Fantasy shivam.. the warrior..

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Wao! Superb jabarjast amazing updates bhai sandar imotional

Singhaniyas ne apne boss ke sath meating ki hai to kya pari ne use track kiya ya nahi...

Ishan ke pass bheja hai boss ne or Usne vahi jankari nikali hai Jo pari ne duplicate Bnai hui thi logo ko gumrah karne ke liye...

Yha shivam ne shilpi ke sath ek khubsurat night bitai Jisme Bahut Sara pyar tha ek duje ke liye, vahi Riya jo apni ma ki kami shilpi se puri kr rhi hai nind me hote huye bhi shivam ne bhi jaan liya ki kuchh or bhi reason hai Riya ke aise bechain hone me, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...

Shivam ne Pari ko upgrade kr diya hai or Usne 3 alag se AI bnaye hai jinke alag alag kaam hai aur unhe pari control karne vali hai, mujhe lagta hai Inme self kill commond bhi hogi hi misuse se bachne ke liye...

Riya ke dad ke liye bhi koi dvai Bnai hai pr Dekhte hai vo kitna satik labh pahuchati hai...

Superb updates bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing updates with awesome writing skills

shukria bhai.. yeh 9.2 likhne ke lie late night tak mehnat karni padi tab ja kar climaxke lie perfect scene ka idea mind me aaya

 

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bhai log boss ke first physical appearance ke lie kuchh ideas hai..

1)..kyu na uski entry sunday ka jo scene banne wala hai usme kar di jaye?
2).. boss itna powerful ho ki use pari and uski a.i ki team bhi itni asani se track down na kar paye..

which of these ideas is best?

i mean aur bhi socha hai update 10.1/2 ke lie....​

 

[Xabhi]

bhai log boss ke first physical appearance ke lie kuchh ideas hai..

1)..kyu na uski entry sunday ka jo scene banne wala hai usme kar di jaye?
2).. boss itna powerful ho ki use pari and uski a.i ki team bhi itni asani se track down na kar paye..

which of these ideas is best?

i mean aur bhi socha hai update 10.1/2 ke lie....​

Bhai AI is not a small piece of cake, usko ek vyavsthit tarike se pesh kiya jaye to ye pura universe bhi apna alag se introduce ho sakta hai, ab rahi baat villan ki to uska level hi alag hai Jaisa ki Apne btaya, Lekin ye jo boss hai ye kisi na kisi ke pyade jaise hi hai (Ho sakta hai main villan ke hi ho) to inka level bhi tough hona hi chahiye, hero ko Samajhdaari ke sath grow Karo bhai, Pahle chhota Don fir usse bada Don fir usse bhi bada Don, sab interconnected rakho aur hero ke kuchh patte hmesha chhupa kr rakho, Taki main villan ke time final battle me show karke jeet hasil kar sako, ha refrence de sakte ho un chhupe patto ka samay samay pr...

Aapko Pahle Lagbhag aadhi story likh leni chahiye fir kahi posting suru karni chahiye, yha ek ek update aata rahta or vha pr Aap aage ki kahani likhte rahte, Isse countinuty break bhi nhi hoti or Aapko samay bhi milta rahta...

Yah ek suggestion tha writer ke liye...
Aapne Jo socha hai plot Aap Uspr hi aage badhte rahe...

 

[rebellover]

Bhai AI is not a small piece of cake, usko ek vyavsthit tarike se pesh kiya jaye to ye pura universe bhi apna alag se introduce ho sakta hai, ab rahi baat villan ki to uska level hi alag hai Jaisa ki Apne btaya, Lekin ye jo boss hai ye kisi na kisi ke pyade jaise hi hai (Ho sakta hai main villan ke hi ho) to inka level bhi tough hona hi chahiye, hero ko Samajhdaari ke sath grow Karo bhai, Pahle chhota Don fir usse bada Don fir usse bhi bada Don, sab interconnected rakho aur hero ke kuchh patte hmesha chhupa kr rakho, Taki main villan ke time final battle me show karke jeet hasil kar sako, ha refrence de sakte ho un chhupe patto ka samay samay pr...

Aapko Pahle Lagbhag aadhi story likh leni chahiye fir kahi posting suru karni chahiye, yha ek ek update aata rahta or vha pr Aap aage ki kahani likhte rahte, Isse countinuty break bhi nhi hoti or Aapko samay bhi milta rahta...

Yah ek suggestion tha writer ke liye...
Aapne Jo socha hai plot Aap Uspr hi aage badhte rahe...

shukria bade bhai

 

[Smith_15]

 

[rebellover]

update 10 kal raat ya parso tak ap sab ko mil jayega..

 

[rebellover]

aaj fir se job interview ke lie ja raha is lie updates thode thode break ke bad ayenge..

yeh index kese create kar sakte hain?​

 

[Xabhi]

aaj fir se job interview ke lie ja raha is lie updates thode thode break ke bad ayenge..

yeh index kese create kar sakte hain?​

Yah lo bhai Isse samajh lena or na samajh me aaye tb btana...

How To Create Index

Index Kaise Banate Hai...?Agar story ka index banana hai to Table ke liye niche wale code ko dekho aur samjho.Update 1 update 2 update 3 update 4 update 5 update 6 update 7 update 8 update 9 update 10Ye code thread mein post karne se aisa dikhegaUpdate 1update...

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[Pardeep Singh meena]

Ati uttam lavely update

 

[rebellover]

update 10.. .. family love forever..

shilpi and shivam ke samne riya ke is behaviour ka raaz samne aa chuka tha.. dono soch me pas gaye the ki kya reaction dia jaye.. dono ke samne riya ke man ki halat (emotional stat of mind) saf zahir tha..

shivam : shilpi tum riyu ke sath hi raho mai thoda kam remaining hai woh nipta kar aata hun.. hamari beti bahot bahadur hai bhale hi woh hame batana nahi chahti hame uske decision ka samman karna chahie.. hame wait karna chahie ki kab woh yeh bat khud hame batayegi.. tab tak ham iske sath normal behave hi karenge hum yeh bat zahir nahi hone denge ki hame yeh bat pata hai..

and shiva offline ho jata hai.. shilpi riya ke pas hi bethi rehti hai.. thodi der bad riya jag jati hai and jese hi woh shilpi ko apne pas pati hai to bahot khush ho jati hai and usko gale lagte hue galo par kiss kar leti hai..

shilpi : good morning betu.. ab ap kesa feel kar rahe ho.. mene office se leave le li hai and tumhari leave bhi approved karva di hai shivam se.. hame bina kisi emergency ke office nahi jana padega.. tum ja kar naha lo tab tak main nashta bana deti hun..

riya room me chala jati hai and shilpi kitchen me ja kar uska fav. nashta banane lagti hai.. AALOO KE PARATHE.. thodi der bad nashta ban jati hai and woh riya ke room me jati hai to dekhti hai ki wo naha ka dress up ho chuki hai and mirror ke samne khadi ho kar hair komb kar rahi thi..

shilpi uske pas jati hai and usko mirror ke samne pade chhote se table par betha deti hai and khud uske baal banane lagti hai.. thodi der bad woh ready ho jati hai and dono niche aa jati hai.. shilpi riya ko apne hatho se nashta karvati hai..

thodi der bad dono ghar me bani unki apni alag lab me chali jati hain.. jaha par bahot sare pc screen lagi hui thi.. dekhne se esa lag raha tha ki ye ek cyber expert ki lab hai and sahi bhi tha dono pro level ki hackers thi.. woh dono apne apne pc ke samne beth kar kam karne lagti hain and do ghnate ke bad dono ke chehre par vijai smile thi jese hi computer screens par kuchh appear hua dono ki khushi ka thikana nahi raha..

un dono ke samne singhaniyas ke sare financial asstets ka data show ho raha tha and abse un sabhi ka access shivam and team ke pas aa chuka tha.. wese to yeh kam pari bhi kar sakti thi par yeh karke riya and shilpi ne apni hacking ki practice kar li thi and dono confirm ho gai thi ki unke dimag ki talwar pe zung nahi laga tha..

shivam office me beth kar emails check kar rha tha and unka replies de raha tha.. tabhi pari ne shivam riya and shilpi ko inform kia ki singhaniyas ka call aa raha hai.. shivam and family ne call pick kia and tino singhaniyas ki bat sunne ko ready the..

on call..
nidhi : helllo mr. shivam this is nidhi from singhaniyas.. maine apko yeh kehne ke lie inform kia hai ki hum apki company ke sath business deal karne ke lie taiyar hai and hame apki conditions bhi manzur hai.. ap agar manzuri dein to hum is friday ko deal ke papers sign karne ke lie aana chahenge..

(abse main shivam riya and shilpi ko shivam and team nahi shivam and family likhunga..)

shivam and family yeh sun kar khushi se naachne lagi.. .. thodi der bad shivam ne reply dia..

shivam : you are welcome singhaniyas.. mai apke decision ka samman karta hu and i am happy ke apne hamari conditions ka maan rakha... then see you on Friday..

somewhere in outer space..
jaha par earth pe shivam and family apni pehli jit par muskura rahi thi wahi urenos ko jaha par kaid kiya hua tha waha par dar ka mahol bana hua tha.. urenos ko jaha par kaid kiya gaya tha woh shiyar empire ka sabse tight security wala jail tha jisko todna near to impossible tha..

fir bhi yaha par saalo se ek hi kaidi tha URENOS and itne saal tak behosh rehne ke bad use hosh aa raha tha.. bhale hi shiyar empire sab se jyada powerful the par urenos sab ka baap tha and we can say he was the most cruel person ever..

intro time..
shiyar empire.. yeh sabse powerful alien spieces ka samuh hai jise ek council ke dhwara chalaya jata hai..

guard 1.. ham kafi saal se is jallad ki suraxa kar rahe hain.. mere dada ji ne is jallad ko kaid karne ke lie jo jung usme part lia tha.. isse ladne ke lie sare planets and civilisations ke best warriors gaye hue the par.. sirf gine chune hi jinda bach paye baki sab is jallad ke hatho mare gaye.. jesa mene padha hai kitabo mein us hisab se bhavishyavani ke hisab se iske jagne me sirf 3saal 6mahine ka waqt bacha hua hai..

guard 2 : ye itna zyada cruel hai ki yeh chahe to ek sath kai planets par hamla kar sakta hai and koi ise hara ya mar nahi sakta.. jab tak ise kaid kar paye the tab tak isne galaxy ke aadhi population ko khatam kar dia tha..

guard 2 : iski adat hai ki ye jab bhi kisi planet par hamla karta tha tab akela jata tha par iske pas 10log the jo agar maidan me utar jaye to har planet galaxy ki sabhi armies mil kar bhi inka kuchh nuxan nahi kar payengi..

guard 1 : i hope universe ke pas khud ko bachane ke lie koi to plan hoga..

earth..
shivam ghar aa chuka tha and riya and shilpi ki pehli chaal se kafi khush tha.. and usne dono ko singhaniyas ke bare me bata dia jise sun kar wo dono excited feel kar rahi thi.. khair dinner ka waqt hua and tino dinner karne beth gaye.. shilpi and riya ek dusre ko khila rahi thi par dono ka dhyan shivam ki ore nahi tha..

shivam ne masti karte hue kaha, " koi hame bhi apne hatho se khila do yar.. hamari kisi ko parwah hi nahi hai.. "

riya : kyu apko kyu jealous feel ho raha hai.. ap apne hath use karte hue khaiye..

shivam : esa hai toh mai nahi khaunga fir and ruthne ka natak karte hue uth kar jane laga..

riya ne use rokne ki koshish ki par usne suna nahi and acting karte hue room me chala gaya.. thodi der bad riya dish le kar uske pas room me aa gai..

riya : mujhe ab apke hatho se khana hai agar ap nahi mane to apse bat nahi karungi and apko punishment milegi maa se.. samjhe ap papa.. !!❤❤

riya apni hi dhun me bole ja rahi thi and shivam uska bachpana dekh kar khush ho raha tha par jese hi usne last word bola shivam ko laga jese use puri dunia ki sari khushia mil gai thi..

shivam ne uske pas ja kar kaha,.. " tumne abhi abhi kya kaha zara fir se kehna.. "

riya : yahi ki mujhe apke hatho se khana hai and nahi mane to maa se punishment milegi apko..

shivam : ye nahi last jo bola woh..

riya : papa..

shivam ne jhat se use gale laga lia uski akhe khushi se nam ho gai thi.. usne kaha ek bar firse bolna..

riya : papa..

shivam khushi se jhum utha.. bhale hi riya and woh cousins the par shivam ne hamesha riya ka khayal ek pita ki tarha rakha tha.. ☺☺❤.. shivam ne riya ka hath pakda and ek hath me thaali le kar niche aa gaya..

fir tino ne sath me majak masti karte hue dinner kia and ek sath so gaye ek dusre ko hug kar ke..

next day College..
shivam aaj lectures ke bad library me beth kar notes bana raha tha.. Krishna uske aas pas hi thi pata nahi kyu shivam ko uski yeh activities doubtful lag rahi thi and badi problem yeh thi ke pari bhi iske bare me pata nahi laga paa rahi thi..

shivam ne socha ki usko apna kam karne do jab tak chance na mile tab tak ispar hath daalna sahi nahi hoga.. thodi der bad Krishna khud uske pas aai and uski samne ki chair par beth gai..

krishna : hi.. remember me? i am
shivam : krishna sharma.. first year student.. i don't think i am wrong..
krishna : yep.. its me.. i am glad apko yaad hai.. wese ap kal jaldi me bina bat kie chale gaye the to kya mai wajah jaan sakti hu if you don't mind..

shivam : yep.. mene ek company me job ke lie apply kia tha and kal mujhe interview ke lie bulaya tha.. is lie mujhe jaldi me nikalna pada.. (shivam ne kuchh sochte hue kaha.. woh shocked tha ki pari jo ki sab ki information ek second me nikal sakti thi woh bar bar fail ho rahi thi krishna ke bare me pata lagane me..and jo info. hath lagi thi woh kafi shocking thi..)

khair college ka din khatam hua and woh wapis ghar aa gaya.. woh fresh ho kar niche aaya tab bhi usi bare me soch raha tha.. woh bekhayali me hi sofaa pe beth gaya woh soch me itna khoya hua tha ki jab riya uski god me sar rakh kar let gai tab ja kar uska dhyan toota..

shivam ne uski taraf dekha woh ek angel jesi lag rahi thi.. usne jhuk kar uske forehead par kiss kar dia and uske baalo me hath firane laga..

thodi der bad shilpi waha aa gai shivam thaka hua tha is lie woh riya ko uthane ke lie aage badhne lagi toh shiva ne apne hoth par ungli rakhte hue kaha, "shhh.. sone do ise hamari beti ko.. tum ham baap beti ke bich me mat aao..☺❤ " yeh keh kar woh riya ke baalo me hath firane laga.. thodi der bad riya ne lete lete hi uska hath pakad lia and so gai..

dono hi bahot pyare lag rahe the.. dunia ki nazar me tino ka alag rishta tha par inki dunia me jo rishta tha inka woh sabse khubsoorat aur paak rishta tha.. (hense proved FAMILY LOVE FOREVER..❤..)

thodi der bad shilpi hath me ek photo frame le kar aai and usne woh photo drawing room ki diwar par laga dia.. jisme untino ki group sketch thi jisme niche naam likha tha SHIVAM AND FAMILY..

shivam ne ishare se puchha ki yeh kisne banaya.. shilpi ne riya ki taraf ishara kia.. yeh sketch sach me family ke bich ke pyar ki nishani tha.. ..

shilpi ne uske samne bethe hue kaha, "aaj tum kafi khoye hue lag rahe ho..kya hua koi to baat hai jo tumhe pareshan kar rahi hai.. "

shivam : ek ladki hai college me jo ki meri Junior hai.. Krishna sharma nam hai uska.. kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki woh mujh par nazar rakhe hue hai.. uski taraf se khatra mehsus nahi hota par fir bhi uski taraf se alag hi vibes aati hai.. and herani ki bat yeh hai ki mene pari ko iski information nikalne ko kaha par woh bar bar fail hoti rahi par jab use kuchh info. mili woh bhi ajib hai..

shilpi ne sawaliya nazro se uski taraf dekha.. par woh bhi kuchh soch rahi thi.. thodi der bad uske dimag ki batti jali and usne turant apne laptop me jo last interview lia gaya tha uske sare candidates ki list thi and usme bhi ek naam tha KRISHNA SHARMA.. shilpi ne uski pic open ki and screen shivam ki ore ghuma di..

shivam ne uski pic dekhte hi kaha, "han yahi hai woh.. tum isse kab and kahan mili.." jawab me shilpi ne interview wali sari incident bata di..

shivam sochte hue.. : Agar yeh dushman hai to hame iske ham par hamla karne ka wait karna chahie par mujhe nahi lagta ki woh dushman hai is lie hamara normal rehna hi better hai..

shilpi ko bhi shivam ki bat sahi lagi and woh apni lab me chali gai..

kaun hai krishna and kya pata laga hai pari ko jisne Shivam ko sochne ke lie majbur kar dia hai.. ..

end of update 10..













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