Fantasy Shiva the common man
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Agle subah Deepak aur me usi hotel ki restaurant me beth kar breakfast kar rahe the.
Deepak- toh aur bata kaisa raha in 4 saalon ka safar ek ghane jungle me.
Mein- kuch khas nahi bas har raj zindagi ke liye ladna aur phir thak kar so jana.tu bata tera kaisa raha?
Deepak- kuch nahi bo hi boring tujhe miss karna aur kisi ko bhulane ki koshish inhi sab ke beech kat gaye ye 4 saal.
Mein- aage ka kuch socha hai bhai. Akele zindagi bhari padegi.
Deepak- ab tu aa gaya kisi kya jaroorat.
Mein- bo bhi thik hai.
Deepak- tune kuch socha hai kya?
Mein- haa socha toh hai agar tu taiyaar ho toh anjam bhi de denge is kaam ko.
Deepak- kya socha hai?
Mein-kuch khas nahi purani galtiya sudharne se suru karte hai study complete karke.
Deepak- haa thik hai issi bahane dilli ke college bhi ghum lenge dhang se.
Mein- yaha nahi bahi se jaha choda tha.
Deepak- are you sure? Sambhal payega usse dekh kar khud ko.
Mein- usi ke liye toh jinda hu bhai.
Deepak- par bo nahi hai jinda? Tere jane ke baad se tut gayi hai bo. Ajay ne bataya tha ki kitna bura haal hai.
Mein (nam ankhon se)- kya bataya usne, yaad karti hai kya mujhe?
Deepak- yaad toh use kiya jata hai jisse bhulaya gaya ho. Khud ko bhulaya nahi jata.
Mein- toh kyu kiya tha usne 6 saal pehle aisa kya jaroorat thi, are aisi koi khas kaami bhi toh nahi thi.
Deepak- galti thi bo bo bhi teri nahi uss kamine Gautam ki.
Mein- naam bhi na le us ka.
Nafrat karta hu uss shakhs se.
Phir nasta kar ke hum dono apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.
Yaha dusri taraf ek ladki apne kamre me ek human sized tedy bear ko cuddle kiye hue sapne ki duniya me ghum thi.
Ladki ke sapne me.
Yaha ek ladki behoshi ki halat me hospital laayi gayi thi jiski halat dekh kar lag raha tha ki iska kitna bura accident hua hoga usse laane bale shakhs ne use hospital me raat ke samay choda tha.
Next scene me
Ek ladka uss ladki haath ko pakde hue ro raha hota hai aur apni ki hui galti ke liye sirf baar baar sorry bol raha tha aur kehta hai.
Aur rote rote uska ek ansu uss ladki ke haath par girta hai.
Aur idhar ye soti hui ladki tej awaj me ..... Chilate huye uth jati hai aur uss tedy ko kas ke gale laga kar rone lagti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thanks for reading....
Agle subah Deepak aur me usi hotel ki restaurant me beth kar breakfast kar rahe the.
Deepak- toh aur bata kaisa raha in 4 saalon ka safar ek ghane jungle me.
Mein- kuch khas nahi bas har raj zindagi ke liye ladna aur phir thak kar so jana.tu bata tera kaisa raha?
Deepak- kuch nahi bo hi boring tujhe miss karna aur kisi ko bhulane ki koshish inhi sab ke beech kat gaye ye 4 saal.
Mein- aage ka kuch socha hai bhai. Akele zindagi bhari padegi.
Deepak- ab tu aa gaya kisi kya jaroorat.
Mein- bo bhi thik hai.
Deepak- tune kuch socha hai kya?
Mein- haa socha toh hai agar tu taiyaar ho toh anjam bhi de denge is kaam ko.
Deepak- kya socha hai?
Mein-kuch khas nahi purani galtiya sudharne se suru karte hai study complete karke.
Deepak- haa thik hai issi bahane dilli ke college bhi ghum lenge dhang se.
Mein- yaha nahi bahi se jaha choda tha.
Deepak- are you sure? Sambhal payega usse dekh kar khud ko.
Mein- usi ke liye toh jinda hu bhai.
Deepak- par bo nahi hai jinda? Tere jane ke baad se tut gayi hai bo. Ajay ne bataya tha ki kitna bura haal hai.
Mein (nam ankhon se)- kya bataya usne, yaad karti hai kya mujhe?
Deepak- yaad toh use kiya jata hai jisse bhulaya gaya ho. Khud ko bhulaya nahi jata.
Mein- toh kyu kiya tha usne 6 saal pehle aisa kya jaroorat thi, are aisi koi khas kaami bhi toh nahi thi.
Deepak- galti thi bo bo bhi teri nahi uss kamine Gautam ki.
Mein- naam bhi na le us ka.
Nafrat karta hu uss shakhs se.
Phir nasta kar ke hum dono apne apne ghar ko nikal gaye.
Yaha dusri taraf ek ladki apne kamre me ek human sized tedy bear ko cuddle kiye hue sapne ki duniya me ghum thi.
Ladki ke sapne me.
Yaha ek ladki behoshi ki halat me hospital laayi gayi thi jiski halat dekh kar lag raha tha ki iska kitna bura accident hua hoga usse laane bale shakhs ne use hospital me raat ke samay choda tha.
Next scene me
Ek ladka uss ladki haath ko pakde hue ro raha hota hai aur apni ki hui galti ke liye sirf baar baar sorry bol raha tha aur kehta hai.
Aur rote rote uska ek ansu uss ladki ke haath par girta hai.
Aur idhar ye soti hui ladki tej awaj me ..... Chilate huye uth jati hai aur uss tedy ko kas ke gale laga kar rone lagti hai.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Thanks for reading....
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Pehle toh bahut bahut sorry guys itne lait update ke liye.
But pata nahi kyu guys abhi tak kuch likhne ka dil hi nahi kiya but recently idea laga ki kahani kitni important hoti hai readers ke liye.
Manta hu ki abhi itne achhi nahi likha raha ke logo ko khas farak pade but jo bhi hai hai toh sahi.
Aur ek baat abhi kuch din ke liye update toh ready hai jo ki kuch din ka kaam chala denge. Aur me abhi puri koshish karoonga ki ab break na lage but promise thoda muskil hai.
Jo jaisa hai baisa bilkul bhi nahi hai....
But pata nahi kyu guys abhi tak kuch likhne ka dil hi nahi kiya but recently idea laga ki kahani kitni important hoti hai readers ke liye.
Manta hu ki abhi itne achhi nahi likha raha ke logo ko khas farak pade but jo bhi hai hai toh sahi.
Aur ek baat abhi kuch din ke liye update toh ready hai jo ki kuch din ka kaam chala denge. Aur me abhi puri koshish karoonga ki ab break na lage but promise thoda muskil hai.
Jo jaisa hai baisa bilkul bhi nahi hai....
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Nice update bhai
But thoda long update dijiye
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Welcome back Bhai
Nice update bhai update aur front size thoda bada kijiyega
Nice update bhai update aur front size thoda bada kijiyega
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Update- 24
Subah nasta kar ke mein naani ke ghar aa kar ghanti bajane hi bala tha ki kirti ne aa kar darwaza khol diya.
Kirti- ho gayi subah mere laal.
Mein- ji mausi aur unko gaale lagate hue aapko kaise pata chal jata hai har baar.
Kirti- saanse jhooth nahi bolti.
Mein- agar pyar jatana ho gaya toh ab chale andar.
Kirti- haa chal na mene kab roka.
Ghar me andar aa kar
Kirti- aaj tujhe apne haath ka bana nasta khilaungi.
Ye sunte hi ghar me sabhi chonk gaye.
kar kirti ko bahut gussa aaya aur usne nana aur mama ko ghar se nikal diya adhe naste se.
Aur ek danda la kar mujhe pitne lagi.
Kirti- marna nahi hai na tujhe aaj batati hu kirti ka dil dukhane ki saza.
Nani- jane de na beti lag jayegi use.
Kirti- lage isi liye toh mar rahi hu.
Mami- are ruk ja jhansi ki rani bichare ne pata nahi kuch khaya bhi hai ya nahi.
Mein (mein apne aap ko sehlate hue)- rahne do maami inko kya inko toh ye bhi nahi chinta ki maine kuch khaya ki nahi raat se bhukha hu aur yaha thoda sa majak kiya kar diya aa gayi danda le kar.
Kirti (apni galti ka ehsaas karte hue)- tu toh Deepak ke sath tha na baha nahi khaya kuch.
Mein- bo toh mujhe bula kar chala gaya tha ladki ke pass.
Aur mere pass paise bhi kaha the ki kuch kha pata.
Raat bhar car me sota raha bhukha pyasa.
Kirti- kya, aisa kiya Deepak ne aane do usse aisa sabak shikhaungi ke yaad rakhega.
Nani aur mami ko toh idea ho gaya ki mein jhut kaha lekin kaha kuch nahi dono ne.
Kirti- aisa kyu kiya Deepak ne?
Mein(hera pheri ke raju ki tarah)- ladki ka chakkar babu bhaiya ladki ka chakkar.
kirti- hmmm but phir bhi sahi nahi kiya Deepak ne uski toh me haddiyan tod dungi.
Nani- ab bas bhi kar kuch khila ise pehle. Hanee tu khana laga iska.
Kirti- ha bhabhi ap khana lao me khud apne hath se khilaugi ise.
Phir kirti mausi ne bade hi pyar se khana khilaya.( Lakin apne hath ka bana hua nahi).
Kyunki unhe khana banana aata hi nahi hai.
Uske baad phir mausi mujhe apni ki hui shopping dikhane lagi.
Phir mein unhi ke kamre me aaram karne laga.
Bahi dusri taraf ek andhere kamre me ek shakhs ko bandh rakha tha.
(ye bahi aadmi hai jiska jiksr suru ke update me hua tha.)
Aaj uss shakhs ke body me se kayi jagag se khun nikal raha tha dekhne se saaf tha ki ise kitna mara gaya hai haal hi me.
Tabhi kamre me ek aur shakhs ki entry hoti hai.(ye bhi usi update ka shakhs hai jisne ki pehle aadmi ko kidnap kar rakha hai.)
(Naye logo ko short me bata du ki ek aadmi ko yaha bandh kar rakha hua hai, jiska ki muh ek khas device se bilkul band kiya hua hai. jisko ki maut ki had jitna torture kiya jata ek dusre aadmi ke dwara.)
(Torture karne bale aadmi ko TA likh raha hu)
TA- toh mr .... Kaise ho aap aaj?
Yaha me ye bhi bata du ki device ke bajah se bandha hua aadmi kuch bhi bol nahi sakta.
TA- are haa yaad aaya aap toh bolne ke kabil hi nahi ho. Chalo koi baat nahi mein toh aaj tumhe thik karne aaya hu taaki tum jaldi se sahi ho jao aur ready raho dubara usi dard ko jine ke liye. Haa haa haaa
Aur phir TA us aadmi ke ghao par dawayi laga ta hai aur use need ka injection de kar kamre se nikal jata hai.
Bahi dusri taraf aaj markus subah morning me apne room me so raha hota hai.
Uska manager aata hai use jagane.
Manager- good morning sir.
Itna bolte hi room ke saare curtain khul gaye aur room me light jal gayi but markus nahi utha.
Manager ne kayi baar awaz lagayi but no effect.
Phir manager ko sak hua toh usne chadar hatayi toh baha sirf pillow the na ki markus.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
thanks for reading....
Subah nasta kar ke mein naani ke ghar aa kar ghanti bajane hi bala tha ki kirti ne aa kar darwaza khol diya.
Kirti- ho gayi subah mere laal.
Mein- ji mausi aur unko gaale lagate hue aapko kaise pata chal jata hai har baar.
Kirti- saanse jhooth nahi bolti.
Mein- agar pyar jatana ho gaya toh ab chale andar.
Kirti- haa chal na mene kab roka.
Ghar me andar aa kar
Kirti- aaj tujhe apne haath ka bana nasta khilaungi.
Ye sunte hi ghar me sabhi chonk gaye.
kar kirti ko bahut gussa aaya aur usne nana aur mama ko ghar se nikal diya adhe naste se.
Aur ek danda la kar mujhe pitne lagi.
Kirti- marna nahi hai na tujhe aaj batati hu kirti ka dil dukhane ki saza.
Nani- jane de na beti lag jayegi use.
Kirti- lage isi liye toh mar rahi hu.
Mami- are ruk ja jhansi ki rani bichare ne pata nahi kuch khaya bhi hai ya nahi.
Mein (mein apne aap ko sehlate hue)- rahne do maami inko kya inko toh ye bhi nahi chinta ki maine kuch khaya ki nahi raat se bhukha hu aur yaha thoda sa majak kiya kar diya aa gayi danda le kar.
Kirti (apni galti ka ehsaas karte hue)- tu toh Deepak ke sath tha na baha nahi khaya kuch.
Mein- bo toh mujhe bula kar chala gaya tha ladki ke pass.
Aur mere pass paise bhi kaha the ki kuch kha pata.
Raat bhar car me sota raha bhukha pyasa.
Kirti- kya, aisa kiya Deepak ne aane do usse aisa sabak shikhaungi ke yaad rakhega.
Nani aur mami ko toh idea ho gaya ki mein jhut kaha lekin kaha kuch nahi dono ne.
Kirti- aisa kyu kiya Deepak ne?
Mein(hera pheri ke raju ki tarah)- ladki ka chakkar babu bhaiya ladki ka chakkar.
kirti- hmmm but phir bhi sahi nahi kiya Deepak ne uski toh me haddiyan tod dungi.
Nani- ab bas bhi kar kuch khila ise pehle. Hanee tu khana laga iska.
Kirti- ha bhabhi ap khana lao me khud apne hath se khilaugi ise.
Phir kirti mausi ne bade hi pyar se khana khilaya.( Lakin apne hath ka bana hua nahi).
Kyunki unhe khana banana aata hi nahi hai.
Uske baad phir mausi mujhe apni ki hui shopping dikhane lagi.
Phir mein unhi ke kamre me aaram karne laga.
Bahi dusri taraf ek andhere kamre me ek shakhs ko bandh rakha tha.
(ye bahi aadmi hai jiska jiksr suru ke update me hua tha.)
Aaj uss shakhs ke body me se kayi jagag se khun nikal raha tha dekhne se saaf tha ki ise kitna mara gaya hai haal hi me.
Tabhi kamre me ek aur shakhs ki entry hoti hai.(ye bhi usi update ka shakhs hai jisne ki pehle aadmi ko kidnap kar rakha hai.)
(Naye logo ko short me bata du ki ek aadmi ko yaha bandh kar rakha hua hai, jiska ki muh ek khas device se bilkul band kiya hua hai. jisko ki maut ki had jitna torture kiya jata ek dusre aadmi ke dwara.)
(Torture karne bale aadmi ko TA likh raha hu)
TA- toh mr .... Kaise ho aap aaj?
Yaha me ye bhi bata du ki device ke bajah se bandha hua aadmi kuch bhi bol nahi sakta.
TA- are haa yaad aaya aap toh bolne ke kabil hi nahi ho. Chalo koi baat nahi mein toh aaj tumhe thik karne aaya hu taaki tum jaldi se sahi ho jao aur ready raho dubara usi dard ko jine ke liye. Haa haa haaa
Aur phir TA us aadmi ke ghao par dawayi laga ta hai aur use need ka injection de kar kamre se nikal jata hai.
Bahi dusri taraf aaj markus subah morning me apne room me so raha hota hai.
Uska manager aata hai use jagane.
Manager- good morning sir.
Itna bolte hi room ke saare curtain khul gaye aur room me light jal gayi but markus nahi utha.
Manager ne kayi baar awaz lagayi but no effect.
Phir manager ko sak hua toh usne chadar hatayi toh baha sirf pillow the na ki markus.
Aaj ke liye itna hi.
thanks for reading....
Black water
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