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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Ristrcted

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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UPDATE-48

Ab tak
Earth p Buckky aur Shipra nikal chuke the India aane ko aur wahi Bansoa m Niharika 3 saal k liye behosh ho gayi aur saath hi Jordon aajad ho gaya tha.

Aage

Pahle hum Earth k oor chalte hai jaha p Buccky aur Shipra baithe hue the Paridhi k saamne aur Paridhi ko samajh nhi aa raha tha k ab wo kya bole.
Shipra- Ye kya mazak laga rakha hai jab tumhe koi problem nhi thi to q ye saara natak...
Buccky- Shipra aaram s (paridhi s) haa to aap batao kya baat hai.
Paridhi s ab raha nhi gaya aur usne bolne ka faisla liya.
Paridhi- Aap dono meri wajah s aage hi nhi badh rahe the to main kya krti maine kitna try kiya ki aap mujhse nafrat karo aur mujhe chod apni life k baare m socho pr naa ap dono ko to bas mera hi dyaan rakhna hai.
Shipra- Kya bole ja rahi hai tu.
Buckky- Kya jo main samajh raha hu wahi baat hai paridhi.
Shipra- Kon s baat mujhe bhi batao.
Paridhi- Dekha abhi bhi nhi samjhi ye (Buckky s) aur aap aapko to aage k baare m sochna chahiye tha na pr nhi ye bhi to meri hi beti hai...
Buckky- Pr beta aap iss pr hamse baat bhi kr sakti thi fir inn sab ki kya jarurat.
Paridhi- Ha ha ab yahi bolo bas kitni baar to kaha maine Mom s pr unko kuch samajh hi nhi aata abhi bhi dekho kaise ghure jaa rahi hai.
Shipra- Dekh tu had s aage jaa rahi hai.
Paridhi- Haa abhi aur bhi aage jaungi main dekhti hu aap kya kr loge.
Buckky- Beta ye kaise baate kr rahe ho Mom hai wo aapki.
Paridhi- Kamakal Mom s meri dekho inko onhe abhi bhi kuch samajh nhi aaya hai.
Buckky- Haa wo to hai todhi dimag s paidal.
Shipra- Ye kys laga rakha hai tum dono n Buckky tum bhi idke saath mil gaye yaad hai na hum idher q aaye k wo bhi bhul gaye tum.
Buckky- Yaad hai aur jis liye aaye hai uska jawab bhi mil gaya. (parishi s) Beta thik hai main taiyaar hu pr aapko yaha rahne ki koi jarurat nhi hai aap chalo hamare saath wapas.
Paridhi- Nhi main nhi jaa rahi kahi bhi main idher hi hu maine yahi ek collage m admission k liye apply kiya tha aur select ho gayi hu to ab main yahi hu ap dono jao.
Buckky- Ye kya hai tum USA k collages ko chod India k Collages m padhogi.
Shipra- nhi tum hamare saath chalogi.
Paridhi- Mom maan jao na please acha collage hai ye Papa(Aakash) n yahi s to padhayi ki thi main bhi yahi s karna chahti hu.
Shipra- Koi jarurat nhi aur fir tum yaha adjust kaise karogi.
Paridhi- Main koi bacchi nhi hu samjhe aap main manage kr lungi aur haa main Dada ji k paas bhi nhi jaungi ok ab to maan jao please.
Shipra- Pr beta.
Buckky- Isse rahne do hamari beti badi ho gayi hai wo sambhal legi.
Paridhi- haa main sambhal lungi aur aapko bhi kuch krna hai Mom ko to abhi bhi samajh nhi aaya hoga.
Buckky- Chalo thik hai wo bhi dekh lenge pr pahle to wo collage dikhao jisme aapne admission liya hai.

Fir kya tha Paridhi ne Buccky ko collage dikhaya.
2 din aise hi beet gaye iss bich Shipra ko bhi Paridhi ki baat samajh m aa gayi.

Ab inka yaha s jaane ka waqt ho gaya tha pr usse pahle Buckky n Paridhi k security k liye jo socha tha wo kr diya q ki usse pata tha k yaha k collages m kya kuch nhi hota aur wo Paridhi k case m koi risk nhi chahta tha.
Buckky n saath hi Paridhi k liye ek bank accounyt bhi khulwaya jisme usne dher saare paise jama kara diye.
Buckky aur Shipra ko airport p chod Paridhi wapas chali aayi aur Hostel m shift hone ki taiyaari karne lagi.

Jyada waqt nhi beeta hoga yahi koi 4-5 ghante wo hostel k liye bas nikalne hi wali thi k usne NEWS p dekha ki jis plane s Buckky aur Shipra jaa rahe the usme ek bomb blast hua aur plane Samundra m dub gayi.
Iss khabar n tod diya usse puri tarah s tod diya wo samajh nhi paa rahi thi k react kare to kaise kare wahi jo uski friend jiske yaha wo ruki thi usne bhi jab ye dekha to usse bhi jhatka laga usne turant Paridhi ko galle laga liya pr Paridhi to jaise pathar ki ban gayi thi koi emotion hi nhi raha uske chahre pr wo bas Shunya m chali gayi thi.
Paridhi k friend ko samajh m m mhi aa raha tha k kya kare kya naa kare usne Paridhi s baat krne ki kosis ki pr wo kuch bhi bol nhi rahi thi bas TV ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Uski dost n TV band kr diya ye soch kr k sayad ye fir kuch bole aur uski ye soch sahi nikli TV band hote hi Paridhi k aashu aane shuru ho gaye wo cillane lagi jor jor s rone lagi aaj sayad uska sab kuch chala gaya tha wo akeli bachi thi kahne ko kuch aur bhi log the jaise uske Dada par wo isse kabhi apnate nhi.
Iss plane durghatna ka pata usse bhi laga jisko Buckky n Paridhi ka khayal rakhne ko kaha tha aur wo aadmi Buckky ka acha dost tha.
Uss aadmi n ye khabar sunte hi 2 ladkiyon ko Paridhi k paas bheja aur usse apne pas lane ko kaha wo sayad samajh raha tha abhi Paridhi ki halat ko aur issi liye wo usse akela nhi chodna chahta tha. Khud wo aadmi ek meeting k liye chala gaya jo issi hadse k liye tha.
Meeting m bas ek baat samne aayi k ye blast kisi Human bomb ki wajah s hua hai jo k ek jaane maane terrorist group n karwaya hai.
Uss terrorist group n ye kabul bhi kar liya k unhone hi iss blast ko anjam diya hai.
Iss blast ki khabar har taraf chali gayi FBI ko bhi jab Buckky ki maut ka pata chala to wo bhi gusse m pagal ho gaye aaj FBI k chief Buckky ki maut ki khabar America k NEWS channels m chal rahi thi aur ab FBI chup baithne wali nhi thi wo apne kaam pr lag un logo k pata lagane m jinka haath iske piche tha.

Paridhi ki halat kharab ho gayi thi ro ro kr usne sab kuch jo kho diya tha apna aur ab to wo unki dead bodies bhi nhi dekh sakti thi. Roote roote hi wo behosh ho gayi aur jab uski aakhen khuli to wo hospital m thi samne TV pr wahi terrorist group k baare m dikha rahe the jinhone iss blast ko anjam diya tha. Usne aaspaas dekha to waha 2 ladkiyan, uski dost aur ek aadmi baitha tha.
Wo uthne ko hui to ladki1 jo usse ghure jaa rahi thi wo usne kaha.
Ladki1- ye uth gayi hai.
Aadmi ne uski oor dekha.
Aadmi- Ab kaisi ho Paridhi.
Paridhi- aap kon hai aur main yaha kaise.
Aadmi- Bache main tumhare papa Buccky ka dost hu usne mujhe tumhara khyal rakhne ko bola tha.
Paridhi ne jaise hi Buccky ka naam suna uake aashu nikalne lage.
Paridhi- Sab mere kaaran hua hai naa main yaha aati na wo log aate na ye sab kuh hota sab meri wajah s hua hai.
Aadmi- Nhi bachhe aisa nhi hai jisko jaana hota hai wo chale hi jaate hai.
Tabhi paridhi ki nazar TV pr gayi jisme blast ki news chal rahi thi.
Paridhi- Ye ye kya dikha rahe hai ye blast kya plane m bomb tha inn logo n bomb lagaya tha inki wajah s meri mom Dad chale gaye mujhe chod kar.
Aadmi- Kiran jara TV band kar do.
Wo jo ladki Paridhi ko ghure jaa rahi thi wo kiran thi aur wo aadmi Digvijay aur saath m Mohini.
Kiran- Ji
Digvijay- Bachhe aap inki fikr naa karo inhe to main apne haathon s maarunga..
Paridhi(chikh kr)- Nhi inhe main maarungi inhe pata nhi inhone kya kiya hai main naa sirf inko balki wo saare jo iss blast k piche hai sabhi ko tadpa tadpa k maarungi.
Digvijay- Baache aap abhi thik nhi ho aap hamare saath chalo ab aap hamare saath rahoge.
Paridhi- Main thik hu aur jo bola hai wo kr ke hi rahungi.
Kiran ne Digvijay ko ishare s ek taraf chalne ko bola.
waha jakr.
Kiran- Sir mujhe lagta hai hume ek oor agent milne wali hai.
Digvijay- Kiran tumhara dimag to sahi hai dekho usse abhi wo apne hosh m nhi hai wo bas gusse m sab bole jaa rahi hai aur ye sir sir kya kr rahi ho.
Kiran- Aapko kya lagta hai ye gussa yu hi chala jayega gaur s dekhiye ye gussa ye wahi gussa hai jo sabko jala dega iss waqt aap bhi jante ho yahi sahi hoga iske liye k hum iski madad kare warna ye kuch galat kr jaayegi.
Digvijay ne ek baat Paridhi ki oor dekha jiske aakhon m angare the.
Digvijay- hmmm sahi kaha tumne pr kya tum isse train krwa sakti ho.
Kiran- Haa jarur karwa sakti hu aap kaho to isse bhi Mohini k saath ghar pr hi rakh leti hu.
Digvijay- thik hai waise ye Mohini aur uska bhai kya naam tha uska.
Kiran- Saurya saurya naam hai uska.
Digvijay- Haa to kaisi training chal rahi hai inki.
Kiran- Sir aap manoge nhi ye dono lagbhag apni training complete krne wale hai.
Digvijay- kya baat kr rahi ho bas ek mahine m hi ye to bahut teez hai.
Kiran- Hmm wo to hai dono. Ab aap kya bolte ho iske baare m.
Digvijay- Lag jao kaam pe.
Dono Paridhi k paas gaye.
Mohini ko paridhi k friend k saath baahar bhej diya taaki baat kr sake.
Kiran- Main kiran hu RAW ki agent aur ye hai Digvijay RAW k retired agent. Digvijay ji aapki madad krna chahte hai aap ko uss kaabil banana chahte hai k aap apna inteqam le sake.
Digvijay- Paridhi beta main tumhe RAW ki training dilwana chahta hu.
Paridhi- Kitna waqt lagega isme.
Kiran- Ye to tum pr hai k tum kitna waqt leti ho magar kam s kam 3 mahine to lagte hi hai chahe koi bhi ho.
Paridhi- Thik hai main taiyaar hu.
Digvijay- Soch lo beta iske baad wapsi ka koi rasta nhi hai.
Paridhi- wapas kaha wapas jaaungi main koi raha hi nhi yaha to kiske paas wapas jaunga main batao aap kaha wapas jaau main...aap bas meri iss training ki taiyaari karo.
Digvijay- Thik hai.

Wahi dusri taraf jab Jordon aazad ho Maarcuss k paas pahucha.
Maarcuss n jaise hi Jordon ko dekha usse pata chal gaya k Crystal tut chuka hai aur ring bahar aa gayi hai saath hi Sunahre armor black sword sab samajh gaya wo.
Usne turant hi Daitya Raj ko bulaya.
Daitya raj bhi pahuch gaya uske paas.
Maarcuss(gusse m)- Black sword kaha hai.
Daitya raj Maarcuss ka gussa dekh kaampne laga.
DaityaRaj- Wo wo Maharaj wo.
Maarcuss- kya wo wo laga rakha hai jaldi bata warna abhi k abhi maar dunga tujhe wo bhi tadpa tadpa ke.
Daityaraj- wo Maharaj wo talwar mera beta use haar gaya.
Itne m ek shipahi aata hai waha.
Sipahi- Maharaj ek buri khabar hai.
Maarcuus- bolo ab tum kon si buri khabar laaye ho.
Shipahi- Wo maharaj hamara ek jaasus maara gaya hai uspe black sword aur kappa k talwar s waar kiya gaya tha.
Maarcuss- Kya bakte ho kisne kaha ye tumhe.
Sipahi- Maharaj aapke dusre jaasus ne.
Maarcuss(gusse m)- Kaha hai wo kaayar jisne ye sab hote dekha aur chupa raha.
Shipahi- Maharaj aapse dar kr usne khud khusi kr li.
Maarcuss ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha aur fir usne apni aake band ki aur fir kholi jiske baad wo shipahi DaityaRaj dono bhasm ban chuke the.
Maarcuss- Jordon yudh ki taiyaari karo sabhi logo ko jagao waqt aane wala hai aakhri yudh ka.
Jordon- Ji
Jordon bhi waha s chala gaya apne purane shathiyon ko dhundne k liye.
Wahi Maarcuss apni soch m gum ho gaya
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Osmmm bhai nic update
 

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Osmmm bhai NIC
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