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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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Update No 61
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Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..


Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “

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swati- haan maine .kya hua vicky inhe pura kahani nahini sunaya ya phir tumhko bhi wohi jhut sunaya hai RB aur Bihar ne ..
ritesh- konsi baat aur tum wo andar kya baat kar rahi thi aur ritu ko I meam ritu didi ko kya hua .
swati- sabar rakho tum waise bhi maine tum logon ko batane to nahini wali thi par kya kare tum log ab tak sachai nahini jaante to tum log aaj bhi unn dono ghatiya aadmiyon ko acha maan rahi ho .. aaj unn dono bhaiyon ki mahanata ki baat tumhe bata ti hoo ..
swati- kya galti thi meri behan ki .. kya nahini tha uske pass .. paisa aishon aaram sab to uske pass pehle se tha sirf usne sacha pyar aur bharosha manga tha .. par ek galti uss se ho gayee aur wo thi aadmi pehchan ne main jiss ko wo apna har halat maine sath dene wala insaan mana tha wo to ek hawsi bhediya nikla ..
Meri didi to uske pyar maine pure gharwalon se ladh gayee thi yyanah tak mere papa ko bhi usne mana liya tha .. par faida kya hua . ek din mere didi bohat khusi se isse ye baat batane gaye the ki ghar wale inke shadi ke liye maan gay ehain par wo wanah kya dekhne ko paye ki unk apyar kisi aur ke bahon bistar maine pada hua hai .. uss raat didi kitna royee tjhi ye baat sirf maine hi jaanti hoon.. puri raat ro ro ke unke halat kharab ho gayee thi ..
Par agle din hi wo apna masoom chehera wal anakab pehen ke aagaya didi ke saamen didi ne usse milne ko mana kardiya . kuch din tak ye aise hi chalta raha par didi usse bohat pyar karti thi to iss liye usse aakhir kaar galti ke bawwjood maaf kardiya .
Par ek din didi aur maine market jaa rahe the ki wo ladki aagyee aur didi ko na jaan ekitna kuch sunaya .jab didi iss bare maine nihar se baat kiya to nihar ne unhe ye kaha ki mana kardiya ki wo baat karega didi tension na le .. par uske do din baad jab didi uske room maine usse bina batye ponhach gayee to wo phir se usi ladki ke sath bistar maine pada hua tha iss baar didi usse maaf karne ko tayar nahini thi didi ko itna ghussa aagya tha ki wo ghar walon ke pasand maine shadi karne ko ready ho gayee .. par wo kala din aaya jo sab badal ke rakh diya ..
Ek din didi ghar maine chup chap bethi hui thi .. maine wanha gayee hui thi to maine didi ko pucha tab mujhe didi ne batya ki wo pregnant hain..
Unhone ab ghar walo se shadi karne ko mana kardiya aur nihar ko ophir se ek baar maaf karne ko socha kyun ki ab bache ka sawaal tha .. ghar wale bhi iss baat se raji haogaye .. didi Nihar komilne ke liye bulaya .to usne didi ko ek jagha milne bulya a..
Kash uss din maine bhi didi ke sath chali jati ya didi ko jaane hi nahini deti ..
Uss ghatiya inssan se didi ko wanha bulaya .. phir wo aur uske bhai RB ne milke didi ka rape kiya phir didi ko jaan se maarne ki kosish ki hamien unke body nadi ke kinare mili unke pet maine sariya ghusa diya gaya tha unke sar
Pe bhi gehra chot aaya tha ..
maine uss time ek trip pe gayee hui thi . jab yanha aaye mujhe didi ke bare maien pata chala .. unke pet maien jo shariya ghusa tha uss se unka bacha mar gaya tha aur .. aur unke sar maine chot ke wajha se wo coma maine chali gayee thi ..
vicky- bolkool jhoot .. tumhari didi to shadi karke chali gayee thi .. aur nihar bhaiya ke bare maine tum aisa ghatiya ilzaam lagane ki kosis bhi mat karna .. ye to acha hua RB yanah nahini hai barna Nihar Bhaiya ke bare maien agar wo ye baat sunta to tum soch bhi nahini sakti wo tumhara kya karta ..
swati- aare waah itna bharosha hai tumhe apne uss Nahar bhaiya pe .. acha ek baat bato tumhare Nihar bhaiya uss time pe kanha gayab ho gaye the .. 3 mahine ke liye ..
vicky- gayab kyun ho gaye the wo unka tabiyat kharab tha isi liye wo medical maien admit the ..
swati- sach maine .. aur RB uska kya bahan doge ..
vicky- wo apne bua ke ghar gaya tha shimla ..
swati- acha aur wo kyun bhala .
vicky- unse milne ..
swati- milne ya phir police see bachne ke liye chupne ..
vicky- juaban sambhal ke bolo swati ..
swati- aur tumhare Pyare Nihar bahiaya koi medical maine bharti nahini the police ke hirasat maine the ..
vicky- bilkool jhoot .
swati- acha kya tum mile the unse hospital maine ya tumhe pata hai wo konse hospital maine the .
vicky- haan par mila tha ..
swati- haan par kab tum uss se uss time mile jab wo mental hone ka acting karke police station se nikal aaya ..
vicky- nahini..
swati- tum kuch nahini jaante ho abhi pehle jan lo ki kon kitna masoomiyat ka mukhota pehen rakha hai ..
swati- wo to uss time papa ne iss sab baton ko jada na badhane ki sochi kyun ki business maien ghata ho jata .. barna unn dono bhai koi mot ke munh se nahini bach asakta tha …puchna jaake apne nIhar Bhaiya ke mummy papa se agar unke bete itne hi shareef the to wo log har din hamare ghar ke saamne mere pap se ye kyun kehrahe the ki iss mamle ko kaise bhi karke khatam karde aur .. unke bete ko innn sab se nikal de..
vicky- par
swati- nahii pehle meri baat to sunlo .. unn dono bhai to police se bach gaye ek pagal hone ka acting karke aur ek minor hone ke kanooni khel khel ke ..
mere papa sirf ghar ke izzat ke liye police ko kaise bhi karke sambhal ke iss maamle ko daba diya aur na hi itna inn dodno bhai ko bhi police ke chungool se nikal diya ..
.par maine inn dono bhai ko nahini chodne ne wali .. uss Nihar ko Sab se jada RB se pyar tha na usko to dekho maine kya karti hoon … ek baar didi ko thik ho jaane do phir didi khud hi usko uske gunha ke saja dengi par iss RB ko to maine ab itna todungi ki wo soch bhi nahin sakta mere didi ne jitna bhi aansoo bahaya hai wo maien sab isi se badla loongi ..
Aur tum mere rastye maien aane ki sochna bhi mat bohat shouk hai na inn dono bhaiyon ko dusron ke jindegi auyr izzat se khelne ka .. maine chati thi to dono ko ek minute maine khatam karwa sakti thi .. par nahin maine inhe wohi dard duungi jo mere didi ne bhugta tha .. mere didi jis tarha pye maien tadpi thi isse bhi usi trah maine tad paungi ..
Dipika- par wo to ab tumhare sath nahini hai ..
Swati- maine kya usse aise hi chod dungi .. usse maine aise thodi na chod dungi usse to abhi aur bhi tadapana hoga ..
Sooraj- aare swati tum inke pass kya kar rahi ho maien tumhara uss die intezaar kar raha tha .
Swati- haan chalo maine abhi aati hoon ..
Sooraj ke jaane ke baad ..
Swati- I hope ki dipika tum ab jaan gaye hoge ki kon kya hai .. to bus aage se mujhko sawal mat karn a..aur haan jo baat hamare bich hui wo hamare bich hi rahe yehi acha hoga .. chalo chalti hoon bye ..
Uske baad swati wanha se chali jaati hai .
Ritesh- ye kya tu kuch bol raha hai wo kuch aur hi bol rahi hai ..aur wo bol rahi hai ki RB aur Nihar bhaiya ne Ritu ke sath aisa kiya ..
Dipika- jitna maine RB ko jaanti hoon wo aisa nahini kar sakta ..
Vicky- haan ye tumne thik kaha aur Nihar bhaiay ke baare maien aisa sochna bhiunke pyar ke khilaaf jadti hogi .. aare wo to Ritu ko itna pyar karte the ki uske shadi khabar sunke pagal hogay e..
Ritesh- ek minute iska matlab tu kehraha hai ki ritu ki yanah hone ki aur uske sath aisa hone ki tum ko khabar nahini thai ..
Vicky- janha tak mujhe pata hai humein to iss bare main kuch kahbar nahnini tha humein to pata tha ki ritu shadi karke canada chali gayee par wo yeh keh rahi hai .. aur yeh baat to maan hi nahini sakt ki bhiay ne aisa kiya hai par wo jo bol rahi hai uss maine kuch to sach lag raha hai .. mujhe pata karna padega asliyat maine kya hua tha ur haan tum iss baat RB ko nanhin bataogi ..
Ritesh- thik hai par humin iss bare maine jaldi se jaldi kuch karna padega ..
Vicky- tum ek kaam karo tum dono jao aur RB ka dhyan rakho usse swati ke aaspass bhi mat jane dena maine nahini chahat ki phir se uske sath kuch ho ..
Ritesh- aur tu
Vicky- maine jaa raha hoon kisi se milne jo mujhe sab kuch bata sake aakhirkaar sach kya hai ..
Dipika- maine bhi tumhare sath jaungi ..
Vicky- thikhai .
.ritesh- maine bhi chalta hoon phir.
Vicky- nahin tu RB ka dhyan rakh swati sooraj ya sachin se bas usse door rakhna kisi bhi halat maine tujhe jo karna pade kar bas jab tak sab pat ana lag jata usse inn sab se bas door rakhiyo ..
Ritesh- thik hai ..
Dipika- tum ek kaam karo .Anita aur RB ko leke hamare trip ke liye shopping karne chale jao ..
Ritesh – haan ye thik rahega ..
Ritesh wanha se chala jaat hai ..
Vicky bhi phone karke hostel se apna bike mangwa deta hai ..
Vicky aur Dipika chal padte hain ..
Dipika- tumhe kya lagta hai swati sach kehrahi hai ..
Vicky- kuch nahini keh sakta par itna sure hoon ki nihar bhiay aur RB ka iss maine kuch hath nahini hai aare nihar bhaiya ko bhi ye bhi nahini pata ki wo Ritu yanhi par hai kuch to baat hai jo alag hai . maine jitna samajh paa raha hoon uss time ke kuch batein hai jo hum se jaan bujh ke chupaye gaye hain .. puri baat kya hai wo pehle jan na hoga ..
Diipika – haan yeh tum thik keh rahe ho ..
Wanhi ritesh jaake RB ke pass ponhachta hai ..
RB abhi bhi apne doston ke sath ghoom raha tha .
Thodi der baat karne ke baad wo log bhi chale jaate hain ..
Ritesh- RB chal nikalte hain
RB – kis liye
Ritesh –aare college khatam hone wala hai na isiliye sab milke koi trip pe jaane ke bare maine soch rahe hain ..
RB – to
Ritesh- to ka kya matlab tu nahini jayega kya chal shopping karne chalte hain .. anita bhi aarahi hai ..
RB - haan to tu jaa na maine jaake kyun kabab maine haddi banu ..
Ritesh- aabe sala acting mat kar ab .. chal chup chap .
RB – thik hai ..
Dono wanha se aajate hain .ritesh Anita ko call karke bulati hai .. thodi der maine anita aur uski ek saheli aake ponhach jaate hain ..phir sab nikal padte hain ..
Jaisa ki hota hai mall maine ponhach ke ladkiyan to lag jaati hai ek shop se dooodre maine ghoomne maine ..
RB aur ritesh ussi floor maine bane ek waiting area maine beth jaate hain ..
RB – tujhe bol raha tha ki mujhe na aana tha .. isiliye ..
Ritesh- yaar sahi kaha chal na hamare liye kuch le lete hain ..
RB – haan jaa agar tereko dimag hi garam karna hai .. tu jitna time yanha ek saaman aur ek jeans ke dimaag kharab karega .. sadar bajar se 10 min maine pura stock utha layega .. ye shopping mall to ladkiyon ke liye bane hain .
Ritesh- ye tune sahi kaha sadar bajar to bas hamare liye jannat hai sala yanah se jitne maine kharidoonga uss se aadhe maine bhi wanha ache chiz mil jayenge .. sala kal wanhi se sab saaman uthaunga .. yanah kon faltu ka extraa kharcha karayega..
Tabhi anita aur uske dost rashmi wanha aajate hain ..
Anita – ritesh tum yanah kanha beth gaye chalo tum nahi kharidoge kuch ..
Ritesh- haan chalo ..
Ritesh wanha se chala jaat hai ..
RB –(dhire se ) fatu joru ka gulam)
Ritesh jaate hue RB ko ghoomke dekhta hai aur ishare se gaali deke nikla jata hai ..
Rashmi- RB tumhe kuch nahin kharidna hai ..
RB – nahini yaar mujhe kuch nahini kharina hai maine thik hoon tum jao ..
Rashmi- aare aise kaise maine suna tum log trip maine jaane wale ho .. to kuch to shopping karoge na .. aao tum
RB kuch bolta uss se pehel hi wo RB ka hath pakad ke wanha se le jaati hai ..

Rashmi ko ek shop se duusre shop leke uske liye apne pasand ka dress select karne maine lag gayee thi ..
RB – aare tum rehne do agar tumhe kuch pasand nahini aarah hai ..
Rashmi- pasand nahini aaraha hai nahini ho gaya hai .. ye lo ..
RB – kya yeh sab
Rashmi- haan lo jaldi try kar lo ..
RB – itna sab leke maine kya karunga do char hi de do ..
Rashmi uske baat sune bina hi usse wanah se trial room ke taraf dhaka de deti hai ..
RB kuch der maine sab try karke aata hai .. aur usse pack karne ko keh deta hai .
Rashmi- dekha kitni jaldi hogaya..
RB- haan thanks
Rashmi- nahini thanks se kaam nahini chalega ..
RB – aur
Rashmi- wo ..wo kya maine bhi chal sakti hoon tum logon ke sath ..
RB – thik hai ..
Rashmi- sach maine wo yeh bolke RB se gale lag jaati hai ..
Wanhi vicky aur dipika jaake ek jagha ponhachte hain ..
Dipika- yeh kanha aay e..
Vicky- ye Nihar bhaiya ka ek dost hai iss se sab kuch puchna hoga chaye kuch bhi karke ..
Dono andar jaate hain aur uss se milte hain ..
Vicky- manas bhaia hamien kuch jaan na hai aap se isi liye hum yanah aay ehain .
Manas – han batao ..
Vicky- dekho bahiya hum jo puchenge wo sab aapko sach batana hoga ..
Manas- kis baare maine
Vicky- nihar bhaiya aur ritu didi ke bare maine aap to unke saath hi the yeh to ho hi nahin sakta ki aap ko sab kuch pata na ho ..
Manas- par achanak ..
Vicky- wo swati hain na ritu di ki choti behan wo hamare sath hi padhti hai .. **************** wo hamain yeh sab boli .. par mujhe uski baat pe 1 % bhi bharosha nahini hai .. Niahar bahiay Aur RB ye to Impossible .. wo Nihar Bhaiya jo ki usse itna pyar karte the ki wo pagal ho gaye .. aur aap ko pata hai ritu yanhi pe hai
Mansa- haan mujhe pata hai ..
Vicky& dipika – kya
Vicky- aap hamain sab bataiye ..
Mans- thik hai ye baat kisi se batane ke liye mujhe mana kiya gaya tha par mujhe lagta hai ab tum logon ko bata dena sahi hoga ..to bat ye hai ki **********************************************(ye baad maine story main aayeg filhaal ke liye rehne dete hian )
Unke sab bolne ke baad vicky aur dipika ko apne kaam, maien bhi bharosha nahini ho raha tha ..
Vicky- bahrosha nahini hota hai yeh sab hamare saamne hi hua par humko pata bhi nahini chala yeh sab..
Dipika- par swati ko kya yeh pata nahin hai ..
Manas- jsike paas ye khabar jaise ponhacha gaya wo usse waisa hi maan liya ..
Dipika- to swati ko hum samjahyeneg to
Manas- koi faida nahini Nihar ne already kosis kiya tha ulta wo Nihar ko hi apne ghar walo se maar khilake police hawale kardiya tha .. aur mera mano to RB ko uss se jitna jaldi ho sake dur karo .. wo bilkool pagal ho chuki hai wo kuch bhi kar sakti hai ..
Vicky- thank s bhai ..
Uske baad wo wanha se bahar aajte hain ..
Vicky- matlab mera douby=t sahi tha koi kitna niche gir sakta hai .. chi .. humain RB ko swati se dur karna hoga kaise bhi karke uske dimaag se swati naam ka bhoot utarna hoga ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo mujhe pata hai kya karna hai ..
Wanhi doosre aur
Ritesh- aare chalo RB ke pass wo bore ho raha hoga ..
Anita- maine tumhe isiliye hi yanah le aayi thi
Ritesh- matlab
Anita – wo actually rashmi mujhe bol rahi thi ki wo RB ko like karti hai to maine usse RB ke sath akela chod diya
Ritesh- tum ek no ki( phir wo sochta hai ki acha hai kaise bhi karke RB ko swati se door karna hai to yeh rashmi kaam aa sakti ahi ) thikhai ..
Anita- tum gussa nahini ho na
Ritesh- maine tum pe gussa ho sakta hoon .. ohh shit ye yanah
Anita- kya hua
Ritesh- swati RB kanha hai ..
Anita – niche wale section maine honeg ..
Ritesh bhagta hua uss tarf jaata hai uske piche anita bhi bhagte hue jaati hai ..
Ye wohi waqt hota hai jab rashmi ne RB ko hug kar rahi thi ..usi time ek taraf se ritesh aur doosre taraf se swati ,ussi jagha pe ponhach jaate hain …
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai...... To swaty ko ye pata hai ki nihar oe RB ritu ko dhoka diya hai......or asal me baat kuch or hi hai..... Dekhte hai sach kya hai.....or swaty RB ke sath sath or kya jarty hai or RB kaise bardasht karta hai.......or mahal me kya hota hai.....reshmi ye janti hai ki barsha RB ko like karti hai to reshmi kaise ye kar sackti hai....reahmi ka ye koi chal to nhi hai..... Or sab ek jagah pe joma huye to dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
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Itna bda jhol, maine bich me ye story chhod di thi aaj suraj k election jeetne k baad k saare naye updates padhe,maja aa gya. Sahi ja rahe ho bhai, keep updating....
welcome back bhai ..
 
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai...... To swaty ko ye pata hai ki nihar oe RB ritu ko dhoka diya hai......or asal me baat kuch or hi hai..... Dekhte hai sach kya hai.....or swaty RB ke sath sath or kya jarty hai or RB kaise bardasht karta hai.......or mahal me kya hota hai.....reshmi ye janti hai ki barsha RB ko like karti hai to reshmi kaise ye kar sackti hai....reahmi ka ye koi chal to nhi hai..... Or sab ek jagah pe joma huye to dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
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bhai yeh baat sach hai ki rashmi yeh jaanti thi ki barsha rb ko like karti thi par wo bohat purani baat ho chuka hai wo first year ke baat thi par wo sirf itna hi jaanti thi ki barsha rb ko like karti hai usse yeh nahini pata hai ki barsha usse pyar karti hai .. aur upar se barsha bhi ke liye yanha hai nahini hai wo college chod chuki hai aur upar se wo kisi se contact maine bhi nahini hai ..
 

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Ritesh- tum ek no ki( phir wo sochta hai ki acha hai kaise bhi karke RB ko swati se door karna hai to yeh rashmi kaam aa sakti ahi ) thikhai ..
Anita- tum gussa nahini ho na
Ritesh- maine tum pe gussa ho sakta hoon .. ohh shit ye yanah
Anita- kya hua
Ritesh- swati RB kanha hai ..
Anita – niche wale section maine honeg ..
Ritesh bhagta hua uss tarf jaata hai uske piche anita bhi bhagte hue jaati hai ..
Ye wohi waqt hota hai jab rashmi ne RB ko hug kar rahi thi ..usi time ek taraf se ritesh aur doosre taraf se swati ,ussi jagha pe ponhach jaate hain

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Ritesh- RB chal yanha se jaldi.

RB- rashmi kya kar rahi ho hato .

Rashmi- ohh soory main kabhi dosto ke sath yun ghoomne nahini gayee hoon na bas isiliye jada khus hoagyee..sorry

RB – it ok .

Ritesh- chal yanha se jaldi ..

RB – kya hua tu aise kyun bol raha hai ..

Swati- aare kya hua kyun distrube kar rahe ho tum ritesh dekh nahini rahe ho sir apne agle sikar ke piche lage hain .. continue ..continue ..

Anita- rashmi tum chalo yanah se ..

Swati- kyun mere aane se kya sab ka mood kharab ho gaya .. ohh rashmi tujh se to aisi ummed nahin thi .tujhe pure college maine koi nahini mila isike ilwa ishq ladhane ko ..

Rashmi- haan to iss se tujhe kya ..tu pani kaam dekh na tum dono ka to break up ho chuka hai to wo kuch bhi kare uss se tunhe kya ..

RB – rashmi tum chup raho ..

Swati- kyun bolne do .. pata to chale ki kitna jhoote bato se usse fasa rakha hai .. thodi si bhi saram nahini aati hai .. maine nahini mili to kya naam hai uska rinki ya nisha wo ., uske sath dil bhargaya to rashmi .. chi aur tum jaise ghatiya aadmi se kya bhi umeed kiya jaa sakta hai ..

RB – swati ye tum kya keh rahi ho .. maine tumhe kitna baar bol chuk ahoon ,, aur waise bhi tum ne hi to kaha tha na ki tumhare saamne na aaun aur tum se baat bhi na karu to phir tum kyun khud jaan bujh kar ye kar rahi ho .

Swati- haan haan iska matlab tumhe kis aur ke jindegi bhi barbaad karne doon kabhi nahini ,,

RB- swati tum jaanti ho ki wo galti se hua tha phir bhi aur waise bhi maine kuch bhi karun tumhe kya tum jao apne uss sooraj ke pass ..

Swati- haan wo to jaungi tumhare jaise ghatia insaan ke pass thodi na hoti ..

RB – thik hai .. phir maine chalta hoon bye .

Swati haan jao par aage se maine tumhe kisi bhi ladki ke aas pass bhi dekha na to tumhare liye acha nahini hoga.. maine nahini chahiti ki tum phir kisi ko apne hawas ki chapet main lo .

RB bohat ho gaya tumhara bohat sunliya .. ab bas ab mera jo man hai maine wo karunga jiske sath ho uske sath ghoomunga ..rashmi yanah aana jara ..

Rashmi RB ke pass aati hai .

RB – rashmi agar maine tumhar ahth pakdun to koi ait raaz hai ..

Rashmi- nahini par …… nahini koi ait raaz nahini hai ..

RB – thik hai rashmi ka hath pakad ke tum pooch rahi thi na kal chalne ke liye hamare sath ab maien khud tumhe invite karta hoon mere sath chalne ko ..

Swati- hath chodo uska

RB – ab tum ko kya problem hai tumhe jo karna hai karo maine jo bhi karun tumhe usse se kya jab rashmi ko iss se koi problem nahin hai ..

Swati- par maine nahini chahti ki tum bhi iske jindegi kharab kardo agar raji ho gayee to tumhare bister pe barna uske sath bhi jabardasti rape karoge ,,

RB – swati pagal ho kya ye kya bol rahai ho ..

Swati- aur nahini to kya tum apne aap bohat doodh ke dhule hue maante ho na tumhe kya lagta hai yanha koi tumhari sachai nahini jaanta hai .. rapist kanhi ke ..

Ritesh- swati apni jaban sambhal ke baat kiya karo RB tu chal na yanah se .

RB – nanhini rukh mujhe sun na hai aaj ..haan tum bolo kya bol rahi thi ..

Swati – kyun sab ke saamne apne munh kala karane cahhate ho chale jao yanha se ..

RB – nahini ab to mujhe jaan na hai ki maine aisa kya kiya hai ki tum mujh se iotna nafrat karte ho ..

Swati- acha thik hai suno tum rapist ho sirf tum nahini tumhara wo Nihar bhaiya tum dono rapist ho samjhe ..

RB –swati jaban sambhalke mujhe chahe kuch bhi bol lo par Nihar bahiya ke baare maien ek bhi gande waord apne jaban pe mat lana ..

Swati- kyun kya hua bohat pyar umad raha hai apne bhai ke liye ..to meri behen ne kya paap kiye the jo tum dono darindo ne uske sath aisa kiya ..

RB – swati apne had maine raho ..aur ho sake to apna dimaag ka ilaaz karwao .. chalo sab yanah se ..

Swati- kyun ab bhag kyun rahe ho .. dar gaye kya .. agar kisi ladki ka izzat lutne ka himmat hai to baatein sun ne ki bhi himmat rakho na .. dono bhai bujdil ho samjhe ..

RB – swati maine tumhe aakhir baar keh raha hoon aage se galti se bhi mere bhai ke bare maien kuch mat kehna .. barna anjaam acha nahini hoga ..

Swati- kya karoge .. acha jaise tumhare nIhar bhaiya aur tum milke mere Ritu didi ka raope kiya tha waisa mera bhi karoge ..

“chataaak” “ chataak”

RB- tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Nihar bhaiya ke bare maien aur Ritu didi ke bare maine aisa bolne ko ..

Swati( apne gaal ko hath se sehlaate hue ) ha ha ha kya kaha “Ritu Didi” acha to jab uss Ritu didi ke izzat ko bhediye ke tarha loot rahe the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo “ritu didi “ hai ya phir jab usse aar ke nadi kinare phek aaye the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo tumhari “ritu Didi “ hai .. maine wohi Ritu ki Behan hoon samjhe .. jiss ne tumhare Uss Nihar bhaiya se pyar kiya tha bharosa kiya tah aur tumhe apne Chote bhai se jaad maan ti thi .. par tum chi ..

RB – tum ritu didi ke behan ho ..pagal jaise baaten mat karo .. thik hai .. ritu didi mere aur Nihar bhai ke liye kya hai wo hum jaante hai .. aur wo ab canad maine hai .. apni ye gande dimaag ke upaj ko apne pass tak hi rakho ..

Swati- acha sach maine kya .. to phir (apna phone nikal ke photo dikhate hu) ye kon hai jo do saal se mot se hardin ladh rahi hai .. ab bato apne kiye pap se tum bach nahini sakte .. tumne jo mere didi ke sath kiya hai uska saza to tumhe aur tumhare bhai ko bhogna hi hoga ..

Tabhi wanha pe dipika aur vicky aaajte hain jinhe ritesh ne call karliya tha ..wo RB ko khichte hue wanha se le jaate hain ..

RB sirf swati ko dekhe jaaraha tha uska najar sirf swati ke chehere aur uske hath maine pakde phone pe hi tha ..

RB ko leke vicky aur group wanah door chal;e jaate hain ..

Swati wanhi khade hue abhi bhi roye jaa rahi thi ..

Swati- tum ne ye acha nahini kiya RB mujhe sab ke saamne thappad mar aur mere didi ke sath aisa karne ke baad mujhe laga tha tumhe thoda sa to sahi iska paschatap hoga par tum …… ab dekho maine kya karti hoon ..

Swati apni phone nikal ke kisi ko call karti hai ..

Swati- hlw ,maine swati bol rahi hoo. Ek final kaam tha ..

Uss side-*************

Swati- kya matlab tum mera kaam nahini karogi .pagal mat bano yeh tumhari liye ek achi chance hai ..

Usss ide***********

Swati- to uss se kya hua ..agar thodi si jhut bolne se kuch hasil ho sakta hai to jhut bol dena chahiye ..

Uss side***********

Swati- thik hai maine tumhe kuch bhejti hoon ab tumhare upar hai ki tum wo karogi ya nahin waise bhi tum itna jhoot bol hi chuki ho ki ab tumhara ek aur jhoot bolne se kuch nahini hoga . aur waise bata doon tumhari jagha leel koi aur aagyee hai ..

Uss side******

Swati- uss se tumhe kya farak padta hai .. waise tumhe uss ladki ka naam aur pic bheja hai dekh lo ab tum pe hai tum usse kisi aur ke hone deti ho ya phir thoda sa jhoot se usse pana chahate ho ..maine inteejjar karoongi maine kuch karne jaa rahi hoo agar 2 ghante ke andar tum wo karti ho to samajh jana wo tumhara hua barna usse bhul jana hamesha ke liye bye ..

Uss side ke kya nswer aaye usse sune bina hi swati ne call kaat diya ek baar apne gale maine pade locket ko dekha phir kuch sochke wanha se chali gayee.

Vicky aur group sab RB ko leke wanha se dur ek jagha leke aate hain ..

Ritesh – anita tum jao abhi maine tumhe baad maine milta hoon thik hai ..

Anita- par (ritesh usse ishara se kuch kehta hai ) thik hai maine jaati hoon par mujhe khabar dete rehna thik hai .. bye .rashmi chhal ..

Rashmi- nahini maine yanhi hoon tu jaa.

Anita- tujhe kaha na aane ke liye chal ..

Anita rashmi ko leke wanha se chali jaati hai ..aur jaate jate ritesh ko call karne ko ishara kar ke chali jati hai .

RB abhi bhi chup chap sirf betha hua tha .

Vicky- RB tu thik to hai na ..

RB – tune suna usne kya kah koi kisi se itna nafrat kaise kar sakti hai .tujhe pata hai usne kya kha usne mujhe rapist kaha Nihar bhai ko rapist kaha aur wo bhi ritu didi ka .. ritu didi canad nahin gayee.. hey bhagbaan ye kya hai ..

Vicky- bhai tu pehle shant ho jaa thoda .. maine tujhe sab bata ta hoon ..

Vicky- diipika pani dena .

Dipika pani ka bottle RB ko deti hai ..

RB pani ka bottle ko ek hi baar maine aadhe se bhi jada gale maine utar deta hai aur baki ko apne hi sar maine daal deta hai .. par jo dukh aur gussa uske dimag ko garam kar rahi thi usse sirf pani se thanda nahini kiya jaaa sakta tha .

Vicky- bhai sun tujhe kuch batana hai jo baat hum se chupai gayee thi .

RB – mujhe kuch nahini sun na hai .. plz mujhe abhi akela chod de .. mujhe usse dikahan hai usne himmat kaise ki Nihar bahiya ke bare maine aise kehne ki aur ritu didi ke bare maine aise kehne ki .. kehti hai maine aur nihar bhaiya ritu didi ke sath .. chi maine to juban pe kehne bhar se bhi mujhe saram aati hai ..

Vicky- bhai wo galat nahini keh rahi hai ..

RB – kya kha tune tera matlab ki ..

Vicky- pehle meri baat to sun le jo wo jaanti hai wo uske liye sach hai ..

RB – kehna kya chahata hai tu .

Vicky- to sun .. maine aur dipika aaj manish bhaiya ke pass gaye the poochne ke liye .. ************************** isiliye wo tujh se itni nafrat karti hai ..

RB – par usse kyun saaf saaf nahini dikh raha hai aur ritu didi ne usse kuch nahini batay ..

Vicky- wo abhi coma maine hai .. hum ne jo khbar sun rakhi thi ki wo shadi karke canada chali gayee wo jhut thi .. par swati ko samjhake bhi koi faida nahini hai wo puri tarha se pagal ho chuki hai .. pehle ek ki bali chad chuki hai aur ye bhi ussi raste maien chal rahi hai ..ya to yeh tujhe barbaad kardegi ya phir khud bhi wohi haal kar bethegi jo Ritu ki hui hai .. maine to yeh samajh nahini paa raha hoon abhi tak wo shant kyun hai ..

Dipika- kya pta kya chal raha ho uske dimaag maine ..

RB – thik hai maine swati ko samjahunga ..

Vicky- aur wo kaise wo teri batein manegi .. tujhe kya lagta hai tu pehle hai .. Nihar bhaiya bhi kosis karchuke the wo unke hi khilaf case kardiya .. wo ab itne badle ki aag maine jal rahi hai ki teri koi bhi safai usse kaan tak nahini jayegi upar se wo ulta jada gussa ho jayegi .. aur tu proove kya dega kuch tere hath nahini aayega .. na hi kuch saboot bacha hai na hi koi saamne aayega batane ko .. sach do hi log bayan kar sakte the ek Nihar bhaiya aur tujhe to pata hai unke halat kaisa hai wo jo bolenge koi yakeen bhi nahini karega aur doosra ritu didi jo bol nahini sakti ..

RB – to tu hi bata maine kya karu ..

Vicky – kuch nahin filhaal ke liye sab time ke hath maine chod de .. sab thik ho jayega ..

RB – par swati wo sirf isi gusse ke chalte sooraj se shagai kardegi ..

Vicky- pagal jaisi baatein mat kar wo tujh se guuse ke wajha se rista nahin tod rahi hai balki gusse ke wajha se wo tujh se rista jodi thi .. tujhe kya lagta hai wo tujh se pyar karti thi wo sirf tujhe takleef ponhachana chahati thi ..

Tujhe kya laga tujh se wo yun exam se kuch din pehele hi kyun break up kiya .. taki tu usse kabhi na bhul paye wo tujhe waisa hi tadpana chahati thi ..

RB – par bhai tu samajh nahini raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh mujhe tere liye jo acha laga miane wo bol diya ab karna ya na krna tere upar hai . par jo bhi karega maine tere sath hoon .. dipika chalo isse akela rehne do ..

Dipika- tum chalo maine aati hoon thode der main .

Dipika- RB , tum uss se abhi dur hi raho tum jaante nahini ho wo kitna nafrat karti hai tum se ..

RB – par tumhi hi kaho maine uske bina kaise reh sakta hoon .

Dipika- to tum kya karoge .. dekho waise bhi tumhe usse wo karne dena chahiye jiss se usse khusi mile tumhi to uss din keh rahe the ki bas wo khus rahe phir chahe wo kisi ke bhi sath rahe aur ab tum jaante ho na Ritu didi ke sath kya hua kanhi wo swati ke ..

RB – nahini maine aisa nahini hone doonga ..

Dipika – bas yehi to keh rahi hoon maine .. agar tum uske sath na rehte ho sirf tumhe bura lagega aur dard hoga par agar tumhe usse wapas pana chahte ho to sirf tumhe nahini bohat se logon ko dukh hoga ..kya tum yeh chhate ho..

RB – hmm waise bhi maine usse bada kiya tha ki usse exam ke baad shkal nahini dikhaunag .. to thik hai abhi chahe kuch bhi ho mujhe kitna bhi dard ho maine uske bare maine naini sochunga ..

Dipika- yeh hui na baat .. chalo ab mood thoda thik karo ..

RB – par Nihar Bhai ke sath Jin logon ne aisa kiya aur Ritu did ke sath jinhone aisa kiya unn logon ko to maine aise nahini chod sakta hoon ..

Dipika- aur tum kya karoge .. kya kar paoge un ka .. kuch nahini .. tumhe iss se milge kya .. kuch nahini par tum iss se kya kho sakte ho sab kuch .a bhi tumhare pass jo bhi bacha hai wo sab kuch .. socho un maa bapon ka jo apne bete ke liye itna sab kuch she gaye .. kitni beijjati hui hogi unki unka lagbhag sab kuch chin gaya .. unka beta apna dimagi santulan kho beta par wo aaj bhikhus hai sirf kis liye tum sab ko iss baat se kuch takleef an ho uss liye .. tumhari iss kadam se un sab ko takleef hogi ..

RB – tum sahi kehti ho.. mujhe sab ke khusi dekhni hogi apni nahin .. waise thanks ..

Dipika- wo kis liye..

RB – itne pyar se samjhane ke liye ..

Dip[ika- haan wo to karoongi hi na ek to tum mere dost ho aur upar se aage devar bhi ho .. aur ek baat yaad rakhna tum sirf vicky ke liye hi bhai jaise nahini ho mere liye bhi bhai jaisi ho ..

RB – sach maine vicky bohat lucky hai jisse tum jaisi samajh daar life partner milne wala hai ..

Dipika- sach maine

RB- aur nahini to kya bhavi ji ..

Dipika- ahhhh sun ne maine kitna acha lag raha hai aaj se yehi bulana thik hai ..

RB – thik hai bhavi

Dipika RB ko phir se muskurate dekh ke bohat khus thi ..

Dipika- ab jao apne dost se bhi baat kar lo gussa hua hai tum pe wo ..

RB – thik ahi ..

RB vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

RB – vicky bhai maaf karde maine samajh gaya jo tu keh raha tha ..

Vicky- kyun ab dimag maine kaise baat ghus gayee ..

RB – wo tu kuch bhi bak bak kar raha tha na uss liye kuch samajh nahini aa raha tha ab bhavi ne itne pyar se samjahaya to samjh maine aagaya .

Vicky- bhavi kon bhavi ?

Dipika- kon se kya matlab aur kitne hain ki tumhe pata nahin chal raha hai wo kiski baat kar raha hai .

Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

Uss side******

RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn

RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Chinturocky

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Behtareen update,
Kahi usake gharwale hi usake khilaf saazish to nahi ker rahe. Asali gunahgar kaun hai. Mujhe Lagta hai ki is baar jo bhi final kand hone wala hai use bhi suspense me rakhkar vartman me Lana chahiye aur dono suspense ko end me khulana chahiye.
RB ki maa ko kuchh nahi hua hai ye bhi Shayad koi saazish hi ho.
 

sorbobhuk

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Ritesh- tum ek no ki( phir wo sochta hai ki acha hai kaise bhi karke RB ko swati se door karna hai to yeh rashmi kaam aa sakti ahi ) thikhai ..
Anita- tum gussa nahini ho na
Ritesh- maine tum pe gussa ho sakta hoon .. ohh shit ye yanah
Anita- kya hua
Ritesh- swati RB kanha hai ..
Anita – niche wale section maine honeg ..
Ritesh bhagta hua uss tarf jaata hai uske piche anita bhi bhagte hue jaati hai ..
Ye wohi waqt hota hai jab rashmi ne RB ko hug kar rahi thi ..usi time ek taraf se ritesh aur doosre taraf se swati ,ussi jagha pe ponhach jaate hain

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Ab Aage
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Ritesh- RB chal yanha se jaldi.

RB- rashmi kya kar rahi ho hato .

Rashmi- ohh soory main kabhi dosto ke sath yun ghoomne nahini gayee hoon na bas isiliye jada khus hoagyee..sorry

RB – it ok .

Ritesh- chal yanha se jaldi ..

RB – kya hua tu aise kyun bol raha hai ..

Swati- aare kya hua kyun distrube kar rahe ho tum ritesh dekh nahini rahe ho sir apne agle sikar ke piche lage hain .. continue ..continue ..

Anita- rashmi tum chalo yanah se ..

Swati- kyun mere aane se kya sab ka mood kharab ho gaya .. ohh rashmi tujh se to aisi ummed nahin thi .tujhe pure college maine koi nahini mila isike ilwa ishq ladhane ko ..

Rashmi- haan to iss se tujhe kya ..tu pani kaam dekh na tum dono ka to break up ho chuka hai to wo kuch bhi kare uss se tunhe kya ..

RB – rashmi tum chup raho ..

Swati- kyun bolne do .. pata to chale ki kitna jhoote bato se usse fasa rakha hai .. thodi si bhi saram nahini aati hai .. maine nahini mili to kya naam hai uska rinki ya nisha wo ., uske sath dil bhargaya to rashmi .. chi aur tum jaise ghatiya aadmi se kya bhi umeed kiya jaa sakta hai ..

RB – swati ye tum kya keh rahi ho .. maine tumhe kitna baar bol chuk ahoon ,, aur waise bhi tum ne hi to kaha tha na ki tumhare saamne na aaun aur tum se baat bhi na karu to phir tum kyun khud jaan bujh kar ye kar rahi ho .

Swati- haan haan iska matlab tumhe kis aur ke jindegi bhi barbaad karne doon kabhi nahini ,,

RB- swati tum jaanti ho ki wo galti se hua tha phir bhi aur waise bhi maine kuch bhi karun tumhe kya tum jao apne uss sooraj ke pass ..

Swati- haan wo to jaungi tumhare jaise ghatia insaan ke pass thodi na hoti ..

RB – thik hai .. phir maine chalta hoon bye .

Swati haan jao par aage se maine tumhe kisi bhi ladki ke aas pass bhi dekha na to tumhare liye acha nahini hoga.. maine nahini chahiti ki tum phir kisi ko apne hawas ki chapet main lo .

RB bohat ho gaya tumhara bohat sunliya .. ab bas ab mera jo man hai maine wo karunga jiske sath ho uske sath ghoomunga ..rashmi yanah aana jara ..

Rashmi RB ke pass aati hai .

RB – rashmi agar maine tumhar ahth pakdun to koi ait raaz hai ..

Rashmi- nahini par …… nahini koi ait raaz nahini hai ..

RB – thik hai rashmi ka hath pakad ke tum pooch rahi thi na kal chalne ke liye hamare sath ab maien khud tumhe invite karta hoon mere sath chalne ko ..

Swati- hath chodo uska

RB – ab tum ko kya problem hai tumhe jo karna hai karo maine jo bhi karun tumhe usse se kya jab rashmi ko iss se koi problem nahin hai ..

Swati- par maine nahini chahti ki tum bhi iske jindegi kharab kardo agar raji ho gayee to tumhare bister pe barna uske sath bhi jabardasti rape karoge ,,

RB – swati pagal ho kya ye kya bol rahai ho ..

Swati- aur nahini to kya tum apne aap bohat doodh ke dhule hue maante ho na tumhe kya lagta hai yanha koi tumhari sachai nahini jaanta hai .. rapist kanhi ke ..

Ritesh- swati apni jaban sambhal ke baat kiya karo RB tu chal na yanah se .

RB – nanhini rukh mujhe sun na hai aaj ..haan tum bolo kya bol rahi thi ..

Swati – kyun sab ke saamne apne munh kala karane cahhate ho chale jao yanha se ..

RB – nahini ab to mujhe jaan na hai ki maine aisa kya kiya hai ki tum mujh se iotna nafrat karte ho ..

Swati- acha thik hai suno tum rapist ho sirf tum nahini tumhara wo Nihar bhaiya tum dono rapist ho samjhe ..

RB –swati jaban sambhalke mujhe chahe kuch bhi bol lo par Nihar bahiya ke baare maien ek bhi gande waord apne jaban pe mat lana ..

Swati- kyun kya hua bohat pyar umad raha hai apne bhai ke liye ..to meri behen ne kya paap kiye the jo tum dono darindo ne uske sath aisa kiya ..

RB – swati apne had maine raho ..aur ho sake to apna dimaag ka ilaaz karwao .. chalo sab yanah se ..

Swati- kyun ab bhag kyun rahe ho .. dar gaye kya .. agar kisi ladki ka izzat lutne ka himmat hai to baatein sun ne ki bhi himmat rakho na .. dono bhai bujdil ho samjhe ..

RB – swati maine tumhe aakhir baar keh raha hoon aage se galti se bhi mere bhai ke bare maien kuch mat kehna .. barna anjaam acha nahini hoga ..

Swati- kya karoge .. acha jaise tumhare nIhar bhaiya aur tum milke mere Ritu didi ka raope kiya tha waisa mera bhi karoge ..

“chataaak” “ chataak”

RB- tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Nihar bhaiya ke bare maien aur Ritu didi ke bare maine aisa bolne ko ..

Swati( apne gaal ko hath se sehlaate hue ) ha ha ha kya kaha “Ritu Didi” acha to jab uss Ritu didi ke izzat ko bhediye ke tarha loot rahe the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo “ritu didi “ hai ya phir jab usse aar ke nadi kinare phek aaye the tab yaad nahini aaya ki wo tumhari “ritu Didi “ hai .. maine wohi Ritu ki Behan hoon samjhe .. jiss ne tumhare Uss Nihar bhaiya se pyar kiya tha bharosa kiya tah aur tumhe apne Chote bhai se jaad maan ti thi .. par tum chi ..

RB – tum ritu didi ke behan ho ..pagal jaise baaten mat karo .. thik hai .. ritu didi mere aur Nihar bhai ke liye kya hai wo hum jaante hai .. aur wo ab canad maine hai .. apni ye gande dimaag ke upaj ko apne pass tak hi rakho ..

Swati- acha sach maine kya .. to phir (apna phone nikal ke photo dikhate hu) ye kon hai jo do saal se mot se hardin ladh rahi hai .. ab bato apne kiye pap se tum bach nahini sakte .. tumne jo mere didi ke sath kiya hai uska saza to tumhe aur tumhare bhai ko bhogna hi hoga ..

Tabhi wanha pe dipika aur vicky aaajte hain jinhe ritesh ne call karliya tha ..wo RB ko khichte hue wanha se le jaate hain ..

RB sirf swati ko dekhe jaaraha tha uska najar sirf swati ke chehere aur uske hath maine pakde phone pe hi tha ..

RB ko leke vicky aur group wanah door chal;e jaate hain ..

Swati wanhi khade hue abhi bhi roye jaa rahi thi ..

Swati- tum ne ye acha nahini kiya RB mujhe sab ke saamne thappad mar aur mere didi ke sath aisa karne ke baad mujhe laga tha tumhe thoda sa to sahi iska paschatap hoga par tum …… ab dekho maine kya karti hoon ..

Swati apni phone nikal ke kisi ko call karti hai ..

Swati- hlw ,maine swati bol rahi hoo. Ek final kaam tha ..

Uss side-*************

Swati- kya matlab tum mera kaam nahini karogi .pagal mat bano yeh tumhari liye ek achi chance hai ..

Usss ide***********

Swati- to uss se kya hua ..agar thodi si jhut bolne se kuch hasil ho sakta hai to jhut bol dena chahiye ..

Uss side***********

Swati- thik hai maine tumhe kuch bhejti hoon ab tumhare upar hai ki tum wo karogi ya nahin waise bhi tum itna jhoot bol hi chuki ho ki ab tumhara ek aur jhoot bolne se kuch nahini hoga . aur waise bata doon tumhari jagha leel koi aur aagyee hai ..

Uss side******

Swati- uss se tumhe kya farak padta hai .. waise tumhe uss ladki ka naam aur pic bheja hai dekh lo ab tum pe hai tum usse kisi aur ke hone deti ho ya phir thoda sa jhoot se usse pana chahate ho ..maine inteejjar karoongi maine kuch karne jaa rahi hoo agar 2 ghante ke andar tum wo karti ho to samajh jana wo tumhara hua barna usse bhul jana hamesha ke liye bye ..

Uss side ke kya nswer aaye usse sune bina hi swati ne call kaat diya ek baar apne gale maine pade locket ko dekha phir kuch sochke wanha se chali gayee.

Vicky aur group sab RB ko leke wanha se dur ek jagha leke aate hain ..

Ritesh – anita tum jao abhi maine tumhe baad maine milta hoon thik hai ..

Anita- par (ritesh usse ishara se kuch kehta hai ) thik hai maine jaati hoon par mujhe khabar dete rehna thik hai .. bye .rashmi chhal ..

Rashmi- nahini maine yanhi hoon tu jaa.

Anita- tujhe kaha na aane ke liye chal ..

Anita rashmi ko leke wanha se chali jaati hai ..aur jaate jate ritesh ko call karne ko ishara kar ke chali jati hai .

RB abhi bhi chup chap sirf betha hua tha .

Vicky- RB tu thik to hai na ..

RB – tune suna usne kya kah koi kisi se itna nafrat kaise kar sakti hai .tujhe pata hai usne kya kha usne mujhe rapist kaha Nihar bhai ko rapist kaha aur wo bhi ritu didi ka .. ritu didi canad nahin gayee.. hey bhagbaan ye kya hai ..

Vicky- bhai tu pehle shant ho jaa thoda .. maine tujhe sab bata ta hoon ..

Vicky- diipika pani dena .

Dipika pani ka bottle RB ko deti hai ..

RB pani ka bottle ko ek hi baar maine aadhe se bhi jada gale maine utar deta hai aur baki ko apne hi sar maine daal deta hai .. par jo dukh aur gussa uske dimag ko garam kar rahi thi usse sirf pani se thanda nahini kiya jaaa sakta tha .

Vicky- bhai sun tujhe kuch batana hai jo baat hum se chupai gayee thi .

RB – mujhe kuch nahini sun na hai .. plz mujhe abhi akela chod de .. mujhe usse dikahan hai usne himmat kaise ki Nihar bahiya ke bare maine aise kehne ki aur ritu didi ke bare maine aise kehne ki .. kehti hai maine aur nihar bhaiya ritu didi ke sath .. chi maine to juban pe kehne bhar se bhi mujhe saram aati hai ..

Vicky- bhai wo galat nahini keh rahi hai ..

RB – kya kha tune tera matlab ki ..

Vicky- pehle meri baat to sun le jo wo jaanti hai wo uske liye sach hai ..

RB – kehna kya chahata hai tu .

Vicky- to sun .. maine aur dipika aaj manish bhaiya ke pass gaye the poochne ke liye .. ************************** isiliye wo tujh se itni nafrat karti hai ..

RB – par usse kyun saaf saaf nahini dikh raha hai aur ritu didi ne usse kuch nahini batay ..

Vicky- wo abhi coma maine hai .. hum ne jo khbar sun rakhi thi ki wo shadi karke canada chali gayee wo jhut thi .. par swati ko samjhake bhi koi faida nahini hai wo puri tarha se pagal ho chuki hai .. pehle ek ki bali chad chuki hai aur ye bhi ussi raste maien chal rahi hai ..ya to yeh tujhe barbaad kardegi ya phir khud bhi wohi haal kar bethegi jo Ritu ki hui hai .. maine to yeh samajh nahini paa raha hoon abhi tak wo shant kyun hai ..

Dipika- kya pta kya chal raha ho uske dimaag maine ..

RB – thik hai maine swati ko samjahunga ..

Vicky- aur wo kaise wo teri batein manegi .. tujhe kya lagta hai tu pehle hai .. Nihar bhaiya bhi kosis karchuke the wo unke hi khilaf case kardiya .. wo ab itne badle ki aag maine jal rahi hai ki teri koi bhi safai usse kaan tak nahini jayegi upar se wo ulta jada gussa ho jayegi .. aur tu proove kya dega kuch tere hath nahini aayega .. na hi kuch saboot bacha hai na hi koi saamne aayega batane ko .. sach do hi log bayan kar sakte the ek Nihar bhaiya aur tujhe to pata hai unke halat kaisa hai wo jo bolenge koi yakeen bhi nahini karega aur doosra ritu didi jo bol nahini sakti ..

RB – to tu hi bata maine kya karu ..

Vicky – kuch nahin filhaal ke liye sab time ke hath maine chod de .. sab thik ho jayega ..

RB – par swati wo sirf isi gusse ke chalte sooraj se shagai kardegi ..

Vicky- pagal jaisi baatein mat kar wo tujh se guuse ke wajha se rista nahin tod rahi hai balki gusse ke wajha se wo tujh se rista jodi thi .. tujhe kya lagta hai wo tujh se pyar karti thi wo sirf tujhe takleef ponhachana chahati thi ..

Tujhe kya laga tujh se wo yun exam se kuch din pehele hi kyun break up kiya .. taki tu usse kabhi na bhul paye wo tujhe waisa hi tadpana chahati thi ..

RB – par bhai tu samajh nahini raha hai ..

Vicky- dekh mujhe tere liye jo acha laga miane wo bol diya ab karna ya na krna tere upar hai . par jo bhi karega maine tere sath hoon .. dipika chalo isse akela rehne do ..

Dipika- tum chalo maine aati hoon thode der main .

Dipika- RB , tum uss se abhi dur hi raho tum jaante nahini ho wo kitna nafrat karti hai tum se ..

RB – par tumhi hi kaho maine uske bina kaise reh sakta hoon .

Dipika- to tum kya karoge .. dekho waise bhi tumhe usse wo karne dena chahiye jiss se usse khusi mile tumhi to uss din keh rahe the ki bas wo khus rahe phir chahe wo kisi ke bhi sath rahe aur ab tum jaante ho na Ritu didi ke sath kya hua kanhi wo swati ke ..

RB – nahini maine aisa nahini hone doonga ..

Dipika – bas yehi to keh rahi hoon maine .. agar tum uske sath na rehte ho sirf tumhe bura lagega aur dard hoga par agar tumhe usse wapas pana chahte ho to sirf tumhe nahini bohat se logon ko dukh hoga ..kya tum yeh chhate ho..

RB – hmm waise bhi maine usse bada kiya tha ki usse exam ke baad shkal nahini dikhaunag .. to thik hai abhi chahe kuch bhi ho mujhe kitna bhi dard ho maine uske bare maine naini sochunga ..

Dipika- yeh hui na baat .. chalo ab mood thoda thik karo ..

RB – par Nihar Bhai ke sath Jin logon ne aisa kiya aur Ritu did ke sath jinhone aisa kiya unn logon ko to maine aise nahini chod sakta hoon ..

Dipika- aur tum kya karoge .. kya kar paoge un ka .. kuch nahini .. tumhe iss se milge kya .. kuch nahini par tum iss se kya kho sakte ho sab kuch .a bhi tumhare pass jo bhi bacha hai wo sab kuch .. socho un maa bapon ka jo apne bete ke liye itna sab kuch she gaye .. kitni beijjati hui hogi unki unka lagbhag sab kuch chin gaya .. unka beta apna dimagi santulan kho beta par wo aaj bhikhus hai sirf kis liye tum sab ko iss baat se kuch takleef an ho uss liye .. tumhari iss kadam se un sab ko takleef hogi ..

RB – tum sahi kehti ho.. mujhe sab ke khusi dekhni hogi apni nahin .. waise thanks ..

Dipika- wo kis liye..

RB – itne pyar se samjhane ke liye ..

Dip[ika- haan wo to karoongi hi na ek to tum mere dost ho aur upar se aage devar bhi ho .. aur ek baat yaad rakhna tum sirf vicky ke liye hi bhai jaise nahini ho mere liye bhi bhai jaisi ho ..

RB – sach maine vicky bohat lucky hai jisse tum jaisi samajh daar life partner milne wala hai ..

Dipika- sach maine

RB- aur nahini to kya bhavi ji ..

Dipika- ahhhh sun ne maine kitna acha lag raha hai aaj se yehi bulana thik hai ..

RB – thik hai bhavi

Dipika RB ko phir se muskurate dekh ke bohat khus thi ..

Dipika- ab jao apne dost se bhi baat kar lo gussa hua hai tum pe wo ..

RB – thik ahi ..

RB vicky ke pass jaata hai ..

RB – vicky bhai maaf karde maine samajh gaya jo tu keh raha tha ..

Vicky- kyun ab dimag maine kaise baat ghus gayee ..

RB – wo tu kuch bhi bak bak kar raha tha na uss liye kuch samajh nahini aa raha tha ab bhavi ne itne pyar se samjahaya to samjh maine aagaya .

Vicky- bhavi kon bhavi ?

Dipika- kon se kya matlab aur kitne hain ki tumhe pata nahin chal raha hai wo kiski baat kar raha hai .

Vicky- aare sorry baba par ye bhavi achanak ..

Dipika – wo hum bhavi devar ke bich ki baat hai ..

Tabhi RB ka phone bajne lagta hai ..

RB – hlw

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RB – haan kon ladki ?? kya hua hai ? kya hua maa ko ? nahiiiiinn


RB ke mobile niche gir jata hai aur RB apne ghutne ke bal jameen pe beth jata hai .
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....... To RB ko bhi malum padh geya ki swaty RB ko kyu nafrat karti hai..... Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
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