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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Ab tak

Humne dekha ki kaise Saurya se Sanjna and team naraz ho jaati hai wahi Alex ki shadi bhi honi hai Varsha se aur ek baat wo hai Margret ke saath Henry aur Rita ka Earth tak ka safar....

Ab aage..

Chaliye hum pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha Margret ready ho gayi thi Earth pe aane ke liye par abhi tak Henry aur Rita ka koi aata pata nahi tha....

Margret- Pata nahi kaha rah gaye dono....aane do phir pucht....aa gaye dono kaha the..

Rita- Arre wo hum yaha se jaa rahe hai naa to yaha ki yaadein tazza kar rahe the...

Margret- Abhi hum hamesa ke liye nahi jaa rahe jo yaadein taaza kar rahe ho...hum bas waha ke baare mein pata lagane jaa rahe hai ab chalo...

Henry- Haa chalo chalte hai...maine ship ka intezam karwa diya hai....

Margret- Ship nahi Dadu ne koi aur intezam kiya hai humare liye...chalo unke paas..

Henry-(maan mein) lagta hai Headmaster ne Anywhere door se humme bhejne ka socha hai...chalo accha hai..

Tinno waha se chale jaate hai Headmaster ke office mein....

Waha Headmaster baithe hue kuch soch rahe the....

Margret- Dadu Dadu hum aa gaye

Headmaster apni soch se bahar nikalte hue..

Headmaster- Haa aao main kab se tum sab ka intezar kar raha tha...Margret wo jagah yaad to hai naa tumhe...

Margret- Haa dadu koi neela sa planet tha uska ek hi chand tha aur haa uss Sauryamandal mein ek hi suraj tha..sath hi uss planet ki aur bhi baatein yaad hai mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bahut acche chalo ab unhi saari chizon ke baare mein sochte rahna aur ye darwaja kholna samjhi...

Margret- Haa samajh gayi..

Margret ne wahi kiya aur darwaje ke uss taraf Pritvi ki hi ek jagah dikhayi de rahi thi...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo ab acche se jaana aur haa koi bhi gadbad ho to pata hai naa kya karna hai...

Henry- App chinta naa kare Headmaster koi gadbad hone se pahle hi main usko rok dunga...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo thik hai ab jaao aur haa anna ho to mujhe yaad kar lena main waha Anywhere door ka darwaja khol dunga...

Margret- Ji Dadu ab hum chalte hai..

Margret aur baaki dono wahi uss darwaje se ander chale jaate hai aur fir darwaja band ho jaata hai...

Headmaster(maan mein)- kya yahi wajah thi ki hamare purvajo ne Margret ka Pritvi pe jaana nischit kiya tha...kya wahi se wo uss kabil banegi ki apne Maa baap ki maut ka badla le sake...

Aise hi bahut kuch chal raha tha unke maan mein..

Chaliye ab yaha se hum chalte hai Niharika ke planet...waha kal raath hi Alex permission le aaya tha Saurya se shadi ki...

N.mom- Alex ab kya irada hai kab karni hai shadi...

Alex- Ji wo main soch raha tha ki Sabhi yaha ho tab karna thik hoga..

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki apni choti packet bada dhamaka waha aa pahuchi aur seedha uske goad mein...aur pata nahi kya dekha Alex ne ki usne bol diya ki aaj hi Shadi karni hai aur wo bhi abhi..

N.mom- Kya baat hai Alex tum acchanak...

Alex- Time shield...time shield ki jarurat padhne wali hai...aur uske liye Jwala chahiye jaldi se...

Niharika jo wahi baithi hui thi wo uchal padi time shield ka sun kar...

Niharika- Alex Kya dekha abhi tumne batao jaldi...

Alex- Maine dekha wo wo Jwala tak pahuch gaya tha aur usko apna gulam bana liya tha jisse wo samay pe kaabu paa liya aur fir....

Niharika- Hmm samajh gayi...Maa Taiyaari karo jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi...

N.mom- Thik hai...

N.mom ne taiyaariyan shuru karwa di...wahi Alex ki goad mein jo Dristi thi usko pata nahi kya hua ki wo udne lagi aur fir wahi portal khol nikal li waha se...par iss baar portal band nahi hua...sayad wo chahti thi ki Alex yaa baaki sab uske picche aaye...aur aisa hi hua Alex gaya uske picche aur uske jaate hi Portal band...

Dono hi Earth pe the iss waqt ussi jagah pe jaha Margret and team aayi hui thi...

Alex- Tum sab...to aa hi gaye yaha...

Margret ko Alex kuch pahchana hua laga par Rita aur Henry ko nahi aur iss waqt Henry apne Dragon prince ke roop mein bhi nahi tha ki usko dekhte hi pahchan lete wo dono...

Rita - Tum hame kaise jaante ho kon ho tum...

Alex- Main Alex hu Dragon Prince Alex aur tumhe yakkin nahi hoga tum sab ka bahut hi accha dost...

Henry aur baaki sab jhuk gaye ab dragon prince tha Alex to ijjat to banti hi thi naa bas wahi hua...

Alex- Arre doston utho yaha se kyun sharminda kar rahe ho yaar...

Tinno ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha uske baad uth gaye..

Dristi iss waqt Alex ke goad mein hi thi...aur ye tinno usko dekh rahe the...

Alex- Arre haa ye hai meri beti Dristi..

Henry- Kya Dragon Prince ne shadi karli aur unki bacchi bhi ho gayi aur ye baaat abhi tak kisis ko pata bhi nahi....ye nahi ho sakta...

Alex- Haa baat hi kuch aisi hai waise bata du abhi shadi hui nahi hai honi hai aaj hi honi hai aur jab tum tinno aa ho gaye ho to chalo mere saath..

Rita- Shadi hui nahi aur Bacchi ho gayi...kuch to gadbad hai...tum Dragon Prince hi ho naa yaa koi aur...

Margret- Ye wahi hai Rita...main jaanti hu...pata nahi kaise...dragon prince hum aapke ssath chalne ko taiyaar hai...

Henry- Par Margret ye koi aur bhi...

Margret- Maine bola naa ab chalo..

Alex- Haa to chalo...Dristi beta kaam ho gaya naa yaa abhi kisi aur ko bhi lana hai...

Alex ne itna hi kaha tha ki Dristi ne ek aur portal khol diya aur iss baar portal ke dusre side thi Shilpa and team...

Alex- Arre haa inhe bhi bulana hai chalo...

Alex aur Dristi ander gaye...

Alex- Sabhi Raniyon ko Alex.....

Shilpa- haa bas bas...chalo Dristi ko yaha do uske baad jo bolna hai bolo..

Dristi khud hi udti hui chali gayi Shilpa ke pass...

Alex- Wo main wo Shadi hai meri aur Varsha ki aaj to...

Puja- Kal to usne permission di aur aaj shadi bade utawle hue jaa rahe ho...

Alex- Nahi Rani ji wo baat hi aisi hai Jwala ki jarurat padni hai bahut hi jald bas issi wajah se ye sab...

Paridhi- Humme pata hai Alex wpo to bas hum thodi khichayi kar rahe the....Arre Tum tinno bhi aaye ho waha kya kar rahe ho ander aao....

Rita Margret aur Henry tinno hi aankhen phade dekh rahe the unn logo ki oor unko yakkin nahi ho raha tha jinlok ki malika Parilok ki rajkumari ( abhi unko pata nahi hai ki wo ab Rani pari ban chuki hai) aur aise hi 3 aur hastiyan waha thi unke samne...ab bas ek Samrath saurya nahi the waha jinko unn tinno ki aankhen dhundh rahi thi...

Tinno hi turant apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur unn sab ka abhivadan karne lage..

Mohini- Arre yaar utho bhi hum to dost hai naa aur Margret tum bhi....chalo ab utho sab..

Unn tinno ko ghanta samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye log unhe apna dost kyun kah rahe hai haa Margret ko thoda thoda lag raha tha par..usko yakin nahi ho raha tha...

Alex- Aap log chalne ko taiyaar hai naa..

Priya- Haa chal rahe hai..

Alex- Dristi beta...ek Saurya hi rah gaya hai usko bhi....

Alex ki baat puri bhi nahi hui ki Portal khula aur saare log Niharika ke planet pe....

Dristi ne jab aisa kiya to Shilpa and team ne to uske gaalo ko chum chum kar gilla hi kar diya...

Alex- arre Saurya ko bhi bula lete naa...

Paridhi- Koi jarurat nahi hai usko bulane ki....Haa Pradeep bhaiya aur Kiran bhabhi ko bula lo aur haa Guruji ko bhi...

Alex- Ko jyada kuch samajh to nahi aaya par usne wiasa hi kiya...

Sabhi waha aa gaye the siwaye Saurya ke...

Chaliye inhe bhi dekh aate hei kaha hai ye mahasay aur kya kar rahe hai...

Saurya abhi wahi RAW ke dwara di gayi uss flat mein baitha tha dhyaan mein wo sayad kuch pata laga raha tha par kya...

uska phone bajja call Mohit mamu ka tha...

Saurya ne call uthaya...

Mohit- tujhe pata hai kya hua tu vswash nahi karega...

Main- Batao to kya hua fir dekhte hai...

Tere bade Dada aur bade Nana Gaon se yaha saher aaye hai...tere Nana aur Mama saath hi Dada aur Chacha sabhi ki acche se khabar li jaa rahi hai...unhe kisis tarah Tere Maa papa ka pata chal gaya hai aur...

Main- Aur kya Mamu..

Mohit- Wo log bahut hi gusse mein hai saath hi dukhi bhi....abhi teri nani gayi hai yaha se...unko tere chote mama lene aaye the lagta hai unki bhi class lagne wali hai...

Main- Sabko apne kiya ka fal milta hai mamu...chalo main rakhta hu abhi bahar jana hai..

Mohit- Arre sun ab jab teri nani chali gayi hai to tu aaja yaha..

Main- Mamu abhi aap soch bhi nahi sakte kya kya hoga...maan lo nani ne sabko batla diya ki main Mere Maa Papa ka beta hu to...abhi tak to wo hi thi waha uske baad to fauj aa ke khadi ho jaani hai aur fir....

Mohit- Haa ye to socha hi nahi...nahi tu wahi rah main jab kuch hota hai to call karunga tujhe...

Main- Ji mamu....Chalo rakhta hu...

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Main- Ye gaon se log to aa gaye ab ye Maa Papa ko jagane ka waqt bhi aa gaya hai...bas wo sharir aur aatma milane ka kaam sahi se ho jaaye fir koi dikkat nahi..

Kappa- Saurya jo tumne socha hai usme khatra to hai par sambhawanayen bhi sakaratmak nazar aa rahi hai issliye main rokunga nahi tumhe bas itna kahunga ki sambhal ke karna ye sab...

Main- Haa Kappa ab bas dekhte jao...

Kappa- waise tumhe kahi jaana tha naa aaj...bhul gaye kya kal Pradeep aaya tha...

Main- Arre haa yaar main to bhul gaya chalo yaha kaa kaam to ho hi gaya hai to wahi chalte hai unhe manana bhi hai...chalo unke pass chalte hai....

Kappa- wo sab ek jagah thodi baithi hogi...ki tum jaao aur unko manao...pata karo kaha hai saare...

Main- Haa main pata karta hu...

Main wahi fir aankh band karke dekhne laga to pahle to unsab ke clones mille jo unhone apne apne jagah chode the...fir thode der baad wo sab bhi dikhayi diye par wo sab Niharika ke planet pe the...

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Abhi apan kuch busy hai issliye story ka update alternate aayega par agar time milla to apan daily bhi koshish karega dene kaa...

Agle update mein dekhte hai thoda sa ruthna manana aur Jwala ka wapas aana...Shadi ko apan thoda fast forward karenge...to banne rahiye
Yaar ye drishti and team ne to hero ka boycott kar diya... usi ke Dragon ki shaadi hai aur use hi na bulaya ye to popat ho gaya
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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UPDATE - 95

Ab tak

Humne dekha ki kaise Saurya se Sanjna and team naraz ho jaati hai wahi Alex ki shadi bhi honi hai Varsha se aur ek baat wo hai Margret ke saath Henry aur Rita ka Earth tak ka safar....

Ab aage..

Chaliye hum pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha Margret ready ho gayi thi Earth pe aane ke liye par abhi tak Henry aur Rita ka koi aata pata nahi tha....

Margret- Pata nahi kaha rah gaye dono....aane do phir pucht....aa gaye dono kaha the..

Rita- Arre wo hum yaha se jaa rahe hai naa to yaha ki yaadein tazza kar rahe the...

Margret- Abhi hum hamesa ke liye nahi jaa rahe jo yaadein taaza kar rahe ho...hum bas waha ke baare mein pata lagane jaa rahe hai ab chalo...

Henry- Haa chalo chalte hai...maine ship ka intezam karwa diya hai....

Margret- Ship nahi Dadu ne koi aur intezam kiya hai humare liye...chalo unke paas..

Henry-(maan mein) lagta hai Headmaster ne Anywhere door se humme bhejne ka socha hai...chalo accha hai..

Tinno waha se chale jaate hai Headmaster ke office mein....

Waha Headmaster baithe hue kuch soch rahe the....

Margret- Dadu Dadu hum aa gaye

Headmaster apni soch se bahar nikalte hue..

Headmaster- Haa aao main kab se tum sab ka intezar kar raha tha...Margret wo jagah yaad to hai naa tumhe...

Margret- Haa dadu koi neela sa planet tha uska ek hi chand tha aur haa uss Sauryamandal mein ek hi suraj tha..sath hi uss planet ki aur bhi baatein yaad hai mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bahut acche chalo ab unhi saari chizon ke baare mein sochte rahna aur ye darwaja kholna samjhi...

Margret- Haa samajh gayi..

Margret ne wahi kiya aur darwaje ke uss taraf Pritvi ki hi ek jagah dikhayi de rahi thi...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo ab acche se jaana aur haa koi bhi gadbad ho to pata hai naa kya karna hai...

Henry- App chinta naa kare Headmaster koi gadbad hone se pahle hi main usko rok dunga...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo thik hai ab jaao aur haa anna ho to mujhe yaad kar lena main waha Anywhere door ka darwaja khol dunga...

Margret- Ji Dadu ab hum chalte hai..

Margret aur baaki dono wahi uss darwaje se ander chale jaate hai aur fir darwaja band ho jaata hai...

Headmaster(maan mein)- kya yahi wajah thi ki hamare purvajo ne Margret ka Pritvi pe jaana nischit kiya tha...kya wahi se wo uss kabil banegi ki apne Maa baap ki maut ka badla le sake...

Aise hi bahut kuch chal raha tha unke maan mein..

Chaliye ab yaha se hum chalte hai Niharika ke planet...waha kal raath hi Alex permission le aaya tha Saurya se shadi ki...

N.mom- Alex ab kya irada hai kab karni hai shadi...

Alex- Ji wo main soch raha tha ki Sabhi yaha ho tab karna thik hoga..

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki apni choti packet bada dhamaka waha aa pahuchi aur seedha uske goad mein...aur pata nahi kya dekha Alex ne ki usne bol diya ki aaj hi Shadi karni hai aur wo bhi abhi..

N.mom- Kya baat hai Alex tum acchanak...

Alex- Time shield...time shield ki jarurat padhne wali hai...aur uske liye Jwala chahiye jaldi se...

Niharika jo wahi baithi hui thi wo uchal padi time shield ka sun kar...

Niharika- Alex Kya dekha abhi tumne batao jaldi...

Alex- Maine dekha wo wo Jwala tak pahuch gaya tha aur usko apna gulam bana liya tha jisse wo samay pe kaabu paa liya aur fir....

Niharika- Hmm samajh gayi...Maa Taiyaari karo jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi...

N.mom- Thik hai...

N.mom ne taiyaariyan shuru karwa di...wahi Alex ki goad mein jo Dristi thi usko pata nahi kya hua ki wo udne lagi aur fir wahi portal khol nikal li waha se...par iss baar portal band nahi hua...sayad wo chahti thi ki Alex yaa baaki sab uske picche aaye...aur aisa hi hua Alex gaya uske picche aur uske jaate hi Portal band...

Dono hi Earth pe the iss waqt ussi jagah pe jaha Margret and team aayi hui thi...

Alex- Tum sab...to aa hi gaye yaha...

Margret ko Alex kuch pahchana hua laga par Rita aur Henry ko nahi aur iss waqt Henry apne Dragon prince ke roop mein bhi nahi tha ki usko dekhte hi pahchan lete wo dono...

Rita - Tum hame kaise jaante ho kon ho tum...

Alex- Main Alex hu Dragon Prince Alex aur tumhe yakkin nahi hoga tum sab ka bahut hi accha dost...

Henry aur baaki sab jhuk gaye ab dragon prince tha Alex to ijjat to banti hi thi naa bas wahi hua...

Alex- Arre doston utho yaha se kyun sharminda kar rahe ho yaar...

Tinno ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha uske baad uth gaye..

Dristi iss waqt Alex ke goad mein hi thi...aur ye tinno usko dekh rahe the...

Alex- Arre haa ye hai meri beti Dristi..

Henry- Kya Dragon Prince ne shadi karli aur unki bacchi bhi ho gayi aur ye baaat abhi tak kisis ko pata bhi nahi....ye nahi ho sakta...

Alex- Haa baat hi kuch aisi hai waise bata du abhi shadi hui nahi hai honi hai aaj hi honi hai aur jab tum tinno aa ho gaye ho to chalo mere saath..

Rita- Shadi hui nahi aur Bacchi ho gayi...kuch to gadbad hai...tum Dragon Prince hi ho naa yaa koi aur...

Margret- Ye wahi hai Rita...main jaanti hu...pata nahi kaise...dragon prince hum aapke ssath chalne ko taiyaar hai...

Henry- Par Margret ye koi aur bhi...

Margret- Maine bola naa ab chalo..

Alex- Haa to chalo...Dristi beta kaam ho gaya naa yaa abhi kisi aur ko bhi lana hai...

Alex ne itna hi kaha tha ki Dristi ne ek aur portal khol diya aur iss baar portal ke dusre side thi Shilpa and team...

Alex- Arre haa inhe bhi bulana hai chalo...

Alex aur Dristi ander gaye...

Alex- Sabhi Raniyon ko Alex.....

Shilpa- haa bas bas...chalo Dristi ko yaha do uske baad jo bolna hai bolo..

Dristi khud hi udti hui chali gayi Shilpa ke pass...

Alex- Wo main wo Shadi hai meri aur Varsha ki aaj to...

Puja- Kal to usne permission di aur aaj shadi bade utawle hue jaa rahe ho...

Alex- Nahi Rani ji wo baat hi aisi hai Jwala ki jarurat padni hai bahut hi jald bas issi wajah se ye sab...

Paridhi- Humme pata hai Alex wpo to bas hum thodi khichayi kar rahe the....Arre Tum tinno bhi aaye ho waha kya kar rahe ho ander aao....

Rita Margret aur Henry tinno hi aankhen phade dekh rahe the unn logo ki oor unko yakkin nahi ho raha tha jinlok ki malika Parilok ki rajkumari ( abhi unko pata nahi hai ki wo ab Rani pari ban chuki hai) aur aise hi 3 aur hastiyan waha thi unke samne...ab bas ek Samrath saurya nahi the waha jinko unn tinno ki aankhen dhundh rahi thi...

Tinno hi turant apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur unn sab ka abhivadan karne lage..

Mohini- Arre yaar utho bhi hum to dost hai naa aur Margret tum bhi....chalo ab utho sab..

Unn tinno ko ghanta samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye log unhe apna dost kyun kah rahe hai haa Margret ko thoda thoda lag raha tha par..usko yakin nahi ho raha tha...

Alex- Aap log chalne ko taiyaar hai naa..

Priya- Haa chal rahe hai..

Alex- Dristi beta...ek Saurya hi rah gaya hai usko bhi....

Alex ki baat puri bhi nahi hui ki Portal khula aur saare log Niharika ke planet pe....

Dristi ne jab aisa kiya to Shilpa and team ne to uske gaalo ko chum chum kar gilla hi kar diya...

Alex- arre Saurya ko bhi bula lete naa...

Paridhi- Koi jarurat nahi hai usko bulane ki....Haa Pradeep bhaiya aur Kiran bhabhi ko bula lo aur haa Guruji ko bhi...

Alex- Ko jyada kuch samajh to nahi aaya par usne wiasa hi kiya...

Sabhi waha aa gaye the siwaye Saurya ke...

Chaliye inhe bhi dekh aate hei kaha hai ye mahasay aur kya kar rahe hai...

Saurya abhi wahi RAW ke dwara di gayi uss flat mein baitha tha dhyaan mein wo sayad kuch pata laga raha tha par kya...

uska phone bajja call Mohit mamu ka tha...

Saurya ne call uthaya...

Mohit- tujhe pata hai kya hua tu vswash nahi karega...

Main- Batao to kya hua fir dekhte hai...

Tere bade Dada aur bade Nana Gaon se yaha saher aaye hai...tere Nana aur Mama saath hi Dada aur Chacha sabhi ki acche se khabar li jaa rahi hai...unhe kisis tarah Tere Maa papa ka pata chal gaya hai aur...

Main- Aur kya Mamu..

Mohit- Wo log bahut hi gusse mein hai saath hi dukhi bhi....abhi teri nani gayi hai yaha se...unko tere chote mama lene aaye the lagta hai unki bhi class lagne wali hai...

Main- Sabko apne kiya ka fal milta hai mamu...chalo main rakhta hu abhi bahar jana hai..

Mohit- Arre sun ab jab teri nani chali gayi hai to tu aaja yaha..

Main- Mamu abhi aap soch bhi nahi sakte kya kya hoga...maan lo nani ne sabko batla diya ki main Mere Maa Papa ka beta hu to...abhi tak to wo hi thi waha uske baad to fauj aa ke khadi ho jaani hai aur fir....

Mohit- Haa ye to socha hi nahi...nahi tu wahi rah main jab kuch hota hai to call karunga tujhe...

Main- Ji mamu....Chalo rakhta hu...

Call cut...

Main- Ye gaon se log to aa gaye ab ye Maa Papa ko jagane ka waqt bhi aa gaya hai...bas wo sharir aur aatma milane ka kaam sahi se ho jaaye fir koi dikkat nahi..

Kappa- Saurya jo tumne socha hai usme khatra to hai par sambhawanayen bhi sakaratmak nazar aa rahi hai issliye main rokunga nahi tumhe bas itna kahunga ki sambhal ke karna ye sab...

Main- Haa Kappa ab bas dekhte jao...

Kappa- waise tumhe kahi jaana tha naa aaj...bhul gaye kya kal Pradeep aaya tha...

Main- Arre haa yaar main to bhul gaya chalo yaha kaa kaam to ho hi gaya hai to wahi chalte hai unhe manana bhi hai...chalo unke pass chalte hai....

Kappa- wo sab ek jagah thodi baithi hogi...ki tum jaao aur unko manao...pata karo kaha hai saare...

Main- Haa main pata karta hu...

Main wahi fir aankh band karke dekhne laga to pahle to unsab ke clones mille jo unhone apne apne jagah chode the...fir thode der baad wo sab bhi dikhayi diye par wo sab Niharika ke planet pe the...

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Abhi apan kuch busy hai issliye story ka update alternate aayega par agar time milla to apan daily bhi koshish karega dene kaa...

Agle update mein dekhte hai thoda sa ruthna manana aur Jwala ka wapas aana...Shadi ko apan thoda fast forward karenge...to banne rahiye
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UPDATE - 95

Ab tak

Humne dekha ki kaise Saurya se Sanjna and team naraz ho jaati hai wahi Alex ki shadi bhi honi hai Varsha se aur ek baat wo hai Margret ke saath Henry aur Rita ka Earth tak ka safar....

Ab aage..

Chaliye hum pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha Margret ready ho gayi thi Earth pe aane ke liye par abhi tak Henry aur Rita ka koi aata pata nahi tha....

Margret- Pata nahi kaha rah gaye dono....aane do phir pucht....aa gaye dono kaha the..

Rita- Arre wo hum yaha se jaa rahe hai naa to yaha ki yaadein tazza kar rahe the...

Margret- Abhi hum hamesa ke liye nahi jaa rahe jo yaadein taaza kar rahe ho...hum bas waha ke baare mein pata lagane jaa rahe hai ab chalo...

Henry- Haa chalo chalte hai...maine ship ka intezam karwa diya hai....

Margret- Ship nahi Dadu ne koi aur intezam kiya hai humare liye...chalo unke paas..

Henry-(maan mein) lagta hai Headmaster ne Anywhere door se humme bhejne ka socha hai...chalo accha hai..

Tinno waha se chale jaate hai Headmaster ke office mein....

Waha Headmaster baithe hue kuch soch rahe the....

Margret- Dadu Dadu hum aa gaye

Headmaster apni soch se bahar nikalte hue..

Headmaster- Haa aao main kab se tum sab ka intezar kar raha tha...Margret wo jagah yaad to hai naa tumhe...

Margret- Haa dadu koi neela sa planet tha uska ek hi chand tha aur haa uss Sauryamandal mein ek hi suraj tha..sath hi uss planet ki aur bhi baatein yaad hai mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bahut acche chalo ab unhi saari chizon ke baare mein sochte rahna aur ye darwaja kholna samjhi...

Margret- Haa samajh gayi..

Margret ne wahi kiya aur darwaje ke uss taraf Pritvi ki hi ek jagah dikhayi de rahi thi...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo ab acche se jaana aur haa koi bhi gadbad ho to pata hai naa kya karna hai...

Henry- App chinta naa kare Headmaster koi gadbad hone se pahle hi main usko rok dunga...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo thik hai ab jaao aur haa anna ho to mujhe yaad kar lena main waha Anywhere door ka darwaja khol dunga...

Margret- Ji Dadu ab hum chalte hai..

Margret aur baaki dono wahi uss darwaje se ander chale jaate hai aur fir darwaja band ho jaata hai...

Headmaster(maan mein)- kya yahi wajah thi ki hamare purvajo ne Margret ka Pritvi pe jaana nischit kiya tha...kya wahi se wo uss kabil banegi ki apne Maa baap ki maut ka badla le sake...

Aise hi bahut kuch chal raha tha unke maan mein..

Chaliye ab yaha se hum chalte hai Niharika ke planet...waha kal raath hi Alex permission le aaya tha Saurya se shadi ki...

N.mom- Alex ab kya irada hai kab karni hai shadi...

Alex- Ji wo main soch raha tha ki Sabhi yaha ho tab karna thik hoga..

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki apni choti packet bada dhamaka waha aa pahuchi aur seedha uske goad mein...aur pata nahi kya dekha Alex ne ki usne bol diya ki aaj hi Shadi karni hai aur wo bhi abhi..

N.mom- Kya baat hai Alex tum acchanak...

Alex- Time shield...time shield ki jarurat padhne wali hai...aur uske liye Jwala chahiye jaldi se...

Niharika jo wahi baithi hui thi wo uchal padi time shield ka sun kar...

Niharika- Alex Kya dekha abhi tumne batao jaldi...

Alex- Maine dekha wo wo Jwala tak pahuch gaya tha aur usko apna gulam bana liya tha jisse wo samay pe kaabu paa liya aur fir....

Niharika- Hmm samajh gayi...Maa Taiyaari karo jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi...

N.mom- Thik hai...

N.mom ne taiyaariyan shuru karwa di...wahi Alex ki goad mein jo Dristi thi usko pata nahi kya hua ki wo udne lagi aur fir wahi portal khol nikal li waha se...par iss baar portal band nahi hua...sayad wo chahti thi ki Alex yaa baaki sab uske picche aaye...aur aisa hi hua Alex gaya uske picche aur uske jaate hi Portal band...

Dono hi Earth pe the iss waqt ussi jagah pe jaha Margret and team aayi hui thi...

Alex- Tum sab...to aa hi gaye yaha...

Margret ko Alex kuch pahchana hua laga par Rita aur Henry ko nahi aur iss waqt Henry apne Dragon prince ke roop mein bhi nahi tha ki usko dekhte hi pahchan lete wo dono...

Rita - Tum hame kaise jaante ho kon ho tum...

Alex- Main Alex hu Dragon Prince Alex aur tumhe yakkin nahi hoga tum sab ka bahut hi accha dost...

Henry aur baaki sab jhuk gaye ab dragon prince tha Alex to ijjat to banti hi thi naa bas wahi hua...

Alex- Arre doston utho yaha se kyun sharminda kar rahe ho yaar...

Tinno ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha uske baad uth gaye..

Dristi iss waqt Alex ke goad mein hi thi...aur ye tinno usko dekh rahe the...

Alex- Arre haa ye hai meri beti Dristi..

Henry- Kya Dragon Prince ne shadi karli aur unki bacchi bhi ho gayi aur ye baaat abhi tak kisis ko pata bhi nahi....ye nahi ho sakta...

Alex- Haa baat hi kuch aisi hai waise bata du abhi shadi hui nahi hai honi hai aaj hi honi hai aur jab tum tinno aa ho gaye ho to chalo mere saath..

Rita- Shadi hui nahi aur Bacchi ho gayi...kuch to gadbad hai...tum Dragon Prince hi ho naa yaa koi aur...

Margret- Ye wahi hai Rita...main jaanti hu...pata nahi kaise...dragon prince hum aapke ssath chalne ko taiyaar hai...

Henry- Par Margret ye koi aur bhi...

Margret- Maine bola naa ab chalo..

Alex- Haa to chalo...Dristi beta kaam ho gaya naa yaa abhi kisi aur ko bhi lana hai...

Alex ne itna hi kaha tha ki Dristi ne ek aur portal khol diya aur iss baar portal ke dusre side thi Shilpa and team...

Alex- Arre haa inhe bhi bulana hai chalo...

Alex aur Dristi ander gaye...

Alex- Sabhi Raniyon ko Alex.....

Shilpa- haa bas bas...chalo Dristi ko yaha do uske baad jo bolna hai bolo..

Dristi khud hi udti hui chali gayi Shilpa ke pass...

Alex- Wo main wo Shadi hai meri aur Varsha ki aaj to...

Puja- Kal to usne permission di aur aaj shadi bade utawle hue jaa rahe ho...

Alex- Nahi Rani ji wo baat hi aisi hai Jwala ki jarurat padni hai bahut hi jald bas issi wajah se ye sab...

Paridhi- Humme pata hai Alex wpo to bas hum thodi khichayi kar rahe the....Arre Tum tinno bhi aaye ho waha kya kar rahe ho ander aao....

Rita Margret aur Henry tinno hi aankhen phade dekh rahe the unn logo ki oor unko yakkin nahi ho raha tha jinlok ki malika Parilok ki rajkumari ( abhi unko pata nahi hai ki wo ab Rani pari ban chuki hai) aur aise hi 3 aur hastiyan waha thi unke samne...ab bas ek Samrath saurya nahi the waha jinko unn tinno ki aankhen dhundh rahi thi...

Tinno hi turant apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur unn sab ka abhivadan karne lage..

Mohini- Arre yaar utho bhi hum to dost hai naa aur Margret tum bhi....chalo ab utho sab..

Unn tinno ko ghanta samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye log unhe apna dost kyun kah rahe hai haa Margret ko thoda thoda lag raha tha par..usko yakin nahi ho raha tha...

Alex- Aap log chalne ko taiyaar hai naa..

Priya- Haa chal rahe hai..

Alex- Dristi beta...ek Saurya hi rah gaya hai usko bhi....

Alex ki baat puri bhi nahi hui ki Portal khula aur saare log Niharika ke planet pe....

Dristi ne jab aisa kiya to Shilpa and team ne to uske gaalo ko chum chum kar gilla hi kar diya...

Alex- arre Saurya ko bhi bula lete naa...

Paridhi- Koi jarurat nahi hai usko bulane ki....Haa Pradeep bhaiya aur Kiran bhabhi ko bula lo aur haa Guruji ko bhi...

Alex- Ko jyada kuch samajh to nahi aaya par usne wiasa hi kiya...

Sabhi waha aa gaye the siwaye Saurya ke...

Chaliye inhe bhi dekh aate hei kaha hai ye mahasay aur kya kar rahe hai...

Saurya abhi wahi RAW ke dwara di gayi uss flat mein baitha tha dhyaan mein wo sayad kuch pata laga raha tha par kya...

uska phone bajja call Mohit mamu ka tha...

Saurya ne call uthaya...

Mohit- tujhe pata hai kya hua tu vswash nahi karega...

Main- Batao to kya hua fir dekhte hai...

Tere bade Dada aur bade Nana Gaon se yaha saher aaye hai...tere Nana aur Mama saath hi Dada aur Chacha sabhi ki acche se khabar li jaa rahi hai...unhe kisis tarah Tere Maa papa ka pata chal gaya hai aur...

Main- Aur kya Mamu..

Mohit- Wo log bahut hi gusse mein hai saath hi dukhi bhi....abhi teri nani gayi hai yaha se...unko tere chote mama lene aaye the lagta hai unki bhi class lagne wali hai...

Main- Sabko apne kiya ka fal milta hai mamu...chalo main rakhta hu abhi bahar jana hai..

Mohit- Arre sun ab jab teri nani chali gayi hai to tu aaja yaha..

Main- Mamu abhi aap soch bhi nahi sakte kya kya hoga...maan lo nani ne sabko batla diya ki main Mere Maa Papa ka beta hu to...abhi tak to wo hi thi waha uske baad to fauj aa ke khadi ho jaani hai aur fir....

Mohit- Haa ye to socha hi nahi...nahi tu wahi rah main jab kuch hota hai to call karunga tujhe...

Main- Ji mamu....Chalo rakhta hu...

Call cut...

Main- Ye gaon se log to aa gaye ab ye Maa Papa ko jagane ka waqt bhi aa gaya hai...bas wo sharir aur aatma milane ka kaam sahi se ho jaaye fir koi dikkat nahi..

Kappa- Saurya jo tumne socha hai usme khatra to hai par sambhawanayen bhi sakaratmak nazar aa rahi hai issliye main rokunga nahi tumhe bas itna kahunga ki sambhal ke karna ye sab...

Main- Haa Kappa ab bas dekhte jao...

Kappa- waise tumhe kahi jaana tha naa aaj...bhul gaye kya kal Pradeep aaya tha...

Main- Arre haa yaar main to bhul gaya chalo yaha kaa kaam to ho hi gaya hai to wahi chalte hai unhe manana bhi hai...chalo unke pass chalte hai....

Kappa- wo sab ek jagah thodi baithi hogi...ki tum jaao aur unko manao...pata karo kaha hai saare...

Main- Haa main pata karta hu...

Main wahi fir aankh band karke dekhne laga to pahle to unsab ke clones mille jo unhone apne apne jagah chode the...fir thode der baad wo sab bhi dikhayi diye par wo sab Niharika ke planet pe the...

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Abhi apan kuch busy hai issliye story ka update alternate aayega par agar time milla to apan daily bhi koshish karega dene kaa...

Agle update mein dekhte hai thoda sa ruthna manana aur Jwala ka wapas aana...Shadi ko apan thoda fast forward karenge...to banne rahiye
Margret Rita v Henri ke sath anywhere door se hote hue prithvi per aa jati hai Headmaster ke dwara wahin Alex Niharika v Niharika M ko Jwala ke kaid me hone ki baat batata hai aur apni v Versha ki shadi ke liye kahta hai Aur Drishti Margret, Henry, Rita v saari raniyo ko portal khil kar Niharika planet per le aati hai. Alex Pardeep v Kiran ko le aata hai per Surya ko nahi bulata Raniyo ki vajah se.
Bahut hi behtreen update hai mitr.
 

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UPDATE - 95

Ab tak

Humne dekha ki kaise Saurya se Sanjna and team naraz ho jaati hai wahi Alex ki shadi bhi honi hai Varsha se aur ek baat wo hai Margret ke saath Henry aur Rita ka Earth tak ka safar....

Ab aage..

Chaliye hum pahle chalte hai Bansoa jaha Margret ready ho gayi thi Earth pe aane ke liye par abhi tak Henry aur Rita ka koi aata pata nahi tha....

Margret- Pata nahi kaha rah gaye dono....aane do phir pucht....aa gaye dono kaha the..

Rita- Arre wo hum yaha se jaa rahe hai naa to yaha ki yaadein tazza kar rahe the...

Margret- Abhi hum hamesa ke liye nahi jaa rahe jo yaadein taaza kar rahe ho...hum bas waha ke baare mein pata lagane jaa rahe hai ab chalo...

Henry- Haa chalo chalte hai...maine ship ka intezam karwa diya hai....

Margret- Ship nahi Dadu ne koi aur intezam kiya hai humare liye...chalo unke paas..

Henry-(maan mein) lagta hai Headmaster ne Anywhere door se humme bhejne ka socha hai...chalo accha hai..

Tinno waha se chale jaate hai Headmaster ke office mein....

Waha Headmaster baithe hue kuch soch rahe the....

Margret- Dadu Dadu hum aa gaye

Headmaster apni soch se bahar nikalte hue..

Headmaster- Haa aao main kab se tum sab ka intezar kar raha tha...Margret wo jagah yaad to hai naa tumhe...

Margret- Haa dadu koi neela sa planet tha uska ek hi chand tha aur haa uss Sauryamandal mein ek hi suraj tha..sath hi uss planet ki aur bhi baatein yaad hai mujhe...

Headmaster- Haa bahut acche chalo ab unhi saari chizon ke baare mein sochte rahna aur ye darwaja kholna samjhi...

Margret- Haa samajh gayi..

Margret ne wahi kiya aur darwaje ke uss taraf Pritvi ki hi ek jagah dikhayi de rahi thi...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo ab acche se jaana aur haa koi bhi gadbad ho to pata hai naa kya karna hai...

Henry- App chinta naa kare Headmaster koi gadbad hone se pahle hi main usko rok dunga...

Headmaster- Hmm chalo thik hai ab jaao aur haa anna ho to mujhe yaad kar lena main waha Anywhere door ka darwaja khol dunga...

Margret- Ji Dadu ab hum chalte hai..

Margret aur baaki dono wahi uss darwaje se ander chale jaate hai aur fir darwaja band ho jaata hai...

Headmaster(maan mein)- kya yahi wajah thi ki hamare purvajo ne Margret ka Pritvi pe jaana nischit kiya tha...kya wahi se wo uss kabil banegi ki apne Maa baap ki maut ka badla le sake...

Aise hi bahut kuch chal raha tha unke maan mein..

Chaliye ab yaha se hum chalte hai Niharika ke planet...waha kal raath hi Alex permission le aaya tha Saurya se shadi ki...

N.mom- Alex ab kya irada hai kab karni hai shadi...

Alex- Ji wo main soch raha tha ki Sabhi yaha ho tab karna thik hoga..

Abhi wo bol hi raha tha ki apni choti packet bada dhamaka waha aa pahuchi aur seedha uske goad mein...aur pata nahi kya dekha Alex ne ki usne bol diya ki aaj hi Shadi karni hai aur wo bhi abhi..

N.mom- Kya baat hai Alex tum acchanak...

Alex- Time shield...time shield ki jarurat padhne wali hai...aur uske liye Jwala chahiye jaldi se...

Niharika jo wahi baithi hui thi wo uchal padi time shield ka sun kar...

Niharika- Alex Kya dekha abhi tumne batao jaldi...

Alex- Maine dekha wo wo Jwala tak pahuch gaya tha aur usko apna gulam bana liya tha jisse wo samay pe kaabu paa liya aur fir....

Niharika- Hmm samajh gayi...Maa Taiyaari karo jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi...

N.mom- Thik hai...

N.mom ne taiyaariyan shuru karwa di...wahi Alex ki goad mein jo Dristi thi usko pata nahi kya hua ki wo udne lagi aur fir wahi portal khol nikal li waha se...par iss baar portal band nahi hua...sayad wo chahti thi ki Alex yaa baaki sab uske picche aaye...aur aisa hi hua Alex gaya uske picche aur uske jaate hi Portal band...

Dono hi Earth pe the iss waqt ussi jagah pe jaha Margret and team aayi hui thi...

Alex- Tum sab...to aa hi gaye yaha...

Margret ko Alex kuch pahchana hua laga par Rita aur Henry ko nahi aur iss waqt Henry apne Dragon prince ke roop mein bhi nahi tha ki usko dekhte hi pahchan lete wo dono...

Rita - Tum hame kaise jaante ho kon ho tum...

Alex- Main Alex hu Dragon Prince Alex aur tumhe yakkin nahi hoga tum sab ka bahut hi accha dost...

Henry aur baaki sab jhuk gaye ab dragon prince tha Alex to ijjat to banti hi thi naa bas wahi hua...

Alex- Arre doston utho yaha se kyun sharminda kar rahe ho yaar...

Tinno ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha uske baad uth gaye..

Dristi iss waqt Alex ke goad mein hi thi...aur ye tinno usko dekh rahe the...

Alex- Arre haa ye hai meri beti Dristi..

Henry- Kya Dragon Prince ne shadi karli aur unki bacchi bhi ho gayi aur ye baaat abhi tak kisis ko pata bhi nahi....ye nahi ho sakta...

Alex- Haa baat hi kuch aisi hai waise bata du abhi shadi hui nahi hai honi hai aaj hi honi hai aur jab tum tinno aa ho gaye ho to chalo mere saath..

Rita- Shadi hui nahi aur Bacchi ho gayi...kuch to gadbad hai...tum Dragon Prince hi ho naa yaa koi aur...

Margret- Ye wahi hai Rita...main jaanti hu...pata nahi kaise...dragon prince hum aapke ssath chalne ko taiyaar hai...

Henry- Par Margret ye koi aur bhi...

Margret- Maine bola naa ab chalo..

Alex- Haa to chalo...Dristi beta kaam ho gaya naa yaa abhi kisi aur ko bhi lana hai...

Alex ne itna hi kaha tha ki Dristi ne ek aur portal khol diya aur iss baar portal ke dusre side thi Shilpa and team...

Alex- Arre haa inhe bhi bulana hai chalo...

Alex aur Dristi ander gaye...

Alex- Sabhi Raniyon ko Alex.....

Shilpa- haa bas bas...chalo Dristi ko yaha do uske baad jo bolna hai bolo..

Dristi khud hi udti hui chali gayi Shilpa ke pass...

Alex- Wo main wo Shadi hai meri aur Varsha ki aaj to...

Puja- Kal to usne permission di aur aaj shadi bade utawle hue jaa rahe ho...

Alex- Nahi Rani ji wo baat hi aisi hai Jwala ki jarurat padni hai bahut hi jald bas issi wajah se ye sab...

Paridhi- Humme pata hai Alex wpo to bas hum thodi khichayi kar rahe the....Arre Tum tinno bhi aaye ho waha kya kar rahe ho ander aao....

Rita Margret aur Henry tinno hi aankhen phade dekh rahe the unn logo ki oor unko yakkin nahi ho raha tha jinlok ki malika Parilok ki rajkumari ( abhi unko pata nahi hai ki wo ab Rani pari ban chuki hai) aur aise hi 3 aur hastiyan waha thi unke samne...ab bas ek Samrath saurya nahi the waha jinko unn tinno ki aankhen dhundh rahi thi...

Tinno hi turant apne ghutno pe baith gaye aur unn sab ka abhivadan karne lage..

Mohini- Arre yaar utho bhi hum to dost hai naa aur Margret tum bhi....chalo ab utho sab..

Unn tinno ko ghanta samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye log unhe apna dost kyun kah rahe hai haa Margret ko thoda thoda lag raha tha par..usko yakin nahi ho raha tha...

Alex- Aap log chalne ko taiyaar hai naa..

Priya- Haa chal rahe hai..

Alex- Dristi beta...ek Saurya hi rah gaya hai usko bhi....

Alex ki baat puri bhi nahi hui ki Portal khula aur saare log Niharika ke planet pe....

Dristi ne jab aisa kiya to Shilpa and team ne to uske gaalo ko chum chum kar gilla hi kar diya...

Alex- arre Saurya ko bhi bula lete naa...

Paridhi- Koi jarurat nahi hai usko bulane ki....Haa Pradeep bhaiya aur Kiran bhabhi ko bula lo aur haa Guruji ko bhi...

Alex- Ko jyada kuch samajh to nahi aaya par usne wiasa hi kiya...

Sabhi waha aa gaye the siwaye Saurya ke...

Chaliye inhe bhi dekh aate hei kaha hai ye mahasay aur kya kar rahe hai...

Saurya abhi wahi RAW ke dwara di gayi uss flat mein baitha tha dhyaan mein wo sayad kuch pata laga raha tha par kya...

uska phone bajja call Mohit mamu ka tha...

Saurya ne call uthaya...

Mohit- tujhe pata hai kya hua tu vswash nahi karega...

Main- Batao to kya hua fir dekhte hai...

Tere bade Dada aur bade Nana Gaon se yaha saher aaye hai...tere Nana aur Mama saath hi Dada aur Chacha sabhi ki acche se khabar li jaa rahi hai...unhe kisis tarah Tere Maa papa ka pata chal gaya hai aur...

Main- Aur kya Mamu..

Mohit- Wo log bahut hi gusse mein hai saath hi dukhi bhi....abhi teri nani gayi hai yaha se...unko tere chote mama lene aaye the lagta hai unki bhi class lagne wali hai...

Main- Sabko apne kiya ka fal milta hai mamu...chalo main rakhta hu abhi bahar jana hai..

Mohit- Arre sun ab jab teri nani chali gayi hai to tu aaja yaha..

Main- Mamu abhi aap soch bhi nahi sakte kya kya hoga...maan lo nani ne sabko batla diya ki main Mere Maa Papa ka beta hu to...abhi tak to wo hi thi waha uske baad to fauj aa ke khadi ho jaani hai aur fir....

Mohit- Haa ye to socha hi nahi...nahi tu wahi rah main jab kuch hota hai to call karunga tujhe...

Main- Ji mamu....Chalo rakhta hu...

Call cut...

Main- Ye gaon se log to aa gaye ab ye Maa Papa ko jagane ka waqt bhi aa gaya hai...bas wo sharir aur aatma milane ka kaam sahi se ho jaaye fir koi dikkat nahi..

Kappa- Saurya jo tumne socha hai usme khatra to hai par sambhawanayen bhi sakaratmak nazar aa rahi hai issliye main rokunga nahi tumhe bas itna kahunga ki sambhal ke karna ye sab...

Main- Haa Kappa ab bas dekhte jao...

Kappa- waise tumhe kahi jaana tha naa aaj...bhul gaye kya kal Pradeep aaya tha...

Main- Arre haa yaar main to bhul gaya chalo yaha kaa kaam to ho hi gaya hai to wahi chalte hai unhe manana bhi hai...chalo unke pass chalte hai....

Kappa- wo sab ek jagah thodi baithi hogi...ki tum jaao aur unko manao...pata karo kaha hai saare...

Main- Haa main pata karta hu...

Main wahi fir aankh band karke dekhne laga to pahle to unsab ke clones mille jo unhone apne apne jagah chode the...fir thode der baad wo sab bhi dikhayi diye par wo sab Niharika ke planet pe the...

Aaj ke liye itna hi....Abhi apan kuch busy hai issliye story ka update alternate aayega par agar time milla to apan daily bhi koshish karega dene kaa...

Agle update mein dekhte hai thoda sa ruthna manana aur Jwala ka wapas aana...Shadi ko apan thoda fast forward karenge...to banne rahiye
Aida lag rha hai ki main bs ouch mat Bhai story ka line plot ek dam okk hai.
Katai Sahi hai .
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Bole to faddu bhai
 
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