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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

Kya mujhe mere likhne ka tarika change karna chahiye

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
story p chalte h jaise jaise log milte rahenge unke bare m batata jaunga .
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Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya.waiting for next part.
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Awesome update bhai waiting for next
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Nice n fantastic update
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Super fantastic update bhai
Story firse nayi tarah se suru hogi
Thanks bhai.
Hmm
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Bhai part khatam hui hai na wo saare to nhi abhi next update unke baare m hi hai k kya hua tha itne waqt m unlogo k sath. Aur wo Pradeep ko aur waha ek aur Saifali bhi to hai issi liye to choda tha unke paas ki wo saare bhi story m banne rahe.
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Bhai aapki baat sahi he...
Lekin is tarah se puri kahani ulatpalat ho jati he..
Ab un character ka rista hi badal gaya he...
To ab saza Dene ka bhi haq nahi he..
Agar aap ek second me duniya ke 2 deso aapni jagah se badloge to uske prinam acha to nahi aayega... Bura hi hoga..
Ab aapne pahle janam ke Jo gunehggar he.. Unko saza to mili nahi... Yani sab free ho Gaye... Ab dena bhi chahe tab bhi koi fayda nahi hoga..
Qki vo sab to mar Chile hoge...
Ab aap umar to jyada kar nahi skate.. Agar ki to vo fir kus jyada hi puranik katha type ho jayegi
 

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Shaandaar update bhai
 

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Is update se lag gaya ki aapne pahle story nahi Sochi thi aapko kaise le jani hai is update me ye bat v khatam kar di ki surya jisse pahle pyar karta tha aapne uske bare me v nahi bataya jab ye hona hi tha to surya ko ye janm kyo lena pada chalo man liya aapke hisab se ki surya ka janm manjulika se hona tha ye nahi hua is liye to bat wahi khatm ho jati na wahi se dusra janm leta ye chutiyapa nahi hota or isse pahle aap soch rahe the college life jiyega surya is liye kahta hu story ko suru karne se pahle start or end pahle hi dimag me soch leni chahiye is se achha hota aap jaldi se sabko ek kara dete or koi dusri story start karte ye bekar update tha or yaha se kitne readers story padhna band kar denge
 
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