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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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UPDATE - 60

Aab tak

Maarcuss ne B.dragon ko Uss elf(Saurya) ke baare m sab pata karne bola aur ye uske liye aakhri mauka tha wahi dusri oor Varsha shart soch rahi thi aur Paridhi ki lead maar chuki thi. Mohini ne usko sambhala aur aage se mil kar kaam karne ko bola.

Aage

Chaliye hum pahle Alex ke pass chalte hai jo iss waqt Varsha ka intezar kar raha tha.

Alex-(Khud s) pata nahi kya shart hogi iski. Hmm sayad... naa wo to dragon hai wo kyun bhala to phir.

Itne mein Varsha aa jaati hai aur Alex ko khud se baatein karte dekhne lagti hai.

Varsha - Alex Alex kya badbada rahe ho

Alex- Kuch nahi kuch bhi to nahi.
Achha hua tum aaa gayi chalo ab batao apni sharton ke baare mein.

Varsha- Thik hai par usse pahle bata deti hu har shart puri honi chahiye nahi to no shadi samjhe.

Alex- Haa thik hai bolo.

Varsha- Shart no. 1 Main yaha hi rahungi shadi k baad Kiran didi aur Mohini didi ke saath.

Alex- Manjoor hai aage bolo.

Varsha- Shart no. 2 Main bhi tumhari madad karungi har uss chiz mein jo tum kar rahe ho.

Alex- Isme khatra hoga tumhe jo main nahi chahta.

Varsha- To thik hai bhul jao shadi.

Alex- Nahi mujhe manzor hai par meri bhi ek shart hai.

Varsha- (kuch soch kr) Batao kya shart hai.

Alex- Ispe hum baad mein charcha kkarenge chalo apni aage ki shart batao.

Alex- Wo main shadi tab hi karungi jab Saurya ji bhi yaha honge Mohini didi ke pass.

Alex- nahi Varsha iska main abhi kuch nahi kah sakta Abhi Saurya ki training chal rahi hai upar se waha aur bhi pareshaniya hai.

Varsha-Par Mohini didi ko unki bahut yaad aati hai ap ek kaam karo Mohini didi ko unke pass le jao.

Alex- Mujhe usse baat karni hogi pahle chalo ab aage ka batao kya shart hai.

Varsha- Aur kya ho gaya bas ab aur nahi hai .

Alex(Aakh dikhate)- Sach mein naa soch lo fir mauka nahi milega.

Varsha-(Hichkichati hui) wo ek aur shart sochi to thi maine par...

Alex- Par kya jaldi batao.

Varsha- Nahi naa mujhe sharm aati hai main naa shadi ke baad bataungi.

Alex(Haste hue)- Kyun shadi ke baad sharm nahi aayegi kya.

Varsha kuch boli nahi bas uthi aur Alex ke pass gayi fir uske hoothon ko chum kar boli

Varsha- Mujhe ye chahiye roj jab main uthu.

Alex- Arre bas itti si baat main to har waqt kar sakta hu ye.

Varsha- Chalo ab jao aur Saurya ji se baat karo aur kosis karna ki wo yaha aa jaaye.

Alex - Thik hai.

Alex waha se nikal jaata hai.


Chaliye hum chalte hai Daanav raj ke saath Maarcuss ke paas.

Maarcuss ko daanav raaj bata raha tha ke usne sab kuch kar ke dekha par koi fayda nahi hua wo kawach bahut majboot hai.

Maarcuss- Ek dragon ke liye itna majboot kawach kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Daanav raj tum jao agar jarurat padi to bulla lunga.

Daanavraj waha se chala gaya wahi Maarcuss sochne lag gaya ke kaise pata lagaye uss kawach ke ander hai kya ek baar usko Saurya ka khayal bhi aaya fir yaad aya ki usko to Shaifali ne khud maar diya tha. Issi tarah bahut saare vichar liye to baitha raha.

Wahi Bansoa mein ek alag hi kaand hone wala tha. Margret ne kuch sapne sanjo liye the apne dil mein aur wo aaj unn sapno ko batane wali thi.

Margret full taiyar ho nikal gayi apne room se aur chal padi Saurya ke room ki oor.

Waqt shaam ka tha Main apna saara kaam khatam kar apne room mein abhi aaya hi tha. Maine ek towel uthayi aur chal diya bathroom ki oor nahane ko. Abhi maine kapde utar kar nal chalu hi kiya tha ke koi mere room ke ander aa gaya. Maine room lock nahi kiya tha aadat hi nahi karne ki.

Main- Kon hai?

Margret- Main hu ye tum kaha se bol rahe ho.

Main- Margret tum koi kaam tha kya.

Margret-(Muh banate) kyun binna kaam nahi aa sakti yaha tumse milne.


Main- Haa aa sakti ho par aaj tak to aayi nahi issiliye puch liya bas.

Tabhi room mein Henry aa gaya.

Henry(Margret ko dekh) - Waah tum to badi sunder dikh rahi ho aaj bhi kahi jaana hai kya tum dono ko.

Main(Ander se)- Nahi to hame kahi nahi jaana.

Henry- Arre haa wo Sarya wo Alex aaya hai kuch pareshan lag raha hai aur tumhe jaldi se bulla raha hai.


Main- Pareshan lag raha hai ? Margret tum jao uske paas pata karo kya pareshani hai usko.

Margret -Thik hai (Maan mein) iss Alex ko bhi abhi hi aana tha.

Margret, Henry ke saath chali jaati hai Alex ke paas battle house mein.

Thodi der baad main bhi pahucha waha.

Alex ko saare badhayian de rahe the Margret ki sakal utri hui thi.

Main- Kya hua tum sab aise...

Alex-Wo Varsha maan gayi hai shadi ko.

Maine Alex ko gale lagate hue badhayi di.

Alex- Ek aur baat bhi karni thi tumse.

Main- Haa bolo kya baat hai.

Alex- wo Mohini ko tumhari yaad aa rahi hai wo chahti hai ke tum hamari shadi mein aao.

Main- Hmm thik hai main sochta hu iske baare mein waise mujhe bhi baat karni hai kuch.

Alex- Haa bolo naa kya baat hai.

Main - Yaha par black dragon hai.

Alex- kya to wo aazad ho gaya wo yaha pakka.....

Headmaster- Arre usko to saurya ne kal bahut jakhmi kar diya tha.

Headmaster ne Alex ko ishare se kuch kaha jisse usne ek baar Margret ki oor dekha aur samajh gaya.

Alex- Kya tumne usko ghayal kar diya par kaise.

Main- Portal wale magic se.

Maine Alex ko puri kahani shunayi ke kis tarah se maine usko aur uss gudiya dono ko shambhala aur behosh ho gaya.

Alex- To fir tum yaha kaise aaye.

Main- Arre meri dost Margret thi naa mujhe bachane ko kyun Margret.

Margret-(dhire se) haa. Main aati hu mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Itna bol Margret waha se jaane lagi to pata nahi Rita ko kya hua wo bhi uske pichhe chali gayi.

Main - Inko kya hua.

Henry- Arre kuch nahi koi kaam hoga.

Hum saare baatein karte rahe.

(Margret ke respect mein)

Main waha se chali aayi ab raha nahi jaa raha tha mujhse waha par.

Main apne room mein aa gayi jo ke Battle ground mein hi maine chunna tha. Maine gate lock kiya aur bas roone lagi .

Main(Khud se)- Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha main karu to karu kya. Kaha main aaj apne dil ki baat batane jaa rahi thi Saurya.....

Rita - Margret darwaja kholo mujhe ander aane do. Margret kholo darwaja.

Main(Normal awaj mein)- Rita mujhe nind aa rahi hai kal baat karte hai naa.

Rita- Main jaanti hu tumhare ander kya chal raha hai aur yakkin maano tumhe baat karke accha lagega.

Main- Kya kuch bhi bol rahi ho tum jao yaha se.

Rita- Agar tumne kabhi bhi mujhe kuch maana ho apna to plz darwaja kholo Margret. Main tumhari madad kar sakti hu.

Maine apna chahra saaf kiya aur darwaja khola.

Main- Kya tum bhi kuch bhi bole jaa rahi....

Rita- Chup bilkul chup ho jao aur meri baaton ka jawab do bas.

Main chup ho gayi.

Rita- Tumhe Saurya pasand hai.

Main bilkul chup kuch naa boli.


Rita- Tumhe pata nahi tha uski shadi ho chuki hai.

Main- Nahi pata tha mujhe issi liye to ussko pasand karne lagi par sab khatam ho gaya

Rita- Chup ho jao accha tumne iske baare mein usko bataya kabhi.

Main- Directly nahi bol paayi par usko hints deti thi.

Rita-Hmm to tumhe bhi kabhi aisa laga ki wo...

Main- Nahi aisa kabhi kuch mehsus nahi hua.

Rita- To ye one sided tha achha kahi ye bas attraction to nahi tha na.

Main- Pata nahi attraction laga to nagi tha mujhe.

Rita- kya pasand hai tumhe Saurya mein.

Main- hmm uski ...haa uske baat karne ka... nahi uske.... pata nahi kya pasand hai mujhe.

Rita- To tu karna kya chahti thi wo pasand bhi hai tujhe yaa nahi.

Main- Arre hai na pasand wo mujhe yaa sayad nahi.

Rita- Ek kaam kar ek kaagaj le uspe har wo baat likh jo tujhe uske baare mein aachi lagti hai.

Maine ek kaagaj liya aur uske baare mein jo bhi accha lagta wo sab likhne lagi.

3 line bas 3 line hi likh payi main.

Rita ne jab ye dekha to hasne lagi.

Main- Oo jyada haaso mat samjhi itna hi hai to tum Henry ke baare mein likho.

Rita- Meri jaan isme naa bada waqt lag jaayega.

Main- Lagne do main bhi to dekhun.

Rita- Thik hai.

Rita ne ek kaagaj uthayi aur likhna shuru kar diya.

Main usko dekh rahi thi uske facial expressions har ek word par change ho rahe the har ek word pe.

Wo ek ke baad ek kaagaj leti rahi.

Main- Arre kitna likhogi tum.

Rita - Meri jaan jiske baare mein tumne likhne ko kaha hai naa uske baare mein likhne ko mere liye kaagaz khatam ho jaane hai.

Main- Samajh gayi accha ab ye batao mujhe ye Saurya ko dekh aisa kyun lag raha tha.

Rita - Dekho jaha tak mujhe lagta hai tum dono bas aache dost ho aur kuch nahi haa ye bhi hai dono ek dusre ke saath jyada time bitate ho iss karan bhi ho sakta hai. Hmm tumne kabhi kisi dusre ladke ke saath itna time bitaya hai jitna Saurya ke saath.

Main-(Sochte hue) Nahi.

Rita- Haa to ye pakka attaction hi hai. Chalo ab chodo ye sab aur bahar chalte hai.

Main- Hmm chalo.

Main aur Rita jab bahar gaye to waha par mahol hi badla hua tha ek nayi ladki aayi hui thi waha Varsha ke saath aur Saurya ko daante jaaa rahi thi.

Main(Rita se) - ye kaun hai aur isko kyun daant rahi hai.

Rita- pata nahi kaun hai chalo dekhte hai.

Ladki- Tumko to yaad bhi nahi aati naa meri kitna waqt beet gaya hai. Ek baar bhi bulaya tumne mujhe yaha.

Saurya- Par Mohini main to yaha training ke liye aaya tha na.

Mohini- Haa aaye the to kya bhul jaoge mujhe Alex ko bol mujhe yaha bulwa nahi sakte the aur ye Alex isko jab bhi yaha aane ko bolti to kuch naa kuch bahana bana deta.

Main- (Alex se) Ye kya Mohini hai Saurya ki patni.

Mohini- Haa main wahi hu par ye mujhe maante nahi ....

Saurya- Arre aisa kyun bol rahi ho yaar tum.

(Hero ke respect mein).

Mohini- Agar aisa nahi hai to tum aane ko taiyaar kyun nahi ho.

Main- Yaha bahut se kaam hai ek gudiya hai aur ab to wo Black dragon bhi upar se meri training bhi.

Varsha- Training to waha bhi ho sakti hai na.

Alex- Varsha kya kuch bhi....

Mohini(Alex ko aankh dikha) - Haa training to waha bhi ho sakti hai aur hame bhi to training chahiye hi naa.


Main- Par yaha ki pareshaniyon ka kya hoga.

Mohini- Kya pareshani bol rahe ho haa wo gudiya naa usko main dekh leti hu aur rahi uss dragon ki baat to....

Varsha- Usko main dekh lungi.

Alex- Varsha kya kuch bhi bole jaa rahi ho wo bahut shaktishaali hai..

Varsha- To main kya kamjoor hu. Tum dekho bas uss Dragon komaar maar kar uski chatni naa bana di to kahna.

Mohini- Haa ab bolo aur koi bahana hai.

Main- Training ke liye teachers.

Margret- Arre hum hai na hum shikha denge.

Headmaster- Haa Margret sahi bol rahi hai tumhare saath ye sab bhi jaayenge.

Main- Par.

Headmaster ne ishare se mujhe baad mein batane ko kaha.

Main- Thik hai par main tab tak nahi jaunga jab tak iss black dragon aur gudiya kaa kaam naa ho jaye.

Mohini- Thik hai chalo aaj raat hi unka kaam kar dete hai.

Main- Kya karne wali ho tum.

Mohini- Jaal bichaungi aur kya. Bas tum saath dena mera.

Main- Thik hai.

Mohini- Alex , Varsha (Margret aur Rita ki oor ishara kar) Tum dono chalo mere saath.

Hernry- par tum kya karogi.

Mohini- Jyada kuch nahi bas dekhte jao.

Mohini fir sabhi ko waha se le gayi.

Main- Headmaster ye kya tha aap taiyaar kyun ho gaye.

H.master- Margret ko yaha se dur karne ke liye usko apne mukkadar tak pahuchane ke liye.

Main- Mukkadar ab ye kya hai.

H.master- Usko Earth par jaana hi padega issiliye abhi hi bhej raha hu.

Main- Kya kahna chahte ho aap.

H.Master ne apni chadi nikali aur apna dusra haath aage kiya fir chadi ghumayi. Ek chamakta hua gola unke haathon mein aa gaya.

Henry- Bhavishya batane wala gola.

Main- Kya ?

H.master- Ye mere purwajon ne hamare liye banaya tha isse hum apne jivan kaa maksad jaan sakte hai. Margret ke jivan ka maksad Pritvi par jaana hai pata nahi kyun. To maine socha ki usko bhej hi deta hu.

Main- Uska maksad hai Pritvi par jaana ?? Kuch palle nahi pada.

Abhi main kuch bolta usse pahle Margret aayi waha.

Margret(mujhse)- Wo Mohini ji wo raakh maang rahi hai.

Main- Uska kya karegi wo.

Margret ne mujhe ek mukka maara.

Main- Aah maara kyun main to bas puch raha tha naa.

Margret(Hasti hui)- Wo Mohini ji ne bola tha agar raakh dene se pahle wo koi baat puche to ek mukka maar dena.

Maine usko raakh de di aur wo chali gayi.

Headmaster- Tumhe waise bhi jaaana hi hai yaha se.

Main- Par wo kaidkhana waha ka kya aur fir aap.

H.master- Main apni raksha kar sakta hu aur rahi baat kaidkhane mein band logo ki to unko to aazad hona hi hai tabhi to wo marenge.

Main- Kya matlab.

Itne mein fir se Margret aayi.

Margret- Wo black sword aur kappa ki talwar.

Maine binna kuch puche dono hi usko de diya.

Main- Iske alawa mere pass aur kuch nahi hai.

Margret ne dono talwaron ko hawa me udate hue le jaane lagi.

Headmaster- Ye Margret hai naa ussi ke haathon un sabki maut honi hai.

Main- Kya bol rahe ho.

H.master- Haa sach bol raha hu unn charon ke chalte hi mera beta meri bahu maare gaye wo charon to Margret ko bhi maarne wale the par Mere bete aur bahu ne Margret ke chaaro oor ek kawach bana diya tha jisse margret ko kuch nahi hua ulta unn charo mi hi haalat kharab ho gayi tabhi hamne unhe kaid kar liya.

Main- Par kya Margret maar paayegi un charo ko.

H.master- Haa jaroor maaregi tum bas dekhte rahna.

Main kuch der aur wahi baatein karta raha H.master aur Henry ke saath.

Dair raat Mohini ne mujhe bulaya.
Main jab pahucha uske pass to hairaan ho gaya uske paas wo gudiya thi. Maine baakiyon ko dekha to Varsha kuch ghayal nazar aa rahi thi.

Main- Varsha kya hua ye tum thik to ho. Mohini ye gudiya kaha milli tumhe.

Varsha- Saurya ji main thik hu bas chooti si kharooch aayi hai.

Alex- Chup rahogi tum chooti si karooch aayi hai.

Main -Alex isko thik kyun nahi karte.

Alex- Uske liye suraj ki roshni chahiye jo nahi hai abhi.

Main- Ye batao ye sab hua kaise aur ye gudiya yaha.

Mohini- Bola tha naa jaal bhichaungi. Ussi se hua ye sab par hamne uss black dragon ko aankne mein thodi si galti kar di.

Varsha- Arre Mohini didi aisa kuch nahi tha dekha nahi kaise dar kar bhag gaya wo.

Alex ne varsha ko aankh dikhayi.

Varsha- Thik hai kuch nahi bolti.

Mohini- Saurya ab to sab set ho gaya na ab chalen Earth par.

Alex- Ab to chalna hi hoga Saurya ye planet khali karni hogi sabhi ko jaldi yaha se nikalna hoga.

Main- kya par kyun.

Alex- B.Dragon ne mujhe pahchan liya hai aur hum usko pakad bhi nahi paaye wo jaroor Maarcuss ko mere baare mein baata dega aur fir wo yaha khud aa jayega wo bhi apni seena ke saath.

Margret- Par Alex wo thodi naa University mein aa payega Fountain of worriors ke hote hue.

Pata nahi headmaster kaha se aa gaye waha par.

Headmaster- Margret waqt aa chuka hai beta iss grah ko chodne ka. Jaha tak mujhe lagta hai wo B.dragon subah se pahle to Maarcuss ke pass pahuchne se raha aur fir Maarcuss ko yaha aate aate dopahar ho jaana hai to hame abhi se sabko nikalna hoga. (Alex se) Fountain se saara paani nikal lo usko apne ander bulao.

Alex- Kya aisa ho sakta hai.

H.master- Haa ho sakta hai tum agni mani daarak ho wo gulam hai tumhare.

N.mom- Meri bacchi ko kaise le jayenge isko to koi haath bhi nahi laga sakta.

H.master- Varsha le jaayegi usko.

Alex- Par Varsha kaise..... kya Varsha..

H.master - Haa bhi aur nahi bhi wo dono judde to hai par abhi puri tarah se nahi.

Alex- To hamari sha...

H.master- Arre usme koi dikkat nahi hai.

Headmaster ne fir sabko sabke kaam bata diye aur khud bhahar jaane lage.

Main- Headmaster aap kaha jaa rahe ho.

Headmaster- Spirits ke pass unko bhi to nikalna hai yaha se.

Headmaster chale gaye wahi hum saare lag gaye apne apne kaamo par.

Henry aur Rita ko saare professors ko batana tha ye sab wahi Mohini aur N.mom sabhi students ko batane gaye the.

Main aur Alex Bansovia mein gaye waha jitne log bache the unko jaane ko bolne. Jyada log the the waha maine kuch ships ka intezam kiya aur wo saare nikal gaye jaha bhi unko jaana tha.

Inn sab ke baad hum saare fir ikkatha hue battle ground mein. Iss waqt Sangeeta madam bhi thi yaha aur sabko bas dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Main- Ab aage kya karna hai.

H.master- Seena ke logo ke liye wo Earth moon par base baana diya hai maine aur wo bas nikalne wale hai Main bhi unhi ke saath jaunga.
Baaki tum saare Earth par rahoge Sangeeta tum bhi.

Main- Moon par lekin waha koi khat....

Headmaster- Maine base ko uski satah se bahut nicche banaya hai jiska pata lagana muskil hai kisi ke liye bhi. Ab waqt jaaya mat karo dekho subah ke 9 baje hai hame nikalne mein bhi waqt lagega.

Sabhi taiyaar ho gaye. Tabhi Margret boli.

Margret- Dadu wo library ki kitaben unka kya unme...

Headmaster ne usko ek choti si bag de di.

Headmaster- Saari hai isme pata tha mujhe iski jarurat padegi baad mein. Chalo saare ready ho jao ab.

Sabhi ready ho gaye.

Headmaster- Saurya sab taiyaar hai.

Main- Haa sab taiyar hai.

Headmaster- Haa to portal kholo Earth ke liye tabhi to tum log jaoge.

Main- Haa abhi kholta hu.

Maine portal kholi aur hum saare uske ander chale gaye.
Wahi Headmaster ne apne aur seena ke liye koi dusra prabandh kiya tha.

Earth par hum saare ek khaali maidan mein pahuch gaye.

Margret- Hum rahenge kaha.

Alex- Ruko abhi batata hu.

Alex(M2M Pradeep se) - Kisi bade jagah ka bandobast karo 6-7 logo ke liye.

Abhi yaha raat hui thi.

Pradeep- Kya hua iski jaroorat kyun pad gayi.

Alex- Tu kar naa yaar baad mein batata hu.

Pradeep ne usko ek jagah ke baare mein bataya aur Alex sabko waha le gaya.

Aaj ke liye itna hi

Agle update mein kaise Gudiya pakdi gayi. B.dragon ke saath kya hua. Kya hoga jab Maarcuss ko Alex ka pata chalega.
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 

Chinturocky

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Maza aa gaya,
Jab baat sabse shaktishali ki ho to wo beewi hi hoti hai.??
Jis Gudiya aur black dragon ko lekar itana pareshan the use turant nipta diya.
 

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