Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Vickey1211 · Aug 1, 2020

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GuptAbhishek · Aug 2, 2020

Ristrcted said:
DOSTO GALTI S MEGA UPDATE JO PAGE NO 56 P HAI WO AADHE M HI MUJHSE POST HO GAYI THI PR MAINE DER NA KRTE HUE USSE EDIT KR PURA KR DIYA THA.
TO JIN DOSTO N WO ADHURA UPDATE PADH LIYA HO WO PLEASE USSE DOBARA S PADH LE MAIN PURI KOSIS KARUNGA K YE GALTI FIR S NA HO.
SORRY AGAIN.

UPDATE - 32

AB TAK
Pub m wo daayan wala kaand kr main nikal pada Mohini didi , puja didi aur unki friend k saath udher s. Pahle didi k dost ko drop kiya fir khud ghar2 aa gaya. Mohini didi jo puri tunn thi unko apne room m sulaya, Puja didi bhi room m chali gayi soone pr chuki 3 baaj rahe the Main chala gaya chat p dhyan shadhna krne jaisa mujhe Kappa n bola tha.

AB AAGE:-

Subah hui pure sahar m uss daayan ki hi charcha ho rahi thi sayad hi koi NEWS channel ho jo iss kaand k alawa kuch aur dikha raha ho.
Iss khabar ko jab ghar m sabhi n dekha to pahuch gaye saare ghar2 m Puja di aur mujhe dekhne q ki hum to late aaye the hamare aane ka pata kisi ko nhi chala hoga.
Ghar2 m aa saare bade log shor machane lage. Hum sab bhi chale aaye apne rooms s bahar dekhne k aakhir baat kya hui. Main chaat s niche chala aaya.
Mom- Tu uper kya kr raha tha.
Main-Yoga q kya hua aap saare itni subah koi problem hai kya.
Dad- Tum dono bhai bahan kab aaye the ghar.
Puja(ubaasi lete)-3 baje k aas paas
R.bua- Kya itna late aage s tum kahi nahi jaaogi.
Main- Bua wo bolna chahti hai 12 baje wo abhi neend m hai na to kuch bhi bol rahi hai.
Puja- haa bua hum 12 baje hi aa gaye the.
D.bua- Nahi ye dono hi jhoot bol rahe hai.
puja- sacchi bua hum jaldi hi aa gaye the aur aage s aur bhi jaldi aa jayenge.
Itne m mere room s Mohini nikalti hai apna sar khujlate.
Mohini apni saari bua ko ek saath dekh.
Mohini(khud s)- yaar aab to kam pina padega dekho to jinko itne waqt s dhund rahi hu wo mere Nani k yaha hai hahahaaa. Mohini aab kal s ek bottlekam kr le warna sabke milne s pahle....
Annu maasi- Mohini tum yaha. (meri oor dekh) ye yaha kaise.
Main-wo..
Mohini- Dekho to ab to inki aawaje bhi aa rahi hai yaar kahi pub walo n kuch milla to nhi diya drinks m.
chaaataaak
Maa- Sanju didi maara kyu isse.
Mom- isse hosh m laane k liye. Paridhi beta kya tum iska ye nasha tod dogi aur isse thik kr niche hall m le aana ok.
Paridhi- thik hai.
Paridhi n Mohini ko kheechte hue mere room m le gayi.
A.maasi- Haa to Puja aur Saurya tum dono kuch batana chahoge.
Puja- wo kal pub m na he hame puri tunn mili thi.
D.bua- tunn kya bol rahi ho tum.
Main- haa wo Mohini didi n kal kuch jyada hi pi rakhi thi aur khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paa rahi thi Puja di ne unko pahchan liya. Ab hum inhe uss halat m chod to nhi sakte the na.
Puja- To hum isse yaha le aaye.
Itne m Paridhi didi Mohini ka phone le kr hamare paas aayi.
Paridhi(Maa s)-Mammi wo Mohini k phone p uski mom k call aaye hue hai bahut jyada to kya m.
Papa- Phone mujhe do main unko yaha bula leta hu wo pareshan hogi raat bhar s.
D.bua- uska nasha utra k nahi.
Paridhi- abhi dahi khilaya hai sayad kuch der m sahi ho jaaye. Pragati usse dekh rahi hai abhi.
Mom- aane do isse hosh m abhi to bas ek hi lagai hai na iski to main..
P.maasi-Aap hi nhi didi main bhi isse.
V.mausa- oo meri rani Lakshmi bai aaram s isne kiya hi kya hai bas drink hi to ki hai haa thodi jyada ho gai pr uske liye aise react krna accha nahi hai.
Maa- haa jiju sahi bol rahe hai.
A.maasi- Tu to chup hi rah agar kuch galat ho jata iske saath to.
papa bich m bol pade.
Papa- Alka bhabhi aa rahi hai yaha kuch hi der m.

Chaliye insabhi ko baate karne dete hai aur hum chalte hai Alka Maami k paas.
Alka Maami abhi apne mmayke m thi wo badi pareshan thi Mohini k ghar naa aane ki wajah s. Unhe Hospital bhi jaana tha Nani ko dekhne.
Tabhi Naina maami ka phone aata hai.
N.maami- tunne TV dekha kya.
A.Maami- nhi kya hua bolo.
N.maami- Aree kal *** Pub m ek daayan ghus aayi thi aur...
A.maami- kya *** pub m daayan kya bol rahi ho aap.
N.maami- TV on kr pahle .
A.maami n tv on kiya or wo daayan ki khabar dekhi tabhi unko yaad aaya k Mohini bhi issi pub m jaya krti thi.
A.maami(roote hue)- Naina bhabhi Mohini issi club m jaya krti thi aur kal raat s hi wo ghar nhi aayi hai.
N.maami- ye kya bol rahi hai tu wo ghar nhi aayi...sayad kisi dost k yaha ho.
A.maami- Nhi bhabhi maine sabko call kiya pr wo unke saath nhi thi.
Tabhi A.maami ka phone vibrate hua.
A.maami- bhabhi ussi ka phone aa raha hai aap hold p raho m usse baat krti hu.
Itna bol Alka n Naina ka phone hold p kr diya aur Mohini ka call pick kiya.
Alka- kaha hai tu kitni baar call kiya tujhe phone q nhi uthati ek baar ...
Mohini(papa)-bhabhi saant ho jao Mohini thik hai.
Alka- hello kon bol raha hai kon ho aap aur meri bacchi kaha hai.
Papa- Bhabhi main Deep hu aapko ek address bhej raha hu wahi aa jao Mohini thik hai aur hamare yaha hai.
Alka-D..DEEP tum Deep bol rahe ho.
Papa- haa aur baaki baate baad m phle aap iss address p aa jao.
Alka- thik hai.
Papa ne unko address bej diya.
wo address dekhne k baad Naina s.
Alka-(khus ho)bhabhi hello bhabhi.
Naina- pata chala kaha hai wo Mohini aaj mujhe maat rokna aaj to usse main..
Alka- Bhabhi aap sunno gi k usne kya kiya to aap meri beti k gaal chum logi.
Naina- Aisa kya kr diya usne aur thik to hai na wo.
Alka- Bhabhi wo Deep k paas hai.
Naina-kon Deep kahi usne...kya kaha Deep pr wo to...tu thik to haina Alka tu wahi ruk main aati hu tere pass.
Alka- Bhabhi Deep ka phone aaya tha aap iss address p pahucho main bhi nikal rahi hu.
Itna bol Alka n call cut kr diya aur usko address bhej diya.

Wahi ghar2 m ab Mohini ji hosh m thi aur kisi mujrim ki tarah sabhi k saamne khadi thi. Wo abtak sabhi s mill chuki thi pr ab daant khane wali thi.
Mom- Mohini singh kal raat aapne kitni pi rakhi thi aapko pata hai.
Mohini bas naa m sar hilla deti hai.
P.maasi- Isse to main ek baat bata tujhe jara bhi fikar nahi hui apne Maa ki wo kb s tujhe phone kr rahi thi pata hai kitna pareshan thi wo.
Mohini - Sorry wo to main aap savhi k naa milne ki wajah s thodi stressed ho gayi thi to.
A.bua- Hain! Stressed ho gayi thi to kya Sarab ki tanker pi jaogi akal hai ki nhi tujhme.
D.bua- Tum to bahut badi bewakuf ho agar koi tumhare saath kuch kr deta nashe m to.
Mohini(roote hue)- Sorry aage s nhi karungi kabhi.
Maa usse gale laga chup karate hue
Maa- Dekho beta roote nahi hum sab aapke safty k liye hi to bol rahe hai na agar aapka bhai waha nhi hota to.
Chalo ab chup ho jao aapki Mom aati hi hongi.
Itne m Alka ki entry hui aur Naina bhi thi saath hi the Kirti aur Preety bhi.
Saare log ek dusre s milte hai pr kuch the jo khush nhi the unke aane s jaise m Annu maasi aur P.maasi.
Jab sabhi mil liye ek dusre s tab.
A.massi-(Mammi s)Ab aapki beti sahi salamat hai isse le ke chale jaiye.
D.bua- Annu ye kya bol rahi ho tum.
A.maasi- kya bol rahi hu main jaane do in logo ko yaha s ye yaha kya krenge.
Maa- kya hua didi aap aise achank s q bol rahi ho.
P.maasi- naatak mat kr saifali tu bhi janti hai didi q bol rahi hai aisa kya tu bhul gayi k inhi dono bhabhiyon n naa jaane kitni baar tujhe kya kuch nhi bola tha.
Maa- Didi dekh kr to bolo bachiya h yaha unki.
A.maasi- acha hai ye sabhi bhi to sunne apni maa k kartut inhe bhi to pata chale.
Dono Mamiyon ki aankhen bhar aayi thi ye sun unhe bhi yaad aane lage wo saari kadwi baate jo undono n kabhi Maa s bola tha aur fir unhe apni betiyon k baare m yaad aaya kaise Mohini ek no ki piyakaad bani baithi hai, Kirti bhi depresion ka shikar hai aur Preety wo to kisi s baat hi nhi karti kuch bhi nhi bolti wo bas chup chap khud m khoyi hui.

P.maasi- Aaj to aap dono yaha aa gaye ho wo bhi sirf Mohini k wajah s aage s kabhi iss jagah mat aana. Ab jao yaha s.
Dono ne hi Maa k pair pakad liye.
Alka- Maaf kr do hame hum aaj tk unn papon ki saja bhugat rahe hai sayad tum nahi janti k hamari bachiya kaisi ho gayi hai sayad ye unhi papo ki saza hai.
Naina- Saifali humne jo kuch bhi tumhare saath kiya ya tumhe kaha wo sasur ji aur sasu maa k baaton m aa k kiya tha pr ab hum badal gaye hai.
Fir dono n jo Nana ji k ghar m hua tha inn sabhi ko bataya.
Maa - aap dono pagal ho kya koi apni bachiyon k samne aisa krta hai. Didi aap log bhi na.
Mom- Didi jb Dilawar Singh n mujhe maarne k liye aadmi bheje the uss waqt Alka bhabhi n hi mujhe bataya thauske bare mai. Inhe maaf kr dete hai.
A.maasi- Ha q nhi pahle inhe maaf kr dete hai fir Maa ko maaf kr denge uske baad Papa ko bhi hai na aur phir saare jan mil ke rahenge yahi chahti ho na tum to sun lo mere rahte aisa kuch nahi ho sakta Tum bhul sakti ho inn logo n tumhare aur saifali k saath kya kiya hai main nhi.
p.maasi- main bhi nhi bhul sakti wo sab aur kisi ko bhi maaf nhi kr skti main.
Mom- main sabki baate nhi kr rahi main to bas inhi logo ki baat kr rahi hu manna luch galtiyan indono n bhi ki hai pr in bachiyon ko dekho kya inhe hak nhi apni bua k saath rahe apne dono bhaiyon k saath rahe aap hi batao.
Main- A.maasi,P.maasi maan jao na yaar aur maafi dena acha hota hai.Ab jo ho gaya wo wapas yo nahi ho sakta na to q na sab bhul ek nayi shuruat karte hai na.
Maa- sahi kaha tune beta.
A.maasi- Bilkul nhi aisa kuch nhi hoga inhe jaane ko bolo.
Sabhi n badi mehnat s A.maasi aur p.maasi ko manaya.

Chaliye ab ye jaante hai ki mere ander ye chamatkari badlaw kaise aa gaya.
Jab main dhyan m baitha tha apne ander R.boom aur O.book ki saktiyon ko dhundne.
{wo thi to mere paas hi par unki puri shaktiyan mere paas nhi thi}
Kuch hi der m wo mujhe mil gayi aur fir jo maine dekha mere wo ek gaon ka drisya tha.
Actually m hua ye k O.book k paas ek shakti thi jo mere aaspaas k achi ya buri shaktiyon k baare m mujhe bata deti thi wahi R.book k paas meri identity yani shaktiya chipane ki kabiliyat thi.
Haa to gaon ka naam tha Madavpur aur yaha ek ajeeb shakti ka waas tha jise log Manjulika kahte the iski bhi ek kahani thi.
Manjulika ek badi hi sunder stree thi. wo karib 400 saal pahle iss gaon m aayi thi apne pati k saath. Uska pati usse bahut pyar krta tha. kahte hai ki wo kisi tapaswi ki beti thi aur usme bhi kuch shidhiyan thi. Iss gaon m kuch logo ko uske badan ki khubsurati ko dekh raha nhi gaya aur ek din wo log uske ghar m ghus gaye aur uske pati ki uske saamne hi hatya kr di aur phir uska balatkar kiya tab tk kiya jab tak wo maari nhi. Lagbhag pure gaon ko pata tha k ye sab kin logo n kiya hai pr kisi ne bhius waqt k Raja k saamne kuch nhi bola.
Uss waqt wo pait s thi. jab iss ghatna ka pata uss tapasvi yaani Manjulika k pita ko chala krodh m aa unhone pure Madhavpur ko hi sraap de dala ki jb tk ye pura gaon aur yaha k washinde jinda hai tab tak meri beti ka sharir yaha k logo ko maarti rahegi wo sharir kabhi nast nhi hogi itna bol us tapaswi ne bhi apni beti k sharir k paas hi apne praan tyag diye . Fir kya tha roj bahut saare log marte rahe. Jab logo ko pata chala iss shraap k baare m to ye puri baat waha k raja ko batayi gayi sath m un logo k baare m bhi jinhone Manjulika ko maara tha.
Raja n aadesh diya unko pakadne ka aur unko ek badi hi kaufnaak maut di gayi pr ab usse kya hona tha. Manjulika ka sarir to waise hi sabko maarta rahne wala tha. Din bit rahe the aur gaon k log marte rahe.Kuch logo n apne pariwar sahit gaon chodne ki kosis ki pr wo saare gaon k caupal p mare hue milte the.
Sabhi chintit ho gaye aur pahuch gaye Raja k paas. Unhi dino ek sadhu ghumte hue pahuch gaye uss gaon m wo bhi bheed k saath Raj darbar pahuch gaye. Logo dwara batayi gayi kahani sun unhe unpe pahle to gussa aaya fir unki halat dekh datlya bhi aaya wo bich darbar m khade ho bole.
Sadhu- he Rajan maine iss gaon ki dadha k baare m sunna or mujhe bahut burra laga isse sun agar aagya ho to main iske kuch upaye bata sakta hu.

Raja- He Sadhu Maharaj kripya apna parichay de.
Sadhu- Main Rishi Pisap ka putra Rishi Dembha hu mere pita ne mujhe icha mrityu ka wardan aur apni saari shiksha pradan ki hai aur main unhi ka prayog kr iss gaon ko mukt krna chahta hu agar aapki aagya ho to.
Raja- He Rishi aapko agya mangne ki awasyakta nhi hai aap to aadesh de. Main iss nagar ka raja aapkse vinti krta hu kripya iss jagah ko mukt kr de.
Sadhu unki baad sun muskuraya aur bola.
Sadhu- Raajan kuch waqt de mujhe main apni puja s uss sraap ka tood pata krta hu.

Sadhu ye bol chala gaya ussi jagah jaha pahle Manulika ki maut hui thi fir uske pita n apne praan tyaage the.
Kuch din wahi baith puja paath karne k baad unhe Manjulika, uske pita aur uske pati ki aatma s mulakat hui.
Sadhu- he Manjulika tumhare gunehgaaron ko sazza mil chuki hai ab tum bhi saant ho jao aur yamlok ki oor prasthan karo.
Manjulika- Hey Rishi Dimbha mera nyay to khud yamdev kar chuke hai main, mere pati mera beta sab ka nyay ho chuka hai.
Sadhu-prantu ye kaise sambhav hai abhi bhi tumhara sharir issi lok main hai aur tum kah rahi ho tumhara nyay ho chuka hai aur tumhara to koi beta nhi tha.
Tapasvi- He Rishi Dimbha wo mere sraap k kaaran hai waha aur wo waise hi rahega.
Sadhu- He tapaswi tumhari Beti k sabhi dooshi ko maut mill chuki hai ab kripya mujhe uss sraap ka tod bataye.
Tapaswi- nhi Rishi abhi nhi abhi to bahut waqt hai is sab m bahut saare ghunagar abhi bhi jivit hai ye vo gunehgar hai jinka gunah tha chupi saadh lena meri beti ko nyay na dilana aur jab tak wo jivit hai ye sab chalta rahega aur unki maut k baad bhi.
Sadhu- he tapaswi unhe apni bhul gyat ho chuki hai aur wo prastachap bhi kar rahe hai. kripya ab unhe iss sraap s mukt kraye.
Tapaswi- Sayad tumhe gyaat nhi Manjulika ka jo beta aane wala tha wo kon tha wo varso s iss dharti p aane ki pratiksha kr rha tha iss dharti ko paap s mukt krane k liye pr kuch logo ki wajah s ye ho na saka parantu ab jb iss gaon k logo ko glani ho hi gayi hai to main tumhe iska upay bhi bataunga. Yaha ka Raja bada hi dayaalu hai ussi k kul m fir s meri beti ka janm hoga uski shadi mere damad s hi hogi uss janam m bhi aur fir meri beti hi iss gaon ko mukt karegi. Jab meri beti apne purane sharir ko chuegi usse sab gyaat ho jayega aur wo sharir bhi nast ho jaayegi. Meri beti hi banegi uss bache ki maa jo iss duniya ko paap mukt krnw wala hai iss janm m na sahi to agle janam m hi. Uske ander bhi kuch shaktiyan hogi jo usse haar burayi s bachayegi har khatre s bachayegi.
Sadhu- he tapaswi uss subh gadi m abhi kitna vilambh hoga.
Tapaswi-He Rishi jab fir s wohi grah dasha wapas aayegi jo meri putri k janm k waqt thi ussi waqt iska punah janm hoga aur aapko sab pata chal jayega.
Sadhu(chintit ho)-parantu issme to bahut waqt lagega.
Tapaswi- jao aur uss sharir p (ek kaala dhaga de) ye dhaga baand dena wo soo jayegi din k ujale m kabhi nhi uthegi pr bas uss waqt tk jb tk meri beti ka punr janm nhi ho jata. fir dhire dhire uski shaktiyan wapas aati rahegi aur wo balwan hoti rahegi jab tk iss sharir ko wo chu na le.
Itna bol 4ro aatmayen gayab ho gayi aur ye baat shadu n
ye baat Raja ko batayi aur ye bhi bola k shaam hote hi koi bhi ghar s na nikle.
Pura parivar ek saath gaon s bahar na nikle.

ye drisya khatam hote hi mujhe meri Nani dikhi jinke goad m 2 ladkiya thi badi hi pyari uske baad dikhe mujhe meri Dadi jo ek ladke ko goad m liye khade the.
Fir Mere dimag m Mere Maa Papa ki tasweer aayi jo mujhe apni goad m liye muskura rahe the.
Main- (O.book s) kya ye wahi hai..
O.book- haa saurya ye wahi hai jo tum soch rahe ho aur ab tumhe hi apni Maa dwara uss Gaon ko mukt karana hai jitni jaldi ho sake. wo pura gaon shadiyon s tumhari maa ki raah dekh rahi hai.
Main- thik hai pr main apne Nana aur Dada ko sabak shikhana chahta hu.
O.book- kya ye un gaon walo ki jindgi s bhi jyada jaruri hai.
Main- nhi
O.book- Pahle jao uss gaon ko mukt karo uske baad jaise icha ho waise unhe sabak shikhana.
Main- To kya abhi hi chala jaun Maa ko lekar.
Wo- Saurya wo grah nakshatra jo iss kaam k liye nirdharit hue the usse aane m abhi kuch din shesh hai tb tk tum apbe Dada & Nana ko sabak shikhsne k liye taiyaari kr sakte ho.
Main- Tum kya krti agar tun meri jagah hoti to.
O.book- Main unhe akela kr deti jaise unhone tumhari Maa k saath kiya tha fir unko tadpati sayad unke tadap dekh mere dil ko thodi khushi milti.
Main- thanks yaar tum ladkiyan idea bada acha deti ho badla lene ka.
O.book- Maine koi idea nhi diya.
Itne m mera dhyan tut gaya.

Present:-
Plan mujhe mil gaya tha mera maksad tha un dono ko hi akela kr dena aur uske liye ek mahora tha mere paas Mohini jisse main Alka Mami ko unse alag kr sakta tha pr meri kismat go dekho ek pr ek free Naina Mami bhi aa gayi mere paas.Maine aisa bhi nhi socha tha k sabhi ko uhi maaf kr dunga jaise Nani aur Dadi ya baakiyon ko hi Main unhe har roj wo sab yaad dilana chahta tha jo un sabhi n meri Maa k sath kiya tha har din har pal aur uske liye pahle unke karib jaana tha.

Sabhi k manane pr Dono mausiyon n unhe maaf kr diya.

Main- Ab maami aur bahne bhi aa gaye hai to q na..
A.maasi- nhi bilkul bhi nhi wo dono idher kabhi nhi aayenge haa agar dono bhabhiyon ka maan ho to wo hamse milti rah sakti hai pr wo dono nhi.
Maa- Didi plz.
Alka- Nhi Saifali Annu sahi kah rahi hai arre wo log to apni Maa k kahne p bhi tumhe dhudna nhi chahte the chodo unhe.
Maa-pr bhabhi.
P.maasi- Dekh ab jyada ho raha hai.
Maa chup ho gayi.
Main- pr Nani ko to idhar laa sakte hai na unki dekh bhal bhi ho jayegi.
D.bua- haa ye sahi hoga maana wo Maa hone ka farz bhul gayi pr kya tum log bhi beti hone ka fraz bhul jaogi.
C.nani- Ha didi ko bulla lo na idher main bhi unki sewa.
A.Maasi- thik hai bulla lo unhe.
Fir kya tha shaam hote hote Nani aa gayi hamare ghar m unko ghar1 m shift kiya gaya tha.
Pata nhi kaise pr Maa aur Mom k dwara unko chunne pr hi unke sarir m kuch pratikriya ho rahi thi sayad wo filmon m dikhate hai na Pyar ki takat ussi ki wajah s.
Dono Mamiyon ko wapas unke Maayke bhej diya gaya pr meri bahno ko ghar2 m shift krwa diya gaya iss ummed s k wo kuch thik ho jaye Mohini ki sarab chuut jaye Kirti ki depression aur preety ki chuppi aur iska jimma baaki k sarron p de diya gaya.

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Next update m dekhe k kaise Dada ji aur dono chacha ko Bisambhar ji ghar s nikalte hai aur unhe Mashiha yaani Maa jo ki unke Ghar ki kulvadhu thi unhi k saath wapas lautne ko kaha jata hai fir kaise wo aur Nanaji mill kr hamtk pahuchte hai.

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Agar aapko ek superpower maangne ki icha di jaye to aap kya mangoge?
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Killerpanditji(pandit) · Aug 2, 2020

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UPDATE - 93

Ab tak

Dristi unn pancho ko kuch dikha rahi thi wahi main Earth pe aa gaya tha aur aage ke baare mein soch raha thaaur Kappa se discuss kar raha tha..

Aage

Chaliye pahle hum jinlok chalte hai jaha ab tak wo sabhi sab kuch dekh cukke the aur ab bas sabhi ke aankho mein aashu the. Unko samjh mein nahi aa raha tha kaise wo ek dusre ke khilaf ho gayi thi...

Varsha aur Alex jo waha par the wo unn sabhi ko shant karwate hai. Wo paancho badi muskil se shant hoti hai par shant hote hi unn sab ke chahro pe kuch tha jisko samajhna muskil tha.

Wo paancho hi ek dusre ki oor dekhti hai aur fir bas pancho waha se gayab ho jaati hai...

Ab pata nahi kya chal raha hai inke dimmag mein..

Alex aur Varsha bhi Dristi ko lekar wapas chale jaate hai..

Wahi Main jo Earth pe ta abhi RAW ke diye hue flat pe waha par wo pancho hi tapak padti hai..

Shilpa- Hame aur shakti chahiye..

Main- Pahle jo hai usko control karna sheekho...tum sabse jyada takatwaar ho par apni takat pe control nahi hai tumhara...Paridhi tum tum ab Rani Pari ho apni takat ko jaano aur uspe kaabu karo aur tum Mohini bahut takat aa gayi hai tumhare pass hame kal Vetallok ko jitna hai aur tumhe waha ki rani banana hai. ...

Jab main ye sab bol raha tha wo saare ekdum se shocked the muh kulla tha unka..

Puja- Didi inko kya hua y...

Shilpa- Pata nahi ye aise baatein kaise kar rahe...

Main- main serious hu abhi aur tum sab ko jo bola hai wo karna hoga ok. Ye tum sab ke liye hi hai...

Priya- hmm pata hai hame bas ye dekh rahe ki Dristi ki baatein sach thi..

Main- Kya dikhaya usne tum logo ko...

Puja-Hum sab ka milna aapki shadi Shilpa didi se phir paridhi didi se shadi fir hum dono se shadi sab kuch dikhaya usne ye bhi ki hum apne powers ko control nahi karne lage the aur bhi bahut kuch...

Main- Itna pahle se dikhaya usne tabhi to itna time laga..Accha chalo isko chodo aur meri baat sunno ab tum sab ko jo bhi bola hai karna shuru kardo...

Shilpa- Hmm thik hai.

Main- Chalo ab sabhi niklo apne apne ghar aur haa Mohini taiyaar rahna kal ke liye...

Priya- Hammme bhaga rahe ho..

Main- Arre nahi wo to kal ki taiyaari karni hai naa tum sabko bas issi liye aur waise bhi mujhe kisi ke pass jaana hai..

Sabse thoda der aur baat kiya fir sabhi chale gaye...

Wahi main nikal gaya waha se kisi ke pass jaane ke liye....

Raat ka waqt tha main sheeda uske room mein pahucha aur fir waha par apna kaam kiya aur nikal gaya waha se uske baad kisi aur ghar mein gaya waha bhi wahi kiya aur nikal gaya..

Waha se aa pahucha wapas RAW ke diye hue jagah pe....

Kappa- Chalo unn dono ka bhi kam kar diya ab bas wait karna hai thoda...

Main- Hmm wahi karna hai bas...Chalo ab baaki kal dekhte hai Vetallok ke safar pe..

Aur issi ke saath main soo gaya..

Next morning main utha jaldi aur dhyaan mein baith gaya... Karib subah ke 9 baje tak main taiyaar tha aur thik uske 15 minute baad Wo pancho aa gayi thi mere pass...

Main- To ready ho naa chalne ke liyeMohini tum ready ho naa..

Mohini- Haa main ready hu

Aur usne fir apni aankhe band ki aur ham sab ko usko chune ke liye bola...thode hi der mein hum sab ki aankhen khud band hui aur agle hi pal hum Vetallok mein the...

Main- Arre mujhe kahti main Portal khol deta..

Mohini- Nahi mujhe apni power check karni thi bas...

Main- Thik hai chalo ab ready to ho naa.

Mohini- Hmm ready...

Main- (bakki charon se.) Hame bas rasta banana hai iske liye aur kuch nahi...Vetalraj se ye khud ladegi...

Sabhi - ok

Fir kya tha hum aage badhene lage...aur hame log milne lage..Yaha bhi sabhi tarah ke log the acche burre har tarah ke..Jo hampe hamla karne aata uspe hm humla karte aur dekhte hi dekhte hum pahuch gaye mahel ki orr itne der mein naa jaane kitne hi logo se hamara saamna hua tha par...usnme se kisi mein bhi itna dum nahi tha ki meri Raniyon ko chu bhi sake...

Kuch to tha aaj unn pancho mein jiski wajah se aisa ho raha tha ab pata nahi kya...matlab ab ye Vetal log itne kamzor to nahi ho sakte ki wo......

Hum aage badhte gaye aur fir hamari nazar padi Vetallok ke Raja Vetalraj ki taraf....Wo darra hua tha..

Ajeeb hai naa wo bhala kyun dara hua tha...humse dara hua ho...saayad yaa pata nahi..

Mohini- Kaise hai Vetalraj..

Vetalraj- Tum mujhe maarne aaye ho naa jaldi se khatam karo mujhe aur niklo yaha se...

Ye baat sunke bada ajeeb laga mujhe matlab isko pata kaise chala aur maan lo usko kisi tarah pata chal bhi gaya ho to isne koi upay kyun nahi dhundha hume rokne ke liye...

Kappa- Saurya kuch to gadbad hai yaha...

Main- Mujhe bhi lag raha hai...par kya wo pata nahi hai..

Main(bakki sab se)- Sab ruk jao koi uspe hamla nahi karega...

Sabhi meri oor dekhne lage..

Vetalraj- Agar marna hai to jaldi maaro warna niklo yaha se..

Main- Ye kkuch samajh nahi aa raha mujhe....tumhari baatein badi ajeeb hai...

Vetalraj- Main kah raha hu naa jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo aur niklo yaha se...

Priya- ab teri ye iccha to puri karni hi hogi...Mohini maar isko jaldi bada tadap raha hai naa.

Mohini meri oor dekhti hai par main to khud hi confuse hua pada tha iss Vetalraj ke aise kahne se....Main kya bolta usko...

Vetalraj ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske haath mein uski talwar aa gayi..

Vetalraj- Mohini agar tunne mujhe mara to pura Vetallok tera hoga aur agar nahi mara to ye lok mere saath hi khatam ho jaayega...

Itna bol usne talwar ko apni oor laga liya..

Mohini ne jaise hi ye deka wo ek baar meri oor dekhti ai aur jab usko main abhi tak confuse hi dikhta hu to wo apna haath aage karti hai aur uske haath mein talwar aa jaati hai aur wo seedha jaa kar Vetalraj ke upar war kar deti hai .

Ye bahut hi jaldi hua tha main ekdum se shocked tha...wahi Vetalraj nicche pada hua tha...usne Mohini ko apni oor bulaya aur Mohini chali bhi gayi...

Vetalraj- Aaj se tum iss Vetallok ki Rani ho baccha lo isko warna sab khatam ho jaayega..wo wapas aa chuka hai..

Bas itna bola aur apna mukut Mohini ke sar pe rakh kar wo mar gaya...

Hum sab ye dekh kar aur sun kar hairaan the..

Kappa- Saayad wo aa raha hai usko pata chal gaya hai time period collapse hone kaa ab hame sawdhan rahna hoga...

Mohini-(chilla kar) Shainikon yaha aao aur inka acche se antim sanskar karo..

Wahi uske baad do log aaye aur Vetalraj ki body le gaye waha se..

Mohini- Tum sab mere saaath chalo ab ujhe kuch check karna hai....yaad rahe agar main kuch ajeeb saa karu to ussi waqt maar dena mujhe....

Main- Ye kya ho raha hai...tum kya karne wali ho..

Mohini- kuch aisa jo jaruri hai ab kyunki agar mera shaq sahi hai to bahut badi gadbad honi hai yaha...

Hum sab bolte rahe par wo sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi thi aur fir hum bhi picche chale gaye uskke...

Wo ek bade se room ki oor gayi pata nahi waha kya tha par waha jaane se hi dil mein ek ajeeb si halchal ho rahi thi mere..

Kappa- control mein rakho khud ko

Main- Patta nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe..

Mohini- Tum sab waha khade ho jaao..

Hum sab khade ho gaye...

Mohini ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske hath mein ek kalla hira aaa gay usne wo hirra apne taj pe lagaya jiske baad wo hawa mein udhne lagi....

Hum uske pass jaane ko hue....

Mohini- Wahi rahna main thik hu...

Hum wahi rahe...

Mohini ko udte hue dekhte ajeeb tha ye mujhe aisa lag raha tha koi mujhse mera kuch cheen raha hai....pata nahi kya hua mujhe main bhi dhyaan mein baith gaya waha par aur Mohini ke upar dhyaan kendrit karne laga aisa lag raha tha koi usko usse hi alag kar raha hai...

maine jab dhyaan se dekha to uss hirre se kuch nikal raha tha...

Wo ghere jaa raha tha Mohini ko...ye mujhe galat lag rahha tha meri aankhen khuli aur main Mohini ke pass gaya aur uss hirre ko jhat se usse alag kiya jiske baad wo behosh ho gayi....Wahi wo Hirra gayab ho gaya tha.

Maine usko goad mein uthaya aur usko wahi mahel ke ek kamre mein le gaya jaha usko bed pe lita diya...baaki saare bhi mere picche aa gaye the..

Main- Paridhi isko thik karo jaldi se...

Paridhi- haa koshish karti hu...

Paridhi ne apni chadi nikali aur Mohini ke sar ke pass ghumane lagi..

Shilpa bhi apni aankhe band kar ke kuch karne lagi wahi Puja aur Priya bhi..

Karib aadhe ghante baad Mohini ki aankhen khuli...wo darri hui thi..

Main- Kya hua tha Mohini batao...

Mohini- Wo wo yaha aa raha tha wo heera rasta tha uska usko nast karo agar wo yaha aa pahucha to sab khatam ho jaayega abhi tak wo jaaga nahi hai par jaagne hi wala hai aur usko raasta chahiye...wo heera nast karo usko...

Wo aise hi bolti rahi main kuch jyada to samjh nahi paaya uski baaton se issliye usko aaram kaarne ka bol kar uss Heere ki talash mein nikal pada...abhi main waha ussi room mein wapas gaya hi tha

Main waha har jagah wo heera dhundh raha tha par wo nahi milla...

Kappa- wo jaa chuka hai Saurya ab koi faiyda nahi hai...ab bas taiyaari karo uske aane ki usse samna karne ki..

Main- Par abhi koi taiyaar nahi hai yaha naa to Margret aur baaki sab yaha aaye hai...aur Pradeep usko bhi waqt lagega kuch....Jwala ka bhi pata nahi hai abhi..

Kappa- Jo karna hai jaldi karna hoga kyunki wo har tarah se koshish karega jaldi aane ki..

Main- Inn sab mein waqt lagega Kappa tum bhi jaante ho abhi waqt saamna karne ka nahi balki usko rokne kaa hai koi upay dhundho jisse wo iss waqt main naa aa sake aur hame waqt mil jaaye...

Kappa - Ye bhi tumhe hi karna hoga Saurya tum Alex se baat karo yaa kisi aur se...

Main - Thik hai main dekhta hu ye sab...

Main waha se wapas sabhi ke pass gaya...

main- Hame chalna hoga yaha se...Mohini tum ab thik ho naa..

Mohini- Haa Saurya main thik hu uss waqt pata nahi...

Main- Koi baat nahi....Chalo ab yaha se nikalte hai tum sab wapas jao Earth pe...

Shilpa- Tum nahi aa rahe...

Main- Main aaunga par ahi nahi abhi tum sab waha jaao aur haa ek baat aur waha jaa kar naa sabhi apne apne ghar mein Bade dada aur Bade nana ka jikar karna saath hi Shrapit gaon ki bhi..

Kappa- Tu pagal hai kya..

Main- Inka dhyaan bhatkana jaruri hai Kappa inko abhi wahi lage rahne do iss mamle ko main khud samjh lu fir inko bataunga..

Kappa- Thik hai..

Maine fir unn sab ko bataya ki kya kuch karna hai...

Bade dada aur gaon ke baare mein unn sab ko Dristi ne batla diya tha...

Bas fir kya tha maine portal khola sabhi Earth pe aur apne apne jagah pe....wahi main chala gaya Niharika ke planet pe waha pahucha to Alex Dristi ke saath khel raha tha saath hi Kaal sarp bhi tha unke saath...

Maine Kaal sarp ko bulaya usko sab kuch bataya to usne bola ki agar usko yaha aane se rokna hai to Jwala ko lana hoga...

Main- Matlab Alex aur Varsha ko batana hga..

Kaal sarp- Haa

Main - Thik hai tum unse baat karo iss baare mein main jarra Rani Pari se bhi puch aaun iss baare mein..

Waha se main nikal gay aur shidha pahuch gaya Parilok main jaha Pihu se sabse pahle mulakat hui usse kuch der baaat ki maine aur fir Rani Pari ke room mein chala aaya wo abhi kamjoor thi to bahar nahi aati ythi..

Main- Rani pari...

Rani pari- Arre Saurya beta aao aao main to kab se tumse milna chahti thi par...

Main - Maaf kijiyega par abhi inn sab mein waqt jaaza naa kar hum mudde par aate hai...Kya hum kisi ko time travel karne se rok sakte hai..

Rani pari ne mujhe pahle to acche se dekha uske baad apni aankhen band ki aur thodi der mein unke haath mein ek kitab aa gayi thi...Unhone wo kitab mujhe de diya...

Main- ye kya hai..

Rani pari- Kitab hai tumhari hi hai par tumhe milli nahi thi abhi tak isko padho sab samjh jaaoge...

Main- Meri hai se kya matlab..

Rani pari - Khass tumhare liye likhi gayi hai ye iss kitab ko dhyan se padhna aaram se koi jaldbazzi nahi samjhe...

Main- waqt ki hi to kammi hai...

Rani pari( Haste hue)- Wahi to khatam karni hai naa..isko padhna shuru karo sab samajh jaaoge..

Main-thik hai..

Itna bol waha se kitab lekar chala gaya..

Earth pe aaya to sham ho rahi thi...

Abhi aaya hi tha aur mera phone bajne laga..

Maine dekha phone mom ka tha maine unse baat ki unhone kaha ki wo jagah safe hai unpe bharosha kar sakte saath mein ye bhi kaha ki waha meri choti maasi ke alawa aur bhi log aa rahe hai jaise meri badi bua meri badi maasi ye sab...

Mom- Beta abhi main inhe tere baare mein batane ka soch rahi hu...

Main- Mom please thoda aur ruk jao maine kuch socha hai please please..

Mom- Haa bata kya socha hai..

Main- aapko khud pata chal jaayega waise badi maasi kab aa rahi hai..

Mom- Wo parso tak aa jaayegi pata hai abhi unko hamare yaha hone ka pata chala naa to kitna bawal hua tha..arre kya bataun....

Fir MOm ne mujhe wo saare emotional kisse sunaye jo waha hue the aur bhi bahut kuch aur issi tarah phone pe baaat karte hue hi sham se raat ho gayi maine kitab ko palat ke bhi nahi dekha tha...

Mom ne call cut kiya aur main jaldi se pahuch gaya RAW ke diye hue flat par..waha jaa kar abhi baitha hi tha ke dimmag mein kuch aaya aur maine kitab ko side kiya aur dhyaan mein baith gaya.....

Aaj ke liye itna hi bahut kuch hua hai iss update mein autr hum dhere dhere badh rahe hai iss part ke annt ki oor pahle hi bata deta hu annt Iss time period ke Maarcuss ke aant se hogi saaath hi hamare nayye villan ke samne aane se ye issliye likh raha ki koi ye naa kahe ending nahi sochi hai saath hi kuch suggetions ke liye agar aap chahte ho ki ending change ki jaaye to jarur baataiye waise change hone wali nahi hai maine soch rakha hai...haa par unn suggetions se jo agla part hoga usme madad ho jaayegi meri...Ab yaha Readers ye hi kahenge Writer to comments dekhta bhinahi hai to aisa nahi hai doston aap sab ke comments main dekhunga aur reply bhi karunga....To bane rahiye...

Ek baaar sabhi Readers ko dil se shukriya kahna cahunga saath bane rahne ke liye..

Agle update mein dekhte hai ye naya kitab kya hai aur saath hi Jwala ko laane ki taiyaari aur Bansoa se sabhi shathiyon ka bhi aana......

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Chinturocky said:
Ristrcted bhai kya hua sab kuchh Theek thak to hai na? Update na sahi aakar hi hello hi ker diya karo.

Arre bhai karta hu yaar hi hello waise bahut time se reply naa diya readers ko to wahi soch raha tha kaha se shuru karu reply karna to aapse hi shuru karte hai...Story padhiye aur bas bane rahiye kuch suggetions ki baat bhi kari hai bataiyega jarur

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Vickey1211 said:
waiting

posted bro

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Killerpanditji(pandit) said:
Waiting

posted bro

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GuptAbhishek said:
Flying power

Flying power :hmm2:

kyun bhai aapko bhi hamesha kahi jaane mein der hoti hai kya meri tarah issliye udd kar jana chahte ho

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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

nahi aise hi sahi hai

haa (to comment kr mujhe advice d)

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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds