Fantasy Shiva the common man

[Secretshiva1]

Awesome update Bhai..but update kuch jayda chota nhi hai

Badhiya update par chota he toda bada karo

Bhai Bo kya hai ki mujhe pata Nahi ki bade update ek Baar me post kaise hotel hai aur me ye bhi Nahi Chahta ki ek hi update do Baar me post ho(update-2) ki Jaise.

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice and fantastic update

 

[Secretshiva1]

Update-5

Nasta karte huye papa ne mujhe un sab se milbaya.
New characters introduction
Harsh Gupta-hamare manager
Ramsingh-hamare farm ke caretaker (yeh hamare farms aur animals ko dekhte hai)
Santa di- yeh hamare Ghar me Khana banati hai aur apni ekloti beti Sudha ke sath rehti hai Ghar me hi
Ranveer singh-police inspector
Jorabar singh-driver
Me nasta khatam hi Kar Raha tha ki ranveer Singh hamare Ghar me aata hai aur papa ko morning wish karta hai
Ranveer- sir Mene suna hai ki shiva bapas aa Gaya hai?
Papa- haa Sahi suna hai. aap batayi kya kaam hai?
Ranveer- sir Bo kya hai na abhi inki missing Ka case opne hai aur hamme bhi yeh Janna hai ki ye the Kaha par 4 Saal se.
Itna sunte hi papa ne kaha, inspector apni aukaat me raho Mera beta abhi bapas Aaya hai itne time baad aur aap abhi bhi use pareshan Karna chahate ho?
Ranveer- sir Mera aisa koi maksad Nahi tha par case toh close Karna hi hoga.
Abhi papa Kuch kehne hi baale the ki Mene unhe roka. Aur inspector se thik hai bataiye kaha chalna hai.
Ranveer- sir apko station aana Hoga baha apke Khun ki janch hogi aur apka lie detector test bhi hoga.
Mene Kaha thik hai.
Phir ranveer aur me police station Jane lage raaste me hamari koi baat Nahi hui.
Station me jaake bethe tab tak papa aur chacha bhi aa Gaye the baha ranveer me saari taiyari Karne ko Kaha.
Thode Der baad ek nurse ne aake Mera khoon Ka sample le liya.
Uske baad Mera lie detector test suru hua doctor me mujhe Kuch injections diye aur kayi saare connector mere hath pairo me laga diye Gaye uske baad ranveer ne sawal suru kiye.
Thanks for reading.....

 

[John Cena]

boht khoob bhai

 

[Mkapil]

Story achhi likh rahe ho
Age bhi ASE hi likte raho but update time se Dena bakiyon ki tarah mt karna nhi to mehnat bekar jayegi

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice updates

 

[Pintupaul]

Update-5

Nasta karte huye papa ne mujhe un sab se milbaya.
New characters introduction
Harsh Gupta-hamare manager
Ramsingh-hamare farm ke caretaker (yeh hamare farms aur animals ko dekhte hai)
Santa di- yeh hamare Ghar me Khana banati hai aur apni ekloti beti Sudha ke sath rehti hai Ghar me hi
Ranveer singh-police inspector
Jorabar singh-driver
Me nasta khatam hi Kar Raha tha ki ranveer Singh hamare Ghar me aata hai aur papa ko morning wish karta hai
Ranveer- sir Mene suna hai ki shiva bapas aa Gaya hai?
Papa- haa Sahi suna hai. aap batayi kya kaam hai?
Ranveer- sir Bo kya hai na abhi inki missing Ka case opne hai aur hamme bhi yeh Janna hai ki ye the Kaha par 4 Saal se.
Itna sunte hi papa ne kaha, inspector apni aukaat me raho Mera beta abhi bapas Aaya hai itne time baad aur aap abhi bhi use pareshan Karna chahate ho?
Ranveer- sir Mera aisa koi maksad Nahi tha par case toh close Karna hi hoga.
Abhi papa Kuch kehne hi baale the ki Mene unhe roka. Aur inspector se thik hai bataiye kaha chalna hai.
Ranveer- sir apko station aana Hoga baha apke Khun ki janch hogi aur apka lie detector test bhi hoga.
Mene Kaha thik hai.
Phir ranveer aur me police station Jane lage raaste me hamari koi baat Nahi hui.
Station me jaake bethe tab tak papa aur chacha bhi aa Gaye the baha ranveer me saari taiyari Karne ko Kaha.
Thode Der baad ek nurse ne aake Mera khoon Ka sample le liya.
Uske baad Mera lie detector test suru hua doctor me mujhe Kuch injections diye aur kayi saare connector mere hath pairo me laga diye Gaye uske baad ranveer ne sawal suru kiye.
Thanks for reading.....

Nice update bro

 

[Secretshiva1]

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[Secretshiva1]

Update-6

Uske baad Mera lie detector test suru hua doctor me mujhe Kuch injections diye aur kayi saare connector mere hath pairo me laga diye Gaye uske baad ranveer ne sawal suru kiye.
Ab aage...
Ranveer- toh Mr shiva Verma Kaha the aap 4 Saalon se?
Mein- Japan ke ek island par.
Ranceer- kis island par the bapas aanee me 4 Saal lag Gaye?
Mein- izu island par
Ranveer- toh kaise pahuche the baha par?
Mein- mujhe Nahi pata.
Ranveer- toh ye batao ke lya hua tha 4 Saal pehle?
Mein- jab me dukaan band Kar ke ja Raha tha Ghar ki taraf ki Kisi ne mere sir par mara aur jab mujhe hosh Aaya toh mein uss island par tha.
Ranveer- jab ab kidnape huye uske do din pehle aap Ka Kisi se jhagda hua tha uske baare me Kuch batayo.
Mein- mujhe Yaad Nahi ho Sakta Kuch udhar ya account Ka issue hi ho ga.
Ranveer- ye koi jabab Nahi hua.
Mein- mujhe Yaad Nahi ki kis baat par jhagda hua.
Ab isse pehle ranveer Kuch kehta ki papa bich me aa Gaye aur mujhe Apne sath le Jane lage.
Jab ranveer ne unhe rokna chaha toh bakeel shahab bich me aa Gaye aur ranveer se poochne lage ki ab kis jurm me rokna chahate ho isse, jab sab Kuch Sahi hai?
Ranveer se Kuch jabab Nahi Bana aur hum log police station se bhar as Gaye bahar ek BMW 640D khadi thi hum log usse Ghar ki taraf nikl Gaye.
Ab sawal mere man me the papa ke liye jinke jabab mujhe janne the.
Thanks for reading......

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update