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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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UPDATE - 96

Ab tak

Saurya ko jab kappa ne yaad dilaya ki usko Sabhi ko manana bhi hai to wo unn sab ka pata lagane laga aur pata milla Niharika ke planet ka...

Ab aage

Main- Yaar ye saare Niharika ke planet pe kya karne gaye hai...

Kappa- Waha koi kaam hoga unko yaa Niharika aur baaki sab se milne gaye honge....

Main- Haa milne hi gaye honge unko waha kya kaam ho sakta hai...chalo hum bhi chalte hai waha unko manna lunga main...

Kappa- Haa chalo...

Saurya ne portal khola aur bas pahuch gaye Niharika ke planet pe...

Sham ka waqt tha shadi raat ko honi thi Varsha aur Alex ki....par taiyaariyan abhi se hi chal rahi thi...aur sabse jyadaa busy the hamare kaal sarp usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha phir bhi laga pada tha wo...

Main waha pahucha aur jab ye sab hote dekha to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya...

Main kaal sarp ke pass gaya kyunki ek wahi to milla tha mujhe....

Main- Kya ho raha hai yaha...ye taiyaariyan...

Kaal sarp- Dekho majak to karo mat tum main bahut busy hu kisi aur ke paas jao majak karne....kya ho raha hai yaha...jaise isko pata hi nahi kuch...

Aise hi badbadate hue wo chala gaya aur main usko dekhta raha...

Main- Yaar ye ho kya raha hai aur Ye kyun itna kaam kar raha hai....

Kappa- Lagta hai koi function hona hai yaha...dekho ussi ki taiyaariyan lagti hai ye....

Main- Haa aur sayad ussi liye wo sab yaha honge...par mujhe kyun nahi bullaya kisine....

Kappa- Arre tujhe chod kam se kam mujhe to bulana chahiye tha....

Main- OOye tu mere ander hai agar tere ko bulate to mujhe bhi bulate...

Kappa- matlab kaaran tu hai ki mujhe bhi nahi bulaya yaha...

Main- Arre chup kar yaar aur chal dekhta hai kya ho raha hai yaha....

Kappa- Haa main bhi to dekhu tere saath hone ke kaaran kya kya miss kar raha hu main...

Main mahel ki oor badha...

Mahel pura sazza hua tha...mahel kya aisa lag raha tha pura planet hi sazza diya ho aaj...

Main mahel ke darwaje ke pass pahucha...

Sainik- Aap ander nahi jaa sakte....

Main- Kyun bhai kyun nahi jaa sakta....waise jaante ho naa tum main kon hu....

Sainik- Ji jaanta hu....

Main- Haa to jaane do mujhe ander mujhe kaam hai....

Sainik- Ji aaj iss mahel mein koi bhi purush nahi jaana chahiye aisa Rani ji(N.mom) ne kaha hai....

Main- Kya....par koi wajah bhi to hogi iski...

Sainik- Haa wajah hai aur wwo hai shadi ab isse jyada kuch bhi bata nahi paaunga main aapko...

Kappa- Yaar ye shadi kon kar raha hai yaha...Alexx to nahi...

Main- Arre wo kaha wo kar raha hota to mujhe bulata sabse pahle....

Kappa- To fir....

Main- To fir N.mom to karegi nahi bacchi Niharika...

Kappa- Haa to kya wo hi....

Main- Ye bahut galat kiya dost bolti thi aur shadi ka bataya bhi nahi....koi nahi main bhi usko surprise dunga...

Kappa- Kaisa surprise...

Main- dekhte jao....

Main(sianik se)- arre dost to humlog ke rahne kaa bhi koi prabandh hai yaa fir...

Sainik - Hai naa wo waha Kaal sarp ki guffa wahi rahna hai aaj sabhi purushon ko shadi tak...Dulha bhi wahi taiyaar ho raha hai....

Main- Chalo thik hai main bhi dekh leta hu kon hai dulha....

Sainik- Arre aap bhi kya majak karte hai wo to aapke saathi hai...

Main- Sathi...kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...

Sainik- Alex ji ki unhi ki to shadi hai Varsha ji se...

Main- Kyaaa Alex aur Varsha ki shadi hai....

Sainik- Haa

Main turant waha se binna kuch bole hi portal se sabhi ke pass pahuch gaya....

Waha pe sabhi the Alex , Henry, Pradeep , Baba aur bhi kuch log the....

Main- Waah...ye bahut accha hai dost ki shadi ho rahi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi....waaah..

Pradeep- Waise accha to ye bhi hai saari patniya ruthi hui hai aur janab ko khabar tak nahi.....waahh.

Main- Pradeep abhi wo baat nahi karni hai abhi baat ye hai ki mujhe kyun nahi bulaya...

Pradeep- Baat wahi hai Saurya aur tujhe naa bulane ka kaaran bhi wahi hai...

Main- Yaar par wo alag matter tha yaha alag matter hai naa aur main to unke pass jaane hi wala tha.....

Pradeep- Subhah se kya kar raha tha kal bola tha naa maine ki wo sab naaraz hai ek baar bhi gaya waha nahi naa.....

Main sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya kyunki uski baat bhi sahi thi...main apne plan karne mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki unpe dhyaan hi nahi diya....

Henry jo ye sab dekhe jaa raha tha usko ghanta samjh mein nahi aa raha tha baat kya hai...wo Alex se puchta hai kya baat hai....Alex bhi usko wo sab batata hai jitna usko pata tha....sunne ke baad wo kuch bolne ko hua par chup rah gaya...sayad mujhe Samrath samajh kar thoda jhijhak raha ho...

Main- Haa thik hai meri galti hai par ab kya karu main to unko hi manane aaya hu par Mahel mein jaana allowed nahi hai naa ....

Alex- Mahel mein kya karna hai tumhe....

Main- Mahel mein kya karna hai se kya matlab unse maafi mangni hai aur kya...

Pradeep- Haa to maaafi mangne ke liye unko mahel mein le jaaoge...

Main- Kya matlab....

Henry- wo sab waha bagiche mein hai uss bacchi ke saath khel rahe hai samrath...

Main- Arre Henry dost...tum bhi ho yaha thanks yaar...

Main usse galle lag gaya aur wo shocked khada raha ab main uske liye Samrath saurya tha aur main uske galle lagu ye shock ki baat to thi...

Main usse alag hua aur chal diya Bagiche ki oor...

Pradeep - Manna ke aana unsab ko warna aana hi mat...

Main- Ha ha thik hai...

Main waha se shidha chala gaya Bagiche mein jaha mere jaate hi Dristi meri goad mein aa gayi...

Main usko goad mein liye aage badhne laga to wahi pe puri mahila mandali dikhayi di....Shilpa and team to thi hi saaath hi main Niharika,Kiran aur Rita bhi thi....

Kiran- Loo aagaya manane tum sab ko ye aalsi....

Niharika- Itna bhi aalsi insan hota hai bhala....

Shilpa- Dristi beta yaha aao hamare paas...

Dristi udti hui Puja ki goad mein chali gayi....

Aur uske jaate hi Shilpa, Paridhi, Puja , Priya aur Mohini paacho hi waha se jaane lage...

Main- Arre sunno to main maafi mangne aaya hu...

Par majal ho ek ke bhi paun thode der ke liye bhi thahre ho wo to mujhe aur meri baat ko aise ignore kar ke gayi jaise main hu hi nahi waha....

Wo sab waha se chali gayi....

Niharika- Aurr Alsi Samrath...pahle nahi aa sakte the...

Main- Arre yaar main kuch mantron ki practice kar raha tha naa bas ussi liye....

Main abhi kuch aur bolta usse pahle Margret aayi...

Margret- Rani ji bulla rahi hai tum sab ko chalo jaldi...

Margret ne bhi abhi mujhe nahi pahchana sayad as dost waise to Samrath ki tarah jaanti hi hogi wo....

Main - Arre koi kuch bata to do kaise manaun unko....

Kiran- koi surprise socho kuch bada jisse khush ho jaaye ye sab...

Main- Hmm thik hai main sochta hu kuch...

Wo sab bhi chali gayi....

Main- Yaar kappa kya kiya jaaye ki wo sab khush ho jaaye....

Kappa- Mujhe kya pata...tu samajh teri patniyan hai....

Main- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai...

Maine kuch der socha aur fir mere chahhre pe ek badi si muskan aayi aur maine jhat se portal khola aur chala gaya ek jagah....

Chaliye tabtak hum Shilpa and team ke pass chalte hai....

Priya- Dekha ek to subah se ab aa rahe hai aur wo bhi khali haat...ek taufa bhi nahi laaye wo...

Mohini- Ha wahi to kam se kam kuch to laate ek phool hi le aate sabke liye...

Paridhi- Haa par ye bhi nahi hua usse...mujhe baat hi nahi karni usse....

Shilpa- Arre shant bhi raho aur dekho ab kya karte hai wo humme manane ke liye....

Puja- Kya karenge wapas se kkhali haath aayega aur bolega maaf kardo...aur iss baar main uske uske baal noch lungi....

Priya- Main bhi ...

Mohini- Main bhi aur fir baat bhi nahi karungi usse...

Aise hi ye sab baatein karti rahi...waqt bitta par main waha nahi gaya kyunki main waha tha hi nahi main to Parilok mein aaya hua tha Pihu aur Rani pari ko lene....par jaante hi honge ki ladkiyon ko yaaa auraton ko kitna time lagta hai taiyaar hone mein bas wahi tha...

Main baitha intezar kar raha tha ki kya hoga....

Aaj ke liye itna hi aage dekhte hai mera unko manane ka plan kaamiyab hota hai yaaa nahi aur jo ye Jwala ka piche update mein bhi aane ke baare mein likha tha wo bhi dekhte hai.....to banne rahiye....

Haa chota update hai par next one will be bigger....
 

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UPDATE - 96

Ab tak

Saurya ko jab kappa ne yaad dilaya ki usko Sabhi ko manana bhi hai to wo unn sab ka pata lagane laga aur pata milla Niharika ke planet ka...

Ab aage

Main- Yaar ye saare Niharika ke planet pe kya karne gaye hai...

Kappa- Waha koi kaam hoga unko yaa Niharika aur baaki sab se milne gaye honge....

Main- Haa milne hi gaye honge unko waha kya kaam ho sakta hai...chalo hum bhi chalte hai waha unko manna lunga main...

Kappa- Haa chalo...

Saurya ne portal khola aur bas pahuch gaye Niharika ke planet pe...

Sham ka waqt tha shadi raat ko honi thi Varsha aur Alex ki....par taiyaariyan abhi se hi chal rahi thi...aur sabse jyadaa busy the hamare kaal sarp usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha phir bhi laga pada tha wo...

Main waha pahucha aur jab ye sab hote dekha to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya...

Main kaal sarp ke pass gaya kyunki ek wahi to milla tha mujhe....

Main- Kya ho raha hai yaha...ye taiyaariyan...

Kaal sarp- Dekho majak to karo mat tum main bahut busy hu kisi aur ke paas jao majak karne....kya ho raha hai yaha...jaise isko pata hi nahi kuch...

Aise hi badbadate hue wo chala gaya aur main usko dekhta raha...

Main- Yaar ye ho kya raha hai aur Ye kyun itna kaam kar raha hai....

Kappa- Lagta hai koi function hona hai yaha...dekho ussi ki taiyaariyan lagti hai ye....

Main- Haa aur sayad ussi liye wo sab yaha honge...par mujhe kyun nahi bullaya kisine....

Kappa- Arre tujhe chod kam se kam mujhe to bulana chahiye tha....

Main- OOye tu mere ander hai agar tere ko bulate to mujhe bhi bulate...

Kappa- matlab kaaran tu hai ki mujhe bhi nahi bulaya yaha...

Main- Arre chup kar yaar aur chal dekhta hai kya ho raha hai yaha....

Kappa- Haa main bhi to dekhu tere saath hone ke kaaran kya kya miss kar raha hu main...

Main mahel ki oor badha...

Mahel pura sazza hua tha...mahel kya aisa lag raha tha pura planet hi sazza diya ho aaj...

Main mahel ke darwaje ke pass pahucha...

Sainik- Aap ander nahi jaa sakte....

Main- Kyun bhai kyun nahi jaa sakta....waise jaante ho naa tum main kon hu....

Sainik- Ji jaanta hu....

Main- Haa to jaane do mujhe ander mujhe kaam hai....

Sainik- Ji aaj iss mahel mein koi bhi purush nahi jaana chahiye aisa Rani ji(N.mom) ne kaha hai....

Main- Kya....par koi wajah bhi to hogi iski...

Sainik- Haa wajah hai aur wwo hai shadi ab isse jyada kuch bhi bata nahi paaunga main aapko...

Kappa- Yaar ye shadi kon kar raha hai yaha...Alexx to nahi...

Main- Arre wo kaha wo kar raha hota to mujhe bulata sabse pahle....

Kappa- To fir....

Main- To fir N.mom to karegi nahi bacchi Niharika...

Kappa- Haa to kya wo hi....

Main- Ye bahut galat kiya dost bolti thi aur shadi ka bataya bhi nahi....koi nahi main bhi usko surprise dunga...

Kappa- Kaisa surprise...

Main- dekhte jao....

Main(sianik se)- arre dost to humlog ke rahne kaa bhi koi prabandh hai yaa fir...

Sainik - Hai naa wo waha Kaal sarp ki guffa wahi rahna hai aaj sabhi purushon ko shadi tak...Dulha bhi wahi taiyaar ho raha hai....

Main- Chalo thik hai main bhi dekh leta hu kon hai dulha....

Sainik- Arre aap bhi kya majak karte hai wo to aapke saathi hai...

Main- Sathi...kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...

Sainik- Alex ji ki unhi ki to shadi hai Varsha ji se...

Main- Kyaaa Alex aur Varsha ki shadi hai....

Sainik- Haa

Main turant waha se binna kuch bole hi portal se sabhi ke pass pahuch gaya....

Waha pe sabhi the Alex , Henry, Pradeep , Baba aur bhi kuch log the....

Main- Waah...ye bahut accha hai dost ki shadi ho rahi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi....waaah..

Pradeep- Waise accha to ye bhi hai saari patniya ruthi hui hai aur janab ko khabar tak nahi.....waahh.

Main- Pradeep abhi wo baat nahi karni hai abhi baat ye hai ki mujhe kyun nahi bulaya...

Pradeep- Baat wahi hai Saurya aur tujhe naa bulane ka kaaran bhi wahi hai...

Main- Yaar par wo alag matter tha yaha alag matter hai naa aur main to unke pass jaane hi wala tha.....

Pradeep- Subhah se kya kar raha tha kal bola tha naa maine ki wo sab naaraz hai ek baar bhi gaya waha nahi naa.....

Main sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya kyunki uski baat bhi sahi thi...main apne plan karne mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki unpe dhyaan hi nahi diya....

Henry jo ye sab dekhe jaa raha tha usko ghanta samjh mein nahi aa raha tha baat kya hai...wo Alex se puchta hai kya baat hai....Alex bhi usko wo sab batata hai jitna usko pata tha....sunne ke baad wo kuch bolne ko hua par chup rah gaya...sayad mujhe Samrath samajh kar thoda jhijhak raha ho...

Main- Haa thik hai meri galti hai par ab kya karu main to unko hi manane aaya hu par Mahel mein jaana allowed nahi hai naa ....

Alex- Mahel mein kya karna hai tumhe....

Main- Mahel mein kya karna hai se kya matlab unse maafi mangni hai aur kya...

Pradeep- Haa to maaafi mangne ke liye unko mahel mein le jaaoge...

Main- Kya matlab....

Henry- wo sab waha bagiche mein hai uss bacchi ke saath khel rahe hai samrath...

Main- Arre Henry dost...tum bhi ho yaha thanks yaar...

Main usse galle lag gaya aur wo shocked khada raha ab main uske liye Samrath saurya tha aur main uske galle lagu ye shock ki baat to thi...

Main usse alag hua aur chal diya Bagiche ki oor...

Pradeep - Manna ke aana unsab ko warna aana hi mat...

Main- Ha ha thik hai...

Main waha se shidha chala gaya Bagiche mein jaha mere jaate hi Dristi meri goad mein aa gayi...

Main usko goad mein liye aage badhne laga to wahi pe puri mahila mandali dikhayi di....Shilpa and team to thi hi saaath hi main Niharika,Kiran aur Rita bhi thi....

Kiran- Loo aagaya manane tum sab ko ye aalsi....

Niharika- Itna bhi aalsi insan hota hai bhala....

Shilpa- Dristi beta yaha aao hamare paas...

Dristi udti hui Puja ki goad mein chali gayi....

Aur uske jaate hi Shilpa, Paridhi, Puja , Priya aur Mohini paacho hi waha se jaane lage...

Main- Arre sunno to main maafi mangne aaya hu...

Par majal ho ek ke bhi paun thode der ke liye bhi thahre ho wo to mujhe aur meri baat ko aise ignore kar ke gayi jaise main hu hi nahi waha....

Wo sab waha se chali gayi....

Niharika- Aurr Alsi Samrath...pahle nahi aa sakte the...

Main- Arre yaar main kuch mantron ki practice kar raha tha naa bas ussi liye....

Main abhi kuch aur bolta usse pahle Margret aayi...

Margret- Rani ji bulla rahi hai tum sab ko chalo jaldi...

Margret ne bhi abhi mujhe nahi pahchana sayad as dost waise to Samrath ki tarah jaanti hi hogi wo....

Main - Arre koi kuch bata to do kaise manaun unko....

Kiran- koi surprise socho kuch bada jisse khush ho jaaye ye sab...

Main- Hmm thik hai main sochta hu kuch...

Wo sab bhi chali gayi....

Main- Yaar kappa kya kiya jaaye ki wo sab khush ho jaaye....

Kappa- Mujhe kya pata...tu samajh teri patniyan hai....

Main- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai...

Maine kuch der socha aur fir mere chahhre pe ek badi si muskan aayi aur maine jhat se portal khola aur chala gaya ek jagah....

Chaliye tabtak hum Shilpa and team ke pass chalte hai....

Priya- Dekha ek to subah se ab aa rahe hai aur wo bhi khali haat...ek taufa bhi nahi laaye wo...

Mohini- Ha wahi to kam se kam kuch to laate ek phool hi le aate sabke liye...

Paridhi- Haa par ye bhi nahi hua usse...mujhe baat hi nahi karni usse....

Shilpa- Arre shant bhi raho aur dekho ab kya karte hai wo humme manane ke liye....

Puja- Kya karenge wapas se kkhali haath aayega aur bolega maaf kardo...aur iss baar main uske uske baal noch lungi....

Priya- Main bhi ...

Mohini- Main bhi aur fir baat bhi nahi karungi usse...

Aise hi ye sab baatein karti rahi...waqt bitta par main waha nahi gaya kyunki main waha tha hi nahi main to Parilok mein aaya hua tha Pihu aur Rani pari ko lene....par jaante hi honge ki ladkiyon ko yaaa auraton ko kitna time lagta hai taiyaar hone mein bas wahi tha...

Main baitha intezar kar raha tha ki kya hoga....

Aaj ke liye itna hi aage dekhte hai mera unko manane ka plan kaamiyab hota hai yaaa nahi aur jo ye Jwala ka piche update mein bhi aane ke baare mein likha tha wo bhi dekhte hai.....to banne rahiye....

Haa chota update hai par next one will be bigger....
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UPDATE - 96

Ab tak

Saurya ko jab kappa ne yaad dilaya ki usko Sabhi ko manana bhi hai to wo unn sab ka pata lagane laga aur pata milla Niharika ke planet ka...

Ab aage

Main- Yaar ye saare Niharika ke planet pe kya karne gaye hai...

Kappa- Waha koi kaam hoga unko yaa Niharika aur baaki sab se milne gaye honge....

Main- Haa milne hi gaye honge unko waha kya kaam ho sakta hai...chalo hum bhi chalte hai waha unko manna lunga main...

Kappa- Haa chalo...

Saurya ne portal khola aur bas pahuch gaye Niharika ke planet pe...

Sham ka waqt tha shadi raat ko honi thi Varsha aur Alex ki....par taiyaariyan abhi se hi chal rahi thi...aur sabse jyadaa busy the hamare kaal sarp usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha phir bhi laga pada tha wo...

Main waha pahucha aur jab ye sab hote dekha to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya...

Main kaal sarp ke pass gaya kyunki ek wahi to milla tha mujhe....

Main- Kya ho raha hai yaha...ye taiyaariyan...

Kaal sarp- Dekho majak to karo mat tum main bahut busy hu kisi aur ke paas jao majak karne....kya ho raha hai yaha...jaise isko pata hi nahi kuch...

Aise hi badbadate hue wo chala gaya aur main usko dekhta raha...

Main- Yaar ye ho kya raha hai aur Ye kyun itna kaam kar raha hai....

Kappa- Lagta hai koi function hona hai yaha...dekho ussi ki taiyaariyan lagti hai ye....

Main- Haa aur sayad ussi liye wo sab yaha honge...par mujhe kyun nahi bullaya kisine....

Kappa- Arre tujhe chod kam se kam mujhe to bulana chahiye tha....

Main- OOye tu mere ander hai agar tere ko bulate to mujhe bhi bulate...

Kappa- matlab kaaran tu hai ki mujhe bhi nahi bulaya yaha...

Main- Arre chup kar yaar aur chal dekhta hai kya ho raha hai yaha....

Kappa- Haa main bhi to dekhu tere saath hone ke kaaran kya kya miss kar raha hu main...

Main mahel ki oor badha...

Mahel pura sazza hua tha...mahel kya aisa lag raha tha pura planet hi sazza diya ho aaj...

Main mahel ke darwaje ke pass pahucha...

Sainik- Aap ander nahi jaa sakte....

Main- Kyun bhai kyun nahi jaa sakta....waise jaante ho naa tum main kon hu....

Sainik- Ji jaanta hu....

Main- Haa to jaane do mujhe ander mujhe kaam hai....

Sainik- Ji aaj iss mahel mein koi bhi purush nahi jaana chahiye aisa Rani ji(N.mom) ne kaha hai....

Main- Kya....par koi wajah bhi to hogi iski...

Sainik- Haa wajah hai aur wwo hai shadi ab isse jyada kuch bhi bata nahi paaunga main aapko...

Kappa- Yaar ye shadi kon kar raha hai yaha...Alexx to nahi...

Main- Arre wo kaha wo kar raha hota to mujhe bulata sabse pahle....

Kappa- To fir....

Main- To fir N.mom to karegi nahi bacchi Niharika...

Kappa- Haa to kya wo hi....

Main- Ye bahut galat kiya dost bolti thi aur shadi ka bataya bhi nahi....koi nahi main bhi usko surprise dunga...

Kappa- Kaisa surprise...

Main- dekhte jao....

Main(sianik se)- arre dost to humlog ke rahne kaa bhi koi prabandh hai yaa fir...

Sainik - Hai naa wo waha Kaal sarp ki guffa wahi rahna hai aaj sabhi purushon ko shadi tak...Dulha bhi wahi taiyaar ho raha hai....

Main- Chalo thik hai main bhi dekh leta hu kon hai dulha....

Sainik- Arre aap bhi kya majak karte hai wo to aapke saathi hai...

Main- Sathi...kiski baat kar rahe ho tum...

Sainik- Alex ji ki unhi ki to shadi hai Varsha ji se...

Main- Kyaaa Alex aur Varsha ki shadi hai....

Sainik- Haa

Main turant waha se binna kuch bole hi portal se sabhi ke pass pahuch gaya....

Waha pe sabhi the Alex , Henry, Pradeep , Baba aur bhi kuch log the....

Main- Waah...ye bahut accha hai dost ki shadi ho rahi hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi....waaah..

Pradeep- Waise accha to ye bhi hai saari patniya ruthi hui hai aur janab ko khabar tak nahi.....waahh.

Main- Pradeep abhi wo baat nahi karni hai abhi baat ye hai ki mujhe kyun nahi bulaya...

Pradeep- Baat wahi hai Saurya aur tujhe naa bulane ka kaaran bhi wahi hai...

Main- Yaar par wo alag matter tha yaha alag matter hai naa aur main to unke pass jaane hi wala tha.....

Pradeep- Subhah se kya kar raha tha kal bola tha naa maine ki wo sab naaraz hai ek baar bhi gaya waha nahi naa.....

Main sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya kyunki uski baat bhi sahi thi...main apne plan karne mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki unpe dhyaan hi nahi diya....

Henry jo ye sab dekhe jaa raha tha usko ghanta samjh mein nahi aa raha tha baat kya hai...wo Alex se puchta hai kya baat hai....Alex bhi usko wo sab batata hai jitna usko pata tha....sunne ke baad wo kuch bolne ko hua par chup rah gaya...sayad mujhe Samrath samajh kar thoda jhijhak raha ho...

Main- Haa thik hai meri galti hai par ab kya karu main to unko hi manane aaya hu par Mahel mein jaana allowed nahi hai naa ....

Alex- Mahel mein kya karna hai tumhe....

Main- Mahel mein kya karna hai se kya matlab unse maafi mangni hai aur kya...

Pradeep- Haa to maaafi mangne ke liye unko mahel mein le jaaoge...

Main- Kya matlab....

Henry- wo sab waha bagiche mein hai uss bacchi ke saath khel rahe hai samrath...

Main- Arre Henry dost...tum bhi ho yaha thanks yaar...

Main usse galle lag gaya aur wo shocked khada raha ab main uske liye Samrath saurya tha aur main uske galle lagu ye shock ki baat to thi...

Main usse alag hua aur chal diya Bagiche ki oor...

Pradeep - Manna ke aana unsab ko warna aana hi mat...

Main- Ha ha thik hai...

Main waha se shidha chala gaya Bagiche mein jaha mere jaate hi Dristi meri goad mein aa gayi...

Main usko goad mein liye aage badhne laga to wahi pe puri mahila mandali dikhayi di....Shilpa and team to thi hi saaath hi main Niharika,Kiran aur Rita bhi thi....

Kiran- Loo aagaya manane tum sab ko ye aalsi....

Niharika- Itna bhi aalsi insan hota hai bhala....

Shilpa- Dristi beta yaha aao hamare paas...

Dristi udti hui Puja ki goad mein chali gayi....

Aur uske jaate hi Shilpa, Paridhi, Puja , Priya aur Mohini paacho hi waha se jaane lage...

Main- Arre sunno to main maafi mangne aaya hu...

Par majal ho ek ke bhi paun thode der ke liye bhi thahre ho wo to mujhe aur meri baat ko aise ignore kar ke gayi jaise main hu hi nahi waha....

Wo sab waha se chali gayi....

Niharika- Aurr Alsi Samrath...pahle nahi aa sakte the...

Main- Arre yaar main kuch mantron ki practice kar raha tha naa bas ussi liye....

Main abhi kuch aur bolta usse pahle Margret aayi...

Margret- Rani ji bulla rahi hai tum sab ko chalo jaldi...

Margret ne bhi abhi mujhe nahi pahchana sayad as dost waise to Samrath ki tarah jaanti hi hogi wo....

Main - Arre koi kuch bata to do kaise manaun unko....

Kiran- koi surprise socho kuch bada jisse khush ho jaaye ye sab...

Main- Hmm thik hai main sochta hu kuch...

Wo sab bhi chali gayi....

Main- Yaar kappa kya kiya jaaye ki wo sab khush ho jaaye....

Kappa- Mujhe kya pata...tu samajh teri patniyan hai....

Main- Hmm ye bhi sahi hai...

Maine kuch der socha aur fir mere chahhre pe ek badi si muskan aayi aur maine jhat se portal khola aur chala gaya ek jagah....

Chaliye tabtak hum Shilpa and team ke pass chalte hai....

Priya- Dekha ek to subah se ab aa rahe hai aur wo bhi khali haat...ek taufa bhi nahi laaye wo...

Mohini- Ha wahi to kam se kam kuch to laate ek phool hi le aate sabke liye...

Paridhi- Haa par ye bhi nahi hua usse...mujhe baat hi nahi karni usse....

Shilpa- Arre shant bhi raho aur dekho ab kya karte hai wo humme manane ke liye....

Puja- Kya karenge wapas se kkhali haath aayega aur bolega maaf kardo...aur iss baar main uske uske baal noch lungi....

Priya- Main bhi ...

Mohini- Main bhi aur fir baat bhi nahi karungi usse...

Aise hi ye sab baatein karti rahi...waqt bitta par main waha nahi gaya kyunki main waha tha hi nahi main to Parilok mein aaya hua tha Pihu aur Rani pari ko lene....par jaante hi honge ki ladkiyon ko yaaa auraton ko kitna time lagta hai taiyaar hone mein bas wahi tha...

Main baitha intezar kar raha tha ki kya hoga....

Aaj ke liye itna hi aage dekhte hai mera unko manane ka plan kaamiyab hota hai yaaa nahi aur jo ye Jwala ka piche update mein bhi aane ke baare mein likha tha wo bhi dekhte hai.....to banne rahiye....

Haa chota update hai par next one will be bigger....
Bahut hi badhiya update hai dost.
 

Ristrcted

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Saurya ke samrat wale janam me 7biwiya thi naa?
Fir yaha to bas 4 hi jama hui hai baki kaha hai??
part 2 ke liye kuch to rahne dene ka naa aur waise unme se 2 ko dikhaya jaa chuka hai bachi hui ek part 2 mein aaane wali hai.....bakki apko pata hi hoga kon hai wo do :D
 

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Saurya ke samrat wale janam me 7biwiya thi naa?
Fir yaha to bas 4 hi jama hui hai baki kaha hai??
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