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Incest time travel (kismat ne diya mouka)

Neerav

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maa mere saamne so rahi thi aur mujhe maa pe bahut pyaar aa raha tha. mai bas maa ko pyaar se dekhta raha aur kab do ghante bit gaye pata bhi nahi chala aur maa ka nind khul gaya. jab maa ka nind khula to wo dekhi ki mai unhe ek tak dekhe jaa raha tha.
mai dekha maa ki saasen apne aap hi thoda bhari ho gaya lekin maa turant lambi saas lete hue boli- kya hua itna dhyan se kya dekh raha hai. mere chehre pe kuch laga hai kya.
mai bola-kuch nahi maa aise hi bas soch raha tha tum jab mere saath hoti ho kitna achha lagta hai.
mera baat sunkar maa muskura kar boli- tu bhi to jab mere pass hota hai to mujhe bahut achha lagta hai.
mai bola-maa mai soch raha tha dekho ye PN college mera admission ho jayega. uske baad humko bahut time bhi milega to ek baar gaav ghum aate hai. ek baar dekhna padega na gaav me jamin kaisa hai. uspe kya kar sakte hai.
maa boli-tu to dekha hai jamin fir se dekh ke kya karna hai abhi. pahle padhayi pe dhyan do. bussinees aaram se baad me karenge.
mai bola-maa tumko yaad bhi hai pichla baar mai gaav gaya tha aaj se 5 saal pahle jab papa ka accident hua tha uske baad mai kabhi gaav nahi gaya hoon.
papa ki baat sun maa thodi chup ho gayi.
mai bola-sorry
maa boi-sorry ki kya baat hai. tumko gaav jana hai to chale jana jab chutti mile. ek baar achhe se sab dekh kar aana. tere papa is duniya me nahi rahe isme tumhari galti nahi hai. ye to bas kismat kismat ki baat hai.
mai bola-oho maa dekho fir tum purani baate lekar baith gayi.
maa boli-thik hai thik mai kuch nahi bol rahi ab. mai jaa rahi hoon khana banane.
mai bola-mai madad kar deta hoon.
maa ek baar mujhe dekhi lekin kuch boli nahi.
maa boli-thik hai mai bathroom se aati hoon thoda fresh hokar fir kaam karenge. ye bolkar maa bathroom chali gayi.
mai bhi kamre me idhar udhar tahal raha tha. humare ghar ke bedroom ka ek khidki ghar ke piche ki taraf khulta tha jo aksar thoda sata hi hua rahta tha aur parda laga rahta tha kyunki humare ghar ke piche nala tha jo dhaka hua tha lekin thoda ganda sa jagah tha. udhar jhadi bhi dher sara tha. udhar koi aata jata nahi tha.
mai aise hi kamre me idhar udhar dekh raha tha tabhi mujhe laga koi humare ghar ke piche hai.
ye ahsaas hote hi mai socha humare ghar ke piche udhar jhadiyon me koun hoga. koi chor to nahi aaya hai. ye sochkar mai apne ghar se nikla aur jab piche ki taraf dekha to dekha pados wale auncle the jo humare hi ghar ke diwaron ki taraf dekh rahe the lekin mujhe dekhte hi wo hadbada gaye.
mai pucha-kya hua auncle.
wo hadbadate hue bola-kuch nahi kuch nahi. wo meri biwi kuch saman kachra samajh kar piche fek di thi mujhe laga kahi idhar to nahi aa gaya. tum chinta mat karo. saman mil gaya hai. ye bolkar wo udhar se jaldi jaldi bhag gaya. mujhe ajeeb laga. kuch gadbad bhi laga.
uske jaane ke baad mai us jagah chala gaya jahan wo aadmi khada tha aur apne ghar ke piche ki diwar ki taraf dekha to mujhe diwar me ek chota sa ched dikha.
mai jaise hi us ched se andar jhaka mera kaleja mere sine se akar mere gale me atak gaya.
andar bathroom tha. bathroom pura nahi dikh raha tha fir bhi dikha ki maa pesab karne ke liye baith rahi hai. aur maa jaise hi baithi unka saree unke gol gol gaand se upar ho gaya.
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Itna dekhne ke baad to mera pair hi kaamp gaya aur mai girte girte bacha bagal ke nali me lekin mere girne ki awaj sun maa bhi hadbada kar uth khadi hui. mai jaldi se bhaga ghar ke piche se.
mujhe to dar tha ki kahi maa na dekh le mujhe . ek badi kismat se fir se mujhe ek jindagi mila hai usme bhi mai badnaam ho jau ki mai ghar ke piche se apni hi maa ko nanga dekhta hoon to kitna bura hoga. mai jaldi se bhag kar ghar me gaya aur bilkul apne aap ko normal karte hue andar kamre me jaane laga tabhi maa bathroom se nikli aur bathroom se nikalte hi mere ankhon ke saamne chakkar kha kar girne lagi. mai bilkul jaise koi fielderdrive marke ball pakadta hai us tarah kuda maa ko bachane ke liye aur maa mere hathon par giri. mai bhi gir gaya tha. maa ko jada chot to nahi aaya lekin maa ke sar pe thoda kharoch aaya tha aur maa behosh to nahi hui thi lekin unko dekh ke lag raha tha unhe chakkar aa raha hai. wo thik se hosh me nahi hai. mai turant khada hua maa ko utha kar bed pe letaya ek glass pani pilaya aur fir bhag ke bahar gaya aur ek taxy wale ko ghar bulaya. maa ko taxy me lekar pass ke hi hospital me aa gaya. maa ab pahle se thik thi lekin abhi bhi thik se khada nahi ho paa rahi thi. mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai. mujhe achhe se yaad hai pichli baar mai aaj ke hi din is ghar se delhi gaya tha wo bhi aaj ke hi raat ke train se ur maa hi mujhe khana banakar nam ankhon se vida ki thi lekin us baar to maa bilkul thik thi to is baar ye kaise hua. past kaise badal raha hai. kahi mai fir se maa ko kho to nahi dunga. kahi mere nasib me maa ka pyaar likha hi nahi aisa to nahi hai. ye sab soch soch kar mai bahut dar raha tha. hum hospital pahuche to mai maa ko ek gents doctor ke pass le jaane laga lekin maa boli ki wo lady doctor ko hi dikhayegi. mujhe maa pe thoda gussa bhi aaya kyunki ek to maa ko chakkar aa raha tha upar se maa yahan lady aur gents doctor me bhedbhav kar rahi thi khair mai maa ko ek jagah baithakar ek lady doctor ka pata kiya fir maa ko us doctor ke pass le gaya. wo dcotor mujhe cabin se bahar kar di aur fir maa ka check up ki. unhe kya dawa di pata nahi. kya baat ki pata nahi. lagbhag 40 se 45 minut maa andar thi aur mai bahar bechaini me tahalta raha fir jaise hi maa bahar aayi tab maa thodi thik thi. apne pairon pe khadi thi ye dekh ke mujhe achha laga lekin fir bhi turant maa ke haath se report liya aur use padhne laga.
usme likha hua tha high libido. ye padhte hi mera dimag ghum gaya. high libido ka matlab hota hai hyper sexual drive. ye koi bimari nahi hai. ye chije ya to genetically matlba maa se beti me aati hai ya kabhi kabhi direct bhi paya jata hai bina kisi reason ke.

ye padhte hi mai maa ko bola-maa tum baitho mai abhi turant aata hoon. ye bolkar mai doctor ke cabin me ghus gaya.
mujhe dekhte hi doctor boli-aaj ka mera time khatm ho gaya hai pass ke cabin me dusre doctor ke pass chale jao.
mai bola-mam mai koi patient nahi hoon. mai wo patient jo aayi thi abhi aapke pass unka relative hoon.
maine jaanbujh kar relative bola kyunki agar beta bolunga to doctor ho sakta hai bahut si baate na bataye.
doctor boli- dekho jo tumhari aunty hai unko koi bimri nahi hai. hum insaano ke sarir me kabhi kabhi garmi badh jata hai aur jab wo bardast nahi hota to hume chakkar aa jata hai. mai kuch dawaye likh di hoon time pe de dena aur haan kosis karo ki tumhari aunty subah subah exercise kare aur ghar me jada samay akele na rahe. akela pan khali pan bhi in chijo ko badhawa deta hai. best to hota agar unke husband hote lekin unhone bataya ki unka husband nahi hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki is umra me wo dusri shaadi ke liye manengi to upay yahi hai. medicine dete raho exercise karate raho aur unhe busy rakho sab thik ho jayega.

mai bola-okey mam aur palat ke jane laga tabhi doctor boli-haan agar tum unke husband ki jagah le lo to bhi achha hai. bina medicine ke wo thik ho jayegi. medicine ke to fir bhi side effects hote hai.
ye sunte hi mai ghuma aur gusse me bola-doctor kisne bana diya aapko.
wo lady apna sina chouda karke ek college ka naam batayi. sachme jis college ka naam batayi wo india ke achhe college me se ek tha aur mai kuch bol nahi paya aur mai kamre se nikal gaya.

jaate samay mai aur maa fir se taxy me baith gaye. mai dekha maa mujhse najre nahi mila rahi thi. mai fir se sochne laga ki maa ko pahle ye dikkat to kabhi nahi tha nahi to maa diary me kahi kuch to likhti aur mai ankh band karke time travel ke samay jo diary padha tha use fir se yaad karne ka kosis karne laga ur mujhe kuch yaad aaya.
maa apne diary me kabhi bhi koi bhi baat bahut detail me nahi likhti hai. bahut si baate chupa kar likhti hai taki kisi ko wo diary mil jaye to bhi wo achhe se samajh nahi paaye.
mujhe yaad aa gaya ki mere pichle janm me mere delhi jaane ke ek yaa do din baad maa diary me likhi thi ki mujhe aaj usne dekh liya.
fir likhi thi wo mujhse baar baar is baare me baat karna chahta hai mujhe achha nahi lagta.
iska matlab saaf tha mera pados ka sala harami auncle ne maa ko bathroom me khud ko ungali karte hue dekh liya tha uske baad se wo baar baar maa se gandi baate karne ki kosis karta tha jiske chalte maa pareshan hokar yahan se banglore chali gayi thi.

fir mujhe yaad aaya ki diary me likha tha meri bahu ne aaj chupke se mujhe dekh lliya. wo mujhe taane deti hai.
mera beta rohan apni jindagi me khush hai lekin......
fir mujhe yaad aaya usme likha tha meri badi bahu choti bahu me baat hui.. ab wo bhi.......

fir last me likha tha aaj mere bete aur bahu dono ne meri baat nahi suni...
aur akhir me likha tha mujhe ab jine ka man nahi karta ...............

aur fir mere ankhon ke saamne wo tasweer aa gaya jisme maa khud se ek truck ke saamne aa gayi thi.
ye sab yaad karke mera muthhhi gusse me bandh gaya tha. maa ko ek choti si bimari thi jo maa ko kabhi pata nahi chala kyunki wo kabhi doctor ke pass nahi gayi. itna hi nahi mere bhai ne bhabhi ne maa ko doctor ko dikhne ya ye sab baate dabane ke bajay maa ko pareshn kiya jiske chalte maa ne apni jindagi de di. kaisa bita hoga maa ka jivan jis jeevan me sirf taane hi bhare hue the.
mai khud se than liya ki is baar mai aisa nahi hone dunga. maa ko mai dawa se aur exrecise karwa kar unka khyal rakhkar unhe thik kar dunga. aur sala mera padosi meri maa ko pareshan kiya tha na dekh mai kya karta hoon tere saath.

ye sab sochte hue hum ghar aaye.
mai dekha maa abhi bhi mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi. mai samajh gaya maa mujhse sharma rahi hai. unhe lag raha hai mujhe doctor ne sab bata diya hai aur ab maa ko mujhse najre milane me sharm aa raha tha.
mai pyaar se maa ka haath thama aur unhe bedroom me lejakar baithaya.
mai bola-maa aaj jo bhi doctor mujhe boli hai usme sharmane wala koi baat nahi hai. hum insaan hai humare sarir ki banawat aisi hai to isme kya sharmana.
mai bola-aapka libido high hai to hai isme sharmane ki koi baat nahi hai ulta aage se dhyan rakhne ki baat hai taaki aage chalkar koi bhi problem na ho. mai doctor se baat kar liya hoon. kal se tumko daily subah exercise karna hai. kabhi bhi akele nahi baithna hai. kuch man na kare to TV dekho mobile dekho. pass wali aunty se baat karo lekin aise akele shant shant nahi baithna hai. thik hai.
fir mai haskar bola-kitchen me akele khana nahi banana hai mere saath banana hai. chalo aaj mai khana banata hoon tum madad kar dena.
ye bolkar mai maa ko kitchen le aaya aur ek table pe baith diya.
mai fir khana banane laga aur maa bas pyaar se mujhe dekh rahi thi.
maa pure raste ye soch soch ke ghabra rahi thi unka beta unke baare me galat sochne lagega lekin aisa kuch bhi nahi hua to unhe bahut achha lag raha tha.
khana ban jane ke baad mai maa ko bola-maa tum TV dekho mai aata hoon medical shop se dawa lekar.
aur mai ghar se nikla dukan se dawa liya jo jo doctor likhi thi. dawa lene ke baad mai ghar aate samay mobile me padhne laga un dawao ke baare me to mujhe pata chala ye dawa regular khane par haddiyan kamjor hone lagti hai. ye jaankar mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi laga fir mai maa ki bimari ke baare me padhne laga uske kya symtoms hai. kaise control kiya jaa sakta hai ye sab padha lekin kuch khas nahi mila aur mai ghar aa gaya fir mai aur maa dono saath me khana kha kar so gaye.
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maa mere saamne so rahi thi aur mujhe maa pe bahut pyaar aa raha tha. mai bas maa ko pyaar se dekhta raha aur kab do ghante bit gaye pata bhi nahi chala aur maa ka nind khul gaya. jab maa ka nind khula to wo dekhi ki mai unhe ek tak dekhe jaa raha tha.
mai dekha maa ki saasen apne aap hi thoda bhari ho gaya lekin maa turant lambi saas lete hue boli- kya hua itna dhyan se kya dekh raha hai. mere chehre pe kuch laga hai kya.
mai bola-kuch nahi maa aise hi bas soch raha tha tum jab mere saath hoti ho kitna achha lagta hai.
mera baat sunkar maa muskura kar boli- tu bhi to jab mere pass hota hai to mujhe bahut achha lagta hai.
mai bola-maa mai soch raha tha dekho ye PN college mera admission ho jayega. uske baad humko bahut time bhi milega to ek baar gaav ghum aate hai. ek baar dekhna padega na gaav me jamin kaisa hai. uspe kya kar sakte hai.
maa boli-tu to dekha hai jamin fir se dekh ke kya karna hai abhi. pahle padhayi pe dhyan do. bussinees aaram se baad me karenge.
mai bola-maa tumko yaad bhi hai pichla baar mai gaav gaya tha aaj se 5 saal pahle jab papa ka accident hua tha uske baad mai kabhi gaav nahi gaya hoon.
papa ki baat sun maa thodi chup ho gayi.
mai bola-sorry
maa boi-sorry ki kya baat hai. tumko gaav jana hai to chale jana jab chutti mile. ek baar achhe se sab dekh kar aana. tere papa is duniya me nahi rahe isme tumhari galti nahi hai. ye to bas kismat kismat ki baat hai.
mai bola-oho maa dekho fir tum purani baate lekar baith gayi.
maa boli-thik hai thik mai kuch nahi bol rahi ab. mai jaa rahi hoon khana banane.
mai bola-mai madad kar deta hoon.
maa ek baar mujhe dekhi lekin kuch boli nahi.
maa boli-thik hai mai bathroom se aati hoon thoda fresh hokar fir kaam karenge. ye bolkar maa bathroom chali gayi.
mai bhi kamre me idhar udhar tahal raha tha. humare ghar ke bedroom ka ek khidki ghar ke piche ki taraf khulta tha jo aksar thoda sata hi hua rahta tha aur parda laga rahta tha kyunki humare ghar ke piche nala tha jo dhaka hua tha lekin thoda ganda sa jagah tha. udhar jhadi bhi dher sara tha. udhar koi aata jata nahi tha.
mai aise hi kamre me idhar udhar dekh raha tha tabhi mujhe laga koi humare ghar ke piche hai.
ye ahsaas hote hi mai socha humare ghar ke piche udhar jhadiyon me koun hoga. koi chor to nahi aaya hai. ye sochkar mai apne ghar se nikla aur jab piche ki taraf dekha to dekha pados wale auncle the jo humare hi ghar ke diwaron ki taraf dekh rahe the lekin mujhe dekhte hi wo hadbada gaye.
mai pucha-kya hua auncle.
wo hadbadate hue bola-kuch nahi kuch nahi. wo meri biwi kuch saman kachra samajh kar piche fek di thi mujhe laga kahi idhar to nahi aa gaya. tum chinta mat karo. saman mil gaya hai. ye bolkar wo udhar se jaldi jaldi bhag gaya. mujhe ajeeb laga. kuch gadbad bhi laga.
uske jaane ke baad mai us jagah chala gaya jahan wo aadmi khada tha aur apne ghar ke piche ki diwar ki taraf dekha to mujhe diwar me ek chota sa ched dikha.
mai jaise hi us ched se andar jhaka mera kaleja mere sine se akar mere gale me atak gaya.
andar bathroom tha. bathroom pura nahi dikh raha tha fir bhi dikha ki maa pesab karne ke liye baith rahi hai. aur maa jaise hi baithi unka saree unke gol gol gaand se upar ho gaya.
20231110000101010-283

Itna dekhne ke baad to mera pair hi kaamp gaya aur mai girte girte bacha bagal ke nali me lekin mere girne ki awaj sun maa bhi hadbada kar uth khadi hui. mai jaldi se bhaga ghar ke piche se.
mujhe to dar tha ki kahi maa na dekh le mujhe . ek badi kismat se fir se mujhe ek jindagi mila hai usme bhi mai badnaam ho jau ki mai ghar ke piche se apni hi maa ko nanga dekhta hoon to kitna bura hoga. mai jaldi se bhag kar ghar me gaya aur bilkul apne aap ko normal karte hue andar kamre me jaane laga tabhi maa bathroom se nikli aur bathroom se nikalte hi mere ankhon ke saamne chakkar kha kar girne lagi. mai bilkul jaise koi fielderdrive marke ball pakadta hai us tarah kuda maa ko bachane ke liye aur maa mere hathon par giri. mai bhi gir gaya tha. maa ko jada chot to nahi aaya lekin maa ke sar pe thoda kharoch aaya tha aur maa behosh to nahi hui thi lekin unko dekh ke lag raha tha unhe chakkar aa raha hai. wo thik se hosh me nahi hai. mai turant khada hua maa ko utha kar bed pe letaya ek glass pani pilaya aur fir bhag ke bahar gaya aur ek taxy wale ko ghar bulaya. maa ko taxy me lekar pass ke hi hospital me aa gaya. maa ab pahle se thik thi lekin abhi bhi thik se khada nahi ho paa rahi thi. mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai. mujhe achhe se yaad hai pichli baar mai aaj ke hi din is ghar se delhi gaya tha wo bhi aaj ke hi raat ke train se ur maa hi mujhe khana banakar nam ankhon se vida ki thi lekin us baar to maa bilkul thik thi to is baar ye kaise hua. past kaise badal raha hai. kahi mai fir se maa ko kho to nahi dunga. kahi mere nasib me maa ka pyaar likha hi nahi aisa to nahi hai. ye sab soch soch kar mai bahut dar raha tha. hum hospital pahuche to mai maa ko ek gents doctor ke pass le jaane laga lekin maa boli ki wo lady doctor ko hi dikhayegi. mujhe maa pe thoda gussa bhi aaya kyunki ek to maa ko chakkar aa raha tha upar se maa yahan lady aur gents doctor me bhedbhav kar rahi thi khair mai maa ko ek jagah baithakar ek lady doctor ka pata kiya fir maa ko us doctor ke pass le gaya. wo dcotor mujhe cabin se bahar kar di aur fir maa ka check up ki. unhe kya dawa di pata nahi. kya baat ki pata nahi. lagbhag 40 se 45 minut maa andar thi aur mai bahar bechaini me tahalta raha fir jaise hi maa bahar aayi tab maa thodi thik thi. apne pairon pe khadi thi ye dekh ke mujhe achha laga lekin fir bhi turant maa ke haath se report liya aur use padhne laga.
usme likha hua tha high libido. ye padhte hi mera dimag ghum gaya. high libido ka matlab hota hai hyper sexual drive. ye koi bimari nahi hai. ye chije ya to genetically matlba maa se beti me aati hai ya kabhi kabhi direct bhi paya jata hai bina kisi reason ke.

ye padhte hi mai maa ko bola-maa tum baitho mai abhi turant aata hoon. ye bolkar mai doctor ke cabin me ghus gaya.
mujhe dekhte hi doctor boli-aaj ka mera time khatm ho gaya hai pass ke cabin me dusre doctor ke pass chale jao.
mai bola-mam mai koi patient nahi hoon. mai wo patient jo aayi thi abhi aapke pass unka relative hoon.
maine jaanbujh kar relative bola kyunki agar beta bolunga to doctor ho sakta hai bahut si baate na bataye.
doctor boli- dekho jo tumhari aunty hai unko koi bimri nahi hai. hum insaano ke sarir me kabhi kabhi garmi badh jata hai aur jab wo bardast nahi hota to hume chakkar aa jata hai. mai kuch dawaye likh di hoon time pe de dena aur haan kosis karo ki tumhari aunty subah subah exercise kare aur ghar me jada samay akele na rahe. akela pan khali pan bhi in chijo ko badhawa deta hai. best to hota agar unke husband hote lekin unhone bataya ki unka husband nahi hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki is umra me wo dusri shaadi ke liye manengi to upay yahi hai. medicine dete raho exercise karate raho aur unhe busy rakho sab thik ho jayega.

mai bola-okey mam aur palat ke jane laga tabhi doctor boli-haan agar tum unke husband ki jagah le lo to bhi achha hai. bina medicine ke wo thik ho jayegi. medicine ke to fir bhi side effects hote hai.
ye sunte hi mai ghuma aur gusse me bola-doctor kisne bana diya aapko.
wo lady apna sina chouda karke ek college ka naam batayi. sachme jis college ka naam batayi wo india ke achhe college me se ek tha aur mai kuch bol nahi paya aur mai kamre se nikal gaya.

jaate samay mai aur maa fir se taxy me baith gaye. mai dekha maa mujhse najre nahi mila rahi thi. mai fir se sochne laga ki maa ko pahle ye dikkat to kabhi nahi tha nahi to maa diary me kahi kuch to likhti aur mai ankh band karke time travel ke samay jo diary padha tha use fir se yaad karne ka kosis karne laga ur mujhe kuch yaad aaya.
maa apne diary me kabhi bhi koi bhi baat bahut detail me nahi likhti hai. bahut si baate chupa kar likhti hai taki kisi ko wo diary mil jaye to bhi wo achhe se samajh nahi paaye.
mujhe yaad aa gaya ki mere pichle janm me mere delhi jaane ke ek yaa do din baad maa diary me likhi thi ki mujhe aaj usne dekh liya.
fir likhi thi wo mujhse baar baar is baare me baat karna chahta hai mujhe achha nahi lagta.
iska matlab saaf tha mera pados ka sala harami auncle ne maa ko bathroom me khud ko ungali karte hue dekh liya tha uske baad se wo baar baar maa se gandi baate karne ki kosis karta tha jiske chalte maa pareshan hokar yahan se banglore chali gayi thi.

fir mujhe yaad aaya ki diary me likha tha meri bahu ne aaj chupke se mujhe dekh lliya. wo mujhe taane deti hai.
mera beta rohan apni jindagi me khush hai lekin......
fir mujhe yaad aaya usme likha tha meri badi bahu choti bahu me baat hui.. ab wo bhi.......

fir last me likha tha aaj mere bete aur bahu dono ne meri baat nahi suni...
aur akhir me likha tha mujhe ab jine ka man nahi karta ...............

aur fir mere ankhon ke saamne wo tasweer aa gaya jisme maa khud se ek truck ke saamne aa gayi thi.
ye sab yaad karke mera muthhhi gusse me bandh gaya tha. maa ko ek choti si bimari thi jo maa ko kabhi pata nahi chala kyunki wo kabhi doctor ke pass nahi gayi. itna hi nahi mere bhai ne bhabhi ne maa ko doctor ko dikhne ya ye sab baate dabane ke bajay maa ko pareshn kiya jiske chalte maa ne apni jindagi de di. kaisa bita hoga maa ka jivan jis jeevan me sirf taane hi bhare hue the.
mai khud se than liya ki is baar mai aisa nahi hone dunga. maa ko mai dawa se aur exrecise karwa kar unka khyal rakhkar unhe thik kar dunga. aur sala mera padosi meri maa ko pareshan kiya tha na dekh mai kya karta hoon tere saath.

ye sab sochte hue hum ghar aaye.
mai dekha maa abhi bhi mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi. mai samajh gaya maa mujhse sharma rahi hai. unhe lag raha hai mujhe doctor ne sab bata diya hai aur ab maa ko mujhse najre milane me sharm aa raha tha.
mai pyaar se maa ka haath thama aur unhe bedroom me lejakar baithaya.
mai bola-maa aaj jo bhi doctor mujhe boli hai usme sharmane wala koi baat nahi hai. hum insaan hai humare sarir ki banawat aisi hai to isme kya sharmana.
mai bola-aapka libido high hai to hai isme sharmane ki koi baat nahi hai ulta aage se dhyan rakhne ki baat hai taaki aage chalkar koi bhi problem na ho. mai doctor se baat kar liya hoon. kal se tumko daily subah exercise karna hai. kabhi bhi akele nahi baithna hai. kuch man na kare to TV dekho mobile dekho. pass wali aunty se baat karo lekin aise akele shant shant nahi baithna hai. thik hai.
fir mai haskar bola-kitchen me akele khana nahi banana hai mere saath banana hai. chalo aaj mai khana banata hoon tum madad kar dena.
ye bolkar mai maa ko kitchen le aaya aur ek table pe baith diya.
mai fir khana banane laga aur maa bas pyaar se mujhe dekh rahi thi.
maa pure raste ye soch soch ke ghabra rahi thi unka beta unke baare me galat sochne lagega lekin aisa kuch bhi nahi hua to unhe bahut achha lag raha tha.
khana ban jane ke baad mai maa ko bola-maa tum TV dekho mai aata hoon medical shop se dawa lekar.
aur mai ghar se nikla dukan se dawa liya jo jo doctor likhi thi. dawa lene ke baad mai ghar aate samay mobile me padhne laga un dawao ke baare me to mujhe pata chala ye dawa regular khane par haddiyan kamjor hone lagti hai. ye jaankar mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi laga fir mai maa ki bimari ke baare me padhne laga uske kya symtoms hai. kaise control kiya jaa sakta hai ye sab padha lekin kuch khas nahi mila aur mai ghar aa gaya fir mai aur maa dono saath me khana kha kar so gaye.
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Writer bhai galat mat samjhna lekin yeh kahani ka jo main plot hai woh Maine pahle hi kisi dusre kahani mein padha hua lekin main yeh nai keh raha hu ki tumne poori tarah se copy Kiya hua hai bas kuch inspiration liya hua hai aisa mujhe lagta hai
Kyuki tumne characters background,no. of characters, plot direction, characters motivation ko uss kahani ke tulna mein change kar diya hai jo ki acchi baat hai aur iss kahani ko ek naya andaj deta hai
Lekin mera yeh batane ka karan yeh tha ki kuch kuch elements aise the kahani ke jo uss purani kahani ke yaad dilati hai aur dukh hota hai ki wo kahani adhuri reh gai🥲

Isiliye itna hi kahunga ki kahani tumne bohot hi acchi tarah se likhi hai aur jitni bhi padhi hai usse itna pata chal gaya hai ki aage ke updates bhi shandar honge aur ummid karta hu ki aur dher sare updates thore jaldi aur lambe samay tak mile 🙏🙏👌😅
 
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Writer bhai galat mat samjhna lekin yeh kahani ka jo main plot hai woh Maine pahle hi kisi dusre kahani mein padha hua lekin main yeh nai keh raha hu ki tumne poori tarah se copy Kiya hua hai bas kuch inspiration liya hua hai aisa mujhe lagta hai
Kyuki tumne characters background,no. of characters, plot direction, characters motivation ko uss kahani ke tulna mein change kar diya hai jo ki acchi baat hai aur iss kahani ko ek naya andaj deta hai
Lekin mera yeh batane ka karan yeh tha ki kuch kuch elements aise the kahani ke jo uss purani kahani ke yaad dilati hai aur dukh hota hai ki wo kahani adhuri reh gai🥲

Isiliye itna hi kahunga ki kahani tumne bohot hi acchi tarah se likhi hai aur jitni bhi padhi hai usse itna pata chal gaya hai ki aage ke updates bhi shandar honge aur ummid karta hu ki aur dher sare updates thore jaldi aur lambe samay tak mile 🙏🙏👌😅
App usi kahani kibaat Kar Rahe ho na jisme hero ke saath gunde bhi past se aa jate Hai. Fir khub ladayi hoti Hai. Wo kahani mujhe bhi bahut achhi lage Lakin Pura nahi hua wo kahani. Waise bhi us kahani ka writer bahut badmash Hai. Wo Har Saal do Saal me jab free Hota Hai aata Hai kahani likhta Hai busy hone par bhang jata Hai. Mai aapko bas Bata raha hoon Mai wo nahi hoon
 

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App usi kahani ki baat Kar Rahe ho na jisme hero ke saath gunde bhi past se aa jate Hai. Fir khub ladayi hoti Hai. Wo kahani mujhe bhi bahut achhi lage Lakin Pura nahi hua wo kahani. Waise bhi us kahani ka writer bahut badmash Hai. Wo Har Saal do Saal me jab free Hota Hai aata Hai kahani likhta Hai busy hone par bhang jata Hai. Mai aapko bas Bata raha hoon Mai wo nahi hoon
Maine yeh toh nai kaha ki tum wahi writer ho 😅😅
Shayad dusre kahani ki baat kar rahe ho tum writer bhai....(Naam bata dena 😅)
Main writer arvindaa ki kahani ka jikr kar raha hu😅
 
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maa mere saamne so rahi thi aur mujhe maa pe bahut pyaar aa raha tha. mai bas maa ko pyaar se dekhta raha aur kab do ghante bit gaye pata bhi nahi chala aur maa ka nind khul gaya. jab maa ka nind khula to wo dekhi ki mai unhe ek tak dekhe jaa raha tha.
mai dekha maa ki saasen apne aap hi thoda bhari ho gaya lekin maa turant lambi saas lete hue boli- kya hua itna dhyan se kya dekh raha hai. mere chehre pe kuch laga hai kya.
mai bola-kuch nahi maa aise hi bas soch raha tha tum jab mere saath hoti ho kitna achha lagta hai.
mera baat sunkar maa muskura kar boli- tu bhi to jab mere pass hota hai to mujhe bahut achha lagta hai.
mai bola-maa mai soch raha tha dekho ye PN college mera admission ho jayega. uske baad humko bahut time bhi milega to ek baar gaav ghum aate hai. ek baar dekhna padega na gaav me jamin kaisa hai. uspe kya kar sakte hai.
maa boli-tu to dekha hai jamin fir se dekh ke kya karna hai abhi. pahle padhayi pe dhyan do. bussinees aaram se baad me karenge.
mai bola-maa tumko yaad bhi hai pichla baar mai gaav gaya tha aaj se 5 saal pahle jab papa ka accident hua tha uske baad mai kabhi gaav nahi gaya hoon.
papa ki baat sun maa thodi chup ho gayi.
mai bola-sorry
maa boi-sorry ki kya baat hai. tumko gaav jana hai to chale jana jab chutti mile. ek baar achhe se sab dekh kar aana. tere papa is duniya me nahi rahe isme tumhari galti nahi hai. ye to bas kismat kismat ki baat hai.
mai bola-oho maa dekho fir tum purani baate lekar baith gayi.
maa boli-thik hai thik mai kuch nahi bol rahi ab. mai jaa rahi hoon khana banane.
mai bola-mai madad kar deta hoon.
maa ek baar mujhe dekhi lekin kuch boli nahi.
maa boli-thik hai mai bathroom se aati hoon thoda fresh hokar fir kaam karenge. ye bolkar maa bathroom chali gayi.
mai bhi kamre me idhar udhar tahal raha tha. humare ghar ke bedroom ka ek khidki ghar ke piche ki taraf khulta tha jo aksar thoda sata hi hua rahta tha aur parda laga rahta tha kyunki humare ghar ke piche nala tha jo dhaka hua tha lekin thoda ganda sa jagah tha. udhar jhadi bhi dher sara tha. udhar koi aata jata nahi tha.
mai aise hi kamre me idhar udhar dekh raha tha tabhi mujhe laga koi humare ghar ke piche hai.
ye ahsaas hote hi mai socha humare ghar ke piche udhar jhadiyon me koun hoga. koi chor to nahi aaya hai. ye sochkar mai apne ghar se nikla aur jab piche ki taraf dekha to dekha pados wale auncle the jo humare hi ghar ke diwaron ki taraf dekh rahe the lekin mujhe dekhte hi wo hadbada gaye.
mai pucha-kya hua auncle.
wo hadbadate hue bola-kuch nahi kuch nahi. wo meri biwi kuch saman kachra samajh kar piche fek di thi mujhe laga kahi idhar to nahi aa gaya. tum chinta mat karo. saman mil gaya hai. ye bolkar wo udhar se jaldi jaldi bhag gaya. mujhe ajeeb laga. kuch gadbad bhi laga.
uske jaane ke baad mai us jagah chala gaya jahan wo aadmi khada tha aur apne ghar ke piche ki diwar ki taraf dekha to mujhe diwar me ek chota sa ched dikha.
mai jaise hi us ched se andar jhaka mera kaleja mere sine se akar mere gale me atak gaya.
andar bathroom tha. bathroom pura nahi dikh raha tha fir bhi dikha ki maa pesab karne ke liye baith rahi hai. aur maa jaise hi baithi unka saree unke gol gol gaand se upar ho gaya.
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Itna dekhne ke baad to mera pair hi kaamp gaya aur mai girte girte bacha bagal ke nali me lekin mere girne ki awaj sun maa bhi hadbada kar uth khadi hui. mai jaldi se bhaga ghar ke piche se.
mujhe to dar tha ki kahi maa na dekh le mujhe . ek badi kismat se fir se mujhe ek jindagi mila hai usme bhi mai badnaam ho jau ki mai ghar ke piche se apni hi maa ko nanga dekhta hoon to kitna bura hoga. mai jaldi se bhag kar ghar me gaya aur bilkul apne aap ko normal karte hue andar kamre me jaane laga tabhi maa bathroom se nikli aur bathroom se nikalte hi mere ankhon ke saamne chakkar kha kar girne lagi. mai bilkul jaise koi fielderdrive marke ball pakadta hai us tarah kuda maa ko bachane ke liye aur maa mere hathon par giri. mai bhi gir gaya tha. maa ko jada chot to nahi aaya lekin maa ke sar pe thoda kharoch aaya tha aur maa behosh to nahi hui thi lekin unko dekh ke lag raha tha unhe chakkar aa raha hai. wo thik se hosh me nahi hai. mai turant khada hua maa ko utha kar bed pe letaya ek glass pani pilaya aur fir bhag ke bahar gaya aur ek taxy wale ko ghar bulaya. maa ko taxy me lekar pass ke hi hospital me aa gaya. maa ab pahle se thik thi lekin abhi bhi thik se khada nahi ho paa rahi thi. mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai. mujhe achhe se yaad hai pichli baar mai aaj ke hi din is ghar se delhi gaya tha wo bhi aaj ke hi raat ke train se ur maa hi mujhe khana banakar nam ankhon se vida ki thi lekin us baar to maa bilkul thik thi to is baar ye kaise hua. past kaise badal raha hai. kahi mai fir se maa ko kho to nahi dunga. kahi mere nasib me maa ka pyaar likha hi nahi aisa to nahi hai. ye sab soch soch kar mai bahut dar raha tha. hum hospital pahuche to mai maa ko ek gents doctor ke pass le jaane laga lekin maa boli ki wo lady doctor ko hi dikhayegi. mujhe maa pe thoda gussa bhi aaya kyunki ek to maa ko chakkar aa raha tha upar se maa yahan lady aur gents doctor me bhedbhav kar rahi thi khair mai maa ko ek jagah baithakar ek lady doctor ka pata kiya fir maa ko us doctor ke pass le gaya. wo dcotor mujhe cabin se bahar kar di aur fir maa ka check up ki. unhe kya dawa di pata nahi. kya baat ki pata nahi. lagbhag 40 se 45 minut maa andar thi aur mai bahar bechaini me tahalta raha fir jaise hi maa bahar aayi tab maa thodi thik thi. apne pairon pe khadi thi ye dekh ke mujhe achha laga lekin fir bhi turant maa ke haath se report liya aur use padhne laga.
usme likha hua tha high libido. ye padhte hi mera dimag ghum gaya. high libido ka matlab hota hai hyper sexual drive. ye koi bimari nahi hai. ye chije ya to genetically matlba maa se beti me aati hai ya kabhi kabhi direct bhi paya jata hai bina kisi reason ke.

ye padhte hi mai maa ko bola-maa tum baitho mai abhi turant aata hoon. ye bolkar mai doctor ke cabin me ghus gaya.
mujhe dekhte hi doctor boli-aaj ka mera time khatm ho gaya hai pass ke cabin me dusre doctor ke pass chale jao.
mai bola-mam mai koi patient nahi hoon. mai wo patient jo aayi thi abhi aapke pass unka relative hoon.
maine jaanbujh kar relative bola kyunki agar beta bolunga to doctor ho sakta hai bahut si baate na bataye.
doctor boli- dekho jo tumhari aunty hai unko koi bimri nahi hai. hum insaano ke sarir me kabhi kabhi garmi badh jata hai aur jab wo bardast nahi hota to hume chakkar aa jata hai. mai kuch dawaye likh di hoon time pe de dena aur haan kosis karo ki tumhari aunty subah subah exercise kare aur ghar me jada samay akele na rahe. akela pan khali pan bhi in chijo ko badhawa deta hai. best to hota agar unke husband hote lekin unhone bataya ki unka husband nahi hai aur mujhe nahi lagta ki is umra me wo dusri shaadi ke liye manengi to upay yahi hai. medicine dete raho exercise karate raho aur unhe busy rakho sab thik ho jayega.

mai bola-okey mam aur palat ke jane laga tabhi doctor boli-haan agar tum unke husband ki jagah le lo to bhi achha hai. bina medicine ke wo thik ho jayegi. medicine ke to fir bhi side effects hote hai.
ye sunte hi mai ghuma aur gusse me bola-doctor kisne bana diya aapko.
wo lady apna sina chouda karke ek college ka naam batayi. sachme jis college ka naam batayi wo india ke achhe college me se ek tha aur mai kuch bol nahi paya aur mai kamre se nikal gaya.

jaate samay mai aur maa fir se taxy me baith gaye. mai dekha maa mujhse najre nahi mila rahi thi. mai fir se sochne laga ki maa ko pahle ye dikkat to kabhi nahi tha nahi to maa diary me kahi kuch to likhti aur mai ankh band karke time travel ke samay jo diary padha tha use fir se yaad karne ka kosis karne laga ur mujhe kuch yaad aaya.
maa apne diary me kabhi bhi koi bhi baat bahut detail me nahi likhti hai. bahut si baate chupa kar likhti hai taki kisi ko wo diary mil jaye to bhi wo achhe se samajh nahi paaye.
mujhe yaad aa gaya ki mere pichle janm me mere delhi jaane ke ek yaa do din baad maa diary me likhi thi ki mujhe aaj usne dekh liya.
fir likhi thi wo mujhse baar baar is baare me baat karna chahta hai mujhe achha nahi lagta.
iska matlab saaf tha mera pados ka sala harami auncle ne maa ko bathroom me khud ko ungali karte hue dekh liya tha uske baad se wo baar baar maa se gandi baate karne ki kosis karta tha jiske chalte maa pareshan hokar yahan se banglore chali gayi thi.

fir mujhe yaad aaya ki diary me likha tha meri bahu ne aaj chupke se mujhe dekh lliya. wo mujhe taane deti hai.
mera beta rohan apni jindagi me khush hai lekin......
fir mujhe yaad aaya usme likha tha meri badi bahu choti bahu me baat hui.. ab wo bhi.......

fir last me likha tha aaj mere bete aur bahu dono ne meri baat nahi suni...
aur akhir me likha tha mujhe ab jine ka man nahi karta ...............

aur fir mere ankhon ke saamne wo tasweer aa gaya jisme maa khud se ek truck ke saamne aa gayi thi.
ye sab yaad karke mera muthhhi gusse me bandh gaya tha. maa ko ek choti si bimari thi jo maa ko kabhi pata nahi chala kyunki wo kabhi doctor ke pass nahi gayi. itna hi nahi mere bhai ne bhabhi ne maa ko doctor ko dikhne ya ye sab baate dabane ke bajay maa ko pareshn kiya jiske chalte maa ne apni jindagi de di. kaisa bita hoga maa ka jivan jis jeevan me sirf taane hi bhare hue the.
mai khud se than liya ki is baar mai aisa nahi hone dunga. maa ko mai dawa se aur exrecise karwa kar unka khyal rakhkar unhe thik kar dunga. aur sala mera padosi meri maa ko pareshan kiya tha na dekh mai kya karta hoon tere saath.

ye sab sochte hue hum ghar aaye.
mai dekha maa abhi bhi mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi. mai samajh gaya maa mujhse sharma rahi hai. unhe lag raha hai mujhe doctor ne sab bata diya hai aur ab maa ko mujhse najre milane me sharm aa raha tha.
mai pyaar se maa ka haath thama aur unhe bedroom me lejakar baithaya.
mai bola-maa aaj jo bhi doctor mujhe boli hai usme sharmane wala koi baat nahi hai. hum insaan hai humare sarir ki banawat aisi hai to isme kya sharmana.
mai bola-aapka libido high hai to hai isme sharmane ki koi baat nahi hai ulta aage se dhyan rakhne ki baat hai taaki aage chalkar koi bhi problem na ho. mai doctor se baat kar liya hoon. kal se tumko daily subah exercise karna hai. kabhi bhi akele nahi baithna hai. kuch man na kare to TV dekho mobile dekho. pass wali aunty se baat karo lekin aise akele shant shant nahi baithna hai. thik hai.
fir mai haskar bola-kitchen me akele khana nahi banana hai mere saath banana hai. chalo aaj mai khana banata hoon tum madad kar dena.
ye bolkar mai maa ko kitchen le aaya aur ek table pe baith diya.
mai fir khana banane laga aur maa bas pyaar se mujhe dekh rahi thi.
maa pure raste ye soch soch ke ghabra rahi thi unka beta unke baare me galat sochne lagega lekin aisa kuch bhi nahi hua to unhe bahut achha lag raha tha.
khana ban jane ke baad mai maa ko bola-maa tum TV dekho mai aata hoon medical shop se dawa lekar.
aur mai ghar se nikla dukan se dawa liya jo jo doctor likhi thi. dawa lene ke baad mai ghar aate samay mobile me padhne laga un dawao ke baare me to mujhe pata chala ye dawa regular khane par haddiyan kamjor hone lagti hai. ye jaankar mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi laga fir mai maa ki bimari ke baare me padhne laga uske kya symtoms hai. kaise control kiya jaa sakta hai ye sab padha lekin kuch khas nahi mila aur mai ghar aa gaya fir mai aur maa dono saath me khana kha kar so gaye.
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mai aaj bhi bilkul subah subah uth gaya. dekha to saamne maa sukun se so rahi thi ye dekh kar achha laga. mai fir dheere se utha aur ekdum dabe paav kitchen gaya aur kitchen me jakar chay banaya. maa ka nind jaise hi khula mai chay lekar maa ke pass aa gaya.
maa mere haathon me chay dekhte hi pyaar se boli- kya baat hai aaj bhi chay banakar pila raha hai. kal to tumhe commerce lena tha uske liye maska laga raha tha aaj kya baat hai.
mai bola- maa aaj ki baat ye hai ki tumko exercise karna hai.
maa boli-beta is umra me ye sab karna thoda muskil hai.
mai bola-koi muskil nahi hai. mai madad kar dunga. doctor boli hai aapko daily exercise karna hai. koi bahana nahi chalega.
maa boli-mai theek hoon. is umar me koi ye sab karta hai kya. yoga exercise ye sab bacchon ko karna chahiye. tu abhi jawan hai tu daily exercise kiya kar achha rahega.
mai maa ko bola-maa tum chay piyo mai bahar wale room me chatayi bicha ke aata hoon.
aur mai kamre se nikal gaya dusre kamre me chatayi bichaya taki maa thoda bahut exercise kar sake.
jab mai maa ke pass gaya to maa mana kar rahi thi lekin mai unko mana hi liya fir hum dono dusre kamre me a gaye.
maa boli-ab batao kya karna hai. bahut jiddi hai tu. mujhe is umra me ye sab kara raha hai.
mai haskar bola-maa itna drama karne ka kya jarurat hai. itna bhi umra nahi hua hai tumhara. muskil se 40 saal se hua hai.
maa boli-40 nahi 44 samjha.
mai bola-lekin dikhti to 40 se bhi kam ki ho. thoda exercise kar lo kya pata 30 ki lagne lag jao.
maa mujhe thappad dikhate hue boli-mujhse majak karta hai bahut bigad gaya hai.
mai bola-achha maa wo sab chodo chalo exercise karte hai. pahle mai karke dikhata hoon waise hi karna hai.








jaise hi jaagi mai doctor boli thi ki agar maa ko thik rakhna hai to unhe thoda bahit exercise bhi karna padega isliye mai subah aaj bhi chupke chupke kitchen gaya
Mast update Bhai 💯
 
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