Fantasy Shiva the common man
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Bhai update jaldi hi aayega bas kuch photos dhundh raha hu update ke liye.
So thoda sa sabr.....
So thoda sa sabr.....
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Update-16
Mammi(Parvati Verma)- toh kya hua maa usse laga rehne do tum shiva se kara lo jo bhi rashm bagera hai.
Ab aage...
Jaise hi nani ne suna ki shiva laut aaya hai toh bo turrant hi mammi se poochne lagi..
Nani- kaha hai mera beta, kaha hai mera shiva bol na chup kyu hai. Bol.....
Mammi- arre ye kya khada toh hai itni der se kirti ke saath.
Mammi ke ye bolte hi nani turrant kirti ko dekhti hai jiska ki jhooth ab pakda jata hai.
Par fir nani turrant hi meri aur dekhti hai aur
Apni bhari hui aawaj me mujhe bulati hai, SHIVA....
Idhar jaise hi mene suna mene turrant udhar dekha, aur jab mene maa ko nani ke sath dekha toh me turant samjh gaya ki nani ko ab sab pata hai me turant bhag ke nani ke gale lag jata hu.aur ankhon me aashu aa jate hai.
Kuch der me sirf unke gale laga raha koi kuch bhi nahi bol raha tha. Fir nani ne hi khamoshi todi..
Nani- kaha tha beta ab tak, yaad nahi aayi tujhe teri nani ki...
Mein- aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki yaad na aayi ho, par kya karta majboor tha aa nahi sakta tha agar mere bas me hota toh kab ka aa jata par kya karoo....
Nani- kuch nahi beta tu ab aa gaya na ye hi kafi hai, aur ro mat tu me hu na ab tujhe kabhi dur ni jane doongi. Ye sab chod ye bata jab tu aa hi gaya tha toh pehle nahi mil sakta tha...
Nani ka itna bolna tha ki kirti ke expression badal gaye usse pata chal gaya ki ab goli uss par chalne bali hai.toh kirti ne bich me hi bolna suru kar diya..
Kirti- mami ji mene toh isse pehle hi kaha tha ki bata de pako par ye hi jo bola ki nahi thoda majak karte hai.aur aap toh jante hi ho me kitni sidhi hu....
Mein- (aashu saaf karte hue) nani ye jhooth bol rahi hai, inhi ne bola tha ki tu chup rahio me baat karoongi.
Kirti- aeee motu chup kar kitna jhooth bolne lag gaya hai tu.
Nani- tum dono chup ho jao mujhe achhi tarah pata hai kon kitna sareef hai, aur kirti tu jab tak shiva yaha nahi tha toh aaye din khana pina chod deti thi aur jab aa gaya toh lad rahi hai.
Mein- rehne do nani ye toh hai hi pagal chalo baaki logo se milte hai aur pandit ji ki rasham karbate hai.
(Guys yaha me sabhi logo se milne ka drama yahi chod deta hu.)
Uske baad shadi achhe se ho gayi sabhi log kuch din me apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye .
Mammi papa bhi jane lage.
Par me delhi me hi ruk gaya.apne dosto se milne ka bol ke....
Thanks for reading....
Mammi(Parvati Verma)- toh kya hua maa usse laga rehne do tum shiva se kara lo jo bhi rashm bagera hai.
Ab aage...
Jaise hi nani ne suna ki shiva laut aaya hai toh bo turrant hi mammi se poochne lagi..
Nani- kaha hai mera beta, kaha hai mera shiva bol na chup kyu hai. Bol.....
Mammi- arre ye kya khada toh hai itni der se kirti ke saath.
Mammi ke ye bolte hi nani turrant kirti ko dekhti hai jiska ki jhooth ab pakda jata hai.
Par fir nani turrant hi meri aur dekhti hai aur
Apni bhari hui aawaj me mujhe bulati hai, SHIVA....
Idhar jaise hi mene suna mene turrant udhar dekha, aur jab mene maa ko nani ke sath dekha toh me turant samjh gaya ki nani ko ab sab pata hai me turant bhag ke nani ke gale lag jata hu.aur ankhon me aashu aa jate hai.
Kuch der me sirf unke gale laga raha koi kuch bhi nahi bol raha tha. Fir nani ne hi khamoshi todi..
Nani- kaha tha beta ab tak, yaad nahi aayi tujhe teri nani ki...
Mein- aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ki yaad na aayi ho, par kya karta majboor tha aa nahi sakta tha agar mere bas me hota toh kab ka aa jata par kya karoo....
Nani- kuch nahi beta tu ab aa gaya na ye hi kafi hai, aur ro mat tu me hu na ab tujhe kabhi dur ni jane doongi. Ye sab chod ye bata jab tu aa hi gaya tha toh pehle nahi mil sakta tha...
Nani ka itna bolna tha ki kirti ke expression badal gaye usse pata chal gaya ki ab goli uss par chalne bali hai.toh kirti ne bich me hi bolna suru kar diya..
Kirti- mami ji mene toh isse pehle hi kaha tha ki bata de pako par ye hi jo bola ki nahi thoda majak karte hai.aur aap toh jante hi ho me kitni sidhi hu....
Mein- (aashu saaf karte hue) nani ye jhooth bol rahi hai, inhi ne bola tha ki tu chup rahio me baat karoongi.
Kirti- aeee motu chup kar kitna jhooth bolne lag gaya hai tu.
Nani- tum dono chup ho jao mujhe achhi tarah pata hai kon kitna sareef hai, aur kirti tu jab tak shiva yaha nahi tha toh aaye din khana pina chod deti thi aur jab aa gaya toh lad rahi hai.
Mein- rehne do nani ye toh hai hi pagal chalo baaki logo se milte hai aur pandit ji ki rasham karbate hai.
(Guys yaha me sabhi logo se milne ka drama yahi chod deta hu.)
Uske baad shadi achhe se ho gayi sabhi log kuch din me apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye .
Mammi papa bhi jane lage.
Par me delhi me hi ruk gaya.apne dosto se milne ka bol ke....
Thanks for reading....
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Sabse pehel toh late update ke liye sorry bhai log..
Aaj update thoda chota diya hai kyu ki mujhe ye saadi bala part jayda nahi khichna tha isliye.
Aur bhai log review jaroor kare aur apna support banaye rakhe.....
Aaj update thoda chota diya hai kyu ki mujhe ye saadi bala part jayda nahi khichna tha isliye.
Aur bhai log review jaroor kare aur apna support banaye rakhe.....
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bahot khub,
good story dear,
bas ek baat kehna chahunga ki agar regular update de paye to story hit h.
good story dear,
bas ek baat kehna chahunga ki agar regular update de paye to story hit h.