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Fantasy Shiva the common man

Should i continued the story or ,it fills forced on you guys


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Secretshiva1

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Manager ne kayi baar awaz lagayi but no effect.
Phir manager ko sak hua toh usne chadar hatayi toh baha sirf pillow the na ki markus.
ab aage....


Toh asal me hua kuch yu ki markus ne aaj city ko ghumne ka plan kal raat ko hi bana liya tha aur sabhi gaurds ki najron se bach kar bo early morning hi apne villa se nikal aaya tha.

Par jab subah ko markus apne room me nahi mila toh pure ghar me hadkamp mach gaya.
Manager ne turant security incharge ko bulaya aur usse pata karna chaha ki markus kaha gaya.
Par security incharge ko khud kuch pata ho toh bo bataye.
Phir unhone raat ki saari recordings check ki kisi lead ki talash me. Par vaha bhi haath khali hi rahe.


Manager ne turant apne sabhi aadmiyon ko markus ki talaash me laga diya.
Aur yaha markus ek aam aadmi ki tarah city me ghum raha tha bekhauf.
Kyunki police toh markus ki jeb me thi aur baise bhi kuch hi logo ne markus ko dekha hai bo bhi abhi hasl hi me isse pehle toh bo bahar se hi operate karta tha.
Yaha aapko bata du ki markus ne aisa pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha but haal hi me usne iss baat ko realise kiya tha ki use aisa karna chahiye taaki khud ke aadmiyon par najar rakhi ja sake aur city bhi ghum li jaye.
But markus ka ye faisla kuch logo ke liye sahi sabit nahi hoga aaj, aage dekhte hai ki kya kya kand hote hai aaj.

Apne vila se markus paidal hi main sadak tak aata hai aaj markus ek dum sadak par ghumne bale aam logo ki tarah dikh raha tha. Ek printed white t shirt aur black denim me.


Sadak par aa kar markus ek auto ko rokta hai aur delhi me apne thikano ki taraf chalne ko kehta hai.
But delhi me ho aur ek baar me auto bale raaji ho jaye toh bhai sapna dekh rahe ho tum.
Hua bhi kuch aisa hi.
Auto bala markus ko mana kar ke apne raste nikal gaya.
Aise hi markus ne kayi auto roke but koi nahi raazi hua.
Aaj ek underworld don ko pata chal raha tha ki delhi me har aadmi khud ko kisi don se kam nahi samjhta.
Phir kaafi koshish aur double kiraye ke lalch ke baad finally ek auto bala taiyar hua. Toh markus ki trip suru ho gayi sharh ghumne ki.
Abhi markus beth kar apne pasina pooch hi rha tha ki, suru hua auto balo ki chir parichit behaviour aur unke bhojpuri gaane.
Autowala- shaab aap ko yaha dekha nahi kahi bahar se aaye hai kya.
Markus- nahi bhaiya me yaha ka hi hu. Bi kya hai na ki job ki talaash me idhar udhar ghumta rehta hu isliye.
(Yaha me batata chalu markus ek don kisi hadse ya kisi ki help se nahi khud ki mehnat aur knowledge ke badolat bana hai usse duniya ki kayi language aise aati hai jsise bo uski mother tongue ho.)
Autowala- sahi kehte ho shaab delhi me sab job hi karne aate hai, par itni jaldi milti kisi ko nahi.
Autowala- baise shaab ho kaha se aap.
Markus- ji mein gorakhpur se hu.
Autowala- kaha keht ho bhaiya gorakhpur se. Phir toh tum hamar padosi hue. Hum bhi bahi se hu.
Markus- ka keht ho bhaiya phir toh aap hamare bade bhaiya jaisen hue.
Autowala- haa bhaiya. Baise yaha rehwat kahan ho bhaiya.
Markus- ka bataye bhaiya abhi tak toh apne dost ke yaha rehwat hai par bo budbak bhi ab humka nikal dai ka keht hai. Hum toh bahut hi pareshan hun.
Autowala- chinta kahe kart ho hum hu na kabhau hamri konhoo madad chahiye toh aadhi raat ko bhi phone kar dena ha.
Markus- ji bilkul.
Isi tarah autowale se baat karte hue markus apne thikane par pahuch gaya.
Usne autowale ko paise dekar use bhej diya aur baha se paidal hi aage ko chalne laga.

Yaha dusri taraf nani ghar me kuch bhi nahi hua pure din evening me kirti mujhe uthane aayi.
Aur naste ki keh kar chali gayi. Mein uth kar fresh hone chala gaya fresh ho kar nasta kiya.
Tab nani beta abhi shaam ko parvati (mammi)ka phone aaya tha bo bata rahi thi kisi Ranveer ne tumhare khilaf Fir kar di thi.Baise toh loi khas pareshaani ki baat nahi hui. Kyun ki shera ne sab shmabhal liya kyunki ye uss inspector ki sirf chal.thi usne koi Fir nahi ki thi.
Tabhi mama aur nana bol uthe beta baise toh tumhe yah koi pareshani nahi hogi but phir bhi dhyaan rakhana apna.
Nana- aur beta sudha(nani) bata rahi thi ki tu kal raat bhukha raha paise na hone ki bajah se.
Mein- nahi nana aisa kuch nahi hai paise hai mere pass.
Nana- dikha.
Ab ho toh dikhau kyunki papa se mangne ka dhayan nahi raha aur unhe bhi jaldi me yaad na raha.
Mein- bo nana mein abhi aap se mangne hi bala tha ki aap ne pooch liya.
Nana- jo bhi ho ye le ATM card teri maa de gayi thi tere liye.
Aur haa dhayan rakha kar apna.
Ji nana.
Phir uss raat kuch bhi nahi hua aur sab so gaye.
Ek naye din ki suruaat ke intejaar me.

Yaha dusri jo ladki subah sapna dekh de chikh padi thi usi ghar me.
Ladki ki chikh sun kar uska maa turant uske kamre me aati hai.
Ladki ki maa- kya hua beta aaj phir bo hi sapna dekha kya.
Ladki- baat ko chupate hue. Nahi maa bo toh ek chuha tha jise dekh ke dar gayi.Bo sapna toh ab kafi samay se nahi aaya.
Itna kehte hue uss ladki ki awaj rone jaise. Hone lagti hai aur bo ladki jaldi se bhaag kar washroom me ghus jati.
Ladki ki maa(nam ankhon se)- kitni majboor hu me ki apni ladki ke dukh lo dur karne ke liye kuch bhi nahi kar sakti akhir jise bo itna yaad karti hai bo ab hai bhi toh nahi iss duniya me.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thanks for reading....
 
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Secretshiva1

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Bhai log yaha aapse kuch kehna chahta hu.
Ek toh mere pass computer nahi hai, aur abhi mujhe itne achhe se phone se update dena bhi nahi aata.
Mene kuch logo se baat bhi kar raha hu maybe jald hi ise thik kar paoo.
Aur agar kisi ke pass koi tarika ho toh bo bataye.
 
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Manager ne kayi baar awaz lagayi but no effect.
Phir manager ko sak hua toh usne chadar hatayi toh baha sirf pillow the na ki markus.
ab aage....


Toh asal me hua kuch yu ki markus ne aaj city ko ghumne ka plan kal raat ko hi bana liya tha aur sabhi gaurds ki najron se bach kar bo early morning hi apne villa se nikal aaya tha.

Par jab subah ko markus apne room me nahi mila toh pure ghar me hadkamp mach gaya.
Manager ne turant security incharge ko bulaya aur usse pata karna chaha ki markus kaha gaya.
Par security incharge ko khud kuch pata ho toh bo bataye.
Phir unhone raat ki saari recordings check ki kisi lead ki talash me. Par vaha bhi haath khali hi rahe.


Manager ne turant apne sabhi aadmiyon ko markus ki talaash me laga diya.
Aur yaha markus ek aam aadmi ki tarah city me ghum raha tha bekhauf.
Kyunki police toh markus ki jeb me thi aur baise bhi kuch hi logo ne markus ko dekha hai bo bhi abhi hasl hi me isse pehle toh bo bahar se hi operate karta tha.
Yaha aapko bata du ki markus ne aisa pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha but haal hi me usne iss baat ko realise kiya tha ki use aisa karna chahiye taaki khud ke aadmiyon par najar rakhi ja sake aur city bhi ghum li jaye.
But markus ka ye faisla kuch logo ke liye sahi sabit nahi hoga aaj, aage dekhte hai ki kya kya kand hote hai aaj.

Apne vila se markus paidal hi main sadak tak aata hai aaj markus ek dum sadak par ghumne bale aam logo ki tarah dikh raha tha. Ek printed white t shirt aur black denim me.


Sadak par aa kar markus ek auto ko rokta hai aur delhi me apne thikano ki taraf chalne ko kehta hai.
But delhi me ho aur ek baar me auto bale raaji ho jaye toh bhai sapna dekh rahe ho tum.
Hua bhi kuch aisa hi.
Auto bala markus ko mana kar ke apne raste nikal gaya.
Aise hi markus ne kayi auto roke but koi nahi raazi hua.
Aaj ek underworld don ko pata chal raha tha ki delhi me har aadmi khud ko kisi don se kam nahi samjhta.
Phir kaafi koshish aur double kiraye ke lalch ke baad finally ek auto bala taiyar hua. Toh markus ki trip suru ho gayi sharh ghumne ki.
Abhi markus beth kar apne pasina pooch hi rha tha ki, suru hua auto balo ki chir parichit behaviour aur unke bhojpuri gaane.
Autowala- shaab aap ko yaha dekha nahi kahi bahar se aaye hai kya.
Markus- nahi bhaiya me yaha ka hi hu. Bi kya hai na ki job ki talaash me idhar udhar ghumta rehta hu isliye.
(Yaha me batata chalu markus ek don kisi hadse ya kisi ki help se nahi khud ki mehnat aur knowledge ke badolat bana hai usse duniya ki kayi language aise aati hai jsise bo uski mother tongue ho.)
Autowala- sahi kehte ho shaab delhi me sab job hi karne aate hai, par itni jaldi milti kisi ko nahi.
Autowala- baise shaab ho kaha se aap.
Markus- ji mein gorakhpur se hu.
Autowala- kaha keht ho bhaiya gorakhpur se. Phir toh tum hamar padosi hue. Hum bhi bahi se hu.
Markus- ka keht ho bhaiya phir toh aap hamare bade bhaiya jaisen hue.
Autowala- haa bhaiya. Baise yaha rehwat kahan ho bhaiya.
Markus- ka bataye bhaiya abhi tak toh apne dost ke yaha rehwat hai par bo budbak bhi ab humka nikal dai ka keht hai. Hum toh bahut hi pareshan hun.
Autowala- chinta kahe kart ho hum hu na kabhau hamri konhoo madad chahiye toh aadhi raat ko bhi phone kar dena ha.
Markus- ji bilkul.
Isi tarah autowale se baat karte hue markus apne thikane par pahuch gaya.
Usne autowale ko paise dekar use bhej diya aur baha se paidal hi aage ko chalne laga.

Yaha dusri taraf nani ghar me kuch bhi nahi hua pure din evening me kirti mujhe uthane aayi.
Aur naste ki keh kar chali gayi. Mein uth kar fresh hone chala gaya fresh ho kar nasta kiya.
Tab nani beta abhi shaam ko parvati (mammi)ka phone aaya tha bo bata rahi thi kisi Ranveer ne tumhare khilaf Fir kar di thi.Baise toh loi khas pareshaani ki baat nahi hui. Kyun ki shera ne sab shmabhal liya kyunki ye uss inspector ki sirf chal.thi usne koi Fir nahi ki thi.
Tabhi mama aur nana bol uthe beta baise toh tumhe yah koi pareshani nahi hogi but phir bhi dhyaan rakhana apna.
Nana- aur beta sudha(nani) bata rahi thi ki tu kal raat bhukha raha paise na hone ki bajah se.
Mein- nahi nana aisa kuch nahi hai paise hai mere pass.
Nana- dikha.
Ab ho toh dikhau kyunki papa se mangne ka dhayan nahi raha aur unhe bhi jaldi me yaad na raha.
Mein- bo nana mein abhi aap se mangne hi bala tha ki aap ne pooch liya.
Nana- jo bhi ho ye le ATM card teri maa de gayi thi tere liye.
Aur haa dhayan rakha kar apna.
Ji nana.
Phir uss raat kuch bhi nahi hua aur sab so gaye.
Ek naye din ki suruaat ke intejaar me.

Yaha dusri jo ladki subah sapna dekh de chikh padi thi usi ghar me.
Ladki ki chikh sun kar uska maa turant uske kamre me aati hai.
Ladki ki maa- kya hua beta aaj phir bo hi sapna dekha kya.
Ladki- baat ko chupate hue. Nahi maa bo toh ek chuha tha jise dekh ke dar gayi.Bo sapna toh ab kafi samay se nahi aaya.
Itna kehte hue uss ladki ki awaj rone jaise. Hone lagti hai aur bo ladki jaldi se bhaag kar washroom me ghus jati.
Ladki ki maa(nam ankhon se)- kitni majboor hu me ki apni ladki ke dukh lo dur karne ke liye kuch bhi nahi kar sakti akhir jise bo itna yaad karti hai bo ab hai bhi toh nahi iss duniya me.

Aaj ke liye itna hi.

Thanks for reading....
Nice update bhai
 

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