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26.

Ishay ghar kahna galat hoga yai to sach mai he ak bada mahal hai. Ander aaty he meri or manju ki aankhey he chondiya gai. Samnay ak bada he khubsurat hall room tha jiskay charo taraf bahut si khubsurat paintings lagi hui thi. Chat par aalishan jhumar lagey huy thay, charo or rooms ki ginti he nahi kar pa rahey thay. Hamary samnay aalishan shofasets lagey huy thay. Jin par aaram sai 50-60 aadmi ak sath bath saktay thay. Samnay diwar kai pas sai sidiyan upar dono or ghum kar gai hui thi.

Ham dono to is ghar ko dekhtay he rah gaye. Tabhi hall mai ghari ki ghanti nai 9 bajnay ka time bataya to ham sab hosh mai aaye.

Mai. Dada g pahlay ham college mai ja kar aaty hain. Fir bad mai yahan ghar bhi ghum lengay. Abhi 9 bajey hain to sabhi satafroom mai he mil jayengay.

Dada g. Thik hai fir pahlay college ka he kam khatam kartay hain.

Ham sab vapis bahar aaye to dada g ham sabhi ko sath lai kar ak side chal pare. Mai kya dekhta hun ki park kai side sai he college mai jany kai liya ak rasta bana hua hai. Ham sabhi usi rastay par chal kar us gate kai pass ja kar khary ho gaye. Tab dada g nai apnay hath ko us gate kai side mai lagaya to vo gate apnay aap khul gaya.

Dada g. Beta yai gate sirf ham log he khol saktay hain. Agar koi or isko kholnay ki kosis karega to ushay bahut taj bijli ka jhtka lagega. Ishay sirf hamary parivar kai log he use kar saktay hain.

Jashay he gate khula ham sab college kai ander main trusty kai room mai pahuch chukay thay. Jahan par asha lagta tha ki kafi samay sai koi bhi nahi aaya. Ham vahan sai gate khol kar bahar aaye. To samnay he principal ka room tha. Ham sab principal kai room ki taraf chal diya . vahan par bahar ak peon batha hua tha.

Peon nai jashay he dada g ko dekha vo apni jagah sai sai uth kar dada g kai samnay jhuk gaya. Dada g nai usko nam sai pukara or uthnay kai liya kaha. Vo uth to gaya par hamary samnay najar nichay he karkay khara ho gaya.

Dada g. Or kese ho narayan koi dikkat to nahi hai na.

N. ham thi hain sahib. Koi dikkat nahi hai. Aabaap aa gayen hain to sab thik ho jayega.

Dada g. Kya bat hai narayan yahan kuch hua hai kya. Mujey to kisi nai kuch nahi bataya.

N. nahi kuch nahi bade sahib. Sab thik hai.

Dada g. Ramesh ander he hai na.

N. G sahib vo ander he hain. Or usnay principal room ka gate hamary liya khol diya.

Vahan par samnay principal apnay room mai samnay he chair par batha kuch kam kar raha tha. Ham sab ander aa gaye.

N.Sir bade sahib aayen hain.

Peon ki aawaj sun kar ak dam sai apni kursi sai uthatay huy principal ka dhyan ham sab par gaya to vo ham sab ko dekhta he raha gaya.

Usnay jaldi sai uth kar apnay dono hath dada g kai samnay jor diyay.


  • Ramesh. Baba aap yahan. Koi kam tha to mujey bula lete mai aa jata.
  • Dada g. Nahi ramesh mujey koi kam nahi tha. Mai to Mahesh ko college dikhanay kai liya sath aaya hun. Tum jara sabhi professor ko yahan par bula lo. Mujey un sabhi ko is college kai naye malik sai milwana hai.
  • Dada g ki bat sun kar narayan bina principal kai bole he bahar chala gaya, sabhi ko bulanay kai liya.
Ham sab vahan chair lai kar bath gaye. Principal nai apni chair par dada g ko bitha diya or khud hamary sath he bath gaya.

  • Ra. Inko to mane kal college mai dekha tha. Kya yai he apnay rajesh ka beta hai. Yai to bahut bada ho gaya hai. Mai to kal isko dekh kar pahchan he nahi paya ki yai rajesh ka beta hai.
  • Dada g. Han yai bata raha tha ki kal jab saman lene kai liya yai sahar aaya tha to apnay college mai hi ho kar gaya tha. Isi liya mene soucha ki kyon na isko iska poora college dikha doon.
  • Ra. Bahut achi bat hai baba. Ab to sab isko he sambhalna hai.
  • Dada g or ramesh abhi bat kar he rahey thay ki tab tak sabhi professor kai sath narayan bhi vapis aa gaya. Mai dekh raha tha ki narayan ham sabhi kai aany sai bahut khus hai.
  • N. Sahib mai sabhi ko bula kar lai aaya hun.
  • Dada g. Narayan sabhi ko confress room mai laic halo ham bhi bhi vahin par aa rahey hain.
  • Narayan chupchap vahan sai bahar chal para. Ham sab bhi uth kar bahar aa gaye. Pass mai he ak darwaje kai pass narayan khara tha . ham dada g or rmesh kai sath us room mai aaye to vahan par sabhi professor khary thay. Vo kafi bada hal room tha jis kai bich mai kafi kursiyan lagi hui thi. Samnay he ak stage bhi bani hui thi jiskai pass bhi kai kursiyan or ak mej lagi thi.
  • Ramesh ham sab ko vahan stage kai pass lai gaya or ham sab vaha par rakh hui kursion par bath gaye.
  • Ra. Aaj college ka sara staff yahan par hai. Mujey aap sabhi ko batatay huy badi khusi ho rahi hai ki is college kai malik aaj yahan par ham sab kai bich mojud hain. Vo aap sabhi sai kch bat karna chahtay hain.
  • Yai bol kar ramesh nai dada g ko manch par aany kai liya aamantarit kiya.
  • Dada g bhi aaram sai manch par ja kar mike lai kar bolnay lage.
  • Dada g. Mai aap sabhi ko mere bête rajesh kai jany kai bad itnay sal sai is college mai sahi sai kam karnay kai liya dhanyavad deta hun. Aap sabhi nai meri gair mojudgi mai mere college ka achi tarah sai dhyan rakha hai. Mai ab aap sabhi ko is college kai nai malik sai milwata hun. Jo ki aage sai is college ka dhyan rakhega.
  • To aap sab miliya mere pote or is college kai nai malik Mahesh sai.
  • Or dada g nai meri or ishara kiya.
  • Mai bhi apni jagah sai uth kar unkai pass aa gaya. Or sabhi ko hath jor kar parnam kiya.
  • Mai. Mai aap sabhi sai bahut he chota hun. Umar mai bhi or ghyan mai bhi. Bas mai itna he kahunga ki jashay abhi tak yai college aap log chalatyay hui aaye hain , vesy he aage bhi aap log apna sath mere sath banaye rakna. Yai bol kar mai bhi mike sai hat gaya.
  • Kyonki abhi sabhi ko apnay kam par jana tha. Sabhi professor ki class ka time hone wala tha. Mane jadu sai dada g valy office mai bahut sai mithai kai dibbey mangwa diya.
  • Mai. Narayan unkal papa kai office mai mithai kai dibbey rakhey huy hain. Please aap sabhi ko vo dibbey la kar de dengay.
Meri bat sun kar narayan apnay sath kuch or aadmiyon ko lai kar chala gaya. Do minute kai bad he vo sab dibbay room mai lai aaya.

Mai or manju gate kai pass khary ho gaye. Or job hi professor vahan sai jany lagta ham un sabhi ko hath milatay huy vo dibbey dene lage.

Jab sabhi chaly gaye to dada g nai narayan ko apnay pass bulaya or usko papa vala office saf karnay kai liya bola.

Dada g. Rames ab tum apnay liya dusra peon rakh lena . narayan pahlay ki tarah ab Mahesh kai sath kam karega.

Dada g ki bat sun kar ramesh nai bhi apna sir han mai hila diya. Ham sab vapis principal kai office mai aa gaye. Vahin par narayan nai sabi ko chai pilai. Ham sab ab vapis dada g kai office sai hoty huy haveli mai aa gaye. Ab hamary sath narayan bhi tha.

Dada g. Narayan office ka ab tumko he dhyan rakhna hai.vahan par ab tum apni nigrani mai ak bar achi tarah sai saf safai karwa do. Par dhayn rakhna aage sai us office mai tumhary siva or koi nahi ja sakta. Sab kam pahlay ki tarah tumko he dekhna parega.

N. G bade sahib mai dhyan rakhunga.


Fir dada g nai apni jeb sai kuch pasy nikal kar narayan ko diya or vo usi gate sai hoty huy office mai chala gaya. Jasy he vo ander gaya vo gate apnay aap band ho gaya.
 
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26.

Ishay ghar kahna galat hoga yai to sach mai he ak bada mahal hai. Ander aaty he meri or manju ki aankhey he chondiya gai. Samnay ak bada he khubsurat hall room tha jiskay charo taraf bahut si khubsurat paintings lagi hui thi. Chat par aalishan jhumar lagey huy thay, charo or rooms ki ginti he nahi kar pa rahey thay. Hamary samnay aalishan shofasets lagey huy thay. Jin par aaram sai 50-60 aadmi ak sath bath saktay thay. Samnay diwar kai pas sai sidiyan upar dono or ghum kar gai hui thi.

Ham dono to is ghar ko dekhtay he rah gaye. Tabhi hall mai ghari ki ghanti nai 9 bajnay ka time bataya to ham sab hosh mai aaye.

Mai. Dada g pahlay ham college mai ja kar aaty hain. Fir bad mai yahan ghar bhi ghum lengay. Abhi 9 bajey hain to sabhi satafroom mai he mil jayengay.

Dada g. Thik hai fir pahlay college ka he kam khatam kartay hain.

Ham sab vapis bahar aaye to dada g ham sabhi ko sath lai kar ak side chal pare. Mai kya dekhta hun ki park kai side sai he college mai jany kai liya ak rasta bana hua hai. Ham sabhi usi rastay par chal kar us gate kai pass ja kar khary ho gaye. Tab dada g nai apnay hath ko us gate kai side mai lagaya to vo gate apnay aap khul gaya.

Dada g. Beta yai gate sirf ham log he khol saktay hain. Agar koi or isko kholnay ki kosis karega to ushay bahut taj bijli ka jhtka lagega. Ishay sirf hamary parivar kai log he use kar saktay hain.

Jashay he gate khula ham sab college kai ander main trusty kai room mai pahuch chukay thay. Jahan par asha lagta tha ki kafi samay sai koi bhi nahi aaya. Ham vahan sai gate khol kar bahar aaye. To samnay he principal ka room tha. Ham sab principal kai room ki taraf chal diya . vahan par bahar ak peon batha hua tha.

Peon nai jashay he dada g ko dekha vo apni jagah sai sai uth kar dada g kai samnay jhuk gaya. Dada g nai usko nam sai pukara or uthnay kai liya kaha. Vo uth to gaya par hamary samnay najar nichay he karkay khara ho gaya.

Dada g. Or kese ho narayan koi dikkat to nahi hai na.

N. ham thi hain sahib. Koi dikkat nahi hai. Aabaap aa gayen hain to sab thik ho jayega.

Dada g. Kya bat hai narayan yahan kuch hua hai kya. Mujey to kisi nai kuch nahi bataya.

N. nahi kuch nahi bade sahib. Sab thik hai.

Dada g. Ramesh ander he hai na.

N. G sahib vo ander he hain. Or usnay principal room ka gate hamary liya khol diya.

Vahan par samnay principal apnay room mai samnay he chair par batha kuch kam kar raha tha. Ham sab ander aa gaye.

N.Sir bade sahib aayen hain.

Peon ki aawaj sun kar ak dam sai apni kursi sai uthatay huy principal ka dhyan ham sab par gaya to vo ham sab ko dekhta he raha gaya.

Usnay jaldi sai uth kar apnay dono hath dada g kai samnay jor diyay.


  • Ramesh. Baba aap yahan. Koi kam tha to mujey bula lete mai aa jata.
  • Dada g. Nahi ramesh mujey koi kam nahi tha. Mai to Mahesh ko college dikhanay kai liya sath aaya hun. Tum jara sabhi professor ko yahan par bula lo. Mujey un sabhi ko is college kai naye malik sai milwana hai.
  • Dada g ki bat sun kar narayan bina principal kai bole he bahar chala gaya, sabhi ko bulanay kai liya.
Ham sab vahan chair lai kar bath gaye. Principal nai apni chair par dada g ko bitha diya or khud hamary sath he bath gaya.

  • Ra. Inko to mane kal college mai dekha tha. Kya yai he apnay rajesh ka beta hai. Yai to bahut bada ho gaya hai. Mai to kal isko dekh kar pahchan he nahi paya ki yai rajesh ka beta hai.
  • Dada g. Han yai bata raha tha ki kal jab saman lene kai liya yai sahar aaya tha to apnay college mai hi ho kar gaya tha. Isi liya mene soucha ki kyon na isko iska poora college dikha doon.
  • Ra. Bahut achi bat hai baba. Ab to sab isko he sambhalna hai.
  • Dada g or ramesh abhi bat kar he rahey thay ki tab tak sabhi professor kai sath narayan bhi vapis aa gaya. Mai dekh raha tha ki narayan ham sabhi kai aany sai bahut khus hai.
  • N. Sahib mai sabhi ko bula kar lai aaya hun.
  • Dada g. Narayan sabhi ko confress room mai laic halo ham bhi bhi vahin par aa rahey hain.
  • Narayan chupchap vahan sai bahar chal para. Ham sab bhi uth kar bahar aa gaye. Pass mai he ak darwaje kai pass narayan khara tha . ham dada g or rmesh kai sath us room mai aaye to vahan par sabhi professor khary thay. Vo kafi bada hal room tha jis kai bich mai kafi kursiyan lagi hui thi. Samnay he ak stage bhi bani hui thi jiskai pass bhi kai kursiyan or ak mej lagi thi.
  • Ramesh ham sab ko vahan stage kai pass lai gaya or ham sab vaha par rakh hui kursion par bath gaye.
  • Ra. Aaj college ka sara staff yahan par hai. Mujey aap sabhi ko batatay huy badi khusi ho rahi hai ki is college kai malik aaj yahan par ham sab kai bich mojud hain. Vo aap sabhi sai kch bat karna chahtay hain.
  • Yai bol kar ramesh nai dada g ko manch par aany kai liya aamantarit kiya.
  • Dada g bhi aaram sai manch par ja kar mike lai kar bolnay lage.
  • Dada g. Mai aap sabhi ko mere bête rajesh kai jany kai bad itnay sal sai is college mai sahi sai kam karnay kai liya dhanyavad deta hun. Aap sabhi nai meri gair mojudgi mai mere college ka achi tarah sai dhyan rakha hai. Mai ab aap sabhi ko is college kai nai malik sai milwata hun. Jo ki aage sai is college ka dhyan rakhega.
  • To aap sab miliya mere pote or is college kai nai malik Mahesh sai.
  • Or dada g nai meri or ishara kiya.
  • Mai bhi apni jagah sai uth kar unkai pass aa gaya. Or sabhi ko hath jor kar parnam kiya.
  • Mai. Mai aap sabhi sai bahut he chota hun. Umar mai bhi or ghyan mai bhi. Bas mai itna he kahunga ki jashay abhi tak yai college aap log chalatyay hui aaye hain , vesy he aage bhi aap log apna sath mere sath banaye rakna. Yai bol kar mai bhi mike sai hat gaya.
  • Kyonki abhi sabhi ko apnay kam par jana tha. Sabhi professor ki class ka time hone wala tha. Mane jadu sai dada g valy office mai bahut sai mithai kai dibbey mangwa diya.
  • Mai. Narayan unkal papa kai office mai mithai kai dibbey rakhey huy hain. Please aap sabhi ko vo dibbey la kar de dengay.
Meri bat sun kar narayan apnay sath kuch or aadmiyon ko lai kar chala gaya. Do minute kai bad he vo sab dibbay room mai lai aaya.

Mai or manju gate kai pass khary ho gaye. Or job hi professor vahan sai jany lagta ham un sabhi ko hath milatay huy vo dibbey dene lage.

Jab sabhi chaly gaye to dada g nai narayan ko apnay pass bulaya or usko papa vala office saf karnay kai liya bola.

Dada g. Rames ab tum apnay liya dusra peon rakh lena . narayan pahlay ki tarah ab Mahesh kai sath kam karega.

Dada g ki bat sun kar ramesh nai bhi apna sir han mai hila diya. Ham sab vapis principal kai office mai aa gaye. Vahin par narayan nai sabi ko chai pilai. Ham sab ab vapis dada g kai office sai hoty huy haveli mai aa gaye. Ab hamary sath narayan bhi tha.

Dada g. Narayan office ka ab tumko he dhyan rakhna hai.vahan par ab tum apni nigrani mai ak bar achi tarah sai saf safai karwa do. Par dhayn rakhna aage sai us office mai tumhary siva or koi nahi ja sakta. Sab kam pahlay ki tarah tumko he dekhna parega.

N. G bade sahib mai dhyan rakhunga.

Fir dada g nai apni jeb sai kuch pasy nikal kar narayan ko diya or vo usi gate sai hoty huy office mai chala gaya. Jasy he vo ander gaya vo gate apnay aap band ho gaya.
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26.

Ishay ghar kahna galat hoga yai to sach mai he ak bada mahal hai. Ander aaty he meri or manju ki aankhey he chondiya gai. Samnay ak bada he khubsurat hall room tha jiskay charo taraf bahut si khubsurat paintings lagi hui thi. Chat par aalishan jhumar lagey huy thay, charo or rooms ki ginti he nahi kar pa rahey thay. Hamary samnay aalishan shofasets lagey huy thay. Jin par aaram sai 50-60 aadmi ak sath bath saktay thay. Samnay diwar kai pas sai sidiyan upar dono or ghum kar gai hui thi.

Ham dono to is ghar ko dekhtay he rah gaye. Tabhi hall mai ghari ki ghanti nai 9 bajnay ka time bataya to ham sab hosh mai aaye.

Mai. Dada g pahlay ham college mai ja kar aaty hain. Fir bad mai yahan ghar bhi ghum lengay. Abhi 9 bajey hain to sabhi satafroom mai he mil jayengay.

Dada g. Thik hai fir pahlay college ka he kam khatam kartay hain.

Ham sab vapis bahar aaye to dada g ham sabhi ko sath lai kar ak side chal pare. Mai kya dekhta hun ki park kai side sai he college mai jany kai liya ak rasta bana hua hai. Ham sabhi usi rastay par chal kar us gate kai pass ja kar khary ho gaye. Tab dada g nai apnay hath ko us gate kai side mai lagaya to vo gate apnay aap khul gaya.

Dada g. Beta yai gate sirf ham log he khol saktay hain. Agar koi or isko kholnay ki kosis karega to ushay bahut taj bijli ka jhtka lagega. Ishay sirf hamary parivar kai log he use kar saktay hain.

Jashay he gate khula ham sab college kai ander main trusty kai room mai pahuch chukay thay. Jahan par asha lagta tha ki kafi samay sai koi bhi nahi aaya. Ham vahan sai gate khol kar bahar aaye. To samnay he principal ka room tha. Ham sab principal kai room ki taraf chal diya . vahan par bahar ak peon batha hua tha.

Peon nai jashay he dada g ko dekha vo apni jagah sai sai uth kar dada g kai samnay jhuk gaya. Dada g nai usko nam sai pukara or uthnay kai liya kaha. Vo uth to gaya par hamary samnay najar nichay he karkay khara ho gaya.

Dada g. Or kese ho narayan koi dikkat to nahi hai na.

N. ham thi hain sahib. Koi dikkat nahi hai. Aabaap aa gayen hain to sab thik ho jayega.

Dada g. Kya bat hai narayan yahan kuch hua hai kya. Mujey to kisi nai kuch nahi bataya.

N. nahi kuch nahi bade sahib. Sab thik hai.

Dada g. Ramesh ander he hai na.

N. G sahib vo ander he hain. Or usnay principal room ka gate hamary liya khol diya.

Vahan par samnay principal apnay room mai samnay he chair par batha kuch kam kar raha tha. Ham sab ander aa gaye.

N.Sir bade sahib aayen hain.

Peon ki aawaj sun kar ak dam sai apni kursi sai uthatay huy principal ka dhyan ham sab par gaya to vo ham sab ko dekhta he raha gaya.

Usnay jaldi sai uth kar apnay dono hath dada g kai samnay jor diyay.


  • Ramesh. Baba aap yahan. Koi kam tha to mujey bula lete mai aa jata.
  • Dada g. Nahi ramesh mujey koi kam nahi tha. Mai to Mahesh ko college dikhanay kai liya sath aaya hun. Tum jara sabhi professor ko yahan par bula lo. Mujey un sabhi ko is college kai naye malik sai milwana hai.
  • Dada g ki bat sun kar narayan bina principal kai bole he bahar chala gaya, sabhi ko bulanay kai liya.
Ham sab vahan chair lai kar bath gaye. Principal nai apni chair par dada g ko bitha diya or khud hamary sath he bath gaya.

  • Ra. Inko to mane kal college mai dekha tha. Kya yai he apnay rajesh ka beta hai. Yai to bahut bada ho gaya hai. Mai to kal isko dekh kar pahchan he nahi paya ki yai rajesh ka beta hai.
  • Dada g. Han yai bata raha tha ki kal jab saman lene kai liya yai sahar aaya tha to apnay college mai hi ho kar gaya tha. Isi liya mene soucha ki kyon na isko iska poora college dikha doon.
  • Ra. Bahut achi bat hai baba. Ab to sab isko he sambhalna hai.
  • Dada g or ramesh abhi bat kar he rahey thay ki tab tak sabhi professor kai sath narayan bhi vapis aa gaya. Mai dekh raha tha ki narayan ham sabhi kai aany sai bahut khus hai.
  • N. Sahib mai sabhi ko bula kar lai aaya hun.
  • Dada g. Narayan sabhi ko confress room mai laic halo ham bhi bhi vahin par aa rahey hain.
  • Narayan chupchap vahan sai bahar chal para. Ham sab bhi uth kar bahar aa gaye. Pass mai he ak darwaje kai pass narayan khara tha . ham dada g or rmesh kai sath us room mai aaye to vahan par sabhi professor khary thay. Vo kafi bada hal room tha jis kai bich mai kafi kursiyan lagi hui thi. Samnay he ak stage bhi bani hui thi jiskai pass bhi kai kursiyan or ak mej lagi thi.
  • Ramesh ham sab ko vahan stage kai pass lai gaya or ham sab vaha par rakh hui kursion par bath gaye.
  • Ra. Aaj college ka sara staff yahan par hai. Mujey aap sabhi ko batatay huy badi khusi ho rahi hai ki is college kai malik aaj yahan par ham sab kai bich mojud hain. Vo aap sabhi sai kch bat karna chahtay hain.
  • Yai bol kar ramesh nai dada g ko manch par aany kai liya aamantarit kiya.
  • Dada g bhi aaram sai manch par ja kar mike lai kar bolnay lage.
  • Dada g. Mai aap sabhi ko mere bête rajesh kai jany kai bad itnay sal sai is college mai sahi sai kam karnay kai liya dhanyavad deta hun. Aap sabhi nai meri gair mojudgi mai mere college ka achi tarah sai dhyan rakha hai. Mai ab aap sabhi ko is college kai nai malik sai milwata hun. Jo ki aage sai is college ka dhyan rakhega.
  • To aap sab miliya mere pote or is college kai nai malik Mahesh sai.
  • Or dada g nai meri or ishara kiya.
  • Mai bhi apni jagah sai uth kar unkai pass aa gaya. Or sabhi ko hath jor kar parnam kiya.
  • Mai. Mai aap sabhi sai bahut he chota hun. Umar mai bhi or ghyan mai bhi. Bas mai itna he kahunga ki jashay abhi tak yai college aap log chalatyay hui aaye hain , vesy he aage bhi aap log apna sath mere sath banaye rakna. Yai bol kar mai bhi mike sai hat gaya.
  • Kyonki abhi sabhi ko apnay kam par jana tha. Sabhi professor ki class ka time hone wala tha. Mane jadu sai dada g valy office mai bahut sai mithai kai dibbey mangwa diya.
  • Mai. Narayan unkal papa kai office mai mithai kai dibbey rakhey huy hain. Please aap sabhi ko vo dibbey la kar de dengay.
Meri bat sun kar narayan apnay sath kuch or aadmiyon ko lai kar chala gaya. Do minute kai bad he vo sab dibbay room mai lai aaya.

Mai or manju gate kai pass khary ho gaye. Or job hi professor vahan sai jany lagta ham un sabhi ko hath milatay huy vo dibbey dene lage.

Jab sabhi chaly gaye to dada g nai narayan ko apnay pass bulaya or usko papa vala office saf karnay kai liya bola.

Dada g. Rames ab tum apnay liya dusra peon rakh lena . narayan pahlay ki tarah ab Mahesh kai sath kam karega.

Dada g ki bat sun kar ramesh nai bhi apna sir han mai hila diya. Ham sab vapis principal kai office mai aa gaye. Vahin par narayan nai sabi ko chai pilai. Ham sab ab vapis dada g kai office sai hoty huy haveli mai aa gaye. Ab hamary sath narayan bhi tha.

Dada g. Narayan office ka ab tumko he dhyan rakhna hai.vahan par ab tum apni nigrani mai ak bar achi tarah sai saf safai karwa do. Par dhayn rakhna aage sai us office mai tumhary siva or koi nahi ja sakta. Sab kam pahlay ki tarah tumko he dekhna parega.

N. G bade sahib mai dhyan rakhunga.

Fir dada g nai apni jeb sai kuch pasy nikal kar narayan ko diya or vo usi gate sai hoty huy office mai chala gaya. Jasy he vo ander gaya vo gate apnay aap band ho gaya.
Ye kaun si story hai
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Ishay ghar kahna galat hoga yai to sach mai he ak bada mahal hai. Ander aaty he meri or manju ki aankhey he chondiya gai. Samnay ak bada he khubsurat hall room tha jiskay charo taraf bahut si khubsurat paintings lagi hui thi. Chat par aalishan jhumar lagey huy thay, charo or rooms ki ginti he nahi kar pa rahey thay. Hamary samnay aalishan shofasets lagey huy thay. Jin par aaram sai 50-60 aadmi ak sath bath saktay thay. Samnay diwar kai pas sai sidiyan upar dono or ghum kar gai hui thi.

Ham dono to is ghar ko dekhtay he rah gaye. Tabhi hall mai ghari ki ghanti nai 9 bajnay ka time bataya to ham sab hosh mai aaye.

Mai. Dada g pahlay ham college mai ja kar aaty hain. Fir bad mai yahan ghar bhi ghum lengay. Abhi 9 bajey hain to sabhi satafroom mai he mil jayengay.

Dada g. Thik hai fir pahlay college ka he kam khatam kartay hain.

Ham sab vapis bahar aaye to dada g ham sabhi ko sath lai kar ak side chal pare. Mai kya dekhta hun ki park kai side sai he college mai jany kai liya ak rasta bana hua hai. Ham sabhi usi rastay par chal kar us gate kai pass ja kar khary ho gaye. Tab dada g nai apnay hath ko us gate kai side mai lagaya to vo gate apnay aap khul gaya.

Dada g. Beta yai gate sirf ham log he khol saktay hain. Agar koi or isko kholnay ki kosis karega to ushay bahut taj bijli ka jhtka lagega. Ishay sirf hamary parivar kai log he use kar saktay hain.

Jashay he gate khula ham sab college kai ander main trusty kai room mai pahuch chukay thay. Jahan par asha lagta tha ki kafi samay sai koi bhi nahi aaya. Ham vahan sai gate khol kar bahar aaye. To samnay he principal ka room tha. Ham sab principal kai room ki taraf chal diya . vahan par bahar ak peon batha hua tha.

Peon nai jashay he dada g ko dekha vo apni jagah sai sai uth kar dada g kai samnay jhuk gaya. Dada g nai usko nam sai pukara or uthnay kai liya kaha. Vo uth to gaya par hamary samnay najar nichay he karkay khara ho gaya.

Dada g. Or kese ho narayan koi dikkat to nahi hai na.

N. ham thi hain sahib. Koi dikkat nahi hai. Aabaap aa gayen hain to sab thik ho jayega.

Dada g. Kya bat hai narayan yahan kuch hua hai kya. Mujey to kisi nai kuch nahi bataya.

N. nahi kuch nahi bade sahib. Sab thik hai.

Dada g. Ramesh ander he hai na.

N. G sahib vo ander he hain. Or usnay principal room ka gate hamary liya khol diya.

Vahan par samnay principal apnay room mai samnay he chair par batha kuch kam kar raha tha. Ham sab ander aa gaye.

N.Sir bade sahib aayen hain.

Peon ki aawaj sun kar ak dam sai apni kursi sai uthatay huy principal ka dhyan ham sab par gaya to vo ham sab ko dekhta he raha gaya.

Usnay jaldi sai uth kar apnay dono hath dada g kai samnay jor diyay.


  • Ramesh. Baba aap yahan. Koi kam tha to mujey bula lete mai aa jata.
  • Dada g. Nahi ramesh mujey koi kam nahi tha. Mai to Mahesh ko college dikhanay kai liya sath aaya hun. Tum jara sabhi professor ko yahan par bula lo. Mujey un sabhi ko is college kai naye malik sai milwana hai.
  • Dada g ki bat sun kar narayan bina principal kai bole he bahar chala gaya, sabhi ko bulanay kai liya.
Ham sab vahan chair lai kar bath gaye. Principal nai apni chair par dada g ko bitha diya or khud hamary sath he bath gaya.

  • Ra. Inko to mane kal college mai dekha tha. Kya yai he apnay rajesh ka beta hai. Yai to bahut bada ho gaya hai. Mai to kal isko dekh kar pahchan he nahi paya ki yai rajesh ka beta hai.
  • Dada g. Han yai bata raha tha ki kal jab saman lene kai liya yai sahar aaya tha to apnay college mai hi ho kar gaya tha. Isi liya mene soucha ki kyon na isko iska poora college dikha doon.
  • Ra. Bahut achi bat hai baba. Ab to sab isko he sambhalna hai.
  • Dada g or ramesh abhi bat kar he rahey thay ki tab tak sabhi professor kai sath narayan bhi vapis aa gaya. Mai dekh raha tha ki narayan ham sabhi kai aany sai bahut khus hai.
  • N. Sahib mai sabhi ko bula kar lai aaya hun.
  • Dada g. Narayan sabhi ko confress room mai laic halo ham bhi bhi vahin par aa rahey hain.
  • Narayan chupchap vahan sai bahar chal para. Ham sab bhi uth kar bahar aa gaye. Pass mai he ak darwaje kai pass narayan khara tha . ham dada g or rmesh kai sath us room mai aaye to vahan par sabhi professor khary thay. Vo kafi bada hal room tha jis kai bich mai kafi kursiyan lagi hui thi. Samnay he ak stage bhi bani hui thi jiskai pass bhi kai kursiyan or ak mej lagi thi.
  • Ramesh ham sab ko vahan stage kai pass lai gaya or ham sab vaha par rakh hui kursion par bath gaye.
  • Ra. Aaj college ka sara staff yahan par hai. Mujey aap sabhi ko batatay huy badi khusi ho rahi hai ki is college kai malik aaj yahan par ham sab kai bich mojud hain. Vo aap sabhi sai kch bat karna chahtay hain.
  • Yai bol kar ramesh nai dada g ko manch par aany kai liya aamantarit kiya.
  • Dada g bhi aaram sai manch par ja kar mike lai kar bolnay lage.
  • Dada g. Mai aap sabhi ko mere bête rajesh kai jany kai bad itnay sal sai is college mai sahi sai kam karnay kai liya dhanyavad deta hun. Aap sabhi nai meri gair mojudgi mai mere college ka achi tarah sai dhyan rakha hai. Mai ab aap sabhi ko is college kai nai malik sai milwata hun. Jo ki aage sai is college ka dhyan rakhega.
  • To aap sab miliya mere pote or is college kai nai malik Mahesh sai.
  • Or dada g nai meri or ishara kiya.
  • Mai bhi apni jagah sai uth kar unkai pass aa gaya. Or sabhi ko hath jor kar parnam kiya.
  • Mai. Mai aap sabhi sai bahut he chota hun. Umar mai bhi or ghyan mai bhi. Bas mai itna he kahunga ki jashay abhi tak yai college aap log chalatyay hui aaye hain , vesy he aage bhi aap log apna sath mere sath banaye rakna. Yai bol kar mai bhi mike sai hat gaya.
  • Kyonki abhi sabhi ko apnay kam par jana tha. Sabhi professor ki class ka time hone wala tha. Mane jadu sai dada g valy office mai bahut sai mithai kai dibbey mangwa diya.
  • Mai. Narayan unkal papa kai office mai mithai kai dibbey rakhey huy hain. Please aap sabhi ko vo dibbey la kar de dengay.
Meri bat sun kar narayan apnay sath kuch or aadmiyon ko lai kar chala gaya. Do minute kai bad he vo sab dibbay room mai lai aaya.

Mai or manju gate kai pass khary ho gaye. Or job hi professor vahan sai jany lagta ham un sabhi ko hath milatay huy vo dibbey dene lage.

Jab sabhi chaly gaye to dada g nai narayan ko apnay pass bulaya or usko papa vala office saf karnay kai liya bola.

Dada g. Rames ab tum apnay liya dusra peon rakh lena . narayan pahlay ki tarah ab Mahesh kai sath kam karega.

Dada g ki bat sun kar ramesh nai bhi apna sir han mai hila diya. Ham sab vapis principal kai office mai aa gaye. Vahin par narayan nai sabi ko chai pilai. Ham sab ab vapis dada g kai office sai hoty huy haveli mai aa gaye. Ab hamary sath narayan bhi tha.

Dada g. Narayan office ka ab tumko he dhyan rakhna hai.vahan par ab tum apni nigrani mai ak bar achi tarah sai saf safai karwa do. Par dhayn rakhna aage sai us office mai tumhary siva or koi nahi ja sakta. Sab kam pahlay ki tarah tumko he dekhna parega.

N. G bade sahib mai dhyan rakhunga.

Fir dada g nai apni jeb sai kuch pasy nikal kar narayan ko diya or vo usi gate sai hoty huy office mai chala gaya. Jasy he vo ander gaya vo gate apnay aap band ho gaya.
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AB TAK -
Mom kuch bolti usse pahle 7 logo ki entry hui
AAGE-

Ye the Abhishek , Mohit , Digvijay , Reshma , , Bobby aur Suddha. Inme s kuch logo ko dekh kr to Poonam ko mano 440 volt ka jhatka lag gaya ho aisi sakal ho gai thi use kuch samaj nahi aa rha tha wo kaise react kare. Baki sabhi ka bhi yahi hal hai qki kisi n bhi usse yaha paane ki ummed nhi ki thi aur ab jab wo aa gai thi to unko samaj nhi aa rha tha ki kaise uske sawalo ka jawab de.


chaliye ab in ke characters pr aate h

Mohit - iski maa sanjana aur uske bhai bahno k dekh bhal krti thi. Sanjana ise apne bhai ki tarah hi manti thi

Reshma Rajpoot - Khne ko to hmri padosi h magar dad(Abhishek) n inhe apni bahan hi mana h so y h meri bua

Digvijay Rajpoot - ye h mere fufa yani Reshma bua k pati. Bade hi sakki mizaz k admi h jaldi kisi p bharosa nhi krte(q wo aage pata chalega)

Shilpa didi - ye h Reshma bua ki beti phle to mujse baat bhi nahi krti pr achank 3 saal phle s inme mere prati bade hi ajeeb badlaw aaye aur ab ye mujhse sabse jyada pyar krti h .(q aage pata chalega)

Bobby & Suddha - ye dono doctors h hmare gaon k hospital m aur sath hi mere mom dad k ache friends bhi

BACK TO STORY.....

Poonam - Tum log yaha ho maine na jane kaha kaha tum logo ko dunda h pichle 17 saalo m (Reshma ki oor ) Tumhe pata h Tumhare aur Deep k jane k baad Divya didi ka kya haal ho gaya h (Digvijay ki taraf dekh k) tum to best friend the na mere tum to bata k ja sakte the pr ( aur rona suru kr diya fir s)

Mom s unka is tarah rona dekha na gaya to wo unko chup karane lagi aur Shilpa didi ko ham tino(main,tiya , taniya ) ko bahar le janne ko kahne lagi pr dad n hame rook liya aur bole

Dad - Sanju (pyar s mom ko ) hame ab aur nhi chupana cahiye inse hamare pariwar walo k bare m.
mom - Nahi kabhi nahi (gusse m) ( shilpa didi ki taraf dekh kr) tum inhe market le jao aur shoping krwa do
Shilpa didi - (meri oor ) chalo saurya
main jana to nahi chahta tha pr mom k gusse s lal chahra dekh jana pada aur hm charo nikal pade market ki oor

hamare niklte hi Digvijay n apne phone pr kuch kiya jisse unki koi bhi awaj ghar s kya hall s bhi bahar nahi aayi

uake baad shuru hua unka discussion jo hm sun na sake to chalte h meri oor market m
main bas yahi soch raha tha ki kya hua hoga mom-dad k sath jo unhe chup kr rhna pada

main soch hi raha tha ki Shilpa didi ne mujhe bs itna bola
Didi - sayad ab waqt aa gaya hai tumhare sach janne ka
sab- kya apko sab pata h
didi - haa bhi aur nahi bhi
main - matlab ?
didi - matlab y ki m bas utna hi janti hu jitna mujhe mom(Reshma bua) n bataya h aur kuch nahi
Main - didi ap hame batao kis wajah s mom - dad ko ye apni mout ka natak krna pada
didi - dekh Saurya ye to mujhe pata nhi pr m tumhe tumhare nana nani k bare m bata sakti hu
main - batao hame
didi - tumhare Mom ek bhut bada pariwar h jisme tumhare nana -nani , do mama- mami kuch bahne hai aur poonam aunty ki trah 3 massi bhi .
Abhishek uncle k paas ek badut bada ghar bhi h pr kuch hua jiske baad tumhari mom k khne par unhone sab chod diya aur yaha aa gaye aur ase rhne lage ek din dad ko kahi s pata chala ki abhishek uncle iis gaon m h to unhone bhi yahi rhna suru kr diya . fir ase hi Bobby uncle bhi aa gae

main - kya hua tha mom dad k sath?
didi - ye mujhe bhi pata nahi
tiya - didi hmari family kaha h aur kaisi h ?
main - ha didi aur ye Saifali aur Deep inka kya chakar h ?
didi - (ab ise kaise batau ki ye dono iske mom - dad hai ) Safali aunty tummhari massi h aur Deep uncle unke pati jinko kisi n kidnap kiya tha fir aaj tk unke bare m kuch bhi pata nhi chala h
Maine jab y suna to mujhe bhut bura laga.
Tanya - aap hme nana nani k bare m batao
didi - apke nana ji ka naam Dilawar singh h

NANA JI KI FAMILY-:
NANA JI - DILAWAR SINGH
NANI JI - SHARMILA SINGH
BADE MAMA- SAMSHER SINGH
BADI MAMI - NAINA SINGH
CHOTE MAMA - RITESH SINGH
CHOTI MAMI - ALKA SINGH
BADI MAASI - ANURADHA KASHYAP
BADE MAUSA - PAWAN KASHYAP
MANJLI MAASI -POONAM TAKHUR
MANJLE MAUSA - VIKRAM TAKHUR
CHOTI MAASI - SAIFALI GUPTA
CHOTE MAUSA -DEEP GUPTA
{NOTE-POONAM AUR SAIFALI TWINS H }

TUMHARI 6 BAHNE BHI H AUR SABI EK HI COLLAGE M PADHTE H SIWAE EK K
BADE MAMA KI BETI -:
KIRTI (MBBS)
PREETY (B.TECH)

CHOTE MAMA KI BETI- MOHINI (B. SC )
BADI MAASI KI BETI -:
PRAGATI (LLB)
NIDHIMA (B.COM)
MANJHLI MAASI KI BETI
SAIFALI ( ABHI 7TH M HAI) - YE DEKHNE M BILKUL TUMHARI CHOTI MAASI KI TARAH H ISLIYE USKA NAAM BHI UNHI PR RAKHA H POONAM AUNTY N



BACK TO STORY-:
didi kuch bolti usse phle hi mera phone baj utha jb maine number dekha to main jaldi s didi s dur ho gaya aur call pick kiya
main- bolo kya info hai
udher se - sir aap pe hmla hone wala h
main - kiski himat ho gai king pr hmla krne ki agent05
Agent05 - sir kuch jo hmla kr rha h wo sayad janta nhi ki aap king ho
main - kya matlab
Agent05 - don't know sir but koi bhi chaku s king pr hmla nhi krega
main- usko uski jagah s utha lo aur headquater le jao m kal aa raha hu aur gift ka kya hua?
Agent05 - sir gift ready h aapko aaj raat tk mil jayega
main - thik h agent05
aur call cut kr m jldi s didi k paas gaya
main - didi kya Dilawer singh sach m hamare nanaji h
didi - ha aur wo bahut hi powerful bhi h kabhi bhi koi unse nhi ulajhta
main-(sala kismat kharab h mujhe case bhi mila to mere nana ka ) kya hm unse mil skte h
didi - kya tumne apni mom ki baat nhi suni thi wo to tumhe unke bare m batana bhi nhi chahte the aur tum ho ki milna cahte ho
main -(akhir hua kya tha jo ye mom dad itne majbur ho gaye ) thik h didi m nhi milunga
tiya & tanya- hm bhi nhi milege
fir hmne marketing ki aur chal diye ghar ki or ab sham k 5 bajne ko the
jab hm ghar pahuche to tab tk sayad sabhi ki bate khatam ho gai thi aur sabhi ghar ko decorate krne m lage the Mohit babu sofe pr baithe the aur poonam maasi aur mom kitchen m s bahar aa rhi thi jab unhone hme dekha to boli
poonam - beta tumhare mausa ji aur bahan bhi aa rhe h tum log jaldi s taiyar ho jao
main - thik h maasi
aur hm charo chale gae taiyar hone. Room m aate hi maine sabse phle kisi ko call kiya
main - agent 02 tumhe kuch pata krna hai
agent02 - yes sir bataye
main - mujhe Dilawar singh s jude har ek insan ki kundli chahiye kl subah tk
agent02 - sir m try krti hu
main - aur ek baat tum agent 06 ko bolo Dilawar k pure pariwar pr nazar rkhe aur mujhe updates deta rhe
agent02 - ok sir
maine call cut kiya aur taiyar hone laga party k liye


wahi ek sunsan s jagah pr kuch log bate kr rhe hai chaliye sunte h (admi 1,admi2 likhuga)
admi 1- ye kaise ho sakta hai Deep ko to hmne apne hatho s mara tha phir wo wapas kaise aa sakta hai
admi 2- pata nhi Pankaj pr tumne bhi to photo dekhi h na ye wahi h
pankaj(admi 1) -nhi yaar pr ye to jawan dikh raha h
admi2 - sayad y us formule ki wajah s ho
pankaj - agar aisa h tb to meri saifali bhi jinda hogi(kmini muskan k sath bola)
admi2- ye to ab hme uske yaha aane pr hi pata calega
pankaj- abhi tak ye Bunty aaya kue nahi sale ko bola tha jaldi aane ko
admi 2 - aa jayega ruko to sahi
tabhi admi 2 ka phone baja
admi 2 - bolo kya hua
udher s- malik Bunty bhai ko kisi n utha liya h
admi 2 - kya baakte ho Dimag sahi h na tumhara
udhar s - malik hm sach bolta hu due tho aadmi aaya aur Bunty bhaiya ko pakd k le gaya
admi2 - tum kya kr rhe the
udhar s- malik hmka to bade m pata chala nahi to hm aisa howo na dete
admi 2- unka pata lagao aur Bunty ko jaldi dundu
call cut
pankaj - kaun ho skta h jisne Bunty jaise trained fighter ko utha liya
admi2 - jo bhi ho koi aam insan nhi ho sakta kahi Deep n to nhi
Pankaj- kyun majak karte ho Bunty ka wo kuch nahi kr sakta
admi 2 - ha sahi bola
pankaj - pata nhi sala ab ye naya dusman kaha s aa gaya . yaar mujhe to kal hi Russia nikalna h mai ja rha hu tab tk tum pata lagao kaun h ye kutta
admi2 - thim h dost.
isi k sath donk nikal gaye apne apne raste

Dur kahi ek jungle m ek Aashram hai jisme bahut s sadu h aur wo ek dusre s baate kr rhe h
sadhu1 - gurudev aaj 17 saal baad in dono k sarir m koi halchal hui h
gurudev- ha putra tum sahi ho sayad wo wakt aane wala h jab uske apni saktiya wapas milegi( muskurate hue bola)
sadhu2- gurudev maine inko har wo jadi buti , dawa sab kuch diya pr inpar koi prabhaw n pada fir aaj kaise ?
Gurudev -beta ye to Ishwar ki lila h mujhe bas ye pata h jab uss ladke ko apni saktiya aur miljaye gi wo khud inko lene ayega aur inhe thik karega pr abhi usme 2 mahine ka vilabh h
aur issi k sath gurudev apni yog shadhna m leen ho gaye
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Ab tak
Main apna pahla chakra jagrit karne ko baith gaya dhyan m

AB AAGGE

Ab tak main karib 3 ghante s laga tha apna phla chakra jagane m ki tabhi achanak s mere body m bahut dard hone laga aur m wahi jamin pr gir gaya itna dard to maine training k dauran bhi mahsus nahi kiya tha dard itna jyada ho gaya ki mai wahi chillane laga aisa lag raha tha koi mere ander s bahar aane ki kosis kr rha ho ye dard badta hi ja raha tha aur ab m hill bhi nahi paa raha tha bas chillaye ja rha tha pr us jangal m koi nahi tha meri awaj sunne wala kuch der uhi chillane k baad mera sarir s kuch rays nikli aur charo taraf failne lagi fir dekhte hi dekhte mere ander sama gai us waqt meri halt bahut kharb ho gai thi aisa lag raha tha kisi n mere sarir par road roller chala diya ho.
Dhere -dhere dard kam hota gaya aur m bhi thik mahsus karne laga pr abhi bhi kamjori mahsus ho rahi thi mujhe.
Karib adhe ghante baad main utha aur baith gaya aur baba ko yaad kiya aur fir m apne room m pahuch gaya maisa ji k ghar p abhi aur jab ghadi dekhi to abhi subah k panch baj rahe the ab m yaha p apna morning exercise to kr nahi skta tha q ki muhje is ghar k baare m jyada kuch pata nahi tha kal raat ko hi to aaye the ham yaha upar s muhje kuch kamjori bhi lag rahi thi to maine apna phone nikala aur call lagaya agent02 ko

Udhar s - Good morning sir hmne base k liya ek jagah dekh li hai aur usko sequre bhi karwa liya h bas ab aap mujhe apni team k liya requirements bataye aur apki team apko thik 2 din m us jagah pr mil jayegi

main - Agent02 kya tumhe pata abhi time kya hua h

Agent02 - sir abhi 05:03:44 ho raha h ab 46 ho gaya hai

main - kb tk naraj rhogi yaar ab maaf bhi kr do aage s tumhare sath hi jaunga mission p

Agent02 - sir m aapse naraj kyun hougi aap mere boss ho pagal employ hi hoga jo apne boss s naraz ho

main - Sameera Darling ab maaf bhi kr do na aasi bhi kya narazgi ki aap mujhse milo bhi na we are best friends naa

Agent02(Sameera) - Hai nahi hum the ok ek to saale dosti ki tujhse upper s order bhi deta h kya order diya tha yaad hai na
" Agent02 ab s tum Agent06 k under kam karogi "
kuch to socha hota mera kaise ek badi bahan apne chote bhai k under kaam karegi uper s wo gadha mujhse aise aise kaam krwa raha tha jaise badla le raha ho

Main- Yaar ye sab us Agent05 ka kiya dhara h usne aur Agent06 ne milkar phle mujhe hamari dosti ki kasam di aur fir wo sab kraya

Sameera - kya Agent05 ne usse to main abhi dekhti hu. usko interogation room m le jake main..

Main - Are meri Maa ruk to sahi m tujhe kisi ki info bhej raha hu unko apne team m shamil kr le aur wo jisko Agent 05 ne uthaya tha usko interogation room m rakh m 10 baje tk headquaters aa raha hu.

Sameera : thik hai agar tum kaho to isbar m interogate kru please please please

Main - thik hai pr aaram s ok jb m aau tab
call cut
Sameera ko manane m aur apni team ki requirements batane m mujhe karib 20 minute lag gaye fir m bhi fresh hone bathroom m chala gaya aur kari 6 baje m niche aaya to dekha mousa ji tracksuit pahne bahar jaa rahe hai.
main - Good morning Mausa jee
Mausa - Good Morning beta tum itni jaldi uth gaye
main - aadat h mausa ji subah uth exercise krne ki bas essi liye
mausa - ye to badi aachi baat h beta chalo tum bhi tracksuit m aa jao fir hum chalthe h walk p
main ok bol apne room m gaya aur 5 minute m change kr chal diya mausa jee k sath park m.
park ghar s kuch 10 minute ki duri pr h jab hm under gaye to waha bahut s log apne - apne kamo m lage hue the koi apni laughing, to koi exercise kr raha tha to koi apni walk kr raha tha main ander aaya to mausa jee bole

Mausa - Saurya beta aap apna running karo main to phle yoga krta hu .
Maine unko ok bola fir kya tha headphone laga m nikal pada apni dhun m kareeb 15 charak park m laga k jab m ruka to dekha sabhi log muh faade mujhe hi dekh rahe h aur mausa ji to jaise pathar k ho gaye ho q ki maine 45 minute m park kareeb bahut bada tha jiska andaza aap is baat s laga sakte ho ki ek normal aadmi ko park ka ek chakar lagane m 15 minute lagte h .

Issi liye sayad sabhi mujhe ghoore ja rahe the upar s main thaka hua bhi nazar nhi aa raha tha Ek baar to main bhi shock ho gaya sabko khud ki taraf ghoorte hue pa kr itne mai hi Mausa jee mere paas aaye aur mujhe ghar chalne ko bola main bhi nikal chala unke saath.

Bahar aate hi
Mausa jee - beta kya tum koi athelete ho
main - q mausa jee
Mausa- to tumne wo kaise kiya itna stamina aaya kaha s tum me
main - kya mausa jee aap bhi ye to bus practice ka assar h jo mai lagbhag 4 saal s krta aa raha hu uper s football m centre forward bhi hu to ye mere lia aam baat hai
mausa beta ye aam baat nahi hai tumne 15 minute ka track 3 minute m cover kr liya tha abhi wo bhi 15 baar bina thake hue. Manna padega kmal ki stamina h teri upper s footballer bhi bilkul apne baap pr gaya h wo bhi colage ki football team ka captain tha uper s state level tk khela bhi tha pr fir tere dada ji ne hi usse ghar k busness m laga diya nhi to paka national khelta wo
Flow flow m mausa jee kuch jyada hi bol gaye aur phir jb tk unko iska ehsas hua tb tk mera sawal untak pahuch chuka tha
Main - pr mom to batati thi k dad (Abhishek) ko koi bhi sports m maza nhi aata tha wo to bus padai hi krte the aur aap bol rahe ho ki wo football team k captain the

Mausa jee ko ab samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole aur kya na ki tabhi unka phone baaj utha aur wo baad m batane ka bol phone pr baat krne lage
Mausa ji -(maan me-mujhe apne uper control karna hoga nhi to isse sab pata chal jayega jo iske liye khatarnak hai)

jab tk hm ghar na pahuche mausa jee phone s hi chipke rahe.
Hum kareeb 8 baje ghar pahuche to dekha ki meri angel school n jane ki zid kr rhi thi .
Mujhe dekhte hi wo meri taraf aayi aur boli
saifali- Bhaiya aap kaha the maine bola tha na aapko mere sath school chalne k liye
main-are main to bhul hi gaya chalo aap nasta karo fir hum chalte hai
Tiya & Tanya -hum bhi chalnege

Massi - Ha waise bhi 2 din baad s tumhe bhi ussi school m continue krna h sari baate ho gai h bus shilpa tum dono ka T.C. le aaye fir tum wahi padogi
ye sun kar meri tino bahne bahut khush ho gai aur fir jaldi s nasta krne lagi main bhi jaldi hi change kr niche aaya aurnasta kiya fir hum charo nikal pade mausa jee k car s chuki main abhi under 18 tha isi liye driver bhi sath aaya tha aur ham logo ko school le gaya.
ye school is sahar ka sabse accha school hai school dekh Tiya aur Tanya bahut khush hue hm school k ander gaye to dekha ki 3 ladkiya meri angel ki friends hogi wo hmari taraf aaye aur pucha
ladki 1- ye log kon h saifali
saifali - ye mere bhai bahan h tumlog bolte the na ki mera koi bhai bahn nhi h dekho ye h mere saurya bhaiya tiyadidi aut tanya didi
sabhi n hme hello bola hmne bhi unhe hello bola fir hmne school dekha aur chal diya bahar abhi karib 9:17 ho rahe the Gadi k pass pahuch kr
main- Tum dono driver uncle k sath ghar chale jao m thodi der m aata hu
Tiya - Aap yaha kya karoge is naye sahar m to koi aapko janta bhi nahi h fir aap kaha jaoge
main- are meri bahn yaha paas hi m mere ek school friend ka ghar h jab maine usse yaha aane k bare m bataya to mujhe apne ghar aane ko bola to m bas usi k ghar jaa raha hu tum mom ko bata dena m shaam hone s phle pahuch jauga . (jhoot)
Phle to ye dono nahi maani phir kuch ghush lekar( chochlates ) maan gai aur driver k sath nikal gai mausi k ghar ko

Main school s bahar khada hi tha ki ek bike aayi aur thik mere samne ruki
main chup chap bike pr baitha aur hm nikal gaye RAW headqueters ki taraf.
waha pahuchne s phlehm ek hotel m gaye waha room book kiya aur maine apna getup change kiya maine ek mask pehna uske upper ek detective wali red topi aur phir detective wali meri black colour ki jacket
phir ham dono hi nikle aur pahuch gaye headquaters .
Aaj bahut dino baad aaya tha yaha p
mujhe dekhte hi sabhi log mujhe good morning wish karne lage
Main sidha pahucha interogattion room m to paya k ek hatta katta pahalwan type aadmi chair p bandha bhaitha h aur myjhe dekh to jaise aur kush ho gaya is waqt room m hm 3 log the main , Sameera aur wo aadmi
abhi hum kuch puchte ki tabhi mera phone baja
Toh pehla chakra jaagrit kar liya nice going brother
 

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NEW CHARACTERS
Gurudev(phle k episode walle) -Rishi Gautam ye ek vaidya hai jo apne aashram jo ki jungle m hai jiska naam kalp-aashrm h waha rah kr logo ki madad krte hai

ABTAK
Shivpur m sugar factory m pahuche suitcase wale aadmi k logo ki maut ho chuki thi aur wo behosh tha

AAGE

Chaliye ab dekhte hai aakhir shivpur k sugar factory m hua kya tha.

Time-1:37
Main meri team k sath jo ki kul 16 logo ki thi nikl pade shivpur ki taraf aapne plan ko aanjam dene.Hum log factory s kuch dur phle hi utar gaye aur Sameera n apne insect Camera s waha k baare pata lagaya.
Ander kul 25 log the 2 log gate p khade the 5 log ek room m chair s bandhe hue the ek bandha table k paas k kursi p baitha kisi s baat kr raha tha aur baaki k saare waha p bag m drugs aur weapon pack kr rahe the.
Phone p baat kr rhe aadmi n call cut kiya aur un 5 logo ki taraf badh gaya aur unme s ek k kanpati p banduk laga k bola.
Aadmi - Bola tha na tere ko ki apan k raste m nhi asne ka pr tu saala imandarri ki dukan nahi mani meri baat ab dekh tere samne kaise phle tere ghar k ladkiyon ko masalta hu phir aapne logo s masalwaata aur fir inko maarta hu.Tu saala kuch bhi nhi kr payega inspector.
{5 logo m ek inspector ,ek 40 saal k karib ka aadmi , ek aurat jo sayad uski biwi ho aur do jawan khubshurat ladkiyan thi }
Inspector- Dekh Guddu ye mamla mere aur tere bich ka hai inhe chod de aur mujhse lad agar mard ka baccha hai to.
Guddu-Mard ka bachha to apun h aur ye baat abhi inka rape tere samne kr proof karta hai apun.
Itna bol wo apna hath aage badane ko ho jaata hai par achanak s ek talwar aati hai aur uske haath ko kohni tk kaat deti hai jis wajah s wo dard s chikhne lagta aur aapne aadmiyon ko bulane lagta hai
Guddu-are madhar***d haath kaat diya re apun ka behen***d arre kaha mar gaye saare log (meri taraf dekh)bhadwo ye ander kaise aagaya. Kon hai be tu madar***d apun ka hath q kata bahen***d.
Main- aur chilla chilla k bula apne saathiyon ko pr wo ab tere paas nhi aayenge tere ko hi jana padega unke paas.
Maine abhi itna bola tha k room m mere teammates ki entry hui.
Kisi k haath m gun to koi talwar aur khanjar liye khada tha.Sabhi k sharir khun k nishan s bhare pade the.Sameera k talwar p abhi bhi kisi ka bhejha chipka hua tha.Maine abhitak un 5 ko dhyan s dekha bhi nhi tha aur wo saare to Guddu k haath katne wale scene k baad shock m hi chale gaye the aur fir jab mere teammates ko dekha to chup hi rhna thik samjha.Maine apne teammates ko.
Main-Agents bahar pura clear kr do saare bodies iisi room m le aao(Sameera s ) iss chutiye ko behosh kr iski first aid krdo.
Mere itna bolne s hi wo sabhi aapne aapne kammo p lag gaye.Mujhe un 5 ka pata tab chala jab unhone wo adhkathe bodies dekhi aur ultiya kari suru ki tab.Ultiyan krte hue hi 3 no female behosh ho gayi aur jb maine unko dekha to mujhe khud p bada gussa aaya(aage pata chalega q )
Abhi main kuch kahta ki wo inspector aur aadmi dono bole
Aadmi-Sir please hame jaane do hmne kuch nhi kiya h dekho hme inko bahar le jane do kahi in tino ko kuch ho gaya to hum dono jee nahi payenge please.
Inspector - sir please sir hame jaane do agar inhe ku....
abhi wo aage kuch bolta maine Sameera ko bola
Main-Agent02 in sabhi ki rassiya kholo aur hmare van tk le jao waha doctor s inki treatment krane bolo (inspector ki taraf) dekho abhi hm tumhe jaane nhi de sakte jb tk hmara mission complete n hojaye. Aap log Agent02 k sath jaaye aur abhi van m rah k hme coprate kare agar bhagne ki kosis ki to Agent02 aapko shoot kr degi.
Sameera n ek ladki ko uthaya aur baki dono ko inspector aur aadmi n aur chale gaye van k pass.Unke aane s phle hi maine aapne saare teammates ko unko apni position lene ko kaha aur ye bhi kaha ki jaise hi bodies wale room ki light jale sabko udda dena shivay head k.
sabhi ok bol aapne aspne position p pahuch gaye tabhi mere phone p ek notification aaya aur ussi k saath Sameera bhi pahuch gai mere paad apna phone liye aur mujhe phone dikhaya phone jisme mere phone wala notification hi tha
Notification-your target is comming near you.
ye notification hamare banaye gaye aap ka tha iss aap ka kaam ye tha ki jis bhi no ko ya fir IMEI no ko hm sameera k system m dalte agar wo no hamare location k 1 km radius k ander aaye to ye aap hme na sirf inform krta h balki us no ko track bhi krne lagta hai
Ye unhi dono no. m s ek hoga jo kl system m input kia gaya tha aur ab wo hmari hi taraf aa raha tha.
Main - Sameera hm plan p hi chalenge ok ab sunno is bande ko kuch mat hone dena iski to main khatirdaari krunga


Aage jo hua wo aapko pata hi hai iske baad maine sameera s bola
Main - Sameera ab tum handle karogi ok phle to acche tarah s cheak karo iss jagah ko agar kuch khaash mile to usse apne naye base p pahucha dena,in dono ko bhi interogation room m baand dena,m kal base p aaunga aur ha jaane s pahle bodies ko dispose kr dena.
Itna bol main chal pada van ki taraf.waha pahucha to ab sabhi thik the pr darre hue the main pahuch gaya inspector k paas aur bola
Main-(uske batch p uska naam dekh )Pradeep tum yaha inke sath kaise.
Pradeep-sir ye meri family hai.(main ye sun chowk gaya)Main Shivpur ka ACP hu sir yaha aaye din ye log (Guddu & gang) kuch-n-kuch ulta seedha krte rhte the aur main inke kaamo taang aadatha rhta inhone mujhe suru m kharidne ki kosis ki pr main nhi bika ulta inpe aur kade actions lene laga.Mere karan Department k curropt log bhi paresan the iss liye unlogo ne inke sath milke mujhe aur mere faimly ko marwane ki planning ki aur ye kamayab bhi ho jaate agar aap sahi waqt p na aate to.Thank you sir.
Main-ye to aap sabhi ka luck tha ki main pahucha yaha fir bhi welcome ab aap hme apni family s to millao.
Pradeep-je sir ye(aadmi ki taraf) hai mere uncle Pawan kashyap (aurat ki taraf) meri aunty Anuradha kashyap (ladkiyon ki taraf ishara kr) meri bahne Pragati aur Nidhima.
{ab pata chala mujhe gussa q aaya tha arre meri vajah s meri badi maasi aur bahne behosh ho gayi thi}
Main-Hello everyone ab aap sab jaa sakte hai hmara mission complete ho gaya hai aur main sorry bhi kahana chahunga ki meri wajah s aap sabhi ko wo sab dekhna pada (pradeep ki taraf) dost aage s apni family ki safty ka dhyan rakhna taki fir essi condition na aaye
A.Maasi- Sorry bolne kibjarurat nhi hai aapko aaj aapne hme bacha k hmpe bahut bada upkar kiya hai(pradeep ki taraf dekh pyar s) beta is naukri ko chod apne uncle k business m hath batao ab to tumne bhi dekh liya ki is naukri m koi tumhare sath nahi tumhare apne department k logo n hi tumhe fasa diya.
Pradeep-Sahi kaha aunty m aaj hi resign de dunga mujhe meri family s jyada important kuch nhi hai mom-dad k jaane k baad ab m kisi aur ko khona nhi chahta.

Main-Main chalta hu.
A.massi-sir apna naam to bata dijiye taki hame bhi pata ho k hme kisne bachaya hai.
Main-Kingg
Itna bol main waha s chala gaya.


Time-7:21

Mai ghar m aaya to dad aur Mausa ji garden m baithe kuch baate kr rhe the main bhi unki taraf chal diya.
Mausaji- beta aapka result kb hai
Main-abhi to time h usme.
Dad-to kya socha hai tumne aapne future k baare m.
main-Dad abhi to B.Tech ki soch raha hu aaplogo k hi collage s XYZ COLLAGE S
Collage ka naam sunte hi dad aur mausaji thode chintit ho gaye phir normal ho k bole
Dad-Accha socha h.tum jao hm dekh lenge isse.
Mausa ji-Haa tum jao aur jo tumhare room k left side wala room hai na usme maine gym k equipments rakhwa diye h dekh lo agar kuch km pade to bata dena ok.
Main to ye sun bahut khus ho gaya phir chal diya ghar k ander.
Jab ander aaya to sare k saare TV p serial dekh rahe the wo bhi bade dhyan s.Agar abhi yaha koi gun s fire bhi kr deta tb bhi inhe kuch pata nhi calta.
Maine bhi inhe bina disturb kiye apne room m chala gaya aur fir change kr gym ko dekha sarre equipments dekhe sab kuch thik tha.
Fir main nichhe gaya khana khane. Dinning table p mere ek taraf Saifali(meri angel) baithi thi aur ek side Tiya & Tanya aur tino mujhe us ghatiya s serial ki kahani sunna rahe the.Maine jaldi s aapna khana khatam kiya aur chal diya soone .
soote hi m pahuch gaya jungle m aur baith gaya dhyan m 2nd chakra jagane
Team toh achchi he king ki lekin aaj uski wajah se bari mausi or behen ko problem hon gyi waise unki jaan bhi bacha li excellent update
 

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Dosto iss jagah s maine strory m thode changes kiye hai .


UPDATE-7


CHARACTERS
GUDDU - EK SMUGLLER

ABTAK
MAINAPNA 2SRA CHAKRA JAGANE K LIYE BAITH GAYA DHYAN M

AAGE

Aaj bhi waisa hi dard hua aur waise hi mere body s ray nikla aur fir sama gaya mere body m.
Meri neend 4 baje k aas paas khuli aaj bhi body dard tha jab main bathroom m fresh hone gaya to mirror m khud ko dekh chowk gaya q ki meri body aur bhi strong lag rahi thi mere muscles aur fule hue the cuts fir aur acche s shape m aa gaye the.Main apne andar aaye is change ko le kr thoda paressan ho gaya k sabko kya bataunga k acchanak aise kaise ho gaya.Fir abhi k liye ye sab dimag s jhatak chal pada gym m aur shuru ki weight lifting pr sala ye weights mujhe bilkul kisi pankh k tarah halke lag rahe the maine dhire -dhire saare weights try kiye pr mere ko to saare ek saath uthne p bhi halke lag rahe the.Mere ko laga sayad body m aaye hue change ki wajah s aisa h.Karib 6 baje gym s nikal park k oor chal diya.Abhi main raaste m hi tha .ye rasta subah k iss samay p bahut sunsan hota h kuch hi log hote hai yaha s aane jaane wale.Mai aage badh hi raha tha k mujhe kuch ladkion k chillane ki awaj sunai di.Main bhi chal pada awaj ki disha m.waha pahucha to paya 6 log mil ke 2 kubshurat ladkiyon ko pakde hue hai.Mainunke pass pahuch kr.
Main: arre kya bhailog subah subah hi paap shuru kr diya chalo ab jaldi s inhe chod k bhag jao nahi to bahut marunga.
A1-(apne sathion s) dekho isse bhaiyon lagta h iski charbi nikalni padegi
A2-haa bhai mere haatho m bhi khujli ho rahi h
A3(leader)-jaa k mita le khujli apne haato ki .
Main -arre jisko bhi aana h jaldi aa jao agar m aa gaya to sabhi ko bahut maarunga.
Mera itna kahna tha ki A2 daudta hua aaya mere paas aur mujhe marne ko apna haath aage kiya.
Maine bhi socha saale k sath khelu bahut din ho gaye the haath saaf kiye.Jab wo mere karib pahucha maine bhi ek punch bana uska pet p maar diya uske hamla karne s phle hi.Maine to bus uske sath khelne k liye aisa kiya tha pr hua ye ki mere punch padte hi wo udta hua apni car p jaa gira aur ab hill bhi nahi raha tha.Jab maine ye dekha to thoda shock ho gaya wahi un gundo aur dono ladkiyon ki to pucho hi mat muh phade kabhi mujhe to kabhi us aadmi ko dekh rahe the .A3 jo unka leader tha wo khud ko sambhal k bola
A3 - Bahut galat kiya tune Lucky bhai k aadmion s panga le ke ab to tu bhi jayega in dono k sath.
Itna bol usne apne 4 sathion ko bej diya mere ko maarne charo hockey stick,baseball stick ,chain aur bat liye duad pade meri or maine socha ab inhe to aur aaram s maarna padega warna ye saare bhi maare jayenge .Abhi m y soch hi raha tha k A1:saale ek ko maar k jyada saana ban raha hai ruk abhi tere ko maar k tere ghar jayenge hm sabhi aur waha p.. aaahhhhh aaaa
wo abhi apni line puri karta ek chanta khinch k maine usse maara chaaataaak jiske baad saale ke ek side k saare dant jamin p the aur wo wahi gira pada tha. Ye dekh A1 bola
A1: arre chutiyon mil k maaro na jaldi kahe bakchodi kr rhe ho ab no baatiyana only lattiyana samjhe nahi hm hi tumko maar denge.
A1 ki baat sun tinno n mil k mujhpe dhawa bola ek ne hockystick s mere pair p waar kiya dusre n baseball bat s mere pith p aur ek n bat s mere sir p.Maine hawa m chalang laga k tino s bach gaya pr tino k hi waar ek dusre ko lag gaye unko gussa aagay aur wo fir meri taraf daude maine bhi ek k pair p laat maari aur baaki 2 k seene p ghusha de diya pair wale ki pair ki haadi buri tarah toot gai wo wahi baith chillane laga dard s baki k dono maar chuke the unke muh s khun ki pichkari nikli thi. Ab A3 ki fatt k char ho gayi thi wo sala dono ladkiyon ko chod bhagne ko hua main daud k pahuch gaya us tak meri speed m aur uske saamne khada ho gaya aur de maara ek ghussa uske pait p wo udta hua dono ladkiyon k paas pahuch gaya aur bhhooot bol k mar gaya. Waha p ab ek gunda pada hua tha jo dard s tadap raha tha maine usko bhi wahi p maar dena hi sahi samjha q ki agar ye bach jata to main iss bekar k lafde m fash jaata jo main nahi chahta tha.Usko khatam krne k baad maine sameer ko text kr location beja aur usse 15 min m clear krne ko bola.Fir main chal pada dono ladkiyon ki taraf wo had s jyada dari hui thi ek to pahle gunde fir main aur meri maar uske baad saare gundon ki maut aur wo A3 ki baat.Sayad sach m mujhe dono hi bhoot samajh rahi thi maine socha inhe phle kahi baitha deta hu taaki inse puch saku k wo log kaun the aur inhe q pareshan kr rhe the maine to bus kisi lucky bhai ka naam hi sunna aur kuch nahi.Main unke paas jaane laga to 2no pahle dhire-dhire piche jane lagi.Main abhi kuch bolta k gatli s mere pair m us aadmi k daant gad gaye jisse mere muh s ek choti chikh nikli.Meri iss choti si chikh sun pata nhi unko kya hua dono n fauran daud laga di aur turant waha s bhag gai.Main bas dekhta hi rah gaya ab maine bhi park na jaa kr pahuch gaya ghar. waha sabhi dinning table p hi the.Maine bhi change kr unko join kr liya kuch der baad Saifali school k liye taiyaar hone chali gai aur Tiya , Tanya ko bhi mom n shopping p jaane ka bol taiyaar hone bhej diya mujhe bhi kaha to maine mood nahi hai bol unko mana kar diya.Saare ek saath aa gaye niche taiyaar ho ke Mom,Maasi,Tiya,Tanya ko le nikal gaye shopping p Main bhi Saifali ko school chodne chala gaya aur Mausa jee Dad k sath office chal diye.
Saifali ko ghar chod k main ghar m aaya aate hi apne room m gaya aur apna phone nikal usme apne Nanaji k case ko study krne laga aur iss kaam m mujhe bahut s jhatke lage q ki jitne bhi saboot the saare k saare banawati the aisa lag raha tha ki unho waha p jaan bujh k rakha gaya hai
Main(maan m)-Ye saala Nana ji ka pata nhi chal raha kuch Mom dad s sunaa to laga k ye jo case hai isme pakka iska hi haath hoga pr saala file k hisab s to yahi lag raha h koi aur h jo Nana ji k khandhe p banduk rakh challa raha hai.

Maine turant apne superior ko call kiya call pick hote hi wo bol pade.
S- king jo bhi tum soch rahe ho iss case k bare m wo bilkul sahi h tumhare Nana ko fasaya gaya h aur unko fasane wala abhi bhi unke karib h.
Main- (hairan ho) sir aapko kaise pata ki wo mere Nana hai.
S- waise hi jaise ye pata tha k Digvijay RAW ka agent rah chuka h (AgentD) aur wo Shilpa ko bhi train kr raha hai RAW k liye.
Main-aapko hmare baare m itna kaise pata hai
S:King abhi tum kuch nahi jante ho apne pariwaar k baare m kuch galatfahamiyon k karan tumhara pura parivar hi aaj ek aise mod p hai k.... ye baate chodo aur case ko solve karne p focus karo.Yee case maine tumhe iss liye diya hai taaki tum usme kaamyab ho jaao jisme main kamiyab nahi ho paya.
Main:Thik h sir pr mujhe apne family k baare m jaanna h.
S:sahi waqt ka intezar karo mujhe pura yakin h k tum jaroor kamiyab hoge.Waise tumne Digvijay aur Shilpa ko team m rakh accha kiya h pr jb wo ye jaanege k tum king ho to kaise handle kr paoge unko.
S:sir main unko handle kr lunga pr kya unhone join kr liya abhi.
S:Join to wo jarur karenge Digvijay k kuch adhure waade hai jinko purra krne wo jaroor lautega. Shilpa bhi uske sath jaroor join karegi.
call cut.
Sir s baat krne k baad mera dimag aur ghum gaya pata nhi bhudha kya-kya bak gaya mere aur mere family k baare m.
Maine fir Ritvik ko call kiya aur usse Nanaji and family ka update liya sab kuch normal lag raha tha Fir maine Sameer ko call kiya aur usko bola k Nanaji k office m ghus jaaye(job join karke).
Aur waha bhi unke karibi logo ka pata kare aur unki details mujhe forward kare.
Fir Sameera ko call kiya aur bola ki aaj main nahi aa sakta aaj k kaam wo handle kr le aur Guddu aur us aadmi ko abhi ander hi rakhe.
Itna bol m chal pada gym room m aur waha baith case k bare m fir s case k baare m.

Chaliye kahi aur chalte hai.

Ek badi si sunder haveli hai jisme ek aurat mandir m baithi ek tasvir liye aashu baha rahi thi.

Aurat-Q Bhagwan Q ujad diya tune mere swarg s sunder ghar ko kitne acche the wo din jab ye ghar ek ghar hua karta tha logo ki hassi gunjti thi yaha baccho ki kilkariya unka roona kitna achha tha wo hum sab mil k rhte the pta nahi koski nazar lagi mere ghar ko ki aaj ye ek Makaan ban rah gaya hai Q Bhagwan Q(roote hue)
Tabhi ek dusri aurat n uske kandhe p haath rakhaa aur boli
Aurat2- Malkin aab roone s kuchu nahi hoga. Ham uhi waqat boli thi aapse rook lijiye Saifali Bitiya ko is ghar s nikale jaane s .
Aurat1- Shurbhi us waqt kuc samajh nahi aa raha tha aur jb smjhi to wo hme chod bahut door chali gayi jaha s koi nahi aata kabhi laut k.
Shurbhi- Ha to aab kahe roo rahi ho jab sb loot gaya.

Aurat1- Tu bhi aaj tk mujhse roothi hai na hona bhi chahiye wo mere kokh s janmi jaroor thi pr uski dekh bhal to tunne hi ki thi na Yasodha Maiya k jaise.
Shurbhi-Haa naraj to hu pr ab kr bhi kya sakti hu(roote hue) wo to chali gayi na mujhe chod k.
Aurat1 hai meri Nani ji yani Sharmila Singh.

Sharmila - ha aur sath hi le gayi iis ghar ki saari khusiyan bhi Jab uska janam hua tha tb s usko pyar nhi mila
Maa-Baap ka.Bhai-Bahno n bhi sirf nafart hi di usse.Hmesha apne saare bachon s door rha usko. Bachpan s hi hostle m padti aayi itna bada pariwar hone k baad bhi usse kabhi pyar nhi milla wo toh tu thi jo usse uski maa ban pala posha.Dekh na jo iss ghar n uske sath bachpan s kiya aaj wahi ye ghar bhugat raha hai kahne ko kitne log hai na yaha pr koi kisi s baat nhi karta saare log apne m lage rhte hai.3-3 bacchiya hai iss ghar m pr tinno ki aapas m nahi banti wo to unke maa-baap hai jo inhe jode hue hai warna ye kabhi ek jagah rahe hi na.Mere bachho ko bhi jab sach ka pata chala saare riste naate tod chali gai h.Apne Maa-Baap ko to chodo Sanjna wale hadse k baad s to apne jaan spyare bhaiyon s bhi baat nhi ki hai.Pata hai Shurbhi,Poonam ne to hme apni beti ka chahra bhi dekhne nasib nahi hone diya hum sabhi Hospital m hi the uss waqt aur usne Damad ji s bol hame bahar krwa diya.

Shurbhi-Malkin janti aap bhi ho ki galti kiski thi uss waqt jo Poonam n aisa kiya.

Sharmila bas ye sab bol k aur sun k roote-roote wahi behosh ho gai.Jab Shurbhi n ye dekha to usne sabko awaz lagai pr sayad koi tha nahi ghar m to usne kisi tarah Nani ko unke room m pahuchaya aur doctor ko phone kiya.Doctor n cheak kr k bataya ki BP ki problem hai bs aur kuch nhi.

Chaliye ab chalte hai hm Kalp aasram ki taraf.
Yaha p Rishi Gautam(R.G.) apne kutiya m dhyan m baithe hue the ki unke kutiya m koi aaya ussi k sath inki dhyan shadna bhi samapt ho gai.
Are ye to Saaya(Sena Nayak) hai
SenaNayak(S.N)- R.G. ko mera pranamm
R.G- arre aaj to hamre kutiya m jinlok k senapati ji padhare hai aaiye.
S.N- R.G mujhe ma....
abhi wo apna vakya pura krte ki usse pahle hi
R.G.- hame pata hai aap q aaye h maharaj s kah dijiyega ki chinta ki koi awasyakta nahi ye to bas Ishwar ki lila h kuch papiyon ko Dharti s mukt krne ka.Abhi apke maalik bilkul swasth hai aur jald hi wo apne shinghasan p virajne aayenge.
S.N-Thik hai

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Sabhi logo n sath m Dinner kr liya tha aur abhi hus sab baatain kr rhe the.Kal Meri Bahno ka school tha isliye wo soone chali gai thi.
Mausha ji kuch chintit nazar aa rahe the.Unko esse dekh Dad n unse pucha.
Dad- kya hua Vikram kuch paresan s nazar aa rhe ho
Mausa - Ha bhai sahab . Main Divya Bhabhi k baare m soch raha tha k unko batau ki nahi k Reshma & family wapas aa gayi hai.Ab to unka bhi transfer yahi ho raha hai sayad 2 din m yaha shift bhi ho jaye.
Mom- arre Divya abhi bhi padati h collage m kya?
Mausi- Didi wo to aab Dean abn chuki h collage ki yaha XYZ COLLAGE m kuch problem chal rahi h isliye unke yaha ka Dean banaya jaa raha hai.
Mom/Dad-Dean ban gai?
Mausa - haa jab koi aapne personal life s jyada apne professional life me gum ho jata hai to yahi hota hai.
Dad- kya matlab?
Mausi- Aapko to pata hai na ki wo na sirf Deep ki bahan thi balki wo to uski Maa bhi thi Deep k khusi k liye kuch bhi kr janne wali.Yaad hai jab unko Deep & Saifali k pyar k baare m pata chala to unhone Saifali s turant uski Sagai karwa di thi.pr jab wo hadsa hua unke sath tab s Divya Bhabhi puri tut gai thi are wo to pure 2 mahine tk room s bahar hi nahi aayi.wo to jeth ji ne unko sambhal liya.Fir kisi tarah unki jindgi patri p aayi pr tb s wo chup-chup rhne lagi.Kisi s bhi baat nahi karti thi bas jeth ji aur paridhi(beti Divya ki) k sath hi baat kr liya krti thi.waqt guzra wo fir s thodi thodi khulne lagi. Fir achanak s hi Reshma bhi gayab ho gayi aur jab ye baat Bhabhi ko pata chala wo to wo jakham fir s hara ho gaya aur Bhabhi n apna sab kuch chod bus apne collage aur Paridhi ki padhayi p focus suru kar diya aur dekhte - dekhte wo collage ki dean ban gai.Jab meri delivery ka waqt aaya tb wo hmse milne aayi.Meri Beti ko dekh wo bahut khush ho gai q ki ye bilkul Saifali ki tarah dikhti thi.Bhabhi n iska naam Saifali hi rakh diya.Ab wo Saifali k sath kub khelti, Saifali k aate hi jaise unko unka khoya sab kuch mil gaya ho wo to ye tak bolti ki "Meri Saifali aa gai Uske piche piche Deep bhi aayega".Ab hm log bhi unko khush dekh khush rahne lage.Paridhi bhi Saifali ko bahut pyar krti h q ki wahi to uski purani mom ko wapas layi thi.
Maasi ki Baat sunte sunte sabhi k aashu nikalne lage
Dad-dekho kal jb Reshma aayegi to hm usse is baare m baat karenge.

sabhi apne room m chale gaye main bhi room m aa gaya aur soo gaya
soote hi jungle jaa pahucha aur dhyan m baith gaya aapna 3rd chakra jagane ko
Amazing update bro
 
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