Fantasy Shiva the common man

[Last benchers]

Update-11
Mein- nahi uncle aap toh sirf apni duty kar rahe the immandari se aapy maafi mat mango.
Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai.
Mein- mann me (Jaise mene ki 6 saal pehle jiski saja aaj tak bhugat raha hu.)
Ab aage
Uske baad papa ne bhi uncle se maafi maangi aur hum tino andar aa gaye yaha par sab bahut busy the toh kisi ne dhyan nahi diya ki kon aaya kon nahi.
Andar jaakar papa ko unke dost le gaye aur mere paas reh gaya sirf shera.
Mein shera ki taraf dekhe bina.
Mein- commando 57912
(Shera ne jaise hi ye suna bo sock me aa gaya par turant hi usne situation ko samjaha aur jabab diaya.)
Shera- yes boss.
Mein- kabhi koi pareshani toh nahi aayi mission me?
Shera- nahi sir.
Mein- kisi ko sak toh nahi hua tum par?
Shera- no sir.
Mein- good.
Shera- sir agar bura na mane tou kuch poochu?
Mein- poocho.
Shera- kon ho aap?
Mein- ye jaanne ki tumhe jaroorat nahi. Bus itna samjh lo ke tere alava kabhi kisi ko pata naa chale mere baree.
Shera- jaisa aap kahe.
Mein- ab jao aur baaki logo ka dhyan rakho.
Shera- yes sir.
Uske baad mein dinning hall me sabse alag aa kar beth gaya.

Bhai log yaha kuch naye character add honge jinka intro add hone ke baad doonga.
Abhi me baha betha hi tha ki ek waiter ne juice offer kiya mene juice ka glass liya aur pine laga ki tabhi meri najar ek ladki par padi jise dekh kar mera dimaagh hi ghum gaya.
Mein turant uth kar uske paas gaya.
Mein- hello sweetie.
Ladki ye baat sun ker thoda chonk gayi usne turant meri taraf dekha,phir ek dum normal ho gayi.
Ladki- kon ho tum.
Mein- apne aap se poocho.
Ladki- mene toh pooch liya par jawab sirf ek hi aaya ki ek number ke awara ho tum.
Mein- toh koi nahi awara se dosti hi kar lo.
Ladki- dosti my foot.
Mein- aaji itni bhi kadar na giraiye hamari dosti ki,miss sweetie.
Ladki- mat bulayo iss naam se mujhe.
Ladki (man me)- kon hai ye jo baar baar mujhe sweetie keh raha hai kahi ye bo hi toh nahi, awaz toh bilkul uske hi jaisi hai, par bo toh 4 saal se lapta hai. ye bo nahi ho sakta phir isee kaise maloom ye naam.
Mein- kaha kho gayi sweetie dosti nahi karni toh girlfriend hi ban jao.
Ladki- ye mister aukaat me raho jante bhi ho kon hu me.
Mein- haa janta hu miss kirti.
Ladki-( chonkte hue) bahut bade bale awara lagte ho mera naam bhi jante ho.
Mein- aaji naam kya hai humme toh apka address, aapki family members ka naam yaha tak ki apke kai saare secrets bhi pata hai, sweetie.
Ladki- (thoda chillate hue) mat bulao iss naam se mujhe.
Mein- (rote hue) kyu naa bulau apni sabse pyari dost ko iss naam se 4 saal se iss naam ko pukarne ke liye tadap raha hu. Tum se baat karne ke liye par tum ho ki pehchanti bhi nahi mujhe.itna toh nahi badal gaya hu me.
Ladki(kirti)- (rote hue) shiva, ye tu hi hai na bata ab aur pareshan mat kar mujhe.
Mein rote hue unhe gale laga leta hu.
Mein- mat meri sweetie mat ro. Are tere haste hue chehre ko dekhne ko kitna tadpa hu me aur ab bhi aap meri khwahish puri nahi karoogi.
Kirti- (aashu pochte hue) me nahi ro rahi hu par tu bhi toh itni der se pareshan kiye ja raha hai sidhe sidhe nahi bata sakta tha.
Mein- agar sidhe sidhe bata deta toh ye pyara sa hug kaha se milta.
Kirti- (pyar se maarte hue) bahut badmash ho gaye ho tum.
Mein- ek aap hi toh ho jisse dil ki baat karne me kabhi dar nahi lagta.
Kirti- bada ayaa dil ki baat karne bala. Panda kahi ka.
Mein- hai mausi ye sab ab nahi dekha nahi ab kitna fit ho gaya hua me.
Kirti- hmm dekha mene sukh kar kanta hua jaa raha hai par hai toh mera pyara panda hi na sweet sa cute sa, panda.
Mein aur kirti phir khub jor se haste hai.
Toh dosto kuch toh apko idia ho hi gaya hoga aur baaki me bata du ye hai kirti meri mausi cum meri best friend jayda.
Aaj ke liye itna hi...
Thanks for reading.
Plz review...

Awesome mind blowing update sir ji
Shiva ab or Mistry BN RHA hai..
Itna to smjh gya Shiva hi shera ko hi bheja hai... But Kon see mission ki BT KR RHA tha.
Kriti massi Kam best friend jayda nice twist kriti ki chota intro de Dena yrr.
And nice kriti and Shiva drama
Anyway Bhai.
Still waiting for next update

 

[Secretshiva1]

Awesome mind blowing update sir ji
Shiva ab or Mistry BN RHA hai..
Itna to smjh gya Shiva hi shera ko hi bheja hai... But Kon see mission ki BT KR RHA tha.
Kriti massi Kam best friend jayda nice twist kriti ki chota intro de Dena yrr.
And nice kriti and Shiva drama
Anyway Bhai.
Still waiting for next update

Thanks bhai chota intro toh ho Gaya ab toh bada intro milega

 

[Secretshiva1]

awesome update
lakin bhai kuch galtiya hi usko shudharo

Bhai kuch suggestions bhi do kya kami reh gayi.

 

[Secretshiva1]

awesome update
lakin bhai kuch galtiya hi usko shudharo

Bhai kesi galti kuch suggestions toh do.
Aise kese samjh aayega.

 

[Secretshiva1]

Update-12

Kirti- hmm dekha mene sukh kar kanta hua jaa raha hai par hai toh mera pyara panda hi na sweet sa cute sa, panda.
Mein aur kirti phir khub jor se haste hai.
Ab aage
Abhi hum dono has hi rahe the ki Achanak kirti mujhe marne lagi.
Mein- kya baat hai kyu maar rahi ho?
Kirti- kyu maar rahi ho, 4 saal se mere ko birthday wish nahi kiya.na phone kiya aur ab aa kar itna badal gaya hai par ye nahi ki sorry bole.
Mein- to apne bhi toh birthday wish nahi kiya na.
Kirti- kaise karti tera koi number hi nahi tha mere paas.
Mein- haa toh mere paas toh jaise phone tha na pichle 4 saal us sunsan island par, akela tha 4saal se baha yaha aaya toh apko dekha laga ab akela nahi rahoonga haal chal poochne ki jagah sikayat karne lage aate hi. Jao me nahi karta baat aapse.
Kirti- kaise nahi karega haa 4 saal se gayab hai aur ab aaya hai toh baat nahi karega.ja me bhi nahi karti baat.
Ab toh dono hi ek dusre se naraz the toh manaye kon.
Naraz hone par hum jo pehle karte the bo hi aaj kiya hum dono ek dusre ki ankho me ankhe daale ek dusre ko dekhne lage.(ya yu kahu ghurne lage)Isme ye sart hoti hai jo pehle hasa bo hara aur bo dusre ko manayega.
Phir game suru hua aur 5 minutes baad hi me haar gaya.
Mein- yeh sarasar cheating hai.
Kirti- toh me kya karoo. Everything is right for a friend.(dost ke liye sab sahi hai)
Mein- par ye smooch bala face it feels. Ke kisi bandariya ke saath betha hu.
Kirti- kya bola bandariya, toh fir tu kon hai?
Kirti- oh yaad aaya SUKHA HUA PANDA.
Mein- haa toh kya hua isse bahane tumhe manana bhi nahi pada.
Kirti- ohhh, nahi ye cheating hai tu hamesha hi aisa karta hai mujhe manane ki jagah jhagda kar leta hai aur phir me jeet kar bhi haar jati hu.
Mein- i have a better idea tu naa haar hi jaya kar. Kam se kam mujhe ek hug toh mil jayakarega.
Kirti- (khush hote hue) apne cute panda ke liye kuch bhi.
Mein- toh ek hug....
Mera pura kehne se pehle kirti ne mujhe kas ke gale laga liya aur saath me gaal par ek kiss bhi kiya.
Mein- aree wah ye treat kis liye.
Kirti- ye treat hai itne din baad mere pyare se friend ek hug ke liye.
Mein- agar aisa hi hai toh abki baar aur jayda din ke liye gayab ho jata hu, phir toh ek smooch bhi mil sakti hai.
Kirti- khabardar jo phir se jane ka kaha bhi toh khun kar doongi tera, samjha.
Mein- yes madam.
Aur phir hum dono phir se hasne lage.
Kirti- ab chalo baaki logo se milati hu sab khush honge tumhe dekh kar.
Mein- ye na hota mujhse cartoon ki tarah bas haste raho or logo se hath milate raho.
Kirti- chal chup chap apni doston se milvana hai.
Mein- ok, chalo.
Kirti- ek baat aur baha jakar aise treat karna ki hum sirf achhe dost hai ye mausi bala schene rehne dena thodi der.
Mein- ji mausi ji.
Kirti- dekh, plz mat kariyo baha aisa.
Mein- ok friend.
Kirti- that's better, ab chal.
Aaj ke liye itna hi friends. review jaroor kare.
Thanks for reading....

 

[Raja thakur]

Fantastic updates

 

[Secretshiva1]

Fantastic updates

Bhai iss se kaam na hi chalega kuch bada sa review karo.
Pata toh chale logo ko stoy kesi lag rahi hai.

 

[Secretshiva1]

Aur bhai log ek help chahiye.
Yaar kisi ko photos add karne aate hai kya yaha.
Bina photos ke story presentation thoda weak lag raha hai mujhe.
Agar aata hai toh mujhe bhi sikha do.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update bhai
Photo ki baat hi to siraj bhai see contact karo

 

[Secretshiva1]

Nice update bhai
Photo ki baat hi to siraj bhai see contact karo

Bhai naya hu aur sayad siraj bhai ka naam bhi nahi suna abhi tak.
Baaki thanks for review