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Naik

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UPDATE - 05
Last updated me aapne read kiya kaise sare Hunter dare hue the aur achanak se big statue bhi attack kr deta h , tbhi Rider unhe warn krta h fir bhi bhut se Hunter mare jate h . Uske baad wo kaise bache yahi soch rahe hote h .....

AB AAGE .....

THE GATE
Ak aisa tunnel jo dusre worlds ko hmare World se connect krta h .

10 YEAR AGO

Jb GATE ka astitva hamare duniya me aaya , uske baad se hmare World me bhut si vichitr ghtnaye ghati .

Jiska ak EXAMPLE HUNTERS the.

Inki saktiya jb bhi jagati thi uske baad wo kabhi Change nahi hoti thi . Na hi badalti thi

Mai bhi ak HUNTER bana but meri saktiya only ak E Rank HUNTER ke layak thi .
Wo alag baat h ki mai baki jyadatar dusre humane se bahut strong hu but mere aur unke Rank ke bich bahut bada gap hai .

Jis kisi ko bhi power mila h ki wo GATE ke paar ja sake aur monster ko mar sake .

Aur agar usne use apne career ke roop me chun liya h use HUNTER kahte h .

Kabhi kabhi GATE ke paar ak OMINOUS ( bad luck) chupa hota h .
Ab powerful aur mad monster kahi se bhi bahar nahi aate h wo sb bhut phle hi khtam ho chuke h .

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Mai ( Rahul ke broken hath ki taraf dekhte hue )" kya aap thik h ? Khoon bahna abhi tk nahi ruka hai ! "

Rahul " abhi yaha hm kuch nahi kr skte , hai ki nahi ? "
" Mai yaha bs 3 healer le ke aaya tha , qki maine socha tha yaha sb kuch jldi hi khtam ho jayega ....."

Us taraf dekhte hue jaha jamin melt ho gayi thi aur usme se abhi bhi smok nikal raha tha , big statue ke powerful attack se " ak healer to is kahtarnak attack se phle hi mar gaya, uski laas tak nahi bachi "

Ak man ki tarah ishara krte hue jo ak patthar ke sahare apne ghutno pr baitha hua tha aur apne dono hatho se sir ko pakd ke pahli ki tarah badbada raha tha .....
" Mai abhi aur jina cahta hu .."
" Save me ... Save me.... "

Rahul " Ak ye hai jisse itna bada sadma laga h ki ye paglo jaisi harkat kr raha h ! "

Rahul ( Anjana ki taraf dekhte hue jo ki abhi bhi leti hui thi ) " Ak B Rank ki healer ho ke bhi , Miss Anjana ne bhi aaj se phle aisa kuch experience nahi kiya h . Jo kuch bhi aaj hua h . Isi liye filhal ke liye mujhe healing milna thora muskil hai . "

" Is liye filhal sbse acha yahi hoga ki hm abhi jaise h waise hi rahe , in statues jaise enemy ke against "
" Jb situation thodi thik hogi tb , tb hm yaha se bhagane ki kosis kr skte h "
" Jabki hm sb jante hai ki ye aasan bilkul nahi hoga !! "

Wahi baki sb Hunter abhi bhi dar me the aur kuch ro rahe the ...
" Hu hu ~~ huuuuuuukkk "
" Ab hum kya karenge ? "
(Gusse se ) " Ye sirf ak D Rank Dungeon hai ......sirf ak D Rank Dungeon ??? "

Wahi ak HUNTER soch raha tha ' jaise ki Mr Rahul aur Rider ne kaha hm pr tabhi attack hoga jb hm apni jagah se hilenge '
' Agr kisi tarah hm is big statue se bach bhi gaye tb bhi hme door ke gate pr khade guard wale statue ko paar krke jana hoga . '
' Jo ki sayadh hi hme kabhi yaha se bahr jane dega . '

Ye sb sochte hue usne kuch decided kiya aur aur apni jagah se khada ho kr jor se bolta h " Mai yaha aise nahi mar sakta !!! "
" Maine finally ak big Guild join kiya h "
" To mai yaha yaha to bilkul nahi mar sakta !! "
Aur wo apne ghutno ke bal baith kr apne full power ko use krne ko ready ho raha tha .

Hm sb usi ki taraf dekh rahe the .


Tabhi Rahul chilla kr usase bolte h " tum kya kr rahe ho ? Apni jagah se hilna bhi mat !! "

Lakin wo to kisi ki bhi baat nahi sun raha tha bs apne mn ki kr raha tha " mai ye kr skta hu "
" Agr kisi chij ko le kr mujhe pura vishwas hai to wo hai meri speed !! "
" Mai is door ko ak second me paar kr dunga ... "

Itna sb bol kr wo apni full power ko use krke light speed se door ki taraf bhagne lagta h , Qki uski Power uski speed thi jo ki speed of light ke equal thi .

Wo full confidence me tha aur door ke paas phucha hi tha ki tabhi mai aur rahul dekhte hai us big statue ke eye se wapas se power release hone lagti h aur bahut hi teji se us Hunter ki taraf chli jati h . Ye sb itna fast hua ki hme kuch dikhayi hi nahi deta h ki hua kya , jb hm sb hose me aaye aur samne dekhte h to hme us hunter ke bs ghutno ke niche ke bs leg hi dikhe jo ki abhi bhi hawale the jaise bhag koi person bhag raha ho aur uski baki body jal kr raakh me badal gayi thi .

Ye sb dekh kr sb log aur bhi jyada sadme me chle gaye aur dar ke bahut tej tej rone lage .

Mai ( apne mukke ko jamin pr marte hue ) " fuck !!! "
" Ye sare statues Wale hme jb cahe tb maar skte h . Hai ki nahi !!? "

Rahul " ye to ak makkhi ko masalne se bhi aasan hai "

Mai " ye hamara isi samay safaya kr skte hai . "
" To ye hme maar q nahi rahe hai ? "

Rahul " pata nahi !! "

Kuch sochne ke baad Rahul ne mujhse bola " bhle hi ye hme maar skte hai . Pr ye hame maar nahi rahe hai ..."
" Qki ye un pagal monster se alag hai , jo hme kahi bhi dekhte hi andho ki tarah marna suru kr dete hai "
" Wo Guard wala status tabhi attack karta h jb koi door kholne ki kosis karta h "
" Wo big statue apni eye se beams tabhi nikalta h jb koi move hota h "
" Ye sabhi ak pattern me attack kr rahe hai .

" Ak pattern me ...!!! "
Ye sunte hi mai turant piche mud kr us wing wale statue ko dekhne lagta hu aur sochne lagta hu ' ye nahi ho skta.... !! '
'Kya is room me koi rule hai ? '
'Haa , CARTHENON ke rule !! '
' haa , yahi ho skta h !!! '


Aur mai turant Rahul se puchta hu " Mr Rahul 1st rule kya tha ? "

Rahul ( confuse ho kr ) " rule ? "

Mai wings wale statue ki taraf isara karta hu tb unhe kuch smjh me aata h . Aur wo bolte h " 1st rule tha..... Bhagwan ki pooja kre . "

Fir mai big statue ki taraf ghur ke dekhta hu aur apne man me kahta hu ' yahi hoga yaha ka bhagwan ! '

Mai khada hote hue Mr. Rahul se bolta hu " sir yaha is Dungeon me ak niyam hai ..."

Rahul ( mujhe dekh ke shock se dekhte hue ) " ye tum kya karne ja rahe ho ? "

Mai " agar mai sahi hu to !!! "

Rahul ( chillate hue ) " kya tum pagal ho gaye ho ? "

Pr mai bina kuch sune khada ho jata hu aur ghur kr us big statue ki taraf dekhta hu . Rahul meri eye ko dekhta h aur kud se kahta h " ye us aadmi ki aakh nahi h jisme death ka koi dar najar aaye "

Aur m us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue bolta hu " ye us par attack nahi krte hai jo move hota h !!! "




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Apna pyar banaye rakhiyega !!
Behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 

Xabhi

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UPDATE - 07

Jaise ki last update me aap sb ne ab tk read kiya ki hm 1st rule ka matlab smjh kr big statue ke samne ghutno ke bal jhuk jate h . Fir uske face ka expression change ho jata h aur wo ak evil smile ke sath hmare aur badhne lagta h . Tb 2nd rule ke bare me soch kr ak HUNTER usase prathna krne lagta h but last me use bhi big statue maar deta h ....

AB AAGE ....

Us Hunter ke marne se hm sb shock se chillane lagte h aur usase dur bhagne lagte h ......

" Kyaaaaaaa !!!! "
" Ye kya ho gaya !!! "
Rohan " bhago .... "
" Bachao ... "
" Koi meri help kro !! "

CRACK......CRACK..... BOOM.......

Sb log teji se bhagne lagte h , aur wo big statue bhi hamare piche aa raha hota h .

Ak hunter girl dar se apni jagah se hil bhi nahi pati h aur tabhi .....

SQUIZ..........
Wo big statue uske upar apna big pair rakh deta h aur wo Hunter girl mr jati h aur uske chro taraf kewal blood hi blood fail jata h .

Rahul " sb logo ka ak sath bhagana khatarnak hai . Hme turant hi alg alg direction me bhagna hoga . "

Mai " aap thik kah rahe ho ."

Mai Anjana ka hath pakad kr bhag raha tha , wo mere piche thi mai uski taraf dekhta hu to wo bahut jyada dari hui thi , uska pura face aasuo se bhig gaya tha . Use dekh kr mai kud se kahta hu ' mai Miss Anjana ko apne piche nahi chor skta , mujhe unko sath le kr hi bhagna hoga . '

Baki sb bhi Hunter alg alg director me bhag rahe the .

Abhi bhagate hue apne family ke bare me soch raha hota h ....
' mai yaha nahi mar sakta '

Use kuch dino phle ka ak sean yaad aata h jaha wo sofe pr aaram se bear pi raha hota h aur uski pregnant wife usase kuch bol rahi hoti h ....

Abhi pregnant wife " kaisa rahega agr tm ye Hunter ka job chor kr , koi aur safe job dundh lo ?
Hmare ab 2 kids ho gaye h "

Abhi " tm kya bol rahi ho ... Hme aur jyada money earn krna padega unke ache future ke liye . "

Present time me wapas aa kr kud se kahta h
' mai finally 2 kids ka ak jimmedar father bana hu , lakin ye ....'

Tb tk mai bhag kr ak statue ke niche phuch jata hu .
Abhi ( Rohan ki taraf dekh kr ) " yaha pr mai safe rahunga . Hai ki nahi ? "

Rohan ( meri tarf dekh kr ) " Abhi tmhare piche !!!
Piche mud kr dekho . "

Ye sunte hi Abhi jaise hi piche mudne ko hota hu tabhi ak sounds sunayi deti h ...

SWOOSSS.........
aur isi ke sath abhi ke piche khade statue ne apne ward se ak second me hi Abhi ke body ko bilkul bich se cut kr deta h . Us statue ke sward me abhi ka blood laga hua tha , Abhi ki body alg alg director me girl jati h .

Udar wo sb ho raha tha yaha Anjana ke sath bhagate hue mai soch raha tha
' Bhagwan ki prathna ,

Bhagwan ki prathna ,
Bhagwan ki prathna ,
Aakhir hm kaise prathna kr skte h is big statue ke jaise bhagwan ki ?
Qki ye to ak Devil hai !!!
Hmare piche Guards wale statue hai ,
Samne ki taraf ye huge statue hai ,
Aur jo room ke charo taraf last me statue hai wo tabhi attack krenge jb hm unke bahut jyada close jayenge .
In corner wale statue me se kisi ne sward , kisi ne bhala , kisi ne axe ,kisi ne hathora ( hammer ) , kisi ne tir - dhanush , to kisi ne instrument pakda hua h ........'

" Ahhhh mera hath .... Mera hath ...."
" ahhhhh ... "
" Nahi .... "
Pure room me sb Hunter ki dard se chillane ki hi aawaje aa rahi thi . Sb big statue ke dar se corner ki taraf bhag rahe the aur waha ke statue unko bina time waist kiye mare ja rahe the .

Mai bhi corner ki taraf hi bhagte hue soch raha tha ' na hum unke bahut jyada paas ja skte hai , na hum unse dur bhag skte hai . Kare to aakhir kya kare hm ? '

Tabhi mere dimak ki batti jali ' ak min ! '
' instrument wale statue !!

Kya wo apne instrument se hm pr attack krenge ?
Guard tabhi attack karte h jb tm unke bahut paas jao ,
aur ak baar tm unke paas chle jao tb wo aise move hote hai jaise unhe phle se hi bs aise hi move hone ke liye banaya gaya ho ,
agar jo status instrument pakde hue h unhe bhi phle se hi kaise move hona h ya kya karna h ye bataya gaya ho to ? '

Ye sb sochne ke baad mai turant hi chilla kr bolta hu " sb log us statue ki taraf
bhago jisne hath me instrument pakda hua h "

" Kya kaha jisne instrument pakda hua h ? "

Aur sbse phle Rahul ak instrument wale statue ke paas pahuchta h jisne ak bada sa boopu type ka instrument pakda hua tha .
Jaise hi Rahul waha pahuchta h wo statue instrument bajane lagta h .

POOOOOO.......
Rahul " ye kya ! Ye to bajne laga . "

Rahul smjh jata h aur wo bhi apne paas walo ko bolte h " instrument wale status attack nahi krenge , to jldi se ja kr instrument wale statue ko dundho aur uske paas khade ho jao "

Ye sun ke sb instrument wale statue ko dundh kr uske paas bhagne lagte h .

Rohan bhi ak statue ko dundh leta h jo ki ak female ka tha aur usne violin pakda hua tha . Rohan jaise hi uske paas jata h wo statue violin bajana start kr deti hai , aur Rohan us statue ke niche baith kr jor jor se rone lagta h uska pura face aasuo se bhig gaya hota h aur wo gusse me big statue ki taraf dekh ke bolta h " sale harami mai tujhe nahi chorunga !! "

Abhi big statue ka dhyan bakiyon ki taraf tha aur mai Miss Anjana ko le kr us big statue ke left side ke ak instrument wale status ke paas aa kr k hada ho jata hu usr statue ne ak bada sa dol pakda hua tha . Hm uske niche khade the aur mai jor jor se bolta hu statue ki taraf dekh kr ...
" Jaldi kro ! Aur bajana start kro ..."
" C' mon ! "
" Kyu ?? "

Wo statue kuch nahi kr raha tha . Mai aur Anjana usi ki taraf dekh rahe the .

Fir mere dimak me khyal aata h ' 1min ! Kahi ye is liye to nahi kuch kr raha qki hun 2 person yaha khade h . Iska mtlb ak hi statue ke niche do log khade nahi rah sakte . '

Ye khyal aate hi mai Anjana ko wahi chor ke aage ke instrument wale statu ke paas bhagne lagta hu . Aur Anjana rote hue mujhe pukarti h " rider !! "

Mai bina piche mude bhagte hue kahta hu " Bilkul mt hilna , tm safe rahogi agr tm yaha rahi to "

Aur Anjana su statu ke niche baith kr rone lagati h . Tabhi statue dol bajana start kr deta h . Thik usi samay us big statue kaface meri taraf move hota h aur uski aakhe mujhe hi dekh rahi hoti h .

Mai teji se bhag raha hota hu . Tabhi mujhe kuch statue ke baad ak instrument wala ak female ka statue dikhta h aur m kud se kahta hu ' bs thoda sa aur bacha h , mai bs pahunchne hi wala hu ' .

Tabhi mujhe apne upar kuch feel hota h aur mai bhagte hue upar dekhta hu to ye to us big statue ka pair tha , jo ki mere upar rakhne wala hi tha aur mai thik time pr waha se side me jump laga deta hu .

BOOM.......
mai jaha tha waha ki jamin puri distroy ho cuki thi us big statue ke pair rakhne ke karan . Aur tabhi mujhe Rahul ki aawaj sunayi deti h ...
" Us taraf nahi !! "

Aur mai turant hi samne dekhta hu to waha ak corner wala status khada tha . Meri najar uske hath pr jati h usne koi instrument nahi pakda hua tha usne to ak shield 🛡️ pakda hua tha .
Jaise hi mai uske paas pahuchta hu wo statue apne shield hawa me upar uthata h aur niche full force se de karta h .

THUDDDDD.........
us statue ka shield jamin me gad jata h .

Anjana ( jor se chillati h ) " Rider.... "

Mai uske attack se bach jata hu aur jamin pr rengte hue instrument wale status ki taraf khiskate hue badbadane lagta hu ...

" Instrument ... "
" Instrument ..."

Aur apne mn me bolta hu ' agar such me koi bhagwan hai ..... please ... Mujhe bacha lo . "

Mai sochne lagta hu mai abhi ak aisi situation me hu jaha mere life aur death ka sawaal h aur mai ak rassi pakde hue hu jo mujhe marne se bacha sakti h . Lakin mujhe aisa feel ho raha h ki meri rassi bich se hi break hone lagi h aur kabhi bhi puri break ho sakti h .

LA LA LA LA LA ..........
Tabhi achanak se mujhe ak bahut tej song sunayi deta h . Mai samne ki taraf apna face upar krke dekhta hu to mujhe mere samne ki female statue jor jor se gana gate hue dikhti h aur ye dekh kr
mere face pr ak smile aa jati h .

LA LA LA LA LA LA LA .........
sirf gane aur instrument ki aawaj aa rahi hoti h pure room me baki sb bilkul saant the . Pure room me jagah jagah bs dead body padi hui thi jinse blood nikal raha tha .

Tabhi Anjana bhagte hue mere taraf aati h " Rider tum thik to ho na ? "

Mai " ha ! Kuch kuch "

Achanak se Anajan jo ki mere paas khadi thi wo meri taraf dekhte hue shock se apne muh pr hath rakhi h aur kahti h " Rider ye kya ho gaya ? "

Mai " kya ? "

Fir uski najro ka picha krte hue apne left pair ko dekh kr bolta hu " ohhh !! Mera pair ...."






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .
Wao! :woohoo: rider bach gya rider bach gyaaa... :D: pr ye kya? Are iska to ek pair hi kaat diya kisi stachu ne :ohno: karan ne Anjna ko bchane ke liye apne sath le kr bhaga or use ek safe instrument vale stachu ke pass pahucha diya or apni jaan ki baji lga kr apne akhiri time me bhagvan ko yaad kar nirantar Kosis ki or dekho rider bach gya :woohoo: rider bach gya... Dekhte hai kya Anjna thik kr pati hai rider ko ya ab se rider ek pair ka hi rahega... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
 

Naik

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UPDATE - 06

Jaisa ki aapne last updated me read kiya , starting me hmare World aur Hunter ke bare me information di gayi fir ak aur Hunter bhagne ki kosis me mara jata h . Fir mai kuch bato gaur karta hu aur kuch kuch yaha ke bare me smjhne lagta hu ....
AB AAGE ........
Jaise hi mai khada hua us big statue ki eye ki brightness aur bhi increase hone lagi .
Mai turant hi niche jhuk gaya aur big statue ki taraf dekhne laga uski eye ki brightness wapas se normal ho gayi thi , ek pal ko to mai bhi dar gaya fir maine apne aap ko wapas se relex kiya fir sochne laga ..
' ye tabhi attack karta h jb tm ak limit se jyada height se khade ho kar move kro . '

Aakhirkar mai 1st rule ka matalab smjh gaya tha aur mere akho ki chmak thori si increase ho gayi thi .

Main turant hi sbko bola ( chilla kr ) " Sblog !!.... Big statue ke aage apne ghutno pr jhuk jao !!! "

Rohan " Rider kahi tm pagal to nahi ho gaye ho ? "

Abhi " tum kis baare mein baat kar rahe ho "

Rohan " huh !!! "

Rahul ( meri taraf dekh kr ) " tmne kuch pata kr liya h na ? Mai sahi kah raha hu na ? "
Mai " haa "
" Ye tabhi attack karta h agr tm ak limit se jyada height se khade ho kr move kro , isi liye ye attack nahi krega agr jb tum iske samne jitna ho ske utna niche apne ghutno pr jhuk jao . "
" Bhagwan ki pooja kre ka matlab yahi h ki apne ghutno pr jhuk jao aur is big statue ki pooja kro "
" To jb tm iske samne apne ghutno pr jhukoge ....."

Bich me hi Rahul bol padta h " aisa krne ke liye kahi tumhare antah mann ne to nahi kaha ? Kya mai sahi bol raha hu ? "

Mai " abhi ke liye jo bol raha hu mai bs wo kro ..."

Rahul " well !! Iske alawa abhi hum sb aur kuch kr bhi nahi skte . "

Aur sare Hunter Rahul Ko dekh kr apne ghutno pr baith kr us big statue ke samane jhuk jate hai .

Sb sochte hai ...
' sayad ab hame jine ko mil sakta h ?'
' sayad ab hum is jagah se bahar ja sake ? '
' kya sirf ghutno pr jhukne se aisa ho skta h ? '

Anjana bhi ab tb uth chuki thi wo bhi baki sbke sath apne ghutnon ke bal jhuki hui thi .

Tabhi us big statue ki eye ki brightness slowly slowly khtam ho gayi aur achanak se hi agle pal uske face ka expression bilkul change ho gaya . Ab vo big statue kisi evil ki tarah smile 😁kr raha tha, uske sare daat dikh rahe the aur uske aakho ke brightness ka colour bhi change ho kr light red ho gaya tha .

Hm sb apna face upar krke dar ke sath us big statue ke face ko hi dekne ki kosis kr rahe the aur mai sath me soch raha tha ...
' iske face ke sath kya ho gaya ? '
' ye kya ! Iska expression ..... '
' .....ye change ho gaya !! '


' ab tk is big statue ne kitne attack kiye ? Aur kitne mare gaye ? '
' abhi kitne jinda bache hai ? '
' kb tak ...? '
' kb tak hm sb ko ye sb krna padega ? '

Abhi ( big statue ki taraf dekhte hue ) " dekh kr aisa lagta h isne attack krna band kr diya h !! "

Rohan " aisa nahi ho skta "
" Tumhe nahi lagta h ki ye ab kuch naya try krega ? "
" Tumhe kya lagta h ki ab sb thik ho jayega qki hm iske samne ghutno pr jhuk gaye h ? "
" Are ! Are ! Tum khade q ho gaye ? "

Abhi ( khada ho ke ) " dekho "
" Attack hona band ho gaya h "

Baki sb Hunter bhi abhi ko dekh kr khade hone lagate h aur Bolte h ....
" Ye such hai ! "
" Ye big statue ab kuch nhi kr rha h "
" No way ! Kya such me sb khtam ho gya h ab ? "
" Hm sb bach gaye "
" Hm sb abhi aur jiyenge "

TUDDD... TUDDD... TUDDD.....

Mai ( big statue ki taraf shock 😲 se dekhte hue ) ' nahi !! '
' fir se nahi !! '

Baki sb Hunter bhi usi taraf dekh rahe the shock aur dar se ....

TUDDD..... TUDDDD....TUDDD....

Actually me Wo big statue apne chair se khada ho jata h , aur jaise hi apne pair niche jamin pr rakhta h ...

BOOM............

Uske pair rakhne waha ki jamin tut kr ander dhas jati h .

Hm sb Hunter dar se usi big statue ko dekh rahe the aur badbada rahe the...
" Wait ! Ye abhi khatam nahi hua hai "
" Ah ! Ah ! "
" Nahi "
" Ab ye mt kahna ki hme isase fight krni hogi "

Rahul ( meri taraf jor se kahte h ) " Rider "
" Kya tumhare paas koi aur plans nahi h ? "

Mai " bhle hi aap mujhse pucho , lakin mere paas aur koi plans nahi h . "

Rahul " kya such me tumhare paas aur koi Ideas nahi h ?? "

Mai " mai to aage kya karna h ye bhi nahi
janta !! "

Aur tabhi wo big statue ka ek pair move hota h aur wo hamari taraf aage badne lagta hai . Ye dekh kr sb Hunter waha se bhagne hi wale hote h tabhi mai bolta hu ( jor se ) " ruk jao ! Is Dungeon ke apne kud ke kuch rules hai "
" 1st bhagwan ki pooja kre !! "
" 2nd bhagwan se prathna kre !! "
" Isi line me koi raaj hai . "

Ab sub Hunter sochne lag jate h ...
" Prathna kre ? "
" Agar yaha prathna krne ki baat ho rahi h to ..."

Abhi wo Hunter aage kuch kahta usase phle hi ak HUNTER kahta h ( big statue ko dekhte hue ) " mai ak chance le ke dekhna cahta hu "
" Mai CHURCH me prayer gane walo me se ak hu ... "
" Agar yaha baat bs gana gane aur prathna krne ki hai to , mai ye kr lunga "

Aur wo Hunter apni jagah se thora aage badh jata h aur big statue ke bilkul saamne aa kr apne hath se apne gale me latka hua GOD ke locket ko pakad leta h aur prayer karna start kar deta h ....

( prayer English me hi likhunga )
" I approach the lord ,
Make me anew ,
And pour your graces ,
The weakness found within me ,
All will wash away ,
From the love of the lord ,
Your love holds on to me ........ "

Jb wo Hunter prayer kr raha tha tb bhi wo big statue apne right pair ko dhire dhire move krte hue uske upar le jata h .

Mai bhi shock se ye sb dekh raha tha .

Rohan " kya ye kaam kr raha h ? "

Abhi " aisa lag to raha h , qki uske pair bahut slowly move ho rahe h ab . "

Mai ( dhyan se us big statue ki taraf dekhte hue kud se ) ' nahi , ye glt soch rahe h '
' ye kuch aur hi h !! '

Hunter ( jo prayer kr raha tha )
" ..... Like an angel flapping it's wings above ,
I shall also walk with my lord above ,
From with in the lord's love ..."

Ab tk us big statue ke pair us Hunter ke bilkul karib aa gaye the aur wo pasine se bhiga huaa dar ke karna kaap raha tha fir bhi wo ruka nahi aur prayer krta raha .

Tabhi mujhe khyal aata h ' ye to galt bhagwan ki pooja kr raha h ..... ! '

Pr isase phle ki mai kuch bol pata us big statue ne apne r8 pair se us Hunter ko kuchal diya .

BOOM........
Aur uske pair ke niche us Hunter ki body ak makkhi ki tarah masal gayi , aur waha uske pair ke chro taraf kewal blood hi blood fail gaya ....






Aaj ke liye itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye .



Halat bad se badter hote jaa rehe h koyi bach ker bhi baher niklega ya sab ek ek kerke marte jayenge
Dekhte Rider kia dimag lagata h
Badhiya update bhai shaandaar
 

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Wao! :woohoo: rider bach gya rider bach gyaaa... :D: pr ye kya? Are iska to ek pair hi kaat diya kisi stachu ne :ohno: karan ne Anjna ko bchane ke liye apne sath le kr bhaga or use ek safe instrument vale stachu ke pass pahucha diya or apni jaan ki baji lga kr apne akhiri time me bhagvan ko yaad kar nirantar Kosis ki or dekho rider bach gya :woohoo: rider bach gya... Dekhte hai kya Anjna thik kr pati hai rider ko ya ab se rider ek pair ka hi rahega... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Sahi kaha r8 ka ak pair cut kaya ab ye thik hoga ki nahi wo to kl ke update me hi pata chalega .
Aur uske liye kl ka wait krna hoga .
Thanks for this valuable feedback .
 

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Ok bro pata ni kaise chook gaya
Ab read karta hu😄😄
Koi nahi nahi kabhi kabhi hota h.
Aakhir hum humane hi hai
Nd by the way mai bhi aapki story ka big fan hu mujhe bhi uske updated ka wait krta h .😍
 

Itachi_Uchiha

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Halat bad se badter hote jaa rehe h koyi bach ker bhi baher niklega ya sab ek ek kerke marte jayenge
Dekhte Rider kia dimag lagata h
Badhiya update bhai shaandaar
Abhi to bahut kuch baki h aur koi bachata hai ya nahi wo to aane wale updates hi batayenge .
Thanks for beautiful review ☺️
 
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