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Fantasy Shiva the common man
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bhai us par kam hi review aa rahe hai is liye abhi band hai but agar aage review aayenge to continue karunga...
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sukriya meharbani pata hai ap ki story parh ker mujhe story likhne ka dil karne laga warna pehle me ek silent reader tha
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Update-13
Kirti- ek baat aur baha jakar aise treat karna ki hum sirf achhe dost hai ye mausi bala schene rehne dena thodi der.
Mein- ji mausi ji.
Kirti- dekh, plz mat kariyo baha aisa.
Mein- ok friend.
Kirti- that's better, ab chal.
Abb aage
Uske baad mein aur kirti uske doston se milne jate hai.
Humme dur se ek dusre ka hath pakede aate dekh kirti ke dost chonk jate hai, jiska fayada kirti uthane ka sochti hai, aur bo mera samne aa kar kuch kahti hai jisse ki uske doston ko lage ki usne kuch aisa kaha jisse ki me bahut kush ho gaya hu.
Ab hum uske doston ke pass pahoochte hai. Kirti mujhe unse introduce karate hue kahti hai.
Kirti- shiva inse milo ye hai meri friends, Neha, sneha, sanjana, aur ritu. Aur guys ye hai mera dost shiva jo aaj hi kai dino baad USA se aaya hai.(basically ek jhut).
Sabhi girls abhi tak shocked thi mujhe dekh kar. Tabhi,
Neha- hi shiva, my name is neha. Aur spka kya naam hai?
Mein- hey Neha, but shayad abhi abhi kirti ne introduce karaya na humme.
Neha- (man me) ye hi toh rona hai.
Neha- haa bo mene suna nahi.
Sneha- suna nahi ya kuch aur baat hai.
Neha- nahi aisa kuch nahi.
Kirti- tum sab chodo shiva hum dinner karte hai.
Neha & friends- hum bhi chalte hai.
Mein- haa sab chalo.
Udhar Markus & company ki meeting chal rahi thi.
Markus- kuch dino me hamara maal mumbai me ship ke jariye aane bala hai, toh Amit kya plan hai tumhara.
Amit- sir, sab kuch ready hai iss baar humne puri taiyari ki hai, iss baar hamara maal apni manjil tak salamat pahooch jayega.
Amarsingh- kuch bhi kar lo uss ko rokna muskil hi nahi naamumkin hai.
Amit- mujhe ek haare hue inshaan se salah lene ki koi jaroorat Nahi.
Markus- amit, amarsingh sahi keh raha hai apne dusman ko kam samjhne ki bhul kabhi nahi karni chahiye, amarsingh ka samna ho chuka hai uss se isse pata hai uske tarike ke baare me.
Amit- sorry boss, haa toh amarsingh batao kya idea hai tumhara.
Amarsingh- Mujhe kuch bhi nahi batana mei.......
Abhi amarsingh apni baat puri kar bhi nahi paya tha ki ek knife thil uske haat ke paas aa kar lagta hai nisana itna perfect ki uski ungli ke beech me jisse ki uski unglion me thoda sa kat bhi lag gaya tha.
Markus- (gusse me) mein yaha koi drama show nahi chala raha hu, ki ek naraz ko sambhalu toh dusra ruth jaye aur yaad rakhna na tumhari itni bhi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe ke thare nakhre dekhu samjha. Ab chup chap bata kaise aur kaha attack kiya tha usne.
Baha bethe sabhi log Markus ke guase ko jante the toh sabhi ki saanse atki hui thi.
Markus- ab bol jaldi jo poocha mene.
Amarsingh- yeeees yees boss.
Toh jesa ki aap jante hi hai ki hamare har truck me secret video aur audio recorder lage hue hai jisse hum kabhi bhi truck kaha hai ye dekh sakte hai.
Toh jaisa ki boss apko pata hi hai ki uss din Africa se drugs ek private plane ke through India me laye gaye the, jinhe minister ki badolat custom balon ne bhi check nahi kiya tha. Toh yeh saara maal 10 truckon me bhar kar delhi se hamare Haryana bale godown me jaa rahe the.
Raat me ek sunsaan jungle se gujarte hue ye sab hua.
Thanks for reading....
Plz review.
Kirti- ek baat aur baha jakar aise treat karna ki hum sirf achhe dost hai ye mausi bala schene rehne dena thodi der.
Mein- ji mausi ji.
Kirti- dekh, plz mat kariyo baha aisa.
Mein- ok friend.
Kirti- that's better, ab chal.
Abb aage
Uske baad mein aur kirti uske doston se milne jate hai.
Humme dur se ek dusre ka hath pakede aate dekh kirti ke dost chonk jate hai, jiska fayada kirti uthane ka sochti hai, aur bo mera samne aa kar kuch kahti hai jisse ki uske doston ko lage ki usne kuch aisa kaha jisse ki me bahut kush ho gaya hu.
Ab hum uske doston ke pass pahoochte hai. Kirti mujhe unse introduce karate hue kahti hai.
Kirti- shiva inse milo ye hai meri friends, Neha, sneha, sanjana, aur ritu. Aur guys ye hai mera dost shiva jo aaj hi kai dino baad USA se aaya hai.(basically ek jhut).
Sabhi girls abhi tak shocked thi mujhe dekh kar. Tabhi,
Neha- hi shiva, my name is neha. Aur spka kya naam hai?
Mein- hey Neha, but shayad abhi abhi kirti ne introduce karaya na humme.
Neha- (man me) ye hi toh rona hai.
Neha- haa bo mene suna nahi.
Sneha- suna nahi ya kuch aur baat hai.
Neha- nahi aisa kuch nahi.
Kirti- tum sab chodo shiva hum dinner karte hai.
Neha & friends- hum bhi chalte hai.
Mein- haa sab chalo.
Udhar Markus & company ki meeting chal rahi thi.
Markus- kuch dino me hamara maal mumbai me ship ke jariye aane bala hai, toh Amit kya plan hai tumhara.
Amit- sir, sab kuch ready hai iss baar humne puri taiyari ki hai, iss baar hamara maal apni manjil tak salamat pahooch jayega.
Amarsingh- kuch bhi kar lo uss ko rokna muskil hi nahi naamumkin hai.
Amit- mujhe ek haare hue inshaan se salah lene ki koi jaroorat Nahi.
Markus- amit, amarsingh sahi keh raha hai apne dusman ko kam samjhne ki bhul kabhi nahi karni chahiye, amarsingh ka samna ho chuka hai uss se isse pata hai uske tarike ke baare me.
Amit- sorry boss, haa toh amarsingh batao kya idea hai tumhara.
Amarsingh- Mujhe kuch bhi nahi batana mei.......
Abhi amarsingh apni baat puri kar bhi nahi paya tha ki ek knife thil uske haat ke paas aa kar lagta hai nisana itna perfect ki uski ungli ke beech me jisse ki uski unglion me thoda sa kat bhi lag gaya tha.
Markus- (gusse me) mein yaha koi drama show nahi chala raha hu, ki ek naraz ko sambhalu toh dusra ruth jaye aur yaad rakhna na tumhari itni bhi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe ke thare nakhre dekhu samjha. Ab chup chap bata kaise aur kaha attack kiya tha usne.
Baha bethe sabhi log Markus ke guase ko jante the toh sabhi ki saanse atki hui thi.
Markus- ab bol jaldi jo poocha mene.
Amarsingh- yeeees yees boss.
Toh jesa ki aap jante hi hai ki hamare har truck me secret video aur audio recorder lage hue hai jisse hum kabhi bhi truck kaha hai ye dekh sakte hai.
Toh jaisa ki boss apko pata hi hai ki uss din Africa se drugs ek private plane ke through India me laye gaye the, jinhe minister ki badolat custom balon ne bhi check nahi kiya tha. Toh yeh saara maal 10 truckon me bhar kar delhi se hamare Haryana bale godown me jaa rahe the.
Raat me ek sunsaan jungle se gujarte hue ye sab hua.
Thanks for reading....
Plz review.
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Bhai aap continue rakho reviews bhi aa jayga. By the way nice update