Adultery * Talash- Who am i

[tpk]

nice introduction

 

[Chinturocky]

Sabka intro hua per hero ki age usaka physic nahi bataya?
Behtareen shuruwat hai kahani ki.

 

[Ashwanikumar]

Nice

 

[Ayush2017]

Lovely update

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic update

 

[tpk]

waiting for next update

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Waiting

 

[u.sir.name]

Update 2​

Update 2​

Jaise jaise hamari gadi aage badhti gayi , babuji ki haweli najar aane lagi. Bohot badi alishan haweli ko dekhkar me sunn rah gaya tha. Mujhe tab pata chala ki ye thakur h us gaav ke. Haweli ko dekh kar andaja lagaya ja sakta tha. Puri haweli takriban panch yekad me bani huyi thi. Ek bada sa compound tha uske bichobich haweli . bohot sare paid podhe , bagicha bhi tha . baccho ke khelne ke liye bohot si jagah banayi gayi thi. Ek side me nokaron ke liye kuch rooms bane huye the .

Fir hamari gadi haweli me darwaje ke samne ruki. Hum gadi se utar hi rahe the ki ghar ke sare log eke k kar bahar aane lage. Ek bujurg ourat haathon me aarti ki thali lekar baahar aayi. Shayad ye unki patni thi.

Us ourat ne babuji ki aarati utari sath hi najar bhi uteri. Parantu unki family ke kuch sadaasya mujhe ghur ker ajib si najaron se dekh rahe the, soch rahe honge ki ye babuji kis bhikhari ko utha le aaye.

Sabhi andar jane ke liye mude hi the ki babuji ne sabko rok liya. Sabko hall me ikattha hone ka aadesh diya. or mujhe andar aane ka ishara kiya, me unke piche piche andar chala gaya. Main jaise hi andar aaya haweli ke andar ki khubsurati dekh kar me kahi kho sa gaya tha. Bohot hi badi or bohot hi khubsurati se har diwar pe kala ka pradarshan kiya gaya tha. Har ek kone me bohot saari sundar murtiya rakhi gayi thi.

Ghar ke sabhi log hall me baithe huye the babuji bhi jakar un sabhi ke sath baith gaye. Me bas khada khada sabko dekhe jar aha tha. Par kisise aankh milane ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Ye sab unke rutbe or mere gawar pan ke bich mano jaise yuddh chhid gaya ho or meri hi sikhast ho rahi ho.



Tabhi babuji bole ,



BA : hamara naam – Thakur. Vijaypratap singh hai . hum yaha ke thakur hai, ye gaav or usi ke sath or 4 gaav hamare hai. Un sabhi ki dekhbhal or kushionki jimmedari hamari hai.

Ye hai hamari patni –( Thakurain ) Bhanumati vijaypratap singh . ghar ki sari jimmedariya yahi sambhalti hai.



(chalo baki sabhi logonka intro me hi suna deta hun)



Unka bada beta – Pritam singh . inku umar 48 ke aaspas hai. Kheto ki sari jimmedari inhi ke sar di gayi hai. Ye apni patni se bohot pyar karte hai, kare bhi kyu na inki patni hai hi itni sundar komal sacche dil se apne pati ki or ghar ki saari jimeeradiya jo nibhati hai.

Badi bahu ( pritam singh ki patni )- Madhavi Pritam singh .inki umar 42 saal hai, unki khubsurati ko dekhte huye inki umar ka andaja lagaya nahi ja sakta. bohot pyari hai. Sabki dekhbhal karna inki aadat hai. Aapne saas or sasur ka bohot khayal rakhti hai or thakurain ko har kaam me haath batati hai.

Inke do betiya hai.

• Pari – 22 sal ki hai . bilkul apni maa par gayi hai. Graduation puri kar chuki h. aage kuch karna nahi hai inhe.
• Anu – 19 saal ki hai . thodi gussewali hai . parantu bohot pyari hai. Bsc kar rahi hai. Rang thoda sawala hai isiliye thodi kati kati rehti hai sabse.

Dusra beta – Jaydev singh – 46 saal ki umar hai inki. Par ab bhi khud ko young mante hai. Jimmedari ka inhe koi ahsas hi nahi hai. Bas aayyashi karna or apne kiye kaamo ko duniya se chupana yahi inhe ache se aata hai. Par sabke samne ye doodh ke dhule bane firte hai.

Inki patni or ghari dusri bahu - payal jaydev singh . ye lagbhag 40 saal ki hai. Inka nature apne pati se bilkul alag hai. Ye apne pati ko bohot chahati hai. Par pati ke bare me inhe kuch pata nhi hai ki wo bahar kya karta hai. Bohot khubsurat hai. Yoga karna inhe behad pasand hai . or ye khud bhi yoga karti hai or ghar ke chote bade sabhi se yoga karwati hai teacher ki tarah.

In ke teen bacche h –

• Sukannya – 21 saal ki hai. Or shahar me rehkar padhai kar rahi hai. Thodi swarthy kism ki hai , har wakt sirf khud ke bare me sochti hai. Ise apni sundarta par bohot ghamand hai.
• Maya – jaisa iska naam hai waise hi ye bhi hai . inpar gaavwalon ki bhalayi ka bhoot sawar hai to ye kuch na kuch kaam karti rehti hai . inki umar 19 saal hai. Ye rural development ki padhai karti hai. Khubsurat hone ke sath akalmand bhi hai.
• Yash – umar 17 saal hai abhi 12th me padh rahe h. inhe kisi ke life ke bare me koi lena dena nahi hai. Bas padhai padhai me hi gum hoye rehte hai.

Ghar ka chhota beta – vikram singh . ye 40 saal ke sai . peshe se ek doctor hai. Videsh me rehte hai apni patni or baccho ke sath. Saal me 2 mahine ke liye yaha aate hai taki family ke sath vakt bita sake or gaav walo ka bhi ilaj ka intejam kar sake.

Ghar ki chhoti bahu – parul vikram singh . inki umar 38 saal hai . ye bhi ek doctor hai. Collage ke douran inki dosti hui or dosti rishte me badal gayi. Bohot khubsurat hai. Koi bhi inhe dekh le to ve pyar me hi pad jaye . khud ki sehat ka bohot dhyan rakhti hai.

Inke bhi do bcche h

• Inke bhi do bcche h
  • Sapna – 20 saal ki hai or ye bhi medical student hai. Maa ki tarah behed khupsurat h. nature bhi bohot acha hai. Videsh me jyada samay rehne ki vajah se ise india ke bare me jyada pata nahi hai.
  • Sourabh – 18 saal ka hai . ye bhi apni maa par gaya hai. Inhe traveling ka bohot shouk hai . isiliye inhone traveling photography chun li usi ki padhai karte hai.
• Sabhi ka parichay ho gaya , are me ghar ke nokaron ko bhul hi gaya .
• Baki ghar me 7 noukar h unme se 5 mahilaye or baki do purush hai.
  
  Inke liye bahar rehne ka intejam hai.

Inki family ko dekhkar meri aankhe bhar aayi . kaash meri bhi family hoti?????????

Nice update brother...and introduction kafi acha tha...
keep writing...
keep posting.....

 

[Sniperx009]

hero ki intro ka abhi time nahi aaya hai. parantu juld hi woh bhi update kahani me add kar diya jayega , aap sabhi ka sukhriya dosto .
me online work karta hun. sketches or paintings in sab ko manage kar ke mujhe kahani likhne ke liye wakt nikalna padta hai dost , isi liye kahani ke naye update milne ka koi time fix nahi hai fir bhi kuch din tak ek din me ek hi update de sakta hun , uske baad din me 2 ya 3 update dene ki koshish karunga

 

[Sniperx009]

Update 3​

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Mujhe aaise sochte huye dekh or meri ankhe nam hoti dekh kr thakurain mere pass aayi or boli,

Thakurain : “ main nahi janti ki tum dukhi kyu ho, parantu meri ek baat yaad rakhna aaj se tum yaha rahoge to ye bhi tumhari hi family hai. Tum yaha kaam karte ho to kya hua. Yaha tumhe koi kami nahi hogi.” Ye kehte huye unhone mere sar par pyar se haath fera. Our me jhat se unke pairo me baith kar unke pair chhu liye.



Tabhi thakur ji bole ,



Thakur : “ chalo ab bohot hua kyu rula rahi ho is bichare ko, ab kaam ki baate karte hai – ab suno shree – aaj se tum kheto ki dekhbhal karoge raat me, pritam singh tumhe sari baate bata denge sath hi sare khet bhi dikha denge or tumhare liye kheto me ek room banwa diya jayega. Or haan din me yaha aajaya karna, tumhare khane pine ka bhi sara intejam ho jayega. Ab jao naha lo or aaram karna.” Unke nokar raamu ko bulate huye, “ ramu , jao ise tumhare bagal wala room dikha do.”



Chalo sabhi jaao aaram karlo ye keh kar thakur jib hi apne room ki taraf chale gaye.



Me chup chap raamu ke piche-piche chal raha tha. Raamu ne mujhe room dikha diya or nahane ke lye jagah bhi dikha di. Mardo kin aha ne ki jagah khulle me thi or oraton ke liye ek bathroom banaya gaya tha.



{{Iska ek vishesh karan bhi hai, puratan kaal se hi khulle me nahane ki pratha bani huyi hai is do karan hai.

• Dharmik roop se kaha jaye to nahane ka samay suraj ke ugte samay ka hona chahiye , suraj ko naman karke snan karna chahiye , ta ki hamara pura din nirmal or santi se bhara hua ho , isase hamari aatmshaki ko badhava prapt hota hai. Or hamari umra lambi hoti hai. Ye sirf manane walo or jo is kriya ko karte hai unhe hi iska ahsas bakhubi pata hota hai.
• Dusra ye karan hai ki agar vigyan ke anusar khulle aasman ke niche nahane se , hamari aaspas behne wali hawa hamare sharer ki thakavat ko nikaldeta hai or sharer ko halka bana deti hai, pani or hawa ka mishran sharer ki rog partikarak shakti ko badhava deti hai. Jisase hum majbut ban jate hai. Hame pure din kaam karne me utsah prapt hota hai,

Sirf ek week khulle me nahakar dekhiye sabhi log fir result khud hi pata chal jayega. ( mahilaon ke liye anurodh hai ki aap log ye try naa kare kyu ki aaj ka jamana digital hai, siliye aapke liye ye uchit nahi hoga.)



Kahani par aate hai wapis }}



Ramu mujhe room dikhakar wapis chala gaya, mai room me gaya waha har wo vastu mojud thi jiski jarurat har insane ko hoti hai. Ek charpayi jise hum bed kehte hai, 2 takiye, 2-3 chadar. Ek matka pani se bhara hua, or bhi bohot kuch tha. Tab tak ramu badali ek naya towal or kuch mere size ke kapde leke aaya tha our nahane ko kehkar chala gaya.



Maine towal uthai or bahar nahane chala gaya. Pani kafi thanda tha, fir bhi me nahane laga. Socha itne acche family me noukar hun to ache se rehna hoga warna nikal denge mujhe. Isi liye ache se ragad ragad kr nahane laga. 15-20 minute ho gaye mai abhi bhi naha raha tha, par achanak mujhe aaisa laga ki koi mujhe nahate dekh raha hai. Maine piche mud kar idhar udhar dekha pr koi nahi dikhai diya. Me fir vyast ho gaya. Nahane ke baad me touliya se khud ke sharer ko ponch raha tha. Ki meri najar haweli ke upar ahunch gayi, uraj ki roshani aankho par pad rahi thi isiliye wo kaon hai ye mujhe nahi dikh paa raha tha or shayad wo mujhe thik acche se dekh sakti thi.

Mai turant hi room me ghus gaya, raamu khana rakh kar gaya tha. Maine khana kha liya. Or aaram karne ke liye let gaya. “ wo thi kon? Or aaise kaise koi gair ko nahate dekh sakta hai?” sochte huye mujhe kab nind lag gayi pata hi nahi chala.