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Us ladai ke baad se Almash school me kafi famous ho gya tha. School me vo pehle se hi kafi mashoor tha lekin is ladai ke baad to usme chaar chand lag gye the . Is ghatna ke baad kissi ne bhi Gudiya ki taraf nazar bhi uthake nhi dekhta tha.
Ese hi samay guzarta rha aur Almash ne high school ke exam bahut acche numbaro se pass kar liya tha . Sabhi log uske numbero se bahut khus hue . Almasha ke itne acche result ki khusi me Bade Thakur haweli me ek jashan ka elaan karte he. Jasan me poore gaon ki dawat hoti he. Almash kee sare dost vaha pe aye hote he.. vo Ladka jisko Almash ne mara hota he vo aur uske mata pita bhi aye hote he . Sabhi log Almash ko uske acche numbero ke liye badahai dete he.
Ese jashan chal rha hota he ki Almash ko Gudiya kehti he.
Gudiya- Bhaiya aapko Rekha Didi apke kamre me bula rhi he.
Almash- theek he. Main jata hoo.
Phir Almash apne kamre me pahuchta he jaha pe Rekha kadi hoti he.Almash ko dekhte hi Rekha jhat se jake Almash ke gale lag jati he aur i love you kehne lagti he.
Almash- ye tum kya kr rhi ho Rekha chodo mujhe . Ye sab galat he . Main tumko sirf ek dost manta hoo.
Almash ki jawab ke bina parwah kiya Rekha usko pakad ke kiss karrne lagti he. Almash kafi viroddh karta he lekin Rekha ko rok nhi pata he. Rekha aur Almash apne karname me busy hote he ki tabhi Rekha ki Maa vaha pee aajati he. Aur jor se chillati he
Rekha's Maa- hey bhagwaan ye kya kar rhe ho tum meri Beti ke sath.
Chillane ki awaaz sun kar sabhi log upar aajate he phir Rekha ki Maa bolti he.
Rekha's Maa- Thakur sahab ye dekhiya kya kr rha he aapkaa Beta meri Beti ko behla phusla ke apne kamre me bula kar uske sath ... Kya karna chahta he. Ab aaphi insaaf kariye.
Bade Thakur- Rekha bitiya tum batao hume yaha kya ho rha tha.
Rekha- Bade Thakur hum dono ek dooosre se pyaar krte he aur humne jo kiya kuch galat nhi kiya .hum shadi krege .
Almash- ye tum kya bol rhi ho Rekha. Me tumse kab pyaar krta hoo. Tumne hi mujhe yaha bulaya tha aur phir mere gale lag gyi. Please inhe sach batao.
Aadmi- ab aap insaaf kijiye ,us samay jab mere Bete ne aapki Beti ka hath pakda tha to isne usko kitna mara tha . Ab aap hi isko saza dijiye.
Bade Thakur- hum Almash ko sabke samne 10 kode marne ki saza dete he. Jo galti isne ki he . Aur agle mahine in dono ki sadi karai jayegi.
Is bat ko sun kar jaha Rekha khus ho jati he ki uski shadi Almash se hogi vahi doosri aur Almash bolta he.
Almash- lekin me ye shadi nhi kar saakta me isse koi pyaar nhi karta. Almash itna bolta he ki Bade Thakur usko ek thappad marte he.
BT- humne jo faisla kar diya so kar diya. Aaj hume Manjari ki us harkat pe dukh hota he ki usne pata nhi kis gande khoon ko utha layi thi aur humne usse apna naam diya.
Almash- Maa kya me aapka Beta nhi hoo. Lekin Manjari kuch nhi bolti he. Kya apko bhi lagta he ki me itna gatiya kaam kr sakta hoo
. Lekin is baar bhi Manjari apna sirr jhukaye khadi rehti he.
Uske baad Almash ko sabke samne 10 kode padhte he lekin Almash uff tak nhi karta he.
Lekin shadi nhi karne ki than leta he.
BT- agar tum ye shadi nhi karoge to is gaon me bhi tumhari jaroorat nhi he. samjhe nikal jao mere ghar aur gaon.
Almash vaha se jane ke liye nikalta he ki Gudiya aajati he aur Almash ke gale lag jati he aur rone lagti he.
Almash usko chup karata he. Aur ander bhej deta he.fir Rekhaki taraf dekh ke bolta he.
Almash - abto khus hogi meri jindagi barbaad krke . Lekin jo tum jahti ho vo nhi hoga. Itna bol kar vo bahar aajata he . Abhi vo ghar se thodi dur hi nikla tha ki vaha pe Rekha aajati he.
Rekha- tumne acchha nhi kiya he mujhe thukra ke. Dekhliya tumhar sath kya hua. Abhi bhi ruk sakte ho mujhse shadi krke.
Almash kuch nhi bolta he . Aur vaha se chal detaa he.
PRESENT
Ye sab yaad krte waqt AT ki ankhon me ansoon aajate he. Shera vapas Ravi ke pass jata he par vha ka nazara kuch aur tha. Vaha pe 10 12 Ladke the jo Ravii ko pakde the aur Sheela ko ched rhe the .
Us ladai ke baad se Almash school me kafi famous ho gya tha. School me vo pehle se hi kafi mashoor tha lekin is ladai ke baad to usme chaar chand lag gye the . Is ghatna ke baad kissi ne bhi Gudiya ki taraf nazar bhi uthake nhi dekhta tha.
Ese hi samay guzarta rha aur Almash ne high school ke exam bahut acche numbaro se pass kar liya tha . Sabhi log uske numbero se bahut khus hue . Almasha ke itne acche result ki khusi me Bade Thakur haweli me ek jashan ka elaan karte he. Jasan me poore gaon ki dawat hoti he. Almash kee sare dost vaha pe aye hote he.. vo Ladka jisko Almash ne mara hota he vo aur uske mata pita bhi aye hote he . Sabhi log Almash ko uske acche numbero ke liye badahai dete he.
Ese jashan chal rha hota he ki Almash ko Gudiya kehti he.
Gudiya- Bhaiya aapko Rekha Didi apke kamre me bula rhi he.
Almash- theek he. Main jata hoo.
Phir Almash apne kamre me pahuchta he jaha pe Rekha kadi hoti he.Almash ko dekhte hi Rekha jhat se jake Almash ke gale lag jati he aur i love you kehne lagti he.
Almash- ye tum kya kr rhi ho Rekha chodo mujhe . Ye sab galat he . Main tumko sirf ek dost manta hoo.
Almash ki jawab ke bina parwah kiya Rekha usko pakad ke kiss karrne lagti he. Almash kafi viroddh karta he lekin Rekha ko rok nhi pata he. Rekha aur Almash apne karname me busy hote he ki tabhi Rekha ki Maa vaha pee aajati he. Aur jor se chillati he
Rekha's Maa- hey bhagwaan ye kya kar rhe ho tum meri Beti ke sath.
Chillane ki awaaz sun kar sabhi log upar aajate he phir Rekha ki Maa bolti he.
Rekha's Maa- Thakur sahab ye dekhiya kya kr rha he aapkaa Beta meri Beti ko behla phusla ke apne kamre me bula kar uske sath ... Kya karna chahta he. Ab aaphi insaaf kariye.
Bade Thakur- Rekha bitiya tum batao hume yaha kya ho rha tha.
Rekha- Bade Thakur hum dono ek dooosre se pyaar krte he aur humne jo kiya kuch galat nhi kiya .hum shadi krege .
Almash- ye tum kya bol rhi ho Rekha. Me tumse kab pyaar krta hoo. Tumne hi mujhe yaha bulaya tha aur phir mere gale lag gyi. Please inhe sach batao.
Aadmi- ab aap insaaf kijiye ,us samay jab mere Bete ne aapki Beti ka hath pakda tha to isne usko kitna mara tha . Ab aap hi isko saza dijiye.
Bade Thakur- hum Almash ko sabke samne 10 kode marne ki saza dete he. Jo galti isne ki he . Aur agle mahine in dono ki sadi karai jayegi.
Is bat ko sun kar jaha Rekha khus ho jati he ki uski shadi Almash se hogi vahi doosri aur Almash bolta he.
Almash- lekin me ye shadi nhi kar saakta me isse koi pyaar nhi karta. Almash itna bolta he ki Bade Thakur usko ek thappad marte he.
BT- humne jo faisla kar diya so kar diya. Aaj hume Manjari ki us harkat pe dukh hota he ki usne pata nhi kis gande khoon ko utha layi thi aur humne usse apna naam diya.
Almash- Maa kya me aapka Beta nhi hoo. Lekin Manjari kuch nhi bolti he. Kya apko bhi lagta he ki me itna gatiya kaam kr sakta hoo
. Lekin is baar bhi Manjari apna sirr jhukaye khadi rehti he.
Uske baad Almash ko sabke samne 10 kode padhte he lekin Almash uff tak nhi karta he.
Lekin shadi nhi karne ki than leta he.
BT- agar tum ye shadi nhi karoge to is gaon me bhi tumhari jaroorat nhi he. samjhe nikal jao mere ghar aur gaon.
Almash vaha se jane ke liye nikalta he ki Gudiya aajati he aur Almash ke gale lag jati he aur rone lagti he.
Almash usko chup karata he. Aur ander bhej deta he.fir Rekhaki taraf dekh ke bolta he.
Almash - abto khus hogi meri jindagi barbaad krke . Lekin jo tum jahti ho vo nhi hoga. Itna bol kar vo bahar aajata he . Abhi vo ghar se thodi dur hi nikla tha ki vaha pe Rekha aajati he.
Rekha- tumne acchha nhi kiya he mujhe thukra ke. Dekhliya tumhar sath kya hua. Abhi bhi ruk sakte ho mujhse shadi krke.
Almash kuch nhi bolta he . Aur vaha se chal detaa he.
PRESENT
Ye sab yaad krte waqt AT ki ankhon me ansoon aajate he. Shera vapas Ravi ke pass jata he par vha ka nazara kuch aur tha. Vaha pe 10 12 Ladke the jo Ravii ko pakde the aur Sheela ko ched rhe the .
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Ye sab yaad krte waqt AT ki ankhon me ansoon aajate he. Shera vapas Ravi ke pass jata he par vha ka nazara kuch aur tha. Vaha pe 10 12 Ladke the jo Ravii ko pakde the aur Sheela ko ched rhe the .
Ab age-
AT- oye chod mere dost ko salon nhi to tum sabki vo halat karuga ki apne Maa- baap ko kosoge ki unhone tumko paida kyu kiya.... AT ye baat itne gusse aur chillake bolta he ki vaha pe khade sabhi logo ka haal kafi bura ho jata hai. Lekin vo Ladke Ravi ka hath nhi chodte hai aur bolta hai..
Ladka1- abe jyada chilla na janta nhi he tu ki main kon hooo. Ye pura ilaka hamara he baap ka he to tu chup chap nikal ja yaha se nhi to sari garmi teri gand me dal duga... Uski is baat me Ravi bolta hai..
Ravi- Beta tum sabto gye .. kehte he sher ke muh me hath nhi dalna chahiye aur tum sabne sher ke baap ke muh me gardan dal diya.. ab tum sab kya tera baap bhi aajayegato bhi AT ko rok nhi sakta..
Ravi ki baat sunkar vo sabhi Ladke use ghoorne lagte aur AT ko marne ke liye aage bhadte hai lekin unko kya pata hota he ki vo kya galti krne ja rhe hai.. jis aadmi ko koi bada fighter bhi chedne se pehle dus baar sochta he use ye bin mass ki haddi kee dache marne ki soch rhe hai..
Vo sabhi AT ko marne ke liye usme hamla krte he lekin agle pal hi palak japakte he sab ke sab jameen me lete behosh pade hote hai.
Ye kaam AT ne itni tez kiya hota he ki kisi ko bhi kuch samajh me nhi aarha hota he ki ye kya hua siway Ravi ke kyuki vo to AT ko jabse janta he tabse vo yahi dekhte aaya he ki samne wale ke hamle se pehle hi AT unhe dher kr deta hai..
Unsabhi ko marne ke baad AT unko ek side me krta hai aur pani unke chehre pe marta hai.. jab un Ladko ko hosh aata he to unka jo leader type hota hai vo bolta hai..
L1- tu nhi janta tune mujhe maar kar kya galtu ki he . Mere baap ka yaha raaj chalta e aur tune mujhe maar kar apni maut ko dawat di he..
AT- sukr mana ki mai nhi janta ki tu kon he . Kyuki agar me jaan gya to jab bhi mera mood kharab hoga to tujhe kisi bhi kone se dhoodh ke maruga to tere liye yahi aacha hoga ki bhool ja ki tu kabhi kisi AT se mila tha. Aur phir unsab ko agle station pe train se bahar kr deta he.. aur apni seat pe aake beth jata he jaha pe ab Sheela use bus ghoor rhi hoti he lekin ab uski nazar me gusa nhi balki ek kashish aur pyaar hota he jo ki AT se bardash nhi hota he aur vo agle station pe Ravi ko leke jabardasti utar jata he.
Ravi - abe sale dimag kharab ho gya he kya jo yaha utar gya hame do station baad utarna tha aur AT pe gussa karne lagta he jisse pareshan hokar AT uska muh band kr deta he aur bolta he..
AT- abe sale chup . Itni der se pak pak kiye ja rha he . Didi ki sadi he aur tu uska ek lauta Bhai hokar bhi kuch nhi leke ja rha he khali hath jayega kya meri naak katane ki sochi he . Kya sochegi vo . Isliye yaha se shopping krni he kyuki yehi is ilake ka sabse bada seher he..
Uske baad AT aur Ravi dono milkar kafi kapde, jewar , etc lete he . Uske baat AT ek car ke showroom me jata he aur vaha se ek bahut hi sunder car khareedta he. Jispe Ravi use itni mehgi car khareedne ko mana karta he lekin AT use ye keh kar rok deta he ki..
AT- abe sale sirf 70 lakh ki hi to hai . Aur itna paisa bank me rakh kar kya unme deemak lagwayege . Aur vese bhi tu mera Bhai he aur teri Didi meri Didi .. aur vese bhi vo tujhse jyada mujhse pyaar krti he to main apni Didi ke liye kuch bhi loo tu apna muh band rakh samjha..
Ravi AT ko gale laga leta hai aur kuch dair ke baad dono us car me nikal padte he Ravi ke ghar...
Ab dekhte hhe kya rang lati he AT ki kismat gaon me aur kya kya gun khiladi he ye jindagi... Janne ke liye sath bane rahiye..
Ye sab yaad krte waqt AT ki ankhon me ansoon aajate he. Shera vapas Ravi ke pass jata he par vha ka nazara kuch aur tha. Vaha pe 10 12 Ladke the jo Ravii ko pakde the aur Sheela ko ched rhe the .
Ab age-
AT- oye chod mere dost ko salon nhi to tum sabki vo halat karuga ki apne Maa- baap ko kosoge ki unhone tumko paida kyu kiya.... AT ye baat itne gusse aur chillake bolta he ki vaha pe khade sabhi logo ka haal kafi bura ho jata hai. Lekin vo Ladke Ravi ka hath nhi chodte hai aur bolta hai..
Ladka1- abe jyada chilla na janta nhi he tu ki main kon hooo. Ye pura ilaka hamara he baap ka he to tu chup chap nikal ja yaha se nhi to sari garmi teri gand me dal duga... Uski is baat me Ravi bolta hai..
Ravi- Beta tum sabto gye .. kehte he sher ke muh me hath nhi dalna chahiye aur tum sabne sher ke baap ke muh me gardan dal diya.. ab tum sab kya tera baap bhi aajayegato bhi AT ko rok nhi sakta..
Ravi ki baat sunkar vo sabhi Ladke use ghoorne lagte aur AT ko marne ke liye aage bhadte hai lekin unko kya pata hota he ki vo kya galti krne ja rhe hai.. jis aadmi ko koi bada fighter bhi chedne se pehle dus baar sochta he use ye bin mass ki haddi kee dache marne ki soch rhe hai..
Vo sabhi AT ko marne ke liye usme hamla krte he lekin agle pal hi palak japakte he sab ke sab jameen me lete behosh pade hote hai.
Ye kaam AT ne itni tez kiya hota he ki kisi ko bhi kuch samajh me nhi aarha hota he ki ye kya hua siway Ravi ke kyuki vo to AT ko jabse janta he tabse vo yahi dekhte aaya he ki samne wale ke hamle se pehle hi AT unhe dher kr deta hai..
Unsabhi ko marne ke baad AT unko ek side me krta hai aur pani unke chehre pe marta hai.. jab un Ladko ko hosh aata he to unka jo leader type hota hai vo bolta hai..
L1- tu nhi janta tune mujhe maar kar kya galtu ki he . Mere baap ka yaha raaj chalta e aur tune mujhe maar kar apni maut ko dawat di he..
AT- sukr mana ki mai nhi janta ki tu kon he . Kyuki agar me jaan gya to jab bhi mera mood kharab hoga to tujhe kisi bhi kone se dhoodh ke maruga to tere liye yahi aacha hoga ki bhool ja ki tu kabhi kisi AT se mila tha. Aur phir unsab ko agle station pe train se bahar kr deta he.. aur apni seat pe aake beth jata he jaha pe ab Sheela use bus ghoor rhi hoti he lekin ab uski nazar me gusa nhi balki ek kashish aur pyaar hota he jo ki AT se bardash nhi hota he aur vo agle station pe Ravi ko leke jabardasti utar jata he.
Ravi - abe sale dimag kharab ho gya he kya jo yaha utar gya hame do station baad utarna tha aur AT pe gussa karne lagta he jisse pareshan hokar AT uska muh band kr deta he aur bolta he..
AT- abe sale chup . Itni der se pak pak kiye ja rha he . Didi ki sadi he aur tu uska ek lauta Bhai hokar bhi kuch nhi leke ja rha he khali hath jayega kya meri naak katane ki sochi he . Kya sochegi vo . Isliye yaha se shopping krni he kyuki yehi is ilake ka sabse bada seher he..
Uske baad AT aur Ravi dono milkar kafi kapde, jewar , etc lete he . Uske baat AT ek car ke showroom me jata he aur vaha se ek bahut hi sunder car khareedta he. Jispe Ravi use itni mehgi car khareedne ko mana karta he lekin AT use ye keh kar rok deta he ki..
AT- abe sale sirf 70 lakh ki hi to hai . Aur itna paisa bank me rakh kar kya unme deemak lagwayege . Aur vese bhi tu mera Bhai he aur teri Didi meri Didi .. aur vese bhi vo tujhse jyada mujhse pyaar krti he to main apni Didi ke liye kuch bhi loo tu apna muh band rakh samjha..
Ravi AT ko gale laga leta hai aur kuch dair ke baad dono us car me nikal padte he Ravi ke ghar...
Ab dekhte hhe kya rang lati he AT ki kismat gaon me aur kya kya gun khiladi he ye jindagi... Janne ke liye sath bane rahiye..
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