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Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

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Update 13:

Vihaan: tho parbu aap kyu kah rahe h mujhe vachan todne ke liye?


Tridev: Ye tumari pariksha h Vihaan isse tumhe par karna hai.


Vihaan: parbu kya mai kuch puch sakta hu?


Tridev: hum jante tum kya puchna chate h Devil king!!!!

ab aage:


Vihaan: Devil king?


Tridev: ha Devil king thoda dimag pae jor dala aur pata chal jaega.


Kuch samya phale:


Jab Vihaan aaya tha aur Aihsani ne usse ale laga liya tha aur Ruhani aur Aditi usse dkh rahi thi. Ruhani ki ankhe laal ho gayi thi aur Jab sab apne room mai chle gaye Ruhani bhi apne room mai jake gayab ho jati hai.


Back to present:


Vihaan: iska matlab?


Tridev: ha Vihaan Ruhani ko kad kar liya gaya hai.


Vihaan: mai unko choruga nahi agar usne usse kuch kiya tho!!!


Tridev: ab dkhna ye h ki waha se kon bhar aata h Vihaan ya Devil King.


Isse baad Tridev gayab ho jate hai.


Little flash back:


Ragav: bhai ab kare hum?


Rudra: agar wo uske pass aa gayi h tgho usko harana mushkil hai.


Ragav: parntu bhai humare paas ek kadi aur hai usko marne ke liye.


Rudra: aur wo kya hai?


Ragav: Ruhani


Rudra: hum kuch samje nahi Ruhani se hume kya mil skta hai?


Ragav: bhai wo usse sabse jada pyar karta hai. Agarb hum usse marwa de tho wo tut jaega aur kud he marb jaega.


Rudra: agar wo ghar puncha aur usse wo yha nhi mili tho tum jante ho wo kya kar saka hai.


Ragav: esa kuch nhi hoga bha aap nischint rahie.


Rudra: thik hai.


Uske bad ragav Vihaan ke ghar ki jata hai aur kud ko invisible karke Ruhani ke room mai jata haiaur Ruhani ko behosh karke usko bhi invisible kar deta hai aur uski jagh ek colon chor deta hai jisse sabke lage wo Ruhani hai.


Back to Vihaan Side:


Vihaan bhag kar niche aata hai aur Ruhani ke room ki bhagta aur room knock krne lagta hai aur jor jor se chilane lagta hai sab Vihaan ki aawaj sun kar bhar aate hai aur


Aditi: kya hua Vihaan?


Vihaan: Ruhani door nhi khol rahi.


Aditi: wo soo rahi hogi wo thodi tired thi?


Vihaan: (aankho mai ansso aa jate hai aur gussa bhi) nhi wo room mai nhi hai.


Vihaan kisi kin hi suntan aur darwaje ko tod deta hai aur sab ander jate h tho pate h ruhani apne room mai nahi hai.


Aditi: Esa kasie ho sakta hai, wo tho mere samne ander aai thi.


Aishani: ho sakta hai wo bhar laon mai ho?


Vihaan bhar ki traf bhagta hai par waha bhi usse koi nahi milta aur uske gussa aane lagta hai.


Aishani: kha chali gayi ye ladki?


Vihaanko abhi tak pura gussa aa chukka tha ya yuh kahe ki uspe gussa havi ho chukka tha aur ek dum se Aishani ki tarf jata hai aur gal lo pakad kar bolta hai.


Vihaan: kisi ne nahi tumare bhaiyon ne kidnap kiya hai.


Itna bolne ke bad wo Aishani ko dacha de deta hai aur bhar ki traf bhagta hai.


Vihaan ke gusse ko dkh kar sab ek bar tho dar jate hai aur Aditi bhag kar jati hai Aishani ko uthati hai.


Idhar Vihaan gyab ho kar Rudra ki jagah par pucnhta hai aur ander jata h par ander jake wo chonk jata h kyuki waha par koi nahi tha, sab jagah khali thi. Vihaan ka gussa pal pal bhad raha tha


Dusri tarf:


Devil Rajguru: ye kya kar rhe apke shishya Ashish ji?


Angel Rajguru: jo unhe sahi lag raha h wow hi kar rahe h Malik ji.


( ji ha dosto Ashish Dhawan aue Dev malik koi aur nhi Devil rajguru aur Angel rajguru hai)


Malik: agar unhone esa kiya tho anarth ho jaega.


Dhawan: ese humara he kaam saral hoga.


Malik: aap kya kahna hate hai?


Dhawan: yahi ki agar Rudra aur Ragav ne Ruhani ko maar diya tho Vihaan vaise he mar jaega aur wo Devil ban gaya tho sandhi tut jaegi aur usko yudh karna padega.hahaha


Malik bhi parehsan ho jate h kyuki Dhawan ji ne sab kuch sach bola tha au wo chakar bhi hastakshep nahi kar skte kyuki un done ne wachan diya tha ki jab tak Vihaan aur Rajrumari ek nahiho jate dono kisi ko bhi rokbne ke liye badya nahi hai.


Back to hero side:


Vihaan abhi bhi whit ha wo gayab hone wala tha tabhi usse Rudra ki awaj aati hai.


Rudra: kise dhund rahe ho Vihaan?


Vihaan: (gusse mai) agar dum h samne aao?


Rudra: hahahahaha Vihaan mujhe dhund rahe ho thik hai.


Mai whi hu jaha iss sab ki shuruwat hui thi.


Vihaan: mai aa raha hu .


Rudra: aa jao hum tumari partiksha kar rahe hai aur ha uske paas jada samya nahi hai.hahaha


Vihaan ki gusse se aknhe laal ho jhati hai aur gayab ho jata hai aur puchta hai.

( kaha ja raha h Vihaan aur kyu kidnap kiya Rudra ne Ruhani ko aur kya hoga iska anjam, kya Aishani ko sab yaad aa jaega, jaane ke lie sathbane rahie. and sorry forshort update aur kalse daily update aage)



 

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Update 13:

Vihaan: tho parbu aap kyu kah rahe h mujhe vachan todne ke liye?


Tridev: Ye tumari pariksha h Vihaan isse tumhe par karna hai.


Vihaan: parbu kya mai kuch puch sakta hu?


Tridev: hum jante tum kya puchna chate h Devil king!!!!

ab aage:


Vihaan: Devil king?


Tridev: ha Devil king thoda dimag pae jor dala aur pata chal jaega.


Kuch samya phale:


Jab Vihaan aaya tha aur Aihsani ne usse ale laga liya tha aur Ruhani aur Aditi usse dkh rahi thi. Ruhani ki ankhe laal ho gayi thi aur Jab sab apne room mai chle gaye Ruhani bhi apne room mai jake gayab ho jati hai.


Back to present:


Vihaan: iska matlab?


Tridev: ha Vihaan Ruhani ko kad kar liya gaya hai.


Vihaan: mai unko choruga nahi agar usne usse kuch kiya tho!!!


Tridev: ab dkhna ye h ki waha se kon bhar aata h Vihaan ya Devil King.


Isse baad Tridev gayab ho jate hai.


Little flash back:


Ragav: bhai ab kare hum?


Rudra: agar wo uske pass aa gayi h tgho usko harana mushkil hai.


Ragav: parntu bhai humare paas ek kadi aur hai usko marne ke liye.


Rudra: aur wo kya hai?


Ragav: Ruhani


Rudra: hum kuch samje nahi Ruhani se hume kya mil skta hai?


Ragav: bhai wo usse sabse jada pyar karta hai. Agarb hum usse marwa de tho wo tut jaega aur kud he marb jaega.


Rudra: agar wo ghar puncha aur usse wo yha nhi mili tho tum jante ho wo kya kar saka hai.


Ragav: esa kuch nhi hoga bha aap nischint rahie.


Rudra: thik hai.


Uske bad ragav Vihaan ke ghar ki jata hai aur kud ko invisible karke Ruhani ke room mai jata haiaur Ruhani ko behosh karke usko bhi invisible kar deta hai aur uski jagh ek colon chor deta hai jisse sabke lage wo Ruhani hai.


Back to Vihaan Side:


Vihaan bhag kar niche aata hai aur Ruhani ke room ki bhagta aur room knock krne lagta hai aur jor jor se chilane lagta hai sab Vihaan ki aawaj sun kar bhar aate hai aur


Aditi: kya hua Vihaan?


Vihaan: Ruhani door nhi khol rahi.


Aditi: wo soo rahi hogi wo thodi tired thi?


Vihaan: (aankho mai ansso aa jate hai aur gussa bhi) nhi wo room mai nhi hai.


Vihaan kisi kin hi suntan aur darwaje ko tod deta hai aur sab ander jate h tho pate h ruhani apne room mai nahi hai.


Aditi: Esa kasie ho sakta hai, wo tho mere samne ander aai thi.


Aishani: ho sakta hai wo bhar laon mai ho?


Vihaan bhar ki traf bhagta hai par waha bhi usse koi nahi milta aur uske gussa aane lagta hai.


Aishani: kha chali gayi ye ladki?


Vihaanko abhi tak pura gussa aa chukka tha ya yuh kahe ki uspe gussa havi ho chukka tha aur ek dum se Aishani ki tarf jata hai aur gal lo pakad kar bolta hai.


Vihaan: kisi ne nahi tumare bhaiyon ne kidnap kiya hai.


Itna bolne ke bad wo Aishani ko dacha de deta hai aur bhar ki traf bhagta hai.


Vihaan ke gusse ko dkh kar sab ek bar tho dar jate hai aur Aditi bhag kar jati hai Aishani ko uthati hai.


Idhar Vihaan gyab ho kar Rudra ki jagah par pucnhta hai aur ander jata h par ander jake wo chonk jata h kyuki waha par koi nahi tha, sab jagah khali thi. Vihaan ka gussa pal pal bhad raha tha


Dusri tarf:


Devil Rajguru: ye kya kar rhe apke shishya Ashish ji?


Angel Rajguru: jo unhe sahi lag raha h wow hi kar rahe h Malik ji.


( ji ha dosto Ashish Dhawan aue Dev malik koi aur nhi Devil rajguru aur Angel rajguru hai)


Malik: agar unhone esa kiya tho anarth ho jaega.


Dhawan: ese humara he kaam saral hoga.


Malik: aap kya kahna hate hai?


Dhawan: yahi ki agar Rudra aur Ragav ne Ruhani ko maar diya tho Vihaan vaise he mar jaega aur wo Devil ban gaya tho sandhi tut jaegi aur usko yudh karna padega.hahaha


Malik bhi parehsan ho jate h kyuki Dhawan ji ne sab kuch sach bola tha au wo chakar bhi hastakshep nahi kar skte kyuki un done ne wachan diya tha ki jab tak Vihaan aur Rajrumari ek nahiho jate dono kisi ko bhi rokbne ke liye badya nahi hai.


Back to hero side:


Vihaan abhi bhi whit ha wo gayab hone wala tha tabhi usse Rudra ki awaj aati hai.


Rudra: kise dhund rahe ho Vihaan?


Vihaan: (gusse mai) agar dum h samne aao?


Rudra: hahahahaha Vihaan mujhe dhund rahe ho thik hai.


Mai whi hu jaha iss sab ki shuruwat hui thi.


Vihaan: mai aa raha hu .


Rudra: aa jao hum tumari partiksha kar rahe hai aur ha uske paas jada samya nahi hai.hahaha


Vihaan ki gusse se aknhe laal ho jhati hai aur gayab ho jata hai aur puchta hai.

( kaha ja raha h Vihaan aur kyu kidnap kiya Rudra ne Ruhani ko aur kya hoga iska anjam, kya Aishani ko sab yaad aa jaega, jaane ke lie sathbane rahie. and sorry forshort update aur kalse daily update aage)



Boht galat baat ha ya powers ka galat use kar rahe han rudra or raghav ab hero ko in dono ko sabak sikhana ha
 

Pintupaul

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Jabardast update bro age dekhte he Kya hoga
 
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Ghajab Bhai dekhna hai ki ruhani ke sath kya hota hai aur rudra usko kaise bachata hai bacha pata hai bhi ki nhi??
Fantastic update bri you rock keep writing
 

Last benchers

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Nice update
 

Manojsharma

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Nice update bhai
 

Avir

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Waiting next
 

Reza

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Superb update bro...
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