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Bhai bara romanchak kshan hai. Thori si galati jaanleva sabit ho sakati hai. Dekhana
Hai commander kaise unaka samankarata hai
Hai commander kaise unaka samankarata hai
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Gjb ka update hai.... Ab Commander ko sabse pehale apne aap ko heal karana cahiye aur phir tabahi....
Awesome story
Awesome story
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UPDATE-53
vah ‘shadoww warfair’ ki khaas position thi, jismain dushman ko yahi maalum nahin chal paataa thaa ki kul kitne yauddhaa mrityu kaa katoraa banaakar uski taraf baad rahe hain । commander Karan Saxena ne chunki unhen helicopter se utarte dekh liyaa thaa, isiliye jaantaa thaa ki unki kul sankhyaa paanch hai ।
usi kshan Havaam aur Abu nidaal uski camouflage kit ke karib se gujre ।
commander ne apni saans tak rok li ।
donon yoddhaa nirvidhan uske karib se gujar gaye ।
koi bis minute baad ek yoddhaa aur commander Karan Saxena ko ‘monkey hill’ par dikhaai pedaa ।
vah Master thaa ।
Master ne hansiyaa apne haath main pakadaa huaa thaa aur vah badi chaukanni avasthaa main usi taraf bada chalaa aa rahaa thaa ।
Master bhi uski camouflage kit ke karib se gujraa । magar gujarte-gujarte vo ek kshan ke lia thithkaa । kuchh der vo vahin kit ke aaspaas mandraataa rahaa aur uske baad aage chalaa gayaa ।
“lagtaa hai, Master ko meri yahaan maujudgi kaa ahsaas ho gayaa hai ।” commander Karan Saxena ke dimaag main khatre ki ghanti baji ।
aur !
bilkul sahi sochaa thaa commander ne ।
mushkil se ek furlong dur jaate hi Master ne apni us wristwatch ko on kiyaa । jo vaastav main transmitter set thaa । phir vo jaldi-jaldi apne us transmitter par aage gaye donon yoddhaaon se sampark sthaapit karne lagaa ।
“hello-hello ! Master speaking ।”
“Master speaking !”
“yes !” fauran dusri taraf se ek bhaari-bharakam aavaaj transmitter par sunaayi di- “main Havaam bol rahaa hun । kyaa baat hai Master ?”
“mainne ‘monkey hill’ par commander Karan Saxena ko khoj nikaalaa hai Havaam !”
“k... kyaa kah rah ho tum ?”
“mai bilkul thik kah rahaa hun ।” Master behad garamjoshi ke saath bolaa- “vah ek camouflage kit ke niche chhipaa huaa hai aur is vakt mujhse bas thodaa saa faasle par hai ।”
“tum kahaan ho ?”
“yhaan ‘monkey hill’ par jo kaali pahaadi hai, main usi pahaadi ke paas khadaa hun । tum donon jitnaa jald se jald ho sake, yahaan pahuncho ।”
“thik hai, ham abhi vahaan pahunchte hain ।” Havaam vyagrtaapurvak bolaa- “tab tak tum commander Karan Saxena par paini nigaah rakho ।”
“oke ।”
“aur akele hi uske upar hamlaa karne ki bevkufi mat kar baithnaa ।”
“main aisaa kuchh nahin karne vaalaa hun ।”
“behatar !”
Master ne transmitter band kar diyaa ।
hansiyaa abhi bhi uske haath main thaa ।
haalaanki ek 38 caliber ki revolver bhi uski jeb main pedi hui thi । magar us revolver se kahin jyaadaa bharosaa Master ko apne hansiye par thaa ।
vo pahle ki tarah hi chaukanni nigaahon se idhar-udhar dekhne lagaa ।
tabhi use aisaa ahsaas huaa, jaise uske pichhe koi hai ।
Master jhatke se paltaa ।
palatte hi chaunkaa ।
commander uske saamne khadaa huaa thaa । commander ke haath main revolver thi, jo us vakt usi ke haath ko ghur rahi thi ।
“t... tum !”
Master ko chaar sau chaalis volt kaa shak lagaa ।
“kyon, mujhe apne saamne dekhakar hairaani ho rahi hai Master ।” commander muskuraayaa-“shaayad tum jaante ho, tumhaare donon saathi tumhaari madad ke lia etni jaldi yahaan nahin pahunchne vaale hain ।”
“kaun se saathi ?”
“vhi, jinse tumne abhi-abhi traasmitar par baat ki hai ।”
“mainne kisi se baat nahin ki ।”
“lekin... ।”
dhokhaa khaa gayaa commander Karan Saxena !
vah bhul gayaa, uskaa mukaablaa ‘assault group’ ke pahle yauddhaa se hi ho rahaa hai ।
vo baaton main ulajh gayaa ।
aur !
yahi Master kaa uddeshy thaa ।
fauran hi Master kaa hansiyaa badi advitiy phurti ke saath chalaa aur sidhe commander ki revolver se jaakar takraayaa ।
tann !
tej aavaaj hui aur revolver commander ke haath se nikalakar dur jaa giri ।
ek hi jhatke main vo nihatthaa ho gayaa ।
vah sambhaltaa, usse pahle hi hansiyaa tufaani gati se phir chalaa ।
commander ki bhayaprad chikh nikal gayi ।
hansiyaa is baar uski patlun phaadtaa huaa taang ke dher saare gosht ko kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
commander ne jhapatakar apne donon spring blade baahar nikaal liye ।
is baar vah bilkul nahin chukaa ।
spring blade nikaalte hi usne jhatke ke saath dono spring bladeon ko Master ki taraf khinchakar maaraa ।
kisi halkaaye kutte ki tarah dahaadaa Master ।
donon spring blade sanasnaate hua uske kandhon main jaa dhanse । uske donon haath bekaar hokar rah gaye ।
fauran hi commander ne Master ke haath se uskaa hansiyaa chhin liyaa ।
Master ab bahut daraa-daraa najar aane lagaa ।
“mainne sunaa hai Master !” commander hansiyaa uski aankhon ke gird ghumaataa huaa bolaa- “ki tumne apne is hansiye se aaj tak bishumaar aurton ke guptaang phaad daalen hain । main samajhtaa hun, aaj tumhen bhi is hansiye ki dhaar ko dekh lenaa chaahiye ki yah kitni paini hai ।”
“n... nahin ।” Master ki ruh kaamp gayi- “nhin ।”
vo bhaamp gayaa, commander kyaa karne vaalaa hai । vo teji se pichhe hataa ।
turant commander Karan Saxena ne Master ke guptaangon ki taraf hansiye kaa prachand prhaar kiyaa ।
Master ekaaak itne hriadayavidaarak dhang se dakraayaa ki pure jungle main uske chikhne ki aavaaj dur-dur tak pratidhvanit hui ।
uske guptaang vaale hisse se khun kaa phavvaaraa chhut pedaa ।
Master ne jaldi se donon haath apne guptaangon ke upar rakh liye ।
“nhin, commander nahin ।”
sadaak !
hansiyaa apne phul veg ke saath phir chalaa ।
Master aur bhi jyaadaa bhukampkaari andaaj main chilllaayaa ।
is baar hansiyaa Master ke ek haath ki sabhi anguliyon ke saath-saath uske andkosh ko bhi kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
Master chhataptaane lagaa ।
chhataptaate hua hi usne apne dusre haath se 38 caliber ki revolver nikaalni chaahi ।
magar iski mohalat bhi use nahin mili ।
hansiyaa phir drutagati ke saath chalaa aur Master ki aadhi se jyaadaa gardan kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
Master ki gardan aur guptaang se khun ki dhaaraayen chhut pedi ।
vah chikhtaa huaa pichhe jhaadiyon me jaakar giraa ।
girte hi uske praan-pakheru ud gaye ।
commander ab ek chhoti si pahaadi ke upar maujud thaa ।
camouflage kit usne apne upar daali hui thi aur vah aage gaye donon yauddhaaon ke vaapas lautne kaa besabri se entjaar kar rahaa thaa ।
commander jaantaa thaa, sabse pichhe jo do yoddhaa aa rahe the aur jo shaayad abhi ‘monkey hill’ par bhi nahin pahunche the, unhen abhi us tak pahunchne main kaafi vakt thaa ।
filhal to usne Havaam aur Abu Nidaal ko hi apnaa shikaar banaanaa thaa ।
Master ke hansiye se commander Karan Saxena ki jaangh kaafi kat gayi thi । commander ne apni jaangh par ek ‘antiseptik lotion’ spray kar liyaa, jisse uski jaangh se khun bahnaa fauran band ho gayaa ।
filhal itnaa hi kaafi thaa ।
☐☐☐
vah ‘shadoww warfair’ ki khaas position thi, jismain dushman ko yahi maalum nahin chal paataa thaa ki kul kitne yauddhaa mrityu kaa katoraa banaakar uski taraf baad rahe hain । commander Karan Saxena ne chunki unhen helicopter se utarte dekh liyaa thaa, isiliye jaantaa thaa ki unki kul sankhyaa paanch hai ।
usi kshan Havaam aur Abu nidaal uski camouflage kit ke karib se gujre ।
commander ne apni saans tak rok li ।
donon yoddhaa nirvidhan uske karib se gujar gaye ।
koi bis minute baad ek yoddhaa aur commander Karan Saxena ko ‘monkey hill’ par dikhaai pedaa ।
vah Master thaa ।
Master ne hansiyaa apne haath main pakadaa huaa thaa aur vah badi chaukanni avasthaa main usi taraf bada chalaa aa rahaa thaa ।
Master bhi uski camouflage kit ke karib se gujraa । magar gujarte-gujarte vo ek kshan ke lia thithkaa । kuchh der vo vahin kit ke aaspaas mandraataa rahaa aur uske baad aage chalaa gayaa ।
“lagtaa hai, Master ko meri yahaan maujudgi kaa ahsaas ho gayaa hai ।” commander Karan Saxena ke dimaag main khatre ki ghanti baji ।
aur !
bilkul sahi sochaa thaa commander ne ।
mushkil se ek furlong dur jaate hi Master ne apni us wristwatch ko on kiyaa । jo vaastav main transmitter set thaa । phir vo jaldi-jaldi apne us transmitter par aage gaye donon yoddhaaon se sampark sthaapit karne lagaa ।
“hello-hello ! Master speaking ।”
“Master speaking !”
“yes !” fauran dusri taraf se ek bhaari-bharakam aavaaj transmitter par sunaayi di- “main Havaam bol rahaa hun । kyaa baat hai Master ?”
“mainne ‘monkey hill’ par commander Karan Saxena ko khoj nikaalaa hai Havaam !”
“k... kyaa kah rah ho tum ?”
“mai bilkul thik kah rahaa hun ।” Master behad garamjoshi ke saath bolaa- “vah ek camouflage kit ke niche chhipaa huaa hai aur is vakt mujhse bas thodaa saa faasle par hai ।”
“tum kahaan ho ?”
“yhaan ‘monkey hill’ par jo kaali pahaadi hai, main usi pahaadi ke paas khadaa hun । tum donon jitnaa jald se jald ho sake, yahaan pahuncho ।”
“thik hai, ham abhi vahaan pahunchte hain ।” Havaam vyagrtaapurvak bolaa- “tab tak tum commander Karan Saxena par paini nigaah rakho ।”
“oke ।”
“aur akele hi uske upar hamlaa karne ki bevkufi mat kar baithnaa ।”
“main aisaa kuchh nahin karne vaalaa hun ।”
“behatar !”
Master ne transmitter band kar diyaa ।
hansiyaa abhi bhi uske haath main thaa ।
haalaanki ek 38 caliber ki revolver bhi uski jeb main pedi hui thi । magar us revolver se kahin jyaadaa bharosaa Master ko apne hansiye par thaa ।
vo pahle ki tarah hi chaukanni nigaahon se idhar-udhar dekhne lagaa ।
tabhi use aisaa ahsaas huaa, jaise uske pichhe koi hai ।
Master jhatke se paltaa ।
palatte hi chaunkaa ।
commander uske saamne khadaa huaa thaa । commander ke haath main revolver thi, jo us vakt usi ke haath ko ghur rahi thi ।
“t... tum !”
Master ko chaar sau chaalis volt kaa shak lagaa ।
“kyon, mujhe apne saamne dekhakar hairaani ho rahi hai Master ।” commander muskuraayaa-“shaayad tum jaante ho, tumhaare donon saathi tumhaari madad ke lia etni jaldi yahaan nahin pahunchne vaale hain ।”
“kaun se saathi ?”
“vhi, jinse tumne abhi-abhi traasmitar par baat ki hai ।”
“mainne kisi se baat nahin ki ।”
“lekin... ।”
dhokhaa khaa gayaa commander Karan Saxena !
vah bhul gayaa, uskaa mukaablaa ‘assault group’ ke pahle yauddhaa se hi ho rahaa hai ।
vo baaton main ulajh gayaa ।
aur !
yahi Master kaa uddeshy thaa ।
fauran hi Master kaa hansiyaa badi advitiy phurti ke saath chalaa aur sidhe commander ki revolver se jaakar takraayaa ।
tann !
tej aavaaj hui aur revolver commander ke haath se nikalakar dur jaa giri ।
ek hi jhatke main vo nihatthaa ho gayaa ।
vah sambhaltaa, usse pahle hi hansiyaa tufaani gati se phir chalaa ।
commander ki bhayaprad chikh nikal gayi ।
hansiyaa is baar uski patlun phaadtaa huaa taang ke dher saare gosht ko kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
commander ne jhapatakar apne donon spring blade baahar nikaal liye ।
is baar vah bilkul nahin chukaa ।
spring blade nikaalte hi usne jhatke ke saath dono spring bladeon ko Master ki taraf khinchakar maaraa ।
kisi halkaaye kutte ki tarah dahaadaa Master ।
donon spring blade sanasnaate hua uske kandhon main jaa dhanse । uske donon haath bekaar hokar rah gaye ।
fauran hi commander ne Master ke haath se uskaa hansiyaa chhin liyaa ।
Master ab bahut daraa-daraa najar aane lagaa ।
“mainne sunaa hai Master !” commander hansiyaa uski aankhon ke gird ghumaataa huaa bolaa- “ki tumne apne is hansiye se aaj tak bishumaar aurton ke guptaang phaad daalen hain । main samajhtaa hun, aaj tumhen bhi is hansiye ki dhaar ko dekh lenaa chaahiye ki yah kitni paini hai ।”
“n... nahin ।” Master ki ruh kaamp gayi- “nhin ।”
vo bhaamp gayaa, commander kyaa karne vaalaa hai । vo teji se pichhe hataa ।
turant commander Karan Saxena ne Master ke guptaangon ki taraf hansiye kaa prachand prhaar kiyaa ।
Master ekaaak itne hriadayavidaarak dhang se dakraayaa ki pure jungle main uske chikhne ki aavaaj dur-dur tak pratidhvanit hui ।
uske guptaang vaale hisse se khun kaa phavvaaraa chhut pedaa ।
Master ne jaldi se donon haath apne guptaangon ke upar rakh liye ।
“nhin, commander nahin ।”
sadaak !
hansiyaa apne phul veg ke saath phir chalaa ।
Master aur bhi jyaadaa bhukampkaari andaaj main chilllaayaa ।
is baar hansiyaa Master ke ek haath ki sabhi anguliyon ke saath-saath uske andkosh ko bhi kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
Master chhataptaane lagaa ।
chhataptaate hua hi usne apne dusre haath se 38 caliber ki revolver nikaalni chaahi ।
magar iski mohalat bhi use nahin mili ।
hansiyaa phir drutagati ke saath chalaa aur Master ki aadhi se jyaadaa gardan kaattaa chalaa gayaa ।
Master ki gardan aur guptaang se khun ki dhaaraayen chhut pedi ।
vah chikhtaa huaa pichhe jhaadiyon me jaakar giraa ।
girte hi uske praan-pakheru ud gaye ।
commander ab ek chhoti si pahaadi ke upar maujud thaa ।
camouflage kit usne apne upar daali hui thi aur vah aage gaye donon yauddhaaon ke vaapas lautne kaa besabri se entjaar kar rahaa thaa ।
commander jaantaa thaa, sabse pichhe jo do yoddhaa aa rahe the aur jo shaayad abhi ‘monkey hill’ par bhi nahin pahunche the, unhen abhi us tak pahunchne main kaafi vakt thaa ।
filhal to usne Havaam aur Abu Nidaal ko hi apnaa shikaar banaanaa thaa ।
Master ke hansiye se commander Karan Saxena ki jaangh kaafi kat gayi thi । commander ne apni jaangh par ek ‘antiseptik lotion’ spray kar liyaa, jisse uski jaangh se khun bahnaa fauran band ho gayaa ।
filhal itnaa hi kaafi thaa ।
☐☐☐
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UPDATE-54
Master ke hansiye se commander Karan Saxena ki jaangh kaafi kat gayi thi । commander ne apni jaangh par ek ‘antiseptik lotion’ spray kar liyaa, jisse uski jaangh se khun bahnaa fauran band ho gayaa ।
filhal itnaa hi kaafi thaa ।
☐☐☐
udhar donon yoddhaa chale jaa rahe the ।
Havaam ke haath main us samay apni ‘lizard revolver’ thi ।
jabaki Abu Nidaal ke haath main thi- sniper rifel ।
“yhaan to koi nahin hai ।” Abu Nidaal crane ki bhaanti apni gardan idhar-se-udhar ghumaataa huaa bolaa ।
“lekin usne hamain kaali pahaadi ke najdik hi pahunchne ke lia bolaa thaa ।”
“haan ।”
“phir vo kahaan gayaa ?”
“maalum nahin ।”
“Master !” Havaam ne jor se aavaaj lagaayi- “Master !”
shaanti !
kahin se koi pratikriyaa nahin ।
“Master !” Havaam aur jyaadaa jor se galaa faadkar chilllaayaa- “Master kahaan ho tum ?”
pahle jaisi hi shaanti ।
“kmaal hai, bol hi nahin rahaa ।”
“mujhe to kuchh gadabad lagti hai Havaam bhaai !” Abu Nidaal bolaa ।
“kaisi gadabad ?”
“ab ekadam se kyaa kahaa jaa saktaa hai ।”
donon ke chehre sut gaye ।
is bich Nidaal, Master ko talaash kartaa huaa kaali pahaadi se thodaa aage chalaa gayaa aur vahaan jaate hi vo chaunkaa ।
“Havaam, jaldi yahaan aao ।”
Havaam daudakar Abu Nidaal ke najdik pahunchaa ।
“kyaa huaa ?”
“ye dekho, yahaan khun ki kuchh bunde pedi hui hain ।” Abu Nidaal ne anguli se jhaadiyon main ek taraf ishaaraa kiyaa ।
Havaam ne dekhaa, vahaan sachamuch khun ki kaafi bunde pedi hui thi ।
“y... yah kiske khun ki bunden hain ?” Havaam ki aavaaj kampakampaayi- “khin commander ne Master ko bhi to nahin maar daalaa ?”
“kyaa kahaa jaa saktaa hai ।”
khun ki vo bunde kaafi dur tak girti chali gayi thi ।
vah donon khun ki bundon kaa pichhaa karte hua jhaadiyon main ghuste chale gaye । jhaadiyon main thodaa andar jaate hi unhen Master ki khun main buri tarah lathapath laash najar aa gayi ।
“taubaa !” Abu Nidaal ke jism main tej siharan daudi- “aakhir vahi huaa, jiskaa shak thaa । commander Karan Saxena ne hamaare ek aur yoddhaa ko thikaane lagaa diyaa hai ।”
“vo jarur yahin kahin aaspaas hai ।” Havaam gurraayaa-“ Master ne bataayaa thaa ki vo ek ‘camouflage kit’ ke niche chhipaa huaa hai । hamain aisi jhaadiyon ko talaash karnaa chaahiye, jo banaavti najar aayen ।”
donon bilkul alag-alag deshaa main jhaadiyon ko dekhte hua aage baade ।
donon bahut chaukanne the ।
jaraa si aahat hote hi goli chalaane ke lia taiyaar ।
Abu Nidaal jhaadiyon ke andar commander ki talaash kartaa huaa ab us chhoti si pahaadi ke karib pahunchaa, jis par vaastav main hi commander chhipaa thaa ।
commander bahut gaur se uski ek-ek activity dekh rahaa thaa ।
jaise hi Abu Nidaal pahaadi ke thodaa aur karib aayaa । fauran commander pahaadi ke upar se hi ekadam chite ki tarah uske upar jhapat pedaa aur Abu Nidaal ko apne shikanje main is tarah jakad liyaa, jaise giddh apne shikaar ko jakadtaa hai । phir vo Abu Nidaal ko jakade-jakade use lekar daudtaa huaa pahaadi ke pichhe pahunchaa ।
Abu Nidaal ladakhadaakar giraa ।
uske pair ki thokar ek patthar se lagi thi ।
girte hi vo commander ke shikanje se aajaad ho gayaa ।
vah sambhalakar khadaa huaa aur usne fauran apni ‘sniper’ rifelse commander ki gardan ke khaas point par goli chalaayi ।
“Havaam !” saath hi vo galaa faadkar chilllaayaa- “Havaam, jaldi yahaan aao । yah rahaa commander Karan Saxena ।”
commander ne advitiy phurti ke saath niche jhukakar khud ko goli lagne se bachaayaa ।
Colt revolver commander ki unguli ke gird phirakni ki tarah ghumi aur goli chali ।
Abu Nidaal chikh uthaa ।
goli Abu Nidaal ki taang main lagi thi ।
usne punah ‘sniper’ rifel se nishaanaa lagaanaa chaahaa ।
dhaany !
tabhi Colt revolver se ek sholaa aur niklaa ।
is martbaa goli Abu Nidaal ki gardan main thik usi khaas point par jaakar lagi, jahaan aksir vo nishaane lagaayaa kartaa thaa । goli uski gardan main andar hi andar ghumti chali gayi ।
dahaadaa Abu Nidaal !
gardan dhad se katakar ekadam havaa main uchhalti chali gayi ।
‘monkey hill’ par shaanti chhaa gayi, gahri shaanti ।
phir Havaam ke daudte kadmon ki aavaaj ubhri । Abu Nidaal ki chikh aur goli chalne ki aavaaj sunakar vah usi taraf bhaagaa chalaa aa rahaa thaa । ‘lizard’ revolver haath main pakade-pakade vah daudtaa huaa usi pahaadi ke pichhle hisse main aa gayaa ।
saamne hi Abu Nidaal ki gardan kati laash pedi thi ।
‘sniper’ rifel bhi use kaafi dur jhaadiyon main padi najar aayi ।
“my god ।” Havaam ke sharir main tej siharan daudi- “Abu Nidaal bhi maaraa gayaa । yah sab kyaa ho rahaa hai ।”
vah revolver pakade-pakade chaaron taraf ghum gayaa ।
“commander Karan Saxena ।” Havaam jor se chikhaa- “khaan ho tum, saamne aao ।”
khaamoshi !
sannaataa !
“saamne kyon nahin aate tum ?”
phir khaamoshi ।
commander us samay ‘mlaaykaa tiger krek’ chhaapaamaaron ki tarah ped par chadhaa huaa thaa aur apne tisre shikaar par hamlaa karne kaa koi munaasib maukaa dhundh rahaa thaa ।
Havaam kaafi der tak use jor-jor se pukartaa rahaa ।
pahle Master aur ab Abu Nidaal ki laash dekhne ke baad vo maanon paagal ho chukaa thaa ।
vah nahin jaantaa thaa, uskaa is tarah commander ko pukaarnaa kitnaa khatarnaak hai ।
commander ne vahin ped par chhipe-chhipe Havaam ki khopedi kaa nishaanaa lagaanaa shuru kiyaa ।
Havaam, jo abhi tak Abu Nidaal ki laash ke aaspaas hi mandraa rahaa thaa, ekaaak use n jaane kyaa sujhaa ki vah lambe-lambe dag bhartaa huaa pahaadi ke dusri taraf chalaa gayaa ।
commander samajh n sakaa, use ekaaak kyaa huaa hai ।
baharhaal ab Havaam dikhaai denaa band ho gayaa thaa ।
commander phir bhi ‘mlaaykaa tiger krek’ chhaapaamaaron ki tarah ped par chhipaa baithaa rahaa aur Havaam ki kisi agli harakat ki prtikshaa karne lagaa ।
ped par baithe-baithe punah uske upar behoshi chhaane lagi aur commander ko aisaa ahsaas huaa, jaise vo abhi ludhakakar niche jaa giregaa ।
uski haalat sachamuch kaafi kharaab thi ।
bhukh se antadiyaa kulAbulaa rahi thi aur aadhe se jyaadaa sharir khun main nahaayaa huaa thaa । apne aapko behosh hone se bachaaye rakhne ke lia commander ne kandhe ke jakhm ko thodaa aur spring blade se kuradaa ।
iske javaab main ped se kaafi saare patte bhi tod-todakar khaaye aur Haversack bag main se cane nikaalakar paani bhi piyaa ।
commander ki tabiyat kuchh sambhli ।
parantu vo jaantaa thaa ki is prkaar jyaadaa der tak kaam chalne vaalaa nahin hai ।
Master ke hansiye se commander Karan Saxena ki jaangh kaafi kat gayi thi । commander ne apni jaangh par ek ‘antiseptik lotion’ spray kar liyaa, jisse uski jaangh se khun bahnaa fauran band ho gayaa ।
filhal itnaa hi kaafi thaa ।
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udhar donon yoddhaa chale jaa rahe the ।
Havaam ke haath main us samay apni ‘lizard revolver’ thi ।
jabaki Abu Nidaal ke haath main thi- sniper rifel ।
“yhaan to koi nahin hai ।” Abu Nidaal crane ki bhaanti apni gardan idhar-se-udhar ghumaataa huaa bolaa ।
“lekin usne hamain kaali pahaadi ke najdik hi pahunchne ke lia bolaa thaa ।”
“haan ।”
“phir vo kahaan gayaa ?”
“maalum nahin ।”
“Master !” Havaam ne jor se aavaaj lagaayi- “Master !”
shaanti !
kahin se koi pratikriyaa nahin ।
“Master !” Havaam aur jyaadaa jor se galaa faadkar chilllaayaa- “Master kahaan ho tum ?”
pahle jaisi hi shaanti ।
“kmaal hai, bol hi nahin rahaa ।”
“mujhe to kuchh gadabad lagti hai Havaam bhaai !” Abu Nidaal bolaa ।
“kaisi gadabad ?”
“ab ekadam se kyaa kahaa jaa saktaa hai ।”
donon ke chehre sut gaye ।
is bich Nidaal, Master ko talaash kartaa huaa kaali pahaadi se thodaa aage chalaa gayaa aur vahaan jaate hi vo chaunkaa ।
“Havaam, jaldi yahaan aao ।”
Havaam daudakar Abu Nidaal ke najdik pahunchaa ।
“kyaa huaa ?”
“ye dekho, yahaan khun ki kuchh bunde pedi hui hain ।” Abu Nidaal ne anguli se jhaadiyon main ek taraf ishaaraa kiyaa ।
Havaam ne dekhaa, vahaan sachamuch khun ki kaafi bunde pedi hui thi ।
“y... yah kiske khun ki bunden hain ?” Havaam ki aavaaj kampakampaayi- “khin commander ne Master ko bhi to nahin maar daalaa ?”
“kyaa kahaa jaa saktaa hai ।”
khun ki vo bunde kaafi dur tak girti chali gayi thi ।
vah donon khun ki bundon kaa pichhaa karte hua jhaadiyon main ghuste chale gaye । jhaadiyon main thodaa andar jaate hi unhen Master ki khun main buri tarah lathapath laash najar aa gayi ।
“taubaa !” Abu Nidaal ke jism main tej siharan daudi- “aakhir vahi huaa, jiskaa shak thaa । commander Karan Saxena ne hamaare ek aur yoddhaa ko thikaane lagaa diyaa hai ।”
“vo jarur yahin kahin aaspaas hai ।” Havaam gurraayaa-“ Master ne bataayaa thaa ki vo ek ‘camouflage kit’ ke niche chhipaa huaa hai । hamain aisi jhaadiyon ko talaash karnaa chaahiye, jo banaavti najar aayen ।”
donon bilkul alag-alag deshaa main jhaadiyon ko dekhte hua aage baade ।
donon bahut chaukanne the ।
jaraa si aahat hote hi goli chalaane ke lia taiyaar ।
Abu Nidaal jhaadiyon ke andar commander ki talaash kartaa huaa ab us chhoti si pahaadi ke karib pahunchaa, jis par vaastav main hi commander chhipaa thaa ।
commander bahut gaur se uski ek-ek activity dekh rahaa thaa ।
jaise hi Abu Nidaal pahaadi ke thodaa aur karib aayaa । fauran commander pahaadi ke upar se hi ekadam chite ki tarah uske upar jhapat pedaa aur Abu Nidaal ko apne shikanje main is tarah jakad liyaa, jaise giddh apne shikaar ko jakadtaa hai । phir vo Abu Nidaal ko jakade-jakade use lekar daudtaa huaa pahaadi ke pichhe pahunchaa ।
Abu Nidaal ladakhadaakar giraa ।
uske pair ki thokar ek patthar se lagi thi ।
girte hi vo commander ke shikanje se aajaad ho gayaa ।
vah sambhalakar khadaa huaa aur usne fauran apni ‘sniper’ rifelse commander ki gardan ke khaas point par goli chalaayi ।
“Havaam !” saath hi vo galaa faadkar chilllaayaa- “Havaam, jaldi yahaan aao । yah rahaa commander Karan Saxena ।”
commander ne advitiy phurti ke saath niche jhukakar khud ko goli lagne se bachaayaa ।
Colt revolver commander ki unguli ke gird phirakni ki tarah ghumi aur goli chali ।
Abu Nidaal chikh uthaa ।
goli Abu Nidaal ki taang main lagi thi ।
usne punah ‘sniper’ rifel se nishaanaa lagaanaa chaahaa ।
dhaany !
tabhi Colt revolver se ek sholaa aur niklaa ।
is martbaa goli Abu Nidaal ki gardan main thik usi khaas point par jaakar lagi, jahaan aksir vo nishaane lagaayaa kartaa thaa । goli uski gardan main andar hi andar ghumti chali gayi ।
dahaadaa Abu Nidaal !
gardan dhad se katakar ekadam havaa main uchhalti chali gayi ।
‘monkey hill’ par shaanti chhaa gayi, gahri shaanti ।
phir Havaam ke daudte kadmon ki aavaaj ubhri । Abu Nidaal ki chikh aur goli chalne ki aavaaj sunakar vah usi taraf bhaagaa chalaa aa rahaa thaa । ‘lizard’ revolver haath main pakade-pakade vah daudtaa huaa usi pahaadi ke pichhle hisse main aa gayaa ।
saamne hi Abu Nidaal ki gardan kati laash pedi thi ।
‘sniper’ rifel bhi use kaafi dur jhaadiyon main padi najar aayi ।
“my god ।” Havaam ke sharir main tej siharan daudi- “Abu Nidaal bhi maaraa gayaa । yah sab kyaa ho rahaa hai ।”
vah revolver pakade-pakade chaaron taraf ghum gayaa ।
“commander Karan Saxena ।” Havaam jor se chikhaa- “khaan ho tum, saamne aao ।”
khaamoshi !
sannaataa !
“saamne kyon nahin aate tum ?”
phir khaamoshi ।
commander us samay ‘mlaaykaa tiger krek’ chhaapaamaaron ki tarah ped par chadhaa huaa thaa aur apne tisre shikaar par hamlaa karne kaa koi munaasib maukaa dhundh rahaa thaa ।
Havaam kaafi der tak use jor-jor se pukartaa rahaa ।
pahle Master aur ab Abu Nidaal ki laash dekhne ke baad vo maanon paagal ho chukaa thaa ।
vah nahin jaantaa thaa, uskaa is tarah commander ko pukaarnaa kitnaa khatarnaak hai ।
commander ne vahin ped par chhipe-chhipe Havaam ki khopedi kaa nishaanaa lagaanaa shuru kiyaa ।
Havaam, jo abhi tak Abu Nidaal ki laash ke aaspaas hi mandraa rahaa thaa, ekaaak use n jaane kyaa sujhaa ki vah lambe-lambe dag bhartaa huaa pahaadi ke dusri taraf chalaa gayaa ।
commander samajh n sakaa, use ekaaak kyaa huaa hai ।
baharhaal ab Havaam dikhaai denaa band ho gayaa thaa ।
commander phir bhi ‘mlaaykaa tiger krek’ chhaapaamaaron ki tarah ped par chhipaa baithaa rahaa aur Havaam ki kisi agli harakat ki prtikshaa karne lagaa ।
ped par baithe-baithe punah uske upar behoshi chhaane lagi aur commander ko aisaa ahsaas huaa, jaise vo abhi ludhakakar niche jaa giregaa ।
uski haalat sachamuch kaafi kharaab thi ।
bhukh se antadiyaa kulAbulaa rahi thi aur aadhe se jyaadaa sharir khun main nahaayaa huaa thaa । apne aapko behosh hone se bachaaye rakhne ke lia commander ne kandhe ke jakhm ko thodaa aur spring blade se kuradaa ।
iske javaab main ped se kaafi saare patte bhi tod-todakar khaaye aur Haversack bag main se cane nikaalakar paani bhi piyaa ।
commander ki tabiyat kuchh sambhli ।
parantu vo jaantaa thaa ki is prkaar jyaadaa der tak kaam chalne vaalaa nahin hai ।
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