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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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Nice update bhai
Saurya ko sayam, dhairya nahin hai jo uske lie achha nahin hai
 

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UPDATE- 47

AB TAK

Niharika ki Maa n sabhi ko apne pariwar aur Jagdeep k baare m bataya aur saath hi Jordan k baare m bhi. Annt m ye tai hua k aaj raat hi Henry wo Crystal le aayega Niharika k liye.

AAGE.

Hero aur baakiyon ko yahi Bansoa m chod hum chalte hai Alex k saath Earth p.

Earth p USA k New York m ek ladki baithi hui thi NYPD k dafter m haathon m hathkadi lagi hui thi aur ek lady officer usse kuch samjhaye jaa rahi thi.
Thodi der baad ek aadmi aata hai waha aur uss ladki ko le jaata hai. Wo aadmi ladki s baat krna chahta tha pr wo ladki to usse dekh bhi nhi rahi thi dono ghar pahuch jaate hai. Jaha ek aurat baithi thi.
Aurat- Tu q karti hai ye sab kya milta hai tujhe ye kr ke.
Aadmi- Shipra aaram s baat krte hai pr pahle isse fresh hone do.
Shipra(Aurat)- Buckky iss baar nhi ab isne had paar kr di hai har baar ye koi na koi kaand krti hai fir hame pareshan hona padta hai.
Buckky- Ye beti hai hamari...
Ladki- Main koi beti veti nhi hu tumhari Bukky samjhe.
Shipra- PARIDHIII ye kya tarika hai baat krne ka wo tumhaare...
Paridhi- Wo mere kuch nhi lagte samjhi aap wo bas aapke pati hai mere kuch nhi.
Shipra ko gussa aane laga aur wo apna haath uthane hi waali thi k Buckky n usse rok diya.
Buccky- Ye kya kr rahi ho Shipra wo beti hai tumhari (Paridhi s) aap jao aur fresh ho aawo fir dinner karte hai.
Paridhi waha s chali jaati hai aur ab waha p the to bas Buckky,Shipra aur ek chuppi jisko Shipra k aashuon n toda.
Shipra- Buccky mujhe maaf kr do is ladki k wajah s tum hurt hue.
Buccky- Arre tumse kisne kaha main hurt hua usse na bas thoda time chahiye.
Shipra- Kitna time haa 8 saal 8 saal beet gaye hai Aakash k maut ko aur 5 saal hamari shadi ko ye ab tak nhi naa to uski maut hi bhulla payi hai aur naa tumhe accept kr paayi hai.
Buccky- Wo baap tha iska bahut pyar karti thi usse ye itni jaldi nhi bhul sakti usse aur rahi hamari shadi ki baat to sayad hamne bhi kuch jaldi kr di.
Shipra- Ye kya bol raho ho tum.
Buccky- Sach bol raha hu Shipra sayad humme pahle Paridhi s bhi baat krni chahiye thi to saayad aaj sab aisa na hota.
Abhi sabhi log baate hi kr rahe the k Paridhi bahar aayi aur aate hi boom phod diya.
Paridhi- Mom m India jaa rahi hu apne Dada ji k paas.
Shipra aur Buccky dono hi ye sun shock ho gaye.
Shipra- Dada ji pr tum..tumhe unke baare m kaise pata chala.
Paridhi- Q aapko kya laga agar aap na batate to mujhe pata na chalta maine Dad ki saari info nikali thi ussi k liye mujhe FBI k server ko hack karna pada jis wajah s main jail m thi.
Shipra- Tum kahi nhi jaogi samjhi tum mere paas rahogi waha bilkul nhi jaogi.
Buccky- Paridhi tumhe yaha koi problem nhi hai fir q.
Paridhi- Problem nhi hai kisne kaha tumse meri problem ye hai k mujhe yaha iss ghar m rahna padta hai meri mom aur unke pati k saath jo mujhse bardasth nhi hota.
Buccky- Paridhi beta aap aisa q bol rahe ho.
Shipra- Nhi Buccky ab aur nhi isse jaana hai na to chali jaae main bhi dekhti hu kab tak ye uss gaon m apne uss purane khayalaton wali family k saath rahti hai.(Paridhi s) Wo log tujhe apnayege bhi nhi nakkar denge tujhe jaise Mujhe nakara tha nikal denge tujhe apne ghar s jaise Aakash tumhare Dad ko nikala tha.
Buccky-Shipra kya bole jaa rahi ho tum.(Paridhi s) Beta aap kahi nhi jaa rahe aap yahi rahoge.
Paridhi- Main jaa rahi hu 12 baje ki flight hai meri.
Itna bol wo apne room m chali gayi.

Buccky- Shipra jao usse rok lo tum bhi janti ho unn logo ko wo kaise insan hai.
Shipra- Buccky ab aur nhi main ye topic band kr rahi hu tum khud dekh lena 4 din m wapas aa jayegi ye bas 4 din m.
Buccky- Tum ye itna yakkin s kaise kah sakti ho.
Shipra- Jitna maine Aakash s unke baare m sunna hai na main clearly kah sakti hu Paridhi laut aayegi aur ye jaruri bhi hai usse bhi pata chalega k jitna tumne uske liye kiya wo koi bhi nhi kr sakta fir wo tumhe accept kr hi legi.
Buccky- Pr isme usko khatra bhi ho sakta hai tum samajh rahi ho na wo India jaa rahi hai wo bhi akele. Main ek kaam krta hu kuch officers ko bhej deta hu uske piche.
Shipra- Thik hai.
Buckky n FBI m call kiya aur apne kuch khas officers ko Paridhi k piche jaane ko bola.

Raat hui yahi karib 9 baje Paridhi nikal gayi apne bags le airport ki oor pr usse pahle usne ek letter likha jo Buccky k naam tha.

Letter-" Buccky aapne mujhe hamesha bachaya hai har muskil s bachaya h aapne mujhe ek pita ki tarah nhi balki usse bhi badh kr pr sayad main iss kabil nhi hu ki aapki beti ban paau. Main jaa rahi hu hamesha k liye aapko aur Mom ko chod kr. Main jaanti hu aap Mom ka achhe s khayal rakhoge mere jaane k baad.
Aant m bas Sorry kahna chahungi unn sabhi baaton k liye jisse maine aapka dil dukhaya ho. Aap mujhe dhundhne ki kosis mat krna bas ye request hai meri.

Love you
Papa."

Ye letter usne Buccky aur Shipra k tasweer k piche laga diya tha.

Usne flight li aur pahuch gayi India iss baat s anjan k Buccky n bhi apne officers uske piche laga rakhe hai.
India m pahle wo apni kisi friend k yaha gayi jo USA s India shift hui thi.

Ye baat jab Buckky ko pata chala k wo apne Dada k paas na jaa kr kahi aur gayi hai to wo pareshan ho gaya uske police wale dimag m tarah tarah k khayal aane lage. Wo ghar p baitha iske baare m soch hi raha tha k tabhi Shipra k chillane ki awaj aayi aur wo Shipra k paas bhaga. Shipra wahi letter liye khadi thi.
Buckky ne wo letter liya aur padha fir pahle to apne officers ko phone kiya aur unko Paridhi ko pakadne ko bola sayad usse wo letter padh laga k Paridhi sucide krne wali hai.
Fir usne w tickets karayi India ki aur nikal pada waha jaane ko.

Chsliye inko chod hum chalte hai Bansoa jaha ab tak Hero ki classes khatam ho chuki thi aur wo Niharika k saath Red group k common room m baitha tha. Yahi koi saam ho rahi hogi waha.
Niharika- Saurya mujhe na kuch puchna tha tumse.
Main- Haa pucho.
Niharika- Arre wo tum sabhi m s kisi n uss Jordon k baare m kuch bataya hi nhi naa mujhe bas ye pata hai mujhe k wo Maarcuss ka sathi hai.
Maine pahle to yaha waha dekha fir usko room m chalne ko bola.
Room m jaa kr.
Main- Jordon haa uske baare m jitna maine padha hai wo bahut khatarnak hai wo 2 elements Hawa aur Earth ko control krta hai.
Niharika- Oo acha aur kya pata hai.
Main- Maarcuss n usse wo sunahra Armor laane ko bheja tha aur wo ring Jagdeep s taaki wo ajey ho jaaye aur jo yudh hona tha usme wo seena nayak bane Maarcuss ki oor s par aisa ho naa saka Jagdeep k maut k baad wo anguthi crystal m kaid ho gayi aur wo Armor usse tumhare unicorn n chupa diya tha. Saath hi main Jordon ko kaid bhi kr diya aur usse sula diya pr jab bhi wo crystal chamakta hai eo jaag jaata hai aur fir jiski wajah s wo chamka usse maar deta hai.
Niharika- Accha to iss wajah s wo uss yudh m lad nhi paaya tha jiskeckaaran Maarcuss kaid hua tha.
Main- Haa.
Abhi hum baat kr rahe the k Henry aa gaya.
Henry- Kaam ho gaya ye lo ye raha wo crystal.
Main- Itni jaldi wah.
B.S- apni talwar nikalo jaldi.
Maine bhi turant talwar nikal li aur fir jo hua usse dekh main dang rah gaya.
Mera talwar nikalna tha k Niharika n unn dono ko mujhse chin liya aur uska rup fir s badal gaya aur usne Henry p hamla kr diya aur uske haath pair kaat daale aur jo cystal wo laya tha usko Henry k muh m daal diya jiske baad Henry k chithde chithde udd gaye pura room uske khoon s ganda ho gaya tha.
Ye hone k baad Niharika ussi roop m pahle meri taraf mud kr jhuki aur fir dono talwar gayab ho gaye aur wo behosh aur main confuse ho gaya.
Main- Ye ye kya tha Niharika n Henry ko maar diya pr q.
B.S- Chutiye ye Henry nhi tha ye jaasus tha Maarcuss ka jo ek tir s do shikar krne aaya tha ek Niharika ko maarne aur dusra tujhe taaki dono ko Maarcuss k paas le jaa sake.
Main- Kya ye jassus tha par isse hamari baate kaise pata chali.
B.S- Darwaja khol kr baate karoge ye saari to kya hoga. Chalo ab iss Niharika ko uthao.
Maine Niharika ko pahle hosh m laya pr wo to room ki halat dekh ghabra gayi.
Niharika- Ye ye kisne kiya.
Main- Tumne kiya hai ye aur ab chalo hame( charo oor dekh) Battle ground jaana hai.
Hum dono hi nikal pade uss jagah k liye
Main baar baar aas paas dekhe jaa raha tha k kahi koi dekh to nhi raha.
Hum dono pahuch gaye udher N.Mom shipahiyon ko kuch techniques shikha rahi thi.
Main unki oor chal diya aur Niharika ko bola k Henry aur Rita ko bulla le.
Tjodi der baad wo 3 no bhi aa gaye.
Main- Henry ek jaasus ko Niharika n maar dala hai wo tumhare bhesh m aaya tha.
N.mom- Kya isne usse maar diya(Niharika s) kaise maara tha tune bata mujhe.
Niharika- Mujhe yaad nhi.
Main- Arre isko chodo aap aur meri baat sunno. Dekho wo saare koi bhi ho sakte hai aur hamara roop bhi le sakte hai to hame kuch aisa chahiye jisse hum ek dusre ko pahchan sakke.
Maine unhe kuch secrets k baare m batane ko kaha jo kewal hum log hi jante the.
Main- Henry raat ho gayi hai jao uss crystal ko le aawo Niharika ko issi jagah Dhyan lagana hoga.
Henry chala jaata hai wahi Niharika thodi pareshan yaa kahu to daari hui thi.
Main- Kya baat hai Niharika kuch pareshan dikh rahi ho.
Niharika- wo thoda dar lag raha hai agar koi gadbad ho gayi to.
N.Mom- Kuch nhi hoga meri bacchi hame tum pr pura bharosha hai.
Main/Rita- Haa bilkul.

Kuch der baad Henry aata hai wo Crystal le kr.
B.S- Chal talwar nikal.
Main- Ye bhi jasus hai kya iss saale ko to main...
B.S- Pagal na ban wo Cystal todne k liye bol raha hu.
Main- ooo.
Maine Talwar nikala.
B.S- Henry ko bol ek ghera banane ko tere charo oor.
Maine Henry ko bola.
B.S- Chal ab ek baar m dono talwaron s waar kr iss cystal pe samjha.
Maine thik waisa hi kiya aur aisa karne s bahut hi tej roshni hui bahut tej roshni jisse Niharika ka roop badal gaya aur saath hiBansoa hil gaya.
Main- B.S ye kya tha.
B.S- Jordon uth gaya hai. Tum Niharika ko wo ring do.
Maine Niharika ko ring diya usne usse pahna aur wo ring bahut chamakne laga.
B.S- Ab khada kya hai dono talwaron ko ek saath use kr aur wo gola banna iske charo taraf.
Maine waisa hi kiya pr Niharika behosh ho gayi ussi gole k ander jisse dekh hum saare hairan ho gaye.
N.Mom- ye isse kya hua wo thik to hai na.
Tabhi waha Headmaster aa jaate hai.
Headmaster- wo thik hai bas apne aap ko dekh rahi hai wo usse waqt do wo khud thik ho jaayegi.
Main- Isse hua kya hai.
Headmaater- Arre kuch bhi nhi hua hai ek baat batao tum butterfly k baare m jaante ho kya.
Main- Haa.
Headmaster- Ye wahi hai dekho ye jo energy ka gola tumne lagaya hai na ye hai iska cucun jisse bahar wo khud niklegi ek shunder aur takatwar roop m pr isme waqt lagega.
N.mom- Kitna waqt.
Headmaster- hmm sayad itna waqt jitne m Saurya k magic ki padhayi puri ho jaaye 3 saal.
Hum- Kya 3 saal.
Headmaster- Arre wo Spirit world m jaa chuki hai apne unicorn k paas aur usse sab kuch sikh kr hi lautegi jisme 3 saal lagega hi.
Henry- Wo spirit world m hai!
Headmaster- Haa Henry wo wahi hai.
(Mujhse) Saurya ab tumhe jalfi s apni padhayi puri krni hai aur apni chize bhi wapas laani hai yaad hai na wo lambi list.
Main- Hmm yaad hai.


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Earth p kya hoga jab Buccky aur Shipra Paridhi s milenge q paridhi n aisa kadam uthaya.
Jordan jo aazzad hua hai wo ab kya karega.
Marcuss kya karega jab usse apne Jasoos k marne ki khabar milegi
Daitya raj ko jab pata chalega apni beti k gadaari k baare m tab wo kya karega
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UPDATE-48

Ab tak
Earth p Buckky aur Shipra nikal chuke the India aane ko aur wahi Bansoa m Niharika 3 saal k liye behosh ho gayi aur saath hi Jordon aajad ho gaya tha.

Aage

Pahle hum Earth k oor chalte hai jaha p Buccky aur Shipra baithe hue the Paridhi k saamne aur Paridhi ko samajh nhi aa raha tha k ab wo kya bole.
Shipra- Ye kya mazak laga rakha hai jab tumhe koi problem nhi thi to q ye saara natak...
Buccky- Shipra aaram s (paridhi s) haa to aap batao kya baat hai.
Paridhi s ab raha nhi gaya aur usne bolne ka faisla liya.
Paridhi- Aap dono meri wajah s aage hi nhi badh rahe the to main kya krti maine kitna try kiya ki aap mujhse nafrat karo aur mujhe chod apni life k baare m socho pr naa ap dono ko to bas mera hi dyaan rakhna hai.
Shipra- Kya bole ja rahi hai tu.
Buckky- Kya jo main samajh raha hu wahi baat hai paridhi.
Shipra- Kon s baat mujhe bhi batao.
Paridhi- Dekha abhi bhi nhi samjhi ye (Buckky s) aur aap aapko to aage k baare m sochna chahiye tha na pr nhi ye bhi to meri hi beti hai...
Buckky- Pr beta aap iss pr hamse baat bhi kr sakti thi fir inn sab ki kya jarurat.
Paridhi- Ha ha ab yahi bolo bas kitni baar to kaha maine Mom s pr unko kuch samajh hi nhi aata abhi bhi dekho kaise ghure jaa rahi hai.
Shipra- Dekh tu had s aage jaa rahi hai.
Paridhi- Haa abhi aur bhi aage jaungi main dekhti hu aap kya kr loge.
Buckky- Beta ye kaise baate kr rahe ho Mom hai wo aapki.
Paridhi- Kamakal Mom s meri dekho inko onhe abhi bhi kuch samajh nhi aaya hai.
Buckky- Haa wo to hai todhi dimag s paidal.
Shipra- Ye kys laga rakha hai tum dono n Buckky tum bhi idke saath mil gaye yaad hai na hum idher q aaye k wo bhi bhul gaye tum.
Buckky- Yaad hai aur jis liye aaye hai uska jawab bhi mil gaya. (parishi s) Beta thik hai main taiyaar hu pr aapko yaha rahne ki koi jarurat nhi hai aap chalo hamare saath wapas.
Paridhi- Nhi main nhi jaa rahi kahi bhi main idher hi hu maine yahi ek collage m admission k liye apply kiya tha aur select ho gayi hu to ab main yahi hu ap dono jao.
Buckky- Ye kya hai tum USA k collages ko chod India k Collages m padhogi.
Shipra- nhi tum hamare saath chalogi.
Paridhi- Mom maan jao na please acha collage hai ye Papa(Aakash) n yahi s to padhayi ki thi main bhi yahi s karna chahti hu.
Shipra- Koi jarurat nhi aur fir tum yaha adjust kaise karogi.
Paridhi- Main koi bacchi nhi hu samjhe aap main manage kr lungi aur haa main Dada ji k paas bhi nhi jaungi ok ab to maan jao please.
Shipra- Pr beta.
Buckky- Isse rahne do hamari beti badi ho gayi hai wo sambhal legi.
Paridhi- haa main sambhal lungi aur aapko bhi kuch krna hai Mom ko to abhi bhi samajh nhi aaya hoga.
Buckky- Chalo thik hai wo bhi dekh lenge pr pahle to wo collage dikhao jisme aapne admission liya hai.

Fir kya tha Paridhi ne Buccky ko collage dikhaya.
2 din aise hi beet gaye iss bich Shipra ko bhi Paridhi ki baat samajh m aa gayi.

Ab inka yaha s jaane ka waqt ho gaya tha pr usse pahle Buckky n Paridhi k security k liye jo socha tha wo kr diya q ki usse pata tha k yaha k collages m kya kuch nhi hota aur wo Paridhi k case m koi risk nhi chahta tha.
Buckky n saath hi Paridhi k liye ek bank accounyt bhi khulwaya jisme usne dher saare paise jama kara diye.
Buckky aur Shipra ko airport p chod Paridhi wapas chali aayi aur Hostel m shift hone ki taiyaari karne lagi.

Jyada waqt nhi beeta hoga yahi koi 4-5 ghante wo hostel k liye bas nikalne hi wali thi k usne NEWS p dekha ki jis plane s Buckky aur Shipra jaa rahe the usme ek bomb blast hua aur plane Samundra m dub gayi.
Iss khabar n tod diya usse puri tarah s tod diya wo samajh nhi paa rahi thi k react kare to kaise kare wahi jo uski friend jiske yaha wo ruki thi usne bhi jab ye dekha to usse bhi jhatka laga usne turant Paridhi ko galle laga liya pr Paridhi to jaise pathar ki ban gayi thi koi emotion hi nhi raha uske chahre pr wo bas Shunya m chali gayi thi.
Paridhi k friend ko samajh m m mhi aa raha tha k kya kare kya naa kare usne Paridhi s baat krne ki kosis ki pr wo kuch bhi bol nhi rahi thi bas TV ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uski dost n TV band kr diya ye soch kr k sayad ye fir kuch bole aur uski ye soch sahi nikli TV band hote hi Paridhi k aashu aane shuru ho gaye wo cillane lagi jor jor s rone lagi aaj sayad uska sab kuch chala gaya tha wo akeli bachi thi kahne ko kuch aur bhi log the jaise uske Dada par wo isse kabhi apnate nhi.
Iss plane durghatna ka pata usse bhi laga jisko Buckky n Paridhi ka khayal rakhne ko kaha tha aur wo aadmi Buckky ka acha dost tha.
Uss aadmi n ye khabar sunte hi 2 ladkiyon ko Paridhi k paas bheja aur usse apne pas lane ko kaha wo sayad samajh raha tha abhi Paridhi ki halat ko aur issi liye wo usse akela nhi chodna chahta tha. Khud wo aadmi ek meeting k liye chala gaya jo issi hadse k liye tha.
Meeting m bas ek baat samne aayi k ye blast kisi Human bomb ki wajah s hua hai jo k ek jaane maane terrorist group n karwaya hai.
Uss terrorist group n ye kabul bhi kar liya k unhone hi iss blast ko anjam diya hai.
Iss blast ki khabar har taraf chali gayi FBI ko bhi jab Buckky ki maut ka pata chala to wo bhi gusse m pagal ho gaye aaj FBI k chief Buckky ki maut ki khabar America k NEWS channels m chal rahi thi aur ab FBI chup baithne wali nhi thi wo apne kaam pr lag un logo k pata lagane m jinka haath iske piche tha.

Paridhi ki halat kharab ho gayi thi ro ro kr usne sab kuch jo kho diya tha apna aur ab to wo unki dead bodies bhi nhi dekh sakti thi. Roote roote hi wo behosh ho gayi aur jab uski aakhen khuli to wo hospital m thi samne TV pr wahi terrorist group k baare m dikha rahe the jinhone iss blast ko anjam diya tha. Usne aaspaas dekha to waha 2 ladkiyan, uski dost aur ek aadmi baitha tha.
Wo uthne ko hui to ladki1 jo usse ghure jaa rahi thi wo usne kaha.
Ladki1- ye uth gayi hai.
Aadmi ne uski oor dekha.
Aadmi- Ab kaisi ho Paridhi.
Paridhi- aap kon hai aur main yaha kaise.
Aadmi- Bache main tumhare papa Buccky ka dost hu usne mujhe tumhara khyal rakhne ko bola tha.
Paridhi ne jaise hi Buccky ka naam suna uake aashu nikalne lage.
Paridhi- Sab mere kaaran hua hai naa main yaha aati na wo log aate na ye sab kuh hota sab meri wajah s hua hai.
Aadmi- Nhi bachhe aisa nhi hai jisko jaana hota hai wo chale hi jaate hai.
Tabhi paridhi ki nazar TV pr gayi jisme blast ki news chal rahi thi.
Paridhi- Ye ye kya dikha rahe hai ye blast kya plane m bomb tha inn logo n bomb lagaya tha inki wajah s meri mom Dad chale gaye mujhe chod kar.
Aadmi- Kiran jara TV band kar do.
Wo jo ladki Paridhi ko ghure jaa rahi thi wo kiran thi aur wo aadmi Digvijay aur saath m Mohini.
Kiran- Ji
Digvijay- Bachhe aap inki fikr naa karo inhe to main apne haathon s maarunga..
Paridhi(chikh kr)- Nhi inhe main maarungi inhe pata nhi inhone kya kiya hai main naa sirf inko balki wo saare jo iss blast k piche hai sabhi ko tadpa tadpa k maarungi.
Digvijay- Baache aap abhi thik nhi ho aap hamare saath chalo ab aap hamare saath rahoge.
Paridhi- Main thik hu aur jo bola hai wo kr ke hi rahungi.
Kiran ne Digvijay ko ishare s ek taraf chalne ko bola.
waha jakr.
Kiran- Sir mujhe lagta hai hume ek oor agent milne wali hai.
Digvijay- Kiran tumhara dimag to sahi hai dekho usse abhi wo apne hosh m nhi hai wo bas gusse m sab bole jaa rahi hai aur ye sir sir kya kr rahi ho.
Kiran- Aapko kya lagta hai ye gussa yu hi chala jayega gaur s dekhiye ye gussa ye wahi gussa hai jo sabko jala dega iss waqt aap bhi jante ho yahi sahi hoga iske liye k hum iski madad kare warna ye kuch galat kr jaayegi.
Digvijay ne ek baat Paridhi ki oor dekha jiske aakhon m angare the.
Digvijay- hmmm sahi kaha tumne pr kya tum isse train krwa sakti ho.
Kiran- Haa jarur karwa sakti hu aap kaho to isse bhi Mohini k saath ghar pr hi rakh leti hu.
Digvijay- thik hai waise ye Mohini aur uska bhai kya naam tha uska.
Kiran- Saurya saurya naam hai uska.
Digvijay- Haa to kaisi training chal rahi hai inki.
Kiran- Sir aap manoge nhi ye dono lagbhag apni training complete krne wale hai.
Digvijay- kya baat kr rahi ho bas ek mahine m hi ye to bahut teez hai.
Kiran- Hmm wo to hai dono. Ab aap kya bolte ho iske baare m.
Digvijay- Lag jao kaam pe.
Dono Paridhi k paas gaye.
Mohini ko paridhi k friend k saath baahar bhej diya taaki baat kr sake.
Kiran- Main kiran hu RAW ki agent aur ye hai Digvijay RAW k retired agent. Digvijay ji aapki madad krna chahte hai aap ko uss kaabil banana chahte hai k aap apna inteqam le sake.
Digvijay- Paridhi beta main tumhe RAW ki training dilwana chahta hu.
Paridhi- Kitna waqt lagega isme.
Kiran- Ye to tum pr hai k tum kitna waqt leti ho magar kam s kam 3 mahine to lagte hi hai chahe koi bhi ho.
Paridhi- Thik hai main taiyaar hu.
Digvijay- Soch lo beta iske baad wapsi ka koi rasta nhi hai.
Paridhi- wapas kaha wapas jaaungi main koi raha hi nhi yaha to kiske paas wapas jaunga main batao aap kaha wapas jaau main...aap bas meri iss training ki taiyaari karo.
Digvijay- Thik hai.

Wahi dusri taraf jab Jordon aazad ho Maarcuss k paas pahucha.
Maarcuss n jaise hi Jordon ko dekha usse pata chal gaya k Crystal tut chuka hai aur ring bahar aa gayi hai saath hi Sunahre armor black sword sab samajh gaya wo.
Usne turant hi Daitya Raj ko bulaya.
Daitya raj bhi pahuch gaya uske paas.
Maarcuss(gusse m)- Black sword kaha hai.
Daitya raj Maarcuss ka gussa dekh kaampne laga.
DaityaRaj- Wo wo Maharaj wo.
Maarcuss- kya wo wo laga rakha hai jaldi bata warna abhi k abhi maar dunga tujhe wo bhi tadpa tadpa ke.
Daityaraj- wo Maharaj wo talwar mera beta use haar gaya.
Itne m ek shipahi aata hai waha.
Sipahi- Maharaj ek buri khabar hai.
Maarcuus- bolo ab tum kon si buri khabar laaye ho.
Shipahi- Wo maharaj hamara ek jaasus maara gaya hai uspe black sword aur kappa k talwar s waar kiya gaya tha.
Maarcuss- Kya bakte ho kisne kaha ye tumhe.
Sipahi- Maharaj aapke dusre jaasus ne.
Maarcuss(gusse m)- Kaha hai wo kaayar jisne ye sab hote dekha aur chupa raha.
Shipahi- Maharaj aapse dar kr usne khud khusi kr li.
Maarcuss ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha aur fir usne apni aake band ki aur fir kholi jiske baad wo shipahi DaityaRaj dono bhasm ban chuke the.
Maarcuss- Jordon yudh ki taiyaari karo sabhi logo ko jagao waqt aane wala hai aakhri yudh ka.
Jordon- Ji
Jordon bhi waha s chala gaya apne purane shathiyon ko dhundne k liye.
Wahi Maarcuss apni soch m gum ho gaya
 

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Awesome fabulous update
Dono taraf aamne samne ki ladai ki tarayari h dono taraf see aur earth par revenge attack hoga
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