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Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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nidhi ko pata chala ki jeetu hi wo culprit to uske dil mein ek khayal aa raha hoga ki jeetu ko to usne apna bhai hi mana tha... lekin usine pith piche khanjar ghop di....
Well.. achhe aur bhale logo ke yahin gun aur lakshan hai ki wo kabhi apne mann mein kisi ke liye bair, galat vichar nahi rakhte..... gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki galti koi bhi ho lekin maafi yahin log jald de dete hai, kyunki chaahe saamne wala lakh dusman hi sahi lekin achhe aur bhale log apne saamne kisko gidgidate huye nahi dekh sakte, kyun ki inke dil se bade soft hote hai..... ab aise mein baat thi cousin brother jeetu ko maaf karne ki ... to waise bhi maaf kar dete hi, upor se bua ka beta.... aur nidhi ya amar ya phir payal hi ho yeh sabhi jaante the ki baat bahar ya police tak gayi to badnaami shayad family ki ho. Nidhi ki bua ko dukh hota so alag . sabse badi baat nidhi apno ka mol, rishto ka Mol kya hai wo bhali bhaanti jaanti hai... isliye bua ke baare mein soch jeetu ko ek de di usne.. Khair... jab pata chala ki wo culprit nidhi ka cousin brother jeetu hai to ye baat bhi clear ho gayi thi Ya to ushi waqt ya der saber nidhi ushe maaf kar hi degi... ....khas kar amar ne bhi socha hoga ki ye jeetu to cousin brother hai, aise saza dena uchit nahi hoga.... ek galti sudharne ka mauka sabhi ko dena chahiye... isliye jeetu ko bhi de diya wo mauka.... jis tarah se wo log jeetu ko us ghatiya harkat karne ke baad bhi maaf ki sach mein inlogo ke hriday kitne vishal hai yahi praman hai....
lekin wo log bhool gaye hai shayad ki kuch aise bhi bure log bhi hote hai jo kabhi sudhar nahi sakte.. aise logo ki sabse badi khasiyat ye ki ye mauka dekhke phir se pith piche waar karte hai... jeetu bhi inhi bure logo ke prajati se belong karta hai..... aaj nahi to kal satranj ki chaal chal ke jarur waar karega nidhi aur amar pe..... jab bhed ki khal mein bhediya banke jiske ghar raha, jiske ghar rehkar study continue ki, jaha pyar aur samman mila ushi ghar ki beti ke sath aisi ghinoni harkat kar sakta hai to ab mauka milne par phir se pith se waar karna Kounsi badi baat uske liye....
lekin twist ye hai ki jeetu ye nahi jaanta ki wo kin logo panga le raha hai..... shayad agli baar maafi nahi balki aisi saza milegi ushe ki jiske bare mein wo soch bhi sakta.... tab to ushe pachtane ka bhi mauka na mile ki akhir usne phir se aisi ghatiya harkat kyun ki...
Khair...... Harry ne bahot madad ki jeetu ko dhundhne mein... wohi sumit bhi pakda gaya.... waise sumit jaise log kuch paiso ke liye logo ko badnam kar dete hai.:sigh:... aaj kal ye jo fake photos ya videos ke jariye log ko badnam karte hai, aur sath hi logo ki photos aur videos net pe galat tarike se viral kar kaise badnam kar dete hai, is important baat ko jeetu sumit jaise kirdaaro ke jariye writer sahab ne dikhane ki koshish ki hai... ke aaj kal itni jaldi kisi ko bhi viswash mein nahi lena chahiye aise nidhi ki tarah aankh kaan bandh karke... kya pata weh log kis maqsad se aapse jude hai maybe agar kaam hasil na hua to jeetu sumit jaisi ghatiya harkat bhi kar de aapke sath...
Well dono update hi dilchasp tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi ..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:


Ha aapne theek kaha ki jeetu jaldi sudharne walo me se nhi hai. Or isko jaldi hi vo sabit karke bhi dikhayega or ab dekhna ye hai ki ye kya karega or kaise karega or abki baar ise saza mil payegi ya ye fir se bach jayega. Kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye is update me takshak kya planning karega bacho se nipatne ke liye.






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superbb update bro
wese i think ye whi ldka hoga jo varsha k piche pda h
superbb update bro
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next



Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhne ke liye. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye kya hota hai aage story me jeetu kya karega ab or takshak kya karega ab surya ki family se nipatne ke liye. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe.







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Mast shaandar update bade miya to bade miya chote miya shubaanalla
Fabulous update bhai
Kamal ki update bhai
Zabardast update
Awesome update



Thanks bhai log apna sath aise hi banaye rakhiye. Aaj ka update post kar diya hai ummid hai pasand aayega sabhi ko. Aaj dekhiye jeetu ab kya karega or kaha jayega ghar se nikal kar. Or kya ab vo nidhi ki life me dobara aayega bhi ya nhi janne ke liye sath bane rahe.




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Bahut pyara update rahul bhai new generation bi kam ni h...
Aur surya ke is dost vijay ka role start se he acha h akhir surya ka bestii jo h bachpan se

Ha bhai best friend hone ke naate uska role to bada or achha hona hi tha. Ab dekhte aage or kya role aata hai vijay ka or jeetu ab kya karega aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe.





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Awesome Update

Toh uss unknown ne bahot dimaag lagaya Amar aur Nidhi ko alag karne ke liye. Par woh yeh nhi jaanta thaa ke usne kisse panga liya hai.

Dekhte hai woh pakda jaata hai yaa nhi
Awesome Update

Toh woh kamina Nidhi ka cousin brother nikla. Pakda gaya toh emotional blackmail karke khud ko bachaa liyaa. Par mujhe nhi lagta yeh Jeetu sudhra hai. Yeh kuch na kuch kaand toh jarur karega. Inlogo ko jab tak saza naa mile yeh log nhi sudharte.

Dekhte hai yeh ab kya karta hai. Par ab itna toh pakka hogya yeh ab Amar aur Nidhi ko kabhi alag nhi karpayega.


Ha ye to sudharne wala nhi baj filhaal baaki dekhna ye hai ki amar use ab sudhar pata hai ya nahi kya hota hai aage janne ke liye sath bane rahe...





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Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.














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Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














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Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.














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Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














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Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.















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Toh kamina jeetu apne dost ke paas chala gaya jarur woh kamina waha rehke hi kuch na kuch kaand karega. Kyoki dost ki sangati se hi insaan ki pehchan hoti hai. Agar dost achhe ho insaan ke karm bhi achhe hote hai aur agar bure ho karm bhi bure hote hai. ( Har case mein aisa ho jaruri nhi. )


Toh Amar ne Nidhi ke parents ko impress kardiyaa. Aur nidhi ke papa ne rishte ke liye manjoori bhi de di. Yeh achha hua. Isse inke beech aur koi naa aapayega.

Aur Payal ne Jeetu ki sachai bata ke aur achha kiya. Jisse ab woh uss kamina se saavdhaan rahenge. Aur uski kisi bhi baato pe vishwaas karne se pehel 10 baar sochenge.
 

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Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














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Toh jeetu toh bahot bada harami nikla. Amar ne isko zinda chorke bahot galat kiyaa isko zindaa gaar dena chahiye thaa. Kitna gira hua insaan hai. Aur iss giree hue insaan ko takshak jaise MC ka saath milaa. Jisse jeetu jaisa jaanwar bhi power wala bann gaya.

Aur iss power ka istemaal karke kitni ladkiyon ki zindagi tabah kardi. Isko toh jaan se maar dena chahiye. Aur jisne isko power di uss takshak ko toh aisi maut dena ki uski rooh kaanp jaaye.

Dekhte hai ab yeh Jeetu iss power se aur kya kya karta hai. Par iss power se Nidhi ke upar khatra aagaya. Ab woh hypnotise hoke uske saath hosakti hai.

Amar ko jeetu pe nazar rakhne ke liye harry ko bolna chahiye thaa. Aur nidhi ki safety ke liye bhi.

Dekhte hai ab Surya aur Amar isse kaise deal karte hai.
 
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