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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys


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Samar Rajput

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Update dena he nahi h to story stop he kr do..
Poll mangne ki kya jarurt h..
Acchi story ka pura satynash kr rahe ho or kya..
 
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Secretshiva1

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Markus- toh amit tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki amarsingh ki baat sunna time ki barbaadi thi. Yaad rakho kabhi bhi aapas me mat lado, lado toh sirf apne dushman se.
Poori taqat se, poore man se.
Amit- sure sir, aage se ye galti nahi hogi aur ab me plan bhi ab kuch aur achha hi banaoonga.
Ab aage..
Markus- aisa hi ho toh hi achha hai..., Agli meeting amit ki deal ke baad hi hogi.now you can leave.
Aur sab jaane lagte hai, ki tabhi.
Amar- chote, bo insaan kafi khatranaak hai apna dhyan rakhna usse harane ke chakkar me khud ko koi nukshaan na pahoocha lena.
Amit-(gusse me) mujhe kisi haare hue inshaan se salah lene ki jaroorat nahi. Aur ek khooni ke saath ki bhi koi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe samjhe mr. Amarsingh.
Amit ki kadvi baate sunkar amar bhi chup chap baha se chala gaya.
Amit- soory bhaiya par kya karoo jab bhi aapko dekhta hu toh na chahete hue bhi bo din yaad aa jata hai aur man me apke liye sirf gussa bhar jata hai. Sorry bhaiya agar meri kisi baat se apka dil dukha ho toh apne chote bhai ko maaf kar dena.
Idhar shaadi me dinner ke baad mein aur kirti baaki family members se mile.
Ki tabhi baha sabhi log Prashant ko bulane lage, kyu ki mere baad bo hi toh tha sabse bada bhanja tha.
Dosto apke yaha ka pata nahi but hamare north me shaadi me kuch aisi rituals hoti hai jinhe ya toh bhanja(behan ka ladka), ya bua karti hai.
Meri gairhajri me ye sab Prashant hi karta tha. Toh ussi ko dhundha ja raha tha, ki Achanak ek lady bhagte hue aayi aur mujh se takra gayi.
Lady- sorry beta mene dekha nahi.
Mein- koi baat nahi. Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai. Yeh bol kar me unke pair chu leta hu.
Kirti- are bua ji ye...
Abhi itna hi bola tha ki uske dimaagh me ek shaitani idea aaya.
Kirti- are bua ji koi baat nahi ye bura nahi mante bade hi caring hai. ( Yeh baat kirti ne mera ek haath kas ke pakdte hue kahi thi jaise ek girlfriend pakdti hai bheed me apne boyfriend ka, aur aise hi react bhi kar rahi thi.)
Bilkul is photo ki tarah

Kirti ke aisa karne se me chonk gaya par jab mene uski taraf dekha toh uski muskan dekh ke samjh gaya ki kya chal raha hai yaha.
Lady- achha par hai kon ye ladka? Dekha ke toh koi apna sa hi lagta hai jab pair chue toh aisa laga koi apna hi ho.
Yeh baat unhone kirti ko thoda paas me khinch kar kaan me kahi.
Kirti- are haa bua ji apne hi toh hai ye. Inse milo yeh hai apke hone bale Damad...
Lady- kya, hone bale Damad kab hua yeh aur teri maa ko maloom hai iske baare me, karta kya hai ye, maa baap ka kuch pata hai, naam kya hai, kaam kya hai, kuch pata hai iska ke bas apke hone bale Damad kaha mili tu inse.
Kirti- shanti gadhadhari bhem shant sab batati hu.
Dekho kon hai, kya karte hai, maa baap kon hai, yeh sab toh abhi pucha nahi haa par inshan kafi achha hai.
Lady- are pagal ladki achha hai toh kya kisi se bhi shaadi kar legi mili kaha tu inse.
Kirti- abhi thodi der pehle issi shaadi me.
Lady- me toh pagal ho jaoongi tujhe jo karna hai kar mujhe ye bata Prashant kaha hai dekha kya kahi. Pandit ji rashm ke liye bula rahe hai aur ye pata nahi kaha betha hai.
Kirti- aur kaha betha hoga kahi akele me apni jaan ko mana raha hoga. Are dekho bo raha baha stage ke paas.
Lady- tu bhi na me bula ke lati hu, aur batati hu teri maa ko.
Kya batana hai didi.
Lady- achha hua tu aa gayi dekh na ye pagal ladki tere liye Damad leke aayi hai.
Lady2- kirti kya yeh sahi hai?
Kirti- haa mammi bua bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.aur halke se aankh mar deti hai.
Lady2- smajh jaati hai,
Lady2- haa toh phir thik kya ye hi hai mere hone bale Damad.
Mein- dusri lady ke pair chute hue haa naani ji.
Lady- kya kaha apne abhi.
Mein-(hadbade hue) mene toh kaha haa aunty ji me hi hu apka hone bala Damad.
Kirti- kya bua apko pandit ji bula rahe hai baha nahi jana kya.
Lady- are ha me Prashant lo bula kar lati hu.
Aur bo jaane lagti hai.
Ki tabhi maa unhe mil jaati hai mammi kaha ja rahi ho baha pandit ji bula rahe hai.
Lady- kahi nahi beta bo pandit ji rashm ke liye hi Prashant ko bulba rahe hai.
Lady-(man me) ab mera shiva toh raha hi nahi, par agar abhi issse kahoongi toh ye rone lagegi akhir iska beta khoya hai.
Mammi(Parvati Verma)- toh kya hua maa usse laga rehne do tum shiva se kara lo jo bhi rashm bagera hai.
Toh dosto aap logo ko thoda sa idea toh ho hi gaya hoga in lady aur lady2 ka phir bhi.
Kuch naye logo ka introduce de deta hu apni naani ki side ke.
Lady- yeh hai Sudha verma inhi ke naam se meri behan ka naam hai.
Lady2- yeh hai Neelam verma ye hai kirti ki mammi aur meri mammi ki choti bua ji.aur meri nani.
Rajesh verma- kirti ke papa.
Harsh verma- mere bade mama.
Hanee Verma- meri badi mami.
Chirag Verma- mama ka bada ladka. Sirf 2 years ka hai but kafi saitaan hai.
Laxmi verma- ye hai mammi ki badi bua.
Shivam Verma- ye hai laxmi nani ke chote bete aur mere kafi achhe dost.
Ramesh verma- laxmi nani ke pati aur mere nana.

Guys inse alag bhi kayi aur log bhi hai but me jayda bheed nahi karna chahta. Toh agar aage unka kuch role hoga toh unhe aage aad karenge.
Thanks for reading....
 
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Secretshiva1

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Bhaiyon aap sab se request hai mein bhale hi updates quantity me kam ho but mein puri kosis karoonga ki quality me kabhi kam na pade.
Aur bhai log review karte rahe galti hui ho toh bataye jaroor.
 
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John Cena

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Markus- toh amit tumhe abhi bhi lagta hai ki amarsingh ki baat sunna time ki barbaadi thi. Yaad rakho kabhi bhi aapas me mat lado, lado toh sirf apne dushman se.
Poori taqat se, poore man se.
Amit- sure sir, aage se ye galti nahi hogi aur ab me plan bhi ab kuch aur achha hi banaoonga.
Ab aage..
Markus- aisa hi ho toh hi achha hai..., Agli meeting amit ki deal ke baad hi hogi.now you can leave.
Aur sab jaane lagte hai, ki tabhi.
Amar- chote, bo insaan kafi khatranaak hai apna dhyan rakhna usse harane ke chakkar me khud ko koi nukshaan na pahoocha lena.
Amit-(gusse me) mujhe kisi haare hue inshaan se salah lene ki jaroorat nahi. Aur ek khooni ke saath ki bhi koi jaroorat nahi hai mujhe samjhe mr. Amarsingh.
Amit ki kadvi baate sunkar amar bhi chup chap baha se chala gaya.
Amit- soory bhaiya par kya karoo jab bhi aapko dekhta hu toh na chahete hue bhi bo din yaad aa jata hai aur man me apke liye sirf gussa bhar jata hai. Sorry bhaiya agar meri kisi baat se apka dil dukha ho toh apne chote bhai ko maaf kar dena.
Idhar shaadi me dinner ke baad mein aur kirti baaki family members se mile.
Ki tabhi baha sabhi log Prashant ko bulane lage, kyu ki mere baad bo hi toh tha sabse bada bhanja tha.
Dosto apke yaha ka pata nahi but hamare north me shaadi me kuch aisi rituals hoti hai jinhe ya toh bhanja(behan ka ladka), ya bua karti hai.
Meri gairhajri me ye sab Prashant hi karta tha. Toh ussi ko dhundha ja raha tha, ki Achanak ek lady bhagte hue aayi aur mujh se takra gayi.
Lady- sorry beta mene dekha nahi.
Mein- koi baat nahi. Galti toh kisi se bhi ho sakti hai. Yeh bol kar me unke pair chu leta hu.
Kirti- are bua ji ye...
Abhi itna hi bola tha ki uske dimaagh me ek shaitani idea aaya.
Kirti- are bua ji koi baat nahi ye bura nahi mante bade hi caring hai. ( Yeh baat kirti ne mera ek haath kas ke pakdte hue kahi thi jaise ek girlfriend pakdti hai bheed me apne boyfriend ka, aur aise hi react bhi kar rahi thi.)
Bilkul is photo ki tarah

Kirti ke aisa karne se me chonk gaya par jab mene uski taraf dekha toh uski muskan dekh ke samjh gaya ki kya chal raha hai yaha.
Lady- achha par hai kon ye ladka? Dekha ke toh koi apna sa hi lagta hai jab pair chue toh aisa laga koi apna hi ho.
Yeh baat unhone kirti ko thoda paas me khinch kar kaan me kahi.
Kirti- are haa bua ji apne hi toh hai ye. Inse milo yeh hai apke hone bale Damad...
Lady- kya, hone bale Damad kab hua yeh aur teri maa ko maloom hai iske baare me, karta kya hai ye, maa baap ka kuch pata hai, naam kya hai, kaam kya hai, kuch pata hai iska ke bas apke hone bale Damad kaha mili tu inse.
Kirti- shanti gadhadhari bhem shant sab batati hu.
Dekho kon hai, kya karte hai, maa baap kon hai, yeh sab toh abhi pucha nahi haa par inshan kafi achha hai.
Lady- are pagal ladki achha hai toh kya kisi se bhi shaadi kar legi mili kaha tu inse.
Kirti- abhi thodi der pehle issi shaadi me.
Lady- me toh pagal ho jaoongi tujhe jo karna hai kar mujhe ye bata Prashant kaha hai dekha kya kahi. Pandit ji rashm ke liye bula rahe hai aur ye pata nahi kaha betha hai.
Kirti- aur kaha betha hoga kahi akele me apni jaan ko mana raha hoga. Are dekho bo raha baha stage ke paas.
Lady- tu bhi na me bula ke lati hu, aur batati hu teri maa ko.
Kya batana hai didi.
Lady- achha hua tu aa gayi dekh na ye pagal ladki tere liye Damad leke aayi hai.
Lady2- kirti kya yeh sahi hai?
Kirti- haa mammi bua bilkul sahi keh rahi hai.aur halke se aankh mar deti hai.
Lady2- smajh jaati hai,
Lady2- haa toh phir thik kya ye hi hai mere hone bale Damad.
Mein- dusri lady ke pair chute hue haa naani ji.
Lady- kya kaha apne abhi.
Mein-(hadbade hue) mene toh kaha haa aunty ji me hi hu apka hone bala Damad.
Kirti- kya bua apko pandit ji bula rahe hai baha nahi jana kya.
Lady- are ha me Prashant lo bula kar lati hu.
Aur bo jaane lagti hai.
Ki tabhi maa unhe mil jaati hai mammi kaha ja rahi ho baha pandit ji bula rahe hai.
Lady- kahi nahi beta bo pandit ji rashm ke liye hi Prashant ko bulba rahe hai.
Lady-(man me) ab mera shiva toh raha hi nahi, par agar abhi issse kahoongi toh ye rone lagegi akhir iska beta khoya hai.
Mammi(Parvati Verma)- toh kya hua maa usse laga rehne do tum shiva se kara lo jo bhi rashm bagera hai.
Toh dosto aap logo ko thoda sa idea toh ho hi gaya hoga in lady aur lady2 ka phir bhi.
Kuch naye logo ka introduce de deta hu apni naani ki side ke.
Lady- yeh hai Sudha verma inhi ke naam se meri behan ka naam hai.
Lady2- yeh hai Neelam verma ye hai kirti ki mammi aur meri mammi ki choti bua ji.aur meri nani.
Rajesh verma- kirti ke papa.
Harsh verma- mere bade mama.
Hanee Verma- meri badi mami.
Chirag Verma- mama ka bada ladka. Sirf 2 years ka hai but kafi saitaan hai.
Laxmi verma- ye hai mammi ki badi bua.
Shivam Verma- ye hai laxmi nani ke chote bete aur mere kafi achhe dost.
Ramesh verma- laxmi nani ke pati aur mere nana.

Guys inse alag bhi kayi aur log bhi hai but me jayda bheed nahi karna chahta. Toh agar aage unka kuch role hoga toh unhe aage aad karenge.
Thanks for reading....
Zabardast update dost
 

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