Fantasy SUPREME GOD

[Smith_15]

Update 12

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Rohit1988]

Bhai ji aapki story to bahut majedar hai but update chote hote hai aapke thora is pe kaam karo 2.5k to 4.5k ka update do taki padhne me maja aaye

 

[Naik]

Update 10:

Mega Update:


Veer apne assignment ko pura karne mey academy pahuch gaya wahan veer ka assignment ko dekhne key liye sare students jama hogaye hai phir students baat karne lagte hai aaj iss garbage ko yahan nikal diya jaya jayega.

Yeh aapne aapko kya prove karega kay yeh assignment poora nahi kar payega aur last use iss academy sey dhake marke nikal diya jayega. Yahan veer key assignment ko dekhne Miss Qin, Koimin aur Siyaun aathi hai.

Phir principal veer ko samajte ki pehla assignment hai STRENGTH ka hai jahan tumey apne strength ka punching power karke 50K mark tak pahunch na hai aur agar tum fail ho gaye toh tumey iss academy sey nikal diya jayega jaise tumara pehla assignment complete tumey 2nd assignment par ready hosakte.

Phir Veer apne body key ander power sari power ko apne fist mey collect karta hai aur 50K ka target raktha hai ek punch marta hai uss pillar par aur veer ka punch power 70K par jakar rukhta hai yeh dekhkar sab hairan hote hai.

Miss Qin aur Koimin sochne lagte hai iske andar kitna power hai.

Tabhi uss pillar key andar sey ek Giant Beast bahar aatha hai tabhi principal veer sey kehte hai ki tumne pehle assignment complete kiya hai abb second assignment tumey iss beast sey fight karni hai aur iss harana hai agar tum yeh complete karte ho tab tum 3rd assignment par ja sakte ho.

Koiming Miss Qin kehta yeh beast toh Heavenly Earth Realm key 6th level par Veer ko master iss harana mushkil hojayega wahan students kehne lagte hai ab toh gaya yeh beast isko ek punch mey ghayal kardega.

Veer usse beast lalkar tha hai aur yeh dekhkar who beast veer par attack karta hai aur bhi apna attack karta hai lekin dono key powers same rahne key wajase dono piche ho jaate hai.

Yeh dekhkar Miss Qin khush hojati aur apne husband ki power smile karti hai veer uss beast ko phir sey fight karne key liye lalkar tha hai abb who beast veer taraf aane lagta hai aur veer bagtha hai beast veer key piche bagatha hai phir veer hawa mey uddkar ek sprit fire ey attack karta hai aur woh beast bahuth buri tarah sey ghayal ho jata hai aur uske andar ki power veer ko transfer hoti hai.

Yeh dekhkar sab hairan ho jate hai teacher DIAO bhi shock hojate hai ki kaise hua yeh toh ek useless stress hai aur miss Qin, Siyaun aur Koimin aur veer key students kush hojate aur andar andar hi principal bhi khush hojate hai.

Principal veer sey kehne lagte hai veer tumne 2nd assignment ko complete kiya hai 3rd assignment 1 month key baad hoga iss assignment mey tum apne class kisi 3 students ko choose karke unko kisi dusre class key 3 students sey competition hoga jahan aur uss competition mey 3 rounds honge.

1st round hoga on Strength par

2nd round hoga on Alchemist par

3rd round hoga on Purification par.

Toh tum kisko apne competition key teacher ko choose karoge.

Veer sidha teacher DIAO key pass jakar mai aapko challenge karta hoon mere students aapke students key saath competition karenge. Teacher DIAO bhi iss competition ko accept karte hai kyunki wos veer ko iss academy sey nikal dena chatey hai. Sabhi students sochne lagte hai kya master veer pagal toh nahi hogaye hai kyunki teacher DIAO key students strong hai.

Phir class key andar sare students nervous hokar baite rahete hain phir ek student jiska naam Mohan hai woh kehta hai Master Veer teacher DIAO key students poore 3 rounds mey humse har better hai genius hai.

Veer tumko isko bare mey sochne ki zaroorat nahi mujhe par chod do tum logon unse better banunga aur ham competition bhi jeetenge tumey mere decision ka respect karo humey iss class key liye ladna hoga aur hum jeetenge.

Mohan puchta hai aapke 3 students kaun honge.

Veer kehta hai Alchemist key liye mai Siyaun ko choose karta hoon.

Purification (Refining) key liye mai Koimin ko choose karta hoon

Mohan kehta hai ki teacher DIAO key class sab genius hain aur unke class mey best refiner hain aur best alchemist hai isliye mushkil hojayega.

Veer kehta zindagi mey risk lena hai aur aage badana agar age nahi badoge toh phir zindagi bar piche reh jaoge aur apne maa baap key liye kuch bhi nahi kar paoge.

3rd round key liye mai kuch din baad bolunga.

Lekin Miss Qin kehti hai ki 3rd round key liye mai Mohan ko choose karti hoon yeh sunkar veer shock hota hai lekin kuch nahi kehta hai aur raazi hojata hai.

Veer mohan sey kehta hai ki tum aur siyaun dono MO family sey belong karte ho toh.

Koimin kehta hai ki mai acha refiner nahi hoon mujhe lagta hai mai harjaunga.

Veer kehta hai ki tum mujhe par chod do class key baad hum tumare ghar par chalenge aur tabhi mohan kuch kehna chatha lekin veer usse chup karwata hai abb koi kuch bhi nahi bolega jaise mai bolunga waise karenge aur humre pass 1 month ka time hai aur mujhe ache sey pata hai ki mujhe kya karna hai aur kaise karna hai aur tumey kaise thayyar karna hai.

Veer academy key training hall mey andar baite jata hai aur apni cultivation shuru karta hai aur bahuth sare herbs and ingredients knowledge sikhta hai naye naye martial arts ki technique apne energy ko kaise restrore karna siktha hai.

Thodi der baad woh koimin key ghar chala jata hai jahan par koimin aapne father ko help kar raha hai garam garam iron ki pith kar usse khanjar bana raha hai aur uske father usse kaam karna sikha rey tey phir unne dekhe veer kehta hai ki kuch saal KOI family weapons ko refine karne sabse best family tey kaafi famous hone key saath market bhi badi thi phir ek incident mey woh paralyzed ho gaye tabhi aapka market aur apke customers apko chod diya. Yeh sab sunkar KOIMIN master veer ko baite jaldi sey khursi deta hai koimin key father kehta hai ki maaf kijiye master Veer aapko humare ghar mey aaane key baad mai aapko greet nahi kar sakta kyunki pichle 10 years mai paralyzed hoon.

Veer kehta ki iski koi zaroorat nahi hai aur aap maafi maat mangiye aap mujhse bade hai aur mai aapki bahuth repect karta hoon kyunki aap iss city sabse bet refiner hai woh toh purani baat hai veer kehta lekin mai toh kuch saal pehle iss city key best refiner ko samne dekh raha hoon aur aaj b0ih aap best hain iss city aisa koi paida nahi hua tha ki aapke weapons ko takkar de sake aap chahey toh aap aapne pair thik kar phir aapna kaam shuru kar sakte hain.

Father kehte hai ki mai toh abb zindagi bhar paralyzed hoon mai kahan thik ho sakta hoon veer kehta hai ki aap thik ho sakte hai yeh sunkar koimin master sey puchta hai kya aapke pass aisa koi tarika hain jisse mere father thik ho sakte hain veer mai confirm toh nahi bata sakta haan lekin ek rasta hai lekin mujhe tumare father ko check karna padega kehkar koimin key father ko check karta aapne DRAGON SCROLL use karke usse pata chaltha hai ki tumare father ko ek poison diya gaya hai aur unke pair ko paralyzed kiya hai.

Veer kehta hai ki mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai aur academy joh kuch bhi hua usse bata deta hai aur mujhe iss assignment ko poora karne mey KOIMIN ki help chahiye aur isliye mai KOIMIN ko 1month key liye mere saath lekar jana chatha hoon aur usse ache sey training dekhkar ek acha refiner banunga aur mai wada karta hoon jaise yeh competition khatam hota hai mai aapko cure karunga aur KOIMIN sey kehta ki mai tumare father ko cure karunga.

Uske father kehta hai ki KOIMIN tumey aapne master ki help karni hogi tumey iss month mey kaafi hardwork karni hai ache sey practice karna aur mujhe disappoint math karna .

Tabhi wahan KOI family 2nd elder ka beta aata hai ki mujhe iss mahine ka protection fee abhi tak nahi diya unki batamezi karta hai yeh dekhkar KOIMIN gusse mey tum mere father sey aisa nahi kar sakte ho jab tumare father ka paralyzed hogaye tab koi tumey saath nahi de raha tha KOI family ney tumara saath diya hai aur aab tumse aisa baat karoge KOIMIN key father kehte mujhe kuch time do mai aapko dedunga mujhe abhi chahiye warna mai aapka bete ka haath kaat kar lejaunga tabhi wahan par Miss Qin aati hai tum yeh sab karte ho tumare bare mey mujhe grandfather ko bolna padega yeh sunkar woh ladka nahi Miss Qin aap aisa maat kijiye agar grandfather ko pata chala gaya toh mujhe punish karenge Miss Qin humari city abhi loss mey chal rahi hai aur tum inse paise lene aagaye ho.

Aap ko abhi paise dene ki zaroorat nahi hai aur kehkar wahan sey chala jata hai phir veer kehta hai ki aapko abb koi bhi disturb aur pareshani nahi karega mai 1 month key baad aake aapko thiuk kardunga.

Idhar mohan aapne class sey jara tha tabhi koi usse apple phek kar marta hai yeh koi aur nahi teacher DIAO ka student MO hai joh mohan ka brother bhi hai mohan kehta hai brother MO mai iss competition mey tumse harjaunga aur phir teachr DIAO ki jeet hogi tabhi MO kehta tumey pata hai Teacher DIAO Heavenly Earth Realm key 6th level par aur mai bhi hoon aur tum 5th level par ho tumara aur mere pehla round hoga mai tumey itni jaldi nahi marunga tumey mauka dunga aur baad mey tumey kutte ki tarah marunga humare poori family key saamne aur tab sabko pata chalega ki mai kya hoon aur family key ELDER bane sey mujhe koi nahi rokega aur tumare father ko phir nikaldunga yeh kehkar woh chala jata hai yeh sunkar mohan mujhe kuch bhi karna hai aape father key liye aur woh Miss Qin sey milne chala jata hai.

Miss Qin idhar aapne grandfather sey baat karti hai aapne competition key baremey uske grandfather kehte dekho beti tumare against joh ladki hai tum aur woh dono bhi alchemist key 1st level par hai same realm hai lekin pichle kuch din sey uske grandfather uske liye STAR BLOOD ko dhund rahe hai kyunki agar uss blood ko body key andar absorb karlenge toh bahuth strong banegi aur jo pills woh banegi who strong abb tum socho tumey kya karna hai iss competition woh aisa karne wali hai mujhe jaldi sey master Veer ko batana padega aur tabhi wahan mohan aaja ta hai aur kehta hai Miss Qin aap mujhe training dijiye tako mai aapne brother MO fight key saath karunga Miss Qin kehti hai thik hai mai tumey sikhaungi lekin tumey apni preparation khud karni hogi yeh sunkar mohan agree karta hai

After 10 days…..

Veer aapne class mey kuch kaam kar raha tha tabhi wahan mohan daud aakar kehta hai ki bacha lijiye Miss Qin aati mohan tum bhul gaye kya 10 din pehle tumne kya bola tha ki mai tumey train karoon lekin tum toh bahuth kamjor ho abb who ice ball banati hai mohan pr attack karne key liye veer kehta toh kya tum mujhse practice karoge haan mai karunga.

Phir Veer tub mey bahuth sare ingredients ko dalta hai aur usko mix karta hai mohan puchta hai master mujhe kya karna hai aur yeh aap kya kare rahe hai veer kehta tumey iske 3 ghante baithna padega.

After 3 hours

Veer mohan ko bola tha hai ki tumey mai sundar si jagah par lekar chalunga tumey mere saath aana hai aur koi sawal puchna nahi hai kehkar usko ek jungle mey leke aatha hai aur kehtha hai yeh PIG BEAST hai tumey iska shikar karna hai aur aaj raat hum yahi khayenge yeh sunkar mohan ko dar lagne lagta hai aur sochne mai toh 5th level par hoon yeh toh 6th level key BEAST hai mai kahan inka shikar karunga lekin tab tak veer wahan sey chala gaya hai abb ek BEAST mohan par attack karta lekin woh niche jhuk jata hai lekin uske face par ek cut padtha hai phir aapne aap woh heal hota hai yeh dekhkar woh phir sey khada hota BEAST phir sey attack karta hai aur piche jakar girta hai yeh dekhkar siyaun kehti hai woh strong kaise Banega.

Veer kehta dekho mohan ko agar mai kehta ki hum jungle ja raha hai toh who kabhi nahi aatha hai isliye maine usse yahan bulaya aur idhar mohan phir kuch seconds key andar phir heal hojata hai yeh dekhkar woh sochne lagta hai ki yeh sab kaise hua hai tabhi usko khayal aata hai ki haan jab woh tub mey baite tha tab master ney uske andar bahuth sare herbs and ingredients dala hai yeh usi ki wajah sey hai abb woh thoda himmat latha hai aur apni talwar leke unse yudh karta hai, veer kehta mujhe academy mey kuch kaam tum yahan dekho mai chaltha hoon.

Yudh karte karte shaam hogayi thi aur mohan abb bahuth thak gaya tha aur usne yudh mey 7 BEAST ko mar hai abb usmey dum nahi tha ki woh lad sake aur BEAST aane lagte hai tabhi EK bada sa Ice attack hota hai aur saare BEAST mare jate phir behosh hojata, siyaun mohan ko dekhne aati hai dekhti ki hai mohan ney 10 BEAST mey 7 ko mar diay hai aur khush ho jati hai.

Jab apni aankh khol tha hai woh ussi tub mey paya jata hai aur veer ko khade rehte hue dekha tha hai aur veer uss tub mey kuch herbs dal raha tha. Mohan ko gussa aatha hai aur veer sey kehta hai ki tum mujhe marne key liye leke gaye tey tabhi veer usse ek chatta marta hai aur ek kehta ki tum abb puri tarah sey mar chuke ho tabhi mohan ko aur gussa aatha hai kya tum mujhse abhi fight karna chatey ho aur gusse Veer par attack karta hai lekin veer woh attack dodge karta hai aur mohan notice karta hai uski punch ki power zyada ho gayi hai aur woh dektha hai ki woh abb 6th level par pahunch chuka hai isliye uski punch power zyada ho gayi tabhi wahan par Miss Qin aati hai aur kehti hai jis tub tum baite kar naha rahe ho uss mey kuch aise herbs and ingredients dal hai jiss key liye master ney tumare liye 10K low grade crystal coins ko use kara pada taki tumari body strong ban sake yeh sunkar mohan ko bahuth bura lagta hai master sey maafi mangtha hai kehta hai ki aajse aapki har baat ko manunga aur khoob hardwork karke iss competition ko bhi jitunga.

Idhar Teacher DIAO key pass ek student aata hai aur kehta ki Veer ney aapne students training karna shuru kar diya hai Siyaun ko pavilion mey training de raha hai Koimin ko apne pass rakh kar training de raha hai aur Mohan har roj jungle mey training de raha hai teacher DIAO humare students kya kar rahe hai who kehta hai ki sab practice mey lahue hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki humare students key samne veer key students thik payenge teacher DIAO kehta master Veer ko hum kam nahi keh sakte hai aur hum abb risk nahi lena chatey humare students keh do ache sey practice kar time nahi hai.

Idhar Veer Mohan ek book joh martial arts technique ki kitab hai iss tum ache sey practice karo tum aur strong banoge apne physical strength ko bhi strong banoge.

Mohan woh book ley leta hai aur open karta toh usse kuch samaj nahi aata yeh kaunsi handwriting hai veer yeh maine likhi hai tum drawing ko dekhkar practice karo woh kehkar chala jata hai Miss Qin uss book ko lagti hai aur kehti hai ki HIGH GRADE TECHNIQUE ARTS ki book agar isko auction mey house sell karenge toh iss book ki kimat 50K crystal coins hogi yeh sunkar mohan shock hojata..

Veer refining room jakar Koimin sey puchta hai kahan tak ayyi tumari training hai phir KOIMIN kehta hai maine aapke khene key ansuar ek artifact ko banaya hai aur veer ko dikha tha hai yeh dekhkar veer bahuth khush hojata hai tumne bahuth acha artifact banaya hai tumari talent bahuth great hai kya tum mere disable Banoge. Koimin aapke disable bane key liye mai ready hoon mujhe aur kya chahiye.

Phir Veer usse kuch aur ingredients ka sikatha hai jisse aur ache sey artifacts ban sake aur talwar banane ki artifact ko deta hai aur usko talwar banane hai.

Phir sare ingredients ko mix karta hai aur ek strong talwar banata hai aur hawa mey usko chaltha aur ek power release hoti hai.

Bahot zabardast shaandar update
Veer n 2 padao tow Paar ker liye ab yeh teesra Thoda tuff lagta h lekin woh bhi Paar ho hi jayenge sabko jo itni hard training de raha h
Dekhte h cumpition wale din DIAO k students ki kia halat kerte h veer k students
Behtareen shaandar update

 

[Naik]

Update 11:

Veer uss sword ko apne dono haathon sey carvings karta hai jisse sword ko merge karta aur ek normal sword sey powerful sword mey convert karna hota hai. Idhar Miss Qin refining room key pass athi aur andar dekhti hai toh veer apne dono haathon sey carving karta hai yeh dekhkar Miss Qin shock hojati hai kyunki ek ordinary aadmi key liye dono haathon sey carving nahi kar sakta hai lekin ek grandmaster kar sakta hai phir uss carving ko sword sey merge karta hai aur who powerful sword key roop convert hoti hai ek pattar par try karta hai aur jaise who sword pattar par lagti hai toh wahan ek scratch aajata hai.

Koimin uss sword ki power ko dekhkar kaafi hairan hojata hai kyunki ek powerful artifact sey banaya hua sword hai aur issmey jab carving ko merge kiya toh itna powerful banagaya hai tabhi dusre door sey mohan aata hai aur kehta hai mujhe pata chala ki master tumey apna disable bana liya koimin kehta hai Haan tumne sahi suna phir veer mohan ko yeh sword deta hai aur ek try karne key liye kehta hai phir mohan uss sword ko try karta hai apne fighting skills ko use karke aur kehta hai yeh ek perfect sword hai aur koi shak nahi hai isse top grade weapon artifact sey banaya hai lekin iss sword ki strength bahuth zyada hai.

Veer kehta mai yeh sword tumey dena chatha hoon mohan kehta hai kya aap sach mey mujhe dena chatey hain veer haan kehta mohan niche baite jata hai aur kehta hai mai humesh sey ek arrogant ladka tha aur aapko bahuth baar guusa bhi kiya hai aapko iss competition mey harane key liye dusre team key saath maine haath milaya tha lekin aapko sab kuch pata hone key baad bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur shuru sey maine aapko kitna bura bhala kaha phir bhi aapne kuch bhi nahi kaha mujhe lagat hai ki mai yeh deserve nahi karta hoon par mai yeh chatha hoon ki aap mujhe bhi aapne disable key taur par swikar kare veer kehta mai tumey kaise swikar karoon tumey koi talent nahi hai phir bhi mai tumey ek mauka deta hoon agar tum usmey success hogaye toh mai tumey disable nahi balki aapna bhai banalunga aur tumey iss competition jitna hoga aur opposition team key member khub attack hai phir mohan aapne joh book diye tey usmey techniques bahuth difficult hai practice karne mey.

Veer kehta hai thikmai tumey ek technique sikha tha hoon aur sword ko aapne haath mey lekar iss technique ka naam KILLING INTENT TECHNIQUE hai kehkar use technique ka practice karta aur uska attack door par jakar lagta hai door do pieces cut hojata hai piche rahe Miss Qin sabko dikh jati aur use attack key wajse Miss Qin kapde bhi cut hojate hai tabhi Miss Qin kehti hai Veer yeh practice karne ki jagah nahi hai kehkar gusse sey chali jati hai veer use manane chala jata.

Thode der baad dono bhi pavilion key chat par dono baite dikahi deta hai jahan humey dikhata hai ki veer ney Miss Qin ko pata liya hai Miss qin kehti hai tumey humare shaadi sey kyun problem kyun nahi karna chatey shaadi mujhe sey veer kehta hai ki jiss level par hoon abhi mai aur sabhi log mera abhi Mazak udane wale hai abhi mai strong ho raha hoon aur sab log tumey bhi kahenge aur mujhe yeh pasand nahi hai Miss Qin kehti hai isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai

Agli subah mohan aur koimin dono ek saath dikhtey hai tabhi mohan kal raat ko Master Veer aur Miss Qin dono bhi pavilion key chat dikhayi diye romance karte hue tabhi veer aur miss Qin wahan aati hai tum aur koi kaam nahi hai time kam hai humare pass jake dono practice karo ache sey mai aata hoon tabhi veer kehta hai kya baat kar rahe tey tum log yahan par mohan kehta hai aapko kuch bhi chupane ki zaroorat nahi hai sab log jante hai ki aap dono ek dusre sey pyaar karte hai yeh sunkar miss Qin sharma jati hai aur veer ka haath pakad leti hai tabhi wahan par MOHAI aaja tha hai joh mohan ka competitor hai kehta city ka ek useless stress ko Miss Qin jaise beautiful ladki mili hai sach mey ek chamtakar hai yeh sunkar mohan ko gussa atha hai tum yahan kya kar rahe ho MOHAI kehta hai tumey kya lagta hai ki tum master veer sey sikh kar kya tum aapne aapke kya samaj tey ho kya tum mujhe har doge. Tumey kabhi bhi bhulana nahi hai ki jis person sey tum training ley rahe ho ek woh ek useless hai aur mujhe yeh samaj nahi araha hai ki Miss Qin jaise ek beautiful iss useless key saath kaise rehne key liye maan gayi hai tabhi koimin kehta hai ki tum apni hadh par kar rahe ho haan mai apni hadh par kar raha hoon kya kar loge maroge mujhe tum bewakoof tabhi Veer MOHAI key thobde par ek chipka deta hai woh tum he tey jo mujhse ladna chatey ho tabhi MOHAI key saath ayya hua aadmi aage aakar kehta hai ki Veer aaj tumne jo kiya hai na uska badla 7 din key baad tournament mey lenge aur tumey pata hona chahie ki DIAO key student key saath panga lene sey kya hoga kehkar MOHAI uthkar wahan sey chala jata.

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Veer or Qin ka romance badhta jaa raha badhiya
Or yeh compition tow kuch ziada hi garmata jaa raha
Dekhte h kon si team kis per bhari padti h
Team Veer ya fir
Team DIAO

 

[asad1986]

Update 12:


Veer siyaun sey milne Sandal Pavalion chala jata hai aur puchtha hai ki kaise chal rahi hai tumari pills refining training tabhi siyaun khadi hojati hai aur gusse mey kehti hai ki aapne mujhe dhoka diya hai mujhe sab pata chal gaya aapke aur Miss Qin key relation key baremey sab kuch pata chal gaya hai (isse hum maloom padtha hai ki siyaun master veer chaney lagti hai) aab usse sunkar uska dil bahuth dukhi hojata hai aur kehthi hai ki aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai phir who kehti hai ki mai aapse pyaar karti hoon aur aapse shaadi karna chathi hoon aur I love you kehti hai.

Veer kehtha hai ki siyaun tum abhi young ho tum mujhse achi talented Alchemist banogi aur apni family king banogi aur usse ache sey sambalogi tabhi siyaun veer ka dono ko pakad kar kehti hai thik hai jab mai 19 years ho jaungi tab aapse mai shaadi karungi ( isse yeh pata chala hai ki siyaun sach mey veer ko lekar serious hai), aapko aage key update dekhna hoga ki kya veer Miss Qin ko chodkar Siyaun sey shaadi karega.

Siyaun jane lagti hai veer kehta hai kahan ja rahi ho aur tumara cultivation ka kya hoga siyaun kehti hai mujhe cultivation koi zaroorat nahi hai aur rahi baat mere opponent ki agar uske pass BEAST star hai tabhi mai usse har dungi.


Tournament day:

After 7 days battle arena mey sabhi students and teachers zama hojate hai.

Tabhi wahan par teacher DIAO key saath uske students bhi aajate hai wahan par aur phir veer key entry hoti hai uske students key saath aur Miss Qin bhi entry hoti hai. DIAO kehne lagta hai aapne Miss Qin key help liya hai aapne students ko train karne key liye kyunki tum aapne aap khud train nahi kar sakte aur suna hai bahuth hard training ki hai lekin abhi bhi kehta hoon apni izzat ka kyun kachara kar rahe ho haar maan jao abhi aur iss arena ko hum abhi khatam kar denge. Veer kehta abhi battle shuru nahi hua hai aur abhi sey khatam karne key liye kahe rahe ho toh mai kya sochoon ki aap mujhse ya mere students sey dar gaye ho, yeh sunkar ko DIAO ko gussa atha hai lekin tabhi principal enter hote hai dono ko kehte hai shaant hojao aur shuru karte hai competition.

Pehle round hai Alchemist toh aap dono key taraf kaun kaun represent kar raha hai, DIAO aapne student ko aage send karta hai aur veer siyaun ko aage represent karta hai.

Dono battle stage par aajte hai prinicipal kehta hai aap dono key pass 1 ghanta ka samay hai jisse aap dono ko pills banana hai joh 100% pure ho aur 2nd stage aur 3rd stage wale ko bhi uska use ho aur aap dono kuch essence diye jayenge usiko use karke aapko banana hai aur isko hum aapne army key do jawans key upar check karenge kehkar shuru karte hai dono aapne refining tank key pass chale jate hai phir dono pills banana shuru karte hai DIAO student uss pills ko jaldi banana shuru karti phir uske pass joh BEAST power sey thoda aur strong wala pill refine karti hai 40 mins mey pill Tayyar hojati hai idhar Siyaun pehle 10 min kuch nahi karti hai sirf essence ko dekhti hai tabhi usse veer ki baat yaad athi hai ki jo bhi essence ho ya herbs ho uska basic future usko Khusboo dekho phir tumey sochna hai ki isse hum kitna powerful bana sakte hai aur refine kar sakte hai phir Siyaun pill ko refine aur banana shuru karti hai abb dusra basic rule hai ki usse tank mey thodi der ache sey mix kardo aur taki woh powerful aura ko release karta hai tab apne pass jo bhi herbs ko mix karo toh uski resistance power badjati hai phir siyaun aisa karti hai aur uske pass abhibas 3 min tey principal puchtey kya hua siyaun tum kuch kar kyun nahi ho who kehti mujhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hai tumare pass sirf 3 min hai siyaun kehti hai thik hai sirf ek min hai aur uske baad bell ring hota hai dono tank sey door aajate hai .

Phir do jawans ko bulaya jata hai aur kehte hai aap dono ko in do ko consume karna aur aapna level increase karna hai .

Pehla wala DIAO key student ka pill us karti hai woh 100% pure hoti hai lekin stage ko break nahi karti par 2nd level clear hota hai 3rd stage key starting par aakar rukh jata hai. Yeh dekhkar DIAO khush hojata hai lekin uski student bhi khush hojati par agar mai aur ache sey practice karti toh aur acha pill ko refine kar pati hoon lekin kya hua siyaun toh itna bhi nahi kar sakti hai.

Phir Dusre wala siyaun ki pill ko consume karta hai aur cultivation key liye baite jata hai phir kuch seconds key baad 100% pure nikalti hai aur woh 2nd & 3rd stage ko clear karta hai yeh dekhkar wahan sabhi shock hojate hai DIAO ki student yeh nahi ho sakta hai mere pass BEAST star lekin phir bhi kaise tabhi woh sochti hai ki siyaun 2nd stage of alchemist ban gayi hai.

Teacher DIAO ko bahuth gussa aata hai lekin wahan sab rahne key wajase woh kuch nahi karta hai. Sabhi students siyaun key liye claps marte hai aur khush hojate hai.

2nd round:

2nd round hai weapon refining hai.

Dono key teams sey students stage par khade hojate hai veer key taraf sey KOIMIN aur DIAO key taraf sey KOYUHUN aata hai aap dono key 1.5 hours yani dedh ghanta hai aur aap logon ko ek ache weapon ko refine karna joh pattar laga uspar attack karna hai .

Dono aapna kaam shuru karta hai KOIYUHUN bahuth jaldi sey weapon key ache sey banata hai aur uska refine karne lagta aur phir carving bhi karta hai abb uske baad woh ek spear ko banatha hai oki sharp ti.

KOIMIN bahuth slow sey kar raha tha kyunki uske pitaji ki uss ek baat yaad athi hai ki beta ek ache weapon ko agar tum jaldi banoge toh uski power zyada nahi hogi usse time dekar slow sey bano. Phir woh joh artifacts ko use karke usse slow sey banata hai jaise spear ready hoti hai uspar carvings karta hai woh bhi slow karta hai yeh dekhkar teacher DIAO kehte hai tumara student kitna slow hai tumari tarah hai kya woh time key andar bana payega mai kehta hoon abhi bhi haar maan jao aur yahan sey aisae chale jao kisiko kuch pata nahi chalega veer kehta bhi competition baki hai aap jaldi maat kijiye DIAO hasne lagta hai wahan sey chala jata hai.

Koimin 1.25 mins leta hai aur aapna spear ready karta hai phir principal kehte hai ki iss bar dono spear ko ek hi baar mey same pattar par attack karenge phir dono spear ko lete hai aur dono ek hi baar mey pattar par attack karenge wahan sab dekhkar hairan hojate hai ki KOIYUHUN ki spear zyada andar tak nahi jati hai lekin KOIMIN ki spear andar jakar bahar aati hai yeh dekhkar principal abb aapko pata chal gaya hai ki kaun hai winner yahan DIAO bahuth gussa hota hai yeh nahi ho sakta hai principal ney kaha tumne aapne saamne dekha hai KOIHUYUN phir apna spear nikalta hai aur KOIMIN bhi nikalta hai lekin tabhi KOIHUYUN uspar attack karta hai ki KOIMIN aapna spear ko aage defend karta hai jaise uska spear lagta hai woh break hojata hai yeh sab dekhkar shock hojate ki KOIMIN ki spear bahuth strong hai, yeh dekhkar woh kehta hai ki mai tum jaise useless kaise har gaya mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai woh aapna toota hua spear ko phir pattar par attack karta hai lekin woh phir sey utna hi andar jata hai phir woh aur andar dalne ki koshish karta hai tabhi principal kehta hai tumey galath kiya hai KOIMIN par attack karke tumey punishment milti hai ki agle 3 mahine tak tumey academy sey rusticate kiya gaya hai. Teacher DIAO tumey aapne students ko sikhna chahiye ki kaise behave kar sab key saath aur tumare students kuch sikh bhi rahe ya nahi teacher DIAO sharminda hokar mujhe maaf kijiye

Flashback :

Veer kehta hai ki tum bahuth ache sey weapon banate ho mai tumey ek carving sikhatooh iska upyog karna tum yeh bahuth slow sey karna hai tab sare carvings ko ek saath merge karna hai weapon par yeh bahuth strong hogi ki 6th level ka aadmi par attack karoge toh bahuth internal injuries hoga usko aur pattar ko do piece mey break kardegi.

Flashback ends.

Yeh sab dekhkar principal andar sey khush hojate hai aur sochne lathe hai sach mey veer ek genius hai aur ache sey train kiya hai, phir principal 3rd round key baar mey kehte hai aur kya yeh ladki iss round ko jeet payega aisa kyun sochtey hai principal mohan key baare mey aapko aage pata chalega.

ismey ek change hai kehkar Mohan key saath MOHAI nahi fight balki senior III class key student DAYUN fight karega yeh sunkar sab hairan hogaye yeh kaise ho sakta hai yeh toh ek tharfa battle hojayega aise last min mey changes kaise ho gaya hai MOHAN DAYUN nai har sakte hai.

Mohan fight karne sey pehle veer sey kehta hai ki Master aapne kaha tha ki agar mai iss competition ki jeetunga toh aap mujhe aapna brother baneyenge na veer kehta hai ki iss baat ko hum tumare jeetena key baad baat karenge, phir mohan stage bahuth confident sey chala jata hai yeh dekhkar lagta mohan ko abb dar nahi lagta hai

Dono fighters battle stage par aajate hai principal kehte hai iss battle tum koi bhi weapon ko use kar sakte ho kitna bhi time le sakte ho itna kehkar battle ko shuru kar sakte ho

Idhar miss Qin kehti veer DAYUN ek acha fighter hai aur woh bachpan sey train hota hai aur 16 years mey hi woh heavenly earth realm key 6th level par pahunch gaya hai lekin veer kehta hai ki hum match dekhtey hai aur mohan mujhe apna guru banane key liye yeh round ko jitna hoga.

Mohan DAYUN par attack karne baag tha DAYUN usse fire ball sey attack karta hai aur mohan ko lagta hai niche gir jata hai lekin mohan jaldi sey recover hojata hai aur competition sey pehle tub baite aakar aata hai yeh dekhkar DAYUN hairan hojata hai aur mohan khada hota DAYUN yeh dekhkar RED KILL ATTACK karta hai aur mohan ko lagta hai mohan phir sey ghayal hojata hai yeh dekhkar miss Qin kehti hai ki veer mohan bale jaldi sey heal hojata hai lekin iss attacks key wajase usko pain zyada hoga aur phir uske pass energy kam hogi jisse woh attack nahi kar payega veer yeh sunkar nirash hota hai lekin mohan ko agar mera disable bana hai toh competition ko jeetana hai phir mohan khade hokar apne sword ka use karta hai ek martial technique ko use karke hawa mey udtha hai aur apne do clones banata hai aur DAYUN par attack karta hai DAYUN DONO clones key attack ko dodge karta lekin saamne dekhta hai toh mohan gayab hojata hai tabhi DAYUN piche ko turn karta hai lekin mohan uspar attack karta hai aur usse injure karta hai yeh dekh kar sab hairan hote pichle 4 saal sey koi bhi competitor DAYUN ko injure nahi kar paya aur itni der tak nihi tikh paya hai mujhe lagta hai ki DAYUN ko tough fight hoti hai.

DAYUN kehta hai ki itni powerful sword tumare pass rehne ka koi fayda nahi tum iske suitable nahi ho kehkar apni sword ko leta hai aur kehta hai kya sirf tum hi powerful sword bana sakte ho yeh kehkar apne sword sey arrows ko release karta hai aur dekhtey kya tumari sword iss arrows ko rok sakti hai aur back to back arrows attack karta hai mohan un arrows ko apne sword sey break karta hai lekin tabhi DAYUN aapne sword ko mohan key andar ghusa deta hai jisse woh bahuth ghayal hojata hai aur niche girjata hai yeh dekhkar Miss Qin kehti hai ki mohan injure ho chuka uss pain ho raha hai yeh dekhkar principal abb DAYUN ko winner ghosit karna chatey hai lekin tabhi mohan khada hojata hai aur recover hojata hai aur aapne mooh sey khoon ko tukhtha hai yeh dekhkar DAYUN ko bahuth gussa atha hai acha tum abhi bhi hare nahi ho chalo iss bar mai tumare dono haath kaatdunga toh apni sword kaise use karoge yeh kehkar woh mohan key taraf baag tha mohan phir veer ney joh KILLING INTENT TECHNIQUE ko sikhaya usse yaad karta hai jisse Darwaja do pieces mey hogaya tha uss technique ko DAYUN par attack karta hai joh woh sword abb ek heavenly earth realm mey convert hogayi hai DAYUN uss attack ko rokhne ki koshish karta hai lekin nahi kar sakta hai bahuth zyada injure hojata hai aur niche baite jata hai phir mohan DAYUN key pass aake kya tum mujhse abb ladna chaoge DAYUN kehta hai nahi mai tumse abb nahi ladunga yeh sunkar sab hairan hojate hai ki mohan ney senior ko hara diya hai aur DAYUN iss liye nahi lad sakta hai kyunki iss attack key wajase uske haath aur pair dono bhi paralayse hogaye hai.

Yeh sab sunkar principal mohan iss round ko Vijeta announce karte hai mohan veer key pass aakar master veer kya aap mujhe aapne disable key taur par swikar karte hai please karke who ghunte key baal niche baite jata hai veer kehta hai haan mai tumey sweekar karta hoon aur disable nahi balki as tumey mai apna brother banata hoon.

Phir Principal veer congrats kehte hai tumey academy mey teach kar sakte ho aur tumari class ko upgrade bhi kiya jata hai primary sey senior key taur par tabhi DIAO aakar kehta hai veer tum congrats kehta hoon tumare students ney mere students ko hara diya sach mey tum ek talented teacher aur tumari class advance intermediate senior class kiya jata ek offer hai ki mujhe nahi lagta hai tum itne chote sey class ko deserve karte mai tum Advance High class ka mentor banata hoon aur tumare class ko bhi advance high class mey promote karte hai kya tumey yeh pasand hai.

 

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[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

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Nice update

 

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