ANUJ KUMAR
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Nice updateUpdate no. 17 (B)
(Kahani pichale update me aap sab ne padha ki shiva sweety ke kasham dene par Death lok (yamlok ab se ise death lok kahunga) ki kahani suna raha hai jisako sunakar sweety ne to kuchh nahi kaha lekin kuchh kahegi jarur usaki bato se lag raha hai abb usake aage vartmaan me)
idhar sonal ke kamare me sonal , minal aur kanika soi hui thi…………… to sone dete hai aur aaiye buaa ke pariwar me kaun kaun hai jaan lete hai :-
(Aarohi ise kisi se bhi matalab nahi hai nahi inke baat kisi se bhi jyada hoti jai apani bahan kanika aur ma (meri buaa) ko chhod kar aisa kyu to inka time aane dijiye sab pata chalega)
- menaka bua:-
- mukesh tivari fufa ji
- kanika tivari badi beti
- saurabh tiwari aur isase 5 min choti Arohi tiwari choti beti
( yaha bata du ki saurabh apani badi aur chhoti bahan par hai neeyat kharab kiye huye hai karan hai galat dosto ke sath aur bachapan ke vah ghatana jisase sabhi ghar ki ladakiya shiva ki ek tarah se patani ban gayi hai aur ye baat apane dosto ko bata diye hai jo inko pura bambu ke upar chadha diye hai jisase ye samjhane lage hai ki siva jab apani bahano ke sath sadi kar sakta hai to mai kyo nahi kyoki isaki ma ne koi virodh nahi kiya aur nahi naraj hui shiva aur usake gharwalo par)
( Moni sonal ke hi umr ke hai lekin puri badi ho gayi hai dimag se iska srey inake saheliyo ko jata hai…………...ye shiva se bahut pyar karne lagi hai jab se inhe pyar ke bare me pata chala hai)
- Salini bua
- siraj tivari bua ke patidev
- vikash tiwari bada beta (isake bare me kuchh nahi pata hai abhi)
- badi beti Amrita tiwari ( ye shiva ko jab vah god me tha tabhi mli thi to yah safe hai kyoki isaki sadi shiva ke sath nahi huyi hai lekin baba ki baat yaad hai na to yah bhi unhe ke sreniu me aayegi lekin abhi isake paas paraman patr nahi hai aur sabse badi baat yah hai ki yah shiva ko janati tak nahi hai ki inake mama ka ladka shiva hai baki yah apani chhoti bahan ke mukh se ye naam kai baar sote huye sun chuki hai kyoki dono behan ek sath soti hai lekin bed alag alag hai)
- vicky tiwari chota beta
- chhoti beti moni tiwari
vicky aur saurabh me bahut gahari dosati hai kyoki dono ek sath jo padhate hai aur ye bhi………………. samjh gaye honge ki mai kya kahana chahta hu………………….acha samjh gaye ho to comment karke batana ki mai kya kahana chahta hu
chaliye abb bakchodi band aur aate hai kahani par:-
sonal ke sote huye usake mukha par kai bhav aa rahe the sayad vah koi sapana dekh rahhi thi aaiye dekhate hai kya dekh rahi hai …………………………………………………………………………………..
sonal vahi scen dekh rahi thi jab shiva us jangalo me tha aur roshani use ghere huye thi lekin vah usaka chehara saf nahi dekh pa rahi thi use dhuyndhala dhunadhala dikh raha tha………
pir scean change hota hai is baar:-
is baar ek pari si dikhane wali ladaki ek bagiche me bhag rahi thi aur haste huye ek hi naam le rahi thi nahi rudra tum mujhe nahi pakad paoge mei tumhare haath nahi aane wali……...arre ye kya ye to hamari sonal hai lekin yah kaun hai jise yah rudra kah rahi hai isaka chehara saf nahi dikha raha hai…….pichale scean se thoda sa saaf dikh raha tha..,.........................
vah ladaka sonal ko pakad leta hai aur use apane bahupas me jakad leta hai aur kahata hai ki meri chulbuli si patni ji aab kaha bhag ke jaogi aab to chummi deni hi hogi…………………….
sonal haste huye kahati hai:- maine kab mana kiya tha rudra lekin yaha nahi yahan koi bhi aa sakta hai please man jao na…..
ridra nahi mai yahi lunga meri jalpari, meri natkhat bibi jasmine mai to yahi apani chummi lunga…………………...jaise jaise vah apana chehara sonal ki or badha raha tha vaise vaise usaka chehara saff hota ja raha tha jab pura chehra saaf ho jata hai to sonal ke chehare par ashchary wala bhaw aa jata hai vah hadbada jati hai aur uth jati hai ye kya tha bhai ki bibi mai khud ko maan rahi hu vah dhire se uth kar sweety ke paas jati hai……………
lekin ham yaha nahi sonal ke kamare me hi chalte hai kanika ke sapane me kya ho raha hai vah kya dekha rahi hai vah dekhate hai……………………………………………………………………………………………………..are ye kya ye to shiva ke baho me baithi huyi hai sala ye kya locha hai aakhir baat kya hai aaiye pata lagate hai;;;;;;;kewal mai januga ki baat kya hai app redars jab kanika aur sweety ke beech baat hogi tab janege tab tak sabr kijiye;;;;;;;;;;;;’;;;;
philhal ye janiye ki shiva ke god me baithe huye kanika aur shiiva me kya bate ho rahi hai:-
kanika; rudra………………..
(yaha mai shiva ko rudara likhunga)
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rudra - ha kanika ……….. vah kanika ke mathe ko chumate huye puchata hai……..
rudara kya ham aise hi sapane me hi mila karenge………………..
(o tere ki ise to ye bhi pata hai ki yah sapana dekha rahi hai ye to mere liye bhi ek raahasy banti ja rahi hai pahale to ye kaise janti hai aur ise sab kaise yad hai sab kuchh chalye sab patya lagaya jayega ab to ye mere liye bhi mystery banti ja rahi hai.)
rudra kanika hamara milan bahari duniya me jald hi hone wala hai to taiyar rahana kahi hamari bahari duniya ME riste ki suruaat sharirik mlan se hi na ho kyoki meri yadast keval mujhe apane bare me hi yaad aaya hai baki meri jitani patniya hai unka chehara saf nahi dikha hai mujhe aur tumhara jab hamara milan hoga tab tumhe bhi mera chrhara saf dikhega nahi to jab tum is sapane se bahar nikalogi to phir se mera chehara bhul jaogi aur fir tumhe hi sahayata karani ho gi meri sari pataniyo ko dhundhane me
ha samjh gayi mere rudara………..
(yaha bata du ki kanika ko abhi shiva ke chehare saff nahi dikhai de rahe the)
lekin rudra mai tumhe pahachanungi kase……...kanika ne puchh
tum meri or khichi chali aaogi aur mujhe tum rok nahi paogi kuchh bhi karane se samjhi tabhi use koi hillane lagata hai vah uthati hai to minal use utha rahi thi vah uthati hai aur fresh hokar bahar chali jati hai
chalte hai sonal aur sweety ke pass dekhate hai kya baate ho rahi hai:-
sweety:- kya baat hai meri gudiya itana pareshan kyo dikha rahi hai……….
sonal;- didu vo...vo baat ye hai ki….cup ho jati hai..
sweety- kya baat hai sonal……..( sonal ke chehare ko dekhate huye aur usake bhao ko pahchanate huye sweety gambhir hote huye puchhati hai.)
sonal - didu vo...ahhh….mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai didu ki ye baat aap se kaise kahu……………….jhujhanjhalate huye sonal kahati hai………………….
sweety- aisi kaun si baat hai ki tujhe itana sochana pad raha hai kahi kuchh huaa to nahi hai mujhe bata kya huaa hai………..
sonal apane man me - kaise kahu didi ki mujhe kya pareshani hai……..
sweety sonal ki hilate huye - are kaha kho gayi …………………
sonal hadbadate huye :- kahi nahi didu kahi nahi…………..ek gahari sas leti hai
sweety- to phir bata baat kya hai………
sonal- didi vo baat aisi hai ki……………...phir vah apane sapane ki sari baat sweety ko bata deti hai……………..jise sunane ke baad sweety chup hi rahati hai jaise kahi kho gayi ho………………..
sonal phir kahati hai- didi mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki mai kya karu …… aaj vachanak unka chehara mujhe dikh gaya jabaki aaj se pahale mai yah sapana mujhe 3-4 din se lagbhag har roj jab mai soti hu chahe din ho ya raat kabhi bhi dikhayi deta tha lekin mane kabhi jise mai rudra kahti hu usaka chehara kabhi bhi saaf nahi dekha tha………………………….
sweety kahati hai gudiya tu chal mai tujhase baad me baat karati hu…………..
sonal lekin didu……….baat iatani hi nahi hai…………………. phir vah jangal wakli hii baat batati hai jo shiva ke sath huaa tha lekin jab shiva ki chikh nikali thi vahi tak………..
sweety- ye sab tune tab dekha jab tu nind me nahi thi yani jagate huye……
sonal…..huuuuuu……….
sweety kuchh sochate huye chal thik hai ham baad me baat karte hai abhi tu dinnar ka timae ho gaya hai ham kal is topic par baat karenge thik hai………………
sonal- gale lagate huye thik hai meri pyari didu….ummmmmmmmmmah……….aur chali jati hai