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Fantasy States War (Completed)

King Aryan

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Uth ja sale .

Abe uth ja nhi to

"Sone de na AT"

AT- sale raat bhar us chipkali se ishq ladata rhega aur subah der tak sota rahega . Uth raha he ya phir daloo pano

Ladka- uth gya be aur tujhe Riya se kya problem he jab dekh use chipkali bolta he tere wajah se vo munhse bhi jagda karti rehti he

AT - sun Ravi . Mujhe usse nhi sabhi Ladkiyo se problem he . I prefer cigrate more than girls

Ravi - lekin akhir kyu tu Ladkiyo ko itna nafrat krta he jab bhi koi Ladki tere kareeb ane ki koshosh krti he to tu use sare aam zaleel kr deta he

AT- dekh mene pehle bhi tujhse bola he ki mujhe is baare me baat nhi karni he aur chal jaldi tayyar ho aaj college ka l result nikal rha he aur usske baad apne adde pe pahuchna he aaj match he


Ravi - theek he chal

Phir todi der baad dono tayyar hoke college jate he aur apna result lete he dono pass ho jate he jaha ek taraf AT college me computer field me top karta he vahi Ravi bhi acche number se pass ho jata he

Phir dono college se pahuch jate he delhi ke mashoor fighting street pe
Ye delhi ki vo jagah he jaha pe har illegal fight hoti he aur log dil khol ke betting lagate he he AT yaha pe pichle 6 saal se street fight karta he aur aaj tak ek bhi esa opponet nhi mila jo useke samne 1 min se jayada tik paye


Aaj yaha pe kuch international fighter aye he jinka samna AT se he
Ravi - abe sale dekh nhi raha he vo sale 4 ek sath tu lad lega

AT- abe ho jayega aur vese bhi jeetne ke 20 lakh mil rhe he


Ravi- abe sale 20 lakh jeetne pe milege aur vese bhi kal mujhe gaon jana he Behen ki shadi me . Theek thak vapas ajana

Aur phir AT aur charo ki fight suru hoti he

Fight suru hone ke 45 sec tak sabhi mil kar AT pe humla krte he jiska vo kafi acha defence krta he aur fir agle ho pal ek kick ek fighter ke neck pe marta he aur vo vhi der ho jata he isi tarah fight chalti he aur char min ke under hi charo fighter zameen par aur AT aur Ravi 20 lakh le ke vaha se chale jate he


Ravi- to phir kal tayyar he chalne ke liye

AT- abe mene pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe nhi jana he aur me vaha kya karuga

Ravi - dekh tujhe chalna padega tujhe meri kasam

AT- vese tera gaon he kaha pe

Ravi- Rajgarh he usse 10km door hee


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AT- 22 saal ka muscular . Banda aur street fighting me maste pechle 6 sale se delhi me reh kar padhai krta he koi nhi janta he kaha se aya he kon he .

Ravi- age 21 . Halke sawle rang ka he dikhne me average he . Iske Maa - baap gaon ke jameendar he jo kafi paise wale he har mahine iske liye money order ajata he .
 

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Ek sun san kale jungal ke beech ek Ladki khadi hoti he jiske chehra nhi dikhta he lekin sirf uski ankhe dikhthi he .

Ladki- aap kaha the kabse aapka intezar sab kr rhe he aaphi hamara akhir sahara he agar aap nhi aye to vo sab kuch khatam kar dega mere bachhe

Ladki- aajao mere bache ab aur intezar nhi hota

Ki tabhi koi us Ladki pe humla kar deta he aur charo taraf sirf khoon ho khoon dikhta he ki ek awaaz aati he


"MAA"

Is tez awaaz ke saath AT uth jata he

Ravi- kya hua Bhai chillaya kyu aaj phir vahi bura sapna dekha


AT- ha yaar pata nhi kyu baar baar vhi sapna aata he . Chod aur bata kab nikal rha he tu

Ravi - me kya matlab . Tu bhi sath chal tha he aur mujhe kuch nhi sunna samjha . Chal ready ho ja



Phir dono tayyar hokar chal dete he railway station jaha par unki train unka intezaar kr rhi hoti he
Dono train me beth jate he

AT- abe ab is dibbe me kab tak rahege

Ravi- 8 gante ka safar he fir uske baad . 1 ganta bus me


Todi der me train chal deti he aur AT apni yado me chala jata he


FLASHBACK

7 years ago


Beta uth ja aur kitna soyega.

Ladka- Maa sone do na aaj vese bhi Tau Ji nhi he roj us kaliya ke pass bhej kar haddiyo ka kya haal banate he .

Maa- theek he Almash uth . Aaj nhi jana bus aur school nhi jana kya jaldi tayyar ho aur is saal tera highschool he . Mehnat karna khoob is baar tujhe sabse aache number lana he

Almash- ha Maa . Aur vese bhi me har baar hi top karta hoo . Aur Gudiya uth gyi ki nhi .

Maa- teri hi Behen he kaha uthi hogi . Chal jaldi tayyar hokar aaja nasta krne . Aur aaj tere Bhaiya apni age ki padhai ke liye ja rhe he seher

Almash- oh teri me to bhul hi gya tha

Aur phir jaldi se uth kar bathroom me ghuss jata he . Aur thodi der me tayyar ho kar neeche pahuch jata he .

Almash- gud morning . Bhai

Bhai- gud morning chote . Aur kya hua aak gya nhi akhade abhi todi der pehle lakhan aya tha lekin Chachi ne bola teri tabiyat kharab he

Almash- are Bhai . Aaj Taya Ji nhi the to chutti karli

Bhai- aane to pita ji ko phir batata hoo

Almash- theek he bata dijiyega . Mai bhi bol duga ki aap seher jakar padhai nhi kisi apni gf ke liyee ja rhe he

Bhai- kya kya b..b... bawass kar rha he

Almash- to thek he me Taya Ji ko bol duga aap ki NS ke bare me

Bhai- are chote me to mazak kar rha tha lekin tujhe kese pata

Almash- bs hum mahan logo ko sab pata chal jata he bs sahi samay ka intezaar rehte he aur pata to mujhe apke bare me bhut kuch he vo to meri sarafat

Bhai- bus kar aaj ke baad tere se panga nhi looga

Ladki- kis baat ke liye Bhai aap mere Almash Bhai ko pareshan kar rhe the

Bhai - lo agyi teri Gudiya . Ab to me chup hi rahooga

Almash- are kuch nhi Gudiya Bhai kisi NS ke bare me bata rhe the


Tau Ji- kya NS .... kar rhe ho tum sab

Bhai- k...kk..kuch nhi pitaji

Almash- Tau Ji vo Bhai kisi NS collge me admission ki baat kr rhe the

Phir isi tarah sabhi break fast krte he aur Bhaiya chale jate he seher
Aur Almash aur Gudiya apne school chale jate he . School pahuch kar Almash apne class me aur Gudiya 6th class me chali jati he ..
 

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Class me pahuch kar Almash apne sabhi dosto se milta he . Ye sabhi usi ke goan ke hote he . On sabme uske jo kareeb the vo the


(Hariya- ek sadarn ghar ka na jyada ameer na jyada gareeb

Rajan- iske pita goan ke sarpanch the to kafi naam tha

Rekha- ye Almash ke Tayi ki Behen ki Beti thi)


Rekha- lo agaya hero

Rajan- tu to bas usi ke peeche padi rha kar aur vo tere ko bhav bhi nhi deta he

Rekha - tu chup kar kamine manhoos baat hi karega

Almash- kya bate ho rhi Bhai

Hariya- kuch nhi ye dono bakwass kiye ja rhe he . Aur aaj itna derse kyu aya akhade me jyada hi mara rha tha

Almash- abe kuch to saram kar Ladki ke shamne

Hariya- maaf krde . Der se kyu aya he

Almash- vo aaj Bhaiya seher ja rhe the to usi me der ho gyi aur bata kya ho rha he

Rajan- kuch nhi bas yaha idhar udhar mar rhe he

Almash- is chipkali ko bhagao yaha se jab dekho chipki rehti he

Rekha- chup kar bandar jati hoo

Aur phir Rekha chali jati he apni saheliyo ke pass

Almash- ha to ab bol kuch nya he ya sab basi .

Rajan- abe suna he ki jo apni nayi teacher he unka apne principal ke sath chakkar chal rha he

Almash- ullu ke patthe kahi ke basi khabar hi aunayega . Uska chakkar bahut purana he isliye to pp ne usko school me rakha he

Hariya- sale tere pass to information ka khajana rehta he . Yaar chal ground me chalte he bunk maarke

Almash- ground me kya hoga is samay

Rajan- ab is samay ground me vo nayi teacher bacho ko pt sikha rhi hogi unhi ko dekh kar akhe sekege

Almash- salo kabhi to sudhar jao hamesha to Ladkiya tadte the ab to teachero ke bhi peeche pad gye ho
Phir teeno chal padte he ground ki aur jaha Hariya aur Rajan to lag jate he Ladkiyo ko dekhne me aur Almash chala jata he ped(tree) ke peche aur suru kar deta he apni cigrate sulgane ki tabhi vaha pe ek Ladka aata he aur bolta he

Ladka- Bhai vaha pe 9th ka ek Ladka apne dosto ke sath apki sis ko ched rha tha aur jab Rajan aur Hariya Bhai ne use roka to sabne usko marne lage
Ye sunkar Almash ka deemag garam ho jata he aur vo ground me us jagah pe pahuch jata he aur dekhta he ki uske dono dost ko kafi buri tarah mara sabne aur uski sis ka hath ek Ladka pakde he aur uski Gudiya ro rhi he .
 

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Almash ground me us jagah pe pahuch jata he aur dekhta he ki uske dono dost ko kafi buri tarah mara sabne aur uski sis ka hath ek Ladka pakde he aur uski Gudiya ro rhi he

Ye dekh uska para garam ho jata he vo kuch bhi seh sakta he but agar koi uski Behen ke bare me galat bol bhi deta he to vo uske sath kyaa krta he ye vo khud nhi janta he . Baat agar sirf dosto ki hoti to sayad vo sirf thoda bahut hi marta ya phir sirf unko bacha leta lekin yaha baat uski Gudiya ki hoti he


Almash bina kuch dekhe jis Ladke ne uski Behen ka hath pakda tha uska hath pakad ke marod deta he aur us Ladke ki haddi chatak ki awaz ke sath toot jati he

Ye dekh baki Ladke Darke bhagne lagte he lekin Almash ki ankhon me khoon sawar tha aur sabhi ko bhaga bhaga kar marta he . Itna sab ho jane kee baad vo Gudiya ko lekar ghar jata he jaha Taya Ji undono ki halat dekh kar poochte he

Bade Thakur(Taya Ji)- ye sab kya haal bana rakha he tumne aur ye ro kyu rhi he

Almash BT ko kuch nhi batana chahta he lekin Gudiya unko sari baat bata deti he jise sunkar unko bahut gussa ata he aur vo un Ladko ke ghar walo ke pass jakar unko achi tarah se samjha dete he .

Bade Thakur ke age gaon ka koi bhi aadmi kuch nhi bol sakta aur apne Ladko ki galti ke liye sabhi ke mata pita BT se apne Ladko ke wayavhar ke liye mafi mangti he .

Phir Bade Thakur sabhi Ladko ke ilaz ka sara kharch khud uthate he aur sabko ache aspatal me bharti karate he .

Sham ko jab ye baat Maa aur Tayi Ji ko pata chali to unhone Almash ko khub sunaya .

Maa- kya jaroorat thi ladai karne ki tujhe kuch ho jata .

Tayi Ji- tu( Gudiya) pehle nhi bata paa rhi thi ko vo Ladka tujhe pareshan karta he

Almash- Tayi Ji vo pehle se hi pareshan he ab aaplog bhi use hi daatrhe hoo

Tayi Ji- ha ab to hum dant bhi nhi sakte . Chal ab jaldi khana kha aur sone jao

Almash khana khata he aur phir sone ke liye nikal jata he



Tabhi vaha pe shor ki wajah se AT apni soch se bahar nikalta he to dekhta he samne 3 Ladkiya he jo bak bak kr rhi he

Ladki - tum dono ( AT aur Ravi) yaha se hato

AT- kyu hate tumhare baap ki seat he

Us Ladki ne ese reply ke bare me socha bhi nhi tha use to laga tha ki uski khoobsurti dekh kar vo Ladka khud hat jayega

Ladki- tumhari himmat kese hui Sheela ( us Ladki ka naam) ke bare me esa bolne ki . Jahil insaan .

Ravi- are chod na yaar uth jate he thoda adjust ho jate he thodi der ki hi baat he

Vaha aas pass ke pessenger bhi bolne lagte he Ladkiyo ke khade rehte khud bethe he .

Todi der baad ek station aata he aur us seat ka ek aadmi utar jata he .

Ravi-le ye jagah khali ho gyi chal beth ja tu

AT- tu bethja mujhe bahr gate ke pass ja rha hoo .waha pe tazi hawa milegi

Sheela- ha jao vese bhi me bhi kisi jahil ke sath nhi bethne wali hoo


AT- apna muh band rakho nhi to isi train se utha kar bahar fek dooga samjhi

Aur ye bol kar bahar darwaze ke pass ajata he aur phir pahuch jata he apni soch me
 

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