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Rony ne vahin jhaadiyon main chhipe-chhipe fauran apni 9 mm ki pistol uski taraf taani aur phir uski khopedi kaa nishaanaa lagaakar trigger dabaa diyaa ।
lekin kismat bhi commander ke puri tarah saath thi ।
jaise hi cyanide bullet uski taraf jhapti, tabhi vo ladakhadaakar niche giraa । goli sanasnaati hui uske thik upar se gujar gayi ।
goli chalte hi commander khatraa bhaamp gayaa ।
vah ekadam jhapatakar jhaadiyon main jaa chhipaa ।
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dushman ek baar phir aamne-saamne the ।
jhaadiyo main chhipe hua ।
“tumne sahi nishaanaa n lagaakar gadabad kar di hai ।” Mike dare-dare lahje main bolaa- “uski haalat jakhmi sher jaisi hai, jiskaa mukaablaa karnaa aasaan n hogaa ।”
“mainne to apni taraf se puri koshish ki thi, lekin kismat bhi us haraamjaade kaa khub saath de rahi hai ।”
kaash vah donon samajh paate ki khatraa ab unke bilkul sir par mandraa rahaa hai ।
commander sirf jhaadiyon main chhipaa hi nahin thaa balki vah fauran jhaadiyon ke andar hi andar sirasraataa huaa ab badi teji se un donon ki taraf hi baad rahaa thaa ।
sniper rifelabhi bhi uske haath main thi ।
jald hi vo bilkul nishabd dhang se un donon ke pichhe jaa pahunchaa ।
Rony !
Mike !
donon ki pith ab uski taraf thi ।
commander ko dhokhe se un par vaar karnaa munaasib n lagaa ।
usne ek dusraa kaam kiyaa ।
usne pichhe se hi sniper rifel ke dvaaraa bazooka kaa nishaanaa lagaayaa aur trigger dabaa diyaa ।
Mike, jisne apne haath main kasakar bazooka pakadi hui thi, ekaaak uske haath ko itnaa tej jhatkaa lagaa, jaise chaar sau chaalis volt kaa karent lagaa ho । fauran bazooka uske haath se uchhalti hui najar aayi ।
dono bijli jaisi raphtaar se palte ।
Rony ne palatte hi apni 9 mm ki pistol se fire kar diyaa ।
commander ne jump li ।
goli uske bilkul karib se sanasnaati hui gujri ।
agar vo cyanide bullet use chhute hue bhi gujar jaati, to tab bhi uskaa kaam-tamaam ho jaataa ।
fauran hi Rony ne do fire aur kiye ।
do cyanide bullet commander ki taraf aur jhaptin, jinse bas vo baal-baal bachaa ।
Rony phir apni 9 mm ki pistol kaa trigger dabaa paataa, usse pahle hi commander ne sniper rifel kaa blast fire khol diyaa ।
dhaany-dhaany-dhaany !
ek saath kayi goliyaan Rony ke sharir main jaakar lagin । uski hriaday vidaarak chikh vaataavaran main gunjti chali gayi । uskaa sharir dhuaandhaar goliyaan lagne ki vajah se andhad main maujud sukhe patte ki tarah jor se kampakampaayaa । kayi jagah se khun ke phavvaare chhute aur phir vo chikhtaa huaa hi pichhe jhaadiyon main jaa giraa ।
is bich Mike ne chaalaaki se kaam liyaa ।
commander ki dahashat uske dilo-dimaag par etni buri tarah haavi ho chuki thi ki filhal usse takraane kaa khyaal tak use n sujhaa । usne fauran apni bazooka uthaai aur maidaan chhodakar bhaag khadaa huaa ।
Rony ko maarne ke baad commander ne Mike ko talaashaa ।
magar Mike use kahin n chamkaa ।
itnaa tay thaa, vo abhi vahin kahin aaspaas thaa । kyonki etni jaldi uske ‘monkey hill’ se bhaag nikalne kaa koi savaal hi nahin thaa ।
commander ne sniper rifel apne se aage taan li ।
uske baad usne badi alert position main us pahaadi kshetr main Mike ko talaashnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jhaadiyon main !
pedon par ।
chhoti-chhoti chattaanon ke pichhe ।
sab jagah vo Mike ko dekhtaa huaa aage bada ।
lekin Mike gadhe ke sir se sing ki tarah gaayab ho chukaa thaa ।
uskaa kahin kuchh pataa n thaa ।
vo n jaane kahaan jaa chhipaa thaa ।
commander kaafi der tak uski talaash main idhar-udhar bhataktaa rahaa । jab vo niraash hone hi vaalaa thaa, tabhi andhkaar main roshni ki tej kiran ki tarah use Mike dikhaai pedaa ।
darasal vahin ‘monkey hill’ par ek jharnaa thaa, jo ek unchi pahaadi se niche ki taraf gir rahaa thaa । ninratar upar se paani girtaa rahne ke kaaran chattaan main pichhe ki taraf thodaa saa gaddhaa bhi ho gayaa thaa । is vakt Mike jharne aur chattaan ke bich main paidaa hue usi gaddhe main chhipaa thaa ।
jharne kaa paani itnaa saaf thaa ki uske pichhe chhipe hua Mike ki jhalak commander ko saaf dikhaai pedi ।
vaakaayi !
Mike ne chhipne ke lia ek bahut behatrin jagah chuni thi ।
lekin chhipte samay vo bhul gayaa thaa, uskaa mukaablaa commander se hai । jiski nigaah se bachnaa aasaan nahin hotaa ।
Mike ko vahaan dekhne ke baad bhi commander ne aisaa jaahir kiyaa, jaise uski nigaahen uske upar n pedi hon ।
alabattaa ab vo had se jyaadaa saavdhaan ho gayaa thaa aur phir tahaltaa huaa pahle thodaa aage chalaa gayaa । uske baad usne side main us pahaadi ke upar ki taraf chadhnaa shuru kiyaa, jahaan se jharnaa niche bah rahaa thaa ।
jald hi commander pahaadi ke upar jaa pahunchaa ।
vahaan kaafi bade-bade patthar rakhe hua the । vah patthar kuchh is tarah ek ke upar ek tike hua the ki agar niche se kisi ek patthar ko bhi apni jagah se hillaa diyaa jaataa, to tamaam patthar gadagadaate hua dhadaadhad niche girte ।
haalaanki commander Karan Saxena jakhmi thaa, lekin phir bhi usne himmat dikhaai ।
usne apni sampurn shakti tatolakar niche rakhe ek patthar ko dhakelnaa shuru kiyaa ।
patthar abhi thodaa hi hillaa thaa ki upar rakhe saare patthar gadagadaate hua dhadaadhad niche girne shuru ho gaye । fauran hi commander ko jharne ke pichhe chhipe Mike ki hriadayavidaarak chikhen bhi sunaai din ।
vah buri tarah chilllaa rahaa thaa ।
karunaadaayi andaaj main ।
commander teji ke saath daudtaa huaa niche pahunchaa ।
jharne ke pichhe jo gaddhaa banaa huaa thaa, Mike ab vahaan faas chukaa thaa aur uske saamne kaafi patthar aakar jamaa ho gaye the ।
andar se abhi bhi Mike ki bhayankar chikh sunaayi de rahi thi ।
“nhin-nahin, ab aur yuddh nahin ।” Mike chilllaa rahaa thaa- “main marnaa nahin chaahtaa commander, mujhe baahar nikaalo ।”
commander kuchh der vahi khadaa haanphtaa rahaa ।
uski haalat kharaab thi ।
“please, mujhe baahar nikaalo ।” vah gidagidaane lagaa- “please commander, main marnaa nahin chaahtaa । main ab aur yuddh nahin chaahtaa ।”
uski aavaaj main behad karunaa kaa bhaav thaa ।
commander ko n jaane kyon us par dayaa aa gayi ।
usne phir apni sampurn shakti batori aur ek patthar ko dhakelnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jald hi usne ek patthar ko pichhe dhakel diyaa ।
andar Mike khun se lathapath pedaa huaa thaa-lekin bazooka abhi bhi uske haath me thi । saans ulte sidhe chal rahe the ।
“laao ।” commander Karan Saxena ne patthron ke bich main se apnaa haath Mike ki taraf badayaa- “apnaa haath mujhe do ।”
andar faase Mike ne fauran apnaa haath commander Karan Saxena ke haath main de diyaa ।
commander ne phir apni shakti batori aur puri taakat lagaakar use patthron ke dher main-se baahar pakadakar khinchaa ।
vah ragad khaataa huaa baahar nikal aayaa ।
“p...paani !” baahar aate hi Mike haath pair failaakar niche pad gayaa- “paani !”
commander ne apne Haversack bag main se paani ki cane nikaali । phir usne thodaa saa paani Mike ke munh main daalaa aur thodaa-saa khud piyaa ।
paani pite hi buri tarah haamphte Mike ke sharir main thodi jaan pedi । uski haalat kuchh sudhri ।
“t… tum sachamuch ek mahaan yauddhaa hone ke saath-saath ek mahaan ensaan bhi ho commander ।” vo haamphtaa huaa hi bolaa- “aye... ek mahaan ensaan bhi ho ।”
uske ulte sidhe chalte saans ab kuchh niyantrit hone lage the ।
“lekin ek baat kahun commander ।”
“kyaa ?”
“kisi aadmi ko itnaa jyaadaa achchhaa bhi nahi honaa chaahiye, jo vah apne dost aur dushman ke bich ke fark ko n samajh sake ।”
“k... kyaa matalab ?”
“matalab bhi abhi samajh aataa hai ।”
Mike ekaaak bijli jaisi advitiy phurti ke saath jhapatakar khadaa huaa aur usne apni bazooka commander ki taraf taan di ।
“tumhaari is sharaafat ne tumhaari saari mehanat bekaar kar di hain commander !” vah ekaaak jahrile naag ki tarah phumphkaar uthaa- “ak hi jhatke main tumhaare tamaam patte pit chuke hain । ab tum marne ke lia taiyaar ho jaao ।”
Mike ne jaise hi bazooka kaa livar dabaanaa chaahaa, turant commander ki round kick badi teji ke saath ghumi aur vo bhadaak se Mike ke sine par pedi ।
Mike ki chikh nikal gayi ।
tabhi round kick ki dusri laat ghumakar prachand veg se Mike ke chehre par pedi aur agle hi pal bazooka commander ke haath main dikhaai de rahi thi ।
Mike ke netr aatank se phate ke phate rah gaye ।
sab kuchh second ke saunve hisse main ho gayaa ।
“tum shaayad apne chhal-prapanch se bhare hua is khel main ek baat bhul gaye Mike ।” commander use behad nafaratabhri nigaahon se dekhtaa huaa bolaa- “jo aadmi jaan bachaanaa chaahtaa hai, vo jaan lenaa bhi jaantaa hai । good bye ।”
Rony ne vahin jhaadiyon main chhipe-chhipe fauran apni 9 mm ki pistol uski taraf taani aur phir uski khopedi kaa nishaanaa lagaakar trigger dabaa diyaa ।
lekin kismat bhi commander ke puri tarah saath thi ।
jaise hi cyanide bullet uski taraf jhapti, tabhi vo ladakhadaakar niche giraa । goli sanasnaati hui uske thik upar se gujar gayi ।
goli chalte hi commander khatraa bhaamp gayaa ।
vah ekadam jhapatakar jhaadiyon main jaa chhipaa ।
☐☐☐
dushman ek baar phir aamne-saamne the ।
jhaadiyo main chhipe hua ।
“tumne sahi nishaanaa n lagaakar gadabad kar di hai ।” Mike dare-dare lahje main bolaa- “uski haalat jakhmi sher jaisi hai, jiskaa mukaablaa karnaa aasaan n hogaa ।”
“mainne to apni taraf se puri koshish ki thi, lekin kismat bhi us haraamjaade kaa khub saath de rahi hai ।”
kaash vah donon samajh paate ki khatraa ab unke bilkul sir par mandraa rahaa hai ।
commander sirf jhaadiyon main chhipaa hi nahin thaa balki vah fauran jhaadiyon ke andar hi andar sirasraataa huaa ab badi teji se un donon ki taraf hi baad rahaa thaa ।
sniper rifelabhi bhi uske haath main thi ।
jald hi vo bilkul nishabd dhang se un donon ke pichhe jaa pahunchaa ।
Rony !
Mike !
donon ki pith ab uski taraf thi ।
commander ko dhokhe se un par vaar karnaa munaasib n lagaa ।
usne ek dusraa kaam kiyaa ।
usne pichhe se hi sniper rifel ke dvaaraa bazooka kaa nishaanaa lagaayaa aur trigger dabaa diyaa ।
Mike, jisne apne haath main kasakar bazooka pakadi hui thi, ekaaak uske haath ko itnaa tej jhatkaa lagaa, jaise chaar sau chaalis volt kaa karent lagaa ho । fauran bazooka uske haath se uchhalti hui najar aayi ।
dono bijli jaisi raphtaar se palte ।
Rony ne palatte hi apni 9 mm ki pistol se fire kar diyaa ।
commander ne jump li ।
goli uske bilkul karib se sanasnaati hui gujri ।
agar vo cyanide bullet use chhute hue bhi gujar jaati, to tab bhi uskaa kaam-tamaam ho jaataa ।
fauran hi Rony ne do fire aur kiye ।
do cyanide bullet commander ki taraf aur jhaptin, jinse bas vo baal-baal bachaa ।
Rony phir apni 9 mm ki pistol kaa trigger dabaa paataa, usse pahle hi commander ne sniper rifel kaa blast fire khol diyaa ।
dhaany-dhaany-dhaany !
ek saath kayi goliyaan Rony ke sharir main jaakar lagin । uski hriaday vidaarak chikh vaataavaran main gunjti chali gayi । uskaa sharir dhuaandhaar goliyaan lagne ki vajah se andhad main maujud sukhe patte ki tarah jor se kampakampaayaa । kayi jagah se khun ke phavvaare chhute aur phir vo chikhtaa huaa hi pichhe jhaadiyon main jaa giraa ।
is bich Mike ne chaalaaki se kaam liyaa ।
commander ki dahashat uske dilo-dimaag par etni buri tarah haavi ho chuki thi ki filhal usse takraane kaa khyaal tak use n sujhaa । usne fauran apni bazooka uthaai aur maidaan chhodakar bhaag khadaa huaa ।
Rony ko maarne ke baad commander ne Mike ko talaashaa ।
magar Mike use kahin n chamkaa ।
itnaa tay thaa, vo abhi vahin kahin aaspaas thaa । kyonki etni jaldi uske ‘monkey hill’ se bhaag nikalne kaa koi savaal hi nahin thaa ।
commander ne sniper rifel apne se aage taan li ।
uske baad usne badi alert position main us pahaadi kshetr main Mike ko talaashnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jhaadiyon main !
pedon par ।
chhoti-chhoti chattaanon ke pichhe ।
sab jagah vo Mike ko dekhtaa huaa aage bada ।
lekin Mike gadhe ke sir se sing ki tarah gaayab ho chukaa thaa ।
uskaa kahin kuchh pataa n thaa ।
vo n jaane kahaan jaa chhipaa thaa ।
commander kaafi der tak uski talaash main idhar-udhar bhataktaa rahaa । jab vo niraash hone hi vaalaa thaa, tabhi andhkaar main roshni ki tej kiran ki tarah use Mike dikhaai pedaa ।
darasal vahin ‘monkey hill’ par ek jharnaa thaa, jo ek unchi pahaadi se niche ki taraf gir rahaa thaa । ninratar upar se paani girtaa rahne ke kaaran chattaan main pichhe ki taraf thodaa saa gaddhaa bhi ho gayaa thaa । is vakt Mike jharne aur chattaan ke bich main paidaa hue usi gaddhe main chhipaa thaa ।
jharne kaa paani itnaa saaf thaa ki uske pichhe chhipe hua Mike ki jhalak commander ko saaf dikhaai pedi ।
vaakaayi !
Mike ne chhipne ke lia ek bahut behatrin jagah chuni thi ।
lekin chhipte samay vo bhul gayaa thaa, uskaa mukaablaa commander se hai । jiski nigaah se bachnaa aasaan nahin hotaa ।
Mike ko vahaan dekhne ke baad bhi commander ne aisaa jaahir kiyaa, jaise uski nigaahen uske upar n pedi hon ।
alabattaa ab vo had se jyaadaa saavdhaan ho gayaa thaa aur phir tahaltaa huaa pahle thodaa aage chalaa gayaa । uske baad usne side main us pahaadi ke upar ki taraf chadhnaa shuru kiyaa, jahaan se jharnaa niche bah rahaa thaa ।
jald hi commander pahaadi ke upar jaa pahunchaa ।
vahaan kaafi bade-bade patthar rakhe hua the । vah patthar kuchh is tarah ek ke upar ek tike hua the ki agar niche se kisi ek patthar ko bhi apni jagah se hillaa diyaa jaataa, to tamaam patthar gadagadaate hua dhadaadhad niche girte ।
haalaanki commander Karan Saxena jakhmi thaa, lekin phir bhi usne himmat dikhaai ।
usne apni sampurn shakti tatolakar niche rakhe ek patthar ko dhakelnaa shuru kiyaa ।
patthar abhi thodaa hi hillaa thaa ki upar rakhe saare patthar gadagadaate hua dhadaadhad niche girne shuru ho gaye । fauran hi commander ko jharne ke pichhe chhipe Mike ki hriadayavidaarak chikhen bhi sunaai din ।
vah buri tarah chilllaa rahaa thaa ।
karunaadaayi andaaj main ।
commander teji ke saath daudtaa huaa niche pahunchaa ।
jharne ke pichhe jo gaddhaa banaa huaa thaa, Mike ab vahaan faas chukaa thaa aur uske saamne kaafi patthar aakar jamaa ho gaye the ।
andar se abhi bhi Mike ki bhayankar chikh sunaayi de rahi thi ।
“nhin-nahin, ab aur yuddh nahin ।” Mike chilllaa rahaa thaa- “main marnaa nahin chaahtaa commander, mujhe baahar nikaalo ।”
commander kuchh der vahi khadaa haanphtaa rahaa ।
uski haalat kharaab thi ।
“please, mujhe baahar nikaalo ।” vah gidagidaane lagaa- “please commander, main marnaa nahin chaahtaa । main ab aur yuddh nahin chaahtaa ।”
uski aavaaj main behad karunaa kaa bhaav thaa ।
commander ko n jaane kyon us par dayaa aa gayi ।
usne phir apni sampurn shakti batori aur ek patthar ko dhakelnaa shuru kiyaa ।
jald hi usne ek patthar ko pichhe dhakel diyaa ।
andar Mike khun se lathapath pedaa huaa thaa-lekin bazooka abhi bhi uske haath me thi । saans ulte sidhe chal rahe the ।
“laao ।” commander Karan Saxena ne patthron ke bich main se apnaa haath Mike ki taraf badayaa- “apnaa haath mujhe do ।”
andar faase Mike ne fauran apnaa haath commander Karan Saxena ke haath main de diyaa ।
commander ne phir apni shakti batori aur puri taakat lagaakar use patthron ke dher main-se baahar pakadakar khinchaa ।
vah ragad khaataa huaa baahar nikal aayaa ।
“p...paani !” baahar aate hi Mike haath pair failaakar niche pad gayaa- “paani !”
commander ne apne Haversack bag main se paani ki cane nikaali । phir usne thodaa saa paani Mike ke munh main daalaa aur thodaa-saa khud piyaa ।
paani pite hi buri tarah haamphte Mike ke sharir main thodi jaan pedi । uski haalat kuchh sudhri ।
“t… tum sachamuch ek mahaan yauddhaa hone ke saath-saath ek mahaan ensaan bhi ho commander ।” vo haamphtaa huaa hi bolaa- “aye... ek mahaan ensaan bhi ho ।”
uske ulte sidhe chalte saans ab kuchh niyantrit hone lage the ।
“lekin ek baat kahun commander ।”
“kyaa ?”
“kisi aadmi ko itnaa jyaadaa achchhaa bhi nahi honaa chaahiye, jo vah apne dost aur dushman ke bich ke fark ko n samajh sake ।”
“k... kyaa matalab ?”
“matalab bhi abhi samajh aataa hai ।”
Mike ekaaak bijli jaisi advitiy phurti ke saath jhapatakar khadaa huaa aur usne apni bazooka commander ki taraf taan di ।
“tumhaari is sharaafat ne tumhaari saari mehanat bekaar kar di hain commander !” vah ekaaak jahrile naag ki tarah phumphkaar uthaa- “ak hi jhatke main tumhaare tamaam patte pit chuke hain । ab tum marne ke lia taiyaar ho jaao ।”
Mike ne jaise hi bazooka kaa livar dabaanaa chaahaa, turant commander ki round kick badi teji ke saath ghumi aur vo bhadaak se Mike ke sine par pedi ।
Mike ki chikh nikal gayi ।
tabhi round kick ki dusri laat ghumakar prachand veg se Mike ke chehre par pedi aur agle hi pal bazooka commander ke haath main dikhaai de rahi thi ।
Mike ke netr aatank se phate ke phate rah gaye ।
sab kuchh second ke saunve hisse main ho gayaa ।
“tum shaayad apne chhal-prapanch se bhare hua is khel main ek baat bhul gaye Mike ।” commander use behad nafaratabhri nigaahon se dekhtaa huaa bolaa- “jo aadmi jaan bachaanaa chaahtaa hai, vo jaan lenaa bhi jaantaa hai । good bye ।”
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Gjbb ab last enemy bacha hua hai
Gjbb ab last enemy bacha hua hai
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Gjb ki furti hai commander ne...
Best story hai yr....
Mst tha update
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Mst tha update
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