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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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UPDATE- 67

Ab tak

Shilpa ko zaher diya gaya tha. Wo to achha hua Saifali ko pata chal gaya aur usne Shilpa ko bacha liya.
Shilpa ne usko sab bataya ki usne bas dawa li thi jo uske doctor ne diya tha usko aur fir ye sab ho gaya.

Aage

Next morning

Saurya bed par leta tha uske saath Mohini soo rahi thi. Waqt yahi koi
3 - 4 baj rahe honge subah ke ki tabhi Saurya ko aisa laga ki koi usko bulla raha hai wo utha apne charo taraf dekha ek baar par koi dikha nahi usko. Wo fresh hone chala gaya waha se nikla to dekha Mohini waha nahi hai. Wo nichhe chala gaya jaha usko practice karna hota tha waha par hi sabhi the.

Wo bhi chala gaya waha practice karne ko ki tabhi tuska phone bajja.

Call Paridhi ka tha.

Main(Saurya)- Haa Paridhi bolo.

Paridhi(Gusse mein)- Tum mujhe lene kab aa rahe ho yaad nahi meri bhi practice haij aaj se.

Main- Arre ha wo main bhul gaya tha par tum Kiran Ma'm ke saath aa jaati naa.

Paridhi- Arre wo jab mein room se bahar nikli unke paas jane ke liye tab tak o nikal chuki thi upar se tumne address bhi nahi bataya tha naa to phone karna pada.

Main- Thik hai phone rakho main aata hu.

Paridhi ne phone rakha aur maine ek portal khola thik uske roomm mein aur pahuch gaya uske pass.

Main- Chalo jaldi training shuru ho g....ummmmmmm

Wo mere par kud gayi aur mujhe chummne lagi.

Paridhi- Samrath kyun akela chod kar chale jaate ho aap mujhe kya main ab aapko pasand nahi.

Main-(maan mein) Yaar ye alag kisam ki bimari laga di hai iss Margret ne isko.

Main utha aur usse thoda dur ho gaya kyun ki mujhe pata tha ab kabhi bhi iski yaadast chali jaani hai.

Main- Nahi Paridhi aisi baat nahi hai.

Paridhi- Kaun si baat aur ye tumhare chahre par lipstick kya kar rahi hai.

Main- (Maan mein) Accha hua sahi waqt par alag ho gaya warna lene ke denne ho jaate.

Main- Arre ye kuch nahi hai tum chalo jaldi waha training shuru ho chuki hai.

Paridhi ne ek baarmeri oor ghur kar dekha fir portal jo khulla hua tha uske ander chali gayi. Main bhi uske piche piche chala gaya ander. Jab hum waha pahuche to Henry aur Rita hasse jaa rahe the aur Margret mujhe isharo se sorry bol rahi thi.


Maine pahle Paridhi ko sabhi se introduce karaya. Fir hamari training shuru hui.

Chaliye yaha ka chod kar hum chalte hai Hospital jaha Shilpa soo rahi thi.

Ek ward boy aata hai uske pass aur ek injection taiyaar karne lagta hai. Wo baar baar uss room ke darwaje ki oor bhi dekh raha tha ki koi aa to nahi raha. Injection ready karne ke baad wo injection ko Shilpa ko inject karne ke liye apna haath aage badha hi raha tha ke ek tez jhatka laga usko aur wo udta hua waha se dur jaa gira.

Isse aawaj hui aur Shilpa ki neend khul gayi saath hi kuch aur log bhi uss room mein aa gaye. Sabhi ne dekha ki wo wardboy farsh par girra pada hai aur uske sar se khoon nikal raha hai. Usko uthaya gaya aur bahar le jaa kar marham patti ki jaane lagi wahi Shilpa bas ye sab dekhti rahi.

Thodi der mein waha Saifali aati hai.

Saifali- Chalo ab chalte hai yaha se.

Shilpa- Ma'm wo ek aadmi....

Saifali- Arre patta hai uska sar fat gaya yahi naa sab jaanti hu main ab chalo tum yaha se collage ka bhi time ho raha hai.

Shilpa bhi yaha se jaana chahti thi ab kaun Hospital mein rahna chahega. Saath hi uske pass bahut se sawal bhi the jinka jawab usko dhundna tha.

Shilpa taiyaar hui aur waha se Saifali ke saath bahar nikal gayi.
Saifali usko parking area ke bagal mein ek sunsan illake mein le gayi aur ek portal khola. Usko dekh kar to Shilpa ki aakhen hi bahar aane ko ho gayi usko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye hai kya.

Saifali ne uska haath pakda aur portal ke andar aa gayi aur pahuch gayi apne ghar mein. Shilpa ki to haalat hi kharab ho rakhi thi wo baar baar apni aakhen maal rahi thi.

Saifali- Paani piyogi.

Shilpa ne haa mein apna sar hillaya aur uske haath mein ek glass pani aa gaya. Ye hote hi uske haath se wo paani ka glass choot gaya.

Shilpa- ye ye kya tha main sapna to nahi dekh rahi na.

Saifali ek sofe par baith gayi.

Saifali- Nahi Shilpa ye sach hai.

Shilpa- To to ye sab kya ho raha hai aur kaise ho raha hai.

Saifali- Duniya mein naa kuch logo ke pass superpowers hote hai tum aur main unhi mein se ek hai

Shilpa- Kya?? Kya aap sach bol rahi ho par mere paas...

Saifali- Tumhe jo aawajein sunnayi de rahi thi naa wo logo ke maan ki aawajein thi.

Shilpa- Kya maan ki awajein?? Par mere saath hi kyun.

Saifali- Saayad issliye kyun ki tum hi inko sambhal shakti ho sayad issliye ki tum iss shakti ke kabil ho.

Shilpa- Sach mein.

Saifali- Haa sach mein aur ab inhi shaktiyon ko tumhe kaabu mein karna hoga aur inko iss duniya ki bhalayi ke liye istemal karna hoga.

Shilpa- Haa main aisa hi karungi par mujhe inko kaabu mein karna kaun shikhayega.

Saifali- Shikhane wala khud aayega tumhare pass par tab tak ke liye tumhe dhyaan lagana hoga...tumhe meditation to aati hogi naa.

Shilpa- Haa aati hai Papa bachpan mein Papa ne shikhayi thi mujhe.

Saifali- Bahut acche to ab lag jao issi mein.

Shilpa- thik hai.

Saifali ne Shilpa ko room mein hi meditate karne ko kaha aur khud dusre room mein chali gayi.

Saifali- Dekha Mother Elika kaise handle kiya maine usko.....arre sab yaha ki filmo se sheekha hai maine......Accha uss doctor aur iski Shilpa ki sauteli maa ka kya karna hai.....Saurya ko bolu par wo to....thik hai jaisa aap kaho.

Saifali itna sab bolne ke baad apni aakhen band karti hai aur uske aakhon ke saamne Saurya aa jata hai jo abhi abhi training khatam kar apne room mein aaya tha.

Saifali ne ek portal banaya aur usko apne passs le aayi

Saurya- Arre kya hua batao to sahi.

Saifali- Chalo mere saath.

Saifali usko Shilpa jis room mein baithi dhyaan laga rahi thi waha le gayi.

Saurya-(Khush hote hue) Shilpa yaha. Yeh tumhare pass kaise kya isko sab yaad aa gaya.

Saifali- Nahi kuch yaad nahi aaya hai isko par kuch conditions ban gayi thi jis wajah se isse yaha laana pada.

Saurya- Conditions kaisi conditions.

Saifali ne Saurya ko puri baat batayi zaher Shilpa ka depression sab kuch jisko sun kar Saurya ko gussa bhi aaya aur dhukh bhi hua.

Saurya- Mujhe unn logo kaa pata chahiye jo inn sab mein saamil hai.

Saifali- Hmm bata...kya thik hai....(Saurya se) Sorry main nahi bata shakti ye tumhe khud pata lagana hoga.

Saurya- Ye kya hai jab tumhe pata hai to batta kyun nahi sakti.

Saifali- Jitna mujhe batana tha maine bata diya wo dawa uss doctor ne bheji thi aur dawa mein hi zaher tha isse aage batane se manna kiya Mother Elika ne.

Main- Thik hai aage ka mein pata laga lunga par ab Shilpa ko main apne saath le jauna.

Saifali- Kya kahoge tum usko ye bhi bata do jisse wo tumhare sath chali jaayegi.

Main- Main nahi tum ho naa tum meri mada...

Saifali- Nahi main kuch nahi karungi Mother Elika ne manna kiya hai aur main bhi dekhna chahti hu kitna dimmag hai tumme.

Main- Hmm thik hai to pahle mujhe uss Doctor ke pass pahucha do ye to kar dogi naa kyunki mera magic kaam nahi karta yaha.

Saifali- Arre itna main kar sakti hu.

Saifali ne ek portal khola aur mujhe uske ander jaane ko bolla.

Jab main ander gaya to ek bade se ghar ke pass bahar nikla.

Main(Khud se)- Ye kaha pahucha diya usne doctor ka bol kar.

Saifali- Wo yahi hai aur ye ghar Shilpa ka hai.

Main- Tum mujhe dekh rahi ho kya.

Saifali- Haa dekh rahi hu chalo ab ghar ke ander jaao par binna magic ke.

Main- Kya par kyun.

Saifali- Mother....

Main- Haa samajh gaya jaa raha hu.

Maine dekha saamne 1 guard khada tha. Main gaya uske pass.

G- Kya baat hai kisse milna hai.

Main- Madam se milna tha kuch baat batani hai unko.

G- Madam nahi hai yaha abhi bahar gayi hai baad mein aana.

Main- Arre abhi phone kar ke bullayi hai humko tum batiya lo unse.

G- Phone kiya tha par mujhe to kisi ke aane ki koi khabar nahi milli hai.

Main- Arre bhul gayi hogi wo Doctor babu se baat kare ke chakar mein.

G- Tumhe kaise pata Doctor sahab yaha aaye hue hai.

Main- Lo arre ab unhone bataya tha mujhe naa ki yaha aa kar millo tum phone kar ke puch lo ek baar.

G- Thik hai rukko tum.

Guard ne phone uthaya aur ghar ke ander call kiya call pick nahi hua.

G- Call pick nahi ho raha.

Main- Arre to jaane do naa humko agar nahi gaye to dikkat ho jaayegi tumhari naukari ke liye.

G(Kuch soocte hue)- Yaar sach mein tumko bulaya hai naa unhone majak to nahi kar rahe naa tum.

Main- arre sach mein bullaya hai humko tum ek kaam karo ander jaa kar puch lo naa.

G- Nahi bhai Madam ne manna kiya hai ki jab koi mehmaan aaye to ander naa jaun.

Main- Hmm ab to tum darwaja kholo aur game ander jaane do.

Guard ne ek baar fir se landline try kiya aur iss baar caal pick ho gaya.

G- Madam ek ladka aaya hai bol raha aapne bulaya hai usko.

phone par ........

G(Mujhe ghurte hue) - Thik hai madam

Main(Zor se)- Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aapki madad kar sakta hu.

Ye baat phone ke uss side bhi sunnayi di thi par waha se koi jawab aata usse pahle hi phone rakh diya guard ne.

G- Chal nikal be yaha se bhag bsdk.

Main- Arre ruko to bhai jarra 2 min.

G- Madam ne bolla hai tere ko bhagane ko saale tujh jaise sellsmen se nafrat hai unn...

Tabhi landline ki ghanti baji.

Main- Chalo baat karo unse aur hame ander jaane do.

G- Haa madam ji boliye

phone- .........

G- Thik hai madam bhej dete hai.

Guard ne darwaja khol diya

G- Chalo jao ander madam bulla rahi hai.

Main ander challa gaya.

Saifali- Ye kya tha.

Main- Kya kya tha tumne bola ander jane ke liye to jaa raha hu ander wo bhi bina magic ke.

Saifali- Arre par mujhe laga kuch action waction dikhaoge par tum to....par Mother Elika dekha naa aapne ye to....hmm ye bhi sahi hai.

Main- kya kaha unhone mujhe bhi batao.

Saifali- Bol rahi thi thik thak tha tumhara performance.

Main- Bas thik thak

Saifali- Unko thik thak laga mere hissab se to tumhe maar padni chahiye aisi ghatiya performance ke kaaran. Chalo ab jao aur miil lo uss Doctor se aur pata karo kyun kiya ye sab par binna magic ke.....par Mother Elika....Thik hai

Saifali- Magic use kar sajte iss baar.

Main-thik hai

Main ghar ke ander chala gaya jaha soffe oar ek aurat nighty mein baithi thi uske baal bikhre hue the ussi ke saamne ek aadmi bhi baitha tha.

Aurat- Bahar kya bak rahe the

Main- Yahi ki Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aur usko maarne main madad kar sakta hu aapki.


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UPDATE- 67

Ab tak

Shilpa ko zaher diya gaya tha. Wo to achha hua Saifali ko pata chal gaya aur usne Shilpa ko bacha liya.
Shilpa ne usko sab bataya ki usne bas dawa li thi jo uske doctor ne diya tha usko aur fir ye sab ho gaya.

Aage

Next morning

Saurya bed par leta tha uske saath Mohini soo rahi thi. Waqt yahi koi
3 - 4 baj rahe honge subah ke ki tabhi Saurya ko aisa laga ki koi usko bulla raha hai wo utha apne charo taraf dekha ek baar par koi dikha nahi usko. Wo fresh hone chala gaya waha se nikla to dekha Mohini waha nahi hai. Wo nichhe chala gaya jaha usko practice karna hota tha waha par hi sabhi the.

Wo bhi chala gaya waha practice karne ko ki tabhi tuska phone bajja.

Call Paridhi ka tha.

Main(Saurya)- Haa Paridhi bolo.

Paridhi(Gusse mein)- Tum mujhe lene kab aa rahe ho yaad nahi meri bhi practice haij aaj se.

Main- Arre ha wo main bhul gaya tha par tum Kiran Ma'm ke saath aa jaati naa.

Paridhi- Arre wo jab mein room se bahar nikli unke paas jane ke liye tab tak o nikal chuki thi upar se tumne address bhi nahi bataya tha naa to phone karna pada.

Main- Thik hai phone rakho main aata hu.

Paridhi ne phone rakha aur maine ek portal khola thik uske roomm mein aur pahuch gaya uske pass.

Main- Chalo jaldi training shuru ho g....ummmmmmm

Wo mere par kud gayi aur mujhe chummne lagi.

Paridhi- Samrath kyun akela chod kar chale jaate ho aap mujhe kya main ab aapko pasand nahi.

Main-(maan mein) Yaar ye alag kisam ki bimari laga di hai iss Margret ne isko.

Main utha aur usse thoda dur ho gaya kyun ki mujhe pata tha ab kabhi bhi iski yaadast chali jaani hai.

Main- Nahi Paridhi aisi baat nahi hai.

Paridhi- Kaun si baat aur ye tumhare chahre par lipstick kya kar rahi hai.

Main- (Maan mein) Accha hua sahi waqt par alag ho gaya warna lene ke denne ho jaate.

Main- Arre ye kuch nahi hai tum chalo jaldi waha training shuru ho chuki hai.

Paridhi ne ek baarmeri oor ghur kar dekha fir portal jo khulla hua tha uske ander chali gayi. Main bhi uske piche piche chala gaya ander. Jab hum waha pahuche to Henry aur Rita hasse jaa rahe the aur Margret mujhe isharo se sorry bol rahi thi.


Maine pahle Paridhi ko sabhi se introduce karaya. Fir hamari training shuru hui.

Chaliye yaha ka chod kar hum chalte hai Hospital jaha Shilpa soo rahi thi.

Ek ward boy aata hai uske pass aur ek injection taiyaar karne lagta hai. Wo baar baar uss room ke darwaje ki oor bhi dekh raha tha ki koi aa to nahi raha. Injection ready karne ke baad wo injection ko Shilpa ko inject karne ke liye apna haath aage badha hi raha tha ke ek tez jhatka laga usko aur wo udta hua waha se dur jaa gira.

Isse aawaj hui aur Shilpa ki neend khul gayi saath hi kuch aur log bhi uss room mein aa gaye. Sabhi ne dekha ki wo wardboy farsh par girra pada hai aur uske sar se khoon nikal raha hai. Usko uthaya gaya aur bahar le jaa kar marham patti ki jaane lagi wahi Shilpa bas ye sab dekhti rahi.

Thodi der mein waha Saifali aati hai.

Saifali- Chalo ab chalte hai yaha se.

Shilpa- Ma'm wo ek aadmi....

Saifali- Arre patta hai uska sar fat gaya yahi naa sab jaanti hu main ab chalo tum yaha se collage ka bhi time ho raha hai.

Shilpa bhi yaha se jaana chahti thi ab kaun Hospital mein rahna chahega. Saath hi uske pass bahut se sawal bhi the jinka jawab usko dhundna tha.

Shilpa taiyaar hui aur waha se Saifali ke saath bahar nikal gayi.
Saifali usko parking area ke bagal mein ek sunsan illake mein le gayi aur ek portal khola. Usko dekh kar to Shilpa ki aakhen hi bahar aane ko ho gayi usko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye hai kya.

Saifali ne uska haath pakda aur portal ke andar aa gayi aur pahuch gayi apne ghar mein. Shilpa ki to haalat hi kharab ho rakhi thi wo baar baar apni aakhen maal rahi thi.

Saifali- Paani piyogi.

Shilpa ne haa mein apna sar hillaya aur uske haath mein ek glass pani aa gaya. Ye hote hi uske haath se wo paani ka glass choot gaya.

Shilpa- ye ye kya tha main sapna to nahi dekh rahi na.

Saifali ek sofe par baith gayi.

Saifali- Nahi Shilpa ye sach hai.

Shilpa- To to ye sab kya ho raha hai aur kaise ho raha hai.

Saifali- Duniya mein naa kuch logo ke pass superpowers hote hai tum aur main unhi mein se ek hai

Shilpa- Kya?? Kya aap sach bol rahi ho par mere paas...

Saifali- Tumhe jo aawajein sunnayi de rahi thi naa wo logo ke maan ki aawajein thi.

Shilpa- Kya maan ki awajein?? Par mere saath hi kyun.

Saifali- Saayad issliye kyun ki tum hi inko sambhal shakti ho sayad issliye ki tum iss shakti ke kabil ho.

Shilpa- Sach mein.

Saifali- Haa sach mein aur ab inhi shaktiyon ko tumhe kaabu mein karna hoga aur inko iss duniya ki bhalayi ke liye istemal karna hoga.

Shilpa- Haa main aisa hi karungi par mujhe inko kaabu mein karna kaun shikhayega.

Saifali- Shikhane wala khud aayega tumhare pass par tab tak ke liye tumhe dhyaan lagana hoga...tumhe meditation to aati hogi naa.

Shilpa- Haa aati hai Papa bachpan mein Papa ne shikhayi thi mujhe.

Saifali- Bahut acche to ab lag jao issi mein.

Shilpa- thik hai.

Saifali ne Shilpa ko room mein hi meditate karne ko kaha aur khud dusre room mein chali gayi.

Saifali- Dekha Mother Elika kaise handle kiya maine usko.....arre sab yaha ki filmo se sheekha hai maine......Accha uss doctor aur iski Shilpa ki sauteli maa ka kya karna hai.....Saurya ko bolu par wo to....thik hai jaisa aap kaho.

Saifali itna sab bolne ke baad apni aakhen band karti hai aur uske aakhon ke saamne Saurya aa jata hai jo abhi abhi training khatam kar apne room mein aaya tha.

Saifali ne ek portal banaya aur usko apne passs le aayi

Saurya- Arre kya hua batao to sahi.

Saifali- Chalo mere saath.

Saifali usko Shilpa jis room mein baithi dhyaan laga rahi thi waha le gayi.

Saurya-(Khush hote hue) Shilpa yaha. Yeh tumhare pass kaise kya isko sab yaad aa gaya.

Saifali- Nahi kuch yaad nahi aaya hai isko par kuch conditions ban gayi thi jis wajah se isse yaha laana pada.

Saurya- Conditions kaisi conditions.

Saifali ne Saurya ko puri baat batayi zaher Shilpa ka depression sab kuch jisko sun kar Saurya ko gussa bhi aaya aur dhukh bhi hua.

Saurya- Mujhe unn logo kaa pata chahiye jo inn sab mein saamil hai.

Saifali- Hmm bata...kya thik hai....(Saurya se) Sorry main nahi bata shakti ye tumhe khud pata lagana hoga.

Saurya- Ye kya hai jab tumhe pata hai to batta kyun nahi sakti.

Saifali- Jitna mujhe batana tha maine bata diya wo dawa uss doctor ne bheji thi aur dawa mein hi zaher tha isse aage batane se manna kiya Mother Elika ne.

Main- Thik hai aage ka mein pata laga lunga par ab Shilpa ko main apne saath le jauna.

Saifali- Kya kahoge tum usko ye bhi bata do jisse wo tumhare sath chali jaayegi.

Main- Main nahi tum ho naa tum meri mada...

Saifali- Nahi main kuch nahi karungi Mother Elika ne manna kiya hai aur main bhi dekhna chahti hu kitna dimmag hai tumme.

Main- Hmm thik hai to pahle mujhe uss Doctor ke pass pahucha do ye to kar dogi naa kyunki mera magic kaam nahi karta yaha.

Saifali- Arre itna main kar sakti hu.

Saifali ne ek portal khola aur mujhe uske ander jaane ko bolla.

Jab main ander gaya to ek bade se ghar ke pass bahar nikla.

Main(Khud se)- Ye kaha pahucha diya usne doctor ka bol kar.

Saifali- Wo yahi hai aur ye ghar Shilpa ka hai.

Main- Tum mujhe dekh rahi ho kya.

Saifali- Haa dekh rahi hu chalo ab ghar ke ander jaao par binna magic ke.

Main- Kya par kyun.

Saifali- Mother....

Main- Haa samajh gaya jaa raha hu.

Maine dekha saamne 1 guard khada tha. Main gaya uske pass.

G- Kya baat hai kisse milna hai.

Main- Madam se milna tha kuch baat batani hai unko.

G- Madam nahi hai yaha abhi bahar gayi hai baad mein aana.

Main- Arre abhi phone kar ke bullayi hai humko tum batiya lo unse.

G- Phone kiya tha par mujhe to kisi ke aane ki koi khabar nahi milli hai.

Main- Arre bhul gayi hogi wo Doctor babu se baat kare ke chakar mein.

G- Tumhe kaise pata Doctor sahab yaha aaye hue hai.

Main- Lo arre ab unhone bataya tha mujhe naa ki yaha aa kar millo tum phone kar ke puch lo ek baar.

G- Thik hai rukko tum.

Guard ne phone uthaya aur ghar ke ander call kiya call pick nahi hua.

G- Call pick nahi ho raha.

Main- Arre to jaane do naa humko agar nahi gaye to dikkat ho jaayegi tumhari naukari ke liye.

G(Kuch soocte hue)- Yaar sach mein tumko bulaya hai naa unhone majak to nahi kar rahe naa tum.

Main- arre sach mein bullaya hai humko tum ek kaam karo ander jaa kar puch lo naa.

G- Nahi bhai Madam ne manna kiya hai ki jab koi mehmaan aaye to ander naa jaun.

Main- Hmm ab to tum darwaja kholo aur game ander jaane do.

Guard ne ek baar fir se landline try kiya aur iss baar caal pick ho gaya.

G- Madam ek ladka aaya hai bol raha aapne bulaya hai usko.

phone par ........

G(Mujhe ghurte hue) - Thik hai madam

Main(Zor se)- Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aapki madad kar sakta hu.

Ye baat phone ke uss side bhi sunnayi di thi par waha se koi jawab aata usse pahle hi phone rakh diya guard ne.

G- Chal nikal be yaha se bhag bsdk.

Main- Arre ruko to bhai jarra 2 min.

G- Madam ne bolla hai tere ko bhagane ko saale tujh jaise sellsmen se nafrat hai unn...

Tabhi landline ki ghanti baji.

Main- Chalo baat karo unse aur hame ander jaane do.

G- Haa madam ji boliye

phone- .........

G- Thik hai madam bhej dete hai.

Guard ne darwaja khol diya

G- Chalo jao ander madam bulla rahi hai.

Main ander challa gaya.

Saifali- Ye kya tha.

Main- Kya kya tha tumne bola ander jane ke liye to jaa raha hu ander wo bhi bina magic ke.

Saifali- Arre par mujhe laga kuch action waction dikhaoge par tum to....par Mother Elika dekha naa aapne ye to....hmm ye bhi sahi hai.

Main- kya kaha unhone mujhe bhi batao.

Saifali- Bol rahi thi thik thak tha tumhara performance.

Main- Bas thik thak

Saifali- Unko thik thak laga mere hissab se to tumhe maar padni chahiye aisi ghatiya performance ke kaaran. Chalo ab jao aur miil lo uss Doctor se aur pata karo kyun kiya ye sab par binna magic ke.....par Mother Elika....Thik hai

Saifali- Magic use kar sajte iss baar.

Main-thik hai

Main ghar ke ander chala gaya jaha soffe oar ek aurat nighty mein baithi thi uske baal bikhre hue the ussi ke saamne ek aadmi bhi baitha tha.

Aurat- Bahar kya bak rahe the

Main- Yahi ki Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aur usko maarne main madad kar sakta hu aapki.


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Shilpa ko zaher diya gaya tha. Wo to achha hua Saifali ko pata chal gaya aur usne Shilpa ko bacha liya.
Shilpa ne usko sab bataya ki usne bas dawa li thi jo uske doctor ne diya tha usko aur fir ye sab ho gaya.

Aage

Next morning

Saurya bed par leta tha uske saath Mohini soo rahi thi. Waqt yahi koi
3 - 4 baj rahe honge subah ke ki tabhi Saurya ko aisa laga ki koi usko bulla raha hai wo utha apne charo taraf dekha ek baar par koi dikha nahi usko. Wo fresh hone chala gaya waha se nikla to dekha Mohini waha nahi hai. Wo nichhe chala gaya jaha usko practice karna hota tha waha par hi sabhi the.

Wo bhi chala gaya waha practice karne ko ki tabhi tuska phone bajja.

Call Paridhi ka tha.

Main(Saurya)- Haa Paridhi bolo.

Paridhi(Gusse mein)- Tum mujhe lene kab aa rahe ho yaad nahi meri bhi practice haij aaj se.

Main- Arre ha wo main bhul gaya tha par tum Kiran Ma'm ke saath aa jaati naa.

Paridhi- Arre wo jab mein room se bahar nikli unke paas jane ke liye tab tak o nikal chuki thi upar se tumne address bhi nahi bataya tha naa to phone karna pada.

Main- Thik hai phone rakho main aata hu.

Paridhi ne phone rakha aur maine ek portal khola thik uske roomm mein aur pahuch gaya uske pass.

Main- Chalo jaldi training shuru ho g....ummmmmmm

Wo mere par kud gayi aur mujhe chummne lagi.

Paridhi- Samrath kyun akela chod kar chale jaate ho aap mujhe kya main ab aapko pasand nahi.

Main-(maan mein) Yaar ye alag kisam ki bimari laga di hai iss Margret ne isko.

Main utha aur usse thoda dur ho gaya kyun ki mujhe pata tha ab kabhi bhi iski yaadast chali jaani hai.

Main- Nahi Paridhi aisi baat nahi hai.

Paridhi- Kaun si baat aur ye tumhare chahre par lipstick kya kar rahi hai.

Main- (Maan mein) Accha hua sahi waqt par alag ho gaya warna lene ke denne ho jaate.

Main- Arre ye kuch nahi hai tum chalo jaldi waha training shuru ho chuki hai.

Paridhi ne ek baarmeri oor ghur kar dekha fir portal jo khulla hua tha uske ander chali gayi. Main bhi uske piche piche chala gaya ander. Jab hum waha pahuche to Henry aur Rita hasse jaa rahe the aur Margret mujhe isharo se sorry bol rahi thi.


Maine pahle Paridhi ko sabhi se introduce karaya. Fir hamari training shuru hui.

Chaliye yaha ka chod kar hum chalte hai Hospital jaha Shilpa soo rahi thi.

Ek ward boy aata hai uske pass aur ek injection taiyaar karne lagta hai. Wo baar baar uss room ke darwaje ki oor bhi dekh raha tha ki koi aa to nahi raha. Injection ready karne ke baad wo injection ko Shilpa ko inject karne ke liye apna haath aage badha hi raha tha ke ek tez jhatka laga usko aur wo udta hua waha se dur jaa gira.

Isse aawaj hui aur Shilpa ki neend khul gayi saath hi kuch aur log bhi uss room mein aa gaye. Sabhi ne dekha ki wo wardboy farsh par girra pada hai aur uske sar se khoon nikal raha hai. Usko uthaya gaya aur bahar le jaa kar marham patti ki jaane lagi wahi Shilpa bas ye sab dekhti rahi.

Thodi der mein waha Saifali aati hai.

Saifali- Chalo ab chalte hai yaha se.

Shilpa- Ma'm wo ek aadmi....

Saifali- Arre patta hai uska sar fat gaya yahi naa sab jaanti hu main ab chalo tum yaha se collage ka bhi time ho raha hai.

Shilpa bhi yaha se jaana chahti thi ab kaun Hospital mein rahna chahega. Saath hi uske pass bahut se sawal bhi the jinka jawab usko dhundna tha.

Shilpa taiyaar hui aur waha se Saifali ke saath bahar nikal gayi.
Saifali usko parking area ke bagal mein ek sunsan illake mein le gayi aur ek portal khola. Usko dekh kar to Shilpa ki aakhen hi bahar aane ko ho gayi usko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye hai kya.

Saifali ne uska haath pakda aur portal ke andar aa gayi aur pahuch gayi apne ghar mein. Shilpa ki to haalat hi kharab ho rakhi thi wo baar baar apni aakhen maal rahi thi.

Saifali- Paani piyogi.

Shilpa ne haa mein apna sar hillaya aur uske haath mein ek glass pani aa gaya. Ye hote hi uske haath se wo paani ka glass choot gaya.

Shilpa- ye ye kya tha main sapna to nahi dekh rahi na.

Saifali ek sofe par baith gayi.

Saifali- Nahi Shilpa ye sach hai.

Shilpa- To to ye sab kya ho raha hai aur kaise ho raha hai.

Saifali- Duniya mein naa kuch logo ke pass superpowers hote hai tum aur main unhi mein se ek hai

Shilpa- Kya?? Kya aap sach bol rahi ho par mere paas...

Saifali- Tumhe jo aawajein sunnayi de rahi thi naa wo logo ke maan ki aawajein thi.

Shilpa- Kya maan ki awajein?? Par mere saath hi kyun.

Saifali- Saayad issliye kyun ki tum hi inko sambhal shakti ho sayad issliye ki tum iss shakti ke kabil ho.

Shilpa- Sach mein.

Saifali- Haa sach mein aur ab inhi shaktiyon ko tumhe kaabu mein karna hoga aur inko iss duniya ki bhalayi ke liye istemal karna hoga.

Shilpa- Haa main aisa hi karungi par mujhe inko kaabu mein karna kaun shikhayega.

Saifali- Shikhane wala khud aayega tumhare pass par tab tak ke liye tumhe dhyaan lagana hoga...tumhe meditation to aati hogi naa.

Shilpa- Haa aati hai Papa bachpan mein Papa ne shikhayi thi mujhe.

Saifali- Bahut acche to ab lag jao issi mein.

Shilpa- thik hai.

Saifali ne Shilpa ko room mein hi meditate karne ko kaha aur khud dusre room mein chali gayi.

Saifali- Dekha Mother Elika kaise handle kiya maine usko.....arre sab yaha ki filmo se sheekha hai maine......Accha uss doctor aur iski Shilpa ki sauteli maa ka kya karna hai.....Saurya ko bolu par wo to....thik hai jaisa aap kaho.

Saifali itna sab bolne ke baad apni aakhen band karti hai aur uske aakhon ke saamne Saurya aa jata hai jo abhi abhi training khatam kar apne room mein aaya tha.

Saifali ne ek portal banaya aur usko apne passs le aayi

Saurya- Arre kya hua batao to sahi.

Saifali- Chalo mere saath.

Saifali usko Shilpa jis room mein baithi dhyaan laga rahi thi waha le gayi.

Saurya-(Khush hote hue) Shilpa yaha. Yeh tumhare pass kaise kya isko sab yaad aa gaya.

Saifali- Nahi kuch yaad nahi aaya hai isko par kuch conditions ban gayi thi jis wajah se isse yaha laana pada.

Saurya- Conditions kaisi conditions.

Saifali ne Saurya ko puri baat batayi zaher Shilpa ka depression sab kuch jisko sun kar Saurya ko gussa bhi aaya aur dhukh bhi hua.

Saurya- Mujhe unn logo kaa pata chahiye jo inn sab mein saamil hai.

Saifali- Hmm bata...kya thik hai....(Saurya se) Sorry main nahi bata shakti ye tumhe khud pata lagana hoga.

Saurya- Ye kya hai jab tumhe pata hai to batta kyun nahi sakti.

Saifali- Jitna mujhe batana tha maine bata diya wo dawa uss doctor ne bheji thi aur dawa mein hi zaher tha isse aage batane se manna kiya Mother Elika ne.

Main- Thik hai aage ka mein pata laga lunga par ab Shilpa ko main apne saath le jauna.

Saifali- Kya kahoge tum usko ye bhi bata do jisse wo tumhare sath chali jaayegi.

Main- Main nahi tum ho naa tum meri mada...

Saifali- Nahi main kuch nahi karungi Mother Elika ne manna kiya hai aur main bhi dekhna chahti hu kitna dimmag hai tumme.

Main- Hmm thik hai to pahle mujhe uss Doctor ke pass pahucha do ye to kar dogi naa kyunki mera magic kaam nahi karta yaha.

Saifali- Arre itna main kar sakti hu.

Saifali ne ek portal khola aur mujhe uske ander jaane ko bolla.

Jab main ander gaya to ek bade se ghar ke pass bahar nikla.

Main(Khud se)- Ye kaha pahucha diya usne doctor ka bol kar.

Saifali- Wo yahi hai aur ye ghar Shilpa ka hai.

Main- Tum mujhe dekh rahi ho kya.

Saifali- Haa dekh rahi hu chalo ab ghar ke ander jaao par binna magic ke.

Main- Kya par kyun.

Saifali- Mother....

Main- Haa samajh gaya jaa raha hu.

Maine dekha saamne 1 guard khada tha. Main gaya uske pass.

G- Kya baat hai kisse milna hai.

Main- Madam se milna tha kuch baat batani hai unko.

G- Madam nahi hai yaha abhi bahar gayi hai baad mein aana.

Main- Arre abhi phone kar ke bullayi hai humko tum batiya lo unse.

G- Phone kiya tha par mujhe to kisi ke aane ki koi khabar nahi milli hai.

Main- Arre bhul gayi hogi wo Doctor babu se baat kare ke chakar mein.

G- Tumhe kaise pata Doctor sahab yaha aaye hue hai.

Main- Lo arre ab unhone bataya tha mujhe naa ki yaha aa kar millo tum phone kar ke puch lo ek baar.

G- Thik hai rukko tum.

Guard ne phone uthaya aur ghar ke ander call kiya call pick nahi hua.

G- Call pick nahi ho raha.

Main- Arre to jaane do naa humko agar nahi gaye to dikkat ho jaayegi tumhari naukari ke liye.

G(Kuch soocte hue)- Yaar sach mein tumko bulaya hai naa unhone majak to nahi kar rahe naa tum.

Main- arre sach mein bullaya hai humko tum ek kaam karo ander jaa kar puch lo naa.

G- Nahi bhai Madam ne manna kiya hai ki jab koi mehmaan aaye to ander naa jaun.

Main- Hmm ab to tum darwaja kholo aur game ander jaane do.

Guard ne ek baar fir se landline try kiya aur iss baar caal pick ho gaya.

G- Madam ek ladka aaya hai bol raha aapne bulaya hai usko.

phone par ........

G(Mujhe ghurte hue) - Thik hai madam

Main(Zor se)- Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aapki madad kar sakta hu.

Ye baat phone ke uss side bhi sunnayi di thi par waha se koi jawab aata usse pahle hi phone rakh diya guard ne.

G- Chal nikal be yaha se bhag bsdk.

Main- Arre ruko to bhai jarra 2 min.

G- Madam ne bolla hai tere ko bhagane ko saale tujh jaise sellsmen se nafrat hai unn...

Tabhi landline ki ghanti baji.

Main- Chalo baat karo unse aur hame ander jaane do.

G- Haa madam ji boliye

phone- .........

G- Thik hai madam bhej dete hai.

Guard ne darwaja khol diya

G- Chalo jao ander madam bulla rahi hai.

Main ander challa gaya.

Saifali- Ye kya tha.

Main- Kya kya tha tumne bola ander jane ke liye to jaa raha hu ander wo bhi bina magic ke.

Saifali- Arre par mujhe laga kuch action waction dikhaoge par tum to....par Mother Elika dekha naa aapne ye to....hmm ye bhi sahi hai.

Main- kya kaha unhone mujhe bhi batao.

Saifali- Bol rahi thi thik thak tha tumhara performance.

Main- Bas thik thak

Saifali- Unko thik thak laga mere hissab se to tumhe maar padni chahiye aisi ghatiya performance ke kaaran. Chalo ab jao aur miil lo uss Doctor se aur pata karo kyun kiya ye sab par binna magic ke.....par Mother Elika....Thik hai

Saifali- Magic use kar sajte iss baar.

Main-thik hai

Main ghar ke ander chala gaya jaha soffe oar ek aurat nighty mein baithi thi uske baal bikhre hue the ussi ke saamne ek aadmi bhi baitha tha.

Aurat- Bahar kya bak rahe the

Main- Yahi ki Shilpa ke collage mein padta hu aur usko maarne main madad kar sakta hu aapki.


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ISS AWAJ K SAATH HI SHILPA DIDI EKDUM S CHOWK GAYI AUR MAIN BHI.
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R.BOOK- HA MALKIN MAIN AA GAYI
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V.MAUSA- ARRE POONAM MAIN Q YE SAURYA HAI NA TUMHARE SAATH TO MERI KYA JAROORAT BHALA.
MAASI - YE BECHARA KITNA SAAMAN UTHAYEGA BHALA AAP BHI CHALO MERI MADAD KR DENA BAHUT DIN HUE HAI AAPKE SATH SHOPPING P GAYE.
ISS BAAT PR FIR BAAKI K GENTS HASNE LAGE .
MOM- CHOTI MERA BHI MOOD HO GAYA SHOPPING KA CHAL HUM BHI CHALTE HAI.
DAD- SANJU MAINE TO KUCH KAHA BHI NAHI PHIR MERE SAATH YE ANYAY Q BHALA.
MOM- ARRE ANYAY KYA MAIN THODI NA AAPKI BAAT KAR RHI THI MAIN TO APNI AUR SHUDHA KI BAAT KR RHI THI. PR AB TO AAPKO BHI CHALNA HOGA Q KI AAPKO APNI BIWI K SATH SHOPPING P JANA ANYAY LAGTA HAINA.
CHALO UTHO AUR READY HO JAO.
ITNE M BOBBY UNCLE K MUH S NIKAL GAYA- HAASH MAIN BACH GAYA.
FIR KYA THA WO BHI HAMARE SATH HO LIYE .
AANT TAK MANZAR YE THA K SABHI GENTS KO JAANE K LIYE ORDER MIL GAYE AUR SAARI LADIES TO THI HI READY PAHLE S HI.FIR SABHI APNE APNE ROOM M READY HONE CHALE GAYE.
MAIN APNE ROOM MAIN GAYA AUR BED P BAITH KUCH SOCHNE LAGA K TABHI ROOM MAI S.DIDI AA GAYI AUR BOLI.
S.DIDI- SAURYA AB PLAN KA KYA HOGA ISS AGAR AAJ TUMNE ISSMILE KI JAGAH NA LI TO USKE AADMIYON KO PATA CHAL JAYEGA K WO GAYAB HO CHUKA HAI NO PLAN K LIYE SAHI NAHI HAI.
MAIN - HA DIDI YAHI TO SOCH RAHA HU AB TO PATA NAHI KYA KARU INLOGO KO BHI MANNA NHI
KR SAKTA SHOPPING K LIYE.
R.BOOK- SAURYA TUM EK KAAM KARO APNA EK CLONE INKE SAATH BEJH DO AUR TUM BASE P CHALE JAO.
MAIN - CLONE SACH M . KYA MAIN AISA KR SAKTA HU.
S.DIDI- MAIN BHI BHULAKAD HOTI JAA RAHIHU AB JAB YE(R.BOOK) HAI TO KYA TENTION .
R.BOOK- HA AAP BANA SAKTE HO APNA CLONE BAS EK BAAR BOLIYE "CLONED"
AUR AAPKA CLONE AAPKE SAMNE HOGA AUR YE APKE MAN ANUSAR KISI KA BHI ROOP LE SAKTA HAI. EK BAAT AUR YE CLONE JO BHI KAREGA YA SUNNEGA WO AAPKO ISKO CHUNE P PATA CHAL JAYEGA. ISS CLONE MAIN BHI AAPKI HI TARAH POWERS HOGI LEKIN AAPSE BAHUT KAM PR KISI AAM INSAN S BAHUT JYADA.
MAIN- MAIN EK BAAR M KITNE CLONE BANA SAKTA HU.
R.BOOK- JINTI AAPKI ICHA,JITNI BAAR AAP CLONED BOLOGE UTNE HI TUMHARE CLONE BANEGE.
MAIN-OK FIR MAINE 2 BAAR CLONED BOLA AUR DEKHTE HI DEKHTE MERE 2 CLONES BAN GAYE MAINE EK KO S.DIDI BANNE KO BOLA AUR DONO KO SHOPING P JAANE KO READY HONE KO BOLA.
MAIN -(S.DIDI S) CHALO DIDI AB BASE P CHALTE HAI.
S.DIDI N CHUTKI BAJAYI HUM BASE S THODI DUR PRAKAT HO GAYE JANHA KOI NAHI THA.
FIR HUM BASE P PAHUCHE.
WAHA PAHUCH KR MAIN DIDI K SAATH SIDHA ISMILE K PAAS PAHUCH GAYA USKA HAATH PAKDA AUR USKI SAARI INFO LELI.
ITNE MAIN ROOM M SAMEERAKI ENTRY HUI JO PATA NAHI Q DIDI K SAMNE JHUK GAYI.
SAMEERA- JINNO KI MALIKA KO ESS NACHIZ KA SALAM.

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CHALIYE DOSTO AB GUESS KARE KI YE SAMEERA HAI KON AUR YE SHILPA DIDI KO JINNO KI MALIKA Q BULA RAHI HAI

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