Samar Rajput
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𝕿𝖍𝖊 𝕺𝖓𝖊 & 𝕺𝖓𝖑𝖞 𝕿𝖗𝖚𝖊 𝕶𝖎𝖓𝖌
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UPDATE- 09
Ravi AT ko gale laga leta hai aur kuch dair ke baad dono us car me nikal padte he Ravi ke ghar...
Ab aage-
AT car ko tezi se dauda deta he aur Ravi usko rasta batata he. Kafi time ho jane ke karan andhera hone lagta he . To Ravi bolta he..
Ravi- hume jaldi krni hogi raat hone wali he aur idhar dakuo ka kafi khatra rehta he.
AT- kyu be teri fat rhi he dakuo ke naam se abe mene apna bachpan in jungalo me bitaya.. iske aage kuch nhi bolta he aur chup ho jata he..
Ravi- kya bola .. in jangalo me matlab tu idhar ka hi rehne wala he aur mujhe bataya bhi nhi kabhi..
AT- abe chod in bato ko .. mujhe vo bate dubara yaad nhi krni me to bus sirf tere wajah se yaha aaya hoo nhi to yaha kafi bhi nhi aana chahta tha ab tu chup beth aur dobara kafi ye baat mat krna agar kabhi jaroorat padi to me khud thujhe bata dooga.
Uske baad dono ke beech koi baat nhi hoti he aur dono chal dete he gaon ki taraf. Kuch hi samay me dono Ravi ke gaon pahuch jate . Raat ke 10 baj jane ke karan sabhi log apne apne gharo me hote he. Ravi AT ko rasta batata he aur vo ghar ek haweli ke samne rokta he.
Raat ke andhere me jal rhe bulb me haweli bahut sunder lag rhi hoti he. Car ki awaaz sunkar ek naukar aajata he aur phir AT aur Ravi gadi ko ek jagah khadi krke ander jate he jaha pe Ravi ke mata - pita aur uski Behen hoti he.
Ravi ke mata- pita to AT ko nhi jante hote he lekin uski Behen AT ko janti thi aur apne Bhai ki tarah samjhti thi. Ravi AT ka parichey apne mata pita se karata he . Aur phir kafi thak jane ke karan dono so jate he.
NEXT DAY-
Ravi aur AT uth jate he aur jake dining table pe bethe he jaha Ravi ki Didi pehle se hi hoti he..AT ko dekh kr bolti he..
Didi- dhanye hue bhagye hamare jo swaym AT maharaj hamari shadi me padhare.
AT- kya Nisha Di .. aapne kese soch liya ki main aapki shadi me nhi aaoga. Aapna bulati to bhi me jaroor aata
Ravi-(AT ke kaan me) abe tune kab bola tha aane ko . Ab Didi se jhoot bol rha he.
AT- ( dheere se) bade mahaan admi ne kaha he ki jis jhoot se kisi ka fayda ho use jhoot nhi . Aur apne fayde se bada kya fayda hota he is liye apne fayde ke liye me din bhar me 100-200 ese sach( jhooth) bol diya krta hoo.
Ravi- aur ye mahaan aadmi kon he..
AT- saad Bhai bahut naam he unka . Ese sach(jhoot ) to vo din bhar bola karte he
Nisha- oye ye kya khusur phusur kr rhe ho. Mere liye koi gift laye ho ya nhi. Ki khali hath agye ho..
AT- me to la rha tha but isne bola ki chodo kya Didi ko gift doge . Didi ko 1 rupye wali eclairs khila dege vo khus ho jayegi.. ye sun Nisha Ravi ko marne lagti he pyaar se.
Ravi- Didi jhoot bol rha he ye kamina mene esa kuch nhi bola..
Tabhi uski Maa aajati he..
R mom- kya Nisha itni badi ho gyi he aur gift ke liye lad rhi he.
AT- rehne diya na aunty vese bhi Behne agar Bhai se gift nhi mangegi to kisse mangegi..
R mom- lagta he apni Behen se bahut payaar krta he.
AT- sayad mere naseeb me vo pyaar hi nhi he. Aur ye baad bolte hue uski ankho me anssoon aajate he..
Nisha- oye.. shenti hona band kr . Me kya teri Behen nhi hoo. Aur AT ke gale laga leti he thodi dair baad jab AT alag hote he..to Nisha bolti..
Nisha- ye sheti hokar tune jo mera gift se peecha chutane ke liye socha he . Esa sochna bhi mat kyuki gift liye bina me manugi nhi..
Ravi- chal Bhai dede gift nhi to pata chala shadi me khana bhi na khane de...
AT- chaliye Didi aapko aapka gift dikhata hoo aur phir DONO jake Nisha ko nyi car dikhate he ..
AT - to kesa laga gift ...
Nisha- bahut aacha he thankyou...
Ravi- aabhi to suruwat he . Abhi to bahut se gift he fir vo dono car se sara samaan nikalte he aur ghar me lake dikhate he jisme kuch jwellary aur kapde aur etc samaan hota he jise dekh Nisha khush hojati he.
AT- Didi vese aapne hamare jiju ka naam nhi bataya
Nisha- ( sarmate hue) Rajesh Thakur.... Aur uske gaal laal hojate he.
AT - kahi vo Rajatgarh ke Bade Thakur ke Bete to nhi..
Nisha- ha lekin tum kya jante ho unhe...
AT- nahi Didi bus naam suna he aur vaha se apni nam akhe leke haweli ki chat ke aur..
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Update 10
AT- nahi Didi bus naam suna he aur vaha se apni nam akhe liye haweli ki chat ki aur chal deta he.
Ab age....
AT ki ankhon ki nami baki to kisi ko nhi dikhti he lekin Ravi ye dekh leta he aur vo bhi AT ke peeche- pecche chat pe pahuch jata he.. aur uske bagal me khada ho jata he jaha pe AT khada hokar samne ke pahad ko dekh rha hota he..
Ravi- to tu Rajatgarh se he.
AT- kya bol rhahe..
Ravi- dekh me tujhe kayi salo se jannat hoo aur teri ankhon me nami jaldi nhi aati he aur jab aati he to tu janta he kis liye aati he to ab sach bata ..
AT- Ravi ki baato ko sunkar thodi der tak khada sochta rehta he phir bolta he.. vo mere bade Bhaiya he..
Ravi- ye sun kar usko ek jhatka lagta he..
AT- janta hoo to yahi soch rha he na ki mera pariwaar jab jinda he to mene kabhi tujhe unke baare me kyu nhi bataya ..
Ravi bus apni mundi ha me hilata he.
AT phir apne bachpan ki puri kahani batata he ki unlogo ne use goad liya tha aur kese usko ghar se nikala gya............. Aur dobara kabhi sakal nhi dikhane ko bola.
AT- isiliye me wapas yaha nhi aana chahta tha. Lekin teri wajah se aana pada aur ab vapas unlogo ke samne jake na me unko dukhi krna chahta hoo aur na hi khud tutna chahta hoo..
Ravi- shant ho jao itna samay beet gya he vo log bhi sayad samjh gyee hoge ki usme teri galti nhi thi aur vese bhi vo log tujhe pehchanege nhi itne samay beet jane ke baad aur ab ye face sahi kar nhi to Didi ya kahu teri hone wali bhabhi dekh legi to samat aajayegi..
Uske baad usdin kuch khas nhi hota he pura din tayyariyo me nikal jaata he Ravi aur AT sari jimedari bakhoobi nibhate he .
AT the day of marriage-
Baraat ane ka waqt ho rha hota he aur ghar pe bahut chehel pehel hoti he . Samne ke darwaze pe Ravi aur uske pita baraat ka swagat krne ke liye khade hote he. AT waha pe nhi rukna chahta tha lekin Ravi jabardasti use waha pe ghaseet ke le jata he.
Kuch hi dair me baraat aajaati he. Charo aur patako ki ghunj sunayi dene lagti he. Raat ke kale aasmaan me rang birange patako ki rosni uski sundarta ko nikharne lagte he . Wahi pe AT ke dil me bhi ek khusi ki leher dod padti he aaj itne salo baad usne apne pariwaar ko dekha hota he. Uska Bhaii jo aaj ghode pe sawar hota he. Uski Behen jo ab badi ho gyi hoti he. Sabhi ko dekh uska dil khushi se jhoom uthta he lekin vo chah ke bhi kisi se nhi mil sakta tha.
Sabhi ne milkar barat ka swagat kiya aur Ravi ne sabka prichey AT se karaya. Lekin jab AT ke samne ek Ladki aati he aur apna naam batati he to AT ki ankhon me gussa aajata he lekin shadi ke mahol ko dekh kar vo ise bigadna nhi chahta tha isliye vo shant rehta he. Lekin vo Ladki to bus AT ko ghure ja rhi hoti he jisse uska para chadne lagta he aur vo vaha se hat jata he aur ander ka kaam dekhne lagta he. Ye Ladki koi aur nhi balki Rekha hoti he jiske wajah se AT ki jindagi barbaad ho jati he.. puri shadi ke samay vo bus AT ko ghura karti he aur apni adao se use rijhane ki koshish krti he lekin AT usko bhav nhi deta he. Isi tarah shadi ki rasme ho jati he aur bidai ka samay doosre din tay hota he. Sabhi log kafi raat hojane ke karan aaram karne ke liye jane lagte he isi beech AT bhi jane lagta he ki Ravi use rokte hue bolta he...
Ravi- abe kaha ja rha he chal ab apni aasli party suru krte he.
AT- kesi party..
Ravi- jannat ki party.....
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