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Naik

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Update 48
Raj, Anu aur Viren Ruhi ke ghar wale ko pick karke sidhe airport jate hai aur wanha se Bangalore, wanha Rohan aur Kabir dono aaye thy sabhi ko lene ke liye.
Sharma ji Rohan se mil ke bahut khush hote hai, Rohan Kabir ke bare mai bataya hai, usse bhi khush hokar milte hai.
Sabhi Raj ke ghar per hi rukhte hai aur sham ko Mallik sahab ko milne ke liye nikal jate hai. Iss saab mai Raj saab ki bahot care karta hai. Ruhi ki mom to baas Raj ki tarif hi Kari ja rahi thy. Ron to pehle se hi Raj se impressed tha. Baas Sharma ji chid rahe thy per Ruhi ki mom ne unhe bilkul ignore kiya hua tha. Raj Anu aur Viren ka plan kaam kar raha tha.
baas 10 din baad shadi thy. Shadi do tarike se honi thy, din mai nikah aur raat ko phere...saab tayari Raj aur Rohan kar rahe thy ladke balo ki taraf se.
Ladki walo ki taraf se Viren aur Kabir lage thy. Rohan bhi Raj ke plan mai shamil tha aur wo bhi Raj ki achi adat batata aur dikhata rehta Sharma ji ko, Sharma ji ka dil aab pighalane laga tha.
Shadi ko aab ek hafta hi reh gaya tha aur Sharma ji taas se maas nahi ho rahe thy. Ruhi ki mom ne bhi han kar di thy Rohan ki puchne per saab baas Sharma ji ke jawab ke intezar mai thy.
Sabhi ne try kar liya tha aab iss baar Kabir ne kaman sambhala....
Ek din Kabir kisi kaam se Raj ke banglow aaya to pata chala ki saab shoping karne gaye hai, fir usne Ram ji ko dekha to wo sofe pe bethe bethe pure ghar ko nihar rahe thy Kabir bhi unke paas jake beth gaya.
Kabir : kese hai uncle aap?
Ram ji : aare beta tum..mai thik hun tum batao kese ho, tayari kese chal rahi hai shadi ki?
Kabir : bahut achi chal rahi hai per maine suna hai ki do do shadiya ho rahi hai yanha....
Ram ji thode akad ke sath : nahi saab ke waham hai ye...saab chahte hai ki Ruhi ki shadi uss....uss Rajveer ke sath hi ho jaye....
Kabir : oohh...to ye baat hai per isme to apka hi fayeda hai....
Ram ji herani se : wo kese...mai kuch samajha nahi....
kabir apna master mind use karke : dekhiye uncle..aagar Ruhani ji ki shadi Rajveer se ho gayi to wo to apki haar baat manne ke liye jhukna hoga aur manni hi padegi...wese bhi uske maa papa nahi hai to apni patni ke hi maa papa ko unka darja hi dega....
Fir kuch der rukh ke Ram ji ke aur dekhta hai jo kuch soch rahe thy....
Kabir : ye jo ghar dekh rahe hai na ye uski maa ka sapna tha jo usne puri ji jaan laga kar pura kiya. Jyada tar jo anath bache hote hai kabhi sahi raste pe nahi badhte aur ye mukam nahi hasil karte, per Raj ne ye kiya...wese to mujhe bhi wo kuch khash pasand nahi hai hamesha apni chalata hai per uski mehnat aur imandari ki daat deta hun..hamesha galat ke khilaf ladha hai.
aab jaab Kabir ne Ram ji ko dekha to wo thode naram pad rahe thy,
Kabir (mann mai) : chal beta Kabir baas aab akhri chot de hi de fir dusman haar jayega.
Kabir : per uncle ek baat to hai, wo gussa bahut karta hai..aur aagar aapne han nahi ki to gusse maj hi per shadi to karega Ruhani ji se aur gusse se ki to puri jindegi wo aur Ruhani dono hi apke hatho se nikal jayenge....
Wo to apne bache tak ko apke paas aane nahi dega..soch lo uncle aab aap...wese bhi aunty aur chote Ron dono uske taraf hai..ye na ho ki head of the family usse hi bana de..aage aap samajhdar hai, soch lijiye...
Ram ji Kabir ki baate sunke soch mai pad jate hai, aur Kabir wanha se khisak jata hai aur mall mai uske paas chala jata hai phone karke.
Mall mai aake Kabir sidha Raj aur Viren ke paas aata hai jo Rohan ki dress lene mai madat kar rahe thy.
Kabir : to Raj..dekh tera ye kabil dost saab set kar diya hai, yesi yesi baate boli hai hi Sharma ji se pehle hi ball mai out ho gaye. Tu baas ghar ja dekhna tujhe gale se laga lenge.
Viren : aur aagar tune kuch gadbad ki huyi hogi to....
Kabir : yaar...thoda to bharosha rakh....
Rohan : aagar kuch gadbad huyi to ye haam teeno se pitega.....
Raj : han ye thik hai..aagar kuch hua to tu dekh lena ki tera kya hoga....
Kabir : aur aagar maan gaye to....
Raj : tere liye pakka ek achi si ladki dekh ke tera shadi karwa dunga....
Kabir khush hoke : saab apni baat per rehna.....
teeno ek sath : tu bhi.....
saab ladkiyo ke taraf jati hai jo abhi bhi kapde le rahe thy, Ruhi jo bhi saree uthati Raj na mai sar hila deti hai, saab ke kapde ho gaye aur idha Raj baas na na kar raha tha to Ruhi ke nahi huye thy.
Anu saab ko jane ko bols aur khud Ruhi ke sath aane ko bol diya. Ritika ji ne bhi Raj ko rukhne ke liye bol diya, wo to khud chahti thy ki dono sath hi rahe. Raj ka dil to maano khushi se uchal raha tha.
Raj ke kehne le Viren bhi rukh jata hai aur Raj Anu aur Viren ko kuch ishara kar deta hai to wo dono sath mai chale jate hai Raj aur Ruhi ko chod ke.
Raj ne ek shadi ka joda Ruhi ko diya aur pehne ko kaha, Ruhi bhi bina kuch kahe leke chali gayi aur try karke trial room se bahar aagayi aur Raj ko dikhane lagi.
Jaab Ruhi bahar aayi trial room se to sare jo bhi shop pe thy saab Ruhi ko dekhne lage. Raj bhi baas Ruhi ko dekhe ja raha tha.
Fir Raj aage badh ke Ruhi ke paas aajata hai,
Raj : Ruhi ye shadi ke jode mai bahut pyaari lag rahi ho..yanhi pehen na hai tumhe hamare shadi mai....
Ruhi herani se : per papa....
Raj : wo masn jayenge..mujhpe bharosha hai na...
Ruhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai.
Raj : to baas fir...jao change kar lo aur kuch thik karwana baj to abhi bol do....
Ruhi : han..wo...wo..ye choli thodi loose hai to....
Raj : koyi baat nahi abhi thik kar denge...
Ruhi jaab change karke aati hai to usko thik karne ke liye de dete hai aur usme 1 ghanta lagna tha to Anu aur Viren ko bula ke kuch khana khane chale jate hai, aur fir aake dress leke ghar chale jate hai.
jesse hi ghar pahunche to samne Sharma ji bethe thy aur baki saab side mai khade thy, charo aur sannata tha.
Viren (mann mai) : ek to inhe bhi Chen nahi..pata nahi kya kahenge...fir Kabir ke taraf dekha to uska munh utra hua tha.
Ram ji (gusse se) : Ruhani tum...tum iss..iss Rajveer se pyaar karti ho?
Ruhi bina dare Raj ka hath tham kar : ji papa....
Sharma ji ne Ruhi ko ghurne lage per Ruhi ne Raj hath choda nahi aur jor se pakad liya, saab Ruhi aur Raj ko dekh rahe thy.
Raj (mann mai) : wah meri sherni...hitler ko pehli hi ball mai clean bold kar diya....
Ram ji : to tumhare liye mera faisla koyi mayene nahi rakhta....
Ruhi : rakhta hai papa bahut rakhta hai tabhi to aab taak maine Raj ke sath shadi ke liye han nahi kahi sur to aur wo khud yanhi chahte hai ki aapki han ke baad hi ham shadi kare.

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
 

Ajay

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Update 48
Raj, Anu aur Viren Ruhi ke ghar wale ko pick karke sidhe airport jate hai aur wanha se Bangalore, wanha Rohan aur Kabir dono aaye thy sabhi ko lene ke liye.
Sharma ji Rohan se mil ke bahut khush hote hai, Rohan Kabir ke bare mai bataya hai, usse bhi khush hokar milte hai.
Sabhi Raj ke ghar per hi rukhte hai aur sham ko Mallik sahab ko milne ke liye nikal jate hai. Iss saab mai Raj saab ki bahot care karta hai. Ruhi ki mom to baas Raj ki tarif hi Kari ja rahi thy. Ron to pehle se hi Raj se impressed tha. Baas Sharma ji chid rahe thy per Ruhi ki mom ne unhe bilkul ignore kiya hua tha. Raj Anu aur Viren ka plan kaam kar raha tha.
baas 10 din baad shadi thy. Shadi do tarike se honi thy, din mai nikah aur raat ko phere...saab tayari Raj aur Rohan kar rahe thy ladke balo ki taraf se.
Ladki walo ki taraf se Viren aur Kabir lage thy. Rohan bhi Raj ke plan mai shamil tha aur wo bhi Raj ki achi adat batata aur dikhata rehta Sharma ji ko, Sharma ji ka dil aab pighalane laga tha.
Shadi ko aab ek hafta hi reh gaya tha aur Sharma ji taas se maas nahi ho rahe thy. Ruhi ki mom ne bhi han kar di thy Rohan ki puchne per saab baas Sharma ji ke jawab ke intezar mai thy.
Sabhi ne try kar liya tha aab iss baar Kabir ne kaman sambhala....
Ek din Kabir kisi kaam se Raj ke banglow aaya to pata chala ki saab shoping karne gaye hai, fir usne Ram ji ko dekha to wo sofe pe bethe bethe pure ghar ko nihar rahe thy Kabir bhi unke paas jake beth gaya.
Kabir : kese hai uncle aap?
Ram ji : aare beta tum..mai thik hun tum batao kese ho, tayari kese chal rahi hai shadi ki?
Kabir : bahut achi chal rahi hai per maine suna hai ki do do shadiya ho rahi hai yanha....
Ram ji thode akad ke sath : nahi saab ke waham hai ye...saab chahte hai ki Ruhi ki shadi uss....uss Rajveer ke sath hi ho jaye....
Kabir : oohh...to ye baat hai per isme to apka hi fayeda hai....
Ram ji herani se : wo kese...mai kuch samajha nahi....
kabir apna master mind use karke : dekhiye uncle..aagar Ruhani ji ki shadi Rajveer se ho gayi to wo to apki haar baat manne ke liye jhukna hoga aur manni hi padegi...wese bhi uske maa papa nahi hai to apni patni ke hi maa papa ko unka darja hi dega....
Fir kuch der rukh ke Ram ji ke aur dekhta hai jo kuch soch rahe thy....
Kabir : ye jo ghar dekh rahe hai na ye uski maa ka sapna tha jo usne puri ji jaan laga kar pura kiya. Jyada tar jo anath bache hote hai kabhi sahi raste pe nahi badhte aur ye mukam nahi hasil karte, per Raj ne ye kiya...wese to mujhe bhi wo kuch khash pasand nahi hai hamesha apni chalata hai per uski mehnat aur imandari ki daat deta hun..hamesha galat ke khilaf ladha hai.
aab jaab Kabir ne Ram ji ko dekha to wo thode naram pad rahe thy,
Kabir (mann mai) : chal beta Kabir baas aab akhri chot de hi de fir dusman haar jayega.
Kabir : per uncle ek baat to hai, wo gussa bahut karta hai..aur aagar aapne han nahi ki to gusse maj hi per shadi to karega Ruhani ji se aur gusse se ki to puri jindegi wo aur Ruhani dono hi apke hatho se nikal jayenge....
Wo to apne bache tak ko apke paas aane nahi dega..soch lo uncle aab aap...wese bhi aunty aur chote Ron dono uske taraf hai..ye na ho ki head of the family usse hi bana de..aage aap samajhdar hai, soch lijiye...
Ram ji Kabir ki baate sunke soch mai pad jate hai, aur Kabir wanha se khisak jata hai aur mall mai uske paas chala jata hai phone karke.
Mall mai aake Kabir sidha Raj aur Viren ke paas aata hai jo Rohan ki dress lene mai madat kar rahe thy.
Kabir : to Raj..dekh tera ye kabil dost saab set kar diya hai, yesi yesi baate boli hai hi Sharma ji se pehle hi ball mai out ho gaye. Tu baas ghar ja dekhna tujhe gale se laga lenge.
Viren : aur aagar tune kuch gadbad ki huyi hogi to....
Kabir : yaar...thoda to bharosha rakh....
Rohan : aagar kuch gadbad huyi to ye haam teeno se pitega.....
Raj : han ye thik hai..aagar kuch hua to tu dekh lena ki tera kya hoga....
Kabir : aur aagar maan gaye to....
Raj : tere liye pakka ek achi si ladki dekh ke tera shadi karwa dunga....
Kabir khush hoke : saab apni baat per rehna.....
teeno ek sath : tu bhi.....
saab ladkiyo ke taraf jati hai jo abhi bhi kapde le rahe thy, Ruhi jo bhi saree uthati Raj na mai sar hila deti hai, saab ke kapde ho gaye aur idha Raj baas na na kar raha tha to Ruhi ke nahi huye thy.
Anu saab ko jane ko bols aur khud Ruhi ke sath aane ko bol diya. Ritika ji ne bhi Raj ko rukhne ke liye bol diya, wo to khud chahti thy ki dono sath hi rahe. Raj ka dil to maano khushi se uchal raha tha.
Raj ke kehne le Viren bhi rukh jata hai aur Raj Anu aur Viren ko kuch ishara kar deta hai to wo dono sath mai chale jate hai Raj aur Ruhi ko chod ke.
Raj ne ek shadi ka joda Ruhi ko diya aur pehne ko kaha, Ruhi bhi bina kuch kahe leke chali gayi aur try karke trial room se bahar aagayi aur Raj ko dikhane lagi.
Jaab Ruhi bahar aayi trial room se to sare jo bhi shop pe thy saab Ruhi ko dekhne lage. Raj bhi baas Ruhi ko dekhe ja raha tha.
Fir Raj aage badh ke Ruhi ke paas aajata hai,
Raj : Ruhi ye shadi ke jode mai bahut pyaari lag rahi ho..yanhi pehen na hai tumhe hamare shadi mai....
Ruhi herani se : per papa....
Raj : wo masn jayenge..mujhpe bharosha hai na...
Ruhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai.
Raj : to baas fir...jao change kar lo aur kuch thik karwana baj to abhi bol do....
Ruhi : han..wo...wo..ye choli thodi loose hai to....
Raj : koyi baat nahi abhi thik kar denge...
Ruhi jaab change karke aati hai to usko thik karne ke liye de dete hai aur usme 1 ghanta lagna tha to Anu aur Viren ko bula ke kuch khana khane chale jate hai, aur fir aake dress leke ghar chale jate hai.
jesse hi ghar pahunche to samne Sharma ji bethe thy aur baki saab side mai khade thy, charo aur sannata tha.
Viren (mann mai) : ek to inhe bhi Chen nahi..pata nahi kya kahenge...fir Kabir ke taraf dekha to uska munh utra hua tha.
Ram ji (gusse se) : Ruhani tum...tum iss..iss Rajveer se pyaar karti ho?
Ruhi bina dare Raj ka hath tham kar : ji papa....
Sharma ji ne Ruhi ko ghurne lage per Ruhi ne Raj hath choda nahi aur jor se pakad liya, saab Ruhi aur Raj ko dekh rahe thy.
Raj (mann mai) : wah meri sherni...hitler ko pehli hi ball mai clean bold kar diya....
Ram ji : to tumhare liye mera faisla koyi mayene nahi rakhta....
Ruhi : rakhta hai papa bahut rakhta hai tabhi to aab taak maine Raj ke sath shadi ke liye han nahi kahi sur to aur wo khud yanhi chahte hai ki aapki han ke baad hi ham shadi kare.
Nice update bhai
 

dhparikh

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Update 47
teeno abhi bethe huye thy ki chief ki phone aajata hai Raj ko to wo call utha deta hai, aur teeno samne screen pe dekhne lagte hai, samne screen pe ek 45 saal ke aas paas ka admi tha, teeno usse salute karte hai.
Chief : to Sharma ji aab apka America mai kaam khatam hua aur aab aap yanhi rahenge.
Ram ji : jo chief....fir muskurane lagte hai.
Chief : Viren tumhara agla mission Abu Dhabi mai hoga ek mahine baad...saari detail Sharma ji ke paas hai.
Viren : jo chief....
Chief : Rajveer tumhara mission Istanbul mai hoga do mahine baad taab taak tum dono Sharma ji se hacking, coding saab kuch sikhoge jo tumhare mission ke liye jaruri hai,
Tum dono ko team de di jayegi jo ek hafte mai tumhare paas hogi to saab planning kar lena aur jo target diya hai usse khatam karna hai.
Dono pure josh mai : yes chief....
Chief : good...Rajveer tumse kuch jaruri baat karni hai to aap bahar jayiye....
Viren aur Ram ji bahar chale jate hai....
Chief : to tumhara aur Sharma ji ka beti ka kya chal raha hai?
Raj chief ki baat sunke heran reh gaya.
Raj : chief wo meri personal life hai...mai....
Chief : dekho rajveer mai janta hun tum dono ek dusre ko pasand karte ho....Sharma ne America jane ke liye baas ek hi shart rakhi thy ki mai uski beti ka dhyaan rakhu baas usse pata na chale...sayad uski beti se unki banti nahi hai....
Raj (mann mai) : unki to kisi se bhi nahi banti....
Chief : to mujhe Ruhani ki har khabar milti hai wo kanha hai...kiske sath hai saab..to mai baas yanhi chahta hun ki Sharma ke sath tumhara jo bhi jhagda hai usse ek taraf karke Ruhani ka hath mang lo....
Raj to aur herani se chief ko dekhne lagta hai.
Chief : mujhe tum dono ki jodi pasand hai aur wese bhi Viren aur tum dono mere bacho ki tarah hi ho.
Raj (khushi se) : jo chief....
Chief : chalo khayal rakhna aur inn do mahino mai hi shadi kar lena. Raj aab sarmane lagta hai aur chief haste huye call cut kar dete hai.
Teeno kaam karke bahar aate hai,
Ram ji : aab sagun ka saman bhi lena hai...
Viren Raj ki aur dekhta huye : ye sach mai computer genius hacker hai na.. pata nahi kisne inhe agent bana diya.
Raj : uncle saman aagaya hai car mai hai.. pehle hi mangwa diya hai.
Ram ji : acha to fir sahi hai.
Viren aur Raj ne ek dusre ko dekha fir sar jhatka diya.
Raj : wese aap pehle DM thy na...
Ram ji : apko kesse pata....
Raj : Ruhi ne bataya..aur wo gunda..uska kya kiya..wapis se dikha hi nahi....
Ram ji : Ruhi ne ye baat apko kyu batayi?
Raj : Rohan Bhai hai uska to usko bata rahi thy aur mai wanhi betha hua tha to sun liya...wo chodo uss gunde ka kya kiya....
Ram ji : taab bhi mai ek agent hi tha to chief taab mere senior thy unhe pata chala to unhone usse uthwa liya aur khatam kar diya. Chief bhi tum dono ke tarah hi kaam karte thy.
Viren : to aapko unse bhi pareshani hoga....
Ram ji (chid ke) : baas aab...ghar chalo.....
Fir teeno nikal jate hai Ruhi ke ghar mai pahunch jate hai, aur Ram ji ko chod ke Anu ko leke apne ghar nikal jate hai.
Raj Viren se : yaar kesse apne sasur ko manaun..mujhe janha taak lagta hai wo kabhi nahi manenge mere aur Ruhi ke liye..
Viren : lagta to mujhe bhi hai baki kaal ja rahe hai na Rohan ki shadi ke liye to wanha per dekh lenge per jo bhi hai mujhe tujh per taras aaraha hai...hehehehe...kya sasur hai.....
Raj Viren ko ghurne lagta hai fir kuch sochta hai fir apne apne kamre mai chala jate hai.
Idhar raat ko Ruhi der taak saab se baate karti hai per apne papa se kaam hi ki. Der raat kamre mai aati hai aur let jati hai tabhi ek saya khidki se uske kamre mai aata hai aur uske paas jake usse sota hua dekhne lagta hai wanhi bed pe beth ke.
Ruhi jesse hi karbat li to uska hath kisi ko chu jata hai to wo hadbadake uth jati hai aur jaab samne dekhti hai to Raj ko pati hai.
Ruhi : aap yanha...kisi ne dekh liya to....
Raj : ssssshhhh...kisi ne nahi dekha na dekhega....
Ruhi : per itni raat ko yanha.....
Raj : so tumhari permission chahiye thy ...
Ruhi (herani se) : kis baat ke liye?
Raj : tumhare papa se hamari baat karne ke liye aur Rohan aur Zara ke sath hi hamari shadi ke liye bhi.....
Ruhi (herani se) : kya...itni jaldi....
Raj : han do mahine baad mujhe mission ke liye jana hai usse pehle tumhare sath hi rehna chahta hu..aur pata nahi kitna time lage iss baar to....
Ruhi Raj ki baat sunke kuch udas si ho gayi,
Ruhi : yesi baat hai to jaldi se papa se baat kar lijiye mai apko mission ke liye nahi rokungi per pehle haam shadi karenge aur sath rahenge...rahenge na....
Raj ne Ruhi ko apne baho mai bhar ke : hamesha sath rahenge....
fir kuch der yunhi bethe rahe dono aur baate karte rahe fir der raat ko Raj bhi chala jata hai.
Next day....Raj ka ghar....
Raj, Viren aur Anu tayar thy,
Raj : tum dono ko pata hai na kya karna hai?
Anu : apki saas ko patana hai....
Viren : tere sale ko bhi manana haj tujhe jina banane ke liye....
Anu : baas apko sabse perfect dikhna hai aunty ke aage..ki bhabhi ke liye aap hi perfect hai.
Raj : aur sasur ko Kabir sambhal lega.
Viren : to mission Sharma ji suru....
teenk sath mai yes bolte hai aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf nikal jate hai unhe pick karne ke liye kyun ki unka flight baas 1 ghante baad hi thy Bangalore ke liye.
Nice update...
 

dhparikh

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Update 48
Raj, Anu aur Viren Ruhi ke ghar wale ko pick karke sidhe airport jate hai aur wanha se Bangalore, wanha Rohan aur Kabir dono aaye thy sabhi ko lene ke liye.
Sharma ji Rohan se mil ke bahut khush hote hai, Rohan Kabir ke bare mai bataya hai, usse bhi khush hokar milte hai.
Sabhi Raj ke ghar per hi rukhte hai aur sham ko Mallik sahab ko milne ke liye nikal jate hai. Iss saab mai Raj saab ki bahot care karta hai. Ruhi ki mom to baas Raj ki tarif hi Kari ja rahi thy. Ron to pehle se hi Raj se impressed tha. Baas Sharma ji chid rahe thy per Ruhi ki mom ne unhe bilkul ignore kiya hua tha. Raj Anu aur Viren ka plan kaam kar raha tha.
baas 10 din baad shadi thy. Shadi do tarike se honi thy, din mai nikah aur raat ko phere...saab tayari Raj aur Rohan kar rahe thy ladke balo ki taraf se.
Ladki walo ki taraf se Viren aur Kabir lage thy. Rohan bhi Raj ke plan mai shamil tha aur wo bhi Raj ki achi adat batata aur dikhata rehta Sharma ji ko, Sharma ji ka dil aab pighalane laga tha.
Shadi ko aab ek hafta hi reh gaya tha aur Sharma ji taas se maas nahi ho rahe thy. Ruhi ki mom ne bhi han kar di thy Rohan ki puchne per saab baas Sharma ji ke jawab ke intezar mai thy.
Sabhi ne try kar liya tha aab iss baar Kabir ne kaman sambhala....
Ek din Kabir kisi kaam se Raj ke banglow aaya to pata chala ki saab shoping karne gaye hai, fir usne Ram ji ko dekha to wo sofe pe bethe bethe pure ghar ko nihar rahe thy Kabir bhi unke paas jake beth gaya.
Kabir : kese hai uncle aap?
Ram ji : aare beta tum..mai thik hun tum batao kese ho, tayari kese chal rahi hai shadi ki?
Kabir : bahut achi chal rahi hai per maine suna hai ki do do shadiya ho rahi hai yanha....
Ram ji thode akad ke sath : nahi saab ke waham hai ye...saab chahte hai ki Ruhi ki shadi uss....uss Rajveer ke sath hi ho jaye....
Kabir : oohh...to ye baat hai per isme to apka hi fayeda hai....
Ram ji herani se : wo kese...mai kuch samajha nahi....
kabir apna master mind use karke : dekhiye uncle..aagar Ruhani ji ki shadi Rajveer se ho gayi to wo to apki haar baat manne ke liye jhukna hoga aur manni hi padegi...wese bhi uske maa papa nahi hai to apni patni ke hi maa papa ko unka darja hi dega....
Fir kuch der rukh ke Ram ji ke aur dekhta hai jo kuch soch rahe thy....
Kabir : ye jo ghar dekh rahe hai na ye uski maa ka sapna tha jo usne puri ji jaan laga kar pura kiya. Jyada tar jo anath bache hote hai kabhi sahi raste pe nahi badhte aur ye mukam nahi hasil karte, per Raj ne ye kiya...wese to mujhe bhi wo kuch khash pasand nahi hai hamesha apni chalata hai per uski mehnat aur imandari ki daat deta hun..hamesha galat ke khilaf ladha hai.
aab jaab Kabir ne Ram ji ko dekha to wo thode naram pad rahe thy,
Kabir (mann mai) : chal beta Kabir baas aab akhri chot de hi de fir dusman haar jayega.
Kabir : per uncle ek baat to hai, wo gussa bahut karta hai..aur aagar aapne han nahi ki to gusse maj hi per shadi to karega Ruhani ji se aur gusse se ki to puri jindegi wo aur Ruhani dono hi apke hatho se nikal jayenge....
Wo to apne bache tak ko apke paas aane nahi dega..soch lo uncle aab aap...wese bhi aunty aur chote Ron dono uske taraf hai..ye na ho ki head of the family usse hi bana de..aage aap samajhdar hai, soch lijiye...
Ram ji Kabir ki baate sunke soch mai pad jate hai, aur Kabir wanha se khisak jata hai aur mall mai uske paas chala jata hai phone karke.
Mall mai aake Kabir sidha Raj aur Viren ke paas aata hai jo Rohan ki dress lene mai madat kar rahe thy.
Kabir : to Raj..dekh tera ye kabil dost saab set kar diya hai, yesi yesi baate boli hai hi Sharma ji se pehle hi ball mai out ho gaye. Tu baas ghar ja dekhna tujhe gale se laga lenge.
Viren : aur aagar tune kuch gadbad ki huyi hogi to....
Kabir : yaar...thoda to bharosha rakh....
Rohan : aagar kuch gadbad huyi to ye haam teeno se pitega.....
Raj : han ye thik hai..aagar kuch hua to tu dekh lena ki tera kya hoga....
Kabir : aur aagar maan gaye to....
Raj : tere liye pakka ek achi si ladki dekh ke tera shadi karwa dunga....
Kabir khush hoke : saab apni baat per rehna.....
teeno ek sath : tu bhi.....
saab ladkiyo ke taraf jati hai jo abhi bhi kapde le rahe thy, Ruhi jo bhi saree uthati Raj na mai sar hila deti hai, saab ke kapde ho gaye aur idha Raj baas na na kar raha tha to Ruhi ke nahi huye thy.
Anu saab ko jane ko bols aur khud Ruhi ke sath aane ko bol diya. Ritika ji ne bhi Raj ko rukhne ke liye bol diya, wo to khud chahti thy ki dono sath hi rahe. Raj ka dil to maano khushi se uchal raha tha.
Raj ke kehne le Viren bhi rukh jata hai aur Raj Anu aur Viren ko kuch ishara kar deta hai to wo dono sath mai chale jate hai Raj aur Ruhi ko chod ke.
Raj ne ek shadi ka joda Ruhi ko diya aur pehne ko kaha, Ruhi bhi bina kuch kahe leke chali gayi aur try karke trial room se bahar aagayi aur Raj ko dikhane lagi.
Jaab Ruhi bahar aayi trial room se to sare jo bhi shop pe thy saab Ruhi ko dekhne lage. Raj bhi baas Ruhi ko dekhe ja raha tha.
Fir Raj aage badh ke Ruhi ke paas aajata hai,
Raj : Ruhi ye shadi ke jode mai bahut pyaari lag rahi ho..yanhi pehen na hai tumhe hamare shadi mai....
Ruhi herani se : per papa....
Raj : wo masn jayenge..mujhpe bharosha hai na...
Ruhi han mai apna sar hila deti hai.
Raj : to baas fir...jao change kar lo aur kuch thik karwana baj to abhi bol do....
Ruhi : han..wo...wo..ye choli thodi loose hai to....
Raj : koyi baat nahi abhi thik kar denge...
Ruhi jaab change karke aati hai to usko thik karne ke liye de dete hai aur usme 1 ghanta lagna tha to Anu aur Viren ko bula ke kuch khana khane chale jate hai, aur fir aake dress leke ghar chale jate hai.
jesse hi ghar pahunche to samne Sharma ji bethe thy aur baki saab side mai khade thy, charo aur sannata tha.
Viren (mann mai) : ek to inhe bhi Chen nahi..pata nahi kya kahenge...fir Kabir ke taraf dekha to uska munh utra hua tha.
Ram ji (gusse se) : Ruhani tum...tum iss..iss Rajveer se pyaar karti ho?
Ruhi bina dare Raj ka hath tham kar : ji papa....
Sharma ji ne Ruhi ko ghurne lage per Ruhi ne Raj hath choda nahi aur jor se pakad liya, saab Ruhi aur Raj ko dekh rahe thy.
Raj (mann mai) : wah meri sherni...hitler ko pehli hi ball mai clean bold kar diya....
Ram ji : to tumhare liye mera faisla koyi mayene nahi rakhta....
Ruhi : rakhta hai papa bahut rakhta hai tabhi to aab taak maine Raj ke sath shadi ke liye han nahi kahi sur to aur wo khud yanhi chahte hai ki aapki han ke baad hi ham shadi kare.
Nice update...
 

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Good update
Superb update
Nice and superb update...
Nice and superb update..
Nice and awesome update..
Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Nice update bhai
Nice update...
Nice update...
Thank you everyone 😊
 

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Ruhi ki baate sunke Ram ji gusse mai pagal ho jate hai,
Ram ji : itni hi mere faisla ki yehmiyat hai to mujhe ye bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai, to teri shadi isse nahi ho sakti.
Ruhi : acha per aap mujhe koyi ek wajah denge ki kyun nahi pasand Raj apko….
Ram ji : baas nahi pasand baat khatam…
Ruhi : mai apki han ka intezar karungi papa….
Ram ji : to puri jindegi karti rehna..aare kya hai isma…isse acha ladka dund dunga tujhe….
Viren (mann mai) : yaar ye kya DDLJ ka Amaresh puri ban rahe hai..itne nakhre to ladki bhi nahi karti hai jitna ye kar rahe hai. Fir gusse se Kabir ko ghurne lagta hai.
Kabir (mann mai) : maan jao uncle..kyun bache ki jaan lene per tule huye ho. Wo mujhe sach mai nahi chodenge…maar maar ke jaan le lenge….
Ruhi : kya yesa ladka dund sakte hai jo 6 saal taak bina kisi umid ke mera intezar kare.
Ram ji herani se : kya…..!!!!
Rohan : mai batata hu uncle….
Fir Rohan Sharma ji ko pichle 7 saalo mai kya kya hua wo saab batata hai, Ruhi ke maa papa dono hi heran thy, Ruhi ke mom ke ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai.
Rohan ki baate sunke Sharma ji ka dil dighal jata hai jo pehel se hi tha, per dikhate nahi thy,
Ram ji : barkhudar…jaab tumne apne ishq ka itna intezar kar hi liya hai to aur kar lo….
Sharma ji ki baate kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aata hai, to Sharma ji aage badh ke Raj ke paas aajate hai,
Ram ji : ek hafte ka intezar aur kaar lo mere bete ke sath meri beti ki bhi shadi hai….aare meri pyaari Ritika ji beti ki shadi ki tayari suru karo…..fir hasne lagte hai,
Sharma ji to kaab ka maan gaye thy wo baas inko sata rahe thy. Saab ye sunke khushi se chilane lagte hai. Raj jo kaab se chup tha wo sidha jake Ram ji ke gale laag jata hai.
Raj : thank you uncle….
Viren dhire se khud mai hi badbadata hai : wah…ye to sach mai Amaresh puri ban gaye baas ek hi baat ki kami hai…..
Piche se Kabir bhi Viren ki ye baat sun leta hai, to wo Viren ke paas aake mai bataun….
Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai fir,
Dono : ja Ruhi ja…ji le apni jindegi…iss ladke se jyada koyi tujhe pyaar nahi kar sakta….hahahahaha….
Ye dono itne jor se bolte hai ki saab unki aur dekhte hai fir hasne lagte hai.
Viren : kamal karte ho Sharma ji aap…dil hi jit liya apne to….
Ram ji : aare Sharma ji nahi uncle bol…uncle….
Viren : aare ek hi dil hai kitne baar jitenge…..
Saab bahut khush thy, wese bhi Sharma ji bina kisi ko bataye do do shadiya ki tayari kar rahe thy. Ritika ji ne to saab rishtey daro ko pehel hi shadi per bula liya tha, ye saab dekh ke Ram ji bhi heran thy….
Saab kuch ache se ja raha tha aab to Viren ki bhi Sharma ji se ache se patne lagi….
Yese hi dekhte dekhte sangit ka din bhi aajata hai, jesse hi teeno ladkiya tayar hoke aate hai to saab dekhte reh jate hai. Kabir aab bhi apne akele hone ka rona ro raha tha.
Dono jodiyo ko betha diya gaya, sabse pehle Anu ne dance kiya, aur baas Viren ko dekh ke hi dance kar rahi thy. Viren bhi Anu mai hi kho gaya tha, jo ki Sharma ji ne notice kar liya,
Ram ji : Viren babu hamari bachi ko yese maat dekho nahi to nazar lag jayegi.
Tabhi pata nahi Kabir kanha se ghumte ghumte aaya aur Ram ji ka baat sunke : uncle nazar to laag chuki hai…ye hamare Anu ke hone wale wo hai…kyu Viren babu….
Kabir ke baat sunke Ram ji Viren aur kabir ko dekhne lagte hai,
Ram ji : aare tum loog bhi dhire dhire dhamake kar rahe ho..ek baar mai hi saab kuch bata do….
Ram ji ki baat pe Viren hasne lagta hai aur Kabir saab kuch bata deta hai.
Fir ek ke baad ek performance ho rahi thy, Ram ji aur Ritika ji ne bhi dance kiya wanhi Mallik sahab Zara ke sath Kabir bhi unke sath ho liya.
Achanak Kabir ko ek phone aata hai to wo bahar ke taraf chala jata hai. Jesse hi baat karke ander aata hai to kisi se takra ke gir jata hai, jesse hi nazar utha ke dekhta hai to ek khubsurat ladki uske upar thy. Kabir to usko dekhta reh gaya. Fir dono khade ho jate hai wo ladki Kabir ko dekhne lagi fir ek daam boli,
Ladki : aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir (mann mai) : aare wah..mai itna famous ho gaya hu ladkiya bhi pehchan ne lagi hai…per yesa to koyi kaam kiya nahi maine…..
Kabir soch hi raha tha ki wo ladki ek aur baar puchti hai aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir : han..per aap….
Ladki : aare maine to apko pehchan liya per aapne nahi pehchan na….
Kabir : ham pehle se hi ek dusre ko jante hai kya….
Ladki : aare Kabir mai Nibi..Anu ki dost…ham ek hi school mai hi thy. Aap aur Viren dono hamare senior thy
Kabir herani se : tum Nibi ho..sach mai…tum to bilkul badal gayi ho…
Nibi : kya sach mai badal gayi hun…achi nahi lag rahi hun aab…..
Kabir usme hi khoye huye : han badal to gayi ho per ek baat jo bilkul nahi badli….
Nibi kabir ko dekhte huye : wo kya….
Kabir : yanhi ki tum bahut cute ho..pehle bhi thy..aab bhi ho….
Ye sunke Nibi muskurane lagti hai,
Nibi : thank you kabir aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho…
Kabir khushi se : thanks…..
Taab tak Anu bhi aajati hai aur Nibi ko apne sath leke chali jati hai, Kabir bhi piche piche aajata hai, aur Nibi ke samne hi khada ho jata hai, Kabir Nibi ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh raha hota hai,
Gora rang, gol gol badi ankhe, gol matol sa chehra, hasti hai to gaal pe dimple padte hai, gumrale baal jo kandhe niche taak aate thy, na jyada moti na jyada patli, ek daam cute si. Kabir to baas Nibi mai hi kho gaya tha.
Viren Kabir ke paas aake : oye chal hamara dance hai aab….
Kabir kanha hosh mai tha to Viren hilane se Kabir wapas hosh mai aata hai aur Viren kya keh raha hai sunne lagta hai, sunne ke baad,
Kabir : han..chal yaar dance karne ..
Fir dono chale jate hai. Dono jodiya stage ke samne bethe thy, unka bhi dance baki tha, tabhi stage pe Viren aur kabir aate hai aur dance karne lagte hai.
Dance karte karte Rohan aur Raj ko bhi stage ke upar khinch lete hai fir charo mil ke dance karne lagte hai fir ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai, charo ki ankhe naam thy, charo ki yesi dosti dekh ke sabhi ki ankhe gili ho gayi thy. Sharma ji to heran thy ki kuch rishtey khun ke rishtey se bhi aage hote hai.
Charo bilkul ek dusre ki jaan hi thy. Sabhi inki dosti dekh ke khush thy.
(Wo kya hai na aaj ke jamane mai sache dost milna bahot muskil hai per meri ye kahani mai maine dosti hi yehmiyat dikhayi hai)
Fir Zara aur Rohan ka bhi dance hota hai fir Raj aur Ruhi dono jodi to baas apne apne partner ka hi yehsaas mai hi khoye huye dance kar rahe thy, sabhi loog behed khush thy.
Sharma ji bhi in charo ko dekh ke behed khush thy, sangit ke ek din baad shadi thy, aur kaal mehendi to saab jaldi jaldi uth ke tayari bhi karni thy. Anu ne Nibi ko rok liya tha, Kabir to bahut khush tha Nibi ke rehne se.
Raat ko saab bade sone chale jate hai to baki saab ne Raj ke banglow ke piche party rakh ki, jisme Rohan, Kabir, Viren, Raj, Ruhi, Anu, Zara, Nibi, Ron thy.
Sabhi ladke to pehle se hi moujud thy baas ladkiya hi nahi thy, thodi der baad wo charo bhi aajate hai, sabhi ke sabhi saree mai thy aur kayamat dha rahe thy, ladkiyo ko dekh ke ladko ka munh khula ka khula reh jata hai, Jisko Ron ne dekh liya to wo ladko ke samne aake,
Ron : mun to band karlo bhai…..
Ron ki baat sunke sabhi hosh mai aajate hai, Rohan aur Raj to apni wali ko leke nikal gaye aur yanha Anu Viren ko ishara kare ja rahi thy aur Viren usse andekha jisse Nibi ne dekh liya to Nibi jhatke mai Anu ko pakad leti aur puch leti hai,
Nibi : tune Viren ko bol diya…kaab..unhe kya kaha..mujhe bataya kyun nahi…bol na….
Anu : shant ho ja meri maa..batati hun fir Anu saab batane lagti hai….
Nibi Anu ki baate sunke apni munh pe hath rakh leti hai : kya….tune Viren ko kiss kiya pagal….
Anu : yaar pagal ho gayi thy baas..Kuch soch samajh kar nahi hua….
Nibi : wow yaar…tum dono finally ek sath…mai bahut khush…ruk mai apne jiju se bhi baate karta hun…..
Nibi sidhe Viren ke paas aajati hai wo Anu ko kuch bolne hi nahi diya to Anu bhi uske piche piche aagayi.
Idhar Viren Kabir aur Ron se baat kar raha tha.
Nibi : hi….
Viren : hey Nibi kesi hai…tujhse baat bhi nahi ho payi function mai….
Nibi : bahut achi, aur function mai aap busy thy it’s ok…chalo aapne to pehchan liya warna to kuch loog ne pehchana hi nahi tha mujhe….
Ye kehke Kabir ki aur dekhne lagi jo usse hi dekh raha tha, ye kehn aa sahi hoga taad raha tha.
Viren : kisne nahi pehchana….
Nibi : wo saab chodo ye batao ki aaj se mai apko jiju bol sakta hun na….
Viren ne Nibi ki baat sunke uske piche khadi Anu ko dekha to wo aaj pehli baar saram se niche dekh rahi thy. Kabir ne bhi jaab Nibi se dhyaan hata ke Anu ko dekha to drink pite pite khasne lagta hai….
Kabir : partner tu sarma rahi hai..sach mai..per isme itna sarmane wali baat kya hai…..
Anu : wo…na…Nibi ne jaab Viren ji ko jiju kaha tha to ander se badi khushi wali feeling aayi ki sach mai aab Viren baas mere hai…..
Kabir : oohhhooo…waah dekho to hamari ladki kitni romantic hai….
Viren ne Anu ki dekha fir Nibi se,
Viren : Nibi mujhe Anu se baat karni hai….
Kabir : han…han…jao tum bhi…..
Ron : per yanhi kaar lo na baat ..di aur Raj jiju bhi chale gaye….Rohan bhai aur Zara bhabhi bhi….
Kabir : aare rehne de Ron..ladki ka chakar…Ron ladki ka chakar….
Viren Kabir ke sar pe maar ke Anu ko le ke side mai chala jata hai. Nibi bhi Ron aur kabir ke bich mai jake beth jati hai. Kabir to baas Nibi ko hi dekh raha tha jo Ron se baato mai lagi thy. Pata nahi itna bolne wala Kabir aaj chup tha.
Ron : to Nibi di apka koyi boy friend hai kya?
Nibi : tujhe lagta hai mere jese gol matol ladki ko koyi pasand karega….
Ron : kya di apko pata hai aap kitni pyari ho, cute ho….
Nibi hass ke ron ka gaal khinch deti hai : tu chota na hota to tujh hi bana leti…
Ron : sachi…per aab to chota hun..wese han Kabir bhayiya hai na…wo to single bhi hai..aur aap dono ki jodi bhi mast lagegi….
Ron ne to Kabir ka dil ki baat bol di…Kabir mann hi mann Ron ko sabasi de raha tha, wanhi Nibi haste haste shant ho gayi….
Nibi : kya Ron kuch bhi bolta hai….
Ron : nahi manna hai to maat mano per sach bola hai maine, chalo mai chala sone bye…di and Kabir bhai….
Kabir : good night Ron….
Ron to chala gaya per Nibi ko shant karwa gaya.
Kabir ne Nibi ko yese chup chap bethi dekha to,
Kabir : tum kyun chup ho gayi…aagar Ron ki baat buri lagi to I am sorry…per kya mai itna bura hun ki mazak mai bhi tu apna naam mere naam ke sath jod nahi sakti.
Nibi kabir ki baat sunke herani se usse dekhne lagti.
 

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Ruhi ki baate sunke Ram ji gusse mai pagal ho jate hai,
Ram ji : itni hi mere faisla ki yehmiyat hai to mujhe ye bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai, to teri shadi isse nahi ho sakti.
Ruhi : acha per aap mujhe koyi ek wajah denge ki kyun nahi pasand Raj apko….
Ram ji : baas nahi pasand baat khatam…
Ruhi : mai apki han ka intezar karungi papa….
Ram ji : to puri jindegi karti rehna..aare kya hai isma…isse acha ladka dund dunga tujhe….
Viren (mann mai) : yaar ye kya DDLJ ka Amaresh puri ban rahe hai..itne nakhre to ladki bhi nahi karti hai jitna ye kar rahe hai. Fir gusse se Kabir ko ghurne lagta hai.
Kabir (mann mai) : maan jao uncle..kyun bache ki jaan lene per tule huye ho. Wo mujhe sach mai nahi chodenge…maar maar ke jaan le lenge….
Ruhi : kya yesa ladka dund sakte hai jo 6 saal taak bina kisi umid ke mera intezar kare.
Ram ji herani se : kya…..!!!!
Rohan : mai batata hu uncle….
Fir Rohan Sharma ji ko pichle 7 saalo mai kya kya hua wo saab batata hai, Ruhi ke maa papa dono hi heran thy, Ruhi ke mom ke ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai.
Rohan ki baate sunke Sharma ji ka dil dighal jata hai jo pehel se hi tha, per dikhate nahi thy,
Ram ji : barkhudar…jaab tumne apne ishq ka itna intezar kar hi liya hai to aur kar lo….
Sharma ji ki baate kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aata hai, to Sharma ji aage badh ke Raj ke paas aajate hai,
Ram ji : ek hafte ka intezar aur kaar lo mere bete ke sath meri beti ki bhi shadi hai….aare meri pyaari Ritika ji beti ki shadi ki tayari suru karo…..fir hasne lagte hai,
Sharma ji to kaab ka maan gaye thy wo baas inko sata rahe thy. Saab ye sunke khushi se chilane lagte hai. Raj jo kaab se chup tha wo sidha jake Ram ji ke gale laag jata hai.
Raj : thank you uncle….
Viren dhire se khud mai hi badbadata hai : wah…ye to sach mai Amaresh puri ban gaye baas ek hi baat ki kami hai…..
Piche se Kabir bhi Viren ki ye baat sun leta hai, to wo Viren ke paas aake mai bataun….
Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai fir,
Dono : ja Ruhi ja…ji le apni jindegi…iss ladke se jyada koyi tujhe pyaar nahi kar sakta….hahahahaha….
Ye dono itne jor se bolte hai ki saab unki aur dekhte hai fir hasne lagte hai.
Viren : kamal karte ho Sharma ji aap…dil hi jit liya apne to….
Ram ji : aare Sharma ji nahi uncle bol…uncle….
Viren : aare ek hi dil hai kitne baar jitenge…..
Saab bahut khush thy, wese bhi Sharma ji bina kisi ko bataye do do shadiya ki tayari kar rahe thy. Ritika ji ne to saab rishtey daro ko pehel hi shadi per bula liya tha, ye saab dekh ke Ram ji bhi heran thy….
Saab kuch ache se ja raha tha aab to Viren ki bhi Sharma ji se ache se patne lagi….
Yese hi dekhte dekhte sangit ka din bhi aajata hai, jesse hi teeno ladkiya tayar hoke aate hai to saab dekhte reh jate hai. Kabir aab bhi apne akele hone ka rona ro raha tha.
Dono jodiyo ko betha diya gaya, sabse pehle Anu ne dance kiya, aur baas Viren ko dekh ke hi dance kar rahi thy. Viren bhi Anu mai hi kho gaya tha, jo ki Sharma ji ne notice kar liya,
Ram ji : Viren babu hamari bachi ko yese maat dekho nahi to nazar lag jayegi.
Tabhi pata nahi Kabir kanha se ghumte ghumte aaya aur Ram ji ka baat sunke : uncle nazar to laag chuki hai…ye hamare Anu ke hone wale wo hai…kyu Viren babu….
Kabir ke baat sunke Ram ji Viren aur kabir ko dekhne lagte hai,
Ram ji : aare tum loog bhi dhire dhire dhamake kar rahe ho..ek baar mai hi saab kuch bata do….
Ram ji ki baat pe Viren hasne lagta hai aur Kabir saab kuch bata deta hai.
Fir ek ke baad ek performance ho rahi thy, Ram ji aur Ritika ji ne bhi dance kiya wanhi Mallik sahab Zara ke sath Kabir bhi unke sath ho liya.
Achanak Kabir ko ek phone aata hai to wo bahar ke taraf chala jata hai. Jesse hi baat karke ander aata hai to kisi se takra ke gir jata hai, jesse hi nazar utha ke dekhta hai to ek khubsurat ladki uske upar thy. Kabir to usko dekhta reh gaya. Fir dono khade ho jate hai wo ladki Kabir ko dekhne lagi fir ek daam boli,
Ladki : aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir (mann mai) : aare wah..mai itna famous ho gaya hu ladkiya bhi pehchan ne lagi hai…per yesa to koyi kaam kiya nahi maine…..
Kabir soch hi raha tha ki wo ladki ek aur baar puchti hai aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir : han..per aap….
Ladki : aare maine to apko pehchan liya per aapne nahi pehchan na….
Kabir : ham pehle se hi ek dusre ko jante hai kya….
Ladki : aare Kabir mai Nibi..Anu ki dost…ham ek hi school mai hi thy. Aap aur Viren dono hamare senior thy
Kabir herani se : tum Nibi ho..sach mai…tum to bilkul badal gayi ho…
Nibi : kya sach mai badal gayi hun…achi nahi lag rahi hun aab…..
Kabir usme hi khoye huye : han badal to gayi ho per ek baat jo bilkul nahi badli….
Nibi kabir ko dekhte huye : wo kya….
Kabir : yanhi ki tum bahut cute ho..pehle bhi thy..aab bhi ho….
Ye sunke Nibi muskurane lagti hai,
Nibi : thank you kabir aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho…
Kabir khushi se : thanks…..
Taab tak Anu bhi aajati hai aur Nibi ko apne sath leke chali jati hai, Kabir bhi piche piche aajata hai, aur Nibi ke samne hi khada ho jata hai, Kabir Nibi ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh raha hota hai,
Gora rang, gol gol badi ankhe, gol matol sa chehra, hasti hai to gaal pe dimple padte hai, gumrale baal jo kandhe niche taak aate thy, na jyada moti na jyada patli, ek daam cute si. Kabir to baas Nibi mai hi kho gaya tha.
Viren Kabir ke paas aake : oye chal hamara dance hai aab….
Kabir kanha hosh mai tha to Viren hilane se Kabir wapas hosh mai aata hai aur Viren kya keh raha hai sunne lagta hai, sunne ke baad,
Kabir : han..chal yaar dance karne ..
Fir dono chale jate hai. Dono jodiya stage ke samne bethe thy, unka bhi dance baki tha, tabhi stage pe Viren aur kabir aate hai aur dance karne lagte hai.
Dance karte karte Rohan aur Raj ko bhi stage ke upar khinch lete hai fir charo mil ke dance karne lagte hai fir ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai, charo ki ankhe naam thy, charo ki yesi dosti dekh ke sabhi ki ankhe gili ho gayi thy. Sharma ji to heran thy ki kuch rishtey khun ke rishtey se bhi aage hote hai.
Charo bilkul ek dusre ki jaan hi thy. Sabhi inki dosti dekh ke khush thy.
(Wo kya hai na aaj ke jamane mai sache dost milna bahot muskil hai per meri ye kahani mai maine dosti hi yehmiyat dikhayi hai)
Fir Zara aur Rohan ka bhi dance hota hai fir Raj aur Ruhi dono jodi to baas apne apne partner ka hi yehsaas mai hi khoye huye dance kar rahe thy, sabhi loog behed khush thy.
Sharma ji bhi in charo ko dekh ke behed khush thy, sangit ke ek din baad shadi thy, aur kaal mehendi to saab jaldi jaldi uth ke tayari bhi karni thy. Anu ne Nibi ko rok liya tha, Kabir to bahut khush tha Nibi ke rehne se.
Raat ko saab bade sone chale jate hai to baki saab ne Raj ke banglow ke piche party rakh ki, jisme Rohan, Kabir, Viren, Raj, Ruhi, Anu, Zara, Nibi, Ron thy.
Sabhi ladke to pehle se hi moujud thy baas ladkiya hi nahi thy, thodi der baad wo charo bhi aajate hai, sabhi ke sabhi saree mai thy aur kayamat dha rahe thy, ladkiyo ko dekh ke ladko ka munh khula ka khula reh jata hai, Jisko Ron ne dekh liya to wo ladko ke samne aake,
Ron : mun to band karlo bhai…..
Ron ki baat sunke sabhi hosh mai aajate hai, Rohan aur Raj to apni wali ko leke nikal gaye aur yanha Anu Viren ko ishara kare ja rahi thy aur Viren usse andekha jisse Nibi ne dekh liya to Nibi jhatke mai Anu ko pakad leti aur puch leti hai,
Nibi : tune Viren ko bol diya…kaab..unhe kya kaha..mujhe bataya kyun nahi…bol na….
Anu : shant ho ja meri maa..batati hun fir Anu saab batane lagti hai….
Nibi Anu ki baate sunke apni munh pe hath rakh leti hai : kya….tune Viren ko kiss kiya pagal….
Anu : yaar pagal ho gayi thy baas..Kuch soch samajh kar nahi hua….
Nibi : wow yaar…tum dono finally ek sath…mai bahut khush…ruk mai apne jiju se bhi baate karta hun…..
Nibi sidhe Viren ke paas aajati hai wo Anu ko kuch bolne hi nahi diya to Anu bhi uske piche piche aagayi.
Idhar Viren Kabir aur Ron se baat kar raha tha.
Nibi : hi….
Viren : hey Nibi kesi hai…tujhse baat bhi nahi ho payi function mai….
Nibi : bahut achi, aur function mai aap busy thy it’s ok…chalo aapne to pehchan liya warna to kuch loog ne pehchana hi nahi tha mujhe….
Ye kehke Kabir ki aur dekhne lagi jo usse hi dekh raha tha, ye kehn aa sahi hoga taad raha tha.
Viren : kisne nahi pehchana….
Nibi : wo saab chodo ye batao ki aaj se mai apko jiju bol sakta hun na….
Viren ne Nibi ki baat sunke uske piche khadi Anu ko dekha to wo aaj pehli baar saram se niche dekh rahi thy. Kabir ne bhi jaab Nibi se dhyaan hata ke Anu ko dekha to drink pite pite khasne lagta hai….
Kabir : partner tu sarma rahi hai..sach mai..per isme itna sarmane wali baat kya hai…..
Anu : wo…na…Nibi ne jaab Viren ji ko jiju kaha tha to ander se badi khushi wali feeling aayi ki sach mai aab Viren baas mere hai…..
Kabir : oohhhooo…waah dekho to hamari ladki kitni romantic hai….
Viren ne Anu ki dekha fir Nibi se,
Viren : Nibi mujhe Anu se baat karni hai….
Kabir : han…han…jao tum bhi…..
Ron : per yanhi kaar lo na baat ..di aur Raj jiju bhi chale gaye….Rohan bhai aur Zara bhabhi bhi….
Kabir : aare rehne de Ron..ladki ka chakar…Ron ladki ka chakar….
Viren Kabir ke sar pe maar ke Anu ko le ke side mai chala jata hai. Nibi bhi Ron aur kabir ke bich mai jake beth jati hai. Kabir to baas Nibi ko hi dekh raha tha jo Ron se baato mai lagi thy. Pata nahi itna bolne wala Kabir aaj chup tha.
Ron : to Nibi di apka koyi boy friend hai kya?
Nibi : tujhe lagta hai mere jese gol matol ladki ko koyi pasand karega….
Ron : kya di apko pata hai aap kitni pyari ho, cute ho….
Nibi hass ke ron ka gaal khinch deti hai : tu chota na hota to tujh hi bana leti…
Ron : sachi…per aab to chota hun..wese han Kabir bhayiya hai na…wo to single bhi hai..aur aap dono ki jodi bhi mast lagegi….
Ron ne to Kabir ka dil ki baat bol di…Kabir mann hi mann Ron ko sabasi de raha tha, wanhi Nibi haste haste shant ho gayi….
Nibi : kya Ron kuch bhi bolta hai….
Ron : nahi manna hai to maat mano per sach bola hai maine, chalo mai chala sone bye…di and Kabir bhai….
Kabir : good night Ron….
Ron to chala gaya per Nibi ko shant karwa gaya.
Kabir ne Nibi ko yese chup chap bethi dekha to,
Kabir : tum kyun chup ho gayi…aagar Ron ki baat buri lagi to I am sorry…per kya mai itna bura hun ki mazak mai bhi tu apna naam mere naam ke sath jod nahi sakti.
Nibi kabir ki baat sunke herani se usse dekhne lagti.

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Ruhi ki baate sunke Ram ji gusse mai pagal ho jate hai,
Ram ji : itni hi mere faisla ki yehmiyat hai to mujhe ye bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai, to teri shadi isse nahi ho sakti.
Ruhi : acha per aap mujhe koyi ek wajah denge ki kyun nahi pasand Raj apko….
Ram ji : baas nahi pasand baat khatam…
Ruhi : mai apki han ka intezar karungi papa….
Ram ji : to puri jindegi karti rehna..aare kya hai isma…isse acha ladka dund dunga tujhe….
Viren (mann mai) : yaar ye kya DDLJ ka Amaresh puri ban rahe hai..itne nakhre to ladki bhi nahi karti hai jitna ye kar rahe hai. Fir gusse se Kabir ko ghurne lagta hai.
Kabir (mann mai) : maan jao uncle..kyun bache ki jaan lene per tule huye ho. Wo mujhe sach mai nahi chodenge…maar maar ke jaan le lenge….
Ruhi : kya yesa ladka dund sakte hai jo 6 saal taak bina kisi umid ke mera intezar kare.
Ram ji herani se : kya…..!!!!
Rohan : mai batata hu uncle….
Fir Rohan Sharma ji ko pichle 7 saalo mai kya kya hua wo saab batata hai, Ruhi ke maa papa dono hi heran thy, Ruhi ke mom ke ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai.
Rohan ki baate sunke Sharma ji ka dil dighal jata hai jo pehel se hi tha, per dikhate nahi thy,
Ram ji : barkhudar…jaab tumne apne ishq ka itna intezar kar hi liya hai to aur kar lo….
Sharma ji ki baate kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aata hai, to Sharma ji aage badh ke Raj ke paas aajate hai,
Ram ji : ek hafte ka intezar aur kaar lo mere bete ke sath meri beti ki bhi shadi hai….aare meri pyaari Ritika ji beti ki shadi ki tayari suru karo…..fir hasne lagte hai,
Sharma ji to kaab ka maan gaye thy wo baas inko sata rahe thy. Saab ye sunke khushi se chilane lagte hai. Raj jo kaab se chup tha wo sidha jake Ram ji ke gale laag jata hai.
Raj : thank you uncle….
Viren dhire se khud mai hi badbadata hai : wah…ye to sach mai Amaresh puri ban gaye baas ek hi baat ki kami hai…..
Piche se Kabir bhi Viren ki ye baat sun leta hai, to wo Viren ke paas aake mai bataun….
Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai fir,
Dono : ja Ruhi ja…ji le apni jindegi…iss ladke se jyada koyi tujhe pyaar nahi kar sakta….hahahahaha….
Ye dono itne jor se bolte hai ki saab unki aur dekhte hai fir hasne lagte hai.
Viren : kamal karte ho Sharma ji aap…dil hi jit liya apne to….
Ram ji : aare Sharma ji nahi uncle bol…uncle….
Viren : aare ek hi dil hai kitne baar jitenge…..
Saab bahut khush thy, wese bhi Sharma ji bina kisi ko bataye do do shadiya ki tayari kar rahe thy. Ritika ji ne to saab rishtey daro ko pehel hi shadi per bula liya tha, ye saab dekh ke Ram ji bhi heran thy….
Saab kuch ache se ja raha tha aab to Viren ki bhi Sharma ji se ache se patne lagi….
Yese hi dekhte dekhte sangit ka din bhi aajata hai, jesse hi teeno ladkiya tayar hoke aate hai to saab dekhte reh jate hai. Kabir aab bhi apne akele hone ka rona ro raha tha.
Dono jodiyo ko betha diya gaya, sabse pehle Anu ne dance kiya, aur baas Viren ko dekh ke hi dance kar rahi thy. Viren bhi Anu mai hi kho gaya tha, jo ki Sharma ji ne notice kar liya,
Ram ji : Viren babu hamari bachi ko yese maat dekho nahi to nazar lag jayegi.
Tabhi pata nahi Kabir kanha se ghumte ghumte aaya aur Ram ji ka baat sunke : uncle nazar to laag chuki hai…ye hamare Anu ke hone wale wo hai…kyu Viren babu….
Kabir ke baat sunke Ram ji Viren aur kabir ko dekhne lagte hai,
Ram ji : aare tum loog bhi dhire dhire dhamake kar rahe ho..ek baar mai hi saab kuch bata do….
Ram ji ki baat pe Viren hasne lagta hai aur Kabir saab kuch bata deta hai.
Fir ek ke baad ek performance ho rahi thy, Ram ji aur Ritika ji ne bhi dance kiya wanhi Mallik sahab Zara ke sath Kabir bhi unke sath ho liya.
Achanak Kabir ko ek phone aata hai to wo bahar ke taraf chala jata hai. Jesse hi baat karke ander aata hai to kisi se takra ke gir jata hai, jesse hi nazar utha ke dekhta hai to ek khubsurat ladki uske upar thy. Kabir to usko dekhta reh gaya. Fir dono khade ho jate hai wo ladki Kabir ko dekhne lagi fir ek daam boli,
Ladki : aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir (mann mai) : aare wah..mai itna famous ho gaya hu ladkiya bhi pehchan ne lagi hai…per yesa to koyi kaam kiya nahi maine…..
Kabir soch hi raha tha ki wo ladki ek aur baar puchti hai aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir : han..per aap….
Ladki : aare maine to apko pehchan liya per aapne nahi pehchan na….
Kabir : ham pehle se hi ek dusre ko jante hai kya….
Ladki : aare Kabir mai Nibi..Anu ki dost…ham ek hi school mai hi thy. Aap aur Viren dono hamare senior thy
Kabir herani se : tum Nibi ho..sach mai…tum to bilkul badal gayi ho…
Nibi : kya sach mai badal gayi hun…achi nahi lag rahi hun aab…..
Kabir usme hi khoye huye : han badal to gayi ho per ek baat jo bilkul nahi badli….
Nibi kabir ko dekhte huye : wo kya….
Kabir : yanhi ki tum bahut cute ho..pehle bhi thy..aab bhi ho….
Ye sunke Nibi muskurane lagti hai,
Nibi : thank you kabir aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho…
Kabir khushi se : thanks…..
Taab tak Anu bhi aajati hai aur Nibi ko apne sath leke chali jati hai, Kabir bhi piche piche aajata hai, aur Nibi ke samne hi khada ho jata hai, Kabir Nibi ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh raha hota hai,
Gora rang, gol gol badi ankhe, gol matol sa chehra, hasti hai to gaal pe dimple padte hai, gumrale baal jo kandhe niche taak aate thy, na jyada moti na jyada patli, ek daam cute si. Kabir to baas Nibi mai hi kho gaya tha.
Viren Kabir ke paas aake : oye chal hamara dance hai aab….
Kabir kanha hosh mai tha to Viren hilane se Kabir wapas hosh mai aata hai aur Viren kya keh raha hai sunne lagta hai, sunne ke baad,
Kabir : han..chal yaar dance karne ..
Fir dono chale jate hai. Dono jodiya stage ke samne bethe thy, unka bhi dance baki tha, tabhi stage pe Viren aur kabir aate hai aur dance karne lagte hai.
Dance karte karte Rohan aur Raj ko bhi stage ke upar khinch lete hai fir charo mil ke dance karne lagte hai fir ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai, charo ki ankhe naam thy, charo ki yesi dosti dekh ke sabhi ki ankhe gili ho gayi thy. Sharma ji to heran thy ki kuch rishtey khun ke rishtey se bhi aage hote hai.
Charo bilkul ek dusre ki jaan hi thy. Sabhi inki dosti dekh ke khush thy.
(Wo kya hai na aaj ke jamane mai sache dost milna bahot muskil hai per meri ye kahani mai maine dosti hi yehmiyat dikhayi hai)
Fir Zara aur Rohan ka bhi dance hota hai fir Raj aur Ruhi dono jodi to baas apne apne partner ka hi yehsaas mai hi khoye huye dance kar rahe thy, sabhi loog behed khush thy.
Sharma ji bhi in charo ko dekh ke behed khush thy, sangit ke ek din baad shadi thy, aur kaal mehendi to saab jaldi jaldi uth ke tayari bhi karni thy. Anu ne Nibi ko rok liya tha, Kabir to bahut khush tha Nibi ke rehne se.
Raat ko saab bade sone chale jate hai to baki saab ne Raj ke banglow ke piche party rakh ki, jisme Rohan, Kabir, Viren, Raj, Ruhi, Anu, Zara, Nibi, Ron thy.
Sabhi ladke to pehle se hi moujud thy baas ladkiya hi nahi thy, thodi der baad wo charo bhi aajate hai, sabhi ke sabhi saree mai thy aur kayamat dha rahe thy, ladkiyo ko dekh ke ladko ka munh khula ka khula reh jata hai, Jisko Ron ne dekh liya to wo ladko ke samne aake,
Ron : mun to band karlo bhai…..
Ron ki baat sunke sabhi hosh mai aajate hai, Rohan aur Raj to apni wali ko leke nikal gaye aur yanha Anu Viren ko ishara kare ja rahi thy aur Viren usse andekha jisse Nibi ne dekh liya to Nibi jhatke mai Anu ko pakad leti aur puch leti hai,
Nibi : tune Viren ko bol diya…kaab..unhe kya kaha..mujhe bataya kyun nahi…bol na….
Anu : shant ho ja meri maa..batati hun fir Anu saab batane lagti hai….
Nibi Anu ki baate sunke apni munh pe hath rakh leti hai : kya….tune Viren ko kiss kiya pagal….
Anu : yaar pagal ho gayi thy baas..Kuch soch samajh kar nahi hua….
Nibi : wow yaar…tum dono finally ek sath…mai bahut khush…ruk mai apne jiju se bhi baate karta hun…..
Nibi sidhe Viren ke paas aajati hai wo Anu ko kuch bolne hi nahi diya to Anu bhi uske piche piche aagayi.
Idhar Viren Kabir aur Ron se baat kar raha tha.
Nibi : hi….
Viren : hey Nibi kesi hai…tujhse baat bhi nahi ho payi function mai….
Nibi : bahut achi, aur function mai aap busy thy it’s ok…chalo aapne to pehchan liya warna to kuch loog ne pehchana hi nahi tha mujhe….
Ye kehke Kabir ki aur dekhne lagi jo usse hi dekh raha tha, ye kehn aa sahi hoga taad raha tha.
Viren : kisne nahi pehchana….
Nibi : wo saab chodo ye batao ki aaj se mai apko jiju bol sakta hun na….
Viren ne Nibi ki baat sunke uske piche khadi Anu ko dekha to wo aaj pehli baar saram se niche dekh rahi thy. Kabir ne bhi jaab Nibi se dhyaan hata ke Anu ko dekha to drink pite pite khasne lagta hai….
Kabir : partner tu sarma rahi hai..sach mai..per isme itna sarmane wali baat kya hai…..
Anu : wo…na…Nibi ne jaab Viren ji ko jiju kaha tha to ander se badi khushi wali feeling aayi ki sach mai aab Viren baas mere hai…..
Kabir : oohhhooo…waah dekho to hamari ladki kitni romantic hai….
Viren ne Anu ki dekha fir Nibi se,
Viren : Nibi mujhe Anu se baat karni hai….
Kabir : han…han…jao tum bhi…..
Ron : per yanhi kaar lo na baat ..di aur Raj jiju bhi chale gaye….Rohan bhai aur Zara bhabhi bhi….
Kabir : aare rehne de Ron..ladki ka chakar…Ron ladki ka chakar….
Viren Kabir ke sar pe maar ke Anu ko le ke side mai chala jata hai. Nibi bhi Ron aur kabir ke bich mai jake beth jati hai. Kabir to baas Nibi ko hi dekh raha tha jo Ron se baato mai lagi thy. Pata nahi itna bolne wala Kabir aaj chup tha.
Ron : to Nibi di apka koyi boy friend hai kya?
Nibi : tujhe lagta hai mere jese gol matol ladki ko koyi pasand karega….
Ron : kya di apko pata hai aap kitni pyari ho, cute ho….
Nibi hass ke ron ka gaal khinch deti hai : tu chota na hota to tujh hi bana leti…
Ron : sachi…per aab to chota hun..wese han Kabir bhayiya hai na…wo to single bhi hai..aur aap dono ki jodi bhi mast lagegi….
Ron ne to Kabir ka dil ki baat bol di…Kabir mann hi mann Ron ko sabasi de raha tha, wanhi Nibi haste haste shant ho gayi….
Nibi : kya Ron kuch bhi bolta hai….
Ron : nahi manna hai to maat mano per sach bola hai maine, chalo mai chala sone bye…di and Kabir bhai….
Kabir : good night Ron….
Ron to chala gaya per Nibi ko shant karwa gaya.
Kabir ne Nibi ko yese chup chap bethi dekha to,
Kabir : tum kyun chup ho gayi…aagar Ron ki baat buri lagi to I am sorry…per kya mai itna bura hun ki mazak mai bhi tu apna naam mere naam ke sath jod nahi sakti.
Nibi kabir ki baat sunke herani se usse dekhne lagti.
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Ruhi ki baate sunke Ram ji gusse mai pagal ho jate hai,
Ram ji : itni hi mere faisla ki yehmiyat hai to mujhe ye bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai, to teri shadi isse nahi ho sakti.
Ruhi : acha per aap mujhe koyi ek wajah denge ki kyun nahi pasand Raj apko….
Ram ji : baas nahi pasand baat khatam…
Ruhi : mai apki han ka intezar karungi papa….
Ram ji : to puri jindegi karti rehna..aare kya hai isma…isse acha ladka dund dunga tujhe….
Viren (mann mai) : yaar ye kya DDLJ ka Amaresh puri ban rahe hai..itne nakhre to ladki bhi nahi karti hai jitna ye kar rahe hai. Fir gusse se Kabir ko ghurne lagta hai.
Kabir (mann mai) : maan jao uncle..kyun bache ki jaan lene per tule huye ho. Wo mujhe sach mai nahi chodenge…maar maar ke jaan le lenge….
Ruhi : kya yesa ladka dund sakte hai jo 6 saal taak bina kisi umid ke mera intezar kare.
Ram ji herani se : kya…..!!!!
Rohan : mai batata hu uncle….
Fir Rohan Sharma ji ko pichle 7 saalo mai kya kya hua wo saab batata hai, Ruhi ke maa papa dono hi heran thy, Ruhi ke mom ke ankhe bhi naam ho jati hai.
Rohan ki baate sunke Sharma ji ka dil dighal jata hai jo pehel se hi tha, per dikhate nahi thy,
Ram ji : barkhudar…jaab tumne apne ishq ka itna intezar kar hi liya hai to aur kar lo….
Sharma ji ki baate kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aata hai, to Sharma ji aage badh ke Raj ke paas aajate hai,
Ram ji : ek hafte ka intezar aur kaar lo mere bete ke sath meri beti ki bhi shadi hai….aare meri pyaari Ritika ji beti ki shadi ki tayari suru karo…..fir hasne lagte hai,
Sharma ji to kaab ka maan gaye thy wo baas inko sata rahe thy. Saab ye sunke khushi se chilane lagte hai. Raj jo kaab se chup tha wo sidha jake Ram ji ke gale laag jata hai.
Raj : thank you uncle….
Viren dhire se khud mai hi badbadata hai : wah…ye to sach mai Amaresh puri ban gaye baas ek hi baat ki kami hai…..
Piche se Kabir bhi Viren ki ye baat sun leta hai, to wo Viren ke paas aake mai bataun….
Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai fir,
Dono : ja Ruhi ja…ji le apni jindegi…iss ladke se jyada koyi tujhe pyaar nahi kar sakta….hahahahaha….
Ye dono itne jor se bolte hai ki saab unki aur dekhte hai fir hasne lagte hai.
Viren : kamal karte ho Sharma ji aap…dil hi jit liya apne to….
Ram ji : aare Sharma ji nahi uncle bol…uncle….
Viren : aare ek hi dil hai kitne baar jitenge…..
Saab bahut khush thy, wese bhi Sharma ji bina kisi ko bataye do do shadiya ki tayari kar rahe thy. Ritika ji ne to saab rishtey daro ko pehel hi shadi per bula liya tha, ye saab dekh ke Ram ji bhi heran thy….
Saab kuch ache se ja raha tha aab to Viren ki bhi Sharma ji se ache se patne lagi….
Yese hi dekhte dekhte sangit ka din bhi aajata hai, jesse hi teeno ladkiya tayar hoke aate hai to saab dekhte reh jate hai. Kabir aab bhi apne akele hone ka rona ro raha tha.
Dono jodiyo ko betha diya gaya, sabse pehle Anu ne dance kiya, aur baas Viren ko dekh ke hi dance kar rahi thy. Viren bhi Anu mai hi kho gaya tha, jo ki Sharma ji ne notice kar liya,
Ram ji : Viren babu hamari bachi ko yese maat dekho nahi to nazar lag jayegi.
Tabhi pata nahi Kabir kanha se ghumte ghumte aaya aur Ram ji ka baat sunke : uncle nazar to laag chuki hai…ye hamare Anu ke hone wale wo hai…kyu Viren babu….
Kabir ke baat sunke Ram ji Viren aur kabir ko dekhne lagte hai,
Ram ji : aare tum loog bhi dhire dhire dhamake kar rahe ho..ek baar mai hi saab kuch bata do….
Ram ji ki baat pe Viren hasne lagta hai aur Kabir saab kuch bata deta hai.
Fir ek ke baad ek performance ho rahi thy, Ram ji aur Ritika ji ne bhi dance kiya wanhi Mallik sahab Zara ke sath Kabir bhi unke sath ho liya.
Achanak Kabir ko ek phone aata hai to wo bahar ke taraf chala jata hai. Jesse hi baat karke ander aata hai to kisi se takra ke gir jata hai, jesse hi nazar utha ke dekhta hai to ek khubsurat ladki uske upar thy. Kabir to usko dekhta reh gaya. Fir dono khade ho jate hai wo ladki Kabir ko dekhne lagi fir ek daam boli,
Ladki : aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir (mann mai) : aare wah..mai itna famous ho gaya hu ladkiya bhi pehchan ne lagi hai…per yesa to koyi kaam kiya nahi maine…..
Kabir soch hi raha tha ki wo ladki ek aur baar puchti hai aap Kabir ho na….
Kabir : han..per aap….
Ladki : aare maine to apko pehchan liya per aapne nahi pehchan na….
Kabir : ham pehle se hi ek dusre ko jante hai kya….
Ladki : aare Kabir mai Nibi..Anu ki dost…ham ek hi school mai hi thy. Aap aur Viren dono hamare senior thy
Kabir herani se : tum Nibi ho..sach mai…tum to bilkul badal gayi ho…
Nibi : kya sach mai badal gayi hun…achi nahi lag rahi hun aab…..
Kabir usme hi khoye huye : han badal to gayi ho per ek baat jo bilkul nahi badli….
Nibi kabir ko dekhte huye : wo kya….
Kabir : yanhi ki tum bahut cute ho..pehle bhi thy..aab bhi ho….
Ye sunke Nibi muskurane lagti hai,
Nibi : thank you kabir aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho…
Kabir khushi se : thanks…..
Taab tak Anu bhi aajati hai aur Nibi ko apne sath leke chali jati hai, Kabir bhi piche piche aajata hai, aur Nibi ke samne hi khada ho jata hai, Kabir Nibi ko bade hi dhyaan se dekh raha hota hai,
Gora rang, gol gol badi ankhe, gol matol sa chehra, hasti hai to gaal pe dimple padte hai, gumrale baal jo kandhe niche taak aate thy, na jyada moti na jyada patli, ek daam cute si. Kabir to baas Nibi mai hi kho gaya tha.
Viren Kabir ke paas aake : oye chal hamara dance hai aab….
Kabir kanha hosh mai tha to Viren hilane se Kabir wapas hosh mai aata hai aur Viren kya keh raha hai sunne lagta hai, sunne ke baad,
Kabir : han..chal yaar dance karne ..
Fir dono chale jate hai. Dono jodiya stage ke samne bethe thy, unka bhi dance baki tha, tabhi stage pe Viren aur kabir aate hai aur dance karne lagte hai.
Dance karte karte Rohan aur Raj ko bhi stage ke upar khinch lete hai fir charo mil ke dance karne lagte hai fir ek dusre ke gale lag jate hai, charo ki ankhe naam thy, charo ki yesi dosti dekh ke sabhi ki ankhe gili ho gayi thy. Sharma ji to heran thy ki kuch rishtey khun ke rishtey se bhi aage hote hai.
Charo bilkul ek dusre ki jaan hi thy. Sabhi inki dosti dekh ke khush thy.
(Wo kya hai na aaj ke jamane mai sache dost milna bahot muskil hai per meri ye kahani mai maine dosti hi yehmiyat dikhayi hai)
Fir Zara aur Rohan ka bhi dance hota hai fir Raj aur Ruhi dono jodi to baas apne apne partner ka hi yehsaas mai hi khoye huye dance kar rahe thy, sabhi loog behed khush thy.
Sharma ji bhi in charo ko dekh ke behed khush thy, sangit ke ek din baad shadi thy, aur kaal mehendi to saab jaldi jaldi uth ke tayari bhi karni thy. Anu ne Nibi ko rok liya tha, Kabir to bahut khush tha Nibi ke rehne se.
Raat ko saab bade sone chale jate hai to baki saab ne Raj ke banglow ke piche party rakh ki, jisme Rohan, Kabir, Viren, Raj, Ruhi, Anu, Zara, Nibi, Ron thy.
Sabhi ladke to pehle se hi moujud thy baas ladkiya hi nahi thy, thodi der baad wo charo bhi aajate hai, sabhi ke sabhi saree mai thy aur kayamat dha rahe thy, ladkiyo ko dekh ke ladko ka munh khula ka khula reh jata hai, Jisko Ron ne dekh liya to wo ladko ke samne aake,
Ron : mun to band karlo bhai…..
Ron ki baat sunke sabhi hosh mai aajate hai, Rohan aur Raj to apni wali ko leke nikal gaye aur yanha Anu Viren ko ishara kare ja rahi thy aur Viren usse andekha jisse Nibi ne dekh liya to Nibi jhatke mai Anu ko pakad leti aur puch leti hai,
Nibi : tune Viren ko bol diya…kaab..unhe kya kaha..mujhe bataya kyun nahi…bol na….
Anu : shant ho ja meri maa..batati hun fir Anu saab batane lagti hai….
Nibi Anu ki baate sunke apni munh pe hath rakh leti hai : kya….tune Viren ko kiss kiya pagal….
Anu : yaar pagal ho gayi thy baas..Kuch soch samajh kar nahi hua….
Nibi : wow yaar…tum dono finally ek sath…mai bahut khush…ruk mai apne jiju se bhi baate karta hun…..
Nibi sidhe Viren ke paas aajati hai wo Anu ko kuch bolne hi nahi diya to Anu bhi uske piche piche aagayi.
Idhar Viren Kabir aur Ron se baat kar raha tha.
Nibi : hi….
Viren : hey Nibi kesi hai…tujhse baat bhi nahi ho payi function mai….
Nibi : bahut achi, aur function mai aap busy thy it’s ok…chalo aapne to pehchan liya warna to kuch loog ne pehchana hi nahi tha mujhe….
Ye kehke Kabir ki aur dekhne lagi jo usse hi dekh raha tha, ye kehn aa sahi hoga taad raha tha.
Viren : kisne nahi pehchana….
Nibi : wo saab chodo ye batao ki aaj se mai apko jiju bol sakta hun na….
Viren ne Nibi ki baat sunke uske piche khadi Anu ko dekha to wo aaj pehli baar saram se niche dekh rahi thy. Kabir ne bhi jaab Nibi se dhyaan hata ke Anu ko dekha to drink pite pite khasne lagta hai….
Kabir : partner tu sarma rahi hai..sach mai..per isme itna sarmane wali baat kya hai…..
Anu : wo…na…Nibi ne jaab Viren ji ko jiju kaha tha to ander se badi khushi wali feeling aayi ki sach mai aab Viren baas mere hai…..
Kabir : oohhhooo…waah dekho to hamari ladki kitni romantic hai….
Viren ne Anu ki dekha fir Nibi se,
Viren : Nibi mujhe Anu se baat karni hai….
Kabir : han…han…jao tum bhi…..
Ron : per yanhi kaar lo na baat ..di aur Raj jiju bhi chale gaye….Rohan bhai aur Zara bhabhi bhi….
Kabir : aare rehne de Ron..ladki ka chakar…Ron ladki ka chakar….
Viren Kabir ke sar pe maar ke Anu ko le ke side mai chala jata hai. Nibi bhi Ron aur kabir ke bich mai jake beth jati hai. Kabir to baas Nibi ko hi dekh raha tha jo Ron se baato mai lagi thy. Pata nahi itna bolne wala Kabir aaj chup tha.
Ron : to Nibi di apka koyi boy friend hai kya?
Nibi : tujhe lagta hai mere jese gol matol ladki ko koyi pasand karega….
Ron : kya di apko pata hai aap kitni pyari ho, cute ho….
Nibi hass ke ron ka gaal khinch deti hai : tu chota na hota to tujh hi bana leti…
Ron : sachi…per aab to chota hun..wese han Kabir bhayiya hai na…wo to single bhi hai..aur aap dono ki jodi bhi mast lagegi….
Ron ne to Kabir ka dil ki baat bol di…Kabir mann hi mann Ron ko sabasi de raha tha, wanhi Nibi haste haste shant ho gayi….
Nibi : kya Ron kuch bhi bolta hai….
Ron : nahi manna hai to maat mano per sach bola hai maine, chalo mai chala sone bye…di and Kabir bhai….
Kabir : good night Ron….
Ron to chala gaya per Nibi ko shant karwa gaya.
Kabir ne Nibi ko yese chup chap bethi dekha to,
Kabir : tum kyun chup ho gayi…aagar Ron ki baat buri lagi to I am sorry…per kya mai itna bura hun ki mazak mai bhi tu apna naam mere naam ke sath jod nahi sakti.
Nibi kabir ki baat sunke herani se usse dekhne lagti.

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