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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Update - 4

Ab tak
Main apna pahla chakra jagrit karne ko baith gaya dhyan m

AB AAGGE

Ab tak main karib 3 ghante s laga tha apna phla chakra jagane m ki tabhi achanak s mere body m bahut dard hone laga aur m wahi jamin pr gir gaya itna dard to maine training k dauran bhi mahsus nahi kiya tha dard itna jyada ho gaya ki mai wahi chillane laga aisa lag raha tha koi mere ander s bahar aane ki kosis kr rha ho ye dard badta hi ja raha tha aur ab m hill bhi nahi paa raha tha bas chillaye ja rha tha pr us jangal m koi nahi tha meri awaj sunne wala kuch der uhi chillane k baad mera sarir s kuch rays nikli aur charo taraf failne lagi fir dekhte hi dekhte mere ander sama gai us waqt meri halt bahut kharb ho gai thi aisa lag raha tha kisi n mere sarir par road roller chala diya ho.
Dhere -dhere dard kam hota gaya aur m bhi thik mahsus karne laga pr abhi bhi kamjori mahsus ho rahi thi mujhe.
Karib adhe ghante baad main utha aur baith gaya aur baba ko yaad kiya aur fir m apne room m pahuch gaya maisa ji k ghar p abhi aur jab ghadi dekhi to abhi subah k panch baj rahe the ab m yaha p apna morning exercise to kr nahi skta tha q ki muhje is ghar k baare m jyada kuch pata nahi tha kal raat ko hi to aaye the ham yaha upar s muhje kuch kamjori bhi lag rahi thi to maine apna phone nikala aur call lagaya agent02 ko

Udhar s - Good morning sir hmne base k liya ek jagah dekh li hai aur usko sequre bhi karwa liya h bas ab aap mujhe apni team k liya requirements bataye aur apki team apko thik 2 din m us jagah pr mil jayegi

main - Agent02 kya tumhe pata abhi time kya hua h

Agent02 - sir abhi 05:03:44 ho raha h ab 46 ho gaya hai

main - kb tk naraj rhogi yaar ab maaf bhi kr do aage s tumhare sath hi jaunga mission p

Agent02 - sir m aapse naraj kyun hougi aap mere boss ho pagal employ hi hoga jo apne boss s naraz ho

main - Sameera Darling ab maaf bhi kr do na aasi bhi kya narazgi ki aap mujhse milo bhi na we are best friends naa

Agent02(Sameera) - Hai nahi hum the ok ek to saale dosti ki tujhse upper s order bhi deta h kya order diya tha yaad hai na
" Agent02 ab s tum Agent06 k under kam karogi "
kuch to socha hota mera kaise ek badi bahan apne chote bhai k under kaam karegi uper s wo gadha mujhse aise aise kaam krwa raha tha jaise badla le raha ho

Main- Yaar ye sab us Agent05 ka kiya dhara h usne aur Agent06 ne milkar phle mujhe hamari dosti ki kasam di aur fir wo sab kraya

Sameera - kya Agent05 ne usse to main abhi dekhti hu. usko interogation room m le jake main..

Main - Are meri Maa ruk to sahi m tujhe kisi ki info bhej raha hu unko apne team m shamil kr le aur wo jisko Agent 05 ne uthaya tha usko interogation room m rakh m 10 baje tk headquaters aa raha hu.

Sameera : thik hai agar tum kaho to isbar m interogate kru please please please

Main - thik hai pr aaram s ok jb m aau tab
call cut
Sameera ko manane m aur apni team ki requirements batane m mujhe karib 20 minute lag gaye fir m bhi fresh hone bathroom m chala gaya aur kari 6 baje m niche aaya to dekha mousa ji tracksuit pahne bahar jaa rahe hai.
main - Good morning Mausa jee
Mausa - Good Morning beta tum itni jaldi uth gaye
main - aadat h mausa ji subah uth exercise krne ki bas essi liye
mausa - ye to badi aachi baat h beta chalo tum bhi tracksuit m aa jao fir hum chalthe h walk p
main ok bol apne room m gaya aur 5 minute m change kr chal diya mausa jee k sath park m.
park ghar s kuch 10 minute ki duri pr h jab hm under gaye to waha bahut s log apne - apne kamo m lage hue the koi apni laughing, to koi exercise kr raha tha to koi apni walk kr raha tha main ander aaya to mausa jee bole

Mausa - Saurya beta aap apna running karo main to phle yoga krta hu .
Maine unko ok bola fir kya tha headphone laga m nikal pada apni dhun m kareeb 15 charak park m laga k jab m ruka to dekha sabhi log muh faade mujhe hi dekh rahe h aur mausa ji to jaise pathar k ho gaye ho q ki maine 45 minute m park kareeb bahut bada tha jiska andaza aap is baat s laga sakte ho ki ek normal aadmi ko park ka ek chakar lagane m 15 minute lagte h .

Issi liye sayad sabhi mujhe ghoore ja rahe the upar s main thaka hua bhi nazar nhi aa raha tha Ek baar to main bhi shock ho gaya sabko khud ki taraf ghoorte hue pa kr itne mai hi Mausa jee mere paas aaye aur mujhe ghar chalne ko bola main bhi nikal chala unke saath.

Bahar aate hi
Mausa jee - beta kya tum koi athelete ho
main - q mausa jee
Mausa- to tumne wo kaise kiya itna stamina aaya kaha s tum me
main - kya mausa jee aap bhi ye to bus practice ka assar h jo mai lagbhag 4 saal s krta aa raha hu uper s football m centre forward bhi hu to ye mere lia aam baat hai
mausa beta ye aam baat nahi hai tumne 15 minute ka track 3 minute m cover kr liya tha abhi wo bhi 15 baar bina thake hue. Manna padega kmal ki stamina h teri upper s footballer bhi bilkul apne baap pr gaya h wo bhi colage ki football team ka captain tha uper s state level tk khela bhi tha pr fir tere dada ji ne hi usse ghar k busness m laga diya nhi to paka national khelta wo
Flow flow m mausa jee kuch jyada hi bol gaye aur phir jb tk unko iska ehsas hua tb tk mera sawal untak pahuch chuka tha
Main - pr mom to batati thi k dad (Abhishek) ko koi bhi sports m maza nhi aata tha wo to bus padai hi krte the aur aap bol rahe ho ki wo football team k captain the

Mausa jee ko ab samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole aur kya na ki tabhi unka phone baaj utha aur wo baad m batane ka bol phone pr baat krne lage
Mausa ji -(maan me-mujhe apne uper control karna hoga nhi to isse sab pata chal jayega jo iske liye khatarnak hai)

jab tk hm ghar na pahuche mausa jee phone s hi chipke rahe.
Hum kareeb 8 baje ghar pahuche to dekha ki meri angel school n jane ki zid kr rhi thi .
Mujhe dekhte hi wo meri taraf aayi aur boli
saifali- Bhaiya aap kaha the maine bola tha na aapko mere sath school chalne k liye
main-are main to bhul hi gaya chalo aap nasta karo fir hum chalte hai
Tiya & Tanya -hum bhi chalnege

Massi - Ha waise bhi 2 din baad s tumhe bhi ussi school m continue krna h sari baate ho gai h bus shilpa tum dono ka T.C. le aaye fir tum wahi padogi
ye sun kar meri tino bahne bahut khush ho gai aur fir jaldi s nasta krne lagi main bhi jaldi hi change kr niche aaya aurnasta kiya fir hum charo nikal pade mausa jee k car s chuki main abhi under 18 tha isi liye driver bhi sath aaya tha aur ham logo ko school le gaya.
ye school is sahar ka sabse accha school hai school dekh Tiya aur Tanya bahut khush hue hm school k ander gaye to dekha ki 3 ladkiya meri angel ki friends hogi wo hmari taraf aaye aur pucha
ladki 1- ye log kon h saifali
saifali - ye mere bhai bahan h tumlog bolte the na ki mera koi bhai bahn nhi h dekho ye h mere saurya bhaiya tiyadidi aut tanya didi
sabhi n hme hello bola hmne bhi unhe hello bola fir hmne school dekha aur chal diya bahar abhi karib 9:17 ho rahe the Gadi k pass pahuch kr
main- Tum dono driver uncle k sath ghar chale jao m thodi der m aata hu
Tiya - Aap yaha kya karoge is naye sahar m to koi aapko janta bhi nahi h fir aap kaha jaoge
main- are meri bahn yaha paas hi m mere ek school friend ka ghar h jab maine usse yaha aane k bare m bataya to mujhe apne ghar aane ko bola to m bas usi k ghar jaa raha hu tum mom ko bata dena m shaam hone s phle pahuch jauga . (jhoot)
Phle to ye dono nahi maani phir kuch ghush lekar( chochlates ) maan gai aur driver k sath nikal gai mausi k ghar ko

Main school s bahar khada hi tha ki ek bike aayi aur thik mere samne ruki
main chup chap bike pr baitha aur hm nikal gaye RAW headqueters ki taraf.
waha pahuchne s phlehm ek hotel m gaye waha room book kiya aur maine apna getup change kiya maine ek mask pehna uske upper ek detective wali red topi aur phir detective wali meri black colour ki jacket
phir ham dono hi nikle aur pahuch gaye headquaters .
Aaj bahut dino baad aaya tha yaha p
mujhe dekhte hi sabhi log mujhe good morning wish karne lage
Main sidha pahucha interogattion room m to paya k ek hatta katta pahalwan type aadmi chair p bandha bhaitha h aur myjhe dekh to jaise aur kush ho gaya is waqt room m hm 3 log the main , Sameera aur wo aadmi
abhi hum kuch puchte ki tabhi mera phone baja
 

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thank you all of you readers bas ekrequest aur karunga jaha bhi apko koi mistake lage to comment kr k jaroor bataye
 

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Super fantastic update bhai
 

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Very Nice, Fantastic update ....................
Keep it up bro ....................
Waiting for next update .....................
 
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Bro gay update lab ay ga
Bhai mere paas unke back up nahi the pr main phir bhi kosis karta hu unko fir s dene ki
 
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:reading1: Update Please ASAP Waiting Bro.

A Big Thanks All Writers And Mods
 
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Don't Be Sad Bro We Can Understand.
 
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