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Fantasy Saurya - ek youdha (Completed)

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Hi friend maine xforum pr kafi stories padi hai aur ab mai bhi apni ek story post karne ja raha hu ab jyada wakt na lete huye
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YAAR PATA NHI KAISE BUT ISS BAAR BHI WO UPDATE 37 ADHURA HI POST HO GAYA THA SORRY FOR THAT PLEASE READ IT AGAI.
 

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UPDATE - 37

Part-2
(Mohini k respect mai)

Humara aaj naam karan hone wala tha. Ghar ko pura sajaya gaya tha phoolon s.
Sabhi log puja ki taiyaarion mai lage hue the. Wahi hum dono hi ek palki m pade hue the Saurya to bas sota hi rahta tha aur jab jaagta to roona shuru.
Puja ka muhurat ho gaya tha.
Ek Aadmi- Arre wo pandit ji ko bulaye ho na dekho waqt ho raha hai.
Aurat- Haa bhai wo aa rahe hai bol rahe the ki apne kisi guru ji k saath aayenge unhi s naam karan krwa denge.
Aadmi-Hain kya bol rahi ho pandit ji unhone aisa kaha arre wo to khud hi itne bade vidwan hai.
Itne m ghar m 2 log aate hai ek ne pitambari rang ka kurta aur dhoti pahni hui thi wahi dusre n gerue rang ki.
Aadmi- Arre aayie aayie pandit ji hum aapki hi pratiksha kr rahe the.
Pandit- Sab kushal mangal hai na Jay Narayan.
Jai- Haa pandit ji bas aapki hi kripa hai aab bas hamare bitiya aur bhatije ka naam karan ho jaye bas
Pandit- Jay Narayan tumhe yakin nhi hoga hamare guruji khud chal ke aaye hai inn dono ka naam karan karne.
Jay- Namaste jaan kr bahut khusi hui jo aap hamare bacho k liye yaha tak aaye.
Guruji-(muskurate hue) Hame to aana hi tha.
Jay- chaliye puja ka waqt bhi ho raha hai.
Sabhi chal diye puja k liye.
Guru ji- Haa to dono jode apne apne bacho ko le baith jaiye apne sthan pr.
Kuch mantr padne k baad fir Guruji n mujhe apne paas lane ko bola.
Mujhe dekhte hi Uss Guru ji k muh m ek muskan aa gayi aur wahi mere chahre pr bhi.
Guruji- Ye ladki badi hi bhagyashali hai chanchal to itni hogi k batana muskil hai apni chanchalta s sabka man moh legi ye ladki. Iska naam to Mohini hi hoga.
Fir mujhe mere Jay ko de unhone Saurya ko apni oor manga.
Guruji- Ye baalak bada hi balwan hoga aur himat wala bhi hmm (meri oor dekh) iska naam Saurya hoga.
Usse bhi fir wapas kr diya.
Guruji- Jajmaan ek baat meri dhyaan s sunne inn dono ko alag na kiya jaaye dono hi jude hue hai agar inhe alag kiya to parinam dukhdaayi hi hoga. Ye ladki Mohini iske saamne iss lakde Saurya ko agar koi kuch kahe ya kare to ye apna aapa kho baithegi waise to saant sawabhaw ki hogi pr uss waqt isse jyada ugra koi nhi hoga.

Pandit ji aur Guruji ko unki dakhshina milli aur ewo chale gatye wapas.

Waqt bhi bitta raha kahte hai na k waqt k pankh hote hai wo rukta nhi kisi k rooke bas wahi hua.
Main Saurya s bas 10 min badi thi. Hum dono hi bade hue School jaane lage.
Mujhe sab kuch yaad tha pahle ka issi wajah s sayad m hamesha uske paas hi raha krti har waqt. Hum saath padte khelte khanna kahate aur soote bhi saath hi the.
Dekhte dekhte hi hum aur bade ho gaye hamari 12th ki result bhi aa gayi thi. Hamne collage m admission bhi krwa liya tha wo bhi scholarship pe.
Hum dono hi apni life m khoye hue the.

Kal hamare Collage ka pahla din tha aur hamare 18th birthday bhi yaani wo din jab mujhe apni powers milne wali thi aur saurya ko bhi.

Abhi yahi koi raat k 12 bajne m 10 min honge main bed p baithi soch rahi thi k ab shuru kaha s karungi kya pahle Saurya ko sab bata du fir mil kr baakiyon ko dunde ya fir abhi bas usko uski powers control krne ki lessons du uske liye bhi to koi chahiye tha jo abhi bahut dur tha.
Maine dekha 12 bajne hi waale hai main jaldi s khadi hui aur chat p chali gayi aur waha baith gayi dhyan ki mudra m.
Jaise hi 12 baje main 18 sal ki hui meri body kaali padne lagi ek dum s kaali sayad andhere ko bhi maat de de waisi kaali. Ye meri black powers thi jo mujme sama rahi thi aur mujhe inhe control krna tha warna main khoon ki talab m pura ghar hi saffa chat kar jaati.
Main baithi rahi waise hi fir eka eka meri body chamakne lagi main hawa m udne lagi aur meri body fir s thik ho gayi iska yahi matlab tha k maine apne black powers control kr liye hai.Main fir room m aa gayi.
Wahi Dusri oor Saurya soo raha tha k tabhi uska sharir akadne laga wo chikhna chahta tha pr uski chikh hi nhi nikal rahi thi. Usne bahut kosis ki pr koi faiyda nhi hua wo dard k kaaran behosh ho gaya.
Subah Jay(mere new dad) k uthane phir main uthi aur fir chal di Saurya ko uthane mujhe pata tha uska yahi koi haal hoga. Maine usse hosh m laya usne mujhe dekhte hi sab kuch bataya k kal raat achank s usse dard hone laga bodu akadne lagi aur bhi bahut kuch.
Maine uski baat sunni aur bas itna bola sayad thakawat ki wajah s wo kal khet m kaam kr k jo aaya tha.
Wo bhi maan gaya.
Fir hum dono hi ready hue.
Chuki aaj ghar m puja honi thi hamare janam din k wajah s.

Chalo ghar k logo k baare m bata du.
Jay Narayan-Mere pita annath hai padhe likhe nhi hai jyada badi mehnat s unhone ek chota sa jameen ka tukda kharida aur ussi m kheti karte the unhe har baar pata hota k kon si fasal jyada mahngi bikegi. sab sahi raha to aaj wo ek kuch kheton k maalik bane huehai aur ab majdoron s kheti karwate hai.
Nilam- Meri Maa ye ghar k kaam dham dekhti hai pata nhi kaise pr ye english badi achi bolti hai.
Amrita chachi- Ye hai Saurya ki Maa. Inki maut ho gayi thi nahar m dubne s to tab s meri Maa hi Saurya ko dekha krti thi.
Pritvi Chachu- Kahne ko ye bhi anath hi hai.Ye Saurya k baapu hai jo abb uske saath nhi rahte. Amrita chachi k marne k baad ye kahi chale gaye fir kabhi nhi laut k aaye.
Jab ye sab hua tab hum 14 saal k hi the. Saurya insab k baad tut gaya tha fir maine aur baakiyon n usse sambhala tha.

Bas yahi thi hamari nayi family.

Puja ka waqt hua pandit ji aa gaye unhone puja karayi fir hume aashirwad diya.
Fur hum dono hi nikal pade sahar bus pr s wahi to collage tha apna.
Collage ka naam tha MNG collage.
Hum dono hi yaha B.tech ki padayi k liye aaye the. Hum dono ka hi pehnawa bada hi odd tha un collage walo k liye q ki hum dono hi gaon walo ki tarah kapde pehen aa gaye the udher aur wo thahra ek posh ilake ka collage.
Ab collage tha pahla din tha to ragging to honi hi thi na wahi hua fir kuch seniors the waha pe khade jo sabhi ko pareshan kr rahe the.
ek group n hum dono ko apne paas bulaya.
Saurya- Didi wo dekho wo hame hi bula rahe hai.
Main- haa chal dekhte hai kya baat hai.
Hum dono bhi chal diye udhar hi.
L1- Dekho bhaiyon lagta hai gaon s aaye hai ye dono.
(hamse) Tohar naam ka rahi.
Saurya- Hamar naam Surya rahle badu auu iss hamri bahin Mohini howe.
L2(L3 K kaan m)- Bhai mast item hai dekh gaon ki kanchi kali hai ye to.
Maine uski baat sun li pr boli kuch bhi nhi.
L3- Chalo tum Saurya iss collage k 10 chakar lagao abhi aur aap Mohini ji yaha aaiye hamare paas aur apne baare m bataiye.
Saurya- pr q main q lagau 10 chakar aur Didi s kya janna chahte ho mujhse pucho jo puchna hai.
L3- Arre dekho iss gawar ki to juban bhi chalti hai.Bete jo bola na wo kr warna collage s nikalwa dunga samjha kya.
Main-(Saurya s) Saurya ja jaldi s daud laga aa tere bhi haath pair khul jayenge.
Saurya- ye kya bol rahi ho didi itna bada collage hai main kaise 10 chakar..
Main- tu kosis to kar mujhe pata hai tu kr lega chsl ab jaa.
Maine Shaurya ko jabardasti bhej diya daudne ko. khud chal di L3 k taraf mujhe khun ki talab ho rahi thi badi pyaas lagi thi mujhe. L3-Haa to batao kuch apne baare m waise sunder to kaafi ho tum.
Ye bolte hue wo mera haath pakdne ko aaya.
Main- Idhar kaise batau itne log hai na jo batana tha wo bata diya ab to akele batane wali baate hai bus.
L2(L3 s)- Bhai ye to ye to direct line de rahi hai aap jao iske saath maje karo.
L3-Arre ha yaar ye to shide shide akele milne ko bol rahi hai.Chalo isse bhi chak lete hai fir tum sabhi ko bhi chakha dunga.
L3- (Mere s) Acha tab to akele hi milna hoga na chalo fir chalte hai.
Main- Nahi mujhe kahi nhi jaana aapke saath akele mai.
L2(L3 s) - bhai ye to ek saath aur lena chahti hai.
L2- To kya sabhi tino k saath chalogi.
Maine haa m saar hila diya.
Unn tino ki sakal to aisi ho gayi thi jaise loterry lagi ho.
L2- Hamare piche aawo.
Main bhi chal di tino k piche piche wo tino hi collage k chat ki oor chale gaye aur main bhi chal di. Chat p jaane wali shidi k paas bahut andera tha sayad waha ka light bulb kharab ho maine pahle ek baar aas paas dekha koi nazar nhi aaya.
Maine apne nukile daant bahar nikale aur fir...
Aaaaahh nhii yeeeee aaahhhh bhoooot aaaahhh .
Bas yahi saari aawaje aayi waha s. Maine fir waha s gayab ho girl's toilet m pahuch gayi waha pr muh dhoya aur chal di Saurya k paas jo kisi duwidha m khada tha.
Main- kya hua Saurya tu aise q khada hai.
Saurya- Didi main na abhi collage k 100 chakar laga kr aaya hu wo bhi itni jaldi.
Main(maan m)- Chalo ab isse bata sakti hu sab kuch aur ab waqt aa gaya hai Pradeep bhai s milne ka.
Main- Chup raho ye baat kisi s bhi mat bolna samjhe chalo kisi khali jagah p chalte hai.
Main usse waha s kisi khali jagah le gayi aur fir usko aakhen band krne ko bola.
Hum pahuch gayi Sanjana group of industries k boss k cabin m. waha ek adhed umar ka aadmi baitha files m kuch padh raha tha.
Main- uummmh ummmh Pradeep bhai.
Pradeep ne pahle to hame dekha ek baar aur fir apne kaam m lag gaya jaise hum usse uska koi brahmm lage ho.
Main-(zor s) Pradeep bhai.
Pradeep apne chasme uthar unhe saaf krte hue aur fir pehan kr bola.
Pradeep-Mohini tum Saurya mere dost mere bhai.
Itna bol wo hamare gale lag gaye.
Saurya bechara to bas pagalo ki tarah kabhi mujhe kabhi usse to kabhi uss jagah ko dekhta raha.
Main- Pradeep bhai Baba n aapko kuch diya tha jaane s pahle aur kuch krne ko bola tha.
Pradeep- Haa mujhe yaad hai tum dono ruko.

Pradeep n apna haath aage badaya aur ek choti si shishi uske haath m aa gayi.
Maine wo Shishi li aur usse khol saurya ki oor bada di jo bas stabd khada tha.
Main usse hilate hue.
Main- Isse pi lo sab sahi ho jayega.
Saurya- Ye kon hai hum kaha hai aur hum yaha aaye kaise.
Main- Saurya isse jaldi s pi lo sab samajh jaoge.
Pahle to wo na nukur krta hai fir wo usse pi leta hai.
Uss Shishi m Rani pari k aashu the jo Baba n Pradeep ko tb diya tha jab usse sab kuch yaad aa gaya tha.

Uss aashu ko pite hi Saurya ko jhatke lagne lage wo buri tarah s kappne laga aur fir gir gaya.
Main- Chalo bhai ab aapki baari isse train karo ache s samjhe na ye last chance hai hamare paas hame sabhi ko ek saath lana hoga.
Pradeep- Thik hai.
Main- Acha wo ek baat batana wo hamare jane k baad kya Ritesh ko sab ne maaaf kiya tha kya.
Pradeep-(has kr) Tum sabhi k jaane k baad kisi ko bhi tumhare baare m kuch bhi yaad nhi raha siway Saifali mausi aur Deep mausa k baare m chod kr Ek khabar aayi thi ghar mai k Saifali mausi aur Deep mausa hum sabhi s chip kr gaon chale gaye waha pr unki maut ho gayi uss sraap ko khatm krte hue. Haa ek chithi bhi thi tumhi ne rakhi thi naa k sabko maaf kr dena bla...bla..bla ye hamari aakhri icha hai.
Main- To kya wo kaam aayi.
Pradeep- nhi wo kaam nhi aayi tum bhul rahi ho tum sabhi n apna wajood hi mita liya tha. Na tumhare papa ko yad tha k unki koi beti hai na hi Divya ji ko paridhi k baare m kuch pata tha. Sayad tumhe bura lage pr jo log nanaji aur Arpit k saath the unpe wo terror funding wala case chala aur saare log abhi jail m hai Ritesh bhi.
Main- Pr q wo to...
Pradeep- karmo k fal aur kya bolu isse ye sab kuch Digvijay n kiya usne apne RAW m hone ka fayda utha unn sabhi ko uss case m fasa diya.
Main- Ab sabhi kaha hai.
Pradeep- Sabhi ka to pata nhi Main ab gaon m hi rahta hu bade Nanaji n mujhe apna utradhikari ghosit kr diya tha jaane s pahle ab main uss gaon ka Raja hu. Ye company Maa k naam s shuru ki hai issi m apna waqt kaat raha hu.
Itne main Saurya ko hosh aane laga




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UPDATE - 37

Part-2
(Mohini k respect mai)

Humara aaj naam karan hone wala tha. Ghar ko pura sajaya gaya tha phoolon s.
Sabhi log puja ki taiyaarion mai lage hue the. Wahi hum dono hi ek palki m pade hue the Saurya to bas sota hi rahta tha aur jab jaagta to roona shuru.
Puja ka muhurat ho gaya tha.
Ek Aadmi- Arre wo pandit ji ko bulaye ho na dekho waqt ho raha hai.
Aurat- Haa bhai wo aa rahe hai bol rahe the ki apne kisi guru ji k saath aayenge unhi s naam karan krwa denge.
Aadmi-Hain kya bol rahi ho pandit ji unhone aisa kaha arre wo to khud hi itne bade vidwan hai.
Itne m ghar m 2 log aate hai ek ne pitambari rang ka kurta aur dhoti pahni hui thi wahi dusre n gerue rang ki.
Aadmi- Arre aayie aayie pandit ji hum aapki hi pratiksha kr rahe the.
Pandit- Sab kushal mangal hai na Jay Narayan.
Jai- Haa pandit ji bas aapki hi kripa hai aab bas hamare bitiya aur bhatije ka naam karan ho jaye bas
Pandit- Jay Narayan tumhe yakin nhi hoga hamare guruji khud chal ke aaye hai inn dono ka naam karan karne.
Jay- Namaste jaan kr bahut khusi hui jo aap hamare bacho k liye yaha tak aaye.
Guruji-(muskurate hue) Hame to aana hi tha.
Jay- chaliye puja ka waqt bhi ho raha hai.
Sabhi chal diye puja k liye.
Guru ji- Haa to dono jode apne apne bacho ko le baith jaiye apne sthan pr.
Kuch mantr padne k baad fir Guruji n mujhe apne paas lane ko bola.
Mujhe dekhte hi Uss Guru ji k muh m ek muskan aa gayi aur wahi mere chahre pr bhi.
Guruji- Ye ladki badi hi bhagyashali hai chanchal to itni hogi k batana muskil hai apni chanchalta s sabka man moh legi ye ladki. Iska naam to Mohini hi hoga.
Fir mujhe mere Jay ko de unhone Saurya ko apni oor manga.
Guruji- Ye baalak bada hi balwan hoga aur himat wala bhi hmm (meri oor dekh) iska naam Saurya hoga.
Usse bhi fir wapas kr diya.
Guruji- Jajmaan ek baat meri dhyaan s sunne inn dono ko alag na kiya jaaye dono hi jude hue hai agar inhe alag kiya to parinam dukhdaayi hi hoga. Ye ladki Mohini iske saamne iss lakde Saurya ko agar koi kuch kahe ya kare to ye apna aapa kho baithegi waise to saant sawabhaw ki hogi pr uss waqt isse jyada ugra koi nhi hoga.

Pandit ji aur Guruji ko unki dakhshina milli aur ewo chale gatye wapas.

Waqt bhi bitta raha kahte hai na k waqt k pankh hote hai wo rukta nhi kisi k rooke bas wahi hua.
Main Saurya s bas 10 min badi thi. Hum dono hi bade hue School jaane lage.
Mujhe sab kuch yaad tha pahle ka issi wajah s sayad m hamesha uske paas hi raha krti har waqt. Hum saath padte khelte khanna kahate aur soote bhi saath hi the.
Dekhte dekhte hi hum aur bade ho gaye hamari 12th ki result bhi aa gayi thi. Hamne collage m admission bhi krwa liya tha wo bhi scholarship pe.
Hum dono hi apni life m khoye hue the.

Kal hamare Collage ka pahla din tha aur hamare 18th birthday bhi yaani wo din jab mujhe apni powers milne wali thi aur saurya ko bhi.

Abhi yahi koi raat k 12 bajne m 10 min honge main bed p baithi soch rahi thi k ab shuru kaha s karungi kya pahle Saurya ko sab bata du fir mil kr baakiyon ko dunde ya fir abhi bas usko uski powers control krne ki lessons du uske liye bhi to koi chahiye tha jo abhi bahut dur tha.
Maine dekha 12 bajne hi waale hai main jaldi s khadi hui aur chat p chali gayi aur waha baith gayi dhyan ki mudra m.
Jaise hi 12 baje main 18 sal ki hui meri body kaali padne lagi ek dum s kaali sayad andhere ko bhi maat de de waisi kaali. Ye meri black powers thi jo mujme sama rahi thi aur mujhe inhe control krna tha warna main khoon ki talab m pura ghar hi saffa chat kar jaati.
Main baithi rahi waise hi fir eka eka meri body chamakne lagi main hawa m udne lagi aur meri body fir s thik ho gayi iska yahi matlab tha k maine apne black powers control kr liye hai.Main fir room m aa gayi.
Wahi Dusri oor Saurya soo raha tha k tabhi uska sharir akadne laga wo chikhna chahta tha pr uski chikh hi nhi nikal rahi thi. Usne bahut kosis ki pr koi faiyda nhi hua wo dard k kaaran behosh ho gaya.
Subah Jay(mere new dad) k uthane phir main uthi aur fir chal di Saurya ko uthane mujhe pata tha uska yahi koi haal hoga. Maine usse hosh m laya usne mujhe dekhte hi sab kuch bataya k kal raat achank s usse dard hone laga bodu akadne lagi aur bhi bahut kuch.
Maine uski baat sunni aur bas itna bola sayad thakawat ki wajah s wo kal khet m kaam kr k jo aaya tha.
Wo bhi maan gaya.
Fir hum dono hi ready hue.
Chuki aaj ghar m puja honi thi hamare janam din k wajah s.

Chalo ghar k logo k baare m bata du.
Jay Narayan-Mere pita annath hai padhe likhe nhi hai jyada badi mehnat s unhone ek chota sa jameen ka tukda kharida aur ussi m kheti karte the unhe har baar pata hota k kon si fasal jyada mahngi bikegi. sab sahi raha to aaj wo ek kuch kheton k maalik bane huehai aur ab majdoron s kheti karwate hai.
Nilam- Meri Maa ye ghar k kaam dham dekhti hai pata nhi kaise pr ye english badi achi bolti hai.
Amrita chachi- Ye hai Saurya ki Maa. Inki maut ho gayi thi nahar m dubne s to tab s meri Maa hi Saurya ko dekha krti thi.
Pritvi Chachu- Kahne ko ye bhi anath hi hai.Ye Saurya k baapu hai jo abb uske saath nhi rahte. Amrita chachi k marne k baad ye kahi chale gaye fir kabhi nhi laut k aaye.
Jab ye sab hua tab hum 14 saal k hi the. Saurya insab k baad tut gaya tha fir maine aur baakiyon n usse sambhala tha.

Bas yahi thi hamari nayi family.

Puja ka waqt hua pandit ji aa gaye unhone puja karayi fir hume aashirwad diya.
Fur hum dono hi nikal pade sahar bus pr s wahi to collage tha apna.
Collage ka naam tha MNG collage.
Hum dono hi yaha B.tech ki padayi k liye aaye the. Hum dono ka hi pehnawa bada hi odd tha un collage walo k liye q ki hum dono hi gaon walo ki tarah kapde pehen aa gaye the udher aur wo thahra ek posh ilake ka collage.
Ab collage tha pahla din tha to ragging to honi hi thi na wahi hua fir kuch seniors the waha pe khade jo sabhi ko pareshan kr rahe the.
ek group n hum dono ko apne paas bulaya.
Saurya- Didi wo dekho wo hame hi bula rahe hai.
Main- haa chal dekhte hai kya baat hai.
Hum dono bhi chal diye udhar hi.
L1- Dekho bhaiyon lagta hai gaon s aaye hai ye dono.
(hamse) Tohar naam ka rahi.
Saurya- Hamar naam Surya rahle badu auu iss hamri bahin Mohini howe.
L2(L3 K kaan m)- Bhai mast item hai dekh gaon ki kanchi kali hai ye to.
Maine uski baat sun li pr boli kuch bhi nhi.
L3- Chalo tum Saurya iss collage k 10 chakar lagao abhi aur aap Mohini ji yaha aaiye hamare paas aur apne baare m bataiye.
Saurya- pr q main q lagau 10 chakar aur Didi s kya janna chahte ho mujhse pucho jo puchna hai.
L3- Arre dekho iss gawar ki to juban bhi chalti hai.Bete jo bola na wo kr warna collage s nikalwa dunga samjha kya.
Main-(Saurya s) Saurya ja jaldi s daud laga aa tere bhi haath pair khul jayenge.
Saurya- ye kya bol rahi ho didi itna bada collage hai main kaise 10 chakar..
Main- tu kosis to kar mujhe pata hai tu kr lega chsl ab jaa.
Maine Shaurya ko jabardasti bhej diya daudne ko. khud chal di L3 k taraf mujhe khun ki talab ho rahi thi badi pyaas lagi thi mujhe. L3-Haa to batao kuch apne baare m waise sunder to kaafi ho tum.
Ye bolte hue wo mera haath pakdne ko aaya.
Main- Idhar kaise batau itne log hai na jo batana tha wo bata diya ab to akele batane wali baate hai bus.
L2(L3 s)- Bhai ye to ye to direct line de rahi hai aap jao iske saath maje karo.
L3-Arre ha yaar ye to shide shide akele milne ko bol rahi hai.Chalo isse bhi chak lete hai fir tum sabhi ko bhi chakha dunga.
L3- (Mere s) Acha tab to akele hi milna hoga na chalo fir chalte hai.
Main- Nahi mujhe kahi nhi jaana aapke saath akele mai.
L2(L3 s) - bhai ye to ek saath aur lena chahti hai.
L2- To kya sabhi tino k saath chalogi.
Maine haa m saar hila diya.
Unn tino ki sakal to aisi ho gayi thi jaise loterry lagi ho.
L2- Hamare piche aawo.
Main bhi chal di tino k piche piche wo tino hi collage k chat ki oor chale gaye aur main bhi chal di. Chat p jaane wali shidi k paas bahut andera tha sayad waha ka light bulb kharab ho maine pahle ek baar aas paas dekha koi nazar nhi aaya.
Maine apne nukile daant bahar nikale aur fir...
Aaaaahh nhii yeeeee aaahhhh bhoooot aaaahhh .
Bas yahi saari aawaje aayi waha s. Maine fir waha s gayab ho girl's toilet m pahuch gayi waha pr muh dhoya aur chal di Saurya k paas jo kisi duwidha m khada tha.
Main- kya hua Saurya tu aise q khada hai.
Saurya- Didi main na abhi collage k 100 chakar laga kr aaya hu wo bhi itni jaldi.
Main(maan m)- Chalo ab isse bata sakti hu sab kuch aur ab waqt aa gaya hai Pradeep bhai s milne ka.
Main- Chup raho ye baat kisi s bhi mat bolna samjhe chalo kisi khali jagah p chalte hai.
Main usse waha s kisi khali jagah le gayi aur fir usko aakhen band krne ko bola.
Hum pahuch gayi Sanjana group of industries k boss k cabin m. waha ek adhed umar ka aadmi baitha files m kuch padh raha tha.
Main- uummmh ummmh Pradeep bhai.
Pradeep ne pahle to hame dekha ek baar aur fir apne kaam m lag gaya jaise hum usse uska koi brahmm lage ho.
Main-(zor s) Pradeep bhai.
Pradeep apne chasme uthar unhe saaf krte hue aur fir pehan kr bola.
Pradeep-Mohini tum Saurya mere dost mere bhai.
Itna bol wo hamare gale lag gaye.
Saurya bechara to bas pagalo ki tarah kabhi mujhe kabhi usse to kabhi uss jagah ko dekhta raha.
Main- Pradeep bhai Baba n aapko kuch diya tha jaane s pahle aur kuch krne ko bola tha.
Pradeep- Haa mujhe yaad hai tum dono ruko.

Pradeep n apna haath aage badaya aur ek choti si shishi uske haath m aa gayi.
Maine wo Shishi li aur usse khol saurya ki oor bada di jo bas stabd khada tha.
Main usse hilate hue.
Main- Isse pi lo sab sahi ho jayega.
Saurya- Ye kon hai hum kaha hai aur hum yaha aaye kaise.
Main- Saurya isse jaldi s pi lo sab samajh jaoge.
Pahle to wo na nukur krta hai fir wo usse pi leta hai.
Uss Shishi m Rani pari k aashu the jo Baba n Pradeep ko tb diya tha jab usse sab kuch yaad aa gaya tha.

Uss aashu ko pite hi Saurya ko jhatke lagne lage wo buri tarah s kappne laga aur fir gir gaya.
Main- Chalo bhai ab aapki baari isse train karo ache s samjhe na ye last chance hai hamare paas hame sabhi ko ek saath lana hoga.
Pradeep- Thik hai.
Main- Acha wo ek baat batana wo hamare jane k baad kya Ritesh ko sab ne maaaf kiya tha kya.
Pradeep-(has kr) Tum sabhi k jaane k baad kisi ko bhi tumhare baare m kuch bhi yaad nhi raha siway Saifali mausi aur Deep mausa k baare m chod kr Ek khabar aayi thi ghar mai k Saifali mausi aur Deep mausa hum sabhi s chip kr gaon chale gaye waha pr unki maut ho gayi uss sraap ko khatm krte hue. Haa ek chithi bhi thi tumhi ne rakhi thi naa k sabko maaf kr dena bla...bla..bla ye hamari aakhri icha hai.
Main- To kya wo kaam aayi.
Pradeep- nhi wo kaam nhi aayi tum bhul rahi ho tum sabhi n apna wajood hi mita liya tha. Na tumhare papa ko yad tha k unki koi beti hai na hi Divya ji ko paridhi k baare m kuch pata tha. Sayad tumhe bura lage pr jo log nanaji aur Arpit k saath the unpe wo terror funding wala case chala aur saare log abhi jail m hai Ritesh bhi.
Main- Pr q wo to...
Pradeep- karmo k fal aur kya bolu isse ye sab kuch Digvijay n kiya usne apne RAW m hone ka fayda utha unn sabhi ko uss case m fasa diya.
Main- Ab sabhi kaha hai.
Pradeep- Sabhi ka to pata nhi Main ab gaon m hi rahta hu bade Nanaji n mujhe apna utradhikari ghosit kr diya tha jaane s pahle ab main uss gaon ka Raja hu. Ye company Maa k naam s shuru ki hai issi m apna waqt kaat raha hu.
Itne main Saurya ko hosh aane laga





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DiNu DraCula

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Bhai ek chota sa hint deta hu.
Pradeep ko sab kuch kab yaad aane wala tha aur Baba usse kab milne wale the.
Uske liye baba me kaha tha ab bhi waqt he...
Lekin aapne to waqt hi badal diya...
Jane do Bhai..
Humari ye bate kabhi khatam nahi hogi...
Kahani aapki he.. Jo bhi kiya aapne sochkar hi kiya hoga..
Dekhta he kya hota he??
 
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