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अभितक आपको यह कहानी कैसी लग रही है?

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    Votes: 40 87.0%
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    Votes: 3 6.5%
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    Votes: 2 4.3%
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ANUJ KUMAR

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update no. 07


KAhani aah tak

मैं घर आकर रात के खाना खाया और 1 बज के 55 मिनट पर का अलार्म लगाकर सो गया।

रात के 1:55 पर मेरी नींद खुल गई अलार्म से मैं उठा और चुपके से घर से निकल कर चल दिया हवेली के तरफ और पहुंचा तो वह कल वाले बाबा वही पर बैठे हुए है।

मैं उन्हें प्रणाम किया और उनके पास बैठ गया…..

कुछ देर बाद उन्होंने पूछ तो बताओ तुमने क्या फैसला किया है क्या तुम हवेली के राज जानना चाहते हो।

मैं_हा बाबा मैं पूरी तैयारी करके आया हु आप मुझे कहानी बताइए मैं तैयार हु…..

बाबा_ तो ठीक है सुनो…..

Aab aage :-

Pahli kahani :-

Baba_ to beta yeh kahani hai………

Kaushal puri ke raja chandrbhan jo ek param prtapi raja the unke davara kiya gaya nayay bahut dur dur tak faili hui thi raja ke ek putr the jinka naam malayketu tha.

……... Malayketu ek bahut hi sundar rajkumar the…….. ya yuan kahlo agar koi bhi stree unhe ek bar dekhale…….. to un par mohit hue bina na rahe ………….rajkumaar ki umr abhi 23 varsh ki thi inake vivah inaki ichha ke bina inke……... pita chandrbhan bhi nahi kara sakte kyoki

……. rajkumar ne raja air apane parivar walo se vachan jo le rakha hai…..ki unke anumati ke bina ianka vivah ki charch nahi hone chahiye…..

Isi tarah din bitata gya raja ki maut ho gayi aur malayketu ko raja banaya gya…..

Ek din raja banane ke bad malayketu jangal me sikar par jate hai……..vah sikar khelte khelate apane sathiyo se bahut dur nikal jate hai…….pata to unhe tab laga jab malayketu ko pyas lagti hai….tba vah dekhte hai ki ve ….. apni sathiyo se bahut dur nikal aaye hai …… ve vahi par utar jate hai aur ghode par thaili me rakhe pani ko pite hue vahi par ….. aaram karne lagte hai ….. aur sochate hai ki thoda aaram karke lauta jaya apane rajdhani….
Aaram hi kar rahe the ki …. Ek rishi kanya vahi ke raste se hokar matke me panoli leke ja rahi hai rajkumar us kanya ko dekh kar….us par aasakt ho jate hai….
. Aur us kanya ke pichhe pichhe chalne lagte hai aur pahuch jata hai risi ke ashram jaha ek risi vahi yagy vedi par baithe hue hai…...aur yagy me aahuti dal rahe hai ….. rajkumar wahi khada hokar yagy pura hone ki pratiksha karte hai……
Kuchh samay baad yagy puri ho jati hai aur vah rishi chalkar rajkumar ke paas aate hai aur kahte hai :-


Kaushalpur ke maharaj is sadhu ke kutiya me aaj padhare hai…….hamari kutiya to aaj to sachamuch dhany ho gayi……...kahiye kya seva karu maharal malayketu……

Malayketu - hath jod ke vinamr bhav se…...rusi ko prnam karte hai aur kahte hai……..isivar vah kanya koun hai jo ataynt rupvan ke sath sath kaam ko bhi mohit karne vali hai?

Risi- muskurakar…...maharaj vah meri putri hai…aur uaska naam charu hai…...kahiye kya kiya hai meri putri ne …

Malayketu- risivar mai shikar par nikala huaa tha. mai sikar khelne me itna busy ho gaya tha ki……..mujhe ehsaas hi nahi hua ki mai itana………. dur nikal aaya hu pata to mujhe tab chala jab mujhe pyas lagi aur jab mujhe dhyan ayaa to mai bahut dur nikal aaya tha ………phir mai pani pikar ek ped ke niche bvisram hi kar raha tha ki ……….mujhe aapki putri pani ka matka kamr par rakhi hui jaa rahi Dikhi……….. mai use dekhta hi mohit ho gaya hu aur mai aapak putri se vivah ki ichchha rakhta hu.

rishi---- rajan agar tum nirdosh jivo ko marna chhodane ka vachan dete ho to mai tumhe apani putri ka vivah tumse kare ka asvasan deta hu.

malayketu vachan de deta hai……... aur…….. charu se vahi aasram me vivah karke chal deta hai ……….. malay abhi kuch hi dur raste par aaya tha ki …………….ek bhayankar rakshas vaha prakt ho jata hai …………...aur charu ko apane muthi mee kaid kar leta hai .
malayketu us rakshas se charu ko chhod dene ko kahta hai……….. lekin rakshas charu ko chhodane ke liye ek sart rakhta hai ki rajan tum apani patni ko bachana chahate ho to tumhe apani patni ke sthan par ek brahman balak ko ek saptah ke andar mere liye lana ho lekin sart ye hai ki us ladke mata pita us ladke ka hath pakde hue ho aur tum uske sar apne isi talwar se katoge.
daR KE MARE RAJA us rakshas ki baat man leta hai aur apne rajy me aakar apane mahamantri ko yah bat batata hai to mahamantri kahta hai “ maharaj aap chinta n kare main aise balak ko dundh nikalunga vo bhi saat dino ke andar.
mahamantri ne ek saat varsh ke balak ki murti banvai ji pure sone ki thi aur use anek bahumulya hire motio se sajakar nagar nagar ghumavata hai aur sath me us rakshas davara ki gayi mang ko ghosana ke rup me batalvata hai.
vahi jab yah baat ek brahamn balak sunta hai to apane ma baap ke pass jata hai aur kahata ha “ aapake do putr hai jisame se agar ek kisi karan vas jinda na bhi rahe to aap par koi vishes prabhav nahi padega. atah maine yah faisala kiya hai ki mai raja ki baat manuga aur aap logo ko mere is faisale me sath dena hoga” us ladke ke ma baap mana krte hai to vah phir bolta hai ki “ ,mere sharir se raja ki bhalayi hogo aur aap sab ka sara garibi mit jayega mujhe jane dijiye” vah balak hath karne lagta hai uske hath ke aage ve sab man jate hai.aur use lekar raja ke mahal me jate hai aur raja malyketu unhe us rakshas ke pas lekar jate hai.
rakshas ke samane balak ke hath pair pakde hue uske mata pita khade the aur raja malayketu apana talavar lekar us balak ke sar ko uske dhad se alag kane vale hote hai ki balak usi samay jor se hasne lagata hai.

iatana kahani sunane ke baad budha vykti chup ho jata hai mai uska mukh hi dekhe ja raha tha .




kuchh samaya pashchat budhe baba bolate hai ki shiva ab tumhare jawab dene ka samay aa gaya hai ab tum jawab dene ke liye taiyar ho jao


to tumhara prashan yah hai ki “ vah ladaka jo ek brahman balak tha vah hasa kyo” jabki hota yah hai ki us samay koi bhi manushya aisa nahi hasta hai.
to tumhe isi saval ka jawab dena hoga ki vah balak hasa kyo. aur tumhara samay suru hota hai aab.

baba ye kaisa sawal hai vah ladaa to pagal ho gaya hai apani maut dekhakar isliye ha raha hai --- mai bola

baba bole --- shiva tum apana dhyan lagao aur is saval ka sahi sahi javab dena nahi to tum jante ho ki kya hoga tumhare sath. aur ha chaar baj gaya hai aaj saam ko tumhe apane gav jaan hai to tumhare pasaa keval abb se keval 10 ghante ka samay rah gya hai to apane dimag lagao aur is kahani ke prashno ke uttar do aur mai phir se bata deta hu ki tumne kahaniyo ke mayajal me pravesh kar chuke ho aab tum chah kar bhi isase bacha kar nahi bhag sake ho agar iske samay jo nirdharit hai us samay me nahi javabde paye yaa bhag gaye to tumhe iska parinaam bhugatana hoga.

mai-- ji mai samjh gya hu.

baba - aur ha is saval ke javab dene ke badd tumhe saat dino ke andar dusari kahani ka javab dena hoga nahi to parinam wahi hoga jo javab galat ya bhagane par ho

chalta hu phir milate hai agli kahani ke sath ….
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Update no. 08


Kahani ab tak---

baba bole --- shiva tum apana dhyan lagao aur is saval ka sahi sahi javab dena nahi to tum jante ho ki kya hoga tumhare sath. aur ha chaar baj gaya hai aaj saam ko tumhe apane gav jaan hai to tumhare pasaa keval abb se keval 10 ghante ka samay rah gya hai to apane dimag lagao aur is kahani ke prashno ke uttar do aur mai phir se bata deta hu ki tumne kahaniyo ke mayajal me pravesh kar chuke ho aab tum chah kar bhi isase bacha kar nahi bhag sake ho agar iske samay jo nirdharit hai us samay me nahi javabde paye yaa bhag gaye to tumhe iska parinaam bhugatana hoga.

mai-- ji mai samjh gya hu.

baba - aur ha is saval ke javab dene ke badd tumhe saat dino ke andar dusari kahani ka javab dena hoga nahi to parinam wahi hoga jo javab galat ya bhagane par ho

chalta hu phir milate hai agli kahani ke sath ….

Aab aage:-



Mai baba ke chale jane ke baad bhi vaha par bahut der tak baitha raha ki ye to mere sar ke upar se ja raha hai yah prasanna iska jawab kya hoga mai kisi se kuchh bhi nahi puchh sakthu........

Phir ghadi dekha to 5 baj gya tha mai vaha se utha aur ghar jakar chhat par chala gya aur utter sochane laga


Vahi dusari oor----

Vah baba kuchh dur jakar gayab ho jate hai.

Usi jangal me usi mandir me jaha shiva us pandit ji se mila tha vaha par pandit ji baithe the tabhi vaha ek aur sakhs pragt hota hai....jo vastav me ye vahi baba hai jo shiva ko kahani suna rahe hai.......lekin ye yaha kaya kar rahe hai.......tabhi vah baba un pandit ji ko prnam karte hai. ...... Bolte hai.........parnam ********* apne mujhe kis liye yad kiya hai o bhi is samay......
( Dosto jo pahale wale sadhu the vo god the jo bhesh badal kar aaye the to aab se mai unhe god hi likhunga)

God---.......mai isliye aapko yaad kiya ki abb samay aa gaya hai ki the devil ki shaktiya jagrit hone ka aap jaise jaise kahani sunayenge aur vah us kahani ko sunkar us kahani ke prashno ka uttar dega taise taise uski shaktiya uske andar jagrit hoti jayegi.....

martand munni---god ye to badi vikat samsya khadi ho jayegi agar uski sahkitya jagrit ho gayi to use sambhalne ke liye unke sanginiye ko rahana ati avashyak hai kyoki uski pahle shakti jo jagrit hone vali hai un shaktiyo me kam shakti sabse prbal hoge aur agar ise nahi roka jayega to yah phir se vahi galti karega jo isne purv me kiyA tha yah phir se jabajsti kisi se baat prem karega jo iske andar devil ke power ko atyadhik badhadega..........jiska matlab ye hoga ki vah ek purn devil banane lgega to ......... Bataiye ki ab aage kya kia jaye........

God----risivar ek hi upay hai rajkumari vidhi....vahi devil ko kabu me kar sakti hai...

martand munni---prantu bagavan vo to inse atyadhik ….. Phir lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai …….rani vidhi to……...nafrat karti hai is janam me to ve kyo rokegi.......

God----martand munni aap sab kuchh jante huye bhi aisi bate kar rahe hai......vah nafrat karti......prantu jab unhe ye pta chalega ki unke sath shiva ne vah sab kyo kiya tha aur jab unhe pichhle janam ki sari bate yaad aayegi to vah jarur sab samajh jayegi kyon ki unhe sab yad aate hi uski sari shaktiya jagrit ho jayengi.aur unka prem bhi jo abhi tak apane andar chhu pai hui hai........

martand munni-----god aap to sarv gyta hai aap se kya chhupa hua hai.......to bataiye kya kiya jaye.........

God-----devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unke saty se avgat karaya jaye..vahi is devil ko roke payegi…....

martand munni--- aur baki raniyo ka kya god .....unhe kab sari bato ka pata chalegi.......

God----- martand munni aap to jante hai ki kabhi bhi bina uchit samay aaye koi kary nahi hota usi trah jab uchit samay aayega to unhe bhi apani saree bate yad aa jayegi......pahle aap jaiye aur rani vidhi ko unke saty aur unke karm ko yadd dilaiye...nahi to share brahmand me hahakar macha dega the devil.......Agar samay raht use roka nahi jayega tab…..

Phir rishton martand baha se gayab ho jate hai aur god mandir ke murti me sama jate hai.


Vahi dusari oor-----

shiva us saval ke uttar ke bare me soch raha tha par use kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki is saval ka uttar kya hoga........

Tabhi uski ma sudha upar aati hai....

Sudha---- beta tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.....itani dhup me.......chal niche

Sudha---- beta tu yaha kya kar rahi hai.....itani dhup me....... cha niche chal tere papa ka phone aaya tha oh bol rahe the ki tujhase koi kaam hai.........

mai-- apni soch se bahar nikale hue bola aur Sare soch vichar ko darkinare karte huye mai niche aagye......
papa phone par hi the ... mai phone lete hue......heloo papa kya baat hai.......aapne mujhe yad kiya
papa-- ha beta shiva mujhe tuhase ye batana tha ki hame aaj hi char baje dilii ke liye nkana hoga ..... vaha bahut arjent ho gaya hai abhi abhi tere bade papa ke phone aaya tha....
mai--lekin papa hame kal nikalna tha aur achanak aisa kaun aisa kaam aa gaya hai ki kal tak sab bigad jayega.....
papa-- bbeta ye to hame vaha ja kar hi pata chale ga.....ab jaldi se sare saman pack karo aur apani maa se bhi bol do ki vah bhi mera aur apna saaman pack kar le hame aaj hi vaha se nikalna ho ga 4 baje se.......
mai ok papa bola aur papa ne phone kaat diya.

Phir mai sab ma ko bataya to vah jaldi se room me chali gyi aur Mamta didi ko bhi bol diya…….

Mai bhi apane room me aa gaya aur apani paking karte huye saval ka jawab sochata raha tabhi mere dimag me ek bijali si kaudhi …….ki yahi uttar hona chahiye balki yahi uttar hoga…….

Mai_o teri…..bahnchod is saval ka uttar to mere hisab se uttar yahi hona chahiye……..ha...ha...yahi hoga hi….

Phir mai ghadi ki oor dekhata hu…..

Mai_sala saman paking karte hue hi itana samy ho gya…..chalo koi na abhi bhi 2 ghante ka time hai tab tak thoda aaram kar lete hu……

Mai_vahi bisatar par pasar gaya…..aur sochane laga…….

Ki Mujhe aaj 12 saal ho gaya hai apane sare parivar walo ko dekhe hue (mamta didi kabhi kabhi saal me yaha aati thi.inke aalava ma papa saath the)......keri pyari minal to ek dam badi ho gayi hoge kya vah mujhe pahchanegi…..ha….ha…..kyo nahi pahchanegi akhir vh to mujhase jayda mujhko 0yar karti hai bas thoda sa naraj ho lgi mana lunga use…..aur didi kaya mujhe abhi tak maf kar payi hongi……...sayad…..nahi……..agar mujhe maaf kar diya hota to vh mujhse jarur milne aati….kyoki vah mujhase itana pyar jobkarti thi……..

Yahi sab sochate hua kab 1:50 ho gaya mujhe pata hi nahi chala mai jaldi se utha aur gresh hokar……Niche aaya.



Ma…..kaha ja raha hai...beta ….. abhi hame 2 ghante me nikalna hai…..do ghante me train hai beta aur tu bahar ghumane ja raha hai….

Mai_ ma mai abhi ek ghante me ghar aa jaunga meri paking ho gayi hai….mai toda apne dosto se mil lu….aur unhe bata du……..

Ma_thik hai par jaldi aana ….. tere papa ke aate hi hame yaha se nikalna hoga….

Mai_ samjh gya ma …… mai jaldi hi laut aaunga……

Mai jadi se us haveli ke pass pahuch gya…..aur uske aas pass najar daudai aur raste par bhi najar maar li koi nahi tha…...to mai jaldi se us haveli ke pass gya aur dajvaje ke pass jakar bola……..

Mai_suno ye haveli tumhare pahli kahani ke saval ka javab hoga ki -----
" Vah ladka isliye hasa ki jab koi ladaka dar jata hai to Apane maa baap ko pukarta hai apni raksha ke liye aur mata pita nahi ho to raja madad karte hai…...…..par yaha to koi bhi us balak ke saath nahi tha. To vah kisko madad ke liye pukare...jabki uske mata pita khud apane bete ke hath pair pakde huye hai bali ke liye halanki unhone ladke ke hath ke karan kar rahe the parantu kaun maa baap aisa jidd pura karta hai ….aur raja khada hai apne haath me nagi talvar liye…….aur to aur vah apne devato kya yaad kare jab uske samne danv hi khada ho uske bali ke baad khane ke liye…….vah ladaka sochta hai ki vah propakar kar raha hai.lekin nahi nahi yaha to sab lalach me aagye hai uske ma baap aur apane praja se bachhon ki tarah pyar karne wala raja bhi ek stree ke pyar me andha huaa pada hai……..isi liye vah khushi tha ki is lalachi duniya se ja raha hai aur ashcharya se ki is duniya me apane sawarth sidhi ke liye koi bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hai……………. Yahi karan tha ki vah brahman balak hasa ..

Itana kahkar mai chup ho jata hu haveli aisi lagne lagti hai ki jaise hil rahi ho mai dar se pichhe hat gya…..tabhi haveli se ek aavaj aayi……
He shiva tumne is kahani ke sawalo ka javab. Bilakul sahi diya isliye tumhe puraskar savrup mai apna darvaja tumhare liye kholara hu………

Tabhi haveli ke andar se. Charrrrrrr.rrrrr ki aavaja aayi jaise koi bahut purana darvaja khola jata hiai takataki lagaye haveli ke darvaje ko hi dekha raha tha par darvaja khulane ki aavaj to aayi lekin darvaja khula hi nahi……..

Phir haveli se aawaz aati hai___jayada socho mat shiva maine davavaja khola hai parantu bahar vala nahi mere andar saat darwaze hai…….to mane andar wala darwaja khula hai….jaidlse jaise tumm savlo ke javab doge to tumhare liye vase vaise darwaza khulta jayega…….ab tum jaoo aur agli kahani ka jawab do………


Mai ghar jane ke liye mudahi tha ki phir ss aavaj aai…..
Sabass.mere bache tune pahli kahani ka uttar dekar pahli jeet hasi ki hai aur tumhe darvaja khulane ke baad tumhe ek bahut bada inaam bhi mila hai……
Maine piche mud kar dekha to baba khade the….maine unhe pranam kiya aur puchh kaisa inam baba…….keval darwaja khula ke alava …

Baba_beta tumhe ye baat abhi nahi pata chalegi tum jaao or dilli se laut aao tab tumhe dusari kahani ka javab dena hoga aur dhyan rahe tumhare pas keval saat din ka samy hai……..saat din ke andar tum yaha aakar dusari kahani ke uttar nahi diye to saja bhi tumhe milegi….aur tum jante ho ki saja kya hai…….

Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi……
Yah halchal kya hai janne ke liye bane rahe kahani ke sath………….
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update no. 09
Kahani aab tak:-
Mai_ ha baba mai janta hu ki mera purus shakti aur mera parivaar mujhase chhin jayega……

Baba_ ab tum jaoo aur jo chij tumhe mili hai vh buri aur achhi dodno hai abb tumhe pata tab chalega jab samay aayega tab aur samay jald hi aane wala hai…….

Mai_ baba ko pranam karkr apne ghar ko chhal diya abhi chala hi tha ki maine socha ki apane dosto se jakar mil lu lekin mobile nikal kar dekha to jaane ka time ho gya tha to maine unse baad me milne ka soch kar ghar ki or chal chall diya…….

Aur baba baha se gayab gaye….

Udhar mai ghar ki orr gya idhar haveli me halchal suru ho gayi………..


Aab aage:-

jab mai haveli se ghar aaya to sare log mera hi intejar kar rahe the mujhe dekhate hi mamata didi ne bola……
dekho to ham yaha intejar kar rahe hai aur ye mahashay hai ki inhe to bas apne se matlab hai……..
abhi mamata didi kuchh aur boili usae pahle ma ne bat ko sambhalate he boli…
aa gaya beta chal jaldi se 5 min. me taiyar ho ja 4.30 baje ki train hai aur hame station jane me bhi aadha ghanta lag hi jayega aur abhi 3.50 ho gaya hai to jaldi se ja aur apana saman aur taiyar hokar niche aa……

mai mamta didi ko najarandaj kiya aur jaldi se upar jakar taiyar hokar niche aaya aur ham sab chal diye……………


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  1. meena srivastav-
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  3. anjali tiwari-
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  5. sandy ( asali naaam:- vikash dube)-
  6. mohit singhaniya-
  7. anjali singhaniya-
  8. ekata kapoor -
  9. vikas kanaujia-

ye sabhi canten me baithe hue the ek sath ( ladakiya ek tarf aur sare ladke ek traf matalab table chaukor tha)

abb ate hai nke dosto ke bare me jo is kahani me aham bhumika nibhayenge-

anjali tivari- bahut hi sundar hai ab inka figar kya batau. ye ek modern khyalat ke ladki hai inhe didi ke ladako me se jo vikash kanaujiya hai inhe bahut pasand bhi karta hai lekin ye maharani use bhav hi nahi deti hai-

  • rajkishor tivari- anjali ke papa
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ham log satation jane ke liye ghar se nikal rahe the……

Ma- papa se……..suresh kya time ho raha hai abhi….

papa- kalai ghadi me dekhate hue sudha abhi 4:05 ho gya hai…….phir teji se….oh no….

mai- kya huaa papa aap aise aaschry sa muh kyo bana rahe hai kya ho gya….

papa- beta hame yahi 4:05 ho gya hai lekin train 4:30 par station par aa jayegi aur hame yaha se janeme time lagega agar ham haveli vale raste se jayenge toh kam se kam 35 minat ka time lagega hi…… aur jangal se jayenge to 20 minat me pahuch jayenge jo ki philahal sambhav nahi hai jangal ke raste se jana.aur hame aaj kisi trah se yah train pakadani hogi.

mai- to papa abhi to suryast hone me abhi to lagbhag 2 ghante lagega to ham jangal ke raste se nikal jayenge.

ma- nahi shiva tum us jangal ke bare me sab kuchh nahi jante ho phir bhi aisi bate kar rahe ho.

mamta didi- lekin chachi abhi to suryst hone me time hai aur jangal me to keval raat me hi jane me khatra hai.

maa- nahi mamata ham aisa nahi kar sakte ek to saam ka vakt hai aur us jangal me din me bhi andhera jaisa mahaul rahata hai aur uspar se maine apane baba se suna hai us jangal se hote hue ek gupt rasta sundarvan jo ki pa. Bangal me hai vaha par ek tantrik kaid hai…jisake karan hamare gav ke jangal shapit ho gaya hai…….aur saam ke 4 baj rahe hai..to lagbhag raat hone hi wala hai …...to jana thik nahi hoga….

papa- sudha mamta sahi kah rahi hai aabhi to saam ka samy hai rat to nhai hui hai to aabhi jangal ke raste se jana safe rahega………..

lekin maa kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi thi lekin sab ko ek hi baat bar bar kahne se maa ne gusse me akar ha kah diya aur ham chal diye jangal ke raste se station……...
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idhar shiva ke jane ke baad haveli me halchal paida ho gayi thi aisa lg raha tha ki bukamp aa gaya hai lekin yeh sab haveli me ho raha tha bahar sab kuchh normal tha…………

us haveli ke bicho bich matalab angan ki jamin me darar padane laga tha aur usame se khun aise nikal raha tha jaise pahadon par se nadiya.



vah khoon do bhago me bat gaya aur ek bhag safed aur dusara bhag kalle dhue me badal gaya aur upar ki or jane laga aur us darrar me se ek aur jyoti bahar nikali jo ek bahut hi kalli thi. phir vah darar band ho gya jaise vaha kuch huaa hi nahi ho

dono dhua upar ki or janne lagte hai aur thik haveli ke uapar jakar dono dhuaa aapas me jud jate hai jaise koi gend ho aur uske aadha bhag kala aur adha bhag safed rang ka tha………… dhuaa ke gola ek disha me udta chala jata hai…...aur vah kali jyoti kuch dur us dhue ke sath aage jakar ek dusari disa me chali jati hai….

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mumbai me -

switi didi aur unke saare friends canteen me baithe nasta kar rahe the ki tabhi us canteen me ek ladka aur usaki paltan andar aati hai…..jo katai achhi paltan nahi thi…….

us gang ke lidar hath me sigaret liye hue switi and friends ke pass ata hai usake aate hi vikarant malhotra jo ki ek phattu kism ka banda tha aur vh didi ke samane wale chair par baitha huaa tha…….vha khada hokar us ladke ko baithane ka jagah deta hai../…..

us gang ke lidar ka naam dharmesh bhatt tha jo ek nihayati badmas ladka tha…par switi ke samane kuchh nahi karta hai…..
Lekin aaj kuchh soch kar aaya tha…..dekha te hai aaj kya karta hai…....


dharmesh---- jakar vikrant davara diye gaye sit par baitha howe bolta hai…….aur kya haal hai meri jaan switi ka……..aap to yaar din pratidin aur bhi hot hoti jaa rahi hai…………..

switi didi kuchh nahi bol rahi thi vah baat ko badhana nahi chahti thi to usane kuchh nahi bola bas gusse wala look deti hai………

dharmesh ---- aise look na de zalim …...kya nazron se ghayal kar ke marne ka irada hai kya……

did----dekho dharmesh……..

Dharmesh---- dikhao meri jaan kya dikhana chahti ho…mai sab dekhane ko taiyar hu bas tum dikhao…..

Didi----uski bato ko ignore karte hue……. maine bar bar mana kiya hai ki mujhe paresan na karo lekin tumm manane ko taiyar hi nahi ho aakhir tum chahte kya ho……….

(Didi ke saare dosto ko dharmesh ke aage lakha maar jaata tha isliye ve kuchh nahi bole)

dharmesh ----- tumhe keval tumko mai chahta hu switi…….mai chata hu ki tumm meri ho jao………..

aabhi dharmesh ne itan hi kaha tha ki didi usage bolati hai ki………..

switi-- dharmesh tum bhi jante ho ki ye passibal nahi hai……..

dhaRMESH tapak se bolta hai-- kya possible nahi hai switi dekho mai kiitana handsome hu. paisa wala hu. Aur to aur jo tum kahogi mai vo sab karne ko taiyar hu….kaho to mai saab kuchh chhodne ke liye taiyar hu. Ya phir tum..kaho to tumhari family se bhi tumko mang lunga……..kya kami hai mujhme…..

didi---- mannar nam ki chj nahi hai tumhare paas mere paas aane aur keh dene se yah nahi ho jata ki tumm achchhe ho ……

dharmesh ko gussa aata hai lekin vah shanti se bolta hai---tum kitana pagal ladki ho switi tum kis jamane me jee rahi ho kya tumhe nahi pata hai ki aaj kal paisa hi sab kuch hai na ki tumhara mannar………...mai chahu to mere pass ladkiyo ki kami nahi hai lekin nahi mujhe keval tum chahiye…. aur… tum ye bhi janti ho ki mai tumhe kitana pyar karta hu ki mai tumhe pane ke liye kuchchh bhi karne ko taiayr hu agar tum kahogi to mai sab chhod dunga ye tum ek baar to keh ke dekho………

Didi----dekho tum mai ye nahi kahti ki tum ache insan ho ya bure lekin mai tumhe to kya yaha kisi se bhi pyar nahi karti hu………

Yah kahakar didi apane dosto ke sath baha se uth jati hai aur chal deti hai apne dosto ke saath kyoki class ki bell baj gayi thi……..

.dharmesh----- gusse me tebal ko hath marte hue…...salli rand jayada ghamand hai na…….to aab mujhe lagta hai tujhe pane ke liye mujhe ungali tedhi karni padegi…….bahut badal liya apane aap ko abb nahi…….tujhe aab mere niche aana hi hoga…..uske liye mujhe chahe jo karna pade karunga ……..kyoki tu sirf meri hai….sirf meri…..

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Location:- delahi ka ek jangal jo ek bhayanak mayavi jangal tha ….

delhi ke ek bhayanak jangal me ek budhi aurat raat ke andhere me haath me torch liye hue chali ja rahi hai ………..

chaaro or andhera aur sirf dhundh hi dhundh dikh rahi thi…..bujurg aurat apane aap ko ek laal shal se dhaki hui thi………..

jangal me me usake siva koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha tha……….na jane vah kaha vah akeli ja rahi thi…… vah aurat apane madhyam gati se us ghane jangalo me badhati ja rahi thi…...usaki aakho ke nichhe jhurriya aagyi thi jisase yah pata chal raha tha ki vah aurat sach me ek budhi aurat thi isaki umr lagbhag 70-75 saal to hoga hi…………

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..
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Kahani aab tak:-

tabhi vah aage chalte chalte use kuchh log dikhayi dete hai ve log bhi apane hatho me torch pakade hue the……

sare log ek ghera banakar vaha par baithe hue the…….aur…..unake beech me aag lagi hui thi………

vaha upasthit saree log muskurate hue us aurat ki oor dekhane lage……… vah budhi aurat bhi haste hue un sabhi logo dekha rahi th……….

vah bujurg aurat un logo ke pass aati hai aur apani torch ko jamin par rakh kar baithate hoe kahti hai…………..

Abb aage:-

Location - p. Bangal sunadarvan


Haveli se nikali vah kalli jyoti udati hui chali ja rahi thi…….jyoti ki disha bangal rajy ke side tha aur jyoti tivr gati se us taraf badhe ja rahi thi…..

Vah kali jyoti sundar van me pahuch jati hai aur sundar van me ek jagah par jakar dharti ke andar sammahit ho jati hai aur van me bhukamp sa aa jata hai……….aur jis jagah par vah jyoti akar takari thi vaha ki mitti dekhate hi dekhate sukha jati hai aur vaha par darar fat jata hai…………

Us darar me se sass lene ki aawaj aane lagti hai….jaise koi apni sass rokne ke baad lambi lambi sase leta hai i..

aakash me kalee badal chhane lagte hai tej havaye bijaliya kadakne lagti hai…… phir achanak sab kuchh pahle ke jaisi ho jaati haii……..

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jab ham log (didi, ma, papa aur mai) jangal ke raste se hote huye satation ki or ja rahe the ki tabhi hamare aage ek pagal sa dikhane wala sadhu type aadami hamare gadi ke aage rasta roke hue khada tha…….. driver ne bahut horn diya lekin jaise use kuchh sunai hi nahi de raha tha vah hat hi nahi raha tha../.. tabhi papa gadi se bahar nikal kar use hatane keliye jaate hai to vah kahta hai……….

pagal aadami--- tu marne wala hai….ha..ha...tu aaj marega vah tujhe aur tere bete ko marne ke liye marak totaka (dosto tona aur jaadu ke bare me jayada kuchh pata nahi hai) kar rahi hai tujhe dhokhe se bulaa rahi hai tu na ja usake pass…..nahi to tu bachhe ga nahi …….

papa yah sunakr thoda darr gaye the lekin phir bole- kya bake jaa rahe ho hato rashate se hame jaane me deri ho rahi hai……

pagal adami- tu chinta na kar aaj usaki pahli shakti jagrit ho gayi hai…...par aabhi vah kamjor hai ……..


papa ke to kuchh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha unhe kya samh to hame bhi nahi aaraha tha….

vah pagal itana bolkar raste se hat gya aur jangal ki or chala gya gay papa gadi ke andar aaye to maa ne puchha- kya bol raha tha suresh vah pagal aadami……..

papa- are kuchh nahi vah bol raha tha ki ….papa ne sab bata diya ……. ye kya bol gya hame to kuchh samajh hi nahi aaya ki usane kya bola…….

Phir ham log chal diye……

Jangal me aadhe raste par hi the ki driver ne achanak hi brek maar diya ham sabhi aage ki or jhuk gaye………….

Mai are kya huaa drivar uncle ye achanak aapane brek kyo maar diye…….

Driver- sahab aage to rasta hi nahi hai phir ham aage kaise jayenge…..

Papa-kya matlab hai tumhara ki aage rasta nahi hai………

Driver-- mai shi kah raha hu dekhiye aage kahi se bhi rasta nahi hai…………

Sab log gadi se bahar nikale to sach me rasta nahi taha aage jane ke liye……..

Mamata didi---lekin jab mai gav aai thi to ham log isi raste se aaye the phir ye achanak rasta kaha gaya……..

Mammi- suresh maine bola tha tumhe ki ham jangal ke raste se nahi jayenge……. Lekin tum sab meri baat sune hi nahi…...ab aise bhi late hoga aur vaise bhi late hota lekin vah rasta safe tha lekin nahi hame aaj hi pahchana hai………

Papa-sudha ab mujhe kya pata tha ki yaha se achanak rasta hi gayab ho jayega………

Abhi sabhi baat hi kar rahe the ki baha ek tej prakash fail gya aur sabhi ke ankhe band ho gayi……….

Vah tej parkash us dhuye se aaraha tha kyoki jo safed wala bhag tha vah bahut tej chamak raha tha…………..vah do rangiy dhuaa aakar shiva ke andar sama gayi jisase shiva ko bahut tej dard hone laga vah chilla uth……

M………….aaaaaaaaaa

Ma ne jab meri aawaj suni to jhat se apani aakhe kol kar mujhe dekha ne lagi………
Lekin baha mai nahi tha………

Shiva...shiva kaha gaya.. Ma ne mujhe dhudhate hue puchh

Papa aur mamata didi charo traf tarf mujhe dekha ne lage lekin mai baha nahi tha…..aur ye mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mai kaha gya hu baha se kyoki jab mujhe tej dadr utha to mai vahi chillate hue behosh ho gaya…….

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location- delhi ka jangal

aurat ( kutil muskan dete hue)- kya puja ke liye bali ka intejaam ho gaya hai…….
un me se ek sakhas kahata hai……...ji ……..taiyar hai…

vah upasthit sare log us aurat ko ek jhopadi me leke jaate hai…………..jhopdi ke andar charo or tantra vidya ki chije aur usse sambandhit vastu banayi gayi aur rakhi gayi thi……….niche ek putala ke charo or chaar nimbu rakhe gaye the jin par lal sindur laga hua tha………………….

jhopdi ke andar ka nazara dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha ki yaha par kisi prakarya ke jaadu tona ya badi totake ka anjam diya jaane wala hai…………..

tabhi vah aurat apane hath me ek mans katane wala chaku uatha leti hai…...aur…...muskurate hue bali ke paas jaati hai……...phir vah aurat……...usi chaku se us bali ke sharir par “shiva tivari” likh deti hai…………

vah bali chaku ke nook apane dil par dekhate hi chhatpatane lagta hai……….vaha upasthit log aakar us bali ke haath pair pakad lete hai…………..

vah aurat apane muh se kuchh mantr padhati hai aur jor se chillate hue us bali ke gardan jor se dabane lagti hai…………..baki ke sharir se sara khun nikalkar pass rakhe us gudiya ke charo or chipakane lagata hai…...aur us gudiya se ek ataynt kala dhuaa nikalne lagata hai aut vah dhuaa us disha ki or ud jaata hai jis disha me shiva tha aur jakar shiva se usi vakt takarata hai jis vakt us haveli se nikala dhuaa ka gola shiva me pravesh karne wala hota hai…………….
aur shiva ko ek tej jhataka lagata hai jisase usaki chikh nikal jati hai---------

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location:- delhi me ek unknown haveli ke ek kamre me

delhi ke ek aalishan haveli ke ek kamre me ek ladki jiski umr lagbhag 17-18 saal thi…………..
ladki ke hath me ek piyano tha jispar vah ek bahut hi khubsurat si dhun baja rahi thi………..
usaki ungaliya lagatar sangit ke madur dhun chhed rahe the……..uaske chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jo uaske sunadrta me chhar chaand laga rahi thi………..
jis room me vah thi vah room charo taraf se classic interior se saja hua tha……..

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koibhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vahi neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)


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Kahani ab tak:-

kamera ke samne ek badi si kanchh ke khidaki lagi hui thi, jisse koi bhi us kamre se bahari sunadrta ko dekhakar mantr mugdh ho jata………….us ladki ke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi jaise uaski koi mangi hui wish puri hone wali ho…………….lekin tabhi uske hriday me atyadhik dard hone laga aur vah jor se chikh uthi n…...hi rudraravi…… aur vah vah neeche dhadam se gir ke behosh ho gai…………
(jab vah ladki ke sine me dard utha usi samay shiva ka takkar us aurat ke bheje hue kaali dhuaa aur us haveli ke dhue se huaa tha)

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Location:- himachal pradesh ke jilla shimala ke ratanganj gav ke ek purani kothi keshari bhavan me jo aaj bhi bade -2 mahlo ko apne aage maat deta hai:-

Ek kamre me ek mahila sayad bahut dino se koma me thi jor se chikhate hue uthati hai…..

Ru……Ru….draravi………………..

Phir achanak behosh ho jati hai……….

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Location:- jaha mai (shiva) tha

jab vah dhue ka gola mujhase takraya to mujhe ek tej jhataka laga aur mai ma……….chilate hue dur ja gira jaha mai ek ped se takra gya aur jab mai khada hone ki koshis ki to khada ho kar kuchh hi dur gya tha ki mai dhadam se jameen par gir gya aur meri aakhe dhire dhire band hoti chali gayi…...

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Location:-jaha ma baba aur mamta didi the:-

jangal me ma papa mamata didi mujhe dundhane lage………… ma to mujhe naa pakar rone lagi aur saara dos papa par dalne lagi ki unke hi kahne par jangal ke raste se aaye the….

ma rote hue:- suresh mai kuchh nahi janti kahi se bhi mera beta lakar dijiye…………………

mamata didi- shant ho jaiye chachi use kuchh nahi hoga shayad vah jo roshani faili thi to use me4bhatkakar jangal me kahi chala gaya hoga………..

halanki mamata didi bhi ghabra rahi thi vah man hi man bhagwan se prarthana kar rahi thi ki mai jaha bhi rahu surakshit raahu jabki mamata didi ne mujh se kabhi pyar se baat nahi ki kyoki bachapan me mujhase ek galati anjane me ho gayi tab se lekin vah mujhse sabse adhik pyar karti thi…………….

aaj unka bhi dill bahut joro se dhadak raha tha ki kahin mujhe kuchh na ho jaye…….

yaha par sabb log pareshan the vahi jangal me usi mandir me god aur martand rishi aapas me baate kar rahe the………

martand rishi:- god ye to anarth ho gaya………


God- ha rishi var jo hona nahi chahiye vahi ho gaya mujhe iska pata pehle se hi pata tha lekin mai prakritik ke karyo me hastakshep nahi karunga aur na hi aap karne ko cheshtha kare………………

hoga vahi jo ********chahenge………

rishi - parantu god shiva ki atma to subah hote hi uski sharir chod degi aur vah shaitani aatma uske sharir par kabja kar kar legi jo atadhik vinashkari sidh ho sakta hai ………


God- chintit na hoiye rishivar jo hota hai vah lok kalyan ke liye hi hota hai ………. burai chahe jitna bhi apna bistar kar le par ant me jeet sachchai ki hi hoti hai aab aap jaiye aur shiva ke parivar walo ko sambhaliye aur ha jitani jaldi ho sake aap devil ki badi rani vidhi ko unka karm ka samran dilaiye……
dusari baat yah hai ki aab se ham aur aap is jangal me nahi milenge……..

rishi - god mujhe aapaki margdarshan ki ati avsyakta padegi …..


God - aapke mardarshan ke liye aapke guru प्रचंडक rishi ji hai jo aap ko aage ki raah dikhayenge……...philhal प्रचंडक rishi himalaya par kathor tapasya kar rahe hai uchit samay aane par vah aap se milne swayam aayenge……….l.

jo aagya bhagwan………

kalyan ho……….

aur god antardhyan ho gaye.

Martand rishi chal diye jidhar meri ma baba the………

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Location :- jha mai tha:-
Time:- savera abhi abhi apana pankh faila rahi thi………

jab meri aakh khuli to subahj ho gayi thi……..mere akho ke samane neela aasaman tha, muhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kuchh ghanto se yaha behosh pada hua tha……

jab mai utha to dekha mere samane nadi bas rahi thi aur mere charo or keval hare bhare ped paudhe hi dikhay de rahe the……...tabhi mujhe ki mai to ma baba aur did ke sath delhi ja raha tha …….aur jangal wala raste ke aadhe me se hi gayab ho gaya tha aur kuchh der baad vah tej roshni……….uske aage mujhe kuchh yaad nahi aaraha tha……….tabhi meri najar niche ki or gayi mai ek dam se uchhal pada kyoki jaha mai pahle behosh pada tha vaha mere jaise hi ek aadami leta huaa hai ………..tab mujhe reyakais huaa ki mera mritu ho chuki hai mai mar chuka hu…………...mai apana deh tyag chuka hu mere sharir se meri aatma bahar nikal chuki hai………..mera to diumag hi ghum gya ki ye sab kya huaa……..kaise huaa...mere man me savalo ka jvala uathane laga ………...mai jab jamin par lete hue sharir ke pass jakar use chhune ki koshis ki to mai chhu hi nmahi pa raha tha..mera haath sharir ke aar paar ho ja raha tha…….
mai kisi bhi vastu ko touch hi nahi kar pa raha tha …..aur mai yahi soch raha tha ki mai na jaane kis musibat me fas gya hu……….aur kaise fasa ye to mujhe bilkul nahi p[ata ………..

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dusari taraf…….

ma- na jane mera bacha kaha gayab ho gaya kis haal me hoga…….
mamata didi- use kuchh nahi hoga chchi………..aap shant ho jaiye dekhna vah aata hi hoga mai janti hu vo ham sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai………….

sahi kaha putri vah tum sab se dur nahi rah sakta hai…………..

sabhi9 log pichhe mud kar dekhate hai to ek sadhu piche khada hai jisame atadhik tej hai chehre par chamak aisa lag raha tha ki vah koi mahan punyatma hai………

papa- hath jodte hue……...aap kaun hai…….

mai mahadev ka ek chhota sa tuchh bhakt hu aur unhi ke aadesh par yaha aaya hu…….ye batane ke liye ki aap sabhi chinta na kare aapke bete ko kuch nahi hoga …….. aap nishchint hokar apne ghar jaye…………...rishi ne bola

kaise chale jaye ghar bina apane bachhe ko liye mai ghar kya ann ka ek dana bhi muh me nahi lungi………… suresh chahe jo bhi karo mujhe mera beta chha hiye…...ma ne kaha

papa- sudha ha rishivar ham aapne bachhe ke bina yaha se nahi jayenge………..

rishi- kya aap bhul gaye jabb aaplog shiva ko mile the to un tapasvi ne kya kaha tha……….tumhe to sab yaad hi hoga……

Mamata didi… sochane lagi ki baat kya hai jo hamme nahi pata…...chacha chachi ne humse kya chhupaya hai……...

ma baba- ko yaad aane lagta hai ki………….

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aaj se 15 saal pahle:-

shudha aur suresh aur sath me Sweety aur shiva ham dono bhi the ( Sweety us samay 6 varh ki thi aur mai 4 varsh ka tha ) himachal pradesh ke mandiro par ja ja kar darshan kar rahe the bas ek hi mandir rah gaya tha vah tha himachal pradesh ke jangal ke beech ek mandir tha jisaka naam ********* devi mandir tha



jab sudha( maa), suresh (pap), aur Sweety didi aur shiva saath me ********** mandir chal dete hai……...shiva ko papa ne god me utha rakha tha………

Sweety-papa betu ko mujhako do na mai bete ko apni god me lekar chalti hu………..vo mera betu hai…………

Ma- ha….ha...ham jante hai vo tera hi betu hai hamara to vah beta hai ye baat ham jante hai…...aur rahi baat shiva ko tere god me lene ki to tu aabhi chhoti hai apane betu ko giraana chahti ho kya……..

Sweety-jaldi se…..nahi….nahi mai betu ko kaise neeche giraungi…………

Maa- to use god me kyo lena chahti hai tu jannati hai ki tu abhi betu ko god me lekar nahi chal sakti…….uske liye bada hona padega………

Masumiyat se……..kitana mammi…….

Tere papa jitane….ma ne kaha

Papa jitane ……. Phir kuch sochte hue……...matlab aap abhi choti ho…...mujhase badi ho to……...Sweety ne bholepan se puchh

Maa- haste hue………. chal hame jaldi mandir pahuchana hai aaj koi auto wale bhi nahi dikhai de rahe hai raat hone wali hai……..aur mandir bhi abhi dur hai…..ham hotel bhi nahi ja sakte hai kyon ki mandir yahan se bahut pass padega……...suresh mere to jee bahut ghabara raha hai……….

Papa-sudha aur kuchh dur chal lete hai abb ham pahuchane wale hai is jangal me rukana bhi to khatarnak hai…….

Sweety- papa mere betu so gaya kya..

Papa- ha beta tera betu aur hamara beta so gaya hai……….chalo jaldi jaldi chalo………

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Flashback me hi dusri taraf……….

Ek car teji se usi jangal ki taraf aa rahi thi us gadi me ek mahila aur ek aadmi the. Ko karib 30-32 saal ke honge……..usi car me ek bachh th jo behosh tha ki soya huaa tha ye mujhe nahi pata…………..

Aadmi- tumhe kya lagta hai ham jo kar rahe hai vah sahi hai……..

Aurat- kyo nahi sahi hai…..ha……..agar ye sahi nahi hai to kya vah sahi tha jo isane aur isaki ma ************* ne kya……….

Aadami- ********** tum samjh nahi rahi ho bhabhi ne jo bhi kya vah janbujhkar nahi kya vah to use hi bachane ke liye jaa rahi thi……

Aurat- dekho ji mai kuchh bhi nahi janti usake karan mera beta hame chod gaya abb uska beta nahi rahega ………..

Aadmi--dekho ********** ham phir se koshish karenge to hame phir se bachha ho sakte hai……….aur……...bhabhi ne apana operation kara liya hai hai unke vansh vridhi ke liye bas yahi ek hai aur ham aaj isako bhi unase chhin lege………..

Aurat-chin lege……..ha….to usane jo hamare bachhe ko chhin liya usaka kya ha………

Aadmi-unhone jaan bujh kar nahi kya hai *******.......tum samjh nahi rahi ho jis din tumhe sachai pata chalegi tum bahut pachhatane waali hi…………

Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhe chhina hai……..(aur aapke bhai ke karan meri bahan ki jindagi jo barbad ho gayi hai uska bhi badala hai ye chhodungi nahi tujhe ******* Thakur abhi to ye suruaat hai)
……...…..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……
Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….

Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….

Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….

Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliya the…………………

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Aurat--dekho ji…...mai kuchh nahi janti mai sirf itana jaanti hu ki usane mera beta mujhse china………..dant pisate hue……….. mai uska beta usage chhin lungi…..bas…...mujhe khun ke badale khun aur bete ke badale beta chahiye….aur kuchh nahi……..aur rahi beta paida karne ka to is saari sampati jo hai use sambhalne ke liye koi to chahiye……..aur dono jeth me se to ek aaj nirvansh ho jayega to unki bhi dhan daulat ko sambhalne ke kiye koi to chahiye……..


Vah aadami kuchh nahi bolta hai….


Aurat- aur aap ne hse vada kiya tha ki mai jo bhi karungi aap bina koi saval puchhe karenge…….


Aadmi--rukhepan se halanki vah bhi apane bete ke liye dukhi tha par vah yah nahi karna chahta lekin vah apne patni se bahut pyar karta tha isliye vah uska sath de raha tha…….


Dono hidimba van pahuch gaye the…..aur car ko jangal ke anadar leliy the…………………


Abb aage:-



flashback jari rahega :-



Car ek bade se ped ke pass le jakar rok deta hai……..aur kisi ka intejar karne lagte hai…….

Tabhi bachhe ko hosh aa jata hai aur dekhata hai ki vo to gadi me hai phir bahar ki taraf dekhata hai to uske chacha chachi bahar hi hai unhe vah ladka aavaj hi dene wala hota hai ki use kuchh ghante pahle ki hui ghatanaye yaad aajati hai ki kaise uske chacha ne use mara gadi ke andar baithNe ke liye aur chachai baat kar rahi thi use marane ke liye vah ladka dar gaya aur sochne laga halanki vah sochane layak tha to nahi parantu har kisi ke sochane ki kshamta to hoti hi hai vah ladka bhi apne jitana dimag tha utna sochne laga ki….. abb kya kiya jaye usane dekha ki vo log gadi ke dusari side the aur dusri saide koi nahi tha…….us ne check kiya to get lock nahi tha vah chupake se get kholkar dhire se bahar nikal gya aur dusari side ki or bhagane laga…….vah jitana tej Daud sakta tha utana tej Daud raha tha tabhi chach ki najar mere taraf chali gayi……..


Chachi- ************ pakdo use vah kamina bhag raha hai…….hamne socha tha ki yah behosh hai lekin yah to badi chalak nikala………...jaldi se pakdo bhagane na paye……………


Dono log ladake ko pakadane ke liye us or bhagane lage aur ladka bhi jangal ki or teji se bhagane laga……………



Vah bhagate bhagate ualnhe chakama dete dete vah pahuch gya jaha suresh and family ja rahi thi mandir ki taraf……

Sudha - suresh yahi kuchh der aaram bhi kar lete hai aur khana bh kha lete hai ……


Suresh- kuch nahi bolata hai vahi sadak ke kinare ve log apna sara saman rakha kar shiva ko vahi litakar kuchh duri par jakar aapna tent lagane lagte hai ………....

VaH ladaka vaha pahuch jata hai aur jakar Sweety ke pass chala jata hai jo pass hi me baithi hui khel rahi th aur kuchh hi duri par thi didi mujhe bacha lo vo log mujhe maar denge Sweety abhi kuchh bolane hi vali hoti hai ki tabhi use apaniammi ki chikh sunai deta hai………….






Sudha- nahi ………..shiva……

Aur teji se Us or bhagati hai jis or ek mota gande se dikhane vala aadami shiva ko god me liiye hue teji se Daud raha tha halanki suresh aur Sweety ko us ladke ka chehara dikhayi nahi de raha tha….


Vah Gunda teji se us Shiva ko lekar bhagata hai………

Yaha suresh aur Sweety nasamajh ho kar dekhe ja rahe the………..ki sudha ma ko kya ho gaya vah itani teji se vs aadami ke pichhe kyo bhag rahi hai………………..


Suresh- sudha are kya hua tum us aadami ke pichhe kyo ja rahi ho……….


Sudha- suresh jaldi pakdiye is aadami ko ye shiva ko lekar bhag raha hai…………


Suresh- lekin shiva to yaha hai Sweety ke paas ……….

Sudha Sweety ki or dekhati hai to uska demag hi hill jata hai……..


Sudha- suresh hamara shiva yaha hai to us aadmi ne kisi ko pakad kar le gaya…………


Suresh- tum kahi pagal to nahi ho gayi ho jab shiva hamare pass hai to vah kaise shiva ko le ha sakta hai…………..


(Huaa ye tha ki jab vah ladka Sweety ke pass gaya tabhi vaha us ladke ko dundhate hue vah aadami vaha aa gya aur uski najar shiva par padi to usne use vaha se utha liya kyoki shiva aur us ladke ka chehara ek jaisa tha)


Sudh-nahi suresh aap ne dekha ki nahi dekha lekin maine dekha vah ladka hu b hu shiva ki tarah hi tha………….


Sweety- kya baat karti ho mammi vah mera betu jaisa tha leki aisa kaise ho sakta hai…...mera betu to yaha hai mere pass…………….


Ladka kuchh nahi bolata hai darr ke mare vah chupchap se sabko dekhata hai...


Sudh- hame chalkar dekhana chahiye suresh baat kya hai………….


Tino log usi disha me chal dete hai jis disha me vah aadami ladke ko le gaya tha……...jald hi be log vah pahuch jaye hai aur ek ped se chhipakar dekhane lage yaha un sabki bate sunai de rahi thi…………….



Gounda- malik le aaya yah mandir ki tarf bhag raha tha………


Aadami- vaah kallu vah ye tumane bahut achha kiya vaise yah bhagata to bhi marta bhukhe lekin ham koi risk nahi lena chahte the……..


Aurat- kallu tumane jo kaam kiya hai uska inaam tumhe mil jayega……..aab iska sar dhad se alag kar do aur iske sar ko ek gift me pack karke mere jeth Thakur ************* singh ko bhet savrup de do…………………


Aadmi nahi ----------- tum ye kya karna chahti ho bhaisahab ko pata chala ki unke bete ka katl huaa hai to vah iska pata lagwaywnge aur usme kahi pata chal gya to…………


Aurat- ha ye maine socha hi nahi……….. kallu ise tum kato aur iske deh ke har ang ko dur dur tak le jakar gad do…………


Kallu- ji malkin…….jaisa aap kahe………


Aur jaise hi kallu bachhe ke gardan par talwar chalane ko hota hai ki ladaka boll padata hai chachi ma aap aisa kyo kar rahi ho maine aapka kya bigada hai aapko to mai apana ma hi manta hu…………


Aurat ye sun kar uske aakho me aashu aa jate hai lekin vah kuchh kar nahi pa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha ki koi usase yah sab karwa raha hai……..


Aurat- chilla kar kallu jaldi kar……..


Yaha ped ke piche (Sare log dhire dhire baat karte hai)



sweety- papa hame kuchh karna chahiye betu jaisa dikhane wala ladake ko ve log maar denge………..


Sudha-ha suresh jaldi se police ko phone kariye……………..


Suresh apna mobile nikalta hai……..


Suresh- oh….no….


Sudha- kya huaa…….


Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado



Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….
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Kahani aab tak:-

Suresh- phone me network hi nahi hai dekho tumhare me hai kaya ……………


Sudha apani mobile chek karti hai….nahi mere me bhi nahi hai……….


Suresh- abb kya kare ye log to nirdayi ulta se is bachhe maar denge……….abb to lagta hai ki hame hi aage aana padega…….tum log yahi chhipe rahna………lo shiva ko tum pakado


Abhi suresh yah baat kahakar aage bhadhane hi wala hota hai ki tabhi koi usaka haath pakad leta hai…………….


Abb aage:-

Ve log dar jate hai ki yah kaun hai pichhe mudkar dekhate hai to hath pakadne wala eak sadhu tha…………

Sadhu- beta tum unko nahi rok sakte ho…………
Suresh-baba ye aap kya kah rahe hai………..

Sadhu-mai sahi kah raha hu suresh…Yahi vidhi ka vidhan hai…….

Suresh apna naam sunakr chauk jata hai phir apane aap ko sambhalte hue puchata hai…………

Aap mera naam kaise jante hai…….

Sadhu-jaise ye janta hu ki vah ladaka jise tum bachane wale ho aaj uske sharir ka aant aa gay hai……..

Suresh- ye aap kya kah rahe hai ………...to kya ham use yu hi marne de……….

Sadhu- beta koi fayada nahi hai vaha jakar kyoki us ladke ka aant aa gay hai………..

Sudha- baba phir bhi ham use aise hi nahi marne de sakte hai apna prayash karenge use bachane ke liye……...ham use yu hi marne nahi de sakte hai………….

Sadhu-- putri sudha tum nishchint raho vah ladke ki mrityu nahi hogi balki uski keval sharir nast hoga………….

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….

Sadhu-- pahle yaha se chalo………..mai sab kuchh batata hu…….

Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki kalu ne us ladke ka sar dhad se aalag kar deta hai lekin sudha, suresh, Sweety ki najar idhar nahi padati hai unki najri aur kaano ko us sadhu ne bandh diya tha apni shaktiyo davara……..

Jab ladke marta hai to uske sharir se ek jayoti nikalti hai jo vastav me isaki aatma hoti hai……..
Lekin vah jyoti kewal aadhi hi thi aisa lag raha tha ki uaski aadhi hi aatma bahar nikali hai aadhi nahi……..vah jyoti jaha Vah ladka tha us or chal deta hai……ladka sweety ka hath pakda huaa tha aur vah jivanjyoti us ladke me jakar sama jaati hai aur us ladke apani sari batte bhul jaata hai aur yaad rahata hai to keval shiva ki yade vah shiva ban jata hai………

Sudha- baat kya hai baba…...aap ne us bache ko marne kyo diya………..

Sadhu-- putri kaun sa bacha kaun mara hai……...mujhe to nahi malum kisko maine marne diya hai……..mai to kisi ko aadha se purn bana raha hu……..

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba….kripya vistar se bataiye……….

Ve log kab mandir pahuch gaye unhe pata hi nahi chala ve log mandir me jakar ek or baith jate hai………..

Sadhu-- ye ek rahasya hai suresh………kya .ye aapki putri hai ………..

Sudha- ha baba iski naam Sweety hai…...aur ek aur hai jisaka naam Minal hai vah abhi 2 varsh ki hai…...use ham yaha nahi laye hai……..vah apane buaa ke pass hai……..

Sadhu-- putri Sweety kaya tum aur tumhara betu mandir nahi ghumenge jao mandir ghum aao………..

Ladaka jisame shiva ki atma samane ke baad use keval shiva dvara abhi tak ka jiye jindagi hi yaad thi vah apana saara past bhul gya tha to aab se use shiva hi likhunga kyoki vah shiva hi hai

Shiva- ha didi chalo na mai bhi ghumana chahta hu.

Sweety apani ma papa ki or dekhati hai……..

Suresh samjh jata hai ki jarur koi baat hai…...ja beta apane bhai ko lekar uske sath kelo……

Sudha- Sweety yahi vaha pass me jo chabutara hai usi par jaoo bhai ko lekar………..

Sweety chali jati hai……



Sadhu-- suresh aur sudha tum jante hi ho ki tumhare putr ki aayu jayada vakt ki nahi tha……….vah alpayu tha……..

Sudha aur suresh ko vah baat yad aane lagata hai jab shiva ka janm huaa tha…….ghar ke pandit ne kaha tha ki aapke bete ki aatma aadhi hai……...is karan vah alpayu hoga……..apane soch se bahar nikalte hue…..

Suresh- ji baba hame yad hai…...aur humne unse upay bhi pucha tha lekin unhone kaha tha ki upay unhe nahi pata hai…….

Sadhu-- to putr tumhare putr aab chiranjivi ho gaya hai us ladake ko marne se aur aab aane wale samay me badh rahe papo ka naas karne ke liye ek masiha ka janm ho gaya hai aaj…….

Sudha- ham kuchh samjhe nhi baba…..mashiha …..aur hamre bete ka umr kaise badh gaya hai……

Sadhu--putri tumhare putr ke jivan me teen mrtu yog hai jo tala nahi ja sakta hai vastav me yah yog iske pichhle janm ki anjane me kiye hue apradh ki saza hai………..

Suresh-baba mrtu dand to bhayanak apradh ke liye diya jata hai leki shiva ne kaun sa apradh kiya tha…...ye rahasya kya hai baba …….. hamara putra kaun hai jo is janam me hamara beta bankar janm hua hai……….

Sadhu-- putr tumhare putr ek mahan aatma hai lekin ek dust ke vajah se isame rakshasi ansh bhi pravesh kar gay…….jisase yah devil king ban gay…

….dekha jay to yah ghatan god ji ke vardan ko pura karne ke liye huaa hai kyoki vah devil ne vardan hi manga tha ki god ke ansh ho lekin sath hi uska ansh bhi ho usame jisaka use pata bhi na ho…….isi vardan ke karan ise devil king banaya gaya …..

.lekin yah baat us devil aur uske guru daitygueu ko pata chal gaya aur unhone apne devil power davara………...devil king me jo achhaiya thi unhe deil king ke agyanta davara nast kara diya jisase usne ek bhut hi bhayanak apradh kiya jisse use dandit kiya gaya…

….halanki devil king ka janm papo ka naash karne ke liye huaa tha to uski agyanta ko kshama karte hue uska phir se janam hua lekin jab devil king ki aatma ko dharti par bheja gaya to vah do bhago me pahucha jo ek tumhare garbh me gya aur ek Thakur patni ke garbh me jisase dono ki aayu alpayu ho gayi………jo aab …………..

Sudha- ka dil teji se dhadak rahath use lagne laga ki vah ladka usaka shiva hi tha………
Sudha- bechaini se aab kya baba……

Sadhu-- beta mai pahle ye batana chahta hu ki tumhare bete ki maut ho gayi hai aur jo yah larka hai yah vastav me Thakur ladka aur abb tumharabhi putr hogaya hai…………

Sudha- to ye baat sunte hi dhadam se vahi par gir jati hai suresh jadi se apane goad me le leta ha………...uski bhi aankho me aashu aa gaye the………

Sadhu apane kamndal se jal nikal kar sudha ke chehare par marate hai aur sudha hosh me aa jati hai aur hosh me aane ke baad rone lagti hai ………
Sadhu-- putri apane aap ko sambhalo tumhara putr marke bhi jinda hai……..

Sudha- kaisi ma hi mai apne bete ko pahchan nahi payi…..aur to aur uske kapade se bhi nahi pahchan payi ……….. hay mera shiva …….mujhe maf karde mere bete mai tujhe pahchan hi nahi payi aur tujhe marta hua vaha chod aayi……..

Sadhu--putri tumhara shiva jinda hai………

Sudha- apne aansu puchte hue…...jida hai phir vah kya tha kya vah kishi prakar ka maya jaal tha……..
Sadhu-- nahi na hi vah aasty hai aur na ye asaty hai ki tumhara beta jinda hai…….

Suresh- ham kuchh samjhe nahi baba…….

Sadhu-- tumhare bete ke mrtyu hote hi jo aadhi atma thi aab pura ho gayi hai…...kyoki yah balak tumhara bhi putra hai aur us Thakur ka bhi kyoki devil ke aadhe bhag ka janm Thakur patni ke garbh se bhi hauu taha…aur shiva ki aadhi aatma aab is balak me sama kar pura ho gayi hai…..

Use sab yad hai tum uski maa ho suresh uske pita hai ya you kahu ki use shiva jo janta hai vah sab yaad hai…….

Sudha-us Thakur ladke ki yade…….
Sadhu-beti uski yade kuch samay ke liye bandh gayi hai…...jo samay aane par hi use yaad aayegi ……….

Suresh-to baba yaad aate hi kya shiva hame bhul jayega…….

Sadhu-- maine tumhe yah bataya tha ki yah tumhara aur Thakur dono ke putr hai…….to jab iski shaktiya jagrit hogi tab ise sab yaad aa jayega…….aur sudha ye tumhe kabhi nahi chhodega…………

Sudh-lekin baba aapne yah nahi bataya ki teen mrityu yog kyo banaya gaya……..

Sadhu- beti halanki devil king ko dandit kiya gaya tha aur usi dand ko mrtyu yog banakar iske punr jivan me diya gaya hai ki agar yah pap hi karta hai to ise mrityu yog lagega anytha yah bach jayega…….

Sadhu-- yah yog jab yah 19 saal ka huaa hoga tab jab tak yah 20 saal ka nahi ho jata tab tak yah yog ispar kabhi bhi lag sakta hai…….agar yah bachh gya to iske 21 janmdin ke samy aur phir bach gaya to 25ve janmdin par lagega aur isase bach gya to iske upar se yah yog khatm ho jayega……....

Sudha- baba kya hame aap puri kahani vistar se batayenge

Sadhu kuchh der sochata hai phir bolta hai…..
putri yah khani hai treta yug ki ********************************************************************************yah kahani 3 se 4 update ki hai jo aane wale samy me ek aaise raj ka pardafas karega jisase is kahani ka villen juda huaa hai aur the devil king bana kaise tha kyo aur kaise janm huaa devil king ka sab pata chalega bas kuchh update intejar karne ke baad aur is
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Phir aaj se karib kai hajar purv us devil aur tantrik ki tapasya puri hui aur unka ant karne ke liye janm hua devil king ka aur phir ************************************************************************************************************

Bas yahi kahni hai devil ke janm, aur unke kary, aur dand ka.

Sudha- to kya us janm me bhi devil king ki aatama ka janm do rupo me hua th…..

Sadhu-- ha baat ye hai ki tantrik ne vardan me manga tha ki ******************tabhi uski mrityu hogi…...isliye…….

Saare log chupp ho jate hai is shanti ko bhang karne ke liye sadhu baba phir bolte hai…..

Suresh aur sudha ek saty mai tumhe batana chahunga ki devil ki sari patniyo ka bhi janam hua hai……….

Suresh- ve log kaun hai baba kya mai janta hu unhe ………

Sadhu-- beta devil ki 11 mukhya raniyo mese 4 raniyo ka janam tumhare hi ghar me huaa hai ve hai……..Mamata, Sweety, Minal, aur sonal………

Sudha aur suresh ye naam sunakr chook jate hai kya………..

Sadhu-- ha ye satya hai ki tumhare ghar ki sari ladkiya devil king ki patniya hai aur tumhari bhan ke garbh se bhi janm lene wali Kanika, Aarohi, Amrita, moni, bhi devil ki mukhya raniya hai…….

Suresh-ye to 8 hi hue hai baba aur 3 mukhya raniya aur inki Surbhi jo raniya hai vah sabhi kaun hai……..

Sadhu-- sab samya aayega to tumhe pata chal jayega beta itana adhir na ho………..

Sudha- baba leki ye sari to shiva ki bahane hai aur yah samaj………..

Sadhu--beta kya jab sristi bani to bata sakte ho Manu ki shadi jisase hui vah bhi brahma ji ki purti thi to dono bhai bhan hue ki nahi tab tum ye batao ki kya yah galat hai aur rahi baat is jamane ki baat to sab samay par chod do……..
Aur ek baat beta tumhare ghar ki sari devil ki raniyo ka batani ka mera yah karan tha ki tumhe apne sari ladakiyo ki mang me jab shiva ka jab 7va janam din aayega tab iske naam ka sindoor shiva ke hatho bharwana hoga hoga nahi to tumhari khandan ka samul vinash ho jayega…………..


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Sweety delhi ke airport par pahuch chuki thi vaha use lene minal aur sona1l aayi thi…………………


Welcome my sweet si sweety didi…………….sonal ne kaha…………... welcome to our house didi…………..minal ne kaha…………………………


Thank you my sweet angel's………………….bhai nahi aaye ya phir mamta didi papa chacha……………sweety ne jawab dete huye puchh ……


Minal ne kaha…………...nahi didi bhaya 5 dino se out 9f country hai aur papa chacha ke aane ki khusi me nahi aaye intane din baad jo mile hai dono bhai………………………………..


Chalo koi baat nahi……..sweety ne kaha………………….


. sara samaan gadi me rakhakar chal dete


Gadi chalne se kuchh der baad sweety ne side mirror me dekha to ek kali car unke pichhe pichhe aa rahi hai unki gadi jis jis tarf ja rahi thi us us tarf ja rahi thi ye dekhakar Sweety ne puchh………….


Achha minal...bade chacha ne tum logo ke liye bodyguard rakhe hai kya…………….


Minal ne jawab diya…...nahi didi…..


To fir ye gadi jisaki hai jo hamare pichhe pichhe aa rahi hai……………….sweety ne usare se dikhate hauye kaha…………..


Minal aur sonal ne jab mirror me gadi ko dekha to be thoda dar gayi kyoki be is gadi ko bahut achhi tarah se pahchanti thi………………………..


Sonal……….ye hamara pichha kyo kar raha hai………….


Pichha…….ye kaun hai sonal………….


Sonal……….didi ye yaha ke mla ke beta hai school me hame pareshan karata rahata hai…..jab ham school jate hai to agar ham salwar suit me jate hai to ye chhote chhote kapade pahan ke aane ko bolata hai………….agar nahi jaye to ye kisi na kisi bahane use kharab kar deta hai………………


To tum logo ne bhaiya ya phir chacha se kyo nahi kaha ve log in kaise ladako ko achhi tarah se sidha kar dete……..sweety ne kaha………


Didi hamne papa se kaha to ve kahate hai ki mai principal se baat kar lenge aur bhaiya se kahte hai to kahate hai ki ve aisa react karte hai ki jase unhe hamse koi lena dena hi nahi hai……………..minal ne kaha….


Sweety gadi se nikalti hai aur us hadi ke pass jakar kahahti hai bhaiya jara gadi side kar lenge……………….driver sweety ki baat ko sunkar bhi ansuna kar deta hai …………. Sweety phir se request kaerti hai…………..lekin is baar bhi koi jawab nahi milta hai………..



Abhi ye log bate hi kar rahe the ki inke aage ek gadi aakar ruk jati hai jisase inhe bhi apani gadi ka brek marana padata hai………………………….pichhe wali gadi bhi rook jati hai aur uska get khulata hai aur usame se nikalta hai mla ka beta aur aage wali gadi se niklata hai mla…………...aur sweety aur sonal minal bhi nikalete hai……………..sweety ne dono se kaha ki tum log chup rahana mai baat karti hoon………..


sweety :- kaun ho tum log aur kya chahte ho aur is tarah hamara rasta rokane ka kya matalab hai...................


Mla ka beta jisaka naam mantu tha aur usake pita ka naam Deshraj hai………………


Mai hu is areya aur tumahare Shahr revatiganj ke mla ka beta mantu aur ye hai jo mere jayaj najayaj mang ko pura karane waale mla sahab desharaj ji hai jo ki mere pita sree hai…………………….mantu ne jawab diya…………..aur kuchh janana hai………


Desharaj ne bola…….dekho tum jo bhi ho hame tumse nahi tumhare pichhe jo ye ladaki tumne kya naam bataya beta…..mmmmmmmmmm…….ha sonal se apane bete se sadi karne ke liye baat karani hai…………….


Sadi ………… to jakar hamare gharwalo se baat kijiye is tarah se rasta rokakar baat karane ka kya matalb hai ………..sweety ne kaha……..


Desharaj dekho mera manana hai ki is aaj ke jamane me jab tak ladaka ladaki taiyar nahi honge to unke gharwalo se baat karane se kya fayad…………………..


Abhi sweety kuchh bolane wali thi ki sonal ne kaha………..aap se kisane kaha ki mai ise yani aapke bete se pyar karti hu…………


Desharaj……...beta aaj nahi karti ho to sadi ke bad ho jayega mai to yaha sirf ye kahne aaya tha ki mai tumhare ghar kal aane wala hu aur tumse Jo bhi kahu tum hame ha hi kahana nahi to mantu isake bahan ko utha le kagar ye na kahe to isake ghar me ho ne wali beijjati ki kimat isaki bahan chukayegi………………………..



Papa aab ye nahi mujhe ye chahiye kyoki isake aage to ye bhi fell hai sweety ki or sldekhate huye kaha…………….


Desharaj……..to abb ghar jaana kya hai le chal teeno ko tujhe jisase sadi karni hai kar lena bachi do ko ham apani parashanal banayenge………..



Aur mujhe mla sahab mujhe bhi to kuchh banaiye………...............ek anjan aawaj aati hai……….


Sare log jis taraf se aawaj aaya tha us or dekhate hai……………...to vaha ek ladaka khada tha blach t shirt aur upar ek shart pahana huaa tha jisake batan khula tha niche maching jemas bhi tha…..vah apaneuh par ek kaale rang ka scarf banadha huaa tha………..bole to ek dam pura hero jaisa dikha raha tha dekhane me to aisa lag raha tha ki pura…...abb kya batau bas ye janlo ki ladakiyo ko jaisa rajkumaar chahiye vah aisa hi kuchh dikh Raha tha…………………………….


Mantu…...aree bhai abb tum kaun ho aur yaha herogiri dikhane aaya ho chale jaooo nahi to phir tumhare ma ki ek beta aur tumhare hot bahan jo tumhari tarah hi hogi vah binaa bhai ke ho jayegi……….


Mask man:- beta tumne mujhe hero kahakar mera beijjati kar rahe ho kyoki mai sirf hero hi nahi villan bhiai hi hu…………………………….Aur ha…


beta galtikar rahe ho ladki ko chhed kar bhari .......

Aur tum chudwaoge aur chodenge ham ma tumhari...............


Desharaj;- bahut bol rahe ho beta lagata hai ki tumhe jinda hi nahi rahana hai maroo sale ko dekha kya raho ye baat sunate hi saree gunde mask man ki or badhane lagte hai …….


Mask man :- mai kahta hu ki abhi bhi samay hai rook jaao nahi to mai jo bhi kahata hu vahi karta hu maine kaha hai ki tumahari ma chodenge to chodenge abb tumhe visavas nahi hai to mai kya kar sakta hu aab. Tumhe visavas dilane ke liye in sabko bhi pelana padega…


. Akhir hai kaun tu aur inko kyo bacha raha hai kya risata hai inke sath ……….Deshraj ne puchha


Mask man :- nice question ……...mera jawab hai .pata nahi lekin kuchh to hai mai tumhe itana bata deta hu ki jaha bhi galat kaam honge vaha mai hounga .............samjhe ki nahi samjhe…………..


Mantu :- ham to samjh gaye lekin tum nahi samjhe dekh kya rahe ho maro sale ko aur le chalo inko

Abhi gunde aage badhane wale the ki mask man pahuch jata hai unke pas aur lagata hai dhone sare gunde jamin par pade huye hote hai aur bachate hai bap bete ….. vah kahata hai ………...bete. Ye meri pahali fight thi to dicount de raha hu lekin agali bar chodunga nahi …………….samjhe ki nahi samjhe

Deshraj darte huye puchata hai kaun ho tum tumhara asali naam kya hai ……………..


Kyo naam pata jankar apani beti se meri sadi karayega ………...mask man bola ....... Naam janana hai to tumhare ghar me jo tv lagi hai usame dekhate rahana kahi na kahi mera naam pata chal hi jayega ........ Abb nikalo yaha se nahi to phir......


Ye sunte hi dono baap bete ye kahate huye nikal jate hai ki dekha lenge tumhe aur inko ………….


Mask man sweety and bahano ke paas aata hai jo ek tak use hi Nihar rahi thi………..pass aakar unhe hosh me pata hai uthe mallikao free ka show khatm ho gya hai.............


Ye sunakar teeno bahane hanada jati hai phir sweety apane aap ko sambhalte huye kahati hai.... Abb to apna mask hata lijiye ........


Mask man ......... Agar hata liya to aap behosh na ho jaye mujhe dekhkar…………...itana handsome jo hu


O ho apani tarif apane muh se achha hai……..vai aapka naaam kya hai ……..aisa lag raha hai ki mai aapko janti hu ………. Minal ne pucha.


Ye janane wali baat sunakr mask man ghabara jaata hai lekin apane aap ko sambhalte huye ha janti hongi kahi mai aapke sapno me to nahi aata hu roj aapka rajkumaar banke …………


Nice joks ......... Sonal ne kaha…….vaise aapne bataya nahi ki aapka naam kya hai aur ye mask kyo nahi hata rahe hai …………

Aur ye itani achhi righat karna kaha se sikha ........


Ek aas me iatane sawal jarur aap inme se sabase chhoti hongi to mera jabab hai mera naam hai............ Vaise mera naam jankar kya karana hai aapko..... Chehara hi dikha deta hu ............... Ye kahakr usane apna mask hata deta hai........


Use dekhkar sonal to dekhate hi rah jati hai.........


Sweety puchati hai abb chehara to dikha diya naam bhi bata do .............


Apane naam puchh to bata deta hu mera naam shiva hai aur mai yaha naya hu delhi me aur mai revatiganj me mera ghar hai vaise aap sabka naam kya hai .............


Naam sunakr teeno kuchh sochane lagti hai phir minal puchati hai aap kaha se aaye hai ……….


Ji mai himanchal Pradesh ke simala jile ke rampur gav se aaya hu…(ji ha yah mai tha aap sochenge ki mai to mar gya aur kya huaa yam lok me to mai yahi kahunga ki rooko jara sab pata chalega )..............


Ye sunte hi teeno aachary aur hairani se dekhati hai abhi minal kuchh bolane wali hoti hai ki ....... Sweety use rokate huye kahati hai........ham log bhi vahi ja rahe hai chaliye chhod dete hai…………..


Ji koi baat nahi aap logo ko koi taklif nahi dena chahta hu mai puchhte puchhate chala jaunga……………….


Sweety ne aakha dikhate huye bola……..maine kaha na chaliye ham chhod dete hai……


Mai socha sala ye to puri sweety jasi tevar dikha rahi hai chalte hai……chaliye chalte hai……..ham charo gadi me baith gaye sweety gadi chala rahi thi. Minal aage baithi huyi thi aur pichhe mai aur sonal baithe huye the…………….


Sonal apane hi socha me gum thi…….vah soch rahi thi …..ki ……….kya yah shiva bhai hai nahi gav me rahakar drees scence itaana achha …….lekin mamata didi ke anusar to ve kafi handsome hai aur ye bhi kam nahi hai ho na ho yahi shiva bhai hai……


Is tarah se ham pahuch gaye revatiganj


Abb kaha jana hai aapko….matalab kisake ghar jaana hai…………...sonal ne puchha…………..


Ji aab mai chala jaunga……...aap chita na kare……..


Chaliye thik hai……...aur ha dhanyawad aapane jo hamari jaan bachao……..sweety ne kaha……


Mai:- are usame thanks ki koi jarurat nahi maine aapki sahayata ki aur aapane hamari hisab barabar……….chalte hai …………..yah kahar mai vaha se dur hat gaya aur sweety gadi aage badha deti hai…………………..

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Ek mahila:- padhariye rani sahiba aapka savagat hai...
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Kahani aab tak.


itana pyar dekhakar usake aakho se pani girane lagati hai sweety ki najar jab shiva ke chehare par padati hai to sabko hatane lagti hai aur puchati hai jyada dard ho raha hai bata kaha lagi hai…………………

Shiva sweety ke muh se jab ye sunta hai to usake sabr ka bandh toot jata hai aur sabko hatate huye sweety ke gale lag jata hai aur jor jor se dur fut kar bachho jase lipat kar rone lagata hai sweety bhi rone lagati hai………..

Abb aage:-
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Vaha sabhi upasthit logo ke aakhe pahale se jo nam thi unake se pani girane lagata hai…………………..

Sweety shiva ke sar par pyar se hath fer rahi thi aur shiva ko chup kara rahi thi lekin khud hi roye ja rahi thi ……………….

Sudha aur Suresh ek dusare ko dekhate hai unke aakho me khushi ke aasu the…………….

Mahesh mahaul ko dekhate huye kahata hai beta tere bade papa bhi hai unke kaleje ko thandak nahi pahuchayega……………….. shiva apane aashu pochate huye bade papa kahate huye unke gale lag jata hai………..Mahesh ke mukh se santusthi ke aah nikalti hai jaise varsho ke pyase Ko Pani dene ke baad sukun ki anubhuti ho gayi ho………….. unke aakho se bhi do char moti tapak hi jate hai…………...ve shiva ko jor se gale lagate hai jaise varsho ki pyas bujha rahe ho………………….

Sobha bolati hai…..kya mere bete ko mujhase nahi milane dege ji………………….

Mahesh ji bolate hai ha…...ha…..ha….milo apane bete se mai kaha rok raha hu…..

Chhodenge tab to milungi usase………..

Ve shiva ko chhodate hai……….to shobha ne use apane gale lagate huye kaha hame maf karde beta tere dada ji ki maut ke karan tujhe manakar ham tujhe unka doshi manae lage leki ma ji jab antim samay me hame kuchh bate batayi tab jake hame apani bhul ka ahsas huaa…….hame maf karde beta maf kar de aur kas kar shiva ko gale laga leti hai aur rone lagati hai………………….

Nahi badi ma aap kyo ro rahi hai mai tha hi aisa ki koisi ko mujhapar hi sak hota aap mafi mat mangiye……………….kisi ki koi galti nahi hai yahi mere bhagya me tha …………….

Shobha pyar se shiva ke mathe ko chumati hai…….mera pyara beta kitana smajhdar ho gaya hai………ruk baith tere liye pani leke aati hu…………….siva jab baithane ko hota hai to minal aakar uasase lipat jati hai aur ek side se minal bhi aur rote huye kahati hai bhaiya sabse mil liya lekin hase nahi mile kya hame bhul gaye ho ham aapako yaad nahi ki aapki do chhoti bahane bhi hai………ha aur ek buaa ki ladaki jo tumahari didi lagati hai pichhe se kanika aakar lipatati hai aur aise kahati hai ki sabki rote huye hasi nikal jati hai……………

Shiva kahata hai aap sabko kaise bhi sakta hu me princesses aur meri pyari didi ko ha batao bhala ye bhi koi bhulane wali chij hai।

Matalb ham sab ko bhi gaya tha tu tujhe keval apani chhoti bahane hi yaad thi ……….sweety ne gussa dikhate huye kaha jisame ha me ha mamta ne mila diya …….abb to shiva ki hawa tight ho gayi va jaldi me hadbadate huye ka ……. N…..n….hi didi aisi koi baat nahi hai…..

Tab aap hamse jhuth bol rahe hai ha…….minal ne apane kamar par hath rakhate huye kaha……..

Maine aisa kab kaha meri pari ko ki mai use bhool gaya hu……….tab aap mujhe bhul gaye the ……...sonal ne bhi kaha……..


Nahi meri gudiya tu koi bhulane wali chij hai………..tab kanika abhi bhi pichhe se gale lagaye huye aur sat gayi aur usake kandhe par sar rakhate huye kahti hai aur mai………….


Tabhi Sobha ki aawaj sabko sunayi deti hai kisi ko nahi bhula hai mera beta samjhe tum sab abb chodo ise aaram karane do ise aate hi ise ek to rula diya upar se pareshan kar rahi hai…...le beta pani pi aur minal ja apna kamra dikha bhai ko aur tu sonal ke kamre me shift ho ja vase bhi tu sonal ke sath hi to rahti hai……………………
.mai nahi jane wali is gittar devi ke pass jab bhi nind aati hai to inka gotta nikal aata hai mai sweety didi ke pass rahungi. ……….(dosto aab aap log samjh gaye honge ki sonal kya soch rahi thi agar nahi samjhe to aage aur bhi clear hoga thoda wait karo)


Phir sabse bolati hai ki tum sab bhi jao aur aaram karo dinner par milte hai………...sabhi log apane kamre me chale jate hi…………….

Siva minal ke kamre me chala jata hai aur bet par let jata hai aur pichhali bato ko yad karne lagta hai ……………..

Sweety bhi apana room me sara saman jamm deti hai usake sath me mamta bhi thi…………

Mamta :- chal aab bata kyo tu delhi aayi…….

Didi abhi nahi raat ko abhi aap aaram karo mai shiva se milke aati hai …………….sweety ne baat talte huye kaha………………..

Ha ….bhai aab apne pati ke aage kisaki Suniti tum jao milkar pyar bhari baat kar lo leki ye mat bhulana ki aur bhi kai hai… ……..mamta ne maje lete huye sweety ko chidaya….


Ha mujhe pata hai……..agar aapka bhi. Man hai to aap bhi chal sakti hai aakhi aap bhi to unaki patni jo hai…...sweety ne jawab di ya aur bina jawab sune chal deti hai shiva ke kamre me ………………

Aab to milungi hi didi nahi patani banke kyoki mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki mujhe usase payar hai ye baat use khone ke baad pata chali hai…….abb usase dur bhi to nahi raha jayega…….mamata ne bed par letate huye takiya ko apane aagosh me lete huye kaha……….

Minal kanika dono sonal ke room me bed par lete huye the………..

Sweety shiva wale darwaze ko nok karti hai to darwaja shiva khilata hai to dekhata hai samne sweety didi khadi hai vah unhe rasta dete huye kahta hai aaiye didi…………

Sweety andar aati hai aur bed par baith jati hai…………….aur ek tak shiva ke chehare ko niharane lagati hai aur usame kho si jati hai……………...



Aise dekahte huye sweety ko shiva usase puchhata hai aise kya dekh rahi ho didi……….

Sweety ne apani soch se bahar nikalte huye kahti hai vaha kaha khada hai aa mere pass baith…………

Shiva sweety ke pas baith jata hai aur sweety ke god me apana sar rakhakar let jata hai………………….

Sweety uske sar par hath pyar se ferate huye kahti hai kya hua tha tere sath jangal me ……..

Kuch nahi di aap paresahn kyo ho rahi hai mai thik to huna ……..


Maine jo puchha hai usaka sahi sahi jawab de tujhe meri kasam hai agar jhuth bola to samjha aab to sach bolega…………

Abb to bhagwan bhi aajaye aur kahe ki mat bata lekin mai tab bhi aapko bataunga………...suniye………………………………….. … … … …
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