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    Votes: 40 87.0%
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    Votes: 3 6.5%
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    Votes: 2 4.3%
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  • Total voters
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Naik

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update 17 (C)

Sonal ke jane ke baad sweety kuchh der sochati hai phir bahar chali jati hai……………..

dinnar ke timae ho gaya tha lekin shiva abhi bhi soya hua hi tha………..niche dining table par sabhi aa gaye the sivay shiva ke……………….

shudha- ye shiva kaha rah gaya…………………

kanika- mai dekhati hu mami lagata hai vah abhi tak soya hua hi hai…………….

kanika shiva jis room me tha us room me jati hai……………………………..aur dekhati hau shiva bina kisi chinata ke soya huaaa tha vah sote huye bahut ho manmohak lag raha tha…..kanika use dekhati hi rah jati hai…….vah sochati hai…….pata nahi kyo shiva mujhe apani or khichata chala ja raha hai aisa isi speed se huaa to mujhe nahi lagata hai ki mai apane aap ko subah tak rok paungi nahi mujhhe apane upar control karana hi hoga……….phir sare vicharo ko darkinar karate huye shiva ke paas jati hai aur use jagati hai………..shiva uthata hai aur fresh hokar niche aata hai aur table par apani sit lekar baith jata hai vah charo taraf dekhata hai to sabhi log use hi dekha rahe the…………………...jisase vah sakpaka jaata hai lekin apane aap ko thik dikhate huye kahata hai ki……..

badi ma chachi aur chacha nahi dikh rahe hai yaha tak bhaiya aur bhabhi bhi…………..

sobha:- ha tere bhaiya usa gaye hai kuchh kam tha aur bhabhi bhi unake sath hi gayi hai halanki teri bhabhi nahi jaana chahati thi lekin tere bhaiya unhe jabarjasti leke gaye hai………...aur tere chachi apane mayake gayi hai aur tere chacha unkae satha hi gaye hai…………………...phir sabhi log dinnar karte hai……………...usake baad sabhi log ek dusare ko good night bolkar apane kamare me chale jate hai …………………………

sweety akele,
mamata aur kanika ek sath,
sonal ke sath majaburi me minal soti hai aur shiva akele.
baki bhi apane sthan par sojate haia,,,,,,,,

rat ke 10 baje shiva ke darwaja khulata hai kyoki usane darwaja keval satakar chhod doiayaa tha band nahi kya thya………….yah sweety thi…………………...aati hai..

sweety- betu so gaya kya……………..

shiva- nahi didi aaj aapake sath rahane wala hu to yahi sochakar nind nahi aa rahi hai………. aiye ……

sweety:- achha shiva tum rita se payar karte the………..
shiva:- sochate huye nahi didi lekin hamesha ek khichav sa mahsus hota tha unake sath……………….
sweety:- unke sath……..achha muhe n abb aisa lagata hai kitujhe use aap nahi balki abb tum kahakr bolana shikh lena hoga……………………
shiva:- aisa kyo didi………….
sweety:- pahale to ye mujhe ye didi bolana chhod……………….

mai to hairanio se didi ke taraf dekhane laga………………………..

sweety:- thoda muskurate huye…………...aise kya dekh rahe ho ji mujhe laaj aa rahi hai…………...udhar dekho na…………………..

mai man me:-- o bhosadike ye kya hai didi kya pagal ho gayi hai…..nahi nahi majak kar rahi hai…………...phir kahata hai………….ye kya hai didi aap mera ,ajak uda rahi hai……………….

sweety- nahi to …. bhala koi apane pati ka majak kyo udayega ha……. jara batana……………..

mai- hairani se……… pati aur mai…………...apaka…………….mrea to dimag hi chakara gaya...ye sunakar………………..

sweety- to tujhe kya laga ki ladakiyo ki mang me sindur bhar dene se vah didi lagati hai…………………..

mai- lekin vo sab to galti se huaa tha didi vah meri nasamjhi ke karan hua aur to aur…………..abhi mai kuchh aage bolane wala tha ki didi bolati hai……………..

sweety- mai manati hu ki nasamjh tu tha lekin hamari sadi ma papa ke asirwad se hui hai unhone hi ye sab karwaya tha tujhse samjh aur abb mai tumhari patni hu samjhe…………………………………...phir sweety sarma jaati hai………

mai- meri to kuchh samjh me hi nahi aa raha tha………….ma papa ne lekin kyo …………...abb ye mat kahana ki aapko nahi pata ki aap nahi janati ho agar itana pata hai to ye baat bhi jarur janati hongi………………….

sweety- nahi pahale tu apani baat ko pura kar ki tere sath death lok me kya huaa tha…….aur ha agar ye baat mere muh se janani hai to tujhe mera naam lekar ek patani ki tarah puchana hio ho samjhe…………….

mai- baat koi bhi ho ap meri didi ho mai apka bhai hu …..vo sab meri na samjh ke karan hi hua hai bas…………….aur aap mujhe bataiye ki baba ne aisa kyo karawaya mujhase…………………..

sweety- maine kah na baad me meri sart manane ke baad hi yujhe bataungi to bina teri didi bane tujhe samjh me nahi aat6a………………..

mai didi ko gusse me dekhakar hi meri fat jati hai fir bhi bola……..thik hai mai batata hu lekin aapo ko bhi batana hoga ha…………………

sweety- chal thik hai vo ham baad me dekhenge abb bata aur ha puri baat kuchh chhuane ki koshish bhi mat karna…………...vo baat bad ki hai ki mai gussa houngi ki nahi ye mai kahani sunane ke baad hi bataungi………………………….

mai janata tha ki meri samat aane wali hai is baat ko batane ke baad………………..

sweety phir bolati hai- ye to bataya hi nahi ki rita ka kya huaa…………………………..

mai - ab bata hi raha hu to aap jaan hi jaogi ki kya huaa hai unke sath ………………

ha thik hai chal bata…………………………………………………

ha to suniye…………………………….

kahani kaha thi …..uummmmmmm……….ha


ham the hame god of hell ne apane pass bulaya tha…………………………..

ham andar jate hai to dekhate hai ki andar ki sunadarta hi alag hai aage 6-7 sihasa lage huye the aur ek aage bada sihasan the jispar ek vykti baitha huaa tha aur aur side wale sihasan par bhi log baithe huye hai jisame do mahilaye hai aur ek sihasan khali tha jis par d0o logo ke baithane ke liye jagah paryapt tha…………….


ham us mahal ke bhitari sunadarata me khoye huye the ki tabhi hame ek bhari lekin madhur aawaj sunai deta hai………………………….

aaiye king aur rani ritika aapka sawagat hai death lok mai mai hu god of hell yaha ka raja…………………………

ham dono to pichhe mudakar dekhane lage ki ye king aur rtika hai kaun lekin hamare pichhe koi nahi tha phir ham aage aaschary se dekhane lage………………………………..

hamne aap logo ko hi bola hai ham jante hai ki aap apane bare me kuchh nahi janate hai lekin samay aa gaya hai ki aap apane bare me kuchh jan le aaiye aasan grahan kijiye…………………….

hamara to dimag hi gum gaya ki sala ye hamko king aur rutu didi ko ritka kyo bol raha hai…………………..

god of hell- abb to didi mat boliye king ye aapki dharm patni hai aur aap inake pati …………………..

mai- ye….ye kya bole ja rahe hai kaun king mai to kahi ka raja nahi hu…………….

mai sihasann par jakar baith gaya ritu didi bhi meri bayi or jakar baith gayi………………..

god of hell- abhi pat chal jayega…………………...aur ye kahakar ve hamare pass aate hai aur hamare sar par apana hath rakh dete hai jisase ham dono ki aakhe band ho jati hai aur ham jaise apane sapano me chale jate hai jaise jaise hamara drisy aage ki or badhata ja araha tha to hamare chehare par khusi aur dukh… gusse ke mile jule bhaw aate ja rahe the…………….hamre aakho se aasu nikalane lage phir hamari akhe ek sath khul jaati hai ham apane akho me aashu liye ek dusare ko dekhate hai aur phir vaha baithe logo ko………………………………….

ritu vah baiothi ek mahila jisake aakho me bhi aasuthe usase jakar lipat kar rone lagati hai………………..ma mai…….mai…...mai ritu aage bol hi nahi p[a rahi thi…………………..

ha meri bachhi tu phir se mere pass laut aayi hai hamane bahut salo se tera intejar kiya hai meri bachi aur ritu ke chehare ko chumane lagti hai ………………………..

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….


kahani jari rahegi……………...
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Update no. 17 (D)

Kahani abhi tak:-

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Abb aage:-

Death lok ki kahani jari rahegi:-

Abb batate haiwaha kaun kaun tha to vaha jo mahila thi vah thi fairy Queen (pariyo ki rani ) mandakini , aur unake pati mahoday shashank…,......

Dusari mahila thi jinlok ki rani संवेदिका aur sath me hai maharaj कुषाण,..................

और do the yaha ke hi the mantri type (jyada pata nahi hai kyoki inka jyada rol nahi hai)

(Dosto bata du ki queen mandakini aur king shashank ki ritika beti hai aur shiva beta nahi balki damad hai……………)

Queen se milane ke baad mai king se bhi mila……..

king of fairies :- aap to hamare bete hi hai jamai raja hete kam thodi hi na………..

Tabhi ek taraf se Ritu gale lagte huye kahati hai ha pitaji aap inko hi jyada pyar karte hai mujhe nahi………

king of fairies:- beta ji pyar to mai tumse bhi bahut jyada karta hu…………

Mai :-ha pitaji nahi to jitana tumhe prthavi ke khane se pram karti ho usase kahi jyada tumhe ye prem karte hai……Lekin beta kya abb bhi………

Ritu:- ma aap mera majak bana rahi hai pahale ki baat dusari thi abb ki baat dusari hai……...mai abb nahi khati utani……….

Mai sab se milane ke baad vahi par khada tha aur Ritu ke bat sunane ke baad maje lete huye kaha… O to ye baat hai lekin ritika tum kuchh jyada hi sach nahi bol rahi ho….kam khati ho….

Ritu- ji nahi balki yaha to abb mahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki tumhe to khane ke naam se hi bhukh lag jati hai…..

mai - ha to mai khaunga hi na mai khane se koi samjhauta nahi kar sakta lekin tum apani dekho kaise sukha ke kata ho gayi ho pahale kaisi tha bb kya ho gayi ho……………

ritu- jyada meri majak mat udao samjh ….. mai utana hi khati hu jitana ki mujhe khane chahiye

aur ye jo isare kar rahe ho pahale tum kisi se nahi darte the lekin abb samjh to gaye honge aap king ji………..

mai- o to tum meri sikayat karogi meri sweety didi se ha mat bhulo pati hu mai tumhara……

o ho to patidev ji pahale shadi to karlo phir pati hone ka hak jatana samjhe aur ha mai tumse badi hu to mujhe darane ki baat mat karo nahi to mai………...itanahi kah thi ki fairies queen ne unhe rokate huye kaha…..tum logo keabhi to sab bate bhule huye the lekin ladana nahi bhule ho pahale bhi bina baat ke ladfate the aur aaj bhi.,.......

ritu- ma mai kaha lad rahi hu pahale to isane suru kiya tha……….

queen sanvedika ne kaha ritika apane pati se aise baat nahi karte beta ye tumhare pati hai pahale ki baat aujab tum logo ko kuchh nahi pat tha lekin abb to pata chal gaya hai na…….

ritu- mai isase badi hu aur ha mujhase aap kahlwane ke liye pahale mujhase sadi to karle….

mai- sadi to hamare pahale hi ho gayi hai abb kya karana hai……

\ritu- ji nahi sadi to tumhe karani hi padegi…….

sare lo inka nok jhok dekh rahe the aur muskura rahe the to fairies king ne unhe rokate huye kaha---

ruk jao meri rajkumari bitiuya aur tum bhi jamai raja pahale tum dono ko yaha kyo bulaya gaya hai ye to sun lo………

ye baat sunakar hame yaad aaya ki ham to mar chuke hai…………

ye hamari man ki baat king of hell sun lete hai…..aur kahate hai…..

nahi shiva tum dono mare nahi ho lekin tum dono abb prithavi vasi ho to yaha aane ke liye tumhe marana pada partantu tum dono ka sharir surakshit rakha gaya hai….abb suno tumhe yaha bulane ka hamara uddesy kaya hai……..

shiva- matalab ham mare nahi hai aur hame yaha aane ke liye baar baar apan sharir chodana padega kya maharaj…

hell king nahi jab tak purn roop se devil king nahi ban jaate to tab tak tumhe agar yaha kisi jaruri kaam se aana ya bulana pada to tumhe marana padega…….

mai- ji mai samjh gya aab hame yaha bulane ka mukhaya karan bataiye………. abb sabhi log apane apane jagah par baith gaye the to…………

hell king- tumhe yaha bulane ka mukhay karan hai futur book jo yaha se chori ho gaya hai…….

mai- futur book ye kya hota hai chori ho gaya hai lekin yaha se mai kuchh samjha nahi aap kahana kya chahate hai………..

hell king- ha futur book jisaki suraksha ki jimmedari god ne mujhe di thi…..aur isaki madat se ham kisi ki bhi futur dekh sakte hai kisi ki bhi lekin ham devatao ki keval likhit rup se hamari yojanaye jo ham banayenge vah pata chalta hai kyoki ham futur mw hone wali ghatnao ko to jante hai lekin ham us ghatana ke bhag nahi hote hai isliye………….rahi chori ki baat to pahale ye sun lo ki chori ksane ki haiaur kyo isake pichhe ke karan kya hai pahale tum aaj aaram kar lo… ham kal baat karenge…….

mai- ji lekin……

fairies king- putr ham samjhate hai lekin tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe tumhare samay me hi wapas bhej denge….. pahale tum aaj aaram kro…….

paresent me:-

itana sunane ke baad sweety ne usake muh par hath rakha aur bola abb bas aab aage ki baate kal pahale aap aaram kijiye ham kal bate karenge…………

didi ye kya aapane aap aap laga rakha hai aap mujhase badi hai to……………..

shiva ke hotho par hath rakhate huye …… maitumhe chup aur bhi tarike se kara sakti thi lekin us tarike ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai samjhe aur ha aap jitana jaldi ho sake utana jaldi ye aap sunane ka aadat daal lijiye kyoki mamta didi mere pichhe pad gayi hai yah baat janane ke liye aur mai bhi batane wali hu…..mai unhe rokakar kuchh bolane hi wala tha k unhone rokakar bola ……..abhi meri baat piuri nahi huyi hai samjhe…...hato mai kah rahi hu ritu didi ko kuchh dino me pata chalega liki usase pahale mai bata du ki kanika ko sab pata hai lekin vah tumhara chehara nahi dekh payi hai lekin mujhe lagata hai ki vah samay jald hi aane wala hai……..aur sabse badi baat sonal ko bhi tumhare bare me pata chal gaya hai leki abhi vah conform nahi hai aur mai use yah baat clear kal kar dungi usaki aur ha mai kisi bhi halat me nahi ruk sakati samjhe ye meri bahano ke sath nainsafi hogi…….

mai- jab itana kuchh bata diya hai to baki ke bare me bhi bata dijiye kyoki mai man to nahi padh sakata abhi………

sweety- baki samay aane par kyoki abhi itana hi jaruru tha aur ha aap bhi mujhe fors nahi karenge lekin aap pata lagana ho to laga sakte hai……… likin itana jarur kahungi ki tin baar gale mat lagan nahi to use jo ham nahi janate use sab kuchh bhi yaad aa jayega……...aur aap to janate hi hai ki sonal aur minal dono kaisi thi to savdhan sonal to kal se hi aapko aur hamko bhi pareshan karna chalu kar degi leki minal me abhi samaya hai lekin sonal use batayegi jarur koi na koi upaya lagakar……...yah kahakr vah goo night bolakar chali gayi aur mai sala pagalo ki tarah baitha raha kahir mai sari baato ko apane dimag se nikalte huye let gaya……………………………..

chalte hai sonal ke pass jo vahi sapana dekh rahi thi aur minal to kuchh janati hi nahi thi to nirbhed soi huyi thi……

mamata bhi soyi huyi thi lekin kanika to vahi sapana dekh rahi thi…...sweety bhi apane kamare me chali gayi…………

subah ke ** baj gaye the lekin mai abhi bhi ghode bechh kar soya huaa tha jaise mujhe koi chinta fikir hi na ho…………..aur niche papa aur bade papa nasta karke apani samsya ko hal karane nikal gaye the……….

kanika , minal , sonal ne bhi nasta kar liya tha aur abb badi mammi , ma, mamata didi, sweety didi baithi huyi yhi ……………..

sonal, minal nasta parosh rahe the………...kanika apani hi soch me gum thi pata nahi kya soch rahi thi….mai bhi nahi janta kyoki abhi mujhe man padhane ki sakti nahi mili thi……..

sudh- aare kanika beta jara shiva ko bhi utha dena vah lagaata hai ki kal bahut thak gaya tha…….

kanika- ji mami our vah chal deti hai shiva ko jagane ke liye…………………..

kahani jari rahegi…………aage ek hot update milega to bane rahiye is kahani ke sath………………..
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Update no. 17 (D)

Kahani abhi tak:-

mai bhi unke pas jakar khada ho jata hu aur kahta hu…………..ma aap mujhe bhul gayi ………….apaka to mai beta hu na ye to aapaki bahu hai………………….. rote huye bhi sabhi has padate hai …………. ha bere bachh aur mujhe bhi apane gale se laaga leti hai…………………………………………………………………………………………….

Abb aage:-

Death lok ki kahani jari rahegi:-

Abb batate haiwaha kaun kaun tha to vaha jo mahila thi vah thi fairy Queen (pariyo ki rani ) mandakini , aur unake pati mahoday shashank…,......

Dusari mahila thi jinlok ki rani संवेदिका aur sath me hai maharaj कुषाण,..................

और do the yaha ke hi the mantri type (jyada pata nahi hai kyoki inka jyada rol nahi hai)

(Dosto bata du ki queen mandakini aur king shashank ki ritika beti hai aur shiva beta nahi balki damad hai……………)

Queen se milane ke baad mai king se bhi mila……..

king of fairies :- aap to hamare bete hi hai jamai raja hete kam thodi hi na………..

Tabhi ek taraf se Ritu gale lagte huye kahati hai ha pitaji aap inko hi jyada pyar karte hai mujhe nahi………

king of fairies:- beta ji pyar to mai tumse bhi bahut jyada karta hu…………

Mai :-ha pitaji nahi to jitana tumhe prthavi ke khane se pram karti ho usase kahi jyada tumhe ye prem karte hai……Lekin beta kya abb bhi………

Ritu:- ma aap mera majak bana rahi hai pahale ki baat dusari thi abb ki baat dusari hai……...mai abb nahi khati utani……….

Mai sab se milane ke baad vahi par khada tha aur Ritu ke bat sunane ke baad maje lete huye kaha… O to ye baat hai lekin ritika tum kuchh jyada hi sach nahi bol rahi ho….kam khati ho….

Ritu- ji nahi balki yaha to abb mahaul aisa ban gaya hai ki tumhe to khane ke naam se hi bhukh lag jati hai…..

mai - ha to mai khaunga hi na mai khane se koi samjhauta nahi kar sakta lekin tum apani dekho kaise sukha ke kata ho gayi ho pahale kaisi tha bb kya ho gayi ho……………

ritu- jyada meri majak mat udao samjh ….. mai utana hi khati hu jitana ki mujhe khane chahiye

aur ye jo isare kar rahe ho pahale tum kisi se nahi darte the lekin abb samjh to gaye honge aap king ji………..

mai- o to tum meri sikayat karogi meri sweety didi se ha mat bhulo pati hu mai tumhara……

o ho to patidev ji pahale shadi to karlo phir pati hone ka hak jatana samjhe aur ha mai tumse badi hu to mujhe darane ki baat mat karo nahi to mai………...itanahi kah thi ki fairies queen ne unhe rokate huye kaha…..tum logo keabhi to sab bate bhule huye the lekin ladana nahi bhule ho pahale bhi bina baat ke ladfate the aur aaj bhi.,.......

ritu- ma mai kaha lad rahi hu pahale to isane suru kiya tha……….

queen sanvedika ne kaha ritika apane pati se aise baat nahi karte beta ye tumhare pati hai pahale ki baat aujab tum logo ko kuchh nahi pat tha lekin abb to pata chal gaya hai na…….

ritu- mai isase badi hu aur ha mujhase aap kahlwane ke liye pahale mujhase sadi to karle….

mai- sadi to hamare pahale hi ho gayi hai abb kya karana hai……

\ritu- ji nahi sadi to tumhe karani hi padegi…….

sare lo inka nok jhok dekh rahe the aur muskura rahe the to fairies king ne unhe rokate huye kaha---

ruk jao meri rajkumari bitiuya aur tum bhi jamai raja pahale tum dono ko yaha kyo bulaya gaya hai ye to sun lo………

ye baat sunakar hame yaad aaya ki ham to mar chuke hai…………

ye hamari man ki baat king of hell sun lete hai…..aur kahate hai…..

nahi shiva tum dono mare nahi ho lekin tum dono abb prithavi vasi ho to yaha aane ke liye tumhe marana pada partantu tum dono ka sharir surakshit rakha gaya hai….abb suno tumhe yaha bulane ka hamara uddesy kaya hai……..

shiva- matalab ham mare nahi hai aur hame yaha aane ke liye baar baar apan sharir chodana padega kya maharaj…

hell king nahi jab tak purn roop se devil king nahi ban jaate to tab tak tumhe agar yaha kisi jaruri kaam se aana ya bulana pada to tumhe marana padega…….

mai- ji mai samjh gya aab hame yaha bulane ka mukhaya karan bataiye………. abb sabhi log apane apane jagah par baith gaye the to…………

hell king- tumhe yaha bulane ka mukhay karan hai futur book jo yaha se chori ho gaya hai…….

mai- futur book ye kya hota hai chori ho gaya hai lekin yaha se mai kuchh samjha nahi aap kahana kya chahate hai………..

hell king- ha futur book jisaki suraksha ki jimmedari god ne mujhe di thi…..aur isaki madat se ham kisi ki bhi futur dekh sakte hai kisi ki bhi lekin ham devatao ki keval likhit rup se hamari yojanaye jo ham banayenge vah pata chalta hai kyoki ham futur mw hone wali ghatnao ko to jante hai lekin ham us ghatana ke bhag nahi hote hai isliye………….rahi chori ki baat to pahale ye sun lo ki chori ksane ki haiaur kyo isake pichhe ke karan kya hai pahale tum aaj aaram kar lo… ham kal baat karenge…….

mai- ji lekin……

fairies king- putr ham samjhate hai lekin tum chinta mat karo ham tumhe tumhare samay me hi wapas bhej denge….. pahale tum aaj aaram kro…….

paresent me:-

itana sunane ke baad sweety ne usake muh par hath rakha aur bola abb bas aab aage ki baate kal pahale aap aaram kijiye ham kal bate karenge…………

didi ye kya aapane aap aap laga rakha hai aap mujhase badi hai to……………..

shiva ke hotho par hath rakhate huye …… maitumhe chup aur bhi tarike se kara sakti thi lekin us tarike ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai samjhe aur ha aap jitana jaldi ho sake utana jaldi ye aap sunane ka aadat daal lijiye kyoki mamta didi mere pichhe pad gayi hai yah baat janane ke liye aur mai bhi batane wali hu…..mai unhe rokakar kuchh bolane hi wala tha k unhone rokakar bola ……..abhi meri baat piuri nahi huyi hai samjhe…...hato mai kah rahi hu ritu didi ko kuchh dino me pata chalega liki usase pahale mai bata du ki kanika ko sab pata hai lekin vah tumhara chehara nahi dekh payi hai lekin mujhe lagata hai ki vah samay jald hi aane wala hai……..aur sabse badi baat sonal ko bhi tumhare bare me pata chal gaya hai leki abhi vah conform nahi hai aur mai use yah baat clear kal kar dungi usaki aur ha mai kisi bhi halat me nahi ruk sakati samjhe ye meri bahano ke sath nainsafi hogi…….

mai- jab itana kuchh bata diya hai to baki ke bare me bhi bata dijiye kyoki mai man to nahi padh sakata abhi………

sweety- baki samay aane par kyoki abhi itana hi jaruru tha aur ha aap bhi mujhe fors nahi karenge lekin aap pata lagana ho to laga sakte hai……… likin itana jarur kahungi ki tin baar gale mat lagan nahi to use jo ham nahi janate use sab kuchh bhi yaad aa jayega……...aur aap to janate hi hai ki sonal aur minal dono kaisi thi to savdhan sonal to kal se hi aapko aur hamko bhi pareshan karna chalu kar degi leki minal me abhi samaya hai lekin sonal use batayegi jarur koi na koi upaya lagakar……...yah kahakr vah goo night bolakar chali gayi aur mai sala pagalo ki tarah baitha raha kahir mai sari baato ko apane dimag se nikalte huye let gaya……………………………..

chalte hai sonal ke pass jo vahi sapana dekh rahi thi aur minal to kuchh janati hi nahi thi to nirbhed soi huyi thi……

mamata bhi soyi huyi thi lekin kanika to vahi sapana dekh rahi thi…...sweety bhi apane kamare me chali gayi…………

subah ke ** baj gaye the lekin mai abhi bhi ghode bechh kar soya huaa tha jaise mujhe koi chinta fikir hi na ho…………..aur niche papa aur bade papa nasta karke apani samsya ko hal karane nikal gaye the……….

kanika , minal , sonal ne bhi nasta kar liya tha aur abb badi mammi , ma, mamata didi, sweety didi baithi huyi yhi ……………..

sonal, minal nasta parosh rahe the………...kanika apani hi soch me gum thi pata nahi kya soch rahi thi….mai bhi nahi janta kyoki abhi mujhe man padhane ki sakti nahi mili thi……..

sudh- aare kanika beta jara shiva ko bhi utha dena vah lagaata hai ki kal bahut thak gaya tha…….

kanika- ji mami our vah chal deti hai shiva ko jagane ke liye…………………..

kahani jari rahegi…………aage ek hot update milega to bane rahiye is kahani ke sath………………..
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Kahani aab tak:-

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..

Abb aage:-

Location - p. Bangal sunadarvan


Haveli se nikali vah kalli jyoti udati hui chali ja rahi thi…….jyoti ki disha bangal rajy ke side tha aur jyoti tivr gati se us taraf badhe ja rahi thi…..

Vah kali jyoti sundar van me pahuch jati hai aur sundar van me ek jagah par jakar dharti ke andar sammahit ho jati hai aur van me bhukamp sa aa jata hai……….aur jis jagah par vah jyoti akar takari thi vaha ki mitti dekhate hi dekhate sukha jati hai aur vaha par darar fat jata hai…………

Us darar me se sass lene ki aawaj aane lagti hai….jaise koi apni sass rokne ke baad lambi lambi sase leta hai i..

aakash me kalee badal chhane lagte hai tej havaye bijaliya kadakne lagti hai…… phir achanak sab kuchh pahle ke jaisi ho jaati haii……..

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jab ham log (didi, ma, papa aur mai) jangal ke raste se hote huye satation ki or ja rahe the ki tabhi hamare aage ek pagal sa dikhane wala sadhu type aadami hamare gadi ke aage rasta roke hue khada tha…….. driver ne bahut horn diya lekin jaise use kuchh sunai hi nahi de raha tha vah hat hi nahi raha tha../.. tabhi papa gadi se bahar nikal kar use hatane keliye jaate hai to vah kahta hai……….

pagal aadami--- tu marne wala hai….ha..ha...tu aaj marega vah tujhe aur tere bete ko marne ke liye marak totaka (dosto tona aur jaadu ke bare me jayada kuchh pata nahi hai) kar rahi hai tujhe dhokhe se bulaa rahi hai tu na ja usake pass…..nahi to tu bachhe ga nahi …….

papa yah sunakr thoda darr gaye the lekin phir bole- kya bake jaa rahe ho hato rashate se hame jaane me deri ho rahi hai……

pagal adami- tu chinta na kar aaj usaki pahli shakti jagrit ho gayi hai…...par aabhi vah kamjor hai ……..


papa ke to kuchh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha unhe kya samh to hame bhi nahi aaraha tha….

vah pagal itana bolkar raste se hat gya aur jangal ki or chala gya gay papa gadi ke andar aaye to maa ne puchha- kya bol raha tha suresh vah pagal aadami……..

papa- are kuchh nahi vah bol raha tha ki ….papa ne sab bata diya ……. ye kya bol gya hame to kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya ki usane kya bola…….

Phir ham log chal diye……

Jangal me aadhe raste par hi the ki driver ne achanak hi brek maar diya ham sabhi aage ki or jhuk gaye………….

Mai are kya huaa drivar uncle ye achanak aapane brek kyo maar diye…….

Driver- sahab aage to rasta hi nahi hai phir ham aage kaise jayenge…..

Papa-kya matlab hai tumhara ki aage rasta nahi hai………

Driver-- mai shi kah raha hu dekhiye aage kahi se bhi rasta nahi hai…………

Sab log gadi se bahar nikale to sach me rasta nahi taha aage jane ke liye……..

Mamata didi---lekin jab mai gav aai thi to ham log isi raste se aaye the phir ye achanak rasta kaha gaya……..

Mammi- suresh maine bola tha tumhe ki ham jangal ke raste se nahi jayenge……. Lekin tum sab meri baat sune hi nahi…...ab aise bhi late hoga aur vaise bhi late hota lekin vah rasta safe tha lekin nahi hame aaj hi pahchana hai………

Papa-sudha ab mujhe kya pata tha ki yaha se achanak rasta hi gayab ho jayega………

Abhi sabhi baat hi kar rahe the ki baha ek tej prakash fail gya aur sabhi ke ankhe band ho gayi……….

Vah tej parkash us dhuye se aaraha tha kyoki jo safed wala bhag tha vah bahut tej chamak raha tha…………..vah do rangiy dhuaa aakar shiva ke andar sama gayi jisase shiva ko bahut tej dard hone laga vah chilla uth……

M………….aaaaaaaaaa

Ma ne jab meri aawaj suni to jhat se apani aakhe kol kar mujhe dekha ne lagi………
Lekin baha mai nahi tha………

Shiva...shiva kaha gaya.. Ma ne mujhe dhudhate hue puchh

Papa aur mamata didi charo traf tarf mujhe dekha ne lage lekin mai baha nahi tha…..aur ye mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mai kaha gya hu baha se kyoki jab mujhe tej dadr utha to mai vahi chillate hue behosh ho gaya…….

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location- delhi ka jangal

aurat ( kutil muskan dete hue)- kya puja ke liye bali ka intejaam ho gaya hai…….
un me se ek sakhas kahata hai……...ji ……..taiyar hai…

vah upasthit sare log us aurat ko ek jhopadi me leke jaate hai…………..jhopdi ke andar charo or tantra vidya ki chije aur usse sambandhit vastu banayi gayi aur rakhi gayi thi……….niche ek putala ke charo or chaar nimbu rakhe gaye the jin par lal sindur laga hua tha………………….

jhopdi ke andar ka nazara dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha ki yaha par kisi prakarya ke jaadu tona ya badi totake ka anjam diya jaane wala hai…………..

tabhi vah aurat apane hath me ek mans katane wala chaku uatha leti hai…...aur…...muskurate hue bali ke paas jaati hai……...phir vah aurat……...usi chaku se us bali ke sharir par “shiva tivari” likh deti hai…………

vah bali chaku ke nook apane dil par dekhate hi chhatpatane lagta hai……….vaha upasthit log aakar us bali ke haath pair pakad lete hai…………..

vah aurat apane muh se kuchh mantr padhati hai aur jor se chillate hue us bali ke gardan jor se dabane lagti hai…………..baki ke sharir se sara khun nikalkar pass rakhe us gudiya ke charo or chipakane lagata hai…...aur us gudiya se ek ataynt kala dhuaa nikalne lagata hai aut vah dhuaa us disha ki or ud jaata hai jis disha me shiva tha aur jakar shiva se usi vakt takarata hai jis vakt us haveli se nikala dhuaa ka gola shiva me pravesh karne wala hota hai…………….
aur shiva ko ek tej jhataka lagata hai jisase usaki chikh nikal jati hai---------

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location:- delhi me ek unknown haveli ke ek kamre me

delhi ke ek aalishan haveli ke ek kamre me ek ladki jiski umr lagbhag 17-18 saal thi…………..
ladki ke hath me ek piyano tha jispar vah ek bahut hi khubsurat si dhun baja rahi thi………..
usaki ungaliya lagatar sangit ke madur dhun chhed rahe the……..uaske chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jo uaske sunadrta me chhar chaand laga rahi thi………..
jis room me vah thi vah room charo taraf se classic interior se saja hua tha……..

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koibhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vahi neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)


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Kahani ab tak:-

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koi bhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vah neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)

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Abb age:-

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Location:- himachal pradesh ke jilla shimala ke ratanganj gav ke ek purani kothi keshari bhavan me jo aaj bhi bade -2 mahlo ko apne aage maat deta hai:-

Ek kamre me ek mahila sayad bahut dino se koma me thi jor se chikhate hue uthati hai…..

Ru……Ru….draravi………………..

Phir achanak behosh ho jati hai……….

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Location:- jaha mai (shiva) tha

jab vah dhue ka gola mujhase takraya to mujhe ek tej jhataka laga aur mai ma……….chilate hue dur ja gira jaha mai ek ped se takra gya aur jab mai khada hone ki koshis ki to khada ho kar kuchh hi dur gya tha ki mai dhadam se jameen par gir gya aur meri aakhe dhire dhire band hoti chali gayi…...

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Location:-jaha ma baba aur mamta didi the:-

jangal me ma papa mamata didi mujhe dundhane lage………… ma to mujhe naa pakar rone lagi aur saara dos papa par dalne lagi ki unke hi kahne par jangal ke raste se aaye the….

ma rote hue:- suresh mai kuchh nahi janti kahi se bhi mera beta lakar dijiye…………………

mamata didi- shant ho jaiye chachi use kuchh nahi hoga shayad vah jo roshani faili thi to use me4bhatkakar jangal me kahi chala gaya hoga………..

halanki mamata didi bhi ghabra rahi thi vah man hi man bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi thi ki mai jaha bhi rahu surakshit raahu jabki mamata didi ne mujh se kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki kyoki bachapan me mujhase ek galati anjane me ho gayi tab se lekin vah mujhse sabse adhik pyar karti thi…………….

aaj unka bhi dill bahut joro se dhadak raha tha ki kahin mujhe kuchh na ho jaye…….

yaha par sabb log pareshan the vahi jangal me usi mandir me god aur martand rishi aapas me baate kar rahe the………

martand rishi:- god ye to anarth ho gaya………


God- ha rishi var jo hona nahi chahiye vahi ho gaya mujhe iska pata pehle se hi pata tha lekin mai prakritik ke karyo me hastakshep nahi karunga aur na hi aap karne ko cheshtha kare………………

hoga vahi jo ********chahenge………

rishi - parantu god shiva ki atma to subah hote hi uski sharir chod degi aur vah shaitani aatma uske sharir par kabja kar kar legi jo atadhik vinashkari sidh ho sakta hai ………


God- chintit na hoiye rishivar jo hota hai vah lok kalyan ke liye hi hota hai ………. burai chahe jitna bhi apna bistar kar le par ant me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai aab aap jaiye aur shiva ke parivar walo ko sambhaliye aur ha jitani jaldi ho sake aap devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unka karm ka samran dilaiye……
dusari baat yah hai ki aab se ham aur aap is jangal me nahi milenge……..

rishi - god mujhe aapaki margdarshan ki ati avsyakta padegi …..


God - aapke mardarshan ke liye aapke guru प्रचंडक rishi ji hai jo aap ko aage ki raah dikhayenge……...philhal प्रचंडक rishi himalaya par kathor tapasya kar rahe hai uchit samay aane par vah aap se milne swayam aayenge……….l.

jo aagya bhagwan………

kalyan ho……….

aur god antardhyan ho gaye.

Martand rishi chal diye jidhar meri ma baba the………

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Location :- jha mai tha:-
Time:- savera abhi abhi apana pankh faila rahi thi………

jab meri aakh khuli to subahj ho gayi thi……..mere akho ke samane neela aasaman tha, muhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuchh ghanto se yaha behosh pada hua tha……

jab mai utha to dekha mere samane nadi bas rahi thi aur mere charo or keval hare bhare ped paudhe hi dikhay de rahe the……...tabhi mujhe ki mai to ma baba aur did ke sath delhi ja raha tha …….aur jangal wala raste ke aadhe me se hi gayab ho gaya tha aur kuchh der baad vah tej roshni……….uske aage mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aaraha tha……….tabhi meri najar niche ki or gayi mai ek dam se uchhal pada kyoki jaha mai pahle behosh pada tha vaha mere jaise hi ek aadami leta huaa hai ………..tab mujhe reyakais huaa ki mera mritu ho chuki hai mai mar chuka hu…………...mai apana deh tyag chuka hu mere sharir se meri aatma bahar nikal chuki hai………..mera to diumag hi ghum gya ki ye sab kya huaa……..kaise huaa...mere man me savalo ka jvala uathane laga ………...mai jab jamin par lete hue sharir ke pass jakar use chhune ki koshis ki to mai chhu hi nmahi pa raha tha..mera haath sharir ke aar paar ho ja raha tha…….
mai kisi bhi vastu ko touch hi nahi kar pa raha tha …..aur mai yahi soch raha tha ki mai na jaane kis musibat me fas gya hu……….aur kaise fasa ye to mujhe bilkul nahi p[ata ………..

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dusari taraf…….

ma- na jane mera bacha kaha gayab ho gaya kis haal me hoga…….
mamata didi- use kuchh nahi hoga chchi………..aap shant ho jaiye dekhna vah aata hi hoga mai janti hu vo ham sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai………….

sahi kaha putri vah tum sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai…………..

sabhi9 log pichhe mud kar dekhate hai to ek sadhu piche khada hai jisame atadhik tej hai chehre par chamak aisa lag raha tha ki vah koi mahan punyatma hai………

papa- hath jodte hue……...aap kaun hai…….

mai mahadev ka ek chhota sa tuchh bhakt hu aur unhi ke aadesh par yaha aaya hu…….ye batane ke liye ki aap sabhi chinta na kare aapke bete ko kuch nahi hoga …….. aap nishchint hokar apne ghar jaye…………...rishi ne bola

kaise chale jaye ghar bina apane bachhe ko liye mai ghar kya ann ka ek dana bhi muh me nahi lungi………… suresh chahe jo bhi karo mujhe mera beta chha hiye…...ma ne kaha

papa- sudha ha rishivar ham aapne bachhe ke bina yaha se nahi jayenge………..

rishi- kya aap bhul gaye jabb aaplog shiva ko mile the to un tapasvi ne kya kaha tha……….tumhe to sab yaad hi hoga……

Mamata didi… sochane lagi ki baat kya hai jo hamme nahi pata…...chacha chachi ne humse kya chhupaya hai……...

ma baba- ko yaad aane lagta hai ki………….

flashback first ( 1):-
aaj se 15 saal pahle:-

shudha aur suresh aur sath me Sweety aur shiva ham dono bhi the ( Sweety us samay 6 varh ki thi aur mai 4 varsh ka tha ) himachal pradesh ke mandiro par ja ja kar darshan kar rahe the bas ek hi mandir rah gaya tha vah tha himachal pradesh ke jangal ke beech ek mandir tha jisaka naam ********* devi mandir tha



jab sudha( maa), suresh (pap), aur Sweety didi aur shiva saath me ********** mandir chal dete hai……...shiva ko papa ne god me utha rakha tha………

Sweety-papa betu ko mujhako do na mai bete ko apni god me lekar chalti hu………..vo mera betu hai…………

Ma- ha….ha...ham jante hai vo tera hi betu hai hamara to vah beta hai ye baat ham jante hai…...aur rahi baat shiva ko tere god me lene ki to tu aabhi chhoti hai apane betu ko giraana chahti ho kya……..

Sweety-jaldi se…..nahi….nahi mai betu ko kaise neeche giraungi…………

Maa- to use god me kyo lena chahti hai tu jannati hai ki tu abhi betu ko god me lekar nahi chal sakti…….uske liye bada hona padega………

Masumiyat se……..kitana mammi…….

Tere papa jitane….ma ne kaha

Papa jitane ……. Phir kuch sochte hue……...matlab aap abhi choti ho…...mujhase badi ho to……...Sweety ne bholepan se puchh

Maa- haste hue………. chal hame jaldi mandir pahuchana hai aaj koi auto wale bhi nahi dikhai de rahe hai raat hone wali hai……..aur mandir bhi abhi dur hai…..ham hotel bhi nahi ja sakte hai kyon ki mandir yahan se bahut pass padega……...suresh mere to jee bahut ghabara raha hai……….

Papa-sudha aur kuchh dur chal lete hai abb ham pahuchane wale hai is jangal me rukana bhi to khatarnak hai…….

Sweety- papa mere betu so gaya kya..

Papa- ha beta tera betu aur hamara beta so gaya hai……….chalo jaldi jaldi chalo………

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Flashback me hi dusri taraf……….

Ek car teji se usi jangal ki taraf aa rahi thi us gadi me ek mahila aur ek aadmi the. Ko karib 30-32 saal ke honge……..usi car me ek bachh th jo behosh tha ki soya huaa tha ye mujhe nahi pata…………..

Aadmi- tumhe kya lagta hai ham jo kar rahe hai vah sahi hai……..

Aurat- kyo nahi sahi hai…..ha……..agar ye sahi nahi hai to kya vah sahi tha jo isane aur isaki ma ************* ne kya……….

Aadami- ********** tum samjh nahi rahi ho bhabhi ne jo bhi kya vah janbujhkar nahi kya vah to use hi bachane ke liye jaa rahi thi……

Aurat- dekho ji mai kuchh bhi nahi janti usake karan mera beta hame chod gaya abb uska beta nahi rahega ………..

Aadmi--dekho ********** ham phir se koshish karenge to hame phir se bachha ho sakte hai……….aur……...bhabhi ne apana operation kara liya hai hai unke vansh vridhi ke liye bas yahi ek hai aur ham aaj isako bhi unase chhin lege………..

Aurat-chin lege……..ha….to usane jo hamare bachhe ko chhin liya usaka kya ha………

Aadmi-unhone jaan bujh kar nahi kya hai *******.......tum samjh nahi rahi ho jis din tumhe sachai pata chalegi tum bahut pachhatane waali hi…………

Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhe chhina hai……..(aur aapke bhai ke karan meri bahan ki jindagi jo barbad ho gayi hai uska bhi badala hai ye chhodungi nahi tujhe ******* Thakur abhi to ye suruaat hai)
……...…..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….

Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….

Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….

Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliya the…………………

Flashback will continue in the next update
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Update no 12
the story So Far:-


Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..


Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….


Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….


Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….


Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………


Abb aage:-



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Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….

Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..


Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………


Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………



Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……

Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……


Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....

VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….






Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……

Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….


Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………

Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..


Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….


Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………


Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….

Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..


Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………


Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..


(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)


Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….


Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….


Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...


Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….


Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….



Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………


Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..


Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………


Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………


Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………


Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………


Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………


Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..


Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..


Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)



sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..


Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..


Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..


Suresh- oh….no….


Sudha- kya huaa…….


Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado



Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….
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Update no. 12 (B)

Kahani aab tak:-

Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado


Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….


Abb aage:-

Ve log dar jate hai ki yah kaun hai pichhe mudkar dekhate hai to hath pakadne wala eak sadhu tha…………

Sadhu- beta tum unko nahi rok sakte ho…………
Suresh-baba ye aap kya kah rahe hai………..

Sadhu-mai sahi kah raha hu suresh…Yahi vidhi ka vidhan hai…….

Suresh apna naam sunakr chauk jata hai phir apane aap ko sambhalte hue puchata hai…………

Aap mera naam kaise jante hai…….

Sadhu-jaise ye janta hu ki vah ladaka jise tum bachane wale ho aaj uske sharir ka aant aa gay hai……..

Suresh- ye aap kya kah rahe hai ………...to kya ham use yu hi marne de……….

Sadhu- beta koi fayada nahi hai vaha jakar kyoki us ladke ka aant aa gay hai………..

Sudha- baba phir bhi ham use aise hi nahi marne de sakte hai apna prayash karenge use bachane ke liye……...ham use yu hi marne nahi de sakte hai………….

Sadhu-- putri sudha tum nishchint raho vah ladke ki mrityu nahi hogi balki uski keval sharir nast hoga………….

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….

Sadhu-- pahle yaha se chalo………..mai sab kuchh batata hu…….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki kalu ne us ladke ka sar dhad se aalag kar deta hai lekin sudha, suresh, Sweety ki najar idhar nahi padati hai unki najri aur kaano ko us sadhu ne bandh diya tha apni shaktiyo davara……..

Jab ladke marta hai to uske sharir se ek jayoti nikalti hai jo vastav me isaki aatma hoti hai……..
Lekin vah jyoti kewal aadhi hi thi aisa lag raha tha ki uaski aadhi hi aatma bahar nikali hai aadhi nahi……..vah jyoti jaha Vah ladka tha us or chal deta hai……ladka sweety ka hath pakda huaa tha aur vah jivanjyoti us ladke me jakar sama jaati hai aur us ladke apani sari batte bhul jaata hai aur yaad rahata hai to keval shiva ki yade vah shiva ban jata hai………

Sudha- baat kya hai baba…...aap ne us bache ko marne kyo diya………..

Sadhu-- putri kaun sa bacha kaun mara hai……...mujhe to nahi malum kisko maine marne diya hai……..mai to kisi ko aadha se purn bana raha hu……..

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba….kripya vistar se bataiye……….

Ve log kab mandir pahuch gaye unhe pata hi nahi chala ve log mandir me jakar ek or baith jate hai………..

Sadhu-- ye ek rahasya hai suresh………kya .ye aapki putri hai ………..

Sudha- ha baba iski naam Sweety hai…...aur ek aur hai jisaka naam Minal hai vah abhi 2 varsh ki hai…...use ham yaha nahi laye hai……..vah apane buaa ke pass hai……..

Sadhu-- putri Sweety kaya tum aur tumhara betu mandir nahi ghumenge jao mandir ghum aao………..

Ladaka jisame shiva ki atma samane ke baad use keval shiva dvara abhi tak ka jiye jindagi hi yaad thi vah apana saara past bhul gya tha to aab se use shiva hi likhunga kyoki vah shiva hi hai

Shiva- ha didi chalo na mai bhi ghumana chahta hu.

Sweety apani ma papa ki or dekhati hai……..

Suresh samjh jata hai ki jarur koi baat hai…...ja beta apane bhai ko lekar uske sath kelo……

Sudha- Sweety yahi vaha pass me jo chabutara hai usi par jaoo bhai ko lekar………..

Sweety chali jati hai……



Sadhu-- suresh aur sudha tum jante hi ho ki tumhare putr ki aayu jayada vakt ki nahi tha……….vah alpayu tha……..

Sudha aur suresh ko vah baat yad aane lagata hai jab shiva ka janm huaa tha…….ghar ke pandit ne kaha tha ki aapke bete ki aatma aadhi hai……...is karan vah alpayu hoga……..apane soch se bahar nikalte hue…..

Suresh- ji baba hame yad hai…...aur humne unse upay bhi pucha tha lekin unhone kaha tha ki upay unhe nahi pata hai…….

Sadhu-- to putr tumhare putr aab chiranjivi ho gaya hai us ladake ko marne se aur aab aane wale samay me badh rahe papo ka naas karne ke liye ek masiha ka janm ho gaya hai aaj…….

Sudha- ham kuchh samjhe nhi baba…..mashiha …..aur hamre bete ka umr kaise badh gaya hai……

Sadhu--putri tumhare putr ke jivan me teen mrtu yog hai jo tala nahi ja sakta hai vastav me yah yog iske pichhle janm ki anjane me kiye hue apradh ki saza hai………..

Suresh-baba mrtu dand to bhayanak apradh ke liye diya jata hai leki shiva ne kaun sa apradh kiya tha…...ye rahasya kya hai baba …….. hamara putra kaun hai jo is janam me hamara beta bankar janm hua hai……….

Sadhu-- putr tumhare putr ek mahan aatma hai lekin ek dust ke vajah se isame rakshasi ansh bhi pravesh kar gay…….jisase yah devil king ban gay…

….dekha jay to yah ghatan god ji ke vardan ko pura karne ke liye huaa hai kyoki vah devil ne vardan hi manga tha ki god ke ansh ho lekin sath hi uska ansh bhi ho usame jisaka use pata bhi na ho…….isi vardan ke karan ise devil king banaya gaya …..

.lekin yah baat us devil aur uske guru daitygueu ko pata chal gaya aur unhone apne devil power davara………...devil king me jo achhaiya thi unhe deil king ke agyanta davara nast kara diya jisase usne ek bhut hi bhayanak apradh kiya jisse use dandit kiya gaya…

….halanki devil king ka janm papo ka naash karne ke liye huaa tha to uski agyanta ko kshama karte hue uska phir se janam hua lekin jab devil king ki aatma ko dharti par bheja gaya to vah do bhago me pahucha jo ek tumhare garbh me gya aur ek Thakur patni ke garbh me jisase dono ki aayu alpayu ho gayi………jo aab …………..

Sudha- ka dil teji se dhadak rahath use lagne laga ki vah ladka usaka shiva hi tha………
Sudha- bechaini se aab kya baba……

Sadhu-- beta mai pahle ye batana chahta hu ki tumhare bete ki maut ho gayi hai aur jo yah larka hai yah vastav me Thakur ladka aur abb tumharabhi putr hogaya hai…………

Sudha- to ye baat sunte hi dhadam se vahi par gir jati hai suresh jadi se apane goad me le leta ha………...uski bhi aankho me aashu aa gaye the………

Sadhu apane kamndal se jal nikal kar sudha ke chehare par marate hai aur sudha hosh me aa jati hai aur hosh me aane ke baad rone lagti hai ………
Sadhu-- putri apane aap ko sambhalo tumhara putr marke bhi jinda hai……..

Sudha- kaisi ma hi mai apne bete ko pahchan nahi payi…..aur to aur uske kapade se bhi nahi pahchan payi ……….. hay mera shiva …….mujhe maf karde mere bete mai tujhe pahchan hi nahi payi aur tujhe marta hua vaha chod aayi……..

Sadhu--putri tumhara shiva jinda hai………

Sudha- apne aansu puchte hue…...jida hai phir vah kya tha kya vah kishi prakar ka maya jaal tha……..
Sadhu-- nahi na hi vah aasty hai aur na ye asaty hai ki tumhara beta jinda hai…….

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….

Sadhu-- tumhare bete ke mrtyu hote hi jo aadhi atma thi aab pura ho gayi hai…...kyoki yah balak tumhara bhi putra hai aur us Thakur ka bhi kyoki devil ke aadhe bhag ka janm Thakur patni ke garbh se bhi hauu taha…aur shiva ki aadhi aatma aab is balak me sama kar pura ho gayi hai…..

Use sab yad hai tum uski maa ho suresh uske pita hai ya you kahu ki use shiva jo janta hai vah sab yaad hai…….

Sudha-us Thakur ladke ki yade…….
Sadhu-beti uski yade kuch samay ke liye bandh gayi hai…...jo samay aane par hi use yaad aayegi ……….

Suresh-to baba yaad aate hi kya shiva hame bhul jayega…….

Sadhu-- maine tumhe yah bataya tha ki yah tumhara aur Thakur dono ke putr hai…….to jab iski shaktiya jagrit hogi tab ise sab yaad aa jayega…….aur sudha ye tumhe kabhi nahi chhodega…………

Sudh-lekin baba aapne yah nahi bataya ki teen mrityu yog kyo banaya gaya……..

Sadhu- beti halanki devil king ko dandit kiya gaya tha aur usi dand ko mrtyu yog banakar iske punr jivan me diya gaya hai ki agar yah pap hi karta hai to ise mrityu yog lagega anytha yah bach jayega…….

Sadhu-- yah yog jab yah 19 saal ka huaa hoga tab jab tak yah 20 saal ka nahi ho jata tab tak yah yog ispar kabhi bhi lag sakta hai…….agar yah bachh gya to iske 21 janmdin ke samy aur phir bach gaya to 25ve janmdin par lagega aur isase bach gya to iske upar se yah yog khatm ho jayega……....

Sudha- baba kya hame aap puri kahani vistar se batayenge

Sadhu kuchh der sochata hai phir bolta hai…..
putri yah khani hai treta yug ki ********************************************************************************yah kahani 3 se 4 update ki hai jo aane wale samy me ek aaise raj ka pardafas karega jisase is kahani ka villen juda huaa hai aur the devil king bana kaise tha kyo aur kaise janm huaa devil king ka sab pata chalega bas kuchh update intejar karne ke baad aur is
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Phir aaj se karib kai hajar purv us devil aur tantrik ki tapasya puri hui aur unka ant karne ke liye janm hua devil king ka aur phir ************************************************************************************************************

Bas yahi kahni hai devil ke janm, aur unke kary, aur dand ka.

Sudha- to kya us janm me bhi devil king ki aatama ka janm do rupo me hua th…..

Sadhu-- ha baat ye hai ki tantrik ne vardan me manga tha ki ******************tabhi uski mrityu hogi…...isliye…….

Saare log chupp ho jate hai is shanti ko bhang karne ke liye sadhu baba phir bolte hai…..

Suresh aur sudha ek saty mai tumhe batana chahunga ki devil ki sari patniyo ka bhi janam hua hai……….

Suresh- ve log kaun hai baba kya mai janta hu unhe ………

Sadhu-- beta devil ki 11 mukhya raniyo mese 4 raniyo ka janam tumhare hi ghar me huaa hai ve hai……..Mamata, Sweety, Minal, aur sonal………

Sudha aur suresh ye naam sunakr chook jate hai kya………..

Sadhu-- ha ye satya hai ki tumhare ghar ki sari ladkiya devil king ki patniya hai aur tumhari bhan ke garbh se bhi janm lene wali Kanika, Aarohi, Amrita, moni, bhi devil ki mukhya raniya hai…….

Suresh-ye to 8 hi hue hai baba aur 3 mukhya raniya aur inki Surbhi jo raniya hai vah sabhi kaun hai……..

Sadhu-- sab samya aayega to tumhe pata chal jayega beta itana adhir na ho………..

Sudha- baba leki ye sari to shiva ki bahane hai aur yah samaj………..

Sadhu--beta kya jab sristi bani to bata sakte ho Manu ki shadi jisase hui vah bhi brahma ji ki purti thi to dono bhai bhan hue ki nahi tab tum ye batao ki kya yah galat hai aur rahi baat is jamane ki baat to sab samay par chod do……..
Aur ek baat beta tumhare ghar ki sari devil ki raniyo ka batani ka mera yah karan tha ki tumhe apne sari ladakiyo ki mang me jab shiva ka jab 7va janam din aayega tab iske naam ka sindoor shiva ke hatho bharwana hoga hoga nahi to tumhari khandan ka samul vinash ho jayega…………..


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