Fantasy States War (Completed)

[John Cena]

Yar agla part da do is ka plZ

 

[Rahul]

wonderful update dost waiting next update abhi kaun aaya fir kya hua

 

[Siraj Patel]

Update -12



Ravi- bus kar Bhai aur kitna marega. Ab isme me kya karoo papa aur Didi ne bola he jana hi padega..

Ab age-

AT- kuch soch kar theek he chalooga me bhi... Lekin dhyan rhe ki kisi ko gaon me mere bare me pata nhi chalna chahiye..

Ravi- theek Bhai jesa tu bole. Chal ja apna saman pack kr le hume waha pe pura ek week rukna he aur phir wahi se Didi ko wapas lana he ek week baad.

Uske baad AT bhi apne kamre me chala jata he aur apna bag pack krke bahar aata he aur car me saman rakh deta he. Thodi dair me sab chalne lagte he aur Ravi aur AT bhi ek car me chal padte he . Baratiyo ke sath kuch 20-30 hathiyaar band log bhi hote he jinko dekh AT poochta he..

AT- abe Ravi ye hamare sath itne log kyu ja rhe he . Bidai hokar ghar ja rhi he dulhan ki ladne ke liye jung pe ja rhe he.

Ravi- Bhai tu to kayi salo pehle ye ilaka chod diya he isliye tujhe sayad yaha ke halat ke bare me nhi pata he.

AT- kyu kya hua yaha ke halat ko..

Ravi- pichle panch salo se yaha ke halat bahut bure ho gye he dakuo ka aatank bahut badh gya he. Din dahade lootpaat . Balatkar, logo ke ghar dukaan jala dete he aur koi kuch nhi kar pata he . Jinke pass Power he aadmi he paisa he vo ya to unse Ladke bach jate he ya phir paise deke aur jo gareeb he unko to bus unlogo ka atyachaar hi sehna padta he..

AT- aur yaha ki police aur government kya karti he.

Ravi- government ko to kuch pata hi nhi chalta he jo yaha ka mla aur bade police officers he vo sab unse mile hue he. Isliye koi bhi government action nhi hota he.

AT-kuch sochta he aur phir bolta he chal theek he . Kitni dair me nikal rhe he sab.

Ravi- 15 min me chal rhe he .

AT- ruk mai abhi aata hoo aur phir apne bag se ek cigret nikalta he aur ek side me jake pine lagta he. Thodi der me jab log chalne lagte he aur AT bhi car me beth jata he.

Yaha se safar kuch 40 km ka hota he aur gaon ke rasta hone ki wajah se kuch 1-1.5 ganta hota he.

Sabhi care waha se chal deti he . Raste ke sundar drasyo ka anand uthate hue. Sadko ke kinare lage hue phool aur ped bahut hi sundar lag rhe hote he . Pure raste me prakrati ki sunderta ka bahot hi accha pradarshan ho rha hota he.

Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....

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Insani duniya se dur kisi aur dimension me ek budha aadmi betha hua tapasya kr rha hota he. Uske charo aur kafi sare log bethe hote he jo kafi pareshan hote he aur us budhe aadmi ke tapassya se bahar aane ka intezar kar rhe hote he.

Ki tabhi achanak vo budha aadmi apni tapasya se jagta he aur muskura rha hota he jise dekh sabhi logo ko bahut ascharye hota he.. aur usme se ek aadmi us budhe vyakti se poochta he..

Aadmi- Guruji aap ese muskura rhe he. Ye jante hue bhi ki bahut jald hi Agni us kaid se bahar aane wala he aur is baar uski shaktiya aur bhi adhikh bad jayegi..


Admi 2- us kaid me rehte hue bhi usne 5 States pe puri tarah se kabza kar liye he aur sirf ab hum kuch hi log bache he jo usse lad rhe he lekin kab tak ye bhi nhi jante he. Hamare ander to ab itni takat bhi nhi he ki uske sipahiyo se jeet paye..

Guruji- shant ho jao. Tum sab ... Bahot jald hi vo wapas aarha jo 5 States ko wapas ajad karayega.( Tabhi vaha pe kafi dair se shant Ladki bolti he)

Ladki- kon ayega Guruji ...

Guruji- King of Xander Cage aur vohi ab Dark Prince Agni ko khatam karega..

Ladki- lekin Rajkumar to mar chuka he.

Guruji- nhi Jackli vo kabhi nhi mara tha. Queen of Crystal State ke jadui mantro ke wajah se vo yaha se dur insani duniya me chala gya tha aur uske bare me kisi ko nhi pata chal paye isliye Rani ne kuch mantro se ek raksha kavach bana diya tha jo ki tab hi hatega jab uske ander ki Shaktiya jagegi. aur jo bahut hi jald jagne wali he..lekin abhi vo itna takatwar nhi he ki vo Agni ka samna kr paye isliye pehle usko train karna padega.

Jackli- matlab ki uski Shakti aate hi uske bare me sabko pata chal jayega..

Guruji- nhi mera baccha . Jabtak vo insani duniya me he koi bhi uske bare me pata nhi kar sakta usko tabhi track kiya ja sakega jab vo insani duniya ko chod 5 State me ayega. Aur uski kismat bahut jald hi 5 State me use leke ayega.....

Guruji ki baaat sun kar sabhi kafi khus ho jate he..

(Jackli- age 150 years, but look like a girl of 19 or 20, sword fight me best aur kisi bhi tarah ke kaam ko bahut jald hi kar leti he. Demag aam aadmiyo se 100 guna tez chalta he iska. Baki ka intro waqt ane pe)
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Abhi un logo ne adhe se jyada hi rasta par kiya hota he ki sabhi gadiya ruk jati he....

AT- kya hua gadiya kyu rokdi gyi AT car se muh bahar nikal ke dekhta he to raste me kuch patthar pade hote he.

Sath aye hathiyar band log bahar utarte he aur samne pade hue paththaro ko uthate he ki tabhi goli chalne ki awaaz aati he.

"Dhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy​

Excellent update bhai super duper Bahot hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing & fantastic

Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai aur aap ki yahi mehnat Ke Karan aaj STATES WAR ke Deewano ki list din doguni aur rat chauguni badhati hi ja rahi hai,

Your update was awesome
Hats off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills,

Keep going
We will wait for next update

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[Ng_TheViper]

States War

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_7NinEPmFvKlqbroMCFVJN9f4yecwnLG

It's not opening in my phone..

Will u plz post all update all together...

 

[King Aryan]

Update 13




Sath aye hathiyar band log bahar utarte he aur samne pade hue paththaro ko uthate he ki tabhi goli chalne ki awaaz aati he.

"Dhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy"

Ab aage-...

Goli ki awaaz sun baki ke sabhi hathiyaar band log gadiyo se utar kar pathro ke pass jate he aur charo taraf fail kar sabhi apni position lete he lekin jab tak vo sab position lete he tab tak kayi goliya aur chalti he aur 10 ke aas pass log mar chuke hote hai..

Goliyo ki awaaz sun kar sabhi log dar jate he aur gadi me bethi aurton ki cheekh nikalne lagti he. Sabhi logo ka dar ke mare bura haal ho rha hota he kisi ne bhi ye nhi socha tha ki kuch dair pehle jahaa itna khushi ka mahol tha wahi ab itna khauf ka mahol ho jayega.

Logo ko marte dekh AT car se utarne lagta he lekin Ravi use utarne nahi deta he . Thodi dair esi hi firing hoti rehti he aur Thakur ke sath aye sabhi logo ki maut ho jati he aur ab jo kuch bache the vo itni buri tarah se ghayal hote he ki unme ladne kki bilkul takat bhi bachti he ..

Kuch hi waqt me dakuo ne sabhi logo ko gher liya hota he sabhi logo kafi dare hue hote he lekin is waqt AT bahut gusse me hota he lekin samne kuch 40-50 ke aas paas daku hote hr jinhe dekh AT bhi samajh jata he ki agar inse panga abhi liya to ghar ke kafi logo ko chot aur nuksan pahuchega . Isliye vo bhi shant gadi me beth jata he.

Sabhi daku charo aur se gadiyo ko gher ke khade ho jate he aur gadi se Bade Thakur , Rajesh, AT, Ravi aur kuch log bahar nikal ke dakuo ke samne khade ho jate he..

Bade Thakur- gujjar tum log accha nhi kr rhe ho jante ho iska anjaam kya hoga..

Gujjar- hahahah budhe kabar me pair rakhe hue ho aur akad abhi bhi nhi gyi jante hona gujjar ki agar khisak gyi to tumhare gaon me ghuss kar tumhare pure khandam ko khatam kr dege.

Rajesh- pitaji shant ho jayiye abhi hum kuch nhi kr sakte he .. hamare sath pariwar bhi he abhi inhe sara saman de dete he...

Gujjar- dekh budhe tera Beta to kafi samajhdar he. Suna he nayi nayi sadhi hui he aur dulhan ko le jaya ja rha he .

Daku 1- sardar gadi to kafi jawan maal he ab inko agar chod diya jayega to ye to daketi ke khilaf hoga.


Daku 2- inke sath to raat rangeen ho jayegi... Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh aur ek jordar cheekh uske muh se nikalti he aur vo vahi mar jata he. Jab raga uski taraf dekhta he to pata he ki AT ne ek chaku nikal us daku ko mara hota he aur vo chaku seedha ja ke daku ke dil dil pr lahta he

Gujjar daku apne aadmi pe humla hua dekh baukhla jata he lekin jab tak vo bandhookh kisi pe chalata AT apni fulti kaistemaal kar seedha jake Gujjjar ki gardan ko apni giraft me le leta he aur ese pakadta he ki agar gujjar zara sa bhi hilta he to uski gardan me bahut zor ka dard hota he.

AT- suno sardar ke chamcho agar apne sardar ki jaan pyaari he to sab log jaldi se apne hathyaar phekdo nhi to sardar ko is jism se azaad kardoooga.

Gujjar- aah jaldi se fekhdo. Ahh...

AT- suna na . Ravi sare hathiyaar utha lo . Aur aap sabhi(Thakur ke pariwar walo se) gadi me beth jayiye aur bahar mat nikalna...

Raga- tum accha nhi kar rhe ho jante nhi ho ki tumhare sath kya hoga..

AT- hahhaha .. geedad ki gardan mere hath he lekin abhi bhi sekhi nhi khatam ho rhi he. Soch raha hoo ki aaj is gujjar ke kisse ko khatam hi kar du kyu age chal kar masla rhe kya kehte ho Bhai log( dakuo se) aur phir AT gujjar ke dono pairo pe bahut zor se marta he aur gujjar dard se bilbilane lagta he aur zameen pe gir kar chillane lagta he..

Apne sardar ka ye haal dekh kar sabhi dakoa ka haal bura ho jata he aur sab ek sath AT par toot padtr he lekin AT apni puri furti ka istemal kar samne aarhe 4 logo ko turant khatam kar deta he..

Dako log apne jeb se chaku nikal kar AT par hamla karne lagte he lekin jese hi vo chaku AT ko chune wale hote he ki achanak vo sabhi chaku AT ke shareer se 1 feet ki duri pe ruk jate he aur wapas dakuo pe baras padte he aur sabhi daku apne kiye gye war se hi mare jate he. Jab ye sab hua hota he to sab log gadiyo me hote he isliye koi bhi isi dekh nhi pata he lekin achanak se hue is waqiye se AT puri tarah se chockh jata he. Aur vo isi ke bare me sochne lagta he ki gujjar apni jeb se ek chota desi katta( revolver ) nikal kar AT pe humla kar deta he aur goli AT ke baju me lagti he.

Goli ki awaaz sun kar sablog car se bahar nikalte he aur dekhte ki goli AT ke baju me lagi hui he aur khoon nikal rha hota he. Gujjar dobara goli chalane wala hota he lekin Rajesh uske hath pe maar kar uski gun gira deta he aur Ravi aur Rajesh dono mil kar usko apne kamze me le lete he..

Ravi- ab iska kya kare.

BT-isko to kanoon ke hawale kar dete hai..

AT- isko kanoon ke hawale nhi balki iske.........

... Jisko sun sabhi log shock ho jate he aur AT ke chehre pe muskaan aajati he.​

 

[King Aryan]

Update-14





Ravi- ab iska kya kare.

BT-isko to kanoon ke hawale kar dete hai..

AT- isko kanoon ke hawale nhi balki iske hath pairo ki haddiya tod kar ise beech chorahe pe latkaya jayega jab tak iski maut nhi hogi. Taki har koi iska anjaam dekhh ke sabak le ki esa karne walo ka kya ho sakta he. Aur agar aap log chahte he ki hum ise police me de taki ye kuch samay ke baad wapas vaha se bhag kar apna aatak dobara se failana suru kare to me kuch nhi boluga kyuki ye aap logo ka ilaka he aage pareshani bhi aap hi logo ko hogi... Aur iske baad sab log shant ho jate he.

BT: tum sahi keh rhe ho AT Beta yahi iske liye sahi hoga.. lekin tabhi AT ke hath se nikalta khoon dekh kar Manjari ki cheekh nikal jati he

Manjari- (pareshan hote hue) aap log yaha khade hue kya bate kar rhe he dekh nhi rhe he ki isko goli lagi he jaldi se ise aspataal le ke chaliye.( Man me) isko takleef me dekh kar mujhe kyu itni takleef ho rhi he akhir kyu. Kon lagta he ye mera akhir kya lagta he lekin samne AT ka khoon dekh vo apne man se sare khayal nikal kar wapas AT ke liye fikarmand ho jati he..


AT- (man me) aaj bhi mere dard ko dekh tumhe takleef hoti he . Mujhe na pehchante hue bhi aapko meri takleef ka andaaza ho gye yahi to pyaar he, Maa ki mamta he..

Ravi- jaldi chalo hospital chal tu(AT se) gadi me beth ja...

AT- shant ho jao kuch nhi hua he mujhe aur ye abhi theek ho jayegi aur aap sab log gadi me bethiye( sabhi ladies se) lekin sab wahi khadi rehti he.. jise dekh BT sabko ander bethne ke liye kehte he aur sab chintit bhav me gadi me beth jati he..

AT- Ravi mera bag laa.. aur fir Ravi car se bag lata he.. AT bag se ek chaku nikalta he aur fir use garam karta he.. chaku kuch dair me garam ho jata he aur phir apne ghav se chaku ki madad se goli nikalta he. Goli nikalne ke baad ghav pe pass pade kuch barood ko dalta he aur usme aag laga deta he.. thodi der me hi khav se khoon band ho jata he aur vo ek kapda us ghav pe bandh deta he...

BT- ab hame chalna chahiye ... Aur thodi dair me hi sab vaha se nikal gaon pahuch jate he jaha pe daku guzzar ko chaurahe ke beecho beech latkaya jata he aur har aane jane wala aadmi uspar pathar barsata rehta he jab tak puri tarah se uski jaan nhi chali jati he.....

Sabhi log Haweli pahuch jate he jaha pe nayi bahu ka jamkar swagat hota he. Kafi lambe aur thakawat ka safar hone ke karan sabhi log apne apne kamre me chale jate he aur so jate he...

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Some where in 5 STATE...

Aadmi- General humne abhi abhi kuch orb energy ka signal mila jo dusrre dimension se aaya tha lekin kuch hi sec kee liye jisse hum use track nhi kar paye..

General- isme esi konsi khas baat he jo tum mujhe bata rhe ho. Esi faltu bato ke liye mere pass time nhi he..

Aadmi- lekin sur vo signal insani duniya se aya he aur vaha ke logo ki enery itni high nhi hoti he ki vo dusre dimension se track ki ja sake..

General- matlab tumhare kehne ka ka matlab he ki vo orb energy insani duniya ke kisi sakhs ki nhi balki hamare States me se kisi ki he..

Aadmi- hum ye keh sakte he General Kato...

Kato- tum saaf saaf bataoge ...

Aadmi- General vo energy itne kam time ke liye track hui thi ki hume ye nhi pata chal paya ki vo kaha se aayi he lekin itna confirm he ki vo energy 5 States ke hi kisi prani ki he . Lekin vo energy bahut hi high level ki he...

Kato- kya ye pata chala ki vo kis level ki thi..( thoda gabrate hue )

Aadmi- (kuch socchte hue) General me is baat ko confirm se to nhi keh sakta but vo energy supreme level ki thi... Aur last time jab hume esi energy dikhi thi jab hum logo ne Crystal State pe humla kiya tha. Aap samjh rhe he me kya kehna chahta hoo..

Kato- esa nhi ho sakta he . Vo baccha to mar chuka tha. Sayad tumko galat femi hui he lekin agar ye baat sahi hui to hume kuch na kuch karna hi hoga..

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Jackli- Guruji abhi hame khabar mili he ki General Kato ko shak ho gya ki King of Xander Cage jinda he..

Guruji- mujhe pehle se hi isbare me pata tha ki uski Shaktiya aate hi dusmano ko khabar mil jayegi.. aur iske hal bhi mene pehle hi nikal diya tha...ye lo( ek locket) dete hue.. ise kisi bhi tarah jake usko pehna do aur phir koi bhi uski enwrgy ko track nhi kar payega...

Jackli- lekin Guruji aap jante he ki dusri duniya me ya kisi anye dimension me jane ke liye permission chahiye hoti he joki sirf royal family hi de sakti he.. aur ab jo bhi royal family he vo ya to mar chuki he ya fir Agni ki gulam he. Aur bina permisson ke sirf royal log hi ja sakte..

Guruji- nhi abhi bhi kuch ese log he jo gulam nhi he . Me jald se jald permission ka bandobast krta hoo...
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Agli subah jab AT ki neendh khulti he to vo apnse samne khade sakhs ko dekh khuss ho jata he aur uske chehre pe ek smile aajati...​

 

[King Aryan]

Update-15


Agli subah jab AT ki neendh khulti he to vo apnse samne khade sakhs ko dekh khuss ho jata he aur uske chehre pe ek smile aajati...

Ab age-

AT ke samne is samay uski jaan se bhi pyaari Behen Aashi khadi hoti he jisko aaj kayi salo baad subah subah dekha tha. Aashi ka sundar aur masoom chehra dekh AT vapas apne bachpan ki yado me kho jata he jab roz subah Aashi aakar uspar pani dal ke use uthati thi . AT Apne khayalo se bahar aakar bolta he..

AT- tum yaha kya kar rhi hoo..

Aashi- vo main aapke liye haldi wala doodh layi thi aapko goli lagi thi aur kal ke liye aapka sukriya karne aayi thi Bhaiya...

AT- ek taraf Bhaiya bhi bolti he aur dooari taraf sukriya bhi bolti he...

Aashi- sorry Bhaiya..

AT- phirse sorry... Aur dono hasne lagte he..

Aashi- ab aapki chot kesi hai...dard to nhi ho rha he ab jyada..

AT- nhi ab to bilkul bhi dard nhi he bus ab patti nikal ke bus ye dekhna he ki ye ghav kab tak bharega... Abhi dono bate kr hi rhe hote he ki waha pe Rekha aajati he jise dekh kar AT aur Aashi dono ko bahut gussa aajata he..

Aashi(man me)- aagyi kamine pehle me mere Bhaiya ki jindagi barbaad kr di thi ab yaha aakar kahin AT Bhaiya ki bhi jindagi barbaad na kar de )

AT(man me)- gaon se jane se pehle iska vo haal karuga ki ye saat sanmo tak royegi ki isne kisse panga liya he..

Rekha(man me)- kya must body he iski .. ek baar isko pata liya kaye to jannat ka maza milega iske sath. Eski ankhen me to esi kashish dikhti he ki kya batao.. aaj tak jitne bhi mardo ko bhoga he iske samne to sab chay kam pani he)

Teeno hi apni soch me doobe hote ki tabhi Rekha kuch bolna ke liye apna muh kholti he lekin Aashi uski baat ko katte hue bolti hai..

Aashi- Bhaiya aap jaldi se fresh ho jayiye . Breakfast ready he. Jaldi se neeche aajayiye uske baad me aapko gaon ghumane le chalugi. Chalege na ghumne.. ye baat vo itne masumiyat se karti he ki AT bhi mana nhi kar pata he. Aur bolta he..

AT- theek he tum ghar me sabse pooch lo phir chalege..

Rekha- chaliye AT ji me bhi aap logo ke sath chalti hoo yaha ka pura ilaka acche acche se janti hoo..

Aashi-( ghur kar) nhi hum log aapke sath nhi jayege.. Aashi Rekha ko esa gusse me dekhti he jese bol rhi ho ki agar yaha tang ladai to ttumhara pura kala chittha kholdugi..

Aashi ke gusse aur nazro ko dekh Rekha bhi dar jati he kyuki agar usne kuch kiya to Rekha ki sari aayyasi band ho jati ..

Rekha- theek he vese bhi mujhe kaam he..(man me) ye sali bahut uchalne lagi he iska bandosbast jaldi hi karna hoga sali bahut jawan ho rhi he .. iski jawani ka ras kisi ko jald hi chakhana padega..

Thodi der me AT bhi fresh ho jata he aur aapne jakh par se patti hatata he lekin jese hi vo patti hatata he vo puri tarah se shock ho jata he. Jaha kal goli lagne ke wajah se ghav tha aaj vha koi ghav nhi hota he esa lagta he ki kabhi koi chot lagi ho na ho.

Ye dekh ke AT ko bhi samajh nhi aata he ki aakhir uske sath ho kya rha he pehle ladai ke dauran chakuo ka rukna aur vapas dusmano par humla karna aur ab ye ghav ka apne aap theek ho jana. AT inhi soch me doob jata he ki tabhi bahar darwaze pe koi knock karta he..


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In General Kato palace -

Soldier- General jaisa ki aapne bola tha us energy ke bare me pata lagane ko humne uske bare me pata lagaya he aur hame ye pata chala ki vaha insani duniya me koi bhi orb energy nhi he .

General Kato- to fir vo jo suraksha dal ne pata lagaya tha vo kya tha..

Soldier- hume lagta he ki vo sayad system me kisi problem ke wajah se hua hoga..

Kato- mujhe esa nhi lagta Ragaru kyuki piche 22 salo me humne magical science me jitni tarakki karli he sayad hi hamari machino me koi problem ho . Mujhe esa lagta he ki koi na koi he jisne humse us energy ka rasta block kiya he..

Ragaru- agar aap aagya de to me apne sath kuch logo ko le jake insani duniya me uski talash karu..

Kato- theek he tum jao aur pata karo aur ye locket lo agar vaha pe koi energy mileegi to ye locket tumhe batayega ki vo kaha se aarhi he.

Phir General Kato koi mantar padhta he jisse vaha pe ek portal khulta he aur Ragaru ke sath baki ke 4 log bhi us portal ke jariye insani duniya me aajate he..

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Jackli- aapne sahi kaha tha ki vo log is baat ko itne halke me nhi lege aur General Kato ne apne soldier ko Ragaru ke sath insani duniya me bhej diya he. Aapke suraksha kavach ke vajah se ek hafte tak to vo log King ke bare me nhi pata kar payege lekin uske baad to vo log aasani se King ko track kar lege .

Guruji- main janta tha esa hi hoga isliye mene pehle hi intezaam kar liya tha.. hume permisaion mil gyi he insani duniya me jane ki lekin vaha tumhe akele jana hoga aur akele hi use dhodhna hoga... Kya tum ye kar paoogi..

Jackli- ji Guruji me kar lugi.. aur uske baad same usi tarah ka portion us permission letter ki help se Guruji kholte he aur Jackli usme chali jati he...​

 

[King Aryan]

Update -16


Ye dekh ke AT ko bhi samajh nhi aata he ki aakhir uske sath ho kya rha he pehle ladai ke dauran chakuo ka rukna aur vapas dusmano par humla karna aur ab ye ghav ka apne aap theek ho jana. AT inhi soch me doob jata he ki tabhi bahar darwaze pe koi knock karta he..


Ab age...

AT bahar jake darwaza kholta he jaha pe aur dekhta he ki samne Ravi khada hota he .

Ravi- Bhai kitna time lagayega chal jaldi naste pe sab tera intezaar kr rhe he..

Phir dono chup chap jake nasta ke table pe beth jate he jaha pe sara pariwaar pehle se hi unka intezaar krrha hota he. Aur AT ko dekh sabhi usse chot ke bare me pocchne lagte he..

AT bhi kisi ko ghav ke bare me sach na bata kar jhoot bol deta he ki uske ghav pehle se theek he kuch time aur lagega ghav bharne me .. uske baad sabhi nasta karne me lag jate he aur koi bhi baat nhi karta .. nasta ho jane ke baad Aashi BT se bolti he..

Aashi- papa me aaj AT Bhaiya ko gaon ghumane le jana chahti hoo . Aapki permission chahiye thi ..

Jispe Bade Thakur bina kisi etraaz ke use jane ki permission de dete he.. jiske baad dono nikal jate he gaon ghumne ke liye jaha.

Pura gaon ghumne ke baad AT ko wapas apna bachpan yaad aajata he ki kese usne apna bachpan yaha guzara tha aur kese yaha pe masti karta tha. Kher ese hi din guzar jata he aur dono ghar vapas aajate he...

NEXT DAY-

Aaj Aashi apne college ke kuch jaruri kaam se chali jati he . Aur AT bhi Ravi ke sath chat pe tahalne lagta he ki tabhi vo Ravi se bol kar neeche apne kamre se sigret lene chala jata he.. jese hi vo wapas chat pe aane ke liye apne kamre se bahar nikalta he ki use Rekha ke kamre se kuch awaaz aati he..

Jab AT vaha khidki se jhak ke dekhta he to pata he ki Rekha kisi se phone pe baat kr rhi hoti he lekin jese gi AT uski baat sunta he vo shock ho jata he..

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Rekha- theek he jaan bahut jald hi milti hoo tumse.

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Rekha- ha vo kamini nikal gyi he college ke liye .

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Rekha- us kamseen kali aaj aache se masal dena sali bahut dhamki deti he aaj uski sari garmi utaar dena taki aage se kabhi kisi ke samne juban na khole..

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Rekha- jald hi phirse milugi meri chut ki aag to tuhi bhijayega. Lekin usse pehle aaj uska aache bhog krna teri dewani ki taraf se ek tofa he tere liye... Isske age vo kuch bolti ki ek jor ka tappad uske gAlo pe padta he aur phone jake side me girta he.

Jab Rekha apna chehra upar karke marne wale ko dekhti he to uska dar ke mare bura haal ho jatahe kyuki is waqt AT ki ankhe gusse se bilkul laal ho rahi hoti he..

AT- kaha se Aashi.... Uski awaaz me itna gussa hota he ki Rekha thar thar kapne lagti he aur sab kuch sach sach bol deti he...

AT bina dair kiya fauran waha se nikal jata he aur Aashi ke college ke peeche wale jungalo me pahuch jata he .

AT vaha pe Aashi ko dhodne lagta he ki tabhi use Aashi ki awaaz sunai deti he aur vo fauran us awaaz ki disha me chal deta he..

Jaise hi vo us jagah pe pahuchta he to samne dekhta he ki 8-10 waha pe khade he aur ek Ladka Aashi ke kapdo ko faad rha hota he aur Aashi bus chilla rahi hoti. Ye nazara dekh AT ko bahut gussa aata he lekin jaise vo uss sakhsh ko dekhta he jo Aashi ke sath ye harkat kar rha hota he uska gussa satve aasman pe pahuch jata he..

AT duadte hue jata he aur us sakhs ko Aashi se alag kar dur fekta he .jab vo sakhs AT ko dekhta he to chillata he
."Tummmm""​

 

[King Aryan]

UPDATE-17




AT duadte hue jata he aur us sakhs ko Aashi se alag kar dur fekta he .jab vo sakhs AT ko dekhta he to chillata he
."Tummmm""

Ab age-

Tum to vahi ho na jisne usdin mujhe maara tha aacha hua aaj mil gye . Pehle aaj tujhse badla le lu fir is chamiya ke sath maze karuga..

AT- tune bahut badi galti kardi jo meri Behen ke bare me kuch bola . Aaj agar tu yaha se jinda bhi nhi ja payega...

Ladka- tu mujhe marega abe us din vo sab sale fattu log the aur aaj tere samne yaha 10 log he jo yaha ke famous gundde he aur inke hote hue tu mujhe chu bhi nhi payega. Aaj pata chalega ki MP ke Bete se panga lene ka kya hasr hota he...

AT- Shut your mouth and Lets start the game. Aur fir suru hota he vaha pe asli khel.


AT apne pass khade aadmi ke gale ko ek hath se pakadta he aur itni jor se dabata he ki kuch hi sec me vo dum tod deta he. Ye nazara dekh baki ke log dar jate he lekin fir bhi AT se bhidne ke liye aage aajate he lekin kuch hi minto me sabhi ke sabhi upar wale ke pass pahuch jate he..

Ab vaha pe sirf do hi log bache hote he jinme se ek hota he vo mp ka Ladka aur ek gunda hota he jo ye sab dekh dar ke mare jadiyo ke peeche chup jata he..

AT- to ab tere sath kya kiya jaye ye tu bata..

Mp' son- mujhe jane do nhi to tumhare sath aacha nhi hoga mera baap tujhe nhi chodega...

AT- hahaha tere baap ki to esi ki tesi sale tune meri Behen ki izzat pe hath dalne ki sochi jiski ankhon me bachan se ek aansoon bhi nhi dekh sakta tha uske sath tu esa kaam karne ki soch rha he . Teri to bus ek hi saza he( aur phir AT apni mutthiyo ko band karke ek tez ghusa uske dil par marta he aur uski dil ki dadkan band ho jati he ) aur ye he vo saza maut ki saza...

Iske baad vo Aashi ke pass jata he jo bahut dair se dari hui khadi hoti he aur AT ki sari baate sun rhi hoti he..

AT- tu theek to he na Gudiya dekh ab darne ki koi baat nhi he ab sab theek he chal ab hum ghar chalte hai..

Aashi- Bhaiyaa ... Aap mere Almash Bhai hona.. sach sach bataiyega aapko meri kasam he...

AT vaha pe kuch nhi bolta he aur sir jhuka ke khada reh jata he bus. Sach vo batana nhi chahta he aur jhoot vo bol nhi sakta kyuki uski jaan se bhi pyari Gudiya ki kasam jo khai hoti he...

AT ki chuppi dekh kar Aashi samajh jati he aur daud ke AT ke gale lag ke rone lagti he ..

Aashi- aap kyu hum sab ko chod ke chale gye the aapko pata he aapke jaane ke baad me kitna royi hoo.. choti Maa apko kitna yaad krti roti thi.. kya aapko hamari yaad nhi aati thi..

AT- (rote hue) chup ho jao Gudiya.. tum sab ke bina ek pal bhi mujhe chain na tha lekin kya karta halat hi ese ho gye the ki mai chah kar bhi wapas nhi laut sakta tha...

Aashi- ye sab us kamini Rekha ke wajah se hua tha usi ke wajah se aap hum sab ko chod ke gye the na vo jhoot bolti aur na hi aap hume chod kar jate..

AT- Rekha ko to mai aaj nhi choduga usne mere sath jo bhi kiya vo me ek bar bhool sakta hoo lekin usne tere sath ye sab karke accha nhi kiya usko iski saza to zaroor milni chahiye.. aaur aaj usko iski saza milegi..




AT- usko saza to dege par ab aap ghar chaliye . Jab sabko aapke bare me pata chalega to sab khus ho jayege...

AT- nhi Gudiya tum kisi ko bhi mere bare me nhi bataogi.. me nhi chahta ki mere bare abhi kisi ko pata chale...

Aashi- theek he Bhaiya me kisi ko nhi bataooga lekin aap bhi ab mujhe chod kr nhi jayege aur AT ke gale lag jati he..




After sometime AT aur Aashi ghar aajaate he dono apne kamre me pahuch jate he . AT Aashi ko aaj kya hua iske bare me ghar pe batane se mna kar deta he aur fir pahuch jata he Rekha ke kamre me . Jaha par Rekha bahut pareshan khadi hoti he aur baar baar kisi ko call milati he...

AT- call milane ka ab koi fayada nhi he kyuki jis vyakti se aap sampark krna chahte he vo is duniya se bahar hai...

Rekha- kya matlab ..

AT- matlab vahi jo tumne suna vo mp ka Ladka ye duniya chod kar ja chuka he usne jo kiya tha ye to uski choti si saza he . Ab tumhari bari he saza ki ye jo tumne plan kiya he uske bare me sabbko pata bhi chalna chahiye...

Rekha- hahhahah... Aur tumko kya lagta he tum sabke samne mujhe expose krrdoge..
Tum mera kuch nhi bigad sakte ha lekin me jarur bigadugu tumhara. Ab me sabko cheeckh cheeckh kar bolugi ki tumne mere sath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki hai uske baad BT tumko pure gaon ke samne marege..

AT- aur tumko esa kyu lagta he ki vo tumhari baat ka vishwa koi kyu karega. Vo log meri bhi baat ka vishwass kar sakte he ki tumne unki Beti ka rape karwane ki koshish kari thi..

Rekha- vo log kabhi bhi is baat ka yakeen nhi karege kyuki men koi bhi saboot nhi chora he jisse ye sabit ho ki ye sari meri planning thi aur koi bhi tumhari baat pe yakeen nhi karega kyuki jab mere ek jhoot ke wajah se unlogo ne apne Bete pe yakeen na karke usko ghar se nikal diya to tum unke kya lagte ho jo mera nhi tumhara yakeen karege..

AT- jo bhi lekin fir bhi me tumhari asliyat sabke samne lake rahuga...

Rekha- vo to tum tab laoge jab tum yaha rahoge usse pehle hi tumko yaha se dhakke marke nikala jayega aur apne kapde fadne lagti he.... Ab dekho tumhare sath kya hota he vo fir Rekha fate kapde liye hue chillate hue rooom se bahar bhagne lagti hai...​

 

[King Aryan]

Update -18






Rekha- vo to tum tab laoge jab tum yaha rahoge usse pehle hi tumko yaha se dhakke marke nikala jayega aur apne kapde fadne lagti he.... Ab dekho tumhare sath kya hota he vo fir Rekha fate kapde liye hue chillate hue rooom se bahar bhagne lagti hai....

Ab age-

Bahar jane ke baad Rekha jor jor se chillane lagti he aur uske chillane se sabhi log bahar ajate he..

BT- kya hua Rekha Beti... Tu ese chilla kyu rahi he aur ye tere kapdo ko kya hua..

Rekha-(rote hue) mama ji usne usne mere sath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki ... Aur fir rone lagti he..

BT- kisne ki ye gustakhi.. usko hum aaj jinda nhi chodege...

Rekha- AT ne , aur fir ek jhuti kahani suna deti he ..

Rekha ki baat sun kar kisi ko bhi yakeen nhi horha hote he ki AT esa kar sakta he .

Theek usi waqt waha pe AT aajata he lekin vo kuch nhi bolta he aur sant khada rehata he..

Aashi- jhoot mat bolo tum Bhaiya esa kuch nhi kar sakte balki aaj unhone hi mujhe bachaya tha nhi to ye(Rekha ) to meri izzat ko kahi ka nhi chodne wali thi aur phir Aashi sari baat sabko bata deti hai..

Rekha- ye sab jhoot he maine esa kuch nhi kiya he aur ye sab us AT ki hi chal he vahi mujhe bandaam kar rha he aur ho sakta he ki uske irade tumpe bhi naik na ho isliye pehle tumbara bharosha jeetna chahta ho aur fir tumhare sath bhi... Iske aage vo kuch nhi bol pati he ki uske gaal pe ek taplad padta he..

Ye tappad kisi aur ne nhi balki Aashi ne mara hota he...

Aashi- jaban sambhal kar agar ek aur bhi baat mere Bhaiya ko tumne boli .. pehle bhi tumhare vajah se unko ghar chod kar jana pada tha aur aaj phir tum unpar jhoota ilzaam laga rahi hoo..

Aashi ki baat sunkar sabhi shock ho jate he...

Rajesh- matlab ye mera Bhai Almash he aur jake uske gale lag jata he .. aur uske sath Manjari(Maa) bhi apne Bete ke gale lag jati he lekin insab ke beech Rekha jab ye baat sunti he to uske chehre pe ek muskaan aajati hee..

Rekha- to ab me samjhi ye sab mujhe badla lene ke liye tumne kiya he na .. mujhe badnaam karne ke liye . Jis galti ki saza meene tumko bachpan me mili uske liye ab tum mujhse badla lene aye ho... Aur isi liye tum mujhe badnaam karna chahte ho..

Almash- ha haha haha.. badnaam aacha mazaak karti hoo.. badnaam to hum usse karte he jisko koi naam ho.. jo pehle se badnaam ho uska kya kar sakte he aur fir apni jeb se mobile nikal kar kuch play krta he jisko sun kar vaha khade sab kisi ke hosh ud jate he...

Rekha- ye sab jhoot he ye meri awaaz nhi he..

Almash- koi baat nhi ab ye vedio bhi dekhlo agar ab bhi koi kasar baki he to batao..

Rekha- lekin ye sab tumne kab kiya...

Almash- jitni kamini tumho na usse kahi jyada me hoo samjhi. Mujhe pehle se hi pata tha ki tum kuch esa vesa hi karogi issliye mene kamre me jane se pehle hi ye recorder chalu kar diya tha.. .... To ab batao tumhe kya saza milni chahiye...

Awaaz- isko saza hum dege aur ek goli seedhe aake Rekha ke sir me lagti he aur vo vahi pe mar jati he..




Jab sablog us taraf dekhte he to vaha pe mp aur uske 20-25 gunde khade hote he..


Almash- to aagye tum mujhe lagatha ki jald hi tumse mulakaat hogi. Akhir tumko bil se jo nikalna tha aur bina Bete ki maut ke to tum bil se nikalte nhi..

MP- kya matlab mujhe bil se nikalna tha ... Kon ho tum..

Almash- jald hi pata chal jayega aur mujhe tumse milna tha isliye tumko pata chala ki tum hare Bete komene mara nhi to jis aadmi ne aake tumko mere bare me bataya he usko me wahase jinda na bhejta samjhe..

MP- tune mere Bete ko markar accha nhi kiya ab me tum sab ko nhi choduga... Iske age vo kuch bolta ki bahar do dhamake hote he..

MP- ye kya hua..

Almash - shant ho jao.. ye tumhari un gadiyo ki awaaz he jisme tum aye ho. Unmme bomb lagaya hua tha aur ese hi kayi bomb tumhari haweli factory.. aur bhi tumhari kayi jagaho pe laga he isliye ab shanti se betho kyuki me kya karsakta hoo ye tum nhi jante ho.. aur vese abhi hume kahi jana he koi aur bhi hamara intezaar kar rha he aaj uska bhi dil pura hone wala he..

MP- kaha jana he aur kon intezaar kar rha..

Almash- vahi jaha tere Beta mara he aur jisse hum milne ja rhe he vo he tera boss international drugs mafia don rockky urf rehan..ab chal chup chap se..

Maa- Bete tu kaha jaa rha hume chod kar hume maaf karde aur fir sab log bhi Almash ko rukne aur usse mafi mangte heii...


Almash- aaplog mafi mat magiye aap log bus galatfemi ka sikaar hue the aur me kahi nhi jaa rha hoo bus kuch kaam nipta ke teen ghante me aata hoo vapas aaplogo ke paas bus aap log apna dhyaan rakhiye aur phir sab vahase nikal jate he..

Kafi time guzar jata he lekin abhi tak Almash vapas nhi aata he jisse sab bahut pareshan ho jate he..


AFTER 6 HOURS-

Aashi- papa Bhaiya bol rhe he the ki vo 3 gante me aajayege lekin 6 gante ho gye he ..

BT- ha Bete humlog bhi vahi soch rhe he lekin hume nhi pata ki vo kaha gya he..

Aashi- Bhaiya bol rhe the jaha mp ke Bete mara he vo log vahi gye he matlab vo college ke peeche wale jungle me gye he..

Thakur Ravi aur Rajesh apne gaon ke 50 aadmiyo ko leke waha pahuch jate he lekin jab vo log us jagah pahuchte he to sabhi ke sabhi shock reh jate he..

Charo taraf sirf lashe hi lashe hoti he jo ki kafi jali hui hoti he . Aaspass ke paid bhi puri tarah se jal ke rakh ho chuke hote he.. tabhi dur khade Ravi ki awaaz aati..

Ravi- jaldi aayiye sablog Almash yaha pe he ..

Sabhi log Almash ko uthate he vo behosh pada hota he kafi buri tarah se chote aayi hoti he. Bade Thakur apne aadmiyo se lasho ko thikane lagane ko kehte he aur Almash ko ghar leke aatee he jaha pe doctor aur sabhi cheezo ka intezaam karte he..

Almash ki halat dekh sabhi log bahut pareshan ho jate he.. aaj pure teen din baad Almash ko hosh aata he ...aur jab vo aankhe kholta he to dekhta he uske charo aur sabhi log khade he

Sabhi log usse pochte he ki vaha kya hua hota he lekin Almash bol deta he ki use kuvh yaad nhi..

Sabhi log use araam karne ke liye kamre me akela chod dete he aur bahar aajatee he.. aur fir Almash apne gale me pade locket ko dekhta he aur vapas se usdin kya hua hota he us yaaad me kho jata he...​