Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Ranveerx · Jun 4, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE- 59

Ab Tak

Bansoa mein Saurya behosh ho chuka tha uski energy khatam hone ke kaaran aur wahi Earth par Alex aur Varsha ka wo kiss jiske baad Varsha nashe ke chalte behosh ho gayi aur Alex usko dekhte hue soo gaya.

Aage.

Pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha saurya ek bister par leta hai aur uske thik bagal mein Margret thi jo uss bister par sar rakhe soo rahi thi sayad baithe baithe neend aa gayi ho.

Jab saurya(meri) neend khuli to mein aas pass dekhne laga aur ussi mein mere se ek glass gir gaya jisse Margret ki neend khul gayi.

Margret- Kya hua awaj...tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Main- Haa aur tum ye aise kaise soo rahi ho.

Chaaataak chaaataaak

Main- Maar kyun rahi ho yaar maine kya kiya.

Margret- Mujhe waha se bjaga kyun diya tha tumne.

Main- Waha tumhe khatra tha aur tumhe pata nahi wo gudiya bhi aa gayi thi udher mujhe dono se ladna pada.

Chaaaataaak chhaaataaak

Main- Dekho ab jyada ho rah....

Margret-(Gusse mein) Jyada ho raha hai ke bachhe agar fir aisa kuch kiya na to taange tod kar haath mein de dungi chalo utho ab training par bhi jaana hai.

Main- Haaa jaata hu tum bahar jao mujhe change karna hai.

Margret- Kyun maine kon se tumhare saath pakde hai jo mere yaha rahte tum change nahi kar sakte. Main nahi jaa rahi bahar.

Main- Arre par main tumhare saamne kaise.

Margret- kya matlab kaise chalo ready ho jao jaldi.

Main- Yaar tum bahar jao.

Margret- Haa jaa rahi hu naa waise itna main bhi nahi sarmati tumhare samne change karne mein jitna tum sharma rahe ho.

Main- Kya kaha tumne abhi.

Margret- Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Margret bahar chali gayi wahiain bhi ready hua aue chal pada training ke liye.

Dusri oor chalte hai B.Dragon ke pass jisko kaafi chootein aayi thi.

B.dragon(Khud se)- Ye kon aa gaya jisko portal kholna aata hai. Kya usko meri kamjori ka bhi pata hoga.

Wo abhi yahi sab soch raha tha ke waha Maarcuss ki awaj aati hai.

Maarcuss- Kaisa raha pahla din kitni barbaadi ki tumne.

B.dragon kuch bol hi nahi paa raha tha kya kahta ke ek elf aaya aur uski halat kharab kar di aur jhoot wo bol nahi sakta tha.

Darte hue usne puri kahani sunna di Maarcuss ko.

Maarcuss- Fir se elf ye kon sa elf hai jo baar baar mujhse takra raha hai aur ye portal ki takat ksha se aa gayi usme. Kuch to galat hai uske baare mein par kya. Tum kuch din bas uspe nazar rakho mujhe uske baare mein sab kuch jaana hai aur ye aakhri mauka hai tumhare liye.

B.Dragon- Ji maalik.

Maarcuss ki awaj aani band ho gayi.

Yaha se dur Pritvi par bhi koi jaag gayi thi. Hamari pyaari Varsha. Kal ke nashe ke wajah se ab udka sar dard kar raha tha wo bhi bahut jyada usko abhi kuch bhi yaad nahi tha kal kya kiya tha usne. Bagal mein Alex so raha tha. Varsha ne usko jagaya aur bola apne sar dard ke baare mein.

Alex ne nimbu paani jaadu se uske liye aur apne liye bhi mangaya aur dono pinne lage par Alex ke hoothon par jo Varsha ne kaata tha uspe wo nimbu pasni lagte hi Alex ko thodi jalan hui.

Varsha- Kya hua...ye nishan ye kaise hua.

Alex- Tumhe nahi pata kaise hua.

Varsha- Nahi main kais....

Varsha ek dum se chup ho gayi usko thoda thoda yaad aaaya ke usne Alex ko kiss koya tha.

Alex- Tumhe pata nahi ye kya hai .

Varsha- nahi mujhe pata nahi.
Varsha itna bol jaane ke liye uthti hai to Alex uska haath pakad leta hai.
Varsha- Choodo mera haath mujhe jaana hai.

Alex- Varsha meri baat sunno naa main naa wo tumse shadi...

Varsha-nahi bilkul nahi aisa sochna bhi mat.

Alex- Kya par kal to tumne...

Varsha- Maine kuch nahi kiya tha sab tumne kiya pahle mujhe wo pilaya uske baad ye sab.

Alex- Maine kaha tha tumhe pinne ko wo to tum khud aayi thi naa par usko chodo aur ye batao tum mujhse pyaar karti ho yaa nahi dekho sach sach batana.

Varsha kuch boli nahi vas apna sar nichhe kiye khadi rahi.

Alex- Varsha kuch to bolo yaar plz.

Varsha-(Dhire se) Haa par.

Alex(Khush hota hua) - Haa tumne haa kaha naa .

Varsha- Par mainshadi nahi karungi tumse.

Alex- Par kyun hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai fir kyun nahi kar sakti shaadi.

Varsha- Meri kuch sharte hai agar wo puri hui tab hi shadi hogi.

Alex- Arree tum bol kar to dekho main kuch bhi kar dunga batao kya shart hai.

Varsha- Mujhe thoda waqt do main tumhe baad mein batati hu.

Varsha itna bol waha se nikal li aur pahuch gayi sheedha Kiran ke pass aur usko purri katha sunna daaali.

Kiran- Matlab tunne pura plan chopat kar diya .

Varsha- Didi jaan kar nahi kiya naa wo to uss chij ke pinne ke baad bas ho gaya.

Kiran- Ye sab uss Kappa aur Pradeep ka kiya dhara hai.

Itne mein Mohini bhi pahuch gayi waha aur usko bhi sab kuch bataya dono ne.

Mohini sharton ke baare mein sun badi khush hui.

Mohini- Chalo to pahli shart to Saurya ko yaha laane ki hogi. Baaki ke aap dono tai kar lo.

Kiran- Par Mohini kya ye sahi hoga matlab wo waha training ke liye gaya hai.

Mohini- Nahi bhabhi mujhe usse milna hai to milna hai ek to mujhe jaane nahi deta ye Alex ka bachha upar se aap bhi. Pata hai wo Kappa aur Pradeep bhai ko le gaya tha ek baar waha par mujhe nahi le gaya.

Varsha- Arre didi aap chinta naa karo jab tak wo nahi aate tab tak main shadi hi nahi karungi chalo ab koi dusri shart batao.

Aise hi ye tinno baithe sapne dekhte rahe.

Wahi Paridhi subah hi taiyaar ho nikal padi thi Saurya(Kappa) ke saath uss jagah jaha wo arm deal honi thi jisme uss plane blast wale terrorist group ke bande aane wale the.

Dono ne hi apne bhes badal rakhe the.

Kappa- Ye to bahut badi jagah hai itne hi tech guns ye to kamaal hai.

Paridhi- Hame bas uss terrorist group ke bando ko pakadna hai samjhe aur koi nahi.

Kappa(Mohini se M2M) - Yaha bahut khana hai.

Mohini- Tum ruko wahi main abhi aati hu.

Paridhi waha unn logo ko dhund rahi thi. Unko pahchanne ka ek aasan tarika tha uss group ke logo ke gardan ke pichhe ek tatoo bana hua hita hai. Paridhi hnko dundhti rahi par ek ghanta intezar ke basd bhi wo nahi aaye par ek call aaya Mohini ka usko.

Paridhi- Hello

Mohini- Haa sun wo kuch bande mille hai mujhe sayad ye wahi hai jinko tum dhoond rahi ho.

Paridhi- Kya par ruko... unke gardan ke piche dekho.

Mohini- Haa tatoo bhi hai issi liye to uthaya hai ye yahi interrogation room mein bandhe hue hai.

Paridhi- Main aa rahi hu.

Call cut.

Paridhi(Kappa se)- chalo kaam ho gaya hai.

Kappa bhi uske saath chal diya dono car mein baithe aur chale gaye wahi unke jaane ke baad. Uss jagah Mohini aayi thi yahi koi 20 log honge.

Mohini- Itna saara khoon chalo kuch din ab binna khoon piye bhi nikal jaayega abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi usko kuch mehsus hua aur wo unko chod hawa ho gayi aur pahuch gayi kawach ke pass waha Daanav raj khada tha apne logo aur kuch dragons ke sath wo kawach ko hi dekh raha tha.

Tabhi waha Alex bhi aa jata hai.

Alex- Ye to daanav lok ka raja hai.

Mohini- Haa aur dekho ye to dragons bhi le aaya hai hum kya kare.

Alex - kuch nahi yee saare kuch nahi kar paayenge .

Mohini- Hmm jaanti hu par ye dragons inke saath matlab koyi hai jo ab uske dragons ka seena pati van chuka hai.

Alex- Hmm sayad tum bhi ussi ke baare mein soch rahi ho.

Mohini- Haa B.dragon wahi hoga.

Alex- Ha par abhi usme waqt hai.

Daanav raj laga hua tha uss kawach ko todne mein naa jaane kitni koshis ki usne par sab bekar haar maan kar wo waha se chala gaya aur uske jaane ke baad Alex aur Mohini bhi.

Mohini ab Base chali gayi uska maan nahi raha ab kuch karne kaa.

Waha pahuchi to dekha paridhi lagi padi hai dono ke upar par wo terrorists bhi gajab ke the kuch bhi nahi bol rahe the.

Paridhi ne bahut torcher kiya tha unko par koi jawab nahi milla usko abhi tak jis wajah se usko gussa aaya aur usne dono ko shock dena suru kar diya jisse dono ki hi maut ho gayi.

Paridhi ko jab iska ahsas hua ki uski eklauti lead ab nahi rahi to usko bahut burra laga wo to accha hua Mohini thi waha par warna Paridhi khud ko hi kuch karne wali thi.
Mohini- Arre fir se koi lead mil jaayega is baar main tere saath rahungi samjhi.

Paridhi ne haa kar di Mohini ko

Excellent update Bro...

Silentreader0 · Jun 4, 2020

Superb update

aks 21 · Jun 4, 2020

Superb one bhai

Vikram Bhosle · Jun 4, 2020

Nice update

King · Jun 4, 2020

Awesome update bhai

ULTRA · Jun 4, 2020

Ristrcted said:
Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

late wali badhai ?

ULTRA · Jun 4, 2020

Ristrcted said:
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"Aree oo bhai ye bus Kishan pur jayegi kya ?" puchha kisi ne
conductor- nahi bhaiya e baswa to Madhavpur jayegi . Tumko jana hai ka ?
Madavpur ka naam sunte hi pata nahi kyun vyakti k chahre k rang hi udd gaye.
"are mohit babu aap aaj akele bus stand pr caleye hm apko apke bus tk chod dete hai." aate huye ek 17 saal k ladke ne kaha
Mohit - arre saurya tum ho kya ?
ladka - ha mohit babu pr aap akele yaha kyu aa gaye aur moti kaha hai .(ladke ne mohit k cahre ko dekha to use laga koi paresani hogi )
Mohit - moti ko hm hi gift pack krane beje hai aaj tumhare ghar jo party h uske liye ab aa hi gae ho to jalge chalo warna tumhari bahane hamse ruth jayegi.
Saurya - caliye hamara hath pkadiye aur chalte hai
mohit babu ne saurya ka hath pakda aur chal diye dusre bus s kishanpur ki traf.

bus pr baithte hi saurya sochne laga ki kya uski bahno ko uska gift pasand ayega bhi ya nhi . aur wahi mohit babu apne paresani k bare m sochne lage (jo baad m pata chalega) .
Aise hi 2 gante m dono log pahuch gaye Kishanpur aur dono hi bade kush lag rahe the ho bhi kyu na ek apni bahno k pass ja raha tha pure 2 saal bad aur ek apne dost k pass (saurya k papa ).

Baat ye hai ki saurya apna 12th k exam de kr waps apne gaon ja raha tha wo bhi pure 2 saal baad
(ab yaha s saurya ki jagah m likhunga )
Main bahut dino baad apne gaon apno k pass aa raha tha jaha m bada hua ye jagah bahut hi achi h yaha pr charo taraf sirf khet hi khet h jo ki dekhne m bahut sundar h aur bhi dekhne layak chije hai jaise yaha ka purana mandir,talab aur purani bhutiya haweli bhi

Main bus s utar kr yahi sab soch raha tha.maine ghar m kisi ko bhi aane k bare m nahi bataya tha isi liye koi b nahi aya mujhe lene . Bus stop pr hi mujhe moti mil gaya jo ki hath m kuch paked dabbe liye khada tha aur Mohit babu ka wait kr raha tha . wo abhi idhar udhar dekh hi rha tha ki Maine use aawaj de k bulaya wo jaldi s aya aur hmare liye riksaw ka intejam kiya aur hm chal diye ghar ki taraf .

yaha s hame ghar jane k liye kam s kam 20 minute lagne the m aur moti gaon k kubsurat najaro m kho gaye aur Mohit babu riksaw wale s bate krne lage .

Ab hm phuch gaye mere ghar. Ghar dekhne m jyada bada nhi tha. 2 majila ghar h jisme 5 kmre h aur 2 bathroom aur niche k floor p 2 room aur ek bathroom h ek room papa k hai aur ek hmesa band rhta h pata nhi kyun.
aur upar k floor pr 3 room aur ek bathroom h jisme s ek mera ek tiya aur taniya ka aur ek guest room.
chaliye ab apne pariwar s milwata hu .
Abhishek Dixit - dad (pese s kishan h hmari jyada jamin to nhi h fir bhi hmare gujar basar k liye thik h )
Sanjana Dixit - mom (house maker h bahut hi sweet aur sabko pyar krne wali )
Tiya and Tanya Dixit-sis(dono twins h hmesa sabko presan krna yhi inka kaam h abhi gaon k school m 10 m padai kr rhi h)
ye thi meri family .

Back to story...
Hm pahuch gaye aur maine mohit babu ko riksaw s utara aur apna saman bhi kuch saman moti ko diya aur kuch khud le liya aur pahuch gaye m ghar k gate pr m bell bajane hi wala tha ki kisi n darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ekdum s chowk gaya m bhi ese nhi janta tha pr dekhne m sabhya malum ho rahi thi main unko dekh hi rha tha ki piche s meri mom aai aur mujhe dekh kush hui aur paresan bhi . maine ye notice kar liya tha.

Mujhe laga ki ye meri mom ki koi friend hogi maine bhi unke pair chue pr unhone to mujhe gale hi laga liya . unke gale lag k mujhe bilkul apna sa mahsus ho raha tha kuch der aise rhne k baad muche apne kandhe pr gilapan mahsus hua jab maine dekha to wo roo rahi thi mujhe ye bahut hi ajib laga aur bura bhi. ab m kuch kahta usse pahle hi meri bahno ki entry ho gai jo ki apne friends ko invite krne gai thi birthday party k liye . Mujhe dekhte hi mere paas aai aur kud gai mere upar Bhaiya Bhaiya chillate hue . Jab ye sab ho raha tha tb wo aurat bas hame dekhe ja rhi thi aur muskura rahi thi aur mom apta nhi kyun kuch pareshan si dikh rahi thi.
Ab maine apni dono bahno ko kud s alag kiya aur unhe birthday wish kiya jise sun kr wo aurat meri mom ko kha jane wali najro s dekhe ja rhi thi.
Ab mai apni mom k pass gaya aur unke pair chue to unhone bhi muje gale laga liya aur wahi sabhi maa ka dialog chipkka diya "kitna ptla ho gaya h khhata nhi kya ..."
main- mom m bilkul fit hu pr aap kuch paresan najar aa rhi h.
mom - nahi beta m to kush hu ki tum aa gaye presan to pahle thi kyunki tumhari bahno n kaha tha jab tk tum na aaye tb tk ye dono khanna nhi khaye gi.(baat ko badalte hue).
maine done ki taraf dekha aur mom ko bola aap khana lagao . Abhi tak wo aurat hame hi dekhe jaa rhi thi . mom n unhe baithne ko kaha aur wo khud khana lane chali gai .
Abhi mom kitchen k ander hi gai thi k bahar s Mohit babu aur moti dono ander aye.
Mohit babu ko dekh kr wo aurat bol padi - are chottu tum yaha kya kr rhe ho.
Mohit babu to awaj sunte hi ghabra gaye .
Mohit - c..cho..choti Malkin aa..aaaap yahaa .
Moti ka bhi face bilkul waisa hi ho gya pr wo kuch na bola
aurat(kadk awaj m ) - kitni baar bola h didi bolne ko malkin nhi pr tum ho ki..
Awaj sun kr Mom kitchen s bahar ayi hatho m thali liye aur bahar jo dekha use dekh to ek dum s chintit hi ho gai. par khud ko sambhal kr boli -Choti maine hi mohit ko yaha k bare m batane s mana kiya tha kisiko.
Aurat - par q didi aap mujhe to bata sakti thi na ye sab ya aap mujhse bhi naraj ho(bolte hue unki awaj kuch bhari hone lagi)
Mai aur meri bahne bas ye sab dekhe jaa rhe the hme kuch samajh nhi aa raha tha .
Mom - nhi choti tum galat samaj rhi ho phle khana kha lo phir m tumhe batati hu.

Hm tino bhai bahan kb s chup baite the ki tabhi Tiya s raha nhi gaya aur usne puch hi liya .
Tiya-Mom ye aunty kon h ? aur y Mohit bhaiya inko choti malkin kyun bol rhe h ? aur y apko didi kyun bol rhi h ?
Mom - beta phle khanna kha lo phir batati hu
phir sabhi n khanna khaya aur baith gaye bate krne dopahar ka samay hua tha abhi.
Mohit - didi app bate karo m jara abhishek bhai s mil kr aata hu .(aur wo chale gaye moti k sath )
mom - beta y tumhari choti massi h.
ye hum tino k liya kisi boom s kum nhi tha chuki hme bataya gaya tha ki hamare parents annath h .
Main- pr mom apne to kaha tha ki aap aur dad annath ho .
mera bas itna hi khna tha ki wo aurat jor s chillayi mom k upar -Aanaathh! ye bataya h apne inko ki app aur jiju annath ho
Mom -Poonam maine aur tumhare jiju n wahi kiya jo hame sahi laga waise bhi us wakt hmne unse rista tod hi liya tha unlogo ki wajah s hamne bahut kuch khoya h( bolte bolte mom rone lagi )
main uth kr mom k pass gaya aur unko gale laga liya air chup karane laga . kuch der m mom chup hui to wo fir boli
mom- aaj bhi yaad h wo din jab papa n gudiya(Saifali) ko bas isliye ghar s dhaka de kr nikal diya qki wo deep s shaddi krna cahti thi pyar krti thi wo deep s aur dad n use nikal diya ghar s. main kabhi khud ko maaf nhi kar paungi ki mere samne meri gudiya k sath aisa kuch hua aur m dekhti rhi bus . us din hi maine abhishek k sath ghar chodne ka maan bana liya tha.

Main aur meri bahne to bas ye sab sun k shock m he the.
Poonam Mausi- pr ghar walo n apke aur jiju k mout ki khabar di thi hame aur maine to apni akhon s akpi aur jiju ki body dekhi thi us car blast k baad.

Mom kuch bolti usse phle hi ghar m 7 logo ki entry hui...

nice

phele hi update me itne dhamake

:superb:

Killerpanditji(pandit) · Jun 4, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE- 59

Ab Tak

Bansoa mein Saurya behosh ho chuka tha uski energy khatam hone ke kaaran aur wahi Earth par Alex aur Varsha ka wo kiss jiske baad Varsha nashe ke chalte behosh ho gayi aur Alex usko dekhte hue soo gaya.

Aage.

Pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha saurya ek bister par leta hai aur uske thik bagal mein Margret thi jo uss bister par sar rakhe soo rahi thi sayad baithe baithe neend aa gayi ho.

Jab saurya(meri) neend khuli to mein aas pass dekhne laga aur ussi mein mere se ek glass gir gaya jisse Margret ki neend khul gayi.

Margret- Kya hua awaj...tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Main- Haa aur tum ye aise kaise soo rahi ho.

Chaaataak chaaataaak

Main- Maar kyun rahi ho yaar maine kya kiya.

Margret- Mujhe waha se bjaga kyun diya tha tumne.

Main- Waha tumhe khatra tha aur tumhe pata nahi wo gudiya bhi aa gayi thi udher mujhe dono se ladna pada.

Chaaaataaak chhaaataaak

Main- Dekho ab jyada ho rah....

Margret-(Gusse mein) Jyada ho raha hai ke bachhe agar fir aisa kuch kiya na to taange tod kar haath mein de dungi chalo utho ab training par bhi jaana hai.

Main- Haaa jaata hu tum bahar jao mujhe change karna hai.

Margret- Kyun maine kon se tumhare saath pakde hai jo mere yaha rahte tum change nahi kar sakte. Main nahi jaa rahi bahar.

Main- Arre par main tumhare saamne kaise.

Margret- kya matlab kaise chalo ready ho jao jaldi.

Main- Yaar tum bahar jao.

Margret- Haa jaa rahi hu naa waise itna main bhi nahi sarmati tumhare samne change karne mein jitna tum sharma rahe ho.

Main- Kya kaha tumne abhi.

Margret- Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Margret bahar chali gayi wahiain bhi ready hua aue chal pada training ke liye.

Dusri oor chalte hai B.Dragon ke pass jisko kaafi chootein aayi thi.

B.dragon(Khud se)- Ye kon aa gaya jisko portal kholna aata hai. Kya usko meri kamjori ka bhi pata hoga.

Wo abhi yahi sab soch raha tha ke waha Maarcuss ki awaj aati hai.

Maarcuss- Kaisa raha pahla din kitni barbaadi ki tumne.

B.dragon kuch bol hi nahi paa raha tha kya kahta ke ek elf aaya aur uski halat kharab kar di aur jhoot wo bol nahi sakta tha.

Darte hue usne puri kahani sunna di Maarcuss ko.

Maarcuss- Fir se elf ye kon sa elf hai jo baar baar mujhse takra raha hai aur ye portal ki takat ksha se aa gayi usme. Kuch to galat hai uske baare mein par kya. Tum kuch din bas uspe nazar rakho mujhe uske baare mein sab kuch jaana hai aur ye aakhri mauka hai tumhare liye.

B.Dragon- Ji maalik.

Maarcuss ki awaj aani band ho gayi.

Yaha se dur Pritvi par bhi koi jaag gayi thi. Hamari pyaari Varsha. Kal ke nashe ke wajah se ab udka sar dard kar raha tha wo bhi bahut jyada usko abhi kuch bhi yaad nahi tha kal kya kiya tha usne. Bagal mein Alex so raha tha. Varsha ne usko jagaya aur bola apne sar dard ke baare mein.

Alex ne nimbu paani jaadu se uske liye aur apne liye bhi mangaya aur dono pinne lage par Alex ke hoothon par jo Varsha ne kaata tha uspe wo nimbu pasni lagte hi Alex ko thodi jalan hui.

Varsha- Kya hua...ye nishan ye kaise hua.

Alex- Tumhe nahi pata kaise hua.

Varsha- Nahi main kais....

Varsha ek dum se chup ho gayi usko thoda thoda yaad aaaya ke usne Alex ko kiss koya tha.

Alex- Tumhe pata nahi ye kya hai .

Varsha- nahi mujhe pata nahi.
Varsha itna bol jaane ke liye uthti hai to Alex uska haath pakad leta hai.
Varsha- Choodo mera haath mujhe jaana hai.

Alex- Varsha meri baat sunno naa main naa wo tumse shadi...

Varsha-nahi bilkul nahi aisa sochna bhi mat.

Alex- Kya par kal to tumne...

Varsha- Maine kuch nahi kiya tha sab tumne kiya pahle mujhe wo pilaya uske baad ye sab.

Alex- Maine kaha tha tumhe pinne ko wo to tum khud aayi thi naa par usko chodo aur ye batao tum mujhse pyaar karti ho yaa nahi dekho sach sach batana.

Varsha kuch boli nahi vas apna sar nichhe kiye khadi rahi.

Alex- Varsha kuch to bolo yaar plz.

Varsha-(Dhire se) Haa par.

Alex(Khush hota hua) - Haa tumne haa kaha naa .

Varsha- Par mainshadi nahi karungi tumse.

Alex- Par kyun hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai fir kyun nahi kar sakti shaadi.

Varsha- Meri kuch sharte hai agar wo puri hui tab hi shadi hogi.

Alex- Arree tum bol kar to dekho main kuch bhi kar dunga batao kya shart hai.

Varsha- Mujhe thoda waqt do main tumhe baad mein batati hu.

Varsha itna bol waha se nikal li aur pahuch gayi sheedha Kiran ke pass aur usko purri katha sunna daaali.

Kiran- Matlab tunne pura plan chopat kar diya .

Varsha- Didi jaan kar nahi kiya naa wo to uss chij ke pinne ke baad bas ho gaya.

Kiran- Ye sab uss Kappa aur Pradeep ka kiya dhara hai.

Itne mein Mohini bhi pahuch gayi waha aur usko bhi sab kuch bataya dono ne.

Mohini sharton ke baare mein sun badi khush hui.

Mohini- Chalo to pahli shart to Saurya ko yaha laane ki hogi. Baaki ke aap dono tai kar lo.

Kiran- Par Mohini kya ye sahi hoga matlab wo waha training ke liye gaya hai.

Mohini- Nahi bhabhi mujhe usse milna hai to milna hai ek to mujhe jaane nahi deta ye Alex ka bachha upar se aap bhi. Pata hai wo Kappa aur Pradeep bhai ko le gaya tha ek baar waha par mujhe nahi le gaya.

Varsha- Arre didi aap chinta naa karo jab tak wo nahi aate tab tak main shadi hi nahi karungi chalo ab koi dusri shart batao.

Aise hi ye tinno baithe sapne dekhte rahe.

Wahi Paridhi subah hi taiyaar ho nikal padi thi Saurya(Kappa) ke saath uss jagah jaha wo arm deal honi thi jisme uss plane blast wale terrorist group ke bande aane wale the.

Dono ne hi apne bhes badal rakhe the.

Kappa- Ye to bahut badi jagah hai itne hi tech guns ye to kamaal hai.

Paridhi- Hame bas uss terrorist group ke bando ko pakadna hai samjhe aur koi nahi.

Kappa(Mohini se M2M) - Yaha bahut khana hai.

Mohini- Tum ruko wahi main abhi aati hu.

Paridhi waha unn logo ko dhund rahi thi. Unko pahchanne ka ek aasan tarika tha uss group ke logo ke gardan ke pichhe ek tatoo bana hua hita hai. Paridhi hnko dundhti rahi par ek ghanta intezar ke basd bhi wo nahi aaye par ek call aaya Mohini ka usko.

Paridhi- Hello

Mohini- Haa sun wo kuch bande mille hai mujhe sayad ye wahi hai jinko tum dhoond rahi ho.

Paridhi- Kya par ruko... unke gardan ke piche dekho.

Mohini- Haa tatoo bhi hai issi liye to uthaya hai ye yahi interrogation room mein bandhe hue hai.

Paridhi- Main aa rahi hu.

Call cut.

Paridhi(Kappa se)- chalo kaam ho gaya hai.

Kappa bhi uske saath chal diya dono car mein baithe aur chale gaye wahi unke jaane ke baad. Uss jagah Mohini aayi thi yahi koi 20 log honge.

Mohini- Itna saara khoon chalo kuch din ab binna khoon piye bhi nikal jaayega abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi usko kuch mehsus hua aur wo unko chod hawa ho gayi aur pahuch gayi kawach ke pass waha Daanav raj khada tha apne logo aur kuch dragons ke sath wo kawach ko hi dekh raha tha.

Tabhi waha Alex bhi aa jata hai.

Alex- Ye to daanav lok ka raja hai.

Mohini- Haa aur dekho ye to dragons bhi le aaya hai hum kya kare.

Alex - kuch nahi yee saare kuch nahi kar paayenge .

Mohini- Hmm jaanti hu par ye dragons inke saath matlab koyi hai jo ab uske dragons ka seena pati van chuka hai.

Alex- Hmm sayad tum bhi ussi ke baare mein soch rahi ho.

Mohini- Haa B.dragon wahi hoga.

Alex- Ha par abhi usme waqt hai.

Daanav raj laga hua tha uss kawach ko todne mein naa jaane kitni koshis ki usne par sab bekar haar maan kar wo waha se chala gaya aur uske jaane ke baad Alex aur Mohini bhi.

Mohini ab Base chali gayi uska maan nahi raha ab kuch karne kaa.

Waha pahuchi to dekha paridhi lagi padi hai dono ke upar par wo terrorists bhi gajab ke the kuch bhi nahi bol rahe the.

Paridhi ne bahut torcher kiya tha unko par koi jawab nahi milla usko abhi tak jis wajah se usko gussa aaya aur usne dono ko shock dena suru kar diya jisse dono ki hi maut ho gayi.

Paridhi ko jab iska ahsas hua ki uski eklauti lead ab nahi rahi to usko bahut burra laga wo to accha hua Mohini thi waha par warna Paridhi khud ko hi kuch karne wali thi.
Mohini- Arre fir se koi lead mil jaayega is baar main tere saath rahungi samjhi.

Paridhi ne haa kar di Mohini ko

Nice post

Vickey1211 · Jun 4, 2020

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UPDATE- 59

Ab Tak

Bansoa mein Saurya behosh ho chuka tha uski energy khatam hone ke kaaran aur wahi Earth par Alex aur Varsha ka wo kiss jiske baad Varsha nashe ke chalte behosh ho gayi aur Alex usko dekhte hue soo gaya.

Aage.

Pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha saurya ek bister par leta hai aur uske thik bagal mein Margret thi jo uss bister par sar rakhe soo rahi thi sayad baithe baithe neend aa gayi ho.

Jab saurya(meri) neend khuli to mein aas pass dekhne laga aur ussi mein mere se ek glass gir gaya jisse Margret ki neend khul gayi.

Margret- Kya hua awaj...tumhe hosh aa gaya.

Main- Haa aur tum ye aise kaise soo rahi ho.

Chaaataak chaaataaak

Main- Maar kyun rahi ho yaar maine kya kiya.

Margret- Mujhe waha se bjaga kyun diya tha tumne.

Main- Waha tumhe khatra tha aur tumhe pata nahi wo gudiya bhi aa gayi thi udher mujhe dono se ladna pada.

Chaaaataaak chhaaataaak

Main- Dekho ab jyada ho rah....

Margret-(Gusse mein) Jyada ho raha hai ke bachhe agar fir aisa kuch kiya na to taange tod kar haath mein de dungi chalo utho ab training par bhi jaana hai.

Main- Haaa jaata hu tum bahar jao mujhe change karna hai.

Margret- Kyun maine kon se tumhare saath pakde hai jo mere yaha rahte tum change nahi kar sakte. Main nahi jaa rahi bahar.

Main- Arre par main tumhare saamne kaise.

Margret- kya matlab kaise chalo ready ho jao jaldi.

Main- Yaar tum bahar jao.

Margret- Haa jaa rahi hu naa waise itna main bhi nahi sarmati tumhare samne change karne mein jitna tum sharma rahe ho.

Main- Kya kaha tumne abhi.

Margret- Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Margret bahar chali gayi wahiain bhi ready hua aue chal pada training ke liye.

Dusri oor chalte hai B.Dragon ke pass jisko kaafi chootein aayi thi.

B.dragon(Khud se)- Ye kon aa gaya jisko portal kholna aata hai. Kya usko meri kamjori ka bhi pata hoga.

Wo abhi yahi sab soch raha tha ke waha Maarcuss ki awaj aati hai.

Maarcuss- Kaisa raha pahla din kitni barbaadi ki tumne.

B.dragon kuch bol hi nahi paa raha tha kya kahta ke ek elf aaya aur uski halat kharab kar di aur jhoot wo bol nahi sakta tha.

Darte hue usne puri kahani sunna di Maarcuss ko.

Maarcuss- Fir se elf ye kon sa elf hai jo baar baar mujhse takra raha hai aur ye portal ki takat ksha se aa gayi usme. Kuch to galat hai uske baare mein par kya. Tum kuch din bas uspe nazar rakho mujhe uske baare mein sab kuch jaana hai aur ye aakhri mauka hai tumhare liye.

B.Dragon- Ji maalik.

Maarcuss ki awaj aani band ho gayi.

Yaha se dur Pritvi par bhi koi jaag gayi thi. Hamari pyaari Varsha. Kal ke nashe ke wajah se ab udka sar dard kar raha tha wo bhi bahut jyada usko abhi kuch bhi yaad nahi tha kal kya kiya tha usne. Bagal mein Alex so raha tha. Varsha ne usko jagaya aur bola apne sar dard ke baare mein.

Alex ne nimbu paani jaadu se uske liye aur apne liye bhi mangaya aur dono pinne lage par Alex ke hoothon par jo Varsha ne kaata tha uspe wo nimbu pasni lagte hi Alex ko thodi jalan hui.

Varsha- Kya hua...ye nishan ye kaise hua.

Alex- Tumhe nahi pata kaise hua.

Varsha- Nahi main kais....

Varsha ek dum se chup ho gayi usko thoda thoda yaad aaaya ke usne Alex ko kiss koya tha.

Alex- Tumhe pata nahi ye kya hai .

Varsha- nahi mujhe pata nahi.
Varsha itna bol jaane ke liye uthti hai to Alex uska haath pakad leta hai.
Varsha- Choodo mera haath mujhe jaana hai.

Alex- Varsha meri baat sunno naa main naa wo tumse shadi...

Varsha-nahi bilkul nahi aisa sochna bhi mat.

Alex- Kya par kal to tumne...

Varsha- Maine kuch nahi kiya tha sab tumne kiya pahle mujhe wo pilaya uske baad ye sab.

Alex- Maine kaha tha tumhe pinne ko wo to tum khud aayi thi naa par usko chodo aur ye batao tum mujhse pyaar karti ho yaa nahi dekho sach sach batana.

Varsha kuch boli nahi vas apna sar nichhe kiye khadi rahi.

Alex- Varsha kuch to bolo yaar plz.

Varsha-(Dhire se) Haa par.

Alex(Khush hota hua) - Haa tumne haa kaha naa .

Varsha- Par mainshadi nahi karungi tumse.

Alex- Par kyun hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai fir kyun nahi kar sakti shaadi.

Varsha- Meri kuch sharte hai agar wo puri hui tab hi shadi hogi.

Alex- Arree tum bol kar to dekho main kuch bhi kar dunga batao kya shart hai.

Varsha- Mujhe thoda waqt do main tumhe baad mein batati hu.

Varsha itna bol waha se nikal li aur pahuch gayi sheedha Kiran ke pass aur usko purri katha sunna daaali.

Kiran- Matlab tunne pura plan chopat kar diya .

Varsha- Didi jaan kar nahi kiya naa wo to uss chij ke pinne ke baad bas ho gaya.

Kiran- Ye sab uss Kappa aur Pradeep ka kiya dhara hai.

Itne mein Mohini bhi pahuch gayi waha aur usko bhi sab kuch bataya dono ne.

Mohini sharton ke baare mein sun badi khush hui.

Mohini- Chalo to pahli shart to Saurya ko yaha laane ki hogi. Baaki ke aap dono tai kar lo.

Kiran- Par Mohini kya ye sahi hoga matlab wo waha training ke liye gaya hai.

Mohini- Nahi bhabhi mujhe usse milna hai to milna hai ek to mujhe jaane nahi deta ye Alex ka bachha upar se aap bhi. Pata hai wo Kappa aur Pradeep bhai ko le gaya tha ek baar waha par mujhe nahi le gaya.

Varsha- Arre didi aap chinta naa karo jab tak wo nahi aate tab tak main shadi hi nahi karungi chalo ab koi dusri shart batao.

Aise hi ye tinno baithe sapne dekhte rahe.

Wahi Paridhi subah hi taiyaar ho nikal padi thi Saurya(Kappa) ke saath uss jagah jaha wo arm deal honi thi jisme uss plane blast wale terrorist group ke bande aane wale the.

Dono ne hi apne bhes badal rakhe the.

Kappa- Ye to bahut badi jagah hai itne hi tech guns ye to kamaal hai.

Paridhi- Hame bas uss terrorist group ke bando ko pakadna hai samjhe aur koi nahi.

Kappa(Mohini se M2M) - Yaha bahut khana hai.

Mohini- Tum ruko wahi main abhi aati hu.

Paridhi waha unn logo ko dhund rahi thi. Unko pahchanne ka ek aasan tarika tha uss group ke logo ke gardan ke pichhe ek tatoo bana hua hita hai. Paridhi hnko dundhti rahi par ek ghanta intezar ke basd bhi wo nahi aaye par ek call aaya Mohini ka usko.

Paridhi- Hello

Mohini- Haa sun wo kuch bande mille hai mujhe sayad ye wahi hai jinko tum dhoond rahi ho.

Paridhi- Kya par ruko... unke gardan ke piche dekho.

Mohini- Haa tatoo bhi hai issi liye to uthaya hai ye yahi interrogation room mein bandhe hue hai.

Paridhi- Main aa rahi hu.

Call cut.

Paridhi(Kappa se)- chalo kaam ho gaya hai.

Kappa bhi uske saath chal diya dono car mein baithe aur chale gaye wahi unke jaane ke baad. Uss jagah Mohini aayi thi yahi koi 20 log honge.

Mohini- Itna saara khoon chalo kuch din ab binna khoon piye bhi nikal jaayega abhi wo kuch karti usse pahle hi usko kuch mehsus hua aur wo unko chod hawa ho gayi aur pahuch gayi kawach ke pass waha Daanav raj khada tha apne logo aur kuch dragons ke sath wo kawach ko hi dekh raha tha.

Tabhi waha Alex bhi aa jata hai.

Alex- Ye to daanav lok ka raja hai.

Mohini- Haa aur dekho ye to dragons bhi le aaya hai hum kya kare.

Alex - kuch nahi yee saare kuch nahi kar paayenge .

Mohini- Hmm jaanti hu par ye dragons inke saath matlab koyi hai jo ab uske dragons ka seena pati van chuka hai.

Alex- Hmm sayad tum bhi ussi ke baare mein soch rahi ho.

Mohini- Haa B.dragon wahi hoga.

Alex- Ha par abhi usme waqt hai.

Daanav raj laga hua tha uss kawach ko todne mein naa jaane kitni koshis ki usne par sab bekar haar maan kar wo waha se chala gaya aur uske jaane ke baad Alex aur Mohini bhi.

Mohini ab Base chali gayi uska maan nahi raha ab kuch karne kaa.

Waha pahuchi to dekha paridhi lagi padi hai dono ke upar par wo terrorists bhi gajab ke the kuch bhi nahi bol rahe the.

Paridhi ne bahut torcher kiya tha unko par koi jawab nahi milla usko abhi tak jis wajah se usko gussa aaya aur usne dono ko shock dena suru kar diya jisse dono ki hi maut ho gayi.

Paridhi ko jab iska ahsas hua ki uski eklauti lead ab nahi rahi to usko bahut burra laga wo to accha hua Mohini thi waha par warna Paridhi khud ko hi kuch karne wali thi.
Mohini- Arre fir se koi lead mil jaayega is baar main tere saath rahungi samjhi.

Paridhi ne haa kar di Mohini ko

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