Fantasy Shiva the common man

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Damha]

Nice update my 1st comment on your story bhai sb kuch bohat aam chal raha hai kuch new lane ki koshis karo story achi hai emotions theek se show nahi ho rahe 1 quetion

ap must kitni dair me update likhte ho???

 

[Secretshiva1]

Nice update my 1st comment on your story bhai sb kuch bohat aam chal raha hai kuch new lane ki koshis karo story achi hai emotions theek se show nahi ho rahe 1 quetion

ap must kitni dair me update likhte ho???

Bhai agar emotions ki baat karu toh ye sach me meri kami ho sakti hai.
Baaki kuch fix nahi hota kabhi kabhi 2din tak bhi koi idea strike nahi hota aur kabhi kabhi kai saare ideas aa jate hai.jaise ki mene kal hi decided kiya shera ka roll bada karne ka.baaki future unpredictable hi rahega jo jaisa hai baisa nahi hai

 

[Damha]

Bhai agar emotions ki baat karu toh ye sach me meri kami ho sakti hai.
Baaki kuch fix nahi hota kabhi kabhi 2din tak bhi koi idea strike nahi hota aur kabhi kabhi kai saare ideas aa jate hai.jaise ki mene kal hi decided kiya shera ka roll bada karne ka.baaki future unpredictable hi rahega jo jaisa hai baisa nahi hai

bhai me idea ka time nai poch raha typing ka time poch raha hu q kay shayid ap emotions time ki kami ki wajha se theek se likh nai pate

 

[Secretshiva1]

bhai me idea ka time nai poch raha typing ka time poch raha hu q kay shayid ap emotions time ki kami ki wajha se theek se likh nai pate

Typing me idea ke saath hi kar leta hu baad me edit karta hu kai saare idea ek update me

 

[Damha]

Typing me idea ke saath hi kar leta hu baad me edit karta hu kai saare idea ek update me

ya shayid ap zada idea use karne ke chakar me zada likh nahi pate

 

[Secretshiva1]

B

ya shayid ap zada idea use karne ke chakar me zada likh nahi pate

Bhai me ek baat bata raha hu mein story ke baare kafi kuch socha hai suru me jaise bhi ho koi nahi aage kafi kuch dimaagh ghuma dene bala hoga.
Jo jaisa hai baisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.

 

[Last benchers]

Update-12

Kirti- hmm dekha mene sukh kar kanta hua jaa raha hai par hai toh mera pyara panda hi na sweet sa cute sa, panda.
Mein aur kirti phir khub jor se haste hai.
Ab aage
Abhi hum dono has hi rahe the ki Achanak kirti mujhe marne lagi.
Mein- kya baat hai kyu maar rahi ho?
Kirti- kyu maar rahi ho, 4 saal se mere ko birthday wish nahi kiya.na phone kiya aur ab aa kar itna badal gaya hai par ye nahi ki sorry bole.
Mein- to apne bhi toh birthday wish nahi kiya na.
Kirti- kaise karti tera koi number hi nahi tha mere paas.
Mein- haa toh mere paas toh jaise phone tha na pichle 4 saal us sunsan island par, akela tha 4saal se baha yaha aaya toh apko dekha laga ab akela nahi rahoonga haal chal poochne ki jagah sikayat karne lage aate hi. Jao me nahi karta baat aapse.
Kirti- kaise nahi karega haa 4 saal se gayab hai aur ab aaya hai toh baat nahi karega.ja me bhi nahi karti baat.
Ab toh dono hi ek dusre se naraz the toh manaye kon.
Naraz hone par hum jo pehle karte the bo hi aaj kiya hum dono ek dusre ki ankho me ankhe daale ek dusre ko dekhne lage.(ya yu kahu ghurne lage)Isme ye sart hoti hai jo pehle hasa bo hara aur bo dusre ko manayega.
Phir game suru hua aur 5 minutes baad hi me haar gaya.
Mein- yeh sarasar cheating hai.
Kirti- toh me kya karoo. Everything is right for a friend.(dost ke liye sab sahi hai)
Mein- par ye smooch bala face it feels. Ke kisi bandariya ke saath betha hu.
Kirti- kya bola bandariya, toh fir tu kon hai?
Kirti- oh yaad aaya SUKHA HUA PANDA.
Mein- haa toh kya hua isse bahane tumhe manana bhi nahi pada.
Kirti- ohhh, nahi ye cheating hai tu hamesha hi aisa karta hai mujhe manane ki jagah jhagda kar leta hai aur phir me jeet kar bhi haar jati hu.
Mein- i have a better idea tu naa haar hi jaya kar. Kam se kam mujhe ek hug toh mil jayakarega.
Kirti- (khush hote hue) apne cute panda ke liye kuch bhi.
Mein- toh ek hug....
Mera pura kehne se pehle kirti ne mujhe kas ke gale laga liya aur saath me gaal par ek kiss bhi kiya.
Mein- aree wah ye treat kis liye.
Kirti- ye treat hai itne din baad mere pyare se friend ek hug ke liye.
Mein- agar aisa hi hai toh abki baar aur jayda din ke liye gayab ho jata hu, phir toh ek smooch bhi mil sakti hai.
Kirti- khabardar jo phir se jane ka kaha bhi toh khun kar doongi tera, samjha.
Mein- yes madam.
Aur phir hum dono phir se hasne lage.
Kirti- ab chalo baaki logo se milati hu sab khush honge tumhe dekh kar.
Mein- ye na hota mujhse cartoon ki tarah bas haste raho or logo se hath milate raho.
Kirti- chal chup chap apni doston se milvana hai.
Mein- ok, chalo.
Kirti- ek baat aur baha jakar aise treat karna ki hum sirf achhe dost hai ye mausi bala schene rehne dena thodi der.
Mein- ji mausi ji.
Kirti- dekh, plz mat kariyo baha aisa.
Mein- ok friend.
Kirti- that's better, ab chal.
Aaj ke liye itna hi friends. review jaroor kare.
Thanks for reading....

Osmmm fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai

 

[Damha]

B

Bhai me ek baat bata raha hu mein story ke baare kafi kuch socha hai suru me jaise bhi ho koi nahi aage kafi kuch dimaagh ghuma dene bala hoga.
Jo jaisa hai baisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.

i wish aisa he ho

 

[DEVILWANTED]

awesome story hai....
thoda thoda emotions bhi laiye aur hero ki bahan kaha hai ..?

keep update