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Shandar update hero ko apna jeevan jhokhim mai daal ke apni sister ke liye paisa jama karna padh raha h aur anjana uski care bi kar rahi h ..too good updateUPDATE 2Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .
Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"
1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "
2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "
1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "
2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"
D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .
Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "
Mai " sorry "
Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "
Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .
Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "
Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .
Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"
Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "
Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "
Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "
Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '
Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "
Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "
Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu
Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "
Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me hoti h !!
Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!
Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'
Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"
Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai
Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "
Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai
Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "
Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!
Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "
" Nahi "
" Mai chalunga "
" Meri tarf se naa hai "
" Chlo fight krte hai "
Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "
Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "
Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "
Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h
Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "
Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "
Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar banaye rakhiye qki aage story bhut achi h abhi bs base ready ho raha h !!
Ha bhai aur apni bimar maa ke hospital ka bill bhi pay jr raha h uske liye family hi sb kuch h ....Shandar update hero ko apna jeevan jhokhim mai daal ke apni sister ke liye paisa jama karna padh raha h aur anjana uski care bi kar rahi h ..too good update
Fabulous update bro dhakty hain rider kya karta hai agy kya hota hai us k sath ho sakta yahan us ko kuch asa mil jy jo us ko powerful bana dy dhakty hain kya hota hai best of luck for your story broUPDATE 2Aise krte huee sb gate ke ander chale jate h . Waha bs food truck wale hi bachte h .
Tabhi ak food truck wala 1st food truck wale se puchta hai " tm kya soch rahe ho ?"
1st food truck wala " mai bs hunter rider ke bare me soch kr paresan hu , ki hum use coffee bhi nahi de paye "
2nd food truck wala " acha , wahi hunter na jo E category me sbse weakest hunter hai ? Is Dungeon ka rank kya hai ? "
1sy food truck wala gate ki taraf dekhte hue " wo kah rahe the ye ak D rank Dungeon ke barabar hai "
" Jb se main kaam kar raha hu, maine hunter rider ko kabhi bhi bina chot lage is hunter guild me nahi dekha hai "
2nd food truck wala " ak D rank Dungeon , well kuch bura hoga aisa mt socho , chalo hm chlte hai !!"
D rank Dungeon ke ander ak jagah mai niche baitha huaa tha . Mujhe kai jagah chot lagi hui thi aur anjana mujhe heal kr rahi thi qki Anjana ak healer thi . Uske hatho se green colour ke anergy ka gola nikalta hai aur mujhe heal krna start kr deta hai .
Wo heal krte hue mujhse bolti hai " rider tum hunter ka kaam chor q nahi dete .."
"Is tarah fight krne se to tum kewal kud ke liye risk bada rahe ho "
Mai " sorry "
Anjana " maine tumhe ye is liye nahi kah rahi hu ki tm mujhse mafi mango ."
Meri aankho me dekhte hue " Mujhe bs tmhari fikar hai "
Humse hi kuch duri pr baki sb members monster se fight kr rahe the . Rahul apne fire ability to use kr raha tha , Rohan apni sward se monster ko tukdo me cut kr raha tha , aise hi sb log apni apni power ka use krke monster ko maar rahe the .
Kuch der baad Anjana kahti hai " aakhirkar ye raid to khatam to hui "
Anjana abhi bhi mere knee ko heal kr rahi thi , mai piche mud kr dekhta hu to fight end ho gayi thi aur sare log aapas me bate kr rahe the .
Rohan abhi se majak karte hue kahta h " are Abhi, tm abhi tk mare nahi !!"
Abhi " nahi ye to mere liye bhut aasan tha "
Tabhi rahul kahta h " lagta h sb monster mar cuke hai ab yaha karne ko kuch nahi h "
Mai ye sb sun hi raha tha ki abhi Anjana kahti h " raider tumhare paas koi ak reason hai ki tum hunter ka kaam na choro ? "
Mai " mai hunter bs is liye bna hu qki mujhe isme maza aata h , agar mai ye kaam na kru to mai actually bore ho ke mar jaunga "
Mai apne mn me sochta hu ' agar maine Anjana ko such bataunga to mujhe aur jyada sharminda hona padega '
Anjana " jaisa ki tm kah rahe ho ki tm maze ke liye krte ho but iske karan two time raid marte hue tmharai jaan jate jate bachi h "
Ye sun kr mai hasne lagta hu aur mujhe hasta huaa dekh kr Anjana gusse se aag babula ho jati h " haso mat , isase tmhare chot wapas se ubhar aayenge "
Mai bs apni gardan haa me hila deta hu
Sb wapas se ak jagah iktha ho jate h tb rahul kahta h " ak monster ko marne ke baad tmlogo ko ye milta h THE MAGICAL CORE "
Ak magical core jo ki ak c rank ke monster ka ho uski kimat thousands me hoti h !!
Pr Rider ak E rank hunter hai to uske liye C Rank monster ko marna impossible hi hai !!
Mai kud se kahta hu ' itti chot aur paresaniya uthane ke baad mai kewal ak E rank magical core hi earn kr paya '
' jabki maine apni life ko risk pr laga diya tha us hisab se to ye bahut kam hai , is tarah se paise kamana ......'
Mai abhi aage soch hi raha tha ki piche se kisi ki aawaj sunayi deti hai " are sb suno yaha ak aur gate hai ......"
Hm sb jldi se us gate se saamne ja kr khadhe ho jate hai aur dekhne lagte hai
Rahul " ye to Double Lair hai , dekh ke to lagta h ye such me asli hai "
Uske baad Rahul apne hath se fire power ka use krke ak aag ka gola banata hai aur use gufa me fek deta hai , aur us fire se hme pata chlta h ki gufa bahut jyada lambi hai
Fir Rahul kahta hai " ak min sb log meri baat suno " bos ke jinda rahane par get band nahin hota .
Qki gate abhi bhi open hai , to aisa ho skta hai ki boss iske ander hi hoga
Usually hme aise situation me apne guild ko contact krke unhe ye sb batana hoga aur unke order ka wait krna hoga lakin ....
Agr dusre hunters waha tk phle phuch gaye to humara profit km ho jayega
To mai cahta hu ki hm sb ander jaye aur boss ko maar de .
Qki ye bahut kahtarnak kaam hai to hm sare 17log iske liye vote kr leta hai
Aur vote ka result jo bhi ho uske baad koi complaint nahi krega "
Aur abhi apna apna vote dene lage !!
Rohan aur abhi sath me " hum dono fight krenge "
" Nahi "
" Mai chalunga "
" Meri tarf se naa hai "
" Chlo fight krte hai "
Anjana " sorry but mai nahi jana cahti "
Sbke vote hone ke baad Rahul kahta hai " to abhi tk 8:8 vote hue h "
Ab sirf mera vote bacha huaa tha to Rahul mujhse puchta h " tmhara kya kahna h rahul ? "
Sb kuch mere vote pr depends krta h sb meri taraf dekh rahe the aur mai soch raha tha ' mere paas abhi enough money nahi huee hai , jldi hi mujhe meri choti sister ko college bhejna hoga ....'
Aur mujhe meri bimar maa ki aur meri family condition ki yaad aane lagti h
Ye sb sochte hi mai turat bolta hu " mai cahlunga "
Aur sb bol padta hai " bs ak baar aur chlo ye krte hai "
Aaj ke liye itta hi !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through .
Apna pyar banaye rakhiye qki aage story bhut achi h abhi bs base ready ho raha h !!
Haa sayad aisa kuch mil jaye ...wo to aage pata chalega hi story me .Fabulous update bro dhakty hain rider kya karta hai agy kya hota hai us k sath ho sakta yahan us ko kuch asa mil jy jo us ko powerful bana dy dhakty hain kya hota hai best of luck for your story bro![]()
AlwaysHaa sayad aisa kuch mil jaye ...wo to aage pata chalega hi story me .
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