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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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To ek baat yaad rakhna swati pyar kabhi kisike liye khatam nahin hota . par kuch aur chiz hai jo uss pyar ko chota bana sakta hai pata hai kya “Nafrat “ .

jo ab mere dil maine tumhare liye bhar gayee hai aur shyada uss pyar se filhaal jada hi hai .. shyad tumhe meri baat samajh maine aagyee ho .. chalo chalta hoon . aur haan sooraj agar principal ke pass complain karna ho ya kuch iss baar tumhe recording karne ki jarurat nahini hai ye CCTv ke footage dikha dena .sir ko ..

RB sooraj ke pass aata hai aur soraj ko gale lagata hai . RB ke iss harqat se wanha khade sab hairat the ..

RB – pata hai tumhe abhi tak maine kyun kuch nahin kaha kyun ki tum dushron ke jaise girgit wali harqat nahini karte jo karna ya kehna hoata tum ne abhi tak saamne kaha hai .
. barna kuch log toh girgit ko bhi sarminda kar dein ..”chal vicky chalte hain ..kuch logon ke chehera se ab nafrat karna sikhna padega ..


Ab Aage




Vicky aur RB wanhs se chale jaate hain . unke jaane ke baad bhid bhi jo jama hui thi dhire dhire kam hone lagi thi .

Ab tak rajesh bhi khada ho chuka tha par uske saans abhi bhi bhari chal rahe the .

Rajesh – nahini chodunga sale ko oye firdosh chal aaj sale ko hostel maine dekhte hain .

Firdosh – na be sala hostel maine nahini maar sakte bahar kanhi dekhenge .

Radhika- aare itna tension kyun lete ho tum sirf maroge to 2 ,3 din hi injured rahega maine toh kehti hoon prinicipal ke pass baat lete hain usko phele suspend karao phir jitna marna hai maro . na kya kehte ho sooraj

Firdosh- aabe sala sooraj ke sath reh reh ke teri dimag bhi jada chale laga hai .. sahi kaha ..

Sooraj abhi bhi kuch soach raha tha ..

Sooraj- tum chup raho sab .swati tum thik ho na

Swati- haan maine thik hoon ..tum tension mat lo iske jaise ghatiye ladke ke liye maine apna dimag kharab nahini karungi .

Sooraj- thik hai tum kya kehti ho kya karna chaiye jo tum kahogi wo maine karunga .

Swati- mujhe koi matlab nahin hai jo tumhe sahi lage .

Sooraj – nahini wo toh maine jaanta hoon par mujhe lagta hai iss topic maine tumahara opinion mere liye matter karta hai .

Swati sooraj ke traf dekhti hai .

Swati- ok . jaane do khamokhan koi faida nahini aise chote mote logon ke sath ulajhane se ulta hamara hi izzat hi kharab hogi .tum uska tension na lo ..acha ok maine chalti hon tabiyat sahi nahini lag rahi hai

Sooraj- aare kya hua tumhe .tumhe chod dun maine .

Swati- nahini koi tension nahni hai mujhe hostel hi jana hai ghar nahini jaungi ..

Sooraj- ok dhyan se jana aur room maine ponhach ke msg karna ok …

Uske baad swati bhi wanha se chali jati hai .swati ke jaane ke baad . firdosh sooraj ke pair maine gir jata hai .

Firdosh- gurudev mujhe bhi sikhao plz hamein bhi apna chella bana do .

Rajesh- ye kya kar raha hai uth be uske pair kyun pade hua hai .

Firdosh- chup kar .. yaar sooraj ek minute ko toh maine bhi shock maine chala gaya tera acting dekh ke sal man na padega acha patipada rakha hai usse . aur sala maine sochne lag tha tu kab se itne fikar karne wala aur itna uske opinion ko samjahne wala ban gay a..

Sooraj- karna padta hai mere bhai sab karna padta hai ek baar shagai ho jaye phir sab khatam .. uske baad ye chah kar bhi kuch nahini kar payegi .. aur mera jo kanta tha wo to ye khud nikal ke phek diya .

radhika – sooraj tum uske liye natak karte ho mere liye kam se kam utna hi kardo ..

sooraj- aare baby tere saamne natak karne ki jarurat kya hai .. waise agar tujhe natak dekhna hi hai to aaj raat ko natak kya tujhe pura picture dikaunga . iske baad radhika bhi sooraj ko bye bolke wanha se chali jaati hai .

radhika ke jaane ke baad rajesh pet pakad ke hasne lagta hai ..

firdosh- ab isse kya hua sala uss chachundar ke maar se pagal ho gaya hai shyad .

sooraj – kya hua be pagal ho gaya hai kya ?

rajesh- maine nahini par tu .. sala yanah radhika ko raat ke liye bol diya wanah kal Lucy ko bhi bol rakha hai uske pass jana tha ..ab kya kareg a.

sooraj- shit yaar yaad hi na raha .

firdosh- sala tere jagha setting bane hue hain ki tu khud yaad nahini rakh pata ..

aise hi thodi der baat karne ke baad wo bhi wnaha se chale jaate hain .

aaj ka pura din RB room se gayab tha .

vicky- RB kanah gaya

ritehs –mujhe kya pata mujhe bola abhi aata hhon .

vicky- aur tune jaan ediya .

ritesh- to aur kya karta

vicky- tujhe bol ke bhi koi faida nahini .

ritesh- usse thoda time de uska dimag abhi hila hua hai . tu jo bolega uska dimag maine nahini ghusega .

vicky- hmm tu shyad sahi keh raha hai par wo hai kanha .. kanhi phir se swati ke pass to nahin gaya .

ritesh pata nahini. Rok call lagata hoon .

vicky- wo nahini utha raha hai .

ritesh- par mera uthayega

ritesh RB ko call lagata hai kuch baat karke rakh deta hai .

vicky- iss ko to tera phone uthaya mera nahni utha raha hai .. maine kya kiya hai mere pe gussa hai .

ritesh- gussa nahin hai .. dekh wo jab kuch karta hai tu usse usiwaqt galideta hai aur gyan chodta hai uske saamne . par maine pehle uska sath deta hoon wo jo kar raha hai aur baad maine isse samjha tahon . isiliye ab samjha ..isiliye kehta hon harwaqt uski maa banna band kar .

vicky- chal ab tu gyan mat de kanha hai wo .

ritesh – yanhi chat maine betha hai .

vicky- chal phir

dono chat maine chale jaate hain ..chat maine RB ek mattress dal ke pada hua tha uske saamne sare books khule hue the aur sath maine 2-3 beer ke bottle pade hue the ..

ritesh vicky ko shant rehne ko bolta hai .

ritesh jaata hai aur RB ke pichwade pe ek laat laga deta hai

ritesh- sala akela akela maja le raha hai .. sala mujhe bhi bula deta ..

RB – distrube mat kar abhi maine padh raha hoon parson se exam hai ..

Ritesh- sala agar aisa exam ho to maine din ke 24 ghanta padhne lagun ..oye vicky aaj padhne ko bohat dil kar raha hai bhag ke jaa niche se mera books wagera le aa aur ek mattress bhi le aaana .

Vicky- kya

Ritesh – aare jaa na re aur RB tere pass aur beer hai .

RB – nahii

Ritesh – aabe tu gaya nahni jaa niche se leke aa .

Vicky ritesh ko ghoorte hue niche chala jaata hai ritesh bhi call karke beer aur kuch snack bhi mangwadeta hai .

Thodi der maine wo bhi jugaad ho jata hai .

Ritesh- oye vicky uss mattress ko daal sala tere niche se mattress lane se pehle beer aagay sala kitna aalshi hai bi tu .

Uske baad ritesh – beer ke bottle kholke rakhta hai aur book leke mattress maine RB ke pass beth jata hai .

Ritesh – kya padhe jaa raha hai be samajh maine aata hai kya .

RB – haan tu padh distrubed mat kar .

Ritesh- haan wo to padhenge hi par pehle a beer khatam kardete hain barna garam ho jayegi ..

Phir sab ek doosre ki shakal dekhte hain aur beer ke bottel ko khali karne maine lag jaate hain .

Vicky- bas RB aur nahini tu pehle hi bohat pi chuka hai ..

RB – maine thik hoon ..

Ritesh- tujhe kya lagta hai mera bhai sirf ek ladki ke chakar maine toot jayeg a.. foot kar royega ..kyun kya kehta hai ?

RB – haan sahi kaha . wo hoi kon hai ki maine uske liye aansoo bahaun .. usse jo marji wo kar rahi hai karne do .. sala ek galti kya hui wo bhi meri anjaane maine yeh to sar ke upar hi chad ke baith gayee.

Aur wo Sali Nisha uski maa ka saali rinki ban ke dimag ke maa chod di Sali ek baar school maine itna lafda karke gayee thi phir yanah ake sab kharab kar gayee. Tu vicky mera sachha bhai hai tu mana kar raha tha uss din maine teri baat na maan ke wanha gaya aur ye sab ho gaya ..

Par kya wo mujhe ek baar bhi maaf nahini kar sakti hai ..

Vicky- tu chod wo sab koi aur baat kar .

Ritesh- tu chup reh be tu bata RB ( ritesh vicky ko aankh se ishara karke chup rehne ko kehta hai ).

RB – kuch nahin aaj se main uss ke saamne nahini jaunga agar usse isi se khusi milti hai to yehi sahi ..

Par kya kabhi kabhi usse sirf dekhne ko jaa sakta hoon .

Vicky- gaya bhens pani maine ..

Ritesh- tujhe bola na chup reh .. tu bol tujhe sirf usse bich maine dekhna hai yehi hai na ..

RB- haan yaar usse dekhe bina maine jinda reh nahini paunga .

vicky wanha se uth ke dur chala jaat hai aur apne beer ka boootle ko ek hi baar maine khatam karke dur phek ke maarta hai ..

ritesh- par ek condition hai thik hai .tu jab bhi usse dekhne jayega hamesh a dur se hi dekhna ..aur kabhi baat mat karna .. aur tu akela kabhi nahini jayega ya to maine rahunga ya phir vicky thik hai .

RB – thik hai par tu hi rehna mere sath wo bohat gali dega ..

Ritesh- thik hai ..ab tu bachon ke jaise harqat karna band kar .. be a man yaar . ab tu padhna hai padha ya phir soja .

RB phir se books maine najar daal deta ritesh wanha se uthke vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

Ritesh- kya hua

Vicky- ye kya tha tu usse uss swati se milne ko mana karne ke wajaye usse ulta gyaan de raha hai swati se milne ko .

Ritesh- uska dimag abhi sahi jagha pe nahini hai to tu kya chata hai wo phir se aisa harqat kare .. maine usse bola hai wo usse baat nahini karega aur jab bhi uske aas pass jayega tu ya maine uske sath honge .

Vicky- hmm kash kaise bhi karke yeh exam khatam ho jaye ..

Ritesh- haan yaar sal tune acha kiya yaad dila diya iska toh koi bharosha nahin pichle 10 12 din se ye book pakda hai ye to khud latkega saala sath maine humein bhi latka dega .

Chalo re baba padhai karo ..

Agle din bhi RB ka hostel maien hi kat gaya wo na aaj bahar gaya tha na hi kisi se baat kiya tha sirf vicky aur ritesh se thoda bohat baat karliya tha ya to chup chap beth ke saamne ki traf dekhta rehta tha ya phir book kholke beth jata tha .raat ko as usal dipika ka call aaya tha wo RB ka hal chal puch aur kal exam ke time maine milne ko bolke phone disconnect kardiya .

Agle din saare students colllge gate ke saamn khade the janha pe college bus line hoke khade the sare students ko leke jaaneko kyun ki exam university maine hi ho rahe the .

Sab ek ek karke bus maine chad gaye . vicky aur ritesh RB ko ek alag bus maine le gaye jis maine sirf ladke hi bhare hue the .. unhone socha tha ki swati and group dusre byu maine jayene .. par bus chalne thodi hi pehle swati and group aajate hain .. swati ko iss bus maine jaat dekh dipika bhi usu bus maine chad jaati hai .

Swati aur sooraj aake ek seat pe beth jate hain. RB swati ko sooraj ke sath dekh ke apni aaknhe band kardeta hai aur bahar ke tarf dekhne lagta hai .. tabhi dipika uske pass aajati hai ..

Dipika- kya hua

RB – kuch nahini ..

Dipika- to bhar ko kyun dekh arahe ho .. aadat daal lo RB ,, par dimag maine chadne mat d .. hum sab dost tumhare sath hain na .. tum aaram se jaake exam do usko dekho hi mat ..

RB- kya tum uss se ek baar baat karogi use samjahane ke liye .. wo mujh se to baat nahini karegi .

Dipika- thik hai par pehle tum sare exam khatam karo practical jab se suru honge tab tak maine tumhara baat karwa dongi thik hai ..

RB –promise ..

Dipika- promise … par exam ache se dena padega ..

RB- hmm.

Tabhi RB ke phone maine msg aate hain RB phone nikalta hai usmaine all the best ka msg tha jo ki do alag alag unknown number se aaya tha .. aur bhi msg aaye the kal parson maine par RB ne dhyaan nahin diya tha .. filhaal ke liye exam tha to wo dimag se wo sab nikaal deta hai aur saamne ke taraf swati ko dekhne lagta hain.. isi bich university aajati hai .sab nikal ke exam keliye chale jate hainphir waps aajate hain .

Yehi routine agle kuch paper tak chalta rehta hai .. RB ab khud ko swati se baat karne se rokne ki kosis maine shant hone lag gaya tha b wo kisi se bhi baat nahin karta tha wo sirf kuch pucho to ishare se ya phir do teen words maine answer karke apna jawab deta tha . exam kahatm ho gaye the

Ab sirf practical the jo kuch din maine suru hone wale the …to iss liye ab students thoda relax ho gaye the kyun ki practical ke koi tension nahin the aur upar se kuch din maine sab ek doosre se hamesha ke liye bichadne wale the to sab apne apne dosto ke sath ghoomna masti karne maine lage hue the .. sab iss kuch din ke period maine apne yadon maine jitna khusnooma pal ho sak usse bhardena chate the ..

Dipiak bhi abhi room maine ready ho rahi thi .. tabhi swati kanhi bahar se ghoom ke aati hai ..

Swati- kaha jaa rahi hai ..

Dipika- tujh se matlab .

Swati- aise kyun baat kar rahi hai ..

Dipika- aur kaise baat karun maine kanhi bhi jaun kya tujh se permission lena padega ..

Swati- maine kya kardiya jo tu aisi ho rahi hai .. mujhe pat hai usine tujhe mere bare maine kuch bola hai isiliye tu mere se aisa bartaaw kar rahi hai .. usko to maine ..

Dipika- tune khud hi apni question ka answer de deiya .. aur rahi RB ki wo kabhi nahini kaha hai aur na hi kahega ki tujh se baat karna band karne ke liye .. par tu chod jaane de khamokhan kyun maine apna time barbaad kar rahi hoon .

Uske baad dipika bahar chali jaati hai aur swati pana gussa apne bed pe nikalti hai .

Dipika market ke traf chal padti hai usse kuch saaman chahiye the aur vicky abhi busy tha to wo akeli hi chali aayii.

Dipika apne liye shopping kar liya tha ab wo ek shop ke pass khadi h hui thi ki

“dipika didi “

Dipika apne naam sunke piche ghumke dekhti hai .. (rashmi dipika ki mousi ki ladki sorry friends mujhe lagta hai ki maine ye character introduced kiya tha par iska naam bhul gya hoon ki rashmi hi hai ya kuch aur .bas ye jaan lo ki yeh barsha ki moushi ki beti hai aur barsha abhi inhike ghar rehti hai )

Dipika-aare rashmi tu tu yanha kab aayee..

Rashmi- do din ho agye ..

Dipika- acha to kya barsha bhi aaye hai kya uske bhi practical maine time hai

Rashmi- nahini di to nahni aayee.

Dipika- kaisi hai wo chudel ek baar jo gayee hai na kisi se baat kar rahi hai na hi kisi ko apna mnumber de gayee hai .

Rashmi- wo aur kare bhi to kya kare bohat hi muskil se wo apne gum ko bhula pai hai wo abhi yanah aake phir se apne ghaw ko hara nahini karna chati …

Dipika- kya matlab tumhara ..

Rashmi- wohi di ki dil tootne ki baat kar rahi hoo.

Dipika- barsha ki dil tootne ki matlab maine samjhi nahin ..

Rashmi- kya dipika di aap ko nahini pata di RB ko pyar karti thi par RB swati ko pasand karta tha isiliye di ne apna pyar ka kurbani de di .. wo kuch der to uss gum ke sahare reh gayee par jab RB aur swati dono ek ho gaye to didi aur uss gum ko she nahini payee aur wo yanah se chali gayee.. aapko nahini pata iss bare maine ..

Dipika- nahini mujhe to kuch bhi na pata iss bare maine tujh se hi sun rahi hoon usne hum ko iss bare maine kuch bhi nahin batya mere khayal se usne RB ko bhi nahini bataya hai iss bare maine ..

Rashmi- han RB ko to unhone kuch nahin batay par mujhe laga aapko p[ata hoga kyun ki vicky bhaiya ko to sab pata hai iss bare maien ..

Dipika- kya

Rashmi- haan wo to didi se baat bhi karte hain to mujhe laga aap bhi iss bare maine jaante honge aur aap bhididi ke sath contact maien honeg ..

Wanhi doosre aur RB ritesh aur vicky sab market aaye hue the .. tabhi unhe apne school ke ek dost mil jata hai to baton baton maine wo RB ko bulata hai kanhi jaane ke liye RB ka dil nahini tha par ritesh ne jabardasti karke usse bhej diya taki thoda logon se ghule mile to uska dimaag thoda free ho ..

Uske baad ritesh aur vicky aake . ek caffe maine beth jaate hain ..

Ritesh- aare yaar ab sirf kuch din bache hain hamare college life khatam hon eko to kyun na ek plan banate hain kanhi ghoomne ka .

Vicky- tu to aise baat kar rah ahai jaise exam khatam hote hi tu iss duniya chod ke kanhi chala jayega ..

Ritesh- aare bolna ya phir tera alag hi plan hai dipika ke sath ..

Vicky- nahini ias akoi nahini hai

Ritesh- saale daga baaz matlab jaruar tera dipika ke sath koi plan tha .. sal doston ko bhul jata hai tension na le maine aur RB jayenge ghoomen tu mat chal .. kam se kam isibahane uska man thoda halka ho jayega

Vicky- ab tu mujhe RB ke naam pe black mailing kar raha hai .

Ritesh- jaisa tujhe sahi lag epar mujhe jo bolna tha maine bol diya ..

Vicky- thik hai meri ek condition hai ..

Ritesh- kya jo bolega manjoor hai ..

Vicky- pakka na ..

Ritesh aab echal tu bhi kya yaad rakhe ga kis mahan aadmi tera dost hai .

Vicky – thik hai fir hamari sath Anita bhi cahlegi thik hai ..

Ritesh- nahin ..

Vicky – dekh mujjhe jo bolan tha maine bol diya ab tere upar hai ki tu usse le jaye ya plan cancel ..

Ritesh – aare ab tu mujhe blackmail kar raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh maine teri baat mani ab tu meri baat maan .

Ritesh – thik hai . tere chakar maine yeh bhi maan leta hoon ..

Vicky- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipiak aao betho “


vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Behtareen update, Achchha chata pada Vikki ko wo isi layak hai ?
Batao girlfriend se bhi koi itani badi baat chhupata hai kya. ??
Barsha agar pyar karti thi to pyar pane ki koshish bhi Karna chahiye tha, ye tyagi type ke log hote hai na jindagi ka kabada sabse jyada yahi log karte hai.???
 
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To ek baat yaad rakhna swati pyar kabhi kisike liye khatam nahin hota . par kuch aur chiz hai jo uss pyar ko chota bana sakta hai pata hai kya “Nafrat “ .

jo ab mere dil maine tumhare liye bhar gayee hai aur shyada uss pyar se filhaal jada hi hai .. shyad tumhe meri baat samajh maine aagyee ho .. chalo chalta hoon . aur haan sooraj agar principal ke pass complain karna ho ya kuch iss baar tumhe recording karne ki jarurat nahini hai ye CCTv ke footage dikha dena .sir ko ..

RB sooraj ke pass aata hai aur soraj ko gale lagata hai . RB ke iss harqat se wanha khade sab hairat the ..

RB – pata hai tumhe abhi tak maine kyun kuch nahin kaha kyun ki tum dushron ke jaise girgit wali harqat nahini karte jo karna ya kehna hoata tum ne abhi tak saamne kaha hai .
. barna kuch log toh girgit ko bhi sarminda kar dein ..”chal vicky chalte hain ..kuch logon ke chehera se ab nafrat karna sikhna padega ..


Ab Aage




Vicky aur RB wanhs se chale jaate hain . unke jaane ke baad bhid bhi jo jama hui thi dhire dhire kam hone lagi thi .

Ab tak rajesh bhi khada ho chuka tha par uske saans abhi bhi bhari chal rahe the .

Rajesh – nahini chodunga sale ko oye firdosh chal aaj sale ko hostel maine dekhte hain .

Firdosh – na be sala hostel maine nahini maar sakte bahar kanhi dekhenge .

Radhika- aare itna tension kyun lete ho tum sirf maroge to 2 ,3 din hi injured rahega maine toh kehti hoon prinicipal ke pass baat lete hain usko phele suspend karao phir jitna marna hai maro . na kya kehte ho sooraj

Firdosh- aabe sala sooraj ke sath reh reh ke teri dimag bhi jada chale laga hai .. sahi kaha ..

Sooraj abhi bhi kuch soach raha tha ..

Sooraj- tum chup raho sab .swati tum thik ho na

Swati- haan maine thik hoon ..tum tension mat lo iske jaise ghatiye ladke ke liye maine apna dimag kharab nahini karungi .

Sooraj- thik hai tum kya kehti ho kya karna chaiye jo tum kahogi wo maine karunga .

Swati- mujhe koi matlab nahin hai jo tumhe sahi lage .

Sooraj – nahini wo toh maine jaanta hoon par mujhe lagta hai iss topic maine tumahara opinion mere liye matter karta hai .

Swati sooraj ke traf dekhti hai .

Swati- ok . jaane do khamokhan koi faida nahini aise chote mote logon ke sath ulajhane se ulta hamara hi izzat hi kharab hogi .tum uska tension na lo ..acha ok maine chalti hon tabiyat sahi nahini lag rahi hai

Sooraj- aare kya hua tumhe .tumhe chod dun maine .

Swati- nahini koi tension nahni hai mujhe hostel hi jana hai ghar nahini jaungi ..

Sooraj- ok dhyan se jana aur room maine ponhach ke msg karna ok …

Uske baad swati bhi wanha se chali jati hai .swati ke jaane ke baad . firdosh sooraj ke pair maine gir jata hai .

Firdosh- gurudev mujhe bhi sikhao plz hamein bhi apna chella bana do .

Rajesh- ye kya kar raha hai uth be uske pair kyun pade hua hai .

Firdosh- chup kar .. yaar sooraj ek minute ko toh maine bhi shock maine chala gaya tera acting dekh ke sal man na padega acha patipada rakha hai usse . aur sala maine sochne lag tha tu kab se itne fikar karne wala aur itna uske opinion ko samjahne wala ban gay a..

Sooraj- karna padta hai mere bhai sab karna padta hai ek baar shagai ho jaye phir sab khatam .. uske baad ye chah kar bhi kuch nahini kar payegi .. aur mera jo kanta tha wo to ye khud nikal ke phek diya .

radhika – sooraj tum uske liye natak karte ho mere liye kam se kam utna hi kardo ..

sooraj- aare baby tere saamne natak karne ki jarurat kya hai .. waise agar tujhe natak dekhna hi hai to aaj raat ko natak kya tujhe pura picture dikaunga . iske baad radhika bhi sooraj ko bye bolke wanha se chali jaati hai .

radhika ke jaane ke baad rajesh pet pakad ke hasne lagta hai ..

firdosh- ab isse kya hua sala uss chachundar ke maar se pagal ho gaya hai shyad .

sooraj – kya hua be pagal ho gaya hai kya ?

rajesh- maine nahini par tu .. sala yanah radhika ko raat ke liye bol diya wanah kal Lucy ko bhi bol rakha hai uske pass jana tha ..ab kya kareg a.

sooraj- shit yaar yaad hi na raha .

firdosh- sala tere jagha setting bane hue hain ki tu khud yaad nahini rakh pata ..

aise hi thodi der baat karne ke baad wo bhi wnaha se chale jaate hain .

aaj ka pura din RB room se gayab tha .

vicky- RB kanah gaya

ritehs –mujhe kya pata mujhe bola abhi aata hhon .

vicky- aur tune jaan ediya .

ritesh- to aur kya karta

vicky- tujhe bol ke bhi koi faida nahini .

ritesh- usse thoda time de uska dimag abhi hila hua hai . tu jo bolega uska dimag maine nahini ghusega .

vicky- hmm tu shyad sahi keh raha hai par wo hai kanha .. kanhi phir se swati ke pass to nahin gaya .

ritesh pata nahini. Rok call lagata hoon .

vicky- wo nahini utha raha hai .

ritesh- par mera uthayega

ritesh RB ko call lagata hai kuch baat karke rakh deta hai .

vicky- iss ko to tera phone uthaya mera nahni utha raha hai .. maine kya kiya hai mere pe gussa hai .

ritesh- gussa nahin hai .. dekh wo jab kuch karta hai tu usse usiwaqt galideta hai aur gyan chodta hai uske saamne . par maine pehle uska sath deta hoon wo jo kar raha hai aur baad maine isse samjha tahon . isiliye ab samjha ..isiliye kehta hon harwaqt uski maa banna band kar .

vicky- chal ab tu gyan mat de kanha hai wo .

ritesh – yanhi chat maine betha hai .

vicky- chal phir

dono chat maine chale jaate hain ..chat maine RB ek mattress dal ke pada hua tha uske saamne sare books khule hue the aur sath maine 2-3 beer ke bottle pade hue the ..

ritesh vicky ko shant rehne ko bolta hai .

ritesh jaata hai aur RB ke pichwade pe ek laat laga deta hai

ritesh- sala akela akela maja le raha hai .. sala mujhe bhi bula deta ..

RB – distrube mat kar abhi maine padh raha hoon parson se exam hai ..

Ritesh- sala agar aisa exam ho to maine din ke 24 ghanta padhne lagun ..oye vicky aaj padhne ko bohat dil kar raha hai bhag ke jaa niche se mera books wagera le aa aur ek mattress bhi le aaana .

Vicky- kya

Ritesh – aare jaa na re aur RB tere pass aur beer hai .

RB – nahii

Ritesh – aabe tu gaya nahni jaa niche se leke aa .

Vicky ritesh ko ghoorte hue niche chala jaata hai ritesh bhi call karke beer aur kuch snack bhi mangwadeta hai .

Thodi der maine wo bhi jugaad ho jata hai .

Ritesh- oye vicky uss mattress ko daal sala tere niche se mattress lane se pehle beer aagay sala kitna aalshi hai bi tu .

Uske baad ritesh – beer ke bottle kholke rakhta hai aur book leke mattress maine RB ke pass beth jata hai .

Ritesh – kya padhe jaa raha hai be samajh maine aata hai kya .

RB – haan tu padh distrubed mat kar .

Ritesh- haan wo to padhenge hi par pehle a beer khatam kardete hain barna garam ho jayegi ..

Phir sab ek doosre ki shakal dekhte hain aur beer ke bottel ko khali karne maine lag jaate hain .

Vicky- bas RB aur nahini tu pehle hi bohat pi chuka hai ..

RB – maine thik hoon ..

Ritesh- tujhe kya lagta hai mera bhai sirf ek ladki ke chakar maine toot jayeg a.. foot kar royega ..kyun kya kehta hai ?

RB – haan sahi kaha . wo hoi kon hai ki maine uske liye aansoo bahaun .. usse jo marji wo kar rahi hai karne do .. sala ek galti kya hui wo bhi meri anjaane maine yeh to sar ke upar hi chad ke baith gayee.

Aur wo Sali Nisha uski maa ka saali rinki ban ke dimag ke maa chod di Sali ek baar school maine itna lafda karke gayee thi phir yanah ake sab kharab kar gayee. Tu vicky mera sachha bhai hai tu mana kar raha tha uss din maine teri baat na maan ke wanha gaya aur ye sab ho gaya ..

Par kya wo mujhe ek baar bhi maaf nahini kar sakti hai ..

Vicky- tu chod wo sab koi aur baat kar .

Ritesh- tu chup reh be tu bata RB ( ritesh vicky ko aankh se ishara karke chup rehne ko kehta hai ).

RB – kuch nahin aaj se main uss ke saamne nahini jaunga agar usse isi se khusi milti hai to yehi sahi ..

Par kya kabhi kabhi usse sirf dekhne ko jaa sakta hoon .

Vicky- gaya bhens pani maine ..

Ritesh- tujhe bola na chup reh .. tu bol tujhe sirf usse bich maine dekhna hai yehi hai na ..

RB- haan yaar usse dekhe bina maine jinda reh nahini paunga .

vicky wanha se uth ke dur chala jaat hai aur apne beer ka boootle ko ek hi baar maine khatam karke dur phek ke maarta hai ..

ritesh- par ek condition hai thik hai .tu jab bhi usse dekhne jayega hamesh a dur se hi dekhna ..aur kabhi baat mat karna .. aur tu akela kabhi nahini jayega ya to maine rahunga ya phir vicky thik hai .

RB – thik hai par tu hi rehna mere sath wo bohat gali dega ..

Ritesh- thik hai ..ab tu bachon ke jaise harqat karna band kar .. be a man yaar . ab tu padhna hai padha ya phir soja .

RB phir se books maine najar daal deta ritesh wanha se uthke vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

Ritesh- kya hua

Vicky- ye kya tha tu usse uss swati se milne ko mana karne ke wajaye usse ulta gyaan de raha hai swati se milne ko .

Ritesh- uska dimag abhi sahi jagha pe nahini hai to tu kya chata hai wo phir se aisa harqat kare .. maine usse bola hai wo usse baat nahini karega aur jab bhi uske aas pass jayega tu ya maine uske sath honge .

Vicky- hmm kash kaise bhi karke yeh exam khatam ho jaye ..

Ritesh- haan yaar sal tune acha kiya yaad dila diya iska toh koi bharosha nahin pichle 10 12 din se ye book pakda hai ye to khud latkega saala sath maine humein bhi latka dega .

Chalo re baba padhai karo ..

Agle din bhi RB ka hostel maien hi kat gaya wo na aaj bahar gaya tha na hi kisi se baat kiya tha sirf vicky aur ritesh se thoda bohat baat karliya tha ya to chup chap beth ke saamne ki traf dekhta rehta tha ya phir book kholke beth jata tha .raat ko as usal dipika ka call aaya tha wo RB ka hal chal puch aur kal exam ke time maine milne ko bolke phone disconnect kardiya .

Agle din saare students colllge gate ke saamn khade the janha pe college bus line hoke khade the sare students ko leke jaaneko kyun ki exam university maine hi ho rahe the .

Sab ek ek karke bus maine chad gaye . vicky aur ritesh RB ko ek alag bus maine le gaye jis maine sirf ladke hi bhare hue the .. unhone socha tha ki swati and group dusre byu maine jayene .. par bus chalne thodi hi pehle swati and group aajate hain .. swati ko iss bus maine jaat dekh dipika bhi usu bus maine chad jaati hai .

Swati aur sooraj aake ek seat pe beth jate hain. RB swati ko sooraj ke sath dekh ke apni aaknhe band kardeta hai aur bahar ke tarf dekhne lagta hai .. tabhi dipika uske pass aajati hai ..

Dipika- kya hua

RB – kuch nahini ..

Dipika- to bhar ko kyun dekh arahe ho .. aadat daal lo RB ,, par dimag maine chadne mat d .. hum sab dost tumhare sath hain na .. tum aaram se jaake exam do usko dekho hi mat ..

RB- kya tum uss se ek baar baat karogi use samjahane ke liye .. wo mujh se to baat nahini karegi .

Dipika- thik hai par pehle tum sare exam khatam karo practical jab se suru honge tab tak maine tumhara baat karwa dongi thik hai ..

RB –promise ..

Dipika- promise … par exam ache se dena padega ..

RB- hmm.

Tabhi RB ke phone maine msg aate hain RB phone nikalta hai usmaine all the best ka msg tha jo ki do alag alag unknown number se aaya tha .. aur bhi msg aaye the kal parson maine par RB ne dhyaan nahin diya tha .. filhaal ke liye exam tha to wo dimag se wo sab nikaal deta hai aur saamne ke taraf swati ko dekhne lagta hain.. isi bich university aajati hai .sab nikal ke exam keliye chale jate hainphir waps aajate hain .

Yehi routine agle kuch paper tak chalta rehta hai .. RB ab khud ko swati se baat karne se rokne ki kosis maine shant hone lag gaya tha b wo kisi se bhi baat nahin karta tha wo sirf kuch pucho to ishare se ya phir do teen words maine answer karke apna jawab deta tha . exam kahatm ho gaye the

Ab sirf practical the jo kuch din maine suru hone wale the …to iss liye ab students thoda relax ho gaye the kyun ki practical ke koi tension nahin the aur upar se kuch din maine sab ek doosre se hamesha ke liye bichadne wale the to sab apne apne dosto ke sath ghoomna masti karne maine lage hue the .. sab iss kuch din ke period maine apne yadon maine jitna khusnooma pal ho sak usse bhardena chate the ..

Dipiak bhi abhi room maine ready ho rahi thi .. tabhi swati kanhi bahar se ghoom ke aati hai ..

Swati- kaha jaa rahi hai ..

Dipika- tujh se matlab .

Swati- aise kyun baat kar rahi hai ..

Dipika- aur kaise baat karun maine kanhi bhi jaun kya tujh se permission lena padega ..

Swati- maine kya kardiya jo tu aisi ho rahi hai .. mujhe pat hai usine tujhe mere bare maine kuch bola hai isiliye tu mere se aisa bartaaw kar rahi hai .. usko to maine ..

Dipika- tune khud hi apni question ka answer de deiya .. aur rahi RB ki wo kabhi nahini kaha hai aur na hi kahega ki tujh se baat karna band karne ke liye .. par tu chod jaane de khamokhan kyun maine apna time barbaad kar rahi hoon .

Uske baad dipika bahar chali jaati hai aur swati pana gussa apne bed pe nikalti hai .

Dipika market ke traf chal padti hai usse kuch saaman chahiye the aur vicky abhi busy tha to wo akeli hi chali aayii.

Dipika apne liye shopping kar liya tha ab wo ek shop ke pass khadi h hui thi ki

“dipika didi “

Dipika apne naam sunke piche ghumke dekhti hai .. (rashmi dipika ki mousi ki ladki sorry friends mujhe lagta hai ki maine ye character introduced kiya tha par iska naam bhul gya hoon ki rashmi hi hai ya kuch aur .bas ye jaan lo ki yeh barsha ki moushi ki beti hai aur barsha abhi inhike ghar rehti hai )

Dipika-aare rashmi tu tu yanha kab aayee..

Rashmi- do din ho agye ..

Dipika- acha to kya barsha bhi aaye hai kya uske bhi practical maine time hai

Rashmi- nahini di to nahni aayee.

Dipika- kaisi hai wo chudel ek baar jo gayee hai na kisi se baat kar rahi hai na hi kisi ko apna mnumber de gayee hai .

Rashmi- wo aur kare bhi to kya kare bohat hi muskil se wo apne gum ko bhula pai hai wo abhi yanah aake phir se apne ghaw ko hara nahini karna chati …

Dipika- kya matlab tumhara ..

Rashmi- wohi di ki dil tootne ki baat kar rahi hoo.

Dipika- barsha ki dil tootne ki matlab maine samjhi nahin ..

Rashmi- kya dipika di aap ko nahini pata di RB ko pyar karti thi par RB swati ko pasand karta tha isiliye di ne apna pyar ka kurbani de di .. wo kuch der to uss gum ke sahare reh gayee par jab RB aur swati dono ek ho gaye to didi aur uss gum ko she nahini payee aur wo yanah se chali gayee.. aapko nahini pata iss bare maine ..

Dipika- nahini mujhe to kuch bhi na pata iss bare maine tujh se hi sun rahi hoon usne hum ko iss bare maine kuch bhi nahin batya mere khayal se usne RB ko bhi nahini bataya hai iss bare maine ..

Rashmi- han RB ko to unhone kuch nahin batay par mujhe laga aapko p[ata hoga kyun ki vicky bhaiya ko to sab pata hai iss bare maien ..

Dipika- kya

Rashmi- haan wo to didi se baat bhi karte hain to mujhe laga aap bhi iss bare maine jaante honge aur aap bhididi ke sath contact maien honeg ..

Wanhi doosre aur RB ritesh aur vicky sab market aaye hue the .. tabhi unhe apne school ke ek dost mil jata hai to baton baton maine wo RB ko bulata hai kanhi jaane ke liye RB ka dil nahini tha par ritesh ne jabardasti karke usse bhej diya taki thoda logon se ghule mile to uska dimaag thoda free ho ..

Uske baad ritesh aur vicky aake . ek caffe maine beth jaate hain ..

Ritesh- aare yaar ab sirf kuch din bache hain hamare college life khatam hon eko to kyun na ek plan banate hain kanhi ghoomne ka .

Vicky- tu to aise baat kar rah ahai jaise exam khatam hote hi tu iss duniya chod ke kanhi chala jayega ..

Ritesh- aare bolna ya phir tera alag hi plan hai dipika ke sath ..

Vicky- nahini ias akoi nahini hai

Ritesh- saale daga baaz matlab jaruar tera dipika ke sath koi plan tha .. sal doston ko bhul jata hai tension na le maine aur RB jayenge ghoomen tu mat chal .. kam se kam isibahane uska man thoda halka ho jayega

Vicky- ab tu mujhe RB ke naam pe black mailing kar raha hai .

Ritesh- jaisa tujhe sahi lag epar mujhe jo bolna tha maine bol diya ..

Vicky- thik hai meri ek condition hai ..

Ritesh- kya jo bolega manjoor hai ..

Vicky- pakka na ..

Ritesh aab echal tu bhi kya yaad rakhe ga kis mahan aadmi tera dost hai .

Vicky – thik hai fir hamari sath Anita bhi cahlegi thik hai ..

Ritesh- nahin ..

Vicky – dekh mujjhe jo bolan tha maine bol diya ab tere upar hai ki tu usse le jaye ya plan cancel ..

Ritesh – aare ab tu mujhe blackmail kar raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh maine teri baat mani ab tu meri baat maan .

Ritesh – thik hai . tere chakar maine yeh bhi maan leta hoon ..

Vicky- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipiak aao betho “


vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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To ek baat yaad rakhna swati pyar kabhi kisike liye khatam nahin hota . par kuch aur chiz hai jo uss pyar ko chota bana sakta hai pata hai kya “Nafrat “ .

jo ab mere dil maine tumhare liye bhar gayee hai aur shyada uss pyar se filhaal jada hi hai .. shyad tumhe meri baat samajh maine aagyee ho .. chalo chalta hoon . aur haan sooraj agar principal ke pass complain karna ho ya kuch iss baar tumhe recording karne ki jarurat nahini hai ye CCTv ke footage dikha dena .sir ko ..

RB sooraj ke pass aata hai aur soraj ko gale lagata hai . RB ke iss harqat se wanha khade sab hairat the ..

RB – pata hai tumhe abhi tak maine kyun kuch nahin kaha kyun ki tum dushron ke jaise girgit wali harqat nahini karte jo karna ya kehna hoata tum ne abhi tak saamne kaha hai .
. barna kuch log toh girgit ko bhi sarminda kar dein ..”chal vicky chalte hain ..kuch logon ke chehera se ab nafrat karna sikhna padega ..


Ab Aage




Vicky aur RB wanhs se chale jaate hain . unke jaane ke baad bhid bhi jo jama hui thi dhire dhire kam hone lagi thi .

Ab tak rajesh bhi khada ho chuka tha par uske saans abhi bhi bhari chal rahe the .

Rajesh – nahini chodunga sale ko oye firdosh chal aaj sale ko hostel maine dekhte hain .

Firdosh – na be sala hostel maine nahini maar sakte bahar kanhi dekhenge .

Radhika- aare itna tension kyun lete ho tum sirf maroge to 2 ,3 din hi injured rahega maine toh kehti hoon prinicipal ke pass baat lete hain usko phele suspend karao phir jitna marna hai maro . na kya kehte ho sooraj

Firdosh- aabe sala sooraj ke sath reh reh ke teri dimag bhi jada chale laga hai .. sahi kaha ..

Sooraj abhi bhi kuch soach raha tha ..

Sooraj- tum chup raho sab .swati tum thik ho na

Swati- haan maine thik hoon ..tum tension mat lo iske jaise ghatiye ladke ke liye maine apna dimag kharab nahini karungi .

Sooraj- thik hai tum kya kehti ho kya karna chaiye jo tum kahogi wo maine karunga .

Swati- mujhe koi matlab nahin hai jo tumhe sahi lage .

Sooraj – nahini wo toh maine jaanta hoon par mujhe lagta hai iss topic maine tumahara opinion mere liye matter karta hai .

Swati sooraj ke traf dekhti hai .

Swati- ok . jaane do khamokhan koi faida nahini aise chote mote logon ke sath ulajhane se ulta hamara hi izzat hi kharab hogi .tum uska tension na lo ..acha ok maine chalti hon tabiyat sahi nahini lag rahi hai

Sooraj- aare kya hua tumhe .tumhe chod dun maine .

Swati- nahini koi tension nahni hai mujhe hostel hi jana hai ghar nahini jaungi ..

Sooraj- ok dhyan se jana aur room maine ponhach ke msg karna ok …

Uske baad swati bhi wanha se chali jati hai .swati ke jaane ke baad . firdosh sooraj ke pair maine gir jata hai .

Firdosh- gurudev mujhe bhi sikhao plz hamein bhi apna chella bana do .

Rajesh- ye kya kar raha hai uth be uske pair kyun pade hua hai .

Firdosh- chup kar .. yaar sooraj ek minute ko toh maine bhi shock maine chala gaya tera acting dekh ke sal man na padega acha patipada rakha hai usse . aur sala maine sochne lag tha tu kab se itne fikar karne wala aur itna uske opinion ko samjahne wala ban gay a..

Sooraj- karna padta hai mere bhai sab karna padta hai ek baar shagai ho jaye phir sab khatam .. uske baad ye chah kar bhi kuch nahini kar payegi .. aur mera jo kanta tha wo to ye khud nikal ke phek diya .

radhika – sooraj tum uske liye natak karte ho mere liye kam se kam utna hi kardo ..

sooraj- aare baby tere saamne natak karne ki jarurat kya hai .. waise agar tujhe natak dekhna hi hai to aaj raat ko natak kya tujhe pura picture dikaunga . iske baad radhika bhi sooraj ko bye bolke wanha se chali jaati hai .

radhika ke jaane ke baad rajesh pet pakad ke hasne lagta hai ..

firdosh- ab isse kya hua sala uss chachundar ke maar se pagal ho gaya hai shyad .

sooraj – kya hua be pagal ho gaya hai kya ?

rajesh- maine nahini par tu .. sala yanah radhika ko raat ke liye bol diya wanah kal Lucy ko bhi bol rakha hai uske pass jana tha ..ab kya kareg a.

sooraj- shit yaar yaad hi na raha .

firdosh- sala tere jagha setting bane hue hain ki tu khud yaad nahini rakh pata ..

aise hi thodi der baat karne ke baad wo bhi wnaha se chale jaate hain .

aaj ka pura din RB room se gayab tha .

vicky- RB kanah gaya

ritehs –mujhe kya pata mujhe bola abhi aata hhon .

vicky- aur tune jaan ediya .

ritesh- to aur kya karta

vicky- tujhe bol ke bhi koi faida nahini .

ritesh- usse thoda time de uska dimag abhi hila hua hai . tu jo bolega uska dimag maine nahini ghusega .

vicky- hmm tu shyad sahi keh raha hai par wo hai kanha .. kanhi phir se swati ke pass to nahin gaya .

ritesh pata nahini. Rok call lagata hoon .

vicky- wo nahini utha raha hai .

ritesh- par mera uthayega

ritesh RB ko call lagata hai kuch baat karke rakh deta hai .

vicky- iss ko to tera phone uthaya mera nahni utha raha hai .. maine kya kiya hai mere pe gussa hai .

ritesh- gussa nahin hai .. dekh wo jab kuch karta hai tu usse usiwaqt galideta hai aur gyan chodta hai uske saamne . par maine pehle uska sath deta hoon wo jo kar raha hai aur baad maine isse samjha tahon . isiliye ab samjha ..isiliye kehta hon harwaqt uski maa banna band kar .

vicky- chal ab tu gyan mat de kanha hai wo .

ritesh – yanhi chat maine betha hai .

vicky- chal phir

dono chat maine chale jaate hain ..chat maine RB ek mattress dal ke pada hua tha uske saamne sare books khule hue the aur sath maine 2-3 beer ke bottle pade hue the ..

ritesh vicky ko shant rehne ko bolta hai .

ritesh jaata hai aur RB ke pichwade pe ek laat laga deta hai

ritesh- sala akela akela maja le raha hai .. sala mujhe bhi bula deta ..

RB – distrube mat kar abhi maine padh raha hoon parson se exam hai ..

Ritesh- sala agar aisa exam ho to maine din ke 24 ghanta padhne lagun ..oye vicky aaj padhne ko bohat dil kar raha hai bhag ke jaa niche se mera books wagera le aa aur ek mattress bhi le aaana .

Vicky- kya

Ritesh – aare jaa na re aur RB tere pass aur beer hai .

RB – nahii

Ritesh – aabe tu gaya nahni jaa niche se leke aa .

Vicky ritesh ko ghoorte hue niche chala jaata hai ritesh bhi call karke beer aur kuch snack bhi mangwadeta hai .

Thodi der maine wo bhi jugaad ho jata hai .

Ritesh- oye vicky uss mattress ko daal sala tere niche se mattress lane se pehle beer aagay sala kitna aalshi hai bi tu .

Uske baad ritesh – beer ke bottle kholke rakhta hai aur book leke mattress maine RB ke pass beth jata hai .

Ritesh – kya padhe jaa raha hai be samajh maine aata hai kya .

RB – haan tu padh distrubed mat kar .

Ritesh- haan wo to padhenge hi par pehle a beer khatam kardete hain barna garam ho jayegi ..

Phir sab ek doosre ki shakal dekhte hain aur beer ke bottel ko khali karne maine lag jaate hain .

Vicky- bas RB aur nahini tu pehle hi bohat pi chuka hai ..

RB – maine thik hoon ..

Ritesh- tujhe kya lagta hai mera bhai sirf ek ladki ke chakar maine toot jayeg a.. foot kar royega ..kyun kya kehta hai ?

RB – haan sahi kaha . wo hoi kon hai ki maine uske liye aansoo bahaun .. usse jo marji wo kar rahi hai karne do .. sala ek galti kya hui wo bhi meri anjaane maine yeh to sar ke upar hi chad ke baith gayee.

Aur wo Sali Nisha uski maa ka saali rinki ban ke dimag ke maa chod di Sali ek baar school maine itna lafda karke gayee thi phir yanah ake sab kharab kar gayee. Tu vicky mera sachha bhai hai tu mana kar raha tha uss din maine teri baat na maan ke wanha gaya aur ye sab ho gaya ..

Par kya wo mujhe ek baar bhi maaf nahini kar sakti hai ..

Vicky- tu chod wo sab koi aur baat kar .

Ritesh- tu chup reh be tu bata RB ( ritesh vicky ko aankh se ishara karke chup rehne ko kehta hai ).

RB – kuch nahin aaj se main uss ke saamne nahini jaunga agar usse isi se khusi milti hai to yehi sahi ..

Par kya kabhi kabhi usse sirf dekhne ko jaa sakta hoon .

Vicky- gaya bhens pani maine ..

Ritesh- tujhe bola na chup reh .. tu bol tujhe sirf usse bich maine dekhna hai yehi hai na ..

RB- haan yaar usse dekhe bina maine jinda reh nahini paunga .

vicky wanha se uth ke dur chala jaat hai aur apne beer ka boootle ko ek hi baar maine khatam karke dur phek ke maarta hai ..

ritesh- par ek condition hai thik hai .tu jab bhi usse dekhne jayega hamesh a dur se hi dekhna ..aur kabhi baat mat karna .. aur tu akela kabhi nahini jayega ya to maine rahunga ya phir vicky thik hai .

RB – thik hai par tu hi rehna mere sath wo bohat gali dega ..

Ritesh- thik hai ..ab tu bachon ke jaise harqat karna band kar .. be a man yaar . ab tu padhna hai padha ya phir soja .

RB phir se books maine najar daal deta ritesh wanha se uthke vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

Ritesh- kya hua

Vicky- ye kya tha tu usse uss swati se milne ko mana karne ke wajaye usse ulta gyaan de raha hai swati se milne ko .

Ritesh- uska dimag abhi sahi jagha pe nahini hai to tu kya chata hai wo phir se aisa harqat kare .. maine usse bola hai wo usse baat nahini karega aur jab bhi uske aas pass jayega tu ya maine uske sath honge .

Vicky- hmm kash kaise bhi karke yeh exam khatam ho jaye ..

Ritesh- haan yaar sal tune acha kiya yaad dila diya iska toh koi bharosha nahin pichle 10 12 din se ye book pakda hai ye to khud latkega saala sath maine humein bhi latka dega .

Chalo re baba padhai karo ..

Agle din bhi RB ka hostel maien hi kat gaya wo na aaj bahar gaya tha na hi kisi se baat kiya tha sirf vicky aur ritesh se thoda bohat baat karliya tha ya to chup chap beth ke saamne ki traf dekhta rehta tha ya phir book kholke beth jata tha .raat ko as usal dipika ka call aaya tha wo RB ka hal chal puch aur kal exam ke time maine milne ko bolke phone disconnect kardiya .

Agle din saare students colllge gate ke saamn khade the janha pe college bus line hoke khade the sare students ko leke jaaneko kyun ki exam university maine hi ho rahe the .

Sab ek ek karke bus maine chad gaye . vicky aur ritesh RB ko ek alag bus maine le gaye jis maine sirf ladke hi bhare hue the .. unhone socha tha ki swati and group dusre byu maine jayene .. par bus chalne thodi hi pehle swati and group aajate hain .. swati ko iss bus maine jaat dekh dipika bhi usu bus maine chad jaati hai .

Swati aur sooraj aake ek seat pe beth jate hain. RB swati ko sooraj ke sath dekh ke apni aaknhe band kardeta hai aur bahar ke tarf dekhne lagta hai .. tabhi dipika uske pass aajati hai ..

Dipika- kya hua

RB – kuch nahini ..

Dipika- to bhar ko kyun dekh arahe ho .. aadat daal lo RB ,, par dimag maine chadne mat d .. hum sab dost tumhare sath hain na .. tum aaram se jaake exam do usko dekho hi mat ..

RB- kya tum uss se ek baar baat karogi use samjahane ke liye .. wo mujh se to baat nahini karegi .

Dipika- thik hai par pehle tum sare exam khatam karo practical jab se suru honge tab tak maine tumhara baat karwa dongi thik hai ..

RB –promise ..

Dipika- promise … par exam ache se dena padega ..

RB- hmm.

Tabhi RB ke phone maine msg aate hain RB phone nikalta hai usmaine all the best ka msg tha jo ki do alag alag unknown number se aaya tha .. aur bhi msg aaye the kal parson maine par RB ne dhyaan nahin diya tha .. filhaal ke liye exam tha to wo dimag se wo sab nikaal deta hai aur saamne ke taraf swati ko dekhne lagta hain.. isi bich university aajati hai .sab nikal ke exam keliye chale jate hainphir waps aajate hain .

Yehi routine agle kuch paper tak chalta rehta hai .. RB ab khud ko swati se baat karne se rokne ki kosis maine shant hone lag gaya tha b wo kisi se bhi baat nahin karta tha wo sirf kuch pucho to ishare se ya phir do teen words maine answer karke apna jawab deta tha . exam kahatm ho gaye the

Ab sirf practical the jo kuch din maine suru hone wale the …to iss liye ab students thoda relax ho gaye the kyun ki practical ke koi tension nahin the aur upar se kuch din maine sab ek doosre se hamesha ke liye bichadne wale the to sab apne apne dosto ke sath ghoomna masti karne maine lage hue the .. sab iss kuch din ke period maine apne yadon maine jitna khusnooma pal ho sak usse bhardena chate the ..

Dipiak bhi abhi room maine ready ho rahi thi .. tabhi swati kanhi bahar se ghoom ke aati hai ..

Swati- kaha jaa rahi hai ..

Dipika- tujh se matlab .

Swati- aise kyun baat kar rahi hai ..

Dipika- aur kaise baat karun maine kanhi bhi jaun kya tujh se permission lena padega ..

Swati- maine kya kardiya jo tu aisi ho rahi hai .. mujhe pat hai usine tujhe mere bare maine kuch bola hai isiliye tu mere se aisa bartaaw kar rahi hai .. usko to maine ..

Dipika- tune khud hi apni question ka answer de deiya .. aur rahi RB ki wo kabhi nahini kaha hai aur na hi kahega ki tujh se baat karna band karne ke liye .. par tu chod jaane de khamokhan kyun maine apna time barbaad kar rahi hoon .

Uske baad dipika bahar chali jaati hai aur swati pana gussa apne bed pe nikalti hai .

Dipika market ke traf chal padti hai usse kuch saaman chahiye the aur vicky abhi busy tha to wo akeli hi chali aayii.

Dipika apne liye shopping kar liya tha ab wo ek shop ke pass khadi h hui thi ki

“dipika didi “

Dipika apne naam sunke piche ghumke dekhti hai .. (rashmi dipika ki mousi ki ladki sorry friends mujhe lagta hai ki maine ye character introduced kiya tha par iska naam bhul gya hoon ki rashmi hi hai ya kuch aur .bas ye jaan lo ki yeh barsha ki moushi ki beti hai aur barsha abhi inhike ghar rehti hai )

Dipika-aare rashmi tu tu yanha kab aayee..

Rashmi- do din ho agye ..

Dipika- acha to kya barsha bhi aaye hai kya uske bhi practical maine time hai

Rashmi- nahini di to nahni aayee.

Dipika- kaisi hai wo chudel ek baar jo gayee hai na kisi se baat kar rahi hai na hi kisi ko apna mnumber de gayee hai .

Rashmi- wo aur kare bhi to kya kare bohat hi muskil se wo apne gum ko bhula pai hai wo abhi yanah aake phir se apne ghaw ko hara nahini karna chati …

Dipika- kya matlab tumhara ..

Rashmi- wohi di ki dil tootne ki baat kar rahi hoo.

Dipika- barsha ki dil tootne ki matlab maine samjhi nahin ..

Rashmi- kya dipika di aap ko nahini pata di RB ko pyar karti thi par RB swati ko pasand karta tha isiliye di ne apna pyar ka kurbani de di .. wo kuch der to uss gum ke sahare reh gayee par jab RB aur swati dono ek ho gaye to didi aur uss gum ko she nahini payee aur wo yanah se chali gayee.. aapko nahini pata iss bare maine ..

Dipika- nahini mujhe to kuch bhi na pata iss bare maine tujh se hi sun rahi hoon usne hum ko iss bare maine kuch bhi nahin batya mere khayal se usne RB ko bhi nahini bataya hai iss bare maine ..

Rashmi- han RB ko to unhone kuch nahin batay par mujhe laga aapko p[ata hoga kyun ki vicky bhaiya ko to sab pata hai iss bare maien ..

Dipika- kya

Rashmi- haan wo to didi se baat bhi karte hain to mujhe laga aap bhi iss bare maine jaante honge aur aap bhididi ke sath contact maien honeg ..

Wanhi doosre aur RB ritesh aur vicky sab market aaye hue the .. tabhi unhe apne school ke ek dost mil jata hai to baton baton maine wo RB ko bulata hai kanhi jaane ke liye RB ka dil nahini tha par ritesh ne jabardasti karke usse bhej diya taki thoda logon se ghule mile to uska dimaag thoda free ho ..

Uske baad ritesh aur vicky aake . ek caffe maine beth jaate hain ..

Ritesh- aare yaar ab sirf kuch din bache hain hamare college life khatam hon eko to kyun na ek plan banate hain kanhi ghoomne ka .

Vicky- tu to aise baat kar rah ahai jaise exam khatam hote hi tu iss duniya chod ke kanhi chala jayega ..

Ritesh- aare bolna ya phir tera alag hi plan hai dipika ke sath ..

Vicky- nahini ias akoi nahini hai

Ritesh- saale daga baaz matlab jaruar tera dipika ke sath koi plan tha .. sal doston ko bhul jata hai tension na le maine aur RB jayenge ghoomen tu mat chal .. kam se kam isibahane uska man thoda halka ho jayega

Vicky- ab tu mujhe RB ke naam pe black mailing kar raha hai .

Ritesh- jaisa tujhe sahi lag epar mujhe jo bolna tha maine bol diya ..

Vicky- thik hai meri ek condition hai ..

Ritesh- kya jo bolega manjoor hai ..

Vicky- pakka na ..

Ritesh aab echal tu bhi kya yaad rakhe ga kis mahan aadmi tera dost hai .

Vicky – thik hai fir hamari sath Anita bhi cahlegi thik hai ..

Ritesh- nahin ..

Vicky – dekh mujjhe jo bolan tha maine bol diya ab tere upar hai ki tu usse le jaye ya plan cancel ..

Ritesh – aare ab tu mujhe blackmail kar raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh maine teri baat mani ab tu meri baat maan .

Ritesh – thik hai . tere chakar maine yeh bhi maan leta hoon ..

Vicky- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipiak aao betho “


vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Jabardast update hai bhai......... RB or swaty ke bich jo hua isse sooraj isiliye chup tha kyu ki usko swaty ke bharsha ko jitna tha....or hua bhi waisa hi.....or idhar reahmi ne vicky ko fasa diya....or dipika vicky ko mara thappad.......age dekhta hai kya hota hai.....or lagta hai story end ke tarap aageye hai....
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Vicky
- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipika aao betho “
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vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Ab Aage
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. vicky – kya hua ?
“chatak”
Ritesh wanha se aake dipika ko rokta hai ..
Ritesh- kya hua tum iise kyun maar rahi ho ..
Dipika- ritesh mera hath chod de aaj yeh mere se nahini bachega ..isne mujhe itna badi baat chupaya tha .. kanhi tu bhi ismain shamil nahni hai ..phir to tu bhi pitega mere hath se.
Ritrsh- nahini kya maine nahin hun kisimaine bhi .. tu kis bare maine puch rahi hai .. tu isse hi maar maine bich maine nahin aaunga ..
Dipika- thi hai side maine hi reh maine to iski ..
Vicky- aare jaan maine kiya kya hai kam se kam yeh to batao . maien tum se kya chupaya hai ..
Dipika- thak ke wanhi beth jati hai ..pass maine rakha pani ka glass pura ek hi baar maine khali kar deti hai ..
Vicky- aaram se ..
Dipika- tum mujh se barsha wali baat kyun chupaya ..
Vicky- konsa si baat tumhe kaise pata . mujhe nahin pata kuch iss bare maine to ..
Dipika- vicky mere mood already kharab hai tum chup chap bataoge ya phir tumhara naak hi tod dun ..
Ritesh- kya baat hai koi mujhe bhi batayega .. kya hua barsha ko ..
Dipika- wo to ye batayega abhi .. barsha se ye contact maine hai aur barsha college iss liye nahin chodi thi ki usse koi family problem thi balki wo RB aur swati ke riste ki wajha se college chhod di thi ..
Ritesh- aur wo kyun bhala ..oye saale ab tu sab batayege barna .chal suru kar ..
Vicky- to suno **********************tab phir maine usko train maine bithake chala aaya . par wo baad maine wo mujhe RB ke baare maine jaan ne ke liye call karke pucha karti thi par .par wo jitna RB aur swati ke bare maine jaanti thi usse utna hi bura lagta tha isiliye maine usse iss bare maine batana mana kardiya . phir maine usse samjhaya ki wo khud ko iss pyar ke jaal se nikale kyun ki RB aur swati to sath maine hai, khamokhan wo dukh seh rahi hai .
Dipika – aur tune itni badi baat hum sab se chupake rakhi thi .
Ritesh uthke vicky ke sar pe ek ulta hath kka deta hai ..
Ritesh- aur yeh mere taraf se .. sala kuch dimag kaam karta hai tera ..
Dipika- to barsha ko abhike situation ke bare maine kuch nahinh pata hai ..
Vicky – nahini exam wagera the uske aur agar usko pata chalta ki RB ka aisa halat hua hai aur khash karke wo accident ke baat to yanha aa jati aur uski padhai aur exam dono suffer karti ..
Dipika- chalo ye baat tumne sahi socha .. wo chodo dekhte hain iss bare maine kuch ..
Ritesh- Dipika hum kya soch rahe the abhi kuch hi din baki hai uske baad hamara college life khatam ho jayega chal na kanhi ghoomne jay e..
Dipika- han kyun nahin.
Ritesh- chal ho gaya plan ..
Vicky- thik hai RB aur Anita ko bhi bata de ..ek date fix kardete hain phir chalnge ..
Ritesh- ok baki kisi ko puchna hai kya .
.vikcy – bakiyon se tera kya matlab .
Ritesh- wo maine .
Dipika- tu swati ke bare maine bol raha hai wo nahini jayegi agar wo jana bhi chahe tab bhi maine usse jane nahini dungi uske jaane se khamokhan RB ki dil dukhega . kyun ki wo akeli to aayegi nahin jarur sooraj ke sath aayegi ..
Ritesh- hm ye bhi sahi baat hai . dekho saitaan ka naam liya aur saitaan hajir ..par ye kiske sath hai ..
Dipika aur vicky bhi ritesh ke dekhne ke direction main dekhne lagte hain ..
Swati ek ladke ke sath restaurant ke andar jaa rahi thi ..
Dipika- ye kabhi nahini sudharne wali ..
Vicky- ab ye kon hai ..
Ritesh- kya pata . tu ruk maine abhi aata hoon .
Vicky- kanha jaa raha hai be .
Ritesh – unke baatein sun ne ka koi jugad lagane pata to chale ki ye sal ahai kon
Dipika- ritesh rook maine bhi chalti hoon ..
Vicky- aare faida kya hai usse karne do jo karna hai tumhe kyun farak padta hai .
Dipika- tujh se kisine pucha aana hai to aa barna betha reh ..
Vicky- hmm. Chalo sab chalte hain ..
Group pura usi taraf chal padte hain . swati aur wo ladka jis restaurant ke nadar gaye the wanhi chale jaate hain .
Vicky- kya hua ab kaise unke batein sunoge wo to private cabin maine chale gaye .
Ritesh- tu ruk do min maine kuch jugad bhidata hoon ..
Ritesh wanha se jaldi se manager ke pass jata hai aur unke pass wala cabin book kareleta hai usek pass wo ek waiter ke pass jata hai aur usse kuch bolta hai aur wapas aa jata hai .
Vicky- kya hua be
Ritesh apna phone de na
Vicky- kya karega
Ritesh- tu phone to de pehle
Dipika- meri phone le le
Ritesh dipika ka phone leke pehle apne phone pe kuch karta hai phir dipika kae phone maine phir wo waiter ko ishare se bulata hai . waiter ke aane ke baad ritesh ussse apna mobile de deta hai .
Ritesh- thik se kardega na ..
Waiter- ji sir aap tension na le ho jayega ..
Ritesh- chal ab jaldi se jaa .
Uske baad witer wanha se chala jata hai ..
Ritesh dipika aur vicky ko leke cabin ke andar chala jata hai ..
Ritesh – awaaz mat karna
Ritesh phone ko speaker p erakh deta hai ..
Kuch der tak faltu awaaz aati rehti hai phir jab waiter unn logon ko serve karte time mobile chupake aagaya tha ab inko awaz clear aane lagi thi .
Awwaz- tum to aaj kal milte hi nahini ho pehle to shkal bhi nahini dikha rahi thi abhi kuch din se jaa rahi ho to mujh se mile bina hi chale aa rahe ho ..
Swati- waisa nahini hai Rocky . pehle mujhe didi se kiya wada nibhana tha unke saamne maine waise unke asli genhagaar ko rulaye bina kaise chali jaati ..
Rocky- par didi aap ko to masi ne mana kiya tha ye sab ke liye
Swati- mummy ke keh dene se kya ho gaya . maine pani ritu didi ko aise hi chod nahini sakti .. maine didi ko uss haal maine dekha hai jiss halat maine gara tu unhe dekhta to ab tak tu inn logon ka qatal kar chuka hota . wo to pata nahini papa aur mummy iss mamle ko kyun daba diya .. unko apni reputation ki bohat parwa thi na .. ye khabar bahar aati to unki badnami ho jati ki dekho diwang ji ki ristedaar ke sath aisa hua ..
Rocky- didi aap thoda shant ho jao ..
Swati- nahini rocky tu didi ko uss halat maine nahini dekha hai jiss halat maine maine unhe dekha hai mout se ladhte hue .. unke sath jo darindgi hua waisa to koi haivan bhi kisi ke sath na kare . kya galti thi unki pyar karne ki .. aare unhone to sirf pyar kiya tha bharosha kiya tha par kya mila unhe aakhirkaar dhoka aur haivaniyat ..mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai rocky jis din didi mere pass aayee thi . wo kitne khus thi ki wo maa ban ne wali thi . unke dil maine iss baat ka dar nahini tha ki agar ghar walon ko pata chal jaye to kya hoga .. unhe sara jamana ko apne pyar ke saamne thokar maar diya tha .. wo gayee thi uss Harami Nihar ko batane iss khusk kabhri ke bare maine usse ye baat batake surprise dene ko par hua kya unhe hi surprise mila wanah pe .. un logon ko mere di ke sath aisa karne se pehle thodi si bhi sharam nahini aaye .. wo Niahr jise wo pyar karti thi uss RB jinhe wo apni debar nahini balki bhai ki tarha maan ne lagi thi .. unhone ne hi unke sath chi .. aur sath maine unke jaan lene kikosis bhi ki .. chi ..
Unhe to sirf didi ke jism aur unke paise se matlab tha .. kash didi pehle hi papa ke baat maan jate ..
Rocky- didi nahini aap ro mat .. abhi to didi sahi hai n na doctor ka kehna hai ki unke halat ab bohat jaldi se sahi ho raha hai agar aisa hi chalta raha wo jaldi hi coma se bhi sahi ho jayengi ..
Swati- usi din ka to maine kab se intejaar kar rahi hoon rocky .. didi bas ek baar sahi ho jaye apne munh kholke phir se mujh se baat karne lag jaye .. unke ek gunehgaar ko to bhagwaan ne saja diya hai usko to maine didi ke liye chod rakha hoon .. usse to didi uski gunha ka hisaab karengi ..par iss RB ko maine rulaungi itna ki uske aankh se aansoo bhi sukh jaye ..
Rocky- pata hai didi mujhe jab pehle pata chala aap RB ke sath reltion maine hai maine to shock ho gaya . maine soch rha tha aap ko sab pata hai phir bhi .. aap uss se pyar .
Swati- pyar aur wo bhi uss fatichar se ..uss se agar kuch hai to sirf nafrat sirf aur nafrat .abhi to kuch nahini hai aage aage dekho main usse kaise tadpati hoon ..
Rocky- par didi abhi to aap sooraj ke stah relation maine ho aur phir aap ki shgai bhi kuch hi din maine hogi aap use filhaal ke liye jaane do usse maine dekh loonga ..
Swat- nahini .. usse koi kuch nahinii kareg a.. agar usse sirf chot ponhachani hoti to ye kaam to sachin bhaiya kab ke kar chuke hote . par mujhe usko chot nahini ponhachani hai usse rulana hai .. aur maine ache se jaanti hoon kaise karna hai .. abhi wo na jee payega na hi mar payega .. sir royega ..
Rocky- par did abhi to college khatam ho gaya wo yanah se kanhi aur chala jayega phir .
Swati- to tujhe kya lagta hai maine usse chod dongi nahini .. usse bohat rulaungi .. jab tak didi sahi nahini ho jati unke sare gunhegaar royenge .. khaskar ke iss RB ko .. wo Nihar to abhi pagal ho gaya hai usse khud ka koi hosh nahini usse abhi kuch kiya bhi to usse apne galti ka paschtatap nahini hoga . usse ek baar sahi hojaane do phir uska bhi number aayega tab tak .. isko to maine ..
Rocky- bas didi bas aap pehle khud ko sambhalo .. ye na ho uske chakar maine aap ko kuch ho jaye aap tension mat lo ab maine bhi aap ke sath hoo .. aap ye pani piyo first aur apna face wash kar ke aao .. socho aap ka aisa halat maine agar Ritu didi dekhengi to unhe kya feel hoga .
Swati- nahini mera mood ab bilkool acha nahini chal maine freash ho aati hoon phir nikalte hain ..
Rocky- thik hai di ..
Phir swati jaake freash hoke aati ahi aur phir wo nikal jaate hain unke jaane ke baad wohi waiter phone laake ritesh ko deta hai .. ritesh apne pocket se kuch notes nikal ke uske hath maine pakda deta hai aur wo bhi thank you kehke nikal jaat hai ..
Vicky aur dipika abhi bhi bhoot ki tarha bethe hue the ..
Ritesh – kya hua .. ye kya bol rahi thi kya ye sach hai ..
Dipika ab sar utha ke vicky ke taraf dekhti hai par vicky abhi bhi mano khaosh kuch gehri yadonmaine khoya hua tha ..
Dipika- kya hua tumhe vicky .kya hua //
Dipika- ritesh chalo yanah se kanhi bahar
Ritesh- yanhi pich eke tarraf hi ek park hai wanhi chalte hain ..
Dipiak aur ritesh kaise karke vicky ko uss park maine leke aate hain ..
Ritesh – yaar tu mujhe bata wo kya bol rahi thi ye ritu kon hai nihar kon hai wo RB ke bare maienkya bol rahi thi sab kuch mujhe bata .. jaldi se ..
Vicky- upar ke taraf dekhta hai phir dipika ke traf dekh ke pani ka ishara karta hai . dipika usse bottle deti ahi ..
Pani pine ke baad vicky ek gehra saan leta hai .. aur apne pocket se phone nikalta hai ..
Aur ek number dial karta hai ..
Vicky- hlw kanha pe hai ..
Uss tarf- *******
Vicky- RB hai ya chala gaya .
Uss taraf-********
Vicky sun kaise bhi karke usse apne sath rakhna jab tak maine call na karun .. kuch bhi ho jaye .. thik hai .
Uss taraf-***
Vicky phone cut karta hai aur mobile ko pocket maine daal deta hai .
Ritesh –ab bata kya hua ..
Vicky – hmm dekho mujhe to pura nahini pata iss bare maine aur aaj jo suna ussmaine kya sach hai kya jhut ye nahini bata sakta maine par ..
Ritesh- aabe tu paheli mat khel bata jaldi se ye ritu kon hai swati kya bol rahi thi ..
Vicky- to suno .. Nihar bhiaya ko to jaante ho na wo RB ke cousin hai . wo aur ritu college maine ek doosre ko pasand karte the . wo dono ek doosre ki bina ek pal bhi nahini reh pate the .. yanha tak ki jab bhi nihar bhaiya gaon aate the Ritu didi bhi unke sath hi gaon aajati thi ghar maine bahan bana ke .. wo RB ko aur mujhe bohat pyar karti thi . RB to mano unka dusra chota bhai tha .
Par pata nahini achanak kya hua unke Ritu did bohat pareshan rehne lagi thi .. hum jab puchte the to tab wo nahini batati thi par baad maien h pata chala ki ritu didi ke ghar maine unke riste ke bare maien jaan gaye the . pehle to unke ghar wale thoda bohat gussa hue par wo phir raji hoagye the par baad maien unke kuch relatives bich maine aagaye jo ki iss shadi ke shakt khilaaf the .. unhone uss time kitne baar nihar bhaiya ko dhamkaya gunde bhi bheje par na hi nihar bahiya na hi ritu didi iss bat se koi farak pad raha tha .. ab ritu didi bhi apne ghar walo ke saamne khulke saamne aagyee thi .. to aakhir kaar unke ghar wale raji ho gaye par ..unka kehna tha ki shadi yanah tak ki shagai bhi abhi nahini kara sakte kyun ki kuch problem hai kundli maine .. iss liye unhone 6 mahine baad karane ko bol diya .. sab kuch thiktha .. hum bhi khsu the ..
Par ek din bhaiya apne kuch colleg ke dosto ke sath ek dost ke ghar maien party kar rah ethe wanha wo nahini jaante par shyad daaru ke nashe maine wo aur ek ladki physical ho gaye ki wanha Ritu didi ponach gayee wo ye sab dekh ke bohat gussa hui .. wo uske baad Nihar bhaiya se baat karna band kardiya .. aur unse milna bhi band kardiya .. Nihar bahiya unhe samjhane ka bohat kosis kiya par wo nahini mani .. wo to keh diya tha ki unhe distrube na kare kyun ki wo kanhi aur shadi karne wali hai .. Nihar bahiya ab Ritu Didi se milne ke liye nikal gaye .. didi uss time ghar se hi bahar nahini nikalti thi .. par raste maien hi bhiaya ka accident ho gaya .. wo marte marte bache the par uss chot se wo pagal hoagyee din bhar sirf Ritu didi ke naam leke wo ote rehte the .. pata nahini kuch bhi bolne lagte the kabhi kabhi chillane lagte the ..
Phir ek din khabar aaye ki Ritu didi ne shadi kar liya hai aur wo Canada shift ho gayee hain ..
Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..
Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “
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Vicky
- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipika aao betho “
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vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Ab Aage
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. vicky – kya hua ?
“chatak”
Ritesh wanha se aake dipika ko rokta hai ..
Ritesh- kya hua tum iise kyun maar rahi ho ..
Dipika- ritesh mera hath chod de aaj yeh mere se nahini bachega ..isne mujhe itna badi baat chupaya tha .. kanhi tu bhi ismain shamil nahni hai ..phir to tu bhi pitega mere hath se.
Ritrsh- nahini kya maine nahin hun kisimaine bhi .. tu kis bare maine puch rahi hai .. tu isse hi maar maine bich maine nahin aaunga ..
Dipika- thi hai side maine hi reh maine to iski ..
Vicky- aare jaan maine kiya kya hai kam se kam yeh to batao . maien tum se kya chupaya hai ..
Dipika- thak ke wanhi beth jati hai ..pass maine rakha pani ka glass pura ek hi baar maine khali kar deti hai ..
Vicky- aaram se ..
Dipika- tum mujh se barsha wali baat kyun chupaya ..
Vicky- konsa si baat tumhe kaise pata . mujhe nahin pata kuch iss bare maine to ..
Dipika- vicky mere mood already kharab hai tum chup chap bataoge ya phir tumhara naak hi tod dun ..
Ritesh- kya baat hai koi mujhe bhi batayega .. kya hua barsha ko ..
Dipika- wo to ye batayega abhi .. barsha se ye contact maine hai aur barsha college iss liye nahin chodi thi ki usse koi family problem thi balki wo RB aur swati ke riste ki wajha se college chhod di thi ..
Ritesh- aur wo kyun bhala ..oye saale ab tu sab batayege barna .chal suru kar ..
Vicky- to suno **********************tab phir maine usko train maine bithake chala aaya . par wo baad maine wo mujhe RB ke baare maine jaan ne ke liye call karke pucha karti thi par .par wo jitna RB aur swati ke bare maine jaanti thi usse utna hi bura lagta tha isiliye maine usse iss bare maine batana mana kardiya . phir maine usse samjhaya ki wo khud ko iss pyar ke jaal se nikale kyun ki RB aur swati to sath maine hai, khamokhan wo dukh seh rahi hai .
Dipika – aur tune itni badi baat hum sab se chupake rakhi thi .
Ritesh uthke vicky ke sar pe ek ulta hath kka deta hai ..
Ritesh- aur yeh mere taraf se .. sala kuch dimag kaam karta hai tera ..
Dipika- to barsha ko abhike situation ke bare maine kuch nahinh pata hai ..
Vicky – nahini exam wagera the uske aur agar usko pata chalta ki RB ka aisa halat hua hai aur khash karke wo accident ke baat to yanha aa jati aur uski padhai aur exam dono suffer karti ..
Dipika- chalo ye baat tumne sahi socha .. wo chodo dekhte hain iss bare maine kuch ..
Ritesh- Dipika hum kya soch rahe the abhi kuch hi din baki hai uske baad hamara college life khatam ho jayega chal na kanhi ghoomne jay e..
Dipika- han kyun nahin.
Ritesh- chal ho gaya plan ..
Vicky- thik hai RB aur Anita ko bhi bata de ..ek date fix kardete hain phir chalnge ..
Ritesh- ok baki kisi ko puchna hai kya .
.vikcy – bakiyon se tera kya matlab .
Ritesh- wo maine .
Dipika- tu swati ke bare maine bol raha hai wo nahini jayegi agar wo jana bhi chahe tab bhi maine usse jane nahini dungi uske jaane se khamokhan RB ki dil dukhega . kyun ki wo akeli to aayegi nahin jarur sooraj ke sath aayegi ..
Ritesh- hm ye bhi sahi baat hai . dekho saitaan ka naam liya aur saitaan hajir ..par ye kiske sath hai ..
Dipika aur vicky bhi ritesh ke dekhne ke direction main dekhne lagte hain ..
Swati ek ladke ke sath restaurant ke andar jaa rahi thi ..
Dipika- ye kabhi nahini sudharne wali ..
Vicky- ab ye kon hai ..
Ritesh- kya pata . tu ruk maine abhi aata hoon .
Vicky- kanha jaa raha hai be .
Ritesh – unke baatein sun ne ka koi jugad lagane pata to chale ki ye sal ahai kon
Dipika- ritesh rook maine bhi chalti hoon ..
Vicky- aare faida kya hai usse karne do jo karna hai tumhe kyun farak padta hai .
Dipika- tujh se kisine pucha aana hai to aa barna betha reh ..
Vicky- hmm. Chalo sab chalte hain ..
Group pura usi taraf chal padte hain . swati aur wo ladka jis restaurant ke nadar gaye the wanhi chale jaate hain .
Vicky- kya hua ab kaise unke batein sunoge wo to private cabin maine chale gaye .
Ritesh- tu ruk do min maine kuch jugad bhidata hoon ..
Ritesh wanha se jaldi se manager ke pass jata hai aur unke pass wala cabin book kareleta hai usek pass wo ek waiter ke pass jata hai aur usse kuch bolta hai aur wapas aa jata hai .
Vicky- kya hua be
Ritesh apna phone de na
Vicky- kya karega
Ritesh- tu phone to de pehle
Dipika- meri phone le le
Ritesh dipika ka phone leke pehle apne phone pe kuch karta hai phir dipika kae phone maine phir wo waiter ko ishare se bulata hai . waiter ke aane ke baad ritesh ussse apna mobile de deta hai .
Ritesh- thik se kardega na ..
Waiter- ji sir aap tension na le ho jayega ..
Ritesh- chal ab jaldi se jaa .
Uske baad witer wanha se chala jata hai ..
Ritesh dipika aur vicky ko leke cabin ke andar chala jata hai ..
Ritesh – awaaz mat karna
Ritesh phone ko speaker p erakh deta hai ..
Kuch der tak faltu awaaz aati rehti hai phir jab waiter unn logon ko serve karte time mobile chupake aagaya tha ab inko awaz clear aane lagi thi .
Awwaz- tum to aaj kal milte hi nahini ho pehle to shkal bhi nahini dikha rahi thi abhi kuch din se jaa rahi ho to mujh se mile bina hi chale aa rahe ho ..
Swati- waisa nahini hai Rocky . pehle mujhe didi se kiya wada nibhana tha unke saamne maine waise unke asli genhagaar ko rulaye bina kaise chali jaati ..
Rocky- par didi aap ko to masi ne mana kiya tha ye sab ke liye
Swati- mummy ke keh dene se kya ho gaya . maine pani ritu didi ko aise hi chod nahini sakti .. maine didi ko uss haal maine dekha hai jiss halat maine gara tu unhe dekhta to ab tak tu inn logon ka qatal kar chuka hota . wo to pata nahini papa aur mummy iss mamle ko kyun daba diya .. unko apni reputation ki bohat parwa thi na .. ye khabar bahar aati to unki badnami ho jati ki dekho diwang ji ki ristedaar ke sath aisa hua ..
Rocky- didi aap thoda shant ho jao ..
Swati- nahini rocky tu didi ko uss halat maine nahini dekha hai jiss halat maine maine unhe dekha hai mout se ladhte hue .. unke sath jo darindgi hua waisa to koi haivan bhi kisi ke sath na kare . kya galti thi unki pyar karne ki .. aare unhone to sirf pyar kiya tha bharosha kiya tha par kya mila unhe aakhirkaar dhoka aur haivaniyat ..mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai rocky jis din didi mere pass aayee thi . wo kitne khus thi ki wo maa ban ne wali thi . unke dil maine iss baat ka dar nahini tha ki agar ghar walon ko pata chal jaye to kya hoga .. unhe sara jamana ko apne pyar ke saamne thokar maar diya tha .. wo gayee thi uss Harami Nihar ko batane iss khusk kabhri ke bare maine usse ye baat batake surprise dene ko par hua kya unhe hi surprise mila wanah pe .. un logon ko mere di ke sath aisa karne se pehle thodi si bhi sharam nahini aaye .. wo Niahr jise wo pyar karti thi uss RB jinhe wo apni debar nahini balki bhai ki tarha maan ne lagi thi .. unhone ne hi unke sath chi .. aur sath maine unke jaan lene kikosis bhi ki .. chi ..
Unhe to sirf didi ke jism aur unke paise se matlab tha .. kash didi pehle hi papa ke baat maan jate ..
Rocky- didi nahini aap ro mat .. abhi to didi sahi hai n na doctor ka kehna hai ki unke halat ab bohat jaldi se sahi ho raha hai agar aisa hi chalta raha wo jaldi hi coma se bhi sahi ho jayengi ..
Swati- usi din ka to maine kab se intejaar kar rahi hoon rocky .. didi bas ek baar sahi ho jaye apne munh kholke phir se mujh se baat karne lag jaye .. unke ek gunehgaar ko to bhagwaan ne saja diya hai usko to maine didi ke liye chod rakha hoon .. usse to didi uski gunha ka hisaab karengi ..par iss RB ko maine rulaungi itna ki uske aankh se aansoo bhi sukh jaye ..
Rocky- pata hai didi mujhe jab pehle pata chala aap RB ke sath reltion maine hai maine to shock ho gaya . maine soch rha tha aap ko sab pata hai phir bhi .. aap uss se pyar .
Swati- pyar aur wo bhi uss fatichar se ..uss se agar kuch hai to sirf nafrat sirf aur nafrat .abhi to kuch nahini hai aage aage dekho main usse kaise tadpati hoon ..
Rocky- par didi abhi to aap sooraj ke stah relation maine ho aur phir aap ki shgai bhi kuch hi din maine hogi aap use filhaal ke liye jaane do usse maine dekh loonga ..
Swat- nahini .. usse koi kuch nahinii kareg a.. agar usse sirf chot ponhachani hoti to ye kaam to sachin bhaiya kab ke kar chuke hote . par mujhe usko chot nahini ponhachani hai usse rulana hai .. aur maine ache se jaanti hoon kaise karna hai .. abhi wo na jee payega na hi mar payega .. sir royega ..
Rocky- par did abhi to college khatam ho gaya wo yanah se kanhi aur chala jayega phir .
Swati- to tujhe kya lagta hai maine usse chod dongi nahini .. usse bohat rulaungi .. jab tak didi sahi nahini ho jati unke sare gunhegaar royenge .. khaskar ke iss RB ko .. wo Nihar to abhi pagal ho gaya hai usse khud ka koi hosh nahini usse abhi kuch kiya bhi to usse apne galti ka paschtatap nahini hoga . usse ek baar sahi hojaane do phir uska bhi number aayega tab tak .. isko to maine ..
Rocky- bas didi bas aap pehle khud ko sambhalo .. ye na ho uske chakar maine aap ko kuch ho jaye aap tension mat lo ab maine bhi aap ke sath hoo .. aap ye pani piyo first aur apna face wash kar ke aao .. socho aap ka aisa halat maine agar Ritu didi dekhengi to unhe kya feel hoga .
Swati- nahini mera mood ab bilkool acha nahini chal maine freash ho aati hoon phir nikalte hain ..
Rocky- thik hai di ..
Phir swati jaake freash hoke aati ahi aur phir wo nikal jaate hain unke jaane ke baad wohi waiter phone laake ritesh ko deta hai .. ritesh apne pocket se kuch notes nikal ke uske hath maine pakda deta hai aur wo bhi thank you kehke nikal jaat hai ..
Vicky aur dipika abhi bhi bhoot ki tarha bethe hue the ..
Ritesh – kya hua .. ye kya bol rahi thi kya ye sach hai ..
Dipika ab sar utha ke vicky ke taraf dekhti hai par vicky abhi bhi mano khaosh kuch gehri yadonmaine khoya hua tha ..
Dipika- kya hua tumhe vicky .kya hua //
Dipika- ritesh chalo yanah se kanhi bahar
Ritesh- yanhi pich eke tarraf hi ek park hai wanhi chalte hain ..
Dipiak aur ritesh kaise karke vicky ko uss park maine leke aate hain ..
Ritesh – yaar tu mujhe bata wo kya bol rahi thi ye ritu kon hai nihar kon hai wo RB ke bare maienkya bol rahi thi sab kuch mujhe bata .. jaldi se ..
Vicky- upar ke taraf dekhta hai phir dipika ke traf dekh ke pani ka ishara karta hai . dipika usse bottle deti ahi ..
Pani pine ke baad vicky ek gehra saan leta hai .. aur apne pocket se phone nikalta hai ..
Aur ek number dial karta hai ..
Vicky- hlw kanha pe hai ..
Uss tarf- *******
Vicky- RB hai ya chala gaya .
Uss taraf-********
Vicky sun kaise bhi karke usse apne sath rakhna jab tak maine call na karun .. kuch bhi ho jaye .. thik hai .
Uss taraf-***
Vicky phone cut karta hai aur mobile ko pocket maine daal deta hai .
Ritesh –ab bata kya hua ..
Vicky – hmm dekho mujhe to pura nahini pata iss bare maine aur aaj jo suna ussmaine kya sach hai kya jhut ye nahini bata sakta maine par ..
Ritesh- aabe tu paheli mat khel bata jaldi se ye ritu kon hai swati kya bol rahi thi ..
Vicky- to suno .. Nihar bhiaya ko to jaante ho na wo RB ke cousin hai . wo aur ritu college maine ek doosre ko pasand karte the . wo dono ek doosre ki bina ek pal bhi nahini reh pate the .. yanha tak ki jab bhi nihar bhaiya gaon aate the Ritu didi bhi unke sath hi gaon aajati thi ghar maine bahan bana ke .. wo RB ko aur mujhe bohat pyar karti thi . RB to mano unka dusra chota bhai tha .
Par pata nahini achanak kya hua unke Ritu did bohat pareshan rehne lagi thi .. hum jab puchte the to tab wo nahini batati thi par baad maien h pata chala ki ritu didi ke ghar maine unke riste ke bare maien jaan gaye the . pehle to unke ghar wale thoda bohat gussa hue par wo phir raji hoagye the par baad maien unke kuch relatives bich maine aagaye jo ki iss shadi ke shakt khilaaf the .. unhone uss time kitne baar nihar bhaiya ko dhamkaya gunde bhi bheje par na hi nihar bahiya na hi ritu didi iss bat se koi farak pad raha tha .. ab ritu didi bhi apne ghar walo ke saamne khulke saamne aagyee thi .. to aakhir kaar unke ghar wale raji ho gaye par ..unka kehna tha ki shadi yanah tak ki shagai bhi abhi nahini kara sakte kyun ki kuch problem hai kundli maine .. iss liye unhone 6 mahine baad karane ko bol diya .. sab kuch thiktha .. hum bhi khsu the ..
Par ek din bhaiya apne kuch colleg ke dosto ke sath ek dost ke ghar maien party kar rah ethe wanha wo nahini jaante par shyad daaru ke nashe maine wo aur ek ladki physical ho gaye ki wanha Ritu didi ponach gayee wo ye sab dekh ke bohat gussa hui .. wo uske baad Nihar bhaiya se baat karna band kardiya .. aur unse milna bhi band kardiya .. Nihar bahiya unhe samjhane ka bohat kosis kiya par wo nahini mani .. wo to keh diya tha ki unhe distrube na kare kyun ki wo kanhi aur shadi karne wali hai .. Nihar bahiya ab Ritu Didi se milne ke liye nikal gaye .. didi uss time ghar se hi bahar nahini nikalti thi .. par raste maien hi bhiaya ka accident ho gaya .. wo marte marte bache the par uss chot se wo pagal hoagyee din bhar sirf Ritu didi ke naam leke wo ote rehte the .. pata nahini kuch bhi bolne lagte the kabhi kabhi chillane lagte the ..
Phir ek din khabar aaye ki Ritu didi ne shadi kar liya hai aur wo Canada shift ho gayee hain ..
Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..
Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “
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