Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Ristrcted · Apr 11, 2020

Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
so lets go

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Sam star 7 · Dec 18, 2020

Ristrcted said:
DOSTO phle k sare update hum issi m compress kar rahe hai iske aage sare naye update honge

UPDATE - 8

ABTAK

Main baith gaya dhyan m aapne 3rd chakra ko jagane.

AAGE

Aaj bhi wahi sab hua dard , ray nikalna bla....bla...bla...

Meri neend 4 baje k aas paas khuli.Main utha aur fresh hua aur chal diya gym m waha karib 2 ghante tk exercise kiya fir 6:30 k aas paas nikal gaya park ki taraf maine waha ja ke apni jogging shuru kr di pr char aakhen aisi thi jo mujhe ghure ja rahi thi yesa nahi tha k main bahut tej bhag raha tha ya ajeeb lag raha tha . Thodi der baad wo akhen mere pass aane lagi main apni dhun m daudta raha kuch der baad piche s kisi ki awaj aayi jo badi taki hue thi .

Ye dono kal wali ladkiyan thi jo mere paas aa rhi thi daudte hue (jogging).

Main - Aap dono mera pechha q kr rhe ho(darne ki acting karte hue)

Ladki1- Arre nahi hum to tumse baat krna chahte the bas tum hamse daro mat

Ladki2- Prema pagal wo natak kr raha hai. (meri or dekh) hum tumhe thanks kahna chahte the.

Main- or wo q?

Prema- are aapne hamari jaan bacahi thi na isliye thanks

Ladki2-(mere taraf ek packet paas krti hue) dekho agar tum hamara ek kaam karoge to hum tumhe paise denge.

Uski baat sun k m confuse ho gaya.

Prema- Are Sapna phle conform to kr le ki ye wo hai ya nhi.

Main-kya hu main? Dekho sayad kuch galatfehmi hui hai.

Sapna-koi galti nhi hui h ok hme pata h tum gunde ho wo bhi bade waale dekho please hmari help kr do hm tumhe bahut paisa denge.

Main-arre mere ko paise nahii...

Prema-are paise nhi cahiye to hmare gaon m jo khet hai wo lelo pr please hamari help kardo please (aakhon m aashu liye) dekho hm badi ummid k sath aaye h tumhare paas please.

Sapna - ha please na help krdo hm jingdi bhar tumhara upkar nahi bhulenge(roote hue)

Saala mera dimag kharab ho gaya park k saare log hmari trf hi dekhne lage.Maine dono ka hath pakda. Hath pakadte hi dono mere dimag m dono k baare m sab kuch aa gaya wo kya hai kaha s aayi hai unki problem sb kuch mere ko apne aaj k power ka pata chal gaya.Maine dono ko ek bench p bitha diya .

Main-arre meri maatao roona band karo aur meri baat sunno.

mainkoi chota bada gunda nhi hu samjhe m to bas ek aam sa ladka hu .

Sapna-nhi tum gunde ho nahi to abhi tk tum jail m hote .

Prema-aur nahi to kya tumne kl 6 muders kiye aur kisi ko bhi iska koi pata nahi chala paaka tumne unhe khi dafna diya hoga aur police ko paise de case suru hone s phle hi band krwa diya hoga.

Main-arre nhi nhi aap log galat samajh rahe ho mere dad k connections bahut s bade loge s isliye kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala.(jhoot)

sapna(Prema k kaan m)-dekh abhi bhi chance hai kya pata iske dad hmari help kare.

prema bas haa m sar hilla deti hai.

Main - chalo ab apna problem batao

Prema-kya hum tumhare dad s mil sakte hai

Main-kya ye problem hia

Sapna - nhi pr hum tumhe bata kr isme samil nhi krna chahte warna tumhe kuch ho bhi sakta hai.please hame aapne dad a milwa do.

Main - dekho ye to lagbhag impossible hai pr agar tum mujhe problem bataogi to main dekhunga ki wo main kr sakta hu ya nhi agar nhi kr paya to dad to bata dunga.Yakin maano aaj tk dad n kbhi meri bast nhi taali h.

prema aur sapna ek dusre ki taraf dekhne k baad boli.

prema- dekho mera naam ...

Main-arre madam aapka naam prema hai ye aapki saheli Sapna hai .right? ab shide mudde p aate hai.

Sapna - thik hai dekho humdono XYZ collage m teachers hai.waha p Lucky naam k gunde k naam s drugs k dhandhe chal rahe hai .jb hume pata chala to hmne police m complain kr de pr yahi hamari galti thi sayad ab wo hme kidnap kr maar dena chahta hai. please hame bacha lo usse .

Main - are daro mt tumhara kaam ho jayega pr badle m tumhe meri collage m madad krni hogi.

Prema - kya tum bhi hamare collage k ho kabhi dekha nhi.

Main-arre madam abhi to main 12th k result ka wait kr raha hu ki kb result aaye aur m aapke collage m aa jaun.

Sapna- tumhari age kitni hai

Main -jee abhi 18 ka hone m kuch waqt hai

prema-tumne itni km umra m ladna kaha s sikhha.

Main-Baad m mil kr bataunga abhi mujhe kahi jaana hai.

Hmne apna no exchange kiya fir main chal pada ghar.

Ghar p phle hi gaon s sabhi aa chuke the aur aapna aapna saman bhi set kr liya tha sab n.

Hamne break fast kiya aur nikal pade school Tiya&Tanya k admission k liye q ki saare documents Shilpa didi le aayi thi. School k liye aaj Main, fufa ji ,didi aur meri baki k bahne gaye the .Waha saare formalities k baad unhone mujhe ghar drop kiya aur nikle gaye office ka bol k.

Main bhi fir ghar m dost ka bahana bana nikal gaya apne naye base ki oor.

Jab main pahucha waha to waha ka nazara hi kuch aur tha.ye pahla aisa base tha jisse RAW k team k liye MOSAAD MI6 RAW AUR NAVY SEAL n mill k banaya tha bahut kuch tha ander. Jamin k uper ek chota sa dhaba bana hua tha uss dhabe k kitchen s hoke ek lift thi jiske jariye hmare base ka rasta tha base 2 floor ka tha 1st floor p 5 rooms thi ek m sare gadgets aur computers the , ek main khane pinne ka saman tha, ek m ilazka saman aur medicine ek m weapons,aur ahiri wala tha hamara interogation room.Bahar ek bada sa hall bhi tha jo training k liye tha . uske niche wale floor p bahut sare mahngi mahngi cars aur bikes rakhe the jinme s adhikthar custumized the main unhi ko dekhne laga ki Sameera mere paas aayi aur boli.

Sameera - ye saare hamare team k liye khas taur pr MI6 aur MOSSAD n bheje hai .

Main- wahi main sochu RAW kbs vehicles p itna karcha krne lagi.kya wo dono aa gaye ?

Sameera -Ha pr tum unko handle kaise karoge. kya tum unhe apni pahchan bata doge.

Main- Jab tak jaroori na ho tab tak to nahi.chalo chalte hai. Aaj kisi aur ko bhi uthana hai .

Fir hum pahuch gaye base k hall m jaha sabhi ek dusre s mill rahe the.

Main:Agents agar milna milana ho gaya ho to ab kaam kr lete hai usse pahle(fufaji aur didi k taraf dekh)welcome back AgentD aap gai toh akele the par sath m hamare liye ek nayab heera liye aaye hai jo ki behad khubshurat hai Welcome Agent11.

Meri baat sun jaha Didi sarmane lagi wahi Fufa ji ko thoda gussa aaya beti jo thi unki.

Main:Agent02 kya pata chala hamre mehmano k baare m .

Sameera(Agent02)- king Guddu ek smugler hai jo ki Shivpur s operate karta tha aur dusre ka naam hai Sanjay kapoor

Ye naam sunte hi Fufaji ki aakhen chamak gai wo kuch bolte usse phle.

Main k leave it abhi hame kisi ko aur bhi uthana hai AgentD sayad aapko uske baare m sun accha lage.aapka purana dost lucky singh.

AgentD-aate hi RAW ne mujhe mera badla len ka mauka de diya.

Main:chaliye ab is mission ko aap hi handle karoge plan banao aur usko carry on karo apko yaha sabka support hoga.

Unhone plan banaya aur kul 18 logo ki team le kr jane ko taiyar ho gaye. Main jb s hall m enter hua tha Didi mujhe bade pyar s dekhe ja rahithi isliye m unke sath nahi gaya.Fufaji k team m Sameer,Sameera ,Ritvik, shilpa didi aur bhi agents the .

kuch der m hamare khabri n hame Lucky ka location bataya jo ki ek farm house tha. Fufaji and team n apne plan ko follow karte hue Lucky ko 6:30 tk base p le aaye .

Wo to abhi hi dono ko interogate karna chahte the pr maine maana kr diya aur kal interogate krne ko kaha.

Time 7:30 main ghar p phucha sab kuch normal tha abhi main aage ja hi raha tha k Didi aur fufa ji ki entry hui Didi mujhe kuch alag c lag rahi thi main Didi ko hi dekh raha tha aachanak s.

Mom-q re tune meri bahu bhi dund li aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi

Ye sabd mere liye kisi bomb s km nahi tha ki tabhi ek bada bomb futa matlad main mom kitaraf muda to waha p sabhi k dresses change ho chuke the sabhi k sabhi esse lag rahe the kisi k shaadi m jaa rahe ho.

Abhi m sabhi ko dekh hi raha tha k waha hamare ghar ka bhi look change ho gaya. Ghar pura saja hua tha main kisi k haath m ring pahna raha tha .

Jaise hi maine ye dekha main e turant us ladki ka haath chod diya aur aas paas dekhne laga fir mujhe sabhi k roone ki awaje aane lagi aisa lag raha tha k saare log ek hi sur m roo rahe ho jaise kisi k control m ho.

Maine fir us ladki ki taraf dekha jiska maine haath choda tha ye hubahu Shilpa Didi ki tarah lag rahi thi fark itna tha ki iski body unse jyada khubshurat lag rahi thi aur aakhon ka colour brown na ho ke green tha.

Abhi main usko dekh hi raha tha k wo roote hue waha s gayab ho gayi . Main idhar udhar dekhne laga.Uske gayab hote hi sabhi hosh m aa gaye aur apne kapde dekh aur ghar ka mahaul dekh confuse ho gaye abhi koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi ek ek kr saare mere ghar wale behosh ho gaye main bhi unke pass jaane laga.

Mujhe sab dikh rahe the shiwaye Shilpa didi k fir ek saaya mere samne prakat hua

Saaya - Malik hame gyaat nahi tha k Rani Shilpa s kuch aisa ho jayega pr aap chinta na kare aapke kisi bhi parijan ko ye baatein yaad nahi rahe gi unko ye bas ek swapn hi lagega. Rani sahiba bhi kuch der m aapke sath hi hogi.

Saala main kuch bolta usse pahle hi wo bhi gayab ho gaya ab bacha tha m aur meri behosh padi family hall m k tabhi sabhi k bodies hawa m udte hue unke room m chale gaye .Main ye sab dekhta hua baith gaya hall m.Mera dimag hi fatta ja raha tha kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha is liye.

Chaliye Dekhte hai Shilpa didi kaha gai

(shilpa didi k respect mai)

Jab mujhe mere pati n nahi pahchana to main toot gayi aur chali aayi us jagah jaha hum sabhi n unke saath apna aakhri waqt guzara tha jungle(ye wahi jungle hai jaha Saurya soone k baad pahuch jata hai.) m .

yaha aate hi ek ajeeb sha sukun milla dil ko saari purani yaade taaza ho gayi meri mujhe sab wo khusi k pal yaad aane lagw jo hum sabhi n ek sath bitayen the fir wo din bhi yaad aaya jab hamara sab kuch badal gaya tha.

FLASH BACK (THE CURSE)

Ek jagah p ek aadmi baitha roo raha tha aur uske gaod m ek dusre aadmi ka sir tha.

Aadmi2 - Samrath saurya sayad mera waqt is jahan m khatam ho gaya hai jaate jaate bas itna hi kahunga k aap apna khayal rakhna agar aap thik honge to meri bahne bhi thik hogi aur yadi wo thik hongi to mere aatma ko rahat milegi

Main-Mitr q kiya aisa q wo waar mere liye tha to q apni jaan de di tumne q

Aadmi2- Samrath ek to main aapka mitr hu dusra aapki patniyon n mujhe raakhi bandi hai bhai maana hai mujhe,

agar m y jaan k bhi aapke uper waar ho raha hai usse n rokta tho na to mitr kahlane yogya rhata aur nahi bhai.arre wo bhai hi kaisa jo apne bahno ki khushi k liye apna sab kuch newchawar kar de.Aur fir aap to meri bahno k pati hai to aapko kaise kuch hone deta

Abhi wo aadmi itna hi bola tha k waha p Baba aa jaate hai. ye aadmi Baba k beta tha.

Baba apne bete ki aisi halat dekh gusse m aapne haath m paani le kar aur mere oor dekhte hue bole

Baba - Samrath Saurya m tumhe sraap deta hu k jis tarah mera bete ki mout hui h thik ussi tarah tumhare aapno ki bhi maut hogi.

Tumhari saari patniyon ki maut aur tum unhe bachane k liye kuch bhi nhi kar paoge na hi apni saktiyon s aur na hi apni vidyaon s

Itna bol unhone wo paani mere uper chidak diya.

Abhi bhi Baba k bete m thodi jaan bachhi hui thi to usne apne pita ko unki galti ka ahsas karwaya .

Baba - Samrath aap jaaye aur apni patniyon ko yaha ghatit saari baate bata de aur mere bete ka bhi antim sanskar kr de q ki ab m is paap k chalte usko aur pida nhi dena cahata.Tabtk m apne sraap ka koi upay dhud leta hu.

Itna bol Baba waha s gayab ho gaye.

Baba k jaane k baad main bhi waha s gayab ho apne Mahal m pahuch gaya janha mujhe aur mere mitr ki aisi halat dekh meri patniyon k rulayi phoot gai.

Maine unhe sab kuch bataya aur fir unke sath mil ke apne mitr ka antim sanskar kiya.

In sabhi vidhiyon k baad maine ek sabha bullayi aur waha p apne khash vyaktiyon ko apne Rajya ka kuch kuch hissa de diya aur fir waha s nikal k apni patniyon k sath ek jungle m pahuch gaya.

Kuch din uhi bit gaye fir Baba n hme darsan diye aur bole

Baba-Samrath Saurya ye jo kuch bhi hua h Ishwar ki lila thi wo aap sabhi ko kisi aur lok m le jana chahte h jis wajah s ye sab hua h.Ab main aapko jo baate batane jaa raha hu unhe gaur s suniye ga. Mere yaha s jaane k baad hi aapki saari patniya apna deh tyag degi aapko un sabhi ka antim sanskar karna hoga uske baad inki aatmayen aapne nirdharit jagahon p pahuch jayegi.

Uske uperant aapko bhi aapni saari shaktiyan apne sarir s nikal k 15 hisso m baatni hogi aur unhe 15 chijo m dalna hoga jo ki Saptrangi kitabe, apki talwar ,Dhanush ,khanjar,Jinlok ka apka Singhasan,Parilok ki aapki mukut,apka locket ,armor aur aapki baasuri hogi.ye kaam krne k baad apko bhi apne pran tyagne honge issi jungle m.

Meri raniya-Baba hum waha inhe pahchane ge kaise

Baba-Us janam m aapko tab tk kuch bhi yaad nahi aayega jab tak aap sabhi k maan m Samrath k prati issi janam jaisa prem bhaw utpan na ho parntu 18 vars ki aayu hone k baad jaise jaise unhe unki saktiyan milna suru hogi waise waise unhe aap sabhi yaad aa jayegi.Aap sabhi Raniyon ki saktiyan aapke aatma m hi kaid rahegi jaise hi aapko apna purv janam yaad aayega aapki shaktiyan bhi wapas aa jayegi aur aap apne purane roop m bhi aa sakengi.

Itna bol Baba kuch der k liye maun ho gaye aur ham sabhi ek dusre ko akhri baar dekhne lage.

Baba-(Raniyon s)ye sab chuki mere hi karan hua hai m iss baat ki kosis karunga k aap sabhi ko ek sath hi rahu aur haa jaise iss janam m mere putr n aap sabhi ko apni bahan mana tha thik ussi prakar agle janam m bhi wo aapka bhai hoga aur jb bhi musibat aayegi aap sab ko usse nikalne ka prayatn karega pr usko uski saktiyan tabhi prapt hogi jab aap sabhi raniya usse apna bhai maanogi anyatha nhi.

Itna bol Baba waha s chale gaye aur maine bhi unke bataye hue tarike s sab kuch kr diya aur deh tyag diya.

Flash back end.

(Shilpa Didi k respect m)

Main wahi jungle m thi ki tabhi mujhe Baba k aawaj sunayi di.

Baba - ye aapne kya kr diya rani sahiba.

Main-Baba main bhul gai thi ki jabtk wo 18 saal k nhi hote unhe kuch yaad nhi aayega.Mujhe laga unhe main yaad houngi issliye main unse is tarah milna chahti thi pr sb bigad gaya.

Baba - aab jab aapko sab yaad aa hi gaya h to main aapko unki suraksha ka daaitwa deta hu

Fir baba n apna hath aage kiya usse ek white ray nikli aur wo sidha Saurya k ander sama gai.

Baba-hmne uski abhi ki smriti ko mitta diya h pr aap aage s dhyan rakhen

Main- jee Baba(udash hote hue)

Baba-app udash n ho aap unko abhi bhi apni or rijha sakti hai pr aap abhi unka mastisk niyantar nahi kr sakte.

Main(kush ho)-Dhanyawad baba.

Itna bol main ghar m as gai abhi bhi saurya jamin p baitha tha main uske paas ja kr.

main:arre ap jamin p kyun baithe ho

Saurya(khada hote hue)- aise hi pr Didi aap mujhe aap kyun bol rahe ho.

main: meri marji main aapko kuch bhi bulau kya aapko koi dikat hai (jhoote gusse m)

Saurya(darte hue)- nahi mujhe q problem hogi jo marji aaye aap wo bulao mujhe.

Main-kya aaj m aapke sath so sakti hu .

Saurya-ha q nhi.

(Hero k respect m)

Fir hum dono sone chale gaye mere room m .soote hi main pahuch gaya jungle m.Aur dhyan m baith gaya apni 4th chakra ko jagane m.

Fir wahi hua wahi dard,ray etc...

Meri neend 4 baje khuli Shilpa didi n hamko jakad rkha tha ekdum jaise koi choti bacchi apne khilone ko jakad k rakhti h.

M utha fresh hua aur gym gaya waha s fir park aur fir ghar aaya apni bahno ko school choda aur nikal gaya king k getup m base ki oor waha phle s hi Fufaji aur Didi baithi hue the. Mere pahuchte hi.

Fufaji-King kya ab m unki khatirdari karu.

Main-Thik h AgentD aap jao aur Sameera ko bi le jana usko bhi bada saukh hai khatirdari karne ki.

Meri baat sun jaise dono pagal ho utte ho khushi s dono lagbagh daud k ander chale gaye.

Unke jaane k baad Didi boli

Didi-king meri weapons ki training kb shuru hogi.

Main - Agent11 abhi to aapko ek test dena hoga main aapko ek file de raha hu isme jo aadmi hai aapko usse apne pyar k jaal m fasana hoga aur fir usse is file m diye gaye questions k answers niklawane honge wo bhi kuch hi dino m .

Meri baat sun ok bol janne lagi wo photo mere Nanaji k company k accountant ki thi jispe mujhe saq tha ki iska kuch na kuch jaroor lena hai is Terrorist funding wale case s. Sameer jo ki abhi ussi office m tha uska bhi yahi manana tha.

Didi(man m)- Dekho to kaisa pati hai apnihi patni ko kisi aur k sath chakar chalane ko bolta hai.ek baar bus ek baar enko sab yaad aa jaye fir batati hu inhe huh

Didi k jaane k baad maine sameer ko call kiya aur bola ki didi ka dhyan rakhe ager koi bhi gadbad ho to turant mujhe call kare

Ooooh toh shilpa didi hi rani hain lekin abhi unko intezar karna hoga nice update

Sam star 7 · Dec 18, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE - 11

AB TAK
SAB APNE ROOMS M SOONE CHALE GAYE.MAIN BHI SOOTE HI JUNGLE PAHUCH GAYA.MAIN APNA 5TH CHAKRA JAGANE

AAGE

Abhi sabko apne apne room m gaye kuch hi der hua tha k koi mere room mai aaya aur dekhne laga k main soya hu k nahi. Mujhe soota hua pa kar wo mere room s bahar chala gaya aur kisi k room ka gate knock kiya. Thode der mai gate kula aur gate kholne wala bola "arre poonam tum iss waqt kya hua."
Maasi - Didi neend nahi aa rahi socha aapse kuch dair baat kar lu.
Mom- aisa kya, bol kaha baate karni hai yaha p to tere jiju so rahe hai aur tere room main Vikram hoga.
Massi- chalo di hum chat p chalte hai waha na to koi disturb hoga aur na hame karega.
Mom- chal thik hai chalte hai.
Fir dono bahne chat p aa jate hai
Mom- Choti ab jadli s bata kya puchna hai.Main acche s janti hu k tu mujhe yaha aese hi nhi laayi hai.
Maasi- Didi baat hi kuch aisi hai.Aapko pata nhi hoga jab aapka car blast wala kaand jo aap logo n kiya tha uske baad kya kya hua.
Mom - kya hua hoga Ghar p saare log khush hue honge Mummy hamesa ki tarah hi chup rahi hogi papa ka dil khusi s dance karne ka hoga aur mere bhai hunh unhe to sayad fark hi nahi pada hoga wo to apni business m hi busy rahe honge aur bhi agar kuch hua hoga to mujhe ab usme koi interest nahi hai.
Maasi - Didi main bhi unki baat nhi kr rhi hu main kisi aur ki baat kr rahi hu.
Mom- kisi aur ki kiski baat kr rhi hai tu janha tk mujhe pata chala tha bus mere aur tere jiju k dost aur unke kuch ristedar bas wahi log kuch din k liye dukhi hue the fir sab apni apni life main busy ho gaye.
Maasi - accha didi ek baat batao aapne kabhi mere baare m soocha tha.
Mom - Dekh choti tujse jhoot nhi bolungi pr uss waqt jo kuch bhi hamare sath hua tha na hum tum sabhi s gussa the kisi k bhi baare m nhi jaanna chahte the pr fir jab Reshma aur Digvijay aaye to unse pata chala tum logo k baare m Mummy-Papa k baare m jo socha tha wahi sach nikla aur bhaiyon k baare m bas ye bataya ki wo dono bus office m hi lage rahte hain aur tere baare m bas itna pata chala ki tu apni life main khush hai pr mummy papa aur baaki sab s saare riste tod diye the tune bus aur kuch nahi
Maasi-haa un logo n sahi bataya tha. Main bhi sayad us waqt tak sambhal chuki thi issi liye khush hogi.Ye chodo aapne sabke baare m sunna pr kya aapne Annuradha didi k baare m nhi pucha unse.
Mom- puchha tha na pr unhone bataya mere jaane k baad unhone bhi ghar s saare naate tod diye aur phir Jiju aur bachhiyo k jiju k gaon(shivpur) m chale gaye. Jiju(Pawan kashyap) n bhi aapne gaon s hi saare business handle krne lage.
Maasi- ye sab jaanne k baad aapka jee nahi kiya humse milne ka.
Mom- ha maan to karta tha pr phir Saurya aur Tiya & Tanya k baare m soch apne maan ko sant kr leti thi. Ek dar sa baith gaya tha maan m k agar tujhse aur didi s milne k chakar m mummy papa ko khabar lag gayi to phir s kahi mujhe mere bacche n khone pade.
Maasi-main samjh skti hu didi.
Mom-tu ye sab q puch rahi h wo bhi iss waqt. sach sach bata tu didi s milli hai na kya tune unse baat ki.

Maasi- Nahi didi maine to bus unko car s jaate hue dekha tha jiju bhi sath m the.Sayad wo log wapas yahi settle ho rahe honge unki betiyan bhi yahi XYZ collage m padti hai na toh sayad issi wajah s.
Mom-kya ab hame kya krna chahiye ?
Maasi - Didi agar wo wapas iss sahar m aayen hai to kabhi n kabhi to hamari mulakat ho hi jayegi.Mujhe lagta hai hame khud hi unse milkar unko saari sachayi bata deni chahiye.
Mom-choti mujhe iske baare m sochne k liye waqt chahiye aur sath hi tere jiju ki salah bhi agar wo kahenge tabhi m y karungi.
Maasi-thik h didi pr jo bhi karna jaldi karna.
Mom - thik hai choti. chal ab bahut raat ho gayi h soone chalte hai baaki baatein kal kr lenge.
Aur fir dono soone chali jaati hai.
Sabhi log ghar m aaram s soo rahe the pr unhe ye kanha pata tha k waha ek tufan aane wala hai jo sabko hilla k rakh dega.

Nice update ab dekhte hain konsa tufaan aane wala he yahan

Sam star 7 · Dec 18, 2020

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UPDATE - 13

CHARACTER INTRO:
LUCKY SINGH - YE APNE SAHAR M DRUGS MAFFIYA KA HEAD HAI ISNE LAGBAG YAHA K SAARE COLLAGES M APNEE NASHE KI DUKAN LAGA RAKHI HAI.

SANJAY KAPOOR - YE BANDA DELHI S OPERATE KARTA HAI. YE WAHA KA SABSE BADA DRUGS AND WEAPONARY KA DEALER HAI.

PANKAJ CHAUHAN- YE BANDA EK SCIENTIST HAI AUR INDIA M RUSSIAN MAAFIYA KA SAARA KAAM DEKHTA HAI.

{YE TINO BAHUT HI ACCHE DOST H AUR INKA BUSINESS BHI AAPAS M RELATED HAI}

GUDDU - YE EK DRUGS AND WEAPONARY PROVIDER HAI . IS BANDE K ANDER KUCH AESE GAON THE JAHA P AFFEM KI KHETI HOTI THI AUR YE UNKO FIR BADE DEALERS KO SUPPLY KARTA.

SURENDER SINGH - YE SAHAR KA MLA H.ISME NETA WALE SAARE GUUN KUT KUT K BHARE HAI(LEADER WALE NAHI)
YE APNE PARIWAR WALO K LIYE KISI FARISTE S KAM NAHI PR ASHAL M YE EK DON HAI. ISKE FAMILY M S YE BAAT SIRF ISKE BHAI LUCKY SINGH KO HI PATA HAI.

ANKIT KAPOOR- YE BANDA IS SAHAR KA MAYOR H. ISME BHI NETA K SAARE GUN HAI YE BHI EK DON HAI PR APNE PARIWAR K LIYE ISNE BHI ACHHAYI KA MUKHAUTA LAGA RAKHA HAI. ISKI SACHAYI BHI KEWAL ISKA BHAI SANJAY KAPOOR KO PATA HAI.

{YE DONO EK HI GROUP M THE AUR INKA EK HI BOSS THA JISKI MYSTRY KUCH UPDATES M KHUL JAYEGI}

DIVYA THAKUR- YE RESHMA RAJPOOT AUR DEEP GUPTA KI BADI BAHAN HAI.YE PALAMPUR K COLLAGE M DEAN THI.WAHI APNE PATI AUR BETI K SATH RAHTI THI. YE HAMARI SAIFALI(GUDIYA) KI CHACHI BHI HAI JO KI USPE JAAN CHIDAKTI HAI.

ROSHAN THAKUR- YE HAI APNI DEAN MADAM K PATI JO UNSE BAHUT PYAR KARTE H. YE THAKUR HAI PADHE LIKHE TO HAI HI PAR APNI FAMILY K KHATIR APNA BANA BANAYA CARRIER CHOD APNE PUSHTAINY JAMINO P KHETI KARWA K APNI JIWANYAPAN KARTE HAI .

PARIDHI THAKUR- YE HAI APNI DEAN MADAM KI BETI SHAADI KI UMAR HO CHUKI HAI PR ABHI AUR PADHNE KA KAHTI HAI. YE BHI PALAMPUR K COLLAGE SABSE YOUNG LECTURER THI.

NOTE- VIKRAM AUR ROSHAN CHACHERE BHAI HAI PR INKE BICH KA PYAR APNE BHAIYON S BHI BADH KR HAI. IN DONO KI FAMILY M BHI BAHUT PREM BHAW HAI. SAYAD YAHI WAJAH HAI KI YE LOG EK SATH HI RAHNA PASAND KRTE HAI.

AB TAK
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AB MERI SAMAJH M AA RAHA THA K DIDI Q MUJHE GUSSE M MARE JA RAHI THI. MAINE MAAN S DIDI KO CONTACT KARNE KI KOSIS KI PR KAR NA SAKA.WAHI BHEED KI HALAT ESSI HO GAYI THI KI SAALE SAARE THARKI BICH SADAK P MUJHE GHERE HUE THE JIS WAJAH S WAHA JAM LAG GAYA THA AUR ISS JAM KO HATANE AAYE POLICE WALE BHI MERI TARAF AANE LAGE.YE DEKH MAIN MAAN HI MAAN BAS YAHI MAANG RAHA THA BHAGWAN S K AAJ BACHA LE FIR KABHI PORN NHI DEKHUNGA.
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MAIN- ACCHA TO TUMNE MERE POWERS KO LOCK KR DIYA AGAR UN LOGO N MERE SATH WAHA KUCH KR DIYA HOTA TO.MAIN TO KAHI MUH DIKHANE LAYAK N RAHTA.
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MERE ROAD P S ACHANAK GAYAB HONE K BAAD EK TEJ WHITE LIGHT WAHA P FLASH HUI AUR SABHI K DIMAG S ABHI K SAARE BAATE NIKAL GAYI.

HUM DONO BHAI BAHAN BHI BASE P PAHUCH GAYE AUR APNE KAAMO MAIN LAG GAYE.
ABHI HAME KAAM P LAGE KUCH HI WAQT HUA THA KARIB SUBAH K 11 BAJ RAHE THE KI MERA AUR DIDI K PHONE EK SAATH HI BAJA. DUSRE TARAF KI BAATE SU HUM DONO K HI CHAHRE P CHINTA K BALDAL CHA GAYE .
KARIB 10 MIN BAAD FUFAJI MERE PAAS AAYE DIDI K SATH AUR BOLO
FUFAJI- KING HUM DONO KO ABHI YAHA S JANA HOGA KUCH PERSONAL PROBLEMS AA GAI HAI JINKO SOLVE KARNA JARORI HAI.
MAIN - OK AGENTD YOU MAY GO.
FUFA JI MERE ITNE JALDI MAANNE KI WAJAH S MUJHE GHURNE LAGE UNKO LAG RAHA THA K MAIN UNKO ITNI JALDI NAHI CHODUNGA.UNDONO K NIKALNE K BAAD MAIN BHI NIKAL GAYA GHAR KI OOR .

FRIENDS AAP LOG GUESS KR K BATAO K KYA HUA HOGA GHAR MAIN AUR HA APNE ADVICES BHI DETE RAAHNA TAKI MAIN APNI WRITING ABILITY M AUR SUDHAR KR SAKU

Mast update bhai lekin ye toh bata dete ki apna hero konsi female star main badal gya tha uska naam

Sam star 7 · Dec 19, 2020

Ristrcted said:
UPDATE - 19

AB TAK
JAB HERO KA PARIWAR HOTEL S NIKLA TO KOI UNHE DEKH RAHA THA UNKE NIKLTE HI USNE APNI MAA KO BOLA KI SANJU BUA JINDA HAI.

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HERO KI FAMILY HERO K CLONE K SATH CHAL DI GHAR KI TARF. WAHA JAB WO PAHUCHE TO SABHI APNE ROOMS M CHALE GAYE. SHILPA PAHLE S HI APNE ROOM M MAUJOOD THI. JAISE HI USKA CLONE WAHA AAYE USNE USSE WAPAS HERO K PAAS BHEJ DIYA AUR WO CLONE FIR S HERO M SAMA GAYA.
RAAT KAAFI HO CHUKI THI SAARE SO GAYE.
SAURYA(CLONE) JO K ROOM M SO RAHA THA USSE KISI K AANE KI AAHAT SUNAYI DI. USNE AAS PAAS DEKHA TO KOI NAHI THA.USSE LAGA USKA WAHAM HOGA AUR YAHI SOCH WO SO GAYA.

CHALIYE APNE HERO K PAAS CHALTE HAI JO ABHI ISMILE K ROOP M HAI AUR USKE GHAR PR HAI.
IS JAGAH KO GHAR TO NHI KAHA JA SAKTA SALA ITNA GANDA TO KISI ENGINEERING STUDENT KA ROOM HI NA HOTA HOGA. HAR TARF KACHRA FAILA HUA THA.
MAIN(ISMILE)-SALLA EK NO. KA NASHEDI HAI YE ISMILE HAR JAGAH CIGRETE K JALLE HUE TUKDE AUR YE DEKHO SAALE NE TO HOOKON KI COLLECTION BANA RAKHI HAI. AADHA MAAL TO YAHI FUK LETA HOGA.
ABHI MAIN YAHI SAB SOCH RAHA THA K EK MITHI C AWAJ MERE KAANO M GAYI PR USSE SUN MAIN CHOWK GAYA.
AWAJ- JIIIJUUU MAIN AA GAYIII.
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MAIN(MAAN M)- YAAR YE KON HAI, IS CHUTIYE ISMILE N TO SHADI KI NHI HAI TO YE KHUBSHURAT BALA ISSE JIJU Q BULA RAHI HAI.
MAIN- KON HO TUM.
LADKI- JIJU BAHUT MAJAK HO GAYA. MUJHE PATA HAI AAP LOGO KO SAB YAAD AA GAYA HAI.
MAIN- AEE LADKI PAHLE YE JIJU BOLNA BAND KR MAIN KOI TERI BAHAN KA PATI NHI.
LADKI- WAAH YE ACCHA HAI MAIN BHI APNI DIDI KO LE JAATI HU AUR TO AUR BAKKIYON KO BHI LE JAUNGI , FIR DEKHTI HU KAISE RAHTE HO AAP.
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LADKI-(ROONI C SHURAT KR)JIJU KYA AAP GUSSA HO SABHI S. SABHI KO CHODO KYA AAP MERE S BHI GUSSA HO HA BOLO
(ROONA SHURU).
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CHALIYE JAB TK MUJHE HOSH AAYE DEKHTE HAI YE KON THI AUR KAHA GAYI THI.
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BABA(KHUS HO)- ARRE AAJ PARIYON KI RAJKUMARI HAMARE YAHA KAISE.(USSE ROOTE HUE DEKH) YE KYA RAJKUMARI PIHU AAP RO RAHI HAI.
ITNA BOL BABA N KUCH MANTR PADHE JISSE PIHU K AASHU EK SHISHI MAI JAMA HONE LAGE.
PIHU - BABA JIJU N MUJHE PAHCHANNE S BHI INKAR KR DIYA AUR YE BHI BOLA KI LE JAO APNI BAHAN KO AB MAIN DIDI K PAAS KAISE JAUNGI.KYA BOLUNGI UNKO K JIJU N AAPKA TYAAG KR DIYA. MAINE HI TO UNKI AUR JIJU KI SHADI KRWAI THI.
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BABA FIR PIHU KO SAARI BAATE BATATE HAI.
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BABA-NAHI ABHI NAHI CHALLA HOGA. ABHI YE KHABAR SIRF JINLOK TK HI SIMIT HAI AUR BAS SAMARATH K KUCH NIKAT K LOGO KO HI PATA CHALI HAI.
PIHU- BABA MUJHE LAGTA HAI AB HAME JIJU KO SAB YAAD DILWA DENA CHAHIYE. JINNLOK KI JO HALAT HAI WO BAT SE BATTAR HOTI JA RAHI HAI WO ANDHERE WALA HISSA BADHTA HI JA RAHA HAI AGAR KUCH HI ROSHANIYON M USSE NA ROKA GAYA TO BADI HI DUVIDHA HO JANI HAI.
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BABA- HA BILKUL AUR AB AAP APNE AASU S HI SAMRATH KI AAYU KO 18 VARS KR DEGI.
PIHU(KHUSH HO)-KYA YE MUMKIN HAI.
BABA- RAJKUMARI YE MUMKIN HAI PR ISKA ISTEMAL AAP KISI EK PR HI KR SAKTE HO YA TO AAP APNE JIJU PR ISTEMAL KARO YA PHIR APKI PARIDHI DIDI K UPAR. AB NIRNAY AAPKO LENA HAI. ISS AASHU KO APNI CHADI P CHIDAK KR AAP JISKE UPER BHI GHUMAWOGI USKI UMER AAPE MAAN KI HO JAYEGI.
PIHU- BABA MAIN JIJU KO HI THIK KARTI HU .
YE BOL WO WAPAS HERO K PAAS CHALI AAYI.

KUCH DER BAAD JAB MERI AAKHEN KHULI TO MUJHE SABKUCH YAAD AA CHUKA THA APNE PICHLE JANAM K BAARE M ISS JANAM K BAARE M APNE ASLI MATA PITA K BAARE M UNKE SAATH KYA HUA Q HUA SAB KUCH YE JAAN KR MERE AAKHON S AASHU NIKALNE LAGE K TABHI.
PIHU- JIJU ABHI WAQT NHI HAI AASHU BAHANE KA AAPKO PAHLE JINLOK KI SAMASYA KO SULJHANA HOGA ANDHERE WALA HISSA BADHTA HI JAA RAHA HAI AAPKO USKO ROKNA HOGA YA FIR KHATAM KRNA HOGA.
MAIN- PIHU TUMHARA BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA JO TUMNE HAME SAB YAAD DILA DIYA PR ABHI MERE PAAS WO SHAKTI NAHI JISSE M USS ANDHERE WAALE HISSE KO MITA SAKU.
PIHU- PR JIJU AAP USSE ROKNE K LIYE TO KUCH KARO WARNA WO FAILTA HI RAHEGA.
MAIN- NAHI PIHU AAJ HI SHILPA(JINNO KI MALIKA)
JINLOK GAYI THI AUR WO APNI SHINGHASAN PR BHI BAITHI THI JIS WAJAH S AB WO ANDHERE WALA BHAG SIKUDNE LAGEGA. USKI SHAKTIYAN KAM HOTI JAYEGI HA PR WO KHATAM TABHI HOGA JB MAIN APNE SINGHASAN PR BAITH JAUN.
PIHU- SACH M AISSA HAI KYA(FIR MAJAK M) MAINE BEKAR HI AAPKO SAB YAAD DILAYA APNE AASHOYON S.
MAIN- SALI SAHIBA AB AAP KO AASU BAHANE KI KOI JARURAT NAHI SAMJHI NA AAP AB BATAIYE K PARILOK KI KYA HALAT HAI.
PIHU(DUKHI HO)- JIJU AAPKE AUR DIDIYON K JAANE K BAAD WAHA SAB BADAL GAYA MAA(RANI PARI) TO HAMESA HI PARIDHI DIDI KO YAAD KRTI RAHTI HAI. SAYAD HI KOI DIN ESSA HO JAB MAA N UNKO NHI DEKHA HO JADUI DARPAN M. RAJPAATH K SAARE KAAM AB HAMARE KANDHO P AA CHUKE HAI. PITAJI ABHI BHI UN SAPTRANGI KITABO KI HI RAKSHA M LAGE RAHTE HAI.
MAIN- BAS KUCH DIN AUR FIR MAIN WADA KRTA HU SAB PAHLE JAISA HO JAYEGA.
PIHU- HAA JIJU BAS ISSI UMMID P TO HUM SAARE LAGE HUE HAI APNE KAAMO M. KYA MAIN EK BAAR DIDI S MIL SAKTI HU BAAT KR SAKTI HU.
MAIN- HA PR TUMHE YE BAAT SHILPA S KRNI HOGI SUNNO TUM NA SUBAH SHILPA K PAAS JAANA AUR USSE BOLNA K TUMHE APNI PARIDHI DIDI S MILNA HAI PHLE TO WO THODA NATAK KAREGI FIR MAAN BHI JAYEGI FIR WO TUMSE JAISA KAHE WAISA HI KRNA AUR HA MERI YAADE WAPAS AA GAYI HAI YE USSE PATA N CHALE SAMJHI( DEVIL SMILE K SAATH).
PIHU- OO TO AAP UNHE..
MAIN- HA BILKUL SAHI SOCHA TUMNE
PIHU - THIK HAI PR DHYAN S HAA WO BHI MERI DIDI HAI AGAR UNKO RULAYA TO MAIN AAPKO CHODUNGI NA.
MAIN- HA HA PATA HA CHALO AB JAO USKE PAAS MUJHE BHI KUCH KAAM HAI.
PIHU- HA HA PATA HAI APKE KAAM.
ITNA BOL WO WAHA S GAYAB HO GAYI.

AB CHUKI MERI YAADE MUJHE MIL GAYI THI TO MERA DIL KR RAHA THA APNI RANIYON KO DEKHNE KA.
MAIN-(R.BOOK S) KYA MAIN ABHI UNHE DEKH SAKTA HU.
R.BOOK- HA AAP APNI AAKHEN BAND KRO AUR UNKE BAARE M SOCHO WO APKO DIKHNE LAGEGI AUR AAP UNKO SUN BHI SAKTE HO.
{PARIDHI PARILOK KI RAJKUMARI THI PICHLE JANAM M AUR PIHU USKI CHOOTI BAHAN}
MAINE EK-EK KR SABHI KO DEKHA FIR ICHA HUI K APNE DOST(BABA K BETE KO DEKHU) USKO BHI DEKHA.
YE SAB KARTE HUE RAAT K 2 BAJ GAYE MAINE SOOCHA AB SOONE KA KOI MATLAB HI NAHI BANTA MAIN BABA K BATAYE ANUSAR BAITH GAYA YOG SHADHNA M.
MUJHE YOG M BAITHNE S MERE KUCH POWERS KA PATA CHALA.(BAAD M PATA CHALEGA INKA)

MAIN KARIB 6 BAJE UTHA YOG S. MERE DIMAG M EK IDEA AAYA KI KAISE MAIN YAHA KI LADKIYON KO YAHA S NIKAL SAKTA HU.
IS PLAN K LIYE RAAT HONA JAROORI THA. MAINE APNA EK CLONE BANAYA AUR USKO ISMILE KA ROOP DE WAHI CHOD DIYA AUR MAIN WAHA S NIKAL PADA BASE KI OOR WAHA PAHUCHNE MAI 7 BAJ GAYE. MAIN 18 SAAL KA HUA THA PR MERE BODY M JYADA CHANGES NAHI AAYE THE WAISE HI MAIN PAHLE S HI MUSCULAR THA.
BASE P PAHUCHA TO SAMEERA,SAMEER AUR RITWIK BAATE KAR RAHE THE.
MAIN- KAISE HO DOSTO?
SAMEERA- TU ITNI SUBAH YAHA P GHAR WALO N NIKAL DIYA KYA GHAR S.
USKI BAAT P BAAKI DONO HASNE LAGE.
MAIN-OOE TERE KO HI MUJHSE KAAM HAI ISSI LIYE JALDI AA GAYA HU.
MERI BAAT SUN SAMEERA CHOWK GAYI.
SAMEERA - TUJHE KAISE PATA K MUJHE TUJHSE KOI KAAM HAI.
MAIN- WO SHILPA DIDI N BATAYA THA(JHOOT).KYA TUNE USKA BACKGROUND CHEAK KR LIYA.
SAMEER- HA BHAI MAINE KIYA HAI SAB CLEAR HAI AUR TRAINING PERIOD M TO USNE KAHI RECORDS TODE HAI HAND TO HAND COMBACT MAIN TO USKA KOI JAWAB HI NHI.
SAMEERA- TUNE KUCH JYADA NAHI DEKH LIYA NA USKE BAARE M. JO ITNI TARIF KIYE JA RAHA HAI.
MAIN- ARRE AB CHODO IN BAATO KO USKO .. KYA NAAM BATAYA THA.
SAMEER- KIRAN. KIRAN RAINAWAT
MAIN- HA KIRAN , USKO YAHA BULAWO PR USKA CHAHRA DHAKA HINA CHAHIYE USSE IS JAGAH KA PATA N CHALE. ABHI TO SIRF USKO ISMILE K LIYE L KR AAWO. USKO RECRUIT KRNA HAI YA NHI YE TO USPE NAZAR RAKHNE K BAAD DEKHENGE.
TINO- THIK HAI

CHALIYE AB HUM USS HOTEL WALE K PAAS CHALTE HAI.USNE HOTEL K MANEGER KO PAISE DE KR WO VIDIO CLIP LE LIYA JISME MERI FAMILY THI AUR WO USS CLIP KO LE CHAL PADI APNI MOM K SAATH GHAR PR.
GHAR AATE HI WO SIDHA APNI MOM K SAATH APNE ROOM M GAYI CLIP KO APNE LAPTOP M LAGA DEKHNE LAGI.
JAISE HI CLIP MAI HUM SAB AAYE US AURAT K AAKHON S AAHU BAHNE LAGE WO BOLI.
AURAT- MOHINI AAJ MAIN BAHUT KHUSH HU BAHUT KHUSH(ROOTE HUE).
MOHINI- PR MOM SANJU BUA N AISA Q KIYA HOGA.
ALKA(MOHINI'S MOM)- Q NA KARE WO ISS GHAR N USKA BETA USSE CHIN LIYA, USKI BAHAN(SIFALI) JO BADI MUSKIL S USSE MILLI THI USKO BHI CHIN LIYA AUR AANT M TO USKI JAAN BHI LENI CHAHI THI ISS GHAR N MAINE HI USSE BATAYA THA K USPE HAMLA HONE WALA HAI AUR USSE BHAG JAANE KO KAHA THA PR FIR WO CAR BLAST HUA AUR..
MOHINI-PR UNHONE APKO WAPAS S CONTACT Q NHI KIYA
ALKA- NAHI BETA WO TO BAS APNI SAFETY K LIYE HOGA SAYAD.
FIR WO DONO VIDEO CLIP DEKHNE LAGE.WO BAAKI SABHI KO TO JANTE THE BAS MUJHE,SHILPA DIDI,SIFALI(GUDIYA), TANYA AUR TIYA KO CHOD KR.
VIDEO KHATAM HONE K BAAD ALKA BOLI.
ALKA- BETA MERI EK BAAT MAANEGI KYA TU INKA PATA LAGA SAKTI HAI MERE LIYE BOL NA.
MOHINI- MOM DHEKHO POONAM BUA BHI TO HAI ISME KYA HUM UNSE...
ALKA- BETA WO KABHI HAMARI BAAT NAHI SUNEGI WO TO HAMSE MILEGI BHI NAHI WO AAJ BHI NARAJ HAI HUM SAB S.
ABHI WO BAAT KR RAHI THI K UNKI NAZAR MERE UPER GAYI.
ALKA(MAAN M)- YE LADKA.. NAHI NAHI SAYAD YE MERA WAHAM HOGA.
ALKA- BETA TU BAS MERA YE KAAM KR DE.
MOHINI- ACHHA MAIN KUCH KARTI HU MOM.

CHALIYE IN MAA BETI KO YAHI CHOD HUM CHALTE HAI GHAR PR.
SUBAH K 8 BAJE HAI.
AAJ SABHI LOG BADE HI KHUSH NAZAR AA RAHE HAI PR MERA CLONE WO SAALA GHODE BECH ABHI TK SOO RAHA HAI.
TABHI USKE UPER PAANI GIRNE LAGTA HAI AUR WO JHAT S UTH JATA HAI.
MAIN(CLONE)- SHILPA DIDI AAP NE AISA Q KIYA.
S.DIDI- TU SAURYA KA HI CLONE HAI NA GADHE WO TO SUBAH 4 BAJE HI UTH JAATA HAI AUR EK TU HAI 8 BAJ RAHE HAI AUR NICHE SABHI TUJHE BULA RAHE HAI.
CLONE(MAIN)- Q MAINE TO KUCH NAHI KIYA.
ABHI CLONE BOL HI RAHA THA K ACHANAK HI WAHA KOI PRAKAT HO JATA HAI......

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SABHI LOG GHAR MAI PARTY K TAIYARI M JUTE HUE THE K DOORBELL BAJTA HAI. MOM DARWAJA KHOLNE JAATI HAI. DARWAJA KHULTE HI MOM.
MOM-TUUMMMM
AUR MOM BEHOSH HO JATI HAI.

AAGE:-

MOM KO GIRTE HUE DEKH BAHAR JO KADHA THA USNE USSE PAKAD LIYA.
WO1-DIDI UTHO NA (WO2) S DEKHO NA KYA HUA DIDI KO.
WO2(JOR S)- VIKRAM PAANI LA.
VIKRAM MAUSA JO K SAJAWAT DEKH RAHE THE UNHE YE AWAJ SUN PPAHLE TO LAGA UNKE KAAN BAJ RAHE HAI PR JB UNHONE BAAKIYON K TARAF DEKHA TO UNKE CHAHRE K RANG BHI UDDE HUE THE.
WO DAUD KR GATE K PASS GAYE PAANI K SAATH.
UNKE PICCHE BAAKI SAARE LOG BHI GAYE US AWAJ K TARAF WO BHI JANNA CHAHTE THE.
JAISE HI SAARE DOOR P PAHUCHE KISI KO APNI AAKHON P BHAROSA NAHI HUA.WO TO JAISE JAAM HI GAYE HO.
WO2(JOOR S)-VIKRAM PAANI DE JALDI DEKH SANJU DIDI BEHOSH HAI.

USKI AWAJ SUN TO JAISE SAARE HOSH M AAGAYE SABKE AAKHON M AASU THE.

SAARE BADE- DEEEEP SAIIIFAAALI TUUUMMMM

JI HAA YE THE HERO K REAL PARENTS.

DEEP-(VIKRAM MAUSA S) AABBE DHAKAN PAANI DE.

VIKRAM MAUSA N JALDI PAANI DIYA AUR FIR DEEP N SANJU K UPER PAANI CHIDKA WO HOSH M AAYI AUR JHAT S SAIFALI(MAA) KO GALLE LAGA LIYA.

YAHA S SAIFALI KO MAA AUR DEEP KO PAPA SANJANA KO MOM AUR ABHISHEK KO DAD

MOM(MAA KO PAKAD)- TU THIK TO HAINA. KAHA THI ITNE DIN AUR WO PAHAD P JO HUA THA WO...
ABHI KOI KUCH AUR BOLTA K PAPA N BOLA.
PAPA-SABHI K SAWALO KA JAWAB MILEGA CHALO PAHLE ANDER TO AANE DO.
EK TO PAHLE HI SAARE SHOCK M THE KISI KO KUCH SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA THA PR FIR BHI SAARE ANDER CHALE GAYE AUR PAHUCH GAYE HALL M.
AB D.BUA S RAHA NHI GAYA EO TURANT HI PAPA AUR MAA KO GALE LG ROOTE HUE.
D.BUA- KAHA CHALA GAYA THA DEEPU TU MUJHE CHOD KR AUR ISSE BHI LE GAYA THA. PATA HAI TERA EK BETA BHI HAI JO BILKUL TERI HI TARAH DIKHTA HAI AUR USKI AAKHEN NA BILKUL MERI SAIFALI KI TARAH DIKHTI HAI.
MAA- HAA DIDI HUM USSE MIL CHUKE HAI WAHI TO HAME YAHA LE KR AAYA FIR KUCH KAAM BOL CHALA GAYA.
SABHI YE SUN DANG RAH GAYE.
SABHI - KYA SAURYA TUM DONO KO YAHA CHODNE AAYA THA.
MAA/PAPA- HAA
MOM- US DIN PAHAD PR JO HUA USKE.....
MAA- DIDI UNLOGO N HAMARE FORMULA KO CHURA LIYA THA AUR WO SERUM KHUD P TEST KRNE WAALE THE TO MAINE AUR DEEP NE WO SERUM KISI TARAH UNSE LE LIYA PR TABHI UNKE BAHUT SAARE AADMI WAHA AA GAYE.
PAPA- MAINE AUR SAIFALI N SOOCHA K ISKO KHUD MAIN HI INJECT KR LETE HAI WAISE BHI MARN...
ABHI PAPA ITNA BOLE HI THE K CHHHAAATAAAKKKK.
D.BUA N DHAR DIYA EK.
D.BUA- KITNI BAAR BOLA HAI AISA N BOLNE KO AUR TUNE WO SERUM KHUD M Q INJECT KIYA AUR ISSE BHI INJECT KRWA DIYA.
R.FUFA- ARRE DIVYA BOLNE TO DO USSE.
D.BUA N R.FUFA KO GHUR KR DEKHA WO EK DUM CHUP HO GAYE.
MAA- DIDI TO FIR HAMNE WO INJECT KR LIYA HAMME KUCH BHI CHANGES NA AAYI HUME ULTIYA AANE LAGI YE DEKH UNLOGO K BOSS N PAHLE TO APNE SAARE SCIENTISTS KO MAAR DIYA AUR FIR HAME BHI GOLI MAAR PAHAD S NICCHE FEK DIYA.ABHI KAL HI HAME HOSH AAYA TO HUM KISI AASHRAM M THE UNHONE BATAYA K HUM PURE 17 SAAL S WAHI COMA M THE.WAHA PR HI HAMARA ILAJ HUA THA.WO FORMULA SAYAD USSI K WAJAH S HUM BACH PAYE USNE HAMARE CELLS KO JALDI S THIK HONE KI KABILIYAT DE DI HAI.FIR HUM BHI WAHA S AANE K LIYE NIKAL PADE HUM THODE DER PAHLE HI SAHAR M PAHUCHE THE K HAME SAURYA MIL GAYA.MAINE USSE DEKHTE HI PAHCHAN LIYA K WO MERA HI BETA HAI PR WO TO MUJHE MAASI BOL RAHA THA AUR USNE FIR HAMSE KUCH BAATE PUCHI FIR HAME YAHA CHOD CHALAGAYA YE BOL K WO RAAT TK AA JAYEGA.MAIN USSE ROK BHI NAHI SAKI.

MAA N SABKO YE SAARI BAATE BATAYI.

PAPA-YE BATAO YAHA ITNI SAJAWAT Q KR RAHE HO KOI PARTY HAI KYA.

S.DIDI- WO MAMA JI AAJ NA SAURYA N STATE BOARD TOP KIYA HAI TO USSI KI PARTY HAI AUR YE USSE PATA HI NAHI.
PAPA-(D.FUFA S)OOYE YE SHILPA HAI NA.
S.DIDI- HAA MAIN SHILPA HU.
MAA- IDHER AA MERI BACHI CHALO AB HAME BAAKIYO S BHI MILWA DO.
FIR SHILPA DIDI N BAAKI SABSE(BACCHO S) UNKA INTRO KRWAYA. JAB TIYA AUR TANYA KI BAARI AAYI TO UNKE AAKHON M AASHUN THE.
MAA-KYA HUA TUM DONO KO ROO Q RAHI HO
TIYA-MAASI AAP BHAIYA KO LE JAOGI NA HAMSE DUR.
JAISE HI SANJANA N YE SUNA USKE DIL M BHI EK TEES THI UTHI EK DARD HUA WAHI DARD JO USNE APNE BETE KO KHO KR PAYA THA. USKI AAKHEN BHI BHAR GAYI PR TABHI MAA BOLI.
MAA (TIYA S)- ARRE AAPKO YE KISNE BOLA K MAIN AAPKE BHAIYA KO LE JAUNGI WO TO AAPKE SAATH HI RAHENGE AUR HUM BHI.
TANYA(KUSH HO)- SACCHI MAASI.
MAA-HAA MUCCHI MERI BACHI. HAL AB AASHU POCH.

AB BAARI AAYI SAIFALI(GUDIYA KI).
USSE DEKH PAPA BOLE.
PAPA-(MAA S) YE TO BILKUL TUMHARI TARAH DIKHTI HAI WAHI AAKHEN WAHI BAAL.
MAA- HAA(SAIFALI S) BETA AAPKA NAAM KYA HAI.
SAIFALI- MERA NAAM SAIFALI HAI AAP MERI MAASI HO NA.
MAA PAPA N USKA NAAM SUN PAHLE TO SABHI K OOR DEKHA FIR SAIFALI S MAA BOLI.
MAA- HA BETA MAIN AAPKI MAASI HU.
ABHI UNHONE ITNA HI BOLA THA K DARWAJE PR S KISI KI AWAJ AAYI AUR SABHI UDHER HI DEKHNE LAGE.
DARWAJE PR ANNURADHA MAASI & FAMILY KHADI THI. AWAJ ANNURADHA MAASI KI THI.
ANNU MAASI- SAIFAALI, SANJUUU
BAS ITNA HI BOLI THI AUR WO DAUD KR ANDER AAYI AUR MAA AUR MOM DONO KO HI GALE LAGA LIYA AUR UNKE CHAHRE KO CHUMNE LAGI.
DARWAJE P KADE PAWAN MAUSA AUR UNKI BETIYAN AUR PRADEEP BAS SHOCK S DEKHE JAA RAHE THE Q KI AAJ UNKE SAMNE KUCH MAARE HUE LOG KHADE THE.
FIR KYA THODA AUR EMOTINAL DRAMA CHALA AUR MAA & MOM N APNI APNI KAHANI UNHE BATAYI.
MOM BAAR BAAR PRADEEP KO DEKHE JA RAHI THI.YAHI HAAL DAD KA BHI THA. YE BAAT PAWAN MAUSA N NOTE KIYA AUR BOLE.
P.MAUSA- AB ISSE DEKHTE HI RAHOGE YA GALE BHI LAGAO GE YE TUM DONO KA BETA HAI SAMJHE.
YE BAAT PRADEEP K LIYE BHI EK BOMB K BARABAR THI. USSE AAJ TK YE NHI BATAYA GAYA THA K ANNU USKI MAASI HAI YA USKE MOM DAD KAISE DIKHTE THE.WAHI MOM DAD K LIYE TO YE BAHUT BADA JHATKA THA UNHE TO APNI KHOYI HUE CHIZ MIL GAYI THI FIR KUCH DER BAAD SABHI USSE BHI MILE KUCH EMOTIONA DRAMA YAHA BHI HUA.
MOM(A.MAASI S)- APKO PRADEEP KAHA MILA THA DIDI HUMNE BAHUT DHUNDA PR HAME TO NAHI MILA.
A.MAASI- SANJU JB PAPA NAHI DILAWAR SINGH K LOG TUM SABHI K PICHE THE AUR TUMNE PRADEEP KO PARK M CHUPA DIYA THA TO WO PAWAN K CHACHERE BHAI KO MILLA BEHOSH THA USS WAKT YE. USKA KOI BACCHA NHI THA TO USNE ISSE APNE PAAS RAKH LIYA.FIR KUCH SAAL BAAD JB USSE PATA CHALA K USSE CANCER HAI TO USNE PRADEEP KO HAME SAUP DIYA AUR WO CHAL BASA. JB MAINE PRADEEP KO DEKHA TO USKE SEENE PR BHI WAHI BIRTHMARK THI JO TUMHARE BETE P THI. FIR MAINE DNA TEST KARWAYA AUR MERA SAQ SAHI NIKLA.PR MAIN YE BAAT KISI KO BATA NJI SAKTI THI MUJHE ABHI BHI SAQ THA K USS DILAWAR SINGH K LOG ABHI BHI ISKE PICCHE PAD JAYENGE. MAINE YE BAAT SIRF DIVYA KO HI BATAYI THI.
P.MASSI- AAP NE MUJHE Q NHI BATAYA.
A.MAASI- DILAWAR SINGH(NANAJI) AAJ BHI TUJHE HI SABSE JYADA PYAR KRTA HAI AUR JAB PRADEEP MUJHE MILA TO WO TUJHE TB BHI MANANE KI KOSIS KR RAHA THA AGAR USSE PATA CHAL JATA TO MAIN YE RISK NHI LENA CHAHTI THI YE SANJU KI NISHANI HI TO THI MERE PAAS TABHI.
MAA- ANNU DIDI AAP PAPA KO NAAM S Q BULA RAHE HO WO BADE HAI.
MAA KA YE BOLNA THA K PAPA KO CHOD SABHI BADE UNPR CHAD GAYE AUR DAATNE LAGE.
A.MAASI- WO KOI PAPA NAHI HAI MERE AUR NA HI TERE SAMJHI TU BAS MERI BAHAN HAI.
P.MAASI- AUR NHI TO KYA WO BAAP KAHLANE LAYAK HI NHI HAI.
DIGVIJAY-TUM KYA PGAGAL HO GAYI HO ITNA KUCH HONE K BAAD BHI..

BAAKIYON NE BHI UNHE BAHUT KUCH KAHA TABHI PIHU BOLI.
PIHU- LAGTA HAI AAJ PARTY NHI HONE WALI.
MAA(PIHU K OOR)- YE KON HAI AUR KISNE KAHA ISSE PARTY NHI HOGI.
PARIDHI-MAAMI YE HAMARI TRAINEER HAI HUME SELF DEFENCE SIKHAYEGI.
MAA- ACCHA (PIHU S) AAPNE AISA Q BOLA K PARTY NHI HOGI AB TO VAHUT BADI PARTY HOGI.
PIHU-AUNTY WO MUJHE LAGA K ABHI AAPKO AUR DAANT PADNI BAAKI HOGI.
A.MAUSI- ARRE AB ISSE KOI KUCH NHI BOLEGA AUR SABHI AB LAG JAO PARTY K TAIYARI MAI. MERA EK BANJE N TOP KIYA HAI STATE BOARD AUR DUSRA AAJ APNE MOM DAD S MILAA HAI AUR TO AUR AAJ MERI SAARI BAHNE BHI SATH HAI.
FIR KYA SAARE LAG GAYE KAAM P BAS PRADEEP KO CHOD KR USSE TO TIYA AUR TANYA HI PAKDE BAITHE HUE THE WO BHI BADA KHUSH THA APNI BAHNO KA PYAR DEKH AAJ USSE SABKUCH MIL GAYA THA.

INKO YAHI RAHNE DETE HAI HUM DEKHTE HAI HAWELI M KYA HUA THA.

MAIN KAPPA K SAATH USKE PICHE HAWELI M CHALA GAYA. HAWELI ANDER S KUH AUR HI DIKH RAHI THI ANDER EK HI TECH GHAR THA JISKA PATA KISI KO NHI THA.
MAIN ANDER GAYA AUR YE SAB DEKH ACHAMBHIT RAH GAYA. TABHI KISI KI AWAJ AAYI " DEEP HAMARA BETA KB AAYEGA PUCHO NA INN DONO S"
PAPA- SAIFALI THODA TO SABR RAKHO AUR YE HUM KIS JAGAH P AA GAYE HAI YE TO DEKHO.
MAA- MUJHE BAS APNE BETE S MILNA HAI AUR KISI S NAHI.
PAPA- MILNA TO MUJHE BHI HAI PR ABHI USME WAQT HAI GURUJI N BOLA THA NA.TB TK HUM ISS HAWELI KO DEKHTE HAI.
WO DELHO WAHA PR YE TO EK LAB HAI.
MAA- PR YEE EQUIPMENTS YE TO EKDUM S NAYE HAI. ESSE EQUIPMENTS TO BADE MAHNGE HOTE HAI.CHALO UN DONO SISYON S PUCHTE HAI K YE KYA HAI.
PAPA- CHALO.
MAIN TO BAS UNKI BAATE SUN RAHA THA AUR UNHE DEKHE JAA RAHA THA MERE AAKHEN BHAR AAYI THI UNHE DEKH.
WO BHI LAB K SIDE S BAHAR AA RAHE THE K UNHE MAIN DIKHAI DIYA AUR SAATH MAI KAAPA BHI.
MUJHE DEKH WO JAISE KAHI KHO GAYE PR TABHI MERE PICHHE KAPPA KO DEKH MAA CHILLAYI.
MAA- BETA BHAG WAHA S WO TUJHE NUKSAN NA PAHUCHA DE.
PAPA N TO WAHI PAAS RAKHI TABLE HIUTHA LI KAPA KO MARNE K LIYE.
MAIN- MAA PAPA AAP(ANKHO M AASHU LIYE)

MERE MUH S ITNA HI SUNNA THA UNDONO N K BHAG KR MERE PAAS AAYE AUR MUJHE GALE LAGA LIYA.
MAA- TUM SAURYA HO MERE BETE HO KITNE BADE HO GAYE HO(ROOTE HUE AUR MUJHE CHUMTE HUE)
PAPA- MERA SHER KITNA BADA HO GAYA HAI TU.BILKUL MERI TARAH DIKHTA HAI .
MAIN - MAA PAPA AAPKE SAATH KYA HUA THA AUR AAP KAHA THE.
FIR PAPA N MUJHE WAHI KAHANHI SUNAYI. ABHI TAK DONO SISYA BHI AA GAYE THE HAMARE PAAS PAHLE TO WO KAAPA K SAMNE JHUKE FIR BOLE.
SISYA1-HE RAAJAN AAPNE HAME APNE DARSAN DE TEIPT KR DIYA HAI.
KAAPA- KHADE HO JAO. TUM MERE SISYA R.G K SISYA HI HOGE. BOLO KYA KAHA HAI USNE.
SISYA2- RAAJAN WO AAPKO AUR INHE(MERI OOR) KO APNE PAAS BULANA CHAHTE HAI UNHE AAPSE KUCH BAATE KARNI HAI.
MAIN(KAAPA S)-YE R.G KAUN HAI AUR MUJHSE Q MILNA CHAHTA HAI.
KAPPA- YE WAHI HAI JISNE TUMHARE MAATA PITA KO BACHAYA HAI AUR YE MERA SISYA BHI HAI. SAYAD KOI JARURI BAAT HOGI TABHI BULAYA HAI.
MAA- BETA KUCH DER RUK JAA NA FIR CHALE JAANA ABHI TO TUJHSE MILLI BHI NHI THIK S.
PAPA- SAIFALI USSE JANE DO GURUJI N JARUR KOI KHAAS KAAM HOGA ISSE.
MAIN- MAA PAPA ABHI AAPKO POONAM MAASI K GHAR CHOD DETA HU AAP WAHA JAO SABSE MILO AUR MAIN RAAT TK AATA HU. KOI BHI KAHANI BATA DENA K AAP WAHA TK KAISE PAHUCHE.
MAA- BETA IDHER TO HUM BUS S AAYE HAI AUR ABHI TO SAHAR KIKOI GAADI HAI NHI WO TO RAAT KO KHULEGI.
KAAPA ITNA SUN HASNE LAGA.
PAPA- YE HAS Q RAHE HAI.
MAIN- PAPA ISKE PAAS KUCH POWERS HAI. AAP DONO BASERA HAATH PAKAD LO(SISYO S) AAP DONO YAHI RUKO HUM ABHI AATE HAI.
SISYA - JI
MAINE AAKHEN BAND KI AUR P.MAASI K GHAR K BAARE M SOOCHA AUR WAHA PAHUCH GAYA.
MAA PAPA KO WAHI HAIRAT MAI CHOD MAIN WAHA S FIR HAWELI AA GAYA
MAIN- KAAPA YE HAWELI TO BHOOTIYA THI NA.
KAAPA- HAA Q KI MAIN YAHA RAHA KRTA THA PR KUCH WAQT PAHLE JINNO KI MALIKA KA AADESH AAYA K MAIN AB SIRF TALAB M HI RAHU AUR YE JAGAH KHALI KR DU. MAINE WAISA HI KIYA AUR MALIKA NE TO ANDER S PURA KA PURA HAWELI HI BADAL DIYA JAADU S.
MAIN- ACHHA TO YE SHILPA KA KIYA DHARA HAI.
MAINE SISYO S BOLA MERA HAATH PAKADNE KO AUR US AASRAM K BAARE M SOOCHNE KO AUR HUM PAHUCH GAYE WAHA.
R.G N KAAPA KO DEKHA AUR TURANT HI USKE PAIRO M GIR GAYA AUR USSE AASIRWAD MAGNE LAGA.
MAIN- R.G AAPNE MERE MAATA PITA KI JAAN BACHAYI HAI MAIN KABI AAPKA YE KRAZ NHI CHUKA PAUNGA.
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Saurya ka dost jisne apni jaan di thi nice update

Kingsingh · Dec 21, 2020

Eagerly Waitinnnnggggggggg for second part Bhai.

Sam star 7 · Jan 28, 2021

Bhai part one zabardast tha

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UPDATE - 36

Ab Tak
Maine Mohini didi s close hone k liye unki wishes puri krne laga.

Aage:-

Aise hi 8 din beet gaye inn 8 dino m main aur Mohini didi dono hi kaafi close ho chuke the. Main ab unse unke friends ki baate unki school life aur na jaane kya kya sunta rahta tha aur wo sunati hi rahti pr abhi bhi wo mujhe bhai k nazar s hi dekhti thi. Meri samajh nhi aa raha tha k kya karu.

Abhi yahi koi gaon wale problem k muhurat ko aane m 5-6 din the.
Mere paas ab 2 kaam the pahla Mohini wala aur dusra sabko gaon le kr jaana.
Main room m baitha inhi sab k baare m soch raha tha. Maine Base k liye apna ek clone bhej rakha tha jo waha ka kaam dekha krta tha.
Mohini didi ander aa gayi.
Mohini- Saurya tune aur daayan ji n koi plan socha k nhi papa aur bua k liye.
Main- Haa soch raha hu.
Mohini- kya abhi bhi soch hi raha hai dekh jaldi kuch krna hoga.
Main- Arre Didi aap baitho pahle aur meri baat sunno ye Daayan ji bol rahi thi k C.Mama yaha iss ghar k paas aate hai.
Mohini- kya baat krta hai matlab karti hai Daayan ji.
Main- arre sach m pata hai unko lagta hai hum bf gf hai.
Mohini- Saurya ye kya baak raha hai.
Main- Arre ye mama ji ko lagta hai aisa daayan ji n bola mere ko aur maine aapko aur aap ho k mujhpe chadi jaa rahi h.
Mohini- Pr papa ko yaha ka address kaise mil gaya aur agar wo sahar m hai aur unhe pata hai k main yaha hu to wo milte q nhi mujhse aur unhone ye kaise soch liya k hum bf gf hai.
Main- Aare didi aaram s yaar aap to tufan mail ban chali. Daayan ji n bola k Mamaji n hum dono ko baahar ghumte hue dekh liya aur picha kr yaha aa gaye.
Mohini- Acha pr wo tumhe aur mujhe bf gf wo q bhala.
Main- wo wo
Mohini- Ye kya wo wo laga rakha hai bol jaldi .
Main- wo daayan ji bol rahi hai k hum hamesa sath gumte hai na to unhe laga... aur wo bhi aapko khush dekh kr khush ho gaye.
Mohini(maan m)- Ha uss din wo pub wala bhi yahi bol raha tha kya hum pr hum to bhai bahan hai na.
Mohini- Wo chod aur ye puch Daayan ji s k hum kya kare.
Main- Dekho didi hame kuch nhi krna Daayan ji bol rahi hai Mamaji jald hi aa jayenge yaha aapse milne bas wahi s to kaam shuru hoga aapka....
Sab kuch ruk gaya Didi jas ki tas khadi rahi.
Baba- Saurya kuch bhi kr k isse jali s apna lo isse wo hak do jaldi warna anath ho jaana hai.
Main- Baba ye sab kya hai aur ye aap kya baat kr rahe ho isme waqt to lagega na.
Baba-Waqt nhi hai saurya waqt hi to nhi hai na tumhare paas na Mohini k paas na hi mere paas.
Main- Aap ho kaha saamne aayie.
Baba- Ek baat sunno meri abhi Mohini k saath sambhog karo tum jaise jaise aage badhoge usse sab yaad aata rahega sab kuch aur ye bahut jaruri hai saurya aaaahh
Main- Baba ye ye kya tha aap thik to ho na.
Baba- waqt km hai saurya aahhh dhyan s sunno
"Jo paaya hai tumne usse khona hoga.
Wo paane ko jo tum kho chuke the"
Yaad rakhna isse wo wo wakt kareeb hai wo aayega aur aur tum taiyaar nhi ho jaise hi aaaaahhh meri awaj band hogi Parilok aur jinlok p ek abhed shuraksha kawach lag jayega wo gayab ho jaayenge aur pritvi pr pritvi pr s wo aazaad ho jaayegaa pr fir prithvi bhi surakchit ho jaayegi aur bas yahi ek surakshit jagah hogi tum sabhi k liye pr aaahh tum ab der naa karo Mohini s..
Bas itni hi to aawaj aayi fir awaj band main samajh nhi paa raha tha kya hua.
Maine pihu ko bulaya Raani pari ko R.G ko Kappa ko sabhi ko pr koi bhi nhi aaya bas ek Shilpa aayi mere paas uske aakhon m aashu the aate hi wo mere gale lag gayi.
Main- Jaan ye kya ho raha hai Baba n.
Shilpa- Sab khatam ho gaya Saurya sab kuch Baba nhi rahe, Pihu , Choti maa sab chale gaye.meri shaktiyan chali gayi Kappa kaid ho gaya tumhare ander yaha tak tumhari bhi shaktiyan jaa rahi hai.
Main- kya pr kaise aisa kaise.
Shilpa- abhi waqt nhi hai tum Mohini ko dekho usse sambandh banao yahi ek maatr jariya hai jo fir hum sabhi ko ek kr degi waqt nhi hai Saurya waqt nhi hai jao uske paas.
Meri samajh m nhi aa raha tha k ho kya raha hai pr achanak s hi Mohini didi m jaise koi bhoot chala aaya ho wo wo kaampne lagi.
Shilpa- Jao saurya waqt nhi hai abhi jao.
Main jhat s pahuch gaya unke paas mujhe samajh nhi aa raha tha k kya karu main ki tabhi Mohini ka sarir kala padne laga wo aur jor s hilne lagi . Main unke paas gaya unko pakda ki tabhi unhone apna honth mere hoth p rakh diya wo mere hoth kaante jaa rahi thi mere hoothon s khun nikalne laga aur Mohini ussi khoon ko chusne lagi.
Mohini- Saaaamraaathhh
Mujhe pata nhi kaise ek nasha sa chadne laga maine apne kapde aur uske kapde gayab kr diye.
Pata nhi kya ho raha tha humme hum dono hi jaise kahi aur hi chale gaye the wo mujhe chumti jaa rahi thi kaat ti jaa rahi thi fir mera khoon piti jaati.
Mujhse aab raha nhi jaa raha tha maine usse bed p le jaana chaha. Hum dono hi bed p chale gaye
Wo mere uper aa gayi aur mera lund pakad usse chaatne lagi chusne lagi pr pata nhi q ye sex sex jaisa nhi tha naa to main khud kuch kr raha tha naa hi wo aisa lag raha tha k koi hum dono ko hi jabran ye sab krwa raha hai badi hi ajeeb baat thi ye.
Ab mera lund khada ho chuka tha achanak s meri aakhon k saamne kuch chalne laga pata nhi kya tha wo aur fir mere lund p kuch kasta hua mehsus hua maine dekha k main Mohini k uper hu aur jor jor s dhaka lagaye jaa raha hu pata nhi kya waqt raha hoga ye kuch bhi samajh nhi aa raha tha. Achanak fir wahi drishya dikhayi diye mujhe aur fir jab hosh aaya to Mohini mere uper chadi uchal rahi thi hum dono hi apne charam pr aa gaya tha. Fir mera kaamras Mohini k kaamras m mil gaya aur meri aakhen band ho gayi. Gardan k paas bahut gard ho raha tha aisa lag raha tha koi meri jaan nikale jaa raha hai. Jab aakhen khuli to Mohini ka muh pura khun s bhinga hua tha aur aur mere gale s khun bahata hi jaa raha tha.
Mohini ke bade bade daant nikle hue the wo wo ek vetal banni hui thi par wo bahut hi sunder thi kya batau mera khoon uske hoothon ko aur bhi laali de raha tha uski aakhen bhi ek dum s laal thi uski skin jo pahle thodi saawli rang ki thi aaj ek dum s chamak rahi thi wo wo saayad..
Mohini- Saamraath aakhir mera intejar khatam ho hi gaya hum ek ho hi gaye tum mujhe mil hi gaye.
Main-kon ho tum aur mujhe kaise jaanti ho.
Mohini- Lambi kahani hai mere raaja aab to milna laga hi rahega abhi sunno hum 4 din s yahi pade hue hai wo waqt kareeb hai jao aur uss Saifali ko le jao Manjulika k paas saath m uss Deep ko bhi le jaana pr aur koi bhi nhi.
Main-tum ho kaun aur ye sab kaise jaanti ho.
Mohini- Arre balam bada intezar karwaya tha tumne ab thoda tum bhi kr lo. Haa ho sake to sabhi s ek baar mill lena q ki wo sab hume bhulne wale hai hum nayi jindgi m jaane walle hai.
Main- Kya kon bhul jayega hame aur nayi jindgi ye kya hai.
Mohini- Chalo ab pati ho tum mere to itna to bata hi sakti hu sunno wo aazad ho chuka hai iss Dharti k kaid s wo ab sabhi loko ko fir s apne addhin kr lega pr usse pahle jaise hi wo gaon ka Sraap tutega tum maar jaoge aur tumhare saath hi maregi tumhari patniyan bhi bas sab kuch fir s shuru ho ga tum sab bhul jaoge sabhi hame bhul jaayenge. Iss ghar m koi bhi hamare wajood ko bhi jaan nhi paayega. Saifali maari jayegi Deep maara jaayega Shilpa bhi.
Main-Nhi ye nhi hoga main aisa hone nhi dunga main apni jaan de dunga pr kisi ko kuch hone nhi dunga.
Mohini(hasti hui)- Oo mere bhole balam ye to hona hi tha Baba n bola tha na
"Jo paa liya hai usse khona hoga.
Wo paane ko jo tum kho chuke the."
Yahi to matlab hai iska mere balma haa ek baat to main bhul hi gayi.
Wo mere paas aayi aur iss baar gardan k dusri taraf apne lambe nukile daant gada mera khun pine lagi aur main dard s tadapta raha.
Mohini- Haa ab sahi hai sunno jyada to nhi bas thodi si shakti de saki hu tumhe uska istemal bas apne inn Maa Papa ko le jaane m hi krna idher mdekhti hu kise maarna hai aur kisse nhi.
Main-nhi ruko kya tum kya tum ye sab rok nhi sakti.
Mohini- Balma ab main lya bolu ye jo bhi ho raha hai sab achhe k liye hi to ho raha hai aur ek baat tum chinta na karo jisse bhi tumhara koi sacha rista juda hua tha ya judne wala tha uss janam m wo sab hame hamare nayi jindgi m milenge aur iske liye unhe marna hoga. Jo tumhari ye patni karegi.Ab chalo meri aakhon m dekho samjhe.
Maine uski aakhon m dekha aur m sammohit ho gaya aur soo gaya yahi koi raat m utha bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha ye bhi pata nhi chal raha tha k jo maine sunna aur dekha tha sach ha ya koi sapna. Main utha k tabhi Maa aa gayi aur mujhe dinner k liye bullaya main pahuch gaya Ghar2.
Waha pr pahucha to sabhi baithe the. Ek hi jagah khali thi wo thi Mohini aur Shilpa k beech ki chair mainwahi baith gaya.
Mohin(mere maan m)- Dekho balam dhyan s dekho sabhi ko pata nhi phir dikhe bhi ya nhi.
Main- Kya ye ruk nhi sakta.
kya main kuch bhi nhi kr sakta isse le kr.
Mohini- Arre mere pyare balma tumhe hi to krna hai sab kuch aur ye ye jo baithe hue insan hai na unhi k liye to krna hai pr nayi jindgi m.
Main- Pr fir inka kya hoga kya hoga in sabhi ka aur kya main apne Maa papa ko bhi nhi bacha sakta.
Mohini-Offo ruko(Shilpa s) arre didi dekho na balma kya bole jaa rahe hai samjhao inhe ye jaruri hai.
Shilpa n meri oor dekha aur baad m batane ka bol diya.
Hum sabhi n khana khatam kiya.
Main apne room m chala gaya wahi Mohini aur Shilpa bhi aa gayi.
Main- Silpa ye sab ho kya raha hai ye ye bolti hai k Hum sabhi maar jaayenge Maa mar jaayegi papa bhi.
Shilpa- Ye sach hai ye sahi bol rahi hai.
Main- pr pr kya ye sab rok nhi sakti.
Shilpa - nhi ye nhi rook skti koi bhi nhi rook sakta.
Yahi niyati hai aur ye ho kr hi rahega pr chinta mat karo hum phir milenge sabhi k sabhi ek nayi jagah ek naye waqt m aur uss pal koi bhi koi bhi hame kuch nhi kar paayega hum sabhi ka milan bhi hoga aur uska annt bhi jiske kaaran ye sab ho raha hai.
Main- kon hai wo ye to bata do.
Mohini- Balma tum bhi na ab bahut ho gaya jyada sawal jawab nhi samjhe kal niklna hai tumhe Gaon k liye aur haa mil lo apni patniyon s q ki waqt kam hai.
Main- Ek baat batao kya mera dost pradeep bhi aayega.
Mohini- Nhi na Bhaiya ko yahi rahna hoga kaash wo bhi aa paate pr nhi. Haa pr aap tention na lo nayi jindgi m wo hum sabhi s jald hi milengi aur hamare saath hi rahenge. Chalo ab bahut ho gayi baate soo jao samjhe mujhe bhi to jaana hai.
Main-kaha jana hai.
Mohini(haste hue)- wo apni hone waali sautano ko maarne unka khoon pine taaki wo bhi hamare saath aa sake nayi jindgi m.
Itna bol wo chali gayi.
Ab main aur Shilpa hi bache the bas waha.
Main- Jaan ye hai kon aur ye sab ho q raha hai.
Shilpa- Saurya baat darasal ye hai k usko maara nhi jaa sakta pritvi pr to usse aazad krna tha. Ussi m Baba nhi rahe aur...
Abhi wo kuch aur bolti k Mohini aayi aur meri gardan p apna daant laga mera khoon pine lagi.
Mohini- Balma chalo ab so jao kal kaam bhi hai na bahut bada.
Main usse bolna chahta tha pr bol na saka meri aakhen lag gayi.
Ussi n fir mujhe subah 6 baje utha diya.
Mohini-Saurya aaj hum sabko alag hona hai pr chita mat krna sabhi ko main saath le aaungi jo bhi hamare apne hai.
Main- kon ho tum ye to bata do.
Mohini- Tumne pahle kabhi vetallok ki Rajkumari k baare m sunna hai kya?
Main-Haa...Tum tum wo ho pr ye kaise ho skta hai usse to usse to andhero m kaid kr diya gaya tha na usko to Vetallok k raja n hi apni hi beti ko to tum wo kaise.
Mohini(muskurate hue)- Haa usne mujhe kaid krna to chaha tha pr mujhe bhi meri Maa, Vetal lok ki raani n prasikshan diya tha sayad unhe pata ho k aisa kuch hona hai, Maine apne aatma ko unhi k locket m chipa diya tha. Main intezar m thi tumhare k kab tum aao aur usse mritudand do fir tum mujhe apna lo pr aisa hua nhi aapko wo sraap mil gaya aur aapne apni sharir s sab kuch tyag diya aur mirtyu ko gale laga baithe. Jab ye baat mujhe gyat hui maine bhi apni Maa s baat kr khud k sharir ko nast krwa liya aur main bhi maar gayi aur aapka intejar krne lagi.
Main- Mera intezar pr q.
Mohini- arre main tumse pyar krti thi haa dekha nhi tha tumhe pr fir bhi chah to thi na tumare khoon ko chakhne ki bas ussi liye aur ye niyati bhi to thi hamari.
hmmm.. Ek baat batao tumhari kitni patniyan hogi pata hai tumhe.
Main- Tumhe mila kr 5 aur bhi hai kya.
Mohini-(haste hue) Abhi na tumhe kuch bhi pata nhi tumhare intejar m kitne hi baithe hue hai bas issi k liye to ye ho raha hai.
Ab bahut hua waqt aane hi wala hai sunno uss Saifali aur Deep ko le jao gaon m. Waha Saifali khud hi apna sharir dhund legi. Wo sharir wahi ha usse jaise hi Saifali chuti hai ek Black hole khulega aur wo ussi k ander chali jaayegi. Aage ka main bata nhi sakti.
Main- Ye sab q ho raha hai.
Mohini- Balma tumhara janm Manjulika s hi hona tha pr uss saitan n ussi k kaaran ye sab ho raha hai inn sab m wo gaon bali chad gaya aur ye sab bas ussi gaon k liye aur uss saithan ko kuch batane k liye ho raha hai.
Ab jao yaha s.
Main- Tum to khud hi black creature ho na fir mera intezar q main to..
Mohini-Ha ha bolo main to kya... Tum bhi jaante ho k tumhare ander jitni roshni ki shakti hai andhere ki bhi utni hi hai ab aur sawal nhi samjhe.
Main puchna to bahut kuch chahta tha pr usne to khud hi mujhe Maa aur papa ko gaon m bhej diya.
Hamare gaon m jaate hi Dharti kaamp uthi.

(Maa k respect m).
Main abhi apne kamre m thi k tabhi main pata nhi kaha pahuch gayi aas paas kuch kachhe makan the aur kuch bhi nhi.Mere saath Saurya aur Deep bhi the .
Main- Saurya ye kya tha tum hame yaha iss wqat.
Saurya-Maa wo gaon wali baat yaad hai na aapko aaj hi wo muhurat hai aur main jaanta tha k koi aapko yaha aane to dega nhi iss liye aise le aaya
Deep-(ek ghar ko dekh) Saifali wo wo ghar usse dekho kitna sunder hai na.
Wo ek tuta futa sa ghar tha bahut hi purana wo Ghar Manjulika aur uske pati n banaya tha apne liye apne hone wale bacche k liye bade pyar s sajaya tha usse Manjulika n aur aaj sayad dono ko hi wo sab yaad aane wala hai.
Main- Haa Deep dekho to arre tum wo paalna lana bhul gaye na mera bacha kaha soyega jao jaldi s le aawo na palna.
Deep- Manju abhi waqt hai ruko jarra pahle mujhe bhi to dekhne do apne bache ko.

Saurya wahi khada raha ek dum chup aur dekhta raha kya ho raha hai.

Main - Haa to dekh lo maine kab roka hai.
Deep mere paas aaya mere pet k paas baith gaya aur usse niharne laga.
Deep- Manju ye ye tumhara pait to fulla hua tha na fir fir ye aise kaise ho gaya.
Maine bhi dhyan diya main 5 mahine ki garbwati thi mera pait thoda bahar nikal chuka tha pr abhi abhi wo bahar nhi tha. Achanak s kuch log ander aaye aur ussi ghar m mere Deep ko maar diya.
Main- Deeeeeep
Pr ye kya Deep to khud mere hi bagal m baitha tha mere pait ko dekh raha tha tabhi waha maine dekha k kuch log mera mera balatkar kr rahe hai main chikh rahi thi roo rahi thi pr pr kisi n bhi meri nhi sunni aur kuch der m main maar gayi.
Wo log wo dhust log chale gaye hame mara hua dekh kr kuch der m Pitaji mere pitaji aaye unhone bhi apne praan tyag diya tabhi maine dekha k mera sharir hilne laga wo hill raha tha. Wo utha aur ghar k ek konne m chala gaya.
Itne m mere kandhe p ek haath aaya.
Saurya- Maa ab aapko pata hai wo kaha hai jao uske paas wo intezar m hai aapki.
Meri aakhon s aashu nikal rahe tge maine khud dekha kaise mere pati mere pita meri hone wali santan aur main khud maare gaye bahut dukh ho raha tha mujhe.
Maine gusse m apna haath uper uthaya tabhi waha bijliya girne lagi mere uss chote s ghar k aas paas ka pura ilaka hi maine jaala diya.
Deep bhi ab hosh m aa chuka tha usse bhi gusha aa raha tha pr wo kuch bhi kr nhi raha tha wahi Saurya muh fadde bas mujhe dekhe jaa raha tha.
Saurya- Maa ruk jao maa aisa mat karo.
Main- Unn logo n mera sab kuch mujhse chin liya aaj aaj main ye gaon hi tabah kr dungi.
Itna bol main aage jaane lagi saamne jo bhi paid paudha aata sabbi p bijli girati jaati kuch ghar bhi aaye the unhe bhi tod diya maine.
Tabhi Deep ki awaj aayi.
Deep- Saifali band karo ye tum iss gaon ko bachane k liye aayi ho na k barbad karne.
Main- Ye wahi gaon hai jisne mera sab kuch barbad kr diya aur aaj aaj to main isse tabah kr ke hi maanungi aur koi bhi mujhe nhi rok paaye ga.
Deep- Nahi aisa mat krna Saifali. Tum to achi ho na bahut achi un logo ko saza mil chuki hai jinhone hamare saath wo sab kiya.
Main- nhi saza to ab milegi wo bhi pure gaon ko koi bhi nhi bachega main har ek ko maar dungi.
Saurya- Nahi Maa aap aisa kuch bhi nhi karoge.
Deep- haa tum aisa nhi karogi main tumhe aisa nhi karne dunga.
Main- Tum tum rokooge mujhe. Main iss gaon ko tabah kiye bina nhi rahungi tumhe jo krna hai kr lo.
Itna bol main aage bad gayi.
Mujhe ek bhuda sa aadmi dikhayi diya maine maine uspe bijli de maari wo jal kr raakh ho gaya tha.
Deep- Ye kya kr diya tumne saifali ab bas bahut hua.
Itna bol Deep n mere uper aag s hamla kiya. Wo mere uper aag k gole fek raha tha.
Main- Tum mujhpe hamla karoge tum q tarafdari kr rahe ho inn paapiyon ki. Inki wajah s aaj tum bhi mere virudh ho to thik hai yahi sahi.
Fir kya tha kabhi wo aag ka gola fekta kabhi main uspe bijli aur pasni s hamla karti.
Mera gussa ab badhta hi chala jaa raha tha. usne mujhpe ek jor daar waar kiya maine usse wahi s uski hi taraf fek diya pr pr...
Saaaauryaaaaa beeetaaa
Wo aag ka gola wo saurya ko jaa laga aur wo gir gaya.
Uski haalat bahut kharab ho gayi thi. Mera saara gussa ek dum s khatam ho gaya aur main pahuch gayi uske paas daudte hue.
Saurya- Maa aap kya kr rhi ho aapko iss gaon ko bachana hai khatam nhi karna.
Main- Chup ho ja beta ye mujhse kya ho gaya Deep dekho ye mujhse kya ho gaya maine apne hi bete ko...
Deep kuch bhi nhi bola wo wo bhi jamin p pada hua tha wo to hill bhi nhi raha tha.
Usne apne iss waar m apbi puri jaan laga di thi aur ussi k saath wo maar gaya tha. Issiliye to wo aag ka gola usse na lag Sairya ko lag gaya aur ab ab saurya bhi.
Main - Nhi ye kya kr diya maine. maine khud hi apne pati aur bete ko maar diya.
Saurya- Maa aap iss gaon ko bachaogi mere liye hamare liye aap jaante ho na wo kaha hai jao...
Itna bola hi tha usne k uski aakhen band ho gayi.
Main usse apne sinne s laga rooti rahi tab tak rooti rahi jab tk ek shadu mere paas naa aa gaya.
Sadhu- Bachi wo jaa chuka hai apni jagah ab uski icha puri krna ka waqt aa chuka hai.
Main kuch na boli bas Saurya k sharir ko sinne s laga rooti rahi.
Achanak hi Saurya aur Deep ka sharir ek ho gaya aur dono hi gaayab ho gaye pr usse phle bas itna hi sunayi diya mujhe.
"Isse khatam kr aa jana hum intezar karenge tumhara apni jagah"
Ye Saurya ki awaj thi aur issi k sath meri thandra tuti aur main uth ke waha chali gayi jaha p Manjulika ka sharir yaani mera sharir tha.
Maine usko chua aur ek black hole ban gaya hum dono hi ussi k ander chale gaye aur aur fir andhera chaa gaya har jagah.

Wahi ghar pr.
(Mohini k respect m)

Main Saurya ko waha bejhne k baad Shilpa k paas pahuch gayi.

Main-Didi kya ye jaruri hai mujhe ye sahi nhi lag raha.
Shilpa- Mohini tum iss waqt aise kamjor nhi pad sakti ab sab kuch tumhare hi haato m hai tum jaanti ho hum sabhi sab kuch bhul jaayenge sab kuch pr tumhe saari baaten yaad hogi aur wo tum hogi jo hame fir ek saath le aaogi.
Mohini- kya main...
Shilpa- tumhe hi ye krna hai samjhi hum to honge nhi Saurya k paas pr tum tum usi k paas rahogi tumhe hi usse taiyar krna hoga tum jaanti ho ye kitna jaruri hai.
Main- Ha pr mujhe ..
Shilpa- Dekho khud p viswas rakhna samhji na aur aab waqt aa raha hai tum jaldi aona kaam karo aur kamjor mat padna hum sabhi ko tumse bahut ummid hai.
Main- Thik hai didi.
Maine fir apne daant bahar nikale aur ghar m jisko bhi apne saath le jaana tha aur saath hi bahar bhi unn sabhi ko maine khud maar dala taaki hum sab ek jagah aa sake.
Fir main wapas Shilpa didi k paas chali aayi.
Shilpa- Kaam ho gaya.
Maine bas haa m sar hilla diya main bolne ki haalat m hi nhi thi meri aakhon s aashu girte jaa rahe the.
Shilpa didi mere paas aayi aur mere aashu ponchte hue boli.
Shilpa- Ab rona nhi samjhi ab to hum sabhi ko ek hona hai ek nayi jagah pr aur sunn tu na hame jaldi s dhund lena samjhi taaki hum bhi to mill sake saurya s.
Achanak hi hum dono k sharir ko ek joor ka jhatka laga ye wahi waqt tha jab wo aag ka gola Saurya ko jaa laga tha.
Pure ghar m ek roshni fhail gayi aur ussi k saath main, Shilpa didi, Paridhi didi puja aur priya hum 5cho hi uss ghar s aur saath hi sabhi k yaadon s bhi gayab hone lage.
Hum pachon hi roshni k rang birange gole m badal gaye the aur kisi k aane ka intezar kr rahe the.
Kuch hi der m 2 aur roshni k gole aaye ek Saifali(maa) ki thi aur ek thi Saurya aur Deep ki dono hi ek ho gaye the.

Hum saare ek hue fir aur fir ek kawach aaya aur ham sabhi k uper lag gaya. Uske baad ek roshni hui bahut hi tez roshni aur ussi k saath hum sabhi alag ho gaye Main aur Saurya hi bas ek saath rah gaye the.
Ye saari roshni k gole alag alag jagaho p chale gaye the.
{Guru ji k maut k waqt hi saare vetal aur wo saitan sabhi jaa chuke the aur pritvi p ek shuraksha kavach aa gayi thi. Kuch aur bhi hua tha ab kisi ko bhi pritvi ya insaano m koi khass dilchaspi nhi bachi thi.}
Main aur Saurya ek ghar m chale gaye ussi energy ball k roop m waha 2 mahilayen bed p padi thi. Hum dono hi unn dono k ander chale gaye.

Karib 9 mahine baad meri aakhen khuli.

Kuch do din baad hi hum wapas ussi ghar m the janha main aur Saurya unn mahilayon s mile the.
Ghar pura saja hua tha. Main ek paalne m thi aur mere bagal m ek golu molu sa bacha pada tha aur roo raha tha bada hi cute tha wo. Main bhi bachi hi thi.
Maine uske haaton ko apne chote chote haato s pakad liya aur wo saant ho gaya uske muh p ek mushkaan aa gayi aur mere muh pr bhi.
Main kisi tarah apna gol matol sharir uski taraf ghumayi aur usko dekhne lagi.
"Dekho to abhi s apne chote bhai ko dekh kitna muskura rahi hai hamari bitiya raani ."-ek budhi aurat boli.

Part one Completed (Madavpur)

"Jo paaya hai usse khona hoga wo paane k liye jo khoya tha"

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