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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Ab tak

Saurya N.mom ko lekar wapas chala gaya....

Ab aage

Saurya to apne jagah Alex aur Varsha ke pass pahuch gaya wahi N.mom apni body mein jo ki Niharika ke planet pe thi.

Abhi tak Alex aur Varsha ko hosh aa chuka tha...Wahi Kaal sarp bhi wapas aa chuka tha uss jagah par..

Saurya jaise hi apni body mein pahucha ekdum se uski body chamakne lagi thi...jiski wajah se lagbhag sabhi ko hi apni apni aankhen band karni padi.

Thoda waqt beeta aur sab normal ho gaya..

Alex aur Varsha dono hi....sirf wo kya har koi waha pe jo tha wo kuch na kuch kahna chahta tha par kisi ko ghanta samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kahe..

Badi himmat ke saath Alex aur Varsha dono hi ek dusre ko kuch kahne wale the ki wo bacchi ronne lagi..Varsha ne usko Alex ki goad se apni goad mein le liya aur usko chup karane lagi..

Saurya- Alex dost ab tum hi batao kya dikhaya hai tumhari bacchi ne tumhe..

Alex- Saurya wo usne ....

Alex kuch bolta usse pahle wo bacchi mere goad mein aa gayi....ye bada ajeeb tha yaar matlab koi bhi kuch bolna chahe to wo usko chup karane ke liye kuch na kuch kar hi deti thi...

Mere goad mein wo jaise hi aayi...meri aankhon ke saamne jinnlok ka wo shinghasan aa gaya aur saath mein meri raaniya...wahi Alex jo kuch bol raha tha wo ekdum se chup ho gaya tha sayad ye bhi issi bacchi ka kaam tha..yaa pata nahi kya.

Jab meri aankhon ke saamne wo sab aaya to main uss bacchi ki taraf dekhne laga...ki fir se mujhe kuch dikhayi diya wo tha mere Earth ka parivar main meri maa papa saath mein Mom dad aur baaki saare bhi sab the waha pe...aur sab khush the...ki acchanak se kuch hua aur unn sab ki khushi maatam mein badal gayi wajah thi hamara yaha se chale jaana...yaa kahu hamari maut hum sab ki body padi hui thi waha par...koi bhi nahi baccha tha yaha main meri raniyan maa Papa Saifali sab yaha se chale gaye the Pradeep aur Kiran bhi....jo bacche hue the unn sab ke aankhon mein aashu the....aur ye scene khatam ho gaya.

Mere pass lakhon sawal the iss waqt aur jawab ek bhi nahi....main bas uss bacchi ko dekh raha tha..

Alex - Kya hua Saurya tum acchanak se....

Main kya bolta usko abhi to meri hi samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha tha..

Main- hmm kuch nahi....(baat ko badalte hue) waise iska naam kya hai..

Varsha- Iska naam Dristi hai...

Alex- Hmm accha naam hai naa ye.

Mainn kuch bolta usse pahle Niharika aur uski mom waha par aa pahuchi..

Niharika - Khabar aayi hai Rani pari thik ho gayi hai...Parilok wapas se sahi ho gaya hai..

MAin- matlab Paridhi ki taajposhi ho gayi....

Niharika- Haa.....ye bacchi ye kon hai kitni pyaari hai ye...

Varsha- ye hamari bacchi hai Dristi future se aayi hai yaha...

Niharika- Ek minute isse mujhe dena jara..

Varsha ne bhi bacchi ko Niharika ki oor badha diya...Niharika ne usko apne goad mein liya....aur Niharika ki aankhen band ho gayi...hum sab usko dekhte rahe.....kuch der hota aur uske chahre par hasi to kabhi dukh to kabhi gusse ke bhaw aa jaate..

Abhi yaha ye sab chal raha tha ki mujhe phone aaya Mohit mamu ka...main side mein gaya aur unka phone uthaya...

Mohit- Saurya kaha hai tu ghar kyun nahi aaya abhi tak..

Main- Wo mamu aa raha hu bas..wo ek dost mil gaya tha to...

Mohit - Thik hai jaldi se aaja kuch baatein krni hai tere se..

Mujhe pata tha kya baat karni hai unko par ab unse bata to sakta nahi tha...to jaldi aane ka bol diya...

Main wapas unn sab ke pass gaya..Niharika ki aankhen ab khul chuki thi wo mujhe dekh rahi thi mujhe pata nahi kyun aisa laga ki usko bhi wahi sab dikha jo mujhe dikha tha...

Main - Niharika tum Parilok jaa kar unn sab ko yaha wapas aane ka bol do main bhi jaa raha hu abhi...

Niharika- hmm thik hai...accha ek baat aur Khabar aayi hai Bansoa mein kuch halchal ho rahi hai waha se bahut se log nikal rahe hai...koi karan bhi nahi aisa karne ki..

Uska itna bolna tha ki Alex aur Varsha Dristi ki oor dekhne lage...

Varsha- Issne Margret ko bhi sab kuch batla diya hai sayad yahi wajah hogi aur ab wo log bhi yaha aate honge..

Niharika- hmm ye bahut tezz hai..

Aise hi fir sab wapas jaane lage Alex ko maine Niharika ke planet par jaane ka bol diya....wo sabhi waha chale gaye aur main chal pada Mohit mama ke ghar ki oor ki tabhi

Kappa- Arre bhai jiske liye aaya tha wo to lete chal wo orange manni..

Main- wo sab yaha nahi hai ab.....Maarcuss ne sab kuch Jinlok mein chippa diya tha...Iss Dristi se mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai...

Kappa- Kya bakk raha hai wo bhala....

Main- wo apni maut ki taiyaari kar ke gaya hai...mujhe to aisa lag raha hai usne future mein bahut kuch jhella hai jiski wajahse wo ye sab kar raha tha...tu khud soch usne meri har ek chiz dhundhi unko Jinlok mein jaa kar rakha shurakshit...fir yaha aaya mere pass aur Dristi ko mujhe saunp gaya...issne bahut burra wqat dekha hoga tabhi ye sab kiya usne.

Kappa- Haa yahi baat hai jab wo(shaitani kitab ka maalik) pahle aaya tha naa tab bhi log aise hi pagalpan pe utar aaye the....accha ye sab chodo aur chalo yaha se...

Main- hmm

Aur main waha se nikal gaya... Raste mein hi Niharika ki awaj aaya ki wo sabhi wapas chali gayi hai...

Ghar pahucha to Mohit Mama kuch tensed lag rahe the...

Main- Kya baat hai Mamu sab thik to hai naa...

Waise pata tha mujhe ye kya kahne wale hai par main unke muh se sunna chahta tha..

Mohit- Wo tum sabhi ke baare mein Maa ke muh se nikal gaya aur ab tumhari nani tum sab se milna chahti hai....unki halat bahut kharab hai..

Main- Aapne Mom se baat ki iss baare mein...

Mohit- Nahi abhi tak nahi mujhe dar lag raha hai ek to jab unko pata chala maine tumhe sab bata diya hai wo gussa ho gayi thi aur mujhe bahut daant bhi padi thi ab agar ye bataya to ....

Maine apna phone nikala aur Mom ka number dial kiya..

Maine fir unko sab kuch bataya aur pucha aage kya karna hai....

Pahle to wo bahut gussa hua Mohit Mama par lekin baad mein mere aur waha se Dad ke samjhane ke baad wo shant hui thoda...

Mom- Naa tum kahi kisi se milne jaoge aur naa hi hum chahe koi marre yaa jiye...samjhe

Main- Hmm thik hai Mom..

Maine call cut kiya...

Main- Mamu chalo hospital chalte hai Naniji se milne...

Mohit mamu ne pahle to mujhe ghur kar dekha...

Mohit- Abhi Didi ne bola naa nahi jaane..

Main- Haa par hame jaana hoga Nani ko dekhne aur main wada karta hu koi hamme nahi pahchan paayega..

Thoda baut manane par Mama maan gaye...

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle updaate mein dekhte hai ki kaise Saurya Hospital jaata hai aur haa Jinlok kaa jo baaki rah gaya hai wo bhi agle update mein...
Drishti Alex v versha ko future batane ke baad Surya, Niharika M v Margret ko sab batla deti hai v Surya ki cheejo ke bare me bhi jo jinn lok me hai. Bahut sunder shabdkriti hai mitr.
 

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Ab tak

Saurya Mohit ke saath Hospital jaane wala tha apni Nani ko dekhne...dekhte hai kaise pahuchta hai...

Ab aage

Mohit ko bahut mannane par wo bhi taiyaar ho gaya tha...

Ab Saurya jaadu se to waha jaa nahi sakta tha Mohit ke sath aur uske plan ke hisab se Mohit ka jaana bhi jaruri tha...

Dono jaldi se taiyaar hue aur Saurya ne kisi ko call karke kuch arrangements karwayi...

Fir thode der baad hi Saurya nikal gaya Mohit ko lekar...Auto se..

Auto jaakar siddha ussi hospital ke picche rukka..

Wahi par kuch log khade the unke haathon mein kuch packets the..

Main aur Mamu unke paas gaye...pahle to waha khade 2 logo ne mujhe salute marra aur maine apna haat apne sar pe...salo ko kitna bhi samjhao par ye nahi sunege..

Mohit mamu unke aisa karne ki wajah puchne lage....wo to maine handle kar liya...fir unse wo packets leliya....

Unhone hame ek nurse jo ki wahi khadi thi uske saath jaane ke liye kaha aur hum dono chal diye uske picche...

Wo hame ek room mein le gayi...

Nurse- Aap dono change karlo tab tak mein uss jagah ko khali karwati hu..

Main- Hmm thik hai..

Jaise hi wo bahar gayi Mohit mamu se sawal shuru ho gaye..

Mohit- Ye kya ho raha hai Saurya...hum yaha aise .....kya ye log tumhe jaante hai...

Main- Mamu shant ho jaao yaar....sab bataunga par pahle apna kaam to kar le...

Mohit- Kaam hum to yaha bas dekhne aaye hai naa unko...

Main- Haa kuch waisa hi...

Mohit- Nahi bata mujhe hum yaha kya karne aaye hai..

Main- hmmm Mamu hum naa Nani ko theek karne aaye hai....bas aab aur kuch nahi jab yaha se niklenge tab baaki baatein bataunga..ab change karo jaldi se...

Mohit ne puchna to chaha magar maine batane se manna kar diya fir wo bhi baad mein puchne ka bol change karne lage...

Hum dono hi doctors ke getup mein aa gaye...

Thodi hi der main wahi Nurse wapas aayi..

Nurse- Sir sab ready hai ab aap chal sakte ho..

Main- hmm chalo aur hum dono hi waha se chal pade Nani ke room ki oor iss waqt room se sabhi ko bahar nikal diya gaya tha....

hum ander pahuche....maine wo jaddi butti jo R.D se li thi wo pahle se hi taiyaar karke laya tha..

Main- Sister kya aap hame thodi der...

Nurse- thik hai sir par jyada waqt nahi hai aapko bas 5 minute ki permission milli hai..

Main- hmm janta hu aap jao main bas baat karungaa..

Nurse chali gayi....

Bas issi ka to intezar kar raha tha main...maine apne pocket se kuch goliyan nikali jo unhi jaddi buttiyon se banayi thi maine...

Maine Nani ka oxygen mask hataya aur wo goliyan unke muh mein de diya...

Mohit - Ye kya kar diya...mask kyun hataya agar kuch ho gaya inko to....aur....

Main- Cool down Mamu ye ek jaddi butti thi jisse Nani thik ho jaayegi...aur kuch nahi hai...

Mohit- Jaddi butti kahi kuch ulta palta naa ho jaaye aur ab to mask laga de dekh inko saans lene mein dikkat ho rahi hai..

Main- Hmm thodi dikkat hogi fir normal ho jaayega sab....chalo ab chalte hai Ghar pe bataunga kya karna hai...

Mohit- Par...

Maine unka haath pakda aur unko khinchta hua bahar le aaya...

Nurse hame bahar hi mill gayi....

Nurse- Ji baat ho gayi unse...

Main- Hmm ho gayi aur ab wo bik=lkul thik hai apna mask nikal kar baithi hui hai apne room mein...

Nurse- kyun majak kar rahe ho sir...wo to bas kuch din ki hi mehman hai unk......

Main- arre aap jaa kar dekh aao unko aur waise bhi abhi unka time nahi aaya hai abhi waqt hai usme...

Itna bol kar main nikal gaya Mohit mama ke saath hamne change kiya aur waha se nikal gaye...

Ghar mein bahut kuch puccha Mamu ne aur maine bhi aise hi kuch jhooti khahaniyan sunna di unko...

Raat ho chuki thi humne dinner kiya aur soo gaye..sotte hue bhi mere dimmag mein wahi 2 scenes chal rahi thi jo Dristi ne dikhaya tha mujhe.......

Maine mind to mind hi Shilpa ko bol diya Jinnlok jaane ke liye....

Bas fir kya sochte sochte hi soo gaya....

Shubah meri aankh Mohit mamu ke jagane se khuli....aur unka wo chahra dekh kar to itna hassa main ki puccho hi mat...wo mujhe ekdum kisi chamatkari baba ki tarah dekh rahe the...

Jab hasna ho gaya mera to unhone bataya...

Mohit- Teri Nani bilkul thik ho gayi hai aur thodi der baad tests ke baad unko free bhi kar diya jaana hai..

Main- Hmm chalo ye sahi hua ab aap sunno main yaha se jaa raha hu kuch din ke liye kyunki ab Nani yahi dera jammane wali hai aapse pata lagwane ke liye...Aapko unhe kuch nahi batana samjhe naa mere baare mein naa hi kisi aur ke baare mein....main apne ek dost ke yaha rahunga aur haa iss baare mein Mom Dad ko bhi mat batana...

Pahle to Mohit mamu ne saaf manna kar diya fir maine unko samjhaya agar galti se bhi Nani ko mere baare mein pata chala to Mom Dad unko chodenge nahi...

Wo bhi samjh gaye par mujhese mere dost ka pata manga aur uska details bhi ab ye mere liye chutki ka kaam tha maine bhi ek address de diya unko saath hi mein kisi ka detail bhi...

Bas fir kya tha main waha se breakfast ki aur nikal gaya...Mamu ne mujhe kuch paise de diye the aur milne aayenge aisa bhi kaha tha...

Waha se nikal ke main shidha RAW ke diye hue Flat mein pahucha aur waha saman rakha aur saath hi waha ke kuch pics Mamu ko send kiye jo unhone maange the...

Fir wahi par maine Shilpa ko bulaya....wo to aayi hi saath mein baaki ke charo bhi aa gayi Paridhi Puja Priya aur Mohini...

Main- Arre yaar saare kyun aa gaye hum ghumne nahi jaa rahe waha..

Priya- Jyada baatein naa banao samjhe hame jana hai to hum bhi aa gaye aur hum jaayenge bhi...

Mujhe pata tha inn sab se jitna mumkin hi nahi hai bas fir maine bhi surrender kar diya..

Main- Hmm thik hai chalo..

Hum sabhi pahuch gaye thodi der main Jinnlok....

Jinlok ka bata du abhi bas kalle jinno ki samsya hi khatam hui thi aur kaale area ki nahi uske keliye mera aur Shilpa ka waha jaana jaruri tha...

Hum sab waha pahuche aur pahle to chal diye Mahel ki oor jaha shinghashan par baithte hi ye kaale region ki samsya khatam honi thi....

Ab jinlok mein jab hum aaye to iss baat ka pata sabhi ko chal gaya aur sabhi hame dekhne aane lage....wahi Sameer Sameera aur Ritvik ko bhi Pritvi se hamare yaha aane ki khabar de di gayi to wo bhi aa gaye waha se yaha...

Fir kya tha hum sabhi ka acche se swagat hua...

Main yaha par sirf ye kaale region ki samasya ke liye to aaya nahi tha issliye ye sab jaldi se niptna chahta tha taaki asal kaam kar saku..

Main- Shilpa chalo ab iss jinlok ki samasya ko khatam karte hai..

Shilpa- Haa jarur ...

Uska ye bolna tha aur hum dono ke hi kapde jinlok ke Raja Rani ke kapdo mein badal gaye saath hi sar pe ek mukut bhi aa gaya..

Wahi meri dusri raniyon ke libas bhi badal gaye...

Main aur shilpa foir singhashan ki oor badhe aur fir uspe baith gaye...

Pahle to kuch bhi nahi hua....isse sabhi chintit ho gaye par fir kuch hi der baad Shinghasan ke picche se bahut tez roshni aayi jo har taraf phail gayi...

Ye roshni phailte phailte pure Jinnlok mein phail gayi aur wo Kaale region wali samasya khatam ho gayi...Saath hi mujhe uska nhi pata chal gaya jiski wajah se aaya tha mein yaha...

Sabhi ne hamare samne sar jhuka liya...

Abhi hum kuch kahte usse pahle hi ek portal khula aur uske ander se koi bahar aaya....jisko dekh kar sabhi aachmbhit rah gaye..

Aaj ke liye itna hi agle update mein dekhte hai ki wo kya chiz hai jiske liye Saurya Jinlok gaya hai saath hi ye kon aa gaya iss portal se jisko dekh sabhi acchambhit rah gaye....saath hi kya chal raha hai iss Saurya ke dimmag mein Earth pe apne pariwar ko lekar....
Surya ne apni naani ko theek kiya v Jinn lok ki samsaya ko dure kiya apni raniyo ke sath. Bahtreen update hai bandhu.
 

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Ab tak

Saurya Jinlok mein tha waha ki problem solve ho chuki thi...Wahi koi portal se aa jata hai waha jisko dekkh sab acchambhit ho jaate hai..

Aage

Jo aaya tha wo koi aur nahi Dristi thi.....iska kuch pata nahi chal raha kabhi bhi kahi bhi pahuch jaa rahi hai ye...

Dristi portal se udte hue bahar aayi aur sheeda meri goad mein aa gayi...aur roone lagi...jisko dekh sabhi hairaan ho gaye.....ek to itni choti bacchi portal se aayi wo bhi udte hue...

Abhi main kuch kahta yaa karta usse pahle

Shilpa- Ye kon hai aur yaha aise....

Maine sabhi ko jaane ke liye bol diya aur Dristi ko goad mein liye hue shinghsan se utha aur room ki taraf jaane laga...

Wahi meri raniyan mere picche aaane lagi hum hamare kamre mein pahuche...Dristi abhi tak rooye jaa rahi thi aur meri samjh mein nahi aa raha tha kyun....

Shilpa ne usko mere goad se cheen liya aur usko chup karane lagi wahi baaki sab bhi usko chup karane lage...

Main kuch bolta usse pahle ek aur Portal khula jisme se Niharika, Varsha aur Alex bahar nikle...

Alex aur Niharika has rahe the wahi Varsha wo gusse mein thi....

Iss baar bhi mere kuch bolne se pahle Varsha bol padi...

Varsha- Wo Drist....to yaha hai tu...nahana to padega hi tujhe chahe tu kuch bhi kar le...

Ab yaha pe ek baat clear kar deta hu Varsha aur Niharika sabko jaante hai yaha par magar meri raniyan wo nahi jaanti inn dono ko abhi tak....

Puja- Ye bacchi aapki hai....badi hi pyari bacchi hai...par ye yaha....

Varsha- isko nahlane ke liye pani garam kar rahi thi aur jab wapas aayi to ye gayab thi...nahana nahi chahti hogi pahle bhi aise hi karti thi(pahle bhi se matlab future mein)

TAbhi Sabki nazar Alex par padti hai...

Shilpa- Alex tum bhi yaha ho...

Alex- hmm Malika wo main apni bacchi ko lene aaya tha...

Paridhi- Bacchi?? Tumhari....par....

Ab wo kuch aur bolti usse pahle hi unn pancho ke haath Dristi ke sar pe chale gaye aur unn sab ki aankhen band ho gayi...ab unko kuch dikha rahi hogi Dristi...

Niharika- VArsha ab to time lagega tum yahi rukko main jaati hu sunna hai aaj kal Vetallok mein koi planning chal rahi hai unko pata chal gaya hai naa Mohini ke wapas aane ka...

Main- Accha to unko pata chal gaya hai tab to hame jaldi hi......

Niharika- Hamme nahi Mohini ko ye usko hi karne do taaki wo Vetalrani ban sakke main bhi bas waha mnazar rakh rahi hu...

Main- hmm thik hai...

Niharika wapas chali jaati hai..wahi main Alex aur Varsha waha khade rahte hai...

Main- Accha Alex main yaha kuch dhundhne aaya hu kya tum meri madad karoge....aaaaahhhhhh

Maine ye bola hi tha ki mere sar mein dard hone laga....pata nahi ab ye kya tha....

Kappa- Dristi nahi chahti tum abhi wo sab nikalo uska waqt nahi aaya hai abhi...

Main- Kya bol raho ho...

Kappa- sach bol raha hu.....abhi tujhe tere kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat nahi hai...abhi tujhe Earth ka kaam sambhalna hai...tujhe pata bhi hai tere MOhit mamu ne kitne call kiye hai tujhe.....

Main- Kya call p....oo yaha pe thodi naa network hota hai yaar main bhi...

Kappa- wo tumhe jaruri kaam ke liye bulla rahe hai Saurya abhi yaha se chalo warna pata nahi kya ho jaaye agle pal....

Main- Hmm ab yaha ka kaam nahi karna to wahi jaana padega naa (Alex se) tum yahi raho....

Maine portal khola aur usse shedha Earth pe aa gaya aate hi mere phone pe misscall ke notifications aane lage...

Maine jaldi se Mamu ko call kiya...

Main- Haa Mamu bolo..

Mohit- Pahle to ye batta tu tha kaha kab se call kar raha hu....

Main- wo thoda bahar chala gaya tha waha network nahi thi to call nahi lag raha hoga...aap batao naa kyun pareshan ho rahe ho...

Mohit- Arre teri Nani mere yaha shift hone wali hai Hospital se nikalte hi mre pass aa rahi hai mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha...

Main- Isme samajhna kya hai aapko unko bas ahsas dilate rahna hai ki unhone galat kiya hai meri Maa ke saath meri Mom ke saath...unko taane maarte raho...

Mohit- tu karna kya chahta hai meri kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai...

Main - Aap samajh jaaoge Mamu bas jaisa kah raha hu karte jaao...

Mohit- thik hai....

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Main- Kappa main kuch soch raha tha....

Kappa - hmm bolo main sun raha hu....

Main- mujhe lagta hai hame ek baar Maarcuss ko dekhne jaana chahiye...

Kappa - Hmm ye sahi hai...aur ek baat iss Alex aur Varsha ko bolo taiyaar hone Jwala ko bhi laane jaana hai...bhul gaye kya...

Main- Arre nahi yaar par tu khud dekh ....abhi kaise kahu....

Kappa- Kahna to padega hi dost....

MAin- Hmm dekhta hu wo bhi....Waise Ab Nana ko fasana hai mujhe aur uske liye bade Nanu se milna hoga hame Gaon jaana hoga uss Shrapit gaon mein....

KAppa- haa to kab chal rahe hai....

Main- abhi kuch din thahar kar....Yaar maine socha tha aaj sab kuch haasil kar lunga aur fir Maarcuss ko khatam kar dunga...

Kappa- Pata hai aur saayad issi wajah se Dristi tumhe rookne aa gayi...hame sab kuch soch kar karna hoga samjhe hum har baar galti nahi kar sakte...mere hisab se pahle apni Raniyon ko thik karo unki takat itni badha do ki koi unka saamna naa kar paaye phir ye sab sochna kyun ki unko bhi tumhare saath yudh mein bhag to lena hi hai aur agar wo kamzoor hui to tum....samjh rahe hona...

MAin- Hmm samajh raha hu to agla padav hamara Vetal lok hai....

Kappa- Hmm ab aayi baat samajh mein teri....accha ye Puja aur Priya inka kya...

Main- Ye dono koi aam log to hai nahi ye dono hi mysterious planet ki Rajkumari hai dono aur waha ki shaktiyon pe agar inn dono ne puri tarah kaabu paa liya to puccho mat kya hoga...

Kappa- Hmm to unki bhi taiyaari karani hogi...

Main- Hmm accha to hum kal chalte hai Vetal lok waha ka game khatam karte hai fir waha se yaha aa kar Gaon chalenge waha se sabko yaha ke baare mein batana hai jisse Dadaji aur Nanaji dono hi out ho jaayenge...

Kappa- Thik hai jaisa tum kaho....

MAin- Haa aur fir ek baar iss Maarcuss se bhi milne chalenge....

Kappa- hmm thik hai...


Aaj ke liye itna hi aage dekhte hai kya kya dikhaya hai Dristi ne sabko aur saath hi Adventure of Vetallok bhi....aur bhi kuch events to baane rahiye...

Jaanta hu chota update hai par light ke aane jaane ki wajah se itna hi likh paya...agala update raat ko deta hu wo lamba hoga
 
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