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Incest The Devil 😈 King

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Are Bhai jitne sabd nhi likhe usse jyada to dot dal diya hai lagta hai aage chal kar khufiya vibhag me Jane ka irada hai aapka...
Chalo ghatiya Jok's apart ko yhi chhodte hai :D
To Shiva ne Sweety ko btana suru kiya pr uske Pahle jo Sweety ne ji lga kr ek Bivi ki tarah baat ki hai maza aa gaya padh kr or jabarjasti Bibi ke hak se puchhne ka kaha hai ki Jo bhi puchhna ho puchh le bad me ritu didi Rani ritika hai or apna Shiva ek king or hell maharani ka beta, ab to flashback kuchh or hi hoga Pahle lga vha saja dene bulaya gya hai pr ab to Shiva ke maze hi maze hai to Shiva ki yade vapas dila di hai hell king ne... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Dhanyawad bhai....
 
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Bhailog kya abhi tak yah kahani aapko achhi lag rahi hai to like kijiye is reply ko kam se kam 25 like to jarur hone chahiye kyoki isase paisa to nahi milta par ham writers ko motivation jarur milta hai aaplog like karenge to mujhe bhi lagega ki ha is kahani ko aage badhana chahiye nahi to jhuth ka hi apana samay aur aapaka samay jo ek achhi story khoj rahe hai unka samay kharab karane se kya fayada agar ho sake to comment bhi jarur kijiyega. ...........................................................................aabb is kahani ka Aaj ek update karib 7-8 baje dene ke baad is kahani ka update Kal dopahar ke baad kabhi bhi aapki pratikriya ke anusar aayega yah like targe ke liye samay jyada hai phir bhi thik hai to please friends is like target ko pura jarur kar dijiyega jisase mujhe ye lage ki yah story aage badhani chahiye ya phir band kar deni chahiye.........
 

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Update no. 17 (D)

Kahani abhi tak:-

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Abb aage:-

Death lok ki kahani jari rahegi:-

Abb batate haiwaha kaun kaun tha to vaha jo mahila thi vah thi fairy Queen (pariyo ki rani ) mandakini , aur unake pati mahoday shashank…,......

Dusari mahila thi jinlok ki rani संवेदिका aur sath me hai maharaj कुषाण,..................

और do the yaha ke hi the mantri type (jyada pata nahi hai kyoki inka jyada rol nahi hai)

(Dosto bata du ki queen mandakini aur king shashank ki ritika beti hai aur shiva beta nahi balki damad hai……………)

Queen se milane ke baad mai king se bhi mila……..

king of fairies :- aap to hamare bete hi hai jamai raja hete kam thodi hi na………..

Tabhi ek taraf se Ritu gale lagte huye kahati hai ha pitaji aap inko hi jyada pyar karte hai mujhe nahi………

king of fairies:- beta ji pyar to mai tumse bhi bahut jyada karta hu…………

Mai :-ha pitaji nahi to jitana tumhe prthavi ke khane se pram karti ho usase kahi jyada tumhe ye prem karte hai……Lekin beta kya abb bhi………

Ritu:- ma aap mera majak bana rahi hai pahale ki baat dusari thi abb ki baat dusari hai……...mai abb nahi khati utani……….

Mai sab se milane ke baad vahi par khada tha aur Ritu ke bat sunane ke baad maje lete huye kaha… O to ye baat hai lekin ritika tum kuchh jyada hi sach nahi bol rahi ho….kam khati ho….

Ritu- ji nahi balki yaha to abb mahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki tumhe to khane ke naam se hi bhukh lag jati hai…..

mai - ha to mai khaunga hi na mai khane se koi samjhauta nahi kar sakta lekin tum apani dekho kaise sukha ke kata ho gayi ho pahale kaisi tha bb kya ho gayi ho……………

ritu- jyada meri majak mat udao samjh ….. mai utana hi khati hu jitana ki mujhe khane chahiye
aur ye jo isare kar rahe ho pahale tum kisi se nahi darte the lekin abb samjh to gaye honge aap king ji………..

mai- o to tum meri sikayat karogi meri sweety didi se ha mat bhulo pati hu mai tumhara……

o ho to patidev ji pahale shadi to karlo phir pati hone ka hak jatana samjhe aur ha mai tumse badi hu to mujhe darane ki baat mat karo nahi to mai………...itanahi kah thi ki fairies queen ne unhe rokate huye kaha…..tum logo keabhi to sab bate bhule huye the lekin ladana nahi bhule ho pahale bhi bina baat ke ladfate the aur aaj bhi.,.......

ritu- ma mai kaha lad rahi hu pahale to isane suru kiya tha……….

queen sanvedika ne kaha ritika apane pati se aise baat nahi karte beta ye tumhare pati hai pahale ki baat aujab tum logo ko kuchh nahi pat tha lekin abb to pata chal gaya hai na…….

ritu- mai isase badi hu aur ha mujhase aap kahlwane ke liye pahale mujhase sadi to karle….

mai- sadi to hamare pahale hi ho gayi hai abb kya karana hai……

\ritu- ji nahi sadi to tumhe karani hi padegi…….

sare lo inka nok jhok dekh rahe the aur muskura rahe the to fairies king ne unhe rokate huye kaha---

ruk jao meri rajkumari bitiuya aur tum bhi jamai raja pahale tum dono ko yaha kyo bulaya gaya hai ye to sun lo………

ye baat sunakar hame yaad aaya ki ham to mar chuke hai…………

ye hamari man ki baat king of hell sun lete hai…..aur kahate hai…..

nahi shiva tum dono mare nahi ho lekin tum dono abb prithavi vasi ho to yaha aane ke liye tumhe marana pada partantu tum dono ka sharir surakshit rakha gaya hai….abb suno tumhe yaha bulane ka hamara uddesy kaya hai……..

shiva- matalab ham mare nahi hai aur hame yaha aane ke liye baar baar apan sharir chodana padega kya maharaj…

hell king nahi jab tak purn roop se devil king nahi ban jaate to tab tak tumhe agar yaha kisi jaruri kaam se aana ya bulana pada to tumhe marana padega…….

mai- ji mai samjh gya aab hame yaha bulane ka mukhaya karan bataiye………. abb sabhi log apane apane jagah par baith gaye the to…………

hell king- tumhe yaha bulane ka mukhay karan hai futur book jo yaha se chori ho gaya hai…….

mai- futur book ye kya hota hai chori ho gaya hai lekin yaha se mai kuchh samjha nahi aap kahana kya chahate hai………..

hell king- ha futur book jisaki suraksha ki jimmedari god ne mujhe di thi…..aur isaki madat se ham kisi ki bhi futur dekh sakte hai kisi ki bhi lekin ham devatao ki keval likhit rup se hamari yojanaye jo ham banayenge vah pata chalta hai kyoki ham futur mw hone wali ghatnao ko to jante hai lekin ham us ghatana ke bhag nahi hote hai isliye………….rahi chori ki baat to pahale ye sun lo ki chori ksane ki haiaur kyo isake pichhe ke karan kya hai pahale tum aaj aaram kar lo… ham kal baat karenge…….

mai- ji lekin……

fairies king- putr ham samjhate hai lekin tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe tumhare samay me hi wapas bhej denge….. pahale tum aaj aaram kro…….

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itana sunane ke baad sweety ne usake muh par hath rakha aur bola abb bas aab aage ki baate kal pahale aap aaram kijiye ham kal bate karenge…………

didi ye kya aapane aap aap laga rakha hai aap mujhase badi hai to……………..

shiva ke hotho par hath rakhate huye …… maitumhe chup aur bhi tarike se kara sakti thi lekin us tarike ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai samjhe aur ha aap jitana jaldi ho sake utana jaldi ye aap sunane ka aadat daal lijiye kyoki mamta didi mere pichhe pad gayi hai yah baat janane ke liye aur mai bhi batane wali hu…..mai unhe rokakar kuchh bolane hi wala tha k unhone rokakar bola ……..abhi meri baat piuri nahi huyi hai samjhe…...hato mai kah rahi hu ritu didi ko kuchh dino me pata chalega liki usase pahale mai bata du ki kanika ko sab pata hai lekin vah tumhara chehara nahi dekh payi hai lekin mujhe lagata hai ki vah samay jald hi aane wala hai……..aur sabse badi baat sonal ko bhi tumhare bare me pata chal gaya hai leki abhi vah conform nahi hai aur mai use yah baat clear kal kar dungi usaki aur ha mai kisi bhi halat me nahi ruk sakati samjhe ye meri bahano ke sath nainsafi hogi…….

mai- jab itana kuchh bata diya hai to baki ke bare me bhi bata dijiye kyoki mai man to nahi padh sakata abhi………

sweety- baki samay aane par kyoki abhi itana hi jaruru tha aur ha aap bhi mujhe fors nahi karenge lekin aap pata lagana ho to laga sakte hai……… likin itana jarur kahungi ki tin baar gale mat lagan nahi to use jo ham nahi janate use sab kuchh bhi yaad aa jayega……...aur aap to janate hi hai ki sonal aur minal dono kaisi thi to savdhan sonal to kal se hi aapko aur hamko bhi pareshan karna chalu kar degi leki minal me abhi samaya hai lekin sonal use batayegi jarur koi na koi upaya lagakar……...yah kahakr vah goo night bolakar chali gayi aur mai sala pagalo ki tarah baitha raha kahir mai sari baato ko apane dimag se nikalte huye let gaya……………………………..

chalte hai sonal ke pass jo vahi sapana dekh rahi thi aur minal to kuchh janati hi nahi thi to nirbhed soi huyi thi……

mamata bhi soyi huyi thi lekin kanika to vahi sapana dekh rahi thi…...sweety bhi apane kamare me chali gayi…………

subah ke ** baj gaye the lekin mai abhi bhi ghode bechh kar soya huaa tha jaise mujhe koi chinta fikir hi na ho…………..aur niche papa aur bade papa nasta karke apani samsya ko hal karane nikal gaye the……….

kanika , minal , sonal ne bhi nasta kar liya tha aur abb badi mammi , ma, mamata didi, sweety didi baithi huyi yhi ……………..

sonal, minal nasta parosh rahe the………...kanika apani hi soch me gum thi pata nahi kya soch rahi thi….mai bhi nahi janta kyoki abhi mujhe man padhane ki sakti nahi mili thi……..

sudh- aare kanika beta jara shiva ko bhi utha dena vah lagaata hai ki kal bahut thak gaya tha…….

kanika- ji mami our vah chal deti hai shiva ko jagane ke liye…………………..

kahani jari rahegi…………aage ek hot update milega to bane rahiye is kahani ke sath………………..
 

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Lajwab awesome superbbbb speechless update.........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update.........
 
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Update no. 17 (D)

Kahani abhi tak:-

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Abb aage:-

Death lok ki kahani jari rahegi:-

Abb batate haiwaha kaun kaun tha to vaha jo mahila thi vah thi fairy Queen (pariyo ki rani ) mandakini , aur unake pati mahoday shashank…,......

Dusari mahila thi jinlok ki rani संवेदिका aur sath me hai maharaj कुषाण,..................

और do the yaha ke hi the mantri type (jyada pata nahi hai kyoki inka jyada rol nahi hai)

(Dosto bata du ki queen mandakini aur king shashank ki ritika beti hai aur shiva beta nahi balki damad hai……………)

Queen se milane ke baad mai king se bhi mila……..

king of fairies :- aap to hamare bete hi hai jamai raja hete kam thodi hi na………..

Tabhi ek taraf se Ritu gale lagte huye kahati hai ha pitaji aap inko hi jyada pyar karte hai mujhe nahi………

king of fairies:- beta ji pyar to mai tumse bhi bahut jyada karta hu…………

Mai :-ha pitaji nahi to jitana tumhe prthavi ke khane se pram karti ho usase kahi jyada tumhe ye prem karte hai……Lekin beta kya abb bhi………

Ritu:- ma aap mera majak bana rahi hai pahale ki baat dusari thi abb ki baat dusari hai……...mai abb nahi khati utani……….

Mai sab se milane ke baad vahi par khada tha aur Ritu ke bat sunane ke baad maje lete huye kaha… O to ye baat hai lekin ritika tum kuchh jyada hi sach nahi bol rahi ho….kam khati ho….

Ritu- ji nahi balki yaha to abb mahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki tumhe to khane ke naam se hi bhukh lag jati hai…..

mai - ha to mai khaunga hi na mai khane se koi samjhauta nahi kar sakta lekin tum apani dekho kaise sukha ke kata ho gayi ho pahale kaisi tha bb kya ho gayi ho……………

ritu- jyada meri majak mat udao samjh ….. mai utana hi khati hu jitana ki mujhe khane chahiye

aur ye jo isare kar rahe ho pahale tum kisi se nahi darte the lekin abb samjh to gaye honge aap king ji………..

mai- o to tum meri sikayat karogi meri sweety didi se ha mat bhulo pati hu mai tumhara……

o ho to patidev ji pahale shadi to karlo phir pati hone ka hak jatana samjhe aur ha mai tumse badi hu to mujhe darane ki baat mat karo nahi to mai………...itanahi kah thi ki fairies queen ne unhe rokate huye kaha…..tum logo keabhi to sab bate bhule huye the lekin ladana nahi bhule ho pahale bhi bina baat ke ladfate the aur aaj bhi.,.......

ritu- ma mai kaha lad rahi hu pahale to isane suru kiya tha……….

queen sanvedika ne kaha ritika apane pati se aise baat nahi karte beta ye tumhare pati hai pahale ki baat aujab tum logo ko kuchh nahi pat tha lekin abb to pata chal gaya hai na…….

ritu- mai isase badi hu aur ha mujhase aap kahlwane ke liye pahale mujhase sadi to karle….

mai- sadi to hamare pahale hi ho gayi hai abb kya karana hai……

\ritu- ji nahi sadi to tumhe karani hi padegi…….

sare lo inka nok jhok dekh rahe the aur muskura rahe the to fairies king ne unhe rokate huye kaha---

ruk jao meri rajkumari bitiuya aur tum bhi jamai raja pahale tum dono ko yaha kyo bulaya gaya hai ye to sun lo………

ye baat sunakar hame yaad aaya ki ham to mar chuke hai…………

ye hamari man ki baat king of hell sun lete hai…..aur kahate hai…..

nahi shiva tum dono mare nahi ho lekin tum dono abb prithavi vasi ho to yaha aane ke liye tumhe marana pada partantu tum dono ka sharir surakshit rakha gaya hai….abb suno tumhe yaha bulane ka hamara uddesy kaya hai……..

shiva- matalab ham mare nahi hai aur hame yaha aane ke liye baar baar apan sharir chodana padega kya maharaj…

hell king nahi jab tak purn roop se devil king nahi ban jaate to tab tak tumhe agar yaha kisi jaruri kaam se aana ya bulana pada to tumhe marana padega…….

mai- ji mai samjh gya aab hame yaha bulane ka mukhaya karan bataiye………. abb sabhi log apane apane jagah par baith gaye the to…………

hell king- tumhe yaha bulane ka mukhay karan hai futur book jo yaha se chori ho gaya hai…….

mai- futur book ye kya hota hai chori ho gaya hai lekin yaha se mai kuchh samjha nahi aap kahana kya chahate hai………..

hell king- ha futur book jisaki suraksha ki jimmedari god ne mujhe di thi…..aur isaki madat se ham kisi ki bhi futur dekh sakte hai kisi ki bhi lekin ham devatao ki keval likhit rup se hamari yojanaye jo ham banayenge vah pata chalta hai kyoki ham futur mw hone wali ghatnao ko to jante hai lekin ham us ghatana ke bhag nahi hote hai isliye………….rahi chori ki baat to pahale ye sun lo ki chori ksane ki haiaur kyo isake pichhe ke karan kya hai pahale tum aaj aaram kar lo… ham kal baat karenge…….

mai- ji lekin……

fairies king- putr ham samjhate hai lekin tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe tumhare samay me hi wapas bhej denge….. pahale tum aaj aaram kro…….

paresent me:-

itana sunane ke baad sweety ne usake muh par hath rakha aur bola abb bas aab aage ki baate kal pahale aap aaram kijiye ham kal bate karenge…………

didi ye kya aapane aap aap laga rakha hai aap mujhase badi hai to……………..

shiva ke hotho par hath rakhate huye …… maitumhe chup aur bhi tarike se kara sakti thi lekin us tarike ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai samjhe aur ha aap jitana jaldi ho sake utana jaldi ye aap sunane ka aadat daal lijiye kyoki mamta didi mere pichhe pad gayi hai yah baat janane ke liye aur mai bhi batane wali hu…..mai unhe rokakar kuchh bolane hi wala tha k unhone rokakar bola ……..abhi meri baat piuri nahi huyi hai samjhe…...hato mai kah rahi hu ritu didi ko kuchh dino me pata chalega liki usase pahale mai bata du ki kanika ko sab pata hai lekin vah tumhara chehara nahi dekh payi hai lekin mujhe lagata hai ki vah samay jald hi aane wala hai……..aur sabse badi baat sonal ko bhi tumhare bare me pata chal gaya hai leki abhi vah conform nahi hai aur mai use yah baat clear kal kar dungi usaki aur ha mai kisi bhi halat me nahi ruk sakati samjhe ye meri bahano ke sath nainsafi hogi…….

mai- jab itana kuchh bata diya hai to baki ke bare me bhi bata dijiye kyoki mai man to nahi padh sakata abhi………

sweety- baki samay aane par kyoki abhi itana hi jaruru tha aur ha aap bhi mujhe fors nahi karenge lekin aap pata lagana ho to laga sakte hai……… likin itana jarur kahungi ki tin baar gale mat lagan nahi to use jo ham nahi janate use sab kuchh bhi yaad aa jayega……...aur aap to janate hi hai ki sonal aur minal dono kaisi thi to savdhan sonal to kal se hi aapko aur hamko bhi pareshan karna chalu kar degi leki minal me abhi samaya hai lekin sonal use batayegi jarur koi na koi upaya lagakar……...yah kahakr vah goo night bolakar chali gayi aur mai sala pagalo ki tarah baitha raha kahir mai sari baato ko apane dimag se nikalte huye let gaya……………………………..

chalte hai sonal ke pass jo vahi sapana dekh rahi thi aur minal to kuchh janati hi nahi thi to nirbhed soi huyi thi……

mamata bhi soyi huyi thi lekin kanika to vahi sapana dekh rahi thi…...sweety bhi apane kamare me chali gayi…………

subah ke ** baj gaye the lekin mai abhi bhi ghode bechh kar soya huaa tha jaise mujhe koi chinta fikir hi na ho…………..aur niche papa aur bade papa nasta karke apani samsya ko hal karane nikal gaye the……….

kanika , minal , sonal ne bhi nasta kar liya tha aur abb badi mammi , ma, mamata didi, sweety didi baithi huyi yhi ……………..

sonal, minal nasta parosh rahe the………...kanika apani hi soch me gum thi pata nahi kya soch rahi thi….mai bhi nahi janta kyoki abhi mujhe man padhane ki sakti nahi mili thi……..

sudh- aare kanika beta jara shiva ko bhi utha dena vah lagaata hai ki kal bahut thak gaya tha…….

kanika- ji mami our vah chal deti hai shiva ko jagane ke liye…………………..

kahani jari rahegi…………aage ek hot update milega to bane rahiye is kahani ke sath………………..
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update 17 (C)

Sonal ke jane ke baad sweety kuchh der sochati hai phir bahar chali jati hai……………..

dinnar ke timae ho gaya tha lekin shiva abhi bhi soya hua hi tha………..niche dining table par sabhi aa gaye the sivay shiva ke……………….

shudha- ye shiva kaha rah gaya…………………

kanika- mai dekhati hu mami lagata hai vah abhi tak soya hua hi hai…………….

kanika shiva jis room me tha us room me jati hai……………………………..aur dekhati hau shiva bina kisi chinata ke soya huaaa tha vah sote huye bahut ho manmohak lag raha tha…..kanika use dekhati hi rah jati hai…….vah sochati hai…….pata nahi kyo shiva mujhe apani or khichata chala ja raha hai aisa isi speed se huaa to mujhe nahi lagata hai ki mai apane aap ko subah tak rok paungi nahi mujhhe apane upar control karana hi hoga……….phir sare vicharo ko darkinar karate huye shiva ke paas jati hai aur use jagati hai………..shiva uthata hai aur fresh hokar niche aata hai aur table par apani sit lekar baith jata hai vah charo taraf dekhata hai to sabhi log use hi dekha rahe the…………………...jisase vah sakpaka jaata hai lekin apane aap ko thik dikhate huye kahata hai ki……..

badi ma chachi aur chacha nahi dikh rahe hai yaha tak bhaiya aur bhabhi bhi…………..

sobha:- ha tere bhaiya usa gaye hai kuchh kam tha aur bhabhi bhi unake sath hi gayi hai halanki teri bhabhi nahi jaana chahati thi lekin tere bhaiya unhe jabarjasti leke gaye hai………...aur tere chachi apane mayake gayi hai aur tere chacha unkae satha hi gaye hai…………………...phir sabhi log dinnar karte hai……………...usake baad sabhi log ek dusare ko good night bolkar apane kamare me chale jate hai …………………………

sweety akele,
mamata aur kanika ek sath,
sonal ke sath majaburi me minal soti hai aur shiva akele.
baki bhi apane sthan par sojate haia,,,,,,,,

rat ke 10 baje shiva ke darwaja khulata hai kyoki usane darwaja keval satakar chhod doiayaa tha band nahi kya thya………….yah sweety thi…………………...aati hai..

sweety- betu so gaya kya……………..

shiva- nahi didi aaj aapake sath rahane wala hu to yahi sochakar nind nahi aa rahi hai………. aiye ……

sweety:- achha shiva tum rita se payar karte the………..
shiva:- sochate huye nahi didi lekin hamesha ek khichav sa mahsus hota tha unake sath……………….
sweety:- unke sath……..achha muhe n abb aisa lagata hai kitujhe use aap nahi balki abb tum kahakr bolana shikh lena hoga……………………
shiva:- aisa kyo didi………….
sweety:- pahale to ye mujhe ye didi bolana chhod……………….

mai to hairanio se didi ke taraf dekhane laga………………………..

sweety:- thoda muskurate huye…………...aise kya dekh rahe ho ji mujhe laaj aa rahi hai…………...udhar dekho na…………………..

mai man me:-- o bhosadike ye kya hai didi kya pagal ho gayi hai…..nahi nahi majak kar rahi hai…………...phir kahata hai………….ye kya hai didi aap mera ,ajak uda rahi hai……………….

sweety- nahi to …. bhala koi apane pati ka majak kyo udayega ha……. jara batana……………..

mai- hairani se……… pati aur mai…………...apaka…………….mrea to dimag hi chakara gaya...ye sunakar………………..

sweety- to tujhe kya laga ki ladakiyo ki mang me sindur bhar dene se vah didi lagati hai…………………..

mai- lekin vo sab to galti se huaa tha didi vah meri nasamjhi ke karan hua aur to aur…………..abhi mai kuchh aage bolane wala tha ki didi bolati hai……………..

sweety- mai manati hu ki nasamjh tu tha lekin hamari sadi ma papa ke asirwad se hui hai unhone hi ye sab karwaya tha tujhse samjh aur abb mai tumhari patni hu samjhe…………………………………...phir sweety sarma jaati hai………

mai- meri to kuchh samjh me hi nahi aa raha tha………….ma papa ne lekin kyo …………...abb ye mat kahana ki aapko nahi pata ki aap nahi janati ho agar itana pata hai to ye baat bhi jarur janati hongi………………….

sweety- nahi pahale tu apani baat ko pura kar ki tere sath death lok me kya huaa tha…….aur ha agar ye baat mere muh se janani hai to tujhe mera naam lekar ek patani ki tarah puchana hio ho samjhe…………….

mai- baat koi bhi ho ap meri didi ho mai apka bhai hu …..vo sab meri na samjh ke karan hi hua hai bas…………….aur aap mujhe bataiye ki baba ne aisa kyo karawaya mujhase…………………..

sweety- maine kah na baad me meri sart manane ke baad hi yujhe bataungi to bina teri didi bane tujhe samjh me nahi aat6a………………..

mai didi ko gusse me dekhakar hi meri fat jati hai fir bhi bola……..thik hai mai batata hu lekin aapo ko bhi batana hoga ha…………………

sweety- chal thik hai vo ham baad me dekhenge abb bata aur ha puri baat kuchh chhuane ki koshish bhi mat karna…………...vo baat bad ki hai ki mai gussa houngi ki nahi ye mai kahani sunane ke baad hi bataungi………………………….

mai janata tha ki meri samat aane wali hai is baat ko batane ke baad………………..

sweety phir bolati hai- ye to bataya hi nahi ki rita ka kya huaa…………………………..

mai - ab bata hi raha hu to aap jaan hi jaogi ki kya huaa hai unke sath ………………

ha thik hai chal bata…………………………………………………

ha to suniye…………………………….

kahani kaha thi …..uummmmmmm……….ha


ham the hame god of hell ne apane pass bulaya tha…………………………..

ham andar jate hai to dekhate hai ki andar ki sunadarta hi alag hai aage 6-7 sihasa lage huye the aur ek aage bada sihasan the jispar ek vykti baitha huaa tha aur aur side wale sihasan par bhi log baithe huye hai jisame do mahilaye hai aur ek sihasan khali tha jis par d0o logo ke baithane ke liye jagah paryapt tha…………….


ham us mahal ke bhitari sunadarata me khoye huye the ki tabhi hame ek bhari lekin madhur aawaj sunai deta hai………………………….

aaiye king aur rani ritika aapka sawagat hai death lok mai mai hu god of hell yaha ka raja…………………………

ham dono to pichhe mudakar dekhane lage ki ye king aur rtika hai kaun lekin hamare pichhe koi nahi tha phir ham aage aaschary se dekhane lage………………………………..

hamne aap logo ko hi bola hai ham jante hai ki aap apane bare me kuchh nahi janate hai lekin samay aa gaya hai ki aap apane bare me kuchh jan le aaiye aasan grahan kijiye…………………….

hamara to dimag hi gum gaya ki sala ye hamko king aur rutu didi ko ritka kyo bol raha hai…………………..

god of hell- abb to didi mat boliye king ye aapki dharm patni hai aur aap inake pati …………………..

mai- ye….ye kya bole ja rahe hai kaun king mai to kahi ka raja nahi hu…………….

mai sihasann par jakar baith gaya ritu didi bhi meri bayi or jakar baith gayi………………..

god of hell- abhi pat chal jayega…………………...aur ye kahakar ve hamare pass aate hai aur hamare sar par apana hath rakh dete hai jisase ham dono ki aakhe band ho jati hai aur ham jaise apane sapano me chale jate hai jaise jaise hamara drisy aage ki or badhata ja araha tha to hamare chehare par khusi aur dukh… gusse ke mile jule bhaw aate ja rahe the…………….hamre aakho se aasu nikalane lage phir hamari akhe ek sath khul jaati hai ham apane akho me aashu liye ek dusare ko dekhate hai aur phir vaha baithe logo ko………………………………….

ritu vah baiothi ek mahila jisake aakho me bhi aasuthe usase jakar lipat kar rone lagati hai………………..ma mai…….mai…...mai ritu aage bol hi nahi p[a rahi thi…………………..

ha meri bachhi tu phir se mere pass laut aayi hai hamane bahut salo se tera intejar kiya hai meri bachi aur ritu ke chehare ko chumane lagti hai ………………………..

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….


kahani jari rahegi……………...
Ye update Sabse mast update hai........

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Update no. 17 (D)

Kahani abhi tak:-

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Abb aage:-

Death lok ki kahani jari rahegi:-

Abb batate haiwaha kaun kaun tha to vaha jo mahila thi vah thi fairy Queen (pariyo ki rani ) mandakini , aur unake pati mahoday shashank…,......

Dusari mahila thi jinlok ki rani संवेदिका aur sath me hai maharaj कुषाण,..................

और do the yaha ke hi the mantri type (jyada pata nahi hai kyoki inka jyada rol nahi hai)

(Dosto bata du ki queen mandakini aur king shashank ki ritika beti hai aur shiva beta nahi balki damad hai……………)

Queen se milane ke baad mai king se bhi mila……..

king of fairies :- aap to hamare bete hi hai jamai raja hete kam thodi hi na………..

Tabhi ek taraf se Ritu gale lagte huye kahati hai ha pitaji aap inko hi jyada pyar karte hai mujhe nahi………

king of fairies:- beta ji pyar to mai tumse bhi bahut jyada karta hu…………

Mai :-ha pitaji nahi to jitana tumhe prthavi ke khane se pram karti ho usase kahi jyada tumhe ye prem karte hai……Lekin beta kya abb bhi………

Ritu:- ma aap mera majak bana rahi hai pahale ki baat dusari thi abb ki baat dusari hai……...mai abb nahi khati utani……….

Mai sab se milane ke baad vahi par khada tha aur Ritu ke bat sunane ke baad maje lete huye kaha… O to ye baat hai lekin ritika tum kuchh jyada hi sach nahi bol rahi ho….kam khati ho….

Ritu- ji nahi balki yaha to abb mahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki tumhe to khane ke naam se hi bhukh lag jati hai…..

mai - ha to mai khaunga hi na mai khane se koi samjhauta nahi kar sakta lekin tum apani dekho kaise sukha ke kata ho gayi ho pahale kaisi tha bb kya ho gayi ho……………

ritu- jyada meri majak mat udao samjh ….. mai utana hi khati hu jitana ki mujhe khane chahiye

aur ye jo isare kar rahe ho pahale tum kisi se nahi darte the lekin abb samjh to gaye honge aap king ji………..

mai- o to tum meri sikayat karogi meri sweety didi se ha mat bhulo pati hu mai tumhara……

o ho to patidev ji pahale shadi to karlo phir pati hone ka hak jatana samjhe aur ha mai tumse badi hu to mujhe darane ki baat mat karo nahi to mai………...itanahi kah thi ki fairies queen ne unhe rokate huye kaha…..tum logo keabhi to sab bate bhule huye the lekin ladana nahi bhule ho pahale bhi bina baat ke ladfate the aur aaj bhi.,.......

ritu- ma mai kaha lad rahi hu pahale to isane suru kiya tha……….

queen sanvedika ne kaha ritika apane pati se aise baat nahi karte beta ye tumhare pati hai pahale ki baat aujab tum logo ko kuchh nahi pat tha lekin abb to pata chal gaya hai na…….

ritu- mai isase badi hu aur ha mujhase aap kahlwane ke liye pahale mujhase sadi to karle….

mai- sadi to hamare pahale hi ho gayi hai abb kya karana hai……

\ritu- ji nahi sadi to tumhe karani hi padegi…….

sare lo inka nok jhok dekh rahe the aur muskura rahe the to fairies king ne unhe rokate huye kaha---

ruk jao meri rajkumari bitiuya aur tum bhi jamai raja pahale tum dono ko yaha kyo bulaya gaya hai ye to sun lo………

ye baat sunakar hame yaad aaya ki ham to mar chuke hai…………

ye hamari man ki baat king of hell sun lete hai…..aur kahate hai…..

nahi shiva tum dono mare nahi ho lekin tum dono abb prithavi vasi ho to yaha aane ke liye tumhe marana pada partantu tum dono ka sharir surakshit rakha gaya hai….abb suno tumhe yaha bulane ka hamara uddesy kaya hai……..

shiva- matalab ham mare nahi hai aur hame yaha aane ke liye baar baar apan sharir chodana padega kya maharaj…

hell king nahi jab tak purn roop se devil king nahi ban jaate to tab tak tumhe agar yaha kisi jaruri kaam se aana ya bulana pada to tumhe marana padega…….

mai- ji mai samjh gya aab hame yaha bulane ka mukhaya karan bataiye………. abb sabhi log apane apane jagah par baith gaye the to…………

hell king- tumhe yaha bulane ka mukhay karan hai futur book jo yaha se chori ho gaya hai…….

mai- futur book ye kya hota hai chori ho gaya hai lekin yaha se mai kuchh samjha nahi aap kahana kya chahate hai………..

hell king- ha futur book jisaki suraksha ki jimmedari god ne mujhe di thi…..aur isaki madat se ham kisi ki bhi futur dekh sakte hai kisi ki bhi lekin ham devatao ki keval likhit rup se hamari yojanaye jo ham banayenge vah pata chalta hai kyoki ham futur mw hone wali ghatnao ko to jante hai lekin ham us ghatana ke bhag nahi hote hai isliye………….rahi chori ki baat to pahale ye sun lo ki chori ksane ki haiaur kyo isake pichhe ke karan kya hai pahale tum aaj aaram kar lo… ham kal baat karenge…….

mai- ji lekin……

fairies king- putr ham samjhate hai lekin tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe tumhare samay me hi wapas bhej denge….. pahale tum aaj aaram kro…….

paresent me:-

itana sunane ke baad sweety ne usake muh par hath rakha aur bola abb bas aab aage ki baate kal pahale aap aaram kijiye ham kal bate karenge…………

didi ye kya aapane aap aap laga rakha hai aap mujhase badi hai to……………..

shiva ke hotho par hath rakhate huye …… maitumhe chup aur bhi tarike se kara sakti thi lekin us tarike ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai samjhe aur ha aap jitana jaldi ho sake utana jaldi ye aap sunane ka aadat daal lijiye kyoki mamta didi mere pichhe pad gayi hai yah baat janane ke liye aur mai bhi batane wali hu…..mai unhe rokakar kuchh bolane hi wala tha k unhone rokakar bola ……..abhi meri baat piuri nahi huyi hai samjhe…...hato mai kah rahi hu ritu didi ko kuchh dino me pata chalega liki usase pahale mai bata du ki kanika ko sab pata hai lekin vah tumhara chehara nahi dekh payi hai lekin mujhe lagata hai ki vah samay jald hi aane wala hai……..aur sabse badi baat sonal ko bhi tumhare bare me pata chal gaya hai leki abhi vah conform nahi hai aur mai use yah baat clear kal kar dungi usaki aur ha mai kisi bhi halat me nahi ruk sakati samjhe ye meri bahano ke sath nainsafi hogi…….

mai- jab itana kuchh bata diya hai to baki ke bare me bhi bata dijiye kyoki mai man to nahi padh sakata abhi………

sweety- baki samay aane par kyoki abhi itana hi jaruru tha aur ha aap bhi mujhe fors nahi karenge lekin aap pata lagana ho to laga sakte hai……… likin itana jarur kahungi ki tin baar gale mat lagan nahi to use jo ham nahi janate use sab kuchh bhi yaad aa jayega……...aur aap to janate hi hai ki sonal aur minal dono kaisi thi to savdhan sonal to kal se hi aapko aur hamko bhi pareshan karna chalu kar degi leki minal me abhi samaya hai lekin sonal use batayegi jarur koi na koi upaya lagakar……...yah kahakr vah goo night bolakar chali gayi aur mai sala pagalo ki tarah baitha raha kahir mai sari baato ko apane dimag se nikalte huye let gaya……………………………..

chalte hai sonal ke pass jo vahi sapana dekh rahi thi aur minal to kuchh janati hi nahi thi to nirbhed soi huyi thi……

mamata bhi soyi huyi thi lekin kanika to vahi sapana dekh rahi thi…...sweety bhi apane kamare me chali gayi…………

subah ke ** baj gaye the lekin mai abhi bhi ghode bechh kar soya huaa tha jaise mujhe koi chinta fikir hi na ho…………..aur niche papa aur bade papa nasta karke apani samsya ko hal karane nikal gaye the……….

kanika , minal , sonal ne bhi nasta kar liya tha aur abb badi mammi , ma, mamata didi, sweety didi baithi huyi yhi ……………..

sonal, minal nasta parosh rahe the………...kanika apani hi soch me gum thi pata nahi kya soch rahi thi….mai bhi nahi janta kyoki abhi mujhe man padhane ki sakti nahi mili thi……..

sudh- aare kanika beta jara shiva ko bhi utha dena vah lagaata hai ki kal bahut thak gaya tha…….

kanika- ji mami our vah chal deti hai shiva ko jagane ke liye…………………..

kahani jari rahegi…………aage ek hot update milega to bane rahiye is kahani ke sath………………..
Mast update hai bro.......
 
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Update no. 17 (B)

(Kahani pichale update me aap sab ne padha ki shiva sweety ke kasham dene par Death lok (yamlok ab se ise death lok kahunga) ki kahani suna raha hai jisako sunakar sweety ne to kuchh nahi kaha lekin kuchh kahegi jarur usaki bato se lag raha hai abb usake aage vartmaan me)

idhar sonal ke kamare me sonal , minal aur kanika soi hui thi…………… to sone dete hai aur aaiye buaa ke pariwar me kaun kaun hai jaan lete hai :-

  1. menaka bua:-
  2. mukesh tivari fufa ji
  3. kanika tivari badi beti
  4. saurabh tiwari aur isase 5 min choti Arohi tiwari choti beti
(Aarohi ise kisi se bhi matalab nahi hai nahi inke baat kisi se bhi jyada hoti jai apani bahan kanika aur ma (meri buaa) ko chhod kar aisa kyu to inka time aane dijiye sab pata chalega)

( yaha bata du ki saurabh apani badi aur chhoti bahan par hai neeyat kharab kiye huye hai karan hai galat dosto ke sath aur bachapan ke vah ghatana jisase sabhi ghar ki ladakiya shiva ki ek tarah se patani ban gayi hai aur ye baat apane dosto ko bata diye hai jo inko pura bambu ke upar chadha diye hai jisase ye samjhane lage hai ki siva jab apani bahano ke sath sadi kar sakta hai to mai kyo nahi kyoki isaki ma ne koi virodh nahi kiya aur nahi naraj hui shiva aur usake gharwalo par)


  1. Salini bua
  2. siraj tivari bua ke patidev
  3. vikash tiwari bada beta (isake bare me kuchh nahi pata hai abhi)
  4. badi beti Amrita tiwari ( ye shiva ko jab vah god me tha tabhi mli thi to yah safe hai kyoki isaki sadi shiva ke sath nahi huyi hai lekin baba ki baat yaad hai na to yah bhi unhe ke sreniu me aayegi lekin abhi isake paas paraman patr nahi hai aur sabse badi baat yah hai ki yah shiva ko janati tak nahi hai ki inake mama ka ladka shiva hai baki yah apani chhoti bahan ke mukh se ye naam kai baar sote huye sun chuki hai kyoki dono behan ek sath soti hai lekin bed alag alag hai)
  5. vicky tiwari chota beta
  6. chhoti beti moni tiwari
( Moni sonal ke hi umr ke hai lekin puri badi ho gayi hai dimag se iska srey inake saheliyo ko jata hai…………...ye shiva se bahut pyar karne lagi hai jab se inhe pyar ke bare me pata chala hai)
vicky aur saurabh me bahut gahari dosati hai kyoki dono ek sath jo padhate hai aur ye bhi………………. samjh gaye honge ki mai kya kahana chahta hu………………….acha samjh gaye ho to comment karke batana ki mai kya kahana chahta hu

chaliye abb bakchodi band aur aate hai kahani par:-

sonal ke sote huye usake mukha par kai bhav aa rahe the sayad vah koi sapana dekh rahhi thi aaiye dekhate hai kya dekh rahi hai …………………………………………………………………………………..

sonal vahi scen dekh rahi thi jab shiva us jangalo me tha aur roshani use ghere huye thi lekin vah usaka chehara saf nahi dekh pa rahi thi use dhuyndhala dhunadhala dikh raha tha………

pir scean change hota hai is baar:-

is baar ek pari si dikhane wali ladaki ek bagiche me bhag rahi thi aur haste huye ek hi naam le rahi thi nahi rudra tum mujhe nahi pakad paoge mei tumhare haath nahi aane wali……...arre ye kya ye to hamari sonal hai lekin yah kaun hai jise yah rudra kah rahi hai isaka chehara saf nahi dikha raha hai…….pichale scean se thoda sa saaf dikh raha tha..,.........................

vah ladaka sonal ko pakad leta hai aur use apane bahupas me jakad leta hai aur kahata hai ki meri chulbuli si patni ji aab kaha bhag ke jaogi aab to chummi deni hi hogi…………………….
sonal haste huye kahati hai:- maine kab mana kiya tha rudra lekin yaha nahi yahan koi bhi aa sakta hai please man jao na…..

ridra nahi mai yahi lunga meri jalpari, meri natkhat bibi jasmine mai to yahi apani chummi lunga…………………...jaise jaise vah apana chehara sonal ki or badha raha tha vaise vaise usaka chehara saff hota ja raha tha jab pura chehra saaf ho jata hai to sonal ke chehare par ashchary wala bhaw aa jata hai vah hadbada jati hai aur uth jati hai ye kya tha bhai ki bibi mai khud ko maan rahi hu vah dhire se uth kar sweety ke paas jati hai……………

lekin ham yaha nahi sonal ke kamare me hi chalte hai kanika ke sapane me kya ho raha hai vah kya dekha rahi hai vah dekhate hai……………………………………………………………………………………………………..are ye kya ye to shiva ke baho me baithi huyi hai sala ye kya locha hai aakhir baat kya hai aaiye pata lagate hai;;;;;;;kewal mai januga ki baat kya hai app redars jab kanika aur sweety ke beech baat hogi tab janege tab tak sabr kijiye;;;;;;;;;;;;’;;;;

philhal ye janiye ki shiva ke god me baithe huye kanika aur shiiva me kya bate ho rahi hai:-

kanika; rudra………………..
(yaha mai shiva ko rudara likhunga)
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rudra - ha kanika ……….. vah kanika ke mathe ko chumate huye puchata hai……..

rudara kya ham aise hi sapane me hi mila karenge………………..

(o tere ki ise to ye bhi pata hai ki yah sapana dekha rahi hai ye to mere liye bhi ek raahasy banti ja rahi hai pahale to ye kaise janti hai aur ise sab kaise yad hai sab kuchh chalye sab patya lagaya jayega ab to ye mere liye bhi mystery banti ja rahi hai.)

rudra kanika hamara milan bahari duniya me jald hi hone wala hai to taiyar rahana kahi hamari bahari duniya ME riste ki suruaat sharirik mlan se hi na ho kyoki meri yadast keval mujhe apane bare me hi yaad aaya hai baki meri jitani patniya hai unka chehara saf nahi dikha hai mujhe aur tumhara jab hamara milan hoga tab tumhe bhi mera chrhara saf dikhega nahi to jab tum is sapane se bahar nikalogi to phir se mera chehara bhul jaogi aur fir tumhe hi sahayata karani ho gi meri sari pataniyo ko dhundhane me

ha samjh gayi mere rudara………..

(yaha bata du ki kanika ko abhi shiva ke chehare saff nahi dikhai de rahe the)

lekin rudra mai tumhe pahachanungi kase……...kanika ne puchh

tum meri or khichi chali aaogi aur mujhe tum rok nahi paogi kuchh bhi karane se samjhi tabhi use koi hillane lagata hai vah uthati hai to minal use utha rahi thi vah uthati hai aur fresh hokar bahar chali jati hai

chalte hai sonal aur sweety ke pass dekhate hai kya baate ho rahi hai:-

sweety:- kya baat hai meri gudiya itana pareshan kyo dikha rahi hai……….

sonal;- didu vo...vo baat ye hai ki….cup ho jati hai..

sweety- kya baat hai sonal……..( sonal ke chehare ko dekhate huye aur usake bhao ko pahchanate huye sweety gambhir hote huye puchhati hai.)

sonal - didu vo...ahhh….mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai didu ki ye baat aap se kaise kahu……………….jhujhanjhalate huye sonal kahati hai………………….

sweety- aisi kaun si baat hai ki tujhe itana sochana pad raha hai kahi kuchh huaa to nahi hai mujhe bata kya huaa hai………..

sonal apane man me - kaise kahu didi ki mujhe kya pareshani hai……..

sweety sonal ki hilate huye - are kaha kho gayi …………………

sonal hadbadate huye :- kahi nahi didu kahi nahi…………..ek gahari sas leti hai

sweety- to phir bata baat kya hai………

sonal- didi vo baat aisi hai ki……………...phir vah apane sapane ki sari baat sweety ko bata deti hai……………..jise sunane ke baad sweety chup hi rahati hai jaise kahi kho gayi ho………………..

sonal phir kahati hai- didi mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki mai kya karu …… aaj vachanak unka chehara mujhe dikh gaya jabaki aaj se pahale mai yah sapana mujhe 3-4 din se lagbhag har roj jab mai soti hu chahe din ho ya raat kabhi bhi dikhayi deta tha lekin mane kabhi jise mai rudra kahti hu usaka chehara kabhi bhi saaf nahi dekha tha………………………….

sweety kahati hai gudiya tu chal mai tujhase baad me baat karati hu…………..

sonal lekin didu……….baat iatani hi nahi hai…………………. phir vah jangal wakli hii baat batati hai jo shiva ke sath huaa tha lekin jab shiva ki chikh nikali thi vahi tak………..

sweety- ye sab tune tab dekha jab tu nind me nahi thi yani jagate huye……

sonal…..huuuuuu……….

sweety kuchh sochate huye chal thik hai ham baad me baat karte hai abhi tu dinnar ka timae ho gaya hai ham kal is topic par baat karenge thik hai………………

sonal- gale lagate huye thik hai meri pyari didu….ummmmmmmmmmah……….aur chali jati hai
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