Fantasy States War (Completed)

[Ng_TheViper]

Wah very nice...

Bahubali movie ki yaad aagai.

Ye rajkumari maytra Kon h aur ye konsi Rani h I mean Kya ye crystal state ki Rani h ya kiss aur state ki .. shayad crystal state ki Rani aur raja Marr chuke the to ye koi aur hi hoga..

Well, Jo b h wo log apne raja ko bachane ki planning akr rahe h aur Kato aisa hona Ni Dena chahta ..

Wahi dusri tarah hero Almash ko abtk apne bare m kch Ni pata. Jackli k pass 15 din h jisme wo Almash ko sachai b bataegi aur train b karegi..

Let's see

 

[King Aryan]

Update -23



Kato- theek hai aur suno isbaar jo hum palace me lord Agni ke janamdin ka jashn manayege usme suraksha badha do aur us kaidi Raja ki suraksha me koi kasar nhi rehni chahiye . Agar is bar koi gadbad hui to meri to sirf rank aur ye ilaka jayega lekin tum sab ki jaan jayegi mere hatho... Samajh gye ab dafa ho jao sab ke sab...


Ab aage-


Kher us din Almash ki life me kuch aur nhi ghatta hai aur vo raat me dinner karke so jata hai agle din ke intezaar mai...



Agli subah Almash wapas usi jagah pe pahuch jata hai jaha pe Jackli ne use milne ke liye bola hota hai. Lekin vaha pe Jackli abhi taka nhi aayi hoti hai..



Almash vaha pe khada hua Jackli ke baare me socha raha hota hai ki tabhi usko ek jordar kick padti hai aur vo dur jake girta hai.. jab Almash vapas khada hokar marne wale ko dekhta hai to pata hai ki samne Jackli khadi hui uspar has rahi hoti hai...



Almash- ye kya behudgi hai.. kabhi sahi se nhi mil sakti ho tum jab dekho ladne ke mood me rehti ho.



Jackli- bacche , ye humle me tumhare bhale ke liye hi kar rhi hoo kyuki jab dusman humla karega to ye nhi batayega ki vo tumpe humla kar rha he aur tumhare dusman sirf marna jante hai ya marna ..


Almash- ye baccha baccha kya laga rakhta hai , mai koi bacccha nhi hoo tumse 2-3 saal bada hi hooga.. aur mere koi dusman nhi he jo mujhpe humla kare isliye ye faltoo ki kahani banana band karo..


Jackli- maine kaha tha na ki tum abhi bacche hi ho, me koi tumse 2-3 saal choti nhi hoo balko meri umar 118 saal hai... Aur ye koi kahani nhi hai balki ye sacchai he jisko janne ke liye tumhe vo locket apne sir pe lagana hoga aur fir tum sab samajh jaoge. Yaha mai sirf tumhare liye ayi hoo Prince kyuki ab sirf tumhi ho jo 5 State ko bacha sakte hoo..


Aur fir Almash vo locket apne mathe pe touch karta hai. Locket touch hote hi Almash ki ankhe band ho jati hai aur jab vo ankhe kholta hai to khud ek palace me pata hai. Palace me vo logo se baat karne ki koshish karta hai lekin nahi koi use dekh sakta hai aur na hi koi use sun sakta hai.


Almash ko samjh nhi aata hai ki vo ab kya kare ki tabhi use Jackli ki awaaz aati hai " ye sirf ek sirf yade hai jinme tum ja sakte ho lekin kuch kar nhi sakte ye tumhare bachpan ki yaad he jab tumhara janm hua tha." Aur phir Jackli ki awaaz band ho jati..


Uske baad Almash ke samne puri kahani aajati he uske janm aur apne pariwaar ki maut ki.jab Almash apni ankhe kholta hai to wapas vo usi jagah pe Jackli ke pass khada pata hai aur uski ankho me aansu aajate hai..


Jackli- mujhe pata hai ki tumhe kesa lag raha hai Prince lekin ye waqt ese rone ka nhi hai. Us jung me sirf tumne hi nhi pure 5 State ne bahut kuch khoya hai..


Almash- mai unlogo ko nhi choduga me un sab ko khatam kar duga.. mujhe abhi unke pass jana hai..


Jackli- ye waqt josh se nhi hosh se kaam lene ka hai. Abhi tum unlogo ka kuch nhi bigad sakte jiska example tumne last fight me dekha tha. Tum unke ek mamuli fighter se bhi nhi lad sake the..


Almash- to tum mujhe sikhao , tum to unse lad chuki ho..


Jackli- mai ye nhi kar sakti hoo tumhari Power bahut hai mai tumhe control nhi kar paoogi tumhe jo sikha sakta hai uske baarr me hume Guruji batayege.. aaj se 12 din baad hum log 5 State jayege kyu agar tum yaha ruke to tumhare apno kp bhi khatra he.... Ye lo (ek powder dete hue) isko apne ghar me sabhi ko pila dene vo sab kuch bhool jayege tumhare bare me aur yahi tumhare liye aur unke liye bhi jaruri hai... Aur koi sawaal


Almash- ye Nishan jo mere peeth pe bana hai iska kya matlab hai ..


Jackli- is Nishan ke bare me na to mujhe kuch pata he aur na hi Guruji ne mujhe kuch bataya hai... Ab tu jake apne pariwaar ke sath waqt bitao 12 din baad hume jana hai..


AFTER 12 DAYS...


Jackli- Almash tum tayyar hona ... Aur uskke baad Jackli vahi paper nikalti hai aur Almash ko ek mantr padhne ko bolti hai jisko bolte hi vaha pe ek portal khulta hai aur dono log pahuch jate hai Guruji ke samne...​

 

[King Aryan]

Update-24



Jackli- Almash tum tayyar hona ... Aur uskke baad Jackli vahi paper nikalti hai aur Almash ko ek mantr padhne ko bolti hai jisko bolte hi vaha pe ek portal khulta hai aur dono log pahuch jate hai Guruji ke samne...


Ab aage--

Portal se nikal kar vo sabhi ek choti si gufa me pahuch jate hai jaha pe Guru ji bethe hota hai.



Almash ko dekh kar Guruji apni jagah se uth kar jake Almash ko gale laga lete hai..



Guruji- kesa hai mera baccha.. aaj apne khoon ko wapas dekh kar jo khushi mil rahi hai vo mai bata nhi sakta hoo.. Guruji ki is baat se Almash ke sath sath Jackli ke bhi hosh ud jate hai..



Jackli- ye kya bol rahe he aap Guruji... Ye aap ka khoon mujhe khuch samajh nhi aaya.. price ka pura khandaan to khatam ho gya tha to aap kese ..



Guruji- us din tumne pucha tha na ki portal me jane ki izazat kese mili . Vo izazat mene hi di thi kyuki mai bhi Crystal State ke royal family ka hoo . Main Almash ke dada hoo



Almash- matlab aap mere dada hai ..



Guruji- ha.. mai tumhara dada hoo, jab tumhara janm se kayi salo pehle hi maine sanyass le liya tha isliye bahut kam hi log janye hai mere bare mai. Us humle wale din bhi mai waha aaya tha lekin bahut dair ho gyi thi . Jab mai waha pahucha to ek sainik tumko marne wala tha tabhi maine tumhari suraksha ke liye tumhe insaani duniya me bhej diya tha..


Uske baad thodi dair unlogo ke beach family drama hota hai jo likhna jaroori nhi hai isliye usko skip kar rha hoo..



After some hours....


Jackli- Guruji aapne kisi master ke bare me bola tha... Kya hua uska .. kab aayege vo...



Guruji- haa Almash ko unke pass hi jana hoga aur vo bhi kal hi..



Jackli- kaha jana hoga hame.. aur unka naam kya hai...




Guruji- unse milne ke liye Dark palace me jana hoga.... Aur vo bhi Almash ko akele jana hoga.. kyuki Dark palace me tum nhi jaa sakti ho ye baat tumhe aacchi tarah se pata hai... Almash ko akele hi King indra ko us kaid se nikalna hoga kyuki ab iswaqt agar koi itna Power bacha he to sirf King indra hi hai.. jo Almash ko control kar sakte hai..




Jackli- aaap jante he na ki Dark palace kitna khatarnak hai.. Almash kesa akela King ko chuda payega.. isse pehle bhi Rainbow State ke logo ne koshish kari thi lekin un sabko sirf muh ki khani padi thi..



Guruji- me janta hoo ye bahut khatarnak hai lekin ye Almash ko karna hi padega kyuki ye khatra to kuch bhi nhi hai age aane wale khatre ko dekh kar.. aur me use kuch cheeze duga jo uski madad karege... Itni dair se Almash jo shant betha hua tha vo bol uthta hai..




Almash- dadaji aap jesa chahte hai me jaooga aur un master ko leke aaoga...




Guruji- bahut acche mere bacche mujhe tumse yahi umeed thi... Tumhare liye mere pass kuch saman hai jo tumhari vaha pe bahut madad karega... Aur phir Guruji kuch saman Almash ko dete hai... Ye lo Almash ye jo pani he is botal me isko peete hai tum kuch samay ke liye gayab ho jaooge jisse vaha pe koi tumhe dekh nhi payega lekin vaha pe shatani kutte hoge jinse tumhe samhal ke rehna padega vo tumhe soong (smell) kar sakte hai isliye unse bach ke rehna...



Almash- aap jinta mat karo kutte hi to dekh luga unko...




Agle din raat ke samay Almash puri tarah se tayyar hota hai Dark palace jane ke liye.. aaj pure mahol me ek alag hi aatank ka jashn ho raha tha aasmaan me kale badal aur bijiliya kadak rahi hoti hai aur Almash aur Jackli Dark palace ki aur jaa rhe ho he..




Almash- suno Jackli ek baat batao.. ki tum mere sath Dark palace kyu nhi jaa sakti ho...



Jackli- last time unlogo ne mujhe pakad liya tha aur mere par kuch magical spell use kiye the , jisse me us palace ke 1km ki turi ke ander nhi aasakti hoo samajh lo( ki tabhi vo ruk jati hai ) iske aage me nhi ja sakti hoo yaha par se spell apna asar suru kar deta hai.. ab iske aage tumhe akele jana hoga...



Almash- tum sath chalti to accha rehta ...



Jackli kyu dar lag rha hai....


Almash- nhi dar nhi lag raha he lekin agar tumhare jaisi sundar, sexy 100 saal ki buddi hoti sath me to time kat jata .. Jackli apni tareef sun kar khush ho jati hai lekin jese hi vo puri baat ka matlab samajhti hai vo Almash ko dauda deti hai lekin jaise hi vo aage badhti hai usko eek jhatka lagta he aur vo peeche ho jati hai...



Jackli- tumko to me baad me dekh lugi ( Almash samajh jata he ki ab vo iske aage nhi aasakti hai ) ab suno ab aage tumhe akele jana hoga... Age toda chal kar hi tumhe vo palace dikh jayega... Ab jao aur jaldi aana.. me yahi intezaar karugi..



Almash- kyu ab mere bina buddi Ladki ka man nhi lagta aur haste hue vaha se aage badh jata hai... Aur kuch hi dair me use Dark palace dikh jata hai..






Dark palce ko dekh Almash man me sochta he ki sala in logo ko party manane ke liye ye bhootiya mahel hi mila .... Sale log agra aajate taj mahal bhook kara lete... Chod mere ko kya chal me bhi chalta hoo aaj Vampire ki party dekh luga.. pata nhi aage kya kya dekhne ko milega...​

 

[Hunterrrr69]

Bahut bdhia update bhai , kuch fast nikal rhe ho thoda slow kre story

 

[king cobra]

very nice bahut achcha update diya hai

 

[rocking navi]

Awesome update

 

[rocking navi]

Waiting for next update

 

[King Aryan]

UPDATE-25



Dark palce ko dekh Almash man me sochta he ki sala in logo ko party manane ke liye ye bhootiya mahel hi mila .... Sale log agra aajate taj mahal bhook kara lete... Chod mere ko kya chal me bhi chalta hoo aaj Vampire ki party dekh luga.. pata nhi aage kya kya dekhne ko milega...


Ab aage....

Almash us jaduyi pani ka istemaal karke gayab ho jata hai aur chal padta hai mehel ke gate ke pass.. jaha me kuch Vampire khade hote hai.. jo ander jane walo ko check kr rhe hote hai.. jin Vampire aur chudailo ke pass invitation card hota hai sirf unhi ko ander pravesh mil raha hota hai..


Almash bhi ek Vampire ke peeche peeche chal deta hai aur usi ke sath ander pahuch jata hai.. invisible hone ke karan vo kisi ko dikh to nhi raha hota hai lekin use is baat ka dar tha ki ye jadu sirf 30 min ke liye kaam karta hai aur kahi waqt se pehle hi jadu ka asar khatam na ho jaye...



Almash bhi us Vampire ke peeche peeche chal raha hota hai aur kuch hi dair me vo log ek haal me pahuch jate hai . Jaha ka naza bahut hi rangeen hota hai .. charo taraf saraab ko jagah khoon tha pine ke liye aur sabab me adhnangi chudaile jo vaha pe naach rhi hoti hai jinhe dekh Almash man me sochta hai..

Almash-(man me) lagta hai sirf duniya aur log change hue hai tharkipana inke pass bhi hai chalo apne ko kya ... Yaha ki party apne standard ki nhi hai... Jiss kaam ke liye aaya hoo vo karlu nhi to lene ke dene pad jayege..

Aur fir Almash vaha se chal deta hai aur mahal me vo jagah dekhne lagta hai jaha pe Raja ko chipaya gya ho lekin use kaid khana kahi nhi milta hai ki tabhi use us aur koi aata dikhayi deta hai jisne apne aapko puri tarah dakha rakka hota hai..


Almash bhi us shaksh ki aur chal deta hai lekin kuch hi dur chalne pe vo shaksh uski ankhon se gayab ho jata hai lekin use saamne kafi soldier( Vampire) dikhte hai aur use samajhte dair nhi lagti hai ki yahi vo jagah he jaha pe Raja ko kaid karke rakha gya hai...

Almash unsabhi soldiers ke pass jata hai aur ek rhakh( ash) type ki cheez un sabhi pe fekhta haai aur dekhte dekhte vo sabhi Vampire behosh ho jate hai... Ab pura rasta saaf ho gya hota hai aur Almash ander ki aur chal padta hai ..

Kaida khana bhi ek vichitr prakaar ka hota hai jaise ko bhool bhulayya ho. Vaha charo taraf darwaze hotai hai aur Almash jab bhi kisi darwaze ke ander jata hai to vo wapas usi jagah dusre darwaze se aajata hai..

Isi tarah kafi dair tak karne se vo pareshan ho jata hai ki tabhi use vaha pe vahi nakab wala sakhs dikhta hai... Jab Almash uske samne jaa ke us sakhs ko dekhta hai to pata hai ki vo ek Ladki hai...


Almash abhi us Ladki ko dekh raha hota he ki usi is baat ko bhi khabar na hoti hai ki ab vo invisible nhi raha hai aur vo Ladki bhi use dekh sakti hai...


Is baat se bekhabar Almash use dekh rha hota hai ko tabhi ek kick Almash ke pair pe padti hai... Aur vo wapas hosh me aajata hai....

Vo Ladki wapas humla karne wali hoti hai ki Almash tab tak sambhal jata hai aur uska hath mod kar uske gale pe chaku rakh deta hai....


Almash- kon ho tum ... Agar koi bhi hosiyaari kari aur pahredaro ko bulane ki koshish ki to gala kaat duga... Ladki bhi samjh jaati hai ki abhi usski koi bhi chal ispe bhari pad sakti hai hai.. isliye vo jhoot bolti hai..

Ladki- mera naam Maytra hai Rainbow State ke raj mahel me ek dasi hoo ... Humle ke waqt Vampire ne Raja ke sath hamare pita ko bhi kaid kar liya tha hum unhe hi chudane aaye hai ab ye khanjar hamare gale se hatao....

Almash- accha hua .. pooch liya nhi to chudail samjh kar maar diya hota .. aur konsi chakki ka aata khati hai yaha ki Ladkiya ... Itni jabardast kick sab marti hai...

Maytra- kya matlab aur tum kon ho... Aur yaha kya karne aaye ho...

Almash- hum yaha pe apne sasur ko lene aye hai.... Hamari Biwi ne shart rakhi hai ki jab tak uske pita ko hum wapas nhi layege tab tak vo hamare sath nahi chalegi.. Maytra kuch bolne wali hoti hai ki tabhi waha pe kuch aahat hoti hai aur dono us taraf dekhte hai....​

 

[King Aryan]

UPDATE-26



Almash- hum yaha pe apne sasur ko lene aye hai.... Hamari Biwi ne shart rakhi hai ki jab tak uske pita ko hum wapas nhi layege tab tak vo hamare sath nahi chalegi.. Maytra kuch bolne wali hoti hai ki tabhi waha pe kuch aahat hoti hai aur dono us taraf dekhte hai....


Ab aaage....

Jab vo log us taraf dekhte hai to ek gaurd dikhta hai jo inhi logo ki aur aaraha hota hai..

Gaurd ko dekh Almash turant Maytra ko pakad ek dawaze ke peeche chup jata hai aur thodi dair me vo gaurd bhi vapas chala jata hai...


Almash- vo Vampire us taraf se aya tha sayad udhar se hi us kaid khane ka rasta ho aur ye bolte hi dono log us darwaze ke ander chal dete hai jaha pe bahut se Cage bane the lekin sab khali the... Vo log aur aage badhne lagte hai.. tabhi Maytra bol padti hai...


Maytra- vese tumhare sasur ka naam kya hai....


Almash- naam to pata nhi kabhi....


Maytra- kya matlab tumne apni Biwi se uske pita ka name hi nhi poocha......

Almash- ab uske liye to pehle Biwi se milna hoga.. jab tak bivi se nhi miluga tab tak kese poochoog..

Maytra- kyaa???? To tum shadi kese kar rhe ho... Shocking way me...


Almash- bahut lambi kahani chalo short me batata hoo sayad isi bahane humko apni manjil mil jaye... Baat us samay ki hai jab me bahut chota tha... To mere pita ne bola ki jab tum bade ho jaoge to tumhari shadi ek Rajkumari se hogi.. bus fir me Rajkumari ko dhoodhne laga lekin nhi mili fir ek din ek Aourat mili aur vo boli ki meri Beti se shadi karlo... Fir me jab unke ghar gya to us Ladki ki Behen ne bola ki Didi ne bola ki vo tab hi mujhse shadi karegi jab mai uske pita ko chuda ke laooga... Bus tabse bhatak raha hoo...

Maytra- tumhari kahani to mere sir ke upar se jaa rhi hai... Tumhe us Ladki ka naam pata hai..

Almash- vo to uske baap se milne ke baad pooch loooga...


Maytra- mujhe esa kyu lag rha hai ki tum mujhe bewakoof bana rahe ho...

Almash-( man me) ab Ladkiyo ko bewakoof banana kon si badi baat hai... Phir bolta hai. Are meri itni kaha himmat jo itni sundar aur bahadur Ladki ke samne jhoot bolu...

Maytra- apni tareef sun toda sarma jati hai fir bolti hai .. agar tumhari us unknown Biwi ko pata chala ki tum ek ajnabi Ladki ke sath flirt kar rhe ho tumhara shadi se pehle hi talakh ho jayege....


Almash- vo samne dekho us Cage me roshni hai sayd waaha koi hai... Aur fir dono log waha pahuch jate hai.. aur Cage me dekhte hai jisme ek boodha aadmi hota hai jise dekh Maytra ki ankho me aasoo aajate hai aut vo pass me rakhi chabhi se Cage khol kar jake us admi ke gale lag jati hai aur rone lag jati hai. Aur yahi haal us aadmi ka bhi tha....


Maytra- pita ji aap theek to hai...


Raja indra- ha meri bacchi mujhe pata tha ek din tum jaroor aaogi.. aur phir dono ka thoda family drama chalta hai. Ki tabhi beech me Almash bol padta hai...


Almash- maaf kariyega lekin kya yaha pe sirf aap akele hai yaha pe aur koi kaidi nhi hai... Mujhe bola gya tha ki yaha pe Rainbow State ke King ko bhi kaid kar ke rakha gya........... Almash ki baat pe pehle dono kafi dair tak Almash ko ghoorte hai fir Raja bolta hai...


Raja indra- mai hi Rainbow State ka King hoo lekin tum kon ho aur mujhe kyu doodhne aaye hoo....


Almash- mere bare me aap baad me jaan lijiyega ... Us baare me aapko Guruji batade dege unhone ne hi mujhe yaha bheja hai lekin pehle hume yaha se bahar nikalna hoga.....tabhi ek bahut jordar awaaz aati hai...


" AUR HUM TO JAISE TUM LOGO GIFT PAKDA KE YAHA SE JINDA JANE DEGE "​

 

[King Aryan]

Update-27




Almash- mere bare me aap baad me jaan lijiyega ... Us baare me aapko Guruji batade dege unhone ne hi mujhe yaha bheja hai lekin pehle hume yaha se bahar nikalna hoga.....tabhi ek bahut jordar awaaz aati hai...



" AUR HUM TO JAISE TUM LOGO GIFT PAKDA KE YAHA SE JINDA JANE DEGE "


Ab aagd....


Almash jab samne dekhta hai to vaha pe ek ek rakhsakhs type ka aadmi khada hota hai jiske hath me ek hammer type ka hathiyaar hota hai....






Almash- na Bhai na hum to sigham ke yaar hai aur hum dono ka mannaa hai ki gift lena nhi chahiye bus dena chahiye..... Aur aapke liye to humne bahut aache aache gift rakhe hai...


Rakhshaks- kon ho tum aur yaha kya kar rhe ho jannte ho ye kiska mahel.....aur main kon hoo...


Almash- na Bhai na hum to nhi jannte chalo tumhi apna intro de do aur mahel to is khandar ko ese bol rhe ho jese mumtaz ki yaad me tajmahel banaya he.....


Rakhshahs- gustakh tu General Kato se mazak kar rha hai... Sipahiyo gher lo ise... aur khatam kardo is Ladke ko...


Almash- are itni jaldi kya hai khatam karne ki abhi to party me aaya hooo gift to duga tumhe..nhi to phir mohalle wale bolege ki muft ki roti thodne aagye hooo... Lekin yaha to roti hai hi nhi .. chalo jo ho pehle gift le lo...


Kato- haha maut sir pe khadi hai aur mazak kar rha hai ...


Almash- hhahahhaa tumko kya lag rha hai ki tumne mujhe gher ke rakha hai galat soch rhe ho.. ghira hua main nhi tum log ho....


Kato- tumhe kya lagta hai tum mujhe kuch bhi bologo aur main maan luga ye... Jab maut aati hai to aadmi pagalo jese hi baat karta hai....


Almash- mat mano meri baat khud hi dekho.. 5.....4....3....2....1.....


Dhadhaaammmm.......dhadhaam.....dhadhaammm........ Mahel ke charo taraf bomb ke ghoojne ki awaaz aarhi hoti hai jisse sun kar waha khade sare sipahi sakte mai aajate hai... Aur Kato turant sabko mahel ki surakhsha dekhne ke liye waha se bhej deta hai aur khud aakela khada hokar Almash , Raja aur Maytra ko ghoorne lagta hai.....​