Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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UPDATE - 92














Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














To be continue……………………...

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[SameerK]

UPDATE - 91














Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.














To be continue……………………….

Awesome update bhai

 

[SameerK]

UPDATE - 92














Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














To be continue……………………...

Excellent update bhai

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 91














Jeetu baha se seedha ghar gya jaha usne chupchap apna saman uthaya or baha se nikal gya apne ek dost ke pass room per.




Bahi nidhi is sab se bahut dukhi thi. Usne sapne me bhi nhi socha tha ki use aisa din bhi dekhna padega. Or amar or payal use samjha rahe the.



Or iska asar bhi ho raha tha. Nidhi ab sambhal chuki thi.



Vijay- achha bacho ab ghar jaao or aaram karo me bhi chalta hu.





Amar- ok uncle. Lekin ab us sumit ka kya hoga.






Vijay- dekhte hai agar maan gya to chhod denge Verna lamba jayega vo






Amar- ok uncle aao dekh lena jo bhi theek lage.





Vijay- ok.




Ye kehkar vijay baha se chala gya and amar or baaki sab bhi baha se apni car tak aagye and amar ne car ko bada diya nidhi ke ghar ki taraf.





Nidhi ab theek thi.




Jaldi hi amar nidhi ke ghar ke bahar pahuch gya.





Nidhi- aaj aapko chalna hi hoga andar Verna me baat nhi karungi aapse.





Amar- me abhi aake kya hi karunga tumhare mom dad honge unko kya jawab dunga me.






Nidhi- jo kehna ho keh dena lekin andar to chalna hi padega.




Nidhi ne bahut jid ki to haar kar amar ne bhi ha bol diya.




Amar or baaki car se utre or nidhi ne amar ka hath pakada or andar le jaane lagi.



Jaha nidhi ke mom dad baithe hue the.





N.dad- beta kabse phone kar raha hu kaha thi tum. Or ye kon hai.






Nidhi- sorry dad thodi busy thi isliye call nhi utha paai. By the way ye amar hai my friend ham udaypur me mile the. Abhi gyi thi me jab.






N.dad- ohh hi amar





Amar- namaste uncle.



Amar ne aage badke unke pair chhuye or unka aasirbaad liya.



Jisse ek hi baar me vo amar se impress ho gye. Bahi nidhi ki mom bhi thi to amar ne unke bhi pair chhu liye vo bhi kush.





N.dad- beta jeetu kaha hai kuch pata hai tumhe






Uska naam sunte hi nidhi ka chehra ek dum se badal gya or ye sab uske mom dad ne bhi dekha.







N.mom- kya hua beta jhagda kiya kya usse. Tum dono kab bade hoge.






Nidhi- aisi baat nhi hai mom. Aaj kuch aisa hua hai jo me kabhi nhi bhul sakti hu. Isliye vo ghar chhodke chala gya hai. Ab kaha gya hai mujhe nhi pata.





Ye sunke vo dono ek sath khade ho gye.




n.dad- kaha gya or hua kya. Saaf saaf batao.






Nidhi batane me sankoch kar rahi thi isliye payal aage aai.




Payal- uncle me batati hu. Darashal hua ye ki. Vo jeetu nidhi per gandi najar rakh raha tha. Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi pata nhi tha. Or aaj usne had hi kar di. Usne amar or nidhi ko ek sath dekha to use laga inke beech kuch ho jayega or uska patta saaf ho jayega isliye usne amar ki kuch photos edit karke nidhi ko bhej di taaki inme dushmani ho jaye. Or hua bhi aisa hi lekin amar ne apni begunahi sabit ki or police ki madad ki or police ne jab tehkikaat ki to pata chala ki in sabke pechhe jeetu ka hath hai. Or fir usne apna jurm bhi kabula or ye bhi kaha ki vo nidhi ko pana chahata tha hamesha se. Or isiliye usne aisa kiya. Ye sab sunke hamare to hosh hi udd gye the. Or nidhi ne use yaha se jaane ko keh diya. Or rishta tha isliye use police ke hawale nhi kiya. Aaj ye kiya hai kal ko nidhi ko akela pakar kuch or bhi kar sakta tha. Uske man me kya chal raha hai kya pata isliye nidhi ne use jane ko keh diya.






Ye sab sunke nidhi ke mom dad ek dum sann reh gye unhe samajh me nhi aaya ki vakai me jeetu aisa ladka hai. Bahi nidhi ki mom uske pass aai or use gale se laga liya or nidhi ke dad bahi sofe per baith gye or sochne lage ki ab kya karu unki bahen ko kya jawab du me.






Amar- i m sorry ye sab meri hi bajah se hua hai.






N. Mom- nhi beta balki ye to achha hua. Waqt rehte hame uski asliyat pata chal gyi Verna ham kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak bhi nhi rehte. Isliye thanks beta.





N.mom- aap kya soch rahe hai.





N.dad- soch raha hu ye jeetu to bada chapter nikla. Lekin ab didi ko kaise or kya kahu me. Vo bechari pata nhi kya sochengi hamare bare me. Kahi zindagi bhar ki dushmani na ban jaaye.






Nidhi- unko kuch bhi batane ki jarurat nhi hai. Jeetu ne jo kiya hai uski bajah se aapke or bua ke beech dushmani kyu bane. Jeetu khud hi bata dega jo batana hoga unhe. Or agar fir vo aapse puchhe to unko bata dena aap ye sab.







N.dad- nhi beta aisa nhi kar sakte ham. Jeetu hamari jimmedari tha vo hamare yaha rehta tha. Isliye uska pata lagana hi padega or uski maa ko bhi batana padega ki jeetu ab yaha nhi reh raha hai.





Ye log abhi baate hi kar rahe the ki nidhi ke papa ka phone baja



Or jab unhone phone dekha to unke hosh udd gye kyuki phone jeetu ki maa ka hi tha. Or jab sabne dekha to sabke hosh udd gye.




N.mom- uthaiye.





Ye sunke unhone phone uthaya or unse baat karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke chehre per ek smile aagyi. Or unhone baat karke call cut kar diya.






N.mom- kya hua aapke chehre per smile.




N dad- hamara kaam jeetu ne aasan kar diya





Nidhi- kaise.





N.mom- usne apni maa ko bol diya hai ki abse vo uske dost ke pass rehne wala hai kyuki baha uski padai or achhe se ho payegi or vo hame jaane se pehle bata nhi pata kyuki use dar tha ki ham use jaane nhi dege isliye hame vina bataye hi vo chala gya hai. Or yahi sab vo hame bata de. Or unhone yahi kiya.





Ye sunke sabke sir ka tension ek hi jhatke me dur ho gya. Or sabhi relex ho gye.





N.mom- chalo ye achha hua sir se tension gyi.






n.dad- ha





Amar- theek hai nidhi ab me chalta hu.




Ye sunke sabhi ka dhyan amar per gya.







N.mom- are aise kaise chalta hu. Yaha baitho me sabke liye nasta leke aati hu. Or chai bhi. Or khabardaar jo mana kiya hai to. Mujhse bura koi nhi hoga.






Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile gyi. Or amar ne bhi ha me mundi hilai or bahi baith gya.





Or nidhi payal or uski mom kitchen me chali gyi. Bahi uske pita or amar bahi baith gye.







N.dad- ha to amar apne bare me kuch batao. Kya karte ho kaha rehte ho bagera bagera.






Amar- ji me yahi rehkar padai kar raha hu. Lekin abhi jo cyclone aaya tha usme hamara clg bhi tabah ho gya hai isliye filhaal ghar per hi rehkar padai kar raha hu.







N. Dad- kaha per hai ghar tumhara.






Amar- ji Ratangarh rajasthan.






N.dad- vakai me are bahut suna hai maine Ratangarh ke baare me. Tum sach me baha ke rehne wale ho.






Amar- ji uncle me bahi ka rehne wala hu usi gaav me hi mera ghar hai. Or mera pura parivar bhi.







N.dad- kya baat hai. Fir to tum pratap parivar ko achhe se jante hoge haina.






Ye sunke amar halke se muskuraya.





Amar- ha uncle achhe se janta hu. Lekin aap unhe kaise jante hai.







N.dad- beta janta nhi hu bas suna hai unke bare me. Business man hu na to aai din unke bare me sunta hi rehta hu. Or ye bhi suna hai ki kaise unhone us pure gaav ka naksha badal diya. Vakai me unka kaam or unhone jo hasil kiya hai vo kabile tariff hai.







Amar- ha uncle ye baat to hai.







N.dad- baise tumhare pita kya karte hai.






Amar- actually uncle aap jis pratap parivar ki baat kar rahe hai vo mera hi parivar hai. Mera pura naam Amar pratap singh hai s/o veer pratap singh.





Ye sunte hi vo ek dum se khade ho gye or ek dum hairani se amar ko dekhne lage.







N.dad- sach me.





Amar- ha uncle





N.dad- kya baat hai me bata nhi sakta ki mujhe kitni kushi ho rahi hai aaj tumse milke. Ki me bata nhi sakta.








Amar- aisa kyu







N.dad- actually me unke kaam se bahut impress hu or unke business se bhi. Or isi liye me unse milna chah raha tha lekin hamara milna nhi ho pa raha tha. Or dekho aaj achanak unki next generation se mulkaat ho gyi.






Amar- ohh ha actually dad or chachi sabhi bahut busy rehte hai. Baise to hamesha vo time nikaal hi lete hai lekin kabhi kabhi aisa season aata hai jab vo mahino tak ghar bhi nhi aate hai. Kyuki business pure world me faila hua hai. Or use sambhalne me kai kaam miss ho jaate hai. Baise bahar ke sare mamle mere chhote chachu hi sambhalte hai. Baaki india ka kaam mere dad or chachi dekhte hai.







N.dad- chhote chachu matlab mr. Surya






Amar- ha






n.dad- vakai me unke baare me to kuch Google per bhi nhi milta hai. Kitne rehasymayi insan hai vo.







Ye sunke amar ki hasi nikal gyi.





Amar- ha actually unhe apni publicity pasand nhi hai. Isiliye vo limelight se dur hi rehte hai. Or parde ke pichhe se sabko sambhalte rehte hai.






N.dad- sabko sambhalte hai matlab.







Amar- matlab yahi ki sara business sambhalte hai sare deals ko crack karte hai. Vagera vagera.







N. Dad- ohh. Vaise ek sawal puchhna tha tumse.







Amar- ha puchhiye.







N. Dad- aapke or nidhi ke beech kuch serious hai kya. Keval meri info ke liye puchhna chahta hu.







Amar- actually ha. We love each other. But filhaal hamara shadi ko leke koi bhi irada nhi hai. Isliye pls aap is mamle ko aage na hi banaye to theek hoga. Abhi hamare khelne khane ke din hai. Baaki jab shadi ka time aayega to kar lenge. And ek baat or me kehna chahunga. Ki aap apne man me avishwas paida mat hone deejiyega. Aapki beti mere sath safe hai uska kabhi bhi galat istemaal me nahi karunga na hi kar sakta hu.






Ye sunke nidhi ke dad ke chehre per smile aagyi.





N.dad- mujhe pata hai beta. Or mujhe jo ye viswas hai vo tumhare parivar ki bajah se hai. Isliye fikr mat karo. Mujhe ye rishta manjur hai jab bhi aap log kahoge me aapki shadi ka praposal leke aapke ghar aajanga.







Uske baad nidhi payal or uski maa aagyi nasta leke. Fir sabne milke nasta kiya or uske baad amar ne sabse bida li.














To be continue……………………….

Ye to hona hi tha, ab jab jeetu sudharne walo mein se nahi hai to yahi baat bhi tay ki wo apni maa ke paas gaon hargiz nahi jaane wala balki kahi aise jagah pe rahega jaha se aage ki planning executed kar sake.... so usne chuna rahne ke liye apne dost ka ghar....
udhar amar ko bhi pasand kar liya nidhi ke parents ne... dekha jaaye to rishta tay hai..... ab bas deri hain to shaadi ki....
Payal ne to jeetu ki saari pol patti khol ke rakh di....
Waise ye Sau pratishat sach ki jeetu jaise ki baaton pe kabhi yakin nahi karna chahiye...
Khair.....
Kuch baatein bhale bahut jyada naya na ho lekin update suruwat se ant tak pesh karne ka tarika aur likhane ke tarike se ek freshness bani rahi.. Shabdo ke khubsoorat jaal bune hain aapne, jiski wajah se padhane ka maja badh jata hai.. Aapki is update ko do part mein divide ki jaa sakti hai, first happy wala part jaha aapne halke fulke mahol mein thoda bahot romance, wohi amar ko nidhi ke liye pasand kar lena... in pehlu, mod, baaton darshaya hai.. aur dusra part jisme negative kirdaar ko baare mein... ki kaise sudharne ka mauka dene ke baad bhi kuch bure log bure kaam karenge hi karenge... jaise unhe koi fark hi pare... .
Well payal bhi ek aham bhumika nibha rahi hai... ye mere favorite kirdaaro mein se ek ban chuki hai... . Overall the best part of the update jab nidhi ke gharwale damad maan liya amar ko... specially the way you have written it.

Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

UPDATE - 92














Amar ke jaane ke baad nidhi or payal apne kamre me chali gyi bahi nidhi ke dad ne uski mom ko abhi hui saari bate batai jise sunke vo bhi kush ho gyi. Or unhe bhi amar bahut pasand aagya tha pehli hi mulakat me.




Khair jeetu is waqt building ki chhat per baitha hua tha akele hi or daru or cigrate pi raha tha. Use bahut hi bura lag raha tha ki nidhi ne use thappad mara or ghar se bhi nikaal diya. Uska dimaag kharab ho raha tha. Or gussa bhi aaraha tha. Vo apman ki aag me jal raha tha. Or ab usne ye tay kar liya tha ki ab vo nidhi ko apne neeche lakar hi rahega fir chahe iske liye use kuch bhi kyu na karna pade. Nidhi ko uski aukaat batani padegi ki. Lekin vo ye diside nhi kar pa raha tha ki apna mansuba pura kaise kare. Kyuki vo itna to samajh gya tha amar koi sadharan insan nhi hai. Uski pahuch bahut uper tak hai. Kyuki usne matra 2 ghanto me ye pata laga liya ki in sab ke pichhe mera hath hai. Isiliye vo ab har kadam fook fook ke uthana chahta tha.






Tabhi use pechhe se ek aawaj aai.




Jeetu pechhe muda to uske samne ek saks khada hua tha three piece suit me.




Jeetu- kon ho tum or yaha kya kar rahe ho. Jaao yaha se mujhe akela chhod do.






U- chala jaunga lekin me yaha tumhari madad karne aaya hu.






Jeetu- kis tarah ki madad.me apni madad karne me khud saksham hu.







U- achha nidhi ko apne neeche laane me to nhi ho saksham






Ye sunte hi jeetu ka sara nasha ek dum se utar gya. Or vo ek dum ghor ke us insan ko dekhne laga. Jaise puchh raha ho ki tumhe kaise pata.







U- jyada socho mat. Me is mamle me tumhari madad kar sakta hu. Or nidhi hamesha ke kiye tumhari hi sakti hai kisi dashi ki tarah. Tum jaise chaho uska istemaal karo vi uff tak nhi karegi. Or uski sari property bhi tumhari ho jayegi






Jeetu- or badle me tumhe kya chahiye hai.





U- jyada kuch nhi bas amar or uski family se badla chahiye hai. Or is kaam me mera badla bhi mil jayega or tumhara kaam bhi hi jayega. Vo kahavat to tumne suni hi hogi.

EK PANT DO KAAJ.







Ye sunke jeetu soch me pad gya. Use vo insan theek to nhi lag raha tha lekin is waqt uske sir per nidhi ko paane ka bhut savar tha isliye usne ha keh diya.





Jeetu- theek hai batao kaise or kya karna hai.






U- ye hui na baat. Tum super natural Power me belive karte ho.








Jeetu- nhi.






U- to karne lago. Kyuki abse tum mere hathiyar banoge






Jeetu- me kuch samjha nhi.







U- matlab ki me tumhe kuch super natural Power dene wala hu. Jiski madad se tum aasani se unhe hara paoge.







Jeetu- kya bakwas hai. Normal insano ko harane ke liye super natural Power ki madad kabse padne lagi. Or sabse imp agar tumhare pass powers haj to tum khud hi kyu nhi unka istemaal karke apna badla le lete ho.








U- beta tum abhi amar or uski family ko jante nhi ho. Vo log jitna jameen ke uper hai utna hi jameen ke nechhe hai. Verna tum hi socho ki itni jaldi unlogo ne kaise pata kar liya ki is sabke pechhe tumhara hath hai. Or jara ye bhi socho ki vo apne gaav se 10-15 min. Me kaise pahuch jata hai mumbai. Aisi konsi car ya flight hai jo itni jaldi use yaha pahucha deti hai.







Ye sab sunke jeetu ke dimaag ka bhi fuse udd gya.





Jeetu- are ha yaar.






U- isiliye keh raha hu me.







Jeetu- lekin aap ye kyu nhi karte ho.








U- me bhi karunga lekin me filhaal unke saamne nhi aasakta hu. Kyuki me unki radaar me hu. Isiliye mujhe tumhari madad chahiye haj taaki unhe pata hi nhi chale ki unki band akhir baja kon raha hai.






Ye sunke jeetu kush ho gya





Jeetu- to fir bataiye kya karna hai






Ye sunke uske chehre per smile aagyu or vo jeetu ke ekdum karib aagya palak jhapkate hi or ye dekh jeetu ek baar or hairan ho gya. Khair us unknown ne jeetu ke mathe per apna hath rakha or kuch mantra pade aisa karte hi uske hatho se kuch roshni nikal kar jeetu me samane lagi. Bahi jeetu ka pura sharir us roshni se chamakne laga tha or use andar se bahut hi takat mehsus ho rahi thi.




Karib 10 min. Tak vo aise hi mantra padta gya or idhar jeetu ke andar ab kaafi takat aagyu thi.



Or fir usne apna hath uske sir se utha liya.





U- ab tum koi mamuli insan nhi rahe ho. Ek khatarnaak hathiyar ban gye ho. Jiska koi tod nhi hai. Tumhara sharir vajr ka ho gya hai jise koi nhi bhed sakta hai. Tumhari raftaar bhi bakio se bahut tez hai. Or sabse imo hai tumhari aankhe jinse tum kisi ko bhi apne vash me kar sakte ho or jarurat padne per inhi aankho se uska vinash bhi kar sakte hai.






Ye sunke jeetu ek dum hairan tha.





Jeetu- kaise







U- apni aankho per jor daalo or saamne kisi jagah per focus karo.





Usne aisa hi kiya usne apni aankho per jor dala or ek khali jagah per focus kiya. Or aisa karte hi uski anakho se bhayankar lazor nikli.



Ye dekhke jeetu ek dum hi achambhit reh gya.




Jeetu- ye dekha tumne lazor nikli meri aankho se. Kahi ye koi sapna to nhi hai.






U- nhi ye haqikat hai. Or test karo apni powers ko.




Ye sunke jeetu ne apna hath normali deewar me mara or uska hath deewar se takrate hi baha ek bada sa hole ban gya or deewar me bhi darar aagyi. Ye dekhke jeetu or kush ho gya.







U- ek baat dhyan rakhna filhaal tumhara focus keval amar or uske bhai bahen per hi rakhna. Sabse pehle unhe apne raste se hatana uske baad kisi or per focus karna. Or meri anumati ke bina kuch bhi harkat ki to ye yaad rakhna ki maine tumhe ye powers di hai. Agar me de sakta hu to le bhi sakta hu. Isliye mujhe double cross karne ki sochna bhi mat.







Jeetu- me samajh gya hu. Aap befikr rahe. Ab me dikhaunga nidhi ko ki me kya kar sakta hu.






U- bahut badiya kal sham ko mujhe udaypur me milo aage me tumhe bataunga baha se kya karna hai.







Jeetu- ok. Baise aapne apna naam nhi bataya mujhe.







U- mera naam takshak hai. Filhaal itna hi kaafi hai tumhare liye.




Ye kehkar takshak baha se palak jhapkate hi gayab ho gya. Bahi jeetu jor jor se hasne laga. Use Biswas hi nhi ho raha tha ki ye haqikat hai.aaj to use neend bhi nhi aane wali thi. Is dar se ki kahi ye sapna na ho or subah jaagte hi ye sapna tut na jaaye.








Bahi sabse pehle jeetu ne apni sabhi powers ko aajmane ka decide kiya. Baaki sabto usne aajma liya tha. Bas sammohan kala ko aajmane baaki tha. Usne building ki chhat se neeche dekha to use ek ladki baha se jaati hui dikhi. To jeetu ka kameenapan jaag gya. Or usne usi chhat se nechhe chhalang laga di. Or dhadam se neeche land hua vo. Ek dum us ladki ke aage.





Or achanak aise kisi ko uper se aata dekhke vo ladki bhi dar gyi.




Bahi usne jeetu se puchhne ke liye jaise hi uski aankho me dekha chamatkaar ho gya. Ek hi jhatke me. Us ladki ki saari pareshani gayab ho gyi or vo jeetu ko dekhke mand mand muskurane lagi.





Bahi ye dekhke jeetu ke man me laddu footne lage.



Or usne us ladki ko apne pechhe aane ka ishara kiya. Or vo ladki bina kisi shart ke uske peechhe chalne lagi. Jeetu apne dost ke flat me gya jaha vo filhaal tha nhi. Vo kahi bahar gya hua tha isiliye jeetu chhat per baith ke pee raha tha.





Khair vo use flat me laya or uske baad baha kya hua hoga aap sabhi achhe se jaante hi hai.



Ji ha usne us ladki ka rape kiya. Us ladki ko to pata hi nhi tha ki vo kya or kyu kar rahi hai. Kyuki vo sammohit thi. Baaki jisne use baisa kiya tha use sab pata tha.



Khair uska jee bhar ke ras paan karne ke baad jeetu ne use fir sab kapde vagera pehnne ko kaha or vapis se road per pahucha diya or ek chutki baja ke uska sammohan tod diya. Or sammohan tutate hi vo seen fir se creat ho gya ki uske saamne jeetu uper se aaya tha.






Jeetu ne use sorry bola or baha se andar side chala gya bahi vo ladki bhi baha se apne raste per chali gyi. Lekin jab age jaake usne time dekha to uske hosh udd gye kyuki vo pure 2 ghante late ho gyi thi. Or ye baat use samajh me nhi aarahi thi ki aisa kaise ho gya office se to vo time per chali thi fir itna late kaise ho gyi. Bahi dusri baat use apni tango ke beech jalan bhi mehsus ho rahi thi. Jis bajah se vo or confuse thi.




Ab aage uska kya hoga ham sabhi jante hi hai. Use uske sawalo ke jawab kabhi nhi milenge vo hamesha isi soch me rahegi ki is raat akhir hua kya tha.





Bahi jeetu ne raat bhar me aise hi 3-4 ladkiyo ke sath kiya kuch ko to unke hi ghar me ghus ke. Is power ka jitna hi sakta tha vo misuse kar raha tha or aisa karne me main vo nidhi ko to bhul hi gya tha or sath me apna badla bhi. Vo bas apni raat ko enjoy hi kar raha tha. Bahi takshak ye sab dekh kar soch raha tha ki kahi usne bacahe ke hath me bhari hui pistol to nhi de di.




Khair ab ye or kya kya karta hai ye janne ke liye sath bane rahe or dekhiye ki ab takshak kya karega kaise jeetu ko kabu karega.














To be continue……………………...

are writer sahab.... ye kya hai?
matlab jeetu ko itna shaktisali ban gaya us takshak ki wajah se ... ek to jeetu hawasi tha hi, dusra uska lomdi jaisa dimag, upor se ye power....is jeetu to saari hadein hi paar kar di .... isko tabhi agar amar maar deta to aisi critical situation create hi nahi hoti... lekin ek hope hai... aur wo hai rider.... shayad wo iska kissa jald hi samapt kar de.... taaki aur kiski ijjat pe taad taad na kar paaye...
waise jin topics ko leke storyline ki suruwat ki wo sach mein dilchasp to the hi par kathin bhi the.. wo kathin topics story mein define karna chapter wise sach much kabile-tareef hai wo bhi fantasy, drama, suspense, emotions, aur understanding ko jis tarah se achhe se darshana.... mind blowing .....
shayad ye ek kahanikar ki sabase badi vijay hoti hai ki jab unke readers is had tak kahani kaar ki lekhni mein kho jaate hai ki ushe kahanikaar ki kalpana ko sach lagane lagate hai...
bahut hi dilchasp update taiyar kiya gaya hai.. na koi extra material cheejen baat add huyi hai aur na hi koi mann ubaoo masaala..... negative kirdaaro ki activities aur sath positive kirdaaro ki activities ko bilkul perfect way mein dikhaya gaya hai.... update ka mod aur pehlu aur sath sath negative kirdaaro jariye ye dikhane koshish.... ki agar power bure logo ke paas aa jaaye to wo power society ke liye kitni hanikarak sabit ho sakti sath bure log bhi... isko dikhane kaamyab rahe, kaamyab is mamle mein rahe aap... ki chahe insaan tez dimag wala kyun ho jaaye lekin savdhaani na rakhne par aur dhyaan na dene par chhoti chhoti ghatnaye bhi baad mein jaake ye roop le, le ki ushe sambhaalna muskil ho jaaye jaise abhi ye jeetu jo ek aam ladka na rahke ek shaktisali darinda ban chuka hai ..
Btw har situation ko pesh karne ka tarika aur prastutikaran nirala tha... lage ki update aur zyada bada hota to..... like mega update....
flow badhiya hai....
Khair......
Let's see what happens next...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills.....

 

[Naik]

UPDATE - 85













Sabhi aasani se khatam ho chuke the. Or vanraj bas dur se hi khada hoke dekh raha tha ki ab akhir ye surya Bapis kaise banega. Use kuch samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki kya kiya jaaye. Bahi charo taraf lagi aag bhi abhi tak jal rahi thi. Vo bhi shant hone ka naam nhi le rahe thi. Fir bhi usne himmat karke aage badhne ka faisla liya.




Vo dheeme dheeme kadmo se aage bada or usne thodi dur se hi surya ka naam pukara






Vanraj- surya.




Ye aawaj sunke rider ne peechhe mud ke dekha.





Or usne gour se vanraj ko dekha or tezi se uske pass gya. Bahi is tarah usko apne pass aata dekhke vanraj ke hath pair kamp gye. Use laga kahi ye uska bhi kaam tamaam na karde.





Rider uske ek dum karib aake ruka or uski khushbu sunghne laga. Actually vo bas buraai ko sunghata hai. Or agar kisi ke andar se thodi bhi buraai ki smell aagyi to vo gya kaam se.




Or is waqt vanraj kisi murti ki tarah ek dum seedha khada hua tha. Or rider uske andar ki buraai ko sunghne ki kosis kar raha tha.





Main2- tum ek achhe insan ho bas thodi der ke liye behal gye the. Or galat raste per chale gye the. Lekin ab mujhe tumhare andar se buraai ki thodi si bhi smell nhi aarahi hai iska matlab tum ab safe ho.






Ye sunke vanraj ki saas me saas aai.





Vanraj- mujhe surya se baat karni hai.







Main2- subah aana abhi mujhe apne sikaar dhundne hai.



Ye kehkar usne seeti bajai or uski bike apne aap start hoke uske pass aagyi. Or vo uspe baitha.






Main2- ye aag mere jaate hi shant hu ho jayegi or fir tum bhi ja sakte ho yaha se. Or seedhe ghar hi jana





Vanraj- ha ghar hi jaunga.





Ye kehkar rider ne apni bike ko aage badhaya or full speed se aag ko paar karte hue nikal gya baha se. Or rider ke aag ko paar karte hi aag se bana hua pura pinjara apne aap hi khatam ho gya or charo taraf ka mahool fir se pehle jaisa ho gya. Halaki mousam garmi kaafi bad gyi thi. Isiliye vanraj ne jaldi hi baha se nikalne ka faisla kiya or ghar ke liye seedhi doud laga di.




Kuch hi Minto me vo pahuch gya surya ke ghar. Or jab baha pahuch kar usne ghar ki haalat dekhi to apna sir pakad liya. Kyuki pure ghar ki band buri tarah baj chuki thi. Ghar ki deeware kaali pad gyi thi. Aag ki bajah se.





Vanraj- ye kya haal ho gya ghar ka.





Harry- sir ab kya kar sakte hai. Jo hona tha so ho gya. Baise surya sir kaha hai.






Vanraj- vo surya nhi hai. Balki uske andar ka khukhara shaitaan hai. Jisko jaha buraai dikhegi vo apna sikaar usko bana lega. Or is waqt bhi vo bahi karne gya hai.







Harry- ha sir maine dekha baha jungle me kya hua. Vakai me pal bhar me sabko khatam kar diya. Or ek hisaab se ye achha hi hua. Kyuki aise shaitano ke liye. Unka aisa rup hi theek hai.






Vanraj- ha ye baat to hai. Or uska ye rup dekhke meri tension kaafi had tak khatam ho gyi hai. Or ab mujhe pura viswas ho gya hai ki black heart or uski gang ka safaya hone se koi nhi rok sakta hai.






Harry- ha sahi kaha. Khair abhi subah hone me waqt hai to bataiye kya karne ka irada hai.






Vanraj- koi kamra salamat bacha ho to bata do me bahi so jaunga.





Harry- theek hai sir uper wale kamro me se koi ek le leejiye vo sab theek hai.





Vanraj- thanks Harry




Ye bolke vanraj uper gya or ekkamre me jaake so gya.






Bahi me apni bike per pure sehar ke chakkar kat raha tha lekin mujhe burai ko gandh kahi per bhi nhi aai. Sayad mere bare me sabhi ko pata chal gya tha or sabhi apne apne bilo me chhip gaye honge. Isliye suraj ke nikalne tak me yaha baha ghumta raha. Or jaise hi suraj nikle meri bike apne aap ruk gyi or me bike se neeche. Me jameen per leta or puri tarah se normal ho gya. Mere body me jo aag lagi hui thi vo apne aap bujh gyi. Or ab me surya wale besh me Bapis aagya tha.





Thodi der tak me vaise hi jameen per leta raha or yaad karne laga ki kal kya kya hua. Lekin mujhe sab kuch thoda thoda hi yaad tha. Baaki puri ghatna yaad nhj aarahi thi.




Meri sanse jor jor se chal rahi thi jinhen me control kar raha tha.





Tabhi achanak se mujhe ek bahut hi tez horn sunai diya to maine apni mundi ko ghuma kar dekha to ek truck seedha mere hi uper chada ja raha tha. Use dekhte hi meri aankhe chad gyi. Or me furti se side ko ludak gya. Or truck apni speed se mere baju se nikal gya. Or maine chain ki saas li.




Khair thodi der lete rehne ke baad me khada hua apne kapde saaf kiye. Jo kai jagah se jal gye the. Fir bhi theek the. Uske baad maine dekha ki mai. Akhir hu kaha. Ab mobile mere pass tha nhi or milestone bhi nhi laga hua tha. Isliye ab kisi se puchhna tha mujhe.



Lekin aaspass koi nhi tha. Isliye apni bike ko uthaya or jis disha me meri bike padi hui thi uski opposite disha me maine jana shuru kar diya. Or thodi hi aage gya tha me ki mujhe ek aadmi dikha jo paidal hi road per tehal raha tha. Maine uske baju me apni bike ko roka.





Main- are bhai jara suno to.




Meri aawaj sunke vo mere pass aaya





U- ha bhai kya hua.





Main- darashal mujhe mumbai jana hai. Konsa rasta hai baha ka or yaha se kitni duri per haj







U- bhai aap mumbaj wale road per hi ho. Yaha se mumbaj karib 150 km dur hai.





Main- isi taraf jana hai.





U- ha bhaisaab. Isi taraf jaiye pahuch jayenge aap mumbai.






Main- dhanyavad bhai.






U- baise bhai aapki bike badi mast hai. Kaha se li hai ye or konsi company ki hai.






Main- bhai ye bike mere bhai ne banai hai. Khud apne hatho se. Ye kisi company ki nhi haj.








U- aisi bike banwane me kitna kharcha aajayega.






Main- jyda nhi 2-3 lakh me aisi bike van jayegi.





U- ohh ye to bahut mehngi hai.





Ye sunkar mujhe samajh me aaya ki maine thoda jyada hi casual bol diya






Main- ha bhai mehngi to haj. Khair chalo me nikalta hu. Thanks.






U- ok bhai.




Ye kehkar maine bike ko aage badhaya apni full speed se. Mujhe jald se jald ghar pahunchana tha.






Or aisa hi hua ek ghante me main mumbai me ghus gya tha. Or ab kamse kam aadha ghanta or lagega ghar tak pahunchane me.




Or hua bhi aisa hi me 1:30 ghante ke pure safar ke baad ghar pahuch hi gya. Or jan baha ki haalat dekhi to mere hosh hi udd gye. Kyuki ghar ki haalat vakai me kharab ho gyi thi. Or ghar me repairing ka kaam jori shoro se chal raha tha.




Or bahi mujhe bahar ki side vanraj ek jagah baitha hua dikha subah ki chai peete hue or news paper padte hue.





Main- kaise ho miyan.





Ye aawaj sunke usne meri taraf dekha or ek hi jhatke me khada ho gya or meri taraf aaya or mere gale mila.




Vanraj- kaha gye the






Main- pata nhi jaha vo le gya chala gya me. Baise kya hua raat ko. Kuch galat salat to nhi kar diya maine.






Vanraj- bhai kurta faad ke rumaal kardiya aapne.






Main- achha aisa kya kar diya.





Vanraj- jyada kuch nhi. Bas vikraal kaya or uske kuch sathiyo ka kaam tamaam kardiya aapne. Vo bhi aise jaise vo koi machar ho. Jitni aasani se insan macharro ko maarte hai baise hi aapne un sabhi ko mara hai.







Ye sunke mujhe vakai me jhatka laga.




Main- what vikraal kaya khatam.





Vanraj- ha bhai. Maja hi aagya.unko tadapta hua dekhke. Or agar ye rider isi speed se chalta raha to kuch hi dino me black heart khud tumhare saamne hoga ladne ke liye kyuki uske pass log hi nhi bachenge aage bhejne ke liye.







Main- vakai me.






Vanraj- baise aajkal mujhse bahut kuch chhipane lage ho tum. Mujhe bataya kyu hi iske baare me.






Main- actually me khud pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya hota hai kaise hota hai. Hota bhi hai ya nhi. Isiliye nhi bataya tha.






Vanraj- baise ye sab hua kab tha.






Main- kal raat ko hi. Uske baad subah maine sabko ghar bhej diya tha or raat me ye sab ho gya.






Vanraj- sahi hai. Baise kya lagta hai.ab black heart kya karega jab use iske baare me pata chalega.







Main- kuch keh pana muskil hai. Isliye filhaal hame saabdhan rehne ki jarurat hai. Baaki dekhte hai kya karta hai vo.
















To be continue……………………….

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

 

[Naik]

UPDATE - 86













Bahi dusri taraf ghar per mahol theek thak tha bas amar ka dill yaha per nhi lag raha tha kyuki uska dill to already kisi or ke pass chala gya tha.



Or yahi hal nidhi ka bhi tha. Jo is waqt bister per ulti leti hui thi or amar ke khayalo me khoi hui thi. Or halke halke muskura rahi thi. Usne iswaqt ek short skirt pehni hui thi jo uski jangho tak hi seemit thi. Or uske aise letne ki bajah se thoda or uper ko ho gya tha. Or uper ek t shirt. Bahi uske kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha. Or baha per koi chhip kar nidhi ke pichhwade ko taad raha tha. Or soch raha tha ki kab ye meri banegi. Kab me iske badan ka raspan kar paunga.





Kaafi der tak vo baha khada raha. Or jab usne dekha ki nidhi bister se uth rahi hai to vo baha se chup chap nikal gya or nidhi ko bhanak bhi nhi lagi ki koi use aise dekh raha tha.




Bahi use pata tha ki nidhi ka chakkar ab kisi or se chalne laga hai. Isliye use kaafi insecurity ho rahi thi ki nidhi usse hamesha ke liye dur ho jayegi. Or yahi soch soch ke uski rato ki neend udi hui thi. Use kuch aisa plan chahiye tha jisse ye dono ek dusre se alag ho jaaye or nidhi kisi tarah uski jholi me aajaye. Or isiliye vo abhi tak khamosh hai.



Lekin ye kab tak aisa rehta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai.







Bahi sabhi bache gaav me ghumne nikale hue the sham ka samay tha. Or ghumte hue vo log gaav se bahar ek jheel ke pass pahuch gye. Or bahi apna jamawda laga liya. Samar or varsha sabse thode alag baith gye hatho me hath dalke. Or avi ashk or amar ek sath baith gye. Bahi amar thoda gupchup tha or ashk hamesha ki tarah bad bad kar rahi thi beech beech me or avi uski khichai.






Ashk- kya hua bhai aap itne shant kyu ho. Bhabhi ki jyada yaad aarahi hai kya.





Amar- ha yaar mera to bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha hai yaha per.





Avi- bhai aap kaho to kal milne chale mumbai.ya aap akele hi chale jaao.





Ashk- baise me mana to nhi karna chahti lekin bhai agar papa ko pata chala to bahut dant bhi pad sakti hai. Isliye jo bhi faisla le soch samjh ke lena.





Amar- i know isiliye to nhi ja raha hu me baha per.






Avi- baise me aapki madad kar sakta hu. Raat me chhip kar jaane me or Bapis aane me.





Ye sunke donk ne hairangi se avi ko dekha.







Amar- kaise.






Avi- robo ki madad se aap chupchap ja sakte hai or aa bbi sakte hai.





Ye sunke amar or ashk ne ek dusre ko aise dekha jaise soch rahe ho ki ye idea unhe kyu nhi aaya.





Ashk- are ha yaar ye idea mujhe kyu nhi aaya.





Avi- kyuki tu duffer hai.





Ashk- achha bada aaya. Chal maan liya ki robo bhai ko le jayega lekin Harry ka kya. Uske bina to ghar me patta bhi nhi ghus sakta fir robo bhai ko le jayega or use pata nhi chalega aisa possible hi nhi hai. Or usko pata chala matlab saaf hai ki papa ko pata chal gya. Or fir band bajna tay hai.







Avi- baise Harry ko ham samjha kar apni side kar lenge. Or usse kahenge ki papa ko kuch na vataye. To vo maan jayega. Vo apna dude haj.samajh jayega.







Amar- to ek kaam kar abhi bula usko or mujhe bhej do. Raat hone se pehle to me mil ke sabhi jaunga. Abhi 2-3 ghante hai andhera hone me.






Ashk- ha ye idea theek hai. Aisa hi kar bula usko.





Avi- ok jo hukum.



Ye kehkar abhi ne apne mobile se robo ko active kiya or use apne pass bulaya





Robo is waqt mumbai base me hi tha. Jaise hi use command mila vo udd gya avi ke pass aane ke liye.





Or karib 15 min. Me vo avi logo ke saamne khada tha. Bahi Samar or varsha ka dhyan gya usper to vo bhi aagye baha per. Unhe laga kuch hua hoga.





Samar- kya hua ye yaha kaise.





Avi- maine bulaya hai bhai.





Samar- kyu.





Ashk- vo kya hai hamare bade bhaiyya ko bhabhi ki bahut yaad aarahi hai to ye unko milane ye jayega or vapis le aayega. Puri safety ke sath.





Ye sunke sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.




Uske baad amar ne nidhi ko call kiya or ek restaurant me milne bulaya 15 min. Me jo unke ghar ke pass hi tha. Or jab nidhi ko pata chala ki amar bahi per usse milne aaraha hai to vo kushi se pagal ho gyi or jaldi se ready hone nikal gyi. Halaki ready hone ke liye 15 min. Bahut hi kam hai. Lekin usne thoda sa touchup kiya badiya si dress pehni or nikal gyi ghar se.




Bahi avi ne sab samjha diya robo ko or vo bhi samajh gya or usne amar ko kaske pakda or dono udd gye full speed se or theek 15 min. Me usi restaurant ke pass hi ek sunsaan jagah per land ho gye. Baha se amar ne usko Bapis base per bhej diya or 2 ghante baad yahi milne ka bol diya. Usne command accept kiya or base me chala gya.



Bahi amar ne khud ko theek kiya baal bagera set kiye hath se hi or kapde theek kiye or pahuch gya restaurant jaha per use nidhi ek seat per baithi hui dikh gyi to vo uske pass gya.





Amar- hii madam.




Ye sunke nidhi ne peechhe dekha or amar ko baha dekh ke kush ho gyi or jor se chipak gyi usse. Dono kaafi betaab the ek dusre ke liye






Amar- public place hai nidhi control.



Ye sunke dono alag hue or bahi baith gye. Waiter ko 2 coffee ka order diya or lag gye dono apni gappo me.






Nidhi- achanak yaha kaise. Or bataya bhi nhi kab aaye yaha.





Amar- abhi aaya tha khaas tumse milne sabse chhipke. Agar chachu ya papa ko pata chala to pakka band bajegi ghar per.






Nidhi- achha to fir kyu aaye yaha.





Amar- kya kare ghar per bilkul bhi man nhi lag raha tha. Har samay tumhari hi yaad aarahi thi. Isiliye aana pada.





Nidhi- sach kahu to mera bhi yahi haal hai. Na clg me man lag raha hai na ghar per. Nas har pal yahi sochati hu ki jaldi se hamari shadi ho jaaye or me aapke sath rehne lagu.






Amar- me bhi yahi sochata hu. Lekin kya kare abhi shadi ki age bhi nhi hai hamari or itni jaldi shadi karni bhi nhi hai. Or ghar wale hasenge alag agar unko maine bola to sab khichai karenge meri.






Nidhi- ha lekin is dill ka kya kare.





Amar- khair chhodo or sunao






Nidhi- kya sunau.





Amar- kuch bhi.




Dono ki romantic gapshap shuru hui or chalti hi rahi. Kab 2 ghante nikal gye pata hi nhi chala. Akhir me amar ka call baja to usne attend kiya jo robo ka tha.




Robo- sir 2:30 ghante ho chuke hai andhera bhi ho gya hai. I think ab hame chalna chahiye.





Amar- ok bas 10 min. Me aaya.



Amar- ab chalta hu. Verna sab gadbad ho jayegi.






Nidhi- jana jaruri hai. Mat jaao





Amar- man to nahi hai lekin jana padega. Ab aata rahunga milne isi tarah.






Nidhi- to fir theek hai. Ab kab aaoge.






Amar- aata hu 3-4 din me. Roj roj nhi aasakta






Nidhi- I understand. Ok chalo me aapko chhod deti hu. Baise aaye kaise the






Amar- jadu se. Or baise hi chala jaunga.



Ye kehkar or mouka dekhke amar ne ek halki si kiss nidhi ko kar li. Or isse nidhi ek dum se hairan or sharma gyi. Uske baad amar ne bill diya or nidhi ko bye bolke nikal gya baha se. Nidhi ne bhi usi byy kiya or fir se vo thodi mayus ho gyi lekin ab kushi jyada thi or mayusi kam. Or usi kushi ke sath vo bhi apne ghar chali gyi. Jaha fir se us teesre bande ne use dekha or vo thoda soch me pad gya ki ye kaha gyi thi or iske chehre per ye smile kaisi.





Bahi amar usi sunsaan jagah per pahucha or baha se robo use uda le gya usi jheel ke pass jaha se usne amar ko pick kiya tha. Jaha sabhi uska wait kar rahe the.






Uske baad robo Bapis mumbai aagya bahi Harry ko sab pata tha ki aaj kya or kaise hua hai. Lekin usne ye bat surya ko nhi batai. Batane ki jarurat bhi nhi lagi use.



Or baaki ke bache kushi kushi apne ghar chale gye tehalte hue.









Bahi dusri taraf takshak puri tarah hairan tha vikraal or kaya ki mout se. Use samajh me nhi aaraha tha ki unki mout akhir hui kaise. Kyuki use abhi tak nahi pata tha ki surya ab kya ban chuka hai.




Or ab takshak ghanta raha tha ki ye khabar vo black heart ko kaise de. Lekin batana bhi jaruri tha.
Isliye usne black heart se contact kiya





B.H- bolo takshak koi kush khabar.





Takshak- nhi ek buri khabar jarur hai.





B.H- kya?






Takshak- vikraal or kaya ab nhi rahe un dono ka ant ho chuka hai. Lekin ye kaise or kisne kiya mujhe pata nhi chala hai.





Ye sunke black heart ek dum se khada ho gya or jor se bola.





B.H- kya bak rahe ho takshak. Kab hua ye.







Takshak- aaj hi raat ko. Unko maine surya se nipatne bheja tha. Lekin vo Bapis hi nhi aaye. Mere ek khabri ne bataya ki kisi aag wale danav ne un sabhi ka khatma kar diya. Jab vo vanraj se lad rahe the. Vo achanak hi aaya or achanak hi gayab ho gya.





Ye sunte hi black heart ka chehra ek dum se peela pad gya. Or use apne pita ki baat yaad aai ki vo jiske baare me keh rahe the vo yahi hai rider. Black heart jaanta tha rider ke baare me or uski shaktiyo ke baare me bhi.







B.H- kya sach me usme aag wala danav hi kaha tha.





Takshak- ha. Lekin aap itne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai. Kya hua. Koi chinta ki baat hai kya.







B.H- ha takshak bahut badi chinta ki baat hai. Kyuki agar bakai me baisa danav hai to samajh lo hamme se koi bhi ab surakshit nhi hai kahi per bhi.








Takshak- aisa kya hai us danav me. Hai kon vo.






B.H- vo rider hai ghost rider. Mere pita ke dwara banaya gya ek danav. Jo apan jaise buri shaktiyon or burai ka sikaar karta hai. Use na aag jala sakti hai na hi paani bujha sakta hai. Uske uper kisi bhi shakti ka jyada asar nhi hota hai. Or mere pita ne usko aazad kardiya. Taaki vo hame rok sake ya hamara khatma kar sake.







Ye sunke takshak ko bhi paseena aane laga.




Takshak- ab kya kare ham aap hi bataye.






B.H- mujhe sochne ka thoda time chahiye hai. Me koi na koi hal nikala hi lunga iski. Tab tak tum apne bill me hi chhile rehna. Kyuki vo dur se hi buraai ko sungh leta hai. Or agar use tumhari gandh aagyi to fir tumhara bachna impossible ho jayega. Isliye chhipe raho.






Takshak- theek hai maharaj. Me chhipa hi rahunga. Lekin aap jaldi hi iska koi hal khojiye. Verna aapka sapna fir se sapna hi reh jayega.





B.H- ha me janta hu.




Uske baad dono ka connection cut gya or takshak ne apne aap ko chhipane ke sare intjaam karna shuru kar diya. Bahi Black heart apni socho me dub gya. Vo sochne laga ki ise kaise roka jaaye.








Baaki dekhte hai ab kya hota hai inka.














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black heart apni socho me gum tha use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki kya or kaise kiya jaaye. Isliye unse library jaane ka faisla liya. Jo hell me hi bani hui thi. Or usme bahut saari books available thi. Or unme likhi hui jaankari anmol thi. Or inhi books ki madad se hi sabko paras pathar ki jaankari mili thi. Jisse black heart zinda hua tha. Inme kai varsho ka gyan simta hua tha. Or black heart itna takatvar inhi books ki madad se hi hua hai. Or black heart ko pura bharosa tha ki rider se sambandhit jankari bhi use yahi mil sakti hai. Baaki or koi rasta nhi tha uske pass.







Vo gya baha per jaha itni unchi unchi imaraten thi books ki. Kya hi bataye ab. Usne ek ek columns ko check karna start kiya. Vo rider ki jaankari chahta tha. Isliye usne apne pita se releted books dhundna start kiya. Jisme pakka rider ka jikr hoga. Kyuki uski creation unhi ke dwara hui hai.




Jaldi hi use vo section dikh gya. Uske baad usne ek ek book ko khol kar padna start kiya. Unki language kuch alag hi thi. Jo apne palle to bilkul bhi nhi padne wali hai. Lekin use padna aata hai to usne padna start kiya. Ek ke baad ek usne 4-5 book pad daali jisme use jaankari to bahut mili lekin rider se sambandhit ek bhi nhi. Or in sabko padne me hi use kaafi time bhi lag gya tha. Lekin use pata tha ki jab tak koi jaankari nhi milti tab tak use rukna nhi hai. Or usne bahi kiya vo fir se lag gya kaam me. Or kadi mehnat ke Baad use akhir kaar ek book me rider se sambandhit jaankari mil hi gyi. Usne dhyan se use padna start kiya. Ek ek point ko note kiya apne dimaag me. Usme rider ko takat or kamjori dono hi likhi hui thi. Halaki kamjori to naam matra ki hi thi takat ki jaankari jyada thi. Lekin akhir me use kuch aisi jaankari mili jise padte hu uske chehre per smile aagyi.



Kahi na kahi use rider ka tod mil gya tha. Or ab use pata tha ki kya karna hai or kaise karna hai. Or iske liye use kuch powers ki jarurat thi jo use sadhna me baithne se hi mil sakti hai. Apne pita ki kuch powers use chahiye thi. Isiliye vo sadhna kaksh me gya or usme leen ho gya.




Ab ye kab uthega pata nhi lekin itna tay tha ki itne samay tak ab prithvi or hell me shanti chha gyi thi.





Bahi dur antriksh me is waqt khal vali machi hui thi. Kyuki black heart ke kuch khatarnaak logo ne sabki naak me dum kar rakha tha. Or afsos ki baat unke liye ye thi ki unhen koi rokna wala bhi nhi tha. Antriksh ke yodha unhe harane ki puri kosis kar rahe the lekin ant me haar unki hi ho rahi thi na ki in bhuto ki.



Bahi alag alag jagho se kuch keemti cheeze bhi unlogo ne jama kar li thi black heart ke liye. Usko kush karne ke liye. Jaise baha ki sundariyan or baha ke beskeemti ratna.





Inki lut past chalu hi thi. Or jo bhi baha se keemti cheez milti vo log use kisi na kisi se sath hell me bhej dete black heart ke pass. Lekin yaha black heart apni sadhna main baitha hua tha. Or apni powers ko bada raha tha.







Bahi prithvi per takshak bechain ho raha tha chhipe chhipe. Use samajh nhi aaraha tha ki ye rider akhir cheez kya hai jisne black heart ko hi itna dara diya. Vo kuch aisa karna chahta tha jisse vo black heart ki najro me or uncha uth jaaye. Lekin iske liye pehle use rider ko parakhna tha. Or aisa karne ke liye use kuch sathiyo ki jarurat thi jo rider ko uksa kar bahar nikaal sake. Use yaad tha ki rider buraai ko sungh leta hai. Isliye usne apne kuch khaas bhuto ko prithvi per bulaya.






Takshak- suno hame ek bahut bada kaam karna hai. Ek bahut hi takatvar dushman aagya hai hamare raste me. Or black heart ko bhi tension hai usko leke. Or aise me agar hamne use maar diya to socho ham black heart ki najro me kitna uncha uth jayenge.





Ye sunke baha khade sabhi ke chehre per smile aagyi.

Unme se ek bola.



A1- ham tayyar hai aap bas bataye ki karna kya hai.




Takshak- bahut achhe. To jaao or sehar me tabahi macha do. Logo maarne lago. Vo apne aap tum sabke saamne aajayega. Or use khatam kar do. Me tum sabke aaspass hi rahunga. Or jaise hi meri madad ki jarurat padi to aajuanga me saamne.




A1- theek hai boss.




Ye kehkar vo sabhi bahi se gayab ho gye or takshak halke halke muskurane laga.




Bahi unke jaate hi vi bhi baha se gayab ho gya.





Bahi vo log baha se gye or sehro me tabahi machane lage logo ko maarne lage unhe darane lage.



Sabhi jagah ek dum se hahakar mach gya ki ye kya hai or kyu hai.




Bahi logo ki cheekh dur se hi mere kaano me padne lagi. Or mera dhyan gya us taraf. Mujhe samajh me nhi aaya ki ye aawaj akhir aa kaha se rahi hai.





Main- Harry kahi kuch gadbad hai sab jagah check karo.





Harry meri baat sunte hi lag gya kama me. Or usne sabhi jagah checking shuru kar di. Or use jaldi hi pata chal gya ki akhir mamla kya hai.





Harry- sir kuch bhut fir se aagye hai logo ko pareshan karne




Main- kaha per hai






Harry- sir filhaal nasik ke pass ek gaav me hai vo log.






Vanraj- tumhe kaise pata chala ki kahi kuch gadbad chal rahi hai.





Main- pata nhi mujhe aawaje sunai di to maine kaha Harry se.





Vanraj- gjb. Ithink ab tumhe jana chahiye.





Main- mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai.



Ye kehkar me bahar nikla or doud laga di Harry ki batai jagah ke liye. Kyuki aise me main jaldi pahuchta baha per bike se to der lagti.




Thode hi samay me main baha per tha. Jaha ka najara dekhke meri aankho me gussa aagya. Kyuki bahut hi jyada tabahi macha di thi un logo ne. Vo sab kuch ujadte hue aage badte ja rahe the. Is beech kai log or unke ghar sab tabah hote ja rahe the.





Bahi buraai ki sugandh aate hi mere andar jalan badne lagi thi. Me bahi ek sunsaan si jagah per khada hua tha. Ki meri aankho se dhua sa nikalne laga or palak jhapkate hi me surya se rider ban gya pal bhar me. Meri aankho se bhayankar jwala nikal rahi thi.



Uske baad rider ne seeti bajai or kuch hi der me uski bike uske pass aagyi tufaan ki raftaar se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise bike surya se bhi tez ho. Or ye bhi socho ki bike me aag lagi hai or tezi se vo yaha aai hai to jisne bhi use is haalat me dekha hoga uska kya hua hoga kya socha hoga usne. Halaki uske chances kam hi hai ki kisi ko vo najar aai ho kyuki itni speed se nikli hui cheez kisi ko kaise dikh sakti hai.




Baaki kya hi keh sakte hai.



Khair bike ke aate hi rider uspe baitha or bike usi raftaar se aage bad gyi or us gaav ko paar karte hi next gaav me vo log dikh gaye.



Bahi un logo ki bhi najar padi ki koi aag lagi hui cheez unki taraf aarahi haj. Or unhe samajh me aagya ki ye bahi ho sakta hai.




Isliye unlogo ne apna jaal bichana shuru kiya use fasane ke liye.




Bahi rider apni speed se aage badta hua ja raha tha ki tabhi usse jor se kuch takraya or uska balance bigad gya or bike to aage chali gyi bahi rider udta hua thoda pichhe ja gira.





Girte hi vo turant hi fir se khada ho gya or charo taraf dekhne laga ki kisne or kya takraya usse.




Tabhi ek side udta hua dhua aaya or rider ko speed se pakadta hua ek hi disha me tezi se le jaane laga. Or jaanbujh kar use kabhi pedo me to kabhi pathar se takra deta or speed achhi thi isliye maar bhi bahut bekaar lag rahi thi. Lekin vo rider tha use keval maar padte waqt hi dard hota baaki time vo fir se normal ho jaata.




Lekin aise baar baar takrane se vo irritade ho gya tha. Isliye usne us udane wale ko pakada or apna muh khol ke jor se uske muh per chillaya. Or aisa karte hi uske muh se nikli jwala ne uska kaam hawa me hi tamam kar diya.





Bahi rider abhi speed me hi tha or uske khatam hote hi vo dhadam se neeche gira or dur tak ghisat ta hua ek bade se pathar se ja takraya. Or is takkar se use vakai me chot lagi. Uski khopdi me ek bada sa dent pad gya. Lekin agle hi pal vo fir se theek ho gya.





Uske baad vo fir se khada hua or charo taraf dekhne laga or baha ki hawa ko sunghne laga taaki use unki smell aasake.




Bahi dur se hi takshak ye sab dekh raha tha. Or pehle hi sikaar se vo samajh gya tha ki kyu black heart ne use chhipe rehne ko kaha tha. Or se ye bhi pata tha ki agar jyada der vo yaha raha to uska no. Bhi lag sakta hai isliye usne chupchaap baha se nikalne me hi bhalai samjhi.



Or vo turant hi baha se gayab ho gya.



Bahi jinko usne bheja tha yaha rider ko fasane ke liye. Un sabhi ne bhi ye seen dekha or unki bhi fatne lagi ki ye akhir cheez kya hai
Kitni aasani se isne unke ek sathi ko rakh bana diya.




Vo abhi bhi soch hi rahe the ki kya kare.


Tabhi rider ki dono talvare udti hui aai or dono ke seene me ghus gyi. Or vo hawa me hi hawa ho gye. Matlab ki saaf ho gye.




Uske baad baha buraai ka naam bhi nhi bacha.



Or isi frustration me rider ne ek bahut hi khatarnaak dahaad maari. Ye dahaad itni bhayanak thi ki pura ilaka hi dehal gya isme. Bahi takshak jaha chhipa hua tha uske kaano me bhi ye cheekh padi or vo bahi baithe baithe hi kamp gya. Or usi ki tarah jitne bhi buraai ke Prateek is prithvi per the un sabko bhi ye dahaad sunaai di. Fir chahe vo india me ho ya kisi or country me. Un sabki aatma tak kamp gyi is dahaad se. Or unhe samajh me bhi nhi aaya ki ye dahaad akhir aai kaha se hai or hai kiski.




Uske baad rider fir se charo taraf ghumta raha raat bhar. Lekin uske saamne ek bhi buraai nhi aai or subah hote hote vo fir se normal ho gya. Or is waqt vo j&k me tha. Raat bhar me usne pure india ko ghum liya. Ab jaise hi vo Bapis surya me badla fir se surya blank ho gya use samajh me nhi aaya ki vo yaha kya kar raha hai. Lekin use laga rider hi aaya hoga yaha per. Khair usne bahi per ek private plane hire kiya or usme apni bike ko load kiya or udd gya Bapis mumbai aane ke liye.






Bahi ye wala kand vikraal ke kand ke 4-5 din baad hua tha. Or is beech amar ek baar or mumbai aaya tha. Or yaha nidhi ka peecha karne wale ko pata chal gya tha ki nidhi akhir kisse milne jaati hai. Or ye sab dekhke uska dill jal utha. Usse ye sab bilkul bhi sehan nhi ho raha tha ki nidhi kisi or se milke itni kush ho rahi hai.





Bahi takshak kuch or plan karne laga usne filhaal rider ko side kiya or apna focus surya per kiya. Kyuki vo bhi unka dushman tha. Halaki use ye nhi pata tha ki rider or surya ek hi hai. Or is baar usne apna sikaar surya ko nhi balki uski nai peedi ko banane ka faisala liya. Agar usne unko nuksaan pahucha diya to surya ke liye ye ek bahut badi chot hogi. Uske pass surya ki puri janam kundali thi. Isliye usne apne aap ko chhipane ke surya ke gaav ke pass ka hi jungle chuna. Taaki vo sab per baha se najar rakh sake.




Bahi aajkal bacho ka daily routine tha jheel ke pass jaane ka. Or ye baat takshak ko bhi pata thi. Isliye vo apne naag ke bhesh me usi jheel me rehne laga.




Ha bhai log ye takshak ek naag hi hai ikchha dhari type. Ye apna aakar bada chhota lumba chouda kaisa bhi kar sakta hai. Or uski powers bhi sabse alag hi hai. Isi liye hell ki jail me keval iski hi shaktiya hi thodi bahut kaam karti thi. Or rahi baat takshak ke rider ko na pehchanne ki to bahut pehle rider ka jalwa vikraal kaal or black heart ne dekha tha. Jab pehli Baar vo jaga tha. Or kaise usne ek ek karke logo ko mara tha. Jinme se adhiktar log black heart ke hi the. Or ye baat hell king bhi jaante the. Lekin black heart us samay hell me hi tha. Or kaal bhi. Lekin vikraal un logo ke sath tha. Or bahi per uski thodi si fight hui thi rider ke sath. Jiska jikr usne rider ke sath kiya tha. Bahi takshak us samay black heart ke sath nhi juda hua tha. Vo apne me magan rehta tha. Ye ek alag grah se belong karta tha. Jaha ke raja ka ye rakshak tha or iski nistha uske singhasan ke prati thi. Jaha black heart ne jaake us raja ko maar diya or takshak ko bhi haraya tab se takshak black heart ke prati bafadaar ho gya. Or tab se takshak ko kabhi bhi rider ke bare me na to sunne mila na hi use dekhne mila. Or isi liye vo confuse tha ki akhir isme aisi kya baat hai jo black heart bhi isse dar raha hai.



Khair ab chuki usne rider ka jalwa dekh liya tha isliye usne apna plan badal diya tha.



Baaki ab dekhte hai kya ye apne mansubo me kaamyab hota bhi hai ya nhi or kya use pata chal payega ki jise vo dube ji samajh raha hai vo hi asal me Choubey ji hai. Yaani ki jis surya ko vo normal insan samajh raha hai vahi asal me uska bada wala baap rider hai……















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