Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Nevil singh]

Chapter-9: Hot Chocolate

Update-35
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School khatm hone ke baad main aur Ved, Ranjan ko dhoondhane uski class me gaye.. jaha ek taraf Jafar mujhe ghoor raha tha toh dusari taraf Riya…. Nope.. aisa bikul nahi tha. Riya ne nazaar utha kar ek baar meri taraf dekhi tak nahi, fir ghoorna toh bahut door ki baat hai. Wo toh maine aise hee flow-flow me kah diya… afterall, I’m The Narrator. so, Jafar ko maine ignore kiya aur Riya ne mujhe... Waise bhi ye is samay best tha, yaahi hona bhi chaahiye tha… kyunki mujhe is samay sirf aur sirf Ranjan se kaam tha aur yadi Riya bhi mujhe ghoorti toh mera man vichlit ho sakta tha aur isi ke sath meri yojna bhi...

“Ranjan kaha…?”bio ki class se bahar nikalte hue ek ladke se maine pucha…

“mujhe kya malum, wo sala mera dost thodi hai… donation ke chalte ek jhapad maara mujhe, subah... tu chutiya, Ranjan Chutiya”bolte hue wo chala gaya

“Ranjan ko dekha kya…?”maine ek aur ladke ko pakda…

“hath chhod mera, nahi toh hath tod dunga…. Saale ki ungaiya ke nishaan abhi tak mere gaal par hai.. tu gandmara... tera dost Ranjan gandmara”bolkar wo bhi chalta bana…

“Ved, ye bio walo ko kya ho gaya hai, dhang se baat hee nahi kar rahe…”

“ Jafar hero hai inka aur us-se tune aaj ladayi ki hai + Ranan ne pela bhi inko… itna toh normal hai…”

“achchha ye baat hai… lekin mujhe pata hai ki kaun mujhe Ranjan ke bare me batayega… aur sala ye Ranjan bina bataye gaya kaha… Karan Naik se dar toh nahi gaya…”class se bahar nikal railing se apna pichhwada tika-kar main bola…

Is dauran Riya bhi class se nikli aur ek pal ke liye hum dono ki nazare mili aur fir wo apne raaste ho li aur main wahi khada use waha se jate hue dekhta raha.

“Madhu… ek minute…”jab thodi der baad Madhu class se nikli toh maine uska naam pukara…

“Atharva….”usne bhi mera naam pukara

“tu quiz me meri team ka hissa banegi…? Physics, chemistry ke liye koyi tension nahi…lekin bio se tere ek jaisi intelligent ladki chahiye…”

“main na , tujhe soch ke batati hu, abhi mujhe Mini ke yaha jaana hai fir main aur Mini gup-chup aur hot chocolate khane jayenge.. fir main jab ghar aaungi toh yoga karungi tab is baare me sochungi aur tujhe call karke bata dungi… okkkkkkkkkkk...”

“okkkkkkkk”

“ par yadi call nahi ki toh tu mujhe call karke pareshan mat karne lagna ki , meri quiz team me aa jao… tujhe toh pata hee hoga ki last year bio me mere 75 me 73 number aaye the aur bio me main bahut intelligent hu… lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki tu jo bolega main wo karungi… mujhe pareshan mat karna call karke, warna main Principal sir se complain kar dungi teri... samjha…”

“maaaaadhaarchod…”Madhu ki baat sun Ved badbadaya aur main apni aankho ke sath-sath apna sar malne laga

“ kuch bola kya tune.... Vedu…?”

“Vedu...? what the fuuuu....”main hansa

“tu kyun hans raha hai Bhattu....”

“Bhattu..? what the fuuuu...”abki baar Ved hansa

“Vedu... bata naaaaa kya bola....”hum dono ke chup-chap aise hasne se pareshan hokar Madhu boli

“meri kya majaal jo main aapke saamne kuch bolu… waise Ranjan ko dekha hai kya aapne…?”Madhu ke muh se Vedu sun ... Ved khud par control karke seedhe point pe aaya

“yahi school me dekha hai…”

“kab…?”Ved ne puchha

“jab wo lunch me donation collect karne ke baad aaya tha”

“kaha gaya…? Kuch pata hai?”

“ghar… shayad…”

“chal thik hai… botal-chor … nikal ab….”

“tu botalchor….. Vedu….”

Madhu ke jaane ke baad main aur Ved gate ki taraf badhe, is dauran humne Ranjan ko kayi baar call kiya… ring toh jaa rahi thi, par Ranjan call receive nahi kar raha tha…

“toh plan cancel…?”mobile jeb me rakhte hue Ved bola

“cancel kyun karenge… tu ek kaam kar , tu gate ke bahar mera intezaaar kar… main Sanjana se milke aata hu…”

“kyunn… ab toh use tujhse milna chahiye… naa ki tujhe , us-se”

“bahut ghamandi hai wo… aage se kabhi baat nahi karegi… ab tujhe hee dekh le, tune jab se us-se baat karna band kiya hai, wo tujhse baat ki kya…? Aur main nahi chahta ki mere sath bhi yahi ho … main faltu ki akad me rishte barbad nahi karta”

“kitni bar bola hai ki , tu thoda akad kar raha kar... anyway, bas 5 min gate ke baahar intezaar karunga tera… itni der me yadi aaya toh thik nahi toh mujhe jo milega main usi ke sath nikal lunga…”

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Main neeche seedhi ke paas khada ho gaya aur Sanjana ka intezaar karne laga… Sanjana jab apne class se nikli thi toh maine use dekh liya tha, wo akeli apne hee khayalo me khoyi hui seedhiyo se neeche utar rahi thi aur jab wo paas aayi toh main dusari taraf apna chehra karke mobile me kisi se baat karne ki acting karne laga aur kuch der aise hee baat karta raha, jab tak ki wo mere aur paas nahi aa gayi… jaha se wo mujhe sun sake aur meri aawaz sunkar hee mujhe pahchan sake

“Athaaa..rrr...vvvaaa…”lambi-lambi saanse lete hue wo boli aur mera itna sun-na tha ki main turant peechhe palat kar uski taraf khiska

“kyuunn... aakhir aa hee gayi meri yaad…kya bola tha subah ki 5000 ki jaroorat hai… tune 5000 manga, maine char guna de diya aur rahi baat ki jab 2-3 aadmi ek saath aa jayenge toh main tujhe kaise protect karunga… toh ek baat batau, tab tujhe Karan Naik bhi nahi bacha payega… pel toh kal main hee deta use, par fir tera jija hai , soch ke chhod diya…”

“I’m sorry…”kahte hue Sanjana mere oor thoda khiski

Aur use aisa karte dekh mere hontho par ek feeki muskan aa gayi, meri feeki muskan dekh uske hontho pe bhi feeki muskan ki ek lahar daudi… par main us feeki muskan ke peechhe ke sach ko nahi pahchan paaya tha aur pahchanta bhi kaise… mujhe kaise pata hota ki iske aage kya hone wala hai… us pal sanjana ektak mujhe dekhti rahi aur main use… use dekhte hue maine apni ek aankh mali toh uski feeki muskan aur badh gayi… jiske baad main apni dusari aankh malne laga is dauran wo muskurate hue dheere-dheere mere paas aati rahi aur fir itne paas aa gayi ki main idhar-udhar dekhne laga... uski aankhe ab band ho chuki thi aur chehra itne paas ki peechhe se yadi halka sa hawa kaa jhoka bhi aata toh.............

“so gayi kya tu khade-khade.....”Sanjana ko pakadkar jordar tareeke se hilaate hue maine kaha “….chal thik main chalta hoon.. Ved mera bahar intezaar kar raha hai…”

jaise hee mujhe achanak se baahar khada Ved yaad aaya toh main bola aur Sanjana ki aankhe turant khul gayi aur wo ekdum se peechhe hat gayi…

“ paise collect aur count karke maine principal office me pahucha diya hai, tujhe waha se mil jayega…”

“mil gaya mujhe…”

“toh fir main chalu…?”

“kyun, mere sath nahi jayega aaj…”

“ Karan Naik sir bahar intezaar kar rahe hai tera…wo dekh. waise bhi Ved ke sath paidal jaate hue… 2-3 dukan me rukte hue, ladkiya taadte hue, 2- 4 logo se ladte hue, unki maa-behan ek karte hue ghar jaane ka maja hee kuch aur hai… aur tu chahti hai ki main tere sath jaun… jaha tu rapidfire khel-khel ke mujhe kohni maaregi... Nope, babes... waise bhi Ved ko already bahar rukne ka bol chuka hoon aur Atharva Singh daruha ho sakta hai par dhokebaaz nahi...”

“ek peg me ludhak jaata hai aur khud ko daruha bola raha... chal ho gaya. Bye... pahle mujhe jaane de…”

“chal kat le fir…”

“bye dumb-dumb…”

“dumb-dumb kyun bolti hai mujhe tu, itna hoshiyar toh hu main…”

“ek din samajh jayega…”

Jabardast update bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-36​

“ek din samajh jayega… waise Tea’se Me coffee house chalega… hot chocolate khaane ? jiju mujhe wahi le jaa rahe hai…?”

“no.. nope… never… hot chocolate toh sirf starbeans me badhiya milta hai, baki toh saale copy karte hai… aur jaa na jaldi se…. apna timepass aur mera time waste mat kar…”

Sanjana ke waha se jaane ke baad maine Ved ko call kiya… khada toh Ved baahar hee tha, par fir bhi maine call kiya... kyunki jo balance mere mobile me tha.. uski validity aaj khatm hone waali thi.. isliye wo waise bhi waste ho jaata. So, maine call kiya

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“bike kyun rok di…”maine jhatke se bike roki toh Ved mere upar Vetal ki tarah latak gaya

“wo dekh Starbeans…”

“toh waha daru thodi milega…?”

“daruha sale… utar gadi se… hot chocolate khaate hai, chal …”

“kya hai ye… hot chocolate… ek chocolate lenge , sale garam karke pighala denge aur fir doodh , shakkar me dekar 500 rupaye per cup denge…”

“tujhe chahiye ya nahi…?”

Jispar Ved ne haan me apni gardan hilaayi… hum dono Katni pahuch chuke the, jaha se Rewa ab kuch ghanto ki hee doori par tha. Katni me jab hume Starbeans khula dikha toh main aur Ved uske andar ghuse….

“ye dekh hum dono ki Lord EL Dorado ke sath Jabalpur ki photo… badhiya hai na..? insta me dalunga”ek chair kheechkar mobile mujhe dete hue Ved bola…

“Instagram me kyun daal raha hai aur sale facebook me bhi share aur kar raha hai… ”

“kyun kya hua…”

“baapu ji dekh liye toh… beda paar…”

“bol dena ki photoshop kiya hu… khush ho jayenge , editing skill dekh kar”

“bhaiya… 2 hot chocolate….”maine do hot chocolate ka order de diya ….

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“bhai, aaj hee gate se bahar aayega naa...? ki do-teen din mujhe intezaar karna padega…?”

Sanjana ke jaane ke baad maine school ke andar se hee Ved ko call kiya toh Ved bhadak utha…

“I’m cumming….”

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“Ved se baat hui….?”school ke main gate ke baahar aakar maine puchha

“bsdk, mere se hee na baat kar raha hai… main hee Ved hoon”

“arey sorry, mera matlab Ranjan se baat hui….?”

“haan… wo ghar chala gaya tha lunch break me…. Uske baap ki ladyai ho gayi thi ek Sardar ji se dhabe me… koyi khass nahi hai, khana khane ke baad paisa nahi de raha tha. kahi baat jyada naa badh jaye isliye dhabe me kaam karne walo ne Ranjan ko call kar diya… baat hui hai meri us-se. sham ko aayega wo, yadi time mila toh….”

“chal fir....”

School se ghar aane ke baad main maa ko apni bahaduri ke bade-bade kisse sunane laga ki kaise maine akele... bilkul akele... apne dum me donation campaign chala kar bees hazar se bhi jyada rupaye Sanjana ki maa ke ilaaz ke liye jama kar liya, kaise Gupta ji ko apna jhootha birthday batakar unse bach gaya tha…. Yahi sab batate hue maine unse bike bhi mangi. Par unhone shayad suna nahi.... TV dekhte hue matar chhilne me wo shayad itni magan thi ki unhone meri bakwas par shayad dhyaan hee nahi diya.... jiska fayda uthate hue maine bowl me se ek mutthi bharkar matar ke daano kko chupke se churaya aur turant gapp kar gaya....

“Mommy....”

“kya bakwas kiye jaa raha hai, itni der se...”

“Mooomy...”

“kya chahiye tujhe...?”

“bike....” bolkar maine wapas apna hath matar ke daano ki taraf badhaya...

Socha tha ki is baar bhi main apni is dakaiti me kamyab ho jaunga par bike ka naam sunte hee pahle meri maa ne meri taraf dekha aur fir matar ke daano ki taraf badhte hue mere hath ko.... unhone turant mere hath pe hath de maara....

“kya hai yeeee... Atharva... aur ye matar itna kam kaise ho gaya...”

“Ab tv dekhne me busy rahogi toh kaam kaha se hoga...”daant me fase matar ke ekat daano ko chabate hue maine kaha aur fir jab yaad aaya toh chori pakde jaane ke dar se muh chalana band kar diya...

“usme kida hai shayad....”bolkar maine apna hath bowl ki taraf badhaya aur jhat se ek mutthi matar nikal kar , meri maa kuch kahti, kuch karti ... uske pahle hee gap kar gaya aur Mom ke gusse se dekhne par apna daant dikha diya...

“ab dobara mat lena...”

Jiske baad main waha se utha aur bowl me se teebara ek mautthi matar ke daane nikalkar kha liya aur Mom kuch kahti uske pahle hee main bol pada...

“bike chahiye...”

“kaha jayega....?”

“Sanjay Gandhi... Sanjana ki maa ko dekhne jaane ke liye…”

pahle toh wo taiyar nahi hui isliye on the spot ek background story banani padi ki Sanjana mujhse tab tak baat nahi karegi, jab tak main hospital jakar uski maa se nahi milta…. Jiske baad thoda aur jor dene par meri maa maan gayi aur main bike lekar hospital ke liye ravana hua… lekin Sanjay Gandhi hospital ke liye nahi, balki Vindhya hospital ke liye… jaha Riya ki maa ki kidney stone ki surgery hui thi…

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WAISE PAHLE MAIN BHI RIYA KE BEHAVIOUR KO LEKAR….. BC, CAPS LOCK ON HO GAYA…. Waise pahle main bhi Riya ke behaviour ko lekar confuse tha ki wo ekdum se aise kyun kar rahi hai, matlab maine toh daru peekar sirf thoda ulti-seedhi baat kiya tha, maal-vaal bol diya tha.. bas… mera ye zurm itna bhi sangeen nahi tha ki Riya ekdum se baat karna hee band kar de… maine school me toh ispe jyada dhyan nahi diya kyunki Sanjana aur Gupta ji ne mere dimag ko divert karke rakha hua tha par jab Lunch break me Madhu ne mujhe Riya ki maa ke kidney stone ke bare me bataya aur maine is par gaur kiya, chizo ko analyse kiya tab mujhe ahsaas hua ki kyun Riya mujhe itna chidhi hui hai…

actually wo kal ki baat ko lekar mujhse naraz nahi thi… matlab thoda bahut thi par mukhya Kaaran ye tha ki main aaj school me subah se Sanjana ki maa ke peechhe pada tha par Riya ki maa ke haalat ki mujhe bhanak bhi nahi thi… islliye wo mujhpaar bhadki hui thi. ab isme meri kya galti hai...? Riya ko mujhe batana chahiye tha… Sanjana toh mere ghar ke paas rahti hai + usne mujhe personally apni maa ke hemodialysis ke bare me bataya tha + aaj usne meri izzat ko taar-taar kar diya tha school me seedhiyo ke paas jiske karan maine wo donation wala pura kaand kiya… warna main wo sab karta hee nahi… infact, hafto se Sanjana ki maa Sanjay Gandhi me admit thi lekin main unse abhi tak milne ek baar bhi nahi gaya tha.

Riya shayad meri isi ignorance ke karan naraz ho gayi thi, ya fir koyi dusara kaaran tha… ye maloom karne kaa sirf ek hee raasta tha aur usi raaste par main apni bike is samay dauda raha tha… main beech me ek dukan par ruka aur Dairy milk ka bada wala packet Riya ke liye liya aur jab jaane laga toh dukan wale ne mujhe aawaz dekar kaha ki ek aur naya chocolate market me aaya hai, dairy milk se bhi badhiya…. Ab mera itna budget nahi tha ki main pahle ek chocolate sample ke taur par khareed kar use pahle taste karu aur pasand aane par fir Riya ke liye ek aur kharid lu… isliye maine bina taste kiye dusara packet bhi kharid liya…

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“hiiii…”

“Atharva…. Tune mujhe kyun call kiya.. maine bataya tha na ki mujhe call mat karna, main khud tujhe call karungi…”dusari side se Madhu boli “anyway, bata toh... what am I doing right now…? Nahi bata paaya na... chal acha, main hee bata deti hu, main naa… wo pani-puri kha rahi hu… tujhe khana hai toh tu bhi aaaja…”

“kitna bolti hai Madhu tu bhi…”

“dekh mere se jyada akad mat, jaroorat tujhe hai meri… na ki mujhe teri… bio me 75 me se 73 number aaye the mere…”

“toh…?”

“toh tune quiz ke liye hee call kiya hai na... ki main tere sath participate karungi ya nahi…?”

“quiz ke liye…? Arey haan… usi ke liye kiya hai… toh kya socha aapne…”

“abhi main pani-puri kha rahi hu, fir Starbeans me hot chocolate aur fir tu mujhe call karna… tab main tujhe bataungi aur mere hot chocolate ke paise tujhe dene padenge… mujh jaisi intelligent ladki ke liye itna toh kar hee sakta hai tu…”

“bilkul... kyun nahi… ye bhi koyi kahne ki baat hai”Vindhya Hospital ke bahar khade hokar apni khali ho chuki jeb me hath daalte hue maine kaha… “waise ek aur kaam tha aapse…”

“ek aur kaam… kaisa kaam ? dekh main kuch galat nahi karungi… samjha na… main us type ki ladki nahi hu”

Amazing update bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-37​

“koyi maar do naa re mujhe… ab nahi saha jaata…”mobile door le jakar gusse me main cheekha, chillaya aur fir turant mobile kaan me lagakar bade pyar se bola…

“Madhu ji, wo Riya ki maa Vindhya hospital me admit hai, yadi unka ward number pata chal jata toh… bahut meharbani hoti aapki…”

“kyuu… kahi tu Riya ko quiz me toh nahi lene wala , Atharva…? Dekh ye sarasar treason hai… main ye allow nahi karungi… tujhe mere naa kahne tak ka wait karna padega… fir hee tu kisi ko apni team me shamil kar sakta hai…”

“kaha tu aur kaha wo kal ki aayi chhokri Riya... hum dono ka affair toh barso purana hai... wo toh main vindhya me tha toh socha ki uski maa ka hal-chal puchhta chalu”

“pakka na.. tu mujhe cheat toh nahi karega naa…”

“teri kasam nahi karunga… yadi kiya toh tu fail ho jaaye, is saal”

“dekh main tujhpar vishwas kar rahi hu.. okay… bhaiya , 20 ki panipuri aur bana do aur teekha aur jyada kar dena… laal mirch ka puraa packet daal do”

“thank you…”jab Madhu ne mujhe Riya ki maa ka approximate lying location bataya toh maine us-se kaha aur fir bina ek pal gawaye call cut karke Riya ki maa se milne chal diya…

Is samay Visiting hour tha, isliye kisi ne mujhe nahi roka… jaha security honi chahiye , waha security toh thi..par naa toh koyi mujhse kuch puchh raha tha aur naa hee kisi ne mujhe kahi par roka… warna normally , ek alag se card banwana padta hai andar jaane ke liye.

Main Riya ki maa ko aaj se pahle kabhi nahi dekha tha, isliye main unhe dekhkar toh nahi pahchan sakta tha + Madhu ne sirf ward number bataya tha , bed no. nahi… isliye ward ke andar aane ke baad main apne dono hatho me chocolate liye… waha lete sabhi patient ko ek-ek karke ghoore jaa raha tha aur aakhir me mujhe waha sabse kinare wale bed ke paas Riya ek stool me baithe hue dikhayi di… wo ekdum shant apne mobile me busy thi aur uski maa wahi bed par aankh band kiye hue aaram kar rahi thi… ya so rahi thi yaa fir.... mar gayi thi... oops... dark kamedy...

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Main unhe disturb nahi karna chahta tha isliye ward se bahar aa gaya aur har 5 minute me darwaje se andar jhak kar dekhta ki unhone apni aankhe kholi ya nahi… aisa maine 5-6 baar.... taqriban aadhe ghante tak lagatar kiya… main har 5 minute me apni gardan medhak ki tarah andar bulka kar dekhta ki Riya ki maa ab bhi so rahi hai ya nahi... unki aankh khuli ya nahi.. mujhe unki body me sirf ek harqat hone ka intzaar tha. is tarah main aadhe ghante tak ward ke bahar khada raha … aur jab Riya ki maa ne aankh kholi toh main lapak kar andar kuda….

“ Step Aside, bitch.... Atharva Dev is cumming.” Meri umra se thodi badi ek laundi Nurse jab mere marg me achanak se aayi toh main bola.. I mean... socha.

“sorry, sister….”us nurse ko saamne dekh jhatke se apne pairo par break maara jiski vazah se mere baal thoda kharab ho gaye jise apne dono hath se sanwarte hue main Riya ki taraf badha, mera matlab Riya ki mom ki taraf…

“Namaste….”unke pairo ke taraf khade hokar apne dono hath jod unka abhivadan kiyaa

“Namaste… beta…. Tummm kaun….? Shakl jaani pahchani lag rahi hai”apne dimag par jor daalte hue unhone Riya ki oor apna chehra kiya…

“mujhe kya malum mom… hoga koyi…”meri taraf ek pal nihar kar Riya chidhte hue sirf itna boli aur apne mobile me fir se busy ho gayi

“Riyaaa…. Bad manners…”

“ok , fine… mom. mere school me padhta hai….”abki pahle se bhi jyada chidhte hue Riya boli…

“ok , fine… mom. mere school me padhtaaaa haiiii....”Riya ki aawaz ki nakal kar use chidhate hue maine kaha jispar Riya toh nahi, par uski mom zaroor muskura di…

“he’s witty…”apne pet ki taraf hath karke Riya ki maa boli

unke itna itna bolte hee main samajh gaya ki mera jaadu meri saas par chal gaya hai kyunki unhone khud mujhe Riya ke bagal me khali pade ek stool par baithne ka ishara kiya… shayad wo mujhme apne hone wale bhaavi damad ki chhavi dekh rahi thi. Dahej-vahej ka baat abhiye kar lu..? yaa fir unke puri tarah se thik hone ka intezaar karu...?

“aur Riya, kaisi chal rahi hai painting tumhari… L-O-L. suna hai, kisi ne kharab kar di tumhari painting”Riya ke baagal me baith kar maine Mrs. Rose ko apna naam aur class bhi bataya.

“painting kisi ladke ne bigad di aaj…? Tabhi Riya ka mann ukhda-ukhda sa hai.... wait... ohhh myyy gosh… tabhi main sochu ki tumhara chehra kahi dekha hai… toh, Riya tumhari painting bana rahi thi aur tumhare sath do ladke aur bhi the”

“arey wo dono toh side character hai... ”

“tumhe pata hai ki Riya ki painting kisne bigadi…?”

“wohh…. Actually... Riya ki painting bigadne wala… Shayad… main … hee… thaa…”bolkar maine apni aankh band kar li aur fir dheere se ek aankh kholi… Riya ki mom puri tarah shocked thi....

mujhe darr tha ki Riya chocolate nahi legi yaa fir yadi le bhi li toh lene ke baad apne pair ke paas rakhi dustbin me fek degi… par aisa hoga... ye mera vaham bhi ho sakta hai… ise check karne ka sirf ek hee raasta tha ki Riya ko chocolate de diya jaye aur fir dekha jaye ki wo kya karti hai… so, maine waisa hee kiya…

“sorry, Riya…”dono chocolate Riya ki taraf badhate hue maine kaha…“Rosie…. Ye tumhare liye … and sorry for yesterday, sorry for today and sorry for tomorrow...”

“Rosie…? Riya se seedhe Rosie… hmmm…” Riya ki mom dheere se boli par itna bhi dheere nahi ki hume sunayi na de…

Mere ummid ke viprit Riya ne turant chocolate le li.. li toh li par usne dustbin me feki bhi nahi.. chalo nahi feki.. toh nahi feki... par mujhe dekh ulta wo muskurayi.... chalo muskurayi toh muskurayi par fir bade pyar se mujhe Thank You….bhi boli ye kya ho raha hai aaj mere sath... Mommy bhi bike ke liye maan gayi, Sanjana ko bhi apni galti ka ahsaas hua, Gupta ji ne bhi bacha diya aur ab Riya alag hee mood me mand-mand muskura rahi hai.... aaj din acha hai, I Love You.. aaj hich bol du kya...? kya pata accept kar le... fir uski middle finger ka naam bhi Atharva hoga aur de bhaka-bhak.. andar-baahar...

“aur mere liye kya laaye ho… Atharva…?”meri hawas ko todte hue Riya ki mom puchhi

“aapke liye…?”main samjha nahi , wo kya kahna chah rahi thi.

“haan.. mere liye…? Patient main hu yaha tohh….. usually, jo log milne aate hai wo patient ke liye kuch leke aate hai, waise ye jaroori nahi hai… par kyunki tum Riya ke liye chocolate leke aaye ho toh… maine socha ki mere liye bhi kuch laaye hoge…”

“achchha haan… “apna sar jhuka-kar daye –baye apni gardan ghumate hue main khud par mann hee mann chillaya ki main itna chutiya kaise ho sakta hu….

“Atharva…. Right...?”

“wo…... kya hai ki ... wo.. main bhool gaya… aapke liye kuch laana.. but wait...” ye bolkar main jaldi se utha aur jaldi-jaldi bahar ki oor chalne laga aur thodi der baad toh daudne bhi laga…. Daudte hue main lift ke paas pahucha par lift ka koyi aata-pata nahi tha ki is waqt lift kaha thi aur kitne der me aayegi. isliye maine seedhiyo ka sahara liya… maine daudte hue seedhiya ko paar kiya aur fir daudte hue hee hospital ke bahar aaya….

Maine socha ki Riya ki maa mere bare me kuch galat soche uske pahle hee sev-santare unko lakar de deta hu… par jab main daudte hue hospital ke baahar pahucha toh mujhe achanak yaad aaya ki mere paas toh ek footi kaudi nahi hai… sab toh maine Riya ke liye chocolate kharidne me gawa diya tha….

“fuck me….”haafte hue main hospital ke gate ke bahar ek jagah baitha ya fir ye kahu ki let gaya… aur lambi-lambi saanse bharne laga…

“sala … ek toh paisa nahi hai, upar se faltu me itna dauda bhi… ab kya sochegi Riya ki maa mere bare me…. Ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai…? Ab kya karu…? Thodi der yahi aaram karta hu aur fir ghar chale jaunga…. Kaash ki Sanjana ki maa bhi isi hospital me admit hoti toh… us-se paise udhar le leta…”

Main kuch der wahi leta raha aur yahi sab sochta raha ki Riya achanak mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi…

“mujhe laga ki tum fruits wagerah lene ke liye waha se itni tezi se bhage ho… par tum toh yaha aaram kar rahe ho…”

Jawab me main kuch nahi bola aur Riya ko dekhte hue apne pant ki dono jeb bahar nikal kar dikha diya ki main kangaal ho chuka hoon aur ab mere paas paani tak peene ke liye paise nahi hai… mere dwara meri kangaali ko bayan kar rahi meri jeb ko dekh Riya Muskura di.

“chalo, mere sath…”

Fantastic update mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-38​

“arey main nahi jaunga… aunty ji sochengi ki kya kangaal aadmi hai…”

“Mom aisa kuch bhi nahi sochne wali aur main tumhe waha nahi le jaa rahi balki saamne paas me Starbeans hai… kabhi hot chocolate taste kiya hai tumne Starbeans ka…?”

“nahi…”maine jhooth bola... par kyun.. main aaj tak suspence me hoon.

“maine bhi nahi… par Madhu bata rahi thi ki try karna chahiye……”

“ok… ( yesssssssss..... Jafar Madarchod)......ok, then... ab jab tumhara itnaa man hai toh... company dene chal dunga sath me”

“Company...? kaun si company doge..?”Riya Muskayi aur main.. main toh pahle hee pagal hua jaa raha tha... kya din beet raha tha mere liye.

Riya mujhse thoda aage chal rahi thi isliye beech-beech me main khushi se hawa me lapak kar apni khushi ka izahar karta… meri khushi ka is samay koyi thikana hee nahi tha… matlab Riya Rose, mujhe khud Starbeans le jaa rahi hai… ispar mujhe yakin hee nahi ho raha tha aur usi kshan maine bhisma pratigya li ki zindagi me chahe jaha rahu, jiske sath bhi rahu, jaisa bhi rahu…. Hot chocolate mera favourite rahega…

“yesssssss….. behenchod…. Yessssssss”Riya ke peechhe –peechhe chalte hue main full taqat se kuda….

“ye kya kar rahe ho…”Riya ne jab peechhe mudkar mujhe aisa karte hue dekh liya toh puchhi

“wo paanv me jhun-jhuni chadh gayi thi toh usi ko kood-kood kar normal kar raha tha…”ghutne sahlaate hue maine jawab diya

“tingling ko aise normal karte hai…?”

“fir kaise karte hai…”

Ye waqt aisa tha ki main apne aap muskuraye jaa raha tha… main apni muskan ko control karne ki bahut koshish karta, par sirf kuch pal ke liye kamyab ho pata fir baad me main automatic hasne lagta ya muskurane lagta… mera khud par control hee nahi tha... mera pura chehra laal ho gaya tha… dil ki dhadkan bina stethoscope ke main mahsoos kar raha tha… usme se jab Riya ne mera hath pakda toh….

“yaha aao… yaha kuch der baitho… fir apne aap tingling chali jayegi…”mera hath pakad kar Riya mujhe hospital ko main raod se jodne wali sadak ke divider ki taraf le jaate hue boli aur us dauran main jabran langdane laga taaki usko lage ki sach me pairo me jhun-jhuni chadh gayi hai...

Riya ne mera jo hath pakda tha, mera wo hath bhi ab kaanpne laga tha…. Matlab mere andar maano excitement ka lava foot gaya ho… matlab is level ki khushi. naa toh mujhse ye khushi sambhale sambhal rahi thi aur na hee mera sharir…

“tumhara hath kyun kaanp raha hai…”

“isme bhi jhun-jhuni chadh gayi lagta hai…”maine situation ko control karte hue kaha…

“nahi… ye tingeling nahi hai. tum kaanp rahe ho… fever hai kya, tumhe…?”Riya ne apna hath pahle mere gale par rakha aur fir mere sar par….

Aur jab usne ye kiya abki meri aankhe apne aap lap-lapane lagi…

“tumhe hua kya hai….. Atharva..?”

“aankho me bhi jhun-jhuni chadh gayi hai... shayad... ya fir khushi ka bukhar kah lo….”

“khushi ka bukhaar...?”apni aankhe chhoti karke apni palko par jor daalte hue Riya meri aankho me dekhni lagi...

“ Jaise khushi ke aansu hote hai naa… waise hee ... same concept. ye khushi ka bukhar hai…”

“mom ne sahi kaha tha… you’re witty… I like it… ab bhi Starbeans jaana chahte ho.. hot chocolate ke liye…?”

“bilkul….”

Jiske baad Hum dono waha se khade hue aur Starbens ki taraf paidal hee chal pade… Starbeans Vindhya Hospital se jyada door bhi nahi tha, yahi kuch 10 minutes ka paidal raasta tha… main tha toh bahut khush aur mujhe khush hona bhi chahiye tha, par fir jaise hee main, Riya ke sath Starbeans ke andar ghusa… meri khushi feeki padne lagi….

“hey Riya…. Hey Bhatti….”main aur Riya Starbeans me ek table par ek-dusare ke saamne baithe hee the ki koyi behan ka laudi chillayi.

“wo Madhu hai kya…”Riya ne hum dono ko aawaz dene wali ladki ki taraf dekhkar puchha

“nahi… wo Madhu nahi hai… Madhu aur us ladki me zameen-aasman ka antar hai… kis angle se wo tumhe Madhu lag rahi hai”

“fir use hum dono ka naam kaise maloom… thik se dekho… wo Madhu hee hai…”

“arey bola na, Madhu nahi hai…”

“Riyaaaaaa….. hiiiiiiiiiiii….”humse door ek kone par table par baithi baithi Madhu ne chillate hue hawa me apna ek hath lahraya… jiske jawab me mera mann kiya ki main bhi is table par khada hokar usko lahrate hue apna lund dikha du aur bheja itna khiska tha ki main dikha bhi deta, yadi Riya Rose waha naa hoti toh....

“idhaaarrrrr aaaooo naaaa.. tum dono….”Madhu fir chillayi aur abki baar pura Starbeans gunj uthaa… waha mauzood sabhi log ab ya toh mujhe aur Riya ko dekh rahe the ya fir Madhu aur uski saheliyo ko ghoor rahe the… burchattiya , saali... puri mehnat par moot diya Madhu ne. ladchatti... gadchatti... burchatti.

“chal… Riya … udhar chal… warna chilla-chilla kar sabke kaan ke parde faad degi ye…”ek baar aur jab Madhu chillayi toh maine hee Riya se kah diya...

“I don’t think that’s a good idea…”

“koyi baat nahi. Shit and shitty people always happen, it’s part of life” aankh maarkar maine Riya se kaha aur fir Riya ke sath jaha Madhu baithi thi hum dono waha gaye…

“tum toh pani-puri kha rahi thi na… itni jaldi yaha kaise..?” waha ek chair par baithte hee bade pyaar se maine Madhu se puchha... table par khade hokar lund hawa me lahrane ka vichar ab bhi mere dimag me tha

“oh hello… mera ghar yaha se sirf 2 kilometer door hai… VIP area me rahte hai humlog… yakin na ho toh Starbeans walo se puchh le… aksar delivery karne jaata hai… tu ruk.. tujhe yakin nahi ho raha na… rukk.. abhi puchhati hu….”Madhu ne waiter ko aawaz dene ke liye jaise hee apna hath upar kiya aur jaise hee apna muh kholne wali thi maine Madhau ka hath pakad kar neeche kar diya…

“arey mujhe yakin hai… ab tu VIP area me nahi rahegi toh aur kaun rahega…”

“okay.. okay… apology accepted…”

“apology accepted…? Maine apologize kiya hee kab aur kis chiz ke liye apologize karu….?”

“toh tujhe yakin nahi hai ki main Vindhayanchal , jo ki ek VIP area hai waha rahti hu… ruk abhi tujhe puchhati hu…”Madhu ne apna hath upar karke abki baar waiter ko aawaz de hee di…

“arey yakin hai mujhe…”

“toh fir apologize kar…”

“kisliye karu pologize… ye toh bata…”

“tujhe yakin nahi hai naa. Ruk abhi puchhwati hu… rukk tu, bhatti… garib samajhta hai naa tu mujhe ... abhi batati hoon. Bahut rich family se belong karti hoon main..”apne aap machis ki tilli ki tarah jalte hue Madhu ne ek baar fir se waiter ko aawaz maari aur abki baar aur tezi ke sath…. “bahut rich hoon main.”

“rich bitch...”

“kuch kaha kya....?”

“kaha naa... sorry kaha. my apologies… I take full responsibility…”

“but you were rude… I don’t feel it”

Jakash update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-39​

“oh my goodness ! pardon me for being so rude… ab khush”

“yes.. mam.. aap hume bula rahi thi..?”Starbeans ki purple shirt aur purple cap pahne hue ek ladka waha humare paas aakar khada ho gaya aur Madhu us-se kuch kahti uske pahle hee main bola pada…

“paanch hot chocolate le aao… bas isi ke liye bulaya tha…”

“ok sir…”

“thank you sir…”

Riya aur main jaha agal-bagal baithe the wahi… Madhu aur apne sakhiyo ke sath humare saamne virajmaan thi… hospital me Riya ke dwara mera hath pakadne ke kaaran kuch der pahle jo lava mere andar foot pada tha… uska asar ab bhi thoda bahut mujhpar ho raha tha, jiske karan main Riya ki taraf thodi-thodi der me dekh kar bematlab hee muskura diya karta aur mujhe aise muskurata dekh wo bhi apne chehre me question mark ka expression liye muskura deti aur aksar kabhi hatho se toh kabhi aankho se ishara karke mere muskurane par sawaliya nishan khada karti… par apun ke andar bahut attitude tha, apun ne ek baar bhi nahi bataya ki apun kyun muskura rela hai. aisa bahut der tak chalta raha aur aage bhi bahut der tak chalta… par….

“toh Atharva , tu finally sunna chahta hai apne us sawal ka jawab , jo tune mujhse aaj school me puchha tha….”Madhu achanak se bol padi.

“kaisa jawaaaab… kaisa sawaaaaal…”meri taraf ekdum se dekh kar Riya puchhi…

Waise galti Riya ki nahi thi… Madhu ne aise lahje me sawal hee puchha tha ki kisi ko bhi bhram ho jaye ki wo … us sawal ki baat kar rahi hai….

“arey kuch nahi, Rosie… wo science quiz me participate karne ke liye is-se puchha tha… kisi ek bio wale ko lena hai na..”

“mujhse toh ek baar bhi nahi puchha… wow…”apne baal peechhe karke apne do-do earring wale kaan dikhate hue Riya boli…

“kyunki Atharva , mujhe like karta hai… isliye… aur Atharva jaanta hai ki meri bio bahut strong hai.. last year 75 me se 73 number the mere. mera aur Atharva ka saalo ka relation hai , kyun Atharva…”

Madhu ke itna bolte hee fir Riya meri taraf chauk kar dekhne lagi aur maine pahle apna sar peeta fir apne sar ko dono hatho se tikakar neeche kar liya

“koyi maar do na be mujhe, please… ab aur nahi saha jaata… ye aksar mere saath hee kyun hota hai…… main hee chutiya hoon, yaa fir meri kismet me C likha hai... ya fir dono...”

Main apna sar jhukaye wahi baitha raha aur fir jab hot chocolate aaya toh use grahan karke formality puri karne ke liye Riya & Co. ko bye bola aur Starbeans se bahar aa gaya…. Waise bhi Madhu ne chhoda hee kya tha ab… Khade lund pe hathoda toh maar hee chuki thi wo… anda-vanda sab fod diya.

“abki baar Rakshabandhan me is se rakhi badhwaunga…… saali , kutti... kamini... harjayi... ladchatt ”

Maine bike me sawar hua aur Madhu ko sharaap dete hue ki lawdi ka jaate samay accident ho jaye aur uski chut kat-kat ke kayi tukdo me vibhajit hokar beech road me gir jaye, jise kutta utha ke khaa jaaye. Starbeans ke andar Madhu ko dekhte hue use shraap dekar Main Sanjay Gandhi Hospital ki taraf chal diya…. Kyunki Sanjana ki maa se bhi milna tha naa, nahi toh yadi Mommy yadi ghar me puchh-pachh leti Sanjana se toh pela jaata main.

Mujhe Sanjana ki maa ko dhoondhane me itna problem nahi hua, kyunki mammi ne already ghar me hee a to z sab explain kar diya tha ki… hospital ke andar kaha se kaise mudna hai… kaha se kaise nahi mudna hai… lift lena hai ki nahi... seedhiyo se kaise aaram se jaana hai, jyada kud-fad nahi karni hai. Sanjana ki maa se milte hee Namaste karna hai aur jo paise wo mujhe de rahi hai us se unke liye sev-santare kharid kar unhe dena hai. lagbhag sabkuch… ek-ek chiz se lekar waha jaane wale raaste ke ek-ek inch tak... sab kuch explain kiya Mommy ne. aur mujhe sab samajh aa bhi gaya.. kabhi-kabhi toh lagta hai, main apni maa se hee puchh loon ki ladki kaise patau... matlab mujhe aisa lagne laga tha ki main ab Hospital ka blueprint taiyar kar sakta hu… mujhe lagbhag har jaroori details maloom thi jaise ki… Sanjay Gandhi me dialysis center kaha hai… dialysis center me kisi se milne ki procedure kya hai etc.etc. lagbhag sabhi detail mujhe maloom thi.

Sanjana ki maa ko hemodialysis treatment diya jaa raha tha, waha pahuchkar maine dekha ki Sanjana ki maa ka blood ek blooad pump ki help se artificial kidney me bheja jata , jaha se wo purify hokar wapas body me ghusta tha… unhone mujhe dekha toh ishare se mujhe apne paas aane ke liye kaha…. Par main waha akela nahi tha… waha Silky Sanjana aur Karan Naik bhi mauzood the… jab Sanjana ki maa ne mujhe ishara kiya toh wo dono peechhe meri taraf palte…

Main dheere-dheere , ahiste-ahiste Sanjana ki maa ki taraf badha aur simultaneously Karan Naik ki taraf bhi badha… jaha se yadi wo chahe toh mujhe uthakar teesari manzil se seedhe neeche fek sakta tha… lekin fir bhi maine ye risk liya aur Sanjana ki maa ki taraf badha… Sanjana ki maa pahle kabhi-kabhar humare ghar ghoomne aaya karti thi, isliye wo mujhe bahut hee achchhi tarah se jaanti thi infact unhone ek baar mujhe mere baapu se pitne se bhi bachaya tha…. isliye wo ahsaan toh chukana hee tha

“Namaste….”apne dono hath jodkar unke hath se jude hemodialysis ki system ki taraf dekh kar maine kaha

Iske baad unhone mujhe apne dusare hath se bagal me rakha ek sev khane ke liye diya, jise maine khane ke bajay hath me rakh liya ye soch kar ki yaha se jab Ved ke yaha jaunga .. tab uske sath khaunga. aur fir se hemodialysis ke pure arrangement ko dekhne laga, jise dekhkar mujhe ajeeb lagne laga… kyun..? pata nahi bas ajeeb laga… matlab kharab laga.. maine Sanjana ki maa ko is haalat me dekhne ki kalpana nahi ki thi. Pipes me se move karte hue unke khoon ko dekh mere khoon ne move karna band kar diya tha.jiska andaza shayad Sanjana ki maa ko bhi ho gaya tha.

“kitna bada ho gaya hai tu, Atrharva... do saal me…”mera dhyan bhatkane ke liye wo boli

“kya…”

“maine kaha, kitna bada ho gaya hai tu… kaise chal rahi hai padhai likhayi…”

“sab thik hee chal raha hai… aap batao…”

“bas dekh hee raha hai…”feeki muskan ke sath unhone jawab diya… “mere peechhe bekar hee pareshan hai, ye log… har ek insaan ki zindagi me ek samay aata hai jab use realize hota hai ki, uska samay aa chuka hai… mujhe ye realize ho chuka hai… kabhi-kabhi dar bhi lagta hai is-se… par ye machine ke jariya jinda rahna , fizool hai kyunki ant me toh Mrityu hee param satya hai, chahe uske liye tum taiyar ho ya na ho…”

Sanjana ki maa ke aisa bolte hee Sanjana ki haalat kharab ho gayi , Sanjana ki maa ki condition abhi bahut sahi thi… mera matlab yadi main unhe dialzer ke arrangement ke bina dekhu toh 1 % bhi nahi bata paunga ki wo bimar bhi hai aur jise dialysis suit kar jata hai toh fir wo saalo zinda bhi rahta hai… isliye unka ye kathan bahut hee wahiyaat tha… Sanjana ro toh nahi rahi thi par rone wali expression jaroor uske chehre par the….

“aise kaise…. Abhi toh aapko Sanjana ki shadi me dance bhi karna hai aur beshak Mrityu param satya hai, par abhi aapko us satya ko janne ki jaroorat nahi hai… abhi zindagi roopi asatya ko hee jaaniye bas aur jo aapko realize hua hai na ki aapka samay aa chuka hai… wo hospital me admit hone wale har ek mariz ko hota hai. mariz ko chhodo yaha unse jo milne aate hai.. unhe bhi yahi realize hota hai. ye sab bakwas baate hai aur kuch nahi…”

Iske baad Main waha jyada der tak nahi ruka aur raat hone ka bahana karke waha se nikal gaya… kyunki sach kahu toh waha rahte hue mujhe bhi dheere-dheere realize hone laga tha ki Mrityu hee param satya hai… isliye maine waha se nikalna hee behtar samjha…. Par main waha se akele nahi nikla… matlab main nikla toh akele hee tha, par thodi der baad mere peechhe-peechhe Karan Naik bhi nikla aur Dialysis center se main abhi bahar nikla hee tha ki usne mujhe peechhe se meri gardan daboch liya….

“really……? Is samay ye sujh raha hai aapko”jab Naik ne mujhe peechhe se pakda toh main bola…

“tu sale bahut dogla insaan hai… tujhe us raat dekhte hee maine andaza laga liya tha….”

“kahna toh nahi chahiye.. par jo jaisa hota hai, use sari duniya waisi hee dikhayi deti hai….”

Jordaar update bhai

 

[Yug Purush]

Nevil singh tabahi macha di bhai aapne toh... Itne notifications thanx and welcome to the goa, singham

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Kya dialogue chipkaya bhai... Mira wala ved ka panch line dialogue mast tha..
Yeh to jafar copy karne laga atharva ka...

Thanx

thanks gyani bhai for another master piece

i will read updates then give review

Will wait for your reviews

वेद के आईडिया के साथ जो अथर्व ने संजना के लिए किया,
वही अब वो जफर रिया के साथ कर रहा, पर वो सिंपल तरीके से भी कह सकता था, पर उसने तो सबके सामने रिया की तारीफ के साथ डोनेशन मांगनी शुरू की...

Koyi koyi log kahte hai ki ladkiya idhar ki baat udhr jarur krti hai toh awashya hee ye dialogue riya tk pahucheg aur koyi koyi log ye bhi kahte hai ki ladkiyo ko tareef kuch jyada hee pasand hai.. Isi ko dhyan me rakhte hue wo donation wali line likhi gayi.. Jo actual me Athrva ne Sanjana ke liye likhi thi deep me jao

Ab pata nahi kyon iss character se nafrat hone lagi h..apne ko...

Nafrat hogi tabhi naa ladayi me maza aayega main kisi ko neutral nahi rahne deta story me... Paksh toh lena hee padega, kisi ek ka

mira ne to sabse jyada paise diye .. lagta hai bahut amir hai mira ..

Gand faad rahis h bhai...

ye dinge haakne se achha kuch karke dikhaye atharva to hi behtar hai uske liye... log bolne ko to kuch bol dete hai par kamyabi ya jeet ushe haasil hoti hai jo bolne se zyada karne pe vishvas rakhe... yaha to Atharva ko ye bhi malum nahi ki riya ki mom phir se admit huyi hai.. wohi Jafar har khabar rakhta hai..

+1.kash aap atharva ki friend hoti toh abhi tak karan naik aur jafar ka game baj chuka hota

Ms. Robinhood hai Mira... Aamiro ka lawda lekar, garibo ko paisa deti hai" Ved bola ...

Ye dialogue itna badhiya tha kya..?? Main to aise last second me convo. Badhane ke liye add kr diya tha.

Babu moshay kya gajab likhte ho
Dhoti ko faad ke rumaal karte ho
Do lafjo ka pyar
Lena hai ya dena hai
Hona vahi jo hona hai

Laajwaab katha ki bahut bahut mubarkbaad dost

Welcome my friend

i think jis trah se story ne mod liya hai na mtlb sanjana ka artharva ki life se door ho jana aur ranjan jo chupa rha artharva se sanjana ke baare me yeh ek hi trf ishara krta hai ranjan se set ho jati h sanjana aur Riya jafar ke sath shayed pta nhi

Yadi aisa hua toh tab toh bahut sad ending hogi... Jiske liye main badnaam hu

ab ye kya hai.... khud Arman ki jikar karke bol rahe ki details mein revo mat do un dono stories ki...

Main kr sakta hu.. Mere liye sab maaf h xf me jaise bachpan me khel me kisi kisi player ka doodh bhat rahta tha.. Waisich mere liye hai D

According to me sabka apna tarika hota hai story review karne ka, aap kya samjh rahe ho kya soch rahe ho uspar nirbhar karta hai or jab aap review kar rahe ho to isme itna sochna kya hai ya to pasand aayega nahi to nahi aayega, simple...

Noob mod.. Serious mod ban gaya bach ke rahna padega ab

8th Semester अभी तक पढ़ नहीं पाया हूं इसलिए पहले वाला पैराग्राफ कुछ कंफ्यूज कर रहा है ।
लेकिन जो बातें समझ में आ रही है उस के मुताबिक ये इंजीनियरिंग के लास्ट सेमेस्टर की बात है जब अरमान होस्टल छोड़ कर हमेशा के लिए जा रहा था ।
लेकिन क्या उस वक्त अथर्व और वेद इंजीनियरिंग कॉलेज ज्वाइन कर लिए थे ?
क्या वो दोनों अरमान से जुनियर थे ?

Intezaar rahega aapke us kahani ke review ka
Aur haan wo dono Arman ke junior the... School me bhi aur college me bhi.. Par us story me inka jikra nahi hoga... Sirf 8th semester ke 2nd part me ek jagah thoda sa role hai inka... Bas

aur ye ved mooh se pee peep karke horn baja raha hai ..
aur ye bhed ko bhediya bol diya to laga ye kaha se travel kar rahe hai jo bhediyo ke jhund ko dekh liya ..

Wo actually type ho gaya tha mujhse galti me.. Fir laga galti ko sudharne ki kya jaroorat.. Comedy scene bana do...

बुल्ला सर की क्लास में बातचीत... वैसे किस बेंच पर बैठे हैं ये दोनों.. साथ क्यों नही बैठे ? पीछे क्यों बैठा है वेद

Kabhi kabhi sath me nahi baithte... Kyunki peechhe ghumkar baat karne me jyada maza aata hai

Yug Purush saheb hum apke kayal ho gye
I do not have a word It will be less than what you would say for your praise.
I never thought that this kind of story story on XForum would be found to read.
For this I would like to thank Naina ji who told me about this story.

Thanx bro... And thanx Naina
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Pranam veda apki es tuch manav Kingfisher ka sadar pranam hum apke darshan karke ke dhanya ho gye prabhu apme panchtantra ...
kumashambhav ... mahabhasya mrachkatikam ... sishupalvadham ritusanhar.... vikramakdev charitram ..
Ko milakar jitna gyan sangrahit hota

Abhi kya ye to sirf ek doha tha.. Abhi toh aage.. Sexy gaane bhi milenge aur sexy मुहावरे bhi aise hee thodi usne khud ko sexysaahityakar ki upadhi di hai

pyaar kurbani mangtaa h

Khair iss update me apne ko sabse accha seen ved ka choclate utha kar kha janna laga ...aur baad me besarmi too dekho apne choclate ke jugaad ke liye riya ke naam ki goli deenaa ..waahh..Gazab

परिवारों से मिलना , स्कूल कालेज के प्राचार्य और दोस्तों से मिलना , उन गलियों और सड़कों से गुजरना जिन पर गुजरे हुए सालों बीत गए हों , पड़ोसियों से मिलना , भुली बिसरी यादों को याद करना सब कुछ , सब कुछ इमोशनल कर देता है ।

Aur fir kisi gupchup waale thele par us ladki ka achanak dikh jaana....

Tomorrow is not promised us so let us take today and make the most of it.
बिति बातों को याद करके क्यों रोना ! और आने वाला कल क्या ले कर आएगा , कौन जानता है ! इसलिए क्यों न हम वर्तमान को ही खूबसूरत बनाएं ।

Zindagi jeene ka meri nazar me ye best tarika hai... Par ise apnata koyi nahi.. Atleast is kahani ke kuch kirdar isi raah par chal rahe hai.. Jaise atharva, ved, Ranjan.

Ese kehte hai ek acha Sacha dost khud ki to marva li dusre ko bhi puch rha hai teri bhi ache se mri na

Itna bada to mera udate nahi rahta.. Jitna bada review dete ho..
Thanx a lot man

Hhaaa ab ye avengers Endgame ki tarah time travel bhi karega par vapas present me aa payega ya nhi

Aage time travel, teleportation, samay rokna sab kuch concept hai.. Aap aahe to padho

chutiyapanti es rag rag me basi hai jo hamesha ubal mar kar bahar ko ati hai or fir lagte hai eske loude jo lagte aa rhe hai jiska ye hakdar bhi hai par hai dil ka Sacha ...kya mene shi kha ....ye k

Bilkul sahi kaha bidu...

Khair.... chalo finally intezaar khatam... Kuch waqt mein dono pahunchne hi wale hai apne hometown...
ab aaye maza kuch... ab milenge un bhooli bichhidi yaadon se

Bhooli bichhadi yaado se milne se pahle.. Bhoolna aur bichhadna bhi toh padega...

are atharva aur guru veda aa rahe hai.. are koi to unki swagat ke liye prabandh karo
gupta ji, riya rose, madhu, mini & one & only sanjana are kaha gaye ye sab

10 saal me kitni badal gayi hongi ye sab.. Present time me 28 age hai.. Story 18ve saal ki

Bhedo ko raste se bhagane ke liye muh se horn ki awaaze nikalna.... ye epic tha
wah re guru veda... aur aapke

thanx

agar sanjana ushe pyaar karti hai to wo khud ba khud uske paas chali aayegi...

Ye sirf kahawat hai mam, aas paas nazar ghumao.. Real me aisa nahi hota

r ved ke liye mujhe bahut dukh hai ... koi larki set ho nhi rhi... .kahi aisa na ho ki kismat ki lakir hath par se hatkar kahi aur na Chala Jaye..kuchh kijiye sir...

Ved Sir ka lvl alag hai... Aisi ladkiya unke layak nahi.. Alag se special ladki launga ved sir ke liye

Sanjana ab Atharva ki hone wali bhabhi ho sakti h..

Ranjan & Sanjana

मेरा मानना है कि वो इस फोरम के नम्बर वन राइटर है ।

Chaliye.. A Loner likhne ka kuch toh fayda hua

There is only hope in disappoint. Destination is close but thinking about what will happen there my mind wanders.

Wander..?? Ur mind will be lost after few updates...

Never Leak Any Information about Future
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No More Chit Chat Hamko ban kardenge MOD logis

Jab tumhare paas shri gyan roopi brahmastra (admin) hai toh in chhote mote agni astra, varun astra (mods & sumo) se kya darna...

BTW NO CHIT CHAT thats is the second thing i hate in story section. Incest is still no 1 in the list.

Padkar review to sab dete hai agar apme himmat hai to bina pade review do to mane

Dum h baat me

Update - 29

Bhai only laugh for this update.. ise jada kuch nahi tha... mujhe laga tha sirf ved hi le sakta hai lekin mira ne jo li hai maa kasam maza aa gaya aur apne uspar apni writing se chaar chand laga diye, atharva ka har baat par taunt dena.. matalb ki sachi dosti aur timing ka pehlu ho aap... sahi mein mira ne dho dala pura ka pura uppr se lekar niche ved ke dick tak Uske baad bulla sir ki wapsi aur atharva ka bachna... matlab itni jaldi.. chitti the robot ka concept apne hi to nahi diya tha, maar kar fir wapis, vo kursi ka hilne wala scene matlab aise anokhe anokhe avtar aap hi laa sakte ho bhai.. its is awesome... mazaa gaya sahi mein yaar... aap ki kahani padte waqt aisa lagta hai jeevan hai to yahi hai... reality se dur aur fir bhi uske pass..

Update - 30

Are bhaibhai bhai bhai.... Hahahaa... Otorhinoalaryngologist Ye kahan se aya pehle to ye batao... meaning to hoga par mene aisa word nahi suna aise word sirf medicial mein hote hain jahan tak meri samajh hai... Bhai adha update gazab hasne wala tha lekin baad mein VED sir aye... sahi mein jo gyan bantta hai unhone gazab..... ise kehte hain brain with dick... Maza aa gaya bhai.. full to comedy tha.. lekin sanjana ka naam lene par kahani ulti na padh jaye..ho sakta hai sanjana ko acha na lage... na jane kaise... kahan se kahan tak soch lete ho aap... mein to riya rose ke reaction ka wait kar raha tha par vo apne skip maar dia aur collection ab 5000 se jada ka hone wala hai.. dekhte hain kya hoga aaagee.....



Gurudev Bhai... yar tussi sahi mein great ho... kahe ved ne hai par vichar to legendary insan ke hai

Update - 31

Absolute legendary bhai... Kahani ab ek alag hi level par aa chuki hai... GYANI BHAI at its best... sach mein bhai.. Yahan se jo apne kahani ke twist aur turn planing dalni chalu ki hai na... isne kahani ko, pichle sare update padna safal ho raha hai kyun ki nayi jaan si daal di .... kahani mein reality ke sath maze dogune ho chuke hai ab. Bahut hi sahi ... matlab umda... ved bhale hi hans raha ho lekin sahi udai ladki ne... aur apna kaam karke nikal gayi.... maza aa gaya bhai Guptaji ke liye jo pilan banaya hai ved ne akhir dosti ki chaap chhod raha hai...

Donation ke naam par to log lakhon luta dete hain... ye trick sabse satik aurpurana hai.... naam nahi le sakta warna politcal abuse ka bomb fod denge humpar.. aap samajh hi jao.. khair bhai apratim.. mazedar... bemisaal... dhaamalll... mazaaaa aa gaya....

Update - 32

Plan... Plan... Plan...Matlab pitne se bachne ke liye rambaad ilaz.. Guptaji ke pas apne shastra hai to Atharva ke pas Veshastra hai... Mazedar plan tha bhai, par mujhe nhi malum ki result kya hoga, hona to sahi chahie lekin ye apki kahani hai to mein nahi keh sakta ki result actually mein perfect hoga ya nahi..



Mene daru hi socha tha bhai.... sanskari bacha hun mein

Mujhe laga tha pehle sanjana ki bari ayegi lekin ayi riya... aur fir apne ek alag hi tone set kiya, matlab pehli baar mein kisi kahani ki love story itni different pad raha hun isliye bhai hats off to ur soch... matlab ye sochna hi apne aap mein bahut badi bat hai likhne ke baad to aap use aur chaar chand laga dete ho.. Matlab it was too great.. and unique as well.. Atharva ka girna.. fir riya ki painting kharab hona aur fir uski mayusi.. sab kuch... bhai sach mein har line aisi thi jaise lag raha tha ki banda kya sochta hai yaar.. maza dila deta hai... Kahani ab vakai apne har piche update ko piche chhod kar alag hi tone set karti jaa rahi hai.. Time to time sath nahi chal paa raha lekin bahut jaldi aa jaunga bhai... padne baithta hu to uthne ka dil nahi karta untill unless koi majburi aa jaye... Bhai tussi awesome ho....

Update - 33

Are bhai kahan le jaa rahe ho kahani ko? Isme bhi confuse kar-ke maar dalne ka irada hai kya? Abhi tak sab sahi chal raha tha lekin end mein atte atte confusa gaya itna jda coincidence? Kya gadbad ghotala kar rahe ho... abhi tak kahani padte hue dimag shant tha lekin iske baad dimag uthalfutal ho gaya hai... Maa kasam starting ka ATHARVA wala dard apun ko ARMAAN mafik laga par end mein atte atte side role wali ladki ne to dimag palti ka rdiya jis tarah atharva ka hua usi tarah kuch kuch mera bhi ho gaya bhai.. kya hai ye.. kya karna chahte ho aap...

Mene pichle kuch reply mein kaha tha ki hero hero hai nahi.. side role milne wala hai use, uspar apne is update mein bhi dala... kuch na kuch to jhol hai re baba bhai aap bahut jada jhol karne wale ho... Ye update shayad kahani ka turning point ho sakta hai kyun ki VARUN ka nam pehle bhi aya mene uspar kuch nahi kaha lekin ab dubara aya aur VARUN = ARUN ye dimagi ghotala ATMAKAMI mein padh chuka hun... isliye aur jada sar chakra raha hai... bhai kuch to jhol hai ATMAKAMI ka end abhi tak mere jehen mein hai kyun ki vo kahani jab bhi yaad karta hu muh se bas yahi nikalta hai wah bhai.. matlab wah.. kaise koi banda itna acha soch kar use itni perfectly execute kar sakta hai... kahin is baar bhi aisa to nahi?

Update - 34

Bhai... Mjhe laga tha ek pal ke liye gaya jaffer, maara ye chutiya... aur apne suspense mein daal diya ki ankhein khule dekh raha hai.. pata nahi bhai kya likh rahe ho aur aap heart mein hamare jhatke diye jaa rahe ho.. itne to palang par nahi dete honge launde laundiyu ko jitna aap hamare dil mein de rahe ho
Maza aa gaya, pehle fight aur fir guptaji ka syllabus khatam karne ka andazz... same aisi hi ek teacher hua karti thi hamari life mein par mujhe yaad nahi ki vo college tha ya fir school lekin usne bhi pura ka pura syllabus asie hi udaya tha... pr is update ki shuruwat jitni jandar hui thi use kahin jada jandar end tha update ka... matlab APne sabhi ke dimag ke parkache uda diye, ved atharva ke sath hum sabhi padne walon ke... guptaji ko maan gaya mein aaj.. he is full dude bhai.. gupta ji ko salaam...



Bhai kamal hi kar diya ye to... Matlab guptaji jaisa talented nahi dekha mene... ab ye launda hoshiyari mein jo pilega vo alag... apratim bhai..... masterclass bande ho aap.. next time koi aur word dhundna padega apke liye ....

Update - 35

Sweeet.... is the only word after reading this update bhai. Madhu wala scene funny tha aur jo side launde the vo jada bol gaye par ye side role the isliye mein inko avoid karta hun par jis chiz ne mere chehre par muskan layi vo akhri ka scene tha. Sanjana wala... matlab bhai dil dhak-dhak kar diya apne i don't know how.. kaise aap manage karte ho itna behtarin soch pana it was beatutiful bhai.... Atharva looks alike hi ai armaan ka... lekin thoda sa difference hai armaan was more agressive baki atharva is not lekin dono hi apne dil ki baat na batate na batana chahte... Sanjana was about to kiss and atharva stopped her... Tabhi dumb kaha... matlab ise pyara scene nahi ho sakta ... aap har baar itne ache se kuch unique tarika kahan se le atte ho... Sach kahun bhai agar apki kahani ek reality hoti hai jisme mein jee raha hota to sach mein kabhi marne ka dil nahi karta.... It is the best feeling when i thought of your world... Awesome... King of Virtual-Actual-Reality

Update - 36

Ye madhu behen kyun bolti hai re itna tu... Bhai kahan se utha laye ho ise? Itna bolne wali ladkiyan hoti hai bilkul hoti hai lekin mere se kabhi nahi takrai acha hua nahi takrai varna main to galiya bhar deta abhi tak ise.. man hi man chehre par nahi.. warna bur man jati hai ladkiyan bahut jald. Aur shikayat bahut karti hai.. pata nahi kya chul rehti hai inhe... Kher bhai update mein mere ko maa wala masti dekh kar bada maza aya, bachpan yaad aa gaya... mein bhi aise hi karta tha aur dant khata tha... Bhai gazab sama bandh diya hai apne.. Ladka riya ke piche aur ladke ke piche sanjana bas samajh nhi paa raha ki vo jagfar ke sath kyun hai... haye ye ladke kab samjhenge Bhai gazab likh rahe ho.... mazaa aaa gaya... ab agla jaa rela hun padne...

Update - 37

Bhai..... Ek hi dil mera ... kitni baar jetoge re baba... 36 baar to is kahani mein hi jeet chuke hoo baki alag... ab ye 37 va.... Matlab maza aa gaya bhai... Pehle jis baat ne mera dil jeeta vo tha Madhu ka atharva ko ward no batana.. matlab yaar itna uniquely aap kaise soch kar kaam kar dete ho.. itni chalu ladki.. matlab agar mujhe aise koi bolta to mein yahi manta ki vo gol gappe le rahi hai aur ap bhi aise hi likh dete ho ki bande ko hint bhi na lage ki aisa kuch hoga... matlab jordar ... Uske baad ka scene to matlab... maza hi aa gaya... choclate wala scene, riya ki mom wala scene ek number ka tha bhai... matlab maza aa gaya.. mere pas jada words nahi bach hain likhne ko lekin ... is update jo apka screenplay tha ... vo ek dum top notch.. jaise akhri mein atharva bhag gaya ek dum se... matlab vo to mindblowing tha bhai yahi apka swag hai aur ye chizen apke alawa koi soch kar likh nahi sakta jo aap kar lete ho.. Mujhe riya ke recation par tajub nahi hua kyun ki mujhe lag raha tha vo maan jayegi yun ki ladkiyu ko yahi chahie bas... Rahi baat end ki to bhai hansa tni zor se ki maa bhi kehti meri tjhe kya ho gaya be pagal ho gaya hai kya Bhai mazaa aa gayaa..... u are the great writer bhai

Update - 38

Bhai nag hai yar ye bandi... kasam se.. lekin maa kasam hansi nah ruk rahi.. kaun se jungle se laye ho ise Par bhai maa kasam vo riya aur atharva wala scene is like a dream.. mujhe laga kahin ye sapna nikla to hero gaya lekin apne sahi kaha tha is baar kahani alag hai kyun ki atharva armaan se alag hai, isliye ab mein kahani mein ye atkale nahi lagaunga kyun ki iske sath kuch kuch ache ki umeed hai vaise pata hai ki kuch hona nahi hai par fir bhi.. acha lag rela hai padhte hue.. Uppar se jo realistic writing ka jadu bikharte ho aap vo apne aap mein ek style hai. Atharva ka reaction hum jase laundon ke jaise hi tha bilkul same... kuch bhi bdha chada kar nahi bilkul sateek perfect execution tha.. jhun-jhuni hona.. aur hath pakadne par to bilkul dil dhak dhak ho jana it was too perfect.. Mujhe laga tha kuch baat cheet hogi par dono chup jada rahenge lekin nahi.. yahan to apne kuch aur lana tha.. ab kahin kuch yahan ho na jaye ki kahin atharva ki sari pillaning befil ho jaye... Bhai apratim.... execution.. apratim kahani...

Update - 39

Mixx feel update tha... teen bhag mein ... pehla bhag madhu ne jo le li bhai... ye side role ne to Atharva ko arthi par laitane jaisa kaam kar diya, do minute aur rukta to na jane kya hota... but most importantly jo mujhe is update mein rochak laga vo tha riya ka vo expression tha jab usne kaha kya.. kaha.. tha... aisa.. matlab is expression ke baad har ladke ko dead sure ho jana chahie ki ladki ko jealousy hai aur jahan jealousy hoti hai wahan kuch na kuch hota hai.. uske baad bio wale par na puchne ke piche jo chupa gussa thaa ur ant mein atte atte madhu ne jo pyar dikhaya uske baad to khel khatam... aap ek tune ke sath likhte ho jo har line by line judta chala jata hai.... Aur agar mein is update ke higlight chunun to do chaar the..

Pehla madhu ko jo apne gali di hai na bhai... matlab salam hai... kisi din galiyun ka lesson dena jarur... kaam ayega.... chut bikhar kar tukdon mein bikhar jaye... Kabhi kabhi armaan jaisi jhalak launde mein aa hi jati hai...

Then uske baad maa par choti si tipadi di aur ye hakikat hai agar maa ko kuch pata ho vaise to use sab pata hota hai kaise ye aaj tak samajh nahi aya to vo apna gyan de hi deti hai aur bar bar deti rehti hai... Par badia laga aur bhai sanjana ki maa ki jo halat dikhai apne.. us reality ko hum feel kar sakte hain.. Mrityu ki antim sach hai.. bilkul sahi baat hai... That was a touching part... aap kahani ko itni barriki aur behtarin tarike se likh rahe ho ki jahan apne jada pyar bhi nahi dikhaya aur fir bhi itne feeling de rahe ho kahani mein ki lalo chapo wali love story ki jarurt hi nahi padh rahi...

Third phase end.. do hi line thi usme lekin jis baat se atharva ne end kiya... vo ek number ka dialog diya bhai.. maza aa gayaa....

Update - 40

Hot choclate.... Tabse mein soch raha tha ki is chapter ka ant kaisa hoga.. Kya chapter ka naam riya walle scene par tha laga tha wahin hoga.. lekin is update ne meri vo confusion dur kar di.. aur ek chiz jo mein kehna chahunga vo ye hai ki Gyani bhai.. aap sun sun kar bore ho gaye hoge lekin mein keh keh kar nahi hua... Aap kahani nahi bana rahe ho.. aap ek feeling de rahe ho humlogon ko aur ye dikha rahe ho ki aap jo sochte ho wahan tak hum kyun nahi soch paate.. Hot choclate is the most common chapter name you have given to any chapter in ur story.. but uske piche jo ek beautiful kahani apne likhi hai na uski feeling bilkul alag hai...

Last time mujhe sanjana par gussa aya ki usne aisa kyun kaha lekin ab laga ki ladki ke man mein kya hai... Atharva is not similar to armaan but he is shit as armaan in love.. Aap kahani mein vo meaning dete ho jo shayad apke har chapter/parts ko perfectly define karta hai.. ki apne ispar likhna chaha... ye samjhana cha aur actually mein wahi likha aur wahi samjha gaya... Bahut muskil hota hai ki jo writer samjhana cha raha ho vo samajh aa jaye.. wo feeling understand karna hi mushkil hota hai isliye kehte hain ki samjhane wale ki galti hoti hai, samjhne wale ki nahi aur apke case mein aap vo kami kabhi chhodte hi nahi...

It is the best end of this chapter aur mein ise jada kuch keh nahi paa raha hu... Apne jis andaaaz mein likha hai.. jo jahan hona chahie apne uska roop badal kar ek alag aur behtar andar de diya jo ki apne aap mein hi bemissaal hai... Mein apki har kahani ko yaad rakhta aya hun.. aur ye kahani mjhe hamesha isliye yaad rahegi kyun ki is kahani mein ek aisi love story hai.. jo sab kuch theek hone ke baad bhi adhuri hai.. I don''t know or can't predict the end but ... ye kahani bhi ab ek jagah le legi life mein... yakeen mano aap.. Mein apne future mein agar bache hue mere to apki 8th semester se lekar Atamkami aur 3 girls of my life jarur padwaunga... Absolutely... amazing bhai...

Update - 41

Garib gang se mujhe laga tha ki kuch ladai hone wali hai.. par asal mein ladai to competition ki nikli jo ki kahani ka ek hot topic ban baitha hai... acha hai school mein aise competition dekhna aur padne mein bada maza ata hai aur apko bolne ki jarurat nahi hai ki aapne use likhna kaise hai... gaaand faad har bar ki tarah Pehle mujhe laga tha ki competition skip karoge aap lekin ab to aisa hype bana diya na bhai apne... ab mujhe pura competition padne ko mile mein to bas yahi chahta hun... Maza aya jis tarah apne shot-cut mein sab samjha diya aur bio wallon ka kissa sunaya vo itna uchal rahe hain bol do bina physics ke bio nahi ho sakti to itna uchale na... kyun ki agar physics nahi hoti to gravity ka pata nahi chalta aur gravity ka pata nahi hota to bio walle karname kaise hote... friction ke bare mein kahan se malum hota Khair principal aur school staff bas izzat ke piche mare rehte hain ye katai sach baat hai... har schul student ke sath hota tha mere sath bhi ho chuka hai..ye nahi kar sakata ise mat lo fir jhantein jala di thi mene sabki Abhi to ranjan pilayega ya nahi pata nahi lekin jo excitment mein lakar apne kahani ko roka is update mein katai.. jo roz padh rahe honge unse intezar kaise hua hoga pata nahi.. mujhse to hota nahi bhai... ultimate bemisaal har baar ki tarah...

Update - 42

Bhai yahan to apne khel hi badal dala...pehle do sawal ka jawab na dene par main samajh gaya ki yahi hona tha lekin baad ke do sawalon ka jawab dene par hila dala re ranjan ne.. don't judge the book by its cover.. ye dialog apne adhe update mein kya satik baithaya hai... Ye teacher logon ko guru kaha jata tha ek waqt par fir ye sab badal gaye.. aaj kal adhe se jada ka yahi haal hai, kuch to ache hote hain hamare tym bhi the par ye bachon ke chattu aur favorite banane walle kaise hote hain apne uch koti ka varnan dete hue hume ye samjha diya... Matlab itna reality de dalte ho aap kahani mein ki sala lagta hi nahi mein kahin padh raha hun aisa lag raha hai mein sala isi skul mein padh raha hun aur meri knowledge mein hi hai ye sb... Apratim se bhi uppar bhai... Bio wali teacher bahut chalu hai.. jaffar kuch pakka deta hai inhe ye salle uske piche pagal hai... aur bhai bilkul na rkhna mini ko aisa attitude lekar zindagi mein itni badi thokar khayegi na ye... Bhai bada hi interesting update tha.... atharva kya kehne wala hai ye apne is update ke akhri mein chhod diya.. par har line ke baad aisa lag rah tha ki sala update nahi likh rahe ho aap.. ek incident likh rahe ho vo bhi ek dum real life se juda.. maza hi aa gaya is update ko padne ke baad... ye wala chapter mujhe lag raha hai aisa hi hai.... bhai.. hatts off to your writing and again kya soch soch kar likhte ho aap... gazab...

Update - 43

Kisi mahan vyakti ne kaha hai ki abhmaan sabse bada hota hai...aur apne ek dum sahi tarah se is rambanndh ka istemal karte hue saxena ji ke dimag mein goal kar diya Lekin mein bazooka ka intezar kar raha tha par vo aya hi nahi... uske pehle mini aa gayi aur jaise apne may i come in ka vishleshad diya na bhai sahi mein hanste hanste baithe baithe lait gaya mein... ahahahaha....



Bhai... gazab... gazab.... Ye best vishleshad tha andar ki permission ko dikhane ka...

Fir uske baad jaffar to side role ka gunda hai.. vo mere ko ek dum third class villian lag raha tha par jab aaj usne atharva ko samjhaya use proof ho gaya... Matlab aapne ye sabit kara hi diya.. ladka indirectly dhamki de rela hai hero ko par bhool gaya hi vo hero nahi hai fir bhi abhi hero hi hai.. to baja dega... Bhai gazab aap kahani ko itne amazing tarike se modte ho idhar se udhar.. matlab har baar excitment si bani rhti hai ki ab kya hoga.. ab kya hoga.. yar ye apki writing hi hai.. jo aisa kar sakti hai... kamal ho bhai.. bemisaal...

Update - 44

Ye school walli intensitty.... aur ladkiun ko lekar gunda-gardi.. ladka ladki ki possivness.. ye sala...drama rehta hai skul mein.. apunich baki side role ki tarah spectator ban kar rehta tha apne tym par lekin bhai apne intensity full on set kar rakhi hai.. ye to mein samajh gaya tha ki vo atharva ke pas lakar hi sanjana ko khada karega par apne intensity aisi banai ki kya ho raha hai ye nahi lag raha.. jaffar chipkata to nahi chanta sanjana ko varna pakkka ladki hath se jati aur vo launda jab tk lega nahi tb tak raipta dega nahi

Par kuch highlights hai is update ke jispar tavzo dena chahunga



Agar koi mujhe aise maths sikhata to maa kasam... sikh hi jata... Bahut hi umda... line thi bhai



Are bhai bhai bhai maa kasam.... hansa hansa kar ye admi kisi din maar dalega mujh jaise halke dil walle insan ko

Bhai dialouge bazzi mein apka koi jawab nahi aur na hi apke aage koi hai aur na aapke piche.. aap itni aage ho ki sala line mein lagne wala abhi tak line wali jagah mein pahuncha hi nahi hai... Always be a legend sir...

Update - 45

Gyani bhai.... Outstanding... Marvellous.. Standing Ovation... for this story.... and specially for this update.. Ye update abhi tak ka ki kahani ka sabse tod update tha.. bhai.. kya nahi tha isme? Sab kuch... chutiape se lekar sanjana ki bevkufi se lekar uski samjhdari sab kuch ek hi set.. mein all done... Bhai mein apki jitni tarif karun utni shayad kam padh jaye... Bhai... Mindblow kar diya apne.. sahi mein.. Kahan se shuru karu aur kahan par khatam karun kuch samajh nahi aaa raha... Jahan sanjana ko ek jhakte mein bevkud dikhaya ki vo gali kha kar bhi jafar ke piche thi jo ladkiyan aksar karti hai aur dusri uski samjhdari jo vo atharva ka plan samajh gayi thi.. matlab sab kuch aisa tha mano pre-planned ho aur fir baad mein kiya dhakama... Mira wala... usne to bhai parkache uda diye dimag ke.. Maths ki goti gottte tod kar honi thi is baat par aisa laga jaise sala ye kya hua ? aisa khatarnak twist mrela apne bhai.. kasam... se Atmkami ke twist ki yaad aa gayi.. sala har time ek banda itne alag style se kaise twist de dala hai aur vo bhi baton baton mein.. na hi koi planning na koi plotting... Bas action... ek jhatke mein.. kaam tamam....

Atharva ne jo planning ki thi vo sirf wahi janta tha aur jis andaz mein apne likha na bhai that shows you are the DECEPTION KING... EK taraf atharva ko pareshan dikhaya ye lage ki ye sab bas flow ka hissa hai lekin baad mein hum sab ko deception ke andhere mein fenk kar gate band kar diya aur khud lage aap nachne... :dance: Bhai ... it was absolute ... world class writing....

Chapter ka naam the garib gang.. start aisi hui ki competiion par hogi aur mei wahi umeed lagaye baitha tha... lekin apne to mere level ko aise toda jise akal ek baar fir ayi ki aapke level tak to soch nahi sakte... trio ka matlab ye climax scene tha jise khud Atharva ne banaya aur ved, ranjan ko involve kar liya, aisa master minded bande ko ved aur ranjan ke idea ki kya jarurat? Kya vo un dono ke sath bhi to deception deception nahi khel raha.... Bhai sach mein is logic ko batane ke liye mere pas shabad kam padh jaye... lekin aapki is kahani mein jhatke kam nahi padh rahe...

Gyani bhai so far the best DECEPTION of this story.. first time apne is kahani mein decieve kiya hai is tarah se hume aur ye akhri nahi hai mujhe malum hai.... Thank you so much for this awesome writing guruji...

Update - 46

Are bhai... bhai.. bhai... bhai.. bhai... isee aage kya bolna hai kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha.. Apki narration bhai top notch hai yaar... sahi mein.. matlab ek line padte hue dusri line mein kya ho jaye yahi chiz koi anuman nahi laga sakta.. Is update mein itne highlight the ki ek ek ko quote bhi nahi kar sakta...

Sabse pehle to vo ganna bhai maan gaye apko.. what a remix you have given to the amazing song.... ek engineeer hi aisa kar sakta hai.. Itna badiya apne tune ke sath lyrics banaya tha na bhai sahi mein mera dil kar raha tha apko khade hokar salute karun... par kiya nahi

Uske baad Ved ki ek aur sad story lekin vo sad nahi thi balki aisa likha na apne sahi mein maza aa gaya... sanajana aur riya ki entry par atharva ka palatna ki vo dukhi hai aur uske baad jab use malum hua ki painting ki baat hai to usne fir ved ko sach bhi bata dia ye choti choti chiz aap hi soch kar likhte ho bas... mene kahin pada hi nahi aisa aur na hi socha hai.. It was marvellous bhai.. matlab aap aisi stories par apne badshaahat hassil kar rakhi hai... maza aa gaya aur end mein jo fansaya aur bich mein jo time travel likh kar sirf ek baat kahi vo to main highlight tha update ka.. ise badia aur behtarin kuch nahi ho sakta aur na hi hoga jo mein ab padh raha hun aisa har baar kehta hun aur ap har baar kuch le atte ho Ab kya karu.. jo padta hu sala lagta hai ise acha kya hoga aap use beat kar dete ho kya kre banda fir kahan jakar sochee...

Awesome se bhi uppar tha bhai... maza aa gayaa....

Update - 47

Ab mein thak gaya hun bhai ek hi baat keh keh kar.. kahan se laun nayi baat :banghead2: Bhai matalab itna satik kaise likh sakteho? Starting se lekar end tak ek dum satik kahin kuch jada nahi kahin kuch kam nahi koi altu faltu ka roz chapata nahi bas satik ek dum sidhi baat aur kya dhoya hai atharva ko...maza aa gaya bhale hi vo ved ki taraf se ho ya fir sanjana ki taraf se... Itna sahi apne ved ki taraf se dialouge dilwaya hai ki pure update ka meaning de diya ki ved ne kyun sath nahi dia... Vo atharva se chahta tha ki choose kare jo ki usne kiya... Ye baat to mujhe pehle se hi malum hai ki atharva chutiya hai aur usne sanjana ke hint nahi samjhe islye vo jafar ke pass gayi aur abhi tak atharva nahi samajh paya khair uski galti nahi us tym koi nahi samjhta until unless ladki khud se na bole aur ladki khud se kaha bolti hai ye to fact hai

Gyani bhai it was purely a gold of a update... matlab maza aa gaya.. mere pas samay kam hai lekin ruka nahi jaa raha aur yahan tak padh baitha kyun ki ek ke baad ek aise update aa rahe hain jo chhodne ka man nahi kar rah.... na jane kaise... kaise real time par log wait kr gaye sala mujhse to hota hi nahi... thodi khushi bhi hai is baat ki ek sath padne ko mil raha hai Par bhai... sach mein aapne to kamal hi kar diya is kahani mein... 8 semester ke baad agar skul/college life ke uppar koi kahani likhi gayi ya yaad rakhi jayegi to wo yahi hogi.. kyun ki iske aas pass bhi is genre mein koi kahani nahi hai ... a legend is writing legendary story aagin

Update - 48

Shoorveer Gyani bhaii boooyeahhh wala moment gazab ka tha. Pehle chidana aur uske baad riya ka same usi tarah se karna.. Matlab sab kuch bada natural tha.. aur hasne wala scene padh kar ais laga jaise hamare sath bhi reality mein bhi hua tha.. isliye... maza doguna ho gaya... Is update mein jada kuch kehne ko nahi kyun ki ye build up update tha do chizon ka ek ... competition dusra riya ke uppar atharva ka chatta pyar... ab to aage dekhna hai ki shoorveer ko dhakne ke baad kya hota hai agle update mein... Gazab gyani bhai.. fully reality touch hai kahani mein...

Update - 49

Matlab end tak atte atte atharva ne pure scene ki gaand mein baal daal diye bhai... Bich bich mein jo apne punches dale vo to awesome the. Yani short mein kahun to purre update mein kahani padte hue ek smile thi chehre par... ye jo school life ki sasti wali nok jhok hoti hai na.. sasti isliye kyun ki paise nahi hote... to usme apna hi anand hta tha.. aaj hazaron khrch kar lo to bhi sukun nahi, man ko shanti nahi milti... par jis tarah se apne dialog aur explanation di hai.. fir decieve kiya hai.. jo aap puri kahani mein karte aa rahe ho... mujhe ab aisa surity hone lagi hai kyun ki har jagah deiceve kar de raha hai atharva ... hum padne walo ko bhi.. Death note yaad aa jati hai.. jab vo banda decieve par decieve karta raha tha... Bahut baddia... update tha bhai.. Riya ka character bahut hi umda likha hai apne. Aksar khubsurat ladkiyun ki kahaniya alag hoti hai.. par aisi simplicity koi likh nahi pata... with attitude.... bahut khub gyani bhai.. bahut khub...

Update - 50

OOoo bhaiii.... kya update thaa ma kasamm... laugh: Starting mein riya se indirectly uske... dikhane ki mang aur fir... gaal khinchne wala... Bhai gazab ka scene create karte ho aur gazab ka atharva ko funny dikhaya hai... matlab ki gazab ka funny dikhaya hai... aur baad mein jo Apsara ki kahani jodi hai aur ved ke sath jo bhi discussion hua.. ma kasam hansi na ruki...



Bhai.. kya likha tha ye... sahi mein hans hans kar ankh se pani nikal gaya Bhai.. sometimes samajh nahi ata ki ved jada funny hai ya atharva... sala... ek number tha bhai half century wala update..Chhuhiya gaon.. bc... kya naam hai... Apsara wali kahani to ek number thi Mere ko bas soch soch kar update ki hansi hi aa rahi hai Ek number ka update tha gyani bhai

Update - 51

Bhai kahan se latte ho i mean kahan se... :rofflol: Galiyan banane walle insan aap hi to nahi the jinhone purv samajh mein janam lekar galiyun ka nirman kiya

Is update mein pehli baar hua ki kahani present se past aur wapis present mein ayi aur traffic mein fnsi reh gayi.. katai bura lagta hai aisa traffic par kher.. aisa pehli baar hua jisme traffic ke bare mein batate hue atharva ne riya ki painting ke bare mein bata dia ab ranjan sanjana ko bata dega aur khallas dono ki painting ek jaisi.. atharva gaya yaha? aisa mjhe lagta hai kyun ki past mein bas yahi scene aya tha to iske hone ke pure chanace hai.. uske baad bhai jo scooty wali ladki ke sath hua... waise hona to nahi chahie in rel life lekin padh kar hansi nahi ruki... ma kasam.. itni badmash.. launde vo bhi is tarah chedne wale kam hi milte hai... itna bakhubi likhela hai apne ki mein kya hi bataun.. maza aa gaya bhai.... ek behatrin update tha.. aur ek bathrin end tha... is chapter ka...

Update - 52

I feel sad for Riya.. If she is real... or what atharva is thinking... is all real.. than i feel bad for riya.. vo ek bichari side line mein ban kar reh jayegi... she is started liking atharva par hum laundo ko to bas apna josh dikhta hai Behatrin update tha.. bhai.. apne kewal atharva ko hi nahi balki hume bhi vo feel karaya jo sanjana, atharva aur riya feel kar rahe the.. ek taraf sanjana ke liye bura dusra atharva ki confusion aur tisri taraf riya... Itne satik realistic emotions diye hai na apne jo meko feel kara diya... bahut hi umda update tha... a mixture of feeling se bhara ....

Update - 53

I am still in doubt... ye sala karan naik ki dikatwa kya hai.. uski sali jo marzi kare.. kahin sala vo apni sali ko adhi ghar wali to nahi banana cha raha Ho sakta hai bilkul ho sakta hai... Sanjana ki maa ka ilaz kara raha hai vo samajh ata hai par uske badle sanjana par itne julam? to apni biwi par kitna karta hoga.. bechari vo sexy kapdon mein school bhi nahi aa sakti.. Par bhai jo aap school life likh rahe ho ek gazab likh rahe ho... matlab mein wahin hu usi skul mein.. bas mil nahi sakta kisi se... kash aisi koi machine hoti jo fantasy mein bhi ghusa de sakti thi hume.. maza aa jata.. Kya kya soch leta hun mein bhi.. Par kahani ki main baat... ye atharva ne ek dum shai kiya tha jaffar ka naam dekar uski thukai karane wala... par ab sanjana ko nahi malum chalna chahie ab uski tayari dekhte hai kaise kiye ho.. Aur iske alawa ek chiz aaur.. jo mujhe yahan achi nahi lagi.. chochlate kyun chinni bhai... ladkiyun ke maal par hath daal lo par unki chochlate par nahi.. atharva ko iski sza jarur milegi bhai..

GAzab aparatim likh rahe ho gyani bhai aap... pata nahi kahani kahan jaa rahi hai kyun jaa rahi hai... ky hoga... aage.. kuch nahi malum.. par past mein bahut kuch hona baki hai jisme dard feel hoga i am sure of it.. atharva bhool gaya hai.. par aap hume nahi bhoolne doge... Esha wala kissa aaj bhi yaad hai meko.. sala bada ajeeb lagta ha.. Aage padta hun... bhai

Update - 54

main tum logon jaisa nahi.. Atharva Dev hu.. sometimes.. is insan se bhi ARMAAN jaisi hi feeling ati hi apun ko... launda wahi banta jaa raha hai.. bas thoda naram hai.. ladkiyu ke mamle mein.. warna sanjana ki bezati kar chuka hota.. ya riya ki.. ke na ek ki to bezatti ho hi jatti... sorry bolte hi khel khallas ho gaya tha.. ladka to pehle decieve karne gaya tha. sanjana ne fir bhi pakad liya.. akhir aisi galti kaise kar gaya launda apna... ab sanjana ka karegi re iska... bada hi jhol wala aur emotional wala update tha.... sanjana ki pareshani uske pyar ko darsha rhi thi lekin kya jafar sahi hai itna pyar karne layak hai? ladkiyun ko akal hi nahi ayegi kabhi is bare mein Bahut sahi ek dum true feeling chaap rele ho gyani bhai aap... matlab ladkiyun ko is tarah likhna apne aap men difficult hai apne to harkatein bhi unki usi tarah utar di.. chote-chote expression tak unke bilkul waisich hi utare hai apne... tussi great ho pajji....

Update - 55

bhaiii do shock the.. pehla apka past future wala scenario maa kasam uppar se nikal gaya.. do baar pada aur sochne samjhne ki kosish karne laga ki akhir ye kehna kya chahte hai.. fir mene aur dimag lagaya aur tab samajh aya ki jane do aage samajh aya to aya warna... jitna aya use kaam chala lenge vaise bhi bahut kuch hai sochne ko is kahani mei dusra shock apun ko tab laga jab karun naik ko yun hi chhod diya gaya.. i mean bina kisi tal mol gali galoz.... i mean what the phackk... ise badla lena banta hai bhai.. ye jabaran side villan ban rela hai... bina matlab ke.. role bhi nahi hai itna to iska acha jitna ye ban raha hai FIr mene socha chalo isi bahane iska sanjana se karar kuch kam hoga aur fir apne agli 3 line mein ye sabit kar diya.. sanjana ko uda hi dala bhale hi ignore kar dala lekin apunich ko malum hai sanjana hi true lob hai aur uski wajah se apna hero riya ka dil todega.. aur riya bechari ... sanjana bhi na milegi aur riya bhi.. Ved ki baat sunni chahie re.. bilkul sunni chahie thi... Atharva pachateyega... khair uske baad apne riya ki entry ki aur choclate wala scene dikha kar ye dikha diya lattu dono jagah ghum raha hai.. Matlab bhai world class writing ka silsila chal raha hai is baar.... Mixed with all the feelings.. a best melo drama ho raha hai idhar.. uske uppar se apke likhne ka istyle vo to laa mein jawab hi alag hai... Gyani bhai jis tarah se aap is baar kahani ko likh rahe ho i think ye abhi tak ki first hai apki jahan apne romance plus bakchodi ka itna behtarin namuna pesh kiya hai.. varna apka romance to ESHA jaisa hota hai Gazab.. maza dila dia.. one more to go

Update - 56

Mere pas no words... Riya and atharva... park ka scene.. hasti riya... confused atharva... aur sanjana ka jikr jo usne khud se kaha ki sanjana hoti to samajh jati.. khalas.. khel khatam tata babye. Riya ka chapter to athrva ne wahin khatam kar dia... and i was like ok.... riya gayi to sanjana kaise ayegi.. ye doubt ranjan se clear karwa diya apne... matlab uski khushi dekh kar mujhe samajh jana chahie tha lekin jab tak apne likha nahi yakeen nahi hua.. ab ranjan aur atharva ke bich kuch na ho jaye? ho sakta hai shayad.... shayad nahi.. shayad karan naik ko peetne ke liye ranjan aage aa jaye... Anything is paasible in ur istory bhai... main to bas itna hi kahunga ki jis taraike se aap kahani ko aage badha rahe ho.. use laga hi nahi ki kahani 56 update tak pahunch chuki hai... and still where we are riya, sanjana atharva kya hoga teeno ke bich hume ye nahi mila and still i am feeling... like ... kya likh raha hai bhai.. matlab dil khush ho jata hai.. samajh nahi ata ki har update ke baad kya likhun? Kya bolu ki yaar is update ke andar ye chiz behad khas thi.. ye chiz behad umda tha.... kya likh rahe ho bhai.. kahani ko ek dum mast romantic suspense mein bana kar chhod diya hai apne...

Abhi tak mujhe lag raha tha kahani mein wahich romance ka the end hga.. lekin main ye ab manne ko tayar hi nahi hu ki koi simple the end hga.. mujhe lagta hai... ye kahani ka the end bada hi khatarnak hone wala hai... Bhai.. gazab... gyani bhai gazab...


Thats the reply textbook i have maintained.. Aage ki kahani ka alag se bana kar chapega...

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Update - 29

Bhai only laugh for this update.. ise jada kuch nahi tha... mujhe laga tha sirf ved hi le sakta hai lekin mira ne jo li hai maa kasam maza aa gaya aur apne uspar apni writing se chaar chand laga diye, atharva ka har baat par taunt dena.. matalb ki sachi dosti aur timing ka pehlu ho aap... sahi mein mira ne dho dala pura ka pura uppr se lekar niche ved ke dick tak Uske baad bulla sir ki wapsi aur atharva ka bachna... matlab itni jaldi.. chitti the robot ka concept apne hi to nahi diya tha, maar kar fir wapis, vo kursi ka hilne wala scene matlab aise anokhe anokhe avtar aap hi laa sakte ho bhai.. its is awesome... mazaa gaya sahi mein yaar... aap ki kahani padte waqt aisa lagta hai jeevan hai to yahi hai... reality se dur aur fir bhi uske pass..

Update - 30

Are bhaibhai bhai bhai.... Hahahaa... Otorhinoalaryngologist Ye kahan se aya pehle to ye batao... meaning to hoga par mene aisa word nahi suna aise word sirf medicial mein hote hain jahan tak meri samajh hai... Bhai adha update gazab hasne wala tha lekin baad mein VED sir aye... sahi mein jo gyan bantta hai unhone gazab..... ise kehte hain brain with dick... Maza aa gaya bhai.. full to comedy tha.. lekin sanjana ka naam lene par kahani ulti na padh jaye..ho sakta hai sanjana ko acha na lage... na jane kaise... kahan se kahan tak soch lete ho aap... mein to riya rose ke reaction ka wait kar raha tha par vo apne skip maar dia aur collection ab 5000 se jada ka hone wala hai.. dekhte hain kya hoga aaagee.....



Gurudev Bhai... yar tussi sahi mein great ho... kahe ved ne hai par vichar to legendary insan ke hai

Update - 31

Absolute legendary bhai... Kahani ab ek alag hi level par aa chuki hai... GYANI BHAI at its best... sach mein bhai.. Yahan se jo apne kahani ke twist aur turn planing dalni chalu ki hai na... isne kahani ko, pichle sare update padna safal ho raha hai kyun ki nayi jaan si daal di .... kahani mein reality ke sath maze dogune ho chuke hai ab. Bahut hi sahi ... matlab umda... ved bhale hi hans raha ho lekin sahi udai ladki ne... aur apna kaam karke nikal gayi.... maza aa gaya bhai Guptaji ke liye jo pilan banaya hai ved ne akhir dosti ki chaap chhod raha hai...

Donation ke naam par to log lakhon luta dete hain... ye trick sabse satik aurpurana hai.... naam nahi le sakta warna politcal abuse ka bomb fod denge humpar.. aap samajh hi jao.. khair bhai apratim.. mazedar... bemisaal... dhaamalll... mazaaaa aa gaya....

Update - 32

Plan... Plan... Plan...Matlab pitne se bachne ke liye rambaad ilaz.. Guptaji ke pas apne shastra hai to Atharva ke pas Veshastra hai... Mazedar plan tha bhai, par mujhe nhi malum ki result kya hoga, hona to sahi chahie lekin ye apki kahani hai to mein nahi keh sakta ki result actually mein perfect hoga ya nahi..



Mene daru hi socha tha bhai.... sanskari bacha hun mein

Mujhe laga tha pehle sanjana ki bari ayegi lekin ayi riya... aur fir apne ek alag hi tone set kiya, matlab pehli baar mein kisi kahani ki love story itni different pad raha hun isliye bhai hats off to ur soch... matlab ye sochna hi apne aap mein bahut badi bat hai likhne ke baad to aap use aur chaar chand laga dete ho.. Matlab it was too great.. and unique as well.. Atharva ka girna.. fir riya ki painting kharab hona aur fir uski mayusi.. sab kuch... bhai sach mein har line aisi thi jaise lag raha tha ki banda kya sochta hai yaar.. maza dila deta hai... Kahani ab vakai apne har piche update ko piche chhod kar alag hi tone set karti jaa rahi hai.. Time to time sath nahi chal paa raha lekin bahut jaldi aa jaunga bhai... padne baithta hu to uthne ka dil nahi karta untill unless koi majburi aa jaye... Bhai tussi awesome ho....

Update - 33

Are bhai kahan le jaa rahe ho kahani ko? Isme bhi confuse kar-ke maar dalne ka irada hai kya? Abhi tak sab sahi chal raha tha lekin end mein atte atte confusa gaya itna jda coincidence? Kya gadbad ghotala kar rahe ho... abhi tak kahani padte hue dimag shant tha lekin iske baad dimag uthalfutal ho gaya hai... Maa kasam starting ka ATHARVA wala dard apun ko ARMAAN mafik laga par end mein atte atte side role wali ladki ne to dimag palti ka rdiya jis tarah atharva ka hua usi tarah kuch kuch mera bhi ho gaya bhai.. kya hai ye.. kya karna chahte ho aap...

Mene pichle kuch reply mein kaha tha ki hero hero hai nahi.. side role milne wala hai use, uspar apne is update mein bhi dala... kuch na kuch to jhol hai re baba bhai aap bahut jada jhol karne wale ho... Ye update shayad kahani ka turning point ho sakta hai kyun ki VARUN ka nam pehle bhi aya mene uspar kuch nahi kaha lekin ab dubara aya aur VARUN = ARUN ye dimagi ghotala ATMAKAMI mein padh chuka hun... isliye aur jada sar chakra raha hai... bhai kuch to jhol hai ATMAKAMI ka end abhi tak mere jehen mein hai kyun ki vo kahani jab bhi yaad karta hu muh se bas yahi nikalta hai wah bhai.. matlab wah.. kaise koi banda itna acha soch kar use itni perfectly execute kar sakta hai... kahin is baar bhi aisa to nahi?

Update - 34

Bhai... Mjhe laga tha ek pal ke liye gaya jaffer, maara ye chutiya... aur apne suspense mein daal diya ki ankhein khule dekh raha hai.. pata nahi bhai kya likh rahe ho aur aap heart mein hamare jhatke diye jaa rahe ho.. itne to palang par nahi dete honge launde laundiyu ko jitna aap hamare dil mein de rahe ho
Maza aa gaya, pehle fight aur fir guptaji ka syllabus khatam karne ka andazz... same aisi hi ek teacher hua karti thi hamari life mein par mujhe yaad nahi ki vo college tha ya fir school lekin usne bhi pura ka pura syllabus asie hi udaya tha... pr is update ki shuruwat jitni jandar hui thi use kahin jada jandar end tha update ka... matlab APne sabhi ke dimag ke parkache uda diye, ved atharva ke sath hum sabhi padne walon ke... guptaji ko maan gaya mein aaj.. he is full dude bhai.. gupta ji ko salaam...



Bhai kamal hi kar diya ye to... Matlab guptaji jaisa talented nahi dekha mene... ab ye launda hoshiyari mein jo pilega vo alag... apratim bhai..... masterclass bande ho aap.. next time koi aur word dhundna padega apke liye ....

Update - 35

Sweeet.... is the only word after reading this update bhai. Madhu wala scene funny tha aur jo side launde the vo jada bol gaye par ye side role the isliye mein inko avoid karta hun par jis chiz ne mere chehre par muskan layi vo akhri ka scene tha. Sanjana wala... matlab bhai dil dhak-dhak kar diya apne i don't know how.. kaise aap manage karte ho itna behtarin soch pana it was beatutiful bhai.... Atharva looks alike hi ai armaan ka... lekin thoda sa difference hai armaan was more agressive baki atharva is not itne highlight the ki ek ek ko quote bhi nahi kar sakta...

Sabse pehle to vo ganna bhai maan gaye apko.. what a remix you have given to the amazing song.... ek engineeer hi aisa kar sakta hai.. Itna badiya apne tune ke sath lyrics banaya tha na bhai sahi mein mera dil kar raha tha apko khade hokar salute karun... par kiya nahi

Uske baad Ved ki ek aur sad story lekin vo sad nahi thi balki aisa likha na apne sahi mein maza aa gaya... sanajana aur riya ki entry par atharva ka palatna ki vo dukhi hai aur uske baad jab use malum hua ki painting ki baat hai to usne fir ved ko sach bhi bata dia ye choti choti chiz aap hi soch kar likhte ho bas... mene kahin pada hi nahi aisa aur na hi socha hai.. It was marvellous bhai.. matlab aap aisi stories par apne badshaahat hassil kar rakhi hai... maza aa gaya aur end mein jo fansaya aur bich mein jo time travel likh kar sirf ek baat kahi vo to main highlight tha update ka.. ise badia aur behtarin kuch nahi ho sakta aur na hi hoga jo mein ab padh raha hun aisa har baar kehta hun aur ap shayad karan naik ko peetne ke liye ranjan aage aa jaye... Anything is paasible in ur istory bhai... main to bas itna hi kahunga ki jis taraike se aap kahani ko aage badha rahe ho.. use laga hi nahi ki kahani 56 update tak pahunch chuki hai... and still where we are riya, sanjana atharva kya hoga teeno ke bich hume ye nahi mila and still i am feeling... like ... kya likh raha hai bhai.. matlab dil khush ho jata hai.. samajh nahi ata ki har update ke baad kya likhun? Kya bolu ki yaar is update ke andar ye chiz behad khas thi.. ye chiz behad umda tha.... kya likh rahe ho bhai.. kahani ko ek dum mast romantic suspense mein bana kar chhod diya hai apne...

Abhi tak mujhe lag raha tha kahani mein wahich romance ka the end hga.. lekin main ye ab manne ko tayar hi nahi hu ki koi simple the end hga.. mujhe lagta hai... ye kahani ka the end bada hi khatarnak hone wala hai... Bhai.. gazab... gyani bhai gazab...


Thats the reply textbook i have maintained.. Aage ki kahani ka alag se bana kar chapega...

Heart attack dene wala review... Ek baar to soch me pad gaya ki kahi fir se update-29 se to review nahi de rahe

Adbhut, adwitiya, atulniya vishlesan bhai.... Aapka review padhke kasam se kabhi kabhi to aisa lagta hai ki apun hich xf ka best writer hai

Kayi log review skip kr dete hai, ya silent reader ke taur par story padhte hai... par ek writer samajhta hai ki ek ek comment ki value... Aapne review ke liye alag se draft banaya... Wahi bahut hai .... baaki sab bonus
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Do do bengali ladki pe dil aagaya tha...

Mast gaana gaati thi dono, record krke whatsapp pe bhejti bhi thi... Turu lovvv

पास्ट में अथर्व ने मीरा को जफर के चंगुल से बचा तो लिया था पर संजना को जफर की तरफ बढ़ने से रोक नहीं पाया था ।
फिर उसने संजना को भी जफर की ओर बढ़ते हुए कदमों पर ब्रेक लगाया पर शायद रिया रोज के उपर वो कोई बंदिश न लगा सके ।
बेचारे की जिंदगी सच में उलझ कर रह गई है ।

Wakayi me kafi complicated bana diya main story ko

nice update

Yeh jafar kya announced karnewala hai , kanhi riya ko patah to nahi liya hai. Ved ke sare dialogue aach6e the... Aage dekhte atharva ke sath kya hota hai...

Armaan...​

nice update ..riya baat hi nahi kar rahi ab aur na hi message ,calls ka jawab de rahi ..
aur ye riya ko chocolate dena kisi ke liye faaydemand saabit ho raha hai ..ab ved to kahega hi ki 500 ,600 wala chocolate dene ko riya ko ..

pyar ko lekar dono ke alag view hai ..

par ye jafar kaunsa announcement karne aaya hai class me aur bulla sir ne shayad pehli baar attendance lena rok diya hai ..

good update

Wetting

waiting bruh ...

Bahad khubsurat update dost

fantastic update

awesome update

Everything is happening like it was at the time of Sanjana, just this time Riya and Zafar are in place of Sanjana and Atharv Well, it does not appear that Atharv tries to thwart every attempt by Zafar, first breaking his relationship with Meera and now with Sanjana What Atharv's sharp mind does together we don't understand anything but he will take revenge
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Behatrin update bro

As Always, Thank you everyone, keep it up ​

 

[harshit1890]

Adbhut, adwitiya, atulniya vishlesan bhai....

Vo to aap aur apki kahani hai bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-40​

“kya bola…”

“kuch nahi… maine sirf itna kaha ki… Yatha Drishti, Tatha Srishti ~ यथा दृष्टि तथा सृष्टि ”

“kyaa bola… yattth… ytha”

“rahne do Sanskrit hai aur mera shirt chhodo…”

“tujhe samjhaya tha na ki.. Sanjana se dobara mat milna…”

“toh main Sanjana se kaha mila…? main toh Sanjana ki maa se milne aaya tha…”

“aur tu ab bhi nahi samjha ki maine tujhe dogla kyun kaha…”

“arey hath hatao…”Karan Naik ka hath jhatke se hatate hue maine kaha… “gala dab raha tha mera…”

“jo main bolta hu waisa kar, warna tera gala ghot kar maar dalunga… aaj ke baad Sunayana aur Sanjana ke aas-paas bhi mat dikhna…”

“ek hee school me padhte hai aise kaise sambhav hai ye… ki main uske aas-paas bhi na bhatku… ek kaam kariye, uske liye ek alag se school bana do… hardware ka business hai naa aapka…? bahut note chhapa hoga , toh khulwa do uske liye alag school aur Sunayana mam , teacher hai meri… main nahi bhi jaunga unke paas , toh wo aayengi mere paas… aur ab toh science quiz bhi hone wala hai… isliye Sunayana mam ke paas toh aana-jaana laga rahega…”

“tujhe aise samajh nahi aata hai na…”apni sleeves upar karte hue wo bola “abhi tujhe samjhata hu…”

Karan Naik ko apni sleeves upar karta dekh meri fat gayi ki yadi isne mujhe pelna chalu kiya toh bahut buri tarah se pelega… isliye Ranjan ne jo upay Karan Naik se bachne ke liye mujhe bataya tha, maine jaldbazi me Karan Naik se bachne ke liye istemaal karne ka socha… upay bahut simple tha.. bahut hee simple. Mujhe karna bas ye tha ki Karan Naik ke saamne se main teleportation ke dwara gayab ho jaun aur fir kisi aur ko teleport karke uske saamne khada kar du…. BUT Not physically…

“Jafar…”mujhe Karan Naik maarta uske pahle hee main bol pada , jab wo sleeves upar kar raha tha

“kyaa…”

“Jafar… Sanjana ka boyfriend hai , main nahi… main toh aise hee bas timepass hu , Sanjana ke liye… ek mind freshner ke taur par maan lo…”

“mind freshner...?? ye kya hota hai..”

“jaise mouth freshner hota hai naa.. usi tarah Mind freshner... same concept. real deal toh Jafar hai… mujhe pata hai, Naik ji … aap itna khunnas kyun khaye baithe ho mujhse… aapko lagta hai ki main Sanjana ka boyfriend hu.. par aisa nahi hai… Sanjana ka boyfriend toh wo Jafar hai… isliye kisi ko yadi kuch samjhana hai toh use samjhao… mera kya hai.. ekat-do mahine ke baad final exams honge..fir main waise bhi yaha se chala jaunga”

“ye Jafar kaun hai… kaha milega mujhe…”

“12th bio… mil toh school me bhi jayega par use bahar pakadna… ek baar hospital bhi aaya raha hoga, Sanjana ke sath… tab aapne nahi dekha tha kya use…?”

“us samay main , hospital me nahi tha… fir wapas aane pe Sunayana ne bataya ki Sanjana apne ek friend ke sath aayi thi aur fir jab tujhe us din raat me gate ke saamne dekha toh mujhe laga ki wo tu hoga… jo Sanjana ke sath hospital aaya hoga…”

“nahi.. main toh aaj first time aaya… apni mother-in-law ka reaction nahi dekha kya..? saaf jaahir tha ki main first time unse milne aaya hu… unhone abhi kuch der pahle kaha bhi tha ki do saal me kitna bada ho gaya main.. yaad karo..”

“ispar toh maine gaur hee nahi kiya…”

“ab main bata raha hu na… Jafar Sanjana ka boyfriend hai aur Sanjana se fatat le pyar karta hai… matlab paagal hai wo Sanjana ke liye, chhati me tattoo tak banwaya hai... mujhse ek din bol raha tha ki sholey ke Viru ke mafiq wo school ke chhat me paani wali tanki me chadhkar apne pyaar ka izhaar karega. Sanjana bhi ekdum true love karti hai. ”

“wo main dekh lunga… tu jaa yaha se…”

“thank you…”muskurate hue maine kaha

“tu muskura kyun raha hai...?”

“bas aise hee... aadat hai.”

Karan Naik ke jaane ke baad Main dialysis center ke baahar bahut der tak khada raha aur khud ko pelam pel shabashi deta raha… aur fir parking ki taraf pahucha, jaha maine bike khadi ki thi….

“badhai ho, Karan Naik... aap chodu ban gaye...”



“20 rs.” Maine jaisi hee parking area me khadi apni bike par chabhi ghusayi toh ek ladka mere paas aakar mujhse bola

“20 rs. Kaahe ke…”

“parking ka…”receipt mujhe dete hue wo bola…

“pahle batana tha, main bahar gaadi khada kar deta… aur parking ka paisa kyun le rahe ho be, gand toh hospital ke bill me hee faad dete ho, uspar bhi parking ka bhi paisa chahiye…. Kuch din baad visiting hour me aane wale logo se patients se milne ka bhi paisa lene lagoge… fir kuch din baad saans lene ke bhi paisa lene lagoge… kya karoge bhai itne paiso ka… tum logo ka pet kahe nahi bharta be…”

“arey , gyan mat chod … 20 rupaye de aur nikal…”

“wo toh nahi hai… isiliye toh gyaan de raha tha … ”

“mere ko apne jeb se bharna padega yadi tujhe jaane diya toh… Raseed kat chuka hai… paisa toh dena padega…”

“arey adjust kar lena… kahi.. idhar-udhar… kasam se , ek rupiya nahi hai…”jeans ki khali jeb baahar karte hue maine kaha

“kahe me adjust karu… dedh hazar toh milta hai mahine ka aur bolta hai adjust karu…”

“dekh main kal bhi aaunga, isi time pe… tab le lena … aaj aur kal ka ikattha… ab khush…”

“bharosha nahi hai… 20 rs. Bachane ke liye bade-bade rahis log parking me gadi nahi lagate fir tera kya bharosha…”

“paisa toh nahi hai mere paas… ek kaam kar, le 20 rupaye ka khoon nikal le…”apna hath uski taraf aage karte hue main bola

“main de deti hu…”tabhi ek madhur aawaz mere kaano me padi, jiske baad maine aur us parking waale ne madhur aawaz ke strot ki taraf apni nazre ghumayi....

“Sanjana tu, yahaaa…?”

ye betichod Karan Naik sab bak toh nahi diya. Saale ko silentely kaam karna tha naa... chutiya.

“Sanjana dekh, maine tere jija ko kuch nahi bataya…”Sanjana aage kuch bolti uske pahle hee main bol pada

“main tu tujhe yaha ye sev dene aayi hu, tu wahi bhool gaya tha… main aati nahi, par mom ne mujhe force kiya toh aana pada…”20 rs ka note us parking wale ladke ko dete hue Sanjana boli “ye lijiye bhaiya…”

“bhaiya...?”man girakar us ladke ne Sanjana ke hath se paise liye aur use aisa dekh main hasa…

“kya hua..? maine kam paise de diye kya use…”parking waale ke jaane ke baad Sanjana mujhse puchhi

“nahi… us ladke ki shakl dekhne layak thi… jab tune use bhaiya kaha tha toh…”

“toh isme kya galat hai…”

“jab koyi sundar ladki bhaiya bolti hai toh aisa lagta hai, jaise us ladki ne I love you ka jawab I have a boyfriend me diya ho…”

“kuch bhi…”

“chal good night…”kick markar main bola…

“itni jaldi kaha jaa raha… Starbeans chalega, aaj school me tu bol raha tha ki Starbeans ke hot chocolate best hai…”

“idhar bhi Starbeans hai…?”

“haan aur idhar bhi…. Ka matlab…?”

“Riya ke sath aaj gaya tha Vindhayanchal wale Starbeans me… tujhe yakin nahi hoga aaj kya-kya hua…”

“… achchha…”

“kabhi aur chale… aaj pet full hai…?”

“mera bhi pet bhar gaya ab…”

“chal fir, baju hat… warna accident kar dunga aur tu bhi yahi padi hogi ek bistar me... waise tera blood group kya hai...”

“O +Ve... tera kya hai...?”

“nahi bataunga....”

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“chale bhaiya… yadi pel liya ho toh…? waise Ranjan abhi yaha hota toh maja aata… Trio complete rahta humara…”Ved table par chammach bajate hue bola aur fir chammach bajate hue achanak use kya sujha… usne dusare hath me bhi ek aur chammach liya aur table ko drum ke maafiq bajane laga…

“ye kya kar raha hai…”maine puchha

“dhun bana raha hu, par dhun ban nahi rahi….”

“abbey saale…”

Kuch der baad bill-will pay karke main aur Ved waha se nikle , matlab Katni se nikle…. Ab Interceptor ki Kaman Ved ke hatho me thi…

“main ye soch raha tha Ved ki, us din Sanjay Gandhi hospital me jab Sanjana parking me mujhe Starbeans chalne ke liye boli thiiii… yadi main us din uske sath chala jata toh kya hota..?”

“shayad jo hua us-se bhi bura hota... aur waise bhi Tere Starbeans chale jaane se uske baad jo hone wala tha, wo nahi hota kya…? ”

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dedicated to legendary actor Moin Sir by adding his famous ~abbeyy saale dialogue.

Gadar update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

Chapter-10: Garib Gang~The Trio

Update-41​

Annual day ke purva hone wale competition ka bigul baj chuka tha aur har events aur us-se related students full jor-shor se taiyari me lag gaye the… ab har standard ki class har period me lagbhag aadhi khali rahti… lekin tab bhi teacher barabar aate aur course aage badhate infact class aadhi khaali dekh khunnas me teachers aur adhik syllabus cover kara dete taaki jis-jis ne unki class bunk ki hai… wo adhik se adhik loss me rahe… siway ek ke… wo thi Sunayana mam… unka course wahi ka wahi tha kyunki wo toh school hee nahi aa rahi thi , unhone leave le rakhi thi… Annual day ke in competitions se sabse jyada fayda sports walo ko tha… sale , prayer ke baad attendance markar aise gayab hote ki… fir lunch me hee aate aur lunch ke baad fir gayab ho jate… bhale hee sale ground me practice ke naam par din bhar baithe-baithe gaand khujate rahe… 6-6 ghante kaun practice karta hai be , itna practice toh international level wale players na kare….

Khair mera department toh boring tha… kahi bhi taiyari kar sakte the. Chalte hue, dauddte hue, khaate hue, R.O. ke paas Riya Rose ko paani peete dekhte hue , Sanjana se ladte hue ya fir Mutth maarte hue. Hume Sirf physics , chemistry ki books hee chahiye thi. Jo ki already humare paas teen-teen publishers ki thi. Humari team me do launde already selected the… ek main aur ek Ved… physics aur chemistry ka koyi tension nahi tha… main jo tension tha wo bio ka tha.. ki bio se kise le…

“Madhu ko…? ”maine bio se Ved ko naam suggest kiya

“main lawda… 10 me 10 galat answer dena bardasht kar lunga lekin uske sath nahi…”ye Ved ka response tha.

“Riya Rose….?”abki Ved ne khis niporte hue name suggest kiyaa

“wo painting me jaa rahi hai… maine apne charm ke dum par use intimidate karne ki koshish bhi ki aur kuch had tak safal bhi raha … lekin paintaing uska passion hai … fir bhale hee quiz me main hee kyun na rahu… mera matlab… ek football match ho raha ho jisme Ronaldo, Messi, Andres, Zlatan, Neymar, Rooney, Van Persie, Garcia ye sab bhari-bharkam player us match me ek-dusare ke opponent ho… toh inka name mujhe match dekhne ke liye intimidate karega… lekin wahi yadi Ind Vs Pak cricket match same time aa raha ho toh……?”

“gaand maraye football... main to ind vs pak hee dekhunga”Ved bola

“exactly... bas same concept... same chiz Yaha par Riya ke sath hain… Painting uske liye Ind vs Pak ke match ki tarah hai… jise wo kisi bhi haalat me chhod nahi sakt … isliye usne mujhe mana kar diya…”

Madhu, Riya Rose inke naam kaatne ke baad jo naam mere dimag me aaya wo tha Bio ki real topper ka aur wo thi Madhu ki friend Mini…. Uska actual name kya tha, mujhe nahi maloom bas jab se wo is school me aayi thi hum log use Mini-Vini kahkar bula rahe the …. Riya ke naa kahne par wo option best tha… matlab main toh ek pal ke liye soch me pad gaya ki humne sabse pahle Mini ko approach kyun nahi kiya…? khair humne baad me kiya… par uska bartaav aisa tha jaise wo koyi superstar ho aur main koyi chhota-mota News reporter… wo aise bhav kha rahi thi maano Tony Stark ki laundiya Morgan Stark yahi ho… matlab jiski koyi had nahi…. Ek-do baar toh bina koyi aawaz diye aage badh gayi...

Mini ke is bartaav par jab maine gahan adhyyan kiya tab pata chala ki wo itna kyun bhaav kha rahi hai… jiska pahla kaaran tha, Jafar se meri ladayi… ab jafar purani hindi filmo ki tarah nahi tha ki jis-se sab nafrat kare… infact puri bio branch wale pagal the Jafar ke peechhe. Isliye jab Jafar se meri thodi nok-jhok hui toh main automatically pure bio wale chahe wo 11th ke ho ya 12th ke ho ya fir 9th, 10th ke wo students jo 10th ke baad bio lene wale the… main un sabki hate list me shaamil ho gaya tha. Dusara kaaran jo mujhe samajh me aaya wo ye ki Mini shayad isliye naaraz thi kyunki maine uske pahle us-se kam quality wali ladkiyo se puchha… jaise Madhu aur Riya Rose… afterall wo bio ki main topper thi, uska bhi koyi zameer tha, guroor tha... attitude tha. Wo nahi chahti thi ki wo meri second choice bane… actually second nahi third…..

Maine uske sab nakhre sahe… usne mujhe bahut ghumaya par fir finally maine use raazi kar hee liya… ab meri personality hee aisi hai ki ladkiya mujhe naa nahi kah paati. Wo maan toh gayi par ek shart par ki team teen members me do members uske pasand ke rahenge, warna wo participate nahi karegi… matlab indirectly wo ye bol rahi thi… ki… main Ved ko laat maarkar nikal du aur Mini ko quiz team ki Kaman thama du… jaha ek main rahunga, ek Mini aur ek wo banda ya fir bandi… jise Mini decide karegi….

“lawda mera…. Main bio ke 3 question ke answer me chupke-chupke ke shahid kapoor ki tarah jaba....jaba... bol dunga , lekin ye offer swikar nahi karunga”ye mera response tha…

Aur jaise hee maine Mini ko reject kiya , pure bio wale maano mujhe apna dushman manne lage… dushman toh khair main pahle se hee tha par ab kattar dushman tha. saale lunch time me aise ghoorte mujhe ki maano bhasm kar denge apne netra roopi jwalamukhi se. Mini ko reject karte hee pure 12th bio walo ne quiz me participate karne se mana kar diya … yaha tak ki 11th bio waalo ne bhi. jiske baad mujhe samjah aaya ki ye Mini aur Jaafar ki mili bhagat thi… un dono ne hee pure bio stream ke students ko mere sath participate karne se mana kar diya tha… par ek shaks aisa tha bio me jo ab bhi mera sath deta aur thak-haar kar jab maine use bio subect se apni team me shaamil kiya toh pure school me hahakar mach gaya aur Principal ne lunch me hum teeno ko personally apne cabin me bulaya…. Teeno matlab mujhe, Ved aur Ranjan ko... matlab Garib Gang ko.

Principal ne hum teeno ko waha apne cabin me baithaya , jiske baad humare school ki biology ki teacher waha aayi aur Principal ke bagal me baith gayi….

“good morning mam...”jaise hee wo principal ke bagal wali chair me apna pichhwada tika kar thoda aage khiski toh hum teeno ne ek sath kaha...

“Atharva… maine tumhe, tumhare reputation ke karan quiz team select karne ke liye kaha tha aur mujhe ummid thi tum aisi team banaoge… jo last year ki tarah is saal bhi ye competition jeetegi… baki competition se mujhe jyada kuch matlab nahi hai… lekin .. ye .. science quiz … this is very important… khud vidhayak ji question puchhte hai , pure school ke saamne hall me aur quiz competition ekmatra aisa competition hai… jaha har school ke teachers, waha ke students adhik se adhik sankhya me aate hai… even unke parents tak. Iska andaza is baat se laga lo ki last year population popularity itni thi ki hall me sab aa hee nahi paaye aur hume bahar speakers lagwane pade, taaki jo bahar khade hai unhe live commentary ke through maloom chalta rahe ki kis school ke kitne points hai… aur is baar toh ye competition night me hoga aur tum chahte ho ki main Ranjan ko team me select karne ke liye approve karu aur tumhe apni raat kharab karne ka mauka du…?”

“Ranjan first class student hai… aur sir aap use is tarah bolkar demoralise kar rahe hai…”

“mujhe first class nahi chahiye… wo toh saikdo mil jayenge, yadi main dhoondhane niklu toh… mujhe best of the best of the best, student chahiye… like you and Ved … lekin Ranjan…. No Atharva… physics ya chemistry se apne aalawa kisi aur ko le lete toh main ek baar manage bhi kar leta ki… tum nahi toh bio wala student ise manage kar lega… lekin bio se…? jaha tum aur Ved dono completely blank rahoge… Sunayana mam aur Gupta ji ne apne-apne subject se tumhara aur Ved ka name suggest kiya tha, wo dono bole the ki physics , chemistry ka kaisa bhi question ho… tum dono ko uska answer maloom na h o aisa ho hee nahi sakta… isliye mujhe usme tension nahi hai, meri tension bio ko lekar hai”

“sirf 2 question toh rahega sir, bio se…”

“2 questions… Mazak lag raha hai tumhe… Mam, Atharva ko bataiye toh last year 1st aur 2nd ranking walo ka kya score tha…?”

“1st Rank_ 10 points… Sanskar Valley. 2nd rank _ 9 points ke sath tie tha SSM aur SVM ke beech…”

“suna… Atharva”Saxsena ji ne kaha… “par bahas karne ka koyi fayda nahi aur Ranjan ko main aise bina koyi mauka diye baahar bhi nahi kar sakta. Kyunki ye galat hoga. Isiliye maine mam ko yaha bulaya hai… she’s gonna ask him few questions and if he is able to answer that… you can keep him in the team otherwise…. Well, you know the drill… mam, please… proceed”

Dhaanshu update bhai

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-42​

“who is the father of zoolo…”

“Aristotle…”jaise hee bio wali mam ne question puchha… Ved ne fatt se jawab diya , matlab Bio wali mam puri tarah se zoology tak nahi bol paayi thi ki idhar se Ved ne answer de diya...

“shayad bio me bhi hum puri tarah blank nahi rahenge, sir….”Saxsena ji ki taraf dekh Ved thode garv se apna seena chauda karte hue bola.

“that was a easy one… don’t flatter yourself.”apna naak sikod kar Bio wali mam boli “ Now, name the animal which lives without red blood cells…”

Aur jaisa ki principal ne pahle hee kaha tha, main aur Ved dono completely blank ho gaye, infact hum dono toh ye sochne lage ki aisa possible bhi hai kya…? par hume iska bhi jawab nahi mila… jiske baad Saxsena sir aur bio wali mam ke sath-sath hum dono bhi Ranjan ki taraf answer ke liye dekhne lage… jiske baad Ranjan ne jawab toh diya par wo jawab nahi jo humne expect kiya tha.

“sorry sir and mam, I am afraid I don’t know the answer to this, but if you could tell me I would be grateful..”

“answer is earthworm… earthworm is the animal without red blood cells… anyway, next question…. The corner of the cells of collenchyma tissue in plant are thickened due to deposition of…..????”

Ye question puchhte hee bio wali muskura uthi, shayad use question puchhate hee andaza ho gaya tha ki hum teeno isme bhi laad chaat ke ujjar ho jayenge. fir bhi marta kya na karta… maine aur Ved ne Ranjan ki taraf ek baar fir ummid me dekha….

“sorry, sir and mam... I am afraid I don’t know the answer to this, but if you could tell me I would be grateful..”

“they’re done … this trio can’t win the quiz competition. Sir... we should add Mini...”

“next question…”Bio wali ke itna bolte hee pata nahi Ranjan ko kya hua, wo joshiya gaya aur uske sath Bio wali bhi joshiya gayi... Bio wali mam ki maano jhaate sulag gayi thi ye sunte hee aur jaise uske chehre ke expression the , yadi principal sir waha naa hote toh pakka wo Ranjan ke muh me gusse se apna chut ragad deti aur fir uske muh me moot deti. Par unhone khud ko kabu kiya aur agla sawal daaga....

“the phenomenon of summer sleep by animals is ….?”

“ummm… Ativation..? Aestivation..? yesssss AESTIVATION…”pichhale sabhi question ka badla lete hue Ranjan cheekha

“NEXT QUESTION…… MAM…”Ranjan ek baar fir cheekha… “ab aane do question….”

“Bone deformities occur due to the excess intake of…..”

“FUCKING FLOURINEEEEE”

Itna bolkar Ranjan apni jagah se turant utha aur peechhe jaate hue khushi se kooda.... Bio wali mam ka muh dekhne laayak tha. kaha wo Ranjan ko chut chatane ka soch rahi thi aur kaha vastvikta me Ranjan ne hee use laad chata diya tha. Main aur Ved chup-chap wahi baithe kabhi Principal ko dekhte toh kabhi Bio wali aunty ko... Bio wali mam ki halat is samay aisi thi jaise unke sar me dard ho lekin doctor ne operation chut ka kar diya ho… Ranjan ke F word use karne ke karan Principal ne use chamkaya aur kaha ki next time wo aisa behaviour bardasht nahi karenge aur use waha cabin se jaane ke liye kah diya…. Aur mujhe jo ek baat aaj pata chali wo ye ki , sala kya interesting match tha… matlab.... kaun soch sakta hai ki ek quiz me inta thrill ho sakta hai aur bio ko main is vishwa ka sabse boring subject manta tha, lekin jaise –jaise question aaj puchhe gaye the… maza hee aa gaya sala….

“FUCKING FLOURINEEEEE”bio wali mam ko dekh main bhi andar hee andar chillaya...

“Ranjan is good, but not the best… mam, aap apni taraf se ek bio ke student ko select kariye…”Saxsena sir ne chuppi todte hue kaha...

“maine socha hai , is bare me... sir... Mini is best… Riya ka performance bhi badhiya hai class me.. par wo new student hai toh uske bare me kuch jyada nahi kah sakti aur wo painting competition me bhi represent kar rahi hai school ko toh double dose ho jayega us par… my choice is Mini…”

“mam , Mini ki shart bhi toh batayiye principal sir ko…”jab mujhe mauka mila toh main bhi beech me kood pada.

Warna aise me toh ye Nagdi Gang ke member Jafar, Mini aur Bio wali mam milke game baja de rahi thi Garib Gang ka... Mini ke shart ka jikra karte hee bio wali nagdi mujhe aise dekhne lagi, jaise maine uski gand se apna lund sata diya ho….

“shart… kaisi shart..?”Saxena ji maano hosh me aaye

“wooo…”bio wali nagdi boli “ Atharva-Ved me se koyi ek hee rahega… uska kahna hai ki bio ke do rahne se bio subject ko strength milegi aur physics , chemistry toh Bio waale bhi padhte hai. toh main problem Physics ,chemistry se jyada bio hai. waha backup rahna bahut jaroori hai aur yadi in Atharva-Ved me se kisi ko chunna pade toh... my choice is........”

Itna bolte hue Bio waali ruk gayi aur hum sab intezaar karne lage unke muh se agle pal nikalne waale us ek word ka... jiske base pe bahut kuch nirbhar tha.

“My Choice is Ved....”Bio waali ne wo sentence thoda pause lene ke baad complete kiya...

jhatka laga…? Mujhe bhi laga tha us samay…? Par fir mujhe samajh aaya ki bio wali mam ne aisa kyun kaha tha… kyunki hum dono ko toh unhone kabhi kuch padhaya hee nahi, ek class tak nahi li humari kabhi. Fir unhe kaise maloom ki hum dono me se kaun better hai...? thoda time laga par fir aakhir kar mujhe samajh me aa gaya ki unhone us din aisa kyun kaha tha. darasal Jafar unhe bhi pasand tha aur meri ladayi Jafar se hone ke kaaran… jaha bio wale students mujhse naraz the, wahi bio wali mam bhi naraz ho gayi thi… matlab bio me is level ki popularity thi Jafar ki... upar se launda football bhi khelta tha… Mira aur Sanjana aise hee thodi pati thi.

“sorry mam, par yadi Atharva nahi toh Ved nahi….”Ved ne turant bio wali mam ko uttar diya par muskurate hue taaki wo bur naa maan jaaye aur main…? mera toh lawda garam ho gaya tha… bio wali mam aur Mini ke upar... Sali burchattiya... alag hee politics kar rahi thi.

“sorry mam… Atharva nahi toh Ved bhi nahi…”Jab Saxsena ne Ved ki baat ka koyi jawab nahi diya toh Ved ne dobara kaha... Saxsena ji khud sadme the, shayad...

“No Problem…” khushi se Bio wali Nagdi Saxsena ji ki taraf mudi... “sir, mere paas ek aur idea hai… actually hum teeno members bio se select karte hai… is tarah teeno ko teeno subject ka knowledge rahega…is tarah yadi competition me ek kisi subject me fas bhi gaya toh dusara backup me rahega aur yadi dono fas gaye toh teesara….”

Ye sunkar main , Ved ki taraf muda aur bola “KLC...?” jiska matlab tha ki...

“kya lawda, chale…? apna toh patta saaf ho gaya…”

quiz ke chalte volleyball me bhi nahi gaye the. ab yadi waha gaye toh wo bhi bhaga denge…. Beizzati karenge wo alag. Khair beizzati to ab bhi hogi... saala pura school looser ki tarah dekhega ki... yahi wo do chutiye hai, jo team select karne waale the par ab khud team me nahi hai... Ye sab aksar humare sath hee kyun hota hai…? pata nahi, bhai… shayad hum hee chutiya hai….

“ye kya bol rahi hai mam , aap… jaise ki maine kaha ki mujhe good students nahi chahiye balki best chahiye… aap Mini ko boliye ki mujhse aakar mile, main us-se baat karunga…”thoda taav me aakar Saxsena ji ne Bio wali chodri se kaha

Bio wali chodri , Saxsena sir ka ye jawab sunkar thoda dukhi toh hui par usne apni taraf se koshish puri ki thi , mujhe aur Ved ko quiz team se hatane ke liye… isliye Bio wali mam ki is koshish ke liye jordar taaliya bajao……. Apne hath se unke chikne gaand me….. Saxsena ji eke k second me Nagdi Gang ka pura game ulat diya tha, jab unhone kaha ki Mini se wo baat karenge. Jiske baad Bio wali mam apna udas gaand lekar waha se chalti bani….

Mujhe Ved aksar Arman naam ke humare ek senior ki kahani sunata rahta hai ki kaise logo ne uske aham pe war kar-kar ke us-se wo kara liya , jo wo kabhi karta hee nahi…. Ved aksar kahta ki, uske mauseri bhai Varun.. jise do-do Bengali ladki se pyaar hua tha... Remember that ? wo dono yaani Varun aur Arman classmate the aur Varun ke according Arman jeb me rakhe ek patakhe ki tarah tha… jise koyi bhi... kahi bhi... kaise bhi... jaha jaroorat hoti waha apne jeb se nikal kar fod deta tha. bas use uksa do, uske aham par war kar do... he was a pure Narcissist ~ATMAKAMI (Promotion ) tab main samjha ki ek Mard ka sabse jyada vulrenerble point lund ke neeche latakte hue uske ande nahi balki uska aham hai… uske aham pe war karo aur wo ulool-julool harqate karne ke liye majboor ho jayega… par yaha sawal ye nahi hai ki kisne.. kya.. kab... kiya, balki sawal ye hai ki main ye sab kyun bata raha hu…? Wo bhi abhi...? is waqt....? Principal ke cabin me ?well, toh uska jawab hai....

“sir, aap Mini se kyun baat kar rahe hai….”bio wali mam ke jaane ke baad maine Saxsena ji se kaha

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