Romance Taqdeer [Completed]

NewWriter23 · Jul 16, 2021

Mr. Nobody said:
Boss... Awesome Story waiting for next update

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NewWriter23 · Jul 16, 2021

ragish7357 said:
behatrin update bro
finally rohan or zara mil gye
ab bari h raj or ruhi ki

Thank you brother

parkas · Jul 16, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 26

Anu ka yese bolne se Ruhi ko to ander se acha lagta hai per upar se,

Ruhi : nahi Anu yesi koi baat nahi hai,
(mann mai; aab tumhe kya batau baas ek baar confirm ho jaye), wo mai bhi issi school mai padhi hun to….

Anu : ohh..aap bhi bhai ke hi school mai thy….

Ruhi : hmm, tum ye batao ki sir ne kis saal 11th class kari thy.

Anu : sochte huye; di mujhe to yaad nahi hai,

Anu baate sunke Ruhi udas ho jati hai, yanhi ek rasta tha sab kuch confirm karne ke liye ki sir hi mere Raj hai, mera dil to pehle se hi yanhi kahta tha, jaab bhi sir mere karib hote thy hamesha hi apnapan lagta tha per, aab kese pata karu?

Anu : di..di..kanha kho gayi (wo baate Ruhi apne mann mai hi soch rahi thy), ohh aap ye soch rahi hogi ki bhai apne batchmate hai ya nahi….

Ruhi : hmm..yanhi soch rahi thy….

Anu : ye baat to apko ek minute mai hi pata chal jayega, issi photo se hi, iske piche date aur time likha hua hoga.

Ruhi ye baat sunke ek dam khush ho jati hai aur jaldi se photo palat ke date dekhti hai, 2012 February….

Ruhi : ye to wanhi year hai jaab mai..matlab….

Anu : di matlab bhai apke batchmate hai….

Ruhi : in saab se to yanhi lagta hai….

Anu : di wese kaal Raj bhai aahi rahe hai to aap khud hi puch lena….

Ruhi : Raj?....tum sir ko Raj kehti ho….

Anu : han di bhai ka Nick name Raj hai, pehle to har koi Raj kehte thy per aab nahi baas mai, Rohan Bhai hi kehte hai, aur koi nahi….

Ruhi (mann mai) : aab mai pure tarike se sure hun ki sir hi mere Raj hai, aur Rohan Bhai bhi Raj bulate hai per mere samne to kabhi nahi bole hamesha Rajveer bulate thy, kyun?

Anu : di ye saab chodo na, mujhe shopping per jana hai please.. please chalo na….

Ruhi : ok ok chalte hai, tum na ek dam bachi ban jati ho….

Fir dono nikal jate hai shopping per,

idhar Rohan udas sa marine drive per patharo pe betha hua tha.

Rohan : pata nahi kyun Raj Zara se meri baat nahi karwa raha hai..ya kanhi..wo to jaan bhuj ke mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hai…mujhe aur gussa to nahi ho gayi ya..ya..mujhse dur rehna chahti hai aab..nahi..nahi ye mai hone nahi dunga..baas aab aajaye baas..aur intezar nahi ho raha hai..pata nahi Raj ne kese Ruhi ke samne apne aap ko rok rakha hai aur dur reh raha hai mera to bura haal ho gaya hai.

Raat ko teeno Rohan, Ruhi aur Anu khana kha reh thy, Ruhi aur Rohan to khane ke sath sath Anu ki bak bak bhi sun rahe thy. Anu to baas Raj ke ilawa pehli baar usse koi itna acha laga tha usse. Ruhi ko to baas kabhi chodti hi nahi thy.

Abhi ye saab khana kha hi rahe thy ki Rohan ko Raj ka call aata hai,

Rohan : han…han…kal..chal thik hai jaldi aaja….
Call cut karne ke baad;
wo Raj..Rajveer ka phone tha, wo kaal aarahe hai sham tak….

Ruhi ne jaab suna to behed khush ho jati hai, ki usse aab baas Raj ke aane ka intezar tha. Saab khana kha ke sone ke liye chal dete hai….

Rat ke yanhi koi 1-1.30 baje boor bell bajti hai to saab jag gaye bell ki awaj sunke….

Ruhi nind mai hi thy aur jake darwaja kholti hai, Rohan aur Anu bhi aagaye thy taab tak….

Ruhi ne jese hi darwaja khola to samne Raj khada tha..Ruhi ko laga ki wo sapna hi dekh rahi hai aur wo abhi bhi nind mai hi hai..wo baas muskurake Raj ko dekh rahi thy ki tabhi Raj ke piche se Zara bhi aagayi aur Ruhi ko gale lag gayi….

Zara ke gale lagane se Ruhi ki nind ek daam se udd gayi aur wo jo sapna samajh rahi thy wo hakikat hi hai….

Ruhi : Zara..si..sir...aa..aap dono..iss time..aap to kal aane wale thy na, ye sari baate Ruhi Raj ko dekh hi keh rahi hoti hai.

Raj bhi Ruhi ko hi dekh raha hota hai per idhar Rohan aaj kuch bahut bada karne wala tha.

Wo sidha aage aata hai aur Zara ka hath pakad ke ander hall mai le jata hai, baki sabhi bhi unke piche ander aajate hai, aur kisiko kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye Rohan achanak yesa kyun behave kiya.

Anu bhi Raj ke gale milti hain aur Rohan ke baare mai hi puchti hai,

Anu : inhe kya ho gaya hai bhai….

Raj : pyaar hua hai aur abhi abhi judayi bhi dekh li….hehehehe…

Ruhi to baas suru se leke aab tak baas Raj ko dekh rhi hoti hai bade pyaar se….

Idhar Rohan jaab Zara ka hath pakad ke leke ander aaya to Zara bhi kuch samajh nahi pa rahi thy,

Zara.: Rohan..Rohan..kya hua hai aapko, mujhe yese kyun khich ke le rahe hai.

Rohan bina kuch bole apne gutne ke baal pe beth jata hai aur Zara ka hath to pehle hi pakda hua tha,

Rohan : Zara mai tumse behed pyaar karta hun, tab se jaab mai tumhe pehli baar dekha tha airport pe taab se, kya tum mujhse shadi karogi..aur mere ghar ki mere dil Rani banogi….

Zara ko to pehel jhatka lagta hai ki Rohan ne aate hi usse ye saab keh diya,

Zara : ye..ye….

Rohan apni baat jari dekhte huye,

Rohan : jaab se dur gayi ho na tum pata nahi kitne tadpa hun tumhe ek baar dekhne ke liye, aur tumhari awaj sunne ke liye..mai nahi reh sakta tumhare bager..iss ek mahine mai baas jindegi kaat raha tha, ji nahi pa raha tha….tumhare sath meri jindegi jina chahta hun.

Kya tum mujhse shadi karogi?

Rohan ki ye saab baate sunke Zara ko behed khushi hoti hai aur khusi mai uski ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai,

Anu to suru se phone mai video banane mai lagi huyi thy, Raj dono ko dekh ke smile kar raha tha, aur Ruhi….Ruhi to baas hath jod ke Zara ko han bolne ke intezar kar rahi thy aur uske ankho mai bhi anshu thy khushi ke…

Zara : mai jaab yanha aarahi thy taab behed gussa mai thy aap pe…per..per..maine ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki aap ye saab bolenge..mai apko bata nahi sakti ki aap mere liye kya hai, maine bhi apko pehle hi nazar mai pyaar kar bethi thy, aur itna pyaar kar bethi ki kabhi bayan hi na kar sakunga, han mai apse shadi karne ke liye tayar hun….

Rohan ne jesse hi han suna wo jhat se uth ke Zara ko gale laga liya, Anu to ye saab enjoy kar rahi thy bahut jyada, aur Ruhi Raj ka hath pakad liya tha, aur un dono ko dekh rahi thy aur Raj Ruhi ko,

Raj dhire se Ruhi ke kaan ke paas ja kar bolta hai,

Raj : itna khush ho to apne iss dost ke gale bhi lag sakti ho, hath pakad ne se kya hoga….

Ruhi ne jese hi Raj ko dekha to dekhti reh gayi kyun ki Raj uske behed hi karib tha aur Ruhi ka dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha…..

Ruhi : am sorry sir…maine dekha nahi tha….

Raj kuch kehne ko hua ki Anu Ruhi ko khich ke Rohana aur Zara ke paas le gayi aur Raj kehte kehte rukh gaya….

Anu : oye love birds, kuch to saram karo yanha bade bujurg moujud hai aur tum dono baas chipke khade ho….haye kya jamana aagaya hai….hehehehe….

Rohan aur Zara Anu ki baato se alag ho jate hai, per Zara saram se gadi ja rhai thy to Anu aur Ruhi dono ne usko gale laga liya.

Ruhi : mai sach mai aaj bahut khush hun, aur aaj se mai Zara ko bhabhi hi bolne wali hun, kyun aaj to officially ho gaya hai baas stamp lagna bakai hai.

Fir Ruhi Rohan ki bhi gale lag jati hai aur congratulate karti hai….

Raj : aare yaar jiski wajah se ye saab hua usse to koi puch hi nahi raha hai….

fir munh fulake sofe pe jake beth jata hai Raj....

Nice and superb update...

park · Jul 16, 2021

NewWriter23 said:
Update 26

Anu ka yese bolne se Ruhi ko to ander se acha lagta hai per upar se,

Ruhi : nahi Anu yesi koi baat nahi hai,
(mann mai; aab tumhe kya batau baas ek baar confirm ho jaye), wo mai bhi issi school mai padhi hun to….

Anu : ohh..aap bhi bhai ke hi school mai thy….

Ruhi : hmm, tum ye batao ki sir ne kis saal 11th class kari thy.

Anu : sochte huye; di mujhe to yaad nahi hai,

Anu baate sunke Ruhi udas ho jati hai, yanhi ek rasta tha sab kuch confirm karne ke liye ki sir hi mere Raj hai, mera dil to pehle se hi yanhi kahta tha, jaab bhi sir mere karib hote thy hamesha hi apnapan lagta tha per, aab kese pata karu?

Anu : di..di..kanha kho gayi (wo baate Ruhi apne mann mai hi soch rahi thy), ohh aap ye soch rahi hogi ki bhai apne batchmate hai ya nahi….

Ruhi : hmm..yanhi soch rahi thy….

Anu : ye baat to apko ek minute mai hi pata chal jayega, issi photo se hi, iske piche date aur time likha hua hoga.

Ruhi ye baat sunke ek dam khush ho jati hai aur jaldi se photo palat ke date dekhti hai, 2012 February….

Ruhi : ye to wanhi year hai jaab mai..matlab….

Anu : di matlab bhai apke batchmate hai….

Ruhi : in saab se to yanhi lagta hai….

Anu : di wese kaal Raj bhai aahi rahe hai to aap khud hi puch lena….

Ruhi : Raj?....tum sir ko Raj kehti ho….

Anu : han di bhai ka Nick name Raj hai, pehle to har koi Raj kehte thy per aab nahi baas mai, Rohan Bhai hi kehte hai, aur koi nahi….

Ruhi (mann mai) : aab mai pure tarike se sure hun ki sir hi mere Raj hai, aur Rohan Bhai bhi Raj bulate hai per mere samne to kabhi nahi bole hamesha Rajveer bulate thy, kyun?

Anu : di ye saab chodo na, mujhe shopping per jana hai please.. please chalo na….

Ruhi : ok ok chalte hai, tum na ek dam bachi ban jati ho….

Fir dono nikal jate hai shopping per,

idhar Rohan udas sa marine drive per patharo pe betha hua tha.

Rohan : pata nahi kyun Raj Zara se meri baat nahi karwa raha hai..ya kanhi..wo to jaan bhuj ke mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hai…mujhe aur gussa to nahi ho gayi ya..ya..mujhse dur rehna chahti hai aab..nahi..nahi ye mai hone nahi dunga..baas aab aajaye baas..aur intezar nahi ho raha hai..pata nahi Raj ne kese Ruhi ke samne apne aap ko rok rakha hai aur dur reh raha hai mera to bura haal ho gaya hai.

Raat ko teeno Rohan, Ruhi aur Anu khana kha reh thy, Ruhi aur Rohan to khane ke sath sath Anu ki bak bak bhi sun rahe thy. Anu to baas Raj ke ilawa pehli baar usse koi itna acha laga tha usse. Ruhi ko to baas kabhi chodti hi nahi thy.

Abhi ye saab khana kha hi rahe thy ki Rohan ko Raj ka call aata hai,

Rohan : han…han…kal..chal thik hai jaldi aaja….
Call cut karne ke baad;
wo Raj..Rajveer ka phone tha, wo kaal aarahe hai sham tak….

Ruhi ne jaab suna to behed khush ho jati hai, ki usse aab baas Raj ke aane ka intezar tha. Saab khana kha ke sone ke liye chal dete hai….

Rat ke yanhi koi 1-1.30 baje boor bell bajti hai to saab jag gaye bell ki awaj sunke….

Ruhi nind mai hi thy aur jake darwaja kholti hai, Rohan aur Anu bhi aagaye thy taab tak….

Ruhi ne jese hi darwaja khola to samne Raj khada tha..Ruhi ko laga ki wo sapna hi dekh rahi hai aur wo abhi bhi nind mai hi hai..wo baas muskurake Raj ko dekh rahi thy ki tabhi Raj ke piche se Zara bhi aagayi aur Ruhi ko gale lag gayi….

Zara ke gale lagane se Ruhi ki nind ek daam se udd gayi aur wo jo sapna samajh rahi thy wo hakikat hi hai….

Ruhi : Zara..si..sir...aa..aap dono..iss time..aap to kal aane wale thy na, ye sari baate Ruhi Raj ko dekh hi keh rahi hoti hai.

Raj bhi Ruhi ko hi dekh raha hota hai per idhar Rohan aaj kuch bahut bada karne wala tha.

Wo sidha aage aata hai aur Zara ka hath pakad ke ander hall mai le jata hai, baki sabhi bhi unke piche ander aajate hai, aur kisiko kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye Rohan achanak yesa kyun behave kiya.

Anu bhi Raj ke gale milti hain aur Rohan ke baare mai hi puchti hai,

Anu : inhe kya ho gaya hai bhai….

Raj : pyaar hua hai aur abhi abhi judayi bhi dekh li….hehehehe…

Ruhi to baas suru se leke aab tak baas Raj ko dekh rhi hoti hai bade pyaar se….

Idhar Rohan jaab Zara ka hath pakad ke leke ander aaya to Zara bhi kuch samajh nahi pa rahi thy,

Zara.: Rohan..Rohan..kya hua hai aapko, mujhe yese kyun khich ke le rahe hai.

Rohan bina kuch bole apne gutne ke baal pe beth jata hai aur Zara ka hath to pehle hi pakda hua tha,

Rohan : Zara mai tumse behed pyaar karta hun, tab se jaab mai tumhe pehli baar dekha tha airport pe taab se, kya tum mujhse shadi karogi..aur mere ghar ki mere dil Rani banogi….

Zara ko to pehel jhatka lagta hai ki Rohan ne aate hi usse ye saab keh diya,

Zara : ye..ye….

Rohan apni baat jari dekhte huye,

Rohan : jaab se dur gayi ho na tum pata nahi kitne tadpa hun tumhe ek baar dekhne ke liye, aur tumhari awaj sunne ke liye..mai nahi reh sakta tumhare bager..iss ek mahine mai baas jindegi kaat raha tha, ji nahi pa raha tha….tumhare sath meri jindegi jina chahta hun.

Kya tum mujhse shadi karogi?

Rohan ki ye saab baate sunke Zara ko behed khushi hoti hai aur khusi mai uski ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai,

Anu to suru se phone mai video banane mai lagi huyi thy, Raj dono ko dekh ke smile kar raha tha, aur Ruhi….Ruhi to baas hath jod ke Zara ko han bolne ke intezar kar rahi thy aur uske ankho mai bhi anshu thy khushi ke…

Zara : mai jaab yanha aarahi thy taab behed gussa mai thy aap pe…per..per..maine ye kabhi nahi socha tha ki aap ye saab bolenge..mai apko bata nahi sakti ki aap mere liye kya hai, maine bhi apko pehle hi nazar mai pyaar kar bethi thy, aur itna pyaar kar bethi ki kabhi bayan hi na kar sakunga, han mai apse shadi karne ke liye tayar hun….

Rohan ne jesse hi han suna wo jhat se uth ke Zara ko gale laga liya, Anu to ye saab enjoy kar rahi thy bahut jyada, aur Ruhi Raj ka hath pakad liya tha, aur un dono ko dekh rahi thy aur Raj Ruhi ko,

Raj dhire se Ruhi ke kaan ke paas ja kar bolta hai,

Raj : itna khush ho to apne iss dost ke gale bhi lag sakti ho, hath pakad ne se kya hoga….

Ruhi ne jese hi Raj ko dekha to dekhti reh gayi kyun ki Raj uske behed hi karib tha aur Ruhi ka dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha…..

Ruhi : am sorry sir…maine dekha nahi tha….

Raj kuch kehne ko hua ki Anu Ruhi ko khich ke Rohana aur Zara ke paas le gayi aur Raj kehte kehte rukh gaya….

Anu : oye love birds, kuch to saram karo yanha bade bujurg moujud hai aur tum dono baas chipke khade ho….haye kya jamana aagaya hai….hehehehe….

Rohan aur Zara Anu ki baato se alag ho jate hai, per Zara saram se gadi ja rhai thy to Anu aur Ruhi dono ne usko gale laga liya.

Ruhi : mai sach mai aaj bahut khush hun, aur aaj se mai Zara ko bhabhi hi bolne wali hun, kyun aaj to officially ho gaya hai baas stamp lagna bakai hai.

Fir Ruhi Rohan ki bhi gale lag jati hai aur congratulate karti hai….

Raj : aare yaar jiski wajah se ye saab hua usse to koi puch hi nahi raha hai….

fir munh fulake sofe pe jake beth jata hai Raj....

Nice update...

NewWriter23 · Jul 16, 2021

parkas said:
Nice and superb update...

park said:
Nice update...

Thank you

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NewWriter23 said:
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