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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go


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Nice update bro
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Excellent update
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Shaam tak deta bhai plz wait
 

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Sir bura nhi manan but ab tak story padh kar lag raha h Hero chutiya h or usko kuch power galti se mil gayi h. Concept bhut acha h but kuch confusion h or hero chutiya jaisa react karta h uske under kuch alag drama h bhar kuch sab kahte h wo Evil ko marega but uske attitude or uske haaw baaw se wo aisa kuch karta nhi dikta bs har baar madad ke umid mai rahta h or ek bar usne kuch apne dum pe kiya or behosh ho gaya. Please sir bura nhi manan jo laga wo bol di.
 

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Sir bura nhi manan but ab tak story padh kar lag raha h Hero chutiya h or usko kuch power galti se mil gayi h. Concept bhut acha h but kuch confusion h or hero chutiya jaisa react karta h uske under kuch alag drama h bhar kuch sab kahte h wo Evil ko marega but uske attitude or uske haaw baaw se wo aisa kuch karta nhi dikta bs har baar madad ke umid mai rahta h or ek bar usne kuch apne dum pe kiya or behosh ho gaya. Please sir bura nhi manan jo laga wo bol di.
Kaahe ka bura yaar reality hai ye salla hero hai hi aisa dekhte hai kab tak iss attitude se kaaam chalata hai wo. Saayad usko naa koi jhatka chahiye koi bada jhatka jisse uske iss attitude ko badla jaa sake aur ye bas hone hi walla hai.

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