya aur Kiran taya ho gayi

Ham sab ek gaddi me baith ke
Nikal diye

Jab ham ghar pahuche to
Dekha ghar ka darwaja band tha

Mai jakar darwaja khatkhatya
Kuch der baad puja ne darwaja khola

Mujhe dekh ke puja boli

Puja -, are bhaiya aap itni
Jaldi aa gaye

Mai kuch nahi un sab ko dekh rahi
Ho na wo sab jidd karne lage
Ki mera ghar dekhna h

To mai un san ko le ke aa gaya
Waise maa aur Shruti kaha h

Puja - andar h

Mai - jao bta do ki kaun aaya h
Tum to janti hi ho in sab ko

Uske baad ma i ne un sab ki bula
Liya jo gaddi me hi the abhi

Aur baramde me aa ke baith
Gaye

Kuch hi min me maa aur Shruti bhi
Bahar nikle

Iske baad mai un sab ka
Intro karya maa aur Shruti se
Jinse sab kafi salinta se mile

Iske baad maa chai banane chali gayi
Jaha mai dekha Nikhil kisi soach
Me gum tha maine dhyan nahi diya

Maa - la ke sab ko chai di
Aur boli

Maa - aur bachho kaise ho

Sab bole ekdam badhiya h

Aise hi sab baate kiye mai bor nahi karna chata aap sab ko

Isliye conversion explain nahi karna chaht

Aur kuch der baad sab chalne
Ka bole

Maa - theek h bacho jao

Aur sabne jaate huwe maa ka
Pair chuwa aur maa ne bhi
Sabhi ko nam aankho se

Sab ko vida ki kisi ke dekhne
Se pahle hi apni aankhe saaf kar li

Aur ham wapas chal diye
Mai dekha Nikhil ab bhi kuch
Soach raha tha

Mai - kya soach rahe ho nikhil

Nikhil - kuch nahi yaar
Waise tumhari maa bahut hi achhi
H

Jaise lag raha tha koi apni h

Man me mujhe lag raha h maine
Unhe kahi dekha h
Yaad kyu nahi aa raha

Mai - meri maa se milne ke
Baad sab yahi bolte h

Priya - sach me ajay bhaiya sahi
Bol rahe tumhari maa se mil ke
Hame apne pan mahsoos huwa

Aise hi ham haweli wapas aa gaye
Jaha sab meri maa ki
Bahut hi tarif kar rahe the

Aise hi 7 din me se char dun bit gaye
5we di mai

Saam ko nadi ki taraf tahlne aaya tha
Tabhi maine kuch dekha

Maine dekha waha nadi ke kinare ek sadhu khoon se lath path waha gasite huwe nadi ki taraf ja raha tha

Mai turant hi unki taraf dauda

Unke pass pahuch ke dekha ki wo bahut hi buri trah jhakmi the

Mai bola

Mai - are baba aap ko itni chot kaha se lagi

Wo meri baat sun ke mujhe gaur se dekhne lage

Aur unki aankh me chamak aa gayi thi wo lagatar mujhe hi dekhe ja rahe the

Mai - baba baba meri awaj sun ke bole

Baba - beta jara pani pila do

Mai turant uth ke kadamb ke patto ko gol gol karke pani le aaya

Kuki waha pe mujhe aur koi cheej nahi milito maine patto ko cone ki tarah bana kar pani le aaya

Pani pine ke baad wo bole

Baba - beta mai kitne din se tumhe hi dundh raha tha

Mujhe to ye sun ke bahut hi hairani huwi ki ye mujhe kyu khoj rahe the

Mai - lekin baba mai to aap ko janta bhi nahi
Aur aap ko dekh ke nahi lagta ki aap yaha ke nahi h

Wo - ha beta lekin tum apne aap ko nahi jante ki tum kaun ho

Aur tumhara jnm kyu huwa h tumhare jnm ka bahut bada uddesya h

Mai to ye sun ke puri trah hang ho gaya

Ye kya kya bole ja raheh aur bhala kis uddesya ki baat kar rahe h

Mai unse pucha

Mai - baba mai to ek aam insan hu mera uddesya kya h

Wo - kuch baate manusya ko wakt pe chod dena chahiye

Maine dekha unke jism se khoin bahna band hi nahi ho raha tha

Aur unhe bolne me bhi kafi taklif ho rahi thi

Wo - beta mere paas time nahi h mujhe mera karya pura karna h

Mai - aap akele hi h kya

Wo - nahi beta mai apne tin sathiyo ke sath tha

Lekin marg me kuch asuri saktiyo ne hame marne ki kosis ki

Mai hi waha se bach ke nikal payahu

Lekin beta mere paas wakt bahut hi kam h

Aur wo apne jhole se kuch tatolne lage aur jab hath nikale to ek bahut hi vichitra anguthi nikale

Mai - ye kya h baba

Wo - beta ye tumhari ek sakti ka ans h jo tumhara bahubal h

Ise pahnne ke baad tumhe is pure sansar me koi mll yudh me nahi hara sakta

Aur tumhe apni talwar wapas pana hoga jo ki seman naam ka ek rakshas chura liya h

Talwar paane se pahle tumhe apna swarn kawach wapas paana hoga jo danawo ke kisi bahut hi bahyanak suraksha me rakha gaya h

Mai to ye sab sun ke confuse ho gaya tha

Ki mai ye sab sach manu ya juth

Kuchdino se mil rahe itne sock se to mai is sock se puri trah stabdh hogaya tha

Tabhi unke karahne se meri tantra tuti

Wo - karahte huwe beeetaaaa aaaapni amant looo aurrrr tumharaa baaa..hut hi

Looogooo ko intzar h beeetaaa

Aur wo anguthi mere hatho me rakh diye

Aur iske baad unka sari sant ho gaya


Aur thodhe der me unka sarir duwa bankar ud gaya

Mai aise hi kuch der us anguthi ko dekhta raha

Jo ki mere hath me aane ke baad chamakne laga tha

Maine apne man me soach ki marta huwa koi bhi kabhi juth nahi bolta

Aur mai us anguthi ko apne daye hath me pahn liya

Anguthi pahnte hi wo anguthi ek dragon ka akar le li

Jise dekh mai dar gaya aur apna hath jhtakne laga

Jab wo nahi chuta to phir se delhne laga

Wo meri anguli se nikal kar meri hatheli se hote huwe

Meri kali pe gaya aur wo kalai se hote huwe anguthe aur second anguli ke beech ja ke ruk gaya

Aur wo ek tatto me badal gaya jo dekhne me bahut hi sandar lag raha tha

Phir kuch der baad us tatto se ek nili rosni nikli aur wo chamkne laga

Jisse meri body me ek bahut hi jabardast jhatka laga

Jisse mai ladkhada gaya aur kuch der baad wo ratto normal ho gaya

Mai dekha ki kafi sham ghir aai thi

Mai turant hi ghar ki taraf chal diya

Jab mai ghar pahucha to andhera ghir chuka tha

Maine jab darwaja khatkhatya to darwaja puja ne khola iske baad mai ghar me aa gaya

Jaha maa aur Shruti baithi thi

Mujhe dekh ke maa boli

Maa - maine tumhe kitni baar kaha h raat me na ghuma karo

Mai - kuch nahi maa wo khet wale ghar pe ruk gaya tha kamare me pta nahi chala juth

Kuki agar bata deta ki nadi pe tha maa gussa ho jati kuki andhera ghirne ke baad udhar koi nahi jata

Maa - chalo theek h aage se ab der raat se ghumna chod do

Mai - theek h maa

Maa - aaj to tumhe apni exercise to yaad nahi rahi

Mai - maa ek hi time to nahi kiya

Maa - achha theek h jao ab hath muh dho lo

Khana ban gayah sabhi kha le

Iske baad ham khana kha ke so gaye agli subha

Mujhe Shruti jagane aai aur uske baad mai ja ke apni exercise kiya

Aur aaya to kitchen se maa se apna juice piya jaha puja bhi maa ke sath hath bata rahi thi

Puja to hamesa maa se hi chpki rahti h maa ko bhi puja se lagao ho gaya h

Aur mai kamare me aa gaya aur kapde nikal ke nahane chala gaya

Jab naha ke lauta to dekha mere bed pe Shruti baithi thi

Jab mai andar aaya to dekha Shruti mujhe hi ghur rahi thi

Jisse mujhe sharam a rahi thi to mai bola are guddi kya dekh rahi h

Shruti mere paas aa ke

Shruti - mere abs ko touch kr ke are bhaiya kya abs bana liye ho bilkul pathar ki trah ho gayi h aapki body

Aur kal tak to mai dekhi thi aapki body me itna kadak pan nahi thi

Aaj achanak itne kut kaha se ban gaye

Kuki shruti hamesa meri body chuya karti thi

Mai - tu bhi na kuch bhi bolti h pahle ki trah to hu mai

Shruti - nahi bhaiya aap ko viswas nahi h to aap maa ke room wale sheeshe me dekh lijiye

Jo ki bada sa tha

Aur wo mujhe kheech ke le gayi aur sheeshe ke samne khada kar di

Mai bhi apni body dekh ke ek bar mai bhi chauck gaya

Kuki mere abs to jaise kawach pahnne ke baad kawach ka katw dikhta h

Same usi trah mere bhi abs ho gaye the

Mai - tu bhi na kuch bhi soachti h pahle ki trah hi to h

Uski to samajhhi nahi aya boli nahi kal to aise nahi tha aise hi bahla diya mai aur ja ke apne kapde pahan liya

Aur kuch der baad maa ne mujhe khana diya aur boli ki jaldi kha lo hame kahi chlna h

Maine khana kha liya aur ham sab ghar se nikal diye

Shruti aur puja kajal ke ghar ruk gayi ham sab aage badh gaye

Dushri taraf

Pahle chalte h Bheema ke paas wo apne bhai ko le ke kidhar gaya

To chaliye dekhte h

Bheema haweli se nikalne ke baad jab dekha ki wo gaon se bahar aa gaya h

To usne apni gadi us jangal ki taraf ghuma diya

Aur jald hi us pahadi ki taraf pahuch gaya

Aur us pahadi pe chadhna uske liye koi kathin karya nahi tha

Jaisa ki aap sab pahle se jante h

Usne birju ko apni pith pe rakh ke bandh liya

Uske baad wo jald hi pahadi pe chadh gaya

Aur usi gufa me gaya jaha wo tantrik rahta tha

Jo ki Bheema ka guru tha

Aur wo apne bhai ko uske samne ja ke utar diya

Uske baad usne apne guru yani us tantrik se namaskar kiya
Ab mai use guru na likh ke tantrik hi likhunga taki aap sab confuse na ho

Tantrik- are Bheema tum aur ye kise utha laye ho

Jante ho na yaha pe jo bhi aata h jivit nahi jata bahut hi bahyanak aawaj me

Bheema - ji guru ji but ye mera bhai h aur ise ...................usne puri baat us tantrik se bataya

Kuch der soachne ke baad tantrik bola

Tantrik - beta ye kaam aasan to nahi h ye tumhara bhai h isliye mai dekhta hu


Kuch der dekhne ke baad wo bola

Tantrik - ye theek ho sakta h kintu

Bheema - kintu kya gurudev

Tantrik - tumhe kam se kam 18 saal ke bache ka taza khoon lana hoga

Bheema - ji gurudev ye kaam to mere liye kuch bhi nahi h

Tantrik - tumne meri puri baat nahi suna ise theek karne ke liye wo ladka apne maa baap ka eklauta hona chahiye

Bheema - theek h gurudev mai kal tak le ke aaunga

Tantrik - mai janta hu ki tumhe koi dikkat nahi aayegi

Phir bhi mai tumhe ek mantr batata hu
Jisse tumhe ladke ko dekh ke bolege to tumhe pata chal jayega ki ladka eklauta h ya nahi


Ab in papiyon ko kaun bataye ki kisi ke ghar ka chirag bujhane pe us ghar ki kya haal hoga

Aur us maa pe kya beetegi jo uske dil ka tukra ho

Bhala aisi jindgi ka kya mol hoga jo ki badduwao ke layak bhi na ho ye jindagi
Waise bhi ye danav ke pujariyo ke liye kisi aam insan ka khoon bahana aam baat h

Uske Bheema waha se nikal gaya

Aur khojte khojte wo kafi dur nikal gaya

Aur aaj ka din bhi nikal gaya aur agla din bhi aadhe se jayada nikal gaya tha


Use ab is duniya pe bhi gussa aane laga tha ki abhi tak uae eklauta ladka nahi mila tha

Aur wo gusse me un sabhi ladko ke maa baap ko bhi gali deta tha jiske upar wo us mantra ka use kart tha

Aise hi ghumte ghumte wo sahar ke ek park ke paas pahuch gaya jaha apni gadi khadhi kar ke wo sarab ke ghunt lene laga

Achanak use awaj sunai di koi ek ladka karib 18 ya 19 saal ja hoga awaj de raha tha

Bachha - uncle uncle meri baal dijye na

Bheema ne turant hi pahle us bachhe par mantra ka prayog kiya

Aur uski ankh me chamak a gayi aur bola

Bheema - lo beta aao apni bowl le jao

Wo ladka aaya aur jaise hi apna hath aage badhya bowl lene ke liye

Turant wo tezi se us ladke ko keecha aur

Uski gadan anth diya wo bachhe turant hi lagbhag adhmara ho gaya

Aurturant use apni gadi me dala jab dekha ki koi use nahi deka h ye sab karte huwe wo waha se turant gadi dauda diya

Ye sab karte huwe tanik daya nahi aai aur uski chahre pe ek aise waisypan tha ki agar raat me

Koi achanak chera dekh le to dar se hi mar jaye

Aur karib 5hr ke baad wo us gufa me pahuch gaya

Tantrik - sabas Bheema tumne samay pe kaam kiya h

Aur raat hone tak intzar karo

Aur wo sab raat hone ka intazar karne lage karib adhi raat ko

Wo dono bahut hi badi murti ke paas hawan kund ke paas baithe the

Aur wo murti dekhne pe hi danav ki lag rahi thi jo inka malik tha
Jiske aankh aur muh me jwala jal rahi thi

Aur Birju ko murti ke samne letya tha..

Tantrik kuch mantra budbuda raha tha aur jab mantra pura huwa aur us hawan kund ki taraf

Tantrik - um him klim klim ........swaha

Aur us hawan kund me aag jal gayi

Kuch der baad wo utha aur us bachhe ko laya aur uski gardan ko dhad se alag kar diya

Aur ladka ka sarir siraf tadaf ke rah gaya

Uske sarir se jo khun gir raha tha use us danaw ke muh pe ghirane laga

Aur kuch der baad waha ek bahut hi ghahra duwa utha aur
Us duwe se awaj aai
Jo ki kafi bahayank thi

jise sun ke kisi ka dil dahal jaye

Awaj - ghr ghar ghu ghu... Bheema tumne aaj mujhe khus kiya h ek nadan ka khoon pila ke

Boloo tum kya chahte ho maag lo jo chahte ho

Bheema - mai dhanya huwa he andhero ke awami mai apne bhai ke jivan dan ke liye aaya hu

Mere chote bhai ko jivan dan dijiye hamare malik
.

Awaj - theek h mai tumhare bhai ko theek kar dunga jise baad ye sirf kali saktiyo ka pujari hoga aur mai tumhe ek murti dunga

Agar wo murti kisi sachai ka rakhwala thod diya to tumhare bhai ki maut ho jayegi

Aur ye do din me sahi ho jayega jab ye apni is nidra se jagega to ise ek baar khoon ki jarurta padegi jisse ye sahi hoga iske baad ye aam insan ki trah ho jayega dekhne me

Lekin iske baad ye sirf burai ka hi pratik hoga

Aur wo duwakuch der baad chat gaya

Aur subha tak use hosh aa gaya tha hosh me aane ke baad wo sirf khoon khoon hi chila raha tha

Iske baad us tantrik ne us bachhe ka khoon pilya jo us murti ke muh ke baa neeche bane ek ghadhe me gir raha tha

Aur wo khoon peene ke baad phir so gaya

Iske baad us murti ko jo wo danav diya tha us tantrik ne apne tapobal se ek jadui ghere me rakh diya

Aur beema se bola

Tantrik - ise kabhi koi chune ki kosis karega to ise yani Birju ko pta chal jayega

Aur tumhe ise sab batana padega ki tum ise kaise theek kiye jise baad ise sab pta chal jayega ye kaise thhek huwa aur ab iski jaan kaha h

Iske baad Bheema bhi phir aane ka kah ke phir se use apni pith pe rakh ke neeche aa gaya

Aur use haweli le gaya

Jb wo phir 2sre din utha to Bheema ne use puri baat bati ki kaise sahi huwa

Aur Birju ko bhi sab yaad aa agaya aur kuch der baad Gajendra ko bhi pta chala uska beta sahi ho gaya h

Aur uske baad wo bhi mil ke kush huwa aur birju pucha

Birju - bhaiya aapne mujhe marne wale ka pta lagaya

Tabhi gajendra bola Gajendra - nahi beta abhi nahi ab tum sahi ho gaye ho ab tum hi use khoj ke use marna

Aur chalo aaj hame mele ki baithak me bhi jana h

Is dangal ke baad tum use apne hatho se marna

Aur wo sab tayari me lag gaye


Udhar

Us mele ke jhagah mandir ka pranghar me 56 gaon ke sabhi prtibhagi aaye huwe the

Mandir ke bsamne ek bahut bada maidan bana tha jaha kusti ke liye mitti ki khudai karke ladne layak bana di gayi thi

Us maidan ke charo taraf bathne ke liye seat bani thi jaha se sabhi us kusti ka anand lene wale the

Aur waha 56 me se 54 gaon ke log aa gaye the tabhi waha 5kali gadiya aai jo ki BMW thi usme se Bhanu prtap aur usnke beta utra aur baki ke gadi se unke bodyguard

Aur kuch hi der baad wha 4 aur gadiya aa ke ruki aur usme se Gajendra aur uske bete utre

Aur sab ja ke apni jhagah baith gaye waha partiyogiyo ke luye baithne ke liye bana tha

Aur sab apna apna naam likhwa ne lage jo ki purv vijeta walo ke hath yani ki Bhanu pratap ko karna tha

Gajendra - kyu bhanu tre ghar sabhi me ab koi mard nahi bacha kya

Sab hijde hi paida kiya h kya jo isme tera koi sadsya nahi h haa
Aur sab tahaka lagane lage

Kuch unme bhi the jo Bhanu pratap se jalte the ya yu kahe sab ab apne aap ko hi sabse bada manne lage the

Ykyu ab tumhari mardangi kaha gayi h cup kyu h teri akad kaha chali gayi ha jayegi hi kyu na

Ab to tere ghar me mard nahi hizade bahche

Bhanu pratap ab kya bolte jab koi unka tayar hi nahi tha ladne ke liye sab sir jhukyae baithe huwe the


Tabhi ek awaj se sab saant ho gaye

Mera beta beta ladega
Abhi ashrya se us sakhs ko dekhne lage aur sath me khade us naujwan ko bhi
super fantastic update
 

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Update 18

Us awaj ki taraf sab dekhne lage waha baitha har koi hairan tha us shakhs ko dekh ke

Wo shakhs aur koi nahi meri maa thi

Maa - mera beta ladega dangal

Thakur bhanu pratap singh ka pota thakur virendra pratap ka beta Ajay pratap singh ladega

Mai - ye sab dekh sun ke to sunn ho gaya tha maa ne ye kya bola

Aur itna bara raaj ham sab se chupa ke rakha tha

Kahir in sab ko dekhte h

Virendra ka naam sun ke Bhanu pratap aur Shushil pratap aur jay prtap aur Nikhil ke chehro pe bhi khusi kilahar daud gayi

Wahi Gajendra to Virendra ka naam sun ke apni jhagah se girne se bacha

Jise girte huwe meri maa ne dekh liya aur boli

Maa - kyu Virendra prtap singh yani mere pati ka naam sun ke hi kamp gaya jo apni kursi se hi gir gaya

Soach us naam ka kauf aaj bhi tere dil me h jinhone tere is bete ko bhikh me jivandan diye the

Agar us din tu ne bhikh na mangi hoti to aaj ye teri bandro ki fauj na rahti

Aur baat karta h hijdo ki apne girebaan me jankh ke dekh tujhe pta chal jayega

Kiske ghar hizde paida huwe h

Is khandan me hamesa se sher paida hote h jo tujh jaise bhediyo ka shikar karte h

Tabhi Bheema

Bheema - hee tu apni aukat se jyada bol rahi saant rah nahi to
Tabhi Gajendra ne use sant krwa diya aur iske baad Bheema bhi sant ho gaya

Tabhi Birju Bheema se bola

Birju - bhaiya yahi h wo ladka jisne muje mara tha

Gajendra - beta abhi kuch nahi ho sakta ab jo bhi karna use is dangal me hi maut ke ghat utar dena

Aur ham chalte huwe Bhanu pratap ke paas gaye aur meri maa boli

Maa - maaf karna babuji itne din tak ham aap se nahi mile kya karu iske pita ne mujhse vachan le liya tha agar jarurat ho to hi waha jana

Bhanu pratap - koi baat nahi bahu jo bhi baat hogi ab ghar chal ke karenge

Jis kaam ke liye aai ho wo ho jaye

Iske baad maine bhi apna naam likhya aur Bheema bhi apna naam likhya

Iske baad 56 logo ko char group me banta gaya ek group me 14 log the Bheema mere group me nahi tha

Waha aaye pahlwan ek se badh kar ek the

Aur iske baad sab ko bataya gaya ki ek group se do log liye jayenge

Iske baad pahla group ke jitne wale tisre wale se aur 2sre wale 4the se

Iske baad agla round un sab me jo char jeetenge unhe ladna padega iske

Baad do bache huwo me antim aur nirnayak mukabla hoga

Aur jitne wal prtibhagi ko us trisul ko nikalna tha jiske baad sabhi 56 gaon unke bas me rahega

Aur kuch tayari dekh ke sab apne ghar chal diye

Wahi hame dekh ke kuch shaks kafi kush dikh rahe the

Sabhi ke chale jane ke baad dada ji bole

Ab mai sabhi ko rishto ke hisab se likhunga jis rishte me sab aayenge aur ab phir se detail nahi dunga

Dada ji - chalo bahu ghar chalo

Maa - nahi pita ji abhi nahi aa sakti hu

Dadaji - ab koi jid nahi chalegi aur mai kuch nahi sunna chahta chalo ab ghar

Iskebaad maa sant ho gayi kuch nahi boli

Maa - theek h pahle apne ghar chalungi meri beti ghar pe akeli h

Dadaji - kya meri poti bhi h theek h jaldi chalo ab koi bhi dur nahi rahega khushi se

Lekin bahu veera (virendra pratap) nahi dikh raha h

Maa - mai abhi unke bare me kuch nahi bta sakti

Dadaji- chalo pahle ghar chalte h tab baat hogi

Aur hamre Gaun ki taraf sabhi BMW chal padi gaon me gadi enter karte hi sab hame dekhne lage

Aur gadi hamare ghAr aa ke ruki aur gaon wale peeche pecche hamare ghar tak aa gaye

Ye dekhne ke liye ki kaun aaya h

Aur jab dadaji gadi se utresabhi gaon wale sar jukha liye

Iske baad jab maa gadi se utri sabhi hairan ho gaye

Iske baad ham sab ghar ka darwaja khatkhatya to darwaja shruti kholi

Samne anjan logo ke sath hame dekh ke shruti hairan ho gayi

Aur ham andar aa gaye iske baad maa ne Shruti ko bataya ki ye h meri beti

Aur Shruti se beta ye tumhare dadaji badepapa
Aur dono bhaiya h
Jay aur nikhil ki taraf isara kar ke

Pooja to sab ko janti thi to wo bhi sab ke pair chui Shruti ke sath

Aur dadaji bole chalo beta ab koi bhi yaha nahi rahega

Shruti to abhi bhi sock me thi ki ye sab kya ho raha h

Aur sab bahar aa gaye jaha dada ji bahar aa ke bole

Dadaji - mera beta aur bahu isi gaon me hi rah rahe the aur mai kaha kaha nahi dundha

Aur sab gaon wale jab jane ki ham sab Thakur ke khandan ke h sab

Mere naam ka jaykara lagane lage

Iske baad dadaji sab ko chup karaye aur bole kal is pradesh ka sab se bada mela lag raha h

Jo ki 20 warsh ke baad aata h aap sab aana na bhole ye mela hamare GAon ki shan h

Iske baad kuch baate aur kar ke ham sab haweli ki taraf chal diye

Jab haweli me sabhi gadiya enter huwi gadiyo ki aawaj sun ke sab ghar wale bahar aa gye

Kyuki jab kuch special hota h haweli ke sab sadsya bahar aa ke swagat karte the

Jay Bhaiya ne bhabhi se phone pe bta diye the

Aur jab ham sab gadi se utre to sabhi turant hi hamare paas aa gaye

Aur dadi ji to maa ko gale laga ke rone lagi

Dadaji bole are pahle sabhi andar to chalo
Sab andar aa gaye

Tab sabhi ke swalo ka daur suru huwa

Dadi -, bahu kaha chali gayi thi ham sab kitna pstaye the tumhare jane ke baad

Aur ham sab tumhe kaha kaha nahi dundhe

Maa - are maa ji wo sab bhool jaye jo beet gaya

Dadi - are ye to mera sher hi tha mai to pahli baar hi dekh ke laga ki is ka is ghar se koi na koi rishta h

Aur mere mathe ko pakad ke chum li

Aur Shruti ko dekh ke ye meri poti hai kya bahu

Maa haa me gardan hila di

Dadi - are meri pyari beti aur Shruti ko gale laga li

Ham apne pariwar se mil ke hamare aankho me aansu aagaye

Dadi - are mele ladlo rote kyu ho tum sab ko apni goud me nahi khila saki to kya ab mai tumhe apne paas hi rakhungi

Aur ham dono ko gale laga li

Isi trah family drama kafi der tak chala aur sabhi papa ke bare me puche to maa boli abhi samay nahi aaya h batane ka

Aise hi sab khushi khusi dopahar khana sath baith ke kiye

Sabhi ke chehare par khusi jalak rahi rahi thi

Aur khane ke baad dadaji ne maa ko room me bulaya aur bole

Dadaji - bahu sach btana veera wahi gaya tha na jaha jane ke baad koi nahi lauta h

Maa - ha pita ji mai ajay ke samne nahi batana chahti ki uske pita kaha chale gaye

Dadaji - chalo koi baat nahi bahu jo ho gaya ho gaya

Mai use kai bar bola tha waha kabhi na jana lekin wo apni wali kr hi diya

Theek h jao lekin is baat ka jikra kisi se na karna ab

Aur maa chali aai aur ham tino ko meri sabhi bahne aur bhai bhabhi ek kamare me laye

Aur un sab ke sawalo ka saur sur huwa

Nikhil - mujhe us din dekh ke hi laga tha ki ye meri chaachi h lekin mujhe yaad nhi aaya ki kaha dekha hu

Komal - are ha bhaiya wo chacha aur chachi ki photo h na usme dekhe honge

Bhabhi - mujhe to ek aur nanad mil gayi Shruti ke gaal ko keench ke

Gaal keenchne par Shruti sharma ke mere god me apan sar chupa li

Bhabhi - are dekho meri ladao to sharma gayi

Aur dewar ji aap to hamare sage dewar nikle

Mai - aap bhi to hamari bhabhi hi nikli

Meri baad pe sabhi has diye

Nitu -, waise hamara bhai to hero nikla ab to hamare paas itna sundar aur balwan bhai mil gaya
Aise hi ham sab din bhar masti kye

Aur sham ho gayi jaha sab baithe baate kar rahe the

Us baithak ke khatam hone ke baad

Gajendra aur uske beto to puri trah bhannye huwe the

Ghar aa ke gusse me gajendra ne apna ang vastra (jo kandhe pe rakha jata h lambe gamche ki trah ) use utar ke penkh diya

Gajendra - sala ab ye virendra ka pilla kaha se aa gaya beech me

Aur ab tak ye isi gaon me rahta tha kisi ko bhanak hi nahi lagi

Bheema - dada ji aap paresan kyu hote h us chuhe ko aise maut doonga ki uski aane wali saat peediya Bheema ka naam sun ke hi kisi ladke ko jnm na dengi

Us thakur khandan ki aisi durgati hogi puri duniya dekhegi

Har jagah aa ke wo apni tang ladata h
Is baar naa bachegi taang aur na hi adegi taang

Gajendra - beta apne dusman ko kabhi bhi kamjor nahi samjhna chahiye

Wo kab kaha aur kaise bhari pad jaye is liye hamesa apne vipakshi se stark rahna chaiye

Bheema - dada ji aap kyu chinta karte h is baar aisa dangal hoga jo ki is prtap ghar ke pure itihas me aisa nahi huwa hoga

Puri prtap ghar ki janta is Bheema ka tandav dekhegi

Iske baad ye pura prtap ghar hamara hoga

Birju - ha dada ji aap bas dekhte jaye aage kya hoga

Aise hi sab apne apne bal ke ghamand me chur sabko apna gulam banane ka sapna saja rahe the dekhte h inka sapna kitna sach hota h

Dushri taraf

Waha se nikalne ke baad meri maa ke gharwale

Yani ki mere mama ke ghar sabhi pahuchne ke baad sabhi aaj bahut khush dikhi de rahe the

Tabhi badi mami yani ki laxmi

B mami - kya baat h ji aap sab bahut hi khus dikhai de rahe h bade mama-*sher singh se

B mama - kya batau mai tumhe vishal ki maa aaj itne salo baad mai apni eklauti bahan ko dekha

Usko dehne ke liye meri aankhe taras gayi thi

Aur mere ek bhanja bhi h jo kafi bada ho gaya h
Ye baat kahte huwe bade mama udas ho gaye

B mami - aap achanak udas kyu ho gaye

B mama - abhi mai apne bhanje se mil bhi nahi paaya aur wo is dangal me ladne ja raha h

Aur uski umr bhi 19 ke aas paas hi hogi

Aur maine suna h wo Bheema us pahadi wale jangal me jate huwe kai log dekhe h use

jaha koi aghori rahta h agar waha koi bhi chala gaya to jivit nahi lautth h


Lekin gaon walo ko manna h ki Bheema us aghori ko guru manta h

Jiske kali takte ho uske samne bhala koi kaise tikega

B mama - aap itna kyu soachte h bhagvan kabhi bhi burai ki vijay nahi hone denge

Aur aise hi mujhe lekar mere mama ke ghar kafi charcha huwi

Achanak hamari asliyat samne aane se pure gaon me khalbali machi thi


Aise hi ye din beet gaya sabhi dangal mele ki tayari me lage the
very nice update bhai
 

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Agli subha ham sabhi uth ke daily ka routine work kiye

Iske baad sabhi nashta wagairah karne ke baad dadaji bole

Kaun kaun chalega dangal dekhne ke liye

Aur kaun mele me ghumega

Sabhi bole nahi ham dangal dekhenge pahle

Kyuki mela to 15 dino tak rahega

Aur sabhi tayar hone chal diye meri bahne to sabse jayada excited thi dangal
Ke liye

Wo to esliye khush thi ki wo live kushti dekhne ko milegi unhe

Unhe kya pta waha us dangal me kya kya dekhne ko mile ga

Aur sabhi tayar ho ke bahar aaye aur sabhi gadi me baith gaye

Mujhe le ke to sabhi bahne ek gadi me baith gayi aur sath me nikhil is baar gaadi drive kar raha tha tho ham sabhi bhai bahne ek hi gadi me adjust ho liye

Aur ek gadi me maa dono bua dadi badi maa aur bhabhi

Aur ek gadi me dadaji bade papa jay bhaiya

Aur ham sab nikal diye us mandir ke pranghar ki taraf

Kuch der baad jab ham waha pahuche to

Ham sab dekhe waha bane maidan ke charo taraf kafi achhi tarah sajaya gaya tha

Waha pura baithne ka sthan pura janta se khchakhach bhara huwa tha

Hamare aate hi shor hone laga aur Bhanu pratap ki jay ke naare lagane lage log

Dadaji hath utha ke abhivadan ka uttar diye to janta ka shar kam huwa aur ham sab chalte huwe apne sthan pe ja ke baith gaye

Jo ki maidan ke samne sabse ucha bana huwa tha wo sthan purva vijata ka hota tha

Is liye ham waha ja ke baith gaye

Waha ki surakhsa ke liye police prasasan bhi tainat the

Lekin yaha is dangal ka rula tha ki yaha jo bhi hoga usme sarkar kuch nahi kar sakti

Yaha ki prampara ke anusar hi sab kuch hota h yaha police ek prakar se darsak ke siva kuch nahi thi

Ham sab ke baithne ke baad hamne bagal dekha to waha gajendra pratap ke bete aur pote the

Jo ki hamare itna smman milneke karan andar hi andar jal rahe the

Aur dushri taraf hamare mama ka pariwar tha

Jinhe dekh ke maa ne dur se hi pranaam kiya jise dekh ke sab kafi khush aur isare me hi unhe ashirwad diye

Mujhe to kisi ne kuch btaya nahi tha unke bare me to mai sirf khada raha

Aur kuch der baad announcement huwa ki jo jo prtibhagi is dangal me hissa liye h kripya sabhi is maidan me aa jaye

Announcement hone ke baad sabhi davedar maidan me ek ek karke jane lage

To mai bhi apne khusti ke pisak me ho liya

Yani ki ek half sports cafri me aa gaya jo bhaiya kal hi use sahar se le aaye the

Uske baad mai sabhi ke pair chuwe sabhi ne mere jeet ki kamna kiye

Uske baad maa ne mujhe isare kar ke mama ke pariwar ko dikhayi aur boli wo mere nana mama mami h to mai yahi se hath jod ke namaskar kiya

Un sabhi ne khade ho ke mera abhinandan kiye

Kyuki abhi wakht nahi tha ki ja ke unse hal chal pucha jaye

Aur mai maidan ki taraf chal diya
Mai bhai waha pahuch gaya jaha sabhi pahlwan khade the

Mai bhi un sab ke bagal ja ke khada ho gaya

Uske baad waha shiv bhagwan ki puja huwi aur uske baad sankh naad huwa

Aur sabhi ko bta diya gaya kise kiske sath ladna h

Aur sab apni jhagah wapas chale gaye iske baad jo commentary karne ke liye baitha tha wo bolna start kiya

Commentator - jaisa ki aap sab jaante h aap sab yaha kyu aaye huwe h is desh ka sabse prathisthit aur sabse prachin kala dangal ko dekhne ke liye

Gaon se budhe jawan aur bachhe
Ladke ladkiya saas aur bahuye

Aaj tak aap sabhi ne filmo e ladai aur jhagde dekhe h

Serial me saas aur bahuo ki nok jhok dekhe

Yaha desh ka sabse mahan khel dangal mahotsv ka aanand uthane ke liye sabhi apne apne kamo ko chod kar yaha upasthit huwe h to hazir h

Aap sab ke manoranjan ke liye is khel ka sabse pahle

Is puro gaon me apne bal ke liye vikhyat Bheema jinke samne h sinu jo ki apne danv ke liye janne jate h

Is khe ko suru hone se pahle aap sab ko bta doo ki is dangal rule h agar samne ka prtibhagi apne vipkshi se haar maan gaya to wo jamin par teen baar hath marega

Uske baad use hara huwa mana jayega
To suru karte is hari jhandi ko girne ke baad aur isi ke sath is dangal ka pahla mukabla ke liye apni aanke aur utsah badhane ke liye

Apni taliyon ko bajate rahe dosto aur jandde ke girne ke sath ye mukabla suru hota h

Sinu aur Bheema aamne samne khade the

Bheema - chal aa ja dekhta hu ek mard ki aulad h ya ek hizade ki paidish h

Jisse Bheema ki baat pe Sinu ko gussa aa gaya aur wo pura jor laga ke Bheema ke taraf dauda

Aur uske kamar ko pakadkar jhatke se peeche ki taraf dakhelne ki kosis kiya lekin wo nakam use tas se mas nahi kar saka

Jiske baad Bheema use kisi halke bore ki tarah use utha ke dur penkh diya

Jisse pura maidan Bheema Bheema ke naam se gunj utha

Iske baad Sinu isi trah kai baar pryas kiya lekin wo nakam raha

Bheema - har man le ab kyu apni jaan gawana chahta h ja apne juru ke aanchal me chup ja

Jisse Sinu ko gussa aa gaya aur wo khud ke puri takat se uski chati pe prahar kiya

Bheema do kadam peeche ki taraf ladkhada gaya

Jisse Bheema ko gussa aa gaya aur bola
Bheema - suwar ki aulad ab tu jinda wapas nahi jaye ga is akhade se bahar

Jaise hi dobar wo narne ke liye dauda aur Bheema ke paas pahucha

Bheema use pura hawa me utha ke neeche patak diya jisse ek dardnaak cheek goonji

Aaaahhhhh aaah

Sinu phir se uthne ki kosis karne laga jisse Bheema pura gusse se laal ho gaya

Aur uske baad Bheema ne apne pair se puri takat se sine ke sar pe mara jisse Sinu ka sir jamin me dans gaya

Aur apne pair se uske sir ko dabaye raha jisse Sinu kuch der chat ptata raha aur kuch der baad uska sarir saant ho gaya

Aisa manjar dekh ke to logo ke halak hi sukh gaye pure maidan me snnata cha gaya

Sannate ko commentator ki awaj ne thoda

Cmnttr - jaisa ki aap sab dekh rahe h is baar pratap ghar ke itihas me pahli baar koi bhi prtibhagi apne vpakshi ke hathe se is mukable ko hi nahi apni jindgi hi haar gaya

Is danga ki surwat itni bhayanak huwi h to abhi hame kafi mukable dekhne h to dosto sabhi apne dil ko tham ke baithe rahe

Aur agle mukable ke liye tayar rahe jo ki is gaon ke purv mukhiya is gaon ke malik Shri Bhanu pratap singh ka pota Ajay pratap singh jiske khoon me hi jeet likhi h

Jeetna is khandan ka pesa nahi aadat h aur harana inka sauk nahi hunar h

Aur inke samne pahadi kabile ke pawan jinke paas apne naam ki trah hi pawan jaisa weg h jo apne cheete jaisi tezi ke liye jane jate h

To tayar ho jayiye is dangal ke dusre sbse bade mukable ke liye
Agle mukable ke liye mai maidan me aa gaya

Aur hari jhandi ke girte hi wo pahlwan meri taraf dauda

Aur uski speed normal insan se kafi tez thi

Daudte huwe usne mujhe ek kick mari aur mai sarkta huwa kuch dur chala gaya


Jisse pure maidan me pawan pawan ke naam ka shor hone laga

Phir usne apni puri speed dikhiyi aur is baar wo mujhe utha ke patak diya

Isse pahle ki mai sambhal pata ki ek kick aur mere pet pe padi phir mai dur sarak gaya

Tabhi mere man me kisi ki aawaj aai

Ajay tum itne adhir kyu ho tum in jaise chote pahlwano se har jaoge to tumhare jnm ka kya mltb rah jayega

Tumhe apne prtidwandi ke sabhi moves ko parakhna hoga

Wo kaise kya kar raha h tumhe itni choti badhye nahi rok sakti

Utho aur apne man ko sant karo phir mukabla karo

Is prakar man ko asaant karke kisi bhi youdh ko nahi jita ja sakta chaye ye kusti hi kyu na ho

Hamese hame apne lakshye pe dhyan dena chaihye

Aur meri tantra logo ke shor se tuti jo pawan pawan ke naam se shor macha rahe the

Is baar wo jaise hi mere upar kuda mai antim samay me waha se hat gaya

Ek baar mere naam ki shor mach gaya

Wo pahlwan muskura raha tha aur utha phir wo meri taraf phir se dauda

Is baar usne phir se hawa ke chalang laga di hawa me hi usne mujhe kick marne ke liye is baar pair chalaya

Mai is baar taiyar tha aur jaise hi uska pair mere sar ke paas aaya

Mai turant hi uska pair pakad ke use turant hi pura jor laga ke jamin pe patak diya

Patakne se itni tez aawaj aai
Dhaaaaaaaaddddddd

Pure maidan me shor hona band ho gaya

Waha kisi ko kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha waha sirf mitti hi mitti sabko nazar aa rahi thi

Aur mai us par baras pada tha use ek football ki pairo se maar rha tha jo kabhi is kone us kone ud ke jata meri kick padte hi

Jab dul chati to logo ko dikhayi dene laga tha aur sab phir se shor start kar diye

Aur last me mai uske upar chalang laga diya isse pahle ki

Mera ghusa use uske saat jnmo ki yaad dilye usne jamin par
Apne hath ko tin baar patak diya

Aur mai uske upar se uthar gaya jiske baad use utha ke le jaya gaya kuki meri maar khane baad usme uthne ki himmat nahi bachi

Aur isi trah sabhi leg mukablo mo meri aur Bheema ki vijay hui

Jisme Bheema ne apne prtidwandi ki laas ko us akhade se bahar bijway

Aur mai apne sabhi prtidwandi ko jinda choda thaIsi trah sabhi mukable ke baad mai aur Bheema final me aamne samne the

Cmnttr - to dosto is mukable ke nirnayak mukable ke liye tayar ho jayeye

Kuki har baar ki trah is baar bhi is gaon ke sabhse bade prtidwandi aamne samne h

Is baar phir se har baar ki trah prtap ghar ka itihas usi jagha pe jaha har baar ki trah ye dono khan dan ke beech final mukabla khela gaya h

Jo ki har baar Bhanu pratap ji ke khandan ne har baar is mukable ko jeet ke is gaon pe raaj karne ki virasat apne paas rkhe h

Is baar phir se vahi ithas dohraya jayega ya is baar naya ithihas likha jayega

Kyuki har baar sabhi pahlwan jinda laute the is akade se

Kintu is baar to Bheema ke samne wale ki laas hi bahar nikli h is akhade se

To tayar ho jaye apne naye sasak ko pane ke liye

Aur mai aur Bheema aamne samne khde the aur jhandi ke girne ka intazar kar rahe the

Aur jhandi ke girte hi ham tayr ho gaye the ek dushre ko maat dene ke liye

Is baar pur maidan me saanti phaili huqi thi

Kyuki sabhi ko pta tha ki khandan ki dusmani aaj ki nahi salo se chali aa rahi thi jo ki sab sirf ham par nighah tikaye baithe the

Aur jaise hi mera aur Bheema ke panje aapas me lade pure aasman me kale badal cha gaye

Jo ki din me hi lag raha tha ki andhera ho gaya

Aur hawae kafi tez chalne lagi

Bheema ne mujhe usi trah ek hath ko chuda ke mujhe hawa me utha liya aur mujhe jamin pe phenk diya

Jisse is baar mujhe halki chot lagi is mai sambhal pata usne phir se mujhe patak diya

Aur aise hi usne mujhe kai baar patka uske Patakne ke karan mera haath ka wo Tattoo ab chamak ne laga tha

Is trah se mujhe maar khata dekh sab ko dar lagne laga tha ki is baar is dangal ki GAJENDRA ka pota hi jitega

Aur meri sabhi bahne apas me ek dusre ka hath kas ke pakad li

Aur meri bua aur mamiyo ke aankho me aansu aa gaye the

Sabhi gharwale dil pe pathar rakh ke is antim mukablo ko dekh rahe the sabhi apne man me mere jit ki dua maang rahe the

Aur mai jab khada huwa jaise mujhe laga ki mujhe koi bhi chot nahi lagi h

Is baar Bheema ne kud ke mere sine pe laat mara kintu mai apne jhagah se sirf do kadam peeche gaya tha

Aur is baar hamre panje aapas me lad gaye aur phir start huwa hamaara asli khukhar dangal

Jise dekh ke sabhi ko yakin ho gaya tha ki is akhade se bahar koi ek hi jayega

Aur mai Bheema ko pakad ke ulta ghum gaya aur use pecche se utha ke apne aage patka

Jisse use bahut trz chot lagi sayad wo puri takat se chilya uski chikh itni bhayank thi ki koi bhi dar jay

Aur phir sai mai use utha liya is baar mai use puri takat se apni jangho pe patka jisse uski chikh nikal gayi

Aaahhhh aaaahhahhahhaahh

Mai uski gardan apne pair se daba raha tha

Achanak mujhe mere piche se ek jordaar laat padi mai waha se dur ja ke gira

Uth ke dekha to waha birju khada tha jisne mujhe laat mara

Huwa yu maine jab Bheema ko marna suru kiya to birju ko gussa aa gaya

Aur wo akhade me kud gaya Gajendra use rokta rah gaya

Kintu wo bola ki ab ye yaha se jinda wapas nahi jayega ab ise koi nahi bacha sakta

Ab aate h present me
Aise dekh ke sab gaon wale chillane lage

Nahi nahi ye beimani h ye dangal ab nahi hoga

Cmnttr - ye kya ye is khel ke virudh h ab is khel ke vijeta ajay pratap singh h

Birju - chup karo haramjadio nahi to yaha se koi jinda wapas nahi jayega

Aur ab tum sab bas tamasa dekho kya ho raha h agar kisi ne phir se kuch bhi ek SBD agar apne muh se nikala to wo bhi mara jayega

Mai dekha ki sabhi dare huwe the kyuki ab ye do the jo ki ek prakar se mai jeet hi chuka tha

Mere ghar wale dare sahme huwe the to mai bola

Mai - sant ho jaye sabhi log is jaise hazaro aa jaye mera kuch nahi bigad sakte

Aap sab ab dekhe yaha se ab tino me se ya to mai bahar jinda niklunga ya to ye dono

Birju - tayar ho ja marne ke liye ab tujhe bachane wala koi bhi nahi

Mai - apne hath ko peeche kar ke hath ko peeche kar ke pakad liya

Aur bola aa ja tujh jaise ke liye mujhe hath ki jarurat nahi padegi dekhta hu ki tere khoon me kitna dam

Mujhe hath peeche karta dek ke sabhi sann ho gaye jaha ek gahan sannta cha gaya tha sab bas taktaki lagaye baithe the

Ki aage ab kya hone wala h

Aur birju meri chunauti sunkar meri taraf dauda aur mere karib aa kar mujhe marne ke liye gussa chalaye jo ki mera sar nisana tha

Mai thoda juk ke apne khande se uske sine pe prahar kiya usks balance bigad gaya

Mai turant hi apne sar uske sar me de mara wo samblta isse pahle mere ek jabar dast laat uske pet me pada wo kafi dur ja ke gira

Jise dekh ke sabhi gaon wale mere mujhe protsahan dene lage

Tab tak Bheema bhi sambhal gaya tha

Dono khade ho mujhe aaju baju se gher liye

Aur mai bhi tayar tha tabhi Bheema ne meri taraf dauda jaise hi mere paas aaya mai uske jabdo khud ke apne gutne se mara

Usne jalpna nahi kiya tha is hamle ki aur uske 2 daant sahid ho gaye

Aur tabhi peeche se birju meri taraf dauda mai turan hi kalabazi karte huwe

Uske sar ke upar se uske peeche aa gaya wo gumta ussse pahle hi mai use peeche se hi uski gardan ko pakad ke apne aage patka

Wo wahi chit ho gaya

Tabhi Bheema meri taraf latka aur is baar usne meri kamar pakad ke mujhe girne ki kosis kya

Lekin mai kuch dur tak sarak gaya aur ek pair peeche kar ke ruk gaya
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Aur turant mai use uski kamar se pakad ke pura hawa me utha liya aur puri takat se patka is baar uski ek dardnak cheekh gunji


Aaahhhhb aaaaahhhhhhhhh

Wo phir se khada hota mai pura jor laga ke uske upar kud gaya aur apne gutne ko mod ke uske sine pe mara jisse kaddddak ki aawaj aai sayad uski pasli tut gayi thi

Aur ghuuu ooiuuuu wohhhhh karte huwe uske mukh se khoon aa gaya

Mai use ulta kar ke uske kandho ko apne pair se daba ke uske pair ko apne khandhe par rakh ke kheenchne laga

Mai itne gusse me aa gaya tha ki birju uth ke aa ke peeche se mujhe puri takat se maar raha tha

Mujhe kuch pta hi nahi chal raha tha

Aur mai pure jor se uske pair ko khenchne laga aur Bheema ki bayana dardnaak chikh gunjh ke kafi bhayanak watawarn ko utpan kar rahi thi

Aaahhhhh aaaaaahhhhhhh ooooohhhhhhh mmmmmmmaaaaaa aaaaahhhhhhbbbhhhhhh

Aur uske mukh se khoon ki nadi bah chali aur kuch der baad jab mujhe laga ki uska sarir saant ho gaya

To mai use chod diya aur birju ki garda pakad ke use utha liya aur uska gala dabane laga

Wo puri takat se apne hath pair mar raha tha apni gardan chudane ke liye wo lagatar apne hath se mere hath pe mare ja raha tha

Mai use jamin se upar uski gardan ko pakad ke uthye tha aise hi lagbhag panch min tak wo hath pair marta raha aur dhire dhire kar ke uska sarir saant ho gaya aur mai use chod diya aur wo kisi kate ped ki tarah jamin pe gir gaya

Aur pure maidan me me naam ki jayjTrishul ko bahar nikalte hi jaise sab kuch ruk sa gaya

Log jaha jis trah jis sthiti me the sabhi usi trah ho gaye

Sabhi ek putle ki trah ho gaye samay jaise ruk sa gaya waha sirf mai akela hi hil dul aur sab kuch kar sakta tha

Tabhi ek bahut hi tez safed roshni huwi

Uska ujala itna tez tha ki meri aankhe apne aap band ho gayi aur kuch der baad jab maine

Apni aankhe dhire dhire khola to dekha ki mere samne ek akriti bani huwi thi jo ki safed rosni ke alawa waha kuch nahi tha

Us rosni ka aakar ek hath me trishul sar pe jataye bandhi huwi thi aur jatao pe cndrma ka aakar tha

Mai turant hi jhuk gaya aur bola

Mai - prabhu aap yaha mere saamne mai to aap ke sakshat darasan se hi danya ho gaya

Aab mera ye jivan safal ho gaya jo mujhe devo ke dev mahadev ke darsan prapt ho gaya

Suna h maine aapke darsan maatra se hi manusya ko moksya prapt ho jata h

Is din bakt ka aap ko parbhu koti koti naman h

Shivji - vatsy mai yaha ek karya se tumhare paas aaya hu

Aur tumhe abhi itni jaldi moksya prapt nahi hone wale

Tumhe sristi ke jis karya ke liye chuna gaya h tumhe use pura karna hoga

Mai - kintu prabhu mai kaise sristi ke vikas me madad kar sakta hu

Shiv ji - putra tumhe iski chinta nahi karni h ki kaisa karya karna h tumhe

Samay ke sath tumhe tumhara karmo likhe gaye karyo ko khud hi aisi sthiti banegi ki
Jis karya ke liye tum chune gaye wo tumhe pura karna hoga

Sarvapratham tumhe tumhara pahla padav ke bare me tumhare haveli me milega jo ki ek kitab me h jo tumhari haveli ki tahkhane me kahi rakha gaya h

Jo ki tumhare dada ji ne use ab chupa diya h jo ki wo kitab tumhare purvajo ne hazaro sal pahle likhi h

Tumhe usi kitab se jankari milegi tumhe kaha jana h

Mai - ji parbhu jaisi aap ki ichha mai danya ho gaya jo ki sristi ke vikas karya ke liye mujhe chuna gaya h
To wo karya mai awasy pura karunga mahadev

Shiv ji- aur ek baat tumhe waha jane par jo tumhari saktiya jo ki abhi kuch hi saktiya jagrit huwi h

Waha jane par tumhari koi bhi sakti kaam nahi aayegi

Waha par tumhara sathi sirf tumhari budhimatta aur soach hi rahegi

Tum waha ek aam insan ki trah hi jaoge

Aur tumhe apne man ko sant rakhna hoga aur tumhe apne gusse pe kabu rakhna hoga jisse tumhe saflta me sahyata milegi

Mai - ji prabhi mai iska smaran rakhunga

Shiv ji - aur mai tumhe vardan deta hu is sansar ki manav nirmit koi bhi astra ya sastra aur jal ya agni tumhara kuch nahi bagad sakti h

Mai apne hath jod ke khada tha tabhi unke hath se ek roshni nikli aur mere andar sama gayi

Aur tabhi fir se prakas fail gaya aur maine apni aankhe band kar li

Aur dubara jab apni aankhe khola to sab kuch normal ho gaya tha
super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
 

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Nice and superb update bro!
 
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Update 20

Iske baad dekha ki sabhi mere trishul ko nikalne baad mere naam ki jaykar karne lage

Mere ghar wale bahut hi khus the ki maine ye mukabla jeeta hi nahi balki is gadde huwe trishul ko nikal diya

Iske baad cmnttr ne phir se mike me bolna start kiya

Cmntttr - to dosto jaisa ki aap sab ne dekha ki antim aur final mukabla me niyam ke khilaf thakur gajendra ke pote ne

Is dangal me utar kar is akhade ke niyam ko toda jo ki is mukable ko roka ja sakta tha

Lekin apne takat ke ghamand me chur dono ko hi is akhade me sahid hona pada

Aur is baar bhi ap sab ke yani ki pure 56 gaon ke malik honge thakur ajay pratap singh ji

Ajay ji yaha aaye aur aap apne logo ko doo tuk kuch kahe

Mai staje ki taraf chal diya jaha se wo cmntri kar raha tha

Aur mike le ke bola

Mai - mai bhanu pratap singh ka pota aur virendra pratap singh ka beta
Aur is dangal ka vijeta ye ghosit karta hu dobara phir se ye dangal pratiyogita ab dobara nahi hogi

Ab jantantra ka yug h to aap sab aage chal ke sabhi rajyon ki trah aap bhi ab vote dekar hi apna neta chunenge

Is dangal ka kya arth jo ik khusti ka maidan na ho kar ye ik khuni maidan ban jaye

Jaha log khel bhana ko chod kar marne marne par utar jaye aise khel ka kya fayda

Log to yaha ek dusre ki takat ya kaushal dekhne aate h lekin kuch apne swabhiman ke chalte kitne gharo ko uska malik hi chin le

To ab is prampara ko mai is gaon ka malik hone ke karan ap smapt karta hu

Aur iske baad mai waha se utar ke apne parivar ke paas aa gaya

Mere is faisle se pure janta me josh ka lahar daud gaya aur sabhi jasn manane lage

Mere is nirnay ko mere dada ji bhi sahi tahraye mere un sab ke paas aane par dada ji ne mujhe gale laga liye

Aur udhar jis jis gaon ke pahlwan mare gaye the sabhi rote huwe unki laaso ki lekar apne ghar ko laut gaye

Aur Gajendra bhi bheema aur birju ki sarir ko uthwa ke apne apne gadi me rakhwa liya aur jate jate hame bahut hi gusse me ghur raha tha

Aur sath me apne pote ke khone ka dar tha

Ye sab hote hote saam ho gayi to cmnttr ne announce kiya ki ab ye mela ab band hota h kyuki ab raat hone wali h

Aur ab sabhi dukal wale apne sone ki vayastha kar le aur jo sabhi gaon se aaye h wo apne apne ghar chale jaye

Aur kal subha se ye mela start hoga

Aur ham bhi apne ghar ki taraf ravana ho gaye
Idhar ham ghar pahuch gaye aur sabhi gaddi se utre aur haweli ke andar aa gaye

Mujhe ab thodhi thakan si lag rahi thi to mai bola

Mai - mai ja raha hu sone mai thak gaya hu

Dadaji - theek h beta jao

Maa - jao lekin ja ke pahle naha lo phir sona

Iske baad mai andar apne kamare me aa gaya aur bathroom me ghus gaya

Aur garam panni se nahane laga aur nahate huwe soachne laga ki sabhi to aasani se har gaye

Lekin un dono bheema aur birju se ladte time mujhe ajib sa feel ho raha tha

Jaise wo koi sadharan nahi lag rahe the aur unhe harane ke baad mujhe kuch der baad se thakawat ho rahi thi

Sayad itni mehnat ke karan mai ne apne sar ko jhatak aur soacho se bahar nikla aur jaldi jaldi naha ke so gaya

Bahar sab pue din ki charcha me lage huwe the

Aur bhabhi aur maa khana banane chali gayi aur mard wahi apni apni bate suru kar di

Aur meri bahne apne kamre me aa gai jaha priya madhu komal nitu aur kiran thi

Tabhi madhu ne ek camera nikala jo ki wo apne sath le gayi thi jo ki mujhe baad me pta chala

Aur us camera ko apna laptop nikal ke usme connect kar di aur us camera me mai jab lad raha tha to ladte samay ki bahut si photo thi

Aur use apne laptop me copy kar li aur phir sabhi gupsup karne lagi ki kal mele me kya karna h

Aur kuch samay baad mujhe laga ki koi mujhe jaga raha tha maine apni aankhe kholi to shruti aur puja thi

Shruti - chalo bhaiya khana kha lo sabhi bula rahe h aapko

Mai - gudiya time kitna huwa h

Shruti- 9 bj gaye h

Iske baad mai bola chalo dono mai aata hu aur maine apni muh hath dhoya aur neeche aa gaya

Jaha sabhi baithe the
Mai bhi sabhi ko join kar liya
Tabhi dada ji bole

Dada ji - beta tum theek to ho na kahi koi chot to nahi aai na

Mai - nahi dada ji mai theek hu

Madhu - bhai aaj to full entertain huwa ham sab ka hame to live khusti dekhne ko mili

Nikhil - ha bahar se to baith ke tumhe maja aayega hi jo waha lad raha raha tha use hi pta hpga.

Dadi - ha beta ham sab to dare huwe the jab tumhare us bheema se antim mukabla tha wo to jisse bhi lada sabhi ki laas hi bahar nikali

Likin prabhu ki ichha se wo aur apne sath sath apne bhai ko bhi sath le gaya

Chalo achha hi huwa aise log duniya me rahte pta nahi kya kya karte apne takat ke ghamand me

Priya - sach me ham sab to saans rok ke final dekh rahe the mere bhai jaisa to is duniya me bhi nahi hoga

Maa - hoga kyu nahi akhir khun kiska h

Dada ji - ha bahu wakai me tum to ise ek sanche me dhal di ho agar koi bhi isse takrayega to chur chur ho jayega

Aur aise hi ham sab ki bate chalti rahi aur hamara khana ho gaya

Aur sabhi chal diye apne apne room me sone

Maa mere sath mere room me aai aur boli
Maa - beta tum apne kapade badal lo aur sirf cafri pahan lo mai abhi aai

Aur iske baad maa chali gayi aur mai bhi apne kapade badal liya

Aur 5 min me room me aai maine dekha ki maa ke hath me pyale me tel tha

Aur maa mejhe letne ko boli a
Aur iske baad mai lait gaya

Phir maa ne meri malish karne lagi
Kyuki beta kitna bhi bole ki mai theek hu maa to maa hi hotui h wo kaise maan jaye uska beta pure din ladta raha aur thaka na ho

Mai maa ke hatho ki malish se mujhe bahut hi sukun mil raha tha aur mai unke hatho ke jadu me khoya khoya kab so gaya mujhe pta hi nahi chala

Dusri taraf
Very nice update bhai
 

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Update 21

Udhar Gajendra mele se seedha ghar pahucha

Aur apne pote yani bheema aur birju ko haweli ke baramde me le ja ke litya gaya

Iske baad Gajendra uska beta aur bheema ka chota bhai sabhi waha un laaso ke paas baith gaye

Aur aise hi sabhi baithe rahe waha sab kaam karne wale bhi wahi baith gaye kisi me bhi waha kuch bone ki himmat nahi thi

Aise hi gam me baithe baithe aadhi raat beet gayi na kisi ne kuch khya aur na hi waha se koi utha

Raat ke karib 12 bje us baramde me ek gahan sannta chaya huwa tha

Bahar ghup andhera chaya huwa tha aur jinghuro ki chiiin chinnnn ki aawaje aa rahi thi

Aur bahar se kutto ke rone ki aawaje aa rahi thi jo ki mahol ko darawan bana rahi thi

Kuch der baad badal garjane lage aur barish hone lagi aasman me bijliya chamakne lagi

Kuch der me waha baramde me dhere dhere thand badhne lagi

Bahar se janwaro ki aawje aana tez ho gayi

Syaro ke huuuuuuuwwaaa huuuuwaaaa ki aawaje aa rahi thi mahul bahut hi kaufjada ho gaya tha

Waha baithe log kabhi bhi aisa nahi mahsus kiya tha kyuki wo aksar hi der raat tak jagte the

Upar se un sab ke samne hi mare huwe insan ka sarir pada tha

Thabhi baramde me jaise thandhi hawa ke jhuke kafi tez ho gaye

Aur waha jale huwe sabhi deepak aur lighte band ho gayi

Sabhi dar ke maare ek dusre ka hath pakad liye

Tabhi sarrrrr srrrrr sssssrrrrrr ki aawaj aai aawaj aisi thi ki sabhi kaamp uthe

Achanak waha ek joradar garjana huwi

Ghaaaadddddd ghaaaarrrddddddd ddddgggggrrrddddd

Aur bhar bijli giri jisse baramde me kuch der ke liye rosni fhail gayi

Tabhi sabhi ko do aanke dikhi jo ki laal rang ki chamak rahi thi

Sabhi dar ke maare ek dusre ko jakad liye

Yaha tak Gajendra bhi ek baar khauf kha gaya

Tabhi birju ke sarir me halchal hone lagi

Aur uske hat pair hilne lage aur wo ek chikh se uth ke baith gaya

Birju - nahhhhiiii chhhuuudungaaas

Aur isi ke sath haal me phir se light aa gayi

Sabhi dekhe ki birju uth ke baitha h to sabhi aur dar gaye.
Kyuki log soache ki marahuwa insan kaise jivit ho sakta h

Tabhi birji bola

Birju - mai mai yaha kaise pahucha aur mai to us kameene ko maar raha tha

Tabhi birju ki nazar bheema pe padi wo chup ho gaya

Tabhi gajendra bola beta sab kuch khatam ho gaya

Us ne dangal bhi jeet liya aur tumhare bhai ko bhi maar diya

Aur tumhe kya ho gaya tha maine soacha ki mai apne dono pote ko kho diya

Aur birju soachne laga wo mujhe maar raha tha aur mai uska gala daba ke use upar uthya tha

Iske baad wo khud ki apni haweli me paaya

Birju - dadi ji dangal jeet gaya to kya usne mere bhai ki maar ke apni maut ko dawat de diya.

Ab wo jyada din is duniya me nahi rahega ab wo kuch hi din ka mehmaan h

Aur us jaise ke mujhe marna koi aap baat nahi mujhe mrne ke liye lig ko kai jnam lene padenge aur wo kuch nahi kar paayenge

Aise hi un sab ki sabhi baate chlti rahi aur Gajendra bhi khus tha ki birju ko kuch nahi huwa

Aise hi subha ho gayi aur sabhi bheema ko sabhi karya kar ke uske dah sanskar kar ke

Wapas aa gaye jaha birju ne apne bhai ki chita ki kasam khai ki us khandan me kaoi bhi mard nahi bachega.

Udhar dushri taraf waha us boss ke pass dekh lete h kya ho raha h

Waha sanday ke mare jane ke baad boss ko pta chal gaya ki uska dost mara gaya

Aur wo gusse me rahne laga aur wo phir se nayi planing karne laga

Aur phir dangal ke baad victor uske paas aaya aur bola

Victor - boss us ladke ka pta chal gaya wo jay ka chota bhai h

Jo ki uske baap ghar chod ke chala gay a tha aur dangal ladne ke liye

Apni maa aur bahan ke sath waha haweli pahuch gaya

Boss - ab sale ye bhanu pratap ka ek aur pota paida ho gaya

Victor- boss mujhe pta chala h wo 20 sal pahle us dangal ke baad ghar chod ke chala gaya tha

Aur kuch nahi pta chal

Aur suna ki us launde ne Gajendra ke dono pote bheema aur birju ko us akhade me maar diya

Boss - kuch der soachne ke baad

Boss - ek kaam kar mai kuch foreign killer ko maga raha hu

Tu un sab ko receive kar lena aur kisi ko khabar na ho

Aur bta ye dangal kitne din chalta h

Victor- mene suna h ki ye mela waha 15 din tak chalta h

Boss - theek h tu uske ghar pe nazar banay rakh

Iske baad victor bhi waha chala gaya

Aur boss kuch der soachta raha aur uske mukh pe ek kutil muskan tair gayi aur wo bhi kahi chal diya

Idhar ham sab ke sone ke baad

Subha ko sabhi uth gaye aur mujhe maa ne uthya kyuki maa bhi mere kamare me hi soo gayi thi

Aur mujhe fresh hone ka kah ke wo apne room me chali gayi

Mai ja ke fresh ho gaya aur mai ab kafi taza mahsus kar raha tha

Aur iske. Baad mai neeche aa gaya jaha sab baithe

Mai bhi ja ke sofe pe shruti ke bagal baith gaya

Tabhi Nikhil bola

Nikhil - dada ji ab to ham sab dangal bhi jeet gaye.aur hamara parivar phir se pure gaon ka sarpanch ho gaya

To kyu na es khusi ke mauke pe ek party ho jaye

Dadaji - ha beta mai bhi yahi soach raha hu aur isi bahane mere is sher ki bade logo se pahchan bhi ho jayegi

Mai - nahi dadaji aap party kar dijye aur mai jayada apni pahchan ko badhana nahi chahta

Mai ek simple life jeena chahta hu aur mai ye nahi chahta ki log mere rutbe ke karan mere aage jhuke

Mai apni pahchan banana chahta hu

Mere spach ko dada ji bahut khus huwe aur bole

Dadaji - wah bahu tum ne mere ppte ko bahut hi ucch sikh di ho

Kabhi kabhi ise dekh ke mujhe mere pita ki yaad aa jati kyuki ye apne par dada ki trah hi soachta h

Aur rahi baat pachan naa karane ki to nahi karaunga

Kam se kam mai jin loge se milaunga tum unse mil lena kyuki wo is desh ke lhas log h

Mai - theek h dadaji

Aur iske baad sabhi ne breakfast kiya aur breakfast karne ke baad mai boala

Mai - mujhe aaye huwe itne din ho gaye aur maine abhi apna pura ghar bhi nahi dekha h

Tabhi komal boli

Komal - kyu nahi chalo ham sab tumhe apna pura ghar dilhyenge

Aur mai unke perche ho liya haweli 5 majila thi kamaro ki ginti nahi bta sakta

Pahle hi bta diya hu ki haweli kafi badi h

Aur komal mejhe pura haweli dikhane.lagi

First floor pe ham sab puara andar tak dekh rahe the jaha

Puran jamane ke hatiyar rakhe huwe the jo hamare purkho ke the

Aur ek jhagah ham pahuche waha dekha ki ek darwaje pe tala laga tha

Mai - ye yaha tala kyu laga h

Komal - pta nahi kyuki ye hamesa hi band rahta h

Aise hi ham aage bada gaye aur haweli andar se puri modern thi

Haweli ke andar library bhi thi pura books se bhari thi

Aise hi ham chakar lagate lagate chat pe pahuch gaye

Jaha se pura gaon dikh raha tha

Aur komal mujhe chat pe se hi khoto ko dikhane lagi

Jo ki bahut hi jayada the ya yu kahe ki ek prkar se ham raja hi the

Hzaro karor ki samptati thi
Aise hi ham kafi der tak chat pe bahar dekhte rahe

Aur kuch der baad hame maa ne khane ke liye bulaya aur ham neeche chal diye

Abhi is ghar me kitne aur chije thi jo mujhe jannaa tha
To be continue
Very nice update
 

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Update 11

Ab aage

Udhar Thakur Ggajendra ki hawele me bhi khabar pahuch gayi kisi ne sushil ke upar hamla kiya

Thakur apne aadmiyon se bola jaldi se jaldi
pta lagao kisne sushil pratap pe hamla kawaya h kyuki hame bahut hi fayada hoga agar wo hamse dosti kar lega

Us bhanu pratap ko to ham barbaad kar denge jaldi pta lagao

Idar
mai aa ke apne kamre me aa gaya mujhe ye soachte soachte ki maa ne mujhe haweli kyu bbheja mujhe kab need lagi pta hi nahi chala

Udhar maa apne kamre me
maa man me beta tujhe to haweli jana hi tha aaj nahi to kal jata kyuki mai apne pati se vaada ki thi agar haweli pe koi bhi aanch aayegi to mai tujhe waha jarur bhejungi

Yahi sab soachte huwe maa bhi so gayi

mujhe koi ndi ki tARF bulaye ja raha tha waha nadi ke bagal ek chota sa patharo ka tila tha

Awaj - aao ajay mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha tha

mai - aap kaun h kaha se bol h (ghabra kar).

Awaj - ghabrao nahi putr tum waha pade pathar ko hatao

Nieeche ki taraf ek pathar tha mai ne use hata to ek gadgdahat ki awaje aane lagi jisse mai peeche hat gaya
tabhi us pathar ke tile ke bagal dayi taraf ek seedhi numa raasta nazar aane laga

Awaj - aao putr tum neeche aajao

Mai kisi kathputhli ki tarah us aawaj ki har baat mante huwe sabkuch waisa hi kar raha tha jaisa wo Bol raha tha

Mai us seedhi se neeche utarne laga
jaha neeche pahuchne pe ek haal numa kamra bana hua tha jaha bahut hi andhera tha tabhi
waha bahut hi tez rosni fail gayi jisse mai apni aankhe band kar liya kuch der baad ek awaj se mai apni aankhe khola

Dekha saamne ek sadhu khade the mere saamne jinke mukhmadal pe ek bahut hi tez zhalak raha tha unke mukh ki safed dhadi aur safed baal unki aur sobha bada rahe the
tabhi

Sadhu - kya huwa putra kaha kho gaye

Mai hadbada ke Mai - k kahi nnahi
aap. K k kaun h aa aur aap mera naam kaise jante h

Sadhu - putr is sansar aisa kuch nahi h jo hame na pata ho mai dewtao ka guru hu aur mujhe tumhe sikhsha dene ke liye bheja gaya h is samaya maine tumhare aatma ko yaha bulaya h

Maine unhe turant namaskar kaiya aur bola
.mai - kinru gurudev mujhe kyu bulaya gaya h

Gurudev - kyuki tum is shrishti ki rakhsha karne ke liye bheje gaye ho tum bahut hi khaas ho hamare liye isi liye mai tumhe shiksha dene ke liye swayam aaya hu

Chalo ab subha hone wali h tum jao ab aur unhone hath uthya aur ek bahut hi tez rosni huwi tabi

Mai apne bistar pe uth ke baith gaya

Dekha ki mai to apne ghar me hu aur apne sapne ke bare me soachne laga jisse mera sar ghumne laga aur mai sar jhatak ke spoacha aaj dhyan lagata hu aur mai dhyan lagane laga aur kuch der me kosis karne par mai apne me khone laga tabhi
bhaiya bhaiya ki awaj se mera dhyan tut gaya
Dekha shruti mere kamre me aai h


Shruti - bhaiya aap ankh band ke kyu baithe h

Mai - kuch nahi gudiya waise hi aaj ke bare me soach raha hu ki haweli pe jane pe kya hoga mujhe kyu bulaya gaya h

Shruti - aapko kya kahenge aapka shukriya karneke liye bulaya h unhone ..
chaliye pahle aap apni exercise kar lijiye aur

Mai waha pahucha aur exercise karna start kar diya aaj meri speed daily se kafi tez lag rahi thi
mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki mai jogging kar raha hu ek normal speed me
jAldi hi mera 30 round pura ho gaya iske baad mai dumble ko utha ke chakar lagaya aur pushap kiya iske baad mujhe aisa feel ho raha tha ki maine abhi kuch kiya hi nahi h aur sarir pasine se bhig gaya tha .

Iske baad mai maa ke paas aa gaya
tabhi Shruti boli

Shruti - bhaiya aap to aaj bahut hi tez bhaag rahe the
itna trz to mai kisi ko bhi bhagte nahi dekhi hu jaise aap to kisi motorcycle ki speed se bhag rahe the

Mai - are mai roj ki hi trah to daud raha tha

Maa - nahi beta tu to aaj bahut hi tez daud raha tha aaj tak kisi ko aise karte nahi dekhi

Mai baat kate huwe

Mai - are chodo na maa pahle aal mera juice dijiye ye to aap ke kadhe aur juice ka hi kamal hoga

Mai man me sach me mai itni tez daudh raha tha kya mai sach me khas hu kya wo raat ka sapna bhi bhi sach tha ya mera ye sab sirf waham h

Shruti - are o bhaiya kaha kho gaye aap is samay bahut hi khone lage h kahi kisi ki yaad to nahi aa rahi h
ha

Mai - nahi nahi kkkuch nahi

Maa - jaldi peeyo abhi bhaisahab ke sath tujhe haweli bhi jana h
Aur ja ke naha lo

Iske baad mai peeke nahane chal diya aur naha ke tayar ho ke mai chacha ke ghar aaya aur unke ghar pahuch gaya aur unke sath haweli ki Taraf nikal liya



Udhar gaon se bahut dur sEhar se bahar ki taraf ik building me wahi boss waha kisi ka intzaar kar raha tha

Tabhi use haal me darwaje se victor aata huwa dikha

Boss - aao aao victor aao baitho

Victor aaya aur sofe pe baith gaya .

Biss - aur victor kya loge coffee ya chay

Victor - kuch nahi boss

Boss - achha bataO kuch pta chala uske pariwar ke bare me

Victor - ha boss sab jankari mil gayi

Sushil pratap ka ek bhai h uske pariwar ka kisi ko nahi pata aur uski do bahne h jo kal aa rahi h station pe unhe lene ghar se koi aadmi lene jayega aur uske do bete h aur ek beti aur uska baap Bhanu pratap singh iski central me bahut h pahchan h iska gaon me siikka chalta
iska ek jani dusman h jo eske padosi gaon se
aise h lagbhag bahut hi jankari usne apne boss ko di

Boss - bahut acche victor tumne to mera kaam bahut hi aasan kar diya h

Aur us launde ka kuch pta chala ki nahi

Victor - nahi boss abhi nahi hamare aadmi uska jaldi hi lta laga lenge
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Boss - therk h jald hi pta lagao usko bare me use nahi pta ki wo ksse ulja h uke khandan ko hi mita dunga mai

( ab ise kaun bataye ye kisse bhidne ja raha jo ki iska anjam kya hoga ise nahi pta but isse hame kya ye chahe jo kare hame isse kya lena de ham apni story pe aate h )

Boss - aur ha uski bahne kab aa rahi h

Victor - Boss karib wo 12 bje baje ke aas paas waha pahuchengi

Boss - theek h uski bahno ko waha se uthwa lo
ek baad aur usk thakur se milne ki waywastha karo jald hi jisse hame isse bahut aasani hogi
is shushil aue jai se badla lene me karodo ki hamari nulsan ko ye apne pariwar ko kho ke bahrega
jald hi tu mere pairo me hoga shushil pratap ek makkjari hansi se hall goonj utha

Iske baad victor wha se chala gaya


Idhar ham haweli pahuch gaye

Tabhi kuch aisa huwa ki
Jaise hi mai haweli pahucha
aur jaise hi pahla kadam haweli ke andar rakha to
waha pe tufan aa gaya aur barish hone lagi

Haweli ke andar se sab haal me bhage bhage aa ke bahar dekhne lage bina mausam ki barish aur tufan ko dekh ke sab aascharya me dub gaye

Sab ye soachne lage ki ye kaise ho sakta h tni tez Dhup me barish aur tufan

Aur mai gate ke andar aa gaya aur chacha ke sath chalta huwa andar ki taraf aa gaya

Tabhi ghar ke sabhi sadasyon ki nazar mujh pe padi aur sab mujhe ek tak dekhne lage

Bhanu pratap aur Parvati aur Shushil pratap to buri tarah se chaonk gaye mujhe dekh gaye

Ham haal me pahuch gaye aur chacha aur mai sabhi ko pranam kiya

Bhanu pratap ,- aaao aao sudhir ham sab tumhara hi intazar kar rahe the aur ye tumhare sath kaun hi

Chacha - Malik ye wahi h jo chote malik ko bachaya tha
 
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Update 22

UDHAR
Boss kisi se phone pe baat kar raha tha

Boss - hlw ha

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Boss - okkk rsahte me koi dikkat to nahi hui

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Boss - ha is xxxxxxx hotel me chale jao waha tumhare rahne ki waywastha kar di gayi hai

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Boss - hq ha tumhe sab saman waha mil jayega ko problm nahi hogi

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Boss - okkk byyy kal milta hu tum sab se
Aur phone rakh deta hai

Boss - ab dekta hu jay tu kis kis ko bachayega hahahaha

Idhar

Mai apni haweli dekh raha tha jo ki kafi badi thi itne room hai mai bta nahi sakta

Aur to aur khet to itne ki hazaro caror ki property thi

Komal mujhe bahut si batte batai apni is haweli ki jo kafi intresting thi

Uske baad ham neeche aa gaye aur mai bola

Mai - ha aaj to sab mela dekhne wale the lagta hai kisi ko dekhne nahi jana

Shikha didi - he bachhu kisne tumhe bola ki ham nahi ja rahe hai ha

5 min ruko sab tayar ho ke aate hai sab tumhara hi wait kar rahe hai

Shruti - mai aap nikhil Bhaiya ,shikha didi ,komal etc
Yani ki puri fauj tayar thi jise mujhe sambhalna tha

Mai - ruk ja ruk ja bol deti shabhi chal rahe hai kya yar tu bhi na jao shabhi jqldi jaldi tayar ho jayo

Komal - ha bas yu gaye aur yu aaye

Mai - ha mujhe pta hai ladkiyon ka ki yu gaye aur yu aaye

Meri baat pe shabhi hasne lage jo ki abhi tak shabhi chup baithe the

Aur komal waha se lair patakte huwe bhag gayi

Dadaji - beta thodha sambhal ke jana

Mai - are dqdaji aap ko lagta hai ham sab ko koi kuch karega wo bhi hamare gao me

Dadi - nahi beta lekin paiso walo ke dusman roj bante rahte hai

Mai theek hai aur kuch der me shqbhi bahne aa gayi aur dadaji ne mujhe kuch paise diye

Kuch kya pura bandal hi de diye aur ham sab chal diye jaha mai kajal ko bhi uske ghar se pickup kar liya

Bhai log ab yaha se new likh rha hu kal subah dunga abhi itna hi
Fantastic update
 

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Dadi - nahi beta lekin paiso walo ke dusman roj bante rahte hai
Mai theek hai aur kuch der me shqbhi bahne aa gayi aur dadaji ne mujhe kuch paise diye

Kuch kya pura bandal hi de diye aur ham sab chal diye jaha mai kajal ko bhi uske ghar se pickup kar liya

Update 23

Hamari mandli nikal padi thi mele me udham machane
Aur sab ladkiyan to gaddi me bol bol ke kan kha gyi

Ganimat yhi thi ki sirf 10 min ka rasta tha nhi to pucho mat unki bak bak sun ke mai paresan ho gya yrr

Hamari gadi ko dekh ke sab side ho gye aur apne apne hath jod liye ab itna to karna hi tha unko

Mai bhi sabko apne hath dikha kar unka abhivadan swikar karte huwe ham sab mandir me pahuch gye

Hamne sabse pahle vaha ja kar shiv ji ki puja kiye aur uske baad mai bola

Mai - ab batao sabko kaha kaha ghumna hai sabse pahle kqha se starat kiya jaye

Priya di - kyu na ham sab pahle bada jhule se start karte h hai na komal

Komal - ha didi aap shi bol rhi hi ham sab sabse pahle bada jhula jhulte hai

Nitu - ha didi mja aa jayega bahut din ho gye h jhula jhule huwe

Mai - lekin mai nhi jhulunga jhule pe mujhe dar lagta hai

Nikhil - kya yrr tu bhi dangal jeet liya aur bol raha hai tujhe dar lagta hai kaisa majak karta h bhai

Mai baar baar mna karta rha lekin shabhi jabardasti mujhe bhi bitha liye jhule pe meri to puri phati padi thi jab jhula upar jane laga

Aur jab neeche ki taraf aaya to meri gqand hi phat gyi bhai kya batau phli baar baitha tha lekin dhire dhire baad me mai bhi mja liya jhule ka

Aise hi ham sab ne mele me shabhi jhule jhule sarkas dekhe aur aur beech beech me hamne chat aur samose bhi khaye

Aur last me hamne jalebi kharidi aur ghar ke liye bhi le liye the aur ham sab ghar pe nikal diye

Kyuki kal hamare ghar party bhi rakhi gyi thi hamare yaha sarpanchi aane ke jasn me

Maine kajal ko uske ghar chod diya aur ham sab haweli aa gye

Dadi - aur bachho mela kaisa laga
Maja to aaya na mele me

Kiran - ha nani hamne bahut mja kiya aur hamne khub chat samose khaye hai na didi

Dadi - haa ha ha acha meri natin ko mja aaya chlo jao sab aaram kar lo kal sham ko party hai na aaj yaad hai ki nhi

Komal - are dadi ham kaise bhulenge itne din baad to apne yaha party rakhi gyi h aur ham bhul jaye aisa ho sakta h ha bataiye bataiye

Dadi - chal chal nautanki ja ab aaram kar
Maine dadi ko jalebi de diya aur mai kitchen me chal diya jaha bhabhi thi

Mai - are bhabhi kya kar rhi hai
Bhabhi - kuch nhi bas sham ke khane ki tayari chal rhi h

Mai - achha , lijiye mai aapka golgappe le aaya suna apko bada pasand hai golgappe khana

Bhabhi - aawww so cute devar ji aur unhone mera gal pakad ke kheench liya

Mai - acha lijiye mai chala aur mai apna gal sahlate huwe nikal liya unhone badi jor se kheencha tha mera gal
Aur mujhe jata dekh ke bhabhi hasne lagi aur mujhe rukne ke liye bol rhi thi

Mai to bhai nikal liya abhi gal hi khichi thi aage pta nhi kya kya keecnh de aisa waisa na samjhna

Dusri taraf

Boss phone pe victor o kuch bol rha tha
Boss - ha aaj mai aa rha hu hotel pe milne unse bta dena

Victor -........

Boss - aur unse bolo apna saman tayr rakhe mai unse mil ke ke batata hu kya karna h
Aur tum ek ghante me xxx pte par mujhse milo

Victor- .......

Aur boss apna coat pahan ke nikal gadi le ke nikal diya hotel unse milne

Ab dekhna h boss ka abkya plan hai aage ka
Nice update
 
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