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Romance SIRF TUM!!!

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CHAPTER – 1

{PAST – RIGHT YA WRONG}


UPDATE – 1

{SCENE – 1} :-

I LOVE YOU JAHANVI….

I LOVE YOU TOO VIVAN….

Aur itna kehte hi dono gale lag gaye…..

Woohooo.. *Clap* .. *Clap* .. *Clap*.. Woohooo..

Ye scene hai ek Hotel ka, jahaan par abhi abhi ek ladke ne ek ladki ko propose kiya aur usne accept bhi kar liya. Wahin ye taaliyan aur shorgul hai wahaan maujood in dono ke doston ka jo khush hain inke liye…

Jahaan ladke ke chehre par aseem khushi hai wahin ladki apne chehre par khushi ke saath ek bahot hi khubsurat sharm bhi odhe huye hai….

SCENE CHANGE…. {SCENE – 2} :-

Ab ye drishya hai samandar kinaare ka… Jahaan maujood hai wahi ladka aur ladki. Is samay ladki ne ladke ke kandhe par sar rakha hua hai. Wahin ladka uske baalon mein ungliyan ghuma raha hai. Dono ki hi aankhen band hain. Tabhi,

LADKI – Mujhe na dar lag raha hai VIVAN, tum kabhi mujhe chhodkar mat jaana…

LADKA – Jaan, kis baat ka dar, main hamesha tumhaare saath hun…

LADKI – Aesa.. Aesa lag raha hai ki kuchh bura hone waala hai, bahut bura.

LADKA – Shhh.. Kuchh nahi hoga, Main hoon na, tum idhar aao…

Aur itna kehkar uss ladke ne ladki ko apni baahon mein bhar liya….

SCENE CHANGE.. {SCENE – 3} :-

Ye drishya hai ek hospital room ka, yahaan bhi wahi dono ladka – ladki hain, par unke saath ek aur ladki aur ek aadmi – aurat bhi hain….

LADKI – Why , just Why, Why did you do this… Kyon kiya tumne ye?

Ye bol hain ussi ladki ke, jo filhaal patients ke kapdon mein bed par leti hai aur aankhon mein aansoon liye chillakar uss ladke se ye sawaal kar rahi hai.

Ladke ke chehre par muskaan hai par aankhon mein dard ka samandar, kuchh , kuchh tha jo usse apne andar toot ta hua sa mehsoos ho raha tha.

LADKI – Chale jaao, chale jaao yahaan se aur fir kabhi bhi apni shakal mat dikhana mujhe… Just get Lost….

Wahaan maujood uss aurat ne ek dhakka sa de diya usse ladki ke itna kehne ke baad, aur wo bhi ladkhadata hua kamre se baahar jaane laga, darwaaze par pahunchkar usne peechhe mudkar uss doosri ladki ko dekha aur kuchh ishara kiya, jo wo bhi nam aankhen liye samajh gayi.

Aur fir apni premika jo ab shayad bichhad gayi thi usse nihara aur tezz kadmon se baahar chala gaya… Baahar nikalte hi usne jo ashrudhaara rok rakhi thi, wo beh gayi aur wo rote huye chal raha tha….

Tabhi….

BOSS.. BOSS.. BOSS..

Ek aadmi joki kaale suit boot mein tha kisi ko aawaz laga raha tha joki iss waqt wheel chair par baitha shunya ko ghoor raha tha. Uski aawaz se wheel chair waale ladke ki chetna lauti aur wo apni yaadon se baahar aaya. Ji haan yahi hai wo ladka – “VIVAN”. Ye yahaan baitha apni yaadon mein gum tha aur ab waapis asliyat mein aaya tha, uss ladke ne uss suit boot waale aadmi ki taraf ghoora,

AADMI – Sorry Boss par wo LAVANYA ka phone aaya tha, meeting ka time ho raha hai.

LADKA – Thik hai KHAN. Chalo.

[ INTRO :- ASHFAQ KHAN :- Age :- 34. Sirf do hi aese hai jinki ASHFAQ ibaadat karta hai. Sabse pehle Khuda ki, aur fir uss ladke VIVAN ki. Agar isse VIVAN ke liye apni jaan deni pade ya fir kisi ki bhi jaan leni pade, ye peechhe nahi hatega.

Do kaaran hain iss samarpan bhaav ke. Jo ki aapko aage kahani mein pata chal jaayenge. Bas filhaal ke liye itna samajh lijiye ki VIVAN ke baare mein, uske past ke baare mein agar koyi sabkuchh jaanta hai to wo ASHFAQ hi hai.

VIVAN pehle isse bhaijaan bulata tha par isne saaf keh diya tha ki wo isse naam se hi bulaaye. Isiliye wo isse KHAN kehkar bulaata hai. ]

Arre haan maine aapko iss jagah ke baare mein to kuchh bataya hi nahi,

“ SHANTI VAN ” – Yahi naam hai iss jagah ka. 100 acre mein faila ek bahut hi khubsurat mini jungle hai ye. BANGLORE ke rihaayashi ilaakon se door prakriti ki god mein shaanti se bharpoor ye jagah, dharti par swarg hai. Jaise hi aap ismein enter karte hain wahin par bade aksharon mein iss jagah ka naam likha hai.

Kayi prakaar ke ped hain iss sthaan par , lekin sabse khubsurat baat ye hai ki VIVAN bhaisahab ne iss jungle ke madhya mein ek bahut hi sundar lakdi ka ghar banwaya hua hai. Jiske chaaron taraf phool hi phool hain.
Jaanwar khatarnaak waale nahi hain par khargosh , gilehri (squirrel) , parrots aur paas hi mein ek atti sundar nadi hai jismein alag alag prakaar ki machhliyan bhi hain…

BACK TO STORY :-

To, ASHFAQ ke kehne par VIVAN ne bhi apni wheel chair ek disha ki taraf badha di. Haan iski wheel chair automatic hai, bole to, buttons se operate ki jaati hai. Jaise hi ye uss ghar ki range se baahar aaye to raaste ke dono taraf suit – boot mein aadmi guns ke saath maujood the.

Jab ye SHANTI VAN ke baahar pahunche to ek line mein kitni hi gaadiyan khadi thi. Beech mein ek special car thi , uske aage peechhe 10 – 10 gaadiyan thi. Wo sabhi suit boot waale aadmi unn gaadiyon mein baith gaye. Tabhi beech waali gaadi ke baahar ek button maujood tha, usse ASHFAQ ne daba diya, aur wo gaadi dono sides se khulti chali gayi, aur saath hi uska base bhi zameen ke level par aa gaya. Ye Car GERMANY ki ek company ko special contract dekar taiyaar karwaayi gayi hai. Taaki VIVAN ko problem na ho. Total mein aisi 2 gaadiyan hai iske paas.

VIVAN ne apni wheel chair aage badha di aur car mein position le li. Tabhi ASHFAQ ne wo button dobara dabaya aur car pehle jaisi ho gayi. Wo bhi aage driver ke saath baith gaya. Aur kaafila aage badh chala.

PLACE :- J & V GROUP OF COMPANIES (BANGLORE)

Hindustan ki sabse badi companies mein shumaar, jiske shares pichhle do saal mein ek baar bhi nahi gire hain. VIVAN kiska MD aur CEO dono hai. Iski world wide 7 branches hain aur 8th joki head office hai wo BANGLORE mein hai. VIVAN ke alawa sirf ASHFAQ hi jaanta hai J & V ki full form.

Kuchh aadhe ghante ki drive ke baad gaadiyon ka kaafila yahaan pahuncha aur VIVAN apni gaadi se nikal kar aage ki taraf badh chala. ASHFAQ uske saath hi tha aur baaki sab guards apni apni position par chale gaye.

Aaj yahaan par meeting rakhi gayi hai. Kisliye? Wo isliye kyonki aaj FRANCE ki STEVE ENTERPRISES joki Aaj ki tareekh mein duniya ki sabse badi Software and Technology companies mein se ek hai uska har saal announce hone waala sabse bada contract aaj yahaan ki meeting mein pesh hoga.

Pichhle teen saalon se ye contract J & V GROUP ko hi mil raha hai. Aur iss baar bhi sabko yahi umeed hai. Par iss baar ek change hai..

NAVYA GROUP OF COMPANIES..

[ INTRO :- NAVYA KAPOOR :- Age – 25. Ek bade baap ki beti, bole to Papa ki Pari. Maa bachpan mein hi guzar gayi thi. Aur Papa ne bade laad pyaar se paala hai isse. Iss company ki neev iske Papa ne rakhi thi (MADHAV KAPOOR). Aur ab pichhle do saal se ye iss Company ki nayi MD hai. Ghamandi to hai, aur ye cheez laazmi bhi hai, hadh se zyada khubsurat aur behisaab paisa , ghamand to saath mein hona hi hai.

Ab technology field mein VIVAN ki company no. 1 hai aur ye Madam ki no. 2. Aaj tak ye VIVAN se mili nahi hain. Aur naahi inhe pata hai ki iss company ka maalik kaun hai. Iss saal pehli baar inki Company STEVE ENTERPRISES ke Contract ki line mein hai. Kaaran baad mein Bataunga. ]

Ab aap kahenge ki kisi company ke contract ki meeting kisi aur ke office mein kyon? To iska jawaab ye hai ki STEVE MELTZER ek bahut badi hasti hai aur saal mein ek do baar hi India aata hai. Filhaal yahaan par hai aur main maksad yahaan aane ka ye meeting nahi balki VIVAN se ek AI Programme kharidna hai.

Kuchh din pehle hi VIVAN ki company ne ye programme banakar iski announcement ki thi. Ye ek bahut hi secure programme hai jiske zariye aapka server har tarah ki hacking se bach sakta hai. Aur isiliye STEVE ko ye cheez har keemat par chahiye. Isiliye usne yahaan meeting rakhne ka insist kiya taaki dono kaam ek saath ho jaayen.

THE MEETING HALL ...

Yahaan par maujood hai STEVE ENTERPRISES ka maalik STEVE MELTZER aur saath mein uski team, SHARMA GROUP ke maalik SURAJ SHARMA & team and at last NAVYA KAPOOR with her team. Tabhi meeting hall ka darwaza khulta hai aur sabki nazren uss taraf ho jaati hain. Wahaan se andar aata hai VIVAN apni wheel chair par , usse dekh kar NAVYA ki aankhen uspar jam si gayi thi, handsome hi bahut hai lounda apna. Wahin STEVE apni jagah se khada ho gaya. VIVAN aur STEVE ne haath milaaya. Aur VIVAN apni jagah par pahunch gaya.

Uske saath mein hi meeting room mein ASHFAQ aur saath hi do ladkiyon ne enter kiya. Ye dono VIVAN ki secretary hain.

[ INTRO :- VRINDA DESAI & LAVANYA ROY :- Age – 24. Dono best – friends aur saath hi bala ki Khubsurat bhi. Bachpan se hi saath mein padhi hain. Harvard University se Business Management ki padhayi ki hai. Dono hi ladkiyan genius hain.

Chaar saal pehle jab VIVAN ne ye Company shuru ki thi tab se hi ye dono company ki progress follow kar rahi thi aur uss se kaafi impressed bhi huyi thi. Isiliye 3 saal pehle jab ye dono studies complete karke India lauti to seedhe hi iss company mein apply kar diya aur select bhi ho gayi.

In dono ne VIVAN ko kabhi bhi khush to chhodo halki si smile dete huye bhi nahi dekha. Reason ye dono jaan na chahti hai par abhi tak to anjaan hi hain. ]

To NAVYA abhi bhi VIVAN ke chehre mein khoyi huyi thi wahin STEVE ne meeting shuru kar di. Sabse pehle SHARMA JI ne presentation di. Waise to badiya hi thi par..

Uske baad NAVYA madam ki baari thi aur uski presentation dekh kar STEVE saahab aur saath hi SURAJ saahab bahut impress the… SURAJ ko to lag raha tha ki iss baar VIVAN ke haath se contract gaya aur iss baat par wo bahut khush ho raha tha.

Par VIVAN ka chehra bhaav heen tha, koyi expression nahi, aankhen bhi bilkul khaali thi. Par uski dono secretaries tension mein thi. Haalanki unhe confidence to tha ke VIVAN ke caliber ka banda in sabme se koyi nahi hai. Par fir bhi insaan hai , tension to hoti hi hai…

Fir VIVAN ne apni presentation shuru ki aur uske poore hone ke baad shakh shuba ki koyi gunjaaish baaki nahi thi. NAVYA hairaan bhi thi aur dukhi bhi. Usne poore 2 mahine iss din ke liye mehnat ki thi par ab wo bhi samajh gayi thi ke ye contract uske haath se gaya hi samjho. Aur LAVANYA & VRINDA bhi khushi se fooli nahi sama rahi thi… Aur fir,

STEVE – So, this year’s contract again goes to J & V GROUP. Congratulations to you guys.

Is ghoshna ko sunkar jahaan VRINDA aur LAVANYA ke chehre khil gaye, wahin SHARMA Ji ka muh chhota sa ho gaya. Par VIVAN ko to jaise iss sab se koyi lena – dena hi nahi tha. Abhi bhi bhaav heen chehra liye hua tha ye.

NAVYA ye cheez note kar rahi thi. Aapko bata doon ki NAVYA ne psychology bhi as a subject liya tha apni studies ke dauran aur ye chehre padhna jaanti hai. Par VIVAN ke bhaav heen chehre aur khaali aankhen dekh kar ye bahut hairaan thi. Kabhi bhi isne kisi ko aese expression less nahi dekha tha aur wo bhi itni badi kaamyaabi milne ke baad to katayi nahi.

Chalo inka kaam khatam ho gaya aur ye sab yahaan se thodi bahot baat – cheet ke baad nikal gaye. Par VIVAN aur STEVE apni programme waali baat – cheet final kar rahe the. Chalo ye sab to chalta rahega. Abhi waqt hai iska…

[ INTRO :- VIVAN DIXIT :- Age – 25. Ye chal fir nahi sakta. Bahut hi masoom sa chehra. Aankhon ki putliyon ka rang neela hai iski. Face cut ek dum perfect. Waise to ofcourse ye koyi exercise wagerah nahi kar sakta par fir bhi diet conscious hone ke kaaran katayi fat nahi hai shareer mein. Halki daadhi hai chehre par aur baal halke lambe hain iske.

Aaj ki tareekh mein India ka sabse fast growing businessman. Iske Maa – Baap bachpan mein hi guzar gaye the. Koyi bhai behen to tha nahi to iske ek Chacha Chachi ne isse paala. Ek bojh hi samajhte the wo isse. Maarna peetna, ghar ke kaam karwana, gaaliyan dena ye iske saath routine mein karte the wo log. Jab isne 12th complete ki to wo ghar chhodkar DELHI chala gaya.

Wahaan isne ek reputed Business College se graduation kiya aur fir iske jeewan mein kuchh aesa hua ki aaj se chaar saal pehle ye BANGLORE chala aaya. Yahaan aakar isne ye company stapith ki jisne kuchh hi samay mein aasman ki unchaiyon ko chhoo liya.

Hamesha hi shaant sa rehta hai. Zyada baat – cheet karna isse pasand nahi. Dost ke naam par akelaapan aur khamoshi hi hai iske paas. Iske shareer mein sirf iska sar aur dono baazuen hi kaam karti hain, baaki saara shareer bejaan sa hai. Iska koyi accident nahi hua tha par fir bhi ye haalat hai. Kaaran iss kahani ka sabse bada raaz hai.

JAHANVI MANSION , yahi naam hai iske ghar ka jisse ghar to bilkul nahi kaha jaa sakta. Ek Mahal hi hai wo. Ye hafte mein 3 ya 4 baar SHANTI VAN zaroor jaata hai aur kaafi samay wahaan akela baitha shunya ko niharta rehta hai. Iss dauran koyi bhi isse disturb kare ye cheez bilkul bhi bardaasht nahi kar paata ye.

Zyada logon ne iska chehra nahi dekha hai. Sirf office staff, iski security aur kuchh gine chune clients hi jaante hain ki ye itni badi company ka maalik hai. Media mein aaj tak iski ek bhi tasveer nahi chhapi. Kaaran ye hai ki 3 saal pehle ek fake case kiya gaya tha iss company par jiske dauran media ne badha chadhakar isse doshi ghoshit kar diya tha. Baad mein Court mein nirdosh saabit hone par VIVAN ki request par Court ne Media houses ko iss company ke maslon se door rehne ki sakht hidayat di thi. ]


AKELAPAN AUR KHAMOSHI,
JAB CHHAA JAAYEN SAB JAGAH.
SAMAJH LENA KE DUKH AUR UDAASI MERI,
NAHI HAI BEWAJAH…..


Aaj ke liye itna hi guys..

Milte hain agle Update mein..
Bahut behtarren update bhidu.....scene1 me jo ladka ladki ko propose kr rha tha wo vivan tha pr wo ladki kon thi ..ye abhi suspense hai...scene2 ek samundar ke kinare do ladka or ladki bethe the I think 🤔 isme ek to vivan hoga dusri wahi suspense ladki hogi ya fir koi or hoga? Vivan ek badi company ka malik hokar bhi akela rehta hai kehne ko to sab kuch hai pr fir bhi saath hokar bhi ye akela hai.....navya kapoor ghamandu ladki hai ye jaroor iske peeche aayegi ...pr aisa kya hua bina accident hokar bhi iske legs bekar ho gye? Dekhte hai aage kya majedar hota hai..
 
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Hello to all the members of XForum. Ye meri iss forum par pehli kahani hai aur mujhe umeed hai ke aap sabko ye kahani pasand bhi aayegi.

Jaisa ke story ke naam –
“SIRF TUM!!!” se shayad aapne guess kar hi liya hoga ke ye ek romantic kahani hone waali hai. Halka fulka action aur saath hi suspense bhi dekhne milegaa aapko iss kahani mein.

So, I hope ke iss kahani ke journey mein mujhe kuchh shaandar readers ka saath milegaa jo apne review aur comments se mera utsaah badhayenge. And agar kuchh bhi improvement ki zaroorat lage aapko story mein toh zaroor bataaiyega.

Kal subah pehla update post ho jaayega & starting mein daily updates ki koshish rahegi but aage ka schedule main keh nahi sakta. Workload bhi dekhna hoga aur ussi mutaabik story ke updates aayenge.


Thanks and Be Along!!!
Bhai bas update post karte jao...10-15 update hone par hi reader jutate hai..bcz yaha aadha se adhik writer bhagode hai...for example Kingfisher
 

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Bahut behtarren update bhidu.....scene1 me jo ladka ladki ko propose kr rha tha wo vivan tha pr wo ladki kon thi ..ye abhi suspense hai...scene2 ek samundar ke kinare do ladka or ladki bethe the I think 🤔 isme ek to vivan hoga dusri wahi suspense ladki hogi ya fir koi or hoga? Vivan ek badi company ka malik hokar bhi akela rehta hai kehne ko to sab kuch hai pr fir bhi saath hokar bhi ye akela hai.....navya kapoor ghamandu ladki hai ye jaroor iske peeche aayegi ...pr aisa kya hua bina accident hokar bhi iske legs bekar ho gye? Dekhte hai aage kya majedar hota hai..
Thnx a lot brother.. Teeno scenes mein ladka hero VIVAN hi tha aur uske saath wahi ladki thi – “JAHANVI”.. Sirf legs hi nahi bhai bazuon ko chhodkar poora shareer bejaan hai.. Kaaran saamne aane mein abhi time hai..

Thnx again & Be Along..
 

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Ju ko kuchh nhi kahana hai bas ek baar kingu ne ye dekh liya to mujhe pm me bhajan senayega...aur ju ko ek aur reader mil jayega...kyo Xabhi , ragish7357 ,The king
Mujhe kyo Bich me la rha hai Bhai Maine mushkil se 1 Ya 2 Romance ki story padhi hai usme se ek ke writer ne sadi kr li to busy hai dusre hai Apne Mahi ji jyada romance Apne ko pachta na hai Apan to incest lover hai sath me fantasy adventure or action thoda Bahut horror bhi...
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Mujhe kyo Bich me la rha hai Bhai Maine mushkil se 1 Ya 2 Romance ki story padhi hai usme se ek ke writer ne sadi kr li to busy hai dusre hai Apne Mahi ji jyada romance Apne ko pachta na hai Apan to incest lover hai sath me fantasy adventure or action thoda Bahut horror bhi...
Pr mention kiya hai to revo jarur dunga kabhi na kabhi
Jarur Revo Dena ...waise bhi filhal Jay Bhai nhi hai to ek baar idhar bhi dekh lo ...kafi achchha laga mujhe ye story ...
 

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CHAPTER – 1

{PAST – RIGHT YA WRONG}


UPDATE – 2

PLACE :- SHUKLA SADAN (DELHI)


PLACE INFO :- DELHI ke DWARKA shehar mein bana ek bahut hi khubsurat sa ghar. Zyada bada nahi hai par haan ek duplex makaan bol sakte hain isse. Chaar kamre, ek kitchen, chhota sa ek hall , ek garden aur oopar terrace. Basically ek upper middle class family ka ghar kaha jaa sakta hai isse.


BACK TO STORY :-

Iss ghar ke terrace par khadi hai ek ladki jo iss samay apalak chaand ko nihaar rahi hai. Ya yun kahun ke usmein kisi aur ko hi dekh rahi hai. Aankhon mein peeda ke saath saath ek gussa.. krodh aur ghrina bhi spasht dekhe jaa sakte hain. Wahin terrace ke muhaane par khade ek aadmi – aurat joki shayad iss ladki ke Mata – Pita hain nam aankhon se apni beti ko dekh rahen hain.

Wo aurat shayad apni beti ko iss haalat mein aur der tak naa dekh paayi aur rote huye neeche ki aur chali gayi. Wo aadmi bhi ek nazar apni beti ko dekhne ke baad neeche chale gaye.

Wo aurat neeche hall mein baithi fafak fafak kar rone lagi aur wo aadmi unhe chup karwaane ki koshish mein lage the. Aankhen to unki bhi nam hi thi par fir bhi wo apne dukh ko pare rakh kar unki peeda kam karne ki koshish kar rahe the. Ke tabhi ghar ke main door par kuchh aahat huyi aur un dono ki nazar uss taraf chali gayi.

Wahaan darwaaze par khade the ek ladki aur ek ladka jinhone andar aakar baari baari se un aadmi & aurat ke charan sparsh kiye aur wahin sofa par baith gaye. Uss aurat ko dekh kar hi wo maamla samajh gaye the par wo bhi jaante the ke is sabme kuchh kar paana unke bas ki baat thi hi nahi.

Chaliye sabse pehle kuchh jaan pehchaan ho jaaye in sab kirdaaron se,

[ INTRO :- PRABAL SHUKLA & DEVYANI SHUKLA :- Age – 50 & 47. Terrace par khadi uss ladki ke Mata Pita. Shayad hi koyi itna bebas ho jitna ye dono khud ko mehsoos karte hain. Jis beti ko ye dono jaan se zyada pyaar karte hain uske dard ki koyi dawa nahi hai inke paas. Sab kuchh jaante huye bhi ye dono kuchh nahi kar sakte.

UPDATE – 1 ke {SCENE – 3} mein maujood wo aadmi aur aurat yahi dono the. PRABAL SHUKLA ek chhota sa Import – Export ka business chalate hain aur theek thaak aamdani bhi ho jaati hai inki uss se. Wahin inki Mrs. ek house wife hain aur wo ghar ko sambhaalti hain. ]

[ INTRO :- MEHUL LUTHRA & KANIKA KAUL :- Age – 25. Ye dono hi uss terrace waali ladki ke college friends hain. Aur ye dono bhi wo baat jaante hain jiske kaaran uss ladki ki ye haalat hai. Aksar yahaan aate rehte hain taaki kisi tarah uss ladki ka mann behlaya jaa sake aur uski hasi khushi jo kabki chhin gayi hai wo usse waapis dilaayi jaa sake.

MEHUL & KANIKA ki sagaayi ho chuki hai aur jaise hi ye dono apne apne career mein thoda stable ho jaayenge shaadi ki planning shuru karne ki scope bhi ban jaayegi. Ye dono hi NOIDA aur NCR based ek IT company mein achhi posts par job karte hain. Par aage inke plans aapas mein partnership mein ek naya business start karne ke hain.

Ek zaroori baat ye ki UPDATE – 1 ke hospital scene mein jiss doosri ladki ka zikr hua tha, jisse VIVAN ne jaate jaate kuchh ishaara kiya tha wo koyi aur nahi balki KANIKA hi hai. Ab kya masla tha aur kya ishaara kiya tha ye sab to aage pata chalega. ]

KANIKA – Aunty wo kahaan hai?

DEVYANI – Aur kahaan hogi. Terrace par akeli khadi hai. Pata nahi hamari bachi ke saath hi aesa kyon hua. Sab kuchh uss.. uss ladke..

Aakhiri shabd kehte huye ek krodh ki jawala si bhadak uthi thi unki aankhon mein aur saath hi ek kadvahat saaf prateet ho rahi thi unki aawaz mein,

PRABAL ( Shouts ) – Naam mat lena uss kamine ka DEVYANI… Uska naam tak gaali lagta hai mujhe.

Poore gusse mein kahi thi ye baat unhone aur uss gusse ki hadh ko darsha raha tha unka shareer jismein ye baat kehne ke dauran kampan hone lagi thi.

MEHUL – Aunty ham uss se milkar aate hain.

ON THE TERRACE..

Wo ladki abhi bhi ussi mudra mein khadi thi. Ek sunapan sa jhalak raha tha uske chehre par joki gawaah tha uske dil mein uth rahe uss dard ka jo naa usse theek se jeene de raha tha aur naa hi marne. Chehra bhale hi sapaat ho uska par fir bhi uski aankhen kaafi thi bataane ke liye uska dard… uski takleef.. aur saath hi batane ke liye ke shayad ab uski zindagi se khushiyon ki chaah hi samaapt ho gayi thi.

Kherr! Uss ladki ko wahin paas mein hi khade dekh rahe the MEHUL aur KANIKA jo abhi abhi yahaan terrace par aaye the. Dono hi uske dard ko mehsoos kar sakte the parr uska ilaaz to nahi hi ho sakta tha. Kuchh palon baad KANIKA ne uss ladki ko awaaz lagayi…

KANIKA – JAHANVI…

[ INTRO :- JAHANVI SHUKLA :- Age – 24. Khubsoorti ki agar koyi aakhiri hadh ho sakti hai to wo yahi hai. Ek noorani chehre aur saath hi ek roohani dil ki mallika hai ye..

Aankhen.. Brown colour ki putliyon se saji iski dono aankhen kisi ko bhi unmein kho jaane ko majboor kar den..

Baal.. Lambe, gehre kaale baal jismein jhalakti ek bhoore rang ki latt unki Khoobsurti ko aur bhi badha deti hai..

Honth.. Gulaabi rangat odhe iske teekhe honth kisi ko bhi apni aur aakarshit kar len. Aur unke neeche bana wo til inki khubsurti mein chaar chaand lagane ke liye kaafi hai..

Chehra.. ek behadh hi santulit chehra. Jiska aakar halka elliptical ya kahun ke oval shaped kaha jaa sakta hai… Atyant gore rang par halke laal rang ke dore bhi spasht nazar aate hain… Maano yadi thoda bhi pressure daala jaaye chehre par to wo laal rang poore chehre ko hi apni zadh mein le le..

Shareer bhi apne aap mein hi ek misaal joki iske uss divya chehre ko poori tarah se Nyaya deta hai. Kahin se bhi excess fat nazar nahi aata joki saaf dikhata hai ke apne aapko kiss kadar fit rakha gaya hai…

Agar kam shabdon mein hi tareef karni ho to iss gaane ke bol shayad fit baithenge ke..

“Meri Aankhon Ko Ye Kaisa Manzar Mila,
Tere Har Naksh Mein Bas Khuda Hi Khuda..”

Kherr! Ek IT company mein hi job karti hai ye bhi. Aur kuchh hi samay mein sabko apni mehnat aur lagan se impress kar liya hai isne. Filhaal iski zindagi ka matlab sirf office se ghar aur ghar se office hi hai.

Baaki inke character ke baare mein aap kahani ke saath jaante jaayenge. ]

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KANIKA ki aawaz kaano mein padne par jaise hi ye palti iski bheegi aankhen aur unmein base dard ko dekh kar un dono ke dil mein bhi ek tees apne aap hi paida ho gayi. Apni aankhen ponchkar..

JAHANVI – Tum dono yahaan, iss waqt.

MEHUL – Haan tumse hi milne aaye the. Tum thik ho naa??

JAHANVI ( ek feeki muskaan ke saath ) – Shayad haan ya shayad naa..

KANIKA ne aage badhkar usse gale laga liya aur kaha…

KANIKA – Apne aap ko sambhaalo JAHANVI. Sab thik ho jaayega.

JAHANVI – Jab 4 saalon mein kuchh thik nahi hua to aage bhi kya hi badal jaayega. Kherr.. meri to shayad kismat mein hi ye sab hai. Tum dono chinta mat karo… I’m fine.

KANIKA – Tum hamse jhooth bol sakti ho, baaki sabse bhi bol sakti ho par khudse nahi. Tum thik nahi ho JAHANVI… Bahut ho gaya ab. Apne baare mein nahi to kamse kam Uncle Aunty ke baare mein hi socho. Unpar kya guzarti hogi jab wo tumhe iss haal mein dekhte honge?

KANIKA ki baat sunkar JAHANVI ki aankhon se ek baar fir moti chhalak gaye.

JAHANVI – Main kya karoon… main nahi bhula sakti usse. Wo meri nas nas mein.. yahaan tak ki meri saanson mein bhi bas chuka hai. Kitni koshish karti hoon ke usse bhula doon par nahi hota mujhse. I’m.. I’m just helpless…

Aur itna kehkar wo KANIKA ke gale lag gayi aur foot – foot kar rone lagi. KANIKA bhi uske sar ko sehlakar usse shaant karne ki koshish karne lagi. Kuchh der baad jab wo shaant huyi to KANIKA aur MEHUL ne aur zyada uss baare mein baat karna uchit naa samjha. Kuchh der baat karne ke baad wo waapis chale gaye.

IN THE CAR...

MEHUL – JAHANVI ki condition theek nahi hai ANI ( MEHUL calls her this ). Its deteriorating daily.

KANIKA – You’re right MEHUL. Kaash ke hum uske liye kuchh kar paate.

MEHUL – She’s a pure soul ANI. Wo ye sab deserve nahi karti. Uncle Aunty ko dekh kar sachmein bahut dukh hota hai. Ek beti waise hi hospital mein hai aur doosri..

KANIKA – We can just hope ke kabhi to sab theek hoga.

Achaanak hi MEHUL ki aankhon mein gussa utar aata hai…

MEHUL – Tum mujhe hamesha kehti thi ANI ke wo kabhi naa kabhi apna asli rang zaroor dikhaayega. Aur ek main tha jo usse apna best friend maanta tha. That Bastard… He has ruined three lives.

Ye baat kehte huye MEHUL ki aawaz bahut tezz thi aur saaf jhalak rahi thi uski aawaz mein ek nafrat ki chingaari. Wahin KANIKA kuchh aur hi soch rahi thi.

KANIKA ( mann mein ) – Tum kuchh nahi jaante MEHUL. Jo usne kiya hai wo karne ka koyi soch bhi nahi sakta. He has just destroyed his whole life for JAHANVI. Pata nahi kahaan hoga wo. Hamesha maine usse galath hi samjha par aakhir usne mujhe galath saabit kar hi diya. Kaash wo din waapis aa paate…

SHUKLA SADAN...

Yahaan hall mein baithe the iss ghar ke teeno sadasya ke tabhi PRABAL ji ke phone ki ghanti baji. Unhone phone pick kiya…

MOBILE – Kya main PRABAL SHUKLA se baat kar raha hoon.

PRABAL – JI main hi hoon. Kahiye.

MOBILE – OK. Main HEALTHCARE Hospital se bol raha hoon. Aapke patient ki condition mein bahut betterment aayi hai aur doctors ka kehna hai ke jald hi wo comma se baahar aa jaayengi.

PRABAL ( khush hote huye ) – Aap… aap sach keh rahe hain… Main .. main abhi aata hoon.. main aa raha hoon..

Aur itna kehkar unhone phone cut kar diya.

PLACE :- KAPOOR VILLA (BANGLORE)

Shayad aap samajh hi gaye honge ke ye hai hamari NAVYA madam ka niwaas sthaan. Ek bahut ji bada bangla jismein har tarah ki sukh suwidhaa maujood hai. Naukron ki fauj inki sewa mein har waqt taiyaar rehti hai. Iss samay NAVYA Madam apne vishaal bedroom mein maujood hain aur aankhen band karke kisi ko yaad kar rahin hain, kisse, of course apne VIVAN Babu ko..

NAVYA ( Mann mein ) – How cute he was!!! Kyon mujhe wo baar baar yaad aa raha hai. Kuchh to baat thi usmein jo main uska chehra bhula hi nahi paa rahi hoon. Alag hi vibes aa rahi thi mujhe usmein se. He was so different.

Agar mujhe wo contract mila hota to shayad main to wahin pe dance shuru kar deti. Par uske liye to jaise kuchh hua hi nahi tha. Kaash kaash wo single ho. God please wo single ho. I promise main kabhi bhi gussa nahi karoongi bas meri ye wish poori kar dena.

Aur fir khud ki hi baat par apne hi sar par chapaat laga li..

“ Ye sab kya sochne lagi main. But kuchh bhi kaho handsome to bahut tha wo. We’ll meet again Mr. VIVAN… Soon… Very soon..”

PLACE :- UNKNOWN (DELHI)

Ek bade se office room ke revolving chair par baitha hua hai ek ladka. Three piece formal suit pehne.. kalayi par branded ghadi aur pairon mein mehenge joote.. bataane ke liye kaafi hain ke zaroor ye koyi moti party hai.

Tabhi office ka door knock hota hai..

LADKA – Come In.

Aur wahaan se andar enter karta hai ek madhyam umra ka vyakti jiske haath mein hai ek envelope. Wo aage aakar pehle to uss ladke ko wish karta hai aur fir usse wo envelope thama deta hai.

AADMI – Sir, uss ladki ki poori information nikalwa li hai. JAHANVI SHUKLA naam hai uska… SOORI ki company mein kaam karti hai. Aur jaisa aapne poochha tha wo bhi pata laga liya hai. Abhi tak shaadi nahi huyi hai aur naa hi koyi boy friend hai. Ek dum simple lifestyle hai uska. Baaki ki information is envelope mein hai.

Uss ladke ne aadmi ko baahar jaane ka ishaara kiya aur fir uss envelope ko khola. Sabse oopar hi ek tasveer thi jisse haath mein lekar dekhte huye wo badbadane laga…

LADKA – Arre agar tumhaara koyi boyfriend hota bhi to wo zinda nahi bachta. Kyonki ab tum sirf meri ho aur jo cheez mujhe pasand aa jaati hai usse main haasil karke rehta hoon. After all… VIRAT THAKUR naam hai mera… I’m coming for you JAHANVI...


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